View Full Version : My very very very first computer drawn pic

20th May 2006, 8:24 AM
This is the first image I made, and it is a mushroom guy because i am bored.

Chaotic Houndoom
20th May 2006, 8:36 AM
Aw, that's really cute, I like it.

Captain Murkrow
20th May 2006, 8:57 AM
aww. great for a first ever. the outside lines must be shaded and less thick though. sorry for criticism, but if i made you think of these things, i thought that you would excel in future spriting.

miken park
20th May 2006, 10:54 AM
No offence, but it's quite bad.

The outline is all black, it should be coloured. It should also be 1 pixel wide.
The shading is broken.Use a minimun of three shades, in the curves and where the light doesn't hit.The outline is also a bit shaky.

With alot of pratice, You will improve. Keep tryin'

20th May 2006, 5:46 PM
Well for your first it is kinda bad!Well you need to add more shading on the hat thing and then you might want to make it bigger. I didn't like the size.

20th May 2006, 5:47 PM
Hey, for your first, it's pretty cute. Imean, its nbot perfect.