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Toshi
24th October 2006, 9:36 AM
Yeah, first one here for a LONG time, anyway. I guess I am a pretty old spriter, I started way back in 2004 or so, with some people (notably Shimitaro, FoxBoi, Angel Umbreon, and probably one or two more I'm forgetting). Then I kinda left about Jan '05, and left pokemon all together. Now with D/P comming out and everything, I'm getting a bit more interested and so I'm starting to sprite again. Bear with me, I haven't properly sprited for what, a year and a bit and I am a bit rusty =\

Anyways, the majority of the sprites below are new ones done in the past week. C&C is always appreciated.
Rules, abide by 'em please :)
*DON'T steal. Please.
*Ask permission if you do want to use them.
*PM me requests if you want one, just be careful I may not want to, for whatever reason.

The sprites got ALL of their white transparentized, I'll try and fix that soon!

Scratches!

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4172/chrsitmascustomxu2.gif
A christmas pair. I know the present is a bit off shading wise (This was one of the '04 ones)

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/7205/anemonaecustomvb9.gif
How cool, an anemonae? Made to accompany...

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2490/nemocustju6.gif
Yeah, found nemo? Course it isn't nemo, but we really need a Water/Fire and this fits the bill quite nicely.

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/2885/babyfishycustomnv6.gif
Carvanah/Sharpedo baby. A bit lacking of features, but it's pretty cute the way it is.

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/97/bugevocustomyl6.gif
My very first three scratches. People seem to like the cacoon's (lack of) shading for some reason...

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1594/thingcustsi0.gif
This is just a Dratini-type thing. Boredom ftw!

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6774/spongecustomoq2.gif
For some reason, I really like this guy. It's a sea-sponge, something I've always wanted to have in-game...

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6725/fishehcustomxh5.gif
This is just some random fishy thing. I made an evo but it didn't come out well..

(Good)Mixes!

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/984/octporyzoy1.gif
Octillery/PorygonZ. Scratched the things on the limbs, and the nearly-unseeable nosey thing. Two of my favourite pokemon, as you may see...

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3715/smerpory2ai7.gif
A not-so-good mix, I included it cause its got Pory2 in it :D

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3527/jibaporyzjx6.gif
This also aint that good, (It's Jibacoil [Magneton Evo] with PorygonZ, with Magneton ball..things around it) but it's original and pretty kewl.

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7408/dusknatupk8.gif
A near-custom Duskul/Natu mix. Looks like it fell out of the tree while hatching :

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2954/eggsvoltlb6.gif
Another near-custom mix (Eggsecute[sp?]/Voltorb). I found it actually fun spriting it, with the facial expressions and everything.

Simease Images(They take what, 30 secs to make and WBG? May as well..)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9011/cactsimeasecx6.gif

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/2884/altasimeasenc7.gif

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/8620/armasimeaseha2.gif

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/863/topsimeaseek1.gif

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8616/suisimeasejg4.gif

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4715/tropsimeasedt4.gif

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7549/tyransimeasecl5.gif

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8167/lunasimeaseas1.gif

Revamps(last ones...finally)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6938/octrecolourll2.gif
Octillery from some version (Crystal.. I think?) recoloured.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3500/pory2recolourup9.gif
Porygon2 from...gold? I don't like it's shape in this.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1598/mantrecolourgr3.gif
Mantine from G/S/C. Same pose as D/P.

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9918/corsrecolouryw6.gif
Corsola cause I'm bored.

And thats all of em!

Chaotic Pink
24th October 2006, 12:02 PM
I like your devamps the best, but in the Porgon2's and Octillery's eyes I think you've WBG them as its the green colour of the forums.

Super Wario 64
24th October 2006, 4:34 PM
Pretty good for a beginner spriter. :)

.:Tom~Nook:.
24th October 2006, 4:37 PM
You need to work on your transparency skills, sprite wise, the scratches are quite basic, but not horrible, same with the mixes, Corsola revamp looks a bit flat.

That's my main crits.

Hakuryuu
24th October 2006, 4:41 PM
The Porygon revamp really needs a more organized outline. It seems a little too.. crooked. o.o You need more shading and lighting for the Mantine, and it appears pudgy.

They're pretty good. ;]

zipzap713
24th October 2006, 4:58 PM
The revamps are a good start. teh scratches a lot more fine tuning though....

Toshi
24th October 2006, 9:37 PM
Yeah I know, the Porygon one was done in a hurry >.>

I already stated that the transparency didn't work too well, curse you photoshop!

Corsola was something that was weird, it only had 4 pink colours to work with and the area of... 'blankness' was hard to shade.

I'll try upload em after the editing and un-WBG the eyes/other white areas -.-

jakepwnsjoo
24th October 2006, 9:39 PM
The shading is bad on your scratches, and alot of them have pure black eyes.

Toshi
24th October 2006, 10:03 PM
Kk, re-done the corsola, but got to go to school now so no updates for another what, 6-7 hours?