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17th June 2006, 9:11 PM
This is a story about Drew and May's kid, Harrison.


6-year-old Harrison Thomas wondered, what did his father mean when he said that being a Pokemon Coordinator when he was older would "make him a man"... as he pondered a small potted bonsai-like Pokemon bounced through his bedroom window. "Bon, ssssllllyyyy, ssssllllyyyy!" the pokemon whimpered, cowering in a corner. Harrison looked up. "A Bonsly?" he said. "Bonnnnnn......"

What'd you think?

Yami Ryu
17th June 2006, 9:19 PM
What'd you think?

I think you wrote this up in the reply box, don't really have a plot for it, and thought this up in five seconds and wrote it out in a minute. I advise you, before you continue, read the Rules and Advise For Aspiring Authors threads. Because from your prolouge I see you're going to be trouble unless you curb problems before they start :/

17th June 2006, 9:22 PM
I did NOT write this in a reply box!

17th June 2006, 9:48 PM
Nevertheless, the only type of review you'll get will be negative unless you follow Yami Ryu's instructions and read the rules and advice for aspiring authors thread.