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ΑпGЗ ♠
5th November 2006, 4:46 AM
Please give me "These are excelent sprites! 8/10" style ratings only(!).
If it's the same, without the number rating, don't post then either.
Um, click the following link for sprites.
http://s8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/
I'm lazy, so a formal front page will be put up later.
Newest:
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/869/whatevay1.png

kuro mizu
5th November 2006, 5:15 AM
chikorita/sunflora mix is the best, IMO. Uber kawaii

~Kitty~
5th November 2006, 5:50 AM
Orange,
your sprites are always the best, and will be, keep up the good work!!

I love all of them!

--Vannah--

KingBoo1
5th November 2006, 6:33 AM
Some of the revamps are very nice. Consider the Johto revamp thread for these.

The Mudkip-Quilava mix is nice. Quilava is a great base PKMN. Tauros and Houndoom mix name: "Toradow": it's nice.

ΑпGЗ ♠
5th November 2006, 7:27 AM
kuro mizu: Everyone comments on the fairly old ones, thinking they are better. It looks like a headswap. I can't really think of how to really make it better, though.
~Kitty~: No comment. Really.
KingBoo1: The Johto revamp project is of poor quality ATM. The cheek seems odd on that one. I don't see why people like that one. I like Taurdoom though, it could use some minor edits though.

Please wait a second or ten for an unfinished sprite or two.

EDIT: I decided I should just finish the other sprite tomorrow, as I don't like it.
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/5208/deletert8.png (http://imageshack.us)
I like this one, though, yet this seem somewhat off. Please only comment on the head, you should know why. It's like my chikorita/sunflora mix in a way, as the head was edited to fit on. However, this one will have more stuff. in the end.

Rukaria
5th November 2006, 7:35 AM
Ok, but there is room to improve. For example the shading.

ΑпGЗ ♠
5th November 2006, 7:38 AM
OH GOD THAT WAS SO HELPFUL.

I'm just kidding, but the reason I have posted that sprite here is to learn how to improve it, not that it could be improved on. I of could easily told myself that. Anyway, what about the shading is bad? I will badger you otherwise. >:)

Rukaria
5th November 2006, 8:01 AM
I will give you an example-http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Scratch/Snelia.png
See how the shading is very umm...how do I describe it..
You see how you tried to blend the colours so you have all these jumbled colours. Hard to explain. Just study the shading and you'll see what I mean.
Your Sprite-http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Scratch/Snelia.pngReal Sprite-http://www.forportcity.net/fun/sprites/KirliaNormalSprite.gif

ΑпGЗ ♠
5th November 2006, 8:07 AM
Oh. I want you to only comment on the Sandshew sprite, or the newest sprite at the moment, otherwise I would become confused, like right now.

Do you mean the checkerboard pattern? I tried to reduce that, but I wanted to dither at that time, and I don't want to change a style drasticly like that.

Chaotic Pink
5th November 2006, 12:01 PM
Hi,
Orange, I consider you one of the best spriters on this forum, no I'm not joking!

With this sprite: http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Scratch/Snelia.png the shading is like that of the G/S/C style, only with more shades.

Well done :) Everything I would have C&C'ed on has already been brought to light :(

ΑпGЗ ♠
6th November 2006, 12:58 AM
I'm not sure what you mean, but thanks for trying to help me understand.

squirtleboy12
6th November 2006, 1:00 AM
b+ average sprites..good

kapslock
6th November 2006, 4:46 AM
On your RECENT sprite, it seems like there is little shading. But zoomed in It has quite abit of shading.

The problem? The colors blend to much.
Solution? Try to distingush the colors from each other. Usualy when i make custom colors, I pick one that is simulair to what i want, then i distingush them from each other. Usualy a few shades apart.

Um what is that yellow tail above it's head? A hat, a tail? Please forgive my poor scence of creativity.

Hoped it helped Orange! *coughnowreplyinmydeadthreadchough*

ΑпGЗ ♠
7th November 2006, 12:14 AM
It's the rest of the body.

I'll post when I'm done with homework.

kapslock
7th November 2006, 1:04 AM
aw no thanks for ACTUAL crit? ;_; *craws in shadows* BUT i do have to say that it does look like a tail *nod* but maybe it's just me? *dodges bullet* So any new sprite ideas you have in mind? How about trying to do pixel-overs?

ΑпGЗ ♠
7th November 2006, 3:23 AM
I have this Kirlia sprite that I have been doing for a while. I've always considered it incomplete. I'll post it when I feel like it's done. I don't really like making pixel overs. They're so hard to clean up.

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/686/rukushrewnm4.png
This is what I thought would be a complete version. Are there any other comments until I change the colours?

kapslock
7th November 2006, 3:46 AM
OH that's what it is. Is it me or did ya fix the colors?

But if you have GIMP, or another program that supports layers, then pixelovering is easier then it looks ;) expect a guid for that real soon ;)

Uh the sprite... It seems like you should move the body down a few pixels. It looks like it's wearing a hat. I hate it when other ppl point out dumb things like that too. >.< but that's how it really looks from my point of view. And is the whole sprite custom? It seems like you used the official sprite (I dunno it's name) and used it as a reference. Gee i wish i could do customs, but sadly, all i can do is practice and practice ;_;.

ΑпGЗ ♠
7th November 2006, 4:52 AM
It's either just you, or I somehow reshaded it. It doesn't matter.

I have GIMP, but I only use it for transparency.

Erm, no. I just edited alot. The wierd thing is, I moved the body down, but then I moved it back up again. x_x I should be no problem moving it back though. I'm going to wait for more oppinions though.

kapslock
8th November 2006, 5:00 AM
OKey dokey then. So you only use Gimp for transparensizing? aww come on *nudges* you might like pixel-overing. But i don't want to agrivate more on that subject, so i'll let it go. BUT I do have to say that do you mind if i can see what you have of your Kirlia sprite? please? *is hit on the head with a mallet*

Emo Saria
8th November 2006, 2:09 PM
I have this Kirlia sprite that I have been doing for a while. I've always considered it incomplete. I'll post it when I feel like it's done. I don't really like making pixel overs. They're so hard to clean up.

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/686/rukushrewnm4.png
This is what I thought would be a complete version. Are there any other comments until I change the colours?
Well, they're not junk, so they might just be sprites!
I can say this much.. Cute! I don't think I could find very many people that can do better, good job ^^.
I love all of your sprites overall, the newer ones atleast.. I really don't have anything to say, so keep up the good spriting ^^

ΑпGЗ ♠
8th November 2006, 9:13 PM
OKey dokey then. So you only use Gimp for transparensizing? aww come on *nudges* you might like pixel-overing. But i don't want to agrivate more on that subject, so i'll let it go. BUT I do have to say that do you mind if i can see what you have of your Kirlia sprite? please? *is hit on the head with a mallet*

I once tried to pixel-over with GIMP, although I didn't use layers. It took forever, so I stopped.

I'll post it now, I need suggestions on how to change it a bit more.

Is moving the body a pixel down the same as moving the head up?

EDIT:
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8481/kirliathingshowld6.png
It's lame. My Ralts one was much better IMO.

PokeJosh
9th November 2006, 12:40 AM
I LUV the vulpix chao! Good work!

Mechtaur
9th November 2006, 2:11 AM
I love that mixed Porygon-Machop.

ΑпGЗ ♠
9th November 2006, 5:38 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Revamps/kirlia.png

pnoiboi
9th November 2006, 5:45 AM
I have this Kirlia sprite that I have been doing for a while. I've always considered it incomplete. I'll post it when I feel like it's done. I don't really like making pixel overs. They're so hard to clean up.

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/686/rukushrewnm4.png
This is what I thought would be a complete version. Are there any other comments until I change the colours?

isnt that a repose?

ΑпGЗ ♠
9th November 2006, 11:57 PM
No, that's a mix. How would I make it more Sandshrew-like?

Samayowa
11th November 2006, 4:39 PM
I love your sprites. My favorites are your Aipom/Dunsparce mix and your newest mix..the one that is mixed with Sandshrew....very well done!

ΑпGЗ ♠
12th November 2006, 2:43 AM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4064/electrikezu8.png

I want negative and constructive comments.

jakepwnsjoo
12th November 2006, 2:54 AM
How come spriters follow trends? First the, 'Don't Let This Die' threads, then the 'Fine, let this die, I'll just leave' threads, and now 'My sprites are junk' threads? xD

I've seen some of your sprites before. My favorites are Emo Ralts and http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Scratch/Snelia.png.

Your mixes are very c+p, can't really give a good example...

ΑпGЗ ♠
12th November 2006, 2:59 AM
I only saw another thread with that title. >_< I didn't see it until after I made the topic. That thread existed before then, though.

Do you spot any flaws on what you consider my best?

candy_absol
12th November 2006, 4:12 PM
your sprites are the best. better than mine XD :).

ΑпGЗ ♠
12th November 2006, 4:48 PM
>_>
You haven't seen much, and I haven't seen your's.

ΑпGЗ ♠
13th November 2006, 1:27 AM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/869/whatevay1.png

kuro mizu
13th November 2006, 12:03 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4064/electrikezu8.png

I want negative and constructive comments.

The only thing I dont like is the black outline on the bottom and back of the legs. Change that and its perfect.


http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/Shadow_Ralts/Revamps/kirlia.png

O.o I dont get what its doing, but suprisingly, Im in love with it.

Yami Ryu
13th November 2006, 12:21 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4064/electrikezu8.png

I want negative and constructive comments.

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*Yami used thief*

MINE ALL MINE!

er I mean, really good Electrike sprite. Only thing seems off to me is the paws for some reason, but that's cause I'm used to most sprites with pawed creatures having a bit of detailing for toes. And good job over the other sprites.

Though the flareon things ears look off for some reason O_o

Edit:
Please give me "These are excelent sprites! 8/10" style ratings only(!).

Agne, as I can't write up your whole name, you do know number ratings are against the rules? >>'

Rayquaza777
13th November 2006, 12:33 PM
The sprites are good, Just need a little work here and there. 8/10.