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chrisivy
21st July 2006, 12:18 AM
Hello, new comers and other folks!

This is just my new idea for a new fic or a one-shot. I would like it if you can give me some comments. And if you want you can introduce me to your ideas and your fics! I really hope I can make good friends while I try my best at writing!

Thanks!


Espeon’s Way

I stared down at the Milktank grazing in the meadow below me. I was up in the high mountains alone.

I was hungry for a playmate. The hunger of missing someone, the hunger of killing something. I flopped on by stomatch and felt it growl a bit. I was gone without food for a while now. Probably in a few days, I might as well graze with my boring friends down there in the meadow too.

And how I wished for an opponent to battle with. The last battle I had ever experienced was when these cruel humans tried capturing me to do their boring evil plans. I never wanted to team up with anyone. I love to be free, and I want choose my way of direction.
I don’t want to be strong nor weak. I don’t want to travel so often. I don’t want… anything. I just want to live in peace in a normal way like I choose to do. But I wonder so often…maybe I can look for a better life with a companion.

And then, I wonder sometimes looking below me. Maybe I need to change. Like humans, I can change my life and make it adventurous and explore. I can find a real place to be loved instead of being a loner. I shouldn’t be alone, any more.


“MILKTANK!”


I heard the loud holler of a young boy. My ears twitched in excitement. My heart raced as I saw the Milktank and the boy happily walking off to the river to do their daily walk to the river.

Yami Ryu
21st July 2006, 12:32 AM
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http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=22230 THE OFFICIAL THREAD FOR FIC IDEAS.

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=92178 Thread for 'fic comercials'

And congrats for spamming in more ways than one with this short as crap, far cry from a chapter or prologue, asking to become a spam hole thread :/

Edit: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=19 go there :/ you need to read that thread.