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Alphonse Elric
18th June 2006, 10:48 AM
Well... My Hinata-chan Obsession suddenly made me want to do a Scratch Battle Scene in honor of that event during the Chuunin Exams... So, here it is. As you all know, I'm a Beginner Spriter, so it may suck...


http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2849/hinatachanvsnejispritebattle2u.png

Damn, ImageShack made it darker! Ah, any way... Descriptions: On the status bar, it says "Fight", "Run", "Jutsu", and "Tool". On the text bar, it says "Hinata-chan used BYAKUGAN!" And in case you were wondering, the HP Bar isn't supposed to show when they attack.

Please rate.

EDIT: Thanks to zuloon, I've given it a makeover. Well, I hope this one looks at least a little bit less crappy than the first one...


http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7117/hyuugafight1py.png

And also, a second version with Hinata-chan as the foe... Sorry about the crappy HP Bars and stuff.


http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1529/hyuugafight20vw.png

So, how does it look now?

Moonbeam
18th June 2006, 11:37 AM
Did you save it as anything but PNG. if so, change it to PNG, it prevents colour loss. Anyway, its good, since you done it from scratch.

Kinginsoar
19th June 2006, 12:18 AM
Ir's very good for scratch, and beginning, but the battle thing with fight, tool, jutsu, and run could be lowered. The other guy needs to be widened.

Brandon-kun
19th June 2006, 1:17 AM
Well, you can't really see Neji..he looks chopped up or something! XD But, Hinata is great! the "Fight", "Jutsu", "Run", "Tool" should be lowered like Hazy Leaf said. Neji also has a tan color suit. Mabye make it that color. And the Text is hard to read. If you did that from scratch make them a little better...

Alphonse Elric
23rd June 2006, 8:34 AM
Did you save it as anything but PNG. if so, change it to PNG, it prevents colour loss. Anyway, its good, since you done it from scratch.
It's already saved in PNG.


Well, you can't really see Neji..he looks chopped up or something! XD But, Hinata is great! the "Fight", "Jutsu", "Run", "Tool" should be lowered like Hazy Leaf said. Neji also has a tan color suit. Mabye make it that color. And the Text is hard to read. If you did that from scratch make them a little better...
Yeah, about Neji's suit color. Actually, I based it on the Naruto II (Manga) version, and he has a red vest there. I'll change it if it looks a tad too hideous. So, any more criticism? I just have this feeling that a lotta people think this is crap.

*Working on a New one.*

Brandon-kun
23rd June 2006, 6:51 PM
It's already saved in PNG.


Yeah, about Neji's suit color. Actually, I based it on the Naruto II (Manga) version, and he has a red vest there. I'll change it if it looks a tad too hideous. So, any more criticism? I just have this feeling that a lotta people think this is crap.

*Working on a New one.*

Oh, okay..though, the color looks like Kiba! xD So, you mean you based the colors off of the time skip of NAruto? I see....okay...I will comment on your next one!

zuloon
23rd June 2006, 8:07 PM
Stop making Naruto look bad :P

Seriously, it needs a lot of work. The colors don't match. (Brown+red+green? wtf)

And the text looks horrible. Go search for free fonts, choose a font you like (that actually looks good), and then slap it on.

Alphonse Elric
25th June 2006, 6:43 AM
Stop making Naruto look bad :P

Seriously, it needs a lot of work. The colors don't match. (Brown+red+green? wtf)

And the text looks horrible. Go search for free fonts, choose a font you like (that actually looks good), and then slap it on.
Okay, I'm done with the new Battle Scene.


http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7117/hyuugafight1py.png

How's it look like now?

Brandon-kun
25th June 2006, 6:53 AM
Okay, I'm done with the new Battle Scene.


http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7117/hyuugafight1py.png

How's it look like now?

Zuloon! Stop, why would you say this in a mean way!? wtf!? Stop that!

And, Neji looks AWESOME! This is much better! Mabye makc the font normal instaed of making it..it is all the way to the top of the text box. That indicates it doens't lok good...try and change that first..and then post it again! xD

Alphonse Elric
25th June 2006, 7:04 AM
Zuloon! Stop, why would you say this in a mean way!? wtf!? Stop that!

And, Neji looks AWESOME! This is much better! Mabye makc the font normal instaed of making it..it is all the way to the top of the text box. That indicates it doens't lok good...try and change that first..and then post it again! xD
Uh-oh...

That's a no-go, unfortunately. I used a VERY old Photoshop program to do the text, which can only stay up to that particular height, and unfortunately, it can't be modified any longer...

*Is in the process of making a better Battle Scene.*

Thanks anyway for the comment on the Neji Sprite, though.

Brandon-kun
25th June 2006, 7:15 AM
Uh-oh...

That's a no-go, unfortunately. I used a VERY old Photoshop program to do the text, which can only stay up to that particular height, and unfortunately, it can't be modified any longer...

*Is in the process of making a better Battle Scene.*

Thanks anyway for the comment on the Neji Sprite, though.

No, problema nd you need to ahve shading on Neji's hair, and shorts...and mabye partly the shoes...

Alphonse Elric
25th June 2006, 8:21 AM
New version of the Battle Scene...


http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1529/hyuugafight20vw.png

How does it look?