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.Bright Side.
25th October 2006, 2:38 PM
and I did these while my internet didn't work all last night.

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m238/Snackerbacker/work.png

Send feedback!
Please dont make it just a one lined message.
Tell me where was my best work, or where I need imrpovement, don't just say it sucks or its good.

pokeboy sarab
25th October 2006, 2:42 PM
nice work dude

Nevermore
25th October 2006, 3:53 PM
your fusions seem good, but be careful when you copy'paste things, there are bits missing off the first two sprites, off the dinosaur's leg and the monkey's hand thingy.
the third one along's head thing looks a little odd, ad the dragon things's crest goes sideways, but the plant bit goes up, and the join isn't very smooth. i sugest when things don't match like that, take away whatever is on the base sprite and replace it completly, in this case, don't have the crest, just the plant.
the last fusion is really good, i can't see anything wrong with it, the beak thing fits it really well, nice job.
all the others look great, the wtf one made me laugh. on peliper, part of it's original eye still shows, though.
the holiday ones are good too, just a word about stripes, like on the candy one: look at any striped pokemon. the stripes curve to match the shape of it's body. on your one, the stripes are strait across, which looks unnatural.

one last word, not about the sprites. the image is shrunk, probably cos it's so big. to keep the quality of your sprites, try saving them separately next time, and always remember to save as PNG, it will make them look much better.

overall, very nice work, you look to be a great spriter, keep it up!

.:Tom~Nook:.
25th October 2006, 4:18 PM
They all look very blury to me for some reason =/

Your fusions seem to have parts cut off, which makes them look a tad rushed. WTF's eyes really need some shading, our atleast a tad of AA.
The Chao are your best work here, though the eyes look sort of weird.

Chaotic Pink
25th October 2006, 4:27 PM
They all look very blury to me for some reason =/
They do to me too :)

Your fusions look as if you've accidently chopped of the top or bottom of them in places. They do look quite copy and paste-ish though. But not too bad.

Is it just me or do the Chao seem a tad small?

I like the emo Rapidash, but I think (might just be me) that you've forgot to recolour the outline in a few parts, not much though.

These are ok though :)

.Bright Side.
25th October 2006, 11:22 PM
Thanks for the feedback you guys, and it is on png.

CyroEmerald_Z
25th October 2006, 11:49 PM
I like them all. Very nice.
Keep up the nice work!

EDIT: Actually, i think someone once told me was that when the sprites look blurry it may be because of the white space. I don't really know if its true though.

.::Cyro::.

jakepwnsjoo
26th October 2006, 12:34 AM
The image is too big, so it reduced as a smart image, and looks blurry instead of messing up the pixels. Quite a few of them look like they took you minutes if not seconds. I suggest you try harder. =(

Light Venusaur
26th October 2006, 1:13 AM
I love them all!
I'd like to see more of them.
Keep it up.

bonsly2006
26th October 2006, 1:48 PM
Some good sprites, they look blury to me as well. The fusions are good too maybe a little too copy/ paste try scratching some bits. I would say your best ones are your fusions, i like the second one the best. Also you have some good ideas.

Keep up the great work