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jwla
26th October 2006, 4:55 AM
When I was on here with my last username, seemingly ages ago, I did do some spriting. I did some Eevee-lutions and whatnot. Now, I plan to sprite again. This is just a small one, and it doesn't have a name yet. It's based on a drawing I did of a quail Pokemon. It's a heavily edited Mukkuru sprite, with some Politoed on the top. It's eyes are weird to me, let me know what you think.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7980/quailpkmhw8.png (http://imageshack.us)http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/5726/quailpkmfk8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Both quails here, no name so far. Now, to unveil my death's head moth. I call it Harbroth and it's the Harbringer Pokemon. It is Bug/Dark. Here it is:

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/2167/harbrothly7.png (http://imageshack.us)

I used Venomoth's body and legs, Garmeil's head and antennae (for the shape), and Houndour's skull. The body is fairy edited, and the legs left me stumped. I tried some scratch, but, they didn't work out too well. I made the probiscus from scratch, and well as the eyes. The antennae are edited for a certain look that's tough to capture while spriting. The wings, thought similar to Butterfree's are totally scratch. They need some work, I think. I was tough, because I wanted Harbroth to be black, and that sets a restriction for shading if you don't want to go too light. Let me know what you think.

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1586/platypuspkmnqk5.pnghttp://img166.imageshack.us/img166/657/pandervishbd2.png

BlazikenGurl
26th October 2006, 4:59 AM
That's your fakemon right-o? Well, yes, it's eyes appear awkward to me, like something gross and funny happened and it's making big eyes because it's well... about to laugh. If you have time I suggest you to fix it. And it's body appears to be kinda like it's its whole face because of the eyes. Just fix the eyes and it's be all right. Also, try and not use all black outline on the feet. Correct me if I am wrong on anything, but then again it's a very good edit, good job.

jwla
26th October 2006, 5:06 AM
Yes, it is a fakemon. Yeah, the eyes are, well, odd. The were outlined in a dark color, but, it was stark. I don't know. I did forget to edit the feet XP Mukkuru's were like that. Must've left them...heh. Thanks for the criticisms! Love to hear the way it can work better. Thanks again! :)

Chaotic Pink
26th October 2006, 9:28 AM
I really like it :D The eyes are a little strange, but they're not that bad. I like the colours you've used. Overall, I think that theres a few little bits that could maybe do with editing. A big well done!

bonsly2006
26th October 2006, 10:29 AM
I like it, Its quite cute. I don't think the eyes are that bad. I also like the colours and the detail.
keep up the good work!

jwla
26th October 2006, 5:46 PM
Thanks, everyone. I did some changes, so it would match a real quail, which have dark bands around the eyes. I used a little more brown, too, in the chest coloring. Let me know which you like better.

http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/5726/quailpkmfk8.png (http://imageshack.us)

I drew a cool Death's Head Moth Pokemon, and I am going to try turning it into a sprite. It may take a ton of work, though.

jwla
27th October 2006, 4:51 AM
Here's an update! Everything about this Pokemon is listed in the first post. It's kinda small, and wonky. I am not much of a scratch spriter. There are scratch parts...
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/2167/harbrothly7.png (http://imageshack.us)

jwla
27th October 2006, 5:58 AM
Here's another one. I am an insomniac lately, so expect more this time of night!
It's a platypus Pokemon. People say Psyduck is a platypus, it is not! This is a platypus. I used Psyduck's head, Bippa's body, Biidaru's tail and scratched eyes similar to Farfetch'd! Here it is.
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1586/platypuspkmnqk5.png

miken park
27th October 2006, 8:31 AM
I can see the mukkuruku or whatever it's called in the bird. Fakemon are supposed to be completely scratch. =/

jwla
27th October 2006, 2:24 PM
Not the way I do them. It's not a written rule.

jwla
27th October 2006, 7:15 PM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/657/pandervishbd2.png

Though I have a naysayer, I enjoy using parts in my fakemon. The above is a panda. I call it Pandervish. It evolves from Spinda, and is classified as the Spin Panda Pokemon. Most of the parts are "found" parts. Notably the arms, legs and mouth. The rest is scratch. I wanted to do a Pandervish that looked as it if was twirling, but, I didn't manage.

Manetric
27th October 2006, 7:46 PM
I like the 2nd quail much better, and the venomoth thing needs 1 more shade on the skull thing.

jwla
27th October 2006, 8:14 PM
I thought so, too. I need to revamp it, thanks!

Manetric
27th October 2006, 8:35 PM
I thought so, too. I need to revamp it, thanks!

also, I really like the panda thing but the beavers patchwork on it's tail needs work.

jwla
27th October 2006, 8:41 PM
Yeah, it does. That was a quick hack-job, mostly...lol.

Manetric
27th October 2006, 9:08 PM
Yeah, it does. That was a quick hack-job, mostly...lol.

hm, maybe you could make it lighter , or not have it at all.

jwla
27th October 2006, 10:55 PM
The hash marks, yeah I might go that

???
27th October 2006, 11:10 PM
I raise quail & that looks like a bobwhite quail & they have a white breast. also the black markings are light brown on the females. o.k. on the shadeing add highlights. ^_^

jwla
28th October 2006, 3:08 AM
Cool! Input from a quail breeder! Will do! :)

Manetric
28th October 2006, 11:38 AM
Did you use any sort of Ursaring for the Panda.