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Adam 1475
16th October 2006, 10:04 PM
Rainbow lugia:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3573/0000000000000000000000000000od9.png (http://imageshack.us)

Evil milotic:http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1466/evilmiloticpe9.png (http://imageshack.us)

My unnoticable lugia and rayquaza fusion:http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/2193/lugiarayfusionwg1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Pink Salamence:http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/5505/pokemonrecolourwt7.png (http://imageshack.us)

My first trainer card:http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/8599/tcadamgd8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Third TC:http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/747/01sc7.png (http://imageshack.us)

rate from one to ten.
if i get a overall of twenty,ill make my own shop here :)

~Lucario Master~
16th October 2006, 10:12 PM
well since you said so 1/10
these sprites are horrible plain horrible. I gave you a 1 because the pink salamence looks decent. The TC is okay but then again a moron could make a decent TC.
The raibow Lugia looks like what happens when a circle of people throw up.
the other 2 I don't get.
Sorry to be rude but someone with some decency had to say it. :)

ΑпGЗ ♠
16th October 2006, 10:14 PM
You call this crap art? >_> Sorry if I seem rude.
Seriously, does that rainbow Lugia look pretty at all?
The trainer card has too much white space.
The pinks don't contrast enough.

Adam 1475
16th October 2006, 10:15 PM
i was bored so i just done whateva i wanted to do.
i am proud at the TC.

16th October 2006, 10:16 PM
well, my overall for you would be 21, but wanting 20 before you start a shop is low as you have 5 images, you'd only need an average of 4 per picture.
Rainbow lugia: 2
Evil Milotic: 3
Lugia raquaza fusion: 3
Pink Salamence: 7
Trainer Card: 6

Rainbow Lugia: to bitty, the colours don't go well together and overally looks terrible
Milotic: Also a bit bitty, but it's to dark, you can't see its design properly
Lugia: Colouring's pretty bad, also the pictures been saved as another type before you saved it as PNG.

All of those i would suggest doing again, the salamence however is very good, although i tend to like an outline(that's just personal preferance). Also the Trainer Card is simplistic, which is sometimes good if you're giving it a first try

Overall, work on the first 3 and try and get them as a better quality.

Remember, if i'm mean, it's only because i love all of those little pokemon

~Lucario Master~
16th October 2006, 10:16 PM
Plus sky blue and brown aren't in the rainbow.....right O_o

Adam 1475
16th October 2006, 10:21 PM
new shop opening next week.

16th October 2006, 10:31 PM
FullaRapNPokemon, I would think that your comments are spam. You're doing nothing to help them. Tell them that they need to practice, but tell them what they should try rather than saying it looks like crap.

Do you know how to make custom colours? Figure that out and keep doing recolours and simple mixes. Simple mixes are not done with legendarys, try something like Pikachu/Jigglypuff or Charmander/Meowth. Also, I would suggest reading some of Dragonfree's or others tutorials.

16th October 2006, 10:46 PM
they are even.sorry. i give it a 5

Adam 1475
16th October 2006, 10:49 PM
thx ppl

17th October 2006, 1:19 AM
i'm not going to be as harsh as others here...
they are not very good, BUT if you take some tutorials, they can become good.
on the recolors, don't just add colors everywhere. notice the shades, and do the same. use paints customs colors and make your own spectrum (example: light blue--> blue--> dark blue). then, where it's light put the light blue. Where it's the regular color put blue, ect.

practice, practice a lot

Light Venusaur
18th October 2006, 10:34 AM
Keep it up!

18th October 2006, 10:40 AM
wakakakaka....i laugh when i saw that pink salamence....dude, that's cool...salamence suppost to be a fierce pokemon but now it look soo sissy...

Adam 1475
18th October 2006, 8:11 PM
thx ppl/.
countdown till new shop:

Adam 1475
18th October 2006, 8:11 PM
thx ppl/.
countdown till new shop:

Adam 1475
18th October 2006, 8:11 PM
thx ppl/.
countdown till new shop:

Adam 1475
18th October 2006, 8:12 PM
soz for quad post.
my comp is slow.

18th October 2006, 8:17 PM
tHe sprites 4/10
tc's 8/10
the sprites look like a toddler did 'em. No offense. but u should get some more practice.

18th October 2006, 8:19 PM
Sorry but thats not very good.

You shoulve used different colours on the lugia that actually made it look attractive.

18th October 2006, 8:42 PM
I love how when people see the word 'RATE' in a title they automatically think x/10 :)

As Shadow Fox said, mixing ledgendaries isn't easy. Try something simple like Pikachu-Maril.

I'n not sure but I think you saved them as .GIF, as the area around the sprites is very blurred. Always save as .PNG

Default paint colours make puppies cry. Please don't use them. ;)

18th October 2006, 10:11 PM
Your sprites need a lot of improvements, theres bits of random colors in random places and default colors on paint is not good D:
The font in your TC also is kinda not in a very good position, some of the boxes are too thick or aren't spaced evenly, and some parts of the sprites are sticking out of the boxes o.o;

18th October 2006, 10:33 PM
i think these need major improvements as well

19th October 2006, 10:32 AM
i just thought i'd leave another message adam, i really would suggest reading tutorials for making sprites as you're still slightly sloppy(you chopped off a few of the corners on the last card you put up). If you would like a few tips or tricks, i have a few and might share them with you. I could help you turn your rainbow dud, into a rainbow stud because i'm a generous spriter and don't like to see people recieving to much harsh comments

19th October 2006, 5:12 PM
I'm sorry but it'll be a cold cold day in hell before you get an overall of 20. the trainer card has an enormous amount of white space and your recolours are eyestinging and horendous. Look at a tutorial and learn to do recolours properly before posting more stuff here. Oh and also, that 'fusion' is hardly a fusion at all. Stick to recolours before attempting fusions.

Edit: you can't seriously think of opening a shop especially after the feedback. Or are you the type who only listens to the good reviews and totally ignores the others? If you do open a shop, you won't get anywhere. You need to read some tutorials and improve your work first.

19th October 2006, 6:23 PM
Please don't open a shop. You are not ready for it. You cannot even recolour sprites. NEVER EVER USE STANDARD PAINT COLOURS! They are poison.
There are guides enough around here, so go ahead.

19th October 2006, 6:51 PM
Your opening a shop..... HA!
lol me laughing at him, im not even that good.... :redface:

19th October 2006, 7:02 PM
Your opening a shop..... HA!
lol me laughing at him, im not even that good.... :redface:


If you're not that good, don't make fun of him. In fact, just don't do at all.

You really shouldn't open a shop. Despite the fact people aren't allowed to rate your sprites over in Fan Art Requests, the will anyway. Or your shop will die. And you need much more practice and experience.

You haven't even made the suggested changes to your first sprites. O.o

You'll also find their are a lot more people view Fan Reuqests and they are from all over the Forum, so you'll probably just get a lot more people who aren't as helpful in giving advice posting as in here.