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Black_Winged_Angel
6th November 2006, 3:00 AM
I've been working on Pokemon for a new region, so I'm posting some sprites here for critisism. Tell me what you think, don't flame unless you can back it up.
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/001Cornuta.png
Name: Cornuta
Classification: Wild Corn Pokemon
Number: 001
Type: Grass
Evolution Chain: ~-Currently in Progress-~
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/039Spiritale.png
Name: Spiritale
Classification: Nine Tailed Spirit Pokemon
Number: 039
Type: Fire/Ghost
Evolution Chain: Vulpix -> Fire Stone -> Ninetales -> Awakening Stone -> Spiritale
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/045Lantwirn.png
Name: Lantwirn
Classification: Lamp Pokemon
Number: 045
Type: Light/Steel
Evolution Chain: ~-Currently in Progress-~
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/102Marionne.png
Name: Marionne
Classification: Puppet Pokemon
Number: 102
Type: Ghost/Grass
Evolution Chain: Marionne -> Lv. 36 -> Purinette
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/103Purinette.png
Name: Purinette
Classification: Marionette Pokemon
Number: 103
Type: Ghost/Grass
Evolution Chain: Marionne -> Lv. 36 -> Purinette
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/116Harpona.png
Name: Harpona
Classification: Harp Pokemon
Number: 116
Type: Light/Flying
Evolution Chain: None

Please tell me what you think! :)

pnoiboi
6th November 2006, 3:55 AM
they need outline and more details

-aocom v2-
6th November 2006, 3:57 AM
They're very angular and the colors are a bit to bright. The shading also lacks definition of form (only a bit though). Spiritale's tails look more like ice than they do spirits...

Stick with edits, as the scratch sprites leave something to be desired. The ideas have potential though. :D

Black_Winged_Angel
7th November 2006, 4:39 PM
To pnoiboi: You probably can't see the outlines because some of them don't use black in them. Which ones lack details? I can't improve if I don't know what's wrong with what.
To aocom: I agree with the shading and Spritales tails part, but, uh... define angular. Some of them do indeed have bright colors, I apoligize for any damage to your eyes, I made some more but they're scratch because I made them before reading what you said. They're Dark types, some of them, so I assure you your eyes won't burn as badly. XD

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/146Ygdracanth.png
Name: Ygdracanth
Classification: Reborn Pokemon
Number: 146
Type: Water/Psychic
Evolution Chain: Relicanth -> Awakening Stone -> Ygdracanth

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/133Nurika.png
Name: Nurika
Classification: Dark Wall Pokemon
Number: 133
Type: Dark/Ghost
Evolution Chain: Nurika does not evolve

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j74/rising_umbreon/134Karasa.png
Name: Karasa
Classification: Parasol Pokemon
Number: 134
Type: Dark/Flying
Evolution Chain: Karasa does not evolve

OJG
7th November 2006, 5:52 PM
Dark Wall? lol.

I reckon that Spiritale is more suited to being Vulpix' alternate evo through an Ice/Awakening stone.

Chaotic Pink
7th November 2006, 7:01 PM
Some of them are quite good, and I'd never be able to do the quantity you have!

Some of the outlines/shapes looks too straight making some of the sprite look rigid.

You've got quite a few interesting/weird ideas! Well done though, theres some I really like!

jirachiex201
9th November 2006, 1:57 AM
Ygdracanth = Best one.
The shading looks realistic, and... I like blue. :p

pnoiboi
9th November 2006, 2:19 AM
the lantern looks flat and the others look too square...