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Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 4:10 AM
I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.

Trainer Sprites
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/Rachel.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewTalkshowHostUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewShanaUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewRachelUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewMaxUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewKailiUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewInuyashaUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewHaileyUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/thCorte-1.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewBrendanxMayUne.gif

Revamps
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/GSTotodileRevampUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/GSVictreebelRevampUNE.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/GSHorseaRevampUNE.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/GSElectrodeRevampUne.gif http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewGSPikachuRevampUne.gif

Fakemon
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/FirstScratch.gif

Maps
Korin Region (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/KorinRegionUne.png)
A smaller version of my house (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/untitled-1.png)
Hook Cabin (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewHookCabinUne.png)
Rosedew (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewRosedewUne.png)
PokeCafe (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewPokCafUne.png)
Plinia (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewPliaVillageUne.png)
My School (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/BradenF2.png)

Guides
Recolor Guide (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/RecolorGuide.png)

Avatars
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/AVATARUNE.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/UmiMizunoAvatarUNE.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/KitsuneAvatarUNE.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/LemonTeaUNE.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/SnoPuppyAvatarUNE.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/TheDoctorAvatarUNE.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/MimoriKiryuAVATARDeux.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/ShadowIchigoAvatarUNE.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/AVATARUNEune.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/CeciliaAvatarUNE.png
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/chaossneaselavataruneoz3.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/NewAvatarUNE-1.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/LoveHurtsAvatarKitsune.gif
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/LSGoPAvatarUne.png

Miscellaneous
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/TheCross.gif

To-Do
Fix Corte (Witch Hat Boy)
WBG Rachel (First Girl)
Fix 8th Girl
Fix May
Make Front Overworlds for all trainer sprites

Credit
Susan_Rocket (Suicune on Suicune Girl Avatar)


-Kitsune//End

PokeJosh
3rd November 2006, 5:29 AM
I love it! You're really good. I especially like the korin region map. Keep it up!

-PokeJosh

pnoiboi
3rd November 2006, 6:14 AM
Is that inuyasha?????your sprites are above average

Elementman-Novapoke
3rd November 2006, 8:57 AM
The person with the witches hat:
It looks like they're wearing it backwards. Either flip the person around and re-shade them or flip the hat around and re-shade it. Other than that they're fine.

Edit: On the May and Brendon pic:
It looks like May has a huge forehead - put some hair on it!

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 4:25 PM
PokeJosh, Pnoiboi - Please tell me specifically things I can improve on. I want crit.

Elementman-Novapoke - I'm away from my normal spriting computer, but once I get back, I'll fix them up. That hat has always bugged me, but I've never really noticed May. I'll get it fixed up.

Elementman-Novapoke
3rd November 2006, 4:57 PM
Another minor thing that I noticed is in your region there are too little towns/ places.

Chaotic Pink
3rd November 2006, 5:09 PM
The maps are good, you've took more time into them than most as alot of people don't think to add pokeballs and such.

The revamps are fine, shaded well and you've recolour the outlines.

The trainers are a little weird in places, but that has already been metioned. All I can add on these is with the girl wearing purple has weird looking eyes. To me they don't seem positioned right.

I love the avatars, the Lamon tea one especially, although with some of the writing (on the "Without you... I'm incomplete only) it seems a little small.

Overall, these are excellent. I'd like to see you do scratches though!

zipzap713
3rd November 2006, 5:13 PM
the trainer sprites are just a little small. other than that, they are good.
Revamps-very good. pikachus left side seems to haqve a little 2 much black on it. everything is good. no critic :D

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 5:16 PM
The maps are good, you've took more time into them than most as alot of people don't think to add pokeballs and such.

The revamps are fine, shaded well and you've recolour the outlines.

The trainers are a little weird in places, but that has already been metioned. All I can add on these is with the girl wearing purple has weird looking eyes. To me they don't seem positioned right.

I love the avatars, the Lamon tea one especially, although with some of the writing (on the "Without you... I'm incomplete only) it seems a little small.

Overall, these are excellent. I'd like to see you do scratches though!
Wow, thanks for everything! I'll try to, as I said, get my trainer sprites up tonight.

Scratches? Hehe...Well, about that... >_>

I can't scratch for my life. Tonight I'll attempt a scratch sprite, but it'll need some, like, help. =\

Ellie
3rd November 2006, 5:21 PM
om,g dey rawk do mooooore!!!1111







Just kidding :p

Inuyasha's eyes look really weird, probably because they're too light and there isn't enough white in the eyes.

On the eighth trainer (the girl with the black and red hair), the hair seems too flat. try adding some more light to it to give it more shading.

Btw, you should use all-color outlines more often; it looks much better. :P

Your revamps are pretty good, but the Pikachu looks like it has like no shading. Also, its ears aren't long enough.

Your avatars look good, but you need to credit Susan_Rocket for her Suicune scratch on the last one. :S

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 5:28 PM
Chaos Emerald - xomg, y3sh dey d/o, coshcha merald!!1!!!!one!!W!en!E!!!!
I'll fix Inuysha tonight.

I was planning on making the Pikachu darker/Redoing it, anyways.

I'll fix the Red/Black girl.

It does look better all-color, doesn't it? I'll have to try it.

Yeah, I made that avatar for someone on my website and creditted her, then I forgot to here. =P

I'll do it now.

*umbreon*masta*1*1*
3rd November 2006, 5:30 PM
wow i think these are absolutly fantastic...ive looked 32 times and i seen nothing i think you could imrove ^^;447;

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 5:31 PM
wow i think these are absolutly fantastic...ive looked 32 times and i seen nothing i think you could imrove ^^;447;

*Twitches*



I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.

Improve on what? Every person on this forum has room for improvement, I need specifics as to why.

Malachite Treecko
3rd November 2006, 5:39 PM
Well, the sprites are great, the avatars /-/| except the last, which I love.Korin region is a bit too archipelago for me.

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 5:42 PM
OK, Right now I am...

Fixing Corte (Witch Hat Boy)
WBGing Rachel (First Girl)
About to Fix 8th Girl
Going to fix May.

I have looked at Inuyasha, who's eyes are supposed to be that way.

spareux
3rd November 2006, 7:00 PM
Good title.

Victreebel is missing the brown spots on it's... body-type thing.

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 7:02 PM
Brown spot? I'll take a look into it later on, when I'm back to my computer.

spareux
3rd November 2006, 7:12 PM
http://pokemonelite2000.com/pkfrlg071.png

Okay green whatever xd

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 7:22 PM
OK, thanks. I'll get it fixed up soon. I think I'm gonna start spriting for a comic I might make...I know that it'll be in my school, with my teachers and such.

Kitsune
3rd November 2006, 8:59 PM
UPADATE: My School (http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/BradenF2.png). I have made the second floor of my school, the first coming soon. I'll make an alternate version telling which room is which, and to which teacher it belongs.

OK, now I need an opinion: Should I leave on the red mats signifying a classroom entrance on the side wall or not? I don't like them, but what do you think?

And yes, although I have subtracted a few small areas, this a model of my schools. All of the rooms are accurately placed and such. Later on I will be adding a hall between those two staircases on the right wall of the upward hallway, which is our computer hallway. The hall going downwards farthest to the left is my hall, the Band Hallway.

miken park
3rd November 2006, 9:42 PM
lolz hey, j00r sprites roolz. =p

Inayusha's hair looks to light, add some black to the outline.

jakepwnsjoo
4th November 2006, 12:09 AM
Kitsune, you should advertise Korin here. =P

The doors in your school are strange looking, and the colors aren't very good. Sorry, I can't think of anything else to crit. xP

Kitsune
4th November 2006, 12:41 AM
Jake, I've remade the school, and am going to post it soon. After I get the button made and the site almost done, I do plan on advertising her. Nevermore just told me on MSN our Panda's are almost done. ^^

DanK84
4th November 2006, 3:10 AM
LOL, you are teh greatest spriter evah!!!111!!


Obviously kidding. But in all seriousness, they're great. Now, onto the crit..(I'll try my best, though most of the stuff I mention will probably be stuff you already heard)


Trainers:
First one: No crit.
Second one: Her belt seems a bit weird looking, but hey, I might just be imagining things.
Third one: Her head seems a bit scruntched into the body. *shrugs* I do it too. XD
Fourth one: No crit.
Fifth one: No crit..
Sixth one: I really like this one. No crit.
Inuyasha: Pretty awesome, though his eyes seem..strange compared to the other trainers. And his left hand's thumb, the black outline seems to make it look strange, though I think it might look even weirder without it.
Next one: *shrugs* No crit.
Ninth one: I believe you've already heard everthing I'll say about this one.
Tenth one: Sapphire/May's hair seems to be cut off, though when I look closer I don't think it is.

Revamps are fine through my eyes. (The eyes of someone who can't crit revamps at all)

Towns rock, you put in details other people wouldn't put in. Such as items/pokeballs, etc.

Avatars are awesome, no crit for those. And the Misc. thing is cool too.

Okay, I tried my best. Usually I can only crit mixes and sometimes trainers. Overall, you're an awesome spriter. You're one of those spriters that when I hear your username I go, "Oh yeah, I remember him/her." In other words you're one of those spriters that I remember from long ago, and will probably remember for a while.

jakepwnsjoo
4th November 2006, 5:42 PM
Yay! Pandas! =D Anyways, we should make some of Team Nirvana. Would you allow me to work with you? ^^

Eruriedo
4th November 2006, 6:44 PM
;475;mmm great sprites but just something, isn't inuyasha's sword bigger?;475;

DanK84
4th November 2006, 9:19 PM
;475;mmm great sprites but just something, isn't inuyasha's sword bigger?;475;

It expands. It's normally as big as Kitsune made it.

kuro mizu
4th November 2006, 9:37 PM
the third trainer from the left, the brightest color blue looks a little bit too bright. maybe tone that down just a smidge.

On the school map, maybe show more change in color on the doors. they all look like one color, but you can see onyl a little bit of a change.

Other than that you pretty much have everything down. very good ^-^