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miken park
12th May 2006, 10:53 PM
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Silver Sandslash

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Silver Wooper

Comments and Constructive crit please

Nintendo_6444
12th May 2006, 11:01 PM
Umm its wooper not wopper. But cute. Sandslash looks odd in some way.

Psychic
12th May 2006, 11:11 PM
XD at Wopper. Would you like fries with that?


But seriously, those are really very good! You did a very neat, clean job, their outlines and shading being much better than the originals.
The one thing I can say isn't perfect is the shading. I'm really just nitpicking, as it's very good, but you'll notice that the shadows on the Wooper -the dark blue, not the outlining- is a bit too dark in comparison, especially because you used a bit too much, Reduce the shadows a little bit- on the head there should be less at the bottom, it shouldn;t go so far to the right on the body and it's a bit too big on the tail. However it might also work out better if you just make it a slightly lighter color.

I don't see anything really wrong on the Sandslash, except that on the claws you could maybe have had a highlight to show off the shinyness and shape a bit more. Nothing else to really comment on other than that- it's very good!


So...yeah. Not much to say other than they're very good revamps. You might want to fix up the shading where I pointed it out, but it's not the end of the world if you leave them- they still look great.

Keep up the awesome work!
~Psychic

blazemxx
12th May 2006, 11:19 PM
Nice jobs on both normal and shiny.

miken park
13th May 2006, 3:33 AM
Wow. I didn't expect such good feedback. I fixed the wooper (I think)
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Psychic
13th May 2006, 3:47 AM
^^ It certaily looks terrific, now! I'm glad someone actually listened to what I said for once (you'd be surprised to find out how often I'm either completely ignored or flamed for posting simple feedback). Definitely looks great- the shadows were dubbed down enough that they look a lot more natural, now!
Awesome job fixing it up, Lieutenant Arbiter! *salutes*

Hoping to see more from you! Bonne chance (good luck)!
~Psychic

Hyper Shadow
13th May 2006, 3:51 AM
I think they both lookawesome!

~Flareon~
13th May 2006, 5:23 AM
I liked the Silver Sandslash revamp, it looks very cool. And the Silver Wooper looks very cute. Keep it up!

Alphonse Elric
13th May 2006, 7:51 AM
They look good, but I find the shiny Sandslash a bit... odd. I dunno, maybe it's because the red color on it's spikes make them look too much like blood. O__O

Other than that, they're pretty good. The shiny Wooper looks like a little Pecha Berry. :P

Nevetszero
13th May 2006, 9:20 AM
Cool sprites. They are definitely neat and good. I like your Sandslash, fixing those claws, to shine would make him look great!

Zero Nexus
13th May 2006, 10:35 AM
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Silver Sandslash

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Silver Wooper

Comments and Constructive crit please

cool,i love teh sandslash!

Shadow_Fox
13th May 2006, 2:00 PM
Someone who actually revamps properly. =) Nice to see black outlines.

With the sandlash, the two... "plates" I suppose they would be called, by its left paw look a bit too light, or maybe just dont have any other shading that the lightest red. Also, you may want to use a darker red for the insie of the shiny ones eye, or at least cover some of the red thats there with black.

Nice revamps, hope to see more from you.

~

miken park
13th May 2006, 8:54 PM
Well, Here's Noctowl

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I'm going to fix Sanslash after I save him back onto the computer(Brilliant me saved over him) ><
EDIT:Hopefully fixed
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~Flareon~
14th May 2006, 3:15 AM
I liked the Noctowl revamp, it looks very cool too.

miken park
15th May 2006, 5:26 AM
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I'm proud of this one

Alphonse Elric
15th May 2006, 5:31 AM
Noctowl looks cool.

But I really like the Tyranitar revamp. It kicks ***! Good job.

~Flareon~
15th May 2006, 5:34 AM
Another revamps, I liked the Tyranitar one, it looks very awesome. Keep it up!