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Silver Salamence
25th May 2006, 9:47 PM
Hi.

Now onto the sprites

MIXES

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg096.png Who's that? It's Drew!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/Agronite.png It's Agronite!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr149.png Umm... I don't really have anyhing to say about this one...

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr380.png Steel/Psychic with levitate. This owns Metagross. Its name is Lottery.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg092.pnghttp://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg093no.pnghttp://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg094n.png My two Favorite pokemon mixed to make the uberest pokemon!!!

TRAINER EDITS

It's John Ciponi, Mafia Leader, Wrestler. http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr116.png Version 2!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr125.png Aaauugghhh!!! Zombie Gary!!!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr077.png Blonde man...

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr037.png Zombie Steven!

POKE EDITS

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pinkpokemon.png You know, from the anime...

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr248.png Buttered Tyranitar! Mmmmmmmmmm!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/agrumon.png Federated Troops of Johto!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkrs379.png It's... it's... alive!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkmnrubyback5.png Devil Dragonite! EDIT : http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/dd.png Better version!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlgsh135.png It's about to use its attack, Soul Weed!!!

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg094.png It's going to use its attack, Psycho Tsunami!!!

RE-ELEMENTS

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr303.png Fire Flygon.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg078.png Ghost Rapidash. http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/rsback078.png Back view.

SHADOWS

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr3061.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr373.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr254.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr125.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr009.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr006.png

STATUES

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr135.png Stone Ash.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr1120.png Gold Steelix.

JACKUPS - (Psycick Potato and I created this idea, don't steal! Give cred if using)

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr3730.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr370.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr368.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr367.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr350.png

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/emespr230.png

REGION MAPS

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/kalia.png The land of Kalia. Just of the coast of who-knows-where.

JELLO (My Idea, Give cred if using, Don't steal.)

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/pkfrlg0942.pngMMmmmm...

MISC.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr108.png
Which looks better, with or without lines?
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr1080.png
Couldn't do heads. Too hard. I loooooooove the shading on them it is so awesome.


What say you? I value thoughts of others so post away! I will update on what you think is good and improve on what you think is bad!
Comment, and Contrusctive Critcize!

Karma Dude
25th May 2006, 10:02 PM
There nice I especially like the Jello Gengar xDD.

Captain Murkrow
25th May 2006, 10:04 PM
JELLO GENGAR! EAT! it's wicked

PureFyre
25th May 2006, 10:07 PM
You are pretty good for a beginner.
There are some flaws here and there.
With the way you've attached parts onto Pokemon.
But all-in-all they're good.
Keep practicing!
:D

Silver Salamence
25th May 2006, 10:07 PM
Thanks. ^^^ you 3. What about the others? Any thing I can improve on?

Karma Dude
25th May 2006, 10:11 PM
Well that last one looks better without the outline and the outline on the buttered Tyranitar looks a bit dodgy but the rest are all great!

Dark_Lugia
25th May 2006, 10:47 PM
I love you`re fire flygon^^ Tey are great^^ Keep going ;)

Psycick Potato
25th May 2006, 10:50 PM
You forgot to name your map Kalia!
And you forgot to pur the name of the steel/ psycick mix...aka Lottery

And you might want to tell the shadow and Jacked up pokemon's names...

I just saw how lotterys head was... I thought it was a blown up verson of skarmory's head at first, but now i see what it is.

thats all I have to say

BH-Star
25th May 2006, 10:59 PM
the first 4 sprites are good, unfortunately i have to say (in my opinion, and no offence) the rest actually does suck.. i think there not really serious, and you can see that you didn't spent a lot of time on them.. if i were you i'd stick with the mixes, cause those are really good..

Silver Salamence
25th May 2006, 11:05 PM
You forgot to name your map Kalia!
And you forgot to pur the name of the steel/ psycick mix...aka Lottery

And you might want to tell the shadow and Jacked up pokemon's names...

I just saw how lotterys head was... I thought it was a blown up verson of skarmory's head at first, but now i see what it is.

thats all I have to say

Ya ok ill do that right now.

And the shadow and jacked don't have names. I mean why do the need names. They're just messed up versions of real pokemon.

Psycick Potato
25th May 2006, 11:21 PM
HOLY TOILET PLUNGERS!!1!12! you already have 9 posts in one day!!! my thread only has 7 posts and i have been on that for 3 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets get to the point...BH-star, you were kinda offensive, and The JAKED UP ones are supposed to look bad! also if you think that fire flygon took practly no time, and little effort TRY IT YOURSELF!!!

but you have a point on some, wich look like they take 2 mins.

Jedi Flygon
26th May 2006, 12:08 AM
They're pretty good! Actually, your very great for a beginner. I L.O.V.E. the Jello Gengar, looks good enough to eat! JK! *Goes to find a knife and a fork when no one notices* Keep up the good work! *Mouth stuffed with Jello Gengar*

Silver Salamence
26th May 2006, 12:23 AM
HOLY TOILET PLUNGERS!!1!12! you already have 9 posts in one day!!! my thread only has 7 posts and i have been on that for 3 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets get to the point...BH-star, you were kinda offensive, and The JAKED UP ones are supposed to look bad! also if you think that fire flygon took practly no time, and little effort TRY IT YOURSELF!!!

but you have a point on some, wich look like they take 2 mins.

Buddyo, these (Buttered Tyranitar being the only exception) took a whole lot longer than 2 min.


They're pretty good! Actually, your very great for a beginner. I L.O.V.E. the Jello Gengar, looks good enough to eat! JK! *Goes to find a knife and a fork when no one notices* Keep up the good work! *Mouth stuffed with Jello Gengar*

Why must every one love Jello Gengar? I mean, does he really look tasty to you? He looks like the creation of some mad, Norweigein, pokemon-obsessed, cooking scientist. Awww.. Great now I have mental picture. A very wrong one too. Seasoned with peppered onion salt. 0.0

Btw, thanks for all the nice replies people!

Psycick Potato
26th May 2006, 12:35 AM
I said they LOOK LIKE they were made in 2 mins, not were actually made in 2 mins! And I'm pretty sure that in Norway, people don't use peppered onion salt for seasoning...And Wutcanido, i don't think you eat JELLO with a knife...

Silver Salamence
26th May 2006, 12:59 AM
^ Right, I knew that, heh, heh.

People, people! Don't only post about jello gengar! Crit the other stuff too. And give cred if you're using my ideas of Jack ups and jello.

Megg Lavender
26th May 2006, 3:21 AM
You're pretty good for a beginner. ^^ I really like that Jello Gengar... it looks really good. XD Well, keep up the good work, I know that you'll improve more later on. ^^

~Flareon~
26th May 2006, 10:12 AM
I liked the Aggron/Dragonite mix, it looks very awesome. And the other stuffs are very nice.

Chinese Teletubbie
26th May 2006, 10:20 AM
The Jackups are totally crap. The shadows and trainer edits need alot of work on. But the Jello's are pretty cool

Omega Pirate
26th May 2006, 10:36 AM
That fire Flygon is pretty awesome, and I like the gello idea, without lines.

Zero Nexus
26th May 2006, 9:33 PM
great! love the gold steelix

~zezrex5 out! ;356;

BH-Star
27th May 2006, 12:47 PM
i wasn't even talking about the jackups man.. just all the sprites.. i still think that only your mixes are good.. some of them, are really good, some are not so good.. but i think i said enough about the other stuff..

Silver Salamence
27th May 2006, 5:21 PM
i wasn't even talking about the jackups man.. just all the sprites.. i still think that only your mixes are good.. some of them, are really good, some are not so good.. but i think i said enough about the other stuff..

I'll take your advice and try to improve on the others, but you kinda haven't told me what I need to improve on in each section.

Aeroglyphix
27th May 2006, 6:16 PM
They're awesome!

Silver Salamence
27th May 2006, 7:17 PM
The Jackups are totally crap. The shadows and trainer edits need alot of work on. But the Jello's are pretty cool

Actually, they're supposed to be crap. Hence the name JACK-UP. What's wrong with trainer edits and the shadows? If you could tell me, I could improve.

maxxa
27th May 2006, 7:42 PM
what do you mean when you say they dont suck........
the trainer edits dont go the wreslers proportions are all wrong the jack ups are totally what! the mixes are either deformed or a pokemon with a tail or wings the poke edits are all basicly recoloured with in one case an aggrons head the only good oneS there is fire flygon and the gengar jello

spareux
27th May 2006, 7:58 PM
I think (imo) the the Fire-type Flygon is the best. But then again I also quite like the Ho-oH...
The mixes are by far the overall best though. The dragonite/gengar creepes me out a bit, however... And i think you could improve the smile.

Now. Trainer Edits. The blond man is Ok. The others need some work. On the Porf. Oak/Machamp, You have completely just destroyed the outlining while recolouring, ultimately killin gthe sprite. You can re-build it, or you could start again. personally, i would try re-building it. The same goes for Zombie Gary, but not on such a high scale.
Zombie Steven's red looks like you sued a default paint colour. Try adding some more shades of red.
The Poke Edits are good, except you have also destroyed some outlining on the Entei and Tyranitar. Also, you could try fixing the belly shading on Dark Dragonite.
And I'm guessing the shadows have no outline for an effective reason, so...

Overall very good for beginner. Just some things you have to improve on. Hope i helped. :)

Silver Salamence
27th May 2006, 8:24 PM
I think (imo) the the Fire-type Flygon is the best. But then again I also quite like the Ho-oH...
The mixes are by far the overall best though. The dragonite/gengar creepes me out a bit, however... And i think you could improve the smile.

Now. Trainer Edits. The blond man is Ok. The others need some work. On the Porf. Oak/Machamp, You have completely just destroyed the outlining while recolouring, ultimately killin gthe sprite. You can re-build it, or you could start again. personally, i would try re-building it. The same goes for Zombie Gary, but not on such a high scale.
Zombie Steven's red looks like you sued a default paint colour. Try adding some more shades of red.
The Poke Edits are good, except you have also destroyed some outlining on the Entei and Tyranitar. Also, you could try fixing the belly shading on Dark Dragonite.
And I'm guessing the shadows have no outline for an effective reason, so...

Overall very good for beginner. Just some things you have to improve on. Hope i helped. :)

I don't get what you mean by outline destroying. I think you mean the outline got erased and I re-did it. This happens sometimes becausemy resources have black backrounds and when I turn them white, the lose part of their out line.

On zombie steven I used paint color for a glowy effect.

On all the poke edits none of the out line was lost. It's all there. I fixed Devil Dragonite. http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/dd.png

Thanks for advice!

spareux
27th May 2006, 8:28 PM
When I said 'destroying the outlines' i meant that you have made them rather blurry. Did you use the darkest colour for the area on Machamp's chest? Also, if you find a darker outline colour, I'd get rid of some of the black.

Also, on further inspection, Entei's outlining is there. :p. But the above^ applies for Tyranitar aswell?

Silver Salamence
27th May 2006, 10:12 PM
Thanks, I'm redoing mafia leader wrestler john cioni, and I'm making a back sprite of my rapidash re-element. I also have 3 trainers in the making.

Silver Salamence
28th May 2006, 12:31 AM
Update! Back view of ghost Rapidash! http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/rsback078.png
New John Ciponi!http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j229/_-Dracosphere-_/frlgemtr116.png

.Person.
28th May 2006, 12:34 AM
I likie them. They are great. But a bit of advice about jackups.... You can't own a style of art and need credit. BTW most newb artists do that.

Silver Salamence
28th May 2006, 12:36 AM
I don't really know what that means... Awww... this sucks. Max image limit is 40... I have 44 to put in. I'll figure out a solution.

.Person.
28th May 2006, 3:45 AM
Make them all into a banner...

Dean
28th May 2006, 2:14 PM
UR SPRITES SUCK! jk
They are very good for a begginer.

Silver Salamence
29th May 2006, 9:29 PM
I'll make a freewebs account for my sprites as soon as conquer my laziness. It's summer and my will has succumbed to the wrath of TV!!!

Psycick Potato
31st May 2006, 3:51 AM
I just noticed this like 5 seconds ago, but Kalia's main island dosen't have high enough land in my point of view... I LOVE the JELLO idea though...