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Super Wario 64
24th April 2006, 5:52 AM
I started to get better at spriting and here are my sprites....

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c195/Toadboy10/My%20sprites%20and%20sprite%20animations/PKMN%20Revamps/6e0238f2.png My Gold/Crystal Metapod Revamp

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c195/Toadboy10/My%20sprites%20and%20sprite%20animations/PKMN%20Revamps/83497a11.png My Gold/Crystal Exeggutor Revamp

A Devamp:
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c195/Toadboy10/My%20sprites%20and%20sprite%20animations/PKMN%20Devamps/8fe419dc.png My FR/LG Metapod Devamp

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c195/Toadboy10/My%20sprites%20and%20sprite%20animations/Other%20PKMN%20sprites/a87253d8.png Quagsire as Family Guy's Quagmire I just HAD to make that sprite....

More soon...

24th April 2006, 6:13 AM
Okay, first off, they're all good with few flaws. On the revamped Metapod, you should make the lightest shade go down the length of the boy instead of stopping in the middle then coming back at the bottom. The leaves on the Exeggutor have some outlining issues. The topmost one on the left should have the dark green outline instead of black, and the bottommost on on the left should have a black outline instead of green. The devamped Metapod's colors look weird. Was it supposed to be a GSC or RBY devamp? In either case, the outline should be all-black with the dark inside colored pixels going along the edges of the outline.

They're really good, and I had to zoom in to find most of the flaws. Keep up the good work!

Super Wario 64
24th April 2006, 7:23 AM
I added this >http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c195/Toadboy10/My%20sprites%20and%20sprite%20animations/Other%20PKMN%20sprites/a87253d8.png to the 1st post.

26th April 2006, 7:39 PM
>> Do not post in threads if you have nothing to add. If it goes onto an older page, leave it until you either post eith a sprite or someone else posts. What you did is called SPAming and bumping, and if you read the rules, you'd know that things things are forbidden.

Anyways, the sprites are nothing special or interesting, though I must say I liked your idea of making 'Quagsire' into 'Quagmire'- I never thought of that! Very witty. XD It isn't amazing, but it's pretty cute. Maybe you could have added more yellow spots. *shrugs* It's hard to crit a simple edit. Still, kudos on being creative.

Now, the revamps really aren't revamps. Recoloring the sprite so it has the colors of the Third Gen sprites isn't a revamp. You need to fix the shading, especially the highlights (because those areas are too small and too few).
On Metapod you might want to add another shadow color, a darker one, because right now it's too plain- of course if you made the highlight bigger it would look much less plain as well.
With Executor, add a highlight color on its main body (the brown part), make the shadow area smaller (it's too big) and take away the half tone shading. Also add more highlights on the leaves, and you need to edit the colors of the outline a bit. The outline of the three heads also needs to be fixed- it shouldn't be entirely black. No outline should only be black.

The devamp is decent enough, though I'm not too good at criting devamps so I can't give you a very good opinion. But the most highlighted area should be white- I remember the old sprites had white highlights. @_@

Overall: not bad, but you might want to check out a few tutorials, especially the one on revamping and so on. Keep practicing- you just need to work on your spriting a bit more.

Good luck,