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Samslice12
28th June 2006, 10:17 AM
hey,

This is my first sprite

Jigglychu:

http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jigglychu6cw.png

any feeback would be appreciated

Samslice

Golde
28th June 2006, 10:24 AM
pretty good, especially for a first try. Keep it up! (I might want to hire you in my shop -_-)

~Flareon~
28th June 2006, 10:58 AM
I loved the Jigglypuff/Pikachu mix. It's so cute.

spareux
28th June 2006, 11:06 AM
To me, this is also a very good first sprite. It's simple, you haven't tried anything extremly hard and gone over your head... But I'm afarid your not going to get any better by me just telling you what I like, so here's my advice.

I wouldn't use a black background, IMO. I can see that you've used just a evry dark grey, but it can lead to some people believeing you've destroyed the outling. White willl make your sprite clearer, and it stops the coloured outlining in places look like random blocks.

You haven't coloured some of Jigglypuff's outline to the colour of Pikachu's. You have to do this when recolouring. And one last thing, on Jigglychu's right arm (our right), theres a chunck of pink you'll want to remove. I think that's what it is, but there's definitely to much of it too be an outline.

Hope I helped.

Samslice12
28th June 2006, 11:11 AM
Thanks for your support :)

im working on fine tuning it now

Thanks
Samslice

Samslice12
28th June 2006, 11:25 AM
ok

finally this is my jigglychu

i think it got a bit squashed but u know

http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jigglychu3he.png

MyaFanatic
28th June 2006, 11:29 AM
Sam, sam, sam - you know you're my cousin - but that is very very pixelated. Your first is good though. Can't wait till Saturday - more trading! At least you got better feedack than me. The Orange Mage is mean.

Wietse
28th June 2006, 12:18 PM
mayby try not to make it smaller and than larger because in paint it will make your picture glitched

Samayowa
28th June 2006, 6:13 PM
That's pretty good for a first try! Keep it up.

Samslice12
29th June 2006, 8:35 AM
thanks guys,

yeah i accidently made it a bit bigger lol

thanks for the support
does anyone have any suggestions im not really that imaginative lol

Samslice

Samslice12
29th June 2006, 9:04 AM
ok,

ive been working on my first eveelution and here it is my Dragon eveelution

Drageon:
http://img118.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dragoneveelution3gl.png

Thanks for all the support. Feedback would be appreciated so i can get better :)

Samslice

Wietse
29th June 2006, 9:09 AM
i like it, but you should give it a tail and remove the implant (or how do you english guys call it) on his face

keep up the good work

P.S:When you accenditaly make your image larger or smaller, use Ctrl Z, it's undo

Samslice12
29th June 2006, 9:13 AM
ok sorry to keep posting stuff lol
but here is my Flaming Golem

http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/9130/flaminggolem9if.png

Thanks
Samslice

Samslice12
29th June 2006, 9:15 AM
lol thanks for the tip im working on edited version right now
ill post it when its done

Samslice

Samslice12
29th June 2006, 9:23 AM
ok here it is,

I thought that the "implant" kinda completed it it looke strange without it lol

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/3074/dragoneveelution3ki.png

Thanks
Samslice

Wietse
29th June 2006, 9:31 AM
Yeah now its cool cuz the implant has to do with the tail... but the tail is before te wing and i think (i'm not sure) it should be behand the wing...

spareux
29th June 2006, 4:02 PM
That's a very nice sprite, but it's not been recoloured. And you can't recolour and advance sprite with GSC ones. Well you can, but you shouldn't. ^.^

If you are going to use that body, i suggest you revamp the Espeon. If revamping's not your area or you just can't be bothered, just recolour it and add a few bits of shading here and there.

Your Golem mix is good, but the flames above Golem's head have a straight line from where they have been removed from the other Pokemon. You can quickly re-draw this to make it git and look better.

Hoping to see more of your work soon, and once again hoping I helped. ^.^

Samslice12
30th June 2006, 7:29 AM
hey,

I like it the colour that it is
and i tried revamping it but i just really couldnt be bothered
ok and here is my converted brock i kinda like it its my first trainer conversion
http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/4333/convertedbrock6fs.png