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koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 5:47 PM
Erm... okay here are some of my sprites... OF DOOM! (or not...)

A pokemon mix-http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/nyarth.jpg

A revamp- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/bulba.jpg

A metalic- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/ninetales.jpg

A pokemorph- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/rattamorph.jpg

And a recolour- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/treekip.jpg

So, what do you think? I will get more up soon if you like them. (and yes, I know they're a jpg or whatever, I don't know how to save it as anything else.)

Chinese Teletubbie
21st May 2006, 5:59 PM
The meowth Vaperon is pretty good but the Mudkip Treeko sorta sucks

koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 6:01 PM
What about it?

Chinese Teletubbie
21st May 2006, 6:03 PM
I dont know I just dont like it for some reason

~Sirnight~
21st May 2006, 6:04 PM
They're really good... hmmm... I will say that the Bulbasaur revamp could have been a little imroved in temrs of making the outline a little more- not messy?

koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 6:07 PM
Okay. I'll try making it better

Kinginsoar
21st May 2006, 6:09 PM
Actually, Chinese Teletubbie has it mixed around. The mix is bad, but the recolor is awesome. No offense, but the mix is kinda crap. There were a lot of things cut off, that I see you tried to mix. Try making something fairly easy, like a fat pkmn and fat pkmn like this:

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/1854/wobsey6ay.png (http://imageshack.us)

See? You have to mix something easy, fat and fat, so it'll blend better. Mixing something like a fat pokemon and skinny pokemon is hard. Not that you did that, but some things got cut off. I'm reccomending making something easy. The metalic is ok. The pokémorph doesn't have a lot mixed though, just ears and the color. The revamp looks like it needs better shading.

Use this. (http://www.freewebs.com/howtosprite/)

Hakuryuu
21st May 2006, 6:09 PM
Don't save them as JPGs. Save them as PNGs.

Anyways... you need some practice. The Meowth/Vaporeon mix is your best sprite out of all of them. Still needs to be blended smoothly. The outline needs to be smoother. Its way to jagged around the spine and towards the end of the tail. The fins need work also. Try making them straighter and smoother. It appears they're missing some of the sprite in them.

The metallic Ninetales doesn't appear very metallic. It needs to be brighter. Its a very dull green. It gave me the impression of a RBG sprite. It needs more recoloring.

The trainer fusion isn't that great either. The right ear seems out of place, and its crooked. Needs to be straighter.

The Mudkip recolor is so-so. Maybe if they were PNGs, more people would like them. Its a nice recolor, but towards the right side end of its top fin, it gets jagged and the line messes up. Try to fix that.

You have potential, you really do. Practice and practice. You'll be a good spriter in no time. Remember, save your sprites as PNGs and work on straightening your lines.

Kinginsoar
21st May 2006, 6:11 PM
Don't save them as JPGs. Save them as PNGs.

Anyways... you need some practice. The Meowth/Vaporeon mix is your best sprite out of all of them. Still needs to be blended smoothly. The outline needs to be smoother. Its way to jagged around the spine and towards the end of the tail. The fins need work also. Try making them straighter and smoother. It appears they're missing some of the sprite in them.

The metallic Ninetales doesn't appear very metallic. It needs to be brighter. Its a very dull green. It gave me the impression of a RBG sprite. It needs more recoloring.

The trainer fusion isn't that great either. The right ear seems out of place, and its crooked. Needs to be straighter.

The Mudkip recolor is so-so. Maybe if they were PNGs, more people would like them. Its a nice recolor, but towards the right side end of its top fin, it gets jagged and the line messes up. Try to fix that.

You have potential, you really do. Practice and practice. You'll be a good spriter in no time. Remember, save your sprites as PNGs and work on straightening your lines.
I definitly agree. You've got potential.

~Sirnight~
21st May 2006, 6:13 PM
Yeah, I agree, and upon reading the above, that reminded me what I wanted to say, the OUTLINE, yes, it could use more work on the Breeder/Rattatta mix. It looks like you did more of a fusion where you cut and pasted it.

koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 6:13 PM
How do you save them as pngs?

Hakuryuu
21st May 2006, 6:17 PM
How do you save them as pngs?

Do you remember how you saved your sprites as JPGs? Well, instead of saving them as JPGs, scroll down in the drop down box to the last option, which will be PNG.

koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 6:23 PM
Ah, okay. I'm gtting newer, better ones up soon

koneko-chan
21st May 2006, 6:30 PM
Ta daaaaaa! new sprites. and I think the jpg made them all blurry. ah well.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/smooby.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/untitled.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/Myuu.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/Mangewag.jpg

The last ones all... weird... and spotty... and the mew-morph's tail bugs me. It's all crooked

~Kitty~
21st May 2006, 6:49 PM
I like all of them they are ok..... But to be honest you need to work a lil bit better they are good!
.~*Kitty

Captain Murkrow
21st May 2006, 8:27 PM
meowth+vaporeon= not a mix you would expect, but good all the same

ř®ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 9:11 PM
If you don't have windows XP, save as bmp and host on imageshack.us
The Mew lass' tail should be flipped and reshaded.

SheWhoLovesPineapples
23rd May 2006, 10:35 PM
I liked those! LOL! The Meowth Vaporeon cracked me up.

Amaisan Axis
23rd May 2006, 10:49 PM
Good for your first sprites. Meowth/Vaporeon is a very hard first mix.

Brandon-kun
24th May 2006, 3:45 AM
Erm... okay here are some of my sprites... OF DOOM! (or not...)


A pokemon mix-http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/nyarth.jpg

Okay frist this needs ALOT of work! The tail torwards the bottom is screwed up and it looks bad! Also the left fin thing there is something wrong with it! So you need to fix that!


A revamp- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/bulba.jpg

Well I am not good at these so I say that is good!


A metalic- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/ninetales.jpg

This looks like a devamp of a ninetales!


A pokemorph- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/rattamorph.jpg

It is okay! I mean, there is really nothing wrong with it.


And a recolour- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/treekip.jpg

This is your best work yet!


So, what do you think? I will get more up soon if you like them. (and yes, I know they're a jpg or whatever, I don't know how to save it as anything else.)
That is what I think...also don't take these as offenseive opinions I am just saying things to make you get better!

koneko-chan
26th May 2006, 1:25 AM
New sprites, enjoy!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/rekkuza.jpg
a Rayquayza negative! it was relly easy to make, too!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/salavert.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/jigglytuff.png
SO KYOOOT!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/koolkat13/politorb.png
I don't know either...

~Flareon~
26th May 2006, 9:38 AM
I liked the negative Rayquaza, it looks very cool. And the mixes are very nice.