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Espionage
12th April 2006, 8:50 PM
So I made a random umbreon sprite from scratch, lol. I've only made one scratch before and that was like a year and a half ago and it was ugly.

Here ya go.

http://www.fishgarden.net/kuvei/krur.gif

Imohep
12th April 2006, 9:05 PM
That isn't bad at all! The legs need a bit of work (the location of the middle two legs do not seem to give it support), but apart from that, it is a very good scratch sprite!

whiteabsol
12th April 2006, 9:32 PM
It looks pretty good ^_^

It's front legs need a little work, especially where they join the body. it just looks awkward.

Metal Force
12th April 2006, 11:21 PM
Very nice.. I like it.

POKErUsAm
12th April 2006, 11:26 PM
it is very good. the circkes on it would becooler though, if they were a little more yellow.

DanK84
13th April 2006, 12:07 AM
Very nice! Most of the flaws were pointed above so I don't have anything more to say.

Comis Patronus
13th April 2006, 12:38 AM
So I made a random umbreon sprite from scratch, lol. I've only made one scratch before and that was like a year and a half ago and it was ugly.

Here ya go.

http://www.fishgarden.net/kuvei/krur.gif

What are you talking about? You're giving yourself very litttle credit. I think it's great and creative.

Espionage
13th April 2006, 8:42 AM
Fixed it a little, any better? Though I still can't quite put my finger on what exactly is wrong with the front legs.. o.o

stigy
13th April 2006, 11:59 AM
The problem with the front legs are that they are stiff. Plus it's left front leg looks inverted :(

Untamed Fear
13th April 2006, 12:12 PM
Wow, all you need to work on is the positioning, everything else is awsome.

-aocom v2-
14th April 2006, 12:33 AM
So I made a random umbreon sprite from scratch, lol. I've only made one scratch before and that was like a year and a half ago and it was ugly.

Here ya go.

http://www.fishgarden.net/kuvei/krur.gif

The shading is nice, but what really bugs me is the positioning. Its in a very awkward stance, really. >_0

- The ear in the back should be moved more towards the one in front. With the ears like that, it gives the impression the head should be turning totally away from the viewer.
- You should also continue the outlines from the neck, chest, and legs to show the creases in its body. Right now it looks all melded together.
- Its back foot also looks strange, as it makes a right angle, instead of a smoother transition.
- Try to anti-alias the yellow rings as well.

Mawile XD
14th April 2006, 12:37 AM
I agree with everything that everyone said. Te other hng is that Umbreon's head is a llittle too small. Ovverall, it's detail is very nice. Good job.

Myuuvuirocon
14th April 2006, 1:10 AM
really good! ^^ I agree w/ whiteabsol, though, it's legs do need a little work, but overall, it's really good! :D