View Full Version : Rate my fakemon please

6th November 2006, 4:02 PM
Please say how I can improve.
I don't know its name yet, and the type is Grass/Fighting.

Chaotic Pink
6th November 2006, 4:52 PM
Its not bad, it reminds me a bit of Kirlia. The legs look fine to me, you've got them perfect. The hair on its head looks a little miss shaped, but I'm not sure why.

Its quite good :) I'd like to see some more of what you can do :)

6th November 2006, 4:55 PM
Yeah, I know, I actually used a DP-Kirlia for the pose..^^
Here's it's pre-evolution.

Chaotic Pink
6th November 2006, 4:57 PM
Its cute in a weird sort of way :D

The leg (left one) looks as though its been twisted too far inwards and the hairline doesn't look quite smooth enough.

6th November 2006, 5:04 PM
Hm, I'll fix the leg, but I don't know what to do with the hairline? Is it the right one or what?...how shall I fix it? Any suggestions?
Anyway, thanks for the critics...goin' back to work again. :D

6th November 2006, 10:18 PM
They are very good, but on the first one, there is a bit of excess black on the leaf on top and in the skirt. I like your fakemon, and I hope you make some more!

15th November 2006, 6:14 PM
They bouth look really cute, umb!XD