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Hoshi no Kabii
16th April 2006, 12:39 PM
I just got into spriting, and would like the opinion of others.

A trainer card:

Those are the only sprites that I made that I dont think are total crap and I am willing to showcase. Ill post more here when I create more.

16th April 2006, 2:58 PM
I'm not so sure bout Charazard, but I like the the mix better.

Oh yeah, and good trainer card.

Hoshi no Kabii
16th April 2006, 5:45 PM
Made another: http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/AdmiralSoup/Asprite.jpg

♥~Darkness Within~♥
16th April 2006, 5:48 PM
The Charizard is okay, The Scyther/ Aerodyctal mix is werid but okay, the Trainer card is good, Aswell a sthe bulbsaur good job overall

16th April 2006, 5:59 PM
Good work. But you've to improve at Revamps, use the current sprite as reference and do a bit of line-art. Don't use colours like that. Revamp the wings like the original ones.
Use the flames.

Hoshi no Kabii
16th April 2006, 7:02 PM
How's this one?

Dark Pheonix
16th April 2006, 7:04 PM
The outline is terrible sorry to say. Other than that i like your work. Another promising new spriter :)

www.freewebs.com/howtosprite (http://www.freewebs.com/howtosprite) has usefull tips if you are a beginer

Mega Trickster
16th April 2006, 7:37 PM
Very good work. Don't worry I suck at revamps too D=

Hoshi no Kabii
17th April 2006, 12:27 AM
Yay, I got to make a few more before I go on vacation!
A cel shaded Mew, Glowing Psyduck, and a line-less Flareon. I personally think the Flareon came out very good.

17th April 2006, 1:31 AM
Those are good for a beginner. Keep up the good work!

Hoshi no Kabii
29th April 2006, 12:51 AM
I'm back!
A devamp Crobat and a revamp Golbat. I dicided to work on everyones' favourite batty friends.

29th April 2006, 12:55 AM
Wow... Those are pretty good for a so-called beginner. Keep it up!

Jedi Flygon
29th April 2006, 1:14 AM
Thats not bad for a beginner! Heck, Its perfect for a beginner. I mean, beginner spriters are far away from how good you are! ;)

29th April 2006, 3:40 AM
You aren't bad for a begginer but not good for a expert but you are fine. XD. Your revamps and Devamps are good and the Charizard recolour and Scyther mix is okay keep it up you will be good and you won't even notice.

Hoshi no Kabii
30th April 2006, 2:03 AM
Update: http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6516/asprite2ce.png
Yay, its a PNG!

Hoshi no Kabii
30th April 2006, 2:19 AM
Meh, just something I slapped together. Hu-rah for PNG!
Any suggestions for it? Should I lose the tail?

30th April 2006, 3:25 AM
I liked the trainer card, it looks very awesome. And the Pikachu/Skarmory mix looks very cool. Keep it up!

30th April 2006, 6:04 AM
Good for a beginner I don't like the Charizard's wings (pretty bad shading)

Hoshi no Kabii
30th April 2006, 1:47 PM
This was supposed to be a mightyena-machop mix, but for some reason, after I made it, it turned green and all distorted. The lighter gray dissappeared so the shading is screwed up.O___o. Whenever I copy and paste sprites now, they turn greenish. Anyone know how to fix this?

30th April 2006, 1:48 PM
What paint did you use?

Hoshi no Kabii
30th April 2006, 1:55 PM
Nevermind, it isn't doind it anymore. I just closed it, then reopened.
(now I gotta re-do the machop >.<)

Hoshi no Kabii
30th April 2006, 4:47 PM
I think I'm allowed to DP here.

Update: http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7803/factoryheadnoland2yo.png
Its a ratata/mew mix.

Edit: http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/91/peter3fl.png
Some recolors. And, would more people please rate my sprites!
Are they so bad their un-rateable? ;_;

5th May 2006, 11:34 PM
Ratmew: it's strange..... in a cool way! 8/10

The other 2: The gastly's eyes are black, 6/10, and the Machamp looks strange, 7/10.

Overall: 7/10. Fix Gastly's eyes.

Chaotic Houndoom
5th May 2006, 11:36 PM
Its good, but it seems like the Trianer card can be more clear..

6th May 2006, 2:45 PM
those are actually pretty good but if you work a bit harder you would become a master

Hoshi no Kabii
7th May 2006, 1:52 AM
Its good, but it seems like the Trianer card can be more clear..
Might be because its not a png.

I fixed the Gastly's eyes. Still think it looked better with black...
I'm very proud of the Heracross devamp.

Edit: I ment to say the Heracross was a devamp. Not a revamp -_-*

7th May 2006, 2:03 AM
I am, too. Good job. 8/10

7th May 2006, 2:08 AM
wow, for a beginner, youre great, when i begun, i didnt even know why the was always blocks of white in my sprites, then later on i found the transparency button XD

7th May 2006, 2:23 AM
Cool Ratata and Mew mix.

Mega Trickster
7th May 2006, 4:42 AM
Wait....that Heracross is a revamp?! O_o

7th May 2006, 6:38 AM
I liked the Rattata/Mew revamp, it looks very cute.