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Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 7:31 PM
[b]Could a mod please change the title of this topic to Cosmica's Revamps Please?

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/politoedlanturn.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/feraligatr.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/meganium.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/togepi.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/typhlosion.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/aipom.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/char.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/blastoise.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/venasaur.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/ampharos.jpg

My first lot of revamps EVER.

(I know that Meganium is terrible, I will redo it soon.)
(I also know that for the aipom revamp, the original should be on the left :P)

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 8:23 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/politoedlanturn.jpg

Done lanturn now as well :)

uber-olly
17th October 2006, 8:35 PM
Very good 9/10

HWarrior
17th October 2006, 8:35 PM
They look quite good. I would like to see more work.

spareux
17th October 2006, 9:40 PM
The shading's good for firsts, but you need to work on shaping it smoother a bit more. Also the light shades shouldn't really touch the really dark ones. (The one usedon the outline that is sometimes used for the sprites darkest area)

Im impressed by your outlining abilities for a beginner. But you need to add the black to places such as underneath the fin, not just the bottom of the sprite.

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 10:30 PM
Thanks for the feedback (exactly the type of feedback I wanted :P)

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/feraligatr.jpg
^ I did that one before I read your comment, so I'll take the outline advice into consideration on the next ones I do. :)

Darkside
17th October 2006, 10:37 PM
very good for a first keep up the good work
Edit: yay giavani

striker
17th October 2006, 10:38 PM
good improvement they look better

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 10:58 PM
Hmm. I'm halfway through a meganium one. I dont really like it, but ill finish it to see what its like.

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 11:24 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/meganium.jpg

Finished Meganium...Worst one I've done so far....

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 11:39 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/togepi.jpg

Last one for the night :)

POKErUsAm
17th October 2006, 11:44 PM
On meganium, I think you need a little more lite shadeing.

Legendry
17th October 2006, 11:45 PM
Goood Job really like em'.Oh and can you make Venusar

Cosmica1
17th October 2006, 11:46 PM
Nope. I can't make one for you, because this isn't the request forum....

I'm doing typhlosion, then the Kanto starters though...

Sid
18th October 2006, 12:14 AM
FIRST? FIRST?
Flipping heck you're a natural!
Tiny bit more practise!
The togepi one<33

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 4:58 PM
Back from school :)

Now I'm going to do Typhlosion, redo meganium, and then do the kanto starters :)

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 7:19 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/typhlosion.jpg

TYphlosion :)
Doing Aipom, then the kanto starters.

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 7:23 PM
EDIT - Double Post

fenix287
18th October 2006, 7:28 PM
wow those are awesome!!!!

zipzap713
18th October 2006, 7:36 PM
Wow. those are good. grade A-

yenintendo
18th October 2006, 7:56 PM
Those are awesome
I love the way they are shaded
Im guna attempt to do revamp now (and fail)

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 8:09 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/aipom.jpg

Aipom :D

I'll start charizard now...

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 9:02 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/char.jpg

CHARIZARD@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 10:31 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/blastoise.jpg

Blastoise :D

Best yet in my opinion

robynblclark
18th October 2006, 10:34 PM
i'd like to see more those are really good

DannyKing
18th October 2006, 10:34 PM
wow ther really nice 9/10 i like them!

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 11:11 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/venasaur.jpg

Done all the Kanto starters now :D

I'm going to do some babies.

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 11:39 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/Adam_Marcinkiw_2006/ampharos.jpg

Last one for the night.
(decided not to do babies)

Not exactly the best one i've done, but it's still ok...

Yami Ryu
18th October 2006, 11:54 PM
Those? Good? D: their shading is extreme wtfness, the Charizard holds old and new shading, making it look like light is hitting it from two places, the Ampharos's belly is badly done, as is it's shading.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1172/untitlednk2.png
Not my greatest, but as you see I tried to make the shading look official, and half your sprites, while 'revamped' color wise, hold no new shading, or if they do, you also kept the orginal shading. Leaving them to look well, as I said, wtfness.

And some of your worst; Aipom, Togepi, Charizard and Ampharos. Seriously, compare them to the official RSE sprites.

Cosmica1
18th October 2006, 11:57 PM
Yea, I know. I kinda rushed them.

But I don't think togepi is bad :o

Light Venusaur
19th October 2006, 1:01 AM
I like them!
May I get revamps of these if you do take requests.
Eevee: Yellow
Vaporeon: Blue (without the Fins on it's legs)
Jolteon: Silver
Flareon: Yellow
Espeon: Gold
Umbreon: Silver

Cosmica1
19th October 2006, 5:39 PM
Well considering i've already said this isnt a request thread, I dont know why you'e asked.... Im doing the eeveelutions next anyway, but could you read what I post..?

Red tailed hawk
19th October 2006, 5:49 PM
The Politoed is the only one that looks average for me. I do not like the way you've shaded them, it's way to easily to see misshapen outline parts, and the shadnig is quite poor and randomly placed. Sorry, but you get only 4/10 from me.
Hate me if you want.

Cosmica1
21st October 2006, 12:28 AM
Why would I hate you? I asked for constructive criticism.

If I didn't get any, I wouldnt know how to improve.