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Waterup
5th November 2006, 1:59 AM
It's back!!!
Really Old
My first Mix (http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4271/pkrs151fusion2qv1.gif)
Trainer Card (http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8400/trainercardwater2ts5.jpg)
Lastest(Thanks to all sites who allowed me to make these)
Funny (http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/3170/battlespoofdz2.png)<Second
A comic battle scene (http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1553/battlescene1ub3.png)(I made a mistake.)<First
A thing I made for a friend (http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5018/sidearealba7.png)<Third (Finished)
My comic town (FirstDropTown) (http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3724/firstdroptownvb1.png)<1st Town/map (finally)
New version of ^ (http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4725/firstdroptown2jh8.png)
Trainer Sprite (http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9262/trainersprite1editedbr1.png)<First
One of the rooms at home (http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/2671/sroomhm7.png)
Same as above (http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3658/sroomkg4.png)
Somthing for Ages... (http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2900/energysetbi9.png)
Newest:
Something for the future (http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8172/upgradespm4.png)
Enjoy and comments.

Rayquaza777
5th November 2006, 2:54 AM
Your maps are bad. No senery, bad grass, builings randomly placed, you've got a lot to fix.

Waterup
5th November 2006, 3:10 AM
Your maps are bad. No senery, bad grass, builings randomly placed, you've got a lot to fix.

Which one did you mean? If you meant the Isles this was my first one and it was around July/August when I tried it.

Rayquaza777
5th November 2006, 3:17 AM
The comic town. Is Bad.

Waterup
5th November 2006, 3:23 AM
??? It seems fine to me ??? Oh well its my first anyway. Any more comments?

bonsly2006
5th November 2006, 10:41 AM
The mixs is good but you need to scratch bits as well because the wing on the left is too big

Trainer card: save as png and it will look fine

Chaotic Pink
5th November 2006, 11:55 AM
Rayquaza, please don't just say: "Its bad" give constructive criticism.

The Mix's base doesn't look right with the large arms you've placed on it, these make it out of proportion, so therefore I suggest you scratch some parts it makes them fit better.

The Trainer card is good, but not saved under PNG so the quality of the image is bad. I suggest whiting out the boxes so you can see more of the background.

The battle scenes are good.

The scenery page needs improving, usually in the Pokemon games there are paths leading away from the houses, and have people/pokemon on the scene.

Not bad though :)

Waterup
5th November 2006, 9:42 PM
Thanks, added an edited town aand some other things...