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D-Man
24th October 2006, 8:49 PM
Revamps:



Chikorita: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Chikorita.gif Cyndaquil: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Cyndaquil1.gif Totodile: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Totodile2.gif

Bayleef: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/153-BayleefA.gif Quilava: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Quilava.gif Croconaw: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Croconaw.gif

Pikachu: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Pikachu.gif



Devamps:



http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Pochama.gif



My Sprites, Most Scratches



D/P Female: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/DPGirlFinal5.gif Gold: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Gold2.gif Ash Female: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/AshF.gif Me: http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4855/me4zu.gif

Mew: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Mew1a.gif Charmander: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Charmander2a.gif Voltorb: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Voltorb2.gif Electrode: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Electrode1.gif

Oddish: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Oddish2.gif Metapod: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Metapod.gif Pikachu: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Pikachu3.gif Weepinbell: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Weepinbell1.gif

Marowak: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Marowak2.gif Caterpie: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Caterpie.gif Weedle: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Weedle.gif Horsea: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Horsea2c.gif

Tentacool: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Tentacool1.gif Ponyta: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Ponyta1.gif Butterfree: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Butterfree2.gif Gastly: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Gastly2.gif

Squirtle: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Squirtle1.gif Vaporeon: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Vaporeon1.gif Kabuto: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Kabuto1.gif New Thing: http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/4748/thingoc6.gif

Porygon 3: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Porygon3.gif

CREDIT TO CORONIS - (GOLD SPRITE)



Doll(s):

ASK FOR PERMISSION

D/P Trainer Back: http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/4954/dollbackqa2.gif



Custom TC Backgrounds:

you can use them for your shops, sigs.... just give credit to D-Man (it is not D-man, or d-man, it is D-Man)



http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/1.png http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/2.png
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/3.png http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/4.png
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/5.png http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Trozei%20Cards/6a.png
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Custom.gif



D/P Fake ScreenShoot

i just took my time to made it blurry, i draw it myself, with a little help of maxxa



http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2466/bsfakeqv8ep8.png

Please put good, long, detailed comments

All sprites found on this are 2006 http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3794/bezimenabes3cd7.gif

Jetx
24th October 2006, 9:07 PM
Aww.. shame you're leaving.. ;_;
You probably don't see me much, but oh well, I've seen you a fair few times..

Okay, on topic...
The revamps... Absolutely incredible, maybe even the best I've ever seen. No, I'm serious. You editted more than just colours, perfected any errors from the old sprites to make them look far more up-to-date. I'd say you pulled off croconaw the best of all of them; and cyndaquil's flame is a nice touch. Perhaps, IMO, the outlines could be a little darker. Not black. But darker. Also, perhaps you could edit croconaw a little because the red bit on its head looks a little like.. well, a fringe.

Your sprites... Nice work on just about all of them once again. The D/P girl is a little out of proportion imo, I dunno, her head seems a little small to me. Pikachu's head is a little weird too. I also think butterfree's colours need to be a bit stronger. Apart from that, they're all awesome. I do really like the one of you, but the darkness of the outline doesn't fit in with that of your other sprites.

TC Backgrounds are cool. Dunno what to suggest, never done em before.

And the D/P Screenshot is great apart from the fact it's hard to see who's attacking who, it's just the fact that leaves wouldn't come out of pochama that makes it obvious.

Oh well... Hope I've helped. :)

oyay first post

dragonmaster_jonathan
24th October 2006, 9:23 PM
You're leaving?!?! But I enjoy good spriter's sprites... and you're leaving for a dumb reason o_O... well, since this is your last thread, I'll find some crit

Your outlines on Charmander, Metapod, and Pikachu make them look too skinny. Your poses are okay, but your Mew's pose could be a lot more creative. Your revamps are great and I like how you edited Croconaw's eyes.

I think the scratch of you needs more shading, and the outline could be fixed around the arms and hands... I wouldnt worry too much though, as scratching trainers is hard. HOwever, Hikari's head is oddly shaped. I think the hat should be wider (fatter whatever) and her arms should be fatter. No comment on the trainer card backgrounds, since you know, trainer cards are pretty basic.

Is that a pear on the DP battle scene... o_O I think it needs shading under its eyes, but the battle scene itself is okay.

Well thats all from me... overall good sprites. Not great, but good sprites.

~Lucario Master~
24th October 2006, 9:26 PM
Don't Leave D-Man your a great spriter. I feel your leaving for Foolish reasons. I think the reason that they post in new peoples sprite threads is to turn them into spriters like you.

Okay now on topic..
The sprite of you looks odd. If you were trying to make it look like the games it needs work. If not it's awsome, Perfectly shaded. I also love the screen shot.

I urge you to stay D-Man. But if you choose to leave I wish you the best.

Elementman-Novapoke
24th October 2006, 9:28 PM
No! Please don't leave!
All the cool people and good spriters are leaving - WHY?

Your revamps are loads better than most - Instead of just recolouring you re-shaded the sprites or where the shading was you moved it!
Scratches-
Your scratches are amazing - it must be the shading and positions... The only 1/2 bad ones are the you and pikachu. The you because alot of the outline is black or a dark colour. Pikachu because the eyes are the wrong shape and they don't feel pokemonish... also, the left arm is far too deep into the body...

I like your TC backgrounds - they are very unique, simple yet somehow very eyecatching. Even the last one is good because it feels like it is ment for devamped pokemon, yet again very original.

The screen and fakemon is very good - They just are...




PLEASE DON'T GO!!!!

jakepwnsjoo
24th October 2006, 9:38 PM
I understand what you mean. I'm nowhere as good as you, but I hardly get ANY replies and I get alot of looks. xP Anyways, your sprites are amazing. Your trainers are a little small though.

D-Man
24th October 2006, 9:38 PM
No! Please don't leave!
All the cool people and good spriters are leaving - WHY?

i guess they realized this thing before i did...

anyway i got a empty space in scratches, so i'm gonna post this sprite, scratch, dunno his name:

http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/4748/thingoc6.gif

~Lucario Master~
24th October 2006, 9:42 PM
Well it doesn't look much scratch but after comparing it with the real one I see what you did. Good job and Stay D-Man

D-Man
24th October 2006, 9:45 PM
it looks too official, ain't it....
i know all of people here like good sprites, but i mean if this wasn't my final and last thread i wouldn't get any replies, that is what i am trying to say, but you guys know where you can find me in future :) don't be sad, there are always some good spriters to replace me: maxxa, -4J- PrincessPolitoad....

D.

Shadow_Fox
24th October 2006, 9:53 PM
No! Please don't leave!
All the cool people and good spriters are leaving - WHY?
Becuase Serebii has fallen into the hands of a younger and... Less serious(?) generation. It's my opinion that all the posts go to new spriter's threads becuase these "noobs" want as many posts added to their count as humanly possible. They see that they've posted "cool. i like it. keep it up." in your thread once and they never come back. Not many like to take the time to actually look at the work, either. Post'n'go.

Im not too keen on the revamps... The colours are rather light (Try FG/FR) but Croconaw looks pretty good. Some of your scratch sprites are really good too. I like the Charmander,Weepinbell and Butterfree especialy, though the Gastly's only flaw is that it looks a bit large.

See ya... Good luck :)
~

zipzap713
24th October 2006, 9:54 PM
Why are u leaving? just ignore what the begginers spriters say. your talented so i hope to see your sprite work in a game in the future. The revamps are exellent and the scratches are a little faint but as you said, your not a pro so i don't excpect them 2 be perfect. i give your sprites a 97/100. sad to see that your leaving since there are tons of noobs on the forums nowadays.

D-Man
24th October 2006, 10:07 PM
maxxa, a great spriter and my m8 knewed this was coming, read the first sentece in his thread

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=155305

guys thanks for comments, i really appretiate them, but i think that this is my final desition.

sorry for bad grammar but do note that i'm from Croatia

D.

D-Man
24th October 2006, 10:23 PM
I understand what you mean. I'm nowhere as good as you, but I hardly get ANY replies and I get alot of looks. xP Anyways, your sprites are amazing. Your trainers are a little small though.

trust in yourself.......

Bonsly is pimp
24th October 2006, 10:57 PM
why you lying to everybody, you know you aint leaving. j/k
but all the "the this is my first" threads are getting annoying
also good job on the sprites.

.:Tom~Nook:.
24th October 2006, 11:33 PM
Eww, another cry for attention. Like Maxxa's thread.

Basically, your revamps are very good, but Croconaw's head needs editing a little.

D/P Girl has really weird proportians, as do some of the scratches, they look like pixel overs/ eye traces of Ken Sugimori's art, there's nothing wrong with that, but I'd prefer to see some original poses, as your shading is quite good.

jakepwnsjoo
24th October 2006, 11:35 PM
trust in yourself.......

Meh, I'm a long way away... so where are you going after this?

This looks like it came right from Nintendo! =o http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/4748/thingoc6.gif

EDIT:

Eww, another cry for attention. Like Maxxa's thread.

They have a point, you know.

???
24th October 2006, 11:57 PM
wtf? Why Are Almost All The Best Spriters Leaving! :(

Ellie
25th October 2006, 2:12 AM
Boo. If you don't like it here, go ahead and leave rather than cry for attention.

Your proportioning is pretty weird on many of the scratches. Charmander's eyes are different sizes, Pikachu's head is way too small, Hikari's skirt is too wide and her hea too small, and Horsea's too fat. The shading is also really flat on Charmander, Butterfree, and some of the others. Btw, Oddish has too many leaves.

Also, the Vaporeon is not scratch, it's edit. -_-

K-os
25th October 2006, 8:07 AM
Stay. You are really good at ripping sprites. I don't see why you should leave.

~K-os

Light Venusaur
25th October 2006, 8:12 AM
I love that Vaporeon....may I use it?

D-Man
25th October 2006, 8:54 AM
Boo. If you don't like it here, go ahead and leave rather than cry for attention.

Your proportioning is pretty weird on many of the scratches. Charmander's eyes are different sizes, Pikachu's head is way too small, Hikari's skirt is too wide and her hea too small, and Horsea's too fat. The shading is also really flat on Charmander, Butterfree, and some of the others. Btw, Oddish has too many leaves.

Also, the Vaporeon is not scratch, it's edit. -_-

vaporeon ain't edit, it is 90% scratch, i only used eyes, nose, mouth and faceparts...
And i don't cry for attention, i am jjust saying that this place ain't what it used to be...

Aqua's Dolphin
25th October 2006, 10:57 AM
Don't leave. I own one of those `my 1st blablabla` threads, and i couldn't bear it if it forced you to leave...
(BTW, no-one visits my thread so i'm hardly gonna rival you, am I?)
Please don't leave!

(((Kuwagata Kross)))
25th October 2006, 12:12 PM
Well, if that's it, good bye....I don't know if you know me but I know you and I've always apreciated your spriting. You do a very nice job in scrathches and an awesome one in the D/P clean-ups and rips. Well, good bye.
And by the way, keep on doing the sugimori style scratches...they're awesome.
Good bye.

Will-powered Spriter
25th October 2006, 1:06 PM
I know what you mean. The link in my sig has long died, but if you read it, you will get a good (or bad) taste of noobiness in the sprite sections. C & C has no meaning anymore ;o;

Untitled
25th October 2006, 2:14 PM
Wow your leaving, your like one of the best spriters around here, you should'nt leave everyone will miss your rips and sprite work.
Well if you leave, goodbye...and i hope you could visit us again sometime!!

maxxa
25th October 2006, 7:04 PM
nooooo dont leave!!! please itll be me n 4j and then ill not see you sprite anywhere else pleaseee

combusken1994
25th October 2006, 7:09 PM
Yeah, I agree with maxxa. You've been a great spriter please dont stop :(

yougirasu
25th October 2006, 7:13 PM
you should stay and keep some quality amongst the work you see in these forums

Buizerulad
25th October 2006, 7:17 PM
Don't leave Your'e one of the best spriters on this Forum.


Pleaaaaaaseeeeeeee Don't leave

Buizerulad

You've been a brilliant spriter throughout these years!!!

Lalonde
25th October 2006, 7:34 PM
i agree with D-Man that the sprite forum isn't what it used to be... but don't leave D-Man.... Please, ;_;
everyone appreciates your sprites!

Ellie
25th October 2006, 10:17 PM
vaporeon ain't edit, it is 90% scratch, i only used eyes, nose, mouth and faceparts...
And i don't cry for attention, i am jjust saying that this place ain't what it used to be...

90% scratch =/= scratch. It's still edit, no matter how heavy of an edit it is.

Oh, and your Totodile and Croconaw revamps look flat. Also, Totodile's outlines don't have enough black on them.

D-Man
26th October 2006, 10:50 AM
i am sorry for this, but it is decided, good bye my friends...

EDIT: i just feel this ain't fair. You want me here.... Let's have a deal: I will return for about a month. If i see that the yes option turned over 100 i will stay and live with this n00b cra*. If ain't turn 100 i will leave kay?

D

combusken1994
26th October 2006, 4:31 PM
iVW VOTED YES, YOU DO 2 NOW!!!!!!
i RATED THIS 5

Moonlight_Dreams
26th October 2006, 7:56 PM
Please, don't leave! You are one of best spriters at Serebii. If you leave, newbie spriters rule the sprite section and good spriters get no attention! ;__; And that will be awful!

XD I and my good ideas... But really, you should not leave...

Mew of Friendship
27th October 2006, 6:03 PM
Good-bye... forever ;-;

D-Man
28th October 2006, 10:34 PM
all the replys made me STAY, 80% is for me to stay, so i guess i will stay in here for a while :D
thanks m8 for keeping me alive in here...

Manetric
28th October 2006, 11:36 PM
Whoah! They look very good although I don't like the pear thing. Oh, and you should stay because I'm a fan sprite/art critic and I like people to critisize.

.:Tom~Nook:.
29th October 2006, 1:21 AM
Admit it, you were never going to leave in the first place, you kids and your publicity stunts *random laughter like in every sitcom*

Meh, I looked over your sprites again, the proportions on your scratches really need some work to get them looking perfect.

Kitsune
29th October 2006, 6:57 AM
He was never going to leave. It's obvious. He wanted this attention, and he wanted you all to go on and on about how great he is. He is god, I have to admit, but c'mon, people. "Oh, D-Man, NO! Don't leave! SPPf'll jut fall APART without you!"

On a lighter note, no matter how much you scratched, that Vaporeon is still and will always be an edit.

D-Man
29th October 2006, 9:20 AM
Admit it, you were never going to leave in the first place, you kids and your publicity stunts *random laughter like in every sitcom*


He was never going to leave. It's obvious. He wanted this attention, and he wanted you all to go on and on about how great he is. He is god, I have to admit, but c'mon, people. "Oh, D-Man, NO! Don't leave! SPPf'll jut fall APART without you!"

I REALLY wanted to leave, i couldn't stand all this n00bish crap this days, before this fan sprites used to be for good spriters, not for this is my first this and that, which get more c&c than let's say gridiron's sprite thread, which made him and Ominus to leave, and almost me

Manetric
29th October 2006, 9:56 AM
I REALLY wanted to leave, i couldn't stand all this n00bish crap this days, before this fan sprites used to be for good spriters, not for this is my first this and that, which get more c&c than let's say gridiron's sprite thread, which made him and Ominus to leave, and almost me
I comment in everyone's sprite thread on the front page.

ΑпGЗ ♠
29th October 2006, 4:42 PM
New spriters may eventually lead to good spriters. I like that people are learning about spriting.

D-Man
29th October 2006, 6:08 PM
revamp:

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Pikachu.gif

Manetric
29th October 2006, 6:37 PM
revamp:

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Pikachu.gif
I like the mouth.

D-Man
9th November 2006, 8:01 PM
okay, after a while a new scratch new porygon

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Porygon3.gif

Elementman-Novapoke
9th November 2006, 8:08 PM
okay, after a while a new scratch new porygon

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Sprites/Porygon3.gif

Wow!
It looks really official!

D-Man
9th November 2006, 8:09 PM
too dark IMO, maybe i will fr/lg recolor it

Divine_Light
9th November 2006, 8:11 PM
Please stay D-Man...
Your sprites are amazingly detailed, Your trainers, revamps and scratches, I see no need for you to leave, Your one of my favourite spriters on Serebii, You play a big role in Serebii's spriting community, Even your trainer cards are incredibly great, Well thats me done for this post but tune in for the next post by Divine_Light, lol, I hope you stay D-Man, But if you go, Sorry you're leaving :(

D-Man
9th November 2006, 8:18 PM
Please stay D-Man...
Your sprites are amazingly detailed, Your trainers, revamps and scratches, I see no need for you to leave, Your one of my favourite spriters on Serebii, You play a big role in Serebii's spriting community, Even your trainer cards are incredibly great, Well thats me done for this post but tune in for the next post by Divine_Light, lol, I hope you stay D-Man, But if you go, Sorry you're leaving :(

?

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=4660961&postcount=36

you read?

Divine_Light
9th November 2006, 9:24 PM
This thread says you might be leaving?

D-Man
9th November 2006, 9:57 PM
not anymore, i decided to stay.

pnoiboi
9th November 2006, 10:08 PM
I love your sprites!!but the charmander looks like it has a squirtle's head

D-Man
10th November 2006, 7:08 PM
any suggestions?

D-Man
10th November 2006, 8:34 PM
new one, d/p style trainer back sprite doll

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/4954/dollbackqa2.gif

i marked the areas, ask for permission before use

pnoiboi
10th November 2006, 9:57 PM
wheres the hair?

D-Man
10th November 2006, 10:23 PM
this is DOLL, blank one for u (template) for making sprites

Divine_Light
10th November 2006, 11:04 PM
not anymore, i decided to stay.
Good to hear :D

D-Man
15th November 2006, 7:05 PM
update: http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Totodile2.gif

good old fr/lg style

Elementman-Novapoke
15th November 2006, 7:17 PM
Coud you try to devamp a pochama? If not could you revamp r/b magikarp?


Edit: Yay ! New rank!

D-Man
15th November 2006, 7:22 PM
give me a link for pochama, and to what game?

HWarrior
15th November 2006, 7:36 PM
D-Man, I really like your sprites and Im really happy your staying.

Yes Im quite new but I have got better. I have even done a few revamps, as I have gotten better at the shading.

HWarrior
15th November 2006, 7:40 PM
Could you devamp Lucario to G/S/C?

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dpmfa/dpmfa448.png - a link to it

Zephyr Flare
15th November 2006, 7:43 PM
If you are going to request (Which nobody should be doing in this area) please keep it in pm only.

Sandra

D-Man
15th November 2006, 7:45 PM
wait, please be patient, i need to done pochama 1st, thanks

Elementman-Novapoke
15th November 2006, 8:18 PM
wait, please be patient, i need to done pochama 1st, thanks

Sorry! Try here.http://ww.freewebs.com/howtosprite/
to r/b/y please!

Go to mixes, scroll down and click on the link then on d/p sprites male 1st frame and it's number 393.

D-Man
16th November 2006, 1:27 PM
here:

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Pochama.gif

D-Man
16th November 2006, 6:27 PM
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/Dvojko/Revamps/Quilava.gif


this one was hard...

Myuutsuua
16th November 2006, 7:14 PM
It would be a shame to loose a good spriter like you!

D-Man
16th November 2006, 7:22 PM
i'm not leaving...

Manetric
16th November 2006, 7:29 PM
That Quilava revamp is Whoah!

Elementman-Novapoke
16th November 2006, 7:30 PM
The pochama is good. On the quilava I think there is too much white on it's eye.

Manetric
16th November 2006, 7:32 PM
Can you extreme devamp?

D-Man
16th November 2006, 7:37 PM
i can but i won't :D

can i get some c&c please?

Manetric
16th November 2006, 7:40 PM
The eyes on the pikachu look, odd.

Moonlight_Dreams
17th November 2006, 5:09 PM
They are really good, I have to say. I really love the doll you've made of D/P boy. You should make one of the girl too!

maxxa
25th November 2006, 4:45 PM
i love the porygon 3 sprite man good

Expert Socky
25th November 2006, 6:40 PM
The scratches are wonderful and the devamp is great. You should stay.

Umbreon Rider
27th November 2006, 7:55 PM
Wha?
ypu were gonna leave so u got lots of posts but at the LAST min
"naa il stay"
two words: PR stunt
Antway nice sprites i like your FRLG recolours
i also like ur doll

K-flygon
27th November 2006, 8:00 PM
can we ask for sprites here or....you just posted some sprites and left for good??

D-Man
27th November 2006, 8:55 PM
ask, i will do'em if i have time...

K-flygon
28th November 2006, 11:32 AM
what do you mean ask??? for sprites?? well i need a Black Flygon sprite...

D-Man
28th November 2006, 1:16 PM
can we ask for sprites

you asked...

D-Man
2nd December 2006, 5:39 PM
so will ya ask or not?