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Rageman
29th October 2006, 9:44 PM
My third scratch ever... HEAVY critz plz.
http://i14.*******.com/451cys1.png
My G/S/C style Murkurru
http://i13.*******.com/2cdjyn9.png
My second scratch, a akt. sandshrew evo... YUK :P
http://i13.*******.com/44128me.png

Yes, I know only one has WBG but I'm to lazy to do the other ones. :D

Dean
29th October 2006, 10:55 PM
The sandshrew evo is pretty cool

Ellie
29th October 2006, 11:47 PM
Heavy crit on the first? You got it. :p

The main bad thing is that the shading is incredibly flat. Make the light shade in a more rounded shape that goes further than just a tiny strip on the top of it. The outlining also isn't done correctly on it. The lightest shade is supposed to be outlined with the color of the darkest shade, the middle shade outlined with a color darker than the darkest shade, and the darkest shade outlined in black or a color darker than the middle outline shade.

kapslock
30th October 2006, 12:06 AM
My third scratch ever... HEAVY critz plz.
http://i14.*******.com/451cys1.png
looks flat, use the darkest shade on it's left leg. The head could use ALOT of shading. The mouth/tounge too. Uh mostly EVERYTHING needs shading pal. Especialy under his neck, and muscles.
My G/S/C style Murkurru
http://i13.*******.com/2cdjyn9.png
Not bad the shading looks alright. But it's G/S/G so it didn't have the best shading.
My second scratch, a akt. sandshrew evo... YUK :P
http://i13.*******.com/44128me.png
The shading on it looks poor. The colors blend too much together. It's eyes look crosseyed. The claws have only one color outline. Best if you stole another pkm's claw color.

Yes, I know only one has WBG but I'm to lazy to do the other ones. :D

Overall, they are good, but work on your shading. A good example is looking at pictures, notice how the shading is under the jaw/neck/eyes. Outlines can use some work, but i'm not the best to crit on outlines so... Your on your own for that.

2/5, for shading, outline, and other problems. But with more practice, and more crit, why damn you can be as good as Princess Politoad/Chaos Emerald/Orange to name a few.

So start cracking buddy!

Wietse
30th October 2006, 9:27 AM
They could use improvement, everything else is already said. You didn't wbg your first, you just gave it a green background...

Rageman
5th November 2006, 6:26 AM
Nooowwwww...... A BIG(notrly)BUMP.
http://i11.*******.com/47l1yip.png
Bippa custom GSC style
http://i12.*******.com/2zs8y0x.png
A beta version of a RBY t-card
PLLLZZZZ REPSOND FOLKS!!!!!!!!!!!

Rageman
9th November 2006, 2:02 AM
Sorry for DP but..... BUMPZ0RZ.