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splat
27th June 2006, 3:39 PM
allright. today i made my first scratch sprite, and i want to know if i should continue making them. so, here it is:
v.1:http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2982/scratch9gc.png
v.2:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4774/scratchv25hu.png

here's the second one i made:
v.1:http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2529/scratch26bb.png

new one:
v.1:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6503/aquid4me.png
v.2:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6238/nb35bc.png

another one:
v.1:http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/3505/nb49lp.png

Eevee_Master
27th June 2006, 3:47 PM
It's cute!! A little more shading would make it better though... But, it's cute. It really is.

splat
27th June 2006, 7:36 PM
thanks for the comment. changed it (see v2). and please people, give me some things I can change to it. I have 43 views now and only 1 comment..

Pikachu & Bonsly master
27th June 2006, 9:04 PM
It's great.Better than my first scratch...
~pikachumaster9

Lunachu
27th June 2006, 10:22 PM
I like V2 a lot better than V1. It looks a lot better. Keep working at it. I can't wait to see if you do any new scratches. It's a lot better than my first attempt at my fakemon Lunea.

splat
28th June 2006, 11:13 AM
i made a new one: it's the evo of flitish, hammash:
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2529/scratch26bb.png
i would like some comments for this one too

Dragonfree
29th June 2006, 4:09 PM
Hey, those are nice! Most newbie scratch sprites look blocky with a very shaky shape, but your shapes are perfectly smooth. Nice job on that.

Right now, I just have to suggest that if you want to make them look like authenic Pokémon sprites, you need to use fewer shades and shade the outlines much more. Also, while the shape of the outline is smooth, the shape of the shading isn't. You should always make the outline of the shading carefully too. :)

Otherwise, good job.

Dean
29th June 2006, 4:29 PM
I like them! They are very good

Stealth.Scizor
29th June 2006, 6:11 PM
wow those are goooood
im suk at scratches ;(

Eevee_Master
29th June 2006, 6:19 PM
I think it's a lot better. I realy think you are a good scratch spriter O.o Keep up the good work!! ^.^

▼■DoomWing■▼
29th June 2006, 8:23 PM
I agree with Dragonfree.Those are really good for a novice.Try to make em look more like an official sprite.You know, less shade, more shades on outline, etc

~ZFx

Risk Alchemist
29th June 2006, 11:13 PM
nice work. Shading I think is good, but if anyone wants to correct me go ahead!^^ 8/10

Keep working on them they'll be awesome!

splat
30th June 2006, 10:58 AM
thanks for the comments :D

i made a new one, but i made it before i was able to see your comments, so it is in the same style as the previous ones:
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6503/aquid4me.png well, not excatly the same style. i made it on a different computer, so the outline is different compared to the other two.

silverdragon
30th June 2006, 11:58 AM
they're nice but the lines are all black no details

shadow3944
30th June 2006, 1:50 PM
those are good. nice work

zeppelin
30th June 2006, 4:03 PM
these are great,better than most newbie scratches

splat
1st July 2006, 3:06 PM
fixed the ouline so it is more in the same style as the last two:
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6238/nb35bc.png

Eevee_Master
1st July 2006, 3:46 PM
I think it's cute ^.^

splat
2nd July 2006, 8:34 PM
i made an evo for the water blob. it was supposed to be a poison type, and should be looking more dangerous than the blob, but i think it looks cuter. O_o

anyway,
http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/3505/nb49lp.png
i don't know which one i should pick. the difference is in the eyes, the right one looks more evil, i think.

RamOne
3rd July 2006, 7:14 AM
i like it. it looks really cute ^^. and i have no idea which one you should pick, i like them both.

Beorn
6th July 2006, 11:57 PM
These aren't bad, but the pillow shading makes them look really bad. You need to make them fit the Pokemon sprite style.

Eevee_Master
6th July 2006, 11:58 PM
It's SOOO cute!!! I love them ^.^

orock12321
7th July 2006, 12:04 AM
the normal aquid kind of looks like a starter in a fake i made in.