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Dashiel
3rd November 2006, 6:50 PM
http://dasheo.com/images/dashdp.PNG
Meh, I tryed to Remake the Dash sprite in D/P format, didn't turn out that great. C&C please?

Ellie
3rd November 2006, 7:45 PM
The upper body is far too rigid, especially the outstretched arm. Make it more smooth and curved.

I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that or not, since you don't have a full-body reference pic, but the upper body looks too small compared to the lower body, and the pants don't go down far enough.

Not bad, but needs more work.

Chaotic Pink
3rd November 2006, 8:51 PM
It looks stiff and imobile. The outstreched arm looks far too straight, curve and shape it. His trousers look too short too, if you want them to be 3/4 length shorten them even more. Not bad though :)

Dashiel
3rd November 2006, 9:03 PM
Wow some constructive criticism O.o I've got quite a bit to work on xD

Ellie
3rd November 2006, 9:43 PM
Wow some constructive criticism O.o I've got quite a bit to work on xD
Yes, I know, it's a rarity nowadays :p

Another thing I just noticed, the outlines use way too much black. DP sprites do tend to have darker outlines than RS, but they still aren't black, and have shading.