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27th June 2006, 3:39 PM
allright. today i made my first scratch sprite, and i want to know if i should continue making them. so, here it is:

here's the second one i made:

new one:

another one:

27th June 2006, 3:47 PM
It's cute!! A little more shading would make it better though... But, it's cute. It really is.

27th June 2006, 7:36 PM
thanks for the comment. changed it (see v2). and please people, give me some things I can change to it. I have 43 views now and only 1 comment..

Pikachu & Bonsly master
27th June 2006, 9:04 PM
It's great.Better than my first scratch...

27th June 2006, 10:22 PM
I like V2 a lot better than V1. It looks a lot better. Keep working at it. I can't wait to see if you do any new scratches. It's a lot better than my first attempt at my fakemon Lunea.

28th June 2006, 11:13 AM
i made a new one: it's the evo of flitish, hammash:
i would like some comments for this one too

29th June 2006, 4:09 PM
Hey, those are nice! Most newbie scratch sprites look blocky with a very shaky shape, but your shapes are perfectly smooth. Nice job on that.

Right now, I just have to suggest that if you want to make them look like authenic Pokémon sprites, you need to use fewer shades and shade the outlines much more. Also, while the shape of the outline is smooth, the shape of the shading isn't. You should always make the outline of the shading carefully too. :)

Otherwise, good job.

29th June 2006, 4:29 PM
I like them! They are very good

29th June 2006, 6:11 PM
wow those are goooood
im suk at scratches ;(

29th June 2006, 6:19 PM
I think it's a lot better. I realy think you are a good scratch spriter O.o Keep up the good work!! ^.^

29th June 2006, 8:23 PM
I agree with Dragonfree.Those are really good for a novice.Try to make em look more like an official sprite.You know, less shade, more shades on outline, etc


Risk Alchemist
29th June 2006, 11:13 PM
nice work. Shading I think is good, but if anyone wants to correct me go ahead!^^ 8/10

Keep working on them they'll be awesome!

30th June 2006, 10:58 AM
thanks for the comments :D

i made a new one, but i made it before i was able to see your comments, so it is in the same style as the previous ones:
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6503/aquid4me.png well, not excatly the same style. i made it on a different computer, so the outline is different compared to the other two.

30th June 2006, 11:58 AM
they're nice but the lines are all black no details

30th June 2006, 1:50 PM
those are good. nice work

30th June 2006, 4:03 PM
these are great,better than most newbie scratches

1st July 2006, 3:06 PM
fixed the ouline so it is more in the same style as the last two:

1st July 2006, 3:46 PM
I think it's cute ^.^

2nd July 2006, 8:34 PM
i made an evo for the water blob. it was supposed to be a poison type, and should be looking more dangerous than the blob, but i think it looks cuter. O_o

i don't know which one i should pick. the difference is in the eyes, the right one looks more evil, i think.

3rd July 2006, 7:14 AM
i like it. it looks really cute ^^. and i have no idea which one you should pick, i like them both.

6th July 2006, 11:57 PM
These aren't bad, but the pillow shading makes them look really bad. You need to make them fit the Pokemon sprite style.

6th July 2006, 11:58 PM
It's SOOO cute!!! I love them ^.^

7th July 2006, 12:04 AM
the normal aquid kind of looks like a starter in a fake i made in.