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Kitsune
6th November 2006, 3:35 AM
I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e386/Hacker720/FirstScratch.gif

OK, I have added this to my Sprite Thread here (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=165703), but I want it indivicually critiqued. It is my first, so I obviously want you to be harsh so I can improve. The only thing that is clear the needs improvement is my outline shading. Anyways, any criticism is welcomed with open arms.

pnoiboi
6th November 2006, 3:36 AM
its good, but that bunny is freaking me out!

Kitsune
6th November 2006, 3:38 AM
OK...

I said give my crit. I wanna know why it's good. If you don't edit that with some actual help, I'll have the bunny eat you.

pnoiboi
6th November 2006, 3:44 AM
OKAY!!!!!!!needs more shadowing!
please dont eat me!

ΑпGЗ ♠
6th November 2006, 4:09 AM
Um, what is the brown stuff supposed to be? Is it wood?

The body's shading seems off, but I'm not sure how, so please feed me to the bunny. The foot on your left also seems odd in pose.

Kitsune
6th November 2006, 4:14 AM
Yes, it is wood on the head. The outline is what made the left foot seem weird. If you're the Bracket that's lurking around my thread in C-Spriting, you're bunny food.

pnoiboi
6th November 2006, 4:17 AM
whats that round thing in the tip?it kinda bugs me