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idc47
15th May 2006, 3:23 AM
I decided to start my own story using sprites as comics. This is the first part of the story I have created, the Region.
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c261/idc47/Map.jpg
what do you think?

zuloon
15th May 2006, 3:24 AM
Save as a portable network graphic next time.

DanK84
15th May 2006, 3:45 AM
It's pretty good, but the island in the top-left corner is way too small.

xXFallenButterflyXx
15th May 2006, 3:49 AM
It's okay but the colors are dull and looks pixified and the yellowish part that conects the dots looks as if you made it in Paint. Did you?

Overall:

8.6/10

~;151; Fallen

~Flareon~
15th May 2006, 3:59 AM
I liked the region map, it looks very cool. Good job!

idc47
15th May 2006, 4:00 AM
thanks, the island in the top left is for a secret in the story that isnt revealed yet

DanK84
15th May 2006, 4:02 AM
Oh, okay then, that explains it. ^^

blazemxx
15th May 2006, 7:50 PM
Looks OK, but the traile needs to be transparent instead of one color.