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17th October 2006, 8:46 PM

C&C Please.

17th October 2006, 9:45 PM
Its good but the pose seems a bit awkward.
Still pretty good.

18th October 2006, 12:17 AM
It's good but it looks like it got squished XD

18th October 2006, 2:09 AM
It does look a bit thin, but it looks great for a first try. The legs are too close together, the face too thin, the arms too.. dead. Over all, I think your bigest problem is that the pose has no dynamics. Keep practicing and you'll get it.


18th October 2006, 2:11 AM
it is so thin it looks like it has an eating disorder. Make it a little wider and it will be better.

18th October 2006, 8:44 AM
Now I know whats wrong with it. It needs a bit more punch if you know what i mean. It looks too static and thin.

Light Venusaur
18th October 2006, 9:57 AM
It's ok....but it's just a tad skinny.