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smoochum friend
25th May 2006, 7:09 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h5/smoochumfriend/iggymite.jpghttp://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h5/smoochumfriend/oddchou.jpghttp://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h5/smoochumfriend/chindish.jpg

these are my first ever sprites

please give constructive critiscism

i may recolour the igglybuff and magnemite mix

spareux
25th May 2006, 7:24 PM
I like the firt oddish/chincou one. Mixes seem to be the very first thing most people do when they start out. You should definitely recolour the igglybuff/magnemite mix to make it look les like a Copy/Paste job.

I would suggest for the final mix reshaping Oddish head to better suit the antenae. Also, there is an uneeded black line near the top just under the antenae that makes the head look square in that area.

Overall, good. 7/10 for a newbie.

smoochum friend
25th May 2006, 7:32 PM
thnx

i recoulor and post an update soon

Psycick Potato
25th May 2006, 10:56 PM
They are amazing for first sprites, when I made my first sprite, I accidentally used paint colors...Lol

Jerichi
26th May 2006, 12:22 AM
For a beginner, they're OK. The Igglymite needs some work, namely in colors and shading consistncy. Also the colors look a little washed out. JPGs=not good for colors. PNGs give you the same quality without the color loss. The Oddish base fusion needs some work. The shading on the antenna needs to be fixed, and the colors need to work toghether better.