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kuro mizu
4th November 2006, 8:04 PM
Names ive been through on SPPF: from Waterlover315--to-->DarkWater--and finally-->kuro mizu

Well. >.> Here they are...

^^=new.

Sprites are viewed best in the Happy Style, but the forums are best viewed in Dark Style BTW

Trainers

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/9666/trainerlrkthc3.png
(Me) ((planning on making a new one soon))

Mixes

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5079/feebinitmo4.png http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5562/miloairaki3.png
Feebini, Miloair

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/3980/raltseeptio6.png http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8552/kirlaffyaqo5.png http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4803/gardamphapu3.png
Raltseep, Kirlaffy, Gardamph

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/5120/wurmplepieedittap2.png http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/964/silkapodtts0.png http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/4936/beautyfreetnw2.png
Wurmplepie, Silkapod, Beautyfree

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3226/weempletll4.png
^^Weemple

Fakes

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/5395/humbirdtie7.png
Humbird. First scratch ever.

Trainer cards

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1332/tcati5.gif
Would-be D/P teams



*Please, I appreciate CC. I want you to be honest, I need to hear the truth. I dont really like when people post "good job" or whatever, but I guess Im a hypocrit cuz I do that sometimes. I want people to help me improve even more so that I can measure up to the spriting gods, and maybe, enter a contest and win. Even if you dont want to give crit, but say good job or rate them out of 10 or something, thats fine too. I love getting responses.

I can take suggestions, but I don't want this to turn into a request thread. I've tried those numerous times, and they usually get too stressful.

and uhh...follow SPPF rules and...rate my thread please?

enjoy. ^-^

Lucas;130;

jakepwnsjoo
4th November 2006, 8:08 PM
The trainer is cool, but his head is relatively small, and I can tell the places you scratched because you don't use black in your outlines... so... yeah. Welcome back from wherever. xP

ShadowP
4th November 2006, 8:15 PM
The head could use a bit of work. Mainly around the hair part; it doesn't fit the style. Include a bit more contrast (difference in shades) in the hair and make the outlines in it a bit more noticable. Some black in the outline is also needed. I'm also not too fond of the skin colour as it looks a bit dark and without any visible highlights.
The hand (which I suppose is scratched) could do with some work too. Try and use the official sprites as a sort of reference on the structure; it can be hard but you should be able to pull it off. And finally, a bit more contrast in the upper clothes could be added.

kuro mizu
4th November 2006, 8:21 PM
Thanks for the first post ^.^

(im comming back from the depths of the underworld O.O a.k.a. myspace)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1592/trainerdplukecj1.png

I took out all black lines, and i edited the hair a little bit so that the head looks a little bigger.

ANYONE WANT TO TRANSPARENTIZE?!


EDIT:

took off arm, realized that it looked stupid, edited color of jacket a bit

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6516/trainerdplukejm7.png

kuro mizu
5th November 2006, 5:11 AM
sorry for double posting :\ *BUMPAGE*

ugh you people are tough >:P

well, to get you to comment...heres some eye candy that strained my neck to the max ;;

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1592/miloairch4.png
Miloair

???

pnoiboi
5th November 2006, 5:26 AM
I like it!!!! lacks detail though!

kuro mizu
5th November 2006, 5:41 AM
well...what else is there to a dragonair? ;-;

pnoiboi
5th November 2006, 5:48 AM
if its a fusion, then it should have some milotic...hehe..rhymes with erotic

kuro mizu
5th November 2006, 6:40 AM
well i used milotic as the base and added dragonair parts...i dont know how much more elaborate i can make it O.o

*night*

ΑпGЗ ♠
5th November 2006, 7:21 AM
I don't know. Maybe make the tail a fan after the two tail beads.

jakepwnsjoo
5th November 2006, 5:33 PM
Is it a fusion? It looks more like a repose. If you are fusing, you use parts of both pokemon to make it. I think it looks like a great repose, though. ^^

Wietse
5th November 2006, 6:06 PM
May I request you to type in black please? It's very irritating for people using a light template

jakepwnsjoo
5th November 2006, 7:49 PM
May I request you to type in black please? It's very irritating for people using a light template

xD That's funny. I didn't notice, I'm using the dark template. xD It's all white to me.

I also noticed that the shading on the dragonair looks weird.

kuro mizu
5th November 2006, 8:00 PM
May I request you to type in black please? It's very irritating for people using a light template

please, dont spam my thread. if you have a problem with the way i type, then PM me. I dont need your complaints right now.


xD That's funny. I didn't notice, I'm using the dark template. xD It's all white to me.

I also noticed that the shading on the dragonair looks weird.

yeah I use the dark template too. Its the best.

what could I work on with the shading to make it look better?

kuro mizu
6th November 2006, 3:23 AM
*gets ready to be yelled at for double posting**BUMPage*

Got 1/3 of an evo line done. Raltseep.

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2051/raltseepwo2.png

ΑпGЗ ♠
6th November 2006, 3:45 AM
That shade of yellow is why my eyes hurt.

kuro mizu
6th November 2006, 10:51 PM
I dont think its too bright DX

next up is kirlaffy
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/950/kirlaffyts1.png

whatddayathink?

-Espacio-
6th November 2006, 11:02 PM
ooo, i don't remember you, but these are awesome:D The Dragonair/Milotic thing is beautiful, that's the only word I can use to desrcibe it. The mixes are very well blended also :D

kuro mizu
6th November 2006, 11:05 PM
ooo, i don't remember you, but these are awesome:D The Dragonair/Milotic thing is beautiful, that's the only word I can use to desrcibe it. The mixes are very well blended also :D

oooooo arigatou :3

oooh i just love getting replies ^.^

Gardamph comming up later tonight.

ΑпGЗ ♠
7th November 2006, 12:10 AM
It seems a bit pillowshaded on the head.

Kaioga
7th November 2006, 12:19 AM
didn't know you did spriting dude. these look pretty cool. Milolair looks like Dragonair with a Charmeleon bump thing on its head, maybe a little more Milotic? the yellow part on Raltseep looks like its brain to me. Kirlaffy looks really cool though! i like the orb in its hand. it uses it to focus its electric and psychic powers, i assume?

kuro mizu
7th November 2006, 12:44 AM
didn't know you did spriting dude. these look pretty cool. Milolair looks like Dragonair with a Charmeleon bump thing on its head, maybe a little more Milotic? the yellow part on Raltseep looks like its brain to me. Kirlaffy looks really cool though! i like the orb in its hand. it uses it to focus its electric and psychic powers, i assume?

yeah ive been spriting over a year or so now.

uhhh thats just how the d/p sprite is with the point head :s BLAH I dont know what else to add to it to make it more milotic DX

and uhh...I was just trying to make it fluffy :3

and uhhh...SURE! :3 kirlaffy is cool though :3 :3

i might postpone gardamph till tomorrow, idk...

BLAH!




It seems a bit pillowshaded on the head.

well i just like that style :3

kapslock
7th November 2006, 4:03 AM
Trainers

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6516/trainerdplukejm7.png
(Me)



You pulled of the shading quite well. But it seems like you didn't do a too well job on his right pant leg. Zoomed in on paint, you did, but i guess the human eye can be dis honest no?
Mixes
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1592/miloairch4.png
Miloair (First sprite in a while)
The head looks more suited for another pkm, try to make it rounder. Look at the sugmori, the anime pics for reference. the base of the body looks too thick try to slim it up a few pixels. Expirement. Try to use diffrent colors for the outline. a good chart can be found here http://www.dragonflycave.com/recoloring.aspxhttp://www.dragonflycave.com/recoloring.aspx

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2051/raltseepwo2.png
Stage 1: Raltseep


*http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/950/kirlaffyts1.png
Stage 2: Kirlaffy
Lucas;130;

Nothing really to say except... how can a yellow head, ball tail thing evovle into a cute fluffy pink fairy? O.o
3.5/5

I'll transparensize!

kuro mizu
8th November 2006, 11:08 PM
sorry, theres not much to an ampharos :\ so i just added some pretty electric effects. They'd show up better if someone would transparentize *COUGHCOUGH*

heres Gardamph. Sorry for the delay.

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7657/gardamphoj0.png


any suggestiongs for evo lines? I want to appeal to the publics liking :3

Absoltastic
8th November 2006, 11:14 PM
I love the electric effects you used on Gardamph! I don't really think the Miloair lacks detail; I think it is a wonderful mix. I like the wing ears the most. They're so big!

kuro mizu
8th November 2006, 11:17 PM
I love the electric effects you used on Gardamph! I don't really think the Miloair lacks detail; I think it is a wonderful mix. I like the wing ears the most. They're so big!

hah, thanks :3

I originally had the regular size wings on miloair, but i thought they looked too wimpy, so i upgraded them, which resulted in them looking much better. I think my miloair is simple, yet pretty =)



;130;

Atoyont
8th November 2006, 11:45 PM
You are very good indeed. The main thing I notice is the lack of darker outlines. But I suppose that is your choice.

kuro mizu
9th November 2006, 12:04 AM
You are very good indeed. The main thing I notice is the lack of darker outlines. But I suppose that is your choice.

you hit the nail right on the head :3

Lizard-kun
9th November 2006, 1:10 AM
dang, Kuro, nice sprites.
i'm a fan of gardevoir and the family.
love'em.

CyroEmerald_Z
9th November 2006, 1:16 AM
OMG! You are awesome. I love your mixes. The Ralts/Mareep evo line is awesome. Your trainer is also great!
Keep up the awesome work!

.::Cyro::.

ΑпGЗ ♠
9th November 2006, 2:02 AM
sorry, theres not much to an ampharos :\ so i just added some pretty electric effects. They'd show up better if someone would transparentize *COUGHCOUGH*

heres Gardamph. Sorry for the delay.

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7657/gardamphoj0.png


any suggestiongs for evo lines? I want to appeal to the publics liking :3

It is transparent.

The eletric effects seem messy, and the Raltseep should have the ball in it's hands like the rest.

kuro mizu
9th November 2006, 2:05 AM
The eletric effects seem messy, and the Raltseep should have the ball in it's hands like the rest.

yeah i was thinking that too, about the ball thing. I might change it.

pnoiboi
9th November 2006, 3:11 AM
the electricity looks kinda messy...try taking some out.

K-os
9th November 2006, 9:16 AM
Don't know if you still need the transperency... anyway:

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2383/gardamphwbgqj3.png
^It might be gray, but if you save it, it will be transparent.

Nice sprites BTW.

~K-os

Divine_Light
9th November 2006, 9:29 AM
Very good trainer sprite, It looks like one of Gary's poses

Elementman-Novapoke
9th November 2006, 4:11 PM
Since you asked for a request I say:
Machop + evos with Oddish and evos (vileplume as the last)
Magby+evos with Elekid+evos
Wurmple and evos(dustox) with nincada and evos
Wurmple and evos (beautifly) with azurill and evos.
p.s your raltseep and evos are amazing! 9/10 (i never give anything 10 from now on).

Samayowa
9th November 2006, 9:56 PM
Well. >.>

I've been on this site on and off again for a long time now. I'm pretty much going back into the spriting mood. I don't know how regularly im going to be posting here, but I'll do whatever I can.

*=new.

Trainers

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/9666/trainerlrkthc3.png
(Me)

Mixes
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1592/miloairch4.png
Miloair (First sprite in a while)

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2051/raltseepwo2.png
Stage 1: Raltseep

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/5130/kirlaffytmm1.png
Stage 2: Kirlaffy

*http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/9016/gardamphtxu7.png
Stage 3: Gardamph



*Please, I appreciate CC. I want you to be honest, I need to hear the truth. I dont really like when people post "good job" or whatever, but I guess Im a hypocrit cuz I do that sometimes. I want people to help me improve even more so that I can measure up to the spriting gods, and maybe, enter a contest and win. Even if you dont want to give crit, but say good job or rate them out of 10 or something, thats fine too. I love getting responses.

I can take suggestions, but I don't want this to turn into a request thread. I've tried those numerous times, and they usually get too stressful.

and uhh...follow SPPF rules and...rate my thread please?

enjoy. ^-^

Lucas;130;



I love your sprites!
You're a freakin' awesome spriter!

kuro mizu
10th November 2006, 1:03 AM
new and improved! (transparentize later)

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2316/raltseeppa5.png
Raltseep v.2

http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/907/kirlaffywv8.png
Kirlaffy v.2

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/1692/gardamphjy6.png
Gardamph v.2

Better, yes?


Also, elementman, I have taken your ideas into consideration =)

Kiseki
10th November 2006, 3:15 AM
Your sprites are wonderful! The shadings are nice, and I also like your new Kirlaffy. Great job! ^^

kuro mizu
12th November 2006, 6:47 PM
Pre evo of miloair, Feebini. The problem is, I dont know which version I like best, so i'll let the public decide. The one who gets the most votes i'll transparentize.

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9152/feebiniyu7.png

Absoltastic
12th November 2006, 7:01 PM
I personally like the first version with the tail fins. Sorry, but the other ones look too much like tadpoles.

kuro mizu
12th November 2006, 9:19 PM
First ever 100% scratch fakemon *try to act like you're not impressed ;D*

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/1285/humbirdeo2.png
I call it Humbird.

Yeah. Its so simple that its stupid O.o. I couldnt think of any other small fake to make, because Iknow I'd have no chance in making a bigger fake, I'd totaly mess it up.

???
12th November 2006, 9:45 PM
First ever 100% scratch fakemon *try to act like you're not impressed ;D*

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/1285/humbirdeo2.png
I call it Humbird.

Yeah. Its so simple that its stupid O.o. I couldnt think of any other small fake to make, because I know I'd have no chance in making a bigger fake, I'd totaly mess it up.


So, are you entering the fakemon contest? ;)
So what if it's simple? What do you mean you'd mess up if you made a bigger fakemon? So what, you're not going to try anyways?
BTW, get impatient waiting for you're last update to upload?

kuro mizu
12th November 2006, 11:05 PM
So, are you entering the fakemon contest? ;)
So what if it's simple? What do you mean you'd mess up if you made a bigger fakemon? So what, you're not going to try anyways?
BTW, get impatient waiting for you're last update to upload?

eh, I dont think so. It doesnt even stand close to some of the entries ive seen so far.

And it'd turn out retarded if i made a bigger one, it'd look completely noobish. :/ and I dont want that. I just need to keep improving.

and sorry for the quadruple posting, i deleted 3 of em 0.0; sorry, my computer is high speed, but when i go on SPPF, it gets screwed up and slows down, and then eventually, it wont even laod the page, so then i have to restart my computer.

o.O
13th November 2006, 12:40 AM
i like the Ralts/Mareep evos i think there coolio :D
I likie them yo.

kuro mizu
13th November 2006, 1:19 AM
Thanks for all the replies everybody. I hope I can keep this thread alive O.o

Heres a custom trainer card animation i made with the current D/P pokesho sprites. Yes, i gave credit to pokesho on the cards.

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1332/tcati5.gif

kuro mizu
14th November 2006, 2:17 AM
No one is posting O.O,

Heres 1/3 done of an evo line. Its name names me laugh. Wurmplepie. XD

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3195/wurmplepietul2.png

pnoiboi
14th November 2006, 2:20 AM
lol thats a funny name! I vote for V1

CyroEmerald_Z
16th November 2006, 2:38 AM
I like the wurmplepie. Very nice! cant wait to see its evolutions. Metacoon and Beautifree(just quickly made those names).
And i vote for the first one of that other mix. its awesome!

.::Cyro::.

-Espacio-
23rd November 2006, 3:09 PM
Aww, he is so cute. The shading is nice, but the outline looks just a little too light in some spots. I cant wait to see the evos :D

Rayquaza777
23rd November 2006, 3:31 PM
They are all good especially the trainer card. 8.5/10.

kuro mizu
23rd November 2006, 6:53 PM
Updated first page everybody. Check it out ^^

P.S. new rank ^.^

EDITTTTT heres an improved wurmplepie http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/5120/wurmplepieedittap2.png I made the outlines darker because they were too light.

Happy Lamesgiving day T_T

kuro mizu
24th November 2006, 12:57 AM
how come nobody has replied yet :(

heres the final evo, Beautyfree

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/4936/beautyfreetnw2.png

***Views best with happy style***

Lizard-kun
24th November 2006, 2:44 AM
love the sprites man.
how do you give your sprites that, shady look?

kuro mizu
24th November 2006, 2:51 AM
love the sprites man.
how do you give your sprites that, shady look?

I...really dont know, It might just be my style. I always use custom colors and never black outlines ever...uhh other than that, I couldnt tell ya O.o

Any suggestions for a really cool evo line? Im bored x.x

-Espacio-
24th November 2006, 4:45 PM
ooh, nice Butterfree mix, its looks so cute! I just notciced that you are Waterlover315, I've saw you before I think Well, keep up the good work :D

kuro mizu
24th November 2006, 5:40 PM
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/3226/weempletll4.png

Lizard-kun
24th November 2006, 6:34 PM
I...really dont know, It might just be my style. I always use custom colors and never black outlines ever...uhh other than that, I couldnt tell ya O.o

Any suggestions for a really cool evo line? Im bored x.xpoliwag & aron evoline?