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~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 9:01 PM
Since everyone kept only looking at the 1st page, I remade it again.

Here are my sprites:

Sprites made after this thread was made:
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6997/jolteonrevamp2ti.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2002/golemew2xn.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3656/flarenun5rq.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/2869/pokesho7pj.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9815/lotamander3fi.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2512/myfrteam5eo.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5025/vaporusle7bw.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2972/uuberpichuball4re.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6372/pokemoncratertc7zq.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/4449/duscter0of.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/7284/scyclops4kj.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/1558/eevsea6fh.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9707/pazuchu1qv.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9786/pazuchumarichuandrazumachu9yc.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1580/firemew6mn.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9664/sceptiken1yo.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/7299/shablet8pv.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9392/castinch0qk.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2807/masjask8gi.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4312/electichu5cs.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9171/silverpichu8iv.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/607/hoothootdevamp0tp.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8906/chimetoy4xa.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5974/boo2jq.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7717/emerald4by.png (http://imageshack.us)


Sprites taken from the old thread:

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/751/vaporichu8df.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/4994/ipod9yi.png
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/331/banneclops2vo.png
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/4169/blastgon1ma.png
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/6346/flarachu5hz.png
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4756/devamp20oy.png
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/5071/catle6on.png
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/4116/lineless0xg.png
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9869/mewpokeball8qo.png
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3968/pokeball5mc.png
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5926/nidodudemale9dp.png
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7275/revamp6cr.png
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5863/mewrevamp6mb.png
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/2281/battle5ut.png
http://img418.imageshack.us/img418/2941/shinychimetoy9mk.png
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9877/red4hz.png
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/3194/egg7ej.png
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4075/mewtwomix0oq.png
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7562/michu4ue.png

Rules:

1. Don't Steal
2. Don't Say I suck or anyhting bad like that without saying why.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 9:05 PM
Metalic devamps only have two colours, white and black. It is prefered that you recolour the base and not the parts.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 9:08 PM
Metalical Devamp? What the heck?

~Sirnight~
21st May 2006, 9:11 PM
I lke what you have done, but I feel you could do more to the sprites.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 9:12 PM
Metal generation. Gold, Silver, Crystal.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 9:13 PM
Oh. So what do you mean?

~Sirnight~
21st May 2006, 9:17 PM
Oh. So what do you mean?

If you meant me, what I mean is that you do little (yet still good) stuff to the sprites and that I think you're good and could go farther into fusion.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 9:21 PM
I was talking to orange Eipam, but ok.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 10:08 PM
I ment that your devamp has more than 2 colours.

.Person.
21st May 2006, 10:12 PM
Hay man! I like them!! The i-pod could use a little work. But it's still greate. Hay. PM me when you open your shop! :D

Hoshi no Kabii
21st May 2006, 10:13 PM
Steel_Expert is right. When you mix, you usually re-color the base pokemon to whatever it is mixed with. What is the charizard? If it is a de-vamp, why is it purple? And the Blastoise pokeball looks like a pokeball with marshmellows pasted on =/ (no offence) Maybe add a shell. Those are the only flaws I can find.

Edit:
I ment that your devamp has more than 2 colours.I thought it was 4. O_o

.Person.
21st May 2006, 10:15 PM
It's a recolored de-vamp.

Myuuvuirocon
21st May 2006, 10:16 PM
they're cool, ^^ I like the Flareon Pika and Vaporeon Pika mix, ^^ they're cool. and the PokÚballs are realy nice, ^^ anyways, keep working at it and you'll get better, ^^

Chaotic Houndoom
21st May 2006, 10:18 PM
I like those Pretty Pokeball colors.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 10:20 PM
I ment that your devamp has more than 2 colours.
I used the Gold, Silver, AND Crystal Shiny Charizard colors.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 10:24 PM
Well, it's still only supposed to have two colours.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 10:25 PM
I didn't want it to have only 2 colors, ok?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
21st May 2006, 10:29 PM
-_-
Oh, and the hair on the Blastoise/Flygon is not properly attatched.

Kiseki
21st May 2006, 10:29 PM
Your sprites are pretty Ok. Some need a few more shading and adjustments, but overall, you did a good job. :) I guess I like your Flareon/Pikachu... ^^; Anyway, I hope you'll improve! ^^

Akayfortyseven
21st May 2006, 10:49 PM
Looks pretty good! i like the eevee ones. some of the mixes dont seem right yno? its sort of like the parts dont mix or arent merged properly. and the battle scene text needs to be a little smaller. overall you have some very good ideas and are clearly creative :) practice makes perfect, and these are significantly improved since last time. what program do you use for these?

.Person.
21st May 2006, 10:56 PM
Egnor ~♠Orange♥Eipam♠~. I don't know whos sprites he likes.

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 10:59 PM
Looks pretty good! i like the eevee ones. some of the mixes dont seem right yno? its sort of like the parts dont mix or arent merged properly. and the battle scene text needs to be a little smaller. overall you have some very good ideas and are clearly creative :) practice makes perfect, and these are significantly improved since last time. what program do you use for these?
I use Microsoft Paint.

And yeah, Lunar~*~Eclipse, I think he thinks he's all that and the best, but he's not. I'll ignore him.

I need a suggestion!!!

.Person.
21st May 2006, 11:06 PM
Ummm... I like your mixes. How about you try to use haunter and some other pokemon as the base in a mix?

~*Pikafan*~
21st May 2006, 11:25 PM
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/981/hauntclops9zo.png (http://imageshack.us)

Hauntclops!!!

Dusclops + Haunter = Hauntclops.

.Person.
22nd May 2006, 12:29 AM
Ya. It's cool.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
22nd May 2006, 12:53 AM
Excuse me, but I am female and am not the best. I have seen many sprites better than mine, but yours to me aren't those. It doesn't look much like a Dusclops. Try recolouring the base.
Oh, I forgot, you put me on your ignore list.

~*Pikafan*~
22nd May 2006, 2:09 AM
No I didn't.

I don't want to! And If you don't see the hands or the thing on its head, then you can't see.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
22nd May 2006, 3:13 AM
I can see the parts, I am not blind, but it looks like you only recoloured parts and stuck them on, and not a thourough mix. Sorry, but this is the best explanation I can give you.

OmegaDragon
22nd May 2006, 3:17 AM
It doesnt look like a dusclops. Recolour the body with dusclops colors, and it will deem much more like a mix.

POKErUsAm
22nd May 2006, 3:27 AM
You should make it have the brick like things on it.
The lineless pikachu needs some work because you just made the lines gone.(Even if you didn't, you still need to make it look better)
To acually make it look better, you can recolor the lines like the color nexted to it.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
22nd May 2006, 4:50 AM
It doesnt look like a dusclops. Recolour the body with dusclops colors, and it will deem much more like a mix.
I already told him that. He will not do it.

~*Pikafan*~
22nd May 2006, 9:18 PM
FINE! You guys want me to recolor the thing dusclops colors so bad, I did! I'm tired of you saying stuff like that.

HERE!
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8664/duscter0jo.png (http://imageshack.us)

POKErUsAm
23rd May 2006, 1:25 AM
It sorta looks more like a dusclops mix now.
Try a recolour of a pokemon now. You aren't the best at recoloring so maybe you should try one.
PS: Since you are useing paint, don't use the colors it gives you to recolor, but another pokemons color.

OmegaDragon
23rd May 2006, 1:36 AM
That looks much more like a mix now. Good job. Sorry if I sounded mean, I was just trying to give CC.

~*Pikafan*~
23rd May 2006, 1:42 AM
It sorta looks more like a dusclops mix now.
Try a recolour of a pokemon now. You aren't the best at recoloring so maybe you should try one.
PS: Since you are useing paint, don't use the colors it gives you to recolor, but another pokemons color.
Hello?!? On that breloom, I said I used Combusken's colors! Didn't you see that on the last thread?!?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
23rd May 2006, 1:49 AM
Much better, but I would like it more if it only had one eye and some stripes, like a dusclops.

~*Pikafan*~
23rd May 2006, 1:58 AM
Ok................

Wait, what do you mean?

silverdragon
23rd May 2006, 2:01 AM
i like the pokeballs

~*Pikafan*~
23rd May 2006, 2:07 AM
Ok, this is SO CRAZY!!!

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/4449/duscter0of.png (http://imageshack.us)

Silver Salamence
23rd May 2006, 2:25 AM
Your last Hauntclops whatever is really good. Don't try putting the brick pattern from Dusclops on Haunter. If you did, it'd mean that haunter has substantial form, which it doesn't really, or shouldn't. Your other sprites are OK. I like the Mew pokeball most of all. Your lineless sprite on the other hand is terrible. In stead of replacing the lines with actual colors and shades, you really just took off all the lines. There is a website that gives awesome tutorials but I forgot the url. Anyways, keep spriting. I see you have potential.

~Flareon~
23rd May 2006, 3:28 PM
I liked the Haunter/Dusclops mix, it looks very cool.

~*Pikafan*~
23rd May 2006, 11:17 PM
I made a new mix! Everyone, this is Scyclops. And do you see the arm that connects the left Cythe or razor? I made that.

http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/7284/scyclops4kj.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
24th May 2006, 6:20 AM
The sythe on our left should be flipped. What is it a mix of?

~*Pikafan*~
24th May 2006, 12:47 PM
Kabutops + Scyther = Scyclops.

~*Pikafan*~
24th May 2006, 10:11 PM
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/1558/eevsea6fh.png (http://imageshack.us)

Update!

Eevee + Horsea = Eevsea
Seadra + Vaporeon = Seaporedron

~Flareon~
25th May 2006, 10:42 AM
I liked the Vaporeon/Seadra mix, it looks very cool. And the Eevee/Horsea mix is so cute. Good job!

Char1016
25th May 2006, 11:10 AM
You still need to practice, even though some are done pretty good.

~*Pikafan*~
27th May 2006, 5:40 PM
I made 3 new mixes!!!

Pazuchu, Marichu, and Razumachu!

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9786/pazuchumarichuandrazumachu9yc.png (http://imageshack.us)

Magma Grunt Alex
28th May 2006, 12:12 AM
Some are weird, but ok at the same time.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 12:28 AM
I think you should reshade Pirill's head.

Torchibusken
28th May 2006, 1:39 AM
They're good,Pikafan, especially the Haunter/Dusclops. Orange Aipom, no offense ,but that's like telling an ice cream vendor they need more meat. Pikafan didn't wan't 2 colors, so don't badger her.

pikachu25
28th May 2006, 1:52 AM
I made 3 new mixes!!!

Pazuchu, Marichu, and Razumachu!

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9786/pazuchumarichuandrazumachu9yc.png (http://imageshack.us)
Razumachu mix is good, but you should fix Pazuchu and Marichu's ears a little.They look kinda weird like that.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 3:47 AM
Orange Aipom, no offense ,but that's like telling an ice cream vendor they need more meat.
I don't think we are talking about that anymore.

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 12:24 PM
They're good,Pikafan, especially the Haunter/Dusclops. Orange Aipom, no offense ,but that's like telling an ice cream vendor they need more meat. Pikafan didn't wan't 2 colors, so don't badger her.
I am a boy, you know.

Suggestion Plz!

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 2:44 PM
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3628/firemew7qr.png (http://imageshack.us)

My own Mew re-element!!!

shadowofdreams
28th May 2006, 6:48 PM
those look great!

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 7:39 PM
The hair doesn't look attatched.

Brandon-kun
28th May 2006, 8:52 PM
I made 3 new mixes!!!

Pazuchu, Marichu, and Razumachu!

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9786/pazuchumarichuandrazumachu9yc.png (http://imageshack.us)

If this is a evolution line mix then the one on the left, Pazuchu, ahould also be yellow...

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 9:35 PM
I would think that if it was an evo-chain, the sprite would have a different base.

Brandon-kun
28th May 2006, 9:59 PM
I would think that if it was an evo-chain, the sprite would have a different base.

So then the base would be Pichu's evo line? I think Azurill's is good but the Pazuchu should be yellow like the other sprites.....

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 10:06 PM
No, the first sprite has a Pichu base, instead of an Azuril base, when the other sprites have a Maril evo line base.

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 10:12 PM
I tried that, the tail would look wrong, but ok. What do you mean the hair isn't attached?!?!?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
28th May 2006, 10:24 PM
Pay attention, it is attached, but not correctly. The part I didn't tell you is to edit it so it fits Mew's head, and not Ponyta's.

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 10:39 PM
Oh. I'll fix those things.

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 11:23 PM
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9707/pazuchu1qv.png (http://imageshack.us)

And when I use Large Size on MS Paint, it looks fine.

~*Pikafan*~
28th May 2006, 11:29 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1580/firemew6mn.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
29th May 2006, 2:00 AM
Is that the same sprite?

Brandon-kun
29th May 2006, 2:17 AM
Is that the same sprite?


Ya it kinda does look lilke it! XD

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 2:45 AM
I moved its "hair" down a little.

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 3:21 AM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/112/pikatwo7ji.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
29th May 2006, 3:23 AM
No, I ment to edit the outline., not to relocate it.
The colours on this one don't blend very well.

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 3:30 AM
Oh. Oh well...

Anyways, someone from Poke-Center Forums made a suggestion of that.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
29th May 2006, 3:30 AM
A suggestion of what?

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 3:35 AM
Pikachu & Mewtwo!

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
29th May 2006, 3:40 AM
What does that have to do with anything?

Brandon-kun
29th May 2006, 3:41 AM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/112/pikatwo7ji.png (http://imageshack.us)

The head....colors aren't blended so it is a bad sprite so far..

It is kinda bad. Fix this sprite up!

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 3:51 AM
I fixed it!

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/5457/pikatwo7ds.png (http://imageshack.us)

Brandon-kun
29th May 2006, 3:52 AM
I fixed it!

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/5457/pikatwo7ds.png (http://imageshack.us)

Oh, that is much better! The shading is good and then the face is much, much better! XD

purpleslime
29th May 2006, 4:03 AM
I think the tail should be a little lower

Dean
29th May 2006, 4:00 PM
I love the pinsir.scyther mix. it's my fave

/Exiled/
29th May 2006, 4:34 PM
the dusclops 1 scares me....

~*Pikafan*~
29th May 2006, 7:46 PM
I had made Chimetoy before (Chimecho + Baltoy), but I mixed it incorrectly. Here is the correct mix: http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8906/chimetoy4xa.png (http://imageshack.us)

~*Pikafan*~
3rd June 2006, 3:07 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2647/sceptiken3wi.png (http://imageshack.us)

I had started on it last week.

SUGGESTION PLEASE!

Brandon-kun
3rd June 2006, 6:09 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2647/sceptiken3wi.png (http://imageshack.us)

I had started on it last week.

SUGGESTION PLEASE!

It took you a week to finish that?! XD

It's okay, there is nothing wrong with it so...it;s an okay sprite!

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
3rd June 2006, 7:14 PM
Some of left leg is missing. You might want to scratch what is missing.

~*Pikafan*~
3rd June 2006, 7:31 PM
It took you a week to finish that?! XD

It's okay, there is nothing wrong with it so...it;s an okay sprite!
I stopped for about 6 days.......

~*Pikafan*~
3rd June 2006, 7:50 PM
I see what you mean, orange aipom.

http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/1069/sceptiken4bz.png (http://imageshack.us)

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 1:32 AM
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/607/hoothootdevamp0tp.png (http://imageshack.us)

-Espacio-
4th June 2006, 1:45 AM
Is that a revamp? If it is, the only thing that is revamped is the eyes.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
4th June 2006, 1:46 AM
No! The other leg!

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 1:48 AM
Oh.

And No, the whole sprite is revamped!

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg163.gifhttp://img127.imageshack.us/img127/607/hoothootdevamp0tp.png

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 1:54 AM
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6669/sceptiken7dp.png (http://imageshack.us)

That better?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
4th June 2006, 2:13 AM
http://i6.*******.com/11kk3uo.png
This is what I mean.

-Espacio-
4th June 2006, 2:32 AM
It doesn't have enough shadess on it. Add all of HootHoot's shades on it.

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 12:21 PM
Oh. I only put 1 shade on, and I'll fix that, Orange Aipom

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 2:27 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9664/sceptiken1yo.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
4th June 2006, 7:35 PM
Now it has a tumor in it's leg. XD

~*Pikafan*~
4th June 2006, 7:35 PM
What???????? You told me to do that.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
4th June 2006, 8:00 PM
Not to make it bigger, but make it a circle.

~*Pikafan*~
6th June 2006, 9:13 PM
I have some new stuff!

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9392/castinch0qk.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2807/masjask8gi.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4312/electichu5cs.png (http://imageshack.us) I know, a little strange..
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9171/silverpichu8iv.png (http://imageshack.us) Pichu recolored Castform's colors.

SUPER BLASTOISE
6th June 2006, 9:20 PM
i think u shouls open a request shop ^___^

Brandon-kun
6th June 2006, 10:54 PM
Oh.

And No, the whole sprite is revamped!

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg163.gifhttp://img127.imageshack.us/img127/607/hoothootdevamp0tp.png

That is not revamped! It is just a recolor! You need to fix that!

RisenJade DragonKnightGT
6th June 2006, 11:29 PM
all of the are all really bad to be honest with you.all of them need serious work and some serious effort.i will reveiw them one by one very carefully and tell you want is good and bad to tell you how to properly mix and never make these bad sprites ever again to start i'll reveiw in order.

the haunter/dusclops needs serious work start with a more versatile sprite that works with the sprite haunter is a bad base.alll i can see you did on the sprite was put a dusclops eye hands and the hair and glow on the hands.the hair does'nt even blend in.it looks a it is coming from the back which it should'nt.if you had worked with the dusclops base you could have added more parts and make the mix look good.please put more effort into your sprites you added 4 parts which is'nt much of effort.

again syther/kabutops you add only 3 parts a deformed scratch left hand and kabutops claws.heres a tip don't use the copy and paster trick mimic the psrite to acutally work with the sprite and make it alot more natural looking.the wings of the syther you messed up the wings by messing up the outline please don't do that.

vaporeon/seadra eevee/horsea again im gonna say you add too little parts for every sprite which makes it look way too simple.vaporean/seadra a hard mix please get used to mixing before you start with anything hard like groudon/rayquaza or somehting like that.

the pichu i can't tell what else is in their looks pretty good probably yourt best but screwed because of the recolouring on the outline

the azuril line is ok you know just screwed yet again by the infamous bad outline.

the mew you just added fire that is real nice mew is a pokemon that can never be greatly mixed.

the sceptile/blaziken is the worse sprite you ever made bcause you tried to scratch parts and it made me throwup.the leg look like o no!doctor sceptile/blaziken has a giant tomber on his left leg we have to amputate it.to me you are horrible and scratch just again mimic the part to make it look natural don't scratch sprites until you get the hang of spriting or like me read 8 tutorials to go straight to scratching.

vaporeon/pikachu same thing as the horsea/eevee line

ipod pokemon is not a form of spriting and is plan retarded it is plainly simple it is just recolor black put headphones on pokemon and a eyepod which has no color

bannete/dusclops same as dusclops/haunter

blastoise and flygon is too hard short and sweet

flareon/pikachu too simple of a sprite 2 parts hardly a effort to me.screwed by the infamous outline stealing bandit also not all of the tail is recolored.

devamp is pretty good but it looks g/s style so you might wanna make the color a little light or darker than original charizard color.

caterpie/whatever spikey pokemon hardly i see you spent like 2 minutes on the sprite

lineless is not a form of spriting retarded idea

i don't make pokeball pokemon

again please choose a more versatile pokemon that you could put more parts into

the devamp is ok but it does'nt have any dithering like the g/s sprites if you want to make r/b sprites you have to give them a deformed sort of look.

i don't know about the mew i looks flat please add shading if your going to revamp

i don't do battle scenes

the chimeco same as blastoise/flygon

breloom recolour looks your best recolour new spriters usually right away with the recolour thing work on recolouring again so the bandit of bad outline will be repeled by your recoloring skills

gain i don't do eggs

mewtwo/deoxys is odd please use parts of the same pokemon

pichu/minun or plusle i do know but looks like a decent sprite

read the tutorials on serebii they will help.good luck on your never ending quest on your quest to be the best spriter ever.
don not be lazy read all of this!


That is not revamped! It is just a recolor! You need to fix that!
Kyuubi Ookami you oviously can't tell the difference from anything it is a revamp

~*Pikafan*~
7th June 2006, 1:13 AM
all of the are all really bad to be honest with you.all of them need serious work and some serious effort.i will reveiw them one by one very carefully and tell you want is good and bad to tell you how to properly mix and never make these bad sprites ever again to start i'll reveiw in order.

the haunter/dusclops needs serious work start with a more versatile sprite that works with the sprite haunter is a bad base.alll i can see you did on the sprite was put a dusclops eye hands and the hair and glow on the hands.the hair does'nt even blend in.it looks a it is coming from the back which it should'nt.if you had worked with the dusclops base you could have added more parts and make the mix look good.please put more effort into your sprites you added 4 parts which is'nt much of effort.

again syther/kabutops you add only 3 parts a deformed scratch left hand and kabutops claws.heres a tip don't use the copy and paster trick mimic the psrite to acutally work with the sprite and make it alot more natural looking.the wings of the syther you messed up the wings by messing up the outline please don't do that.

vaporeon/seadra eevee/horsea again im gonna say you add too little parts for every sprite which makes it look way too simple.vaporean/seadra a hard mix please get used to mixing before you start with anything hard like groudon/rayquaza or somehting like that.

the pichu i can't tell what else is in their looks pretty good probably yourt best but screwed because of the recolouring on the outline

the azuril line is ok you know just screwed yet again by the infamous bad outline.

the mew you just added fire that is real nice mew is a pokemon that can never be greatly mixed.

the sceptile/blaziken is the worse sprite you ever made bcause you tried to scratch parts and it made me throwup.the leg look like o no!doctor sceptile/blaziken has a giant tomber on his left leg we have to amputate it.to me you are horrible and scratch just again mimic the part to make it look natural don't scratch sprites until you get the hang of spriting or like me read 8 tutorials to go straight to scratching. I did not draw that bubble! Read the page before, fool!

vaporeon/pikachu same thing as the horsea/eevee line

ipod pokemon is not a form of spriting and is plan retarded it is plainly simple it is just recolor black put headphones on pokemon and a eyepod which has no color

bannete/dusclops same as dusclops/haunter

blastoise and flygon is too hard short and sweet

flareon/pikachu too simple of a sprite 2 parts hardly a effort to me.screwed by the infamous outline stealing bandit also not all of the tail is recolored.

devamp is pretty good but it looks g/s style so you might wanna make the color a little light or darker than original charizard color.

caterpie/whatever spikey pokemon hardly i see you spent like 2 minutes on the sprite

lineless is not a form of spriting retarded idea Stupid, don't call me a retard! Idiot.

i don't make pokeball pokemon

again please choose a more versatile pokemon that you could put more parts into

the devamp is ok but it does'nt have any dithering like the g/s sprites if you want to make r/b sprites you have to give them a deformed sort of look.

i don't know about the mew i looks flat please add shading if your going to revamp

i don't do battle scenes

the chimeco same as blastoise/flygon

breloom recolour looks your best recolour new spriters usually right away with the recolour thing work on recolouring again so the bandit of bad outline will be repeled by your recoloring skills

gain i don't do eggs

mewtwo/deoxys is odd please use parts of the same pokemon

pichu/minun or plusle i do know but looks like a decent sprite

read the tutorials on serebii they will help.good luck on your never ending quest on your quest to be the best spriter ever.
don not be lazy read all of this!


Kyuubi Ookami you oviously can't tell the difference from anything it is a revamp Yes it is. I used R/S/E sprite colors.

READ THIS. READ THAT OTHER BOLD ABOUT THE SCEPTILE BLAZIKEN.
Some of this stuff I had to rush, like the Vaporeon/Seadra, I was working on it, and I had to do HW, I never bothered to fix it.

And how about you try the stuff you did bad on and PM me them?

~*Pikafan*~
7th June 2006, 1:38 AM
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/7299/shablet8pv.png (http://imageshack.us)

~*Pikafan*~
7th June 2006, 2:57 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2972/uuberpichuball4re.png (http://imageshack.us)

I call it the Uuber (is it that way or Oober) Pichu ball!

Brandon-kun
7th June 2006, 3:37 AM
all of the are all really bad to be honest with you.all of them need serious work and some serious effort.i will reveiw them one by one very carefully and tell you want is good and bad to tell you how to properly mix and never make these bad sprites ever again to start i'll reveiw in order.

the haunter/dusclops needs serious work start with a more versatile sprite that works with the sprite haunter is a bad base.alll i can see you did on the sprite was put a dusclops eye hands and the hair and glow on the hands.the hair does'nt even blend in.it looks a it is coming from the back which it should'nt.if you had worked with the dusclops base you could have added more parts and make the mix look good.please put more effort into your sprites you added 4 parts which is'nt much of effort.

again syther/kabutops you add only 3 parts a deformed scratch left hand and kabutops claws.heres a tip don't use the copy and paster trick mimic the psrite to acutally work with the sprite and make it alot more natural looking.the wings of the syther you messed up the wings by messing up the outline please don't do that.

vaporeon/seadra eevee/horsea again im gonna say you add too little parts for every sprite which makes it look way too simple.vaporean/seadra a hard mix please get used to mixing before you start with anything hard like groudon/rayquaza or somehting like that.

the pichu i can't tell what else is in their looks pretty good probably yourt best but screwed because of the recolouring on the outline

the azuril line is ok you know just screwed yet again by the infamous bad outline.

the mew you just added fire that is real nice mew is a pokemon that can never be greatly mixed.

the sceptile/blaziken is the worse sprite you ever made bcause you tried to scratch parts and it made me throwup.the leg look like o no!doctor sceptile/blaziken has a giant tomber on his left leg we have to amputate it.to me you are horrible and scratch just again mimic the part to make it look natural don't scratch sprites until you get the hang of spriting or like me read 8 tutorials to go straight to scratching.

vaporeon/pikachu same thing as the horsea/eevee line

ipod pokemon is not a form of spriting and is plan retarded it is plainly simple it is just recolor black put headphones on pokemon and a eyepod which has no color

bannete/dusclops same as dusclops/haunter

blastoise and flygon is too hard short and sweet

flareon/pikachu too simple of a sprite 2 parts hardly a effort to me.screwed by the infamous outline stealing bandit also not all of the tail is recolored.

devamp is pretty good but it looks g/s style so you might wanna make the color a little light or darker than original charizard color.

caterpie/whatever spikey pokemon hardly i see you spent like 2 minutes on the sprite

lineless is not a form of spriting retarded idea

i don't make pokeball pokemon

again please choose a more versatile pokemon that you could put more parts into

the devamp is ok but it does'nt have any dithering like the g/s sprites if you want to make r/b sprites you have to give them a deformed sort of look.

i don't know about the mew i looks flat please add shading if your going to revamp

i don't do battle scenes

the chimeco same as blastoise/flygon

breloom recolour looks your best recolour new spriters usually right away with the recolour thing work on recolouring again so the bandit of bad outline will be repeled by your recoloring skills

gain i don't do eggs

mewtwo/deoxys is odd please use parts of the same pokemon

pichu/minun or plusle i do know but looks like a decent sprite

read the tutorials on serebii they will help.good luck on your never ending quest on your quest to be the best spriter ever.
don not be lazy read all of this!


Kyuubi Ookami you oviously can't tell the difference from anything it is a revamp

No just gop and look at it! It is just recolored! Except for the eyes! PLZ just look at the sprite..

~*Pikafan*~
14th June 2006, 1:38 AM
I finally did it! I'VE MADE A TC!

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5974/boo2jq.png (http://imageshack.us)

~Flareon~
14th June 2006, 4:52 AM
I liked your trainer card. And keep it up!

~*Pikafan*~
14th June 2006, 11:57 AM
Suggestion anyone?

~Flareon~
14th June 2006, 12:11 PM
Can you do a Plusle/Vaporeon mix?

~*Pikafan*~
14th June 2006, 12:12 PM
Vaporeon base?

~Flareon~
14th June 2006, 12:13 PM
Vaporeon base?
Yes, of course.

~*Pikafan*~
14th June 2006, 12:38 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5025/vaporusle7bw.png (http://imageshack.us)

~Flareon~
14th June 2006, 12:42 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5025/vaporusle7bw.png (http://imageshack.us)
I liked it. And can I use the Plusle/Vaporeon mix? I will give you credits.

~*Pikafan*~
14th June 2006, 12:45 PM
Sure. Go ahead

~*Pikafan*~
15th June 2006, 3:27 AM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2512/myfrteam5eo.png (http://imageshack.us)

This TC is my FR Team

Brandon-kun
15th June 2006, 3:34 AM
I don't like it since that it has a white background...

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
15th June 2006, 4:40 AM
Why does the Vaporeon have three ears?

~*Pikafan*~
15th June 2006, 12:25 PM
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkfrlg134.png

I tried to make have the 3 things like it does here.

Brandon-kun
16th June 2006, 12:44 AM
You should've just left that there and then recolred it with Plusles color...

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
16th June 2006, 2:27 AM
Then it would be a recolour. <_<
You could add two ears, and leave the top fin as it is, or remove it.

I was working on it, and I had to do HW, I never bothered to fix it.
Sprite after you do homework.

Stupid, don't call me a retard! Idiot.
That seems kind of contradicting.

~*Pikafan*~
16th June 2006, 2:56 AM
Huh? And I need a suggestion.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
16th June 2006, 6:54 PM
http://dragonflycave.com/testing.htm < A mix generator.
Lotad/Charmander?
Oh, and I joined your Johto Rpg.

Captain Murkrow
16th June 2006, 7:01 PM
haunter+dusclops.....0.o

Samayowa
16th June 2006, 7:14 PM
I really like the Haunter/Dusclops sprite. It's really good.

~*Pikafan*~
16th June 2006, 9:05 PM
(Orange Aipom: I know, thanks.)

I meant huh to the last thing you said.

I'll try Lotad Charmander.

Any other Suggestions?

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 1:28 PM
I think I messed up on the lotad Charmander, and I made a New TC.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9815/lotamander3fi.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6372/pokemoncratertc7zq.png (http://imageshack.us)

~Flareon~
18th June 2006, 1:56 PM
I liked the Charmander/Lotad mix and the trainer card looks great.

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 2:02 PM
I am making a Fake-mon TC now. It's a TC with pokemon Mixes (or Fake-mon, which is what we call fake pokemon at my Forum) as the party pokemon.

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 2:14 PM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/3030/mixestc7rb.png (http://imageshack.us)

~Flareon~
18th June 2006, 5:49 PM
I liked your fakemon TC too. And good job!

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 6:01 PM
Suggestion?

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 7:16 PM
I made another TC!

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7717/emerald4by.png (http://imageshack.us)

I think I'll open up a shop, what do you think?

Ray_League_Champion
18th June 2006, 7:47 PM
Pikafan has now become an employee at my shop if you would like to get some of his work. The Url is:

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=3472716

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 7:49 PM
Yes, I am now a worker there. So if you want a suggestion or a request, request there, please.

~*Pikafan*~
18th June 2006, 8:54 PM
I made a new TC! Credit to pokesho for Images.

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/2869/pokesho7pj.png (http://imageshack.us)

So? Should I open up a shop?

~Flareon~
19th June 2006, 6:02 AM
Yes, you should open a shop. Because your trainer cards are great.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
19th June 2006, 6:11 AM
He is already working somewhere. It's okay, but I don't like the paint blue background.

~*Pikafan*~
19th June 2006, 12:17 PM
I can work at 2 places! I already am, but that shop died.

Oh, and that button in your sig? I made that.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
19th June 2006, 6:31 PM
So? Do you want me to give credit?
Oh, and I requested something in the other shop.

~*Pikafan*~
20th June 2006, 1:15 AM
Yes.

This is the request:

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7169/mudinair7wf.png (http://imageshack.us)

Brandon-kun
20th June 2006, 7:37 AM
Some of the shading is grey whihc doens't go god with those mix of colors..then the left white thing, don't know what they are called, is outlined in black so mabye do that to a lighter color than doing black. Looks bad like that.

May_Eevee, os you just say "Oh, those are good!" or "I liked in Eevee/Wooper Mix!". Without saying anything else, then that is considered SPAM!

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
20th June 2006, 8:28 AM
I'll just say that it is your rpg.

I think that is because he is using FRLG sprites. When you use those sprites, recolour them to Emerald colours. They will look better.
The chest orb's outline is all black. Yuck.

~*Pikafan*~
20th June 2006, 12:24 PM
Some of the shading is grey whihc doens't go god with those mix of colors..then the left white thing, don't know what they are called, is outlined in black so mabye do that to a lighter color than doing black. Looks bad like that.

May_Eevee, os you just say "Oh, those are good!" or "I liked in Eevee/Wooper Mix!". Without saying anything else, then that is considered SPAM!
Well, actually, to me, it doesn't.

And I did use the FR/LG sprite.

~*Pikafan*~
20th June 2006, 12:25 PM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2678/celechi0hd.png (http://imageshack.us)

Here was another request.

I don't like this one...

~*Pikafan*~
20th June 2006, 12:57 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/135/mix7rt.png (http://imageshack.us)

~*Pikafan*~
21st June 2006, 8:58 PM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6997/jolteonrevamp2ti.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2002/golemew2xn.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3656/flarenun5rq.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
1st July 2006, 10:51 PM
The revamp isn't very good. It still looks like a Green sprite. All you did is recolour. You need to add custom shading in revamps.

kuro mizu
2nd July 2006, 5:55 AM
ummm...the backgrounds on your trainer cards suck...on the water background one, try looking up "photoshop water" on google images...just dont leave the background blank it makes it look horrible.

~Flareon~
2nd July 2006, 12:11 PM
I liked the Zapdos/Articuno mix. It's awesome. Keep it up!

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 2:03 AM
I made my first scratch!http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7940/voltorbscratch7bk.png (http://imageshack.us)

It may look the same, but it isn't.

Look (mine's on the left): http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9815/voltorbs4nl.png (http://imageshack.us)

RisenJade DragonKnightGT
7th July 2006, 2:10 AM
I made my first scratch!http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7940/voltorbscratch7bk.png (http://imageshack.us)

It may look the same, but it isn't.

Yeah try something alot more original.That is not scratch if you are just trying to mimic the r/s voltorb sprite.You copied the exact outline and shading just with a few alias and different colors.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
7th July 2006, 2:12 AM
WTF? It's exactly the same as the FL one. Well, except for an eye pixel.

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 2:17 AM
Yeah try something alot more original.That is not scratch if you are just trying to mimic the r/s voltorb sprite.You copied the exact outline and shading just with a few alias and different colors.
Ok. You mean make my own position and stuff? Sure, I will try.

RisenJade DragonKnightGT
7th July 2006, 2:22 AM
WTF? It's exactly the same as the FL one.

OO did'nt notice that yep I think your orange aipam i dunno could be wrong.
He/she is right the shading and most of the outline is the same.Only differenct between pikafan and fr/lg one is the outline.On the >top right Pikafan made a solid corner instead of making a two pixels than corner.Pikafan try a fakemon or something make your own idea.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
7th July 2006, 2:23 AM
Oh yeah, and an eye pixel is missing.

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 2:29 AM
3, actually.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
7th July 2006, 2:31 AM
Oh yeah, and you got rid of the shading in the eye.

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 2:34 AM
I'm trying to make a fakemon now.

Edit: Forget it, I'll try it later.

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 5:43 PM
http://img307.imageshack.us/img307/7738/scratch2nk.png (http://imageshack.us)

This is my first correct scratch, right?

~*Pikafan*~
7th July 2006, 5:52 PM
http://img321.imageshack.us/img321/2021/voltdude0dr.png (http://imageshack.us)

Another mix!

~*Pikafan*~
10th July 2006, 5:39 PM
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2479/grassmew8dd.png

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
10th July 2006, 9:19 PM
It's a nice re-element, but the shades of green don't blend very well, like it's a different on the head, body, and tail.

~*Pikafan*~
10th July 2006, 10:43 PM
I used different pokemon. What about the scratch?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
10th July 2006, 11:18 PM
Then recolour it to one colour. :p I know you did, you used rozelia(sp?), Grovile, and Breloom. Maybe recolour it with Skiploom colours.
I don't know what to say about the scratch. It's good, but is a bit bland.

~*Pikafan*~
11th July 2006, 1:24 AM
What does bland mean? I'll try that.

Edit: I can't recolor it. It won't show up.

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
11th July 2006, 1:33 AM
What do you mean?

Golden Rapidash
11th July 2006, 3:51 AM
Is the cubone really a scratch? It looks like the normal sprite to me...

RisenJade DragonKnightGT
11th July 2006, 6:25 AM
Omg what is the point of you trying to scratch when you just try to mimic a pokemon sprite.I found alot of simalarities in all cubone sprites from the shading to outline and overall look.I told to try fakemon in your post you just don't wanna.Whats the point of spriting for you when your not going to put effort into your sprite.t.For most spriters it takes hours to ACTUALLY make a good sprite.You should acutally contiue your work instead of just showcasing a unfinished one seriously.The re element is not a re element really it is just a poor copy and paste look the parts don't even blend.Oviously tutorials do not help you nor critique.Their has'nt been any improvement in your mixes whatsoever.

~*Pikafan*~
11th July 2006, 1:57 PM
How about you Shut Up and read the front page you idiot! You don't read!

~Flareon~
11th July 2006, 2:01 PM
I liked the Geodude/Voltorb mix. It's so cool.

~*Pikafan*~
11th July 2006, 4:59 PM
Is the cubone really a scratch? It looks like the normal sprite to me...
Yes it is, look at the bone and the right leg.


Then recolour it to one colour. :p I know you did, you used rozelia(sp?), Grovile, and Breloom. Maybe recolour it with Skiploom colours.
I don't know what to say about the scratch. It's good, but is a bit bland.
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9829/grassmew2pj.png (http://imageshack.us)

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
11th July 2006, 5:08 PM
How about you Shut Up and read the front page you idiot! You don't read!
What do you mean?

Maybe you could give it another rose. The things on it's head don't really look attached.

Brandon-kun
11th July 2006, 5:42 PM
What do you mean?

Maybe you could give it another rose. The things on it's head don't really look attached.

He was talking to...ArchFireDragon! And I AGREE with him. Some shading pixeling are the same...-________-

RisenJade DragonKnightGT
11th July 2006, 11:53 PM
How about you Shut Up and read the front page you idiot! You don't read!

You STFU I can read you idiot.I already stated why your sprites suck thats what you wanted so don't call me an idiot.Idiot.

Brandon-kun
11th July 2006, 11:58 PM
Flaming! Alert!

Okay, now..lets not flame..

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
12th July 2006, 12:13 AM
Okay, let's not minimod.

Instead of making fakemon, you could make unique poses. These poses look more like edits. Maybe a tail-chasing Growlithe or something.

DarkAbyssWolf
12th July 2006, 1:00 AM
I just wanna say the "Lineless" pikachu is a pikachu with no black -_-

and the little flame war that is starting .....

Pikafan,
ArchFireDragon DIDsay why it sucks.All he said it was an effortless sprite BECAUSE
it had a lot of similarities in it.AND it does.

All I'm saying is acting like a 5 year-old and saying"How about you Shut Up and read the front page you idiot! You don't read!"
to someone who is trying to help you is going to give a really bad rep.


Also to both of you guys flaming is not an answer.

Oh and get this,AN 11-year-old is telling you this.

I may be a kid but i'm still grown-up

~*Pikafan*~
12th July 2006, 1:18 AM
Okay, let's not minimod.

Instead of making fakemon, you could make unique poses. These poses look more like edits. Maybe a tail-chasing Growlithe or something.
Huh? What do you mean? You mean Growlithe chasing its tail? Hm... I'll try.

I'm just gonna ignore ArchFireDragon Now. I don't freaking care what he says anymore.

DarkAbyssWolf
12th July 2006, 1:30 AM
-_______________________________________-

wow you didn't listen to my post did you?HE WAS TRYING TO HELP

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
12th July 2006, 2:33 AM
Erm, reduce the size of the text. I guess he was, but the tone of the text threw him off.

~*Pikafan*~
12th July 2006, 12:42 PM
-_______________________________________-

wow you didn't listen to my post did you?

HE WAS TRYING TO HELP
How about you DON'T SPAM IN MY THREAD. I DON'T LIKE HIM SO I'M IGNORING HIM.

Brandon-kun
12th July 2006, 9:16 PM
flaming.

What are you gonna do next?

°«ΑпGЗ ♠
13th July 2006, 1:12 AM
Yes, Pikafan, stop flaming.

Spriteman
13th July 2006, 2:19 AM
Pikafan... Seen him on an RPG somewhere...

Anyway, Some are good, some are bad, I'm honest, so, well... For all of them around 7/10 really.

~*Pikafan*~
13th July 2006, 5:37 PM
Yes, Pikafan, stop flaming.
Yes, °«ΑпGЗ ♠, stop minimoding.

I think I'll just delete this SPAMming thread and start a new one.

Edit: I know where you have seen me from Spriteman! From the Sevii Islands RPG!