My newbie deck rate please!

[sludge962]

this is my newbie old fighting-psychic deck (please note I got most of these cards from my friend, thats why most of them are old)

x2 Machamp (base)
x1 Hitmonchan (base)
x1 Machamp (E-Expedition)
x1 Dark Pupitar (EX Teamrocket returns)
x2 Machop (base)
x1 Machop (E-Expedition)
x3 Machoke (base)
x1 Larvitar (neo disc)
x1 Brock's Geodude (gym challenge)
x1 Brock's Graveler (gym challenge)
x1 Diglett (base)
x1 Diglett (team rocket)
x1 Dugtrio (base)
x1 Sandrew (base)
x1 Sandslash (fossil)
x1 Cubone (jungle)
x1 Onix (base)
x1 Onix (neo gen)
x1 Rocket's Mewtwo (*winner* BEST)
x1 Dark Slowking (ex TR returns)
x1 Mew (promo)
x1 Misdreavus (promo)
x1 Gastly (base)
x1 Gastly (neo dest)
x1 Haunter (base)
x1 Haunter (E-Expedition)
x1 Slowpoke (fossil)
x1 Farfetch'd (neo revel)
x1 Farfetch'd (base)
x1 Spearow (jungle)
x1 Fearow (EX Sandstorm)
x1 Jigglypuff (jungle)
x1 Dark Wigglytuff (neo destiny)

Trainers:
x1 PokeBall (base)
x1 Minion Of TR (gym heroes)
x1 Switch (base)
x1 Sleep! (TR)
x1 Radio Tower (neo destiny)
x2 Prof. Elm's training method (E-Expedition

Energies:
x11 Fighting Energy
x5 psi energy
x1 recycle energy (???)
x1 Multi-energy (EX Fossil)


Well, thats my current deck, I know I dont have enough energies.

[Alakazam]

Actually, you have just enough energy and too little trainers.

[sludge962]

Oh, well then do you like it?;068;

[Jimmy P.]

The only thing you got right with it is that it IS a newbie deck. I'm not being harsh or mean, but I'm sure that most other people here would agree that using single copies of cards is dodgy.

The Energies are okay but I suggest putting in one more Recycle/Multi to avoid getting those ones lost in your prizes.
The use of single Trainers is also dodgy. But like you said, it is a newbie deck. :D

[Cipher 2008]

The only thing you got right with it is that it IS a newbie deck. I'm not being harsh or mean, but I'm sure that most other people here would agree that using single copies of cards is dodgy.

Completely. If you want less of a newbie deck (I don't like that phrase, but I can't argue that it's correct), have some 3-2-1 or 3-2-2 lines in there. Then you can try out some others, like 3-4-3 or 4-3-4. Then just go from there, but you do need a fair amount more trainer. Get rid of some of the single Pokémon in there.