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Lucario0708
22nd April 2011, 3:29 AM
here is my profile


Name: Jaku

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad: 5th seat, squad 7

Inner World: a volcanic area rushing with lava, always burning

Blood Group: AB+

Eyes: blue, when i go into bankai, they turn gold

Hair: white, spiky, think kamina's hair from gurren lagann

Height: 6 ft. 4"

Other Physical Appearance: shinigami wears a black trench coat, which has tears in the bottom, a black dress shirt underneath with a black leather jacket over it, obsidian bracers covering his arms and a pair of black gloves that make his fingers look clawed, a pair of black metal boots, the toe part comes out in a beak shape. He also wears a pair of orange kamina glasses, which have computer systems inside them to target and analyze enemies

Human form wears a yellow dress shirt, navy blue jacket, navy pants, think Spike Spiegel from cowboy bebop

Zanpakuto:
Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation)
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in


Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai Sealed Bankai Shield Bankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu


Personality: Smart, somewhat silent most of the time, sometimes cocky in a battle, when he really gets fired up, he rushes in without thinking, using all his power, he never gives up and tries to do the impossible, and reach the invisible

Primary Hand: right

Battle Style: fast, scans enemy movements and learns their patterns, then strikes, when fired up he rushes in with all his power

Battle Stats-
Offense: 70
Defense: 70
Mobility: 80
Intellect: 60
Kidou: 70
Stamina: 70
420/600
(i think this is how I had it)

Physical Age: 21

District of Origin: did not originate in the soul society, parents were japanese, moved to america, he was born in america

Backstory: Jaku traveled with a man, and they helped save people, however, he left that life to continue his own, and became a soul reaper, the silver key hanging on his neck is all he has to remember his old life. He joined the man when he was 13, traveled for 3 years, joined soul society at 16, been with it for 5 years, father was a soul reaper who took part in the quincy wars

VizardBlue
22nd April 2011, 3:39 AM
im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

The gun blade seems a lil..Cloud'ish. may I ask how long the blade is, can it still be used against a regular long/thick sword?
Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
I am extremely pleased that you have given yourself limits.
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one



Other then that, it's actually fairly cool and awesome. So.. I give you this, as my sign of approval.
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lid8z6s4Lt1qctyxj.gif

Lucario0708
22nd April 2011, 3:46 AM
the gun blade in shikai is 4 feet long, in bankai it is 5

it can still be used against a long/thick sword

it seems cloud'ish? I honestly never knew cloud had a gunblade until I looked up pictures of gunblades, as I have seen them before and thought they were really cool

yes, I gave myself limits, hard to try and figure out those limits BUT I DID

and lol, crying smiley face :'D

Jinchuuriki Hunter
22nd April 2011, 5:50 AM
Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in


Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai Sealed Bankai Shield Bankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one


@Eon: LoZ, so much LoZ, GAHHHHHHHHHHH *headexplode* in all seriousness, very well thought out, im looking forward to reading YOUR fic

i just had a great idea for a new zanpakto, but i already made mine, so ill just tell you what the weapon is and you guys can maybe work with it

my super awesome idea for a zanpakto is..... a deck of cards

yes, a deck of deadly spirit cards that are used gambit style

but like i said, im not using it, so you guys may want to work with it
You do realize your bankai's name is basically "Phoenix Shining" said with a very heavy Japanese accent?
Other than that, I don't see anything wrong with this zanpakutou. Except for the collecting light thing it does which should make it reach full power rather quickly seeing as how light is everywhere and moves at the speed of light.

Oh guys, did you hear? I'm resigning oh, you heard.

kusari
22nd April 2011, 8:45 AM
im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in


Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai (http://files.sharenator.com/gunblade_What_weapon_would_you_use_during_a_zombie _apocalypse-s480x480-51381-580.jpg) Sealed (http://www.andreas.blicher.info/images/Scimitar.jpg) Bankai Shield (http://images.mmosite.com/rf/shield/shield_elf_lv55a.jpg) Bankai armor (http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lcizb7tupf1qct6s5o1_500.jpg) the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

sounds okay. others may have some objections.



Oh guys, did you hear? I'm resigning oh, you heard.
Yeah. We heard. =_=


A final note of business. The other fic I'm currently working on is a Pokemon fic that has been embryonic for a while now. I figure that every once and a while I'll have a character of the day or just random character winning/losing a battle. Anyone who's interested just shoot me a PM with 4-6 non-legendaries that you would want to appear with you. 2 or 3 of you may have multiple appearances. So thanks in advance if you choose to help out.

Cell
22nd April 2011, 9:31 AM
Zanpaktou Name; Yuki Sendou

Type; Ice, Throwing weaponry

]Awesome![/B

Zanpaktou Spirit; Yuki Senkou appears as a small chipmunk, who's fur is literally as white and pure as the first snow.

Sword Form: Classic Katana with a light blue Flange hilt in the shape of a snowflake. The snow flake pattern seems to change slightly often.

[B]The hilt changes shape... I like it

Release Command; Hyouketsu (Freeze)

Shikai Details; Yuki Sendou becomes two throwing knives. The User's speed increases greatly. The knives are completely white from hilt to blade-tip. the user can channel reietsu in different forms, most often ice, snow, and freezing liquids from distances through the throwing knives. The throwing knives are incredibly sturdy and are used to "Conduct" and control ice, even if the knives are far from the User himself. They're powerful weapons but their main purpose is for them to act as satellites, relaying his control of ice to long distances. Similarly, he can create ice from thin air or by gathering moisutre in the air (For a cost energy-wise, of course) and the satellite attribute of his blades works just as well for that.

... satellite knives? Can you also do GPS functions? ;)

Jokes aside, I quite like it.


Bankai Name; Kaisoku Buriza-do Toride. (High-Speed Blizzard Fortress)

Bankai Details; In Bankai his throwing knives are less confined to a shape, they can become a variety of different throwing weaponry-so long as it is small. They could go from knives to shuriken, bladed boomerangs, needles, smaller chakrams or darts, but he couldn't create a javelin or a larger chakram). He can create these throwing weapons to a large amount, mostly limited only by the mental strain of having to keep track of all of them and the time in which he can maintain his bankai while using energy fighting. From any distance the user can channel Reiatsu throguh their weaponry, an automatic nearly comepletely undraining freeze takes place everytime a daggar hits something; a near perfect Attack system because the battlefield will become colder and more icy with every miss and the opponent will become slower by every hit-on top of that he can make sudden changes to the battlefield by channeling energy through his weapons. Whenever he enters bankai it starts to snow. The users speed is dramatically increased in comparison to his Shikai. The user's clothing and hair turn snow white and their clothes enlarges to cover all skin-allowing him to camouflage into the snow. Even his body temperature fades into the temperature of snow.

Anything Else; The weapons ARE made of metal.

Seems a bit strange that the weapons would be made out of metal, to be honest... Why not just highly concentrated ice?

Zanpakutou Abilities:

Kairaikoori: The ability to control/move/shape/etc Ice. (Ice Puppet)

Kumokouchi: The ability to effect the weather directly.(In favor of cold weather) (Cloud Craft)

For next week, our systems indicate the weather will be sunny. /machines can't detect zanpakto's. You're making weathermen's lives that much more annoying. ;)

Mattou Maru: Ability to create solid ice anywhere in line of sight. (Absolute Zero, literally Complete Zero)

Wait a minute.. everywhere in the line of sight? So if you're on the highest mountain you could just freeze half a country? I do think this needs a small nerf (say in a 10km radius?)

Mattou Maru Eisei: The ability to form ice anywhere (Within reason) near one of his weapons. (Absolute Zero Satellite, Lit. Complete Zero Satellite) (Abilities involving use of previously thrown weapons work due to each weapon maintain a link to his mind unless it is destroyed or voluntarily dissolved. This causes a mental stress that raises the more blades he summons)

The comment between the (), doesn't it belong at the next technique?

Kakumei Eisei: The ability to form ice over a previously thrown weapon and therefore control the weapon from a distance. (Satellite Revolution.)

Hitoshirezu Gengeki: The ability to hide weapons in his clothing such that he can fight at close range or form ice on himself, around himself, or on an opponent for offensive or defensive purposes. (Hidden Weapons) BANKAI.

Reminds me of a manga I once read. No comments, however.

Fukyuu Kire Naraku: The ultimate technique. Using Kakumei Eisei to control all previously thrown weapons on the battlefield to trap and kill the target or targets. High focus and concentration is required to maintain a steady control. High Maintenance. (Eternal Slicing Hell) BANKAI

You mean you use the previously thrown weapons and make them fly to a target?

Ken Iyou No Auto: Last Resort. A Post-FKN move. All previously formed weapons dissolve into the (Small amount of) reiatsu that was used to form it, relieving the mental stress of maintaining so many weapons and slightly replenish his energy. Contrary to his normal fighting style, he forms two weapons only for the remainder of his bankai state. Two large crescent shapes blades (See below) that "Eat" Ice. The blades become larger, yet without increasing in weight, sturdier, and all the sharper whenever they come in contact with Ice. The negatives are that the User loses the ability to create ice (For the period of activation) and ice dissolves after being "eaten". The snow stops when this is activated. There IS, a long ranged mode, of course... (Odd Blade Out)

I'd like to know more about this 'Odd Blade Out' skill.

Ken Iyou no Auto: http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6675/keniyounoauto.jpg



What do you think?

All Comments inside the spoiler.

Overal I like it, except the point about 'everything in the line of sight', there should be a bit of a limit on that.




@Luc.'s new zanpakto;

That actually seems more human shinigami than your other one, and waaay less complicated (which is a good thing).

I don't really notice any flaws except that light is almost instantanious..

Wouldn't it be better if the solar power (light) is used up to power up the fire attacks?





Oh and I've officially thought about a fullbring, I'll be posting that later today. ;)





Oh guys, did you hear? I'm resigning oh, you heard.
Yes I've heard.. *cries*

Northern Lights
22nd April 2011, 12:11 PM
im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in


Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai (http://files.sharenator.com/gunblade_What_weapon_would_you_use_during_a_zombie _apocalypse-s480x480-51381-580.jpg) Sealed (http://www.andreas.blicher.info/images/Scimitar.jpg) Bankai Shield (http://images.mmosite.com/rf/shield/shield_elf_lv55a.jpg) Bankai armor (http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lcizb7tupf1qct6s5o1_500.jpg) the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

That's much better, a light based Zanapktou - interesting idea with the meteors, and you gave yourself a slight handicap too, good good


my super awesome idea for a zanpakto is..... a deck of cards
yes, a deck of deadly spirit cards that are used gambit style
but like i said, im not using it, so you guys may want to work with it

Idea has already been taken in a conversation between myself and RG, i'm afraid - Hopefully he'll finalise it soon

I wonder where Golde is? ...

Cell
22nd April 2011, 12:20 PM
Cell Studios Proudly Presents;



Note: contains programming terms, see the last lines for a small legend;


Fullbring Name: Data Drive

Item: Portable hard disk


Activation description:
When I activate my fullbring, the blue power led on the hard disk lights up, A circle made out of strings appears around the disk. Each string is seperated from the next by a &. Empty spots are " _ "


Ability Details:
Once I pull out these strings, the hard disk changes into the object that the string represents.

I can drag the string back to the power led (which is present in all forms), reversing the item back to the hard disk model.

I can drag out 2 strings at most, if they're next to each other in the circle. (such as "sword"&"shield")


If I am familiar with an object, I can make a variable of it to place it in the empty string spots in the hard disk. A variable is represented by an incomplete cube.

However, the object will be created out of the hard disk available substances.
I can vaguely change the form of the object though I am limited to use materials made out of:

* magnet wire
* gold (in small amounts)
* iron/steel
* rubber
* (thermo)plastic
* copper (in small amounts)


What it looks like:

*refers to the image*

The dark colour is grey, the light colour is orange.

The cubes are a mix of light and dark blue. (yeah I messed up a bit while drawing, should have used a pencil...)

http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/8348/fullbring.jpg

Legend;

A string is a sequence of characters and is contained within " (such as "sword")

A variable is an object which holds data (in the above example the physical sword cube would be the variable)




What do you think? :o

I like Pokemon (...)
22nd April 2011, 4:06 PM
All of the new zans/revamps look good. I don't really have anything specific to say about them.
And yes, I DID read all of them.


And how're you going to control your motion / reactions if you speed up time to the point that I can't track you? Remember, your brain has to be able to keep up with your body for your powers to be effective (If this isn't the case now, I think you could make this work for a weakness / limit). Plus, slowing down time for me is less effective (to an extent) because of my enhanced nervous system; I can react after my opponent and still make it in time (by quite a bit in Bankai). The only way to balance this is to make us roughly equal and then force the fight from there, otherwise neither of us will be able to do anything to the other.
At the moment that isn't a limitation, I might add that in.
While your nervous system is still enhanced because of your shikai/bankai, mine also slows it down. So relative to your slowed down frame, your nervous system is still excited, whereas to me, it wouldn't be as much.


Do eeet.

The weakness or the list? XD


What is feminine about Arial? o.o I used that font for my essay nooooooo
I meant the colour as well XD. The lighter colour, it's softer, smoother and thinner than verdana, at least to me XD.


...Are you giving me a false hope again? :p
Probably.

Yep. Thoughts?
Looks good to me, and I don't really have anything specific to point out. Except it's ironic that you're one of the older shinigamis, when you're not a vet XP

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one
Much better.
Though we have another Fire zan XD. It's no wonder that Arc is at the top.


I wonder where Golde is? ...
Trying to find our pot stash so we stop being insane.

Eon Master
22nd April 2011, 5:11 PM
Nothing really to say for the Zanpaktou, I looked them over and all of them looked fine. And Cell's fullbring as well. I should try that when I'm not trying to re-make my Shinigami self.


@Eon: LoZ, so much LoZ, GAHHHHHHHHHHH *headexplode* in all seriousness, very well thought out, im looking forward to reading YOUR fic

xD There wasn't any LoZ in the profile! Only the appearance being based on Link, really. And cool, thanks.


At the moment that isn't a limitation, I might add that in.
While your nervous system is still enhanced because of your shikai/bankai, mine also slows it down. So relative to your slowed down frame, your nervous system is still excited, whereas to me, it wouldn't be as much.

Mhm. Just figured it might be a good place to start.
And that's exactly it. You can slow me down, but I can still react to your moves well in advance and time my dodges perfectly.


The weakness or the list? XD

I meant the list, but the weakness is cool too xD


Looks good to me, and I don't really have anything specific to point out. Except it's ironic that you're one of the older shinigamis, when you're not a vet XP

It's just for my fic, really. And did I do a good job of showing how godmoddy my Zan would be if it didn't have such massive limitations?

Lucario0708
22nd April 2011, 6:36 PM
Ya, I just noticed that my Hikari ryūsei danmaku would be extremely overpowered if I did not put in limitations

and on another fire zan and arc's water at being the top?

well sunlight evaporates water no?

also, my zan would be completely useless if it was nighttime/cloudy unless I go straight to bankai

anyway, I ran out of reeses pieces, so no more hyper luke for a long time

also, anyone wondering about my username let me explain

Lucario, is of course my favorite pokemon, and my middle name is Luke so, ya

and the 0708 refers to the years 2007 and 2008, in which a variety of awesome stuff happened to me those two years

and there is already a deck of cards zanpakto? dang.... i thought of an entire idea based around that that i might put in my bleach fic

if you want to know, here's my idea

The zan would be used by a dead Soul Reaper

yes, a walking Skeleton

killed in a battle with Espada #4, Ulquiorra, he was strangely re-animated as a walking skeleton, and uses a deck of playing cards as his zan

just throwing that idea out there, may make an entire profile for this dude and show you guys before i decide to put this guy in my fic


oh and also, who WOULDN'T want to use a gunblade? it's a fricking gun AND a sword

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 3:33 AM
im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in


Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai (http://files.sharenator.com/gunblade_What_weapon_would_you_use_during_a_zombie _apocalypse-s480x480-51381-580.jpg) Sealed (http://www.andreas.blicher.info/images/Scimitar.jpg) Bankai Shield (http://images.mmosite.com/rf/shield/shield_elf_lv55a.jpg) Bankai armor (http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lcizb7tupf1qct6s5o1_500.jpg) the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one
Seems pretty good. Hikari Ryūsei Danmaku seems like an attack Kubo would come up with.

Keep the element as light, instead of fire.
None of it's attacks have much to do with fire.

I don't think having the gun blade be 4-5 feet is practical, at least in shikai.
Maybe have the gun blade be like a big knife in shikai, about 1-2 feet.
And then in bankai it can be 3-4 feet.

Oh, and I have some name suggestions I'll PM to you. :p


@Eon: LoZ, so much LoZ, GAHHHHHHHHHHH *headexplode* in all seriousness, very well thought out, im looking forward to reading YOUR fic

i just had a great idea for a new zanpakto, but i already made mine, so ill just tell you what the weapon is and you guys can maybe work with it

my super awesome idea for a zanpakto is..... a deck of cards

yes, a deck of deadly spirit cards that are used gambit style

but like i said, im not using it, so you guys may want to work with it
Even thought he's not using it here, Arceus03 came up with a similar idea a while ago.


Oh guys, did you hear? I'm resigning oh, you heard.
Shhhh, we we're hoping Golde wouldn't notice.


and there is already a deck of cards zanpakto? dang.... i thought of an entire idea based around that that i might put in my bleach fic

if you want to know, here's my idea

The zan would be used by a dead Soul Reaper

yes, a walking Skeleton

killed in a battle with Espada #4, Ulquiorra, he was strangely re-animated as a walking skeleton, and uses a deck of playing cards as his zan

just throwing that idea out there, may make an entire profile for this dude and show you guys before i decide to put this guy in my fic
There are two, apparently. >.>

Now that sounds like something that would come from One Piece.
Do you watch One Piece by any chance?
You should give your skeleton Soul Reaper a big afro! :D

Lucario0708
23rd April 2011, 4:57 AM
I do not watch one piece, I'm not a big fan of stretchy pirates

also just thought, what if there was a pen/pencil zanpakto?

I ERASED YOUR ATTACK, BWAHAHAHA

in all seriousness, what of a regular pistol as a zanpakto? it would be interesting definitely,

so, anyway, *spiral teleports away to punch rossiu*

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 5:02 AM
Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 5:05 AM
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, badmanjaro.
I'm Zameric, the captain of Squad 9.
Who is your favorite character?
Where are you in the series?


I do not watch one piece, I'm not a big fan of stretchy pirates

also just thought, what if there was a pen/pencil zanpakto?

I ERASED YOUR ATTACK, BWAHAHAHA

in all seriousness, what of a regular pistol as a zanpakto? it would be interesting definitely,

so, anyway, *spiral teleports away to punch rossiu*
Too bad...

Well, Northern Light's zanpakuto is somewhat related to that idea; her zan is a giant paint brush.

Well, I think Kubo usually tries to keep zanpakuto in the form of some kind of sword, or other older weapons.
Pretty sure he tries to stay away from modern weapons.
Except for Starrk, who has been the main and only exception.

Lucario0708
23rd April 2011, 5:12 AM
@badmanjaro: I believe you are now accepted though i would wait for someone to confirm this

anyway, welcome to the club! My name is Lucario0708 but you can call me Luke/78/Jaku
I am 5th seat of squad 7, underneath my captain, eon master

if you need help with your zanpakuto, feel free to ask me or any other member

@zam: BY THE POWER OF GRAYSKULL! I think deadpool would then make an excellent soul reaper, don't you agree?

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 5:34 AM
@zam: BY THE POWER OF GRAYSKULL! I think deadpool would then make an excellent soul reaper, don't you agree?
I didn't know anythign about his powers, so I went on a wiki-walk.
He seems like he'd be the captain of Squad 2, maybe.
But his Weapon X powers would probably be his zan powers.

VizardBlue
23rd April 2011, 5:37 AM
Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!

IT'S A NEW MEMBER! Hi there, im the Squad 11 Captain!
Im the club's official cloud cuckoolander/crazy sadistic maniac!
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lexgjnzD2I1qachxg.gif
My list of achievements include: Person to Visit Squad 4 the Most//Person to be in the most fights//Sadistic Maniac//Cam//Person who walked into Mordor.
screwtherulesIhaveBlueHair
How far you in the series?
Do you need any help with your zanpaktou/Have you already made one?
Do you RP at all?
And the most important question of all, do you LIKE SHINJI HIRAKO?

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 6:52 AM
Omg I just wrote so many paragraphs about what I liked and my zanpakuto/bankai then my page refreshed!!!

PKMN Trainer Rex
23rd April 2011, 7:06 AM
Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 7:39 AM
Zanpakuto - Howling Force - Hauringu-ryoku

Release Phase: (Ikkini daun shite, anata no emono o ubau) Swoop down and snatch your prey


Zanpakuto spirit: an adult sized bird with wings of electric and a body mixed with flames.

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves

Bright beams - Buraito wa, bīmu

I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

A. Spark of Destruction - Hakai no Hibana
Electric cero.
B. Cold Fire - Kōrudo-hi
Fire cero.



Final temptation - Saishū-tekina yūwaku
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot as many as needed to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.


Bankai - Heaven's Force - Ten no chikara
I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes - De~yuosurasshu

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

A. Roaring Thunder - Narihibiku kaminari
Thunder
B. Burning Earth - Bāninguāsu
Fire


Swinging Doom - Unmei o yurasu
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.





Swing of Faith - Shinkō no suingu
(FINAL FINAL FINAL ATTACK)

I place all of my power into my blades causing them to both disintegrate, turning into dust. I blow the dust in my hand which magically turns into a double tipped spear. I then swing it into the air (Think about when Ulquiorra swings his sword to deflect one of Hollow Ichigos swings, just swinging it in the air),
As I'm swinging it, bolts of lightning from the sky and fire from the ground are just going inside the blade. I then run up to my opponent with one last blow. By doing so, this may seriously injure me as my powers are very dangerous a bit to much for my to handle.

Thank you Zameric with some name suggestions!

Northern Lights
23rd April 2011, 11:32 AM
Favorite character : gin ichimaru

8D ... Good answer! Your zanpaktou seems to be good as well, reminds me of those twins from the second Bleach Movie

Welcome, badmanjaro and PKMN Trainer Rex, I am Kida Ookami, Captain of 3rd Squad. So yo =]

XD, Blue you crack me up with these GIFs

CyberBlaziken
23rd April 2011, 1:52 PM
Welcome to The Bleach Club, badmanjaro and PKMN Trainer Rex!
I'm Lieutenant of Squad 7, CyberBlaziken.
Call me Kai.

Tsukishima's reallys strong :|
And i thought Kurosaki got his Shinigami powers back -.-'A bit dissapointed with his FullBring transformation though..

I like Pokemon (...)
23rd April 2011, 5:33 PM
and on another fire zan and arc's water at being the top?

well sunlight evaporates water no?
You'd have to heat Tsukibana to higher than 500 degrees Celsius, and even if you did, it wouldn't be very good...

Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!

Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.
Welcome the the Bleach club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...), though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

Do you guys read the manga or watch the anime (sub or dub?)

Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Initiate saying: Fly your prey is before you!

Zanpakuto spirit: a human like figure on fire. Wherever he walks there's electric flowing from his feet, also whatever he touches. He is very dangerous...

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves - I'll get these translated later

Bright beams
I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.



Final temptation
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot from the air about 10 each to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.



I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.


I can't think of an attack name for this so help me out with what I say :)
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.

Dual fire and electric? Nice. With Final Temptation, if the swords are duplicated 50 times, why do you shoot only 10 of each to your opponent?

kusari
23rd April 2011, 5:48 PM
Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!
Come to 13. We're the most awesome squad besides 3. (<---Totally sucking up)


Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.
you too should come to Squad 13.


Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Initiate saying: Fly your prey is before you!

Zanpakuto spirit: a human like figure on fire. Wherever he walks there's electric flowing from his feet, also whatever he touches. He is very dangerous...

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves - I'll get these translated later

Bright beams
I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.



Final temptation
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot from the air about 10 each to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.



I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.


I can't think of an attack name for this so help me out with what I say :)
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.



Final attack needs a name xD


Well both of my claws just charge up for one last blow and slash my opponent.

Thank you!! Took me awhile to write it lol. I hope it gets approved. Now to answer the questions!

I like it. Not the run of the mill zan.


You'd have to heat Tsukibana to higher than 500 degrees Celsius, and even if you did, it wouldn't be very good...

If you're talking about the ability where Arc sends Tsukibana inside you, then yeah. That's not good.


Welcome newbies. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. When joining a squad I hope you would consider 13 as an option. Badmanjaro may I recommend that, if you don't join 13, consider Squad 6. They're an offensive squad and your zan is somewhat like the current captain's.

Northern Lights
23rd April 2011, 6:26 PM
We're the most awesome squad besides 3. (<---Totally sucking up)

Being a little biased there aren't we? ;]

Squad 3 - Mostly a Defensive squad, we thrive on animal instinct and our protective natures aid our comrades in battle.

So, if you think you'd suit a Squad like this, then i'll be happy to offer you a place =]

BTW, does anyone know where Eigth Circle of WTH is?

Cell
23rd April 2011, 6:44 PM
Hello there, PKMN Trainer Rex and badmanjaro. Welcome to the Bleach Club.

I'm Cell, 5th seat of the Second squad. Local long range specialist.


@badmanjaro;

Interesting Zanpakto you have there. I like that it has longer range capabilities. :)

@Lucario;

Bah, gunblades.. BOWSWORDS is where it's at. ;)


That's all for now.

PKMN Trainer Rex
23rd April 2011, 7:44 PM
If its possible, can anyone help with my zanpaktou? I got some concepts down, but there is a lot of tweaking to do.

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 7:48 PM
I'll answer everyone's answer later! Well I guess I can answer one now. One dagger is on fire whilst one is electric xD I only shoot 10 at a time, maybe just for consistinstcy? I have no idea xD

Eon Master
23rd April 2011, 7:49 PM
BTW, does anyone know where Eigth Circle of WTH is?

*sigh*

T'was really hoping not to be the bearer of bad news more than once.


Alright, I'm sorry to drop off some bad news, but Circ has asked me to let you know that he's resigning his position as the Lieutenant of Squad 3. In his words: "I haven't been on since December, and that's not likely to change anytime soon. Tell them I'm sorry, but I can't keep up at all."

Oh, and he also said that if you wanted to have him "die" in your fanfics, just make it epic and he's fine with it xD

About eight or ten pages back.

On a slightly happier (or not, depending on how you view my old character's death) note, my fanfic is coming along nicely.

Welcome, new members. Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7 here. You can call me Eon, or come up with your own nickname so long as it's not derogatory.

And Rex, I'd be happy to help you out.

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 7:54 PM
I guess I'm not leaving yet. Squad 6 sounds nice xD Isnt squad 6 captain byakuya?

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 8:09 PM
Hmm, quite a few posts since my last one. I'll read them later, but I'm just here now to post the webpage I made to showcase all the Battle Data Charts. Then I'm going to get off my computer to have lunch. Hello new member, I'll properly introduce myself in a little while. Also, badmanjaro, I'll read you zan after I come back too. Here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=11446606) is the webpage with all the Battle Data Charts.

PKMN Trainer Rex
23rd April 2011, 8:16 PM
Thank you Eon, just hit me up on my visitor convo we can get started or to anyone who wants to help just hit me up. Any help will be much appreciated.

Might as well answer some questions while I'm here.

Favorite character(s): Sajin Komamura & Izuru Kira

Where am I in the series? I'm caught up on the manga series. Haven't watched the subbed for about a year (college takes too much time) and I watch the dubbed every Saturday.

My zanpaktou: TBA

Do I RP? Not really, I can in to it though.

Do I like Shinji Hirako? Of course I do, especially his mummy mask. Kensei is cool too.

kusari
23rd April 2011, 8:20 PM
Being a little biased there aren't we? ;]

Maaaaybe :3


I guess I'm not leaving yet. Squad 6 sounds nice xD Isnt squad 6 captain byakuya?
In canon yeah. I'm talking about our Squad 6 captain, MasterCharizard, or MC for short. He'll probably be welcoming you guys here pretty soon.


Taking a short break from writing. At the rate I'm going my pilot chapter should be done by tuesday. I'll link when it's up.

Cell
23rd April 2011, 9:10 PM
My first ever fanfiction chapter, bear with me on this.




A young man was running through the masses in the street, a long chain dragging behind him. The image of the hooded monster forever edged into his mind. Slowly he heard the biting sound getting closer. He kept running away from the noise, but no matter what he did, he noticed it didn't make a difference.. if all that just hadn't happened in the first place...


A couple of hours earlier, shopping district 12.

How it had happened, nobody knew, a man about 17 years old had fallen from the 4th floor of an appartment building. Bystanders gathered around the scene, taking pictures with their phones.

What no one could see,was that the young man kept staring at his own body lying on the pavement. He had no idea how he got down there, earlier he was just snoozing in his bedroom thinking about unnecesary things. A single chain connecting him and his body. He tried to pull it, nothing happened. No matter what he tried, he couldn't get away from the scene nor could he go back inside his own body. He tried to ask the people around him for help, no one was responding to his calls.

Then he heard laughter by his right ear, he spun around trying to look the bastard in the eye. He saw nothing. "Over here little kitty", he heard behind him. He slowly turned around, a huge black cloaked thing stood before him, holding a giant axe on its shoulder. It was wearing a hood, obscuring the part where the face should be. The only thing visible was a smile, bone coloured teeth visible.

He stumbled backwards as the thing picked up the chain. "Hehe, what's this? Did the little kitty stumble into an accident? Doesn't it know what happened?" The thing lifted the huge axe with one hand, holding it up in the air.

The young man wanted to run, his feet ignoring the obvious command he gave them. "How about I make this more interesting, eh little kitty? Want me to help you?" Was this thing something good? He didn't know anymore. It handed him a bandaged hand.. He took it with a bit of hesitation.

The axe swooped down and hit the chain once. 'What the hell are you doing?' he yelled. The thing raised the axe and let it drop again. 2 times became 3. At the same time the thing was maniacally laughing. He couldn't get his hand out of the tight grip.

The chain snapped in twain and he felt pain and disgust as it happened. "Now run little kitty, before it catches up to you" it said.

PKMN Trainer Rex
23rd April 2011, 9:16 PM
My first ever fanfiction chapter, bear with me on this.




A young man was running through the masses in the street, a long chain dragging behind him. The image of the hooded monster forever edged into his mind. Slowly he heard the biting sound getting closer. He kept running away from the noise, but no matter what he did, he noticed it didn't make a difference.. if all that just hadn't happened in the first place...


A couple of hours earlier, shopping district 12.

How it had happened, nobody knew, a man about 17 years old had fallen from the 4th floor of an appartment building. Bystanders gathered around the scene, taking pictures with their phones.

What no one could see,was that the young man kept staring at his own body lying on the pavement. He had no idea how he got down there, earlier he was just snoozing in his bedroom thinking about unnecesary things. A single chain connecting him and his body. He tried to pull it, nothing happened. No matter what he tried, he couldn't get away from the scene nor could he go back inside his own body. He tried to ask the people around him for help, no one was responding to his calls.

Then he heard laughter by his right ear, he spun around trying to look the bastard in the eye. He saw nothing. "Over here little kitty", he heard behind him. He slowly turned around, a huge black cloaked thing stood before him, holding a giant axe on its shoulder. It was wearing a hood, obscuring the part where the face should be. The only thing visible was a smile, bone coloured teeth visible.

He stumbled backwards as the thing picked up the chain. "Hehe, what's this? Did the little kitty stumble into an accident? Doesn't it know what happened?" The thing lifted the huge axe with one hand, holding it up in the air.

The young man wanted to run, his feet ignoring the obvious command he gave them. "How about I make this more interesting, eh little kitty? Want me to help you?" Was this thing something good? He didn't know anymore. It handed him a bandaged hand.. He took it with a bit of hesitation.

The axe swooped down and hit the chain once. 'What the hell are you doing?' he yelled. The thing raised the axe and let it drop again. 2 times became 3. At the same time the thing was maniacally laughing. He couldn't get his hand out of the tight grip.

The chain snapped in twain and he felt pain and disgust as it happened. "Now run little kitty, before it catches up to you" it said.


I like it, but its a little short. I want more!

minchan
23rd April 2011, 9:28 PM
Well I've been on vacation the past week... I'll be home Monday.

I just now read the new chapter...
Hey, at least there's some action going on now~!! And Ichigo finds out about Orihime being attacked and stuff... Yeah. Well I'm excited for the next chapter, that's for sure! You know, I think one great thing about Bleach is that it leaves you excited for the next chapter, which means you'll be coming back for more.

So, uhh... Did I miss anything too important? I didn't really read any of the posts since I left for vacation, and I'm kinda too lazy to do that right now... Sorry. XD

GTG for now... Later~~

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 10:51 PM
Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, Rex.
I'm Zameric, captain of Squad Justice! 9. :p
If you need any help or have question, feel free to ask.


Tsukishima's reallys strong :|
And i thought Kurosaki got his Shinigami powers back -.-'A bit dissapointed with his FullBring transformation though..
Nah, not yet. I though he was supposed to get his Soul Reaper powers first too.


Well I've been on vacation the past week... I'll be home Monday.

I just now read the new chapter...
Hey, at least there's some action going on now~!! And Ichigo finds out about Orihime being attacked and stuff... Yeah. Well I'm excited for the next chapter, that's for sure! You know, I think one great thing about Bleach is that it leaves you excited for the next chapter, which means you'll be coming back for more.

So, uhh... Did I miss anything too important? I didn't really read any of the posts since I left for vacation, and I'm kinda too lazy to do that right now... Sorry. XD

GTG for now... Later~~
I feel the same way. If it wasn't for that factor, many of us probably would have lost interest a while ago. :p

Have fun finishing out your vacation.

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 10:54 PM
I'm back everyone :)

I like Pokemon (...)
23rd April 2011, 11:13 PM
Welcome newbies. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. When joining a squad I hope you would consider 13 as an option. Badmanjaro may I recommend that, if you don't join 13, consider Squad 6. They're an offensive squad and your zan is somewhat like the current captain's.
We should give each Squad a proper "title", don't you think?

1. The "Lead" Squad? I can't think of a proper word here.
2. Undertaker squad (suggested by Cell)
3. Defense Squad
4. Healing Squad
5. ...Party Squad? Should we actually call it that?
6. Offense Squad, as suggested by Kusari
7. I'm not so sure. If everyone was like Eon, then I'd call it the tactical squad, or something.
8. ...
9. Justice Squad (suggested by Zam)
10. Also no clue.
11. Combat Squad.
12. Research and Development Squad.
13. ... Nap Squad?


A young man was running through the masses in the street, a long chain dragging behind him. The image of the hooded monster forever edged into his mind. Slowly he heard the biting sound getting closer. He kept running away from the noise, but no matter what he did, he noticed it didn't make a difference.. if all that just hadn't happened in the first place...
A good start. Sets the scene quite nicely, as well as giving us a bit of ambiguity to fill in.
If you wanted to, you could be a bit more descriptive. Use the senses, or show off some vocab.


How it had happened, nobody knew, a man about 17 years old had fallen from the 4th floor of an appartment building. Bystanders gathered around the scene, taking pictures with their phones.

What no one could see,was that the young man kept staring at his own body lying on the pavement. He had no idea how he got down there, earlier he was just snoozing in his bedroom thinking about unnecesary things. A single chain connecting him and his body.
Reminds me of Yu Yu Hakusho.
Someone (else) should make a Bleach/Yu Yu Hakusho crossover.


"Over here little kitty", he heard behind him. He slowly turned around, a huge black cloaked thing stood before him, holding a giant axe on its shoulder. It was wearing a hood, obscuring the part where the face should be. The only thing visible was a smile, bone coloured teeth visible.
"Kitty", black cloak, axe, hood, smile, teeth... I can't think of who this is XD.


The chain snapped in twain and he felt pain and disgust as it happened. "Now run little kitty, before it catches up to you" it said.
Obviously "it" is the Hollow going to come. But it would be futile to run, because the only way to avoid it would be to be sent to Soul Society. So an odd phrasing.

A bit short for the first chapter, but it's not so bad. I'd have liked it to be more indepth. I don't know whether the boy or the man is the main character, or what might happen next. It'd be nice to have something to... speculate about, if you know what I mean?

Good first chapter, though.



I'm back everyone :)
Please don't post oneliners in the club. It's a good idea to have at least a few lines of text in your post. You can quote other people and make replies to them, like I've done above, to make your post longer.

badmanjaro
23rd April 2011, 11:17 PM
How do I join squad 6?


Edit: my bad :(

Zameric
23rd April 2011, 11:30 PM
Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Initiate saying: Fly your prey is before you!

Zanpakuto spirit: a human like figure on fire. Wherever he walks there's electric flowing from his feet, also whatever he touches. He is very dangerous...

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves - I'll get these translated later

Bright beams
I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.



Final temptation
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot from the air about 10 each to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.



I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.


I can't think of an attack name for this so help me out with what I say :)
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.



Final attack needs a name xD


Well both of my claws just charge up for one last blow and slash my opponent.

Thank you!! Took me awhile to write it lol. I hope it gets approved. Now to answer the questions!
I like the concept of you zanpakuto and most of it's attack.
Though, I felt like there might have been a few details that seemed a bit confusing.
I'll PM you a few suggestion, mostly on names translations.


My first ever fanfiction chapter, bear with me on this.




A young man was running through the masses in the street, a long chain dragging behind him. The image of the hooded monster forever edged into his mind. Slowly he heard the biting sound getting closer. He kept running away from the noise, but no matter what he did, he noticed it didn't make a difference.. if all that just hadn't happened in the first place...


A couple of hours earlier, shopping district 12.

How it had happened, nobody knew, a man about 17 years old had fallen from the 4th floor of an appartment building. Bystanders gathered around the scene, taking pictures with their phones.

What no one could see,was that the young man kept staring at his own body lying on the pavement. He had no idea how he got down there, earlier he was just snoozing in his bedroom thinking about unnecesary things. A single chain connecting him and his body. He tried to pull it, nothing happened. No matter what he tried, he couldn't get away from the scene nor could he go back inside his own body. He tried to ask the people around him for help, no one was responding to his calls.

Then he heard laughter by his right ear, he spun around trying to look the bastard in the eye. He saw nothing. "Over here little kitty", he heard behind him. He slowly turned around, a huge black cloaked thing stood before him, holding a giant axe on its shoulder. It was wearing a hood, obscuring the part where the face should be. The only thing visible was a smile, bone coloured teeth visible.

He stumbled backwards as the thing picked up the chain. "Hehe, what's this? Did the little kitty stumble into an accident? Doesn't it know what happened?" The thing lifted the huge axe with one hand, holding it up in the air.

The young man wanted to run, his feet ignoring the obvious command he gave them. "How about I make this more interesting, eh little kitty? Want me to help you?" Was this thing something good? He didn't know anymore. It handed him a bandaged hand.. He took it with a bit of hesitation.

The axe swooped down and hit the chain once. 'What the hell are you doing?' he yelled. The thing raised the axe and let it drop again. 2 times became 3. At the same time the thing was maniacally laughing. He couldn't get his hand out of the tight grip.

The chain snapped in twain and he felt pain and disgust as it happened. "Now run little kitty, before it catches up to you" it said.

That was a decent prologue for your story.
Starts off with mystery, death, and a giant axe. xD
Though, it would have been nice to give the boy a name.
Very interested to read more, please continue your fanfic.


How do I join squad 6?
Mainly just by asking.
But it would improve your chances by showing you'll be an active and rule-abiding member.
Just try to lay off the one-line posts and you should be able to join a squad soon.

Lucario0708
23rd April 2011, 11:33 PM
rex, i can help with your zan, sending you a vm now

MasterCharizard15
23rd April 2011, 11:38 PM
@ Rex and badmanjaro

Welcome to the club, I am the Captain of Squad 6, MC.

@badmanjaro

You must first prove you'll be here and can follow the rules and guidelines well enough, before joining a Squad.

Usually lasts a few days but one liners don't help.

Please remember this a forum club and not a chat room, we need at least 3 sentences for posts not to be considered spam/oneliner.

PKMN Trainer Rex
24th April 2011, 1:45 AM
Zanpaktou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Sealed form: Regular katana guard looks like my shikai (see below)

Shikai form: Command phrase - "Yo!" Two yo-yo's that kind of look like http://images-en.busytrade.com/175267900/Super-Metal-Yoyo-Ball-Bearing-High-Speed-Patent-Product.jpg. Causes explosions upon contact. Capable of extending between 3 to 13 feet. Before and after every attack I must rewind/recall the yo-yo, just like a regular yo-yo. Add on/edit: As long as I keep the string at full extension I can move around during an attack. Once there is enough slack in the string the yo-yo loses power in attacks or falls.

Attacks:

Standard explosion - It just goes boom whenever it hits something.

Vacuum boom (Shinku bumu) - Fully extends yo-yo straight out to end of string, spins (like the sleeper trick) causing a 10 second vacuum that sucks in anyone within a 7 feet radius. I forgot to say that it goes boom after the 10 secs, but hopefully boom part of the name explained it.

Chain Explosion (Rensa bakuhatsu) - Series of rapid explosions in one spot.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha) - Swings yo-yos at full extension from sides to front and causes a massive concussion wave going forward.

Final/ Last Resort Attack: Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto) - Flings yo-yos at full force into the ground creating a local seismic event. Add on: Causes a 5 feet wall earth that spreads out on a radius. And also gets my yo-yos stuck in the ground, which leaves me obviously open to an attack

Bankai: None as of yet
Spirit: TBA

Mad props to Eon Master for the load of help.

badmanjaro
24th April 2011, 2:03 AM
Zanpaktou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Sealed form: Regular katana guard looks like my shikai (see below)

Shikai form: Command phrase - Yo! Two yo-yo's that kind of look like http://images-en.busytrade.com/175267900/Super-Metal-Yoyo-Ball-Bearing-High-Speed-Patent-Product.jpg. Causes explosions upon contact. Capable of extending between 3 to 13 feet. Before and after every attack I must rewind/recall the yo-yo, just like a regular yo-yo.

Attacks:

Standard explosion - It just goes boom whenever it hits something.

Vacuum boom (Shinku bumu) - Fully extends yo-yo straight out to end of string, spins (like the sleeper trick) causing a 10 second vacuum that sucks in anyone within a 7 feet radius.

Chain Explosion (Rensa bakuhatsu) - Series of rapid explosions in one spot.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha) - Swings yo-yos at full extension from sides to front and causes a massive concussion wave going forward.

Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto) - Flings yo-yos at full force into the ground creating a local seismic event.

Bankai: None as of yet
Spirit: TBA

It sounds great! But, what are you going to do when your rewinding? Just going to stand there? How long does it take to bring back? The opponent can just slice you to pieces :/ this is just my opinion.

PKMN Trainer Rex
24th April 2011, 2:13 AM
It sounds great! But, what are you going to do when your rewinding? Just going to stand there? How long does it take to bring back? The opponent can just slice you to pieces :/ this is just my opinion.

Thanks. I also added some credit where credit is due and some other stuff to make it more difficult for me :P. More difficulty = more dramatic battle. Also if anyone has a better shikai command phrase I'll take it. "Yo!" is the only one I could think of since its a yo-yo.

When I mean rewind, I mean like how a regular yo-yo works when you flick it it will come straight back. The recall speed of a normal yo-yo is pretty fast in real life, with enough force in combination with reitsu it enhances that speed further.

And since they are yo-yos they're very light weight and not very cumbersome, so I can easily shunpo to evade. Its like I recently gained it and is trying to still master it kinda sorta.

Eon Master
24th April 2011, 3:36 AM
^ Also, since you have two yo-yo's, you can easily just attack with one and use the other one to hit your opponent if they dodge the initial strike. Or keep it in reserve to use if they dodge and hit them when they try to get close.

And I didn't do all that much to help, just the name and secondary concept, really.

EDIT: Also, I'd modify the Rensa Bakuhatsu just slightly, perhaps have both yo-yo's attack and create a chain effect due to both clashing together? As it is now, it'd be slightly haxxy compared to your normal explosive attack, seeing as you can create a chain explosion on one and still have the other in reserve to do more damage.

Otherwise, consider this fully approved by me. Nicely done for a first attempt; most Zans need a lot of revision from their first incarnation, but this looks great.

If you want, you could try incorporating a grappling hook-style attack in there as well. As in, you use your yo-yo, but it misses and gets imbedded in the ground. Instead of it exploding, have it retract you so you fly in close and get in a follow-up strike. That's what I'd do, anyway xD

EDIT 2.0: As for the release command, "lash out", "strike and burst", and "bombard" all come to mind.

Lucario0708
24th April 2011, 4:26 AM
interesting using a yo-yo.....

inb4 ned

i just decided to make a joke zanpakto based on deadpool, this is a joke zan, and it's not the one i will use, the one im using is the gunblade one i posted earlier

Zanpaktou Name; Super legendary... thing
Type; AWESOMENESS
Zanpaktou Spirit; a giant pineapple
Release Command; anime power up time!
Sealed form: a kitchen knife and a pop gun
Shikai Details; it now turns into a katana and a machine gun

Abilities:
is extremely fast and unstoppable

Techniques:

Katana-rama
He hits you with his katanas and slices you to death

Have gun will shoot
He shoots you in the face repeatedly

Bankai Name; super ULTRA legendary thing... OF AWESOMENESS
Bankai Details; it gives deadpool +3 charm and

Techniques:

Hellfire in your face!
He shoots you in the face with your guns, FOREVER

4th wall breaker
deadpool grabs the word bubbles (manga) or subtitles (anime) and hits you repeatedly with them until you admit you are the imaginary friend of an old japanese dude

ULTIMATE LAST RESORT BANKAI THING
This attack's power level is..... OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are completely erased from existence, bye bye
Anything Else; Deadpool says: "If you need me, i'll be ogling neliel in the next panel."


PURE, EPIC, WIN

PKMN Trainer Rex
24th April 2011, 5:45 AM
^ Also, since you have two yo-yo's, you can easily just attack with one and use the other one to hit your opponent if they dodge the initial strike. Or keep it in reserve to use if they dodge and hit them when they try to get close.

I would of never of thought that up until way down the line, I'm more of a run in without much of a thought and work as I go guy.


And I didn't do all that much to help, just the name and secondary concept, really.
Otherwise, consider this fully approved by me. Nicely done for a first attempt; most Zans need a lot of revision from their first incarnation, but this looks great.

You pushed it along faster than I could of by myself, I will post the revised attacks on a later date.


EDIT: Also, I'd modify the Rensa Bakuhatsu just slightly, perhaps have both yo-yo's attack and create a chain effect due to both clashing together? As it is now, it'd be slightly haxxy compared to your normal explosive attack, seeing as you can create a chain explosion on one and still have the other in reserve to do more damage.

I'm working on a refined version on it right now.



If you want, you could try incorporating a grappling hook-style attack in there as well. As in, you use your yo-yo, but it misses and gets imbedded in the ground. Instead of it exploding, have it retract you so you fly in close and get in a follow-up strike. That's what I'd do, anyway xD

Like Batman for when he travels or Spider Man's Web Slingshot attack. I'll incorporate that.


EDIT 2.0: As for the release command, "lash out", "strike and burst", and "bombard" all come to mind.

I definitely like "strike and burst" better than "Yo!" (how I say hi to people :P)

Also Luc that is answesome Deadpool-esqe zan. You should of added the "greatest thing ever", it was one of his passive power ups that added to all of his stats in MUA 2.

Cell
24th April 2011, 10:13 AM
I definitely like "strike and burst" better than "Yo!" (how I say hi to people :P)


Yes, It would be better to change it than to randomly go into shikai state whenever you say hello to someone. :P

I'll read your zanpakto later. :)





Running as the thing said, was the only thing on his mind. It might have been the chance for survival for him. Sadly, the truth was soon revealed before his eyes. There wasn't anything chasing him, there was something eating his chain. "This can't be happening", he thought to himself.


Meanwhile, the thing was slowly flying through the air, a smirk on its face. "How long are you going to play with the target?" The thing froze, the smile slowly disappearing. "Kiaro, I asked you something.", Slowly small drupplets of sweat seemed to appear where the smile was before, he got called by his name while in the human world, this could only mean one thing. In a flash Kiaro turned around, bowed his head and said "Good day, Master Ragi.. I was just finishing up 'her' current project.. Some stress would advance the plan much faster than the usual way, you see." Ragi coldly replied, "Don't kid around! We need that sample to go to the next stage of the plan. Now finish what 'she' asked you to do or your head will be ...!" Ragi never finished the sentence as Kiaro quickly sonído'd away, Kiaro had never expected that 'she' would force Ragi to come to the human world in person. He had messed up badly, and he knew it.


The pain became worse and worse as the chain became shorter by the second, he didn't have any strength remaining to run. He tried pulling the chain out of his body with his last strength, it only caused him to hurt his hand as the chain was devouring itself. He screamed out for help for the last moments before the chain reached the end.

There was a moment of peace within his body, there was no more pain.. Was he really going to be alright? Had the thing told the truth that it was going to help him? He stood up when it started.

His left shoulder bone dislocated as his arm got pulled in by the gaping hole where the chain once was. He felt his spine trembling under the pressure and slowly fluids were leaking out of his eyes, his ears.. Memories he once treasured broke before he managed to see them. His leg was warping around and he slowly felt his own concious drop away. Everything was getting warped into the hole. Then nothingness.


In the street were the young man was screaming, there were now pools of odd material. People walked through them, ignoring everything around them. That is, until someone bumped into something they couldn't see. The person was suddenly missing his head. A bright red light was making a building collapse. When Kiaro arrived at the scene, the street was completely destroyed and a small thing was visible in the chaos, roaring at everything it saw.

Kiaro slowly floated down, he was smiling again. His trick had worked.. By lowering the young man's stamina, the hollow had been able to quickly gain control over the body. The young man had a large reiatsu pool even before his death and by devouring all the souls in the busy street, it had unlocked an even greater power. The small thing roaring there, wasn't a mere hollow.. it was a full fledged adjuchas which couldn't control its own power.

Kiaro raised the axe and let it drop, smiling in the process. The adjuchas mask broke and the area was filled with a dark red light.



By the way, I'm still looking for cannon fodder other characters, if any of you want to appear in my fanfic, send me a pm with the following:

Character name:
What the character looks like:
Zanpakto: (if it's the Bleach club one, just put 'Club' there)
Fighting style:
Can I kill you off (y/n) (this might be ignored for some people ;)):
If yes, what would be the preferred way?:

Northern Lights
24th April 2011, 12:54 PM
If its possible, can anyone help with my zanpaktou? I got some concepts down, but there is a lot of tweaking to do.

I LOVE the Yo-Yo idea, but you might want to include your Zanpaktou spirit, what is it, what it looks like ... etc.


*sigh*

T'was really hoping not to be the bearer of bad news more than once.

My bad, must have missed that - I'll edit my Squad page TT.TT *tis all alone now*


We should give each Squad a proper "title", don't you think?

1. The "Lead" Squad? I can't think of a proper word here.
2. Undertaker squad (suggested by Cell)
3. Defense Squad
4. Healing Squad
5. ...Party Squad? Should we actually call it that?
6. Offense Squad, as suggested by Kusari
7. I'm not so sure. If everyone was like Eon, then I'd call it the tactical squad, or something.
8. ...
9. Justice Squad (suggested by Zam)
10. Also no clue.
11. Combat Squad.
12. Research and Development Squad.
13. ... Nap Squad?

That's a fair representation I think *saved*

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I just realised I never actually made any techniques because, well it's kinda sel explanatory but hey ho, here I go.
I decided to ditch the use of Lightning as I can encompase that in Air, and Lightning is not part of the four natural elements.

I think i'm going to have my Element commands in Latin. Warning: quite a lot of Wiccan influence in here =P

Zanpaktou Name;
Ryookami [from Dragon [Ryuu] and Wolf [Ookami]
Type;
Multi-Element
Zanpaktou Spirit;
Ryookami, is a blue silver coloured cross between a wolf and a dragon; the upper body looks like that of a wolf, all be it one that can stand on it back feet, perfectly balanced. It had dots for eyebrows, unconnected black dragon wings and a strong dragons tail, with a white tuft at the end. It's tail is strong enough to support it's on weight easily, so, sometimes, Ryookami balances on it's tail. It has the kanji symbol for 'Hunt' on it's left leg, in blue.

The Dragon represents power, but Dragons are also lavish and will die protecting treasures and rich things, but then the Wolf is Wise and reminds the Dragon of what is really worth dying to protect … life.

Release Command;
Hunt [Kari]
Shikai Details;
When in Shikai, swinging my sword down, it turns into a large, long and thin calligraphy brush as the Beast Form (http://kida-ookami.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p0do6) of my Zanpaktou is revealed, as floating ink from out of the brush. This brush enables me to control any element, but to do that I need to draw the Elemental Symbol that corresponds to it; Tear Drop for Water, Leaf for Earth, Spiral for Wind and Flame for Fire, and the Ink Manifestation of my Zanpaktou Beast changes ink colour to match each Element. Everything created by the brush disappears once the brush is sealed again.

The Elements; Water, Earth, Air, Fire

http://i54.*******.com/2zokyuc.jpg

Aqua [Water] - The Water element is used as a defensive force, drawing water from any available source, however the further away it is the more power it requires to envoke it.

Bubble Dome - This traps the opponent within a bubble preventing them from moving, you can enter the bubble, but you can't get out of it, the bubble can then be transported holding the enemy prisoner
Wall of Poseidon - As the name would suggest, its a wall of water that surges up infront of a person, acting as a barrier, it can also be used as a torrent of water to push enemies away
Frozen Blood - Upon contact, the water inside the enemy's body is frozen, and even caused to rupture organs and break through the skin as spkies of ice, this is the Water Element Last Resort

Terra [Earth] - The Earth element is hardly ever used as an attacking force, instead it's power is used to help and heal other shinigami in battle.

Ropes of the Earth - Vines spring up from under the ground ensnaring the enemies legs and arms, incapacitating them
Gift of Nature - Depending on the injury a different flower blooms to heal it, this cannot obviously heal major or fatal injuries, but it can produce anesthetics, poison or paralytic antidotes and heal moderate to minor cuts
Earthquake - An earthquake is sent out, with the weilder of the attack at the epicenter, cracking the land around them, this is the Earth Element Last Resort


Aer [Air] - The Air element is used primarily as neither an attacking nor defensive force, manipulating the Air can mean altering the force of the winds, or changing the climate. It's mostly used to enhance comrades power or aid their attacks.

Eye of the Storm - By changing the climate and mixing cold and warm opposing winds, a storm is created, aiding lightning attacks, creating shadow, powering ice weilders or making long range attacks easier by negating air resistance
Lighter than Air - Manipulating the density of air to slow someone fall or cushion a landing
Four Winds - Calls upon the full force of the atmosphere creating gale force winds and hurricanes, this is the Air Element Last Resort


Ignis [Fire] - The Fire element is the only attack only force and cannot be created from nothing but must use an already existing source.

Fire Storm - A build up of energy expelled as an expanding ring of fire from around the user
Ball of Fire - Summons a ball of fire in the palm of ones hand to be thrown short distance to burn a foe or set them on fire
Hephaestus' Anger - This causes a volcanic eruption from under the earth surface over enemy terrain, this is the Fire Element Last Resort

The Last Resort techniques are, as the name suggests, a last resort and once used render the user unable to control their zanpaktou, which returns to it's sealed state, and barely able to move.

Two symbols drawn; The Max limit for Element Weilding in Shikai
Third symbol drawn; Automatically releases Bankai

Bankai Name;
Tsuki no Ryookami [Dragon Wolf of the Moon]
Bankai Details;
In Bankai, the four elements become perfectly balanced, which opens up the fifth element; Spirit. The area becomes night as the Full Moon rises and a pentagram is drawn around the user to represent each of the four elements with the fifth point marked as Spirit, with Ryookami circling round it as she hovers.
Each point can be tapped into and used at any time, but the user must remain stationary and within the Pentagram to use Bankai.
The Fifth point is used to connect with fellow shinigami reiatsus, to speak with them, help them or warn them.

http://i53.*******.com/2mnlpcm.jpg

However, needing to stay within the Pentagram can be dangerous if someone is able to get close and is fast enough to deal some damage, once blood is spilt in the Pentagram it dissapears. The Ink brush returns to me as a defensive weapon, leaving me to rely on hand to hand combat skills alone.



EDIT:



Would you mind
Posting in the club and telling them I can't get on my laptop or log onto serebii?

Charger for the Laptop broke, or so i'm told, so it will be a while before he can buy a new one. Oh and...


And also tell them that Rex is welcome to join squad 11

Zameric
24th April 2011, 6:12 PM
@ Rex's Zanpakuto
It's a really cool concept, I like it a lot.
But I was just wondering, are they the size of average yo-yos or bigger?
When you want to post your revised version, just edit the original post.


I would of never of thought that up until way down the line, I'm more of a run in without much of a thought and work as I go guy.
Sounds like you'd do well in Squad 11. :p

@ NL's Zan Revamp
The new version is pretty cool.
The named abilities for shikai were kind of needed.
I really like the new bankai better.
It seems more unique and a bit less complicated.

I like Pokemon (...)
24th April 2011, 8:56 PM
Zanpaktou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Sealed form: Regular katana guard looks like my shikai (see below)

Shikai form: Command phrase - "Yo!" Two yo-yo's that kind of look like http://images-en.busytrade.com/175267900/Super-Metal-Yoyo-Ball-Bearing-High-Speed-Patent-Product.jpg. Causes explosions upon contact. Capable of extending between 3 to 13 feet. Before and after every attack I must rewind/recall the yo-yo, just like a regular yo-yo. Add on/edit: As long as I keep the string at full extension I can move around during an attack. Once there is enough slack in the string the yo-yo loses power in attacks or falls.

Attacks:

Standard explosion - It just goes boom whenever it hits something.

Vacuum boom (Shinku bumu) - Fully extends yo-yo straight out to end of string, spins (like the sleeper trick) causing a 10 second vacuum that sucks in anyone within a 7 feet radius. I forgot to say that it goes boom after the 10 secs, but hopefully boom part of the name explained it.

Chain Explosion (Rensa bakuhatsu) - Series of rapid explosions in one spot.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha) - Swings yo-yos at full extension from sides to front and causes a massive concussion wave going forward.

Final/ Last Resort Attack: Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto) - Flings yo-yos at full force into the ground creating a local seismic event. Add on: Causes a 5 feet wall earth that spreads out on a radius. And also gets my yo-yos stuck in the ground, which leaves me obviously open to an attack

Bankai: None as of yet
Spirit: TBA

Mad props to Eon Master for the load of help.
I like it. It's really unique with Yo Yos instead of a sword, or something similar. But when you say "explosion", how powerful is it? Enough to break a Hollow's mask in one hit, but nothing further? Or can you change it to be as strong as you want it to? If the latter, what is the strongest?


Zanpaktou Name; Super legendary... thing
Type; AWESOMENESS
Zanpaktou Spirit; a giant pineapple
Release Command; anime power up time!
Sealed form: a kitchen knife and a pop gun
Shikai Details; it now turns into a katana and a machine gun

Abilities:
is extremely fast and unstoppable

Techniques:

Katana-rama
He hits you with his katanas and slices you to death

Have gun will shoot
He shoots you in the face repeatedly

Bankai Name; super ULTRA legendary thing... OF AWESOMENESS
Bankai Details; it gives deadpool +3 charm and

Techniques:

Hellfire in your face!
He shoots you in the face with your guns, FOREVER

4th wall breaker
deadpool grabs the word bubbles (manga) or subtitles (anime) and hits you repeatedly with them until you admit you are the imaginary friend of an old japanese dude

ULTIMATE LAST RESORT BANKAI THING
This attack's power level is..... OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are completely erased from existence, bye bye
Anything Else; Deadpool says: "If you need me, i'll be ogling neliel in the next panel."


PURE, EPIC, WIN
XD Awesome.




Meanwhile, the thing was slowly flying through the air, a smirk on its face.
The thing? I only just realised, the person wasn't given a gender o.o



"How long are you going to play with the target?" The thing froze, the smile slowly disappearing. "Kiaro, I asked you something.", Slowly small drupplets of sweat seemed to appear where the smile was before, he got called by his name while in the human world, this could only mean one thing. In a flash Kiaro turned around, bowed his head and said
Ah, NOW he's given a gender and a name- Kiaro. Well, we know that he's very scared/frightened of Ragi, with his reaction.
Also, with a new speaker, a new paragraph. You could word it as:
>In a flash, Kiaro turned around and bowed his head.
>"Words" he said.
>Ragi coldly replied.



"Good day, Master Ragi.. I was just finishing up 'her' current project.. Some stress would advance the plan much faster than the usual way, you see."
"She" is probably the leader of the group, or at least very high up. If she's given orders, and making projects, then she has to be important.



Ragi coldly replied, "Don't kid around! We need that sample to go to the next stage of the plan. Now finish what 'she' asked you to do or your head will be ...!" Ragi never finished the sentence as Kiaro quickly sonído'd away, Kiaro had never expected that 'she' would force Ragi to come to the human world in person. He had messed up badly, and he knew it.
Okay, so the boy himself is specific and important. He's not just a practice, or something. And if Ragi doesn't normally come to the human world in person, then Ragi definitely is very high up Though "Master Ragi" should've tipped that off.



The pain became worse and worse as the chain became shorter by the second, he didn't have any strength remaining to run. He tried pulling the chain out of his body with his last strength, it only caused him to hurt his hand as the chain was devouring itself. He screamed out for help for the last moments before the chain reached the end.
Because this is focusing on the boy, instead, you might want to show that it's a scene change. Something like

--

could be used. It's just easier to show that the focus is on someone else. This time, it was obvious that the focus was on the boy because of the chain, but it could've been more difficult to understand in another situation.

And the chain reached the end? How long did all of this take- unless the chain was cut VERY short (which should have been mentioned), and even then it wouldn't happen this quickly, he should still have days or weeks left. Stress could help, but it was more like a fright than actual stress. If there was something on the axe that might have moved to the chain and forced it to eat quicker...?



His left shoulder bone dislocated as his arm got pulled in by the gaping hole where the chain once was. He felt his spine trembling under the pressure and slowly fluids were leaking out of his eyes, his ears.. Memories he once treasured broke before he managed to see them. His leg was warping around and he slowly felt his own concious drop away. Everything was getting warped into the hole. Then nothingness.
Hollowfication just got a new meaning.



In the street were the young man was screaming, there were now pools of odd material. People walked through them, ignoring everything around them. That is, until someone bumped into something they couldn't see. The person was suddenly missing his head. A bright red light was making a building collapse. When Kiaro arrived at the scene, the street was completely destroyed and a small thing was visible in the chaos, roaring at everything it saw.

Kiaro slowly floated down, he was smiling again. His trick had worked.. By lowering the young man's stamina, the hollow had been able to quickly gain control over the body. The young man had a large reiatsu pool even before his death and by devouring all the souls in the busy street, it had unlocked an even greater power. The small thing roaring there, wasn't a mere hollow.. it was a full fledged adjuchas which couldn't control its own power.

Okay, let me get the story straight:
Kiaro came, cut the chain, then got into trouble.
The boy became a hollow, fed on people, and became an adjuchas?

Again, simply lowering his physical stamina by making him frightened and run a bit shouldn't do a whole lot. If souls turned into Hollows whenever they ran, then we'd end up with Hollows being made everytime a soul was chased.
Already having a large reiatsu is fine, typical of a main character.
But the adjuchas thing is incorrect. What happens is we start with a Hollow. Over time, normal souls won't satisfy its hunger, so it eats other Hollows. If you throw hundreds of these into one place, they become a Gillian. If one of the Hollows stood out, or was a lot stronger, than the others, then it has a special mask. This cannibal Gillian then noms on other Gillians, and evolves into an Adjuchas.


Kiaro raised the axe and let it drop, smiling in the process. The adjuchas mask broke and the area was filled with a dark red light.
The only ways that we've seen a mask be broken is by the Hougyoku, and when Grand Fisher has his mask destroyed at the end of the episode, quite early in the series. But if you remember when Orihime's brother became a Hollow, Ichigo's zanpakutou was used to destroy part of his mask, and nothing happened. I'm not sure what allows for arrancarisation, but if the axe is a zanpakutou, then I don't think it would work.

I'm a bit unsure of this chapter. I found what seems to be plotholes, though I'd like to know your answers to them first. Again, though, very short. If you wanted to, you could've fleshed both this and the previous chapters, and put them together.



Zanpaktou Name;
Ryookami [from Dragon [Ryuu] and Wolf [Ookami]
Type;
Multi-Element
Zanpaktou Spirit;
Ryookami, is a blue silver coloured cross between a wolf and a dragon; the upper body looks like that of a wolf, all be it one that can stand on it back feet, perfectly balanced. It had dots for eyebrows, unconnected black dragon wings and a strong dragons tail, with a white tuft at the end. It's tail is strong enough to support it's on weight easily, so, sometimes, Ryookami balances on it's tail. It has the kanji symbol for 'Hunt' on it's left leg, in blue.

The Dragon represents power, but Dragons are also lavish and will die protecting treasures and rich things, but then the Wolf is Wise and reminds the Dragon of what is really worth dying to protect … life.

Release Command;
Hunt [Kari]
Shikai Details;
When in Shikai, swinging my sword down, it turns into a large, long and thin calligraphy brush as the Beast Form (http://kida-ookami.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p0do6) of my Zanpaktou is revealed, as floating ink from out of the brush. This brush enables me to control any element, but to do that I need to draw the Elemental Symbol that corresponds to it; Tear Drop for Water, Leaf for Earth, Spiral for Wind and Flame for Fire, and the Ink Manifestation of my Zanpaktou Beast changes ink colour to match each Element. Everything created by the brush disappears once the brush is sealed again.

The Elements; Water, Earth, Air, Fire

http://i54.*******.com/2zokyuc.jpg

Aqua [Water] - The Water element is used as a defensive force, drawing water from any available source, however the further away it is the more power it requires to envoke it.

Bubble Dome - This traps the opponent within a bubble preventing them from moving, you can enter the bubble, but you can't get out of it, the bubble can then be transported holding the enemy prisoner
Wall of Poseidon - As the name would suggest, its a wall of water that surges up infront of a person, acting as a barrier, it can also be used as a torrent of water to push enemies away
Frozen Blood - Upon contact, the water inside the enemy's body is frozen, and even caused to rupture organs and break through the skin as spkies of ice, this is the Water Element Last Resort

Terra [Earth] - The Earth element is hardly ever used as an attacking force, instead it's power is used to help and heal other shinigami in battle.

Ropes of the Earth - Vines spring up from under the ground ensnaring the enemies legs and arms, incapacitating them
Gift of Nature - Depending on the injury a different flower blooms to heal it, this cannot obviously heal major or fatal injuries, but it can produce anesthetics, poison or paralytic antidotes and heal moderate to minor cuts
Earthquake - An earthquake is sent out, with the weilder of the attack at the epicenter, cracking the land around them, this is the Earth Element Last Resort


Aer [Air] - The Air element is used primarily as neither an attacking nor defensive force, manipulating the Air can mean altering the force of the winds, or changing the climate. It's mostly used to enhance comrades power or aid their attacks.

Eye of the Storm - By changing the climate and mixing cold and warm opposing winds, a storm is created, aiding lightning attacks, creating shadow, powering ice weilders or making long range attacks easier by negating air resistance
Lighter than Air - Manipulating the density of air to slow someone fall or cushion a landing
Four Winds - Calls upon the full force of the atmosphere creating gale force winds and hurricanes, this is the Air Element Last Resort


Ignis [Fire] - The Fire element is the only attack only force and cannot be created from nothing but must use an already existing source.

Fire Storm - A build up of energy expelled as an expanding ring of fire from around the user
Ball of Fire - Summons a ball of fire in the palm of ones hand to be thrown short distance to burn a foe or set them on fire
Hephaestus' Anger - This causes a volcanic eruption from under the earth surface over enemy terrain, this is the Fire Element Last Resort

The Last Resort techniques are, as the name suggests, a last resort and once used render the user unable to control their zanpaktou, which returns to it's sealed state, and barely able to move.

Two symbols drawn; The Max limit for Element Weilding in Shikai
Third symbol drawn; Automatically releases Bankai

Bankai Name;
Tsuki no Ryookami [Dragon Wolf of the Moon]
Bankai Details;
In Bankai, the four elements become perfectly balanced, which opens up the fifth element; Spirit. The area becomes night as the Full Moon rises and a pentagram is drawn around the user to represent each of the four elements with the fifth point marked as Spirit, with Ryookami circling round it as she hovers.
Each point can be tapped into and used at any time, but the user must remain stationary and within the Pentagram to use Bankai.
The Fifth point is used to connect with fellow shinigami reiatsus, to speak with them, help them or warn them.

http://i53.*******.com/2mnlpcm.jpg

However, needing to stay within the Pentagram can be dangerous if someone is able to get close and is fast enough to deal some damage, once blood is spilt in the Pentagram it dissapears. The Ink brush returns to me as a defensive weapon, leaving me to rely on hand to hand combat skills alone.


I really like this one. I learnt a bit of Latin so it's very cool that you have that XD.
I like how the ___ Element Last Resort is very much a Last Resort, and not just a very powerful move.
The pentagram idea is also very nice, but how big is it? Because at first, I thought that it would hover around the waist of the user, and you could run around and jump and it would follow you, but I'm unsure now.

I might update my Zan soon. I had some ideas, but when I was thinking about them, I kind of got off track and started thinking about... well, other nerdy stuff instead.

Northern Lights
24th April 2011, 9:07 PM
I really like this one. I learnt a bit of Latin so it's very cool that you have that XD.
I like how the ___ Element Last Resort is very much a Last Resort, and not just a very powerful move.
The pentagram idea is also very nice, but how big is it? Because at first, I thought that it would hover around the waist of the user, and you could run around and jump and it would follow you, but I'm unsure now.

I might update my Zan soon. I had some ideas, but when I was thinking about them, I kind of got off track and started thinking about... well, other nerdy stuff instead.

Thanks, I'm going to try and translate the techniques too, but no promises.
The Pentagram is actually etched into the ground around me, about 5ft in diameter, so I can't step outside the confines of the lines or it will break and Bankai will seal itself.

Yeah, I don't really like having huge powerful moves, but they can be useful and necessary in battle, so they are very much a do or die sort of scenario response.

OT: Did anyone watch March of the Dinosuars? It was narrated by Stephen Fry =]

I like Pokemon (...)
24th April 2011, 9:58 PM
Zanpaktou Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal-Void)

Type; Space-time

Zanpakutou Spirit; Kagirinai appears as 2 small balls, one black and one white, each about the size of a fist. They do not talk, and they float around seemingly randomly. It is unknown if they can communicate, whether with each other, or at all. They are also both intangible, allowing them to, when manifested, pass through literally everything.


Shikai

Release Command; Igami! (Bend!)

Shikai Details; After calling its release command, the zanpakutou glows a grey colour. I grab onto the hilt with both hands and pull, so it splits into 2. When the glow fades, I have 2 scythes: one black (Ebony) and one white (Ivory). The handles are about as long as my arm and the curved blades are about as long as my forearm.

With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can change its size, but I must keep to the limit that I cannot create or destroy any matter. I can expand or compress an object to cover more distance, but that is it. When I go back into a normal state, everything goes directly back to normal.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I slice an object, I have to say “up” or “down”. If I say “up”, then time flows faster than normal for the object; when I say “down”, time flows slower than normal for the object. I can control how much faster it flows at will, without having to say it. When I go back into a normal state, the reverse of the time happens (so if I speed it to twice as fast as normal for 5 seconds, then three times as fast for 1 hour, it then goes half as fast for 5 seconds, and three times as slow for 1 hour, or vice versa).

When something is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can also change its mass at will.


Bankai

Bankai Name; Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void)

Bankai Description; Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one armour being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Bankai Abilities; When I go into Bankai, electrical items and magnetic fields go haywire during the transformation. It calms down when the transformation is over, but if the fight continues for a long time, then it will happen again.

My powers extend to whatever I touch, and not just what I cut, though everything that was under my control while I was in Shikai, I can still control while in Bankai.

With Ebony, I can convert air into material, allowing me to “create matter from nothing” (not literally, obviously). For example, I can take the neutrons, protons and electrons from the Nitrogen in the air and make them into Carbon atoms (this works with almost any atom or molecule, but not with other peoples’ zanpakutou). Obviously, this takes up Reiatsu, so I can’t do this a lot. I can make smaller objects with relative ease, but larger objects (like a sword) I cannot.

With Ivory, I can actually cause time to stop for an object. When using it on a person, I have to be touching them for it to work. Using a lot of reaistu, I can even cause time to reverse for an area. This can be used to undo a wound, but will often leave me much more tired afterwards. Depending on how much time I have to reverse, as well as for how big an area, I can do this a few times.

Other notes;
When I refer to an “object”, it is usually quite limited. If I were to cut someone’s shirt, then it would only affect their shirt. If I cut their finger, however, then it would be considered as their entire body, excluding their clothes or weapon. A zanpakutou must have some kind of visual damage for it to be affected; an actual scratch or chip would work (Kagirinai is very sharp). A light tap would not be counted.

Also, the greater I vary an object from normal, the more Reiatsu is required. I normally would do smaller changes, and use Kidou for actual attacks. Sometimes, though, I know that I am forced to immediately make a big change and finish a fight early.

Oh, and if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time.

Northern Lights
24th April 2011, 10:16 PM
Zanpakutou Spirit; Kagirinai appears as a small black ball, about the size of a fist. It does not verbally talk, but it does fly/float around when it wants to get my attention or to point something out. Kagirinai is also intangible, which allows it to, if manifested, pass through literally everything.

I immediatly thought of the Bauble out of the Black Cauldron ... *facepalm*


I have 2 scythes: one black (Ebony) and one white (Ivory).

Scythes are awesome.


With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can change its size, but I must keep to the limit that I cannot create or destroy any matter. I can expand or compress an object to cover more distance, but that is it. When I go back into a normal state, everything goes directly back to normal.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I slice an object, I have to say “up” or “down”. If I say “up”, then time flows faster than normal for the object; when I say “down”, time flows slower than normal for the object. I can control how much faster it flows at will, without having to say it. When I go back into a normal state, the reverse of the time happens (so if I speed it to twice as fast as normal for 5 seconds, then three times as fast for 1 hour, it then goes half as fast for 5 seconds, and three times as slow for 1 hour, or vice versa).

When something is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can also change its mass at will.

Ah, I remember why I didn't like fighting you now, you're like Dialga and Palkia rolled into one XD


Bankai Name; Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void)

Good luck trying to say that when you're in a hurry


With Ebony, I can convert air into material, allowing me to “create matter from nothing” (not literally, obviously). For example, I can take the neutrons, protons and electrons from the Nitrogen in the air and make them into Carbon atoms (this works with almost any atom or molecule, but not with other peoples’ zanpakutou). Obviously, this takes up Reiatsu, so I can’t do this a lot. I can make smaller objects with relative ease, but larger objects (like a sword) I cannot.


Lol, make an Acme anvil fall from the sky


With Ivory, I can actually cause time to stop for an object.

Matrix anyone?

I like Pokemon (...)
24th April 2011, 10:19 PM
The Pentagram is actually etched into the ground around me, about 5ft in diameter, so I can't step outside the confines of the lines or it will break and Bankai will seal itself.

Yeah, I don't really like having huge powerful moves, but they can be useful and necessary in battle, so they are very much a do or die sort of scenario response.

OT: Did anyone watch March of the Dinosuars? It was narrated by Stephen Fry =]
Ah, I see.

And DAMNIT I missed Stephen Fry! T.T

Scythes are awesome.
That they are, that they are...

Ah, I remember why I didn't like fighting you now, you're like Dialga and Palkia rolled into one XD
MC doesn't call me "Dialga and Palkia's lovechild" for no reason.

Good luck trying to say that when you're in a hurry
I like double-barreled names >.>

Lol, make an Acme anvil fall from the sky
That can work.

Matrix anyone?
I actually haven't seen that properly.

EDIT: I forgot to add something to the notes. It's there now.

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th April 2011, 12:32 AM
I like it. It's really unique with Yo Yos instead of a sword, or something similar. But when you say "explosion", how powerful is it? Enough to break a Hollow's mask in one hit, but nothing further? Or can you change it to be as strong as you want it to? If the latter, what is the strongest?


Thank you, and yes that detail hit me too. I'm still trying to refine it, but the explosion is partly by me and partly by the zan. The strength of the blast depends how long the yo yo is extended. The closer it is the weaker the explosion as to deal as little damage to me as possible, the farther the stronger. In dire situations, I could strengthen the blast when it is closer if I want to go suicide style.

As for the overall power of the explosion itself, I don't want it to be too powerful. Not strong enough to totally break a hollow mask in one hit, two hits will leave a good crack. So I say 3-4 hit kills. Probably strong enough to incapacitate a hollow long enough for me to get in another hit.

I'm still trying to refine everything, my revisions should be done soon.

Eon Master
25th April 2011, 12:53 AM
I would of never of thought that up until way down the line, I'm more of a run in without much of a thought and work as I go guy.

Now see, I do this too, but it's much better to keep basic strategy in mind so you can actually have something to work with and test your opponent without getting slashed to pieces.

Oh, and...


In dire situations, I could strengthen the blast when it is closer if I want to go out with a bang.

Fix'd.

Don't be expecting a chapter for the next few days, I'm very busy at the moment.

Zameric
25th April 2011, 1:54 AM
Happy Easter everyone,whether you celebrate it or not! :p




Zanpaktou Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal-Void)

Type; Space-time

Zanpakutou Spirit; Kagirinai appears as a small black ball, about the size of a fist. It does not verbally talk, but it does fly/float around when it wants to get my attention or to point something out. Kagirinai is also intangible, which allows it to, if manifested, pass through literally everything.


Shikai

Release Command; Igami! (Bend!)

Shikai Details; After calling its release command, the zanpakutou glows a grey colour. I grab onto the hilt with both hands and pull, so it splits into 2. When the glow fades, I have 2 scythes: one black (Ebony) and one white (Ivory). The handles are about as long as my arm and the curved blades are about as long as my forearm.

With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can change its size, but I must keep to the limit that I cannot create or destroy any matter. I can expand or compress an object to cover more distance, but that is it. When I go back into a normal state, everything goes directly back to normal.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I slice an object, I have to say “up” or “down”. If I say “up”, then time flows faster than normal for the object; when I say “down”, time flows slower than normal for the object. I can control how much faster it flows at will, without having to say it. When I go back into a normal state, the reverse of the time happens (so if I speed it to twice as fast as normal for 5 seconds, then three times as fast for 1 hour, it then goes half as fast for 5 seconds, and three times as slow for 1 hour, or vice versa).

When something is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can also change its mass at will.


Bankai

Bankai Name; Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void)

Bankai Description; Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one armour being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Bankai Abilities; When I go into Bankai, electrical items and magnetic fields go haywire during the transformation. It calms down when the transformation is over, but if the fight continues for a long time, then it will happen again.

My powers extend to whatever I touch, and not just what I cut, though everything that was under my control while I was in Shikai, I can still control while in Bankai.

With Ebony, I can convert air into material, allowing me to “create matter from nothing” (not literally, obviously). For example, I can take the neutrons, protons and electrons from the Nitrogen in the air and make them into Carbon atoms (this works with almost any atom or molecule, but not with other peoples’ zanpakutou). Obviously, this takes up Reiatsu, so I can’t do this a lot. I can make smaller objects with relative ease, but larger objects (like a sword) I cannot.

With Ivory, I can actually cause time to stop for an object. When using it on a person, I have to be touching them for it to work. Using a lot of reaistu, I can even cause time to reverse for an area. This can be used to undo a wound, but will often leave me much more tired afterwards. Depending on how much time I have to reverse, as well as for how big an area, I can do this a few times.

Other notes;
When I refer to an “object”, it is usually quite limited. If I were to cut someone’s shirt, then it would only affect their shirt. If I cut their finger, however, then it would be considered as their entire body, excluding their clothes or weapon. A zanpakutou must have some kind of visual damage for it to be affected; an actual scratch or chip would work (Kagirinai is very sharp). A light tap would not be counted.

Also, the greater I vary an object from normal, the more Reiatsu is required. I normally would do smaller changes, and use Kidou for actual attacks. Sometimes, though, I know that I am forced to immediately make a big change and finish a fight early.

Oh, and if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time.


Wow Ant, that was a great revamp!
I admit, it was a bit difficult to read and understand you're zan's powers before.
The new zanpakuto spirit is interesting and odd at the same time.
Though, I think there should be a black and white orb and you should nick-name them Anternero.
I also like how you simplified the armor in bankai.
Too many people with full bankai body armor in this club. :p
The new names are kind hard to pronounce though.

Lucario0708
25th April 2011, 2:21 AM
the only person with infinite reiatsu is chuck norris......


Anime:

Kenpachi comes back with a bang after that cliffhanger, removes his seal but now we're left at another cliffhanger with one of nnoitora's arms stuck through his stomach

kusari
25th April 2011, 6:36 AM
so, i've decided to revamp my zan as well. by revamp I mean start from scratch.

i'm again making a zan that is a new type to the club. i'm also returning to my roots, as noted by the shikai form.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th April 2011, 7:03 AM
so, i've decided to revamp my zan as well. by revamp I mean start from scratch.

i'm again making a zan that is a new type to the club. i'm also returning to my roots, as noted by the shikai form.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.

The spirit reminds me of the Pride thing from FMA: Brotherhood

Both shikai and bankai forms are pretty damn sick looking. It was hard for me to make the tusk = blades connection, but I'm not the brightest bulb. The attacks are straight forward, overall nice job.

badmanjaro
25th April 2011, 7:20 AM
so, i've decided to revamp my zan as well. by revamp I mean start from scratch.

i'm again making a zan that is a new type to the club. i'm also returning to my roots, as noted by the shikai form.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.


Your zanpakuto is awesome! I like the air cutter part! I wonder if i could block that. Earth strike seems really strong but couldn't someone shunpo away? Overall great zanpakuto!

theo_cupent42
25th April 2011, 7:23 AM
ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!! but the thing is, I already have my own shikai and bankai here (http://theo-cupent42.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=96#/d37lq7j) - will this affect my joining in any way?

kusari
25th April 2011, 7:48 AM
The spirit reminds me of the Pride thing from FMA: Brotherhood
tis the Dwarf in the Flask.


Both shikai and bankai forms are pretty damn sick looking. It was hard for me to make the tusk = blades connection, but I'm not the brightest bulb. The attacks are straight forward, overall nice job.
i mainly chose "Tusk" because, if you imagine it right, holding both bankai blades forward at the same time would look like the tusks on an elephant.


Your zanpakuto is awesome! I like the air cutter part! I wonder if i could block that. Earth strike seems really strong but couldn't someone shunpo away? Overall great zanpakuto!
it moves relatively quickly and rips up the rocks as it moves and sends them flying to an extent. Its really all about planning.


ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!! but the thing is, I already have my own shikai and bankai here (http://theo-cupent42.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=96#/d37lq7j) - will this affect my joining in any way?
it won't hinder it in any way. just post your zan here so Golde can put a link on the first post. (its pretty awesome by the way)

Hello, Theo. (you don't mind me calling you that do you?) I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. Feel free to join the squad. Akua and I would love to have another member.

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th April 2011, 8:08 AM
tis the Dwarf in the Flask.


i mainly chose "Tusk" because, if you imagine it right, holding both bankai blades forward at the same time would look like the tusks on an elephant.


Yes thats the one, the Dwarf in the Flask. I was watching the dub last night, Hohenheim just met up with Pride. But I digress.

Yeah, when I read and envisioned the Bankai it made totally sense.

And @ theo welcome, and no already having your own zan does not hinder anything what so ever.

arceus03
25th April 2011, 9:17 AM
Massive post alert!


Cell Studios Proudly Presents;


Fullbring Name: Data Drive


So... No more rifle fullbring? :p



and on another fire zan and arc's water at being the top?

well sunlight evaporates water no?


1. It's not that easy to evaporate my water.
2. You wouldn't want to do it anyway. :P But since yours isn't fire based anyway, so it's not like "zOMG an0ther fire zanpakto w00t" moment for me. :p Still, water can refract light


Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!


Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.

Hello newcomers. :) arceus03, Captain of Squad 4. Avid Unohana fan. Besides the medics, we are also serving cookies to anyone who wants. Especially free on Thursdays. Come and drop by. :P Welcome to the Bleach Club.



I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.


Why does everyone seem to have wings in bankai state? XD It'd be fun to write a fanfic where Soul Society goes to war, and half of the battlefield is filled with flying shinigami. XDD


You'd have to heat Tsukibana to higher than 500 degrees Celsius, and even if you did, it wouldn't be very good...

^^


Hmm, quite a few posts since my last one. I'll read them later, but I'm just here now to post the webpage I made to showcase all the Battle Data Charts. Then I'm going to get off my computer to have lunch. Hello new member, I'll properly introduce myself in a little while. Also, badmanjaro, I'll read you zan after I come back too. Here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=11446606) is the webpage with all the Battle Data Charts.

Thank you! =D Now, I might finally have some time to do the threat list tomorrow... Late is late


My first ever fanfiction chapter, bear with me on this.

Now why does the hooded man remind me of Barragan?


We should give each Squad a proper "title", don't you think?

4. Healing Squad

Medical Squad... plus Cookies! is a preferable name :p


Zanpaktou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Sealed form: Regular katana guard looks like my shikai (see below)

Shikai form: Command phrase - "Yo!" Two yo-yo's that kind of look like http://images-en.busytrade.com/175267900/Super-Metal-Yoyo-Ball-Bearing-High-Speed-Patent-Product.jpg. Causes explosions upon contact. Capable of extending between 3 to 13 feet. Before and after every attack I must rewind/recall the yo-yo, just like a regular yo-yo. Add on/edit: As long as I keep the string at full extension I can move around during an attack. Once there is enough slack in the string the yo-yo loses power in attacks or falls.


Now why does that remind me of Bridgett.. Tell me, do you play GGX?


Thanks. I also added some credit where credit is due and some other stuff to make it more difficult for me :P. More difficulty = more dramatic battle. Also if anyone has a better shikai command phrase I'll take it. "Yo!" is the only one I could think of since its a yo-yo.


First command that comes to mind: Reel



Aqua [Water] - The Water element is used as a defensive force, drawing water from any available source, however the further away it is the more power it requires to envoke it.

Bubble Dome - This traps the opponent within a bubble preventing them from moving, you can enter the bubble, but you can't get out of it, the bubble can then be transported holding the enemy prisoner
Wall of Poseidon - As the name would suggest, its a wall of water that surges up infront of a person, acting as a barrier, it can also be used as a torrent of water to push enemies away
Frozen Blood - Upon contact, the water inside the enemy's body is frozen, and even caused to rupture organs and break through the skin as spkies of ice, this is the Water Element Last Resort

Good luck trying to say that when you're in a hurry

My bad, must have missed that - I'll edit my Squad page TT.TT *tis all alone now*


*tempted to have Frozen Blood as well* Wait, your brush cannot create water?

Overall, I like the new abilities, and bankai. =]

XD

Awww *pat pat* Well, we have 3 newcomers waiting to be recruited.


so, i've decided to revamp my zan as well. by revamp I mean start from scratch.

i'm again making a zan that is a new type to the club. i'm also returning to my roots, as noted by the shikai form.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.

I think your bankai has more abilities than the one you revealed....?
Also, tench knives means the new one is pretty similar to the old (first) one you had, except it's wind-based instead?


ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!! but the thing is, I already have my own shikai and bankai here (http://theo-cupent42.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=96#/d37lq7j) - will this affect my joining in any way?

Hey. arceus03, Squad 4 Captain, cookie supplier. Avid Unohana fan. Welcome to the Club. And no, you can simply post your zanpakto here again.

Since everyone and their grandmother are revamping zanpakto and whatnot... *rolls sleeves*
...

*unrolls* Nah, too lazy. :p Plus, I'm already happy with mine. XP

Cell
25th April 2011, 10:10 AM
Welcome to the club, Theo. I'm Cell, 5th squad 2nd seat. :)



So... No more rifle fullbring? :p


My 'rifle fullbring' was just a fast idea I threw up. This one actually took a bit longer to think off. :)






The thing? I only just realised, the person wasn't given a gender o.o

Hehe, I made sure of that for the first chapter. ;)


Ah, NOW he's given a gender and a name- Kiaro. Well, we know that he's very scared/frightened of Ragi, with his reaction.
Also, with a new speaker, a new paragraph. You could word it as:
>In a flash, Kiaro turned around and bowed his head.
>"Words" he said.
>Ragi coldly replied.

I quite like what I did, myself

"She" is probably the leader of the group, or at least very high up. If she's given orders, and making projects, then she has to be important.

Probably

Okay, so the boy himself is specific and important. He's not just a practice, or something. And if Ragi doesn't normally come to the human world in person, then Ragi definitely is very high up Though "Master Ragi" should've tipped that off.

There is a certain order to things.

Because this is focusing on the boy, instead, you might want to show that it's a scene change. Something like

--

could be used. It's just easier to show that the focus is on someone else. This time, it was obvious that the focus was on the boy because of the chain, but it could've been more difficult to understand in another situation.


I'll usually do something like in the first part, but for this the change was so obivous I didn't bother with that.

And the chain reached the end? How long did all of this take- unless the chain was cut VERY short (which should have been mentioned), and even then it wouldn't happen this quickly, he should still have days or weeks left. Stress could help, but it was more like a fright than actual stress. If there was something on the axe that might have moved to the chain and forced it to eat quicker...?

All will be explained. ;)

Hollowfication just got a new meaning.

I made it a bit more painfull. >.>


Okay, let me get the story straight:
Kiaro came, cut the chain, then got into trouble.
The boy became a hollow, fed on people, and became an adjuchas?


Kiaro got in trouble because he took a while to finally cut the chain, toying with him first.

At first sight, that is what happened, yes.

Again, simply lowering his physical stamina by making him frightened and run a bit shouldn't do a whole lot. If souls turned into Hollows whenever they ran, then we'd end up with Hollows being made everytime a soul was chased.
Already having a large reiatsu is fine, typical of a main character.
But the adjuchas thing is incorrect. What happens is we start with a Hollow. Over time, normal souls won't satisfy its hunger, so it eats other Hollows. If you throw hundreds of these into one place, they become a Gillian. If one of the Hollows stood out, or was a lot stronger, than the others, then it has a special mask. This cannibal Gillian then noms on other Gillians, and evolves into an Adjuchas.


2 words: The Project

The only ways that we've seen a mask be broken is by the Hougyoku, and when Grand Fisher has his mask destroyed at the end of the episode, quite early in the series. But if you remember when Orihime's brother became a Hollow, Ichigo's zanpakutou was used to destroy part of his mask, and nothing happened. I'm not sure what allows for arrancarisation, but if the axe is a zanpakutou, then I don't think it would work.


Kiaro is NOT a shinegami AT ALL

I'm a bit unsure of this chapter. I found what seems to be plotholes, though I'd like to know your answers to them first. Again, though, very short. If you wanted to, you could've fleshed both this and the previous chapters, and put them together.


You should know how I write... I write about 3 pages, start cleaning it up and then I have left what I post in the club. XD






Zanpaktou Name;
Ryookami [from Dragon [Ryuu] and Wolf [Ookami]
Type;
Multi-Element
Zanpaktou Spirit;
Ryookami, is a blue silver coloured cross between a wolf and a dragon; the upper body looks like that of a wolf, all be it one that can stand on it back feet, perfectly balanced. It had dots for eyebrows, unconnected black dragon wings and a strong dragons tail, with a white tuft at the end. It's tail is strong enough to support it's on weight easily, so, sometimes, Ryookami balances on it's tail. It has the kanji symbol for 'Hunt' on it's left leg, in blue.

The Dragon represents power, but Dragons are also lavish and will die protecting treasures and rich things, but then the Wolf is Wise and reminds the Dragon of what is really worth dying to protect … life.

Release Command;
Hunt [Kari]
Shikai Details;
When in Shikai, swinging my sword down, it turns into a large, long and thin calligraphy brush as the Beast Form (http://kida-ookami.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p0do6) of my Zanpaktou is revealed, as floating ink from out of the brush. This brush enables me to control any element, but to do that I need to draw the Elemental Symbol that corresponds to it; Tear Drop for Water, Leaf for Earth, Spiral for Wind and Flame for Fire, and the Ink Manifestation of my Zanpaktou Beast changes ink colour to match each Element. Everything created by the brush disappears once the brush is sealed again.

The Elements; Water, Earth, Air, Fire

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Aqua [Water] - The Water element is used as a defensive force, drawing water from any available source, however the further away it is the more power it requires to envoke it.

Bubble Dome - This traps the opponent within a bubble preventing them from moving, you can enter the bubble, but you can't get out of it, the bubble can then be transported holding the enemy prisoner
Wall of Poseidon - As the name would suggest, its a wall of water that surges up infront of a person, acting as a barrier, it can also be used as a torrent of water to push enemies away
Frozen Blood - Upon contact, the water inside the enemy's body is frozen, and even caused to rupture organs and break through the skin as spkies of ice, this is the Water Element Last Resort

Terra [Earth] - The Earth element is hardly ever used as an attacking force, instead it's power is used to help and heal other shinigami in battle.

Ropes of the Earth - Vines spring up from under the ground ensnaring the enemies legs and arms, incapacitating them
Gift of Nature - Depending on the injury a different flower blooms to heal it, this cannot obviously heal major or fatal injuries, but it can produce anesthetics, poison or paralytic antidotes and heal moderate to minor cuts
Earthquake - An earthquake is sent out, with the weilder of the attack at the epicenter, cracking the land around them, this is the Earth Element Last Resort


Aer [Air] - The Air element is used primarily as neither an attacking nor defensive force, manipulating the Air can mean altering the force of the winds, or changing the climate. It's mostly used to enhance comrades power or aid their attacks.

Eye of the Storm - By changing the climate and mixing cold and warm opposing winds, a storm is created, aiding lightning attacks, creating shadow, powering ice weilders or making long range attacks easier by negating air resistance
Lighter than Air - Manipulating the density of air to slow someone fall or cushion a landing
Four Winds - Calls upon the full force of the atmosphere creating gale force winds and hurricanes, this is the Air Element Last Resort


Ignis [Fire] - The Fire element is the only attack only force and cannot be created from nothing but must use an already existing source.

Fire Storm - A build up of energy expelled as an expanding ring of fire from around the user
Ball of Fire - Summons a ball of fire in the palm of ones hand to be thrown short distance to burn a foe or set them on fire
Hephaestus' Anger - This causes a volcanic eruption from under the earth surface over enemy terrain, this is the Fire Element Last Resort

The Last Resort techniques are, as the name suggests, a last resort and once used render the user unable to control their zanpaktou, which returns to it's sealed state, and barely able to move.

Two symbols drawn; The Max limit for Element Weilding in Shikai
Third symbol drawn; Automatically releases Bankai

Bankai Name;
Tsuki no Ryookami [Dragon Wolf of the Moon]
Bankai Details;
In Bankai, the four elements become perfectly balanced, which opens up the fifth element; Spirit. The area becomes night as the Full Moon rises and a pentagram is drawn around the user to represent each of the four elements with the fifth point marked as Spirit, with Ryookami circling round it as she hovers.
Each point can be tapped into and used at any time, but the user must remain stationary and within the Pentagram to use Bankai.
The Fifth point is used to connect with fellow shinigami reiatsus, to speak with them, help them or warn them.

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However, needing to stay within the Pentagram can be dangerous if someone is able to get close and is fast enough to deal some damage, once blood is spilt in the Pentagram it dissapears. The Ink brush returns to me as a defensive weapon, leaving me to rely on hand to hand combat skills alone.




I like the things you did with it, though I'm a bit perplexed when it comes to the water and fire... if you need to draw 3 symbols to go into bankai.. doesn't this mean that IF there isn't any water AND fire available.. that you can never go into bankai? Can Kido fire work or not?




Zanpaktou Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal-Void)

Type; Space-time

Zanpakutou Spirit; Kagirinai appears as a small black ball, about the size of a fist. It does not verbally talk, but it does fly/float around when it wants to get my attention or to point something out. Kagirinai is also intangible, which allows it to, if manifested, pass through literally everything.


Shikai

Release Command; Igami! (Bend!)

Shikai Details; After calling its release command, the zanpakutou glows a grey colour. I grab onto the hilt with both hands and pull, so it splits into 2. When the glow fades, I have 2 scythes: one black (Ebony) and one white (Ivory). The handles are about as long as my arm and the curved blades are about as long as my forearm.

With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can change its size, but I must keep to the limit that I cannot create or destroy any matter. I can expand or compress an object to cover more distance, but that is it. When I go back into a normal state, everything goes directly back to normal.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I slice an object, I have to say “up” or “down”. If I say “up”, then time flows faster than normal for the object; when I say “down”, time flows slower than normal for the object. I can control how much faster it flows at will, without having to say it. When I go back into a normal state, the reverse of the time happens (so if I speed it to twice as fast as normal for 5 seconds, then three times as fast for 1 hour, it then goes half as fast for 5 seconds, and three times as slow for 1 hour, or vice versa).

When something is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can also change its mass at will.


Bankai

Bankai Name; Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void)

Bankai Description; Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one armour being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Bankai Abilities; When I go into Bankai, electrical items and magnetic fields go haywire during the transformation. It calms down when the transformation is over, but if the fight continues for a long time, then it will happen again.

My powers extend to whatever I touch, and not just what I cut, though everything that was under my control while I was in Shikai, I can still control while in Bankai.

With Ebony, I can convert air into material, allowing me to “create matter from nothing” (not literally, obviously). For example, I can take the neutrons, protons and electrons from the Nitrogen in the air and make them into Carbon atoms (this works with almost any atom or molecule, but not with other peoples’ zanpakutou). Obviously, this takes up Reiatsu, so I can’t do this a lot. I can make smaller objects with relative ease, but larger objects (like a sword) I cannot.

With Ivory, I can actually cause time to stop for an object. When using it on a person, I have to be touching them for it to work. Using a lot of reaistu, I can even cause time to reverse for an area. This can be used to undo a wound, but will often leave me much more tired afterwards. Depending on how much time I have to reverse, as well as for how big an area, I can do this a few times.

Other notes;
When I refer to an “object”, it is usually quite limited. If I were to cut someone’s shirt, then it would only affect their shirt. If I cut their finger, however, then it would be considered as their entire body, excluding their clothes or weapon. A zanpakutou must have some kind of visual damage for it to be affected; an actual scratch or chip would work (Kagirinai is very sharp). A light tap would not be counted.

Also, the greater I vary an object from normal, the more Reiatsu is required. I normally would do smaller changes, and use Kidou for actual attacks. Sometimes, though, I know that I am forced to immediately make a big change and finish a fight early.

Oh, and if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time.


Aha, a nerf seen he has. I'll remember (if I ever want to fight you) to hold your unreleased zanpakto first. :p

Scythes! Awesome!

Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void) is a bit long, though.

So basically Ebony can create a watermass bomb?



Zanpaktou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Sealed form: Regular katana guard looks like my shikai (see below)

Shikai form: Command phrase - "Yo!" Two yo-yo's that kind of look like http://images-en.busytrade.com/175267900/Super-Metal-Yoyo-Ball-Bearing-High-Speed-Patent-Product.jpg. Causes explosions upon contact. Capable of extending between 3 to 13 feet. Before and after every attack I must rewind/recall the yo-yo, just like a regular yo-yo. Add on/edit: As long as I keep the string at full extension I can move around during an attack. Once there is enough slack in the string the yo-yo loses power in attacks or falls.

Attacks:

Standard explosion - It just goes boom whenever it hits something.

Vacuum boom (Shinku bumu) - Fully extends yo-yo straight out to end of string, spins (like the sleeper trick) causing a 10 second vacuum that sucks in anyone within a 7 feet radius. I forgot to say that it goes boom after the 10 secs, but hopefully boom part of the name explained it.

Chain Explosion (Rensa bakuhatsu) - Series of rapid explosions in one spot.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha) - Swings yo-yos at full extension from sides to front and causes a massive concussion wave going forward.

Final/ Last Resort Attack: Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto) - Flings yo-yos at full force into the ground creating a local seismic event. Add on: Causes a 5 feet wall earth that spreads out on a radius. And also gets my yo-yos stuck in the ground, which leaves me obviously open to an attack

Bankai: None as of yet
Spirit: TBA

Mad props to Eon Master for the load of help.

That is one of the most original zanpakto's I have ever seen. And BALANCED, it's a MIRACLE. O_o


so, i've decided to revamp my zan as well. by revamp I mean start from scratch.

i'm again making a zan that is a new type to the club. i'm also returning to my roots, as noted by the shikai form.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.

It's.. short? Not sure if I really like it..

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th April 2011, 10:17 AM
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Now why does that remind me of Bridgett.. Tell me, do you play GGX?

First command that comes to mind: Reel


Greetings Captain, I do know who sh........he...........the trap is but nope I do not play Guilty Gear. I got to the yo yo as a weapon by my own way of vague thinking. I was watching "Journey to the Center of the Earth" starring Brendan Fraiser, and there was a scene with a yo yo. And thought how cool they were. Then went to how much they hurt when they hit. Then came to beating up guys with a yo yo. Yup I'm pretty off in the head.

I have a new shikai release command that will be included in my revised attacks list, which is coming out soon.

Cell
25th April 2011, 11:46 AM
Infront of Kiaro, a tall man with spiky hair was visible. He wearing some sort of bone bracer around his neck and something that seemed like a ripped pair of jeans. As footwear, he was wearing a part of bone greaves. "What is your name?" Kiaro asked. Before Kiaro ever heard an answer, the other guy had stood up and had pulled out a gigantic sword out of the earth, almost twice the size of his own body. He dragged the sword to a nearby corpse and started feasting on the remains.
Kiaro stood there perplexed.. it was true that the potion 'she' had given him, which he had smeared on his axe, would greatly advance the hollowfication process and make the hollow reach its final stage when it devours around a hundred human souls.

'A pity that this one only reached adjuchas stage.. Ragi was a Vasto Lorde when we awakened him.. Did this one advance too quickly and couldn't the mind follow?' Kiaro thought, He laid his hand on the new guy's shoulder. "I asked you what your name was!"-If Kiaro hadn't reacted to the sudden movement, he would have been dead. The spot where he was standing a second earlier, was now the resting place of the gigantic sword, the earth was split open for atleast 36 meters. "My name? Basara." The new guy replied, while he walked back to the corpse. "Basara? Hope you won't get in trouble with that name if 'she' hears it." Kiaro said, "Anyway, we have to move to Hueco Mun-" He was interrupted by a piece of heart being thrown at his head. "I'm eating, **** off. Or I'll kill you." Basara replied, a bored look on his face. Kiaro smiled, this guy was stronger than he had thought.

-Meanwhile, in Soul Society-

The 6th seat of the 12th squad, who was on observation duty of the human world, had noticed the abnormal high spiritual pressure in the shopping district. When the SoulCam hovered over the area, and the huge area of destruction became visible, he knew he had to press the panic button. The panic button would send out urgent requests to nearby shinigami, if this was a false alarm it would cost him it's head.. He doubted for a minute, looking at the spiritual pressure levels in the area he noticed that there were 2 shinigami quite close to the area. One was captain level, another was quite close to it.. He pressed the button.

The two shinigami got the message to move to the area with caution, one was the captain of the 11th squad, Cam Blue. She was quite young to have already concurred a captain spot, using the third way to advance to the captain rank. Blue was actually on her vacation to the human world, looking for more games to play. Though, she quickly ran to a phone booth to leave her gigai there.
The second shinigami was someone who had been ordered to destroy some hollows in the nearby woods, he was the 5th seat of the second squad, Niche. He was quite tall at 6'5", had long dark brown hair and was not wearing the usual shinigami outfit. Instead he was wearing a long black coat, dark trousers with metal bits and a black t-shirt with the Metal sign. Metal spiked leather bracers on his arms and something that looked like combat boots implated with metal as footwear. He quickly finished the low level hollows and flash stepped towards the scene.


-The start of the battle-

The first to arrive at the scene was Blue, eyes full of excitement. She walked right to the guy with the big axe. "Hey, why did you steal my smile?" she asked.

Kiaro turned his head to look at the voice. He had trouble not bursting out in laughter when he saw the 5'9" 14 year old blue haired shinigami. "Hey kid, move, I'm on important business here." Kiaro picked up his axe and walked to the shinigami. Blue was cooking with anger at this point, she pulled out her zanpakto and bursted out: "Disappear and Reappear! Kagebu!" Her sword became pitch black instantly. Kiaro kept laughing, "So you can use a shikai state and it changes the colour of your zanpakto? Can you make me a little rainbow? Just go home you little-", He hadn't been able to finish his sentence as Blue had dropped into her own shadow and had appeared behind him. "****, that's more dangerous than I had expected." He swung his axe sideways, blunt side first, hitting Blue right in the stomach. She was sent flying through a couple of buildings. Smiling, Kiaro walked back to Basara, who was using sonido to jump from corpse to corpse to find some intact intestines to eat.

By coincidence, Niche was just flash stepping on the building Blue had been thrown in. He looked through the hole and saw Blue laughing. Perplexed he stared back. Blue stood up, the impact hadn't caused much damage. "Bankai!" she yelled out. Niche made sure to get the hell out of that building as fast as he could, the 11th squad captain was not the one to worry about friendly fire. Though he wondered what had pushed the captain through so many buildings. He arrived at the scene, staying a bit higher out of sight to see what was happening. He immediatly wished he hadn't eaten that Hot Dog when he came to the human world.. He saw a big guy, covered in blood, eating the stomach of a headless corpse.. He pulled out his zanpakto, in an usual dagger shape and said; "Twirl - Siska!". The dagger morphed into a bow as tall as he was, he pulled an arrow infusing it with both Bakudo 21, Sekienton and Hado 32, Okasen. One of the feathers turned red, the other yellow. He let the arrow fly towards the target.

The arrow hit the corpse Basara was feasting on, the smoke cloud obscuring his vision and the corpse getting disintigrated by the hado spell. When the smoke cleared and Basara noticed his meal was gone, he went haywire. He grabbed his zweihander and slashed around. Kiaro was barely able to avoid a slash that would have cut him in half. "Hey man, calm down.. that guy that pissed you off is at the top of that building", he pointed towards the exact position Niche was at. Niche quickly flash stepped away from the building as Basara cut it in half in a single slash... He dropped down to the ground level and activated his bankai. The sky became clouded and a dark mist descended around him, part of the bow was morphing back into a sword, the bowstring changing into a chain, the top part of the bow changed into a bracer with small electric currents circling the chain.

Once the clouds disappeared, the chain coiled up and the electric currents accelerated. An individual metal ring was fired in Basara's direction, who had noticed the shinigami when the bankai was activated. It was an instinctual reaction to cover his head with his blade as the ring collided with it. Basara was thrown backwards and crashed into a fountain. If he hadn't blocked that, he would have lost his head. Before he had time to recover, he heard the words "Hado 90, Kurohitsugi" four times. The shinigami's blade was covered with a dark pulsating mass as he charged at Basara.

Basara smiled.

MasterCharizard15
25th April 2011, 12:06 PM
Burns the two posts above alive. We don't want any.

@New memebers

I am the Captain of Squad 6, MC. Welcome to the club, be sure to check the squad pages of the squad on the first page, it gives you pretty much a heads up on the Chaos way things work here and how each Squad behaves. All evil.

@Arc you don't need to Revamp, you are the #1 threat to every living creature in this club, you'll still be targeted first when everyone pulls an Aizen.

Northern Lights
25th April 2011, 12:56 PM
ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!! but the thing is, I already have my own shikai and bankai here - will this affect my joining in any way?

Welcome, I'm Captain of 3rd Squad, Kida =3
That won't hinder you at all, I quite like your bankai weapon designs too, just copy it and post it in the club so we can have a record of it.
I like your zanpaktou, we seem to have another Bow and Arrow, good, I love Archery - Not too sure what type your Zanpaktou is thoug, it seems to be Fire.


*tempted to have Frozen Blood as well* Wait, your brush cannot create water?
Overall, I like the new abilities, and bankai. =]

Thanks, I could teach you Frozen Blood to you if ya' like? XD


I like the things you did with it, though I'm a bit perplexed when it comes to the water and fire... if you need to draw 3 symbols to go into bankai.. doesn't this mean that IF there isn't any water AND fire available.. that you can never go into bankai? Can Kido fire work or not?

No, I don't NEED to have 3 symbols drawn, that's just part of my limitations, I can't envoke more than 2 of the 4 elements in Shikai, trying to envoke another will force me into Bankai. But I can use Bankai the conventional way too.

What are the Types of Zanpaktou we have in the club? I might make a List.

EDIT: -----------------------------------------

Fire
MasterCharizard
badmanjaro
Lucario0708
Flash Step
Minchan
Northern Lights

Water
Arceus03
Northern Lights
CyberBlaziken

Air
Kusari
SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Earth

SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Lightning
Golde
badmanjaro
Arenak

Ice
Rotrum
CyberBlaziken

Space-Time
ILP

Spirit
Eon Master

Kido
Cell
Senbonzakura
GalladeX
VizardBlue

We have too many Fire users XD

rotrum
25th April 2011, 3:26 PM
Wow everyone is hopping on the Zanpakutou revamp bandwagon now. Poor Golde, when he gets back he's gonnna havge a heart attack Unless the candy gets to him first.

Hello people who are new. I am Rotrum. Mess with me and die. The End.

-spies on Kida's Frozen Blood lesson-

Am I the only person who didn't look at Rex's Zanpakutou and think "Rinku can now blow things up..." ?

The only way that ILP could logically pull off Bankai in the middle of a heated battle is if he got his own epic, timefreeze moment usually reserved for main characters and people in The Matrix. Otherwise someone cold probably just slap some tape on his mouth.

My squad remains entirely empty. Maybe I should TradeMark throwing weaponry...

I have no wings in my bankai state. Instead I have camouflage. I should sooo many wings of ice!

Why do shinigami even need wings? Can't they walk on Air anyways?

Kusari's new Zan is...incredibly limited.

Tell me, does this screencap remind you of Bleach? When I first saw it, I just had to show you and see what you guys thought.

http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/9808/kyosukeandexcellen.jpg

Lucario0708
25th April 2011, 5:25 PM
actually, my gunblade zan is fire AND light

considering it uses light based tactics, the spirit is a phoenix in bankai, and THE LIGHT BURNS

ah, a dwarf in the flask, homunculus reference in kusari's new zan, the minute you said the giant glass ball (flask) housed the small black ball shaped spirit with an eye and a creepy smile, I immediately thought of homunculus (father)


@cell: did you get my pm?

I like Pokemon (...)
25th April 2011, 6:21 PM
Thank you, and yes that detail hit me too. I'm still trying to refine it, but the explosion is partly by me and partly by the zan. The strength of the blast depends how long the yo yo is extended. The closer it is the weaker the explosion as to deal as little damage to me as possible, the farther the stronger. In dire situations, I could strengthen the blast when it is closer if I want to go suicide style.

As for the overall power of the explosion itself, I don't want it to be too powerful. Not strong enough to totally break a hollow mask in one hit, two hits will leave a good crack. So I say 3-4 hit kills. Probably strong enough to incapacitate a hollow long enough for me to get in another hit.

I'm still trying to refine everything, my revisions should be done soon.
Ah, I see. Sounds good to me.


Happy Easter everyone,whether you celebrate it or not! :p
Happy zombie Jesus day!


Wow Ant, that was a great revamp!
I admit, it was a bit difficult to read and understand you're zan's powers before.
The new zanpakuto spirit is interesting and odd at the same time.
Though, I think there should be a black and white orb and you should nick-name them Anternero.
I also like how you simplified the armor in bankai.
Too many people with full bankai body armor in this club. :p
The new names are kind hard to pronounce though.
XD Thank you
Blah, I just realised, I should probably have a white orb too >.> TO THE EDIT BUTTON!
Mmm, yeah, I just couldn't be bothered to do more than the arms XD



Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives

-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)


so yeah. feedback please.
I like it. Simple, but effective. And I might have a better chance against you now :p
Which reminds me, with all the revamps, a fair amount of the ordering needs to be changed.

ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!! but the thing is, I already have my own shikai and bankai here (http://theo-cupent42.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=96#/d37lq7j) - will this affect my joining in any way?
Welcome to the Bleach club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) but you can also call me ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroneiro/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

Why does everyone seem to have wings in bankai state? XD It'd be fun to write a fanfic where Soul Society goes to war, and half of the battlefield is filled with flying shinigami. XDD
That's why :p

Since everyone and their grandmother are revamping zanpakto and whatnot... *rolls sleeves*
...

*unrolls* Nah, too lazy. :p Plus, I'm already happy with mine. XP
Spoken like my spatially and temporally seperated twin.

Noppikinaranai Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Unavoidable Eternal Void) is a bit long, though.
*Shrug* I wanted a double-barreled name. And Noppikinaranai is probably the really long word that I should cut down >.>



Before Kiaro ever heard an answer, the other guy had stood up and had pulled out a gigantic sword out of the earth, almost twice the size of his own body. He dragged the sword to a nearby corpse and started feasting on the remains.
Alright then. A guy with a massive sword who eats people.

Kiaro stood there perplexed.. it was true that the potion 'she' had given him, which he had smeared on his axe, would greatly advance the hollowfication process and make the hollow reach its final stage when it devours around a hundred human souls.
I wonder if you mentioned that because I said it :p


'A pity that this one only reached adjuchas stage.. Ragi was a Vasto Lorde when we awakened him.. Did this one advance too quickly and couldn't the mind follow?'
Which means that they're developing/developed a potion that forces Hollowfication, Menos Grande-fication, and forces them to move into a further stage. Most souls shouldn't be able to handle that *cough*


Kiaro thought, He laid his hand on the new guy's shoulder. "I asked you what your name was!"-If Kiaro hadn't reacted to the sudden movement, he would have been dead. The spot where he was standing a second earlier, was now the resting place of the gigantic sword, the earth was split open for atleast 36 meters. "My name? Basara."
Neeew paragraaaaph
It's just something you do when you write. A new paragraph for a new speaker, a time change, a scene change, like that. It lets the reader know that there is something different.


The new guy replied, while he walked back to the corpse. "Basara? Hope you won't get in trouble with that name if 'she' hears it."
Interesting...

He was quite tall at 6'5", had long dark brown hair and was not wearing the usual shinigami outfit. Instead he was wearing a long black coat, dark trousers with metal bits and a black t-shirt with the Metal sign. Metal spiked leather bracers on his arms and something that looked like combat boots implated with metal as footwear. He quickly finished the low level hollows and flash stepped towards the scene.
I like how you gave yourself more description :p Are you really 6'5? That'd make you the 2nd tallest member in the club. After Da.c and before Golde.


"So you can use a shikai state and it changes the colour of your zanpakto? Can you make me a little rainbow? Just go home you little-",
Idiot.

Basara smiled.
I'll take a guess and he's thinking "MORE FOOOOD"

Okay, so we have a new character, and Cam and Niche are sent in to fight. Let's see where this goes...



@Arc you don't need to Revamp, you are the #1 threat to every living creature in this club, you'll still be targeted first when everyone pulls an Aizen. At the same time.
Fix'd/

What are the Types of Zanpaktou we have in the club? I might make a List.

EDIT: -----------------------------------------

Fire
MasterCharizard
badmanjaro
Lucario0708
Flash Step
Minchan
Northern Lights

Water
Arceus03
Northern Lights
CyberBlaziken

Air
Kusari
SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Earth

SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Lightning
Golde
badmanjaro
Arenak

Ice
Rotrum
CyberBlaziken

Space-Time
ILP

Spirit
Eon Master

Kido
Cell
Senbonzakura
GalladeX
VizardBlue

We have too many Fire users XD
I thought Sapph was a Kidou user o.o
And would it be fair to consider yourself in each category, instead of just "Multi-type"?

The only way that ILP could logically pull off Bankai in the middle of a heated battle is if he got his own epic, timefreeze moment usually reserved for main characters and people in The Matrix. Otherwise someone cold probably just slap some tape on his mouth.
>Logically
There's your problem.


Why do shinigami even need wings? Can't they walk on Air anyways?
THEY LOOK COOL!


http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/9808/kyosukeandexcellen.jpg
No, I have no clue what you're talking about.

badmanjaro
25th April 2011, 7:48 PM
Welcome, I'm Captain of 3rd Squad, Kida =3
That won't hinder you at all, I quite like your bankai weapon designs too, just copy it and post it in the club so we can have a record of it.
I like your zanpaktou, we seem to have another Bow and Arrow, good, I love Archery - Not too sure what type your Zanpaktou is thoug, it seems to be Fire.



Thanks, I could teach you Frozen Blood to you if ya' like? XD



No, I don't NEED to have 3 symbols drawn, that's just part of my limitations, I can't envoke more than 2 of the 4 elements in Shikai, trying to envoke another will force me into Bankai. But I can use Bankai the conventional way too.

What are the Types of Zanpaktou we have in the club? I might make a List.

EDIT: -----------------------------------------

Fire
MasterCharizard
badmanjaro
Lucario0708
Flash Step
Minchan
Northern Lights

Water
Arceus03
Northern Lights
CyberBlaziken

Air
Kusari
SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Earth

SaphireDragon929
Northern Lights

Lightning
Golde
badmanjaro
Arenak

Ice
Rotrum
CyberBlaziken

Space-Time
ILP

Spirit
Eon Master

Kido
Cell
Senbonzakura
GalladeX
VizardBlue

We have too many Fire users XD


If you want I can switch my zanpakutos power to Water and Lightning instead. I guess I can have a combo. But then I have to switch up my abilities.

Northern Lights
25th April 2011, 8:47 PM
-spies on Kida's Frozen Blood lesson-

*uses Water Bubble to prevent sound escaping*


http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/9808/kyosukeandexcellen.jpg

OMG, brown haired Ichigo XD



I thought Sapph was a Kidou user o.o
And would it be fair to consider yourself in each category, instead of just "Multi-type"?

Yep, I checked front page unless Sapph changed it =\
Yeah, because other people can weild more than one type aswell, so I just put the names under the types that can be used within this club, and how many can use those types


If you want I can switch my zanpakutos power to Water and Lightning instead. I guess I can have a combo. But then I have to switch up my abilities.

Nah, you don't have change anything =]

Lucario0708
25th April 2011, 9:13 PM
well, here is ch 1 of my bleach fanfic, also, if you wanna be in, pm me a link to your character profile and zanpakto

first is the character profile of Ryaku Sentino (a character in my fanfic)

Name: Ryaku Sentino

Appearance: He wears a black flak jacket underneath a navy blue trenchcoat, the trench coat has a few strange white markings on it, reminiscent of the main elements, he wears a hood to cover his skull-face, underneath his clothes he is a complete skeleton, but he walks around the mortal world with his hood covering his face and bandages covering his hands

Zanpakuto: Sakuryaku




"Jaku, you will come with me to find a rogue shinigami."

"Excuse me?" Jaku said, his words barely understandable due to the doughnut protruding from his mouth. He put the pastry on a napkin and said: "Excuse me captain Kuchiki but this is my vacation, I'd rather not go chasing after some dead man while I can be sitting here, drinking an ice-cold tropical smoothie in peace and forget about the whole 'Fighting Hollows and saving people' sort of thing."

They were sitting at a white table overlooking a large beach in California.

"I did not come all the way to America to hear your nonsense Jaku, so I suggest you follow me." Byakuya said, while simultaneously tugging the zanpakuto hung on his waist.

"Jeez, fine I'll go, and have my entire vacation plans ruined! I was going to go see this 'Big Apple' everyone's talking about, I heard it's as big as a city!"

"It is a city you imbecile."

"You're *****ing me?"

Later, at a bar in Hong Kong

Jaku and Byakuya walked into the bar, both clad in their shinigmami outfits. Jaku was about 20 years old, his hair was spiked in the front but relatively short and white. He wore a black trench coat over his shinigami robes, the trim of the coat was ripped at the ends. Covering his legs was a set of black boots with a sharp, beak-like shape at the toes. On his head was a combat visor, complete with targeting and computer systems. On his waist hung his zanpakuto, Sukui o shainingu.

Byakuya was captain of Squad 6, he had long black hair and wore captain's robes, of course. His zanpakuto hung at his waist as well.

They walked up to a table where a few men were playing poker. "That's him." Byakuya said, pointing to the man wearing a strange trench coat with a hood covering his face, he seemed to be winning the poker game.

"All in." he said in a low voice, there seemed to be a hint of sadness in it.

"Oh yeah, he's bluffing probably, I'll go all in too." the other men at the table agreed as well.

"Royal Flush." the shinigami said, and set down his cards and took the prize money. He seemed to notice the two men staring at him, so he got up and walked over to them.

"What do you want, shinigami?" he said.

"Ryaku Sentino, I am Captain Byakuya, of squad 6, you are coming with us."

"What makes you think I will?" he said in an angry tone.

"Your file says you were killed my Espada number 4, Ulquiorra, he saw you die, yet you stand before us."

He was silent for a few moments. "Come." he said, and gestured to follow him.

They followed him to the top of a large building in upper Hong Kong, where he turned to them and said: "My past has finally caught up with me, after running all these years, with no innocents around I will have to kill you now, Watashi o tataku!"

With that said, from his belt a deck of small paper playing cards flew out, and turned to metal, the force of the wind from the cards flying around blew off his hood, revealing a skull, staring in their direction.

"Ha!" Jaku said, "Finally, some action, Sukui o shainingu has been wanting a fight." Jaku ripped the cutlass out of its sheathe and said: "Ejji o mekura ken-ka!" At once, the zanpakuto transformed into a gunblade with a revolver handle.

"Heh." Ryaku said, as he spat in Jaku's direction. "Kādo aitsugu." The cards suddenly started flying towards Jaku at a high speed.

Jaku dodged and leaped into the air. "Kajō-gaki no arashi!" Jaku started spinning, and bullets made of pure light flew in all directions, piercing and burning every last card. "Mabayui bakari no furasshu!" Jaku's blade reflected the sunlight gleaming above and blinded Ryaku for a fraction of a second. "Furasshu aitsugu!" Jaku said, as he flash-stepped forward and slashed relentlessly at Ryaku.

To Jaku's surprise, Ryaku blocked every strike with his cards.

"Jaku, don't kill him, Genryusei Yamamoto specifically said to keep him ali-"

"Screw that old man, I'm having fun!"

"It seems you are more powerful than I expected, well then." Ryaku paused and gathered his deck of cards. "Bankai, Okunote." The cards started flying wildly around Ryaku, and when they had stopped he was fulley armored head to toe, in playing cards!"

"Going to Bankai, eh?" Jaku said. "Bankai, Fenikkusushainingu." The spirit of his zanpakuto appeared, as a golden eagle, and then burst into flames, and covered him with it's wings, when the feathers had cleared, Jaku was clad with a golden armor.

Ryaku stared at him.

"Stop Looking at me With your bone-face!"

rotrum
25th April 2011, 9:17 PM
Fiction Time.

PLease note that the skeleton of the plot is borrowed.




Prologue: Beyond the hurricane lies a clear sky.

One year ago, the captain of the Second Squad, Jin, resigned from his position. With no specific reason given, he simply disappeared from the world without a trace. At the same time, Captain Luppi of the Eleventh squad resigned from office and, just the same, disappeared from the world. The naïve, yet powerful, Cameron Blue took on the place of Luppi at the head of Squad Eleven. The wise and calculative Magnus took on the role of Captain of Squad Two.

Three months passed and there was no word on the two missing Ex-Captains, but all was normal and calm in Soul Society. Everything was normal business. That is, it was until Captain Ryuu reported anomalies in the usually quiet surroundings of Soul Society-where deceased animals roamed. This was followed by many disappearances of shinigami, sometimes within the Sereitei, sometimes on Earth, it was entirely random. Fear went through the ranks of Shinigami.

Magnus formed a small team, three shinigami that he personally would train to combat this threat using the most advanced technology Ryuu had to offer. These three shinigami operated from Squad Two Headquarters and quickly went from new recruits into elite shinigami with the finest technology and back-up weaponry. They were part of a larger experiment, one that Ryuu had been asking Golde-Soutaichou to approve for a while. He wanted to equip shinigami with weapons aside from those provided by their Zanpakutou. The three guinea pigs for this? Fifth Squad’s Min, Seventh Squad’s Kai, and Twelfth Squad’s Gira Empty. These three used basic elementally aligned abilities, making them perfect candidates for the team-The EWX Team. (Experiment Weapons. X cause it makes everything cooler.)

Determined to hold on to the old ways, Golde creating an opposing team, if the EWX wasn’t stronger by the end of the experiment, it would be disbanded and scrapped. Appointing Cameron as it’s leader, he brought together the Kido Elite of Squad Two, Cell, The Violent Rose of Squad 6, Saph, and the Steel Bird of Squad 4, Erin. The OTX (Original Test-Group, once again X is there to look cool.) Team.

One half-year after the disappearance of Luppi and Jin, came the end of the experiment. Despite the best efforts of the two teams, shinigami continued to mysteriously disappear-gruesome deaths and destroyed buildings began appearing as well. Several clashes between the mysterious murderers and the two teams ended in stalemates. Similar encounters plagued all of the higher-ups as well.

Having accomplished virtually nothing, the effectiveness of the project was to be tested in battle. A three-on-three fight between the six shinigami, Fourth Squad Captain Aleph at the sidelines, would commence.

Their fight would never finish, midway through the battle an attack by strange beings, much like but far more powerful than the simple Bioroids they had encountered earlier. Whoever was their enemy, it appeared that they outmatched Ryuu in robotics. The EWX were soundly defeated after a harsh fight, even as other shinigami joined in the fight, the number of Bioroids increased twice as quickly. In the middle of the fight Magnus ran over to where the defeated Min, Gira, and Kai lay. He lowered his hand to Min, and unleashed the fastest Hiryugekizokushintenraihou ever casted by a shinigami previously. He and the Bioroids left as quickly as they had come.

The next five months were a painful war with Magnus’ true leader, Chii, their other allies, the bioroids, and the captured and brainwashed shinigami who had disappeared. It was a painful war and in the end, half of the shinigami were gone. The Sereitei was actually falling to the invading forces until Luppi and Jin appeared, changing the tide of battle with a strange Guest-Former Captain Gibull. Chii had disappeared in the Final Battle without a trace. Captain Kida is still on leave since the final battle.

No suitable replacement has come up for the Captain of the Second Squad.

Otherwise, however, the Soul Society is already falling back into pace. The world is peaceful in the world of the Shinigami once more.

Cell
25th April 2011, 9:56 PM
"Jaku, you will come with me to find a rogue shinigami."

"Excuse me?" Jaku said, his words barely understandable due to the doughnut protruding from his mouth. He put the pastry on a napkin and said: "Excuse me captain Kuchiki but this is my vacation, I'd rather not go chasing after some dead man while I can be sitting here, drinking an ice-cold tropical smoothie in peace and forget about the whole 'Fighting Hollows and saving people' sort of thing."

... Byakuya.. ?

They were sitting at a white table overlooking a large beach in California.

"I did not come all the way to America to hear your nonsense Jaku, so I suggest you follow me." Byakuya said, while simultaneously tugging the zanpakuto hung on his waist.

It doesn't really sound like Byakuya, to be honest.

"Jeez, fine I'll go, and have my entire vacation plans ruined! I was going to go see this 'Big Apple' everyone's talking about, I heard it's as big as a city!"

"It is a city you imbecile."

"You're *****ing me?"

... Crude joke, not funny. No offence.

Later, at a bar in Hong Kong

... Wait what.. Hong Kong?

Jaku and Byakuya walked into the bar, both clad in their shinigmami outfits. Jaku was about 20 years old, his hair was spiked in the front but relatively short and white. He wore a black trench coat over his shinigami robes, the trim of the coat was ripped at the ends. Covering his legs was a set of black boots with a sharp, beak-like shape at the toes. On his head was a combat visor, complete with targeting and computer systems. On his waist hung his zanpakuto, Sukui o shainingu.

Good description of your character.

Byakuya was captain of Squad 6, he had long black hair and wore captain's robes, of course. His zanpakuto hung at his waist as well.

... Does he really need an introduction?

They walked up to a table where a few men were playing poker. "That's him." Byakuya said, pointing to the man wearing a strange trench coat with a hood covering his face, he seemed to be winning the poker game.

... rogue SHINIGAMI.. in a POKER CLUB... In the REAL WORLD.. I need an explanation..

"All in." he said in a low voice, there seemed to be a hint of sadness in it.

"Oh yeah, he's bluffing probably, I'll go all in too." the other men at the table agreed as well.

"Royal Flush." the shinigami said, and set down his cards and took the prize money. He seemed to notice the two men staring at him, so he got up and walked over to them.

... So he really is a shinigami..

"What do you want, shinigami?" he said.

"Ryaku Sentino, I am Captain Byakuya, of squad 6, you are coming with us."

"What makes you think I will?" he said in an angry tone.

"Your file says you were killed my Espada number 4, Ulquiorra, he saw you die, yet you stand before us."

... He what? Espada's suddenly cooperating with shinigami's? O_o

He was silent for a few moments. "Come." he said, and gestured to follow him.

They followed him to the top of a large building in upper Hong Kong, where he turned to them and said: "My past has finally caught up with me, after running all these years, with no innocents around I will have to kill you now, Watashi o tataku!"

He's up against a damn captain and.. another shinigami who's power we don't know.

With that said, from his belt a deck of small paper playing cards flew out, and turned to metal, the force of the wind from the cards flying around blew off his hood, revealing a skull, staring in their direction.

... a skull? Is he a shinigami or what is he..

"Ha!" Jaku said, "Finally, some action, Sukui o shainingu has been wanting a fight." Jaku ripped the cutlass out of its sheathe and said: "Ejji o mekura ken-ka!" At once, the zanpakuto transformed into a gunblade with a revolver handle.

... A sealed state zanpakto is a katana.. not a pirate cutlass. No offence.

"Heh." Ryaku said, as he spat in Jaku's direction. "Kādo aitsugu." The cards suddenly started flying towards Jaku at a high speed.

Jaku dodged and leaped into the air. "Kajō-gaki no arashi!" Jaku started spinning, and bullets made of pure light flew in all directions, piercing and burning every last card. "Mabayui bakari no furasshu!" Jaku's blade reflected the sunlight gleaming above and blinded Ryaku for a fraction of a second. "Furasshu aitsugu!" Jaku said, as he flash-stepped forward and slashed relentlessly at Ryaku.

If you burn every card, just burn him.. it doesn't sound like you're willing to save his life..

To Jaku's surprise, Ryaku blocked every strike with his cards.

.. You're surprised that he blocks your slashes with METAL CARDS?

"Jaku, don't kill him, Genryusei Yamamoto specifically said to keep him ali-"

"Screw that old man, I'm having fun!"

... He is the captain commander.. He'd burn your bottom off if he knew..

"It seems you are more powerful than I expected, well then." Ryaku paused and gathered his deck of cards. "Bankai, Okunote." The cards started flying wildly around Ryaku, and when they had stopped he was fulley armored head to toe, in playing cards!"

.. Bankai already? He could block you earlier?

"Going to Bankai, eh?" Jaku said. "Bankai, Fenikkusushainingu." The spirit of his zanpakuto appeared, as a golden eagle, and then burst into flames, and covered him with it's wings, when the feathers had cleared, Jaku was clad with a golden armor.

Ryaku stared at him.

... Stop staring, just GET ON WITH IT.

"Stop Looking at me With your bone-face!"

.. Wait what?



Comments in bold.

1. Establish the setting it is in, don't just start with a beach then go to hong kong.. say HOW they HELL they got there and why they can be seen by mortals..

2. If I was playing poker with a talking skull I'd go all in too just to run away.

3. The "jokes" weren't funny, .. Or I just have a sophisticated sense of humor.

4. if you start a fight, end it with a cliffhanger of some sort to keep the reader interested.. they both went bankai.. Give a bit of foreshadowing of what'll happen. Not just some odd comment which doesn't seem to hold any value while reading about the situation..

5. Try to build your own universe for everything, if you want people to send in bio's, make it worth the time... I don't want to see my character right next to Byakuya.. (or for example, see OUR 6th Squad captain suddenly as a 3rd seat)

kusari
25th April 2011, 10:03 PM
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul. If the sphere is ever broken, which is almost never, the black mass that is Tenretsujin possesses the girl's body and is able to move freely and attack that way.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I strike the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.

-- Rousoku Chuuwareppu (Candle Snuffing Gale lit: Candle Neutralizing Gale): From my fist (or blade in bankai) a high speed gale is released. It has the ability to snuff small-to-moderate size flames. The attack itself is only about three feet wide and is incredibly focused compared to my other attacks.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~7 feet).

Attacks:
-- All attacks from shikai, with the exception of Nentenrepputama, can still be used.

-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Saishuukokyuu (Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into an Arashisetsudanki in all directions on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.

Lucario0708
25th April 2011, 10:22 PM
Comments in bold.

1. Establish the setting it is in, don't just start with a beach then go to hong kong.. say HOW they HELL they got there and why they can be seen by mortals..

1. Never said the mortals could see them
2.It was obvious that they flew there




2. If I was playing poker with a talking skull I'd go all in too just to run away.


They couldn't see his face, so they wouldn't know if he was a skull



3. The "jokes" weren't funny, .. Or I just have a sophisticated sense of humor.


they were funny to me



4. if you start a fight, end it with a cliffhanger of some sort to keep the reader interested.. they both went bankai.. Give a bit of foreshadowing of what'll happen. Not just some odd comment which doesn't seem to hold any value while reading about the situation..


I like to end with a witty comment



5. Try to build your own universe for everything, if you want people to send in bio's, make it worth the time... I don't want to see my character right next to Byakuya.. (or for example, see OUR 6th Squad captain suddenly as a 3rd seat)

note taken, it's just byakuya is so BADASS, i'll change it come next time

also, if senbonzakura doesnt come back, i'd like to work my way up to be 8th squad captain

Cell
25th April 2011, 10:25 PM
1. Never said the mortals could see them


... Your rogue shinigami was playing poker with mortals... If they were using Gigai's say so, try to make sure that it makes sense.. at one time they're playing poker (with a guy who doesn't show his face... I mean... ).. The next they go to the roof and start fighting.. He must be in a gigai to play poker, and he must be outside of it to fight.

A witty comment here and there is fine, but don't use it to finish a chapter.. you're supposed to try and grab the reader.. make him want to read further and await the next chapter.

Did you open the spoiler and read what I wrote inside aswell?

I like Pokemon (...)
25th April 2011, 10:47 PM
"Jaku, you will come with me to find a rogue shinigami."

"Excuse me?" Jaku said, his words barely understandable due to the doughnut protruding from his mouth. He put the pastry on a napkin and said: "Excuse me captain Kuchiki but this is my vacation, I'd rather not go chasing after some dead man while I can be sitting here, drinking an ice-cold tropical smoothie in peace and forget about the whole 'Fighting Hollows and saving people' sort of thing."
Woah woah woah, you do not talk back to Captain Kuchiki. He will beat your *** senseless.


"Jeez, fine I'll go, and have my entire vacation plans ruined! I was going to go see this 'Big Apple' everyone's talking about, I heard it's as big as a city!"

"It is a city you imbecile."

"You're *****ing me?"

Later, at a bar in Hong Kong

Wait, they were in California, and then they went Hong Kong? Another pair of Shinigami could've gone to Hong Kong, a pair who were closer.

Byakuya was captain of Squad 6, he had long black hair and wore captain's robes, of course. His zanpakuto hung at his waist as well.
Byakuya needs to introduction, we all know who he is.

They walked up to a table where a few men were playing poker. "That's him." Byakuya said, pointing to the man wearing a strange trench coat with a hood covering his face, he seemed to be winning the poker game.
He's wearing a trenchcoat, and you can't see his face. How do you know it's him?

"Ryaku Sentino, I am Captain Byakuya, of squad 6, you are coming with us."

"What makes you think I will?" he said in an angry tone.
Again, you don't talk back to Byakuya. The moment he says that he is taking you (in which case, he'd say "you are under arrest" or something), he'd hold your hands together and shunpo out before you understood what happened.

"Your file says you were killed my Espada number 4, Ulquiorra, he saw you die, yet you stand before us."
Wait, so Ulquiorra was working with the Shinigami? He's dead. And he wouldn't work with the Shinigami, EVER.

He was silent for a few moments. "Come." he said, and gestured to follow him.
And they would follow him.. Why? You never follow the enemy, who KNOWS what they've planned.

"Ha!" Jaku said, "Finally, some action, Sukui o shainingu has been wanting a fight." Jaku ripped the cutlass out of its sheathe and said: "Ejji o mekura ken-ka!" At once, the zanpakuto transformed into a gunblade with a revolver handle.
Yeah... The moment that Ryaku does anything, Byakuya would come in and stop it. Remember when he met Ichigo at the very beginning of the anime? Like that. He wouldn't allow this to happen, and he wouldn't allow it to continue.

"Jaku, don't kill him, Genryusei Yamamoto specifically said to keep him ali-"

"Screw that old man, I'm having fun!"
Byakuya wouldn't do that. He'd knock out Jaku and Ryaku, and keep them under control, and scold Jaku later. And you don't interupt Byakuya.




One year ago, the captain of the Second Squad, Jin, resigned from his position. With no specific reason given, he simply disappeared from the world without a trace. At the same time, Captain Luppi of the Eleventh squad resigned from office and, just the same, disappeared from the world. The naïve, yet powerful, Cameron Blue took on the place of Luppi at the head of Squad Eleven. The wise and calculative Magnus took on the role of Captain of Squad Two.
So you put Luppi and Jin's leaving together? You should've had Da.c's leaving too, so that 3 captains leave :p

That is, it was until Captain Ryuu reported anomalies in the usually quiet surroundings of Soul Society-where deceased animals roamed. This was followed by many disappearances of shinigami, sometimes within the Sereitei, sometimes on Earth, it was entirely random. Fear went through the ranks of Shinigami.
Normally, you'd refer to a Captain by their full name or surname, so Captain (Ryuu) Schiffer.
And what kind of anomalies? You said it was FOLLOWED by disappearances, so the disappearances can't be the anomalies themselves.

He wanted to equip shinigami with weapons aside from those provided by their Zanpakutou. The three guinea pigs for this? Fifth Squad’s Min, Seventh Squad’s Kai, and Twelfth Squad’s Gira Empty. These three used basic elementally aligned abilities, making them perfect candidates for the team-The EWX Team. (Experiment Weapons. X cause it makes everything cooler.)
XD They all sound awesome.

Determined to hold on to the old ways, Golde creating an opposing team, if the EWX wasn’t stronger by the end of the experiment, it would be disbanded and scrapped. Appointing Cameron as it’s leader, he brought together the Kido Elite of Squad Two, Cell, The Violent Rose of Squad 6, Saph, and the Steel Bird of Squad 4, Erin. The OTX (Original Test-Group, once again X is there to look cool.) Team.
But if Golde had given permission for Ryuu to do it... Why did he make an opposing team? o.o

Having accomplished virtually nothing, the effectiveness of the project was to be tested in battle. A three-on-three fight between the six shinigami, Fourth Squad Captain Aleph at the sidelines, would commence. Why did Akira suddenly turn into Aleph?


Their fight would never finish, midway through the battle an attack by strange beings, much like but far more powerful than the simple Bioroids they had encountered earlier. Whoever was their enemy, it appeared that they outmatched Ryuu in robotics. The EWX were soundly defeated after a harsh fight, even as other shinigami joined in the fight, the number of Bioroids increased twice as quickly. In the middle of the fight Magnus ran over to where the defeated Min, Gira, and Kai lay. He lowered his hand to Min, and unleashed the fastest Hiryugekizokushintenraihou ever casted by a shinigami previously. He and the Bioroids left as quickly as they had come.
Bioroids?

Otherwise, however, the Soul Society is already falling back into pace. The world is peaceful in the world of the Shinigami once more.
So... Who is on what side, again?

Lucario0708
25th April 2011, 11:02 PM
i read what was inside the spoiler as well, yes

all things i must work on, i suppose

ch 2 will come up with BIG changes

Zameric
26th April 2011, 12:59 AM
ZACHIRU

thank you - I'd like to join!!!
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, Theo.
I'm Zameric, captain of THE SQUAD OF JUSTICE Squad 9.
Make sure to follow the rules and just have some fun. :)


What are the Types of Zanpaktou we have in the club? I might make a List.

EDIT: -----------------------------------------

Fire
MasterCharizard
badmanjaro
Lucario0708
Flash Step
Minchan
Northern Lights

We have too many Fire users XD
Yeah, but they're all pretty cool in their own ways. :p


Wow everyone is hopping on the Zanpakutou revamp bandwagon now. Poor Golde, when he gets back he's gonnna havge a heart attack Unless the candy gets to him first.

My squad remains entirely empty. Maybe I should TradeMark throwing weaponry...

Tell me, does this screencap remind you of Bleach? When I first saw it, I just had to show you and see what you guys thought.
http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/9808/kyosukeandexcellen.jpg
I'm keeping a list for when he gets back. :p

I think that's technically classified as projectiles.

Yeah, he kind looks like a brown hair Ichigo.


actually, my gunblade zan is fire AND light

considering it uses light based tactics, the spirit is a phoenix in bankai, and THE LIGHT BURNS
Actually, I'd cosider it more just light.
Light that burns is just hot light. xD

Also, did you get my PM about the name suggestions?


If you want I can switch my zanpakutos power to Water and Lightning instead. I guess I can have a combo. But then I have to switch up my abilities.
No! I like your zan that way it is. It's really cool and using some of the names I gave it blends the elements really well.


so, when I made this zan i wasn't quite firing on all cylinders mentally. so i'm gonna add a few more abilities and try to make things more clear.

Zanpaktou Name: Kurogane Kiba (Iron Tusk)

Type: Wind/Lightning

Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Release Command: Devour

Shikai Details: a pair of black, knuckle duster trench knives. The one on the right has a gold blade and is named Raijin and the one on the left has a silver blade and is named Fujin.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): when punching with Fujin, I force a burst of air to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force

-- Tsuchidageki (Earth Strike): I punch the ground sending a burst of straight line-wind through the battlefield. this causes a wave of rock to smash into the opponent.

-- Raifushi (Lightning Knuckle): Raijin enables the use of electrically charged punches.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Kurogane Kiba (Sky-Piercing Iron Tusk)

Bankai Details: two giant blades. think the stinger on Suzumebachi's spirit's arm except black with a silver edge for Fujin and a gold edge for Raijin. one is on each arm and only on the outer part of the arm where the cutting edge rests.

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Ikazuchisetsudanki (Thunder Cutter): A variation of Arashisetsudanki. Caused by using Arashisetsudanki with an electrically charged blade. Performs the same function as the original attack but with an electrical charge.

-- Ikazuchiken (Charge Blade): By slashing the air with Raijin, I perform a singular version of Ikazuchisetsudanki. (ie. it fires only one blade)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

Pretty cool, Kusari. Simple yet destructive and powerful.
Reminds me of Kensei, who is my favorite captain!
Also, do I need to change your BDC (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=123849523) now?

Lucario0708
26th April 2011, 1:31 AM
the spirit is bankai is a phoenix

so its fire AND light, lets leave it at that

arceus03
26th April 2011, 8:26 AM
So now people are posting zanpakto revamps and fanfics.....

Too many to read @.@


Greetings Captain, I do know who sh........he...........the trap is but nope I do not play Guilty Gear. I got to the yo yo as a weapon by my own way of vague thinking.

Ah. Okay. XD I just thought if you do, you could use some of Bridgett's attacks/overdrives as your shikai/bankai abilities.



@Arc you don't need to Revamp, you are the #1 threat to every living creature in this club, you'll still be targeted first when everyone pulls an Aizen.

Well well. :p



Thanks, I could teach you Frozen Blood to you if ya' like? XD

No, I don't NEED to have 3 symbols drawn, that's just part of my limitations, I can't envoke more than 2 of the 4 elements in Shikai, trying to envoke another will force me into Bankai. But I can use Bankai the conventional way too.


*tempting offer* XP Though, of course, with that ability, I'd be a godmod since I don't have to find a nearby water source. XD

Umm, with bankai, you're free to create water/fire from nothing right? Or would you still have to find a nearby source? I'm guessing it's the former.

Also, why didn't you use Greek gods' names as well for Earth and Air? Gaea could fit for the Earth element, and Aeolus for the Wind. Just a suggestion, though.



Why do shinigami even need wings? Can't they walk on Air anyways?

Tell me, does this screencap remind you of Bleach? When I first saw it, I just had to show you and see what you guys thought.


....
I lol'd. THAT is a VERY valid point. XDDD Unless their wings are a part of their power..

Yeah, a bit like Ichigo I guess. But maybe you should just have shown the picture and see what we thought of it. When you said "remind you of Bleach", people would think of Bleach first then the picture; doubtless they would make that connection straightaway. Moot point is moot



Which reminds me, with all the revamps, a fair amount of the ordering needs to be changed.

Fix'd/


What ordering? o.o

At once o.o I SO am going to die



Zanpaktou Spirit: A tall man who never shows any emotion. He eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.


I love the spirit. It's... unique.

@Lucario0708
Hmm.. Mhmmm.. Basically what ILPy/Cell have stated, but I'd like to add in a few points. Maybe you can somehow tweak the story to make it seem more... 'interesting', as in, to hold the reader so they keep on reading. And, bankai after just a few moments fight with shikai? That'll hardly ever happen. It makes like you seem too rushed to go into your powers. Such things are far better kept till climax, IMO.



3. The "jokes" weren't funny, .. Or I just have a sophisticated sense of humor.


... Waitwhat, there was a joke? o.o

rotrum
Okay... The final part was a bit confusing.


The next five months were a painful war between Magnus’ true leader, Chii, their other allies, the bioroids, and the captured and brainwashed shinigami who had disappeared.

So Magnus is under Chii, and they had allies, as well as bioroids. And they fought the captured and brainwashed shinigami? Or the captured shinigami were brainwashed, and they were a part of Chii's/Magnus's team, fighting against the Soul Society?

Although, I love the title. It's cool.

Oh, also, I'm editing my zanpakto page (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10616126&postcount=22). Not adding anything new, but cleaning it up, since the abilities are a bit cluttered, and some are the same in both shikai/bankai states. If anyone would care to look and tell me whether it's more organized now, I'd be greatly grateful. ^^ Free cookies for one day. Come and choose

Has anyone ever heard of Undine's Curse? New idea unfolding

Northern Lights
26th April 2011, 7:15 PM
Lucario: You're story just pitches straight in, no backstory, no introduction, nothing to set the scene <-- the basic stuff a good story needs to start off with, or a slow start atleast. Rotrum devoted an entire chapter to the setting, which makes me more likely to want to read it in future. Plus, the characters are bordering on being rather arrogant "Mary Sue" like [what's the male version?] stay clear of that, have a definate personality for each character and stick to it. Do you have a planned plot for the story already written down?

Rotrum: dayum, dessimate the ranks much? I'm guessing Seireitei ins't a pretty sight at the moment [why did I suddenly get an image of Zameric doing construction work on buildings? O.o]


*tempting offer* XP Though, of course, with that ability, I'd be a godmod since I don't have to find a nearby water source. XD

Umm, with bankai, you're free to create water/fire from nothing right? Or would you still have to find a nearby source? I'm guessing it's the former.

Also, why didn't you use Greek gods' names as well for Earth and Air? Gaea could fit for the Earth element, and Aeolus for the Wind. Just a suggestion, though.


Yes, in Bankai I can, the reason I can't do it in Shikai is because I can't create one element without upsetting the natural exisiting balance between the four which gives Life, or Spirit; if you create one but not it's opposing force, it can have hazardous consequences or cause an over-compensation in equilibrium.

But with Bankai, I have the Spirit element, which means that I can envoke any element in any amount that I choose within my Pentagram because the Spirit exists within that Pentagram and is self equalising. That's the full explanation of Bankai really. I thought about it too much havn't I?

Originally I did have Greek Gods for Air and Earth too, but the names just didn't fit in as well as the others =[

MGOShockWave
26th April 2011, 7:48 PM
So... I was suggested to join this club by Squad Captain 3 NorthernLights :D so hi everyone!
I'm a big Bleach fan I recently started watching the show over from Season one to now :D

[Zachiru] :o

kusari
26th April 2011, 8:29 PM
Lucario: You're story just pitches straight in, no backstory, no introduction, nothing to set the scene <-- the basic stuff a good story needs to start off with, or a slow start atleast. Rotrum devoted an entire chapter to the setting, which makes me more likely to want to read it in future. Plus, the characters are bordering on being rather arrogant "Mary Sue" like [what's the male version?] stay clear of that, have a definate personality for each character and stick to it. Do you have a planned plot for the story already written down?
Marty Stu. When I first started writing fics (years ago) that's what all my characters were called by reviewers.


So... I was suggested to join this club by Squad Captain 3 NorthernLights :D so hi everyone!
I'm a big Bleach fan I recently started watching the show over from Season one to now :D

[Zachiru] :o
Well, since you're a friend of NL you have to be awesome. Welcome to the club. I'm Kusari and I'm the Captain of Squad 13.

Fic review
Rotrum: Nice. I'm hooked. Mainly because (as said by ILP) I have a thing for traitors in the Soul Society.

Luke: Like NL said, you're way too upfront. Add backstory, don't change an existing captain's personality (ie. Don't have characters talk back to Byakuya. He doesn't like that) and make your battles more fleshed out (ie. Don't make a character go to Bankai not long after the battle starts. I wrote an entire arc of my previous fic that never included a bankai release). I reccomend going to the first post and looking at the fanfic archives. Most of us have written a chapter here or there and have our fics all laid out there. I reccomend Golde's, NL's or Eon's for good examples.

Cell: You have a good story going here. Keep it up.

And on the subject of fics, I decided to tell you guys what would have happened had I kept going.

Starting from where I left off:

1) Everyone on my side except for Arenak wins their fights
2) We manage to get away though
3) Norio possesses Golde with the help of parasitic Hollow provided by Zakei
4) Norio proceeds to possess all the captains
5) We attack and everyone fights except ILP
6) I defeat Norio in an epic battle and my allies free the possessed captains by defeating them
7) Yoshi, beaten nearly to death, gives still possessed ILP the order to begin detonation on a Seireitei sized bomb. Yoshi bleeds out immeadiately afterwards.
8) Arc and Akane lead everyone out of the Seireitei into the Human world
9) I head to Squad 12 and fight against ILP to get to the computer and disable the bomb
10) I barely free ILP from possession but knock him out and have to disable the bomb alone
11) The bomb explodes and we fade into an epilouge narrated by Kida.
12) The epilouge reveals that ILP is safe and ends ambiguously giving the impression that I'm still alive and am roaming Hueco Mundo killing hollows to quell the tide


so yeah. that's it.

EDIT: Working on new chapter. Yay, explanation of treachery!

I like Pokemon (...)
26th April 2011, 9:50 PM
What ordering? o.o
Some people are more/less of a threat now. Like now, I have a way of hitting Kusari.

Plus, the characters are bordering on being rather arrogant "Mary Sue" like [what's the male version?]
There's also Gary Stu.


Rotrum: dayum, dessimate the ranks much? I'm guessing Seireitei ins't a pretty sight at the moment [why did I suddenly get an image of Zameric doing construction work on buildings? O.o]

I truly lol'd.




Yes, in Bankai I can, the reason I can't do it in Shikai is because I can't create one element without upsetting the natural exisiting balance between the four which gives Life, or Spirit; if you create one but not it's opposing force, it can have hazardous consequences or cause an over-compensation in equilibrium.

But with Bankai, I have the Spirit element, which means that I can envoke any element in any amount that I choose within my Pentagram because the Spirit exists within that Pentagram and is self equalising. That's the full explanation of Bankai really. I thought about it too much havn't I?
It's awesome, so it's fine.

So... I was suggested to join this club by Squad Captain 3 NorthernLights :D so hi everyone!
I'm a big Bleach fan I recently started watching the show over from Season one to now :D

[Zachiru] :o
Welcome to the Bleach Club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname you want to call me by.

Who are your favourite and least favourite characters? Do you read the manga?


And on the subject of fics, I decided to tell you guys what would have happened had I kept going.

Starting from where I left off:

1) Everyone on my side except for Arenak wins their fights
2) We manage to get away though
3) Norio possesses Golde with the help of parasitic Hollow provided by Zakei
4) Norio proceeds to possess all the captains
5) We attack and everyone fights except ILP
6) I defeat Norio in an epic battle and my allies free the possessed captains by defeating them
7) Yoshi, beaten nearly to death, gives still possessed ILP the order to begin detonation on a Seireitei sized bomb. Yoshi bleeds out immeadiately afterwards.
8) Arc and Akane lead everyone out of the Seireitei into the Human world
9) I head to Squad 12 and fight against ILP to get to the computer and disable the bomb
10) I barely free ILP from possession but knock him out and have to disable the bomb alone
11) The bomb explodes and we fade into an epilouge narrated by Kida.
12) The epilouge reveals that ILP is safe and ends ambiguously giving the impression that I'm still alive and am roaming Hueco Mundo killing hollows to quell the tide


so yeah. that's it.
I can't remember much of your story :p
But I like how I get a big part towards the end :p

Lucario0708
26th April 2011, 10:23 PM
i have a different way of writing i know, and here are some things i'm changing

1. Byakuya replaced by Eon
2. Genryusei Yamamoto replaced by Golde

anyway, decided to do chapter 2 later or tomorrow

i dont know what i was on while writing chapter 1.........

rotrum
26th April 2011, 11:27 PM
Glad people were interested by my prologue. I realized a made a couple mistakes and I was a bit too focused on being vague.

Kusa, I'm sure my story will interest you, then. The story of the traitor probably won't be finished for a looong time evne though it happened in the past.

The prologue itself is vague because as the story unfolds, the war/the past is going to be looked upon a lot-and a lot of details are important enough ot hide at this moment. That was just a bit of background.

I promised ILP something but it's going to be a chapter late.





In the Shadow of the Aftershock



Thousands and thousands of shinigami crowded into the basement of the bunker. The “Basement” was more like a shelter. The shinigami were not creating any commotion, except for a small few who acted like anyone should in a bunker-scared. The vast majority were simply standing there like statues, waiting. Three shinigami specifically were in the middle of the room. Several metal rods surrounded them, and a Zanpakutou was stabbed into the exact center of the circle.

Energy rushed between the rods, given off by the three in massive quantities. They were rushing. It was not safe.

__________

The red sky bathed the destroyed city with it’s bloody glow. Ruins of walls and a Feudal Japanese city were all that was remaining in the area. Except for one building. It stood out from the ruins easily. It was made of sleek metal, which reflected the full red light like an unichromatic disco ball.

The building was only ten feet high, mainly because everything happened underground. A single figure sat atop the building, their eyes scanning the ruins fervently. A katana was at his side, the hilt already in his hands. It was quiet. Too clichédly damned quiet

A figure walked silently behind him. He jumped up and silently whispered, “Show your power, Soulgain”-somehow detecting the other person. His Zanpakutou faded away as metal washed over his body-forming a loose armor. Blades decorated his blue and silver armor. Metallic cuffs each jut out an outward blade, for example. “Aleph Rickes (Completely random name. I happen to be bad at names.) Captain of the Soul Society Special Tactical Assassination Squad…Codename…Bahamut”

Aleph just looked at the other for a few seconds, “Calling me by my codename isn’t going to change your fate.” He said simply, rushing forward as his Zanpakutou turned into a huge watery mass instantly. Blades of water began cutting at the door as Aleph charged the other.

“Yes…I will kill you and then make the jump. Fate indeed.” He replied cockily before releasing his bankai. “Soulgain, Activate Code: KIRIN.” Energy engulfed his body, powering his movements and increasing his speed. His cuffs span rapidly, the blade on each producing a point of energy at the tips. He punched forwards twice, balls of powerful energy firing at Aleph. “Die Bahamut!”

__________

The pale moon, struggling to output its feeble light against the will of the drifting clouds, barely spotlighted the figures that gathered on Earth. The cold desert air drifted slowly across the area, etching lines across the sand-dramaticized greatly by the moon until irregular shadows were, apparently, etched into the very ground, only to shift in the wind, but the figures didn’t care about that.

“You did well, Ms. Ookami” A green haired man in what appeared to be a shinigami uniform and captain’s haori.

“Helios left behind his Zanpakutou, and you saw my Masterpiece disappear, did you not?” The apparent Ookami replied coolly.

“There was no proof that thing made it here. We still don’t know, based on the number of his mass-produced version that even made it here with us.” The first replied coldly, looking around at the other figures. They were all garbed in shinigami clothing, complete with Zanpakutou. There were three others that stood out, for they were garbed in Captain’s Haoris as well-including Ms. Ookami.

“Bah, let’s just find Helios already” Muttered a red-haired man, clearly irritated in general.

“Ms. Ookami, activate Aguieus.” The Green-haired man commanded.

“Of course, Captain-Commander” She said, a gate opening up beneath the group…

_____________________


It was just another boring day in the Sereitei, nothing was new in the slightest. Well, at first there was nothing new at all. Despite disorder in the ranks and a huge sense of emptiness in general in the empty city, the shinigami all went in a surprisingly organized and average fashion. Some of them were on Earth killing hollows, some of them were in Hueco Mundo killing hollows, others were doing paperwork or training. It was peaceful, simple, calm.

Then, Kida Ookami walked through the gates of the Sereitei for the first time in months. A large bag was slung over her shoulder and her face was cold and serious. The Sereitei stopped and stared for a moment as she arrived, before returning to normalcy as she shunpo’d rapidly into Captain Commander Golde’s House itself.

“Kida-Taichou, you’ve returned” He noted, a bit of surprise in his voice as he sipped his tea. A large bowl next to his teapot had a few sparse grains of sugar remaining in it.

She walked over and sat by him, opening the bag and pulling out a girl, a bit younger than her, and allowing the unconscious girl to lay there. “She was brainwashed.” Kida said with a deadly silence, stroking the cheek of her younger sister.

Moments passed.

_______

Very few people knew about Chii Ookami. Other than, of course, her sister. They were both experiments in the Twelfth division lab as well as shinigami. Ex-Captain (Before Narcisse) Setme and Ex-Vice Captain Cuervo had been studying mutant technology when they discovered Kida, and they had been studying Brainwave patterns when they encountered Chii. One day, many years ago, they disappeared along with several of their test subjects. Kida was spared, her sister was not.

When she later appeared, supposedly the leader of Ex-Captain Magnus and their other allies, Kida confided only in Golde-Soutaichou. But Chii wasn’t Chii. She called herself Lilith Lilith was powerful, but in the end she was beaten. The intense power needed to break the barrier she had been using caused the explosion that lead to her defeat and disappearance.

_______

The next day Golde-Soutaichou ordered a meeting of the Captains as well as the OTX and EWX teams (They are still around.) The subject? Chii Ookami.

“…Now, hearing that, do I have any objections against allowing Chii to train in private for a while before rejoining the Court Guard Squads?”

A tiny blip was heard in the room, like a drop of water falling.

“Just one, Golde-Soutaichou…”

MGOShockWave
27th April 2011, 12:47 AM
Welcome to the Bleach Club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname you want to call me by.

Who are your favourite and least favourite characters? Do you read the manga?

I can't remember much of your story :p
But I like how I get a big part towards the end :p

It's nice to meet you Captain Ilp! :D

And I'd have to say my favorite character is a tough question :/ I like Urahara he is a very suspicious character but it makes me more interested in him :D I also love Yachiru i mean cmon now shes so liddo and very cute :x and of course Ichigo I mean you have to like him!

I plan on starting it soon :D



Well, since you're a friend of NL you have to be awesome. Welcome to the club. I'm Kusari and I'm the Captain of Squad 13.


It's an honor to meet you Captain Kusari!

Zameric
27th April 2011, 1:46 AM
Fiction Time.

PLease note that the skeleton of the plot is borrowed.


Prologue: Beyond the hurricane lies a clear sky.

One year ago, the captain of the Second Squad, Jin, resigned from his position. With no specific reason given, he simply disappeared from the world without a trace. At the same time, Captain Luppi of the Eleventh squad resigned from office and, just the same, disappeared from the world. The naïve, yet powerful, Cameron Blue took on the place of Luppi at the head of Squad Eleven. The wise and calculative Magnus took on the role of Captain of Squad Two.

Three months passed and there was no word on the two missing Ex-Captains, but all was normal and calm in Soul Society. Everything was normal business. That is, it was until Captain Ryuu reported anomalies in the usually quiet surroundings of Soul Society-where deceased animals roamed. This was followed by many disappearances of shinigami, sometimes within the Sereitei, sometimes on Earth, it was entirely random. Fear went through the ranks of Shinigami.

Magnus formed a small team, three shinigami that he personally would train to combat this threat using the most advanced technology Ryuu had to offer. These three shinigami operated from Squad Two Headquarters and quickly went from new recruits into elite shinigami with the finest technology and back-up weaponry. They were part of a larger experiment, one that Ryuu had been asking Golde-Soutaichou to approve for a while. He wanted to equip shinigami with weapons aside from those provided by their Zanpakutou. The three guinea pigs for this? Fifth Squad’s Min, Seventh Squad’s Kai, and Twelfth Squad’s Gira Empty. These three used basic elementally aligned abilities, making them perfect candidates for the team-The EWX Team. (Experiment Weapons. X cause it makes everything cooler.)

Determined to hold on to the old ways, Golde creating an opposing team, if the EWX wasn’t stronger by the end of the experiment, it would be disbanded and scrapped. Appointing Cameron as it’s leader, he brought together the Kido Elite of Squad Two, Cell, The Violent Rose of Squad 6, Saph, and the Steel Bird of Squad 4, Erin. The OTX (Original Test-Group, once again X is there to look cool.) Team.

One half-year after the disappearance of Luppi and Jin, came the end of the experiment. Despite the best efforts of the two teams, shinigami continued to mysteriously disappear-gruesome deaths and destroyed buildings began appearing as well. Several clashes between the mysterious murderers and the two teams ended in stalemates. Similar encounters plagued all of the higher-ups as well.

Having accomplished virtually nothing, the effectiveness of the project was to be tested in battle. A three-on-three fight between the six shinigami, Fourth Squad Captain Aleph at the sidelines, would commence.

Their fight would never finish, midway through the battle an attack by strange beings, much like but far more powerful than the simple Bioroids they had encountered earlier. Whoever was their enemy, it appeared that they outmatched Ryuu in robotics. The EWX were soundly defeated after a harsh fight, even as other shinigami joined in the fight, the number of Bioroids increased twice as quickly. In the middle of the fight Magnus ran over to where the defeated Min, Gira, and Kai lay. He lowered his hand to Min, and unleashed the fastest Hiryugekizokushintenraihou ever casted by a shinigami previously. He and the Bioroids left as quickly as they had come.

The next five months were a painful war with Magnus’ true leader, Chii, their other allies, the bioroids, and the captured and brainwashed shinigami who had disappeared. It was a painful war and in the end, half of the shinigami were gone. The Sereitei was actually falling to the invading forces until Luppi and Jin appeared, changing the tide of battle with a strange Guest-Former Captain Gibull. Chii had disappeared in the Final Battle without a trace. Captain Kida is still on leave since the final battle.

No suitable replacement has come up for the Captain of the Second Squad.

Otherwise, however, the Soul Society is already falling back into pace. The world is peaceful in the world of the Shinigami once more.
I'm with Arc, this was just confusing and random to me. To me it just sounds a real brief summary of a whole fic, rather than a prologue to one. But it seems like other people are interesting, so maybe I'm just missing something.



Rotrum: dayum, dessimate the ranks much? I'm guessing Seireitei ins't a pretty sight at the moment [why did I suddenly get an image of Zameric doing construction work on buildings? O.o]
Ahahaha! I don't know why you did, but it's funny.
Randomly made me think of Yammy the tomato farmer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYWIdKbwPlo). xD


So... I was suggested to join this club by Squad Captain 3 NorthernLights :D so hi everyone!
I'm a big Bleach fan I recently started watching the show over from Season one to now :D

[Zachiru] :o
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, MGOShockWave.
I'm Zameric, captain of Squad 9.
I was also recruited by Kida, way back when. :p

MGOShockWave
27th April 2011, 2:08 AM
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, MGOShockWave.
I'm Zameric, captain of Squad 9.
I was also recruited by Kida, way back when. :p

Thank You! It's nice to meet you Captain Zameric

Eon Master
27th April 2011, 2:15 AM
^ Please try not to post one-liners. Just letting you know.

Eesh, why do I always get stuck reprimanding new people?

Anyway, I'm Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7. You can call me Eon, or come up with your own non-insulting nickname. Welcome to the club.

And yes, Northern Lights is awesome :D

Wow, lots of new members lately. Luke, Bmj, Rex, Theo, and now MGOShockWave. This is crazy, I don't think we've ever had this many new members in such a short span of time.

Arenak
27th April 2011, 2:39 AM
Welcome to the Bleach Club 2, new members, I'm Arenak, lieutenant of Squad 4.



And I'd have to say my favorite character is a tough question :/ I like Urahara he is a very suspicious character but it makes me more interested in him :D I also love Yachiru i mean cmon now shes so liddo and very cute :x and of course Ichigo I mean you have to like him!
You may the first member of this club to actually like ichigo (at least of the one's I've met). But Urahara's cool.

captain arc: your zanpaktou page is fine and don't I always get free cookies? Also, I had no clue what Undine's curse was until I google it.You're going for some life-threatening respiratory disease, right?

Lucario0708
27th April 2011, 3:16 AM
no time to post chapter 2, but i can leave you with this preview of what is to come


"Do you know how it feels never being able to die? Watching your friends and family age and pass yet you live? That is my never-ending struggle."

"What is to come will shock you. The king will set up his pawns while the queen of hearts steals the show. The jack laughs as the ace wins another battle, waiting for his moment to strike. That is what the order of shinigami will become, a power-hungry war zone where no one will survive, not even the forces of hueco mundo will be able to stop him."

"That may be true, but one thing I know is that the future is uncertain and the end is always near."

as you may see it will take a turn from the jokes of chapter 1 to the seriousness of the situation, that is how I start every fic, chapter 1 is filled with jokes and some fast-paced things, whereas chapters afterward get more serious and patient. though i will chock it full of gurren lagann quotes

EDIT: Bleach just got replaced in "The Big 3" of manga/anime..... by TORIKO

i mean..... effing toriko........ now its One Piece, Naruto, Toriko

arceus03
27th April 2011, 9:43 AM
[why did I suddenly get an image of Zameric doing construction work on buildings? O.o]

Yes, in Bankai I can, the reason I can't do it in Shikai is because I can't create one element without upsetting the natural exisiting balance between the four which gives Life, or Spirit; if you create one but not it's opposing force, it can have hazardous consequences or cause an over-compensation in equilibrium.

But with Bankai, I have the Spirit element, which means that I can envoke any element in any amount that I choose within my Pentagram because the Spirit exists within that Pentagram and is self equalising. That's the full explanation of Bankai really. I thought about it too much havn't I?

Originally I did have Greek Gods for Air and Earth too, but the names just didn't fit in as well as the others =[

XD

Ah, okay. That's an awesome explanation. Nothing wrong with thinking too much about it. XD


So... I was suggested to join this club by Squad Captain 3 NorthernLights :D so hi everyone!
I'm a big Bleach fan I recently started watching the show over from Season one to now :D

[Zachiru] :o

Hello. arceus03, Captain of 4th Squad, avid Unohana fan. Also the cookie supplier.



You may the first member of this club to actually like ichigo (at least of the one's I've met). But Urahara's cool.

captain arc: your zanpaktou page is fine and don't I always get free cookies? Also, I had no clue what Undine's curse was until I google it.You're going for some life-threatening respiratory disease, right?

I think Kai is another one who likes Ichigo as well, but we haven't seen him for a long time.

Thank you ^^ Okay, now I have to look for a different reward...

Exacta! It's not a new attack, though, just a new name for an already existing technique, because it sounds cool. :p



EDIT: Bleach just got replaced in "The Big 3" of manga/anime..... by TORIKO

i mean..... effing toriko........ now its One Piece, Naruto, Toriko

In spoils, because some events are still new.

That's not exactly surprising, given how the plot was so cluttered up in the last arc. We needed a lot of explanation, and we were left without them. And we had so little Unohana screentime. And Yammy, the 0th Espada, died just like that, without any proper fight scene. And how the Captains, who could've all gone bankai, really did nothing to stop Aizen.(Apart from Hitsugaya and Komamura, maybe.)

Well yeah. I could go ranting for hours, but it's been said in the past. Just hoping that this new arc is going to bring some changes, but from the way it's developing, we might get to see Getsuga Tensho again, which is JOY. >.>

Jinchuuriki Hunter
27th April 2011, 1:59 PM
EDIT: Bleach just got replaced in "The Big 3" of manga/anime..... by TORIKO

i mean..... effing toriko........ now its One Piece, Naruto, Toriko
To be fair, Toriko kinda deserved it. The world building is excellent, characters are lovable and have interesting and consistent personalities, a unique setting in a world built around gourmet, very consistent power levels, great character development, abilities are explained well and make perfect sense to some degree, an overall very fun series that can get downright manly when it comes to fights.
It's actually very similar to One Piece, but the concepts are different enough that they can be viewed and enjoyed as two entirely different manga series. I find both to be better than either Naruto or Bleach but that's my opinion.

At the same time, Bleach's plot is kind of all over the place. Characters tend to do some of the most illogical things even in serious situations, and power levels are very inconsistent. There is an obvious preference of style over substance by the author and the way panels are used are so storyboardish that something which should require only one page to tell can be stretched over half a chapter. Pacing is one of Bleach's biggest problems.
Another rather glaring weakness of this series is how bland the main character is. He has no lifelong goal, no special motivation. His personality can be summed up as "I must fight to protect my friends", and as benevolent as that is, it kind of makes you a boring and shallow character if that's your only personality trait.
And in a recent interview, Kubo stated that he leaves the backgrounds out because he is drawing the "air" or some nonsense like that. What an excuse to leave out backgrounds...as if admitting that you don't plan ahead isn't bad enough, you admit that you don't draw because it's "stylish".
Bleach's setting had a lot of potential really...that's about the only thing I liked about it. I'm only still reading now because I'm curious to see how Kubo deals with his plotholes.

Northern Lights
27th April 2011, 6:28 PM
*hasn't a clue what Toriko is, went off Naruto ages ago and doesn't like One Piece*

Aww, you guys are so nice ^^
Yey, you joined MGOShockWave =] just make sure to avoid one liners and jump into conversations with anything relevant even if we do end up discussing science theories occasionally

Ooh, this means you can pick a Squad to join when you're ready and build your own Zanpakto - theres a prompt for it on the first page if you need headers for ideas on how to make one up.

Golde is going to have a heart attack when he gets back, so much updating.

Cell
27th April 2011, 6:58 PM
Hi there, MGO, I'm Cell, 5th seat of the second squad, nice to meet you. :)


To be fair, Toriko kinda deserved it. The world building is excellent, characters are lovable and have interesting and consistent personalities, a unique setting in a world built around gourmet, very consistent power levels, great character development, abilities are explained well and make perfect sense to some degree, an overall very fun series that can get downright manly when it comes to fights.
It's actually very similar to One Piece, but the concepts are different enough that they can be viewed and enjoyed as two entirely different manga series. I find both to be better than either Naruto or Bleach but that's my opinion.

At the same time, Bleach's plot is kind of all over the place. Characters tend to do some of the most illogical things even in serious situations, and power levels are very inconsistent. There is an obvious preference of style over substance by the author and the way panels are used are so storyboardish that something which should require only one page to tell can be stretched over half a chapter. Pacing is one of Bleach's biggest problems.
Another rather glaring weakness of this series is how bland the main character is. He has no lifelong goal, no special motivation. His personality can be summed up as "I must fight to protect my friends", and as benevolent as that is, it kind of makes you a boring and shallow character if that's your only personality trait.
And in a recent interview, Kubo stated that he leaves the backgrounds out because he is drawing the "air" or some nonsense like that. What an excuse to leave out backgrounds...as if admitting that you don't plan ahead isn't bad enough, you admit that you don't draw because it's "stylish".
Bleach's setting had a lot of potential really...that's about the only thing I liked about it. I'm only still reading now because I'm curious to see how Kubo deals with his plotholes.

*Avid Toriko fan here*

Couldn't have said it better, expecially about Bleach.



There is a huge amount of possibilities available for Bleach, but one way or another, Kubo always manages to make them the same.

Let's take, for example, the Aizen battle.. They're all on about how Aizen is strong and they can't handle him YADAYADA...

THEY DON'T EVEN GO BANKAI, let alone shikai.. It just feels like a classic example of "I'll power down so the hero can save me".

Ichigo as a character is a grand fluke, shallow, unimaginative and repetitive (Hi there, Getsuga Tenshou ,you were cool the first time I saw you!). His personality is.. I'll fight to protect my friends.. and that's it.. does he even have a personallity?

Next is the antagonists, the only one who seems to have put up a decent fight was Ulquierra..
Yammy the 0th Espada.. he appeared in 0th of a chapter aswell.
Stark... he released and.. got defeated..
Barragan.. it was quite nice if you look at the circumstances..
Tia... Aizen killed/wounded her... A great character (she was actually given some sense of feelings), killed/wounded by Aizen because she could only handle.. what.. 3 captain levels at once?

THE POWER LEVELS ARE MESSED UP... Zaraki had a bit of a problem with the 5th Espada... suddenly the 0th espada is WEAK?

You're fighting the strongest guy ever... JUST GO BANKAI! Seriously..



By the way; NL, you should give Toriko a chance.

I like Pokemon (...)
27th April 2011, 8:26 PM
I'm doing work experience at a library, and they have about 17 issues of an anime/manga magazine called "Neo". I'll list all the articles that are mentioned in the contents, and you guys can pick which ones you want me to photocopy:

Manga: A pocketful of Clouds by Morag Lewis (I don't know if this is the manga itself, or just a review, or whatever).
Cosplay: Top hints and tricks from the best.
Fashion: Pop's fashion tutorial for one of the hottest accessories this season.
Man in Japan: Daniel Robson on the problem of Tokyo's tiny kitchens.
Mangaschool: How to draw hands.

Eva 2.22: Meet the new kid in town as the Rebuild Project steps up a gear!
Fractale: Find out what happens in a world where everyone's played by an avatar.
Madokamagica: It's a new millenium: time for the magical girl genre to get a serious makeover, courtesy of Akiyuki Shinbo.
GOLGO13: Japan's answer to James Bond is a cool, calculating assassin. Jonathon Clements takes on the Duke!
Takashi Shimizu: Calum Waddell quizzes the horror master on the perils of Hollywood, the use of 3D in cinema, and his upcoming projects.
The Tower of Druaga: MVM's latest fantasy epic pokes fun at the gran RPG tradition: find out more about it in retro gaming roots!
The 3DS is here!: Check out our favourite features of Nintendo's latest handheld.

Hetalia's History Lessons: Who said the study of world relations had to be boring - or accurate?!
Star Driver: Mecha Madness meets bondage gear in Studio Bones' latest series...
Japanese Playboy: Jonathon Clements takes a look at the manga that only wishes it was Hugh Hefner.
RE:CODED: Kingdom Hearts returns, and we examine the RPG that took the world by surprise.
A year in J-POP: We go back - and to the future!
Square Enix's PSP love: The 3rd Birthday, Dissidia Duodecim Final Fantasy, Tactics Ogre and Lord of Arcana.
Kings of Korean cinema: NEO's David West interviews three directors leading the new Korean wave.
J-Fashion Brigade.
Markosia Manga

Casshern sins: From a 1973 kid's show to Manga's latest sci-fi adventure, we explore Casshern.
Beelzebub: Find out what happens when a naked devil baby comes crashing to Earth!
Levele: A blast from the past as '90s manga and cult comedy favourite Level E makes its debut on the small screeen.
Jumpsquare: Jonathon Clements takes a look at one of the most influential shonen manga anthologies in Japan.
Confessions of a dog: Corrupt cops and shady deals: it's all based on real life, in Gen Takahashi's expose on the Japanese police.
The Music of Bleach: Find out stories behind the bands responsible for those catchy opening and closing themes! (Already know I'm doing this).
Eureka Seven: It's the old series versus the brand new movie: can you spot the difference?

Manga: Stranger and Friends, by Rebecca Burgess.
Cosplay: Top hints and tricks from the best.
Fashion: Get tips from Popi for your own fashion trip to Tokyo
Man in Japan: Daniel Robson helps himself to some more pudding...
Mangaschool: How to draw luscious manga hair.

BLEACH UNCOVERED: NEO celebrates Tite Kubo's legendary anime and manga franchise with everything you ever wanted to know, including character guides and story arcs! (Doing this one).
Anime expose: We present to you, the cutest Gundams in the world. Ever
Manga snapshot: Sniffing back a tear; manga expert Jonathon Clements takes on Weepy Tales.
Hangry&Angry: Morning Masume girls Hitomi Yoshizawa and Rika Ishikawa turn to the dark side.
Expo Cosplay: Winners from the Manga, Ubisoft and NEO Cosplay Corner phot booth.
NEO @ Cannes: Calum Waddell reports back from the film festival, with a surprising pledge from director Takeshi Kitano...
J-Fashion Brigade
Sweatdrop Manga


Summer Wars: Join Mamoru Hosoda on a breathtaking adventure into the digital world.
Wandering son: Anime tackle transgender issues with a brand new, surprisingly touching series.
Boy's love: Jonathon Clements bravely enters the breach once again, examining some drama courtesy of the Tokyo Anime Fair.
Dream Home: Determined, enthusiastic and perhaps a bit bonkers, David West discovers why everyone should love Josie Ho.
Shikaosuga: Salaryman turned music sensation: NEO's Tom Smith speaks tto one of the biggest names in Japan.
5CM per second: Director Makoto Shinkai schools us in the art of lost romance, the speed cherry blossom falls, and how to create masterwork animation.

Manga: Red Planet Ride by Jim Round.
Cosplay: Top hints and tricks from the best.
Fashion: Find out what our resident fashionista got up to in Tokyo.
Man in Japan: Daniel Robson ponders the future of handheld gaming.
Mangaschool: Create your own Japanese [the photocopying cut off here]

Kendo Cuties: Meet the kendo team of Muroe High School... they'll knock your socks off.
Digimon Xros Wars: Why we're still in Digi-love.
Manga Snapshot: Mystery Bonita, the anthology whose name is more mysterious than its content.
Kung Fu Clan: A family that shaped kung fu cinema.
Doping Panda: The band that's taking on the music industry.
Hello, Kitty. Older, Wise, Cooler?
Creating the Dream: How CyberConnect2 bring Naruto to life.
J-Fashion Brigade
Sweatdrop Manga
Eden of the East: Flip your mag for our interview with director Kenji Kamiyama!

New Year Anime: Look to the future and discover the top titles to be released in the next 12 months!
Movies in 2011: A whole range of Asian cinema treats awaits you, from Thai award-winners to Korean shockers...
Manga Preview: Get your reading glasses on, we've got a library's worth of manga waiting.
Manga snapshot: Jonathon Clements on a manga anthology for gamers, from Square Enix.
Deus Ex: If you loved Scifi anime like Akira, Appleseed and Ergo Proxy, this could be your gaming pick for 2011!
Cosplay winners: The best Expo Cosplayers, brought to you by NEO, Manga Entertainment and Paul Jacques photography.
J-Fashion Brigade
Sweatdrop Manga

Gundam Unicorn: It's a Gundam title fro the Gundam hardcore: NEO prepares you for the universal Century!
Manga snapshot: Jonathon Clements get into Comic Flapper, an anthology for girls that's really for guys...
Expo Report: The highlights from the UK's biggest anime and manga event.
Exist Trace: It's Visual Kei, but not as you know it...
Kurosawa: David West examines the remarkable body of work generated by Kurosawa and Mifune.
J-Fashion Brigade
Sweatdrop Manga

Furious Fists: Find out the legend behind Koei's amazing Fist of the North Star game, Ken's Rage!
Occult Academy: Delve inside the latest spooky story from Japan to be set in a high school.
Manga Snapshot: Check out the Babe with a Boil and other carnal delights, in Japanese manga anthology Men's Young...
J-Horror, Musical Style
NEO's Tom Smith braves the vaults of Dir en Grey to uncover their most disturbing music videos ever.
Satoshi Kon: Our tribute to the late anime director.
J-Fashion Brigade
Dragon Heir
Sengoku Basara: Turn over this issue of the magazine to find out more about how these animated pretty-boys stand up against their real-life historical inspirations!

NEO Awards: The best in Asian entertainment, voted for by you, the NEO readers!
J-Preview: Travel back in time...
Manga Snapshot: More manga for girls who like guys who like other guys...
Puffy Amiyumi: The pop duo reflect on a 13 year career.
AquarionL Shouji Kawamori's latest mecha epic.
Kung Fu returns: NEO interviews Wilson Yip, Donnie Yen and Sammo Hung on the set of Ip Man 2.
Sushi Heaven: NEO attends a masterclass at Japan Fooding.
J-Fashion Brigade
Manga Shakespeare serialisation

Fangs for the Memories: If you though the boys from Twilight and True Blood had all the sex appeal, think again! There's plenty on offer in Vampire Knight...
Anime Expose: High School of the Dead: like Shaun of the Dead, but at school. Kind of.
Manga Snapshot: Ikki wants to be a breeding ground for innovation but Jonathon Clements wonders if its really hitting the mark...
Miyavi Returns: The guitar samurai speaks about studio pressure and being a father.
Kazauki Kiriya: David West tackles the director of Goemon on battling budgets, wire-fu, and some real acting giants.
J-Fashion Brigade
A Tale of 2 Cities
Professor Layton: Flip this issue of NEO to find out about the making of Professor Layton's big screen adventure!

Soul Eater: headfirst into a world of villains, [something] and weapons in Soul Eater!
Anime Expose: [something] and new hero, courtesy of Stan Lee [something]
Manga Snapshot: [something]than Clements investigates some truly [something] manga
Fashion Brigade
Manga Shakespeare

Rebuild of Evangelion: NEO celebrates anime's most controversial science fiction masterpiece: it's Evangelion, but not as you know it...
Anime Expose: Great writing, intriguing plot, it's Durarara!!
Manga Snapshot: Fellow's: a manga with class. It's hopes...
Versailles: Tom Smith investigates "the finest melody born from Japan."
Japan Journey: NEO hijacks the Manga Tour of Tokyo!Take in the sights as we journey to the Lanf of the Rising Sun.
Tokyo Fair: The latest news on the anime industry, direct from Japan's leading event.
J-Fashion
Blood+ Kowloon Nights@ A very special extract from the upcoming Dark Horse manga by Hirotaka Kisaragi, which is out now. Read Japanese-style!

NEO awards: Find out what impressed NEO readers the most out of the offerings of the past 12 months in our bumper Award feature, sponsored by 4Digital Asia!
Bakuman: What's next, after Death Note?
Manga Snapshot: In Big Comic Original, even the cats are waxing lyrical...
Expo Report: Cosplay, announcements and more.
Pac-Man Party! NEO investigates the icon that is Pac-Man.
Otaku Gift Guide: Your Christmas list sorted.
Final Fantasy Online: We speak to the game's creators.
Dragon Heir Manga
DBZ Mania: Turn this issue over for our coverage on one of the greatest anime franchise ever!

Tekken: Find out how the manga industry got involved in Tekken 6!
J-Preview: Put on your learnin' hats.
Manga Snapshots: Jonathon Clements on the biggest name in girls' comics: Ciao.
D'espairspray: They live like salmon...
Grudge Match: Takashi Shimizu on a very unique game.
Halloween Horror: Devil May Cry is on hand this October 31st; along with our favourite creepy manga series.
J-Fashion Brigade
Manga Shakespeare Serialisation

Anime Preview: The latest, the greatest... anime to watch in 2010; plus our hot tips for as yet unreleased titles from Japan!
New Year Movies: Our guide to the Asian films you shouldn't miss out on this year.
Manga for 2010: The best new manga for a happy New Year.
Get Yer Game On!: Final Fantasy X111, Astro Boy, Blue Dragon, Ace Attorny, and more...
J-Fashion Brigade
Abingdon Boys School: Learn some tricks from Takanori Nishikawa
Manga Snapshot
Manga Shakespeare Extract
Reader Survey

Long list is long.



Energy rushed between the rods, given off by the three in massive quantities. They were rushing. It was not safe.
Interesting...

The red sky bathed the destroyed city with it’s bloody glow.
I really liked this one bit of description. I think it was very good.

A figure walked silently behind him. He jumped up and silently whispered, “Show your power, Soulgain”-somehow detecting the other person. His Zanpakutou faded away as metal washed over his body-forming a loose armor. Blades decorated his blue and silver armor. Metallic cuffs each jut out an outward blade, for example. “Aleph Rickes (Completely random name. I happen to be bad at names.) Captain of the Soul Society Special Tactical Assassination Squad…Codename…Bahamut”

Aleph just looked at the other for a few seconds, “Calling me by my codename isn’t going to change your fate.” He said simply, rushing forward as his Zanpakutou turned into a huge watery mass instantly. Blades of water began cutting at the door as Aleph charged the other.
Arc was called Aleph, right?
But the Assassination Squad?
And a water Zan?
Is this the same Gotei 13?

“Yes…I will kill you and then make the jump. Fate indeed.” He replied cockily before releasing his bankai. “Soulgain, Activate Code: KIRIN.”
Oh, wait, duh. Soulgain. Something different, then.

“Ms. Ookami, activate Aguieus.” The Green-haired man commanded.

“Of course, Captain-Commander” She said, a gate opening up beneath the group…
Not Golde, obviously. Probably leader of the Soulgain.

She walked over and sat by him, opening the bag and pulling out a girl, a bit younger than her, and allowing the unconscious girl to lay there.
The imagery made me lol/

“…Now, hearing that, do I have any objections against allowing Chii to train in private for a while before rejoining the Court Guard Squads?”

A tiny blip was heard in the room, like a drop of water falling.

“Just one, Golde-Soutaichou…”
My guess? Aleph.



It's nice to meet you Captain Ilp! :D

And I'd have to say my favorite character is a tough question :/ I like Urahara he is a very suspicious character but it makes me more interested in him :D I also love Yachiru i mean cmon now shes so liddo and very cute :x and of course Ichigo I mean you have to like him!

I plan on starting it soon :D



It's an honor to meet you Captain Kusari!
XD So formal. I think another member was like that for a bit, I don't remember which.
Urahara, very good choice. He's the reason why I decided to go with the 12th Squad.

Ahahaha! I don't know why you did, but it's funny.
Randomly made me think of Yammy the tomato farmer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYWIdKbwPlo). xD
Ah, love this song.
For those of you who don't know, Ulquiorra's Seiyuu, Daisuke Namikawa, also voices Italy in Hetalia, who loves tomatoes. This song came.

Eesh, why do I always get stuck reprimanding new people?

Wow, lots of new members lately. Luke, Bmj, Rex, Theo, and now MGOShockWave. This is crazy, I don't think we've ever had this many new members in such a short span of time.
Because you post so soon after them :p
And yeah, and now I feel like making a timeline of when people join (a time version, and a post version).

EDIT: Bleach just got replaced in "The Big 3" of manga/anime..... by TORIKO

i mean..... effing toriko........ now its One Piece, Naruto, Toriko
How do you know this? o.o
And does it really matter if it isn't a top 3 anymore? It's still a popular manga, and it's HIGHLY unlikely that Shonen will stop printing chapters for it...

Yey, you joined MGOShockWave =] just make sure to avoid one liners and jump into conversations with anything relevant [s]even if we do end up discussing science theories occasionally

Golde is going to have a heart attack when he gets back, so much updating.
You come to me for the science theories :p
And unfortunately, Zam is organisin everything to make it easier for Golde.

I could probably rant, like the others, about the faults in Bleach. But typing out the contents made my fingers tired.

Cell
27th April 2011, 10:25 PM
Just had to do this.

What I think of the Bleach storyline:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y45/Jayzmanz/keeptrollin.gif

Lucario0708
27th April 2011, 11:02 PM
chapter 2 is here! i'm changing jaku's visor a pair of kamina glasses with combat systems, because it's just that badass



Jaku looked at Ryaku, his triangular glasses scanning the armor and bankai effects.

Hm, it seems those cards of his have a mirrored plate, so that is how he can deflect my bullets. It also seems the cards have elemental capabilities. Jaku thought.

"Since you leave me no choice, I'll make this quick. Hikari ryūsei danmaku!"

"Jaku, don't, you'll kill him!" captain Seijuro Arashi* yelled, but it was too late.

Jaku had flown into the air, and he launched a huge cannonball of light from his intricate revolver, when moments later, dozens of large meteors came flying out in all directions.

"You idiot! Are you trying to kill us?" Seijuro yelled. As a meteor came surging his way, he activated bankai, covering himself in a nigh on indestructible suit of armor.

When the dust cleared, Jaku's wings were gone, his armor's original shine was reduced to a dull color, and his shield was scorched, he looked toward the area were Ryaku was.

"Inconceivable!" Jaku yelled. As standing right there, with most of his armor scorched and blown off, was Ryaku.

"No one can survive Hikari ryusei danmaku!"

"I cannot die." Ryaku said.

Jaku was puzzled.

"Do you know how it feels never being able to die? Watching your friends and family age and pass yet you live? That is my never-ending struggle. I will tell you what happened that fateful day."

~~~~~

It was morning, I was dispatched to take down Espada number 4, Ulquiorra. When I found him we engaged in battle, but before I was able to unleash the full might of my bankai, he pierced me through the heart.

"What do you feel soul reaper, is it fear? Is it the fear of death that is not allowing you to speak, or is it an blade stuck through your heart?"

"B-b-bastard. . ."

He dropped me, turned and left me to rot in Hueco Mundo. I died that day, but what seemed like minutes later, I awoke to a strange light.

"Your purpose here is not over. You will live until you fulfill it."

"What is my purpose?"

"It will come in time, when a shining warrior in golden armor fights you, you will know it is time, pass your message onto him, and help him, only then will you find true peace. . ."

I awoke to find my body had decayed, I was nothing but a skeleton, after the hollows had feasted on my flesh.

~~~~

"That is what happened."

"Wow, I can't believe this-"

Jaku was cut off.

"Enough fighting you imbeciles, Hanto Wairudo!" captain Seijuro said, forming a giant wolf made of spirit energy.

They both released their bankai, and Ryaku agreed to come with them.

Later, in the Soul Society

"Hm, I see then." Golde said.

"I have reason to believe that Jaku is my shining golden knight."

"So he is the one you must relay your message to?"

Jaku stirred, he had been leaning on his zanpakuto the whole time while Ryaku relayed the account of the battle and Ulquiorra to Golde.

"I must say it to all of you. What is to come will shock you. The king will set up his pawns while the queen of hearts steals the show. The jack laughs as the ace wins another battle, waiting for his moment to strike. That is what the order of shinigami will become, a power-hungry war zone where no one will survive, not even the forces of hueco mundo will be able to stop him."

Jaku got up. "That may be true, but one thing I know is that the future is uncertain and the end is always near. So I don't want to regret doing nothing, for a tomorrow that might never come."

With that, Golde dismissed them, and they all reverted back to their original human forms, except for Ryaku, who was given a temporary home in district 3.

While walking on the mortal world, Jaku wore a yellow dress undershirt with a blue tie, a blue jacket and pants, with a pair of navy shoes to go with it.**

Jaku was walking with captain Seijuro and other members of the 13 court guard squads, when he stopped.

"Before I joined Gotei 13 5 years ago, I had already saved people. I traveled with a group of people who saved anyone, never resorting to violence, always traveling, always going, never to stop in one place, when I left, I joined and became a shinigami so I could help people."

"Why do you say this now?"

"I just have, a weird feeling, y'know? Like when something strange is going to happen.

Jaku's hunch was right, suddenly a noise was heard, like something scraping up against another thing, and something large started materializing.

"What the hell is that?"

Jaku replied, "Something old. Something new. Something borrowed. Something blue."



*author's note: Eon Master's first Soul Reaper, I'll change it once he tells me the name of his new link-esque one

**author's note: Think Spike Spiegel from Cowboy Bebop


hope you guys like it, so, What is the strange thing materializing? What is the meaning to Ryaku's strange prophecy? What ever happened to the smoothie Jaku had? Will Jaku ever visit the big apple? Will I ever stop asking these random questions?

Next time: Chapter 3: Blink

minchan
27th April 2011, 11:34 PM
Honestly, I couldn't care less how popular or unpopular Bleach (or any other series I follow) is - I just care that I enjoy it... And heck, it doesn't have to be in the top three manga to still be popular and known around the world. It's not a big deal to me, because I never really cared about it being ranked among the three best manga to begin with. Do I think it deserved to be replaced? Honestly, I feel like Bleach is a bit scattered lately. Do I think it's completely Kubo's fault? No. Do I think it's partially his fault? Yes. Though after following Bakuman, which really does give a lot of insight on how manga creation works, I can say that the path Bleach has taken recently more or less couldn't be helped. I'm disappointed we missed some important scenes, but there's nothing we can do now. I can't compare Bleach to Toriko because I've never read the latter. It personally doesn't interest me, in a similar way that One Piece and Dragonball don't interest me. Does that mean I think they're bad? No. Does it mean they're not massively popular? Well duh, of course not! But because I haven't read Toriko, I can't make a fair judgement... But really, what happens, happens. It's not a huge deal, and it doesn't mean the world will end tomorrow.

Ahh!! I'm sorry! I started rambling again, didn't I! It happens a lot when I'm trying to get a thought out, as you may have noticed by now!!

Cell, did you make that GIF or did you find it?
And why is the guy in the front's head not replaced too? LOL

Due to my limited internet on my vacation, I was unable to catch up further on the anime... I'll try to catch up a bit soon. I hate to be so far behind!

Eon Master
27th April 2011, 11:42 PM
@Cell: Oh my god, I think I died and reincarnated myself from laughing too much. What made it even funnier was that I was listening to Ganon's theme from Twilight Princess, and the beat matched the arm swinging perfectly xD

@Luke: My new Shinigami's name is Rouga Kouken. There's a profile about 8-10 pages back if you need more.

Lucario0708
28th April 2011, 12:38 AM
kk, if you could just give me a link to his profile and zan so i dont have to go searching for it that'd be great

that gif is hilarious

also, just learned that best buy has most of the bleach seasons on dvd, should i get a few?

also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....

Eon Master
28th April 2011, 12:50 AM
Zanpaktou (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12343087&postcount=2960)

Profile (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12354353&postcount=3000)

And a new thread? God knows this one is getting cluttered.

badmanjaro
28th April 2011, 1:05 AM
kk, if you could just give me a link to his profile and zan so i dont have to go searching for it that'd be great

that gif is hilarious

also, just learned that best buy has most of the bleach seasons on dvd, should i get a few?

also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....

I would say we wait!

I mean come on.........LOYALTY! Even though I never met him yet.....

Yeah I'm that kind of guy...

VizardBlue
28th April 2011, 1:13 AM
I would say we wait!

I mean come on.........LOYALTY! Even though I never met him yet.....

Yeah I'm that kind of guy...

I agree. This thread is farely cluttered, but were doing fine, and I would never do it without golde's permission. Besides, it's already 2 guys, were not pokemon, we cant just keep releasing bleach clubs.

Lucario0708
28th April 2011, 1:22 AM
well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

and your profile reminds me, I need my power levels and backstory put in

Overall- / 600

Offense- 90
Jaku is extremely powerful when it comes to his attacks, however, due to the widespread effectiveness of some, the accuracy is so-so. With his light-speed sword strikes, he can attack extremely quickly dealing alot of damage


Defense- 80
Jaku is not very keen at defending in shikai, but in bankai his defense is kicked up a notch, with his shield and armor, he can block most incoming attacks, making his defense a key asset


Mobility- 100
Jaku can move at near light-speeds and is extremely agile, and this physical ability is merely amplified with bankai as he gains wings and his speed is increased. He can most possibly be one of the fastest shinigami in the gotei 13

Kido / Reiatsu- 70
Jaku has quite a bit of reiatsu himself, though most of that would be expended in his first few attacks, he relies on his zanpakuto absorbing solar energy and converting it into spiritual energy go green, with solar panel swords!

Intelligence- 100
Jaku has a photographic memory and his mind can work as fast (if not faster) than his reflexes, he can think quick and analyze the situation to every possible outcome, and uses his personally designed glasses to analyze his opponents and locate their weak spots. He likes playing it slow at first so he can learn his opponent's patterns and identify their weaknesses, though when he really gets going for a fight, he often rushes into things

Stamina- 70
Jaku is tough, he can take a bullet to the shoulder and keep fighting, if anything manages to break through his near indestructible armor and shield in bankai, he can take the pain of a direct wound.


Backstory: Jaku's past is shrouded in some mystery. before he joined squad 7 he worked with a rogue group when he was 13, dedicated to fighting for the lives of people throughout the universe, no matter how big or small, good or evil, he never liked violence. He left the group when he was 14 and wandered the earth for two years, sharpening his mind, his relfexes, and his ability to take pain. when he was 16 he joined the soul society and became a part of squad 7, he was there for five years now that his current age is 21, he has never lost a fight yet, but his checkered past leads some to believe he has some kind of emotional attachment, wherever he goes he carries a silver necklace on his neck, with a silver key on the end, he is often times found holding it, staring at it, as if to remembering something long ago.

minchan
28th April 2011, 1:22 AM
@badmanjaro
Aww that's not a bad thing to be that way~

I wasn't around at the time of the first thread, but how come that one was closed? Was it just too cluttered or something?

I frequent on another forum (a J-pop fansite, mainly for Hello! Project) though the details of it isn't too important... But anyway, on that site, there are threads for each member of certain groups - and one of the members' threads has 2042 pages. That's right, over two thousand. I don't really think 156 pages is too many... Though maybe I'm just used to being in threads with over a thousand pages? XD (There are others on that site with over 1000, but not yet 2000, pages.)

Anyway, why's Golde not been on lately? Was there a reason or is this just an unexplained absence? I might have known the answer to this question but I can't really remember. XD Sorry.

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 1:35 AM
also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....


With who leading it? That's like rats abandoning the ship before it's even sinking just because the captain is asleep.


Golde made this club - Golde remains owner of club. Golde decides if there's a need for a new club.


Also I approve of Kubo trolling trolling trolling trolling us. I swear every chapter is just a character flashily drawing his sword for 20 pages.




well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

And I presume you propose yourself to update it and organize it, thus imposing yourself as the owner of the Bleach club while Golde is gone, because if you weren't power hungry you wouldn't mention this at all, would you?

VizardBlue
28th April 2011, 1:35 AM
well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

We can't just wait a month and say "LOLNEWCLUB", golde is busy with college, and will probably be frequent on WLM in the future, it isn't that cluttered, we just need to replace some Zans. That isn't a reason to start some uprising and a new club, If we can't get a hold of him, we can just politely request the mod edit the front page. It's a couple of zans for christs sake.

minchan
28th April 2011, 1:45 AM
I was thinking, if something absolutely NEEDS to be added to the front page, why not put it in the second post, for until Golde has a chance to add it to the first one?

Unless I'm seeing things, ILP is the one who posted second in this thread. And he's pretty active. I mean, it's not a GREAT solution, but if we don't want to get a mod involved (for whatever reason) it might not be a bad idea just to add it to the second post for now... IF it MUST be on the front page ASAP, which I don't really know why it'd have to be...

Just put it in your sig or something, for now... I dunno. Sorry I'm kinda low on ideas now... XD

Lucario0708
28th April 2011, 1:45 AM
im just saying, jeesh

^ great idea, that actually, might work

Ice Heart
28th April 2011, 1:51 AM
Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 1:53 AM
Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~

Welcome to the Bleach Club!

I hope you enjoy!

VizardBlue
28th April 2011, 1:56 AM
well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

and your profile reminds me, I need my power levels and backstory put in

Overall- / 600


Not to be offensive, but your profile is coming off as extremely overpowered, and the max for your overall is around 490-500, everyone else is. The only one who's really 600 is golde, and he's headxaptain, and thats just assumed since he never made one. I suggest you revise it.
@min: MIN YOUR A GENIUS. *hug*
@ICE HEART: Welcome! I'm the Squad 11 captain, and you can call me Cam or Blue. joinmejoinme

Eon Master
28th April 2011, 1:59 AM
^ Golde's is 490 too, actually. Mainly because his Kido ranking is 50, but yeah. He's like me, never has any use for it because his Zanpaktou is so ridiculously powerful.

And definitely no new club. Golde will return eventually, that rule has never been taken seriously in the first place.

EDIT:
Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~

Welcome to the Bleach Club! I'm Squad 7 Captain, Eon Master. You can call me Eon, or come up with your own nickname that isn't insulting xD

And thank you for actually remembering to post the secret word.

EDIT 2.0: OH MY GOD, RED GLOBE RETURNS. Seriously, I think those are your 4th and 5th posts in this incarnation of the club =P

minchan
28th April 2011, 2:01 AM
Hi, Ice Heart! Welcome!

There's a lot of characters, and I'm having some trouble remembering a few of the newer ones, myself. XD

BTW I'm the lieutenant of squad 5 here, you can call me Min. =)

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 2:02 AM
Wow, Jump manga sure has been taking a lot of breaks lately, hasn't it?

it's a shame, I was looking towards to 20 pages of absolutely nothing happening.

Kubo would make a great politician.

Ice Heart
28th April 2011, 2:05 AM
Thanks for the welcome guys! You can just call me Ice. It's quicker to type ; )

minchan
28th April 2011, 2:07 AM
Well there are always breaks for the Jump mangaka - they definitely deserve the vacation time they get, actually, they deserve more...

I recently picked up that old databook... Souls, or however it's stylized... Anyway there's an interview with Kubo and if memory (from like, a few days ago) serves, he said he didn't even have any time off! LOL

Regardless if things are going a bit downhill, he still works hard, as do all the mangaka in Jump, and they deserve every bit of time off that they get.

Also, you have to remember that there was an uncalled for week off due to the disasters in Japan. That certainly couldn't be helped.

But... I guess, because of that, things seem a lot slower, even if just looking at releases and ignoring actual content (or lack thereof)!

cyndagirl
28th April 2011, 5:52 AM
yes, welcome Ice^^ *troughs a drinking party in the squad 8 main building*
and there's tea for the younger folks or none drinkers^^

I have a homemade replica of ukitake's zanpakuto!^^

Zameric
28th April 2011, 7:02 AM
and your profile reminds me, I need my power levels and backstory put in

Overall- / 600

Offense- 90
Jaku is extremely powerful when it comes to his attacks, however, due to the widespread effectiveness of some, the accuracy is so-so. With his light-speed sword strikes, he can attack extremely quickly dealing alot of damage


Defense- 80
Jaku is not very keen at defending in shikai, but in bankai his defense is kicked up a notch, with his shield and armor, he can block most incoming attacks, making his defense a key asset


Mobility- 100
Jaku can move at near light-speeds and is extremely agile, and this physical ability is merely amplified with bankai as he gains wings and his speed is increased. He can most possibly be one of the fastest shinigami in the gotei 13

Kido / Reiatsu- 70
Jaku has quite a bit of reiatsu himself, though most of that would be expended in his first few attacks, he relies on his zanpakuto absorbing solar energy and converting it into spiritual energy go green, with solar panel swords!

Intelligence- 100
Jaku has a photographic memory and his mind can work as fast (if not faster) than his reflexes, he can think quick and analyze the situation to every possible outcome, and uses his personally designed glasses to analyze his opponents and locate their weak spots. He likes playing it slow at first so he can learn his opponent's patterns and identify their weaknesses, though when he really gets going for a fight, he often rushes into things

Stamina- 70
Jaku is tough, he can take a bullet to the shoulder and keep fighting, if anything manages to break through his near indestructible armor and shield in bankai, he can take the pain of a direct wound.


Backstory: Jaku's past is shrouded in some mystery. before he joined squad 7 he worked with a rogue group when he was 13, dedicated to fighting for the lives of people throughout the universe, no matter how big or small, good or evil, he never liked violence. He left the group when he was 14 and wandered the earth for two years, sharpening his mind, his relfexes, and his ability to take pain. when he was 16 he joined the soul society and became a part of squad 7, he was there for five years now that his current age is 21, he has never lost a fight yet, but his checkered past leads some to believe he has some kind of emotional attachment, wherever he goes he carries a silver necklace on his neck, with a silver key on the end, he is often times found holding it, staring at it, as if to remembering something long ago.
Well the character battle data stats are supposed to reflect yourself more so than an OC.
Not saying that a non-captain can't be strong, but maybe you could rethink it a bit.
Here's the page (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=11446606) with all the charts of of club members so far.
If you want, I can help you if you have any questions.
But I'm not gonna force you to make changes.


Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Club, Vanilla Ice.
Can I call you Vanilla or Vanilla Ice? :p
I'm Zameric btw. Captain of Squad 9.


yes, welcome Ice^^ *troughs a drinking party in the squad 8 main building*
and there's tea for the younger folks or none drinkers^^

I have a homemade replica of ukitake's zanpakuto!^^
Are you sure you wanted to join Squad 7? xD

In sealed or shikai form?
Could you take a picture and share with us?

arceus03
28th April 2011, 11:09 AM
Lots of activities. Long-arse post alert. :p





There is a huge amount of possibilities available for Bleach, but one way or another, Kubo always manages to make them the same.

Let's take, for example, the Aizen battle.. They're all on about how Aizen is strong and they can't handle him YADAYADA...

THEY DON'T EVEN GO BANKAI, let alone shikai.. It just feels like a classic example of "I'll power down so the hero can save me".

Ichigo as a character is a grand fluke, shallow, unimaginative and repetitive (Hi there, Getsuga Tenshou ,you were cool the first time I saw you!). His personality is.. I'll fight to protect my friends.. and that's it.. does he even have a personallity?

Next is the antagonists, the only one who seems to have put up a decent fight was Ulquierra..
Yammy the 0th Espada.. he appeared in 0th of a chapter aswell.
Stark... he released and.. got defeated..
Barragan.. it was quite nice if you look at the circumstances..
Tia... Aizen killed/wounded her... A great character (she was actually given some sense of feelings), killed/wounded by Aizen because she could only handle.. what.. 3 captain levels at once?

THE POWER LEVELS ARE MESSED UP... Zaraki had a bit of a problem with the 5th Espada... suddenly the 0th espada is WEAK?

You're fighting the strongest guy ever... JUST GO BANKAI! Seriously..


^That basically recaps all complaints we had during the last arc. :p
Let me just add one more. We saw one bankai, without actually seeing what it does. Poor Kensei =(


I'm doing work experience at a library, and they have about 17 issues of an anime/manga magazine called "Neo". I'll list all the articles that are mentioned in the contents, and you guys can pick which ones you want me to photocopy:

And yeah, and now I feel like making a timeline of when people join (a time version, and a post version).


What are those for?

Stop posting what you felt like doing and start posting what you actually did damnit. :p
Now I feel like making a list of what you said you felt like doing, just so... you know.. XP
Wait, is "making a list of what I felt like doing and posting them in the Club" a part of your "top 50 things you want to do before you die"? :P


Just had to do this.

What I think of the Bleach storyline:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y45/Jayzmanz/keeptrollin.gif

...
XDDDDD



Jaku replied, "Something old. Something new. Something borrowed. Something blue."

The last line just happened to catch my eyes. Wedding now? o.o



also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....

Why would we need a new thread? This old one is as good as it is. And yeah, the front page is a bit outdated, but that's why we have the Squad's page for unless for squads that don't have them, since the Captains are (mostly) active and would update it if a new member joins.

But still, that's a small matter. We don't really need a new Club. Even if we start a new one, chances are sooner or later, it'll get cluttered as well. That's just how it is.


well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

and your profile reminds me, I need my power levels and backstory put in

Overall- / 600


Yeah, 510/600 isn't overpowered at all. >.>

Also, Golde has a life as well. Don't just think that all he needs to do in a day would be to cater to the club. Instead of whining how outdated the first page is, why don't we try to make changes? I know Zameric is often responsible of relaying new updates to Golde, and if he consents to do it this time, why don't we make his life easier? PM him all the changes that you want to be done to the first page (mainly new recruits to the squad and zanpakto pages), so that he can pass them on to Golde when he comes online. And don't just PM Zameric saying "Hey I joined Squad # and posted my zanpakto, can you tell Golde please?" but properly give links and the important details, and make them neat. As in

Hello Zameric, can you please tell Golde that I would like these to be updated in the front page?
Club name: blablabla
Zanpakto: [Link]
Squad:
Profile: [Link]*
Library: [Link]**

*Note: Profiles aren't normally put on the front page, but in the Squad's page instead, hence I suggest you quickly choose a Squad.

**Note: Library refers to one specific post you've made, in which it has all the links to the chapters you've posted so far. You should do this if you're really passionate about writing a fanfic. Example (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10851176&postcount=421).


Just to avoid being listed as "Spirits", as I said, quickly specify which Squad you want to be in before PMing Zameric. Ask nicely from the Captain, I'm sure he/she'll be more than happy to accept. May I suggest Squad 2/Squad 3/Squad 10/Squad 11, since they have yet to find a member? Though, judging on the activeness of the former members, I daresay Squad 6, Squad 9, Squad 12 and Squad 13 would also love to have new recruits.

I cannot give you my words that he WILL update the front page, but at least there's some effort rather than just making faces and complaining. Thank you very much. =)

Okay, now you've made me rant, which is not often.


Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~

Hello Ice :) arceus03, 4th Squad Captain, Avid Unohana fan the Club's cookie supplier. Welcome to the Club =D



I have a homemade replica of ukitake's zanpakuto!^^

Woah, nice. XD Do you have the kids as well?

Anyone mind telling me from what episode does the filler start? Thanks!

OH HAI THERE RG! :D

Oh. As a gentle reminder to those who recently reposted their zanpakto/profile, could you guys please edit your original zanpakto page? It's far quicker to do that than PMing Golde to tell him to change the link.. IIRC, kusari, ILPy, NL, Eon and MC, unless you have already done so. Thank you!! =D
Anyone else?

On a slightly unrelated note, summer semester is starting. :p

Northern Lights
28th April 2011, 2:41 PM
Welcome to the club, Ice Heart, i'm Kida Ook ami, Captain of 3rd Squad
Hey Red Globe! =D


also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....

Oh, yeah, led by whom? you? good luck with that.


well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

http://i53.*******.com/xask9.jpg
We've managed before, Golde trusts us to look after the thread while he's gone - it'll be fine

Arceus03 I've already updated my Zanpaktou page =]

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 3:02 PM
[COLOR="LightBlue"][font='arial']Welcome to the club, Ice Heart, i'm Kida Ook ami, Captain of 3rd Squad
Hey Red Globe! =D

An Okami reference? As in Okami Amaterasu? How did I not notice this before?


Anyways, I'm kinda basing my zanpakto on eighth wonder and thunder edge from that game. xD

Cell
28th April 2011, 3:38 PM
Welcome to the club, Ice Heart. Nice to meet you, I'm Cell, the 5th seat of the second squad.

Hi there, Red Globe. =)


@Cell: Oh my god, I think I died and reincarnated myself from laughing too much. What made it even funnier was that I was listening to Ganon's theme from Twilight Princess, and the beat matched the arm swinging perfectly xD


I aim to please. =)



also, Golde's been gone a while now, if it gets to be a month since he was last on, rules say we can make a new thread....
____

well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized


The only time when this club will make a new thread is when it just gets too big and disorganised OR when GOLDE HIMSELF PASSES THE TORCH TO SOMEONE ELSE. It's fine as it is now.

Zameric
28th April 2011, 5:38 PM
Just to avoid being listed as "Spirits", as I said, quickly specify which Squad you want to be in before PMing Zameric. Ask nicely from the Captain, I'm sure he/she'll be more than happy to accept. May I suggest Squad 2/Squad 3/Squad 10/Squad 11, since they have yet to find a member? Though, judging on the activeness of the former members, I daresay Squad 6, Squad 9, Squad 12 and Squad 13 would also love to have new recruits.

Oh. As a gentle reminder to those who recently reposted their zanpakto/profile, could you guys please edit your original zanpakto page? It's far quicker to do that than PMing Golde to tell him to change the link.. IIRC, kusari, ILPy, NL, Eon and MC, unless you have already done so. Thank you!! =D
Anyone else?
While generally, that's a good tip, I believe Luke already joined Squad 7 as 5th seat. :p

Well, I already sent Golde links on the revamp posts, so...If you do decide to just edit your original zan post, let me know so I can have a list to give to Golde.


http://i53.*******.com/xask9.jpg
We've managed before, Golde trusts us to look after the thread while he's gone - it'll be fine

Arceus03 I've already updated my Zanpaktou page =]
That gif is amazingly brilliant. *Is trying to kind of sound Brit* :p

Ok, I'll start my list with you, Kida....

arceus03
28th April 2011, 6:00 PM
Oh, yeah, led by whom? you? good luck with that.

Arceus03 I've already updated my Zanpaktou page =]

I love it when you're being sarcastic. :p

Thanks :)


While generally, that's a good tip, I believe Luke already joined Squad 7 as 5th seat. :p

Well, I already sent Golde links on the revamp posts, so...If you do decide to just edit your original zan post, let me know so I can have a list to give to Golde.

Ok, I'll start my list with you, Kida....

Well yeah, that's him. Since we have, like, 3 or 4 new members recently, they might want to choose a squad as well before getting listed as spirit and possibly getting stuck to that list for a long period of time. That way, you can compile all the things he'd need to update in one PM, rather than sending lots of them which he might miss.

Ah. I didn't know that. But somehow, I still think it's better to edit the original post so as not to bother Golde too much. Plus, we don't know how long it'll be before he actually comes online and edit the first page, so if anyone wants to have a look at the zanpakto page, it's better to head to the front page rather than PMing you/shuffling through pages of long-arse posts. Still, whatever floats his luggage I guess.

I believe apart from NL, ILPy also have edited his zanpakto page.



Unless I'm seeing things, ILP is the one who posted second in this thread. And he's pretty active. I mean, it's not a GREAT solution, but if we don't want to get a mod involved (for whatever reason) it might not be a bad idea just to add it to the second post for now...

IF it MUST be on the front page ASAP, which I don't really know why it'd have to be...

Just put it in your sig or something, for now... I dunno. Sorry I'm kinda low on ideas now... XD

That post was unfortunately ILPy's zanpakto post as well. If you want him to use that post as a second update or whatever, it means he'll have to make a new zanpakto page.

Though, solid point there. It's not like it's a compulsory necessity for the first post to be updated. If there's anyone who actually reads the first post every time he/she comes to this club, tell me. I'll give that person a free batch of cookies for one week. That doesn't include those who are just starting to read it after you have read this post, thank you. XP

Putting it in your sig works. XDD



He can most possibly be one of the fastest shinigami in the gotei 13


I suggest you edit that before rotrum bombards you with his nonstop ice daggers. You have been warned. :p Speaking of rotrum, he too revamped his zanpakto, but has edited his original page, Zameric.

MasterCharizard15
28th April 2011, 7:36 PM
See, the Captains are co-owners of the club, so as you can see:
WE have everything under control so there is no need for a new club.

@Arc wasn't those supposed to be hard copys of people's zan? Either way, I agree.

@Zam -I'm going to edit my first zanpaktou page then.

...>.>

Rank the other Zanpaktou here based on how much you would like to use them? (Your own can be #0 or #1 so meh.)

...*sits with popcorn and waits for the fun*

Northern Lights
28th April 2011, 7:57 PM
Rank the other Zanpaktou here based on how much you would like to use them?

Oh, jeez, hang on, let me find them all christ almighty >.<

Cell - Siska (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11896771&postcount=2584) - Kido
Kida - Ryookami (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10614566&postcount=11) - Multielement
Arceus03 - Tsukibana (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11521344&postcount=1894) - Water
Arenak - Kinzoku Gekijou (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11521344&postcount=1894) - Electricity
Flash Step - Kitsune na Hii (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10854834&postcount=430) - Fire
Minchan - Tsuyokin (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11461278&postcount=1712) - Fire
MasterCharizard - Iroriryuu (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10614486&postcount=91712) - Fire
SapphireDragon - Shippu no Hana (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671482&postcount=168) - Earth/Wind
EonMaster - Tanryoku no Rei (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671643&postcount=172) - Spirit
Senbonzakura - Mugenyume (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10616781&postcount=30) - Kido
Zameric - Keiri (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10619087&postcount=38) - Kido
Rotrum - Yuki Sendou (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10624868&postcount=70) - Ice
VizardBlue - Kagebu (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11277335&postcount=1110) - Shadow/Kido
I Like Pokemon - Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10613979&postcount=2) - Time/Space
Kusari - Shinkiro (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11675432&postcount=2174) - Kido

I'll Rank them later
EDIT: Ranked in Spoiler
1) Kida - Ryookami (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10614566&postcount=11) - Multielement - It's my own, so obviously I prefer it over anyone elses.
2) Arceus03 - Tsukibana (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11521344&postcount=1894) - Water - I'm partial to Water types, and Tsukibana is so pretty =3
3) Rotrum - Yuki Sendou (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10624868&postcount=70) - Ice - Also partial to Ice Types as well, and with the revamp long distance attacks would suit my fighting stratedgy
4) Cell - Siska (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11896771&postcount=2584) - Kido - I love the shikai because Archery is awesome, and I always loved the idea of charging arrows before firing them with different spells, plus hummingbird, aww.
5) EonMaster - Tanryoku no Rei (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671643&postcount=172) - Spirit - The only reason this isn't higher is because i'm not really one for close quarter combat, which the Shikai is kinda designed for
6) VizardBlue - Kagebu (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11277335&postcount=1110) - Shadow/Kido - Manipulation of shadows and moving through the dark, totally my thing =D
7) Senbonzakura - Mugenyume (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10616781&postcount=30) - Kido - being able to change the state at which somethign exists would be very useful, turning a solid projectile into liquid to reduce damage
8) I Like Pokemon - Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10613979&postcount=2) - Time/Space - I would eventually confuse myself XD
9) SapphireDragon - Shippu no Hana (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671482&postcount=168) - Earth/Wind - Uses the same sort of Element ideas, and the fan reminds me of Temari
10) MasterCharizard - Iroriryuu (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10614486&postcount=91712) - Fire - Fire is not my favourite but it has a Dragon Spirit plus I could use Death Canon >D

I like Pokemon (...)
28th April 2011, 8:12 PM
"I cannot die." Ryaku said.

Jaku was puzzled.
He took him literally? It just sounds like an arrogant comment.


It was morning, I was dispatched to take down Espada number 4, Ulquiorra. When I found him we engaged in battle, but before I was able to unleash the full might of my bankai, he pierced me through the heart.
Here's the thing. You're going to use our Gotei 13, correct? But then Ulquiorra would not have been created, because Aizen does not exist. We can't imagine it like the Bleach anime/manga but with us, because we'd do different things. It doesn't work out.

He dropped me, turned and left me to rot in Hueco Mundo. I died that day, but what seemed like minutes later, I awoke to a strange light.
I hope you're planning on explaining that later.

They both released their bankai, and Ryaku agreed to come with them.
This is just stupid. Eon says "stop fighting!" Goes Bankai, and then they all stop and Ryaku "agrees to come with them" even though no one asked about it.


well if he doesnt come back in the aforementioned month, we ARE going to have to do something, because it isnt updating and it NEEDS to be organized

and your profile reminds me, I need my power levels and backstory put in

Overall- / 600

Offense- 90
Jaku is extremely powerful when it comes to his attacks, however, due to the widespread effectiveness of some, the accuracy is so-so. With his light-speed sword strikes, he can attack extremely quickly dealing alot of damage


Defense- 80
Jaku is not very keen at defending in shikai, but in bankai his defense is kicked up a notch, with his shield and armor, he can block most incoming attacks, making his defense a key asset


Mobility- 100
Jaku can move at near light-speeds and is extremely agile, and this physical ability is merely amplified with bankai as he gains wings and his speed is increased. He can most possibly be one of the fastest shinigami in the gotei 13

Kido / Reiatsu- 70
Jaku has quite a bit of reiatsu himself, though most of that would be expended in his first few attacks, he relies on his zanpakuto absorbing solar energy and converting it into spiritual energy go green, with solar panel swords!

Intelligence- 100
Jaku has a photographic memory and his mind can work as fast (if not faster) than his reflexes, he can think quick and analyze the situation to every possible outcome, and uses his personally designed glasses to analyze his opponents and locate their weak spots. He likes playing it slow at first so he can learn his opponent's patterns and identify their weaknesses, though when he really gets going for a fight, he often rushes into things
Yeahno. Most Captains are around the 480-510, I believe. There's no way you're getting anywhere close to that.
There's also no way Rotrum's letting you get 100 mobility, and there's no way I'm letting you get 100 intelligence. There are very few people I'll allow get 100, you're not one of them.

I was thinking, if something absolutely NEEDS to be added to the front page, why not put it in the second post, for until Golde has a chance to add it to the first one?

Unless I'm seeing things, ILP is the one who posted second in this thread. And he's pretty active. I mean, it's not a GREAT solution, but if we don't want to get a mod involved (for whatever reason) it might not be a bad idea just to add it to the second post for now... IF it MUST be on the front page ASAP, which I don't really know why it'd have to be...

Just put it in your sig or something, for now... I dunno. Sorry I'm kinda low on ideas now... XD
That's actually a good idea.
I can split my post into 2: the original post, and the club details. If I have enough space (as in, i won't run out of text), then I can copy and paste the club, and make changes, so when Golde comes, all he has to do is update his first post with whatever I have.
I have a 4 day weekend, and this I'll get my *** into gear and make it. I might even go through the club so I pick up all the smaller things, and those "I feel like doing this." list.

Wow. I have loved bleach for a long time, But i have been cursed with the lack to remember there names, I watch it every saturday on CN. I would love to join this Club that honors such a great show. : )

Zachiru Forever~
Welcome to the Bleach Club, Ice Heart! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...), but I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

yes, welcome Ice^^ *troughs a drinking party in the squad 8 main building*
and there's tea for the younger folks or none drinkers^^
I believe squad 5 is the resident party squad :p


What are those for?

Stop posting what you felt like doing and start posting what you actually did damnit. :p
Now I feel like making a list of what you said you felt like doing, just so... you know.. XP
Wait, is "making a list of what I felt like doing and posting them in the Club" a part of your "top 50 things you want to do before you die"? :P
What do you mean? The school just gets a subscription of an anime/manga magazine, and if you guys want a photocopy of any of the articles, I can do it.

HOPEFULLY if I go through the club, I can make a list.


[QUOTE=Cell;12401838]The only time when this club will make a new thread is when it just gets too big and disorganised OR when GOLDE HIMSELF PASSES THE TORCH TO SOMEONE ELSE. It's fine as it is now.
I wonder who he'd pass the torch to? Zam is the one who keeps all the updates while he's away, soooo...

That gif is amazingly brilliant. pip pip cheerio and a cuppa tea *Is trying to kind of sound Brit* :p
Fix'd

Rank the other Zanpaktou here based on how much you would like to use them? (Your own can be #0 or #1 so meh.)

I'll answer this when I make that new first post. It'll just be a LOT easier for everyone.

Eon Master
28th April 2011, 8:22 PM
He can most possibly be one of the fastest shinigami in the gotei 13

Umno. If you're talking straight flash step speed, Rotrum is the fastest, but once Shikai is activated I'm faster. There's no comparison in Bankai, as my speed is only limited by how much spirit energy I can focus into my nerve endings and I have a lot of freaking spirit energy.

...plus, there's no way you're faster than a Captain when you're only 5th seat. Unless that Captain is really freaking slow and you're like, Hermes or something >.>

And like ILP said, only a few of us can claim to have 100 intelligence. If you can read through his and my discussions on the physics of the Big Bang without your head exploding, I might consider it or we could ask Chaotic Tyrant to rank you, I'm sure he'll be fair xD

Speaking of Bankai, CyberBlaziken is creating his, he just needs my help with the translations.

Rank the other Zanpaktou here based on how much you would like to use them? (Your own can be #0 or #1 so meh.)

I'll edit this later.

Lucario0708
28th April 2011, 9:56 PM
I always used google translate for my zanpakto translations

and on speed, consider this

his ability states that due to his quick reflexes and the state of bankai, his speed is increased to near light speed which makes him able to do a regular sprint almost as fast as a flash step, and do the flash step himself, also considering in bankai he has WINGS which means he can now FLY through the air at high speeds

the intelligence, errrrrr derp??????
more seriously, I understood your conversations on the big bang, and though I think it is plausible, it is the fact that Where did the energy come from? An explosion needs energy where did it come from? im not talking about the huge mass that is sipposedly what the universe was, im talking about what caused it to explode

and ILP, we can only see in 3 dimensions, stop ranting about 4th, 10th, whatever dimensions, as those are on par with black holes

now the truth is, can you handle my explanation of punnett squares? i think i spelled punnett wrong.....

anyway, If you are so inclined of the INT, then i will drop it down to 80, sound better?

on the bleach note, SHOULD I GET some of the bleach seasons on dvd?

@arc: its not a wedding, but you will see, you may even already know.........

MasterCharizard15
28th April 2011, 10:22 PM
I always used google translate for my zanpakto translations

and on speed, consider this

his ability states that due to his quick reflexes and the state of bankai, his speed is increased to near light speed which makes him able to do a regular sprint almost as fast as a flash step, and do the flash step himself, also considering in bankai he has WINGS which means he can now FLY through the air at high speeds

He shouldn't be that fast, at all. If he was, his other stats and abilities would have to downgraded to balance him out. Also moving at suck speeds would cause friction burn along with a mutliude of other things that would not be pretty.

Also that level of Speed is godmod territory, if Captains can't get away with using that level, what makes you think you can? Seriously, tell me why we should even entertain the idea of actually approving that.


the intelligence, errrrrr derp??????
more seriously, I understood your conversations on the big bang, and though I think it is plausible, it is the fact that Where did the energy come from? An explosion needs energy where did it come from? im not talking about the huge mass that is sipposedly what the universe was, im talking about what caused it to explode

and ILP, we can only see in 3 dimensions, stop ranting about 4th, 10th, whatever dimensions, as those are on par with black holes

now the truth is, can you handle my explanation of punnett squares? i think i spelled punnett wrong.....

Aside from the numerous spelling errors and condescending attitude to Captain/Co-Owner/Senior members here. You haven't show us any reason why he should be that high in intelligence. You haven't proved or showed us ANY reason why we should believe he is that smart, at all, just telling us he is 100 is not going to fly so long as I am active here.

Now if you gave a DETAILED explanation like the people who actually have a 100 intelligence mark here, then we would hold a Captain's meeting to discuss rather or not to allow it.

Finally, DON'T EVER talk to Ant in show a disrespectful way again, I won't tolerate it.


anyway, If you are so inclined of the INT, then i will drop it down to 80, sound better?

Honestly, 50 is average , 75 is very intelligent and 100 is genius.

Now I was being nice, but now it seems I need to be a Royal that actually does something.

Repost your stats with details explaining why they are that level, also remember that he is a 5th seat member, not a Captain.

Also if you DARE to respond to this or any other Captains' responses to your posts with disrespect and outright condescending sarcasm, I will not be responsible for anything they say or will fight to keep you here, other members nerves have been taxed over situations like this.

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 10:22 PM
I always used google translate for my zanpakto translations

and on speed, consider this

his ability states that due to his quick reflexes and the state of bankai, his speed is increased to near light speed which makes him able to do a regular sprint almost as fast as a flash step, and do the flash step himself, also considering in bankai he has WINGS which means he can now FLY through the air at high speeds.........


Wings are slower than flash step. Air resistance derp?
Also as someone who's a new member and not even a captain, don't you think you're making yourself overpowered in literally every field?

the intelligence, errrrrr derp??????
more seriously, I understood your conversations on the big bang, and though I think it is plausible, it is the fact that Where did the energy come from? An explosion needs energy where did it come from? im not talking about the huge mass that is sipposedly what the universe was, im talking about what caused it to explode

Sipposedly. Until you start spelling all your words correctly, and start using punctuation, I refuse to believe your intelligence is 100. Mine could only be, what, about 90? You should really ask Ant on this.

EDIT: Anybody like my new sig?

kusari
28th April 2011, 10:29 PM
so, here's some update for ya.

Fic: New chapter in progress. Hoping to finish soon.

Luke: You should've expected this kind of reaction. Like it was mentioned a page back, you're a FIFTH seat and have a score higher than most captains. My intelligence is only 80 and that's because I know that I don't know everything and can except that. Chiggity-check yourself before you wreck yourself homeslice. (trying to sound like Jason Bateman's character from Dodgeball.) In that respect, I agree with MC. You've been really acting high and mighty towards Captains, especially Golde who you've practically suggested we oust and leave you in charge. As MC said above, if you keep acting this way, don't expect me to protect you.

Luke's fic: Did you take my advice from before? It seems that you're trying too hard or not hard enough.

NL's answer to topic: You should check out my new Zan. It's a little more offensive than the last one.

Zam: I'll be changing my existing Zan page.


So yeah. I'll be back at some point.

minchan
28th April 2011, 10:33 PM
arc... I thought we all established that I run a bakery with more cookies than anyone else in the soul society? XD

NL... err... My zanpakuto is both fire and kido based. Just sayin'~~

PKMN Trainer Rex
28th April 2011, 10:45 PM
Looks like a lots been going on since the last time I've been on. (I had errands and exams to deal with.) Anyone care to catch me up?

I like Pokemon (...)
28th April 2011, 11:15 PM
And like ILP said, only a few of us can claim to have 100 intelligence. If you can read through his and my discussions on the physics of the Big Bang without your head exploding, I might consider it or we could ask Chaotic Tyrant to rank you, I'm sure he'll be fair xD
No, even then, I wouldn't. All it would take is a few reads over the explanation, and a bit of researching on some words you don't know, and you can understand it easily.


his ability states that due to his quick reflexes and the state of bankai, his speed is increased to near light speed which makes him able to do a regular sprint almost as fast as a flash step, and do the flash step himself, also considering in bankai he has WINGS which means he can now FLY through the air at high speeds
Near light speeds, that's actually funny that you thought you could add that in.
And we can all fly already.

the intelligence, errrrrr derp??????
more seriously, I understood your conversations on the big bang, and though I think it is plausible, it is the fact that Where did the energy come from? An explosion needs energy where did it come from? im not talking about the huge mass that is sipposedly what the universe was, im talking about what caused it to explode
It probably helps that I pretty much said that.

and ILP, we can only see in 3 dimensions, stop ranting about 4th, 10th, whatever dimensions, as those are on par with black holes
Excuse me? Give me one good reason why I should even treat you with an ounce of respect after you give me this attitude.

now the truth is, can you handle my explanation of punnett squares? i think i spelled punnett wrong.....
Punnet squares? Easy as pie.


EDIT: Anybody like my new sig?
Awesome. Photoshop?


arc... I thought we all established that I run a bakery with more cookies than anyone else in the soul society? XD
Sorry Min, Arc has you beat there. But Squad 5 does have the largest brewery, winery and... err... yeah, my knowledge on alcohol clearly doesn't rival that on 4D XD.

Red Globe
28th April 2011, 11:32 PM
Awesome. Photoshop?



No, surprisingly. Also, Ant, what do you think my int. would be?

If I wasn't on my aunt's laptop, I'd type my zan up right now

rotrum
28th April 2011, 11:39 PM
I added markers at the top of each description to make it less confuzzling




Cut your strings, puppet

(Destroyed Soul Society, outside of metal bunker)

“Bahamut…You’ll pay for all you’ve done!” The armored man screamed, punching the air twice more as he bombarded Aleph with balls of intense energy.

“Hehehe…” Aleph giggled, a crooked smile upon his face as the energy balls approached him at high speeds. With inhuman reflexes, he dodged them without getting hit once. His body bent backwards such that his head hit the ground as he went underneath the beginning of the onslaught, and he jumped high into the air to get himself into safety. “You can’t defeat me” Water began rushing around him, coating his body in water. Every movement was mimicked by his water armor-practically causing him to become larger.

“Soulgain, Unlock limiters. Code: EG-X.” The man’s armor suddenly grew around him-until a suit of armor about 1.5 times the size of Aleph’s water armor had formed. The armor was clearly very strong and now a helmet lie where his head usually was. His speed was insane, at the limits of the human body. The two grappled with each other, a reiatsu-enchanced surface tension causing the water and armor to strike each other as if the water was solid.

“Seiryurin!” He put his hands back, the armor around him following the movement, as energy gathered in his armor’s hands. The energy glowed a bright blue before he thrusted forwards, energy coming out in the form of an energy beam (Think Turtle Wave.) Aleph easily jumped to the side as the beam didn’t even skid the water.

“Genbu Goudan!” This time his blades began spinning around his arm again at high speeds, He punched forwards but now the energy was behind the fist rather than jetting out in front of. He fired the gauntlet of his armor off using the gathered energy as propulsion. The water-covered Aleph barrel-rolled to the side as the fist skidded across his water-armor-which quickly regained the small loss of form.

They moved at a speed far past the normal capabilities of the human body, while Aleph was moving with ease; the other man clearly was past his limit as he fought. His body was taking damage in itself, yet he never gave up. “Die, Bahamut. Mai Suzaku!” He shouted as he punched forward, his arm-blade spinning rapidly as energy pierced through the water. With insane power, he punched straight through Aleph-rushing past the water-covered foe anime-style. He panted and smiled at his victory. Aleph cackled madly as his wound regenerated itself. It was horrid. His Zanpakutou could not possibly have healed such a serious wound so quickly. Yet Aleph was standing already with no wound.

Then, his body began to morph, muscles becoming defined, limbs stretching beyond their normal length, his face remained cackling with insanity as his body changed into a monstrous being. Parts of his skin were discoloured, his entire body became a work of fiction along the lines of Frankenstein and other monsters. But the worst was his facial expression. As his face slowly became beyond recognizable, he was cackling with insanity, his eyes full of bloodlust.

Somewhere in this, the other figure thought he heard Aleph’s voice somehow

“So long…Good…Bye.”
______
(Beginning of meeting about Chii)

The captains gathered in the Meeting Hall, an emergency meeting having to do with Kida’s return, was all Hell Butterflies told them. But the Meeting was a class A, so everyone arrived uniformly on time.

“Now at this point we all know that Kida has returned from her leave following the war with Magnus and his other allies?” Everyone nodded in agreement to Golde’s opening. “Now, everyone remembers the actual war, the final battle with the enemy, Codename Operation Artingent (Made-up words are fun.)” This time almost everyone hesitated before agreeing.
______
(Operation Artingent Briefing)

“Operation Artingent will be carried out in Three Phases. Phase one will be lead by Rotrum and Furash (As Jin said, Just Flash with a heavy Japanese accent), who will rush Magnus’ base from each side with an eighth of the shinigami forces on each side. After the initial assault they’ll retreat and surround the base long enough to drive out the enemy forces. At this point Phase Two begins, lead by Jordan and myself. We will first be hiding some distance from the base from all directions in several groups. These groups will make up another quarter of our forces altogether and will provide an aerial assault. Another quarter of our troops will participate in Phase Three. Lead by Aleph, the troops will provide support to the ongoing battles and attempt to break through the structure. After that is all improvisation based on how the battle is going.” Ryuu explained the plan he had laid out, which was followed by an animation of the base getting attacked, surrounded, attacked aerially, and invaded. Little avatars represented each captain as well as Magnus and his known allies.
______
(Partway through meeting about Chii)

“Good. You all recall what happened as we first began to gain the advantage?”

“Lilith appeared” someone called out from the lined up captains.

“Yes, the battle quickly turned into their favor against her onslaught of kidou and raw energy-no one could touch her due to her powerful barrier, the same barrier we had found to be nearly unbreakable when we attempted to penetrate the base. Around that time Luppi, Gibull, and Jin appeared, and soon after the tide of battle changed. After destroying her barrier the resulting explosion took out the entire enemy base and good portion of our forces, but we had finally claimed victory.”

“…So why are you bringing it up?” A questioning voice came from the audience of captains and test teams.

“Lilith, no, Chii was Kida’s sister.”

And then, for a while, utter silence.
______
(Present-Time)

Ryuu heard the signal. It was time.

“Just one, Golde-Soutaichou…” said Twelfth Captain Ryuu Schiffer. The other captains looked at him in a mixture of confusion and apprehension about what he could possibly say. Suddenly he was in Bankai before anyone could blink, and his reiatsu pressure came crashing through the room. The entire Meeting Hall exploded outwards as the Captains found themselves frozen in time. “Your decision will be invalidated.”

“A coup!?” questioned Jordan angrily, unable to move most of his body at a significant speed. “Weren’t you our friend!?”

“Never. I was sent here as a scout. Now stop trying to over power my time paralysis or I will self-destruct, taking all of you as well as the entire center of the Sereitei out.” Ryuu said uniformly, his entire body straightened until he may as well have been a talking statue.

Three figures in Captain’s Haoris suddenly descended on the paralyzed shinigami. An imposing man with long green hair, followed by a beautiful woman with long pink hair and another woman with long emerald-colored hair, stood in the middle of the Captain’s Hall. Ryuu nodded to them and shunpo’d until he was using Golde as a wall to lean back against.

“Shinigami. My name is Mauser Vindel, leader of the Shadow-Mirrors. We seek to create the perfect world” The Green-haired man, apparently named Vindel, said solemnly, looking at Golde’s undisturbed eyes with an equally emotionless visage.

“Everyone has a different opinion of what the perfect world is” Noted Kusari skeptically.

“My perfect world…Is a world of constant turmoil, where conflict is a part of daily life. That is the only way to kept the world from growing stagnant, to spur progress.” Vindel answered calmly, entertaining the bound captains.

Horror was strewn across the Captain’s faces, the only part of them that could move-apparently. “That’s insane, a world of constant struggle!?” Aleph cried out, angered by the thought due to his peaceful nature.

“How is it progress, you’ll destroy the world!” Jordan lashed out, bitter from his lack of mobility.

“To those who like to fight, like you and I, that might just be an ideal world, but to those who don’t, it’s HELL!” Cameron said, a bit of anger in his voice.

“I.L.P. add gravity binds to these arguing fools.” Vindel commanded, and soon the captains were weighed to the ground-unable to move at all.

“Ugh…I.L.P., is that what they call you!?” Cameron yelled with a burning passion.

“…Why Ryuu...” Muttered Chii, who was simply against the ground-staring at the situation with tears in her eyes.

“Destruction renews the world and keeps it from growing stagnant. The strong survive and live on to eliminate the weak. From the destruction is new birth. Look at how quickly the EWX team progressed-to a level that years decades to reach normally-in such a short time because there was a threat. Destruction spurs growth that Humanity need to survive.” Vindel responded, justifying his viewpoint while maintaining a steady composure.

“…That is true. Turmoil and chaos create destruction, and from Destruction comes new technologies and innovations that were spurred by threat of annihilation. But…” Rotrum admitted.

“Yes…But the losses that come from a war far outweigh any benefits that could possibly come out of it.” Golde finally chipped into the argument.

Ryuu looked stunned at their arguments, he wasn’t programmed to think, he needed to complete the mission and that was all. And yet, these people he knew for so long, these people he’d befriended…Even in the Human World, If this was to happen…He shook his head.

“Yes…The losses of a war will always outweigh any benefits presented.” Ryuu looked up as the captains suddenly found themselves able to move again. He shunpo’d behind Vindel rapidly, “We…never should have come to this world” He said, teary-eyed, as he grabbed Vindel and began to fly upwards with his bankai’s wings.

“What are you doing!?” Shrieked Cameron and the Pink-haired woman at the same time.

Their question was quickly answered as Vindel struggled against Ryuu, heavily damaging the cyborg. But Ryuu was adamant as they flew skyward-until they were barely even a dot in the sky.

“Initiate Code: ATA. Ash To Ash.”

The explosion filled the air, easily smashing through the barrier around the Sereitei, despite having been so far away from the ground. The entire sky became dark with the smoke and fire rained from the sky-some of it putting itself out in the trip. A single body fell to the ground.



Lucario, you can't join a place, and instantly tell everyone what to dom ow to do it, and assert yourself into a position of superiority. You come in, Vy for a captain's spot, order some people around, downright disrespect some people, and even suggest we make a new club and abandon Golde. YOu even buff your stats up pretty high and give yourself insane speed and intelligence. I rule in speed, and Eon only surpasses me because he is basically distilled essense of Glass Cannon on Wheels with essense of roadrunner and a dash of overreactive nerves

Besides, Wings aren't important since shinigami can walk on Air. Technically, I could use both my mind and my body to move. I'm already fast, but I could just create ice to push me in sync with my movements..

Eon Master
29th April 2011, 12:13 AM
Yeah, half my post got deleted and I cba to go back and re-do it while on my phone, so meh.


more seriously, I understood your conversations on the big bang, and though I think it is plausible, it is the fact that Where did the energy come from? An explosion needs energy where did it come from?

Technically, the energy already existed in the molecular bonds of the matter. All it would take would be a single unstable neutron to unbalance the entire mass, which often occurs through radioactive decay. If the mass was mostly or entirely unstable, it would cause a chain reaction and start the Big Bang. Antimatter meeting matter in a very minute quantity at the singularity point is more likely, but explaining that would likely harm small children.


and ILP, we can only see in 3 dimensions, stop ranting about 4th, 10th, whatever dimensions, as those are on par with black holes


Luke just because you can't see something doesn't mean it doesn't exist. Emotions, for example. Or time.


now the truth is, can you handle my explanation of punnett squares? i think i spelled punnett wrong.....

If you don't understand punnett squares by the age of 13, that's pathetic.

God dammit, now I remember just why I found you irritating in IGRMT.

Ice Heart
29th April 2011, 1:24 AM
Hi Guys! I was just wondering if somone can tell me what it is I should do next :)

minchan
29th April 2011, 1:48 AM
No ILP. I run THE bakery of the soul society. It's part of who I am.
And I'm not stopping others from making cookies. But I make MORE of them. And BETTER ones.

RAWR.

Besides, I'm underage so I can't drink alcohol anyway. THAT'S WHY I have my bakery! RIGHT. NEXT. DOOR. XD

Because I'm smart like that. YEAHHHH.

...Whenever my captain stops being inactive (LOL) I think squad 5 should open up a whole restaurant chain or something........................ End random....

Okay I totally went off topic there. Errrrr sorry...? But I REALLLLLLY like my cookies....... =D

Ummmm anyway. er...
Did I miss something?? I'm pretty out of it these days, nearly failing school because of... lots of things. Anyway I've kinda-sorta just been skimming most posts here (and on all the other forums I visit, actually) so I might have missed something... What's going on with Lucario.....?

Oh and uhhh Ice... umm....... XD

Well this week's kinda slow I guess... we usually talk about the new manga chapters and uhh various things. But there's no new manga this week... And umm Did you create a zanpakuto or profile or anything yet? (Sorry if you did, like I said, I have been kinda... skimming the thread!!) If not, you can do that...... And just chat with us all..... We probably won't bite. Unless you're disguised as a cookie. =P

Okay that was really not funny... I'm sorry.

But yeah... Uhh, really, just chatting with us is fine... About Bleach, about the club itself... Yeah. Sorry I'm still really out of it right now, for some reasonnnn...

Ohhh umm sorry this got SOOOO long. Yeahh I uhh got carried away typing random stuff again. Sorrrrrryyyyyy~~~~~~~~~ (But I bet most of you are already used to this from me!!!) lol

Ice Heart
29th April 2011, 1:59 AM
Do I just fill out the form and post it to the thread? It seems like thats what you do, but i thought I'd ask : )

minchan
29th April 2011, 2:07 AM
For the zanpakuto? Yeah, basically, that's what you do. =)

If you need help with coming up with stuff, we could all give some suggestions... Or take a look through ours and/or canon ones to get ideas... (If you don't have an idea already!)

MasterCharizard15
29th April 2011, 2:21 AM
Do I just fill out the form and post it to the thread? It seems like that is what you do, but i thought I'd ask : )

As long as you read the rules and posted that secret word, then next step would be to make your zanpaktou. Afterward your profile, but if you need help on any of that, feel free to ask.

I'm the captain of Squad 6, you can call me MC.

Ice Heart
29th April 2011, 2:48 AM
Wow thanks guys. I've already came up with a name and some other details. When I work out the rest of the kinks I'll post the filled out from. Heres a preview the name of my Zanpaktou. Ōrorafenikkusu. I iz exited!

Lucario0708
29th April 2011, 3:03 AM
i'm sorry, i'm not trying to act like an idiotic ***, im sorry if i offended anyone and it's clear i should shut up and revise my actions, though some may have misunderstood my true intentions, it is my fault for wording them in the way I did. And i'm NOT trying to assert myself, i'd rather stay a lowly grunt really, too much attention gives me stress, and you don't want to see me when i'm stressful, as all hell may break loose

again, my deepest apologies, i am truly sorry

now, back to my previously ignored topic

My best buy has several installments of the bleach anime, which season(s) do you guys recommend?

badmanjaro
29th April 2011, 3:09 AM
i'm sorry, i'm not trying to act like an idiotic ***, im sorry if i offended anyone and it's clear i should shut up and revise my actions, though some may have misunderstood my true intentions, it is my fault for wording them in the way I did. And i'm NOT trying to assert myself, i'd rather stay a lowly grunt really, too much attention gives me stress, and you don't want to see me when i'm stressful, as all hell may break loose

again, my deepest apologies, i am truly sorry

now, back to my previously ignored topic

My best buy has several installments of the bleach anime, which season(s) do you guys recommend?

It's all cool! I'm sure you didn't really mean it! So when gold comes back, I'm guessing i can find a squad I like?


@Mc building your profile?

Zameric
29th April 2011, 5:21 AM
Rank the other Zanpaktou here based on how much you would like to use them?
I'm only gonna list like my top five...

1. Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon) - MasterCharizard15

Probably my favorite fire type zanpakuto in the club.
2. Chikara o Hauringu (Howling force) - badmanjaro

This would be number one if he'd update it with some of my name suggestions. xD
3. Kagebu (Shadow's Veil) - VizardBlue

I love the idea of shadow hopping and manipulation
4. Tsukibana (Moon Flower) - arceus03

Really cool water elemental zanpakuto.
4. Tsuyokin (Golden Force I think) - minchan

Because throwing around a giant flaming shuriken just sounds cool!
I'd probably make a few tweaks to each of these, though. :p


I wonder who he'd pass the torch to? Zam is the one who keeps all the updates while he's away, soooo...

Fix'd
I think we've had that convo with Golde before.
If I remember right, his first pick would probably be Kida.
If not Kida, I'd think probably you, Eon, Arc or maybe me.

lmao XD


@Zam -I'm going to edit my first zanpaktou page then.

Zam: I'll be changing my existing Zan page.
Ok, I'll add you two to the list.


Speaking of Bankai, CyberBlaziken is creating his, he just needs my help with the translations.
Just have him send me or Jin a PM.


arc... I thought we all established that I run a bakery with more cookies than anyone else in the soul society? XD
Uh-oh, I sense a spat coming on.
Get the popcorn!


Wow thanks guys. I've already came up with a name and some other details. When I work out the rest of the kinks I'll post the filled out from. Heres a preview the name of my Zanpaktou. Ōrorafenikkusu. I iz exited!
That's Engrish for Aurora Phoenix, right?


So when gold comes back, I'm guessing i can find a squad I like?
Well, you could try to join a squad before then if you want.
But if you'd rather hold off on a serious choice till he comes back, that's fine.

minchan
29th April 2011, 6:43 AM
Zam~
Well Tsuyokin is written with the characters for "strong" and "gold" So it's more like "strong gold" or "golden strength".
And the bankai name is Kokoro no Tsuyokin in which "Kokoro no" is "heart" in the possessive. (golden strength of the heart)

"force" was close though... XD
...You get half a cookie. =P

BTW... uhh... What the heck is that post above me? Did I miss something? are we talking about Acrylic Furniture all of a sudden...? LOL......what... XD

Jinchuuriki Hunter
29th April 2011, 9:01 AM
The post above you should be ignored.

Anyway, I've been kinda wondering if intelligence really is that important a stat? Or at least, the intelligence you guys seem to be referring to here. Knowing what a punnett square is and being able to analyze your opponent's weakness are two different kinds of intelligence, and one of them is rather useless in battle.
That said, bragging about knowing what punnett squares are gives me the impression that an intelligence level of 100 should not be warranted. Maybe somewhere around half that value.


Ōrorafenikkusu

That's Engrish for Aurora Phoenix, right?
Looks like someone's catching on.
If you need a more Japanese sounding name, I could suggest Nanairoi Hyouten Fushidori. Unfortunately, there is no native Japanese word for "aurora" so I just went with "seven-coloured ice sky".

theo_cupent42
29th April 2011, 9:55 AM
O.e - two days away, and four pages further...I gotta come back more often!!!

well, here we go!!! My Zanpakuto. All work was done in adobe illustrator CS4.
The various parts of the zanpakuto are in scale.

From Left to Right:

Zampakuto Spirit: it takes the form of a winged, feathered dragon around 23m in length. It is blue-green in colour.

Sealed form: Two katanas, 1m in length (including hilt). Unwrapped hilt, with hexagonal guard and 3 circles on handle.
Abilities: swords can go through each other.

Shikai: Sora no Yumi (sky bow). command: split the air itself! consists of a bow-and-arrow. The bow has a circle surrounded by another six circles in the centre. for sticklers who claim that a zampakuto must be a form of sword: Bow contains the hilt, while the arrow contains the blade (it's there!!!).

Abilities: Kasai Renshou (Fire Streak): when bow is drawn, name of technique is called. the small blade on the arrow instantly catches on fire, and will not go out unless water touches the arrow. if water touches either my bow or the arrow, it will instantly stop burning, and drop to the ground.

Yajirushi bakuhatsu (exploding arrow): when bow is drawn, the first word of the technique is called. When the arrow hits something, or the second word of the technique is called, then the arrow will explode. if it hits steel, or an apponent's sword, it won't do anything - just fall on the ground. (Japanese grammar sticklers - it's plain form. that's why the を doesn't appear!)

Bankai: Sora no Ken (Sky Sword)
To achieve bankai, bow is drawn, pointing to sky. shouts bankai before firing massive arrow full of riatsu into sky. arrow explodes into large cloud of dust. when it dies down, I am holding my Bankai. It consists of two double-bladed swords, with a hexagonal shield in the centre. the centre of the hexagonally shield is the hilt

Abilities:Swords can move through each other, through me, and through other objects (wears down my durability heavily) without affecting it. cannot go through anything related to a soul (riatsu, attack,body etc.) though.

Kasai Renshou: when first word is said, fire forms on the blades, and when second word is said, the fire streaks off from swords into direction pointing. Again, if water touches swords or fire, it stops dead

Yajirushi bakuhatsu : same as before, except a small ball of riatsu shoots from top tips of sword.

Sanka (join): the two swords merge together, to form one. Heavily affects my durability.


http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/019/e/a/my_zampakuto_by_theo_cupent42-d37lq7j.png

well, there you go! that be my zampakuto.

@kusari: I'd love to join 13th squad!!!
@all the other squad captains/vice captains who offered me positions: sorry, but I've read a lot of bleach, and 13th squad is where I belong. If there is anything I can do to help out your squad, I'm more than happy to help!!!
@everyone: I don't mind being called theo - happens a lot!!!

curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.

Northern Lights
29th April 2011, 11:40 AM
Oh dear, is Kida going to have to discipline some people? Tut tut.


now the truth is, can you handle my explanation of punnett squares? i think i spelled punnett wrong.....

PFFT, XD Punnett Squares? They're so easy, I have had to do them in Biology for as long as I remember, seriously if you're asking ILP if he can understand Punnett Squares you clearly havn't grapsed just how intelligent he is.
You may as well have asked him to understand the biochemistry of muscle contractions.

I'm at 80 intelligence ... maybe I should drop back down to 70 again.


and ILP, we can only see in 3 dimensions, stop ranting about 4th, 10th, whatever dimensions, as those are on par with black holes

... are you serious?
Right, just keep your comments to yourself if you're not sure what sort of reaction you'll receive.


Hi Guys! I was just wondering if somone can tell me what it is I should do next

You could design a Zanpaktou, or make up an In club description of yourself, sort of an RPG character for yourself =] and choose a Squad to join.


BTW... uhh... What the heck is that post above me? Did I miss something? are we talking about Acrylic Furniture all of a sudden...? LOL......what... XD

It's just spam, I reported it.


curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.

Quite afew of us have Fic running set in the "Bleach Club" universe, so sure, go ahead =]
I might see if I can contact Golde, see what's up, unless someone has already done so.

OT: KATES DRESS LOOKS SO PRETTY!

I like Pokemon (...)
29th April 2011, 11:44 AM
No, surprisingly. Also, Ant, what do you think my int. would be?
Probably around 80 or so. It's high for a non-lieutenant/captain member, but I think it fits.



“Soulgain, Unlock limiters. Code: EG-X.” The man’s armor suddenly grew around him-until a suit of armor about 1.5 times the size of Aleph’s water armor had formed. The armor was clearly very strong and now a helmet lie where his head usually was. His speed was insane, at the limits of the human body.
MECHA FIGHT!

Then, his body began to morph, muscles becoming defined, limbs stretching beyond their normal length, his face remained cackling with insanity as his body changed into a monstrous being. Parts of his skin were discoloured, his entire body became a work of fiction along the lines of Frankenstein and other monsters. But the worst was his facial expression. As his face slowly became beyond recognizable, he was cackling with insanity, his eyes full of bloodlust.

Somewhere in this, the other figure thought he heard Aleph’s voice somehow

“So long…Good…Bye.”
This'll be... Odd...

“Now, everyone remembers the actual war, the final battle with the enemy, Codename Operation Artingent (Made-up words are fun.)”
They are.

Ryuu explained the plan he had laid out, which was followed by an animation of the base getting attacked, surrounded, attacked aerially, and invaded. Little avatars represented each captain as well as Magnus and his known allies.
That was a very d'aww image in my head. Is it bad I imagined that chibi style?

“Lilith, no, Chii was Kida’s sister.”
...All right then.

Ryuu heard the signal. It was time.
Let's see how you'll write this.

“A coup!?” questioned Jordan angrily, unable to move most of his body at a significant speed. “Weren’t you our friend!?”
Eh, it should affect their whole body, including mouth and brain, and I'd need to touch them soo... Oh well, it makes for an interesting story :p

“Never. I was sent here as a scout. Now stop trying to over power my time paralysis or I will self-destruct, taking all of you as well as the entire center of the Sereitei out.” Ryuu said uniformly, his entire body straightened until he may as well have been a talking statue.
In which case, he should. On the side that he's fighting, the loss of a single cyborg/scout would be nothing compared to the loss of 13 captains (including Chii).

“To those who like to fight, like you and I, that might just be an ideal world, but to those who don’t, it’s HELL!” Cameron said, a bit of anger in his voice.
That first bit made me lol.

Ryuu looked stunned at their arguments, he wasn’t programmed to think,
That's your turning plot point? He wasn't programmed to think? Well he clearly was, considering how long Ryuu would have been with the Gotei 13. Instead of doing a "last minute I see the light", you should've kept Ryuu as a villain, and if you needed him to die, make someone kill him instead.

“Yes…The losses of a war will always outweigh any benefits presented.” Ryuu looked up as the captains suddenly found themselves able to move again. He shunpo’d behind Vindel rapidly, “We…never should have come to this world” He said, teary-eyed, as he grabbed Vindel and began to fly upwards with his bankai’s wings.
The biggest problem with this realisation is that he only realised it NOW. He'd have known from the very beginning that "the losses outweigh the benefits".

A single body fell to the ground.
And Vindeloo is still alive.


Technically, the energy already existed in the molecular bonds of the matter. All it would take would be a single unstable neutron to unbalance the entire mass, which often occurs through radioactive decay. If the mass was mostly or entirely unstable, it would cause a chain reaction and start the Big Bang. Antimatter meeting matter in a very minute quantity at the singularity point is more likely, but explaining that would likely harm small children.
Matter was super compressed at the very beginning. Things like molecular bonds wouldn't have existed, because it'd just be the most simple form of matter.



Luke just because you can't see something doesn't mean it doesn't exist. Emotions, for example. Or time.
Just because something does - or doesn't - exist, doesn't mean I can't enjoy learning about it. I blab on and on about 4D because I find it interesting, and it makes me think in unusual ways. Applying it to all sorts of other theories just helps me understand both theories even better.


No ILP. I run THE bakery of the soul society. It's part of who I am.
And I'm not stopping others from making cookies. But I make MORE of them. And BETTER ones.
I'm afraid I'll have to disagree with you there :p


again, my deepest apologies, i am truly sorry
Apology accepted, but you're walking on hot coals.

My best buy has several installments of the bleach anime, which season(s) do you guys recommend?
Which episodes are for which DVD? Makes it easier to know what you mean by each "season".

I think we've had that convo with Golde before.
If I remember right, his first pick would probably be Kida.
If not Kida, I'd think probably you, Eon, Arc or maybe me.
Hmm, I don't remember. Oh well.

Just have him send me or Jin a PM.
I'll get some of the PMd data off of you.


O.e - two days away, and four pages further...I gotta come back more often!!!
We had an explosion in activity in the club, that's for sure. Which just gave me an idea...

@kusari: I'd love to join 13th squad!!!
@all the other squad captains/vice captains who offered me positions: sorry, but I've read a lot of bleach, and 13th squad is where I belong. If there is anything I can do to help out your squad, I'm more than happy to help!!!

curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.
So you joined Kusari's squad, good choice.

And yeah, a lot of people are writing fanfics with us as the Gotei 13. As long as you can make your fanfic interesting, and different from others (and don't drop it half way :p) then we'll read it.

CyberBlaziken
29th April 2011, 2:06 PM
Welcome to the Club, New Nembers, I have no idea how many of you have joined :| ( Can someone list me the names XP )
I'm Lieutenant of Squad 7! Call me Kai. Nice to meet you :)

Well yeah, no manga yet. -___-

Zampakuto Name: Koorimizu ('Koori' for Ice "mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Koorimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inch. His attires is a Dark Blue jacket like Ulquiorra's. Along with a sky blue cape. He has Grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle.. he tends to hold back his true powers. Does not like walking, glides instead If he deems his opponent worthy, he does not hold back at all. We are very alike and get along pretty well.

Release Command: Freeze the Icy Water! Koorimizu!

Shikai Details:

http://i56.*******.com/2j3qn43.jpg

Kourimizu in it's released state. The hilt is made of very strong and thin layer of Ice. The blade is blue in clour. Water molecules are sometimes present in the handle.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) - The Clouds start to get darker and it feels like rain is about to fall. Ice Shards rain from the sky, which are sharp as a sword. Can almost cut through anything.
Touketsu Kouzui (Frozen Flood)- If pointed at the enemy, it shoots a blast of my own reiatsu.
Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Freezes Water in the Air and then slash it against the enemy. A bit like Getsuga Tenshou.

Bankai Name: Taisan Koorimizu (Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Koorimizu no longer possesses a base form. Its form is the water vapor into the air, which allows me to manipulate and control.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall. A blue aura engulfs me and i start to radiate reiatsu.
The rain falling also helps recover my reiatsu very little bit by bit.

Attacks: *NOTE : All Shikai Attacks can be used*
Tenka no Akayaiba ( Bloody Blade of Snow) - My sword reforms in a red crystal colour, allowing me to use my basic sword fighting technique
Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - I raise my hand in the sky and ball of energy forms, crystal blue in colour. i lower my hand and point my palm in to the opponents direction and it shoots out ice beams.
Hyoutenka Goryou (Literally Subzero Absolute Tomb) - Final Attack. My hands starts to be covered with water droplets from the falling rain.
i thrust my fist on the ground and my enemy, or enemies, are surrounded with a circle made of my reiatsu. the ground inside the circles turns into a whirlpool which sucks them in and freezes them completely. Breaking free is quite impossible. nearly depletes my reiatsu.


Name: Kaii Blaize

Gender: Male

Squad: 7th Squad

Rank: Lieutenant

Zanpaktou: Koorimizu, sealed form is a broadsword.

Eyes: Hazel, with a deep shade of Orange surrounding the pupil

Hair: Black, slight brown highlights. Hair near my back.Neck almost covered. Slight Bangs, hair reaching the eyebrows.

Height: 6' 1"

Blood Group: O -

Personality: Happy-Go-Lucky personality. Has a Dark side too. i will be cold and rude if i don't know you.. but once you get to knw me.. I'm not bad.
Likes to train hard and perfect his moves. training hard to master Bankai..

Combat Style: Doesn't hold back anything. A bit clever on using Kido. Uses different techniques. Freezes body parts and then attacks sometimes. More Offense than Defense. Reiatsu, crystal blue in colour, will flow out and form the Mask of a Hollow if the fights good enough. Moves at Incredible speeds.
Tends to fully freeze the opponent after battle.

District of origin: 78th District of Rukongai, Inuzuri.

Customized: Black Gloves. Normal Shihakusho, with a black cape.

Backstory: I lived a happy life in the 78th District. i found my family after i died. My family was like a noble there so i had my privileges. I had a few friends there.. but they soon moved away. When my father found out i had shinigami powers.. he enrolled me in the Soul Reaper Academy. There i was top in Kido and my Sword skills was renowned in the Academy.

Combat Stats:

Offense - 90

Defense - 70

Mobility - 85

Kido/Reiatsu - 90

Intelligence - 75

Physical Strength - 80

Overall : 490

Thanks to my Captain, Eon Master
For the Translations and Names xD

And Congrats Kusa :D
Another Squad Member!

Jinchuuriki Hunter
29th April 2011, 2:35 PM
My Zanpakuto. All work was done in adobe illustrator CS4.
The various parts of the zanpakuto are in scale.

From Left to Right:

Zampakuto Spirit: it takes the form of a winged, feathered dragon around 23m in length. It is blue-green in colour.

Sealed form: Two katanas, 1m in length (including hilt). Unwrapped hilt, with hexagonal guard and 3 circles on handle.
Abilities: swords can go through each other.

Shikai: Hoshi no Yume (sky bow). command: split the air itself! consists of a bow-and-arrow. The bow has a circle surrounded by another six circles in the centre. for sticklers who claim that a zampakuto must be a form of sword: Bow contains the hilt, while the arrow contains the blade (it's there!!!).

Abilities: Kasai Renshou (Fire Streak): when bow is drawn, name of technique is called. the small blade on the arrow instantly catches on fire, and will not go out unless water touches the arrow. if water touches either my bow or the arrow, it will instantly stop burning, and drop to the ground.

Bakuhatsu Suru (explode): when bow is drawn, the first word of the technique is called. When the arrow hits something, or the second word of the technique is called, then the arrow will explode. if it hits steel, or an apponent's sword, it won't do anything - just fall on the ground.

Bankai: Hoshi no Ken (Sky Sword)
To achieve bankai, bow is drawn, pointing to sky. shouts bankai before firing massive arrow full of riatsu into sky. arrow explodes into large cloud of dust. when it dies down, I am holding my Bankai. It consists of two double-bladed swords, with a hexagonal shield in the centre. the centre of the hexagonally shield is the hilt

Abilities:Swords can move through each other, through me, and through other objects (wears down my durability heavily) without affecting it. cannot go through anything related to a soul (riatsu, attack,body etc.) though.

Kasai Renshou: when first word is said, fire forms on the blades, and when second word is said, the fire streaks off from swords into direction pointing. Again, if water touches swords or fire, it stops dead

Bakuhastu Suru: same as before, except a small ball of riatsu shoots from top tips of sword.

Sanka (join): the two swords merge together, to form one. Heavily affects my durability.
If I may clear a few things up, "hoshi" means "star", not "sky". Also, "bow" (the weapon that goes with arrow) is "yumi" in Japanese. "Yume" is dream and really, Star Dream is not the type of name you'd want to give to a zanpakutou (unless it shoots rainbows).
So "Sky Bow" would be "Sora no Yumi" and "Sky Sword/Blade" would be "Sora no Ken".
And another thing about your "Bakuhatsu Suru" attack. "Bakuhatsusuru" is actually one word so dividing it into two parts to call out while attacking results in something like this:
You: *Stretches bow* EX-!
You: *Releases bow, arrow zips towards opponent*
You: *Arrow strikes a head* PLODE! *Head dies*
Kinda silly don't you think?


Zampakuto Name: Kourimizu ('Kouri' for Ice "mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Kóurimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inch. His attires is a Dark Blue jacket like Ulquiorra's. Along with a sky blue cape. He has Grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle.. he tends to hold back his true powers. Does not like walking, glides instead If he deems his opponent worthy, he does not hold back at all. We are very alike and get along pretty well.

Release Command: Freeze the Icy Water! Kourimizu!

Shikai Details:



Kourimizu in it's released state. The hilt is made of very strong and thin layer of Ice. The blade is blue in clour. Water molecules are sometimes present in the handle.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) - Ice shards sharp as a sword rains from the sky. Can cut through anything.
Touketsu Kouzui (Frozen Flood)- If pointed at the enemy, it shoots a blast of my own reiatsu.
Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Freezes Water in the Air and then slash it against the enemy

Bankai Name: Taisan Hourimizu (Literally Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Hourimizu no longer possesses a base form. Its form is the water vapor into the air, which allows me to manipulate and control.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall. A blue aura engulfs me and i start to radiate reiatsu.
The rain falling also helps recover my reiatsu very little bit by bit.

Attacks: *NOTE : All Shikai Attacks can be used*
Akayaiba no Tenka ( Bloody Blade of Snow) - My sword reforms in a red crystal colour, allowing me to use my basic sword fighting technique
Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - I raise my hand in the sky and ball of energy forms, crystal blue in colour. i lower my hand and point my palm in to the opponents direction and it shoots out ice beams.
Hyoutenka Goryou (Literally Subzero Absolute Tomb) - Final Attack. My hands starts to be covered with water droplets from the falling rain.
i thrust my fist on the ground and my enemy, or enemies, are surrounded with a circle made of my reiatsu. the ground inside the circles turns into a whirlpool which sucks them in and freezes them completely. Breaking free is quite impossible. nearly depletes my reiatsu.

Sorry Eon, I spot a few mistakes in here.
First of, ice" is not "kouri", it's "koori", which is read as though the second "o" is a seperate syllable. Like "ko'ori".
Also, your bankai changes "kouri" to "houri" for some reason, even though it should be "koori" in both cases.
"Akayaiba no Tenka" doesn't really translate to "Bloody Blade of Snow". It translates to "Sky Flowers of the Red Sword" but I can see what you're getting at there. You just put the two words in the wrong places. Switch them around and you should have no problem. "Tenka no Akayaiba".

And there's no manga because it's Goldenweek. It's kinda like Labour Day except it lasts for 7 days.

CyberBlaziken
29th April 2011, 2:59 PM
Thanks for noting out the mistakes Jin ( Can i call you that?)

The 'kouri' to 'houri' is my mistake. Happens alot, i did that before -__-

And i fixed everything. Thanks again :)

Cell
29th April 2011, 5:01 PM
and on speed, consider this

his ability states that due to his quick reflexes and the state of bankai, his speed is increased to near light speed which makes him able to do a regular sprint almost as fast as a flash step, and do the flash step himself, also considering in bankai he has WINGS which means he can now FLY through the air at high speeds


Light speed movement would result into severe tunnel vision.. you wouldn't be able to see anything. Even if your gadget would transmit the image directly to the brain, it would still not help. As the time to factor in the image, calculate what happens in the image, would be far too long for it to work. As if you see a tree... you'd already smacked against it. Quick reflexes or not.

Next point is that you'd have to start slowing down while being MILES away from your destination, an object in movement wants to stay moving at the same speed.

I'll take driving a car as a main example.

If you're driving at 120km/h. And before you there would be an accident or an obstacle.
You'd have: 3 seconds to register what's happening, another 2 seconds for you to decide what the best course of action would be, another second for you transmit the neural sign to your feet to brake.
Then you have to factor in the stopping distance, which would be around.. 174 meters. Now this is only when going at 120km/h. Not 300K Km/h.

Plus, if you factor in your stopping distance at THAT velocity... I don't want you anywhere near me when you stop...


Plus anything you would hit while moving at that speed, would obliterate you... Each action has an equal reaction.


Now, all this doesn't even factor in the friction with the air. Nor the immense pressure your body would have to able to resist..

And no, wings wouldn't make you fast in the air, unless they're superior jet engines. Most of power of a wing is used to keep you in the air.




Zampakuto Name: Koorimizu ('Koori' for Ice "mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Koorimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inch. His attires is a Dark Blue jacket like Ulquiorra's. Along with a sky blue cape. He has Grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle.. he tends to hold back his true powers. Does not like walking, glides instead If he deems his opponent worthy, he does not hold back at all. We are very alike and get along pretty well.

Release Command: Freeze the Icy Water! Koorimizu!

Shikai Details:

http://i56.*******.com/2j3qn43.jpg

Kourimizu in it's released state. The hilt is made of very strong and thin layer of Ice. The blade is blue in clour. Water molecules are sometimes present in the handle.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) - Ice shards sharp as a sword rains from the sky. Can cut through anything.
Touketsu Kouzui (Frozen Flood)- If pointed at the enemy, it shoots a blast of my own reiatsu.
Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Freezes Water in the Air and then slash it against the enemy

Bankai Name: Taisan Koorimizu (Literally Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Koorimizu no longer possesses a base form. Its form is the water vapor into the air, which allows me to manipulate and control.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall. A blue aura engulfs me and i start to radiate reiatsu.
The rain falling also helps recover my reiatsu very little bit by bit.

Attacks: *NOTE : All Shikai Attacks can be used*
Tenka no Akayaiba ( Bloody Blade of Snow) - My sword reforms in a red crystal colour, allowing me to use my basic sword fighting technique
Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - I raise my hand in the sky and ball of energy forms, crystal blue in colour. i lower my hand and point my palm in to the opponents direction and it shoots out ice beams.
Hyoutenka Goryou (Literally Subzero Absolute Tomb) - Final Attack. My hands starts to be covered with water droplets from the falling rain.
i thrust my fist on the ground and my enemy, or enemies, are surrounded with a circle made of my reiatsu. the ground inside the circles turns into a whirlpool which sucks them in and freezes them completely. Breaking free is quite impossible. nearly depletes my reiatsu.



I wouldn't make it 'near zero °', then you would create snow. make it about 5° and that would be better if you want rain.

Other than that, I like the overal idea and the shape you've given it.



My Zanpakuto. All work was done in adobe illustrator CS4.
The various parts of the zanpakuto are in scale.

From Left to Right:

Zampakuto Spirit: it takes the form of a winged, feathered dragon around 23m in length. It is blue-green in colour.

Sealed form: Two katanas, 1m in length (including hilt). Unwrapped hilt, with hexagonal guard and 3 circles on handle.
Abilities: swords can go through each other.

Shikai: Hoshi no Yume (sky bow). command: split the air itself! consists of a bow-and-arrow. The bow has a circle surrounded by another six circles in the centre. for sticklers who claim that a zampakuto must be a form of sword: Bow contains the hilt, while the arrow contains the blade (it's there!!!).

Abilities: Kasai Renshou (Fire Streak): when bow is drawn, name of technique is called. the small blade on the arrow instantly catches on fire, and will not go out unless water touches the arrow. if water touches either my bow or the arrow, it will instantly stop burning, and drop to the ground.

Bakuhatsu Suru (explode): when bow is drawn, the first word of the technique is called. When the arrow hits something, or the second word of the technique is called, then the arrow will explode. if it hits steel, or an apponent's sword, it won't do anything - just fall on the ground.

Bankai: Hoshi no Ken (Sky Sword)
To achieve bankai, bow is drawn, pointing to sky. shouts bankai before firing massive arrow full of riatsu into sky. arrow explodes into large cloud of dust. when it dies down, I am holding my Bankai. It consists of two double-bladed swords, with a hexagonal shield in the centre. the centre of the hexagonally shield is the hilt

Abilities:Swords can move through each other, through me, and through other objects (wears down my durability heavily) without affecting it. cannot go through anything related to a soul (riatsu, attack,body etc.) though.

Kasai Renshou: when first word is said, fire forms on the blades, and when second word is said, the fire streaks off from swords into direction pointing. Again, if water touches swords or fire, it stops dead

Bakuhastu Suru: same as before, except a small ball of riatsu shoots from top tips of sword.

Sanka (join): the two swords merge together, to form one. Heavily affects my durability.



Yay, another bow user!

I don't really get the bankai. =s

Your bankai are swords which pass through anything. When they're on fire, only the fire does damage and not the swords?



curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.

Fine by me, I'm looking forward to it. :)

CyberBlaziken
29th April 2011, 5:24 PM
I wouldn't make it 'near zero °', then you would create snow. make it about 5° and that would be better if you want rain.

Other than that, I like the overal idea and the shape you've given it.


Well i can manipulate the water vapor. Part of my zam. So let's me control rain and snow.

And Theo ( i'll call you that :) )
Your Bankai's a bit confusing.


You and Cell could be partners i reckon. As both of you use Bows.

Eon Master
29th April 2011, 8:04 PM
Matter was super compressed at the very beginning. Things like molecular bonds wouldn't have existed, because it'd just be the most simple form of matter.

Ohyeah, the supercompression effect. I forgot about that ._. /hasn't studied the Big Bang in ages In that case, either the antimatter theory or something else that I don't remember most likely the latter


"Akayaiba no Tenka" doesn't really translate to "Bloody Blade of Snow". It translates to "Sky Flowers of the Red Sword" but I can see what you're getting at there. You just put the two words in the wrong places. Switch them around and you should have no problem. "Tenka no Akayaiba".

Ahh right, thanks. Sorry, my Japanese is a little rougher than my German or Italian. My lack of sleep probably wasn't helping, but meh, I still messed up.

And Kai, that's a badass Bankai. Helps you to recover your reiatsu despite the fact that you're attacking? I like that, seems like you picked up a few tips from Garou. Plus, the rain increases the ammount of water at your disposal. Very solid setup. You sure your intelligence is only 75? Because quite honestly, I think your setup is as good as anything I could've come up with, if not better. It is a little rough, granted, but it has a lot of potential.

@theo: Interesting ability. I think you could get away with turning your Bankai into a pair of bowswords that you can fire with spirit energy instead of your hands, if you want it to have more similarity to the Shikai. And that picture is cool.

badmanjaro
29th April 2011, 8:20 PM
Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Release Phase: (Ikkini daun shite, anata no emono o ubau) Swoop down and snatch your prey


Zanpakuto spirit: an adult sized bird with wings of electric and a body mixed with flames.

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves

Bright beams - Buraito wa, bīmu

I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

A. Spark of Destruction - Hakai no Hibana
Electric cero.
B. Cold Fire - Kōrudo-hi
Fire cero.



Final temptation - Saishū-tekina yūwaku
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot as many as needed to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.


Bankai - Heaven's Force - Ten no chikara
I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes - De~yuosurasshu

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

A. Roaring Thunder - Narihibiku kaminari
Thunder
B. Burning Earth - Bāninguāsu
Fire


Swinging Doom - Unmei o yurasu
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.





Swing of Faith - Shinkō no suingu
(FINAL FINAL FINAL ATTACK)

I place all of my power into my blades causing them to both disintegrate, turning into dust. I blow the dust in my hand which magically turns into a double tipped spear. I then swing it into the air (Think about when Ulquiorra swings his sword to deflect one of Hollow Ichigos swings, just swinging it in the air),
As I'm swinging it, bolts of lightning from the sky and fire from the ground are just going inside the blade. I then run up to my opponent with one last blow. By doing so, this may seriously injure me as my powers are very dangerous a bit to much for my to handle.

Thank you Zameric with some name suggestions!

OK, everyone I finished updating! Tell me what you guys think! Also thank you again for some name suggestions Zameric but some of the names I want to keep =p

CyberBlaziken
29th April 2011, 8:41 PM
That's a pretty neat Zampakuto you got there. :)
I like the idea of a dual type. Especially Fire and Electricity xD
And i like your Final attack. Very interesting.

Eon Master
29th April 2011, 9:17 PM
Alright, finally updated my Zanpaktou and profile page.

Hm. I should probably do my Arrancar profile too, but meh. Too much work atm.

Lucario0708
29th April 2011, 9:53 PM
Thank you for understanding


and im not sure which episodes are on which dvd, i just caught a glance of them, the cover images were masked ichigo and ulquiorra


@rotrum: just thought of something for your ice zan, you will use ice...... to FREEZE (slow down) time

ah, maybe that would make you too godmoddy, considering your speed...

i was just reminded of a boss in MMZX Advent, who use tiny ice crystals in the water to slow down your movements

well, maybe kai can use it with his ice zanpakto

i kinda just thought it funny that cyberblaziken's zan is ice, considering blaziken is fire, heh..... *goes off to drive a lambo, and a mclaren f1*

minchan
29th April 2011, 9:56 PM
I STILL HAS MY AWESOME BAKERY. RAWR.

~~~

I just realized something: I don't think I've ever took the time to look at you guys' zanpakuto and profile information. I think I may have skimmed a couple of them...

I'm sorry! I'll do that as soon as I get the chance... I mean, people apparently have looked at mine, so... XD

Ice Heart
29th April 2011, 10:07 PM
Zanpaktou Name: Ōrorafenikkusu
Type: Fire and Ice

Zanpaktou Spirit: A phoenix that is white in color.(as the name states) The tribal designs protruding from the torso can intimidate very well. The tail feathers of the Ōrorafenikkusu trail behind as a gown would a ball dancer. When active the designs start to glow with the power of the Aurora Borealis

Release Command: Dance.

Shikai Details:

Transformation: The Zanpaktou ignites in a blazing white fire that takes the transformation of the Zanpaktou to Shikai.

Description: After the transformation the Zanpaktou takes the form of a scepter. This scepter has a long staff like shape. At the tip lies a crystal with elemental properties. The crystal is in the shape of a short blade that can be used for Close-Combat. The foe would think that this was the main blade of the staff, but it’s not. At the base of the crystal a ribbon flows. The ribbon is double in length of the staff. The ribbon looks like just a pretty decoration but it’s not. The ribbon is actually the main blade. The ribbon is sharp and can lash out like a steel whip. Half way down the staff lies a small indention where it is to be held. The main staff has designs that are tribal-like. These also glow with the power of Aurora Borealis when active.

Moves:

Frost Fire: The ribbon starts to spin in a cyclone motion. A blue fire spits out of the eye and frosts anything in contact.

Icy Incineration: An Ice shard is pelted toward the foe. If hit successfully it erupts in a fiery explosion.

Star Shoot: A energy ball form at the end of the Crystal (the source of the power) and shoots toward the foe. It leaves a trail like a comet would that is close to earth.

(Final Move) Aurora Heart: The heart of my character starts to shine. Then an actual Aurora forms in the sky. An energy filled heart the size of a fist starts to form in the space in front of my character. The heart is made of ice but burns with the energy of the Aurora. The hearts shoots with such power that it looks like a comet in motion. The heart somehow always hits the heart of the opponent stopping it cold. This Move takes tremendous spiritual energy and can actually harm the user to a great extent.

Special Ability: I didn’t want to put this in the move list because it is sort of an ability. I call it Frost Toxin. During close-combat the user has to use the crystal in blade form to fight (like I said in the description.) Well the staff obviously is not the best clos-combat weapon so it uses a toxin to give it an upper hand. When cut by the crystal the foe is then poisoned. This poison isn’t no ordinary toxin. It doesn’t go for the Nervous or Repertory Systems. It starts to freeze the opponent from the inside out. If it cuts a limb, if the user is not taken down in a period of time, has the potential to freeze the foe’s whole body.

Bankai Name: Ōrorafenikkusu

Bankai Details: The crystal has gotten larger and the ribbon has split into two pieces. The staff got longer and the detail has gotten more depth. With the new ribbon the staff can now have two main blades. A set of wings have appeared at the base of the STAFF. These are very sharp and can now aid in Close-Combat.

Added Moves:

Flare Feathers: the wings at the base of the staff become animated for the sake of this move. They release feathers that are sent slashing at the foe.

Ribbon Dance: The ribbons glow with a blue light then rapidly lash at the foe. At this point in the move the ribbons can seep the Frost Toxin.

Final Move remains Aurora Heart

Anything Else: Not really. ; )

Eon Master
30th April 2011, 12:56 AM
^ Oh wow, you weren't kidding. Fire and Ice as one, nice combo. I especially like that the Zanpaktou's main weapon is the ribbon, very original and cool.

My only issue is with the name of the Bankai. It's one of those that doesn't change its name? I suppose it doesn't matter, but it might be better to change it slightly. Maybe Asayake Ōrorafenikkusu (Morning Light Aurora Pheonix)? Feel free to leave it as is though, I quite like it.


I'm going to try making a Fullbring again, this time with an ability that suits me more than any other.


Fullbring Name: Eternity Key

Item: An old stylized brass key. It hangs from a string around my neck.

Activation description:

When I activate my Fullbring, the key glows gold and resonates with my spirit energy, seeming to throw off a shimmering distortion around me as it powers up. I release it, and it floats horizontally, and grows longer until it forms a three-foot long staff tipped with a 1.5 foot-long blade, a guran dao. The string becomes the tassel attached to the blade. The weapon is very lightweight, but still has enough heft to get a decent swing off with minimal effort.

Ability Details:

My ability is very complex, but has a simple concept: understanding. Any spiritual thing my blade touches is "unlocked", which happens in a flash of green light from my Fullbring and the object it's touching. After a few seconds, the blade flashes gold, and my eyes shine with the same glow for a moment, signifying that the knowledge has passed into my mind.

Being "unlocked" by my Fullbring means that I can percieve and comprehend every power, weakness, strength, dimension, technique, and limit of what my blade has touched (basically everything I could possibly want or need to know). This includes people. Things like clothes (that aren't spiritually enhanced or formed) don't matter, nor do walls and the like (unless they're made of reishi or pure spirit energy).

An interesting point is that I can also apply my Fullbring's abilities to myself if I cut myself (lightly of course) with the blade and bleed on it. This allows me to comprehend my own strengths and weaknesses to my opponent's, to come up with the perfect plan to best them.

While this might seem broken, this is the only thing my Fullbring can do. It has no offensive capabilities (other than being a blade), and no bodily enhancement. I have to rely on my other Fullbringer abilities to do anything in combat.

What it looks like:

Key:
http://img.geocaching.com/track/4d57bfac-71ff-4d4b-8468-ebbce0b2882a.jpg

Guran Dao:
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Yxa877hbFD4/StP1MbxoVMI/AAAAAAAAA_0/a3bmBS7YQoM/s320/guandao

Mhm. And if anybody has a better name, feel free to suggest it. I'm not big on my current one.

EDIT: Squad Page updated. Luke and Cyndagirl are now official members of Squad 7, and Kai's Bankai is now on-site.

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 1:03 AM
Thanks Eon. That actually is a very good suggestion. I like the Morning Light part. I will very highly consider it.Your key thing is cool the way it goes from a key to the Guran Dao.

Lucario0708
30th April 2011, 2:16 AM
i dont know, maybe.... Obelisk Key?

uhh... Chrono Key? gah, I have no idea

MasterCharizard15
30th April 2011, 2:23 AM
@All members

Please watch the one-liners, we require at least three sentences for posts not to be considered spam or one-liners.

Also very nice Zanpaktou...each are unique.

...I wonder...if maybe...to reduce clutter...Fan fics should be posted on the fan fiction part of this site, but be linked to here and vice versa?

Thoughts?

theo_cupent42
30th April 2011, 2:35 AM
If I may clear a few things up, "hoshi" means "star", not "sky". Also, "bow" (the weapon that goes with arrow) is "yumi" in Japanese. "Yume" is dream and really, Star Dream is not the type of name you'd want to give to a zanpakutou (unless it shoots rainbows).
So "Sky Bow" would be "Sora no Yumi" and "Sky Sword/Blade" would be "Sora no Ken".
And another thing about your "Bakuhatsu Suru" attack. "Bakuhatsusuru" is actually one word so dividing it into two parts to call out while attacking results in something like this:
You: *Stretches bow* EX-!
You: *Releases bow, arrow zips towards opponent*
You: *Arrow strikes a head* PLODE! *Head dies*
Kinda silly don't you think?

Thanks for that - I did those translations ages ago, and I literally copied and pasted the description from elsewhere. I haven't looked at that for ages, so it's been fixed now. I'm well aware of the words そら and ゆみ, but I also know that hoshi can be used to mean sky, but genrally means star. Yume/yumi I have no excuse for, except mistranslation ^^.I had a lot of problems translating between め and み when I began my studies. As for "explode" - I didn't realise that one. I was always taught it - by several teachers - that it was always two words. I'll keep that in mind! (technique name has been changed now, anyway - explode doesn't say much...)


@ eon mater: I thought about it, but in conjuction with its abilities alread, it's going overboard. Besides, I wanted a melee weapon for my bankai, and the design is already fairly similar - six circles/ six sides of the hexagon, the central circle, the long blades being similar to the bow limbs.

@ cell: the bankai passes through things, including itself, but it cannot pass through a soul (or anything related - that includes any other zanpakuto, another person's attacks, kido etc.) or anything made of steel. The fire simply acts like fire and burns stuff. if water touches my blade in any way (whether it touches the fire or not), the fire goes out.

badmanjaro
30th April 2011, 3:14 AM
Thanks for that - I did those translations ages ago, and I literally copied and pasted the description from elsewhere. I haven't looked at that for ages, so it's been fixed now. I'm well aware of the words そら and ゆみ, but I also know that hoshi can be used to mean sky, but genrally means star. Yume/yumi I have no excuse for, except mistranslation ^^.I had a lot of problems translating between め and み when I began my studies. As for "explode" - I didn't realise that one. I was always taught it - by several teachers - that it was always two words. I'll keep that in mind! (technique name has been changed now, anyway - explode doesn't say much...)


@ eon mater: I thought about it, but in conjuction with its abilities alread, it's going overboard. Besides, I wanted a melee weapon for my bankai, and the design is already fairly similar - six circles/ six sides of the hexagon, the central circle, the long blades being similar to the bow limbs.

@ cell: the bankai passes through things, including itself, but it cannot pass through a soul (or anything related - that includes any other zanpakuto, another person's attacks, kido etc.) or anything made of steel. The fire simply acts like fire and burns stuff. if water touches my blade in any way (whether it touches the fire or not), the fire goes out.

I like your bankai a lot btw theo! Very creative :D


Also! Can anyone recommend me a squad to join?

fesbuk7474
30th April 2011, 3:23 AM
thanks for share good sharing

Eon Master
30th April 2011, 3:26 AM
@BMJ: I thought you'd already joined Squad 6, but I'd recommend that. MC's cool, and he's a good mentor. He's been a partial mentor to... I think, three captains now? Me, Senny, and Blue.

Considering that you have fire-based abilities and MC's Zanpaktou is the most powerful Fire-type Zanpaktou in the club, it'd be a good fit.

EDIT: What the f*ck? To the above, OUT.

Zameric
30th April 2011, 3:39 AM
Zam~
Well Tsuyokin is written with the characters for "strong" and "gold" So it's more like "strong gold" or "golden strength".
And the bankai name is Kokoro no Tsuyokin in which "Kokoro no" is "heart" in the possessive. (golden strength of the heart)

"force" was close though... XD
...You get half a cookie. =P
Ah, I saw strength in the list of possible translations, but didn't know which to pick. :p


O.e - two days away, and four pages further...I gotta come back more often!!!

curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.
I kind of forgot you joined.
I'll put you in my next note to Golde.

Sure! Practically all the fanfics in the club have used club members as characters.


I'll get some of the PMd data off of you.
What data are you talking about? xD


Combat Stats:

Offense - 90

Defense - 70

Mobility - 85

Kido/Reiatsu - 90

Intelligence - 75

Physical Strength - 80

Overall : 490
I'll get to work on your BDC soon, buddy. :)


I just realized something: I don't think I've ever took the time to look at you guys' zanpakuto and profile information. I think I may have skimmed a couple of them...

I'm sorry! I'll do that as soon as I get the chance... I mean, people apparently have looked at mine, so... XD
Read mine first, I command you to. :p


Also! Can anyone recommend me a squad to join?
Well, based on your zanpakuto, you probably aren't suitable for squads 3 or 4.
You might fair better in offensive types, such as Squad 11, 5 or 6.
Others are relatively neutral between offense and defense; Squads 8, 9, or 10.
Squad 2 is kind of stealth (like in the series) and Squad 12 is R&D.

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 3:56 AM
Speaking of squads. I was wondering who would want me on there squad. I do still have to make a profile though. Could somone give me the form (if there is one) for my characters profile?

Eon Master
30th April 2011, 4:01 AM
^ There isn't really a specific form, but you could always just copy the layout of somebody else's. It's what I did, iirc, my first profile was made ages ago >.>

And I'm sure you'd fit into just about any squad, you seem pretty well rounded. Though just from your Zanpaktou, Squad 3 would be a good fit. They're a more defensive squad, prefer long range attacks, and work best in combination with other Shinigami. Their Lieutenant spot is open, contrary to the first post, but you'll probably need to stick around a little longer to get in, Kida's had some bad luck with keeping members for extended periods of time sorry Kida.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
30th April 2011, 4:35 AM
Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Release Phase: (Ikkini daun shite, anata no emono o ubau) Swoop down and snatch your prey


Zanpakuto spirit: an adult sized bird with wings of electric and a body mixed with flames.

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves

Bright beams - Buraito wa, bīmu

I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

A. Spark of Destruction - Hakai no Hibana
Electric cero.
B. Cold Fire - Kōrudo-hi
Fire cero.



Final temptation - Saishū-tekina yūwaku
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot as many as needed to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.


Bankai - Heaven's Force - Ten no chikara
I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes - De~yuosurasshu

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

A. Roaring Thunder - Narihibiku kaminari
Thunder
B. Burning Earth - Bāninguāsu
Fire


Swinging Doom - Unmei o yurasu
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.





Swing of Faith - Shinkō no suingu
(FINAL FINAL FINAL ATTACK)

I place all of my power into my blades causing them to both disintegrate, turning into dust. I blow the dust in my hand which magically turns into a double tipped spear. I then swing it into the air (Think about when Ulquiorra swings his sword to deflect one of Hollow Ichigos swings, just swinging it in the air),
As I'm swinging it, bolts of lightning from the sky and fire from the ground are just going inside the blade. I then run up to my opponent with one last blow. By doing so, this may seriously injure me as my powers are very dangerous a bit to much for my to handle.

Thank you Zameric with some name suggestions!
First of all, never use the conjunction "o" in a name, it connects the object and the verb in a sentence together and generally isn't used for anything like names.
That means your "Howling Force" would have to be translated as "Hoeri Chikara".
"Buraito wa beam" should be "Buraito Beam" or "Akarui Beam". "Wa" is another conjunction that should not be used in naming; it connects the subject to the predicate.
"Cold Fire" can be translated as "Hiyashibi" which sounds better than the engrish "Cold-hi".
The translation you used for "Duo-slashes" is complete engrish. Let's try calling it "Nirengiri".
"Swinging Doom" should be "Yurashi Unmei". Ah, I see the problem now. You put "Swinging Doom" in some kind of translator and they thought you meant "I am swinging doom around" or something to that effect.
"Swing of Faith" can be "Shinkou no Yurashi" or "Shinkou no Furi" or if you want to have a bit more fun and use "swing" as in the type you find in playgrounds, then "Shinkou no Buranko".

Da14u.C
30th April 2011, 4:36 AM
hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!

i just finished my last two exams today (friday 29th) and I am too tired to go out partying :)

how is everyone? I bet ya'll missed me =D

ooooh, we have newbies!!!!
Hi ice heart!
i wonder who else is new?
oooh, badmanjaro? and theo_cupent42 too?

HI!!! i am Da14u.C :)
i dunno when you joined but late welcome :D

by the way:

http://www.canadiandesignresource.ca/officialgallery/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Royal-Wedding-Stamps.jpg

WOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
royal wedding was so romantic :) me and a whole bunch of friends woke up at 5am (our time) to watch it! Dieu protège le Prince Will et Catherine M || God save Prince Will and Catherine M :)

oh, and something bleachy - the new animé arc looks really addictive. I would like to see Mayuri in full power though, I dislike that he was grabbed so easily :|

theo_cupent42
30th April 2011, 5:20 AM
First of all, never use the conjunction "o" in a name, it connects the object and the verb in a sentence together.

Actually, "o" isn't a conjunction - it's a particle which denotes the object in a sentence. It doesn't do any linking. It's the same with wa - it denotes the subject.

There's an important reason for this: you can rearrange a japanese sentence to emphasise certain points, except the verb, which must always be at the end (you knew that, right?). for example, the sentence "I go to school at 8:00" would generally be written as "Watashi wa hachi ji ni gakou he ikimasu" (literal translation of hiragana) (私は八時に学校へ行きます。). However, if you wanted to emphasise the point that it is 8:00 that you travel to school, you can rearrange the sentence to place hachi ji at the start - but it must keep particle ni, not wa. this is because it isn't the subject, "I" is. so, it would end up as "Hachi ji ni watashi wa gakoo e ikimasu." (八時に私は学校へ行きます。) get the idea?

Although I agree that in the naming plain form should be used and therefore o should be admitted, it doesn't do any linking. the linking particles (I know of & use regularly - there's probably more) are ya, to and no, with each one having its specific use.

minchan
30th April 2011, 6:18 AM
Wow this has become a total Japanese Lesson thread... XD XD

Well umm I guess I did learn a couple of things... Or rather I refreshed memory of a couple things. XD So I can't REALLY complain... HAHA...

Oh yeahh I watched another episode on my way to *attempt* to catch up on the Bleach episodes. Just watched 300... Still far behind but not TOO bad... Not like I used to be, nearly a hundred episodes behind, and I caught up in a couple months~ That's like... 1/10 the time it took to air that much... Less than that, I think. (Unless my mental math is failing me, in which case, I need some sleep.)

Tomorrow (technically today since it's 1 am, but...) I'm going to the Sakura Matsuri. I saw a couple Bleach cosplayers there last year. I'm not gonna cosplay Momo or any Bleach character though, I never do this event. IMO, it'd be kinda odd to go to a hanami event as a shinigami. LOL Well, unless you're cosplaying Kyoraku... His jacket thingy would probably blend in. XD XD XD (Actually I *believe* it was a Kyoraku cosplayer I saw last year... I could be wrong though. It WAS a year ago, after all!)
Oh, and I may also go Sunday... Not 100% sure though.

theo_cupent42
30th April 2011, 6:57 AM
Wow this has become a total Japanese Lesson thread... XD XD

hey, that's a pretty good idea - does it already exist???

Jinchuuriki Hunter
30th April 2011, 8:15 AM
Actually, "o" isn't a conjunction - it's a particle which denotes the object in a sentence. It doesn't do any linking. It's the same with wa - it denotes the subject.

There's an important reason for this: you can rearrange a japanese sentence to emphasise certain points, except the verb, which must always be at the end (you knew that, right?). for example, the sentence "I go to school at 8:00" would generally be written as "Watashi wa hachi ji ni gakou he ikimasu" (literal translation of hiragana) (私は八時に学校へ行きます。). However, if you wanted to emphasise the point that it is 8:00 that you travel to school, you can rearrange the sentence to place hachi ji at the start - but it must keep particle ni, not wa. this is because it isn't the subject, "I" is. so, it would end up as "Hachi ji ni watashi wa gakoo e ikimasu." (八時に私は学校へ行きます。) get the idea?

Although I agree that in the naming plain form should be used and therefore o should be admitted, it doesn't do any linking. the linking particles (I know of & use regularly - there's probably more) are ya, to and no, with each one having its specific use.
Oh right, particle. So that's what they're called. I have a hard time trying to remember the names of whatever those things are called in sentences myself but I do know how to use them.
What are conjunctions again? I forget.

Oh, and a Japanese lesson thread existed for a short while but subsequently died out.

And just so this isn't off-topic, anybody want a zanpakutou with the ability to melt the blade into an all-cleansing white substance that can cleanse even common sense? We can call it Bleach.
The bankai transforms you into an all-white condom butterfly.

theo_cupent42
30th April 2011, 8:52 AM
basically a conjunction joins two words, phrases or sentences together.

"and" "but" "or" "however" are all conjunctions.

japanese conjunctions include と、が、の、や。

On-topic part: I've started the fan-fic! it's going to be in the format of a diary entry, and it'll be from my perspective.

PKMN Trainer Rex
30th April 2011, 9:05 AM
Revised Release Command: "Strike and Burst". Old Command: "Yo!"

Revised Attacks:

Vacuum Boom (Shiku Bumu): Yo-yo extends to the end of the string, spins creating a vacuum (7ft radius) then explodes (8ft blast radius). If one yo-yo is used to do the initial attack the second can be used to hit the opponent if the opponent dodges, or as a secondary strike if it does it. If both yo-yos are used, doubles strength of vacuum and explosion.

Exploding Barrage (Bakuhatsu no Arashi): formally Rensa Bakuhatsu. Rapidly (as fast as I can) alternates yo-yos creating an onslaught/barrage of explosions, with every strike blast radius grows about 20 strikes recoil damages me.

Slingshot Impact (Suringushotto no eikyo): Yo-yos are shot into the ground/wrapped around an object (grappling hook fashion). Yo-yos fling/catapult me at high speeds in to enemy. I come flying in with a kick, punch, headbutt, or cannonball style (I can spin like a drill if I choose to.)
It can also function as a way for me to travel, in a Batman/Spider Man-esque fashion as long as my Zan can reach it.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha): Yo-yos are swung at full extension starting at my sides to my front causing a thunderous clap/massive forward moving concussion wave.

Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto): Yo-yo are flung to either my sides or my front at full force into the ground, with my strongest explosion (depending on how much reitsu I put into it) causes a local seismic event. A 5ft wave of Earth radiates from the epicenter. Leaves my yo-yos stuck and exhausted from the energy usage.


Sorry it took so long, I had tests and quizzes up that area.

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 1:50 PM
I always wanted to learn Japanese...*sigh*
Well anyways I guess I'll stick around for a while, post my profile, and then pick a squad when the time is rite. But I'm finding it very difficult to find another profile anywere in this thread...Help please : )

I like Pokemon (...)
30th April 2011, 2:08 PM
Welcome to the Club, New Nembers, I have no idea how many of you have joined :| ( Can someone list me the names XP )
I'm very slowly going through the club and getting all the names and zans. In the first 8 pages, there are some 7 souls who haven't been added to the list on the first page.



and im not sure which episodes are on which dvd, i just caught a glance of them, the cover images were masked ichigo and ulquiorra
Get that one.


...I wonder...if maybe...to reduce clutter...Fan fics should be posted on the fan fiction part of this site, but be linked to here and vice versa?
Well, what it was meant to be was that each author has his/her own library for his/her fanfics, and they update it. I don't know if everyone who has made a fanfic has done that, though >.>

What data are you talking about? xD
Stuff like new members, new zans, that kind of data. Because I'll probably miss some stuff as I go through the club.

hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!
Welcome back.

ooooh, we have newbies!!!!
A lot of them.


And just so this isn't off-topic, anybody want a zanpakutou with the ability to melt the blade into an all-cleansing white substance that can cleanse even common sense? We can call it Bleach.
The bankai transforms you into an all-white condom butterfly.
ohyou

Anyway, I've read through all the zans, and they're very good. Nothing really specific that I need to point out, I guess. It also seems we have a sort of... third generation, almost, of newbies and dual-elemental zans. XD.


But I'm finding it very difficult to find another profile anywere in this thread...Help please : )
I should have a super-awesome profile made by Sunday. I'm going through the club and taking all the characteristics from each profile that you might want to have.

Red Globe
30th April 2011, 2:27 PM
Hey! I'm finally posting my shikai!

Immah hold back on my actual bankai for a while, though. :U Thanks to zam, ant and blue for the help!

Zanpaktou name:Dai Hachi no Fushigi (Eighth Wonder

Type: Electromagnetism

Zanpaktou Spirit: A small golden monkey, perched on my shoulder. He speaks in deep tones, and will not fall from my shoulder, no matter what. Only those whose intentions are true when their blade strikes mine can ever see him. He also has 8 tails.

Release Command: Attract, Dai Hachi no Fushigi!

Shikai Details:
http://i55.*******.com/2yuk49g.png

Credits go to Clover Studios, because I'm incredibly unimaginative. T_T
Nah, I just thought this design looked awesome, and I wanted to use it. It's from the game Okami, for the PS2. I just cleaned the background. xD
The effect of my shikai is that, whatever it touches, becomes a pseudo-magnet, even if it's not a metallic object. Also, the sword itself feels incredibly light to me, but it'd feel insanely heavy to anyone else who tried to pick it up, because using it's powers allows me to constantly keep it off the ground by propelling it from the earth around me. This uses an extremely tiny amount of reiatsu, because it's a thing I do subconciously.
Anything the blade touches gets shocked. Once an object becomes a pseudo-magnet, I can manipulate it when I'm within a 2 metre radius.
Depending on how I change the strenght and the polarity of the object, I can push it away with a great deal of force or attract it.
Not only can I change the strenght and the polarity of the object(s) that is a pseudo magnet, I can also change the strenght and polarity of my own Zanpaktou.
So for example, if I went to attack an enemy with a big marble statue, I could just touch it then send it flying at the opponent, or if my sword clashes with the opponents zanpaktou, I could then send it flying or pin it to my blade while leaving the enemy open.
I can also use the molecules around my feet, making their polarities the same as mine, and use it to give myself a burst of speed - but constantly doing it when running expends a good deal of reiatsu.
Also, my hilt, which, as you might see is a wheel, does an eighth of a turn every second, thus making a full turn in 8 seconds. For every 10 full turns (or 80 seconds) I get one metre of range. So that's 9 metres in 10 minutes, and 17 metres in 20 minutes.

Needless to say, the stronger the pushes/pulls are, the more reiatsu they expend. I can only change the polarity and strenght of an object when I'm touching the object.

Northern Lights
30th April 2011, 3:46 PM
Zanpaktou Name: Ōrorafenikkusu
Type: Fire and Ice

Zanpaktou Spirit: A phoenix that is white in color.(as the name states) The tribal designs protruding from the torso can intimidate very well. The tail feathers of the Ōrorafenikkusu trail behind as a gown would a ball dancer. When active the designs start to glow with the power of the Aurora Borealis

Release Command: Dance.

Shikai Details:

Transformation: The Zanpaktou ignites in a blazing white fire that takes the transformation of the Zanpaktou to Shikai.

Description: After the transformation the Zanpaktou takes the form of a scepter. This scepter has a long staff like shape. At the tip lies a crystal with elemental properties. The crystal is in the shape of a short blade that can be used for Close-Combat. The foe would think that this was the main blade of the staff, but it’s not. At the base of the crystal a ribbon flows. The ribbon is double in length of the staff. The ribbon looks like just a pretty decoration but it’s not. The ribbon is actually the main blade. The ribbon is sharp and can lash out like a steel whip. Half way down the staff lies a small indention where it is to be held. The main staff has designs that are tribal-like. These also glow with the power of Aurora Borealis when active.

Moves:

Frost Fire: The ribbon starts to spin in a cyclone motion. A blue fire spits out of the eye and frosts anything in contact.

Icy Incineration: An Ice shard is pelted toward the foe. If hit successfully it erupts in a fiery explosion.

Star Shoot: A energy ball form at the end of the Crystal (the source of the power) and shoots toward the foe. It leaves a trail like a comet would that is close to earth.

(Final Move) Aurora Heart: The heart of my character starts to shine. Then an actual Aurora forms in the sky. An energy filled heart the size of a fist starts to form in the space in front of my character. The heart is made of ice but burns with the energy of the Aurora. The hearts shoots with such power that it looks like a comet in motion. The heart somehow always hits the heart of the opponent stopping it cold. This Move takes tremendous spiritual energy and can actually harm the user to a great extent.

Special Ability: I didn’t want to put this in the move list because it is sort of an ability. I call it Frost Toxin. During close-combat the user has to use the crystal in blade form to fight (like I said in the description.) Well the staff obviously is not the best clos-combat weapon so it uses a toxin to give it an upper hand. When cut by the crystal the foe is then poisoned. This poison isn’t no ordinary toxin. It doesn’t go for the Nervous or Repertory Systems. It starts to freeze the opponent from the inside out. If it cuts a limb, if the user is not taken down in a period of time, has the potential to freeze the foe’s whole body.

Bankai Name: Ōrorafenikkusu

Bankai Details: The crystal has gotten larger and the ribbon has split into two pieces. The staff got longer and the detail has gotten more depth. With the new ribbon the staff can now have two main blades. A set of wings have appeared at the base of the STAFF. These are very sharp and can now aid in Close-Combat.

Added Moves:

Flare Feathers: the wings at the base of the staff become animated for the sake of this move. They release feathers that are sent slashing at the foe.

Ribbon Dance: The ribbons glow with a blue light then rapidly lash at the foe. At this point in the move the ribbons can seep the Frost Toxin.

Final Move remains Aurora Heart

Anything Else: Not really. ; )


Gotta love this Zanpaktou, and the Spear like weapon staff weapons ftw and the whole Aurora theme is beautiful - I like your equal balance of Ice and Fire two, always a good combo.


And I'm sure you'd fit into just about any squad, you seem pretty well rounded. Though just from your Zanpaktou, Squad 3 would be a good fit. They're a more defensive squad, prefer long range attacks, and work best in combination with other Shinigami. Their Lieutenant spot is open, contrary to the first post, but you'll probably need to stick around a little longer to get in, Kida's had some bad luck with keeping members for extended periods of time sorry Kida.

As he said, you'd definatly be welcome in my Squad with a Zanpaktou like yours, but for some reason my members never stay long forever alone


hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!

Oh gods.


HI!!! i am Da14u.C :)
i dunno when you joined but late welcome :D

^ He's our local narcissistic moron =]


WOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
royal wedding was so romantic :) me and a whole bunch of friends woke up at 5am (our time) to watch it! Dieu protège le Prince Will et Catherine M || God save Prince Will and Catherine M :)

I'm English, and even I didn't get that worked up about it.


Hey! I'm finally posting my shikai!

Immah hold back on my actual bankai for a while, though. :U Thanks to zam, ant and blue for the help!

Zanpaktou name:Dai Hachi no Fushigi (Eighth Wonder

Type: Electromagnetism

Zanpaktou Spirit: A small golden monkey, perched on my shoulder. He speaks in deep tones, and will not fall from my shoulder, no matter what. Only those whose intentions are true when their blade strikes mine can ever see him. He also has 8 tails.

Release Command: Attract, Dai Hachi no Fushigi!

Shikai Details:
http://i55.*******.com/2yuk49g.png

Credits go to Clover Studios, because I'm incredibly unimaginative. T_T
Nah, I just thought this design looked awesome, and I wanted to use it. It's from the game Okami, for the PS2. I just cleaned the background. xD
The effect of my shikai is that, whatever it touches, becomes a pseudo-magnet, even if it's not a metallic object. Also, the sword itself feels incredibly light to me, but it'd feel insanely heavy to anyone else who tried to pick it up, because using it's powers allows me to constantly keep it off the ground by propelling it from the earth around me. This uses an extremely tiny amount of reiatsu, because it's a thing I do subconciously.
Anything the blade touches gets shocked. Once an object becomes a pseudo-magnet, I can manipulate it when I'm within a 2 metre radius.
Depending on how I change the strenght and the polarity of the object, I can push it away with a great deal of force or attract it.
Not only can I change the strenght and the polarity of the object(s) that is a pseudo magnet, I can also change the strenght and polarity of my own Zanpaktou.
So for example, if I went to attack an enemy with a big marble statue, I could just touch it then send it flying at the opponent, or if my sword clashes with the opponents zanpaktou, I could then send it flying or pin it to my blade while leaving the enemy open.
I can also use the molecules around my feet, making their polarities the same as mine, and use it to give myself a burst of speed - but constantly doing it when running expends a good deal of reiatsu.
Also, my hilt, which, as you might see is a wheel, does an eighth of a turn every second, thus making a full turn in 8 seconds. For every 10 full turns (or 80 seconds) I get one metre of range. So that's 9 metres in 10 minutes, and 17 metres in 20 minutes.

Needless to say, the stronger the pushes/pulls are, the more reiatsu they expend. I can only change the polarity and strenght of an object when I'm touching the object.

Finally! Oooh, you went with Magnetism in the end then, huh?
I KNEW I recognised that sword from somewhere [never actually got that one in the game] I always used the seven pronged sword from Demon Lord Ninetails.

SwarmSwon
30th April 2011, 3:56 PM
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Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 4:02 PM
Thanks Kida! And since you offered then I would be honord to join your squad. I decided that I would make my own character profile form and fill it out this afternoon. Watch out cuz it will be up soon ; )

Edit: Also is Heisei the correct translation of Serenity. Because thats what my guys name is gonna be translated to.

Eon Master
30th April 2011, 4:23 PM
^ You're a hard worker. And yes, it's correct, I'm pretty sure.

Dauc is back. Good god, where are my earplugs? Whoops, I mean "Hi Dauc, how's it going?" You've missed quite a bit, btw. Most of us have new / revised Zanpaktou, myself included, and several of the squads have new members that have appeared since Golde vanished, so we're having trouble keeping track of them all. Oh, and I created an entirely new fanfiction / RPG character profile.

@Rex: I was wondering what had happened, but nicely done. Looks pretty good.

@Red Globe: Nice job with the Zan, but how do you wield that thing in Shikai? Do you levitate it and attack with it that way?


^ He's our local narcissistic moron =]

xD

And congrats to Kida and Ice Heart on the new member and finding a squad, respectively.

EDIT: I know we've had this topic before, but new Fullbring mechanics have been revealed since the last time, so I think it's about time to restart it.

What would your Fullbring be, and what would it do?


Fullbring Name: Eternity Key

Item: An old stylized brass key. It hangs from a string around my neck.

Activation description:

When I activate my Fullbring, the key glows gold and resonates with my spirit energy, seeming to throw off a shimmering distortion around me as it powers up. I release it, and it floats horizontally, and grows longer until it forms a three-foot long staff tipped with a 1.5 foot-long blade, a guran dao. The string becomes the tassel attached to the blade. The weapon is very lightweight, but still has enough heft to get a decent swing off with minimal effort.

Ability Details:

My ability is very complex, but has a simple concept: understanding. Any spiritual thing my blade touches is "unlocked", which happens in a flash of green light from my Fullbring and the object it's touching. After a few seconds, the blade flashes gold, and my eyes shine with the same glow for a moment, signifying that the knowledge has passed into my mind.

Being "unlocked" by my Fullbring means that I can percieve and comprehend every power, weakness, strength, dimension, technique, and limit of what my blade has touched (basically everything I could possibly want or need to know). This includes people. Things like clothes (that aren't spiritually enhanced or formed) don't matter, nor do walls and the like (unless they're made of reishi or pure spirit energy).

An interesting point is that I can also apply my Fullbring's abilities to myself if I cut myself (lightly of course) with the blade and bleed on it. This allows me to comprehend my own strengths and weaknesses and compare them to my opponent's, to come up with the perfect plan to best them.

While this might seem broken, this is the only thing my Fullbring can do. It has no offensive capabilities (other than being a blade), and no bodily enhancement. I have to rely on my other Fullbringer abilities to do anything in combat.

What it looks like:

Key:
http://img.geocaching.com/track/4d57bfac-71ff-4d4b-8468-ebbce0b2882a.jpg

Guran Dao:
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Yxa877hbFD4/StP1MbxoVMI/AAAAAAAAA_0/a3bmBS7YQoM/s320/guandao

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 4:48 PM
I think that fullbrings are very interesting. I have thought about if I had fullbring powers. I think my object of affection would be a chain wrtist band. When the soul is alterd The band would change into a elongated Chain with a blade tip. I haven't went through all the details, so this is why I chose a Zan over a Fullbring. But your's is very unique Eon.

CyberBlaziken
30th April 2011, 5:16 PM
Congrats Kida and Ice! xD

Well i started watching Bleach from the beginning again :)
Except ignoring the fillers -.-

And Eon, Your Banner is awesome :D

I like Pokemon (...)
30th April 2011, 11:04 PM
Alright everybody, on the second post of the Bleach club SHOULD have an updated version of the first post. New members and updated Zans should all be there. I want everyone to check all of ti, just in case I made a mistake.
For example, is a member not in the right spot? Maybe I used the wrong link, or it is broken?
If anyone who updated their Zan, but also changed their original Zan's post, and would prefer me to use that link, tell me (like if the link I have has other text with it, and you would prefer the link with JUST the Zan).
And any Captains with an old Squad page, please update them if you have new members, an updated Zan, anything of the sort.

Also, Zam, if you could PM me with the History Log of the Club. I want to read it myself, even if I have everything on it.

I found this Gem of a quote while going through the club:

Da.C Nice chapter, intresting. And ILP is your artifically created son, with NL being partially his mom... oddly enough, I could sorta see that... I'm so messed up... must be my writer's complex :P


As he said, you'd definatly be welcome in my Squad with a Zanpaktou like yours, but for some reason my members never stay long forever alone
To be fair, Rotrum has been a member for a LONG time (not sure how long he's been a Captain), and he's not had ANY members.

I also took all the Shinigami profiles I could find (bookmarked them all, too, will organise it and maybe add it to the first post) and made this as the profile skeleton.

Name:

Gender:

Rank/Squad:

Zanpakutou:

Inner World:

Eyes:

Hair:

Height:

Physical Age:

Other Physical Appearance:

Personality:

Primary Hand:

Battle Style:

Battle Stats:

- Offense:

- Defense:

- Mobility:

- Kidou/Reiatsu:

- Intellect:

- Stamina:

District of Origin:

Backstory:

Misc:


Anyone think I should add or take anything out?
Also, if people could fill this in either on their Zanpakutou page, or on a completely seperate page with no other comments, then I could probably throw this onto the front page, too.

Made one for Arrancars too, based on the profiles that people have made:

Arrancar Name (Spanish):

Mask Form/Location:

Number Location:

Hollow Hole Location:

Aspect of Death:

Physical Appearance:

Cero Colour/Firing Location:

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base:

Zanpakutou details:

- Name:

- Release Command:

- Physical Appearance:

- Release Abilities:

Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar):

Misc:

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 11:42 PM
Yay! A form I could use! I was gonna make my own but this is better. Oh an he hasn't had ANY members? Aww I kinda feel bad now : ( But I already commited to squad 3. But before I fill out the form I need to know what seat I am.

Flash_Step
30th April 2011, 11:44 PM
well well well
looks like i've been gone for far too long...
looks like we have an abundance of new members...welcome

My name is Flash Step better known as Dré Flashy...Proud Captain of Squad 5...
Ive seen a few Zans and i must say all of them are great...but there was one that caught my eye and i thought i should let badmanjaro kno that it is an excellent Zan...

Well as for my old friends how is everyone..i missed you guys but i jus been so busy with all the training and sleepin out in the field...really sucks

Golde Sotaitou lol how are you...to make up for my tardiness ive brought candy

MC NL ILP...everyone im throwing a party next weekend and i wud very much like everyone to be there especially the new guys...and then..

MC i would like you to help me with the arrangments for a sparring tournament :-) we must test the new guys strengh...

I guess thats all ill say for now...ill post later


EDIT:
@BMJ: I thought you'd already joined Squad 6, but I'd recommend that. MC's cool, and he's a good mentor. He's been a partial mentor to... I think, three captains now? Me, Senny, and Blue.

Considering that you have fire-based abilities and MC's Zanpaktou is the most powerful Fire-type Zanpaktou in the club, it'd be a good fit.

EDIT: What the f*ck? To the above, OUT.


Wait wait wait wait wait...MC the strongest fire Zan in the club...ha do we forget that it was me that help MC train and master being a fire-user...ah well im not mad jus a lil surprised is all i would say the fire users shud battle to see who is the strongest since there are so many now but it not possible

I like Pokemon (...)
30th April 2011, 11:51 PM
Yay! A form I could use! I was gonna make my own but this is better. Oh an he hasn't had ANY members? Aww I kinda feel bad now : ( But I already commited to squad 3. But before I fill out the form I need to know what seat I am.
Not to my knowledge, he hasn't. Though I could be and probably am wrong.
And check the second post :p

well well well
http://www.inquisitr.com/wp-content/wellwellwell-1.jpg

MC NL ILP...everyone im throwing a party next weekend and i wud very much like everyone to be there especially the new guys...and then..
I'm too knackered to do anything at the moment. x.x

Ice Heart
30th April 2011, 11:55 PM
Yes! 3rd seat ain't that bad :P. Watch for this post. This will be the one that contains my Profile.

Edit: Ok i have to admit that there are a few things I don't quite understand about the form; Battle Stats. How do I know them/create them? Primary Hand. Is this the hand you wield the Zan with?. And Blood Group. Ok i might be bad at remembering the names, but I don't remember anything about a blood group?

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 12:04 AM
Yes! 3rd seat ain't that bad :P. Watch for this post. This will be the one that contains my Profile.

Edit: Ok i have to admit that there are a few things I don't quite understand about the form; Battle Stats. How do I know them/create them? Primary Hand. Is this the hand you wield the Zan with?. And Blood Group. Ok i might be bad at remembering the names, but I don't remember anything about a blood group?
Battle Stats. You have 6 categories (Offense, Defense, Mobility, Intelligence, Kidou/Reiatsu, Physical Strength), and you rank them out of 100. Please take into account that most Captains are around the 480/490/500 mark or so.
You are correct about the Primary hand. And blood group... I don't know much about them. I might take them out. For now, put N/A, and we'll see what some other members say about Blood Group.

Ice Heart
1st May 2011, 12:07 AM
Thanks! It helps alot. I guess since this will be my most recent post I'll go ahead and edit in my Profile in a spoiler here.
Name:Heisei

Gender:Male

Rank/Squad: 3rd Seat. Squad 3

Zanpakutou: See link on updated First Post(in seconds Post)

Inner World: A snowy field. The skies are filled with Aurora's. There is a small circle made of marble that Heisei rest on while in the inner world.

Blood Group: N/A

Eyes: Vivid Blue

Hair: White, Shortish in length, Kinda like Ash's

Height: 6 ft. 1"

Other Physical Appearance: In very good shape. Muscular,but not like a football player. More like a Track & Feild Runner (Like myself). Tatto of White Phoenix that starts at the torso and extends to the back. In a tribal design.

Personality: Quite. Not shy though. Very understanding.

Primary Hand: Left

Battle Style: Elegant, Never cocky. Calm with swift strikes.

Battle Stats-
Offense:60
Defense:70
Mobility:70
Itelligence:80
Kidou:60
Physical Strength:60
400/600

Physical Age: 21

District of Origin:64

Backstory: Heisei was raised in a very strict family. They made him train every day of his life. He went to a very defined academy and was kept in check. He graduated from the acdemy and headed straight for the higher Ranks. He is now the 3rd Seat of the 3rd squad. He was very younge to join, but well traind for the job. He was never very social in his childhood. So he can come off as shy but with some talking he can be a very loyal friend.

Eon Master
1st May 2011, 12:16 AM
One thing for your "First Page", ILP. I'd prefer that you link to this page: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671643&postcount=172

It has my updated Zanpaktou, Profile, and Combat Stats, as well as my old Arrancar Profile, as opposed to the one you currently have, which is only my Zanpaktou.

minchan
1st May 2011, 12:28 AM
MY CAPTAIN BROUGHT CANDY? OMG IMMA STEAL EET. XD

CANDYYYYYYYYYYYY~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah I'm hyper. WOOT.

Umm did I forget to warn some of the new people about my hyper-spazzes??? Err... OOPS. SORRIES!!!

@ILP
LOL at the "well well well" picture. XD XD XD
I love those things. XD

And a random comment about fire users... I HAS A GIANT FLAMING SHURIKEN THINGY. =D It's fun to throw at people. YAYYYYYYYYYYY

See I'm hyper. =D

Oh oh oh!!! In other news, before I forget!!!
I picked up volume 49 today (Japanese)
It's got chapters from the new arc. So I'm happy I got it. YEAHHHH~~!!!! XD

OHH yeah I almost forgot: Captain, why we not have squad page? D= MAKE ONE NOWWWWW!!!!! XD lol jk I know real life's important. HAHAHAHAHA But really, can you make one within, like, the next year? XD

Ice Heart
1st May 2011, 12:37 AM
Updated my post with profile! Oh and if anyone thinks my stats are too good for a 3rd seat then tell me and I'll power down. Now I guess Im all set : )

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 12:53 AM
Thanks! It helps alot. I guess since this will be my most recent post I'll go ahead and edit in my Profile in a spoiler here.
Sorry, I just remembered to add another category: Physical age.

Battle Stats-
Offense:79
Defense:81
Mobility:74
Itelligence:89
Kidou:73
Physical Strength:69
I guess I should've made it clearer, you give it in multiples of 10, so it's easier to make a chart of (look at almost any Squad page, there should be an example there). So:
Offense: 80
Defense: 80
Mobility: 70
Intelligence: 90
Kidou/Reiatsu: 70
Physical Strength: 70
Total: 460/600.

I think that might be a bit too much... Min is 410, and Cell is 390.



One thing for your "First Page", ILP. I'd prefer that you link to this page: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10671643&postcount=172

It has my updated Zanpaktou, Profile, and Combat Stats, as well as my old Arrancar Profile, as opposed to the one you currently have, which is only my Zanpaktou.
Alright. Added.

MY CAPTAIN BROUGHT CANDY? OMG IMMA STEAL EET. XD
Something tells me you won't be able to steal candy from the Head Captain.


@ILP
LOL at the "well well well" picture. XD XD XD
I love those things. XD
Yup. Demotivationals are awesome.

I picked up volume 49 today (Japanese)
It's got chapters from the new arc. So I'm happy I got it. YEAHHHH~~!!!! XD
Nice.

minchan
1st May 2011, 1:03 AM
IMMA STILL TRY TO STEAL CANDY!!! CANNNNNDYYY!!!!!!!!!!

Oh yeah, and MS has the new Bleach chapter early this week. (but no Bleach on Wednesday because of that)

Mentions something about the mind of Ichigo... Could it be referring to that place where he met Zangetsu and Hollow Ichigo? You know, that sideways skyscraper place. XD I wonder...

badmanjaro
1st May 2011, 1:05 AM
well well well
looks like i've been gone for far too long...
looks like we have an abundance of new members...welcome

My name is Flash Step better known as Dré Flashy...Proud Captain of Squad 5...
Ive seen a few Zans and i must say all of them are great...but there was one that caught my eye and i thought i should let badmanjaro kno that it is an excellent Zan...

Well as for my old friends how is everyone..i missed you guys but i jus been so busy with all the training and sleepin out in the field...really sucks

Golde Sotaitou lol how are you...to make up for my tardiness ive brought candy

MC NL ILP...everyone im throwing a party next weekend and i wud very much like everyone to be there especially the new guys...and then..

MC i would like you to help me with the arrangments for a sparring tournament :-) we must test the new guys strengh...

I guess thats all ill say for now...ill post later


EDIT:

Wait wait wait wait wait...MC the strongest fire Zan in the club...ha do we forget that it was me that help MC train and master being a fire-user...ah well im not mad jus a lil surprised is all i would say the fire users shud battle to see who is the strongest since there are so many now but it not possible


Lol thanks. It took me a while to plan and write it :)


Soooo! I guess if possible, I would like to join squad 6 ^^ or 13 OR 11.....or...... That's it

Ice Heart
1st May 2011, 1:08 AM
Edited. That should be better huh? If it's still too strong then I'll power down again.
Edit: Sorry for the one line. I try to work on that rule : )

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 1:16 AM
Aww, poor.. What's his name?

I'm pretty sure at least once before, Ichigo has complained "No, let me fight!" Only to be hit. I think it happened with Isshin, too?

Ichigo's being an idiot again...

I don't know if that was the focus, but in one of the panels, Ichigo's face was partially covered by his... thingy. Perhaps that's like his mask?

Looks like Tsukishima is doing an Aizen, by knowing about Ichigo's previous fights.

"Invaders Must Die" is obviously a reference to Space Invaders.
And why did Yukio capture Ichigo, and not Tsukishima?


Soooo! I guess if possible, I would like to join squad 6 ^^ or 13 OR 11.....or...... That's it
You'll have to ask the Captains of the squad...

Edited. That should be better huh? If it's still too strong then I'll power down again.
Much better. But please do not one line. You can either quote and comment on previous posts (like me) or PM/VM me the reply.

badmanjaro
1st May 2011, 1:19 AM
Aww, poor.. What's his name?

I'm pretty sure at least once before, Ichigo has complained "No, let me fight!" Only to be hit. I think it happened with Isshin, too?

Ichigo's being an idiot again...

I don't know if that was the focus, but in one of the panels, Ichigo's face was partially covered by his... thingy. Perhaps that's like his mask?

Looks like Tsukishima is doing an Aizen, by knowing about Ichigo's previous fights.

"Invaders Must Die" is obviously a reference to Space Invaders.
And why did Yukio capture Ichigo, and not Tsukishima?


You'll have to ask the Captains of the squad...

Much better. But please do not one line. You can either quote and comment on previous posts (like me) or PM/VM me the reply.

The squad I REALLY want to join is squad 6 though :p.
I'm trying to contact MC but In his profile, it's not letting me contact him.

EDIT: nvm I sent him a PM

rotrum
1st May 2011, 3:36 AM
-throws a knife at ILP- Have you been ressurecting people from the dead? Dac AND Flash? Flash's corpse was probably in some third world country we were invading/"Correcting", where'd you find Dac's? Outside NL's window after a snowstorm?

Welcome Back Dac and Flash Oh, and Welcome to all those new people that I've been ignoring the past week. I'm Captain of Squad Ten, Rotrum

Well I was one of the first members (IIRC). I did not become a captain for a little while cause I was waiting for Golde to add a Squad Ten. And I did have two people in my squad. Invader Dimwit Until I kicked him out and he joined Kida and Chii, who became Captain of Squad Thirteen And then Kusa came. Then again, those were both Ages ago. Were those both before you came along, ILP?

I actually don't rememeber if Flash or MC came first...But due to activity, it somewhere became conatrued that MC has the most powerful Fire Zan. Maybe it's the constant revisions. Anyways, back to my plans to murder him

I hath finally decided to make a profile. I will add it to my Zanpakutou page. Does anyone know where my Arrancar Profile is? I lacak saved one now



Name: Still too lazy to make one up. I'm terrible with names. You'll find I steal a lot of names in my Fics.

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad: Captain of the Tenth Squad

Zanpakutou: Yuki Sendou

Inner World: A seemingly infinite world in an eternal snowstorm of varying strength. The moon is always visible. The ground is entirely covered in layers of Ice-with fresh snow over it. At the center is a frozen lake with unknown depths.

Blood Group: AB+ (I know...nothing about Blood)

Eyes: Cold, Analytical, Light Blue.

Hair: Black and medium-length. (White during Bankai.)

Height: 4'11" (I actually got taller than this recently)

Other Physical Appearance: Despite being short and thin, he maintains an air of intimidation. His eyes are piercing and analytical, as if they were trying to break straight past your appearance and see straight into your soul. The fact that he is almost always ready to snap into combat and has overreactive reflexes (I'm the type of person who will punch someone in the face if they jump out at me) might also help. Outwardly, he always has a calm and serious disposition.

Personality: Cold and Calculative, he does his best to cover any weaknesses whie exposing other people's-enemy or not. He has a tendency towards sadism. He judges first and reanalyzes later, making him appear highly critical. He's rather quiet and has an apparent lack of interpersonel skills. His intelligence isn't hard to figure out, consider he is the close second-youngest captain and managed to stay in the position much longer than the other. (Raise your hand if you remember our old Eighth, I think it was, captain!)

Primary Hand: Ambidextrous/Partial to the Right

Battle Style: He fights with precision-staying from a distance in order to analyze the opponent's combat style, as well as being better able to observe the nature of their attacks (IE. The way it curves, how much weaker/stronger it gets depending on distance, How well they can target, Etc.) He's still fully capable of fighting under close range circumstances, using ice to turn his throwing weapons into formidable melee weapons, a Jack-Of-All-Trades even-ness being applied to his weapon skill (Not including with his Original Knives and Odd Blade Out), as well as form ice to physcially move him or his opponent, as a direct/indirect weapon (IE. enhance his own weapon/weigh down his opponent's clothing/weapon, or just firing shards of ice), A barrier of sorts, or even to chill the opponent's body into a state they're less capable of fighting in (Alternatively, Cold molecules move slower than heated ones.) However, his specialty is using his speed and skill with throwing weapons to fight at a distance over a battlefield. He uses his speed to avoid projectiles/other long ranged abilities and throws his weapons in return-fire. He, actually, expects the same of his opponent. Each miss gives him a better control and understanding of the battlefield and the terrain(And every hit slows down and chills the opponent-until eventually the battlefield itself is a weapon of his. Assuming he hasn't overloaded mentally, the entire battlefield becomes dangerous because of the added effect of his snow and the ability to control his blades even after being thrown. While Fire, speed, and outright power destroy this system, he still keeps some tricks up his sleeves. OVERALL: He stays at a distance in general, first analysing his opponent as he forcefully immerses them nito his own ideal environment. From there he fight by evading and taking advantages of any opening he finds with a stealthy strike. (Well he causes it to snow, in Bankai he blends perfectly into the snow, his weapons are all snow white, and he fights with ice. Pretty stealthy, I'd say.) If possible, he's definately one of those who would abuse mental warfare.

District of Origin: [CENSORED] (I am lazy. So sue me.)

Backstory: There isn't much to say about his human life, even through he doesn't remember it anyways, it didn't last very long. He was young when he arrived in the Rukongai, and no one was willing to take him in. By some stroke of luck he manages to occupy an empty home with a live-able amount of food. Of course, he wasn't the only one to find it. He was attacked soon after. Grabbing a wooden sword, he managed to protect what he'd claimed as his own. It was around that time he realized the house was not, infact, empty. It was in the belonging of a recent Shinigami Graduate. And the wooden sword was thier old practice one. Sadly, said shinigami graduate was promptly beaten with his own wooden sword when he had been equipped with a perfectly good katana. Of course, a Shinigami getting his *** beat by a Rukongai resident was a cause for investigation. Somewhere along the lines he was sent to the Shinigami academy, which he passed with no real effort on his part (While still squatting in that poor Shinigami's house) and soared through the ranks. In an Eleventh Squad-Famous fashion, he quickly ascended to the rank of Captain by...exerting his power over the current captain of the Tenth Squad.

Misc: Battle Music: STILL Undetermined *Plays Sum41's Screaming Bloody Murder in the meantime*


Yukio is officially my Second favorite character after hitsugaya now. That is all

kusari
1st May 2011, 5:56 AM
so, just came for a few things.

#1: Welcome to the Squad, Theo. For the time being I'll have you as Third Seat as that is the highest postion that is open.

#2: Name: Saiga Hayashi

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad: Captain, Squad 13

Zanpakutou: Kurogane Kiba

Inner World: A sheer mountain cliff, caught in an endless thunderstorm.

Blood Group: AB+

Eyes: Slate blue

Hair: Shaggy black

Height: 6' 1"

Physical Age: 21

Other Physical Appearance: Physically strong but not overly muscular.

Personality: Lazy. Angry and destructive if woken up.

Primary Hand: Ambidextrous but favoring the right

Battle Style: Varies between skikai and bankai. Shikai is and up close and hand-to-hand style. Bankai is a distance style, preffering to launch long ranged wind and electric attacks.

Battle Stats: [Needs revision with new zan. Will come later]

District of Origin: Two

Backstory: Raised by a family of Royal Guard members. Failed the test to become a member of the Guard and is shunned because of it. Uses position as captain to make up for failure.

Misc: Likes booze.



#3: a preview of the next chapter of the fic.

"You...you...you can't be serious," Akira stammered.

"Did I ****ing stutter?" The tall man smirked. "We will bring down your precious Soul Society and bring about the age of the Acacians."

"Acacians? What the hell are Acacians?" The fourth squad captain responded.

"Ask Narcisse Dauc. He can tell you all you need to know about Acacians." The man gave a small wave, signaling his comrades to leave. "And make sure to tell Narcisse that Kyoshiro Sugiyama says hello."


So that's all for now.

minchan
1st May 2011, 7:08 AM
Just dropping in before going to sleep... Umm... I'm gonna try to post my profile eventually. But there's a LOT of content... Which may end up being edited into the post at a later time... Yeah. XD Just so you know. =D Too bad we have to wait until the 11th (or 12th, if it's slow) for a new chapter... =/ Well that's what we get for having an early release... But waiting still kinda sucks. XD

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st May 2011, 8:14 AM
Name: Rekks [last name yet to be determined]

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad: Unranked

Zanpakutou: Bakugeki Kakuhan (Bomber Whip)

Inner World: A big arse plant labyrinth on a sunny day

Blood Group: AB+ (Don't even now what my RL blood type is, so sad.)

Eyes: A very deep shade of brown.

Hair: Short curly/spiky black hair (hat hair). Medium mustache and medium chin beard combo.

Height: 5'5''

Physical Age: 20

Other Physical Appearance: Brown skin. Toned/muscular chest and arms, tubby stomach.

Personality: Chillaxed, likes to ease tension with stupid-sometimes witty comments. Overall nice guy, that shows respect towards everyone. Can be serious when situation really calls for it.

Primary Hand: Lefty, but can use right hand adequately.

Battle Style: Fairly aggressive, likes to stay relatively stationary but can move quite swiftly.

Battle Stats: [Not too keen on this stuff, will need help]

District of Origin: 50

Backstory: Grew up/worked on a farm that was on a island. Raised by hard working parents. Feeling trapped on the island after graduating from high school (if there is such things as schools outside of the Academy), applied to the academy to the as soon as possible.

Misc: Has on person 95% of the time a combination of: Fitted hat(s), big studio headphones, and gum (always willing to share)

Likes to play wit my shikai yo-yos as regular yo-yos, don't worry they don't blow up.


If anything is wrong with my profile please inform me and I'll correct it. Can anyone help with my base stats, I tend to rate my self on the low side or too high.

And I have contacted a Captain and his Lieutenant about joining their squad, waiting for acceptance.

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 11:48 AM
-throws a knife at ILP- Have you been ressurecting people from the dead? Dac AND Flash? Flash's corpse was probably in some third world country we were invading/"Correcting", where'd you find Dac's? Outside NL's window after a snowstorm?
HOW DID YOU KNOW ALL OF THAT?!


Well I was one of the first members (IIRC). I did not become a captain for a little while cause I was waiting for Golde to add a Squad Ten. And I did have two people in my squad. Invader Dimwit Until I kicked him out and he joined Kida and Chii, who became Captain of Squad Thirteen And then Kusa came. Then again, those were both Ages ago. Were those both before you came along, ILP?
Ah, alright. Well, I am - I think the youngest- active veteran. So I didn't know about invaderdim or Chii.
Were there any other previous Captains, that left? We have 2- Jin, 11-Luppi, 12-Da.c and 13-Chii. Perhaps we could have some kind of "old Captain" and "new Captains".

I actually don't rememeber if Flash or MC came first...But due to activity, it somewhere became conatrued that MC has the most powerful Fire Zan. Maybe it's the constant revisions. Anyways, back to my plans to murder him
MC joined 31st July 2008 at 3:52.
Flash Step Joined 23rd July 2008 at 7:17.
So Flash is older by only 8 days.

Also, you're the 3rd oldest member in the club XD.
Golde - 21st October 2007 at 8:15.
Northern Lights - 2nd December 2007 at 14:20.
Rotrum - 18th February at 17:55.

I hath finally decided to make a profile. I will add it to my Zanpakutou page. Does anyone know where my Arrancar Profile is? I lacak saved one now
Here it is (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11556717&postcount=1979)



Height: 4'11" (I actually got taller than this recently)
Holy crap I'm taller than someone.

I snipped the rest because I have nothing else to say.


#1: Welcome to the Squad, Theo. For the time being I'll have you as Third Seat as that is the highest postion that is open.
Updated.


"You...you...you can't be serious," Akira stammered.

"Did I ****ing stutter?" The tall man smirked. "We will bring down your precious Soul Society and bring about the age of the Acacians."

"Acacians? What the hell are Acacians?" The fourth squad captain responded.

"Ask Narcisse Dauc. He can tell you all you need to know about Acacians." The man gave a small wave, signaling his comrades to leave. "And make sure to tell Narcisse that Kyoshiro Sugiyama says hello."


So that's all for now.
Acacians and Dauc. Alright, I'm guessing that Dauc must have created or discovered the Acacians, and something happened that caused him to reject them, perhaps even cause a genocide (they were probably ugly). I'm guessing that either the Acacians were innocent or guilty in this- wrongly accused of something, and forced to leave/be killed, or they killed someone or were just being bad in general. The Acacians then went into hiding, under the guise of being completely killed, biding their time and building their forces, ready to fight back and take revenge.

The name Kyoshiro Sugiyama probably has some meaning behind it. If only I could be bothered to figure it out.


If anything is wrong with my profile please inform me and I'll correct it. Can anyone help with my base stats, I tend to rate my self on the low side or too high.

And I have contacted a Captain and his Lieutenant about joining their squad, waiting for acceptance.
Looks good to me.

And that narrows it down to Squads... 4, 5, 6, 7, 9, 11 and 13. XD.

Northern Lights
1st May 2011, 11:51 AM
Yes! 3rd seat ain't that bad :P. Watch for this post. This will be the one that contains my Profile.

The more you post and get to know the club, the faster you'll become Leiutenant =]



Fullbring Name: Hane Chi
[B]Item: a Black Quill
Activation description: Take the Quill nib and punture the skin of my index finger.
Ability Details: I full bring the blood inside the quill nib, drawing objects in the air that are then translated into being. If I know how it looks from my mind and how it works I can draw it and manipulate it to "live", which is why drawing from imagination is easier than drawing from an image of something i've never seen before, because my imagination designed it I can create it.
What it looks like:

http://i54.*******.com/23uzltl.jpg


Arrancar Name:
Mask Form/Location: Wolf mask that sit a top my head
Number Location: Left side of neck
Hollow Hole Location: Collar bone
Aspect of Death: Fear - Fear of death will only speed it's process and can ruin the life they have
Physical Appearance: Long white top, that reaches half way down my thighs, with a square neck line reaching below the Hollow Hole, the arms of the top are skin tight up to the elbows were it flares out to the wrists. White leggings reach down to my wrists, my feet are left bare.
Cero Colour/Firing Location: Inidgo Cero from the tip of my index finger
Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base:
Zanpakutou details:
- Name: Canción del Miedo [Song of Fear]
- Release Command: Sueño
- Physical Appearance: Pan Pipes with varying shades of black, blue and purple feathers on it.
- Release Abilities: Upon the release command, I begin to play a tune with the Pan Pipes anyone in earshot will fall asleep and they will into nightmares. Depending on the Song I play while they sleep, they will encounter different levels of fear in their nightmare. If they succomb to their fear they will be trapped in their nightmare world even after I have released my Shikai, in a comatose state.
Special Abilities: I am able to read people and see their worst fears, but I cannot speak them aloud.

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 12:43 PM
I think I have everyone's Arrancar and Fullbring profiles saved, as well as their Battle Charts on Zam's webpage. If I'm not mistaken, NL, Kusari and Eon have made Fullbring profiles, who else?

Also, do you think I should put them (Arrancar, Fullbring and Battle Data Charts) in the "First Post" or leave it up to the Captains to have it just in their Squad Pages?

And perhaps we should merge the Shinigami profile and the Zanpakutou skeleton together, in the same way that the Arrancar profile is both of the Arrancar and its zanpakutou? So any new members can see it, fill it in, and can immediately be used in a fanfic. It also gives them something to fill in their first post, instead of one lining.

Speaking of fanfics, can anyone who has written a fanfic please make or update their library, just so all the chapters are fresh on the "First Post". For any new members who have started writing fanfic, just make the Library Post and I'll link it in the "First Post" (If I'm not mistaken, Golde, Cell, NL, Arc, MC, Eon, Luke, Zam, Rotrum, Blue and Kusari have all written fanfics, but I may be missing some).

Ice Heart
1st May 2011, 3:28 PM
Morning Guys! ( : at least it's morning here : ) I was able to catch a oldish episode of bleach last nite, it was an ok episode. I now have every thing that I need completed/filled out. So I guess all there is left is to talk about bleach.

I don't really know how to write a fanfic so somone could maybe give me some info on that :P



The more you post and get to know the club, the faster you'll become Leiutenant =]

I'll try my best :)

Lucario0708
1st May 2011, 3:49 PM
I missed saturday's bleach episode because i was at a friends house

someone describe nnoitora and kenpachi's fight to me, I heard it was epic.........

Ice Heart
1st May 2011, 4:02 PM
Well Obviously if Kenny was fighting then it was VERY epic. The other guy,nnoitora, was actually really good. When he transformed he had SIX arms. Every one of them was armed with a Syth-like weapon. They fought for a while and the nnoitora guy actually cut kenny...Twice. Then Kenny thought if he kept it up he might die. So then it went to a flash back. It turns out Kenny had learned Kido in the past. So he explained how if a man held his zan with two hands it was stronger, Oviously the other guy already knew that and teased kenny about it. Then Kenny was like "no, A man gets ALOT stronger" Then he hold it with both hands. He barly swings it and a gold power burst slices throught the other guy. The other guy looses like 4 of his six arms then he somehow is stil alive. Then Kenny starts to walk away because he doesn't want to kill a guy who is unable to fight back. The the other guy says he can still fight, he then attacks Kenny. Kenny grabs his Zan with two hands again and does the same move. We don't know if the other guy is dead "Yet" Because it said "to be continued". All around it was a pretty good episode.
P.S: Sorry for all the grammer mistakes. I was trying to write that fast.

badmanjaro
1st May 2011, 6:12 PM
Good afternoon everyone! Don't worry I brought something! My profile!

Name: Akio Sato

Gender: Male

Rank/squad: 5th seat of squad 6

Zanpakuto: Howling Force - Hauringu-ryoku (yes i changed the name if anyone noticed)

Inner World: Up in the skies (When my body is calm the sun is up and theres clear skies. When lets say I'm fighting, there's thunder everywhere and you can see beneath you lots of flames.

Blood Type: AB? does this matter?

Eyes: Teal

Hair: Straight hair, long, styles into all sides of the head.

Height: 5"7"

Physical Age: 25

Other physical appearance: Looks skinny but very built in the inside. Arms look muscular. Lots of veins in the arms.

Personality: Cold, Quiet, loyal, and intellegent.

Primary hand: Both

Battle style: Takes things slow unless has to be aggressive. Looks for openings. Never underestimate. ALWAYS stays calm.

Battle stats: 440/600

Offense: 70
Defense:70
Mobility:80
Intelligence:80
Kidou:70
Physical strength:70

District Origin: 27

Backstory: Raised by his mother (Father is deceased). Whenever his friends are in trouble Akio always helps them out, even if it affects himself. (Is this allowed) - Once he found out that his father was a shinigami, he thought to himself hard and decided to become one.

Zameric
1st May 2011, 6:31 PM
Hey Dauc and Dre, good to see you guys around here again. :)


I'm English, and even I didn't get that worked up about it.

High Five! :p


Battle Stats. You have 6 categories (Offense, Defense, Mobility, Intelligence, Kidou/Reiatsu, Physical Strength), and you rank them out of 100. Please take into account that most Captains are around the 480/490/500 mark or so.
You're wrong there my little math nerd friend.
the categories are Offense, Defense, Mobility, Kido/Reiatsu, Intellect, and Stamina.


Battle stats: 470/600 (I'm guessing I have to lower it)

Offense: 90
Defense:70
Mobility:80
Intelligence:100
Kidou:60
Physical strength:70
As I pointed out above, Ant messed up.
Do you want to keep those stats or change them?
Same goes for Ice Heart...

badmanjaro
1st May 2011, 6:36 PM
Hey Dauc and Dre, good to see you guys around here again. :)


High Five! :p


You're wrong there my little math nerd friend.
the categories are Offense, Defense, Mobility, Kido/Reiatsu, Intellect, and Stamina.


As I pointed out above, Ant messed up.
Do you want to keep those stats or change them?
Same goes for Ice Heart...

Lol yeah Ant helped me fix mine. I can bring my intelligence back to 100?
Also I guess I'm replacing my Stamina with Strength. It's going to be pretty low due to my zanpakuto.

Northern Lights
1st May 2011, 6:38 PM
Blood Type: AB? does this matter?

Odd how so many people in this club have AB type blood, when AB is one of the rarest blood groups on the planet.


You're wrong there my little math nerd friend.
the categories are Offense, Defense, Mobility, Kido/Reiatsu, Intellect, and Stamina.


Actually, It's not. ILP is right. It was Defense, Offense, Kido/Reiastu, Intelligence, Mobility and Strength
I have my battle chart that you made me to prove it. Stamina was never on there.

EDIT:
http://i55.*******.com/2zs67i9.jpg

I like Pokemon (...)
1st May 2011, 6:43 PM
I don't really know how to write a fanfic so somone could maybe give me some info on that :P
Well, I guess you start with a plot, and what I find to be good is to just let the characters behave as they normally would, and let the story follow from there. Don't force things to happen if the characters wouldn't do certain things.

High Five! :p
*Joins in on the high fiving*


You're wrong there my little math nerd friend.
the categories are Offense, Defense, Mobility, Kido/Reiatsu, Intellect, and Stamina.
XD I like the new nickname.
And ah, I forgot about those. Those were the translated ones, right?


Odd how so many people in this club have AB type blood, when AB is one of the rarest blood groups on the planet.



Actually, It's not. ILP is right. It was Defense, Offense, Kido/Reiastu, Intelligence, Mobility and Strength
I have my battle chart that you made me to prove it. Stamina was never on there.
I suppose that was the "default" since very few people actually know their blood type. I think I'll take it out.

And I think Intelligence and Physical Strength was the scanlation, and Intellect and Stamina are official translations, am I wrong, Zam?

Cell
1st May 2011, 7:54 PM
My profiles:

Arrancar:



Arrancar Name (Spanish):
Maullido

Mask Form/Location:
My mask remnants are a piece of colarbone around my neck and a sabretooth on my ear.

Number Location:
Left upper arm

Hollow Hole Location:
Exactly where the human heart would be

Aspect of Death:
... Driving too fast? Honestly, I don't really have one.

Physical Appearance:
Green eyes, these light up when I get excited.

I have long dark brown hair which is in a wild look (like I just got electrocuted). My teeth are slightly different as I have 2 fangs.


Cero Colour/Firing Location:
Light blue/grey, mouth

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base:
Saber-toothed Tiger

Zanpakutou details:

- Name:
Dientes de sable electricidad (Electric saber-toothed cat)

- Release Command:
Carga eléctrica (Electric charge)

- Physical Appearance:
Once released, I discard my humanoid form and take the form of a small sabretoothed tiger. Coloured black with light blue stripes shaped like lightning (much like lightning in the night sky). Electric currents run over my body constantly and when I rush around I leave burn marks with static currents circling them.

- Release Abilities:
EXTREMELY HIGH SPEED

Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar):
I am able to compress my body into a lightning bolt to pierce an enemy. I have high jaw strength and a chaotic battle style (build around speed, biting and electrifiying).


Misc:
In my released form, I can unleash a cero in the form of biting jaws, these slightly track an enemy.





Name:
Niche Neeya

Gender:
Male

Rank/Squad:
5th seat, squad 2

Zanpakutou:
Siska, she takes the form of a small hummingbird (7cm tall), she can be seen by everyone she wants to, is always floating around my head and warns me for attacks from behind when in battle.

Inner World:
A lush rainforest at night, small electrical currents jump around over the ground. In the center there is a bright flowerfield, where Siska hovers around from flower to flower.

Blood Group:
B+

Eyes:
Greygreen

Hair:
Long dark brown hair

Height:
6'5"

Physical Age:
19

Other Physical Appearance:
I don't wear the usual shinigami outfit;
Instead I wear a long black coat, dark trousers with metal bits and a black t-shirt with the metal sign.
Metal spiked leather bracers on my arms and combat boots implated with metal as footwear.

Personality:
Mostly timid and observing.

Primary Hand:
Right

Battle Style:
Long distance in shikai as long as possible, when in bankai.. going all out with kido combinations. I have a preference to start, once I have gone into Bankai, with my railgun technique.

Battle Stats:
Offense; 50
Defence; 70
Mobility; 70
Kido/Reiatsu; 80
Intellect; 90
Stamina; 30

390/600


District of Origin:
Unknown, I travelled from District to District.

Backstory:
I have not many memories since I unlocked my shikai state and got recruited into the squad system




Due to personal reasons, I wasn't able to draw anything nor get my next chapter ready.. Sorry. :(

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd May 2011, 12:22 AM
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Odd how so many people in this club have AB type blood, when AB is one of the rarest blood groups on the planet.


It's not that we have it, its just we have no real what we're talking about. It's sad in my case, my major calls for me to know but I don't. I'll probably edit that and some other things in the near future.

I don't know if Flash_Step announced it or not but I joined his squad and am now his 3rd seat.

Lucario0708
2nd May 2011, 12:40 AM
here are my REVISED stats

Overall power level: OVER 9000!!! 420/600

Offense- 70
Defense-70
Mobility- 80 (does that sound good? or should i go lower?)
Kido/Reiatsu70
Intellect- 55-60 (rough estimate, what do you guys think?)
Stamina- 70

@rex: (slightly off topic) @sig: enkidududududududududu

MasterCharizard15
2nd May 2011, 12:43 AM
To all new members

Aside from checking the surveys on the Squad Pages for the squads you want to Join, please if possible Fuse your profile and Zanpaktou page together, so that updating squad and pages and first page will go must faster and easier, also it will be easier to any information needed for fan fics or if you need to change it latter on.

If I'm following this correctly:
Ice heart is in Squad 3
badmanjaro is my squad's 5th seat
Rex is Squad 5's 3rd seat.
...is that every new member?

Eon Master
2nd May 2011, 12:46 AM
Much better, Luke. I'll go for those.

In other news, I've started writing my own demise fanfic in which Seijuro dies and Rouga takes his place. Lots of schoolwork right now though, so don't expect it anytime soon.

@Rex: Congrats and well done.

Lucario0708
2nd May 2011, 12:55 AM
thanks eon, oh and speaking of fan-fics.....

ill write my new ch tomorrow, whoever guesses the surprise guest star who comes in which i hinted at in the end of chapter 2 gets an e-cookie

Eon Master
2nd May 2011, 12:57 AM
^ You're welcome.

And I'm going to guess by the last word of the chapter that it's VizardBlue.

@MC: Theo's joined Squad 13 as well, iirc.

Golde
2nd May 2011, 1:15 AM
Apologize for my leave of absence. I have two weeks before I return home for the summer. Should be infinitely more active.

Due to the fact I have 10 pm's, I guess things have been happening here. I've been a tad busy with schoolwork and life and stuff. I'll get on that. Any PM request should be honored, and if something's amiss after today please send me a pm, and I'll resolve it at a not-so-later time.

Thanks to all who sent me PM's (convenient), Zam for being my unofficial secretary, and the patience of you all. <3!

About to read the Bleach manga, too. 2 weeks or so behind.

minchan
2nd May 2011, 1:20 AM
I don't know if Flash_Step announced it or not but I joined his squad and am now his 3rd seat.

I HAVE AN UNDERLING NOW. =D WOOT.

All in good fun though. I won't make you work long hours in the bakery.
But hey, squad members get free cookies, so...

*gives cookie*

Welcome to the squad, underling PKMN Trainer Rex! LOL

~~~~~~~~~~

GOLDE!!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!! XD XD XD

Yeah... No. I didn't actually think you were dead. =P

----------

Oh yeah, and about blood type... I have no idea what mine is. Is that a bad thing? =/ Well anyway, when I fill out my profile, I'll just pick one for my character - it doesn't have to be the same as mine anyway. XD

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd May 2011, 1:27 AM
I HAVE AN UNDERLING NOW. =D WOOT.

All in good fun though. I won't make you work long hours in the bakery.
But hey, squad members get free cookies, so...

*gives cookie*

Welcome to the squad, underling PKMN Trainer Rex! LOL

I haz cookie!!! OMNOM TIME! LOL. And thanks, hope to be of useful service.


Oh yeah, and about blood type... I have no idea what mine is. Is that a bad thing? =/ Well anyway, when I fill out my profile, I'll just pick one for my character - it doesn't have to be the same as mine anyway. XD

I don't know mines either so don't worry, we're cool like that. Like I already said (I think) my revised profile should be up soon, and faster than my revised attacks.

Ice Heart
2nd May 2011, 1:33 AM
Apologize for my leave of absence. I have two weeks before I return home for the summer. Should be infinitely more active.

Due to the fact I have 10 pm's, I guess things have been happening here. I've been a tad busy with schoolwork and life and stuff. I'll get on that. Any PM request should be honored, and if something's amiss after today please send me a pm, and I'll resolve it at a not-so-later time.

Thanks to all who sent me PM's (convenient), Zam for being my unofficial secretary, and the patience of you all. <3!

About to read the Bleach manga, too. 2 weeks or so behind.

WoW...It's Golde. Im Ice Heart. A new member of the club. Im the 3rd seat of the 3rd squad. Glad to finally meet you ^_^.

Oh and I've read a few of the fanfics and I'm highly considering writing one!

Eon Master
2nd May 2011, 1:36 AM
^ Good luck on being the first person to actually complete one xD Oh wait, does Kusari's count? He made a sequel which got discontinued, so idk.

And welcome back, Golde-soutaichou. We missed you, and Flash_Step brought CANDY.

badmanjaro
2nd May 2011, 1:54 AM
Apologize for my leave of absence. I have two weeks before I return home for the summer. Should be infinitely more active.

Due to the fact I have 10 pm's, I guess things have been happening here. I've been a tad busy with schoolwork and life and stuff. I'll get on that. Any PM request should be honored, and if something's amiss after today please send me a pm, and I'll resolve it at a not-so-later time.

Thanks to all who sent me PM's (convenient), Zam for being my unofficial secretary, and the patience of you all. <3!

About to read the Bleach manga, too. 2 weeks or so behind.
Welcome back golde! I'm a new member :). I'm badmanjaro but I have all of these weird nicknames.

Zameric
2nd May 2011, 2:12 AM
Actually, It's not. ILP is right. It was Defense, Offense, Kido/Reiastu, Intelligence, Mobility and Strength
I have my battle chart that you made me to prove it. Stamina was never on there.

EDIT:
http://i55.*******.com/2zs67i9.jpg
No, those were the categories before the official translated version of Color Bleach+ came out.
And I didn't make that chart, you did. I never used blue in my charts. -_-
Here's (http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/other/NLBDC.png) you're current BDC.


XD I like the new nickname.
And ah, I forgot about those. Those were the translated ones, right?

And I think Intelligence and Physical Strength was the scanlation, and Intellect and Stamina are official translations, am I wrong, Zam?
That's right little math nerd. :p


here are my REVISED stats

Overall power level: OVER 9000!!! 420/600

Offense- 70
Defense-70
Mobility- 80 (does that sound good? or should i go lower?)
Kido/Reiatsu70
Intellect- 55-60 (rough estimate, what do you guys think?)
Stamina- 70
Ok, I'll get to work on your chart in a little bit.



If I'm following this correctly:
Ice heart is in Squad 3
badmanjaro is my squad's 5th seat
Rex is Squad 5's 3rd seat.
...is that every new member?
Eh, more or less....
You got those Golde?