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ShortCircuit
26th October 2006, 2:01 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7145/trademarkedespeonoa5.png
I'm not too happy with this, but as its my first scratch im ok with it,
i done two versions one in my stye of shading and one in R/S/E Style.

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4057/unamedcf4.png
An unamed Fire type scratch, dont yet know if its gonna be related to Slugma or not.


http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8344/unamed2nu4.png
I know its an obvious edit from the gold version ponyta, but i also did a LOT of revamping and editing on this, aswell as custom shading, water spouts and i adjusted the eyes, hoofs and backlining. It's an unamed Water Mare basic stage evolution, water/ice type.

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/7408/unamed3sd3.png
Evolution for unamed horse thing, this could quite a bit of effort to make.

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3961/quagchanny1.png
Hitsire... Must have spent at least an hour on this, re-shading it completely, and adding a new source of light.

Please rate and dont just view, SUGGESTIONS WELCOME, and thank you for viewing!

Jetx
26th October 2006, 2:03 PM
Pretty good.. The thigh seems a little.. fat, however.

I kinda prefer the second to be honest.

Manetric
26th October 2006, 2:05 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7145/trademarkedespeonoa5.png
I'm not too happy with this, but as its my first scratch im ok with it,
i done two versions one in my stye of shading and one in R/S/E Style.

Please rate and dont just view, SUGGESTIONS WELCOME, and thank you for viewing!

I'm likin' 'em, especialy the 2nd one, does the SC have to be there?

ShortCircuit
26th October 2006, 4:26 PM
sorry, for that one its so it doesnt get stolen, theft protection, i wont do them on my later sprites,,

Update: An Unamed scratch fire type, i dont know if im gonna make it related to slugma yet http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4057/unamedcf4.png

Chaotic Pink
26th October 2006, 6:42 PM
I like the 2nd Espeon scratch best, I prefer the shading style.

The fire thing has weird, square eyes!

Manetric
26th October 2006, 7:01 PM
sorry, for that one its so it doesnt get stolen, theft protection, i wont do them on my later sprites,,

Update: An Unamed scratch fire type, i dont know if im gonna make it related to slugma yet http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4057/unamedcf4.png

aw, it's so cute, and I love slugma I likethe ears and trhe shadinng on the top of it's head

Nevermore
26th October 2006, 7:14 PM
^^ these are really good, especially for firsts, mine were nowhere near as good.
i think the espeon needs it's other leg, it looks kinda unbalanced with only one visable.
the fire fake is cute, theres just one thing that bugs me, theres too much light shade on the left ear... thingy.
fantastic work, keep it up!

dragonmaster_jonathan
26th October 2006, 9:33 PM
yeah my first were horrible... but as pointed out, their are mistakes like Espeon's fat leg, and yeah, its other "leg" isnt visible... the fire thing is okay, but for some reason it seems flat near the bottom... probably because of the dark outline, which I hate using....

ShortCircuit
27th October 2006, 1:13 PM
Thanks for the compliments, its supposed to lok flat at the bottom, its a suction pokemon which clings to the ground/walls... wierd i know, its supposed to represent stalagmites and stalagtites. Any suggestions?

Manetric
27th October 2006, 1:48 PM
Thanks for the compliments, its supposed to lok flat at the bottom, its a suction pokemon which clings to the ground/walls... wierd i know, its supposed to represent stalagmites and stalagtites. Any suggestions?

Maybe a more aggresive pokemon, like an evolution

ShortCircuit
27th October 2006, 3:05 PM
I might try at an alternate Shroomish evo, if that doesnt work il experimet with other evos.
Edit: Shroomish chainevo didnt work, might try at a mockinbird.

ShortCircuit
27th October 2006, 3:55 PM
I know its an obvious edit from the gold version ponyta, but i also did a LOT of revamping and editing on this, aswell as custom shading, water spouts and i adjusted the eyes, hoofs and backlining. It's an unamed Water Mare basic stage evolution, water/ice type.
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8344/unamed2nu4.png

Jetx
27th October 2006, 3:58 PM
Wow, I love that thing. nice work.

What could be inproved.. welll I don't see any errors so..

Manetric
27th October 2006, 4:03 PM
I've got to admit it's better than I could do but you could make the skin look more wet and reflective.

ShortCircuit
27th October 2006, 6:05 PM
Update: Evolution for unamed horse thing, this could quite a bit of effort to make.
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/7408/unamed3sd3.png

Manetric
27th October 2006, 6:09 PM
Update: Evolution for unamed horse thing, this could quite a bit of effort to make.
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/7408/unamed3sd3.png

It has a brilliant neck, but it's mouth looks awkward.

Chaotic Pink
27th October 2006, 8:15 PM
The back legs look awkward, and the mouth is very unhorse like. The flanks look flat and the back isn't curved enough. But, well me knowing alot about horses, I can't help but be picky on it :D

Manetric
27th October 2006, 8:20 PM
Try and straiten the back leg.

ShortCircuit
27th October 2006, 9:33 PM
sorry, i thought it looked fine. It was edited majorly from the girafarig diamond sprite pose 2 female, but im not going into further edition for that one sprite.

Manetric
27th October 2006, 9:38 PM
Well, it's your sprite, if your happy with it don't change it.

ShortCircuit
28th October 2006, 11:05 AM
ok, anymore suggestions?

Manetric
28th October 2006, 11:18 AM
How about an evolution of a pokermon we don't know too much about.

ShortCircuit
28th October 2006, 7:06 PM
What evolution? im stuck for ideas...

ShortCircuit
28th October 2006, 10:34 PM
update: Hitsire... Must have spent at least an hour on this, re-shading it completely, and adding a new source of light. http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3961/quagchanny1.png

Manetric
28th October 2006, 11:23 PM
update: Hitsire... Must have spent at least an hour on this, re-shading it completely, and adding a new source of light. http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3961/quagchanny1.png
Brilliant, I don't like the head though. How about a Dainoosu alternative.

ShortCircuit
29th October 2006, 11:52 AM
Sorry, whats a dainoosu?