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Master-sprite_maker
10th April 2006, 8:15 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/Master-sprite_maker/KenshinSprite.png

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/Master-sprite_maker/KenshinSprite.png

Here is a kenshin sprite, I am currently working on some others right now, feel free to C&C

Psychic
10th April 2006, 9:33 PM
First, you shouldn't have enlarged it. It's a lot easier to look at in the smaller sprite form, the way it was meant to look.

It's not bad, as far as I can tell, but it isn't amazing. For one thing, your outlining needs work- some places it's too dark, some places it's too light, and other places just lack proper outlining, like the right sleeve. Also, the color you used for the folds/creases on the bottom clothing piece should be a more blue-grey color, because they're much too dark in contrast to the other colors on it (and don't make the highlighted area white, either).

One last thing: obviously, you copied/pasted the sword from another place. That was a horrible thing to do, becaause it looks VERY out-of-place, as it's too small and it was done sort of differently. You should have remade the sword yourself, because this one doesn't work.


Again, it's not bad other than that, but I advise that you don't start threads only showcasing a single sprite. ;) Good luck.


~Psychic

Master-sprite_maker
10th April 2006, 9:46 PM
Actuily I used MS paint, I did the sword myself becasuse I couldn find a different sword to copy and paste, I cant "free sprite" worth crap.

Kinginsoar
11th April 2006, 3:02 AM
That looks very cool to me. Looks ok.

Comis Patronus
11th April 2006, 3:04 AM
It's great. I use MS paint. Here's a tip:try using different colors on borders so it won't be blurry.