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silverdragon
1st November 2006, 6:59 AM
please tell me if this is good i entered it in the fusion contest http://i12.*******.com/4idbuvs.png please please rate it
dont be too negative with this please

JuicyPaperclip
1st November 2006, 7:37 AM
I think it's alright. However, I think the 'smoothness' and 'flow' between the body parts of the sprite are a little rusty. I cant really talk, i'm not a fantastic spriter :P. I think the concept and design is perfect, but just say, remove some of the whiteness inbetween the blue, and the legs, because it makes it look a little sketchy. Sorry if this doesnt make sense to you, but overall it's pretty godd, and just a little minor adjustments like the lines and the way the body parts are arranged, like the pearl on the neck.

Chaotic Pink
1st November 2006, 4:52 PM
Yep, I agree with the statement above. Its pretty good, a few little bits changed her and there and it'll be a contender!

zipzap713
1st November 2006, 5:08 PM
It is not totally smooth. that is all i will say