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arceus03
10th August 2011, 1:17 AM
@arc: can't be frozen, can't be boiled? am I the only one who thinks your zan has absolutely no weakness and are probably the most powerful person here because of it? please tell me that electricity can at least flow through it


Oh, I AM the most powerful person indeed, you just noticed? Tsk tsk

*ehem* That aside, you are just reposting what Dac did. If you bother to go through the posts on the previous page, you'll see what I posted about my zan. In case you don't want to bother, I quoted it here:



*shrug* My zanpakto is different to most other people. It may not have an apparent weakness, but if you look close enough, you can find openings that you can exploit. That compensates for her lack of offense. My only forms of offense are water pressure and the blade. Plus Kido, of course. She supposed to be more supportive than offensive. So excuse the lack of apparent weakness. My zanpakto would be horribly weak if I give it obvious weakness while at the same time not having great offenses.

Also, no legitimate weakness? Yes it does. Mainly a yellow rat that comes with the name Pikachu, or a teenage girl whose name is Zachiru.

For the note, "a yellow rat that comes with the name Pikachu, or a teenage whose name is Zachiru" means electricity. Yes, it can flow through. I believe Eon mentioned it last page, as well.

And... the water can be frozen and evaporated, as I said on my zanpakto page. It's just that it's hard to. The main reason why I gave Tsukibana those properties is because the water is my blade. If it can be vaporized or frozen at ease, I would be mostly defenseless all the time. "Cherish, Tsukibana!" "Hado #31, Shakkaho!" *Tsukibana evaporates* "Damn"

I have another option, really. I could make Tsukibana have the same properties to normal water (vaporize-able and freeze-able, that is) but in return I would have to be able to create a body of water at will. Like how a certain Espada-Shinigami fight went I could mention (Too lazy to spoiler). I prefer the first option, because it makes Tsukibana a unique body of water, not just a random mass of water I can spew out from my blade anytime.

Also, me, the most powerful person? *shrug* I suppose Eon's bankai that multiplies his strength, speed and sensory nerves a hundredfold isn't a match to a body of revolving water. XP

Hope that clears pretty much everything? ^_^



>Chess fic

Once I get settled in at my new home, I'll be doing my editing, then posting.


You're done? YAY! =D

Eon Master
10th August 2011, 1:59 AM
Well, I see the term "Godmoddy" as being "a power level of over 9000! similar to that of a God" or just "very, very powerful", so in theory, we can have a lot of godmodders together. Though, of course, other people may define it as "more powerful than everyone else by a good margin", which is what I'm assuming you follow it as?

Godmoddy is actually the wrong word to use (because it implies that we're all haxxors), as MC said. Uber is better.


Thankyou.

You're welcome.

I put it in strike outs!

You're still IckleLittlePervert.

Good. It's probably because I have a rather simple character, anyway.

That depends on how you define "simple". Your reactions are rather predictable, but you're a hard character to get a read on and write in terms of emotions. Although, for one thing, your brand of humor is one that I can easily use, which I'm grateful for. Humor is hard for me :P

I'm glad :p

Lol.

I should've mentioned that, actually.
As a plot twist itself, it was good as it revealed that there was more to the death than what we expected; it also showed that Golde is much more of a mastermind that we might have previously thought (especially since his character isn't as integrated to Seijuro as, say, Sen, Cam or Kida). It definitely gripped my attention, especially with the lead up that we've had with Golde's behaviour being slightly... I'm not sure if suspicious is the right word. Though whether or not there's still something that even still needs to be revealed, we shall see.

Excellent. This is exactly the kind of positive feadback I like. Tells me that I wrote a good scene, what I did right, and voices your thoughts and predictions on the matter. Thank you.

My mind is at a bit of a blank for what else to say.

Don't worry, coming up with creative ways to say things is my job. Your job is to make technology that can let me do it at the speed of light :P

Something about getting laid...?

Um, yeah. That and something to do with lawyers.

Paws for feet are hilarious!

They're not like little fluffly puppy paws, they're twisted because they're partially like human feet and they have huge freaking claws. It's supposed to be more gruesome or morbid rather than funny.

Maybe.

Probably. Maybe not to Kida though, it could be someone else :P

Yeah, sure 8D

Good, because I don't like godmodding.

Funnily enough, I think you have the highest total, with 510. Second being Blue, Flash, and Sapph (what) with 500. Most people then have 490 and 480, with I think Zam having 460, and Jin also being fairly low, with around 430 or something.

WHAT. Sapph. Has. 500. Not possible. Even if he's stronger than me (being my former superior and all), he shouldn't be stronger than Golde.

But that's all from memory, I'm probably wrong somewhere.

I believe Jin has 420, but yeah, that's mostly correct.

Bolded.

Preserving odd formatting gives me headaches, so I'm not going to.




Resists the urge to write "Ah, I see" on all of the replies

Ah, I see.

Mmm. I see. I like the concept XD Because it gives the Quincy some... new abilities.

Yep. I'll admit that the concept is modified from another I've seen, but my version is much more complex and is practically an entirely different method, so I don't feel like I'm stealing their idea. In fact, since their idea was poorly explained and mine is much more concrete I think I can claim some semblance of originality. Still, credit where credit is due and all that.

Ah, no wonder. XD That could work as well.

If I managed to complete the humor, which I have issues with.

And you blame me for being enthusiastic for your chapters.

That was mostly sarcasm, lol. Or was that also sarcasm?

Of course not, it's a clarinet right?

xD Yes, yes it is.

Ah. Okay. XD Never liked English grammar to begin with

Hey, Finnish is arguably worse. 40+ noun/verb cases, oh my god.

Ah, so his zanpakto is stressing his body out, and because of that, his other personality (or his wolf, but I won't use "wolf" to avoid confusion with his zanpakto spirit) is causing strain on him mentally, something like that? Hence all the medical problems he had?

Eh, more or less. The whole thing just turned into a downward spiral from there, because, as Golde said, each problem just made his stress even worse.

No wonder. XD

The addiction to love for candy, the teenage girl as a Zanpaktou, the controling tendancies... you see where I'm going with this, right?

XD

Is there an echo in here, echo in here?

I didn't even know he wears boots back then :p

Lol, it was in his profile under his customized traits. Buuuut, seeing as I switched his profile out a while ago, it's totally understandable.

So what, you actually have a fiction planned when you even joined this club? That is SO Aizen :p

xD Nah, I just loved wolves, so I picked the wolfy guy over the white wizard.

Ah, okay.

Mhm.

Even more bold.


@responses to zan: Clearly I have a few more tweaks to make

Please refer to my reply. You're not making a new one until I give you my approval. You've had your current one for four months or so. Wait until mid-October (around the six month mark), then I'll be happy to help design and approve it.

@arc: can't be frozen, can't be boiled? am I the only one who thinks your zan has absolutely no weakness and are probably the most powerful person here because of it? please tell me that electricity can at least flow through it

Arc is probably the second most powerful because of all the fire Zanpaktou in this club (we have like, six or seven including yours). Golde is the most powerful, or perhaps he's not because electricity doesn't work very well in areas of high heat. Either way, we've already been over its weaknesses.

the ice in my body thing sounded better in my head, trust me, it did

Uh-huh. Sure it did.

@eon's fic: awesome, aside from a few grammatical errors, it's awesome

Please refer to kusari's reply to this.

also, prepare to see a fight with me and another person from this club in my next chapter, before everything boils down to the plot again

Your story has a plot?

whoever wants to be the one to fight me, the first one to pm me a link to their zanpakuto and shinigami profile will get to

Just do it yourself. Most of us have profile pages anyway.

it will be against my light zan because that's the zan in my fic

Thank you for seeing the light (pun fully intended).

Sensing a pattern yet?


>Eon's fic

You don't disappoint. It was decidedly epic and the plot twist was very well written. It felt really smooth. The only thing I don't like, is the fact that you have now set the bar high for fic writers. Which means I have to work hard to keep up with you.

Thank you. And lol, you don't have to use me as a standard. In fact, I'd prefer that you don't; I'd likely get a swelled ego and I don't want that.

Tbh, I was using you as a standard when I started writing this, but I've found that it's better if I just do my own thing and not let my basic writing style be influenced by anyone else's, no matter how good they are at writing.

C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!

Aaaaaand I think I'll just add in my two cents here.




Oh, I AM the most powerful person indeed, you just noticed? Tsk tsk

You honestly might be. You have only one major weakess, and it takes a close range fighter to exploit it thanks to your Kidou. Mine is powerful, sure, but if I take even one major (not lethal, but extremely damaging) hit, then I'm done. Golde's is also powerful, but his defense is pretty easy to break through if you know how to. His offense is insane, though. The dangerous thing about lightning is that, with a large enough charge, electricty can overload any insulator, no matter how much it resists an electrical charge. There is no absolute defense against lightning attacks except Kidou (which is part of the reason why the only other pure-lightning user in the club is Arenak, who has a more metal-based ability and is much less powerful than Golde. I doubt we'd allow anyone else to use pure-lightning, at least I wouldn't).

For the note, "a yellow rat that comes with the name Pikachu, or a teenage whose name is Zachiru" means electricity. Yes, it can flow through. I believe Eon mentioned it last page, as well.

In detail, no less.

And... the water can be frozen and evaporated, as I said on my zanpakto page. It's just that it's hard to. The main reason why I gave Tsukibana those properties is because the water is my blade. If it can be vaporized or frozen at ease, I would be mostly defenseless all the time. "Cherish, Tsukibana!" "Hado #31, Shakkaho!" *Tsukibana evaporates* "Damn"

In addition, reishi absorption abilities like Garou (my old Zanpaktou) have no effect on Tsukibana, but they would on normal water. When I used Garou, I was able to defelct Arc's water attacks, but never absorb them. Although the last bit would be just plain funny to see in omake or something. You'd have to win by barraging them with cookies until they got so fat they couldn't move xD

I have another option, really. I could make Tsukibana have the same properties to normal water (vaporize-able and freeze-able, that is) but in return I would have to be able to create a body of water at will. Like how a certain Espada-Shinigami fight went I could mention (Too lazy to spoiler). I prefer the first option, because it makes Tsukibana a unique body of water, not just a random mass of water I can spew out from my blade anytime.

Yours is more unique and much more fun to use (plus it allows for a cuter Zanpaktou spirit). Plus, what could happen if you had to use your healing powers in a pinch with your water evaporated? Use scented steam to calm you down before you die?

Also, me, the most powerful person? *shrug* I suppose Eon's bankai that multiplies his strength, speed and sensory nerves a hundredfold isn't a match to a body of revolving water. XP

See my earlier reply. Water is not a force to underestimate. Especially not when wielded by someone who also has a Kidou ranking of 100 :P And yeah, I'm really powerful, I get it. However, I have a huge, gaping weakness that can be exploited by just about anybody, I just make it insanely hard to target. I'm not as dangerous as you give me credit for, no matter my strategic abilities or power.

Hope that clears pretty much everything? ^_^

Definitely, at least from my point of view.

You're done? YAY! =D

How did I miss this? YAY!

And back to the pattern.


EDIT: To clarify what I meant about "dangerous" as opposed to "powerful", I've made a list with reasons why each Captain is dangerous, and in what order they fall. DO NOT WHINE if you're angry at me for your rating (and yes, some of you will not like it). Just. Don't. Do it.

NOW, I want you all to bear in mind that this "order" is relative; we're all roughly the same level of power (the Captains). We all have at least one weakness, or at least a lack of strength in one area. Nobody is saying you're weaker than anyone else, or that you can't beat someone based solely on these rankings. It's just like any other list in this club.

1. ILP (Technology, Time-Space manipulation, Kidou mastery, and great strategy. In my book, any one of those things is worth a huge danger rating. His only major weakness isn't really a weakness, since it's possible for him to completely mitigate it)

2. Arc (Medic, Water-element, Kidou mastery, tricky, very solid defenses, only one major weakness)

3. Golde (Lightning-element, Head Captain, powerhouse)

4. MC (Super-powerful Zanpaktou, very quick-witted, Kidou mastery, no major weaknesses that can't be at least mitigated, other than God's Fire Extinguisher or Wonderweiss Margera's release)

5. Kida (Five elements [automatic high danger rating despite the supporting style of its abilities], lots of experience [again, high danger rating], very tricky, very solid defenses, Kidou mastery, no gaping weaknesses other than a slight lack of stamina, which can be compensated for)

For all below six, I'll give weaknesses after I list strengths.

6. Me (A near-godlike Zanpaktou with a massive drawback that makes it only highly dangerous as opposed to haxy, fast, perceptive, strong senses, strategist, lots of spirit energy, cold-blooded; pathetic Kidou ability, only moderate stamina, and glass cannon)

7. Kusari (Powerful dual-element Zanpaktou, great strategist, Kidou master [judging from previous stats], good stamina; easily bored, not fast [which clashes with his current Zanpaktou abilities.

8. Zameric (Extremely dangerou Zanpaktou, well-rounded, proficient with Kidou, a real trickster; doesn't excell in any particular aspect, not even one 100-point rating, he has no way to compensate for a large gap in speed other than hoping to get lucky with his Bankai

9. Blue (Majorly dangerous Zanpaktou, incredible stamina, speed, and strength, massive bloodlust, tons of spirit energy; not strategic, weak Kidou abilies, almost purely instinctive and easy to read, if someone manages to outmanuver her shadow jumping, she's helpless)

10. Rotrum (Very dangerous Zanpaktou, fast and poweful, highly skilled in Kidou, decent strategic ability; low stamina, huge weakness to fire-based abilities, not terribly difficult to outlast in one-on-one combat)

The other three Captains are variable. For example, Cell is a master of mid- and long-range combat, but is weak at close range. However, he's fast and wily, and could very easily set a trap to make you pay for getting in close, so it's difficult to give him a ranking because it's hard to ascertain his exact weaknesses. That sort of thing.

I hope you get what I meant. I mean, Blue and I are arguably in the top three most powerful in the club, but in terms of a danger rating, we don't even make the top five. Others might disagree, but honestly, I'm nowhere near the most dangerous fighter in this club, and I feel that my list is at least mostly accurate.

Da14u.C
10th August 2011, 3:01 AM
*sigh* Dauc, that comment was half-sarcastic. Yes, you annoy me to a degree, but no, I'm not intentionally insulting you. If my words are sharper than they should be, it's because of that annoyance. I'm sorry that you feel insulted, but it's really not intentional (at least, not in any instance that I can recall).

Also, the part about me not knowing you? That goes both ways. Little comments like "oh, he's just irritating" (when coming from me) are usually at least partially sarcastic, with the sarcasm and cynicism increasing the more insulting/larger the comments are. It's rare that I deliberatly insult friends or acquaintances, and you don't annoy me nearly enough for that. If you knew me, you wouldn't make that assumption either.

Now then, replies, replies, replies.


I dont know if I should bother replying this...


@responses to zan: Clearly I have a few more tweaks to make
if I were you, personally, I would give up ^_^ you don't like taking peoples advice, or suggestions, and well.... you come up with some really (i think confused might be the most polite word to use) ideas. I have noticed almost everyone offer you help on your zan, just pick someone, have them help you and give you ideas, and produce something original, or just give up. i strongly disadvise trying to come up with something yourself....again.



@arc: can't be frozen, can't be boiled? am I the only one who thinks your zan has absolutely no weakness and are probably the most powerful person here because of it? please tell me that electricity can at least flow through it

there was an entire convo on this....





it will be against my light zan because that's the zan in my fic
xD I like how you had to specify which zan it was xD





Oh, I AM the most powerful person indeed, you just noticed? Tsk tsk

correction, you can claim "most powerful captain" :)
i trump you :)



*ehem* That aside, you are just reposting what Dac did. If you bother to go through the posts on the previous page, you'll see what I posted about my zan. In case you don't want to bother, I quoted it here:
I am horribly ashamed that I basically stated the same thing Lucario did (though he did it after me). I thoroughly apologise for whining about your zan's strength. I like challenges anyway :) and figurig out how i trump you took a good deal of thinking and analysing :P



For the note, "a yellow rat that comes with the name Pikachu, or a teenage whose name is Zachiru" means electricity. Yes, it can flow through. I believe Eon mentioned it last page, as well.
I personally dont see how this is a weakness for you in anyway. If someone tries to electrify you, your zan protects you by diverting the flow of electricity through its liquid body. meh. all it means is you cannot directly touch your zan when someone is sending electricity to it. this is more of an advantage than a disadvantage. its not like your zan will lose its shape when electrified xD

I term your zan official Ultimate Defense




And... the water can be frozen and evaporated, as I said on my zanpakto page. It's just that it's hard to. The main reason why I gave Tsukibana those properties is because the water is my blade. If it can be vaporized or frozen at ease, I would be mostly defenseless all the time. "Cherish, Tsukibana!" "Hado #31, Shakkaho!" *Tsukibana evaporates* "Damn"

I have another option, really. I could make Tsukibana have the same properties to normal water (vaporize-able and freeze-able, that is) but in return I would have to be able to create a body of water at will. Like how a certain Espada-Shinigami fight went I could mention (Too lazy to spoiler). I prefer the first option, because it makes Tsukibana a unique body of water, not just a random mass of water I can spew out from my blade anytime.


Hope that clears pretty much everything? ^_^


I think it cleared everything up :P



Also, me, the most powerful person? *shrug* I suppose Eon's bankai that multiplies his strength, speed and sensory nerves a hundredfold isn't a match to a body of revolving water. XP
correction: most powerful captain :P
i trump you :)


on a more random side note: good group convo yesterday :D we discussed many important things, like how unbelievably hot Cell is :D

actually..... now that I termed Arc's zan, I feel like doing that to everyone.

Golde: Ultimate Shocker
Cell: Robin Hood/The messenger
NL: Mother Nature
Arc: Ultimate Defense
Minchan: The Star
PKMN Trainer Rex: Demonic Brutality
MC15: Draconic flame
Lucario: The Confused One
Zameric: Bloody Death
VizardBlue: Dark Gore
ILP: Absolute Madness
Kusari: Big Bad Wolf
Me: Ultimate Sexiness :D or Toxic Beauty :)

i skipped all the inactive people

arceus03
10th August 2011, 3:30 AM
C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!

XD


That was mostly sarcasm, lol. Or was that also sarcasm?

No. =D I always have trouble sensing sarcasm. XD


Hey, Finnish is arguably worse. 40+ noun/verb cases, oh my god.

Thank God I don't have to learn Finnish


Eh, more or less. The whole thing just turned into a downward spiral from there, because, as Golde said, each problem just made his stress even worse.

Ah, I see.


The addiction to love for candy, the teenage girl as a Zanpaktou, the controling tendancies... you see where I'm going with this, right?

Yeah. XD


xD Nah, I just loved wolves, so I picked the wolfy guy over the white wizard.

White wizard indeed. XD


You honestly might be. You have only one major weakess, and it takes a close range fighter to exploit it thanks to your Kidou.

You know what I think of when you said this?
Unohana. XD She's nice, awesome, Captain of Squad 4, but it's been hinted that she's very powerful. And she's good with Kido. Awwwwww, we have something in mutual :3

...Yeah, I'm nice and awesome. XD As if


Although the last bit would be just plain funny to see in omake or something. You'd have to win by barraging them with cookies until they got so fat they couldn't move xD

XD Indeed


Yours is more unique and much more fun to use (plus it allows for a cuter Zanpaktou spirit). Plus, what could happen if you had to use your healing powers in a pinch with your water evaporated? Use scented steam to calm you down before you die?

I know =D
Scented steam ftw! XD That sounds like something that can make you aroused, though...



2. Arc (Medic, Water-element, Kidou mastery, tricky, very solid defenses, only one major weakness)


You left out one thing: COOKIES! =P I bribe people. With chocolate chip cookies.



correction, you can claim "most powerful captain" :)
i trump you :)

Yeah, yeah. :p I'm not claiming anything. XD


I personally dont see how this is a weakness for you in anyway. If someone tries to electrify you, your zan protects you by diverting the flow of electricity through its liquid body. meh. all it means is you cannot directly touch your zan when someone is sending electricity to it. this is more of an advantage than a disadvantage. its not like your zan will lose its shape when electrified xD

No o.o I've always imagined that blasts of lightning will shoot straight through the water. Other projectile attacks I could shield/deflect/divert its course, but never with electric. That's why I said my absolute weakness is electric; it blasts straight through my defenses.


I term your zan official Ultimate Defense

XD


on a more random side note: good group convo yesterday :D we discussed many important things, like how unbelievably hot Cell is :D

XD That how he always seem to attract...? XD Indeed


actually..... now that I termed Arc's zan, I feel like doing that to everyone.

Lucario: The Confused One

i skipped all the inactive people

That one made me lol very much XDD

And Eon

Manga! =D
Is not out yet, last time I checked. No manga this week right? Bet you checked mangastream before opening this spoiler

I like Pokemon (...)
10th August 2011, 3:20 PM
Those are correct... I believe. For Captains class anyways. Those ranked lower are around ~390 to ~410 or something like that.
I'm surprised at how poor my database is on the stats. I'll have to fix that today.

>Chess fic

Once I get settled in at my new home, I'll be doing my editing, then posting.
****yes.


That depends on how you define "simple". Your reactions are rather predictable, but you're a hard character to get a read on and write in terms of emotions. Although, for one thing, your brand of humor is one that I can easily use, which I'm grateful for. Humor is hard for me :P
The former, mostly. In terms of emotions, you could simply write off "the robot HAS no emotions!" or something. And yay, humour is awesome.


Excellent. This is exactly the kind of positive feadback I like. Tells me that I wrote a good scene, what I did right, and voices your thoughts and predictions on the matter. Thank you.
I'll take a note and try and to something like that for most of my reviews.

Don't worry, coming up with creative ways to say things is my job. Your job is to make technology that can let me do it at the speed of light :P
Woo! I'm good at that bit 8D

They're not like little fluffly puppy paws, they're twisted because they're partially like human feet and they have huge freaking claws. It's supposed to be more gruesome or morbid rather than funny.
I'm sticking with the fluffy puppy paws because it's more funy :p


WHAT. Sapph. Has. 500. Not possible. Even if he's stronger than me (being my former superior and all), he shouldn't be stronger than Golde.
I think he made the numbers quite early, so we didn't quite have that standard "Captain is between X and Y; Lieutenant is betwen A and B", and I think he mentioned something about being an older member, so he should be allowed to have high stats *shrug*. He's not that active though, so he doesn't appear in the fanfics as much anyway.


I believe Jin has 420, but yeah, that's mostly correct.
http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ3Ce3xk7dQq_d4G67I5VY8MQnM2_f85 039BKN5LkMSZTCoPC06eg


No comments on the list, really.



ILP: Absolute Madness
I am okay with this.

Is not out yet, last time I checked. No manga this week right? Bet you checked mangastream before opening this spoiler

Probably why there was such a massive cliffhanger. And no I didn't :p, I already knew

Soroft
10th August 2011, 4:57 PM
Me today:

Wake up, go get some breakfast.

Realize "Oh hey, it's Wednesday"

...Realize "OHAY IT'S WEDNESDAY! NEW BLEACH. :D"

Run to my laptop to finally get the next part to the giant cliffhanger last week

Go to a manga website, clicked Bleach.

Read the latest Bleach, but noticed it looked familiar.

Figured out "Oh, I guess it's not out yet."

Go to the homepage of the manga site.

"One Piece, Bleach, Naruto, [etc.] are all on break this week."

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f92/killjojo/1221366057883s.jpg

Lucario0708
10th August 2011, 6:34 PM
@dac:

confused one, he he, HAHAHAHAHAHAHNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAA

I'm sorry, I think that's the funniest thing I've seen today

I'll keep my light zan as requested, I never give up, so this thing is pushed to the back of my mind *click*

and, as suggested by ILP, Jaku vs. Blue in the next chapter

I am totally ****ed

Zameric
10th August 2011, 7:21 PM
actually..... now that I termed Arc's zan, I feel like doing that to everyone.

Golde: Ultimate Shocker
Cell: Robin Hood/The messenger
NL: Mother Nature
Arc: Ultimate Defense
Minchan: The Star
PKMN Trainer Rex: Demonic Brutality
MC15: Draconic flame
Lucario: The Confused One
Zameric: Bloody Death
VizardBlue: Dark Gore
ILP: Absolute Madness
Kusari: Big Bad Wolf
Me: Ultimate Sexiness :D or Toxic Beauty :)

i skipped all the inactive people
I want to give my interpretations on a few of the zans listed here...
Someone else wanted me to note that your titles 'sound ugly'.

Cell ............................... Flexing Vector
arceus03 [Tsukibana] ................. Wall of Water, Tsunami
minchan [Tsuyokin] ................... Starfire, Morning Star
Eon Master [Tanryoku no Rei] ..... Braveheart
Zameric [Keiri] .......................... The Executioner [s]of course
ILP (...) [Kagirinai-Kuuhaku] ......... Möbius blade

I like Kida's zan title. And Toxic Beauty is fine for yours.
I'm too lazy to comment on the others atm. :p

rotrum
10th August 2011, 7:44 PM
Did you have my funeral yet? Cause I'm still alive! And...ILP may or may not be the only person who knows that. I've gotten caught up with a lot of writing stuff (And evil, evil, evil, evil math homework!) so I haven't been able to post. I have been keeping current with the manga, though, and I actually worked on my chapter one PLease ignore the fact that I posted the prologue ages ago

I also need to make more appearances in Eon's Fic.

Also. I need someone to murder MC for me, he got the 4242th post! *Begins planting weapons everywhere and forming traps out of ice*

In other news, my first chapter has exactly 1337 words (Not including the title) according to word.




Humble Beginnings

The male sat back, taking the metal mask off his face and running his fingers through his hair, staring at the completed works of sheer technological mastery. Golde had finally allowed him the ability to make the technology he wanted to. It was a highly technological suit of armor, meant to make shinigami powerful while substituting the Zanpakutou properties with the Zanpakutou reiatsu as a secondary power reserve.

There were only three small items laid out before him. On the right were shoulder pads of some sort, on the left was something that looked a lot like a large metal and glass rubik’s cube, and in the center was a sleek bracer. He still wasn’t entirely through the approval process. He sighed before putting the bracer on his right arm, the shoulder pads beneath his haori, and the Rubik’s Cube-like item into his pocket. He smirked, he felt like a mixture of, perhaps, the beginning of Kingdom Hearts and Professor Oak. Any second now, he swore someone was going to run in and choose one of them, and someone else would pop up and take the one that had the clearest advantage.

He chuckled before rolling his sleeves down his arms and smiling into the mirror, making sure he was presentable. He adjusted his glasses and fixed his haori, ignoring the bags under his eyes. He took one more glance at himself in the mirror, and off he went. He had an important engagement to get to.

“Time to get some new technology approved.”

_________________

“Hello.” Captain Magnus said, eerily calmly, “Captain Ryuu tells me that you hold the most potential and adaptive ability among lesser known shinigami”

“So, what are we here for?” Kai said, impatiently. On his left, Min was struggling to maintain a serious composure, and his right Gira was simply standing resolutely and waiting patiently.

“I wish to test your combat ability. Simple as that.” Magnus replied, choosing his words carefully as to not let anything slip that they didn’t need to hear yet. “Of course, if you don’t fight at your best, I cannot guarantee you’ll be leaving in one piece.”

The three tensed at this, but realized that he was implying they had no choice. They bowed, to which Magnus smirked and turned around, clapping his hands as three figures shunpo’d into the area. In front of Kai was an incredibly generic and boring-looking man, with a neatly trimmed beard and a thin moustache. Before Min appeared a woman whose shinigami uniform was cut and resewed such that it perfectly complimented her figure-the tailoring turning her outfit into an elegant dress that looked impossible to fight in. In front of Gira was a serious looking man with a clean-shaven face and his sword already gripped in his hand.

_____________

“Computer, check the specs, just to make sure.” He said calmly, looking at the items laid out on the table one more time before going back to admiring himself in the mirror.

“They’re perfectly to your specifications.” A sensuous female voice replied.

“Good.” He smirked at himself, before sighing and, regretfully, departing the mirror. He went to the table and looked at his three technological marvels. Well…a soldier might marvel at them.

On the right was a strange wrist-mounted gun with a blade sticking out of the contraption. On the left was a massive rifle, at least five feet long. Other than the size of it, it was notably different in other rifles in design as well, being one long gun, with the handle and such built into the actual body-giving it length, aerodynamics, and a longer barrel in exchange for a more traditional weapon. Other than numerous other visible differences, it wasn’t exactly easy to tell what could possibly make such a large rifle convenient. Lastly, was a series of gadgets, including wristlets and anklets, that attached to numerous parts of his body where they could be hidden.

He turned around before his mirror again, and walked off.

____________

“Meet Squad Zero Seventh Seat, Ibis Douglas” Captain Kida Ookami said calmly, introducing her guest to the three shinigami that stood before her, wondering why they had been called.

“Hello.” The three shinigami said, looking Ibis over. Squad Zero was rarely mentioned at all, so the fact that they had been brought to meet a member of the squad was interesting. Physically, Ibis was about seventeen, with shoulder length orange hair and a normal shinigami’s outfit (Cause I still have no idea what it’s called.)

Ibis smiled politely back at the three shinigami, “Kida brought me here because she wanted to test you three.” Ibis said, choosing her words carefully as she reviewed the three.

“Why?” Cell asked, cautiously. Training with a member of Squad Zero was no joke, he didn’t want to ruin the chance by being overly inquisitive.

Kida sighed, “Because Ibis was free, any more questions?”

The shinigami could tell there was more, but they didn’t look into it much. They were very interested to see what kind of Zanpakutou she had. It was a rare occasion, and they weren’t just going to pass it up.

“Now, Ibis and I are both wearing limiters for this training, so don’t worry that we’ll go overboard.” Kida explained. “The battle will take place over this entire field, and I expect you to work as a team, got it?”

__________________

Golde finally finished putting everything of value in the Captain’s Hall into the hidden safe room. He pushed his desk up so that it was touching the wall and he sat down on the hard wooden surface calmly, calmly chewing on a large amount of warm caramel, his hand absentmindedly stirring the caramel pot as he waited.

The doors burst open, Ex-Captain Narcisse Dauc entered the room as dramatically as ever, strutting down the room, and finally, he stood in front of Golde, bowing theatrically.

“You’re early. This is a first” Golde chuckled to Dauc, who scoffed at the remark. “Now wait a moment, I’m expecting someone else.”

“Someone else?” Dauc, said, clearly confused, “To see MY fantastic invention!?”

“No.” Golde said calmly, while speaking surprisingly well for a person with a mouthful of caramel. “Someone else, to compete against your ‘Fantastic invention.’”

Dauc stopped, giving Golde The Look as his mind barely registered the sound of the door opening and closing. He span around. “YOU!” he hissed.

Ryuu blinked, doing a quick 360, before realizing the situation. “I believe I could do more with the Extra-Over Technology than you, Narcisse. Now excuse me, I have some…toys to present.” He said with an overly bored tone, walking calmly up to Golde.

Dauc turned away from Ryuu, staring at Golde-who was currently filling his mouth with more Caramel. Upon seeing both of them present, he calmly put down the caramel pot and spoon, and began talking normally while his mouth was full of caramel. “You both asked me if you could do your projects in the same day. I figured that the person who could develop a better series of weapons would be able to prove it. In battle. Saves me the trouble of having to judge them individually, or to choose one of you.”

They both stared at him. He stared back before finally saying, “Oh. You two should fight now. Go.”

_________________

“Tsk tsk tsk. They still haven’t told the public about Jin and Luppi’s disappearances. Or about the EOT.” A masculine voice sighed. “Maybe it is about time we made our move.”

“Yes, it seems this would be the greatest time. Especially since project TD is no where near completion.” Another male voice replied. “Nothing is standing in our way, and we have oh so much in our favor.”

“Yes, we’ve gotten a good deal of people to pledge themselves to our cause already. Perhaps it is time to make our announcement.”

“I agree. Do we have all of the Hell Butterflies we need?”

“Yes, I do believe we have enough.”

“Then to the Divine Crusaders.”

“To the Divine Crusaders!”


The technology and a good number of the characters are stolen simply because I've been working in my past couple fics on making Soul Society more modern, and there weren't enough scientists among us. And...I really haven't been able to write a fight scene in a while, so I may have overdone it with the amount of fight scenes I've set up this chapter.



Okay. So Ichigo evolved into Shinigami!

...Again.

...Again.

Stupid Japanese holidays! They're interrupting all the manga T_T



EDIT: Ohgod. My dog opened my trash bag and let all the trash everywhere...My Kitchen has so many ants in it...*shudders*

I like Pokemon (...)
10th August 2011, 8:11 PM
and, as suggested by ILP, Jaku vs. Blue in the next chapter

I am totally ****ed
Light versus shadow, will be interesting to see.


arceus03 [Tsukibana] ................. Wall of Water, Tsunami
Eon Master [Tanryoku no Rei] ..... Braveheart
Zameric [Keiri] .......................... The Executioner of course
ILP (...) [Kagirinai-Kuuhaku] ......... Möbius blade
Tsunami sounds cool even if it's too offensive
Braveheart... reminds me of the Japanese Digimon song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0sRVDjMbv3k)Which means it suits Rotrum or MC more.
Of course, the Executioner.
MOBIUS BLADE I AM SO OKAY WITH THIS.

And...ILP may or may not be the only person who knows that.
Ironic, considering how you hated me before, and now I'm talking to you so often :p

I've gotten caught up with a lot of writing stuff (And evil, evil, evil, evil math homework!) so I haven't been able to post.
Even I will admit, this homework was evil. Stupid geometry.

Also. I need someone to murder MC for me, he got the 4242th post! *Begins planting weapons everywhere and forming traps out of ice*
Aha, 4242. I just checked, Eon got post 1337.




The male sat back, taking the metal mask off his face and running his fingers through his hair, staring at the completed works of sheer technological mastery. Golde had finally allowed him the ability to make the technology he wanted to.
Is it bad that I knew it was Ant/ILP/me immediately?

There were only three small items laid out before him. On the right were shoulder pads of some sort, on the left was something that looked a lot like a large metal and glass rubik’s cube, and in the center was a sleek bracer. He still wasn’t entirely through the approval process. He sighed before putting the bracer on his right arm, the shoulder pads beneath his haori, and the Rubik’s Cube-like item into his pocket. He smirked, he felt like a mixture of, perhaps, the beginning of Kingdom Hearts and Professor Oak. Any second now, he swore someone was going to run in and choose one of them, and someone else would pop up and take the one that had the clearest advantage.
I wonder what that Rubik's Cube-like item does. And of course, a reference to video games.

“Hello.” Captain Magnus said, eerily calmly,
I can't remember, who's Captain Magnus?

“They’re perfectly to your specifications.” A sensuous female voice replied.

“Good.” He smirked at himself, before sighing and, regretfully, departing the mirror.
Obviously Da.c

“Meet Squad Zero Seventh Seat, Ibis Douglas” Captain Kida Ookami said calmly, introducing her guest to the three shinigami that stood before her, wondering why they had been called.
The thing is, we don't really know a whole lot about Squad 0. From bleach.wikia, all we know is that they were former Captains, so having one come in, they would be quite powerful. Also, do we even know if they have seats, in the same way that squads 1-13 do?

Ibis smiled politely back at the three shinigami,
3? Cell, and who else? I assume that Cell is still a "5th" seat here? Otherwise, I don't think that would be fair, in comparison to the 3 Lieuts that I have.

“No.” Golde said calmly, while speaking surprisingly well for a person with a mouthful of caramel. “Someone else, to compete against your ‘Fantastic invention.’”
Of course.

Ryuu blinked, doing a quick 360, before realizing the situation. “I believe I could do more with the Extra-Over Technology than you, Narcisse. Now excuse me, I have some…toys to present.” He said with an overly bored tone, walking calmly up to Golde.
Wait, why did I do a 360? XD

Dauc turned away from Ryuu, staring at Golde-who was currently filling his mouth with more Caramel. Upon seeing both of them present, he calmly put down the caramel pot and spoon, and began talking normally while his mouth was full of caramel.
Caramel x.x

“You both asked me if you could do your projects in the same day. I figured that the person who could develop a better series of weapons would be able to prove it. In battle. Saves me the trouble of having to judge them individually, or to choose one of you.”

They both stared at him. He stared back before finally saying, “Oh. You two should fight now. Go.”
Alright, a fight between our weapons. Something tells me it will come out as a draw.

“Then to the Divine Crusaders.”

“To the Divine Crusaders!”
And then the ambiguous scene.

arceus03
12th August 2011, 1:27 AM
Someone else wanted me to note that your titles 'sound ugly'.


Ah. Let us sit back and enjoy the show that is going to ensue.


Also. I need someone to murder MC for me, he got the 4242th post! *Begins planting weapons everywhere and forming traps out of ice*



Stupid Japanese holidays! They're interrupting all the manga T_T



EDIT: Ohgod. My dog opened my trash bag and let all the trash everywhere...My Kitchen has so many ants in it...*shudders*

You always deem MC as a necessary casualty. XD

ikr.

ANTS!


Ironic, considering how you hated me before, and now I'm talking to you so often :p

He did?

Aand. Guess what. I have a new zanpakto! =D

Joking. I was thinking of revamping it, actually. Not so much as a revamp than a power split, though. I need to know your opinions. =D


Release command: Cherish (Itoshigaru)

Details: This is the supportive form of Tsukibana. In this form, three of her abilities are activated: curative, Kido enhancement and defensive. She is able to heal minor and moderate wounds with relative ease, with major wounds taking a little more time (albeit much quicker than Kido healing). She enhances my Kido, but more towards the supportive Kido type - healing and binding spells, and doesn't really enhance my Kido for destructive spells. And finally, her defensive abilities in the form of swirling water is nearly impenetrable. Though as I have stated a few posts ago, electricity ALWAYS gets through.

Release command: Cut asunder (Tachikire) (Buut it's Amagai's release command as well, so idk if I can use it? XD) (If not, Kiritsuke; [to cut])

Details: This is the offensive form of Tsukibana. In this form, her abilities are more allocated towards offense. It's still the same body of water, but her abilities are more concentrated towards attacking. Her only means of offense in this mode is via the high water pressure she generates, able to cut through solid material with ease. Check out Findor's abilities if you want proof She also retains the Kido enhancing ability, but in this form it is more directed towards offensive Kido. In this form, she loses her curative ability. Her defensive ability also changes slightly; instead of swirling body of water, it is a wall of highly-pressurized water. It provides just about the same protection as in the other form, though.

The power split basically means I can only support or attack at one time, not both. If I need to heal while in the offensive form, for example, I would have to reseal the blade, then release it again. And the shape shifting ability remains. Meaning if I were to return the water into blade form it doesn't necessarily means I've resealed. =D

Well as I stated, it's not so much of anything new. I just decided to split her shikai into two. It should downtone my power a bit, with the delay it takes to reseal and re-release XD That is all. Tell me what you like/dislike/thoughts/comments/etc. =D

Just to keep the club from dying until Wednesday

Oh new page =D

Speaking of 42, the first post on page 42 was ILPy. XD The second was me And the one who really got the post 42 was Zam. =D

kusari
12th August 2011, 4:27 AM
Short post here.

>Chess fic

I have an estimated period of release. Between August 27th and September 15th.


I changed the name of my zanpakuto and a small chang to primary hand that affects battle style. Not a big thing. Nothing major was changed. Just felt like I should inform you guys.


>Arc's changes

I like the fact that you now have two different forms. It makes you slightly less predictable. Now we have to think of whether you'll attack or defend.

Northern Lights
12th August 2011, 3:25 PM
Did you have my funeral yet? Cause I'm still alive!

I swear i'm one of the only people that doesn't consider you dead to the world.


In other news, my first chapter has exactly 1337 words (Not including the title) according to word.

Havn't you had, tonnes of first chapters? I never remember following chapters =[


EDIT: Ohgod. My dog opened my trash bag and let all the trash everywhere...My Kitchen has so many ants in it...*shudders*

f*ck everything and set fire to your kitchen ... I hate ants.


Ah. Let us sit back and enjoy the show that is going to ensue.

It's what I come her for; the witty banter.



Just to keep the club from dying until Wednesday

What's happening on Wednesday?

I like Pokemon (...)
12th August 2011, 4:30 PM
Ah. Let us sit back and enjoy the show that is going to ensue.
Should be interesting, to say the least.

ANTS!
I don't think the world universe could handle more than one of me.


The power split basically means I can only support or attack at one time, not both. If I need to heal while in the offensive form, for example, I would have to reseal the blade, then release it again. And the shape shifting ability remains. Meaning if I were to return the water into blade form it doesn't necessarily means I've resealed. =D

Well as I stated, it's not so much of anything new. I just decided to split her shikai into two. It should downtone my power a bit, with the delay it takes to reseal and re-release XD That is all. Tell me what you like/dislike/thoughts/comments/etc. =D
As I've told you on MSN, I prefer it with the split as it helps to downtone your power a bit. Which reminds me, in the offensive form, to you have any named attacks (besides Hakuryuu)? And personally, I'd go with Kiritsuke, just to stay safe away from any kind of canon.


Oh new page =D

Speaking of 42, the first post on page 42 was ILPy. XD The second was me And the one who really got the post 42 was Zam. =D
Hmm, well, I have it set to 100 posts per page (so we're "only" on the 43rd page). Soyeah.

Short post here.

>Chess fic

I have an estimated period of release. Between August 27th and September 15th.
I think you're just teasing us now.


Havn't you had, tonnes of first chapters? I never remember following chapters =[



f*ck everything and set fire to your kitchen ... I hate ants.



What's happening on Wednesday?
I think Rotrum makes the most one shots/first chapters.

*Goes to emo corner*

The manga comes out. There was no manga this week, so the club will be a bit dead.

Eon Master
12th August 2011, 4:33 PM
Joking. I was thinking of revamping it, actually. Not so much as a revamp than a power split, though. I need to know your opinions. =D

I actually don't like it. Defense and offense aren't totally seperate, nor is it possible to fully seperate them unless you make it so that you have literally zero offensive capability in your defensive mode and vice versa. That would pretty much guarantee you a spot as the weakest/least dangerous Captain in the club. If you just left your Zanpaktou as it is, but made some of the techniques slighly less dangerous, you'd achieve more or less the same effect while remaining at least fairly powerful. If you'd like some help with that, I'd be happy to lend a hand.


Havn't you had, tonnes of first chapters? I never remember following chapters =[

I think his last fic made it up to Chapter 3 or 4, but idrr. Butyeah, tonnes of first chapters xD


f*ck everything and set fire to your kitchen ... I hate ants.

I'm sure ILP was like "please don't burn me", lol.


It's what I come her for; the witty banter.

Seconded.


I changed the name of my zanpakuto and a small chang to primary hand that affects battle style. Not a big thing. Nothing major was changed. Just felt like I should inform you guys.

Like everybody said to ILP, good luck trying to release your Bankai in a hurry, although your Shikai now sounds a thousand times more epic. Also, left handed reverse grip in sealed form... that's tricky. Even trickier than a reverse-handed dual-wield, at least then both hands follow a uniform attack pattern.


Eon Master [Tanryoku no Rei] ..... Braveheart

Irony. The one piece of the Isles I don't have in me, Scots. I've got Irish, British, North Irish, and even some Welsh. No Scottish.

I'm alright with this. An obvious choice, but a good one.

Totally loling at the fact that I got post 1337.

AND some good news. I'm finally getting MSN next week, once I get my laptop for college this weekend.


EDIT: ILP, you ninja'd me. Stop stealing Cell's job, lol.


The manga comes out. There was no manga this week, so the club will be a bit dead.

Kida's "question" was supposed to be sarcastic, lol. Like I've said before, you're too literal.

MasterCharizard15
12th August 2011, 8:05 PM
Those wolves
It's what I come her for; the witty banter.
Seconded.

Third.



AND some good news. I'm finally getting MSN next week, once I get my laptop for college this weekend.

...
*Uses Magical dragon powers to make everyone's dreams come true*
...

Combat with a Fatal Outcome! Captains vs Captains! Make 2 teams using 6 of the Captains. Telling us why you grouped them that way, may end up saving your life!

....

...I'm thinking about editing in my final attack in Bankai.

Eon Master
12th August 2011, 9:27 PM
Combat with a Fatal Outcome! Captains vs Captains! Make 2 teams using 6 of the Captains. Telling us why you grouped them that way, may end up saving your life!

The way you worded this, I'm assuming that we set up one team with ourselves and one team with six others so we can defeat them? I don't get it, so I'll just say what my team would be.

MC, Arc, Golde, Myself, Blue, ILP: MC, Arc, and Golde each have attacks that can set each other up and keep up a barrage of elemental attacks, while Blue and I specialize in getting close and moving fast so we can constantly keep our opponent off-balance and on the move. ILP because he provides technical support and can analyze his opponent's abilities, and he can control time and space to give us an advantage if we need it. Arc is a medic as well, which gives us an immediate advantage over the other team. Also, we have three Kidou masters and three raw power attackers on our team, and no two members overlap. Plus, ILP and Arc have great defense, MC and Blue have great offense, and Golde and I are balanced between offense and defense. In addition, all of our abilities can be used in team combat without mucking each other up. Finally, we avoid conflict by having one central strategist (me), but having three potential backup strategists (ILP, Arc, MC) in case I go down or one the others does, so we can pick up the slack.

Also, lol@calling me and Kida "those wolves".

Lucario0708
12th August 2011, 9:28 PM
. . .



two words

after, image

. . .

was gonna buy latest edition of manga, if it wasn't $25

CyberBlaziken
12th August 2011, 11:58 PM
Speaking of funerals, anyone planned mine already? ^.^
I haven't been on for weeks!
What's up everybody? :D

I have been inactive because I'm visiting Bangladesh, for those who don't know, I'm from Bangldesh originally.
I'm staying here until Eid is over, which is September 1-3, so until then I won't be on, though I'll try to come as frequently as I can :)

So. other than that, I'm pretty much updated with the Club and Bleach through my Dad's phone. And a friend of mine gives me new eps weekly :3

Eon, I read your fic, and it's going on pretty smoothly. Awesome work. Looking forward to the next chapter :D
And a question for your Fic,
You draw power from both your Zampakuto Spirit and The Wolf inside you right?
Is it the same position as Ichicho? How he uses both Zampakuto Spirit and HIchigo's powers?

Luke, no comments on your Zampakuto since it's been rejected.

Da14u.C
13th August 2011, 1:25 AM
Thank God I don't have to learn Finnish
I hear that finnish is this obscure language that even the neighbouring Swedes avoid learning xD




No o.o I've always imagined that blasts of lightning will shoot straight through the water. Other projectile attacks I could shield/deflect/divert its course, but never with electric. That's why I said my absolute weakness is electric; it blasts straight through my defenses.
hm..... wierd and against the laws of chemistry, but OK.





XD That how he always seem to attract...? XD Indeed
XD XD XD XD


I want to give my interpretations on a few of the zans listed here...
Someone else wanted me to note that your titles 'sound ugly'.

Cell ............................... Flexing Vector
arceus03 [Tsukibana] ................. Wall of Water, Tsunami
minchan [Tsuyokin] ................... Starfire, Morning Star
Eon Master [Tanryoku no Rei] ..... Braveheart
Zameric [Keiri] .......................... The Executioner of course
ILP (...) [Kagirinai-Kuuhaku] ......... Möbius blade

I like Kida's zan title. And Toxic Beauty is fine for yours.
I'm too lazy to comment on the others atm. :p

LOVINGGGGGG the title you gave to ILP! and the backstory is pretty funny haha!

xD at Tsukibana = tsunami
ironically... i ddnt see that xD







Humble Beginnings


I like the chapter title :)





The male sat back, taking the metal mask off his face and running his fingers through his hair, staring at the completed works of sheer technological mastery. Golde had finally allowed him the ability to make the technology he wanted to. It was a highly technological suit of armor, meant to make shinigami powerful while substituting the Zanpakutou properties with the Zanpakutou reiatsu as a secondary power reserve.

There were only three small items laid out before him. On the right were shoulder pads of some sort, on the left was something that looked a lot like a large metal and glass rubik’s cube, and in the center was a sleek bracer. He still wasn’t entirely through the approval process. He sighed before putting the bracer on his right arm, the shoulder pads beneath his haori, and the Rubik’s Cube-like item into his pocket. He smirked, he felt like a mixture of, perhaps, the beginning of Kingdom Hearts and Professor Oak. Any second now, he swore someone was going to run in and choose one of them, and someone else would pop up and take the one that had the clearest advantage.

He chuckled before rolling his sleeves down his arms and smiling into the mirror, making sure he was presentable. He adjusted his glasses and fixed his haori, ignoring the bags under his eyes. He took one more glance at himself in the mirror, and off he went. He had an important engagement to get to.

“Time to get some new technology approved.”



I LOVE this! it is beautifuly written, and I like the description :) It really allowed me to imagine the room nicely :) and I admire that you kept the identity secret :)






“Hello.” Captain Magnus said, eerily calmly, “Captain Ryuu tells me that you hold the most potential and adaptive ability among lesser known shinigami”

“So, what are we here for?” Kai said, impatiently. On his left, Min was struggling to maintain a serious composure, and his right Gira was simply standing resolutely and waiting patiently.

“I wish to test your combat ability. Simple as that.” Magnus replied, choosing his words carefully as to not let anything slip that they didn’t need to hear yet. “Of course, if you don’t fight at your best, I cannot guarantee you’ll be leaving in one piece.”

The three tensed at this, but realized that he was implying they had no choice. They bowed, to which Magnus smirked and turned around, clapping his hands as three figures shunpo’d into the area. In front of Kai was an incredibly generic and boring-looking man, with a neatly trimmed beard and a thin moustache. Before Min appeared a woman whose shinigami uniform was cut and resewed such that it perfectly complimented her figure-the tailoring turning her outfit into an elegant dress that looked impossible to fight in. In front of Gira was a serious looking man with a clean-shaven face and his sword already gripped in his hand.

oooh, mysterious opponents, I look forward to seeing a well written battle scene :D






“Computer, check the specs, just to make sure.” He said calmly, looking at the items laid out on the table one more time before going back to admiring himself in the mirror.

“They’re perfectly to your specifications.” A sensuous female voice replied.

“Good.” He smirked at himself, before sighing and, regretfully, departing the mirror. He went to the table and looked at his three technological marvels. Well…a soldier might marvel at them.

On the right was a strange wrist-mounted gun with a blade sticking out of the contraption. On the left was a massive rifle, at least five feet long. Other than the size of it, it was notably different in other rifles in design as well, being one long gun, with the handle and such built into the actual body-giving it length, aerodynamics, and a longer barrel in exchange for a more traditional weapon. Other than numerous other visible differences, it wasn’t exactly easy to tell what could possibly make such a large rifle convenient. Lastly, was a series of gadgets, including wristlets and anklets, that attached to numerous parts of his body where they could be hidden.

He turned around before his mirror again, and walked off.

xD PERFECT description of me :D
i approve :D





“Meet Squad Zero Seventh Seat, Ibis Douglas” Captain Kida Ookami said calmly, introducing her guest to the three shinigami that stood before her, wondering why they had been called.

“Hello.” The three shinigami said, looking Ibis over. Squad Zero was rarely mentioned at all, so the fact that they had been brought to meet a member of the squad was interesting. Physically, Ibis was about seventeen, with shoulder length orange hair and a normal shinigami’s outfit (Cause I still have no idea what it’s called.)

Ibis smiled politely back at the three shinigami, “Kida brought me here because she wanted to test you three.” Ibis said, choosing her words carefully as she reviewed the three.

“Why?” Cell asked, cautiously. Training with a member of Squad Zero was no joke, he didn’t want to ruin the chance by being overly inquisitive.

Kida sighed, “Because Ibis was free, any more questions?”

The shinigami could tell there was more, but they didn’t look into it much. They were very interested to see what kind of Zanpakutou she had. It was a rare occasion, and they weren’t just going to pass it up.

“Now, Ibis and I are both wearing limiters for this training, so don’t worry that we’ll go overboard.” Kida explained. “The battle will take place over this entire field, and I expect you to work as a team, got it?”

__________________

now i am even MORE excited for the upcoming battle scene!





Golde finally finished putting everything of value in the Captain’s Hall into the hidden safe room. He pushed his desk up so that it was touching the wall and he sat down on the hard wooden surface calmly, calmly chewing on a large amount of warm caramel, his hand absentmindedly stirring the caramel pot as he waited.

The doors burst open, Ex-Captain Narcisse Dauc entered the room as dramatically as ever, strutting down the room, and finally, he stood in front of Golde, bowing theatrically.

“You’re early. This is a first” Golde chuckled to Dauc, who scoffed at the remark. “Now wait a moment, I’m expecting someone else.”

“Someone else?” Dauc, said, clearly confused, “To see MY fantastic invention!?”

“No.” Golde said calmly, while speaking surprisingly well for a person with a mouthful of caramel. “Someone else, to compete against your ‘Fantastic invention.’”

Dauc stopped, giving Golde The Look as his mind barely registered the sound of the door opening and closing. He span around. “YOU!” he hissed.

Ryuu blinked, doing a quick 360, before realizing the situation. “I believe I could do more with the Extra-Over Technology than you, Narcisse. Now excuse me, I have some…toys to present.” He said with an overly bored tone, walking calmly up to Golde.

Dauc turned away from Ryuu, staring at Golde-who was currently filling his mouth with more Caramel. Upon seeing both of them present, he calmly put down the caramel pot and spoon, and began talking normally while his mouth was full of caramel. “You both asked me if you could do your projects in the same day. I figured that the person who could develop a better series of weapons would be able to prove it. In battle. Saves me the trouble of having to judge them individually, or to choose one of you.”

They both stared at him. He stared back before finally saying, “Oh. You two should fight now. Go.”



what an incredible twist!!! a battle between me and ILP? damn.... this will be interesting...







The power split basically means I can only support or attack at one time, not both. If I need to heal while in the offensive form, for example, I would have to reseal the blade, then release it again. And the shape shifting ability remains. Meaning if I were to return the water into blade form it doesn't necessarily means I've resealed. =D

Well as I stated, it's not so much of anything new. I just decided to split her shikai into two. [s]It should downtone my power a bit, with the delay it takes to reseal and re-release XD That is all. Tell me what you like/dislike/thoughts/comments/etc. =D
maybe its just me, but I dont really see a poiint in splitting your zan between attack and defense.... just keep it the way it is, it is fine. The abilities it has in both modes are pretty similar either way.




>Arc's changes

I like the fact that you now have two different forms. It makes you slightly less predictable. Now we have to think of whether you'll attack or defend.

not really.... he can attack/defend in either form. just one has better defense, and the other has better attack.




As I've told you on MSN, I prefer it with the split as it helps to downtone your power a bit. Which reminds me, in the offensive form, to you have any named attacks (besides Hakuryuu)? And personally, I'd go with Kiritsuke, just to stay safe away from any kind of canon.


I disagree. The only weakness is the time it will take for him to change from one form to another.


meh, Arc, dont worry about adding weaknesses to your zan. Aizen's zan only has one weakness that is near impossible to exploit, komamura has a massive weakness that makes him easy to defeat. you dont have to add weaknesses to your zan, just leave it to us to look for loopholes. the only time i will massacre you is when you disobey the laws of Bleach Nature


I actually don't like it. Defense and offense aren't totally seperate, nor is it possible to fully seperate them unless you make it so that you have literally zero offensive capability in your defensive mode and vice versa. That would pretty much guarantee you a spot as the weakest/least dangerous Captain in the club. If you just left your Zanpaktou as it is, but made some of the techniques slighly less dangerous, you'd achieve more or less the same effect while remaining at least fairly powerful. If you'd like some help with that, I'd be happy to lend a hand.


I agree with Eon Master.
I just think ther eis no point in seperating the two.....
I personally think you should leave your zan the way it is, and stop tweaking it to add strengths >.> yes, i notice those little tweaks >.>


AAAHHHHH My favourite bookstore is hiring!!! but.... :( I dunno if I will be able to make the time comitment... DAMMITTTTT :'(

Has anyone seen Rex? he has disappeared :'(

Golde
13th August 2011, 7:54 AM
ironically.... release is more imaginative than Burn.....
if you had made yours "strike" or "electrify" then i would be on your back as well....

I still want the damn trophy.




3. Golde (Lightning-element, Head Captain, powerhouse)


I'm not totally a powerhouse XD I have weaknesses. But yes, I'm powerful I suppose.



I personally dont see how this is a weakness for you in anyway. If someone tries to electrify you, your zan protects you by diverting the flow of electricity through its liquid body. meh. all it means is you cannot directly touch your zan when someone is sending electricity to it. this is more of an advantage than a disadvantage. its not like your zan will lose its shape when electrified xD

yeah but...i feel like having electricity pumping through would affect it somehow. I don't mean real water but if reitsu electricity was pumping through reitsu water...something something bleach physics. Plus if he was damaged, he couldn't heal.


I term your zan official Ultimate Defense




I could give him a run for him money XD But since honestly Mizuhashi's zan has been my favorite for like, forever, I'll let him have this...for now >>



I think he made the numbers quite early, so we didn't quite have that standard "Captain is between X and Y; Lieutenant is betwen A and B", and I think he mentioned something about being an older member, so he should be allowed to have high stats *shrug*. He's not that active though, so he doesn't appear in the fanfics as much anyway.


Eeeeh...maybe I should re-look at it. :P I never said anything about being an older member with benefits. In fact I believe I have relatively low stats because several stats I have like, nothing on. And I'm trying to be more active. I've just had a horrible, randomly-internet-less summer.



EDIT: Ohgod. My dog opened my trash bag and let all the trash everywhere...My Kitchen has so many ants in it...*shudders*

Oh hell did he finally perfect his cloning? *sigh*

Well let's all cut out the fat >>


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two words

after, image

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was gonna buy latest edition of manga, if it wasn't $25

Please put more into your posts. Ok?

Aaaaand...done.

PKMN Trainer Rex
13th August 2011, 8:37 AM
Has anyone seen Rex? he has disappeared :'(

Just as I was gonna post too. I've been lurking, pondering, listening to some Chiddy Bang and songs The Voice for the most part.


.
PKMN Trainer Rex: Demonic Brutality


Needs more Swag. Has a nice ring to it.


Me today:

Wake up, go get some breakfast.

Realize "Oh hey, it's Wednesday"

...Realize "OHAY IT'S WEDNESDAY! NEW BLEACH. :D"

Run to my laptop to finally get the next part to the giant cliffhanger last week

Go to a manga website, clicked Bleach.

Read the latest Bleach, but noticed it looked familiar.

Figured out "Oh, I guess it's not out yet."

Go to the homepage of the manga site.

"One Piece, Bleach, Naruto, [etc.] are all on break this week."

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f92/killjojo/1221366057883s.jpg

Thats how I felt after reading your post.




I think you're just teasing us now.


I get the same feeling.



normal shinigami’s outfit (Cause I still have no idea what it’s called.)



I think its called a "Gi". Off to Google!!!!!! ........ And I'm back, Its says its called a "hakama". But yes, good work on the fanfic. I'll be looking forward to the next installment.

arceus03
13th August 2011, 5:21 PM
>Chess fic

I have an estimated period of release. Between August 27th and September 15th.

>Arc's changes

I like the fact that you now have two different forms. It makes you slightly less predictable. Now we have to think of whether you'll attack or defend.

That's so LONG! D: Now you've made me impatient. XP Anyway, good luck with your first year =D It's the orientation week right? Unless it's different for local students, because I think my friends are in orientation week now. XD

Less predictable? XD I think the old one is even less predictable, since back then it was the same command for all abilities. XD Still, I won't change it, because of others' opinions. But I love the command Kiritsuke so I'm gonna add that name anyway XD



I swear i'm one of the only people that doesn't consider you dead to the world.[/s]

I never consider members dead, unless they haven't visited SPPf for like, a looooooooong time. XD


I don't think the world universe could handle more than one of me.

XD


Hmm, well, I have it set to 100 posts per page (so we're "only" on the 43rd page). Soyeah.

That must be like, reeeeeeeeeeeeeeally long. Especially when Eon posts his chapters and all of us writes lots of reviews. Now I'm itching not to spoil them so you have a looooooong way to scroll 8D


I think you're just teasing us now.

Indeed
Buuut yeah, since he's entering college. :P


*Goes to emo corner*

Awww *pat pat*


I actually don't like it. Defense and offense aren't totally seperate, nor is it possible to fully seperate them unless you make it so that you have literally zero offensive capability in your defensive mode and vice versa. That would pretty much guarantee you a spot as the weakest/least dangerous Captain in the club. If you just left your Zanpaktou as it is, but made some of the techniques slighly less dangerous, you'd achieve more or less the same effect while remaining at least fairly powerful. If you'd like some help with that, I'd be happy to lend a hand.

Mmm hmm. Okay then =D


AND some good news. I'm finally getting MSN next week, once I get my laptop for college this weekend.

YAY =D


Kida's "question" was supposed to be sarcastic, lol. Like I've said before, you're too literal.

It was? XD *high fives ILPy* At least I have someone who has a hard time sensing sarcasm like me XP


Combat with a Fatal Outcome! Captains vs Captains! Make 2 teams using 6 of the Captains. Telling us why you grouped them that way, may end up saving your life!

The way you worded this, I'm assuming that we set up one team with ourselves and one team with six others so we can defeat them? I don't get it, so I'll just say what my team would be.

MC, Arc, Golde, Myself, Blue, ILP: MC, Arc, and Golde each have attacks that can set each other up and keep up a barrage of elemental attacks, while Blue and I specialize in getting close and moving fast so we can constantly keep our opponent off-balance and on the move. ILP because he provides technical support and can analyze his opponent's abilities, and he can control time and space to give us an advantage if we need it. Arc is a medic as well, which gives us an immediate advantage over the other team. Also, we have three Kidou masters and three raw power attackers on our team, and no two members overlap. Plus, ILP and Arc have great defense, MC and Blue have great offense, and Golde and I are balanced between offense and defense. In addition, all of our abilities can be used in team combat without mucking each other up. Finally, we avoid conflict by having one central strategist (me), but having three potential backup strategists (ILP, Arc, MC) in case I go down or one the others does, so we can pick up the slack.

That's how I got his question as well.

Reading your reply, then the other team would be consisted of Cell, Kida, Flash Step, Zameric, Senny, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac (if you count him). Let's say we put in Dac, and leave out Senny and Flash Step (since one is... inactive, and the other one is rarely active). So we have Cell, Kida, Zameric, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac. Cell can go both melee or Kido with his arrows mixed sweeper, as well as kusari and Dac, Kida and rotrum are elemental, and finally Zameric is purely melee. Now, Eon, write how to counter them[s/] If it were me, my initial plan would be to incapacitate Zam, because his abilities are dangerous, but idk. XD *shrug*


Speaking of funerals, anyone planned mine already? ^.^

[s]We don't hold funerals, we burn shrouds <too much reading Percy Jackson



hm..... wierd and against the laws of chemistry, but OK.

You mean laws of physics I think because in all daily life examples we've seen, we'd never see a blast of electricity cutting through water, most of the time it's the electrical current. (If you get what I mean. XD Horrible wording, I know)


maybe its just me, but I dont really see a poiint in splitting your zan between attack and defense.... just keep it the way it is, it is fine. The abilities it has in both modes are pretty similar either way.

XD Okay then. But yeah, I still like the command Kiritsuke. I'll put that as an attack command


the only time i will massacre you is when you disobey the laws of Bleach Nature

How do I go disobeying the laws of Bleach Nature, then?


I agree with Eon Master.
I just think ther eis no point in seperating the two.....
I personally think you should leave your zan the way it is, and stop tweaking it to add strengths >.> yes, i notice those little tweaks >.>

:p

Little tweaks where? From my memory, the ones I remember only insignificant stuff like... zanpakto spirit Milotic hell yeah and bankai release sequence. The last one before that was about freezing Tsukibana like you told me on our VM.

So, er, where?

I'm surprised you didn't get baited by Zam's post that someone said your titles 'sound ugly'


I still want the damn trophy.

XD


yeah but...i feel like having electricity pumping through would affect it somehow. I don't mean real water but if reitsu electricity was pumping through reitsu water...something something bleach physics. Plus if he was damaged, he couldn't heal.


...something something bleach physics. Plus if he was damaged, he couldn't heal.


something something bleach physics.


bleach physics

Better hope ILPy didn't hear that. XP

Though yeah. XD But the electrocuted water could be directed to Earth. :P Live wire indeed


I could give him a run for him money XD But since honestly Mizuhashi's zan has been my favorite for like, forever, I'll let him have this...for now >>

You give everyone a run for his money.
Eh, it is? Awww :3 *blushes*


Oh hell did he finally perfect his cloning? *sigh*

XD


Please put more into your posts. Ok?

Lest Golde-soutaicho oars you

Normal shinigami outfit, you mean shihakusho?

I like Pokemon (...)
13th August 2011, 6:10 PM
I actually don't like it. Defense and offense aren't totally seperate, nor is it possible to fully seperate them unless you make it so that you have literally zero offensive capability in your defensive mode and vice versa. That would pretty much guarantee you a spot as the weakest/least dangerous Captain in the club. If you just left your Zanpaktou as it is, but made some of the techniques slighly less dangerous, you'd achieve more or less the same effect while remaining at least fairly powerful. If you'd like some help with that, I'd be happy to lend a hand.
Hmm... Now that you mention it, you have a point there.


I'm sure ILP was like "please don't burn me", lol.
Let me just get my fireproof skin...


Like everybody said to ILP, good luck trying to release your Bankai in a hurry, although your Shikai now sounds a thousand times more epic.
Mhm, yeah. In my editted version which I still need to post, the name doesn't change from shikai to bankai (and remains "Kagirinai-Kuuhaku".



EDIT: ILP, you ninja'd me. Stop stealing Cell's job, lol.
Strangely enough, Senny was the one who always ninja'd me. In fact, I think Luppi drew a picture of that some time ago... Yup, I still have it.



Kida's "question" was supposed to be sarcastic, lol. Like I've said before, you're too literal.
I might need to recalibrate my sarcasm detector. I'll have to talk to Kida more often.

Combat with a Fatal Outcome! Captains vs Captains!
Why does this sound like the title to an anime episode?
Make 2 teams using 6 of the Captains. Telling us why you grouped them that way, may end up saving your life!
1. I'll start off with Arc as the medic. As Eon said, he'll give the team an immediate advantage over the opponent. Milotic/Blissey
2. I'll also have Zam; despite his lower stats, I think his zanpakutou will make up for it, because of the number of people on the battlefield (it'll be easier to "hide" him). And he could probably get at least one or two kills. Wobbuffet
3. Then Kida; being a multitype user, and the second most experienced user, she'll be damn useful. ...Smeargle?
4. Golde; being the most powerful member, the most experienced member, and not overlapping with Kida's elemental powers, I'm pretty sure he'll get a spot on the team. ...Raikou? Zekrom?
5. Da.c; mainly because a scientist will always be useful, but I think the synergy he has with Kida would prove useful. Nidoking?
6. Eon. As he said, having a "main strategist" with "backup strategists" (Arc, Da.c, possibly Kida) would be good. And I think he's the only close-combat-heavy member in my group. Lucario

...Yeah, I'm pretty sure it doesn't cover all the areas as well as Eon's group does. Oh well


....

...I'm thinking about editing in my final attack in Bankai.

Just make sure you post it before editing your zan, because it might end up that, like Arc, you don't actually need to change it.


. . .



two words

after, image

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...What? I didn't even make any sense of that.

I have been inactive because I'm visiting Bangladesh, for those who don't know, I'm from Bangldesh originally.
I'm staying here until Eid is over, which is September 1-3, so until then I won't be on, though I'll try to come as frequently as I can :)
You guys celebrate Eid for 3 days? Over here we only celebrate for one day T.T

LOVINGGGGGG the title you gave to ILP! and the backstory is pretty funny haha!
Only because you think "Mobius" is a sexy name.


I still want the damn trophy.
*Gives him the damn trophy*



I'm not totally a powerhouse XD I have weaknesses. But yes, I'm powerful I suppose.
Your stats are too low, my number crunching doesn't work as well >.>



yeah but...i feel like having electricity pumping through would affect it somehow. I don't mean real water but if reitsu electricity was pumping through reitsu water...something something bleach physics. Plus if he was damaged, he couldn't heal.

I don't mean real water but if reitsu electricity was pumping through reitsu water...something something bleach physics.

...something something bleach physics.

bleach physics.
8D

Eeeeh...maybe I should re-look at it. :P I never said anything about being an older member with benefits.
Eh, like I said, it's not as big of a deal.
...Though his stat total is higher than yours.



Oh hell did he finally perfect his cloning? *sigh*
8D

I think its called a "Gi". Off to Google!!!!!! ........ And I'm back, Its says its called a "hakama".
*Facepalm* I should have remembered that.

That must be like, reeeeeeeeeeeeeeally long. Especially when Eon posts his chapters and all of us writes lots of reviews. Now I'm itching not to spoil them so you have a looooooong way to scroll 8D
I'm subscribed to the club, so whenever I go to the club, it's always to the most recent post (I just have to scroll up a bit if I haven't posted in some time). If I go to the club by other means (like by googling, or something), I just press the "End" button and scroll up from there.


It was? XD *high fives ILPy* At least I have someone who has a hard time sensing sarcasm like me XP
*High fives.*

Bleach physics. Better hope ILPy didn't hear that.Oh I did.


Lest Golde-soutaicho oars youAh, oars. I remember those.

arceus03
14th August 2011, 12:37 AM
Let me just get my fireproof skin...

XD


Mhm, yeah. In my editted version which I still need to post, the name doesn't change from shikai to bankai (and remains "Kagirinai-Kuuhaku".

Post eeeeeeeet


Strangely enough, Senny was the one who always ninja'd me. In fact, I think Luppi drew a picture of that some time ago... Yup, I still have it.

*wants to see*



...Yeah, I'm pretty sure it doesn't cover all the areas as well as Eon's group does. Oh well

Milotic indeed 8D
But yeah. XD Team of 6, reminds you of Pokemon Who wants to be the HM slave?


You guys celebrate Eid for 3 days? Over here we only celebrate for one day T.T

Seriously, one? o.o But yeah, it's supposed to be a "day", not "week" or "month". XD In Malaysia it goes for, eh, 3 or 4 or 5.


Only because you think "Mobius" is a sexy name.

Either he missed the "sounds ugly" part because it was so small, and in strikeouts no less or he decided to let it go which I doubt


8D

I see what you did thar 8D



Oh I did.

RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!


Ah, oars. I remember those.

Good times, good times. XD I wonder who first started the oaring tradition.

Also, yeah, I edited my zanpakto (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12523902&postcount=3445) again. Like, downtoned a few abilities, gave some new names, but yeah. Nothing major.

Golde
14th August 2011, 5:20 AM
You give everyone a run for his money.
Eh, it is? Awww :3 *blushes*


Lest Golde-soutaicho oars you


As Captain, yeah, I'm pretty powerful XD but my zan has weaknesses. Just like everyone else. Electricity is just the little ***** of the element world. And I commandeer it well.


And not just oar. DIAMOND Oar.



*Gives him the damn trophy*


Your stats are too low, my number crunching doesn't work as well >.>


8D

Eh, like I said, it's not as big of a deal.
...Though his stat total is higher than yours.



I don't even care. I'm better. FACT. (Cockiness XD)

*puts damn trophy on damn trophy shelf*

And what,you gonna define and make laws regarding bleach physics?

...Actually I would be so on board for helping with that. SO ON BOARD.

I like Pokemon (...)
14th August 2011, 7:28 PM
Post eeeeeeeet

The things I've changed are:
The zanpakutou spirit; the release command; the release description is slightly different; using my abilities have an affect on the blades; bankai name is the same as shikai; and some rewording of my bankai effects. If anything is still unclear or should be changed, tell me so I can fix it:


Zanpaktou Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal Void)

Type; Space-time

Zanpakutou spirit; A wise panda with a robotic right arm, a beard, a necklace made of skulls, a walking cane, and a double-sided monocle (one side magnifies, and the other side shrinks). Kagirinai-Kuuhaku talks entirely in proverbs.

Release Command; Eien no kutsuu o chinmoku sa se nasai! (Silence the eternal pain!)

Shikai Details; After calling the release command, peoples’ visions of my zanpakutou become blurry. When their vision clears up, people can see 2 scythes instead of one: Ebony and Ivory. The handles are about as long as my arm and the curved blades are about as long as my forearm. Ivory is pure white with Ebony being as black as charcoal.

With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can cause it to shrink or expand. However, the opposite happens to Ebony’s blade. If I make a person shrink, then Ebony increases in size, and vice versa (this allows me to use a shorter or longer blade, for close-range combat). Ebony does not cause the mass of an object to change, however. The size of the object returns to normal when I reseal my zanpakutou.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I cut an object, I can cause time to flow faster or slower for it. However, when I make time flow faster, Ivory’s blade becomes longer, and when time flows slower, Ivory’s blade becomes shorter (if I make time flow twice as fast, then Ivory gets twice as big, if the flows half as fast, Ivory becomes half the size). I cannot cause time to stop, however. Time flows normally for an object, when I reseal my zanpakutou - but any aging is not reversed.

When an object is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can control mass. If I increase an objects size, and make time flows more slowly, then the mass increases. If I decrease the object's size, and cause time to flow faster, then their mass decreases.

Bankai

Bankai Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal Void)

Bankai Description; Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one arm being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Bankai Abilities;

My powers extend to whatever I touch, and not just what I cut, though everything that was under my control while I was in Shikai, I can still control while in Bankai.


Ebony now also allows me to turn the air into very small items, like daggers (larger and more complicated objects, like a sword or a gun will take much longer). This works by converting the elements in the air into other elements, through fusion and fission. In theory, I can do this to any material, excluding zanpakutou and living creatures.
Ivory also allows me to stop and reverse time. Depending on the size of the area, how quickly time is reversed for it, and how long I do it for, it can take either a lot or a little bit of reiatsu.

Other notes;
When I refer to an “object”, it is usually quite limited. If I were to cut someone’s shirt, then it would only affect their shirt. If I cut their finger, however, then it would be considered as their entire body, excluding their clothes or weapon. A zanpakutou must have some kind of visual damage for it to be affected; an actual scratch or chip would work (Kagirinai-Kuuhaku is very sharp). A light tap would not be counted.

Also, the greater I vary an object from normal, the more Reiatsu is required. I normally would do smaller changes, and use Kidou for actual attacks. Sometimes, though, I know that I am forced to immediately make a big change and finish a fight early.

When I go from sealed to shikai, Ebony and Ivory appear in random hands (but there will always be one blade in each hand). I can swap them around during the fight, but when I go bankai, they remain like that until I go back to shikai/sealed. From sealed straight to bankai, Ebony and Ivory appear for a split second (again, in random hands), and then they become the armour.

Finally, if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time.



*wants to see*
http://oi54.*******.com/23vyxc7.jpg


Good times, good times. XD I wonder who first started the oaring tradition.
I searched for oar, oars, oar'd and oared in the old club (since they all come up with different results), and the first time that any of them was used was by Luppi, on the 3rd of November, 2008. (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=8882536&highlight=oar#post8882536)

And what,you gonna define and make laws regarding bleach physics?

...Actually I would be so on board for helping with that. SO ON BOARD.
That would be DAMN fun. Though I wouldn't know how to go about doing that. Presumably, we'd start with our laws, and then edit them to fit the bleach universe.

Eon Master
15th August 2011, 12:13 AM
1. I'll start off with Arc as the medic. As Eon said, he'll give the team an immediate advantage over the opponent. Milotic/Blissey
2. I'll also have Zam; despite his lower stats, I think his zanpakutou will make up for it, because of the number of people on the battlefield (it'll be easier to "hide" him). And he could probably get at least one or two kills. Wobbuffet
3. Then Kida; being a multitype user, and the second most experienced user, she'll be damn useful. ...Smeargle?
4. Golde; being the most powerful member, the most experienced member, and not overlapping with Kida's elemental powers, I'm pretty sure he'll get a spot on the team. ...Raikou? Zekrom?
5. Da.c; mainly because a scientist will always be useful, but I think the synergy he has with Kida would prove useful. Nidoking?
6. Eon. As he said, having a "main strategist" with "backup strategists" (Arc, Da.c, possibly Kida) would be good. And I think he's the only close-combat-heavy member in my group. Lucario

The only thing I can point out is that Dauc's abilities are not meant for team combat. Yes, he works well with Kida, but in a large group his abilties are just as liable to hurt his allies as his enemies. If you were aiming to keep your whole team alive, he's not a good choice. That's part of the reason why I picked you over him for my team. Also, yeah, Zam does have a dangerous ability, but he's well-rounded. Being well-rounded is usually a bad thing in team combat unless

A) Your entire team is well-rounded (not happening).

or B) The person has an extremely powerful (not necessarily dangerous, but powerful) ability.

Better to have a certain number of specialists that focus on each area, and then let each member watch the other's back rather than let the combat devolve into a melee.

...also, I'm more of a Weavile than a Lucario. More speed than power, and is only powerful at close range. Lucario's Special Attack is actually higher than its Attack by 5 Stat Points. Weavile... well, let's just say that there's a good reason that SpecsVile an Nasty Plot Weavile are gimmicks xD


Reading your reply, then the other team would be consisted of Cell, Kida, Flash Step, Zameric, Senny, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac (if you count him). Let's say we put in Dac, and leave out Senny and Flash Step (since one is... inactive, and the other one is rarely active). So we have Cell, Kida, Zameric, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac. Cell can go both melee or Kido with his arrows mixed sweeper, as well as kusari and Dac, Kida and rotrum are elemental, and finally Zameric is purely melee. [s]Now, Eon, write how to counter them[s/] If it were me, my initial plan would be to incapacitate Zam, because his abilities are dangerous, but idk. XD *shrug*

My immediate reaction would be to off Dauc with Blue and myself (me doing the initial move, Blue as the actual killer), thus cutting down not only the biggest threat to our health (though he's just as dangerous to his own team, I don't want to just let him run amok), since I'm the fastest and Blue's release is incredibly quick, not to mention that she can immediately get a kill-shot in if her opponent is unable to dodge without leaving themself open to another opponent. Then Blue would go after Cell, keeping him off-balance and not giving him a clear shot by constantly using her shadow jumping (Cell can't hit what he can't aim at). I'd then go after Zam with my Bankai (not taking any chances with that haxy Shikai of his). MC would get to go after Rotrum (god knows those two need a good fight to work out their issues). ILP would be going after Kida (he's beaten her before, though you would be on watch to see if he needed any help), and Golde would duel with Kusari. You'd be hanging back to deal out damage, give long range support, and heal us as needed. This also gives you a better defensive position than jumping into the thick of things. It seems like a melee, but we'd actually be working in tandem with one another as well.

I'm probably missing something because I'm running on two hours of sleep, but meh.


I never consider members dead, unless they haven't visited SPPf for like, a looooooooong time. XD

You mean like Senny?

Speaking of him, I'm lol'ing at the MS Paint picture of him ninja'ing ILP.

Also, seeing as we need an understandable topic:

Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

Air resistence apparently throws up huge clouds of dust when characters try to stop skidding backwards while well over fifty feet in the air. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently doesn't carry enough force to snap a Nodachi like a twig if both are Bankai. (Ichigo vs Gin)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently only stabs through your shoulder instead of splattering bits of you across a five mile radius when it hits you. (Ichigo vs. Gin)

A full-power, full-body charge can apparently be stopped by grabbing your opponent's hand when they try to punch you. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

The centrifugal force of a spinning roundhouse kick to the chest apparently knocks you back in a completely straight line instead of a curve. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, second battle)

You can apparently dodge almost perfectly in near-supersonic flight just by nudging in a direction with your shoulder. (Ichigo vs. Grimjow, final battle)

arceus03
16th August 2011, 1:41 AM
Manga goes out for one week and the thread becomes cold



And not just oar. DIAMOND Oar.

I thought diamond oars are rotrum's. Still. :p



Zanpakutou spirit; A wise panda with a robotic right arm, a beard, a necklace made of skulls, and a walking cane. Kagirinai-Kuuhaku talks entirely in proverbs.

I see what you did thar So this panda is like, a mixture of different elements? XD Science (the robotic arm), wisdom (beard, talking in proverbs)... goth? XD (the skull necklace) and the walking cane signifies... age?

Should have included a monocle


Release Command; Eien no kutsuu o chinmoku sa se nasai! (Silence the eternal pain!)

Aaaaand we're back at square one


With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can cause it to shrink or expand. However, the opposite happens to Ebony’s blade. If I make a person shrink, then Ebony increases in size, and vice versa (this allows me to use a shorter or longer blade, for close-range combat). Ebony does not cause the mass of an object to change, however. The size of the object returns to normal when I reseal my zanpakutou.

Which allows you to have elephant-sized scythe with a normal weight, right?


Time flows normally for an object, when I reseal my zanpakutou.

So does it get reverted again? Like in your old (or older, idr) version, when Ivory is resealed, the time flow gets reverted?


Bankai Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal Void)

First case =D Why is that, I wonder? Any mindraping explanation? :p


it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Do you have any specific hand in which you hold Ivory and Ebony? Or is it random?




http://oi54.*******.com/23vyxc7.jpg

XD


I searched for oar, oars, oar'd and oared in the old club (since they all come up with different results), and the first time that any of them was used was by Luppi, on the 3rd of November, 2008. (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=8882536&highlight=oar#post8882536)

You have too much time on your hand


That would be DAMN fun. Though I wouldn't know how to go about doing that. Presumably, we'd start with our laws, and then edit them to fit the bleach universe.

Eh, Bleach physics to go along with the metaphysics. XD


The only thing I can point out is that Dauc's abilities are not meant for team combat. Yes, he works well with Kida, but in a large group his abilties are just as liable to hurt his allies as his enemies. If you were aiming to keep your whole team alive, he's not a good choice.

Tyranitar!


You mean like Senny?

Somethinglikethatyeah


Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

Air resistence apparently throws up huge clouds of dust when characters try to stop skidding backwards while well over fifty feet in the air. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently doesn't carry enough force to snap a Nodachi like a twig if both are Bankai. (Ichigo vs Gin)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently only stabs through your shoulder instead of splattering bits of you across a five mile radius when it hits you. (Ichigo vs. Gin)

A full-power, full-body charge can apparently be stopped by grabbing your opponent's hand when they try to punch you. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

The centrifugal force of a spinning roundhouse kick to the chest apparently knocks you back in a completely straight line instead of a curve. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, second battle)

You can apparently dodge almost perfectly in near-supersonic flight just by nudging in a direction with your shoulder. (Ichigo vs. Grimjow, final battle)

Trust you to include Grimmjow's and Gin's fight XD

Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

Just, I'm not sure which of the many failures in Bleach would be counted under physics. XD;

I like Pokemon (...)
16th August 2011, 5:41 PM
The only thing I can point out is that Dauc's abilities are not meant for team combat. Yes, he works well with Kida, but in a large group his abilties are just as liable to hurt his allies as his enemies. If you were aiming to keep your whole team alive, he's not a good choice.
Hmm, yeah. I think I took the Pokemon idea a bit too far XD. I forgot that everyone was fighting at the same time.

Also, yeah, Zam does have a dangerous ability, but he's well-rounded. Being well-rounded is usually a bad thing in team combat unless

A) Your entire team is well-rounded (not happening).

or B) The person has an extremely powerful (not necessarily dangerous, but powerful) ability.

Better to have a certain number of specialists that focus on each area, and then let each member watch the other's back rather than let the combat devolve into a melee.
Ah, I see. I'll have to remember that for later.

...also, I'm more of a Weavile than a Lucario. More speed than power, and is only powerful at close range. Lucario's Special Attack is actually higher than its Attack by 5 Stat Points. Weavile... well, let's just say that there's a good reason that SpecsVile an Nasty Plot Weavile are gimmicks xD
Yeah, you're right. Your avatar kind of influenced me there.


You mean like Senny?

Speaking of him, I'm lol'ing at the MS Paint picture of him ninja'ing ILP.
I still consider him as alive...
Yeah, that's the kind of stuff that happens when everyone's on MSN XP


Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

The I'm pretty sure Ichigo charging at Aizen, only to be stopped by a single finger pretty badly breaks the law of conservation of momentum.
...That's all I can think of atm XD. I don't pay enough attention to "THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE!" in anime unless it's dialogue, most of the time.



Manga goes out for one week and the thread becomes cold
I was going to post something yesterday, but I didn't finish it. I'm not going to post it today, though, since the manga is coming out tomorrow, and no one's going to read it not like anyone will read it anyway...


I see what you did thar So this panda is like, a mixture of different elements? XD Science (the robotic arm), wisdom (beard, talking in proverbs)... goth? XD (the skull necklace) and the walking cane signifies... age?

Should have included a monocle
Yeah, pretty much.
And I forgot about the monocle, thanks. If you look at it from one side, it magnifies, and from the other side, it shrinks.




Which allows you to have elephant-sized scythe with a normal weight, right?
Yup.

So does it get reverted again? Like in your old (or older, idr) version, when Ivory is resealed, the time flow gets reverted?
No. If someone has aged faster than normal, then they will continue to have those extra days/weeks/months/years/whatever. I just no longer have control of them, after I seal.

First case =D Why is that, I wonder? Any mindraping explanation? :p
It was too long in Bankai.
...Yeah, that's pretty much it. Unless someone wants to come up with a mindraping explanation for me?

Do you have any specific hand in which you hold Ivory and Ebony? Or is it random?
It's random. I can switch and choose whichever way I like.


You have too much time on your hand
Yeah, 5 minutes.

Zameric
17th August 2011, 3:37 AM
Zanpakutou spirit; A wise panda with a robotic right arm, a beard, a necklace made of skulls, a walking cane, and a double-sided monocle (one side magnifies, and the other side shrinks). Kagirinai-Kuuhaku talks entirely in proverbs.
Pardon my French, but...
Que diable êtes-vous fumeur?!
100% generated by Google translate.


Also, seeing as we need an understandable topic:

Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

Air resistence apparently throws up huge clouds of dust when characters try to stop skidding backwards while well over fifty feet in the air. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently doesn't carry enough force to snap a Nodachi like a twig if both are Bankai. (Ichigo vs Gin)

A sword that is 13 km long and moving at a speed of 171,500 meters per second apparently only stabs through your shoulder instead of splattering bits of you across a five mile radius when it hits you. (Ichigo vs. Gin)

A full-power, full-body charge can apparently be stopped by grabbing your opponent's hand when they try to punch you. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, final battle)

The centrifugal force of a spinning roundhouse kick to the chest apparently knocks you back in a completely straight line instead of a curve. (Ichigo vs. Grimmjow, second battle)

You can apparently dodge almost perfectly in near-supersonic flight just by nudging in a direction with your shoulder. (Ichigo vs. Grimjow, final battle)
Ahahahahaha I love this topic!


Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics

The I'm pretty sure Ichigo charging at Aizen, only to be stopped by a single finger pretty badly breaks the law of conservation of momentum.
...That's all I can think of atm XD. I don't pay enough attention to "THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE!" in anime unless it's dialogue, most of the time.
You totally stole my idea!! D<

I really like the quality of the artwork in this episode.
Did anyone else notice that it seemed better?

I don't know quite how to explain it, but the plot for this arc seems better developed than others.
Although, the current arc in the manga is pretty good too. :p

The preview just made me laugh really hard!
Unohana can be pretty deviant when she wants to. xD

Lucario0708
17th August 2011, 3:54 AM
@topic: I'm pretty sure spiritual energy breaks the bounds of physics


anime: man that purple haired homosexual is ugly

kusari
17th August 2011, 4:16 AM
@topic: I'm pretty sure spiritual energy breaks the bounds of physics


anime: man that purple haired homosexual is ugly
Yes Charlotte is ugly. And like Golde said last time, please put a bit more into your posts.

I agree with Zam that this episode did seem to have pretty awesome artwork compared to normal. The scenes where Ichigo was in the cleaner looked particularly awesome.

And Ichigo's mystery savior is revealed. It was himself.

Again, agreeing with Zam, thiz arc was incredibly well planned out. Each small event or item is important later on. It also seems to be giving Kon more of a prominent role that he's only seen in Karakura Superhero/Karakuraizer fillers and Fade To Black.

By this point, I believe I have Kageroza's endgame figured out. I'll just wait and see if I'm right.

Shinigami Illustrated Picture Book sounded like the plot of a one shot that I would write. However it's not better than the one with Hisagi's pr0n.

Topic

Holding a nodachi horizantally with one hand can seemingly stop the punch of a giant man. (Ichigo vs Yammy; first encounter)

While standing in a completely relaxed position, an Arrancar so powerful it had to be split into two entities, shows no recoil at all. (Stark vs Kyoraku)

All I can think ouf that Eon hasn't already said.

arceus03
17th August 2011, 4:21 AM
Hmm, yeah. I think I took the Pokemon idea a bit too far XD. I forgot that everyone was fighting at the same time.

XD What would happen if Bleach battles are held Pokemon style is beyond imaginable. "Dac used Smog!" "ILP was Poisoned! ILP lost his HP because of the poisoning. ILP used Spacial Rend!" "Arc used Refresh!" "ILP's Poisoning was Cured!"

Something along those lines. XD Now that made me want to compare Pokemon moves to Bleach attacks


I was going to post something yesterday, but I didn't finish it. I'm not going to post it today, though, since the manga is coming out tomorrow, and no one's going to read it not like anyone will read it anyway...

Post eeeeet maybe after the manga


Yeah, pretty much.
And I forgot about the monocle, thanks. If you look at it from one side, it magnifies, and from the other side, it shrinks.

Ah, so you had a monocle planned? XD Which eye it's on?


No. If someone has aged faster than normal, then they will continue to have those extra days/weeks/months/years/whatever. I just no longer have control of them, after I seal.

Ah.


...Yeah, that's pretty much it. Unless someone wants to come up with a mindraping explanation for me?

Indeed. XD All I could think of, the name of zanpakto change in accordance with their spirit appearance, right? So maybe your panda stays in the same condition under shikai or bankai.

Speaking of which, though, it's not like we all had different spirits for shikai and bankai anyway. We should, canonically, but meh. XD


It's random. I can switch and choose whichever way I like.

Even in the initial release? I mean like, is there a specific hand in which Ivory/Ebony first appear when you go shikai? Also, how would you go bankai immediately from the sealed state?



I really like the quality of the artwork in this episode.
Did anyone else notice that it seemed better?

The preview just made me laugh really hard!
Unohana can be pretty deviant when she wants to. xD

It is? XD

Yeah, yeah it does XD Deity indeed

Oh wee. So now, ergh, Kageroza and Nozomi are becoming one? o.o

And. We didn't know what happened to the original Captains in Soul Society. >.> Last time they were shown was during that fight, in which they got horribly owned in the end. Aaaaand after that, nothing.


@topic: I'm pretty sure spiritual energy breaks the bounds of physics


anime: man that purple haired homosexual is ugly

Which was why the term was "Bleach physics". Ah well.

Purple haired homosexual... which one? o.o


Yes Charlotte is ugly. And like Golde said last time, please put a bit more into your posts.

And Ichigo's mystery savior is revealed. It was himself.

EDIT: OH CHARLOTTE. >.> We used to have fun making fun of him with Luppi. XD
Apparently someone wants to taste Golde's diamond oar. Ah well. :p

Aaaaah so that's who it was. I've forgotten about that scene a long time ago. XD Cool.

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th August 2011, 5:23 AM
*facepalm* I should of remembered that.


Apparently I was kinda wrong. Some on the Favorite Bleach Character (http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=536674) thread in the anime section called it shihakusho. So I googled it again, and everything that popped up was Bleach related.



@topic: I'm pretty sure spiritual energy breaks the bounds of physics

anime: man that purple haired homosexual is ugly

Charlotte vs Yumichika was freggin' hilarious, especially Charlotte's resurrección. My younger bro was watching the ep too, and his face when it happened was priceless.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
17th August 2011, 1:10 PM
Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics
Those are the types of failures I'm actually least concerned about.
But let me start with Ichigo's bankai allowing him to be the fastest being in Soul Society. Being bested in speed only by every single enemy he's fought after Byakuya.
This essentially means his bankai is useless.

Coincidentally, it matches his personality to a T.

...was that a physics failure? I can't tell anymore with so many other failures popping up everywhere.

I like Pokemon (...)
17th August 2011, 3:31 PM
Pardon my French, but...
Que diable êtes-vous fumeur?!
100% generated by Google translate.

To be fair, I actually didn't come up with that on my own. I think it was a joint effort with me, Da.c, Cell, and I think RG and Kai were in that convo too...

You totally stole my idea!! D<Sowwy.


XD What would happen if Bleach battles are held Pokemon style is beyond imaginable. "Dac used Smog!" "ILP was Poisoned! ILP lost his HP because of the poisoning. ILP used Spacial Rend!" "Arc used Refresh!" "ILP's Poisoning was Cured!"
Refresh only heals the user. Heal Bell or Aromatherapy heals the whole team.
XDDD

Something along those lines. XD Now that made me want to compare Pokemon moves to Bleach attacks
Senbonzakura as a whole is Petal Dance.
Cero is... Hidden Power? Slightly different for everyone who uses it.



Post eeeeet maybe after the manga
Yeah, when the club calms down a bit.

Ah, so you had a monocle planned? XD Which eye it's on?
Either eye, it's random.


Indeed. XD All I could think of, the name of zanpakto change in accordance with their spirit appearance, right? So maybe your panda stays in the same condition under shikai or bankai.

Speaking of which, though, it's not like we all had different spirits for shikai and bankai anyway. We should, canonically, but meh. XD
If I'm not mistaken, the only time that we've seen this is with Ichigo, and Tensa Zangetsu, correct? In that case, you can't really argue "our zanpakutou should have different forms in Shikai and Bankai" because, well, it's Ichigo.

Even in the initial release? I mean like, is there a specific hand in which Ivory/Ebony first appear when you go shikai? Also, how would you go bankai immediately from the sealed state?

Before I release, it's a single blade. After I release, it's randomly in either hand, and I can swap it as I want. When it goes from shikai to bankai, whichever arm I am holding each blade with, stays like that until I go back to shikai or released form.
Going straight from sealed to bankai, for a few seconds, the two blades are formed, and then they go to my arm-our. So it's random, like that.


EDIT: OH CHARLOTTE. >.> We used to have fun making fun of him with Luppi. XD
Ah, I remember that. Good times, good times.

Apparently I was kinda wrong. Some on the Favorite Bleach Character (http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=536674) thread in the anime section called it shihakusho. So I googled it again, and everything that popped up was Bleach related.
*Facepalm again* I should've remembered that as well >.>

This essentially means his bankai is useless.

Coincidentally, it matches his personality to a T.

...was that a physics failure? I can't tell anymore with so many other failures popping up everywhere.
Good ol' Jin.

MasterCharizard15
17th August 2011, 3:32 PM
Zanpaktou Name: Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon)

Type: Fire/Heat/Kido

Release Command: Gisei Ranshi (Immolate) (Lit: Sacrifice by Burning to Death)

Sword Description: The sword is a katana with a flame shaped guard. It also has a red line over the hilt and in the middle of the sword vertically.

Spirit (Shikai): Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail. His scales are as red as fire, and his eyes are golden. He is very large around 80 kilometres long. Valiant and bold, heroic with a persevering spirit, he stands by my side. His presence always has an air of nobility and divinity. Energetic and optimistic, he overcomes all obstacles in his path. Intelligent and ambitious, he guides others with passion and wisdom. He is very decisive about things, however.

Spirit (Bankai): Mokushi Iroriryuu is much more human looking than his shikai form, yet not as much as his humanoid form. Standing at 8'9 feet (271.2 cm) his body is lean yet muscular. His red dragon skin is mostly covered by armor, leaving only the skin around his eyes, arms and tail to be seen. The armor he wears is what the Shikai and Bankai armor is based on.

Humanoid: In Human Form, he is dark skinned with golden eyes; his hair is black with red tips and is around 7 feet tall. He wears a Gi with a bluish black sash; he carries his sword on his left side. His arms and legs are still draconian, but his body and head are human.

Inner World: It's a Canyon, with a river flowing through its centre. At the peak of every pillar in the Canyon, is a statue of a person in my life. The river normally has a clear colour, but becomes blood read when a strong inner turmoil or tragic event happens. The sky is cloud normally, it rains when I feel relieved or stressed. It becomes a raging storm if I'm angry.


[Battle Data]

Shikai Information: My sword and body get engulfed in flames, enough just to cover my body, when the flames die down, my Shikai is revealed. Light weight armor along with either a cannon for long range attacks or a sword for mid to close range combat. The cannon covers my left arm, while the sword is a claymore.

In Shikai, I can attack with fire from my canon or manipulate fire with my claymores. The fire is fuelled by my own reiatsu and spiritual energy, which means I can make fire out of thin air as long as oxygen and heat are available.

The Claymore absorbs heat at the rate of every swipe or hit. It also can become super-heated during combat from absorbing enough heat and become able to slash through almost anything with resistance, due to melting whatever it touches, before it ever makes contact.

My armor also regulates my body heat so that anything extra will go into my claymore. This also prevents me from becoming over heated and protects me from Fire based attacks and partially from lightning based attacks. (I’ll still be electrocuted if I’m not careful.) Which is why I use Heat Lance in conjunction with this, to protect myself.


[Techniques]

Furea-Tsugeki (Flare Seeker)
A hundred tiny fireballs are shot at the foe, locking on to their body temperature. They will follow them until impact; but can be avoided by changing body temperature.

Kasai Hei (Fire Wall)
Flames form a protective barrier against attacks.

Rakki-Ondan (Lucky Warmth)
By using my own spiritual energy and power, I can boost my allies overall strength. It comes with the side effect of everyone effected feeling warm and tingly inside.

Kagayaku Shoukyaku (Shining Incineration)
I blast my foe with a large dragon-shaped fire attack.

Atsusa Mori (Heat Lance)
Superheats the air around me until it forms a miniature twister to deflect away moderately strengthen elemental or projectile attacks.


[Bankai]

Name: Mokushi Iroriryuu (Apocalypse Furnace Dragon)

Type: Fire/Kido/Heat

When using Bankai, My entire body is engulfed in flames, after my transition from Shikai to Bankai is complete, I’ll reveal myself by moving my fiery wings.

In my Bankai form, my outfit is completely changed, wearing armor that covers my torso and limbs, I now have giant wings that become in flamed in combat. The wings absorb heat and spiritual energy faster than my sword.


[Battle Data (Bankai)]

Bankai Information: My Claymore is now sharper and I can now fight with no fear of getting burned by flames at all, or by heat based attacks. (I can freeze water or evaporate it, but can’t control it or absorb it.)


Techniques (Bankai)

Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.

Su-pa-Shinsei Bakufuu Yakedo (Supernova Blast Burn)
All the heat and spiritual energy around me is collected and released in a devastating explosion, with enough range to cover a mile.

Kaijin Hanone (Complete Destruction Fang)
I channel my flames directly into my blade and keep them focused in the blade. It increases the cutting power of my sword.
This makes it so incredibly hot that it immediately cauterizes the wound it inflicts (unless it's so wide that it can't effectively cauterize it), which leaves an instant, permanent scar.

Metsubou Tsume(Ruin Claw)
I can raise the temperature of objects (or people) by holding them and channeling my power through the grip. If they can't break free of my grip in five seconds, they'll become horrifically burned and scarred for life. After ten seconds, they'll be burned to death.

Kuru Kaen (Dark Flame)
If I ever end up in a mental state that I come full circle and can’t possibly be fueled by raging emotions anymore, this attack becomes usable. All my emotions are channeled into my Zanpaktou, leaving me only stoic.
Rational, calm and infallible, emotionless and driven only by resolving whatever caused me to use this move in the first place.
My armor, Body suit and flames turn pitch black, my eyes become red with black irises, all my attacks are maxed out and my speed and power are greatly increased.

Jin, you are made of win.

I like Pokemon (...)
17th August 2011, 4:53 PM
This chapter was AWESOME!

I like the splash page. Seeing Rukia in colour again is always nice.

Ah, that kick. Kubo's gone back to his usual writing style again. But I'm glad. That "YOU WERE CRYING LIKE A SISSY!!!!" line really kind of hit it home, though.

Aha, don't interrupt Rukia XD

I think Renji looks the same.
Byakuya has a different style Haori (his got destroyed, right?) and his hair is slightly different (that hairpiece isn't there) and he doesn't have the scarf.
Hitsugaya grew an inch! Oh, no, wait, he's standing on a ledge... His hair is more similar to when he was a kid, I think.
Kenpachi no longer has those massive spikes XD.
Ikkaku... Just looks a bit more muscular. But his right arm looks kind of weird.
Looks like Ikkaku and Renji didn't become captains, then :/

Okay, so we have 3 captains and 3 lieutenants (Ikkaku is definitely Lieutenant-level) giving Ichigo some of his reiatsu. Surely his body must have some kind of explosion with all the reiatsu suddenly going into him.

Kubo loves the word "despair". Ulquiorra used it all the time "Look, Kurosaki. This is true despair." and Rukia used it 3 times here...

What is it with Ichigo gaining new powers, and always suddenly becoming a badass? A few seconds ago he was crying, and now he's like "...are you an idiot?"

Alright, it looks like Ginjou will die from that. But will Tsukishima also be hit and killed? I guess it depends on whether Kubo wants to give him any lines. Also - if Ginjou and Tsukishima die - this will be the first time that Ichigo has killed someone, right? Hollows don't count because technically they're "purified" (and I think all the ones that he's done are brainless). And of the Arrancars, Dordoni was killed by an Exequias, Grimmjow was chopped down by Nnoitra, Ulquiorra faded into ash, and... those are the only ones that he fought. I think.

Butyeah. It looks like now that the fighting has started, either Kubo will go with the "kill Ginjou and Tsukishima quickly and move on", or "give them a proper ending" (the later of which could drag on for a few more chapters). From there... Probably some humour with Kenpachi wanting to slash down Ichigo to test out his new powers. But then, I don't know.

And obviously, the 3 Captains, 3 Lieutenants, and 2 ex-captains won't join in on the fight at all.

rotrum
17th August 2011, 4:55 PM
Who thinks that Rukia has been an overdramatic motivational speaker so far?

More character redesign...Ummm...did anything chance about Ikkaku?

Ichigo is still using Getsuga Tenshou. Maybe Kubo will mix it up by making up a reason for Ichigo to use the others' reiatsu into new attacks. Doubtful.

IN other news, Ichigo is now past his old level of power tremendously without doing anything.

Deathberry 2. Okay then.



EDIT: ILP beat me. I must murder him with my oar.

Other EDIT: ...Does Byakuya look a little bit like Aizen, or is it just me?

Zameric
17th August 2011, 5:01 PM
Rakki-Ondan (Lucky Warmth)
By using my own spiritual energy and power, I can boost my allies overall strength. It comes with the side effect of everyone effected feeling warm and tingly inside.

Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.
Overall, you zan is still one of the coolest fire types I've seen! :D
Wow, do you know how much I could spin that... http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/awesomesmileyplzsmall.png

Goodness gracious, great balls of fire!!

MasterCharizard15
17th August 2011, 5:08 PM
Renji has a new headband. he also isn't a Captain, that makes me frown. :/
Byakuya has new threads, and his head piece is missing!
Kenpachi was his hair down...
Hitsugaya has a scarf...or cloak.
Ikkaku hasn't changed much.

Ichigo gets to be badass again...so the manga implies. Anyway, the sooner those two losers dies, the better.

Also, Rukia smacking Ichigo around a bit, is what we all wanted to do several times during this Arc.


Overall, you zan is still one of the coolest fire types I've seen! :D
Wow, do you know how much I could spin that... http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/awesomesmileyplzsmall.png

Goodness gracious, great balls of fire!!

...*sighs*

Okay, we get it.
I'm the hot and fiery Captain.
I fill your minds with all sorts of thoughts.
You can't read anything about me in just a single way.
This is fact, lets just acknowledge this and move on.

Zameric
17th August 2011, 5:18 PM
This chapter was AWESOME!

I like the splash page. Seeing Rukia in colour again is always nice.

Looks like Ikkaku and Renji didn't become captains, then :/

What is it with Ichigo gaining new powers, and always suddenly becoming a badass? A few seconds ago he was crying, and now he's like "...are you an idiot?"
I second that motion!

I second that motion too.

I didn't expect Ikkaku to, he likes fighting along side Kenpachi too much.

He's just that kind of person...
He got the pep talk from Rukia, so he's ok now. :p


More character redesign...Ummm...did anything chance about Ikkaku?
As ILP mentioned before, there's something odd on his right arm.


Renji has a new headband. he also isn't a Captain, that makes me frown. :/

...*sighs*

Okay, we get it.
I'm the hot and fiery Captain.
I fill your minds with all sorts of thoughts.
You can't read anything about me in just a single way.
This is fact, lets just acknowledge this and move on.
Me too...I was hoping he'd becom captain of Squad 5

XD

Soroft
17th August 2011, 6:04 PM
Oh. My God. Was I the only one that started laughing in exultation when it showed all of the people that gave reiatsu to Ichigo?

Kenpachi seems to have gone with a new hairstyle, I like it. Let's hope he's actually started learning his zanpakutou's name though. x)

Byakuya upped his noble look even more, with what looks like a customized captain's haori. -.- Oh well, he pulls it off.

And that practice swing was stronger than his previous Getsuga Tenshou? Oh God, I hope that he was talking about his Fullbring Getsuga and not the previous Shinigami one, otherwise it'll be way too overpowered.

And why on Earth is Rukia the one that can always inspire us all? Everybody else in the series is almost complete crap at it. xD

MasterCharizard15
17th August 2011, 7:05 PM
Dubbed:
Oh yes, that battle was made of lol.
Yumichika gave him a "beautiful" death.

Subbed:
Oh dear, KOn is now my favorite Side character. Poor little guy...
Anyway, Nazomi is kidnapped and now Ichigo is powerless...again.
Strange to see when your powerless in Shinigami form, your clothes just turn white... {Next Episode}




Yup, a rapid number of posts in quick session after the Manga comes out.

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th August 2011, 8:13 PM
T
*Facepalm again* I should've remembered that as well >.>


I never knew them in the first place xD.



GAHHHH!!! YEAAAA!!!!!

This chapter is damn awesome!

I had a feeling that Urahara made the sword specifically for the reiatsu transfer.

But I didn't expect Renji & co to contribute their powers too. The only thing I didn't get was why Toshiro was there. The other 4 had some interaction with Ichigo, most through their battles with him. But I don't remember Toshiro & Ichigo being close enough to talk.

Redesigns! (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v51/c460/12.html)

Renji looks the same.
Byakuya's new haori reminds me of Kensei's subordinate haoris from the Pendulum arc.
Kenpachi and Toshiro looks like they stopped using hair gel.
And Ikkaku looks the same, but his right arms does look different. Maybe he gain more muscle?

Northern Lights
17th August 2011, 8:38 PM
OMG we're finally getting somewhere, the Shinigami have returned - it's just not Bleach without them.
I love Rukia, first time you see him in months ... and you slap across the face =D
Toshiro has a new haircut - I like it! X3

I like Pokemon (...)
17th August 2011, 9:21 PM
Ichigo is still using Getsuga Tenshou. Maybe Kubo will mix it up by making up a reason for Ichigo to use the others' reiatsu into new attacks. Doubtful.

IN other news, Ichigo is now past his old level of power tremendously without doing anything.
Do you mean something like using attacks similar to those of Ikkaku/Byakuya/Renji/Hitsugaya/Kenpachi/Rukia? Or am I misunderstanding? Because it's be almost impossible for him to do any of the moves that the others have, except maybe some of Rukia and Hitsugaya's ice attacks, I think.

I don't think he's past his old level (depending on what exactly that is). He's just gone back to being "powerful".


EDIT: ILP beat me. I must murder him with my oar.
Pssh, you weren't expecting me to ninja everyone?


...Does Byakuya look a little bit like Aizen, or is it just me?

I should tell my sister that XD She's a massive Byakuya fan.




Renji has a new headband. he also isn't a Captain, that makes me frown. :/

Also, Rukia smacking Ichigo around a bit, is what we all wanted to do several times during this Arc.
Yeah, that's a shame. I was expecting him to become Captain, though it looks like one and a half years isn't enough time...

Oh yeah, definitely.

I didn't expect Ikkaku to, he likes fighting along side Kenpachi too much.
Yeah, I suppose you're right there.

Kenpachi seems to have gone with a new hairstyle, I like it. Let's hope he's actually started learning his zanpakutou's name though. x)
He might have started trying, but I doubt that he has.

Yup, a rapid number of posts in quick session after the Manga comes out.
Totally saw it coming.

I had a feeling that Urahara made the sword specifically for the reiatsu transfer.

But I didn't expect Renji & co to contribute their powers too. The only thing I didn't get was why Toshiro was there. The other 4 had some interaction with Ichigo, most through their battles with him. But I don't remember Toshiro & Ichigo being close enough to talk.
It's almost definitely Urahara who did it. From what we saw of Urahara and Isshin (and the glowing sword), it seems likely that he made it specifically for the power transfer - I wouldn't be surprised if Isshin knew that even if Ichigo learnt the FGT, Urahara would be able to get Ichigo his powers back.

Hitsugaya comes down to the Real World very often. Him and Ichigo know each other (close enough for Ichigo to call him Toushirou), which is why he probably joined in.

OMG we're finally getting somewhere, the Shinigami have returned - it's just not Bleach without them.
Toshiro has a new haircut - I like it! X3

Definitely! Despite that, I wouldn't mind if Kubo decided to write more on the Arrancars...
I think pretty much all of the makeovers look quite nice.


Edit: Golde and I now have the same number of posts in both clubs: 832.

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th August 2011, 10:06 PM
It's almost definitely Urahara who did it.From what we saw of Urahara and Isshin (and the glowing sword), it seems likely that he made it specifically for the power transfer - I wouldn't be surprised if Isshin knew that even if Ichigo learnt the FGT, Urahara would be able to get Ichigo his powers back.

Hitsugaya comes down to the Real World very often. Him and Ichigo know each other (close enough for Ichigo to call him Toushirou), which is why he probably joined in.




You should of proof read the post, Rex. I knew he made the blade. But after looking at it a couple of times, I came to the conclusion that the blade was a creation of Urahara for that specific reason. With Isshin's mysterious ways, I wouldn't put anything past him.
Oh, I did not know that. Toushiro is that much cooler to me now.

arceus03
17th August 2011, 11:51 PM
Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics
Those are the types of failures I'm actually least concerned about.
But let me start with Ichigo's bankai allowing him to be the fastest being in Soul Society. Being bested in speed only by every single enemy he's fought after Byakuya.
This essentially means his bankai is useless.


XD Indeed, right? His bankai is only useful during the time he hasn't perfected his Inner Hollow submission. After that, it's pretty much the mask.


Apparently I was kinda wrong. Some on the Favorite Bleach Character (http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=536674) thread in the anime section called it shihakusho. So I googled it again, and everything that popped up was Bleach related.



*Facepalm again* I should've remembered that as well >.>

Fine, you both didn't read my post last page. *goes to emo corner*


Normal shinigami outfit, you mean shihakusho?



Refresh only heals the user. Heal Bell or Aromatherapy heals the whole team.
XDDD

IhavenoideaIdon'tuseRefresh


If I'm not mistaken, the only time that we've seen this is with Ichigo, and Tensa Zangetsu, correct? In that case, you can't really argue "our zanpakutou should have different forms in Shikai and Bankai" because, well, it's Ichigo.

Well yeah. idk.
And MC. XD


Revamp

Good luck trying to get people to read that when the manga is out I'll read it after I posted all the things I wanted to say about the manga. :p



And obviously, the 3 Captains, 3 Lieutenants, and 2 ex-captains won't join in on the fight at all.


I just miss Unohana T_T




But I didn't expect Renji & co to contribute their powers too. The only thing I didn't get was why Toshiro was there. The other 4 had some interaction with Ichigo, most through their battles with him. But I don't remember Toshiro & Ichigo being close enough to talk.


Touche. XD The only close relation they got was in movie 2, but that does not constitute canon material. :p I can only say Kubo puts him there because he's highly popular, and if he wasn't there fangirls would murder Kubo in his bed.


(close enough for Ichigo to call him Toushirou)

Naah, Ichigo does that to everyone. He started calling Byakuya "Byakuya" when he visited him in the hospital looking for Inoue, and after that Byakuya wondered that "surely he didn't intend to call me by my first name just now". And every time Ichigo calls Hitsugaya "Toushiro", he always says "It's Captain Hitsugaya!".

Anyway. My thoughts. XD

"I will use this power to protect my friends" Typical Ichigo, as always. >.>

Glad to see the comic relief with Rukia and Ichigo XD
And Urahara knew about Tsukishima. I wonder how.

"He can change your past, but not your future." Awesome quote :3

A sword Urahara prepared for Ichigo... Meaning it's not Isshin's after all.

OH MY GOD. New appearances! Hitsugaya looks cooler. No pun intended ILPy is right, he looks like his younger version. And Byakuya has a new haori? Though I was kinda expecting Renji to be wearing a haori as well. :p And that small blob behind Kenpachi better not be Yachiru >.>

Though I wonder, did they do this with Soul Society's permission? I mean, it being against the law and all. Though yeah, since how they might consider Ichigo as Soul Society's savior and all.

Aaaaaand, payback time. Yay.

Another Bleach Physics failure? Apparently a swing from a sword could cause high enough air pressure to hurt people. XD Though yeah, similar as the one we had before, apparently when two swords clash, the resulting force is enough to break apart a mountain.

Ginjou, to quote Eon: "You idiots are bunched up."

Zameric
17th August 2011, 11:56 PM
Other EDIT: ...Does Byakuya look a little bit like Aizen, or is it just me?
Yeah, except the ***** curl is ironed out. xD


I love Rukia, first time you see him in months ... and you slap across the face =D

Because, she's Ichigo's pimp. Gotta keep her hoe in-line. ;p


Yeah, that's a shame. I was expecting him to become Captain, though it looks like one and a half years isn't enough time...
Should have been, considering they're short three captains (as far as we still know), the fact Rukia got promoted, and Aizen has finally been dealt with...



Does the fact that 3 captains and lieutenants put their spiritual energy into this transfer to help Ichigo get his powers back, mean that Yamamoto and/or the Central 46 were alright with it this time? I guessing this question will pop into Ichigo's head after what is likely to be the escape of the Fullbringers, then he'll ask Rukia.
EDIT:

OH MY GOD. New appearances! Hitsugaya looks cooler. No pun intended And Byakuya has a new haori? Though I was kinda expecting Renji to be wearing a haori as well. :p And that small blob behind Kenpachi better not be Yachiru >.>

Though I wonder, did they do this with Soul Society's permission? I mean, it being against the law and all. Though yeah, since how they might consider Ichigo as Soul Society's savior and all.
No one is noticing, but Kenpachi has a new haori too...
No, that's part of Ikkaku's zan.

Freakin'....you ninja'd me today too.
I think I need to join Rotrum and smack you two with a mackerel, while Rotrum comes in with the finishing oar...

I like Pokemon (...)
18th August 2011, 12:11 AM
Fine, you both didn't read my post last page. *goes to emo corner*

You editted it after I pressed the quote button.

IhavenoideaIdon'tuseRefresh
Neither do I, but I think I saw a Refresh/Recover/something/something Arceus set.

Naah, Ichigo does that to everyone. He started calling Byakuya "Byakuya" when he visited him in the hospital looking for Inoue, and after that Byakuya wondered that "surely he didn't intend to call me by my first name just now". And every time Ichigo calls Hitsugaya "Toushiro", he always says "It's Captain Hitsugaya!".
Just wondering, does he call all of the captains by their first names? Like Retsu, Sajin, Shunsui, Mayuri, Jyushirou, etc.? If not, then it shows the slightly closer relationship he has with Hitsugaya than Unohana/etc.



A sword Urahara prepared for Ichigo... Meaning it's not Isshin's after all.

:p And that small blob behind Kenpachi better not be Yachiru >.>

Though I wonder, did they do this with Soul Society's permission? I mean, it being against the law and all. Though yeah, since how they might consider Ichigo as Soul Society's savior and all.


Oh yeah, you're right there.

It's not, it's the end of Houzukimaru (Ikkaku's shikai).

I think they might turn a blind eye to this - it IS Ichigo, after all.

Because, she's Ichigo's pimp. Gotta keep her hoe in-line. ;p

Should have been, considering they're short three captains (as far as we still know), the fact Rukia got promoted, and Aizen has finally been dealt with...
ROFL.

And maybe... I just really hope that one of the replacement captains is captain of the Kidou Corps >.>

arceus03
18th August 2011, 12:32 AM
Release Command: Gisei Ranshi (Immolate) (Lit: Sacrifice by Burning to Death)

Let's see what Dac says on this


Spirit (Shikai): Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail. His scales are as red as fire, and his eyes are golden. He is very large around 80 kilometres long. Valiant and bold, heroic with a persevering spirit, he stands by my side. His presence always has an air of nobility and divinity. Energetic and optimistic, he overcomes all obstacles in his path. Intelligent and ambitious, he guides others with passion and wisdom. He is very decisive about things, however.

Typical Gary Stu characteristics

Though like ILPy pointed out, we're not sure whether the spirit is different for shikai and bankai or not. Meh, moot point.


Inner World: It's a Canyon, with a river flowing through its centre. At the peak of every pillar in the Canyon, is a statue of a person in my life. The river normally has a clear colour, but becomes blood read when a strong inner turmoil or tragic event happens. The sky is cloud normally, it rains when I feel relieved or stressed. It becomes a raging storm if I'm angry.

Blood red


Which is why I use an Air lance in conjunction with this, to protect myself.

What air lance?


Furea-Tsugeki (Flare Seeker)
They will follow them until impact; but can be avoided by changing body temperature.

This line actually has been bugging me ever since I read your first zanpakto. XD How does one change their body temperature?


Rakki-Ondan (Lucky Warmth)
It comes with the side effect of everyone effected feeling warm and tingly inside.

And this one made me lol


Kagayaku Shoukyaku (Shining Incineration)
I blast my foe with a large dragon-shaped fire attack.

Hakuryuu!



Bankai Information: My Claymore is now sharper and I can now fight with no fear of getting burned by flames at all, or by heat based attacks. (I can freeze water or evaporate it, but can’t control it or absorb it.)

How do you freeze water? o.o


In Bankai, I can raise the temperature of objects (or people) by holding them and channelling my power through the grip. If they can't break free of my grip in five seconds, they'll become horrifically burned and scarred for life. After ten seconds, they'll be burned to death.

Ah, I hope this is a technique, not a constant state in bankai, because if it is, it sounds a bit too cheap. *shrug*


Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.

Trust Zam to crack a dirty joke on this

Nothing much to comment, really. =D



No one is noticing, but Kenpachi has a new haori too...
No, that's part of Ikkaku's zan.

Freakin'....you ninja'd me today too.
I think I need to join Rotrum and smack you two with a mackerel, while Rotrum comes in with the finishing oar...

New haori? Yeah, because his old one went missing. XD But nothing new, right? I think it has the same appearance as before.

Ahh, I see. XD

*deflects oar and mackerel with oar-shaped scalpel* Bring it on! *shot*


You editted it after I pressed the quote button.

Fine... *stays in emo corner*


Neither do I, but I think I saw a Refresh/Recover/something/something Arceus set.

Arceus!


Just wondering, does he call all of the captains by their first names? Like Retsu, Sajin, Shunsui, Mayuri, Jyushirou, etc.? If not, then it shows the slightly closer relationship he has with Hitsugaya than Unohana/etc.

Not that I remember of, but then, I can't even remember a scene where Ichigo talks to any of them. And what about Byakuya? calling him by his first name after hospitalizing him with a serious wound? XD



It's not, it's the end of Houzukimaru (Ikkaku's shikai).

I think they might turn a blind eye to this - it IS Ichigo, after all.


Yeah, Zam ninja'd you to that

I think they'd have some sort of excuse, the foremost being along the line "he was their savior after all". Or maybe a blind eye, like Byakuya did to Renji and Rukia when they went to Hueco Mundo to accompany Ichigo back then. XD

Eon Master
18th August 2011, 2:31 AM
Ok, I have to ask. Does anybody else notice that Zangetsu is even bigger than it was before? Ichigo's definitely overcompensating for something. In fact, that's probably why his Bankai gets smaller (he's hiding the fact that he's overcompensating), and why he had the Hollow mask (he's too ashamed to show his face). That would even explain why he fell back on the other two so often xD

Ginjou is such an idiot. So overconfident. And to think I thought his character was slightly cool.

"That wasn't a Getsuga Tenshou, that was a practice swing." TROLOLOLOLOLOLOL.

WHOA, hold up. Look at Ichigo's hands and neck on the color splash page. What are those? They're obviously not gloves, or even part of a larger outfit, and they're clearly not tatoos either. Leftovers from his Fullbring, maybe. They look slightly similar.

I love Rukia's character. First time she sees Ichigo in a year and a half and she kicks him in the face before mocking him and calling him a whiny git. You go, girl.

Hey, Renji's not wearing his Lieutenant's badge for some reason. That's odd. He looks a bit like a lion now with his hair grown out. The black headband doesn't work very well for him, in my opinion.

Why are Byakuya's eyes black? And his haori isn't that different, just the tassels on the collar and the liner on the ends.

Hitsugaya has a scarf, and he got a new old hairstyle. And I think he did get a little bit taller. He's about the same height as Rukia now xD

Kenpachi... barely changed at all. His hair's still spiky, it's just not insane asylum spiky.

Ah, now I see what's on Ikkaku's right arm. It's a shoulder pauldron with the number 11 painted on it. If you look really closely, you can see another on his left shoulder too, I think. Strange, and slightly Final Fantasy VII-ish, but it works for him.

Ichigo's power boost can't last. If he was given reiatsu from six Captain-class officers, then he'll probably just gain an immediate power boost, then it'll fade as his powers settle down. Right now, he's just charged with spirit energy.

...if he doesn't, Kubo better go back to school and learn how to write plots properly.

Ginjou's not the only one Ichigo has to fight. Tsukishima, Chad, Inoue, and the other Fullbringers are all opposing him too. One heck of a melee, eh?

@MC's Revamp: MC... when I told you to use the "touch stuff and burn it" ability for your Bankai, it was supposed to be a technique, not a constant state.

Also, you forgot to change the "Air Lance" in the Shikai discription to "Heat Lance". Just thought I'd let you know.

Under the "Lucky Warmth", change it to "warm and fuzzy". Sounds less twistable that way.

Other than what Arc already said, I can't think of anything else.


Neither do I, but I think I saw a Refresh/Recover/something/something Arceus set.

Most Arceus sets use Recover, actually. 120/120/120 defenses, even if they're not EV'd to be bulky, are honestly the best in all of Pokemon save for Giratina and perhaps Lugia, neither of which can hold a candle to Arceus' offensive prowess. It'd be a waste to not use Recover unless you need that moveslot for an offensive option. Even Arceus with crappy defensive typing such as Poison or Psychic usually use Recover. The only 4th Gen set that doesn't even mention Recover is the Normal Arceus Choice Band set (for obvious reasons), and that's one out of almost fifty.

Also, yes, Arceus does get Refresh, but it's such a backup option with so much power and such strong defenses... it's really only good on Quickstall variants, especially since Blissey carries Heal Bell so often and most teams have a status absorber of some sort. It's pretty redundant anyway, seeing as the worst you'll get in Ubers is a Thunder Wave (other than Quickstall, stall is totally useless in Ubers, rendering Toxic a stupid option), and you can simply bring in a Groudon/Dugtrio to lol at that. And all Pokemon in Ubers that carry Will-O-Wisp are predictable, and it'll be pretty obvious if they intend to use it.

But, I digress, since I'm getting off-topic here.


Just wondering, does he call all of the captains by their first names? Like Retsu, Sajin, Shunsui, Mayuri, Jyushirou, etc.? If not, then it shows the slightly closer relationship he has with Hitsugaya than Unohana/etc.

He calls Unohana "Unohana-san", and Mayuri "Kurotsuchi" or "Kurotsuchi Mayuri". Idk about the others, I don't think he's met them enough times on-camera.

Ginjou, to quote Eon: "You idiots are bunched up."

Yay for quoting me honestly one of my favorites from my fanfic! But when does this happen, and who says something that prompts this?

Aaaaand that's it. Except I'm going to College on the 20th, and my activity will probably decrease dramatically. Bleh.

arceus03
18th August 2011, 5:03 AM
Ok, I have to ask. Does anybody else notice that Zangetsu is even bigger than it was before?

Eh, it's pretty much the same size as it was last chapter. If you meant compared to the one he had before he lost his powers, I could only guess that's because he got the combined powers of Byakuya, Hitsugaya, Kenpachi, Ikkaku, Renji and Rukia this time. XD

Unless that was sarcasm


WHOA, hold up. Look at Ichigo's hands and neck on the color splash page. What are those? They're obviously not gloves, or even part of a larger outfit, and they're clearly not tatoos either. Leftovers from his Fullbring, maybe. They look slightly similar.

Probably new outfits. Since everyone else gets one. XD



Ginjou's not the only one Ichigo has to fight. Tsukishima, Chad, Inoue, and the other Fullbringers are all opposing him too. One heck of a melee, eh?

Indeed. And as ILPy so accurately put it:


And obviously, the 3 Captains, 3 Lieutenants, and 2 ex-captains won't join in on the fight at all.




Ginjou, to quote Eon: "You idiots are bunched up."

Yay for quoting me honestly one of my favorites from my fanfic! But when does this happen, and who says something that prompts this?

Aaaaand that's it. Except I'm going to College on the 20th, and my activity will probably decrease dramatically. Bleh.

I know, I effing love that quote too Nobody says that, though. It's just my initial reaction + thought towards the enemies (but mostly Ginjou), I think when he said that he took Ichigo's powers completely from him, and Renji interrupted from behind. Basically, during Ginjou's Oh Crap moment. XD

Aaaah, college. XD Mine starts at around the end of August, so I got one week extra than you. :p

minchan
18th August 2011, 6:57 PM
I'm also going to college on the 20th. My activity will sharply decrease as well. I will try to come by every now and then, but life has to come first, sadly.

Also, I went out with some friends yesterday, which is why I haven't commented on the chapter until now.

I'm gonna come back and comment once I read everything everyone else has said. I'll edit it into this post, if nobody else adds another post before I get back to this.

EDIT: Okay, massive quotes coming up. All about the manga.


Okay, so we have 3 captains and 3 lieutenants (Ikkaku is definitely Lieutenant-level) giving Ichigo some of his reiatsu. Surely his body must have some kind of explosion with all the reiatsu suddenly going into him.
YAY FOR EXPLOSIONS.


Kubo loves the word "despair". Ulquiorra used it all the time "Look, Kurosaki. This is true despair." and Rukia used it 3 times here...
You know, I NEVER even noticed that ONE TIME until you just mentioned it. orz I've failed. D=

Who thinks that Rukia has been an overdramatic motivational speaker so far?
Initially, no, but now that you mention it... XD


Oh. My God. Was I the only one that started laughing in exultation when it showed all of the people that gave reiatsu to Ichigo?
No, no you weren't. XD


And why on Earth is Rukia the one that can always inspire us all? Everybody else in the series is almost complete crap at it. xD
Rukia... She needs to write a book or something. XD Like, one of those Chicken Soup for the Soul books, or whatever they're called. XD (Oh, and I just realized. "For the SOUL". LOL Get it? Hahahahaha... Sorry, that joke was probably really really stupid. orz)


The only thing I didn't get was why Toshiro was there. The other 4 had some interaction with Ichigo, most through their battles with him. But I don't remember Toshiro & Ichigo being close enough to talk.
Actually, I'm pretty sure Shiro-chan is the most-seen captain. He might not be like, best friends with Ichigo like Renji and Rukia, but he's definitely familiar enough. Besides, they're in the world of the living right now. And he's like, always there. XD I think that in itself is a good enough reason to put him there. IMHO.


Redesigns! (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v51/c460/12.html)

Renji looks the same.
Byakuya's new haori reminds me of Kensei's subordinate haoris from the Pendulum arc.
Kenpachi and Toshiro looks like they stopped using hair gel.
And Ikkaku looks the same, but his right arms does look different. Maybe he gain more muscle?
Renji... His hair actually seems longer to me. And LOL at the Ken-chan/Shiro-chan comment. XD It's like... TRUE. XD I... Didn't actually notice Byakuya's new haori until you guys all mentioned it. I feel stupid now. I dunno what's up with Ikkaku's arm. LOL Oh and thanks for that link. Because I'm way too lazy to dig it out myself. XD



OMG we're finally getting somewhere, the Shinigami have returned - it's just not Bleach without them.
IKR.


Toshiro has a new haircut - I like it! X3
WHY DID YOU CROSS THAT OUT? D= I like it too. XD


Toushiro is that much cooler to me now.
I'm pretty sure he was always pretty "cool". To everyone. I recycle jokes a bit too much, huh...


OH MY GOD. New appearances! Hitsugaya looks cooler. No pun intended
...This is what I recycled. Sorry for stealing your joke. LOL


"That wasn't a Getsuga Tenshou, that was a practice swing." TROLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
...XD


Hey, Renji's not wearing his Lieutenant's badge for some reason. That's odd.[quote]
I... Did not notice that. orz I wonder why...? Hmm...

[quote]And his haori isn't that different, just the tassels on the collar and the liner on the ends.
But he still has a different haori. His last one was lost. XD


Hitsugaya has a scarf
With his particular abilities, I'm actually surprised he didn't get one sooner. XD


Kenpachi... barely changed at all. His hair's still spiky, it's just not insane asylum spiky.
LOL even if his hair doesn't fit that description any longer, IMHO he still probably belongs in an insane asylum... Just because.


Ginjou's not the only one Ichigo has to fight. Tsukishima, Chad, Inoue, and the other Fullbringers are all opposing him too. One heck of a melee, eh?
*gets popcorn and soda* This'll be good. XD

Zameric
19th August 2011, 2:20 AM
Hey, Renji's not wearing his Lieutenant's badge for some reason. That's odd.
I... Did not notice that. orz I wonder why...? Hmm...


Kenpachi... barely changed at all. His hair's still spiky, it's just not insane asylum spiky.
LOL even if his hair doesn't fit that description any longer, IMHO he still probably belongs in an insane asylum... Just because.
He never wears it. It's not required of lieutenants to wear their badge.

I think I'm going to like this new hair style better. :)

Lucario0708
19th August 2011, 3:45 AM
sorry I havent been posting / been post two liners

I've been really busy with an essay for my geography class, but, expect the vs. blue chapter to come out late afternoon tomorrow when I have more time

Jinchuuriki Hunter
19th August 2011, 4:31 AM
OH WOW, THIS CHAPTER WAS AWE-no...no it wasn't. It just isn't doing it for me...
...Kubo, you're gonna have to do more than just bring back a few people with superbly minor changes in appearance if you want to get me pumped.
Hell, Rukia looks more like Hanatarou than ever.
But at that point I'm just nitpicking.

I like Pokemon (...)
19th August 2011, 3:17 PM
Ok, I have to ask. Does anybody else notice that Zangetsu is even bigger than it was before? Ichigo's definitely overcompensating for something. In fact, that's probably why his Bankai gets smaller (he's hiding the fact that he's overcompensating), and why he had the Hollow mask (he's too ashamed to show his face). That would even explain why he fell back on the other two so often xD

WHOA, hold up. Look at Ichigo's hands and neck on the color splash page. What are those? They're obviously not gloves, or even part of a larger outfit, and they're clearly not tatoos either. Leftovers from his Fullbring, maybe. They look slightly similar.
Ahaha, oh wow.

Yeh, he had them in the last page, in the previous chapter. They're probably just there to look cool.

Most Arceus sets use Recover, actually. 120/120/120 defenses, even if they're not EV'd to be bulky, are honestly the best in all of Pokemon save for Giratina and perhaps Lugia, neither of which can hold a candle to Arceus' offensive prowess. It'd be a waste to not use Recover unless you need that moveslot for an offensive option. Even Arceus with crappy defensive typing such as Poison or Psychic usually use Recover. The only 4th Gen set that doesn't even mention Recover is the Normal Arceus Choice Band set (for obvious reasons), and that's one out of almost fifty.

Also, yes, Arceus does get Refresh, but it's such a backup option with so much power and such strong defenses... it's really only good on Quickstall variants, especially since Blissey carries Heal Bell so often and most teams have a status absorber of some sort. It's pretty redundant anyway, seeing as the worst you'll get in Ubers is a Thunder Wave (other than Quickstall, stall is totally useless in Ubers, rendering Toxic a stupid option), and you can simply bring in a Groudon/Dugtrio to lol at that. And all Pokemon in Ubers that carry Will-O-Wisp are predictable, and it'll be pretty obvious if they intend to use it.
*Nodding along as I read* Yeah, it's been a long time since I've been into competitive battling (probably when Gen V came out...)



I'm also going to college on the 20th. My activity will sharply decrease as well.
And I'm going to college in... 3 years. Something tells me the club will die a lot. Unfortunately, I can't keep the club alive on my own though I probably could XD



Rukia... She needs to write a book or something. XD Like, one of those Chicken Soup for the Soul books, or whatever they're called. XD (Oh, and I just realized. "For the SOUL". LOL Get it? Hahahahaha... Sorry, that joke was probably really really stupid. orz)
Made me lol Chicken soup... hungry...



OH WOW, THIS CHAPTER WAS AWE-no...no it wasn't. It just isn't doing it for me...
...Kubo, you're gonna have to do more than just bring back a few people with superbly minor changes in appearance if you want to get me pumped.
Hell, Rukia looks more like Hanatarou than ever.
But at that point I'm just nitpicking.
Aha, looks like I got a bit too excited? XP

Part of the reason why I got excited is because I really like things like new outfits and new powers. It's refreshing to see, even if it's only superbly minor. That, and these are the characters that I like - and at least it shows that we're going to get out of this downer of an arc.

But at this point, I might just be getting optimistic.

minchan
19th August 2011, 3:49 PM
I don't think it's bad to be optimistic. But right after an epic chapter like the last one, this one, which followed it, naturally has to seem a bit lacking. I think that's just how manga is. Granted, I probably read too much Bakuman. Otherwise, I couldn't give such "insight" on the inner workings of manga. XD I think the next few chapters should get interesting again. It's just a shame I can't read them right away anymore. Well, I'll manage somehow. =)

Da14u.C
19th August 2011, 4:08 PM
AHHHH!!! first of all, I am so sorry I havent posted in two pages ya'll


I still want the damn trophy.
sorry, MC15 wins it hands down :P



yeah but...i feel like having electricity pumping through would affect it somehow. I don't mean real water but if reitsu electricity was pumping through reitsu water...something something bleach physics. Plus if he was damaged, he couldn't heal.
oooh, that is a great point to make.



Well let's all cut out the fat >>
i have no clue what this is about, but I APPROVE!!! i actually used to wanna be a plastic surgeon when i was younger to help fat people stop being fat ^_^ sigh.... i used to be such a sweet kid




Aaaaand...done.
Thats what she said....


Just as I was gonna post too. I've been lurking, pondering, listening to some Chiddy Bang and songs The Voice for the most part.

this is why you should be banned from youtube :|


Needs more Swag. Has a nice ring to it.
*insert chris brown joke*




Reading your reply, then the other team would be consisted of Cell, Kida, Flash Step, Zameric, Senny, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac (if you count him). Let's say we put in Dac, and leave out Senny and Flash Step (since one is... inactive, and the other one is rarely active). So we have Cell, Kida, Zameric, Rotrum, Kusari and Dac. Cell can go both melee or Kido with his arrows mixed sweeper, as well as kusari and Dac, Kida and rotrum are elemental, and finally Zameric is purely melee. Now, Eon, write how to counter them[s/] If it were me, my initial plan would be to incapacitate Zam, because his abilities are dangerous, but idk. XD *shrug*

I did not understand the question at all, but i think this kind of team would work decently well depending....




[s]You mean laws of physics I think because in all daily life examples we've seen, we'd never see a blast of electricity cutting through water, most of the time it's the electrical current. (If you get what I mean. XD Horrible wording, I know)

nah, i meant laws of chemistry. physics is lame, and needs chemistry to function :P



How do I go disobeying the laws of Bleach Nature, then?
in soooo many ways. i wont even get started or else imma write an essay :|



Little tweaks where? From my memory, the ones I remember only insignificant stuff like... zanpakto spirit Milotic hell yeah and bankai release sequence. The last one before that was about freezing Tsukibana like you told me on our VM.

xD i totally lolled when you made your milotic zanpaktou spirit hahahaha
what is a VM?




So, er, where?

too lazy to go and check and copy paste what i remember. s'all good though ^_^




I'm surprised you didn't get baited by Zam's post that someone said your titles 'sound ugly'





nah, i have seen Zam's taste in things.... if he thought my titles sound beautiful, then i would be worried xD



Make 2 teams using 6 of the Captains. Telling us why you grouped them that way, may end up saving your life!
1. I'll start off with Arc as the medic. As Eon said, he'll give the team an immediate advantage over the opponent. Milotic/Blissey
2. I'll also have Zam; despite his lower stats, I think his zanpakutou will make up for it, because of the number of people on the battlefield (it'll be easier to "hide" him). And he could probably get at least one or two kills. Wobbuffet
3. Then Kida; being a multitype user, and the second most experienced user, she'll be damn useful. ...Smeargle?
4. Golde; being the most powerful member, the most experienced member, and not overlapping with Kida's elemental powers, I'm pretty sure he'll get a spot on the team. ...Raikou? Zekrom?
5. Da.c; mainly because a scientist will always be useful, but I think the synergy he has with Kida would prove useful. Nidoking?
6. Eon. As he said, having a "main strategist" with "backup strategists" (Arc, Da.c, possibly Kida) would be good. And I think he's the only close-combat-heavy member in my group. Lucario
hey, i can be close combat too

xD I love how you added pokémon names xD but i see NL more as ninetales. each one a curse of a thousand years.....



Only because you think "Mobius" is a sexy name.
soooooo SEXYYYYYYY
just saying the world alone is just hawwwttttt




*Gives him the damn trophy*
*takes away the damn trophy*



The things I've changed are:
The zanpakutou spirit; the release command; the release description is slightly different; using my abilities have an affect on the blades; bankai name is the same as shikai; and some rewording of my bankai effects. If anything is still unclear or should be changed, tell me so I can fix it:


Zanpaktou Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal Void)

Type; Space-time

Zanpakutou spirit; A wise panda with a robotic right arm, a beard, a necklace made of skulls, a walking cane, and a double-sided monocle (one side magnifies, and the other side shrinks). Kagirinai-Kuuhaku talks entirely in proverbs.

Release Command; Eien no kutsuu o chinmoku sa se nasai! (Silence the eternal pain!)

Shikai Details; After calling the release command, peoples’ visions of my zanpakutou become blurry. When their vision clears up, people can see 2 scythes instead of one: Ebony and Ivory. The handles are about as long as my arm and the curved blades are about as long as my forearm. Ivory is pure white with Ebony being as black as charcoal.

With Ebony, I can control space:
When I cut an object, I can cause it to shrink or expand. However, the opposite happens to Ebony’s blade. If I make a person shrink, then Ebony increases in size, and vice versa (this allows me to use a shorter or longer blade, for close-range combat). Ebony does not cause the mass of an object to change, however. The size of the object returns to normal when I reseal my zanpakutou.

Ivory has the ability to control time:
When I cut an object, I can cause time to flow faster or slower for it. However, when I make time flow faster, Ivory’s blade becomes longer, and when time flows slower, Ivory’s blade becomes shorter (if I make time flow twice as fast, then Ivory gets twice as big, if the flows half as fast, Ivory becomes half the size). I cannot cause time to stop, however. Time flows normally for an object, when I reseal my zanpakutou - but any aging is not reversed.

When an object is cut by both Ebony and Ivory, I can control mass. If I increase an objects size, and make time flows more slowly, then the mass increases. If I decrease the object's size, and cause time to flow faster, then their mass decreases.

Bankai

Bankai Name; Kagirinai-Kuuhaku (Eternal Void)

Bankai Description; Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one arm being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai).

Bankai Abilities;

My powers extend to whatever I touch, and not just what I cut, though everything that was under my control while I was in Shikai, I can still control while in Bankai.


Ebony now also allows me to turn the air into very small items, like daggers (larger and more complicated objects, like a sword or a gun will take much longer). This works by converting the elements in the air into other elements, through fusion and fission. In theory, I can do this to any material, excluding zanpakutou and living creatures.
Ivory also allows me to stop and reverse time. Depending on the size of the area, how quickly time is reversed for it, and how long I do it for, it can take either a lot or a little bit of reiatsu.

Other notes;
When I refer to an “object”, it is usually quite limited. If I were to cut someone’s shirt, then it would only affect their shirt. If I cut their finger, however, then it would be considered as their entire body, excluding their clothes or weapon. A zanpakutou must have some kind of visual damage for it to be affected; an actual scratch or chip would work (Kagirinai-Kuuhaku is very sharp). A light tap would not be counted.

Also, the greater I vary an object from normal, the more Reiatsu is required. I normally would do smaller changes, and use Kidou for actual attacks. Sometimes, though, I know that I am forced to immediately make a big change and finish a fight early.

When I go from sealed to shikai, Ebony and Ivory appear in random hands (but there will always be one blade in each hand). I can swap them around during the fight, but when I go bankai, they remain like that until I go back to shikai/sealed. From sealed straight to bankai, Ebony and Ivory appear for a split second (again, in random hands), and then they become the armour.

Finally, if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time.


two things
1) you ddnt mention how it goes from sealed to shikai, how it goes from shikai to bankai or how it goes from sealed to bankai
2) is there really a point to this weakness: "Finally, if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time." ???
It looks like a weakness added on for the sake of having a weakness, and it just seems to make no sense. especially considering your zan.
that kind of weakness works for Aizen because he has a hypnotic zan, and so to break the hypnosis, you avoid getting hypnotised in the first place. it makes sense for tousen's zan in bankai form because tousen has to be immune to his zan's effects somehow. it doesnt make sense your yours because yours is not a poison that one gets immune to, it is not a spell taht one has to break, it is a physical effect on their body that is to do with space time. it doesnt make logical sense - real logic, or bleach logic




http://oi54.*******.com/23vyxc7.jpg
xD xD xD


The only thing I can point out is that Dauc's abilities are not meant for team combat. Yes, he works well with Kida, but in a large group his abilties are just as liable to hurt his allies as his enemies. If you were aiming to keep your whole team alive, he's not a good choice. That's part of the reason why I picked you over him for my team. Also, yeah, Zam does have a dangerous ability, but he's well-rounded. Being well-rounded is usually a bad thing in team combat unless


xD as long as i promise not to release my toxic gas, i promise everyone will be fine :D

but yeah, Eon Master is right in the sense that my bankai, the toxic gas is constantly flowing. its not something i start or stop, so i cant work in a team in bankai, but i can in shikai where releasing teh gas is an on and off command :D



My immediate reaction would be to off Dauc with Blue and myself (me doing the initial move, Blue as the actual killer), thus cutting down not only the biggest threat to our health (though he's just as dangerous to his own team, I don't want to just let him run amok), since I'm the fastest and Blue's release is incredibly quick, not to mention that she can immediately get a kill-shot in if her opponent is unable to dodge without leaving themself open to another opponent. Then Blue would go after Cell, keeping him off-balance and not giving him a clear shot by constantly using her shadow jumping (Cell can't hit what he can't aim at). I'd then go after Zam with my Bankai (not taking any chances with that haxy Shikai of his). MC would get to go after Rotrum (god knows those two need a good fight to work out their issues). ILP would be going after Kida (he's beaten her before, though you would be on watch to see if he needed any help), and Golde would duel with Kusari. You'd be hanging back to deal out damage, give long range support, and heal us as needed. This also gives you a better defensive position than jumping into the thick of things. It seems like a melee, but we'd actually be working in tandem with one another as well.

xD
basically deal with the most unpredicatble, then deal with the predictable. makes sense.


Hmm, yeah. I think I took the Pokemon idea a bit too far XD. I forgot that everyone was fighting at the same time.


actually.... why would we have to fight at the same time? armies dont send in their infantry, tanks, airplanes and whatever at the same time.


Pardon my French, but...
Que diable êtes-vous fumeur?!
100% generated by Google translate.

hahahahaha
i approve of the attempt.

you were trying to say "what the devil where you smoking?" right?
a better trabslation would be "tu fumes quoi en tabarnak????" or something like that :)



Point out some of the many failures of Bleach Physics
Those are the types of failures I'm actually least concerned about.
But let me start with Ichigo's bankai allowing him to be the fastest being in Soul Society. Being bested in speed only by every single enemy he's fought after Byakuya.
This essentially means his bankai is useless.

Coincidentally, it matches his personality to a T.

...was that a physics failure? I can't tell anymore with so many other failures popping up everywhere.
i fully agree!!!
the whole point of ichigos bankai is to increase his speed and focus is power into a smaller more condensed area. i feel like the directors of the animé and the manga writers forgot that




Zanpaktou Name: Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon)

Type: Fire/Heat/Kido

Release Command: Gisei Ranshi (Immolate) (Lit: Sacrifice by Burning to Death)

Sword Description: The sword is a katana with a flame shaped guard. It also has a red line over the hilt and in the middle of the sword vertically.

Spirit (Shikai): Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail. His scales are as red as fire, and his eyes are golden. He is very large around 80 kilometres long. Valiant and bold, heroic with a persevering spirit, he stands by my side. His presence always has an air of nobility and divinity. Energetic and optimistic, he overcomes all obstacles in his path. Intelligent and ambitious, he guides others with passion and wisdom. He is very decisive about things, however.

Spirit (Bankai): Mokushi Iroriryuu is much more human looking than his shikai form, yet not as much as his humanoid form. Standing at 8'9 feet (271.2 cm) his body is lean yet muscular. His red dragon skin is mostly covered by armor, leaving only the skin around his eyes, arms and tail to be seen. The armor he wears is what the Shikai and Bankai armor is based on.

Humanoid: In Human Form, he is dark skinned with golden eyes; his hair is black with red tips and is around 7 feet tall. He wears a Gi with a bluish black sash; he carries his sword on his left side. His arms and legs are still draconian, but his body and head are human.

Inner World: It's a Canyon, with a river flowing through its centre. At the peak of every pillar in the Canyon, is a statue of a person in my life. The river normally has a clear colour, but becomes blood read when a strong inner turmoil or tragic event happens. The sky is cloud normally, it rains when I feel relieved or stressed. It becomes a raging storm if I'm angry.


[Battle Data]

Shikai Information: My sword and body get engulfed in flames, enough just to cover my body, when the flames die down, my Shikai is revealed. Light weight armor along with either a cannon for long range attacks or a sword for mid to close range combat. The cannon covers my left arm, while the sword is a claymore.

In Shikai, I can attack with fire from my canon or manipulate fire with my claymores. The fire is fuelled by my own reiatsu and spiritual energy, which means I can make fire out of thin air as long as oxygen and heat are available.

The Claymore absorbs heat at the rate of every swipe or hit. It also can become super-heated during combat from absorbing enough heat and become able to slash through almost anything with resistance, due to melting whatever it touches, before it ever makes contact.

My armor also regulates my body heat so that anything extra will go into my claymore. This also prevents me from becoming over heated and protects me from Fire based attacks and partially from lightning based attacks. (I’ll still be electrocuted if I’m not careful.) Which is why I use Heat Lance in conjunction with this, to protect myself.


[Techniques]

Furea-Tsugeki (Flare Seeker)
A hundred tiny fireballs are shot at the foe, locking on to their body temperature. They will follow them until impact; but can be avoided by changing body temperature.

Kasai Hei (Fire Wall)
Flames form a protective barrier against attacks.

Rakki-Ondan (Lucky Warmth)
By using my own spiritual energy and power, I can boost my allies overall strength. It comes with the side effect of everyone effected feeling warm and tingly inside.

Kagayaku Shoukyaku (Shining Incineration)
I blast my foe with a large dragon-shaped fire attack.

Atsusa Mori (Heat Lance)
Superheats the air around me until it forms a miniature twister to deflect away moderately strengthen elemental or projectile attacks.


[Bankai]

Name: Mokushi Iroriryuu (Apocalypse Furnace Dragon)

Type: Fire/Kido/Heat

When using Bankai, My entire body is engulfed in flames, after my transition from Shikai to Bankai is complete, I’ll reveal myself by moving my fiery wings.

In my Bankai form, my outfit is completely changed, wearing armor that covers my torso and limbs, I now have giant wings that become in flamed in combat. The wings absorb heat and spiritual energy faster than my sword.


[Battle Data (Bankai)]

Bankai Information: My Claymore is now sharper and I can now fight with no fear of getting burned by flames at all, or by heat based attacks. (I can freeze water or evaporate it, but can’t control it or absorb it.)


Techniques (Bankai)

Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.

Su-pa-Shinsei Bakufuu Yakedo (Supernova Blast Burn)
All the heat and spiritual energy around me is collected and released in a devastating explosion, with enough range to cover a mile.

Kaijin Hanone (Complete Destruction Fang)
I channel my flames directly into my blade and keep them focused in the blade. It increases the cutting power of my sword.
This makes it so incredibly hot that it immediately cauterizes the wound it inflicts (unless it's so wide that it can't effectively cauterize it), which leaves an instant, permanent scar.

Metsubou Tsume(Ruin Claw)
I can raise the temperature of objects (or people) by holding them and channeling my power through the grip. If they can't break free of my grip in five seconds, they'll become horrifically burned and scarred for life. After ten seconds, they'll be burned to death.

Kuru Kaen (Dark Flame)
If I ever end up in a mental state that I come full circle and can’t possibly be fueled by raging emotions anymore, this attack becomes usable. All my emotions are channeled into my Zanpaktou, leaving me only stoic.
Rational, calm and infallible, emotionless and driven only by resolving whatever caused me to use this move in the first place.
My armor, Body suit and flames turn pitch black, my eyes become red with black irises, all my attacks are maxed out and my speed and power are greatly increased.

Jin, you are made of win.


I APPROVE
I LOVE THIS!!! LIKE I ACTUALLY LOVE THIS!!!!!!
great job MC15 :) hot hot zan





@MC's Revamp: MC... when I told you to use the "touch stuff and burn it" ability for your Bankai, it was supposed to be a technique, not a constant state.

Also, you forgot to change the "Air Lance" in the Shikai discription to "Heat Lance". Just thought I'd let you know.

Under the "Lucky Warmth", change it to "warm and fuzzy". Sounds less twistable that way.
you helped him?
that explains why it is so much more imaginative!!!!
thank you!!!




Aaaaand that's it. Except I'm going to College on the 20th, and my activity will probably decrease dramatically. Bleh.
awww, the young are growing up :D

and LOOOOOL!!! I love that american unis start earlier than Canadian ones and finish later :D



Aaaah, college. XD Mine starts at around the end of August, so I got one week extra than you. :p

see you around xmas time, or next summer irl :)

and have fun in NYS!!!

on and my university starts on september 11th, so ahem..... losers :p



[s]And I'm going to college in... 3 years. Something tells me the club will die a lot. Unfortunately, I can't keep the club alive on my own though I probably could XD

awwwww
hehehehehe
at least the club will be fully alive and revived with everyone back next summer with tons of stories from the year to tell right? :)


oh right, i forgot to add


CONGRATS TO MY SEXY SEXY WIFEY KIDA ON GETTING INTO HER TOP CHOICE UNIVERSITY :)

Northern Lights
19th August 2011, 4:24 PM
What's this about a 'Damn' Trophy


3. Then Kida; being a multitype user, and the second most experienced user, she'll be damn useful. ...Smeargle?

Genius. Oh wow, we so have to do this a MSN Convo at some point - all of us assigned a Pokemon ... by other people 8D


but i see NL more as ninetales. each one a curse of a thousand years.....

... When you said Ninetales I immediatly thought of this guy ... who is a Boss from Okami *facepalm*


on and my university starts on september 11th, so ahem..... loser

Mine starts on the 19th, and that's just Freshers Week, so ...

http://i54.*******.com/k4fghy.jpg

@Manga: What Jin said.

I like Pokemon (...)
19th August 2011, 4:46 PM
what is a VM?
Visitor Message. The SPPF equivalent of posting on someone's Facebook Wall.



two things
1) you ddnt mention how it goes from sealed to shikai, how it goes from shikai to bankai or how it goes from sealed to bankai
From sealed to shikai; "After calling the release command, peoples’ visions of my zanpakutou become blurry. When their vision clears up, people can see 2 scythes instead of one: Ebony and Ivory. " is written in the "shikai details".

From shikai to Bankai; "Ebony and Ivory completely change shape: they turn into armour that cover my arms and hands, one arm being black and the other being white (Ebony and Ivory). They meet at my back, and a pair of large wings sprout from my back; the arm that is covered in black armour has a white wing, and the arm that is covered in white armour has a black wing (sometimes my right arm is covered by Ebony, sometimes my left arm is, it depends on which way I am holding it when I go into Bankai)." is written in the "bankai details".

From sealed to Bankai; "From sealed straight to bankai, Ebony and Ivory appear for a split second (again, in random hands), and then they become the armour." is written in the other notes.

From sealed straight to bankai, Ebony and Ivory appear for a split second (again, in random hands), and then they become the armour.2) is there really a point to this weakness: "Finally, if someone touches my Zanpakutou before I release it, then they are immune to the effects of Kagirinai-Kuuhaku for 24 hours in their time." ??? [/quote]
I think it was kind of put on their just to have a weakness XD. But atm, I'm too lazy to think of something else >.> You know what I'm like.




actually.... why would we have to fight at the same time? armies dont send in their infantry, tanks, airplanes and whatever at the same time.
But this isn't an army with thousands of people - this is a 6 on 6 fight. It won't be like the Winter War where we had people literally just standing around doing nothing. In something like this, people are likely to pair up and duke it out.


awwwww
hehehehehe
at least the club will be fully alive and revived with everyone back next summer with tons of stories from the year to tell right? :)
Something tells me the club won't die that badly in a year, will it?


What's this about a 'Damn' Trophy
Lamest release command. Da.c says it was MC's "Burn" (but he's made no comment on the new release command, "Immolate"), while Golde thinks his "Release" deserves the trophy.

Genius. Oh wow, we so have to do this a MSN Convo at some point - all of us assigned a Pokemon ... by other people 8D

We sort of did, in a small convo, but I'm not sure if it was assigned entirely by other people. It's a good idea, though.
From the small list I have (unfortunately I didn't write down the reasons, and I can't find the convo):
Blue - Dragonair
Me - Metang
Cell - Shiny Luxray
Kida - Mightyena.

...Told you it was a small list.


Oh, and something I forgot to mention: good luck to everyone at college/uni!

Eon Master
19th August 2011, 6:47 PM
actually.... why would we have to fight at the same time? armies dont send in their infantry, tanks, airplanes and whatever at the same time.

Actually, they do, just not all in the same tiny space or area. You can't send in tanks without infantry support, otherwise they'll be mauled by rocket teams and random grunts with RPGs. You can't send in infantry without some kind of support, otherwise they'll be forced to fall back and resort to guerilla tactics when they come up against artillery, armor, or air support. And not utilizing aircraft to support a ground assault is stupid unless the entire sector is a mess of hostile anti-aircraft batteries. It varies based on the situation, but you usually use vehicular, infantry, and air assault squadrons in some combination in warfare, unless you're talking something like jungle warfare in which the only option is to rely on infantry after torching the area with air support or artillery or something.

But I digress, since that doesn't make sense in the context of ILP's original quandry.

Also, you can just call me Eon. I really don't mind.


basically deal with the most unpredicatble, then deal with the predictable. makes sense.

Not exactly. If I wanted to get the most unpredictable first, I would've gone for Kida. My strategy was to off the immediately lethal people first and then move on to the others in the best possible formation while using our numerical advantage to outmanuver them.


you helped him?
that explains why it is so much more imaginative!!!!
thank you!!!

xD Well, in all honesty, the basic ideas were all there. I just needed to give him a push in the right direction. My specialty with Zanpaktou design is adapting powers to fit situations, and this qualified.


awww, the young are growing up

and LOOOOOL!!! I love that american unis start earlier than Canadian ones and finish later

Shaddup :p Your "wifey" is actually younger than me by about five months, so that comment backfires anyway xD

Yeah, but we have longer breaks :p Woo, the whole month of Christmas break!

@all you people who go to school later than me:
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/137/3/b/Navi___Hey_Listen_by_GENZOMAN.jpg

@Kida: Congrats on making it into your university of choice. Knew you'd make it.


We sort of did, in a small convo, but I'm not sure if it was assigned entirely by other people. It's a good idea, though.
From the small list I have (unfortunately I didn't write down the reasons, and I can't find the convo):
Blue - Dragonair
Me - Metang
Cell - Shiny Luxray
Kida - Mightyena

I vote Archeops for myself. Total glass cannon, but very fast and very powerful. If not, I'm totally Weavile.

Also, why is Kida not an Eevee? A Magical Eevee that can shift into any one of her evolutionary forms and back by being exposed to the appropriate elemental energy? completelyadliblol

...also, hyena's are more closely related to cats than dogs, contrary to popular belief, so what you were probably aiming for with Mightyena doesn't really work anyway.

So yeah, not really much else to say though I've already said quite a bit.

I like Pokemon (...)
19th August 2011, 6:49 PM
Remember the last time I analysed the stats (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=11537045&postcount=1917)? Yeah, I’m doing it again. Mainly because I’m bored, but also because we now have Cell instead of Jin, and our previous stats have changed slightly. Also, last time I included the Lieutenants, but because I’ll be doing some more averaging (as opposed to just ranking); I’ve decided not to include them – especially since there are only 4 Lieutenants that have stats.

http://oi52.*******.com/28uwkj.jpg

A single image instead of having 13 charts like last time is so much easier.
Before I do any ranking, what I want to do is show the average Captain’s stats, and calculate roughly – if all of the stats were equal – what the “average Captain” would have in each stat.

So the average Captain has a total of 490 (or more precisely, 486.92 rounded up. Just a note, all numbers that have been rounded will be put in brackets do 2 decimal places). Splitting that into 6 stats, the average Captain would have 80 in each stat (81.15). It doesn’t add up exactly, because the figures are rounded quite heavily, but you get the point. I’ll call the 80 stat the “Rounded Average”, for comparison against all the other averaged stats.



1. Golde (100)
=1. Flash_Step (100)
=1. VizardBlue (100)
=1. Kusari (100)
5. Zameric (90)
=5. rotrum (90)
7. Northern Lights (80)
=7. arceus03 (80)
=7. MasterCharizard15 (80)
=7. Eon Master (80)
=7. Senbonzakura (80)
12. I like Pokemon (...) (70)
13. Cell (60)

Total Offense: 1110
Average Offense: 90 (85.38)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 6
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 5
Number of people below Rounded Average: 2

Quite simply, all I did was rank each member by their offense. If anyone shared the same spot, then they have an = next to their rank, and are ordered by the squad that they’re in.

Offense is by far our greatest stat – having the highest total out of all of the stats. This is because almost half of our members have a stat greater than the Rounded Average – and almost a third having 100. While at the same time, we only have 2 members (Cell and I) below the Rounded Average.




1. Northern Lights (100)
=1. arceus03 (100)
3. Golde (80)
=3. Cell (80)
=3. Eon Master (80)
=3. Senbonzakura (80)
7. Zameric (70)
=7. Rotrum (70)
=7. I like Pokemon (...) (70)
10. Flash_Step (60)
=10. MasterCharizard15 (60)
=10. VizardBlue (60)
=10. kusari (60)

Total Defence: 970
Average Defence: 70 (74.62)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 2
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 4
Number of people below Rounded Average: 7

Of course, when we have one stat that is higher than the Rounded Average, another stat has to be lower. This time, we have more people below the Rounded Average than we do above and even equal to it. This is likely because people tend to either go offensive or defensive (with 3 of the people with 100 in Offense having 60 in Defence).




1. MasterCharizard15 (100)
=1. Eon Master (100)
=1. rotrum (100)
=1. VizardBlue (100)
5. Cell (90)
=5. Flash Step (90)
7. Golde (80)
=7. Senbonzakura (80)
=7. I like Pokemon (80)
=7. Kusari (80)
11. Northern Lights (70)
=11. Zameric (70)
13. arceus03 (60)

Total Mobility: 1100
Average Mobility: 80 (84.62)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 6
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 4
Number of people below Rounded Average: 3

Just 10 points shy of our Total Offense, Mobility is our second highest stat. Unfortunately, though, we’re just a hairline below the rounding; in fact, our Offense and Mobility share almost exactly the same number of stats (four 100s, two 90s, one 60. Offense has fives 80s and one 70, while Mobility has four 80s and two 70s) – this also means that we have 1 more person below the Rounded Average than equal to, when compared to our Offense.




1. Northern Lights (100)
=1. Arceus03 (100)
=1. MasterCharizard15 (100)
=1. Senbonzakura (100)
5. Cell (90)
=5. Flash_Step (90)
=5. rotrum (90)
=5. I like Pokemon (...) (90)
9. Zameric (80)
=9. kusari (80)
11. VizardBlue (70)
12. Eon Master (60)
13. Golde (50).

Total Kidou/Reiatsu: 1100
Average Kidou/Reiatsu: 80 (84.62)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 8
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 2
Number of people below Rounded Average: 3

Interestingly, our total (and therefore our stat average) is exactly the same as Mobility. Despite this, the numbers have shuffled around quite a bit; by far, Kidou/Reiatsu has the most people above the Rounded Average. However, Blue, Eon and Golde’s low stats make the stat average just short of 90.




1. MasterCharizard15 (100)
=1. Eon Master (100)
=1. I like Pokemon (100)
4. Cell (90)
=4. Arceus03 (90)
6. Golde (80)
=6. Northern Lights (80)
=6. Senbonzakura (80)
=6. rotrum (80)
=6. kusari (80)
11. Flash_Step (70)
=11. Zameric (70)
=11. VizardBlue (70)

Total Intellect: 1090
Average Intellect: 80 (83.85)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 5
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 5
Number of people below Rounded Average: 3

Our total Intellect is just below our total Mobility and total Kidou/Reiatsu by 10 points. With just as many people above the Rounded Average as equal to the Rounded Average, our stat total drops just a bit more shy of the round-off mark.




1. Golde (100)
=1. VizardBlue (100)
3. Flash_Step (90)
=3. Kusari (90)
5. Zameric (80)
6. MasterCharizard15 (70)
=6. Eon Master (70)
=6. Senbonzakura (70)
=6. I like Pokemon (...) (70)
10. arceus03 (60)
=10. rotrum (60)
12. Cell (50)
=12. Northern Lights (50)

Total Stamina: 960
Average Stamina: 70 (73.85)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 4
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 1
Number of people below Rounded Average: 8

Stamina is by far our worst stat, with 10 point less than our Total Defense, and 50 points lower than our Total Offense. With 3 more people below the Rounded Average than above and equal to together, our Stat Average is the worst of them all. This could be because at one point, Stamina was Physical Strength – so a lot of members would consider themselves better with Zanpakutou/Zanjutsu and Kidou, instead of fisticuffs.




1. MasterCharizard15 (510)
2. Flash_Step (500)
=2. VizardBlue (500)
4. Golde (490)
=4. arceus03 (490)
=4. Eon Master (490)
=4. Senbonzakura (490)
=4. rotrum (490)
=4. kusari (490)
10. Northern Lights (480)
=10. I like Pokemon (...) (480)
12. Cell (460)
=12. Zameric (460)
Total Total: 6330
Average Total: 490 (486.92)
Number of people above Average: 3
Number of people equal to the Average: 6
Number of people below Average: 4

And so, we come full circle. Just barely making it above the round-off point, we get away with an average total of 490.




If we take the Stat Averages calculated throughout (90/70/80/80/80/70), we find that our total greatly undercuts our Average Total. So if we round up the numbers ending in 4 (like 84.62 in Mobility and Kidou reiatsu) but round down numbers ending in 3 (like 73.85 for Stamina), we get:

Offense: 90
Defence: 80
Mobility: 90
Kidou/Reiatsu: 90
Intellect: 80
Stamina: 70
Total: 500

Just slightly above our Average Total. We could probably get away with dropping Defence down to 70, to get that 490 total.

Quite interesting, no?




One thing I wanted to test out was what our average ranking is. For example, Golde ranked: (1 [Offense] + 3 [Defence] + 7 [Mobility] + 13 [Kidou/Reiatsu] + 6 + 1 [Stamina] = 31) (31/6 = 5.1666…) or simply 5. This means that, for example, 90 Offense is different to 90 Defence – the former will give you a rank of 5, while the latter will give you a rank of 3.

4. MasterCharizard15 (4.333…) [3]
5. Eon Master (5) [2]
=5. Senbonzakura (5) [1]
5. Golde (5.1666…) [2]
6. rotrum (5.666…) [1]
6. Flash_Step (5.8333…) [1]
=6. VizardBlue (5.8333…) [3]
6. arceus03 (6) [2]
=6. Kusari (6) [1]
6. Northern Lights (6.333…) [2]
=6. I like Pokemon (…) (6.333…) [1]
7. Cell (7) [0]
8. Zameric (8) [0]

There is only an = by your rank if you scored exactly the same number [I]before rounding as the person above you. On the left is your rank after rounding, in the ( ) is the rank before rounding (which is what the = is based on), and in the [ ], is the number of 100s that person has – Senbonzakura’s stats are veru much an interesting case.

It seems to score high in this, a 100 in Offense, Mobility and Kidou/Reiatsu is almost necessary (with MC and Blue being the only ones with 100 in 2 of these stats – and Blue probably ranks quite low because of the low Defense, Intellect and Kidou/Reiatsu).

A higher rank is not necessarily better than ranking low, though. For example, when you compare Eon (http://zameric.webs.com/photos/Bleach-Club-BDCs/EonBDC-1.png) and Kusari (http://zameric.webs.com/photos/Bleach-Club-BDCs/kusariBDC-1.png)’s charts, you find that despite having the same total, Kusari is more well-rounded (having only one 100 and one 90, but three 80s and one 60), while Eon is more specialised (having two 100s, no 90s, two 80s, a 70 and a 60) – Eon may have another two stats that he excels at, but Kusari has one more stat that he’s good at than Eon.



And because I was even MORE bored when I was finished…

http://oi53.*******.com/2s8mjx2.jpg

A single image is so awesome. One thing to note – in the English translation, Kenpachi gets 199 Offense, instead of 100, to make up for his 0 Kidou/Reiatsu. I’ve simply rounded it to 200 – this will definitely affect the results.

Just like before – the average Captain’s total, as well as what the Rounded Average for each stat. It should be more interesting, because we now have a MUCH greater range of stats (130 points difference between Yamamoto and Mayuri!). The average Captain has a total of 500 (498.46) [or 490 (490.77) if you have Zaraki with 100 Offense], with each stat having 80 (83.08) [or 81.79], but can probably get either a 100, or two 90s to make up for the bit taken off when I rounded. Just like before, I’ll call 80 the “Rounded Average”.



1. Zaraki (200)
=1. Yamamoto (100)
=1. Unohana (100)
=1. Aizen (100)
=1. Komamura (100)
6. Byakuya (90)
=6. Shunsui (90)
=6. Ukitake (90)
9. Soi Fon (80)
=9. Gin (80)
=9. Hitsugaya (80)
12. Tousen (70)
=12. Mayuri (70)

Total Offense: 1250 [or 1150] (140, or 40 greater than us)
Average Offense: 100 (96.15) [or 90 (88.46)]
Rounded Average: 80 (83.08)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 8 (2 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 3 (2 less than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 2 (equal to us)

For the Total Offense and Average Offense, the numbers in the [ ] brackets are if you count Zaraki as having 100 Offense.

Like us, Offense is their greatest stat – partially because of Kenpachi’s 200 stat. Even without that, though, it is still the stat with the highest total, with more than half of the Gotei 13 having an Offense stat greater than the Rounded Average.




1. Yamamoto (100)
=1. Komamura (100)
3. Aizen (90)
=3. Shunsui (90)
=3. Ukitake (90)
6. Gin (80)
=6. Unohana (80)
=6. Byakuya (80)
=6. Hitsugaya (...) (80)
=6. Zaraki (80)
11. Tousen (70)
=11. Mayuri (70)
13. Soi Fon (60)

Total Defence: 1070 (100 greater than us)
Average Defence: 80 (82.31)
Rounded Average: 80 (83.08)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 5 (3 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 5 (1 more than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 3 (3 less than us)

The Canon Gotei 13 is quite a few points more defensive than us, and quite a lot of people have high in both Offense and Defence. Only Unohana, Soi Fon and Kenpachi having 20 points different- everyone else has either 10 points different, or are equal.




1. Yamamoto (100)
=1. Soi Fon (100)
3. Aizen (90)
=3. Byakuya (90)
=3. Shunsui (90)
=3. Hitsugaya (90)
7. Gin (80)
=7. Tousen (80)
9. Unohana (70)
=9. Ukitake (70)
11. Zaraki (60)
12. Komamura (40)
=12. Mayuri (40)

Total Mobility: 1000 (100 less than us)
Average Mobility: 80 (76.92)
Rounded Average: 80 (83.08)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 6 (equal to us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 2 (2 less than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 5 (2 more than us)

Finally – we’re better than them at something! XD. Along with Defence, Mobility has the fewest 100s, with only 2, and the most 40s (the lowest stats used, excluding Kenpachi’s Kidou/Reiatsu).




1. Yamamoto (100)
=1. Unohana (100)
=1. Aizen (100)
=1. Shunsui (100)
=1. Mayuri (100)
=1. Ukitake (100)
7. Byakuya (90)
=7. Tousen (90)
=7. Hitsugaya (90)
10. Gin (80)
11. Soi Fon (60)
12. Komamura (50)
13. Zaraki (0).

Total Kidou/Reiatsu: 1060 (40 less than us)
Average Kidou/Reiatsu: 80 (81.54)
Rounded Average: 80 (83.08)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 9 (1 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 1 (1 less than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 3 (equal to us)

Just like us, the Canon Gotei 13 is excellent at Kidou – having 6 people with 100s. Even with Kenpachi’s 0, they get just barely lower than us.




1. Yamamoto (100)
=1. Unohana (100)
=1. Aizen (100)
=1. Mayuri (100)
=1. Ukitake (100)
6. Byakuya (90)
=6. Shunsui (90)
=6. Tousen (90)
9. Gin (80)
=9. Komamura (80)
=9. Hitsugaya(80)
=12. Soi Fon (60)
13. Zaraki (50)

Total Intellect: 1120 (30 more than us)
Average Intellect: 90 (86.15)
Rounded Average: 80 (83.08)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 8 (3 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 3 (2 less than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 2 (1 less than us)

There’s definitely a correlation between Kidou/Reiatsu and Intellect. Everyone with 100 in Intellect has a 100 in Kidou/Reiatsu. The only 100 Kidou/Reiatsu with 90 in Intellect is Shunsui. After that, everyone has the same Kidou/Reiatsu and Intellect, except for Komamura (50:80), Hitsugaya (90:80) and Kenpachi (0:50).




1. Soi Fon (100)
=1. Komamura (100)
=1. Zaraki (100)
4. Unohana (90)
5. Gin (80)
=5. Aizen (80)
=5. Hitsugaya (80)
8. Byakuya (70)
=8. Shunsui (70)
10. Yamamoto (60)
=10. Tousen (60)
12. Mayuri (50)
13. Ukitake (40)

Total Stamina: 980 (20 more than us)
Average Stamina: 80 (75.38)
Rounded Average: 80 (81.15)
Number of people above Rounded Average: 4 (1 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Rounded Average: 3 (3 less than us)
Number of people below Rounded Average: 6 (2 more than us)

Just like us, Stamina is their worst stat – in fact, it’s the only one which doesn’t have a total greater than 1000. It has the third least amount of 100s (after Defence and Mobility), as well as the most 60s.




1. Yamamoto (560)
=1. Aizen (560)
3. Unohana (540)
4. Shunsui (530)
5. Byakuya (510)
6. Hitsugaya (500)
7. Zaraki (490)
=7. Ukitake (490)
9. Gin (480)
10. Komamura (470)
11. Soi Fon (460)
=11. Tousen (460)
13. Mayuri (430)
[14. Zaraki (390)]

Total Total: 6480 (150 greater than us) [or 6380 (50 greater than us)]
Average Total: 500 (498.46) [or 490 (490.77]
Number of people above Average: 5 (2 more than us)
Number of people equal to the Average: 1 (5 less than us)
Number of people below Average: 7 (3 more than us)

Once again, we come full circle anyone dizzy yet?. Despite the fact that they have a higher total than us, it is MUCH more spread out than ours, ranging from 560 to 430 (130 points!). So while overall, they’re more powerful than us overall, we have a greater number of powerful members.

Another kind of interesting thing to note is their total – 6480. If we had a Head Captain with 600, and 12 Captains with 490 (never happening, but hypothetically…), then it would have the exact same total/Average. Alternatively, a Head Captain with 600, and 12 Captains with 470, would mean that altogether, we have an average of around 480.




Luckily, none of the numbers end in 3 or 4, so I can very easily round entirely up or down, and still get a nice, good total at the end.

Offense: 100 (or 90)
Defence: 80
Mobility: 80
Kidou/Reiatsu: 80
Intellect: 90
Stamina: 80
Total: 510 (or 500)

Almost perfect.
Quite interesting, no?




I think because the Canon Gotei 13 have a much larger spread of data, the rankings will be more separate (for example, the Club Gotei 13 had seven people ranked 6, but they were almost all because of rounding). In this, I will be counting Zaraki as having 100 Offense (and therefore sharing a rank with Yamamoto and co.)

2. Aizen (2.333…) [3]
3. Yamamoto (2.5) [5]
4. Unohana (3.666…) [3]
5. Shunsui (4.5) [1]
6. Ukitake (5.5) [2]
6. Byakuya (6) [0]
=6. Komamura (6) [3]
7. Hitsugaya (6.5) [0]
8. Zaraki (7.5) [2]
8. Gin (7.666…) [0]
8. Soi Fon (7.8333…) [2]
8. Mayuri (8.1666…) [2]
9. Tousen (8.8332…) [0]

Like for us, on the left is the rank after rounding, in the ( ) is the rank before rounding, and in the [ ] is the number of 100s.
Ah – despite having the same total as Yamamoto, Aizen scores higher here because he was always in the top 5 – while Yamamoto was 10th because of his low stamina, despite being 1st in everything. I guess this shows that the more well-rounded people score higher – that is, as long as they have 100s practically everywhere. And Byakuya and Komamura have exactly the same ranking, despite Byakuya having 40 more points.

The reason why this disagrees with my previous "lower rank means more well-rounded" is simply because of the massive range in stats. Aizen and Yamamoto are just so high that they simply specialise in everything.



Sorry if I hurt anyone’s brain…

One thing that I figured would be quite interesting is the areas - for example, just because a person has a high total, doesn't necessarily mean that the amount that they cover is the best.

The meaning behind the areas is quite interesting – it doesn’t necessarily mean you’re “more powerful” or “more dangerous” or “stronger” just because you have a higher area. It just means that you have really high stats that are closer together – one thing I found out was that having, say, a 100 Offense and 100 Defence would give a higher area than 100 Offense and 100 Mobility (assuming all the other stats remain the same)


There’s maths, so I’ll try and make it as simple and easy to understand as I can.

http://zameric.webs.com/photos/Bleach-Club-BDCs/GoldeBDC-1.png

Each chart can be split into 6 triangles – the centre angle of each triangle is 60 degrees (because we split the centre into 6 equal pieces, so 360/6). The lengths of 2 of the sides of the triangles are the amount that the person has in each stat. And if we know 2 of the lengths of a triangle, and the angle that they meet, we can calculate its area using a formula.

For example, one of the triangles we can calculate using Golde’s chart, is the Offense-Defence triangle. The length of the Offense is 100, the length of the Defence is 80, and the angle that they meet is 60 degrees. I just have to plug it in to my formula:

The formula is A*B*(Sin60)/2

Where A is one of the lengths, B is the length next to it (so Offense/Defence, Defence/Mobility, Mobility/Kidou-Reiatsu, Kidou-Reiatsu/Intellect, Intellect/Stamina, and Stamina/Offense).

So you have to calculate the area of each of the triangles (the six that I just listed), and add them together (with a bit of playing around, you can make the calculating easier for yourself. Or just ask me to do it for you).

The only thing is, Sin60 is an irrational number (the square root of 3 divided by 2 = SQRT3/2), which means the area will be irrational, and will have a bunch of decimals. So, I’m going to ignore that little “square root of 3” sign, and instead of multiplying by “sin60”, I will be dividing by 2 (which means the actual equation is A*B/4) – which means all areas are actually smaller than what they physically are, but they’re still proportional to each other (but it means that saying “I have 60 more area” isn’t TECHNICALLY correct, it’s “60*SQRT3”).

So if you wanted to calculate the area of a chart, and wanted to compare it to the areas of these charts, you just multiply 2 adjacent lengths together, and find a quarter of that result, and do this for every stat pair.




Before I do the actual charts, I wanted to see – assuming the same total, does the number of 100s, or even the spread of stats matter at all?

With a total of 480, we can either have:

80/80/80/80/80/80 – or zero 100s
100/100/70/70/70/70 – two 100s (would this be different to 100/70/100/70/70/70, or even 100/70/70/100/70/70?)
100/100/100/60/60/60 (three 100s– is this any different to 100/60/100/60/100/60?)
100/100/100/100/40/40 (four 100s – is this any different to 100/40/100/100/40/100?)

And, well, I can’t have any more 100s XD. The reason why I don’t have one 100, is because the other stats would be 76, which while I could do, it wouldn’t be legal according to Zam’s charts.

Does the number of 100s matter, if the total is the same? What about adjacent 100s, compared to spread out 100s? Just a note, “adjacent 100s” are two or more 100s that are next to each other, “semi-adjacent 100s” are 100s that only have one non-100 number between them, and “non-adjacent 100s” are 100s that have two or more non-100 numbers between them on both sides.

80/80/80/80/80/80 – or zero 100s
Area = 9600

100/100/70/70/70/70 – or two adjacent 100s
Area = 9675

100/70/100/70/70/70 – or two semi-adjacent 100s
Area = 9450

100/70/70/100/70/70 – or two non-adjacent 100
Area = 9450

100/100/100/60/60/60 – or three adjacent 100s
Area = 9800

100/60/100/60/100/60 – or three semi-adjacent 100s
Area = 9000

100/100/100/100/40/40 – or four adjacent 100s
Area = 9900

100/40/100/100/40/100 – or two adjacent 100s and two semi-adjacent 100s
Area = 9000

…Wow. It might not look it, but there is a big difference there. There’s a ten per cent increase from the last one, to the second last one – and they have EXACTLY the same number of 100s! The only difference was that having them next to each other got a higher result.

With only two 100s, having adjacent 100s got a higher area than having two semi-adjacent or non-adjacent.
With three 100s, being adjacent got 800 more points than semi-adjacent.
And with four 100s, having them altogether gets the highest area. So it looks like from the results, to get the highest area, you should specialise in a few stats that are next to each other.




Finally, the areas of everyone in the club (not just captains, because we’re not really comparing a whole lot). Next to them, I have the stat total for comparison.

1. MasterCharizard15 (10, 850) (510)
2. Sapphiredragon929 (10, 500) (500)
3. Flash_Step (10, 275) (500)
4. VizardBlue (10, 225) (500)
5. Golde (10, 100) (490)
6. Senbonzakura (10, 000) (490)
7. kusari (9950) (490)
8. rotrum (9925) (490)
9. arceus03 (9800) (490)
10. Eon Master (9750) (490)
11. I like Pokemon (…) (9650) (480)
12. CyberBlaziken (9550) (480)
13. Northern Lights (9500) (480)
14. Cell (8925) (460)
15. Zameric (8800) (460)
16. The Eighth Circle of WTH (8675) (460)
17. badmanjaro (8050) (440)
18. Jinchuuriki Hunter (7800) (420)
19. Lucario0708 (7350) (420)
20. PKMN Trainer Rex (7325) (420)
21. minchan (6900) (410)
22. Ice Heart (6625) (400
23. cookies kill you (6400) (400)

Something I found interesting was that no one had the same area. It’s all to do with the way that all the stats were distributed- something which would be unique to each person.




And for the 13 canon captains:

1. Aizen (13, 025) (560)
2. Yamamoto (13, 000) (560)
3. Unohana (12, 150) (540)
4. Shunsui (11, 700) (530)
5. Zaraki w/ 200 (11, 450) (490)
6. Byakuya (10, 800) (510)
7. Hitsugaya (10, 425) 500)
8. Ukitake (9750) (490)
9. Gin (9600) (480)
10. Komamura (9500) (470)
11. Tousen (8850) (460)
12. Soi Fon (8600) (460)
13. Mayuri (7550) (430)
14. Zaraki w/ 100 (6950) (390)

No surprise that no one has the same area.




I wanted to see the ratio of the area compared to the total. Or simply, who is using their stats to get the most area they can?



1. MasterCharizard15 (21.27)
2. Sapphiredragon929 (21)
3. Golde (20.61)
4. Flash_Step (20.55)
5. VizardBlue (20.45)
6. Senbonzakura (20.41)
7. kusari (20.31)
8. rotrum (20.26)
9. I like Pokemon (…) (20.10)
10. arceus03 (20)
11. Eon Master (19.90)
=11. CyberBlaziken (19.90)
13. Northern Lights (19.79)
14. Cell (19.40)
15. Zameric (19.13)
16. The Eighth Circle of WTH (18.86)
17. Jinchuuriki Hunter (18.57)
18. badmanjaro (18.30)
19. Lucario0708 (17.5)
20. PKMN Trainer Rex (17.44)
21. minchan (16.83)
22. Ice Heart (16.56)
23. cookies kill you (16)




1. Zaraki w/200 (23.37)
2. Aizen (23.26)
3. Yamamoto (23.21)
4. Unohana (22.5)
5. Shunsui (22.08)
6. Byakuya (21.18)
7. Hitsugaya (20.85)
8. Komamura (20.21)
9. Gin (20)
10. Ukitake (18.90)
11. Tousen (19.24)
12. Soi Fon (18.70)
13. Zaraki w/100 (17.82)
14. Mayuri (17.56)




Because the numbers for this are a lot less broad than the totals or the areas (both of which we would just be a chunk in the middle), I decided to put the Area per Total together. Bolded are the Canon Captains:

1. Zaraki w/200 (23.37)
2. Aizen (23.26)
3. Yamamoto (23.21)
4. Unohana (22.5)
5. Shunsui (22.08)
6. MasterCharizard15 (21.27)
7. Byakuya (21.18)
8. Sapphiredragon929 (21)
9. Hitsugaya (20.85)
10. Golde (20.61)
11. Flash_Step (20.55)
12. VizardBlue (20.45)
13. Senbonzakura (20.41)
14. kusari (20.31)
15. rotrum (20.26)
16. Komamura (20.21)
17. I like Pokemon (…) (20.10)
18. Gin (20)
=18. arceus03 (20)
20. Eon Master (19.90)
=20. Ukitake (19.90)
=20. CyberBlaziken (19.90)
23. Northern Lights (19.79)
24. Cell (19.40)
25. Tousen (19.24)
26. Zameric (19.13)
27. The Eighth Circle of WTH (18.86)
28. Soi Fon (18.70)
29. Jinchuuriki Hunter (18.57)
30. badmanjaro (18.30)
31. Zaraki w/100 (17.82)
32. Mayuri (17.56)
33. Lucario0708 (17.5)
34. PKMN Trainer Rex (17.44)
35. minchan (16.83)
36. Ice Heart (16.56)
37. cookies kill you (16)

Looks like there’s a chunk of us right between Hitsugaya and Komamura. I find it funny that there’s only 0.64 difference between them.


…Yeah, now I’m bored again.

I think maybe later I’ll make some charts that show correlation between stats – like how with us, it tends that you either have a high Offense or a high Defence; and with the Canon Gotei 13, if you have a high Intellect, you have a high Kidou/Reiatsu rank.

...19 pages in MS word. Eon, how long are your chapters in word?

MasterCharizard15
20th August 2011, 12:36 AM
@ Ilp's Data

It makes me feel special for some reason....
Maybe it's because I have the biggest area or something.
I'm surprised a bit that canon Bleach could own us...ehh...nah, not really.

I'll post more about the data later.

In the mean time, STORY TIME!

The four great noble families were legendary in the Soul Society for their influence and power. For centuries, these four families stood above all other nobles, answering only to the Spirit King and Royal Family. As expected, the families ensured that their status would not be lost by proving their superiority time and time again. The pressure to keep up such a high standard crushed the weaker-willed members of the families, leaving only the strong left to carry on the burdens of status.

The current generation of noble clans were legends amongst legends. They were by far the most powerful generation, each head being a Captain of a Squad in the Gotei thirteen. They got called many things, The Fearsome Four, Four Nobles of Oblivion, and The Heart-breakers. The last title got conceived from many who had fallen for the charm of the nobles, only to lose their interest after few moments.

The noble most famous for being a heart-breaker was, Dre Flashy. The rumors of his exploits was a goldmine to gossips. His looks and charisma was said to be able to seduce any woman to the point that few thought he was an incubus. Few knew this was his way of coping with the immense pressures of running the Flashy clan as well as lead Squad Five as its Captain. He worked hard, and played harder, to put it bluntly and in its most simplistic ideal.

“Captain Flashy, the Head Captain requested that these papers be filled out and sent in by tonight.” said his Lieutenant , Min in a cheerful tone. Min wore the standard Shinigami uniform along with her Lieutenant Badge. He slender frame and fair skin was hidden by her uniform and silky black hair.

“Too much paperwork. Why is Head-Captain working us so hard?” Min asked, also tried for the overload of paperwork. The oak colored desk was almost completely hidden from the piles of papers.

“The fact that the noble families are having lots of power shifts and important events, must not be helping the workload.” She added meekly.

“Well, it looks like we'll have to throw a party to have some fun and get the stress away.” Dre told her with his trademarked smile. A hell butterfly broke the two of their casual conversation, summoning the Captain to a Captain's meeting.

“Hope this meeting won't end up with us getting more work.” He said before flash stepping to meeting, leaving Min to handle all the paperwork.

-
The Captain's meeting room was filled with tension and darkness. The only light source was illuminating from the center of the table in the room. The round table had the flower insignia and squad number of each captain labeled on the edges. The chairs had the same design, most of the captains sitting in their special seat, with varying expressions.

Niche Neeya timidly shifted his gaze from the captains assembled, feeling the tension drowning him. As a captain, he could tell how the others in the room felt by their spiritual pressure. Since he was from the second generation of Shinigami from the academy, he could only tell faintly. Though, with how strong the emotions were, he doubted that anyone couldn't sense them.

Dre Flashy sat there waiting for the meeting to begin. There was so much negative energy in the room, he doubted that even one his famous parties could cut it. He noticed that the Squad two Captain, Niche, was letting the atmosphere get to him.

Zameric Kajiya's face was partly hidden by his long hair and hat, hiding his uneasy expression. He was also from the second generation of graduates, but he could tell who was filling the room with such negative and painful emotions. The Third Squad Captain, Kida Ookami and Sixth Squad Captain, Senshuken Toumoku, were the ones creating most of it. He also noticed that the eighth and tenth captains were absent.

Saiga Hayashi was the only remaining captain that didn't have murderous aura radiating from him. He was pissed that he was woken up, that Aozora woke him, didn't help. He growled a bit, thinking of his luck of getting a wake up call from the only Captain that could survive being sliced in half.

The Head-Captain let it be know that the meeting had started, waiting for the Twelfth Squad Captain, Ryuu Schiffer. His pale and skinny body covered by his shinigami uniform and Captain's robe, stood up in his seat. He then produced a black cord from the back of his neck, inserting it into a port in the table.

“Four hours ago a large outbreak of hollows, ranging from gillain to adjuchas class, appeared in the world of the living. Estimated* around five hundred in number, Squads Six, Seven, Eight and Eleven got dispatched to handle the situation.”

“Geez, overkill much?” Zameric commented, hoping it would ease the thick tension in the room.

Nobody said a word to him, Niche swore he felt someone's urge to smack him. Saiga yawned and looked to Ryuu, “ Well what happened during the mission?”

The joint spiritual pressures of Kida, Senshuken and Seijuro nearly suffocated everyone in the room. The bitter and poisonous feelings were enough to kill a weaker-willed being. Mizuhashi frowned, commenting on the three's current state would likely end in conflict. His own emotions weren't much better, but for the sake of the other, tried to relax the room with his own spiritual pressure.

The Head-Captain seemed ill at the moment, the tension and near suffocating atmosphere created by the others, wasn't making him feel better. He slumped in his chair, body in a cold sweat and feeling like it was on fire. He found that he couldn't speak with gagging, his throat dry and suffering form the acidic puke that struggled to come out.

“Head-Captain?” Mizuhashi asked, noticing his current condition. All eyes turned on their leader, seeing him pass out and collapse on the ground. The Captains all quickly got into action, transporting him to Squad Four. Mizuhashi quickly had a room prepared for him, personally examining their ill leader's body.

The rest of the Captains got out-of-the-way of the Squad Four members, a few waiting outside the squad or around it.

“This day just keeps getting better, next thing you'll know, my hat will take over the world.” Zameric commented while standing around impatiently. He'd normally be enjoying the clear blue weather and sunny sky under different circumstances.

“I hope he'll be alright.” Niche said quietly, standing in the shadows of the squad barracks.

“He's the Head-Captain, he can pretty much live through almost anything.” Saiga told the two, noting that the other Captains had left the three alone.
Mizuhashi frowned, if they had taken any longer to examine him, he most likely would have died. The Head-Captain was somehow poisoned before the meeting. Not only that, but the poison was so lethal, that it was easily comparable to the poison concoctions of the former Squad Twelve Captain.

Captain Mizuhashi also noted that his zanpaktou, Tsukibana, also had trouble with this particular poison. Currently, she had removed most of it from the Head-Captain's system. Mizuhashi collected a sample of the poison for Squad Twelve to analyze as soon as possible.

Mizuhashi sighed and sat on a bed beside the Head-Captain's, emotionally exhausted and stressed. He ran a hand through his white hair and looked over to his zanpaktou, noting that Tsukibana looked uneasy before re-sealing it.

“Do you sense something?” He asked her wondering what else was going on.

“I feel a familiar presence washing over the Seireitei.” She told him mentally, as to make sure they didn't wake up their patient during his recovery.

“Do you other zanpaktou sense it too?” He asked going over a few charts in the room, double checking the symptoms of their leader.

“...I'm sorry master, but I was unable to connect with the other zanpaktou. Quite few inner worlds are in turmoil now, weakening our bonds dramatically. I can't reach Zachiru at all though, it's like a black void blocks all who want to make contact.”

Mizhashi frowned and exited the room, ordering a few officers to keep watch on the Head-Captain's condition. He needed to discuss this with other captains, he left to visit Squad Twelve.
---
Author's Note
Tried using people that normally don't get a ton of screen time in fics.
Which is why a few captains were on mute. XD
---Cast---
Head-Captain- Golde
Niche Neeya-Cell
Kida Ookami-NL
Mizuhashi Akira-Arc
Dre Flashy-Dre
Senshuken Toumoku -MC
Seijuro (Too cool for a last name) -Eon
Eighth Squad Captain -Senny
Zameric Kajiya-Zam
Tenth Squad Captain- Rotrum
Aozora/Blue -Blue
Ryuu Schiffer-ILp
Saiga Hayashi-Kusari

Zameric
20th August 2011, 1:04 AM
nah, i have seen Zam's taste in things.... if he thought my titles sound beautiful, then i would be worried xD

you were trying to say "what the devil where you smoking?" right?
a better trabslation would be "tu fumes quoi en tabarnak????" or something like that :)
<.<

No, I put in What the hell are you smoking?, into Google translate. xD


We sort of did, in a small convo, but I'm not sure if it was assigned entirely by other people. It's a good idea, though.
From the small list I have (unfortunately I didn't write down the reasons, and I can't find the convo):
Blue - Dragonair
Me - Metang
Cell - Shiny Luxray
Kida - Mightyena.

...Told you it was a small list.
I'm putting in Bisharp as my pokemon equivalent! :D

I like Pokemon (...)
20th August 2011, 1:46 AM
@ Ilp's Data

It makes me feel special for some reason....
Maybe it's because I have the biggest area or something.
I'm surprised a bit that canon Bleach could own us...ehh...nah, not really.
Well, the Canon G13 has more people stronger than us, but they have more people weaker than us. Assuming that we can defeat the relatively weaker Captains more easily, we have more people to fight the upper-captains.


The pressure to keep up such a high standard crushed the weaker-willed members of the families, leaving only the strong left to carry on the burdens of status.
I like this bit - it shows that part of the reason why nobles are always so strong is because they have to be, in order to deal with the stress etc.


The current generation of noble clans were legends amongst legends.
Ah, I forgot to mention! While looking over some of my files, I realised that I could group each member based on how many years they joined, after the club was made. So if you joined in the first year, you were a first generation. If you joined in the second year, you were a second gen, etc.

The list goes:

Gen 1 - Golde, NL, Rotrum, Jin, Da.c, Flash, MC, Arc, Luppi and DK
Gen 2 - Senny, me, The Doctor, Zam, RG, Sapph, mario_fan, Cell and arceus7
Gen 3 - Eon, kusari, degausser, Emp Gira, GalladeX, cloudacmaster, VizardBlue, Minchan, Arenak, Hollowfication
Gen 4 - Eight, CyberBlaziken, wayjun, Akua WaterDragonKing, Luke, cyndagirl, badmanjaro, Rex, theo_cupent, MGOShockWave, Ice Heart, CROWN, cookies kill you, Shadow PKMN trainer, Eeveelover824, Toobworm, whoknowswhat, Soroft

Btw, it includes everyone who has posted in this club only, which is why Luppi and DK are still in it (they posted even once or twice), and why inactive members like CROWN are as well.


The last title got conceived from many who had fallen for the charm of the nobles, only to lose their interest after few moments.
I don't quite understand this. Other people would fall for them, but lose interest quickly? It would make more sense for it to be something like "...many who had fallen for the charm of the nobles, but had quickly been denied a relationship." or something.

Min wore the standard Shinigami uniform along with her Lieutenant Badge. He slender frame and fair skin was hidden by her uniform and silky black hair.
Nice bit of description.

The Captain's meeting room was filled with tension and darkness. The only light source was illuminating from the center of the table in the room.
So this meeting is done sitting down? That makes me wonder... If we ignore Golde, we have 12 captains. We can seat them so that the number opposite plus their own, makes 15, and then throw Golde between two people:
2-13, 3-12, 4-11, 5-10, 6-9, 7-8, with Golde somewhere.
...sorry, I'll stop.


The Third Squad Captain, Kida Ookami and Sixth Squad Captain, Senshuken Toumoku, were the ones creating most of it. He also noticed that the eighth and tenth captains were absent.
It tends that Senny is absent, but Rotrum?

He growled a bit, thinking of his luck of getting a wake up call from the only Captain that could survive being sliced in half.
Not only would she survive, but she'd enjoy it too.

Ryruu Schiffer.
Lol. Ryuu.

His pale and skinny body covered by his shinigami uniform and Captain's robe, stood up in his seat. He then produced a black cord from the back of his neck, inserting it into a port in the table.
I love that I'm the one that explains everything 8D

“Four hours ago a large outbreak of hollows, ranging from gillain to adjuchas class, appeared in the world of the living. Estimated* around five hundred in number, Squads Six, Seven, Eight and Eleven got dispatched to handle the situation.”
What's with the asterisk?

The joint spiritual pressures of Kida, Senshuken and Seijuro nearly suffocated everyone in the room. The bitter and poisonous feelings were enough to kill a weaker-willed being.
Besides this, we don't actually know what happened o.o

The Head-Captain seemed ill at the moment, the tension and near suffocating atmosphere created by the others, wasn't making him feel better. He slumped in his chair, body in a cold sweat and feeling like it was on fire. He found that he couldn't speak with gagging, his throat dry and suffering form the acidic puke that struggled to come out.
So Head Captain is feeling unwell? My first reaction was that even so, he wouldn't be suffocated by the others' reiatsus - he's just that strong. But considering there was a poisoning...

“This day just keeps getting better, next thing you'll know, my hat will take over the world.” Zameric commented while standing around impatiently.
Comedy, yay.

The Head-Captain was somehow poisoned before the meeting. Not only that, but the poison was so lethal, that it was easily comparable to the poison concoctions of the former Squad Twelve Captain.
If it was comparable to him, it might BE him. That's my theory.

“I feel a familiar presence washing over the Seireitei.” She told him mentally, as to make sure they didn't wake up their patient during his recovery.
A familiar presence? So it's something that they had fought before.


Mizuhashi Akira-Arc
Might I mention you misspelt his name a few times?

Looks like I didn't get many replies on my data...

Zameric
20th August 2011, 3:10 AM
Looks like I didn't get many replies on my data...
You did a great job on all the number crunching, little Ant. :)
Ooh~, look at all the pretty colors!~
I don't like how Tosen ended up slightly ranking above me in both the stat areas and area ratios. >.>

And all this BDC number crunching is why your captain of Squad 12. xD

Jinchuuriki Hunter
20th August 2011, 4:49 AM
I don't think it's bad to be optimistic. But right after an epic chapter like the last one, this one, which followed it, naturally has to seem a bit lacking. I think that's just how manga is. Granted, I probably read too much Bakuman. Otherwise, I couldn't give such "insight" on the inner workings of manga. XD I think the next few chapters should get interesting again. It's just a shame I can't read them right away anymore. Well, I'll manage somehow. =)
I can tell you quite confidently that I don't find this chapter lacking because of last chapter's epicness. I find it lacking because it felt to me like a desperate attempt at regaining popularity. There isn't much of a reason for those specific members of Soul Society to give their power to Ichigo, Kubo likely just decided to drag in all the most popular soul reapers.
I mean, I can understand maybe Renji giving Ichigo power, but Byakuya?
And I can't see any of the 11th Squad giving him power either, especially not Kenpachi. He seems to me like the type who would just leave Ichigo on his own until he gets strong enough to fight him again.
Hitsugaya didn't even interact with Ichigo, he's just massively popular.
Hanatarou has more of a reason to help Ichigo out, where is he?

And while I'm at it, the last chapter wasn't epic. It was sad. It was a sad, sad attempt at building tension and emotion in a chapter. Ichigo's whining really got on my nerves back there. It just reminded me of so many little kids whining for toys or candy or whatever. That's not the kind of person I'd want for a main character.

PKMN Trainer Rex
20th August 2011, 8:20 AM
Fine, you both didn't read my post last page. *goes to emo corner*[/font]

Yes, indeed I did not. I will put more effort into it next time.


I just miss Unohana T_T

Yeah, debating her strength does that to ya.



Touche. XD The only close relation they got was in movie 2, but that does not constitute canon material. :p I can only say Kubo puts him there because he's highly popular, and if he wasn't there fangirls would murder Kubo in his bed.


Oh lord, we wouldn't want that would we? Maybe they have some mad brospect for each other.



And I'm going to college in... 3 years. Something tells me the club will die a lot. Unfortunately, I can't keep the club alive on my own though I probably could XD


SAD FOR YOOOOOOOOUUUUU!!!!
My college is a town over and I still live at home, so I will be here to witness and participate in the club's slow death.



We sort of did, in a small convo, but I'm not sure if it was assigned entirely by other people. It's a good idea, though.
From the small list I have (unfortunately I didn't write down the reasons, and I can't find the convo):
Blue - Dragonair
Me - Metang
Cell - Shiny Luxray
Kida - Mightyena.


Now you got me thinking about what I would be. Hmmmm probably my one of my faves, Nidoking, Venusaur, or Tauros.



this is why you should be banned from youtube :|


Eh...........no (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rFCfUl1R7SQ)



*insert chris brown joke*


http://www.threadbombing.com/data/media/2/2gtwz83.gif

Oh snap!

I like Pokemon (...)
20th August 2011, 3:45 PM
You did a great job on all the number crunching, little Ant. :)
8D little Ant? As if Ant isn't little enough... XP

Ooh~, look at all the pretty colors!~
I'm glad I put those in now.

I don't like how Tosen ended up slightly ranking above me in both the stat areas and area ratios. >.>
That's because all of his high stats (the two 90s and one 80) are all next to each other, while yours are further spread out.

And all this BDC number crunching is why your captain of Squad 12. xD
8D


SAD FOR YOOOOOOOOUUUUU!!!!
My college is a town over and I still live at home, so I will be here to witness and participate in the club's slow death.
Sad for meeeeeeeee? I'm glad!
So far, it seems that you, Rotrum, Kai (when he comes back) and I will probably be the ones keeping this club alive.
Perhaps we should have a time period for this Club's Canon. "Bleach Fan Club (II): The College Years" That didn't sound as lame in my head.

Zameric
21st August 2011, 2:37 AM
I can tell you quite confidently that I don't find this chapter lacking because of last chapter's epicness. I find it lacking because it felt to me like a desperate attempt at regaining popularity. There isn't much of a reason for those specific members of Soul Society to give their power to Ichigo, Kubo likely just decided to drag in all the most popular soul reapers.
I mean, I can understand maybe Renji giving Ichigo power, but Byakuya?
And I can't see any of the 11th Squad giving him power either, especially not Kenpachi. He seems to me like the type who would just leave Ichigo on his own until he gets strong enough to fight him again.
Hitsugaya didn't even interact with Ichigo, he's just massively popular.
Hanatarou has more of a reason to help Ichigo out, where is he?
You do have a good point there, but I can't think of any other captains Kubo could have reasonably used. :/
Hanataro is the new captain of Squad 5, but he was too busy to be there. XD

Golde
21st August 2011, 5:49 AM
Heeey guys :D

Just a quick message. Leaving tomorrow. Settling in, whatnot, probably will be inattentive for the next few days. I'll try to be on...like...for real this time. XD

And this club won't die! Blasphemy! :D

arceus03
21st August 2011, 9:15 AM
xD i totally lolled when you made your milotic zanpaktou spirit hahahaha
what is a VM?

ikr, randomness indeed
Visitor Messaging. What we've been doing when we talk to each other on our profiles? That.


nah, i have seen Zam's taste in things.... if he thought my titles sound beautiful, then i would be worried xD

XD
Though you misunderstood. Zam only conveyed the message that "someone" said your titles are ugly. Meh.


awww, the young are growing up :D

Pfffft. You're no older than we are. :p



and have fun in NYS!!!

Thank you :p

Congrats to Kida, as well =D



@all you people who go to school later than me:
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/137/3/b/Navi___Hey_Listen_by_GENZOMAN.jpg


Mwahahahahaha
Oooh! Now I know what happens when Link goes near a fairy. No wonder it disappears off the screen in the games, it's too violent for children.


Yeah, I’m doing it again. Mainly because I’m bored, but also because we now have Cell instead of Jin, and our previous stats have changed slightly. Also, last time I included the Lieutenants, but because I’ll be doing some more averaging (as opposed to just ranking); I’ve decided not to include them – especially since there are only 4 Lieutenants that have stats.

As usual, you have too much time on your hands



In the mean time, STORY TIME!


I don't think I have anything more to add apart from the ones I've said on our convo.



Hitsugaya didn't even interact with Ichigo, he's just massively popular.

XD As I said, if he's not there, Kubo would be murdered in his bed by fangirls. And fanboys


Yes, indeed I did not. I will put more effort into it next time.

lol, I was joking. Don't take that seriously :p


Yeah, debating her strength does that to ya.

I can't just let someone bash her and get off with it now, can I? XP


http://www.threadbombing.com/data/media/2/2gtwz83.gif

Oh snap!

Snap indeed. XD I love that gif.


Heeey guys :D

Just a quick message. Leaving tomorrow. Settling in, whatnot, probably will be inattentive for the next few days. I'll try to be on...like...for real this time. XD

And this club won't die! Blasphemy! :D

Heeeey Ed. :D

Can I just say ditto? XD I'm going off tomorrow to my sister's house. Probably no connection until.... until I get connection. XD So yeah. Byeeeee~!

PKMN Trainer Rex
22nd August 2011, 3:10 AM
Sad for meeeeeeeee? I'm glad!
So far, it seems that you, Rotrum, Kai (when he comes back) and I will probably be the ones keeping this club alive.


At least it isn't just you and me.



Perhaps we should have a time period for this Club's Canon. "Bleach Fan Club (II): The College Years" That didn't sound as lame in my head.

The title reminds me of Saved By The Bell lol. Now I'm gonna try to think up a catchy name to beat yours.



lol, I was joking. Don't take that seriously :p


I know, I just like playing along.




I can't just let someone bash her and get off with it now, can I? XP


He just doesn't know. But he must also pay for his insolence!




Snap indeed. XD I love that gif.


I just realized that the gif looks like their looking at and reacting too the comment above them. And I love Kobe and Lamar's reactions.

MasterCharizard15
23rd August 2011, 2:09 PM
Just for fun, tell everyone what you think a non-Bleach Captain's data chart is like.

Like Ichigo for example.

Offense: 70 [He...I can't really say anything. :x]
Defense: 60 [meh...]
Stamina: 80 [Just look at his Grimmjow and Ulquiorra battles!]
Mobility: 100 [...no comment.]
Intelligence: 70 [Ordinary High school student/ Guy who can sorta fight...]
Kido: 0-10 [He can't use Kido at all, I only would give him points for Getsuga Tensho...>.>]
Total: 390?

Da14u.C
23rd August 2011, 2:58 PM
Mine starts on the 19th, and that's just Freshers Week, so ...

http://i54.*******.com/k4fghy.jpg


XD but i am ok with that because you guys end so late :D



Visitor Message. The SPPF equivalent of posting on someone's Facebook Wall.

ah!!!! kk, thanks




From sealed to Bankai; "From sealed straight to bankai, Ebony and Ivory appear for a split second (again, in random hands), and then they become the armour." is written in the other notes.
lame. the others are fine. this one is just lame. its a bankai for goodness sake, where is your dramatic flare?





I think it was kind of put on their just to have a weakness XD. But atm, I'm too lazy to think of something else >.> You know what I'm like.

dont add weaknesses for the sake of having weaknesses. simply let people discern your weaknesses. a weakness like that is pretty much.... what is the word? hm... well i cnat find a polite way to say it.




But this isn't an army with thousands of people - this is a 6 on 6 fight. It won't be like the Winter War where we had people literally just standing around doing nothing. In something like this, people are likely to pair up and duke it out.
not necessarily. for example.... remember all those years ago when bleach was new, how ichigo took on three lietenants (the fat one, the 4th squad one and the 1st squad one) all by himself. a 6-on6 means that there are 6 people to each team, however, here is how it would really work.

lets say a team of me, kida, you, rex, arc and zam against a team of 6 randoms
Kida starts the battle with an overwhelming flame attack, engulfing as many as she can. whoever manages to escape that, lets say 3 or 4 people, will be attacked by my kido immediately, without break. lets assume 2 or 1 escape that. Rex is good with one-on-one, zam could defeat two without problem

me, kida and zam have wide range attacks. they affect more than one person at a time. splitting into mini-duels isnt really feasible. you, arc and rex have attacks that only affect one person at a time (or it takes effort and planning to make it affect more than one person at a time). It would take more effort for me and Kida to have our abilities only affect one person at a time



Actually, they do, just not all in the same tiny space or area. You can't send in tanks without infantry support, otherwise they'll be mauled by rocket teams and random grunts with RPGs. You can't send in infantry without some kind of support, otherwise they'll be forced to fall back and resort to guerilla tactics when they come up against artillery, armor, or air support. And not utilizing aircraft to support a ground assault is stupid unless the entire sector is a mess of hostile anti-aircraft batteries. It varies based on the situation, but you usually use vehicular, infantry, and air assault squadrons in some combination in warfare, unless you're talking something like jungle warfare in which the only option is to rely on infantry after torching the area with air support or artillery or something.

hehe, war general :p





Also, you can just call me Eon. I really don't mind.

awww shuckzzz, kay :)




Not exactly. If I wanted to get the most unpredictable first, I would've gone for Kida. My strategy was to off the immediately lethal people first and then move on to the others in the best possible formation while using our numerical advantage to outmanuver them.

hm... i feel like kida is relatively predictable. all you need to wait for is her to choose an element, then you know the kind of attacks she will throw out

though i approve of that game plan to: off the most lethal, overwhelm the rest. Especially (view what i said to ILP) the whole wide range and narrow range attack thing




xD Well, in all honesty, the basic ideas were all there. I just needed to give him a push in the right direction. My specialty with Zanpaktou design is adapting powers to fit situations, and this qualified.

now if you could just help lucario...... i figure if you can guide MC15 (and that takes effort, brains, and extreme charm), then you can guide the tiny person



Shaddup :p Your "wifey" is actually younger than me by about five months, so that comment backfires anyway xD

Yeah, but we have longer breaks :p Woo, the whole month of Christmas break!
xD xD
we have 2 weeks for christmas breaks WOOTWOOT!!!!



@all you people who go to school later than me:
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/137/3/b/Navi___Hey_Listen_by_GENZOMAN.jpg
ooooh, if you are sending this now, i am scared to see what you will send when i post at the end of apr2012 going "EXAMS DONE!!!!!" and you havent even started yours yet :p



Also, why is Kida not an Eevee? A Magical Eevee that can shift into any one of her evolutionary forms and back by being exposed to the appropriate elemental energy? completelyadliblol
because eevee's are cute and sweet and loving, and kida is....... not
(i say that with love wifey, dont kill meeeee)



The four great noble families were legendary in the Soul Society for their influence and power. For centuries, these four families stood above all other nobles, answering only to the Spirit King and Royal Family. As expected, the families ensured that their status would not be lost by proving their superiority time and time again. The pressure to keep up such a high standard crushed the weaker-willed members of the families, leaving only the strong left to carry on the burdens of status.


I like this starting paragraph. it immediately grabbed my attention, have a background and explained the strength of the characters you are about to introduce





The current generation of noble clans were legends amongst legends. They were by far the most powerful generation, each head being a Captain of a Squad in the Gotei thirteen. They got called many things, The Fearsome Four, Four Nobles of Oblivion, and The Heart-breakers. The last title got conceived from many who had fallen for the charm of the nobles, only to lose their interest after few moments.



totally reminiscient of a conversation we once had eh :P





The noble most famous for being a heart-breaker was, Dre Flashy. The rumors of his exploits was a goldmine to gossips. His looks and charisma was said to be able to seduce any woman to the point that few thought he was an incubus. Few knew this was his way of coping with the immense pressures of running the Flashy clan as well as lead Squad Five as its Captain. He worked hard, and played harder, to put it bluntly and in its most simplistic ideal.



I NEED TO FORWARD THIS TO DRÉ! dammit, he is in the stupid feild so he has no internet access for the next few days :|




The Head-Captain let it be know that the meeting had started, waiting for the Twelfth Squad Captain, Ryuu Schiffer. His pale and skinny body covered by his shinigami uniform and Captain's robe, stood up in his seat. He then produced a black cord from the back of his neck, inserting it into a port in the table.


XD i had an image of ILP becoming a TV




The joint spiritual pressures of Kida, Senshuken and Seijuro nearly suffocated everyone in the room. The bitter and poisonous feelings were enough to kill a weaker-willed being. Mizuhashi frowned, commenting on the three's current state would likely end in conflict. His own emotions weren't much better, but for the sake of the other, tried to relax the room with his own spiritual pressure.
but isnt everyone in the room a captain?




“He's the Head-Captain, he can pretty much live through almost anything.” Saiga told the two, noting that the other Captains had left the three alone.
Mizuhashi frowned, if they had taken any longer to examine him, he most likely would have died. The Head-Captain was somehow poisoned before the meeting. Not only that, but the poison was so lethal, that it was easily comparable to the poison concoctions of the former Squad Twelve Captain.

first of all: yay to the mention of me
secondly: why does everyone refer to Golde as a boy?




XD
Though you misunderstood. Zam only conveyed the message that "someone" said your titles are ugly. Meh.
do i know this someone?




Pfffft. You're no older than we are. :p
i am older in spirit :D
my body may be young but my mind is as old as the ages



Just for fun, tell everyone what you think a non-Bleach Captain's data chart is like.

Like Ichigo for example.

Offense: 70 [He...I can't really say anything. :x]
Defense: 60 [meh...]
Stamina: 80 [Just look at his Grimmjow and Ulquiorra battles!]
Mobility: 100 [...no comment.]
Intelligence: 70 [Ordinary High school student/ Guy who can sorta fight...]
Kido: 0-10 [He can't use Kido at all, I only would give him points for Getsuga Tensho...>.>]
Total: 390?

your idea of fun worries me......





Eh...........no (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rFCfUl1R7SQ)



Banned From youtube :| (http://youtu.be/_tTvBHXY3qc)

Northern Lights
23rd August 2011, 5:33 PM
Thanks guys, just finished making some preliminary choices for optional modules in years 2 and 3


Also, why is Kida not an Eevee? A Magical Eevee that can shift into any one of her evolutionary forms and back by being exposed to the appropriate elemental energy? completelyadliblol

Oh wow, that would be so cool, but it would have to be a shiny Eevee, actually suits rather well - underestimated at first, but can call upon higher powers to become different element channelers ... oooh the Eevee line was also my fave when I first played pokemon, so many years ago ^^ good times.


because eevee's are cute and sweet and loving, and kida is....... not
(i say that with love wifey, dont kill meeeee)

I'll have you know actually, I am quite caring, i've been called cute several times, and I am the "mother" of my group of friends.
It's just you i'm difficult with. Right now, I'm quite docile and peaceful ... it comes and it goes, but most of the times i'm usually pensive believe it or not. so there.

I Like Pokemon...: I must say I did enjoy reading your colourful and easy to read charts and statistics =D


http://www.threadbombing.com/data/media/2/2gtwz83.gif

fukken saved


hm... i feel like kida is relatively predictable. all you need to wait for is her to choose an element, then you know the kind of attacks she will throw out



You'd be a bit screwed if I don't show you my symbol though wouldn't you? I'm not likely to make it very exuberant anyway, I don't do flashy that's your job.
Personally I'd probably draw the symbol in the air with my fingers by my side so no-one would notice I had even envoked an element and then when they did, they wouldn't know which.
Plus, just because I chose one element, I can call another whilst in Shikai increasing the variables - plus, one element can have a mulitude of different aspects, Earth can use the tectonics or the organic matter of plants, Fire can simply use heat in conjunction with other elements or simply apply a flame of differing magnitudes ... etc ... you get the idea.

Just for fun, tell everyone what you think a non-Bleach Captain's data chart is like.

HaHa, loljks? I can't quite tell what you mean by this, first I think you want to discuss the Canon Stats, but then you seem to make up Stats for Ichigo ... or are those his actual stats? In which case, Kubo has lost it completley. XD

I've had such a Celtic fest latley GUYS, WE TOTALLY NEED A HUGE GROUP CONVO

Da14u.C
23rd August 2011, 6:17 PM
I'll have you know actually, I am quite caring, i've been called cute several times, and I am the "mother" of my group of friends.
It's just you i'm difficult with. Right now, I'm quite docile and peaceful ... it comes and it goes, but most of the times i'm usually pensive believe it or not. so there.



mothers are rarely cute my dear :)
plus u know i like it rough ;) ;)



You'd be a bit screwed if I don't show you my symbol though wouldn't you? I'm not likely to make it very exuberant anyway, I don't do flashy that's your job.
Personally I'd probably draw the symbol in the air with my fingers by my side so no-one would notice I had even envoked an element and then when they did, they wouldn't know which.
Plus, just because I chose one element, I can call another whilst in Shikai increasing the variables - plus, one element can have a mulitude of different aspects, Earth can use the tectonics or the organic matter of plants, Fire can simply use heat in conjunction with other elements or simply apply a flame of differing magnitudes ... etc ... you get the idea.

hm....
well firstly, the drawing of the symbol is relatively irrelevant because someone would either have to know you well, or be a good guesser to understand each symbol.
secondly, when you release your first attack, that is your only surprise move. after that, it is pretty much an elemental thing. lets say you choose earth, my first instinct after u attack and i miraculously survive is ti get into the air and kill all vegetation within the visible distance. this should reduce the effectiveness of ur attacks, and while you can pull in another elemnent, this drains a lot of energy from u and i wont even have to attack back, just did dodge whatever you throw at me :)
predictable isnt weak my dear. kempachi is predictable and so far, has never lost :) same with byakuya


and yes: GROUP CONVO

PKMN Trainer Rex
23rd August 2011, 9:05 PM
Banned From youtube :| (http://youtu.be/_tTvBHXY3qc)

Nope
http://assets0.ordienetworks.com/images/GifGuide/DealWithIt/30wphfo.jpg.gif


And I'm glad to see that y'all enjoy my oh snap gif. :p

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention I saw the coolest Bleach umbrella at my local anime store.....didn't buy it due to lack of funds. It looked like Hitsuguya's Zan.

I like Pokemon (...)
23rd August 2011, 9:31 PM
EDIT: Manga is out
It feels like we're going back to short chapters again :/ I suppose though, that's because quite a few pages were just SLASH SLASH again. I guess it can't be helped; Kubo is still Kubo.

Ginjou completely shat his pants when Ichigo said "I missed. I won't again."

I like how Ginjou mentioned that it was his training that made him stronger - not only does it kind of show an irony in how the villain made the hero stronger (despite Ginjou not being a villain at the time), but it also doesn't make Ichigo's new strength PURELY because of the reiatsu.

Wow. That is definitely a lot of reiatsu. I wonder if they all just kind of gave a tiny amount, and it all built up together (because it's - what - 10 captains, 13 Lieutenants, at least 4 ex-Captains (Urahara, Isshin, Yoruichi and Shinji), maybe the rest of the Vaizards (which would make that 4 more captains, and 3 more Lieutenants). And Hanatarou. God damn.

Ah, so Ginjou was that Substitute Shinigami. At the very least, this arc isn't entirely ******** - Ukitake mentioned this when he gave the badge to Ichigo. Now, remember when Ginjou was explaining Tsukishima to Chad? There was a mention of a substitute Shinigami - perhaps Ginjou was talking about himself? Don't forget, he was Tsukishima-fied, so the story would be slightly off the truth.

Which might also mean that Ginjou has shinigami powers in addition to Fullbring powers. If so, this could be a good "final fight" (though what happened to Tsukishima?).


Hanataro is the new captain of Squad 5, but he was too busy to be there. XD
IF ONLY THIS WAS TRUE.

And this club won't die! Blasphemy! :D
I'll try my best not to let it! *Salute*

As usual, you have too much time on your hands

I enjoyed doing that though.

At least it isn't just you and me.
Very true.


The title reminds me of Saved By The Bell lol. Now I'm gonna try to think up a catchy name to beat yours.
That won't be hard at all.

Just for fun, tell everyone what you think a non-Bleach Captain's data chart is like.
When you say "a non-Bleach Captain" do you mean, pick one and write the stats? Or are you giving a general statement (like I think at one point, Zam was going to have Lieutenant charts with lower stat totals or something). I probably would have picked Ichigo, and none of the other Lieutenants are particularly focused on so...


Offense: 70 [He...I can't really say anything. :x]
Defense: 60 [meh...]
Stamina: 80 [Just look at his Grimmjow and Ulquiorra battles!]
Mobility: 100 [...no comment.]
Intelligence: 70 [Ordinary High school student/ Guy who can sorta fight...]
Kido: 0-10 [He can't use Kido at all, I only would give him points for Getsuga Tensho...>.>]
Total: 390?
I'd probably bump Ichigo's offense from 70 to maybe 80 or even 90. Ichigo is an offensive character, and he "defends" his friends by attacking his enemies (if that makes sense).
And Intelligence, well, in terms of booksmarts, he's shown to be near the top of his class. But strategy wise, his analytical skills have grown throughout the series. I'd probably make it 80, but I think Eon can properly say whether or not a higher intelligence suits him.

lame. the others are fine. this one is just lame. its a bankai for goodness sake, where is your dramatic flare?
The zanpakutou suits the person - and I am not a dramatic person. In a fight, if I want a power-up, I want it to come quickly. Seriousbusiness.



dont add weaknesses for the sake of having weaknesses. simply let people discern your weaknesses. a weakness like that is pretty much.... what is the word? hm... well i cnat find a polite way to say it.
Well I'm glad you tried to find a polite way to say it XD
Alright, so you think I should take it out. Does anyone else think that it would be better to just keep it for the sake of having a weakness, or do most people think I shouldn't have it because it doesn't fit.


now if you could just help lucario...... i figure if you can guide MC15 (and that takes effort, brains, and extreme charm), then you can guide the tiny person
If I'm not mistaken, he has at least tried, no? Or at least, Eon will when he thinks that it's an okay time for Luke to change.


XD i had an image of ILP becoming a TV
I am okay with this.

secondly: why does everyone refer to Golde as a boy?
Because he is. I wonder how many times we've told you that Golde is a boy. The funny thing is, is that it's just you who thinks that Golde is a girl XD.


I Like Pokemon...: I must say I did enjoy reading your colourful and easy to read charts and statistics =D

Why thank you Why are the colours the thing most commented on? >.>

GUYS, WE TOTALLY NEED A HUGE GROUP CONVO
and yes: GROUP CONVO
How is it that whenever I decide "nah, I won't be on my laptop all day" there are always group convos?

Edit: See beginning of post

PKMN Trainer Rex
24th August 2011, 8:51 PM
That won't be hard at all.

I got nothing so far xD. Too busy with first week of college stuff.....like making friends......with girls.




Why are the colours the thing most commented on? >.>


People love colorful things


With Finn & Jake[/S]"]
WUUUUHHHH!?!?!?!?! So everybody put their reiatsu into the sword, AND it was under Yamamoto's orders. It was surprising at first, then not as much after the explanation/ thinking about it. It kinda bugs me that Ichigo went from hopeless crybaby into uber-confident badass like that though.

Ginjou gets more interesting/annoying by the issue.

And where's Tsukishima? He has to troll sooner or later. Someone should photo shop the troll face on to his body.

Redesigns: Komamura gets a new haori also (http://www.manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/461/14), and looking at Ikkaku's shoulder (http://www.manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/461/12) its starting too look like a tattoo. But the little nub under it makes me think other wise.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
25th August 2011, 9:06 AM
Hm...ok, so that explains why Hitsugaya's reiatsu was in the sword. I'm fine with that.
I'm not entirely fond of where this story is going though...it feels like a rewrite of Yu Yu Hakusho's Sensui arc, the one with the spirit detective before Yusuke who ended up becoming evil. I liked it when Yu Yu Hakusho did it.
But the way Bleach is handling it feels a bit rushed...and full of holes at the same time for some reason...
Oh yea, what are the other characters doing? Are they just staring at the giant blank page of a sword slash like us?
And this is just me nitpicking but Hanatarou isn't a vice-captain or captain last I remember...

I like Pokemon (...)
25th August 2011, 3:53 PM
People love colorful things
My next stat analysis will be the most colourful **** ever.


With Finn & Jake[/S]"]
And where's Tsukishima? He has to troll sooner or later. Someone should photo shop the troll face on to his body.

Redesigns: Komamura gets a new haori also (http://www.manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/461/14), and looking at Ikkaku's shoulder (http://www.manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/461/12) its starting too look like a tattoo. But the little nub under it makes me think other wise.

http://oi51.*******.com/2j1wfvs.jpg
Oh yeah, I hadn't realised that. It does look like a tattoo now that you mention it.

Hm...ok, so that explains why Hitsugaya's reiatsu was in the sword. I'm fine with that.
I'm not entirely fond of where this story is going though...it feels like a rewrite of Yu Yu Hakusho's Sensui arc, the one with the spirit detective before Yusuke who ended up becoming evil. I liked it when Yu Yu Hakusho did it.
But the way Bleach is handling it feels a bit rushed...and full of holes at the same time for some reason...
Oh yea, what are the other characters doing? Are they just staring at the giant blank page of a sword slash like us?
And this is just me nitpicking but Hanatarou isn't a vice-captain or captain last I remember...
I thought Bleach was know for being a Dragonball Z/Yu Yu Hakusho fusion?
Anyway, yeah, it seems like Kubo wants this to end, but he's trying to throw everything into the mix (like adding that Ginjou was the substitute shinigami).
Sideline characters never fight. Just look at the Winter War.
Didn't you hear? He's the 5th Squad Captain



Just for fun, tell everyone what you think a non-Bleach Captain's data chart is like.
I had the random idea - Urahara! I tried Yoruichi, but I think I made her too powerful...

Urahara:
Offense - 90
Defence - 90 (something tells me his offense and defence would be equal, but I'm not sure if they'd be on par with Yamamoto and/or Komamura).
Mobility - 100 (He was a third seat of the second squad - even then it was a part of the Onmitsukidou. I think it makes sense that he's fast).
Kidou/Reiatsu - 100 (No question here, he created a special Kidou to seal Aizen).
Intellect - 100 (Obviously, being the former 12th Squad Captain).
Stamina - 80 (One reason is that it fits the stat total, but I think that while he is an amazing fighter, I doubt that he would be able to take physical hits particularly well - his main aim would be to avoid them in weird ways).
Total: 560 (The same as Aizen and Yamamoto - I think this is fair, as he is very easily one of the strongest characters).

minchan
25th August 2011, 6:04 PM
I'm in the dorms now, and this week's just orientation so I don't have much to do. I just read the chapter but I'm not caught up on anime or anything.

Anyway I just wanted to share my first impression of that ending of the chapter...
"What the f*ck, really?" was my first impression on that. Granted, I did expect to see some kind of info on that first substitute shinigami in the coming chapters/arc, but I didn't actually expect it to be Ginjou...

On another note, I think it's pretty cool how the old man changed his ways. XD And how it really is all the captain class shinigami who gave their powers. That's pretty damn epic.

Anyway I have some more stuff to do in a little bit, so I might not post again for a little while. But just know I'll definitely be around from time to time, and I'll definitely try my best to stay updated. It's easier to reach me on Facebook, so if you have that, feel free to add me. Some of you have me added already, and if you don't, just ask someone who did add me already for my FB name. I'll give you permission to tell others in the club.

arceus03
25th August 2011, 8:46 PM
And I'm back! Did you miss me?

Aaaand I'm in the States. Woohoo Just got here today to discover not even a single page had added since I last posted



He just doesn't know. But he must also pay for his insolence!

Indeed



secondly: why does everyone refer to Golde as a boy?

Why do YOU refer to Golde as a girl?


do i know this someone?

You do. Very well indeed. XD No, not Kida though.


i am older in spirit :D
my body may be young but my mind is as old as the ages

Pfffft. That just means you start thinking even when you were a spermatozoa in your father's seminiferous tubules. :p



I've had such a Celtic fest latley GUYS, WE TOTALLY NEED A HUGE GROUP CONVO

AYE

You know what, that must have been the best chapter ever. It's the first time we see Unohana in what, months! :3

Besides that, nothing else from what the others have said.

Oh also, a few questions.
1. It seems Shinji, Urahara and Yoruichi are pardoned? Before this, what, they were sentenced to death before they exiled, no?

2. What does the Central 46 say about this? Because we know that (a) Central 46 members are annoying pricks who don't really care about others and (b) Captains are not allowed to interfere with the Central 46 ruling so (c) what if they decide this is against the law or something? Who actually have the higher authority, Yamamoto or them?

3. And yeah, what about Hanataro being a Captain/Lieutenant? >.> They have no vacant Lieutenant spots, and Hanataro couldn't be a Captain... yet. Though yeah, if Renji or another Lieutenant were to take up the vacant Captain spots, they could promote Hanataro to a Lieutenant.... for what? He didn't exactly help in the Winter War, and he was slashed by Rukia back then.

Ginjou being the first Substitute Shinigami.... Which explains the Shinigami badge we saw at the beginning of this arc, and also his huge-*** sword. I wonder what happened. He defected? And what about the XCution members? And we still don't know why he was trying to take away Ichigo's powers.

Oh, his outfit changed.

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th August 2011, 10:59 PM
Aaaand I'm in the States. Woohoo Just got here today to discover not even a single page had added since I last posted

Welcome to the States! I know, right? When we slow down we hit a brick wall.

Where specifically are you?



You know what, that must have been the best chapter ever. It's the first time we see Unohana in what, months! :3

Besides that, nothing else from what the others have said.

Oh also, a few questions.
1. It seems Shinji, Urahara and Yoruichi are pardoned? Before this, what, they were sentenced to death before they exiled, no?

2. What does the Central 46 say about this? Because we know that (a) Central 46 members are annoying pricks who don't really care about others and (b) Captains are not allowed to interfere with the Central 46 ruling so (c) what if they decide this is against the law or something? Who actually have the higher authority, Yamamoto or them?

3. And yeah, what about Hanataro being a Captain/Lieutenant? >.> They have no vacant Lieutenant spots, and Hanataro couldn't be a Captain... yet. Though yeah, if Renji or another Lieutenant were to take up the vacant Captain spots, they could promote Hanataro to a Lieutenant.... for what? He didn't exactly help in the Winter War, and he was slashed by Rukia back then.

Ginjou being the first Substitute Shinigami.... Which explains the Shinigami badge we saw at the beginning of this arc, and also his huge-*** sword. I wonder what happened. He defected? And what about the XCution members? And we still don't know why he was trying to take away Ichigo's powers.

Oh, his outfit changed.


1) Seems like it. I got nothing on this topic.

2) THEY'RE DEAD! Aizen killed them all. Maybe Yamamoto said "screw it" and went behind their backs. He did say it would bring shame upon the Gotei 13 if they did not repay Ichigo for his help.

3) Maybe he isn't either. Maybe he just felt obligated as a friend to do it. Ichigo did save Rukia.

4) Well, if I've learned anything about villains, he wanted Ichigo's powers to add to his own. Probably to exact his revenge on the Soul Society for some whatever reason.

5) I think thats what Ginjou meant by "revamp", he needed time to absorb Ichigo's fullbring.

I like Pokemon (...)
25th August 2011, 11:13 PM
"What the f*ck, really?" was my first impression on that. Granted, I did expect to see some kind of info on that first substitute shinigami in the coming chapters/arc, but I didn't actually expect it to be Ginjou...

Some of you have me added already, and if you don't, just ask someone who did add me already for my FB name. I'll give you permission to tell others in the club.
Yeah, I think that maybe if Kubo wasn't rushing now, the "Ginjou was the Substitute Shinigami!" plot (twist?) could have been done much better.

Just a note, I'm one of those people who have her FB, so you can ask me (because I'm going to be the most active member soyeah).

And I'm back! Did you miss me?
Welcome back.

Aaaand I'm in the States. Woohoo Just got here today to discover not even a single page had added since I last posted
*Going to have to get used to the changed time difference.*

Yeah, well, what, half of our active members are going to be busy, so...

Pfffft. That just means you start thinking even when you were a spermatozoa in your father's seminiferous tubules. :p
I think that was the nerdiest thing I've heard you said (besides our conversation entirely in Chess notation).


You know what, that must have been the best chapter ever. It's the first time we see Unohana in what, months! :3

Besides that, nothing else from what the others have said.

Oh also, a few questions.
1. It seems Shinji, Urahara and Yoruichi are pardoned? Before this, what, they were sentenced to death before they exiled, no?

2. What does the Central 46 say about this? Because we know that (a) Central 46 members are annoying pricks who don't really care about others and (b) Captains are not allowed to interfere with the Central 46 ruling so (c) what if they decide this is against the law or something? Who actually have the higher authority, Yamamoto or them?

3. And yeah, what about Hanataro being a Captain/Lieutenant? >.> They have no vacant Lieutenant spots, and Hanataro couldn't be a Captain... yet. Though yeah, if Renji or another Lieutenant were to take up the vacant Captain spots, they could promote Hanataro to a Lieutenant.... for what? He didn't exactly help in the Winter War, and he was slashed by Rukia back then.

Ginjou being the first Substitute Shinigami.... Which explains the Shinigami badge we saw at the beginning of this arc, and also his huge-*** sword. I wonder what happened. He defected? And what about the XCution members? And we still don't know why he was trying to take away Ichigo's powers.

Oh, his outfit changed.
Of course you would say that >.>

1. It seems like it, yeah. And they were sentenced to death, yeah.

2. Presumably they'd be okay with it - the previous C46 were all murdered, but Ichigo defeated Aizen so... Also, what can they do when 10 Captains and 13 Lieutenants all commit a crime?

3. xD Well, if Hinamori is still in a coma....
Butyeah, did anyone see that he helped Ichigo? Like Urahara or Yoruichi or something? If so, then they probably went to him personally (like how they went to the Vaizards) for his reiatsu.

We still don't know about the other XCution members.

Kubo should be a fashion designer.

arceus03
26th August 2011, 2:23 AM
Welcome to the States! I know, right? When we slow down we hit a brick wall.

Where specifically are you?

Thank you =D I'm in Rochester, NY.

Replies. Mostly in spoilers. 8D



2) THEY'RE DEAD! Aizen killed them all. Maybe Yamamoto said "screw it" and went behind their backs. He did say it would bring shame upon the Gotei 13 if they did not repay Ichigo for his help.

But the new one is there XD I think we had a scene before saying that the Central 46 is the highest authority or whatnot in the whole Soul Society, that even the Captains cannot go against their ruling. Ah well.


3) Maybe he isn't either. Maybe he just felt obligated as a friend to do it. Ichigo did save Rukia.

But then, Hanataro didn't have anything to do with Rukia.... did he? He was the one who asked Renji why Ichigo wanted to save Rukia so much in the first place, IIRC. I could be wrong though.


4) Well, if I've learned anything about villains, he wanted Ichigo's powers to add to his own. Probably to exact his revenge on the Soul Society for some whatever reason.

Ah, feasible enough I guess. But I don't want another arc where the Soul Society is being destroyed... AGAIN. :p



Welcome back.

Thankyou =D


*Going to have to get used to the changed time difference.*

jet lag It just means that now we could be sharing the same daylight. XD


Yeah, well, what, half of our active members are going to be busy, so...

so you have to keep it alive


I think that was the nerdiest thing I've heard you said (besides our conversation entirely in Chess notation).

8D


Of course you would say that >.>

What else? XD
Though now that you mention it, I wonder if Mayuri would want to give his reiatsu to Ichigo. He's just the kind that doesn't care. Even if it's the Captain-Commander's orders.


2. Presumably they'd be okay with it - the previous C46 were all murdered, but Ichigo defeated Aizen so... Also, what can they do when 10 Captains and 13 Lieutenants all commit a crime?


Punish ALL the Captains. XD And let the killing begin.... AGAIN! 8D


3. xD Well, if Hinamori is still in a coma....

Ohyeah, I forgot about Hinamori being in a coma XD


We still don't know about the other XCution members.

Yukio :<


Kubo should be a fashion designer.

Meh, for Kamen Rider outfits, he would do well I guess.

EDIT
Wooohoo new page 8D

Zameric
26th August 2011, 3:12 AM
So after seeing MC's topic about captain class character without BDCs from Kubo, I started to play around with my charts.
At first, I assigned battle stat ranges to those characters, and then I planned to create charts that reflected that.
But then I got distracted creating a new Battle Data Chart with better categories.
After working for a few hours in Paint.NET, and with some help from ILP, I've completed it.
ILP said I should propose them to the club before implementing them, so here are some examples...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/KenpachiBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/YamamotoBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/AizenBDC.png
As you can see, the new charts are octagonal.
And the new categories change up the dynamics of the original BDC.
Would you guys want to change over to the new format?


Aaaand I'm in the States. Woohoo Just got here today to discover not even a single page had added since I last posted

You know what, that must have been the best chapter ever. It's the first time we see Unohana in what, months! :3

Besides that, nothing else from what the others have said.

Oh also, a few questions.
1. It seems Shinji, Urahara and Yoruichi are pardoned? Before this, what, they were sentenced to death before they exiled, no?

2. What does the Central 46 say about this? Because we know that (a) Central 46 members are annoying pricks who don't really care about others and (b) Captains are not allowed to interfere with the Central 46 ruling so (c) what if they decide this is against the law or something? Who actually have the higher authority, Yamamoto or them?

3. And yeah, what about Hanataro being a Captain/Lieutenant? >.> They have no vacant Lieutenant spots, and Hanataro couldn't be a Captain... yet. Though yeah, if Renji or another Lieutenant were to take up the vacant Captain spots, they could promote Hanataro to a Lieutenant.... for what? He didn't exactly help in the Winter War, and he was slashed by Rukia back then.

Ginjou being the first Substitute Shinigami.... Which explains the Shinigami badge we saw at the beginning of this arc, and also his huge-*** sword. I wonder what happened. He defected? And what about the XCution members? And we still don't know why he was trying to take away Ichigo's powers.
Welcome to the USA! Former Land of golden opportunities!
Also the land of Rootbeer soda, No.2 pencils, Chinese Food, crackers (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cracker_%28food%29), music videos, and baseball, among many other things.

Any chapter with Unohana, even briefly, is a great chapter to you. xD

1. Well, I think they were hiding until it was revealed that Aizen was to blame. But I think even now they're probably still exiled. But I could be wrong...

2. Well, it's a whole new group of Central 46 now. I'm sure they're with Yamamoto's decision; they couldn't really stop him anyways.

3. I think you're talking about how I made a joke about Hanantaro being the new captain of Squad 5. This weeks chapter sort of fueled that joke. :p

That's what I thought too..."Ah! So that is why he had one earlier!"

MasterCharizard15
26th August 2011, 3:12 AM
So pretty much any soul reaper we care about, gave him power.
There, plot hole filled. >.>
Now for the Ginjou one...would have much rather liked to be hinted about that instead of watching Ichigo...break?


Topic
Yoruichi

Offense: 100
Defense: 80
Mobility: 100
Stamina: 100
Intelligence: 80
Kido/Retisu: 80
Physical Strength: 100
Total: 540 or 640

Hmm...that could work.

EDIT:
I'm a sucker for octagons, so I approve.
Poor ILP, now the data is gonna need ALOT of recalculations.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
26th August 2011, 3:36 AM
I thought Bleach was know for being a Dragonball Z/Yu Yu Hakusho fusion?
Anyway, yeah, it seems like Kubo wants this to end, but he's trying to throw everything into the mix (like adding that Ginjou was the substitute shinigami).
Sideline characters never fight. Just look at the Winter War.
If it was just a fusion of the general themes and settings then I'd probably be fine with it.
But this is just straight up reusing a storyline, which doesn't sit well with me.
I mean, if you look reaaaally closely, the entire Bleach series is almost a rip-off of the entire Yu Yu Hakusho series.
A young boy who regularly gets into trouble at school meets with an accident and ends up gaining netherworldly powers with the help of a female shinigami.
The boy gains a friend who can create a weapon made of spirit energy.
The boy meets a black-haired enemy and a red-haired enemy, both of which end up being on the boy's side.
The red-haired one uses whip like weapons.
The black-haired one possesses outstanding speed and talent in magic arts.
The young boy tries to fight a powerful enemy but ends up completely helpless.
The boy undergoes training to become stronger with the help of a mentor who is rather fond of cruel and risky training methods.
The boy enters the final stage of the tournament/war, ready to defeat the enemy he couldn't before.
After a desperate struggle from both sides (or in Bleach's case, a series of showing off new transformations), the young boy emerges victorious, but drained of energy.
One of the protagonists loses his spirit powers.
The young boy is confronted by a group of normal people with abnormal special abilities.
These special normal people inform the main protagonist of another special normal person that must be defeated.
This bad guy turns out to be a former "whatever the protagonist is" who also commands a group of special normal people and suffers from multiple personality disorder.
And to put into perspective how bad Kubo's pacing is:
Yu Yu Hakusho did all this and more in somewhere over 100 chapters.
Bleach is at 400+ chapters and still ongoing.
Now, no doubt some of the similarities listed above are just coincidences, but when the overall story has not only been done before, but done better before, I just feel disinterested in it.

PKMN Trainer Rex
26th August 2011, 7:18 AM
Thank you =D I'm in Rochester, NY.

Replies. Mostly in spoilers. 8D

Sweet, have fun.





But the new one is there XD I think we had a scene before saying that the Central 46 is the highest authority or whatnot in the whole Soul Society, that even the Captains cannot go against their ruling. Ah well.

Damn you logic! Yeah well, you win. :p



But then, Hanataro didn't have anything to do with Rukia.... did he? He was the one who asked Renji why Ichigo wanted to save Rukia so much in the first place, IIRC. I could be wrong though.

Just did some reading, he talked to Rukia while she was locked up and learned all about Ichigo. He healed Ichigo after the Renji battle, served as Ichigo's and Ganju's Pokedex and lead them to Rukia's new cell. So Hanataro did help, but still put his energy in, out of respect/obligation regardless of his current rank.




Ah, feasible enough I guess. But I don't want another arc where the Soul Society is being destroyed... AGAIN. :p


Every story follows an archetype, as pointed out by Jin. Hopefully its a little more........unique.

I also forgot to say "OOOOH! Thats what the other badge was for!" too :p


@Zam: I love the charts. I expected Yamamoto's stamina to be higher. But then again, when you have that much power , why do you need to last that long?

I like Pokemon (...)
26th August 2011, 2:39 PM
But the new one is there XD I think we had a scene before saying that the Central 46 is the highest authority or whatnot in the whole Soul Society, that even the Captains cannot go against their ruling. Ah well.

It's possible that Aizen's betrayal completely threw the political system for a loop - perhaps the C46 doesn't have as much power now, as it shows that if something like Aizen does happen again, they aren't as screwed.

jet lag It just means that now we could be sharing the same daylight. XD
Yup 8D

so you have to keep it alive
Not just me (thank goodness). It seems we'll still have people posting every now and then. At the very least, a handful of people will post once or more a week.


What else? XD
Though now that you mention it, I wonder if Mayuri would want to give his reiatsu to Ichigo. He's just the kind that doesn't care. Even if it's the Captain-Commander's orders.
Unless he could study how such a massive amount of reiatsu affects a person...

So after seeing MC's topic about captain class character without BDCs from Kubo, I started to play around with my charts.
At first, I assigned battle stat ranges to those characters, and then I planned to create charts that reflected that.
But then I got distracted creating a new Battle Data Chart with better categories.
After working for a few hours in Paint.NET, and with some help from ILP, I've completed it.
ILP said I should propose them to the club before implementing them, so here are some examples...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/KenpachiBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/YamamotoBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/AizenBDC.png
As you can see, the new charts are octagonal.
And the new categories change up the dynamics of the original BDC.
Would you guys want to change over to the new format?
Obviously, because I helped you make them, I really like them - especially since the categories make sense with what we know from the other charts. I was thinking, after we come up with the stats for all the Canon Captains, we might be able to implement them in the club? Though it depends on what some of the other captains say (especially since this strays away from canon slightly more than the charts). Nobody post stats for themselves yet, I want to get the average of the canon captains first

But also, I probably won't completely switch over to the new charts - I'll work on them as well, but I'll focus still on the hexagonal charts.



Topic
Yoruichi

Offense: 100
Defense: 80
Mobility: 100
Stamina: 100
Intelligence: 80
Kido/Retisu: 80
Physical Strength: 100
Total: 540 or 640
A 540 total, making her on par with Unohana. I think this works well, as she's obviously got the high stats in Offense, Mobility and Stamina. The only thing is that I think her Shunko would make her have a high Kidou, and due to being head of the Onmitsukidou, she'd have a high Intellect, too You can see why I had the problem of making her too powerful
Also, the Octagonal total would be 720, not 640. Kidou and Reiatsu are 2 different stats (and you only count one of them).


EDIT:
I'm a sucker for octagons, so I approve.
Poor ILP, now the data is gonna need ALOT of recalculations.
Poor me? I'm delighted! I have more numbers to work with! This will be a lot of fun for me. Also, I won't recalculate, I'll just have 2 folders - hexagon and octagon.

If it was just a fusion of the general themes and settings then I'd probably be fine with it.
But this is just straight up reusing a storyline, which doesn't sit well with me.
I mean, if you look reaaaally closely, the entire Bleach series is almost a rip-off of the entire Yu Yu Hakusho series.

Yu Yu Hakusho did all this and more in somewhere over 100 chapters.
Bleach is at 400+ chapters and still ongoing.
Now, no doubt some of the similarities listed above are just coincidences, but when the overall story has not only been done before, but done better before, I just feel disinterested in it.
Wow... I hadn't even realised half of that I don't remember too much of YYH. But yeah, you're right, Bleach is incredibly similar to YYH, and as you said, the pacing is much worse.

@Zam: I love the charts. I expected Yamamoto's stamina to be higher. But then again, when you have that much power , why do you need to last that long?
Not to mention, he's an old man. It's a surprise his Mobility hasn't lowered as well (but if the official hexagons say his mobility is 100, it will stay like that - the only ones that will be different from the hex charts are Kidou/Reiatsu, and Stamina).

Eon Master
26th August 2011, 5:46 PM
first free time in days dammit Since everybody already commented on the manga, I won't bother.

Ooh, new charts, eh? My stats need a revamp anyway.

Offense: 100 (I'm a master swordsman I'm precise and never waste movement or opportunities without a really good reason. My movements are also very tricky and hard to track, and I have several incredibly powerful offensive techniques.)


Defense: 100 (I defend and attack simultaniously, use offense as a defense, and have several powerful defensive techniques. My enhanced sensory abilities and reaction time also give me an incredible defensive combination that makes me very hard to attack properly because it becomes borderline impossible to plan your attacks or time them correctly.)


Mobility: 100 (No contest; the fastest being in the Soul Society. I'm also extremely flexible, very mobile and agile. As I said earlier, my movement style is unique and singularly hard to follow. With my reaction time in play, I can even react after my opponent and still make it in time, and my senses let me practically forsee attacks in advance.)


Kidou: 10 (I suck at Kidou. Period. In addition, exerting the focused spiritual energy for Kidou in my Bankai and Shikai forms puts direct stress on my nerves, making it a terrible idea. This leaves me largely incapable of sustaining distance combat outside of mid-range shockwave attacks.)


Spiritual Power/Reiatsu: 100 (I have truckloads of reiatsu, enough to match Golde's Bankai with my own. However, because of my lower endurance, I can't exert myself for nearly as long as him.)


Intellect: 100 (If I need to explain this, you clearly don't know me very well. Let's just say that I'm the club strategist and leave it at that, since I'd rather not inflate my own ego.)


Physical Strength: 80 (I'm strong, but not monsterously so. I rely on speed and skill far more than strength anyway.)


Stamina: 30 (if I'm dealt a serious hit even once in my Bankai, I'm finished. I might survive two or three serious hits in my Shikai form, but even that's pushing it. The only reason it's 30 rather than 10 is because I can sustain my Bankai for extended periods despite the stress it puts on my body.)


Total: 620 (I calculated what the "standard" would become [our old one was 490], and it comes out to be roughly 650. I think that, with my weaknesses being so severe, 620 is a reasonable ammount despite my number of 100's. In all honesty, the only reason the rest are so high is to compensate for my ridiculously large weaknesses.)


Oh wow, that would be so cool, but it would have to be a shiny Eevee, actually suits rather well - underestimated at first, but can call upon higher powers to become different element channelers ... oooh the Eevee line was also my fave when I first played pokemon, so many years ago ^^ good times.

It was a good idea? 0_o I made that up off the top of my head, lol.


hehe, war general :p

I grew up in a military family, I can't help it ;P


ooooh, if you are sending this now, i am scared to see what you will send when i post at the end of apr2012 going "EXAMS DONE!!!!!" and you havent even started yours yet :p

Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *dies* I don't even want to think about exams now, I have so much on my plate as it is.


If I'm not mistaken, he has at least tried, no? Or at least, Eon will when he thinks that it's an okay time for Luke to change.

I did with his first one; gave him a few pointers and said "go". That didn't work so well. I'm letting him change it around the time I turn 19, in October, and I will be designing it with his ideas, heavily supervising the process and making sure it's a Zan he'll be happy with for a while.


Mwahahahahaha
Oooh! Now I know what happens when Link goes near a fairy. No wonder it disappears off the screen in the games, it's too violent for children.

xD It's supposed to be Link finally snapping at Navi, your annoying fairy companion from Ocarina of Time. She was actually voted one of the top 10 most annoying video game characters of all time by Game Informer; I fully agree.

@My Fanfic: No progress. I haven't even had time to sit down in front of a computer until today, everything I've done on Serebii has been from my phone, and I'm not happy about it. In addition, I realized that I'd forgotten to copy my notes onto my USB drive, so I'll have to wait for Labor Day weekend (the first time I'll be going home) before I can even start :/

arceus03
26th August 2011, 11:20 PM
But then I got distracted creating a new Battle Data Chart with better categories.
After working for a few hours in Paint.NET, and with some help from ILP, I've completed it.

I quite like the new one, since it gives... better coverage now that sounds like a mobile phone company ad


Welcome to the USA! Former Land of golden opportunities!
Also the land of Rootbeer soda, No.2 pencils, Chinese Food, crackers (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cracker_%28food%29), music videos, and baseball, among many other things.

I know what a cracker is :p Thankyou =D


Any chapter with Unohana, even briefly, is a great chapter to you. xD

XD Of course! She gets so little screentime, seeing her for a moment is enough to make me go weee (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=quGu7I9XjH8) :p


1. Well, I think they were hiding until it was revealed that Aizen was to blame. But I think even now they're probably still exiled. But I could be wrong...

IF they're even exiled now, the new C46 must be nuts. XD That's all I can say.


2. Well, it's a whole new group of Central 46 now. I'm sure they're with Yamamoto's decision; they couldn't really stop him anyways.

Ahyeah, I guess. But we weren't really told whether or not a Captain-Commander would be able to overrun their decision or not though.


3. I think you're talking about how I made a joke about Hanantaro being the new captain of Squad 5. This weeks chapter sort of fueled that joke. :p

Not exactly Didn't Renji say something about every Captain and Lieutenant giving their reiatsu to the glowing sword? That's what I meant :p


That's what I thought too..."Ah! So that is why he had one earlier!"

Indeed


If it was just a fusion of the general themes and settings then I'd probably be fine with it.
But this is just straight up reusing a storyline, which doesn't sit well with me.
I mean, if you look reaaaally closely, the entire Bleach series is almost a rip-off of the entire Yu Yu Hakusho series.


I recognized a few from the beginning Didn't really keep up with it, but saw a few episodes, I didn't realize there'd be so many similarities o.o


Sweet, have fun.

I will, thanks =D It's cool here. Literally. XD I'm used to the warmer climate of my country.
Though I've been warned that winters here are horrible x.x

Reply to Rex:



Damn you logic! Yeah well, you win. :p

:p


Just did some reading, he talked to Rukia while she was locked up and learned all about Ichigo. He healed Ichigo after the Renji battle, served as Ichigo's and Ganju's Pokedex and lead them to Rukia's new cell. So Hanataro did help, but still put his energy in, out of respect/obligation regardless of his current rank.

Pokedex, XD
Yeah, I guess that could happen.


Every story follows an archetype, as pointed out by Jin. Hopefully its a little more........unique.

XD Unique or not, if it's REALLY another copy of the Aizen arc, I'll just go ugh. As we have seen now, Tsukishima's ability is as frightening as Aizen, only less haxxy, since you have to be cut rather than only SEE.


I also forgot to say "OOOOH! Thats what the other badge was for!" too :p

XD


Reply to ILPy:


It's possible that Aizen's betrayal completely threw the political system for a loop - perhaps the C46 doesn't have as much power now, as it shows that if something like Aizen does happen again, they aren't as screwed.

Ah, could be.


Unless he could study how such a massive amount of reiatsu affects a person...

That doesn't seem like a very interesting study


The only thing is that I think her Shunko would make her have a high Kidou, and due to being head of the Onmitsukidou, she'd have a high Intellect, too You can see why I had the problem of making her too powerful

Not necessarily. Soi Fon only had 60 for both Kido and Intelligence. Though yeah, if the reiatsu/kido data is split into 2, maybe she'd have high Kido and low reiatsu, idk. High intellect I could accept though, since she's been on the exile with Urahara for what, at least one century? Unless she lets him do all the thinking.



Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *dies* I don't even want to think about exams now, I have so much on my plate as it is.

This is SO cool *reminds self to do it when exams are over*


xD It's supposed to be Link finally snapping at Navi, your annoying fairy companion from Ocarina of Time. She was actually voted one of the top 10 most annoying video game characters of all time by Game Informer; I fully agree.

I see XD I only played, what, 2 or 3 TLoZ games and in all those, all the fairies ever did was replenish your health. And give you bigger bomb bags. Ooh, and a silver bow arrow, in the case of a very fat fairy. XD


@My Fanfic: No progress. I haven't even had time to sit down in front of a computer until today, everything I've done on Serebii has been from my phone, and I'm not happy about it. In addition, I realized that I'd forgotten to copy my notes onto my USB drive, so I'll have to wait for Labor Day weekend (the first time I'll be going home) before I can even start :/

That's long Ah, okay. I probably wouldn't have time to read it anyway, at least not so that I could give a full review. Though ILPy could

Lucario0708
27th August 2011, 1:31 AM
allright, sorry for my absence but the rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated

ON WITH THE SHOW



At the words of this sudden prophecy, many of the captains began to talk. The only silent one being Captain Blue, of squad 11. Her face showed that she was annoyed by the fact that people were scared. In a fit of rage, she stormed out of the meeting room.

"Enough!" Golde said, silencing all with his booming voice.

"Take Garra to the infirmary, we'll need more information when he wakes up, that said, if we can find where these 'knights' are holed up, we can send a team in for a preemtive strike. I will send Captain Rouga Kouken of squad 7, as well as 5 lieutenants in."

"Excuse me, sir, but aren't you overestimating them? Sending in a captain and five lieutenants to combat them?" captain Ant said.

"At this time I'm afraid we're underestimating them." Golde said with a sigh. He had an obvious look of both strain and frustration on his face, the way he looks when he needs his mid-afternoon candy.

"Sir, let me go too." Jaku said, stepping up.

"Absolutely not."

"But I fought one of them, I can help."

"It is true, but you lost had to revert to your hollow form, were brutally injured, and nearly cost us the lives of three captains. The fact that you haven't been demoted or worse, or that I still let you live is a ****ing miracle. That being the case, you are put on probation, and banned from using you zanpakuto until further notice. Do I make myself clear?"

"Yes, captain." Jaku said, clenching his hands into fists. He had to go, he couldn't let anything bad happen again, yet, maybe captain Golde is right, maybe he should just let it pass.

"Jaku, go see what is bothering captain blue and report back to me."

Jaku nodded and proceeded to the squad 11 barracks, a 5th seat there said that she went to her quarters after knocking out several squad members and crushing a boulder with her bare hands.

Jaku knocked on the door. "Captain Blue, are you in there?"

There was no answer.

Jaku, knowing he would probably regret it, opened the door.

The events of what happens next are very vulgar and blurred by Jaku's memory, it is recounted in the simplest way possible.

Jaku opened the door to find the captain taking a shower, a chill ran up is spine along with the thought. "God damnit you ****ing idiot."

A little ways away, Ant was carrying some books to his lab when he heard a booming noise, and saw a huge dust cloud over squad 11, he then saw a oddly shaped object flying out of the dust cloud straight at him.

The force of it hit the captain like a bus.

"Oh God Jaku, you really gotta stop laying off the chocolate man, and why are you wet? Jaku?"

Jaku's face was dumbfounded and awestruck, accompanied by several lines of blood dripping down his face as well.

Ant threw Jaku off and looked at him. Jaku still had that strange look on his face.

"I have seen the fist of God." was all he could mutter out.

Ant looked over to see Blue running at him. She stopped and started kicking Jaku's body.

"You ****ing pervert! What are you thinking walking in on me like that!"

"I'm sorry, I knocked but you didn't answer!"

"Excuses!" she yelled as she continued to kick him while he was down.

"Blue, if you continue you'll probably kill him, don't you think you should stop?"

"No."

Ant looked at her.

"Fine." She said, putting one more kick into Jaku's face before picking him up.

They stood Jaku back on his feet. His expression still hadn't changed, so Blue slapped it off him.

"Oh, thanks!"

Blue slapped him again. "I liked you better when you sat there like a retard. So, if I really want to kill you, I'll just have to fight you."

A few hours later. . .

People were gathered all around in preparation of Jaku and Blue's fight. Captain Golde walked forward.

"All right, these two imbeciles wish to have a fight to the death in order to settle a score." Golde cringed. "This will be a no holds barred fight, but if it gets too dangerous, I will have to step in."

"Don't worry, he'll be dead before he even draws his sword." Blue said.

Jaku's right hands rested on the hilt of his sword, as he put his tactical glasses in place. "So I guess we'll start with regular swordplay then, huh? Well then again, who am I to judge a captain." Jaku grabbed the hilt of his blade and held it back up his arm. "It's show time."

In a flash Jaku lunged at Blue, swiping his sword down in a head-splitter. Blue reacted by quickly blocking the blade just inches from her skull.

Blue looked down at Jaku's other hand, and her eyes widened.

"Tenran!" Jaku yelled, as a cyclone of spiritual energy blasted at blue, knocking her back as her feet skidded on the stone.

"That was a dirty trick." she said.

"It is no holds barred, remember?"

Jaku quickly moved into flash-step, several after images appeared behind him, telling blue where he is going to strike.

She twisted backwards, just fast enough to slash Jaku in the stomach, and then, he disappeared.

"Gotcha." Blue heard in her ear as Jaku threw a powerful punch into her back.

Blue skidded to a halt. "What was that, you could've killed me right there!"

"I could have, but this is just too much fun!"

This time Blue reacted first, slashing at Jaku as he blocked with the wide edge of his scimitar. Jaku parried and threw a wide slash at Blue's right side, which he dodged with ease.

Blue flash stepped above Jaku and sent a powerful kick into his lower jaw, sending him flying backwards.

Jaku stood up and wiped the blood off his lip. "You could've killed me too."

"What can I say, this is fun."

Jaku chuckled, then threw another strike at Blue.

Not having time to react, Blue dodged just as the blade sliced off a locke of her hair.

Blue jumped backwards. "You've forced me into this. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!"

Blue's sword turned pitch black, and lengthened a bit.

"Now, you're ****ed."

Blue quickly leaped at Jaku, he blocked the slash, just as she slipped into the shadow of a nearby building.

"Where is she?"

Blue jumped out of Jaku's shadow and slashed at his back.

Jaku fell forward, pain searing through his body. "I won't give up, not yet, not here! Blind them, Sukui o shainingu!"

Jaku's scimitar quickly changed into a long gun blade with a revolver on the hilt. Several sparks flew out of the barrel, and the blade seemed to shine with an ethereal power.

Blue continuously jumped in and out of the shadows, and slashing at Jaku. Some of the hits were blocked, but all the rest hit him.

After the flurry of attacks stopped, Jaku stood, hunched over in pain and exhaustion.

Jaku pushed up his shades. "I'm not done yet." Jaku threw off his tattered trench coat, revealing a white t-shirt that seemed to be glowing from his zanpakuto's light.

Jaku looked up. "I'm not gonna let this pain stop me!"

In a flash Jaku appeared in front of Blue. Reacting, blue locked her blade against his.

"Big mistake." Jaku said, looking down.

Blue's blade was on the top edge of Jaku's.

Jaku pulled the trigger.

The force of the bullet nearly threw the sword out of Blue's hands.

"No more opening for you." Blue said as she slipped into the shadows.

"Time to hit everywhere at once, Kajō-gaki no arashi!" Jaku said, jumping into the air as hundreds of bullets flashed out of his gun in all directions, searing away the shadows and revealing blue.

"Furasshu aitsugu!" Jaku yelled as he flashed in front of blue, letting loose dozens of strikes from his sword in a matter of seconds.

Blue managed to block most of them, but the flash of light each strike delivered made it difficult. Letting some strikes come within a hairs breadth of her neck.

For a while they continued to duel like this, as the sun slowly started to sink down, it came to night.

They both stopped for a moment, breathing heavily out of exhaustion.

"This is my time now." Blue said as the darkness of night fell all around them. "Dark Jumper, Kokuchouyaku Senshu!" she said, as her blade lengthened a bit more, all the shadows seemed to creep closer around Jaku, as a devilish grin appeared on Blue's face.


this is only part 1 of this chapter due to the sheer length of it, and the fact that i'm tired as hell

part 2 is tomorrow

Eon Master
27th August 2011, 2:02 AM
^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

I can name at least five situations/lines that are copied almost verbatim from my fanfic, if not more. Golde laying down the law, the "aren't you overestimating them; right now I'm afraid I'm underestimating them" dialogue, Jaku getting turned down to go on the mission (same thing that happened to Kai in my fanfic), not to mention that you have Blue fighting you and the "now you're ****ed" and "this is my time/domain" lines, which I also used. And the bit about swordplay. And the "this is a no-holds barred fight" thing. And the multiple officers being sent to combat the enemy bit.

^ The list just keeps going, and I'm not happy about it. If there's one thing I will not tolerate, it's someone plagurizing my work. You were just getting on my nerves before, but you can officially consider yourself on thin ice. If you pull some stunt like this again, or something else that we disapprove of, I'll have to suspend you from the Squad until you prove that you're a worthy member. If you can't think up your own ****, don't ****ing copy someone else's just to make it work.

*sigh* Ok, rant over. We will now return to the scheduled program.

I like Pokemon (...)
27th August 2011, 2:20 AM
I went through the Captains and put what I thought they should have for each stats. Zam has checked through and has approved them - but if you guys think that anything is off, tell us and we might change it (depending if we think you're argument is good enough :p).

http://oi55.*******.com/10cqmvn.jpg
The average total is exactly 669 according to my spreadsheet o.o



Ooh, new charts, eh? My stats need a revamp anyway.
I did ask that no one post them yet...

If you make Octagon stats, can you post Hexagon stats that match that? So the same Offense/Defence/Mobility/Intellect on both charts, it's just the Kidou/Reiatsu and Stamina might be slightly different between the charts. Because I don't want a complete swap over to the Octagon charts - I want to use both charts at the same time.

Likewise, if you felt like you wanted to update your stats, now is probably the best time to do it, while you post your Octagon stats. I'll probably update mine soon, after I'm done playing around a bit...


Total: 620 (I calculated what the "standard" would become [our old one was 490], and it comes out to be roughly 650. I think that, with my weaknesses being so severe, 620 is a reasonable ammount despite my number of 100's.
If we keep the same ratio of 490:600, then our new total would be 650, yes. But the average of the Canon Captains (chart in the spoiler) is 670. In the Hexa charts, most of us fit between Hitsugaya and Gin, which would make our total between 670 and 640. I just wanted a good range of totals before anyone makes charts, so we know what kind of area we should aim for.


Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *dies* I don't even want to think about exams now, I have so much on my plate as it is.
Ah, exams. This year should be interesting, since half of most of my subjects are finished in terms of exams (did them last year). I'll try and study more but XD


@My Fanfic: No progress. I haven't even had time to sit down in front of a computer until today, everything I've done on Serebii has been from my phone, and I'm not happy about it. In addition, I realized that I'd forgotten to copy my notes onto my USB drive, so I'll have to wait for Labor Day weekend (the first time I'll be going home) before I can even start :/
That's a shame. Well, it will give me plenty of time to forget to read the previous chapters.

I quite like the new one, since it gives... better coverage now that sounds like a mobile phone company ad
Lol. Did I mention how much I like numbers? 8D


Not exactly Didn't Renji say something about every Captain and Lieutenant giving their reiatsu to the glowing sword? That's what I meant :p



That doesn't seem like a very interesting study

High intellect I could accept though, since she's been on the exile with Urahara for what, at least one century? Unless she lets him do all the thinking.

Just because all Lieuts and Capts were order to, doesn't mean the other seats weren't.

Oh you'd be surprised 8D

I doubt that. Yoruichi is a strong and intelligent woman, and it's unlikely that she'd let Urahara do all the thinking.


ON WITH THE SHOW
I don't think I've really reviewed your chapters before (because of that crossover). But I'll review this since I requested it, of course.


"It is true, but you lost had to revert to your hollow form, were brutally injured, and nearly cost us the lives of three captains. The fact that you haven't been demoted or worse, or that I still let you live is a ****ing miracle. That being the case, you are put on probation, and banned from using you zanpakuto until further notice. Do I make myself clear?"
I think Golde's The Reason You Suck Speech (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheReasonYouSuckSpeech) fit the situation well. However, it wasn't nearly as long as it could have been. If Golde was angry enough to swear at a person, then he would be absolutely pissed - and have given a longer speech.

Jaku nodded and proceeded to the squad 11 barracks, a 5th seat there said that she went to her quarters after knocking out several squad members and crushing a boulder with her bare hands.
Sounds like a normal day for her.

Jaku opened the door to find the captain taking a shower, a chill ran up is spine along with the thought. "God damnit you ****ing idiot."

A little ways away, Ant was carrying some books to his lab when he heard a booming noise, and saw a huge dust cloud over squad 11, he then saw a oddly shaped object flying out of the dust cloud straight at him.
I think you missed a great opportunity for some more comedic violence here - not only did you walk in on the 11th Squad Captain taking a shower, but her boyfriend was walking right past and you wrote nothing about it. Missed moment of funny.


"You ****ing pervert! What are you thinking walking in on me like that!"
Which reminds me - showers are damn noisy. There's no way that you would have been able to open the door and see her having a shower, and not hear it behind the door. Not to mention the basic logic that showers are in bathrooms. If you saw her, you must of gone into the bathroom. Who would go INTO the bathroom to look for a person? Not to mention the fact that people lock their doors.


Blue slapped him again. "I liked you better when you sat there like a retard. So, if I really want to kill you, I'll just have to fight you."
Or, y'know, she could like, punch him hard in the face or something.


"All right, these two imbeciles wish to have a fight to the death in order to settle a score." Golde cringed. "This will be a no holds barred fight, but if it gets too dangerous, I will have to step in."
There is NO WAY that this would be reason enough for Golde to let Jaku use his zanpakutou again. The simple fact that he called them both imbeciles shows that he doesn't take it seriously. And if he was really against it anyway, he wouldn't let the fight happen.

"Gotcha." Blue heard in her ear as Jaku threw a powerful punch into her back.
You have the advantage at the beginning of the fight. you're fighting a captain. Hell, this shouldn't even be called a "fight", this is a fifth seat versus a captain.

Blue skidded to a halt. "What was that, you could've killed me right there!"
A line fitting Blue.


Blue jumped backwards. "You've forced me into this. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!"
Again, there's no way that a fifth seat who hasn't even released has "forced" a captain into releasing. You should have become as flat as a pancake with the reiatsu from her release.

They both stopped for a moment, breathing heavily out of exhaustion.
I'll make my point again with numbers, this time. Blue's Stamina is 100, yours is 70.


this is only part 1 of this chapter due to the sheer length of it, and the fact that i'm tired as hell

part 2 is tomorrow
"Sheer length"? It was mostly one or two line paragraphs and pieces of dialogue.


Eon's review was *applause*.
I'm beginning to think Luke might just be a master troll.

arceus03
27th August 2011, 5:07 AM
^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

I can name at least five situations/lines that are copied almost verbatim from my fanfic, if not more. Golde laying down the law, the "aren't you overestimating them; right now I'm afraid I'm underestimating them" dialogue, Jaku getting turned down to go on the mission (same thing that happened to Kai in my fanfic), not to mention that you have Blue fighting you and the "now you're ****ed" and "this is my time/domain" lines, which I also used. And the bit about swordplay. And the "this is a no-holds barred fight" thing. And the multiple officers being sent to combat the enemy bit.

^ The list just keeps going, and I'm not happy about it. If there's one thing I will not tolerate, it's someone plagurizing my work. You were just getting on my nerves before, but you can officially consider yourself on thin ice. If you pull some stunt like this again, or something else that we disapprove of, I'll have to suspend you from the Squad until you prove that you're a worthy member. If you can't think up your own ****, don't ****ing copy someone else's just to make it work.

*sigh* Ok, rant over. We will now return to the scheduled program.

*Applause*

No offense, Luke, but what Eon said hit the spot pretty accurate.


I went through the Captains and put what I thought they should have for each stats. Zam has checked through and has approved them - but if you guys think that anything is off, tell us and we might change it (depending if we think you're argument is good enough :p).

I demand that Unohana has got 800 total. That is all. Reason? She doesn't need a reason.



If we keep the same ratio of 490:600, then our new total would be 650, yes. But the average of the Canon Captains (chart in the spoiler) is 670.

What was the average stat of the Canon Captain in the original chart again?


Ah, exams. This year should be interesting, since half of most of my subjects are finished in terms of exams (did them last year). I'll try and study more but XD

Ikr. My high school final exam was exactly like that. XD I remember what my lecturer told me. Something that goes like

"This is the American system. You work hard all year round. It's not like the British system, where you play all year long, and at the end of the year, you die."

XP


Lol. Did I mention how much I like numbers? 8D

This is NEWS! You do, seriously? Woah =D


Just because all Lieuts and Capts were order to, doesn't mean the other seats weren't.


*shrug* maybe


I doubt that. Yoruichi is a strong and intelligent woman, and it's unlikely that she'd let Urahara do all the thinking.

Yeah. But how do you know she's intelligent? :p


You have the advantage at the beginning of the fight. you're fighting a captain. Hell, this shouldn't even be called a "fight", this is a fifth seat versus a captain.


That basically sums up my thoughts. And fyi, Luke, in the old days, the Gotei 13 don't keep vizards on probation. They kill them.

And "nearly cost us the lives of three Captains"? You're implying that your Hollow form is strong enough to beat a Captain. Pfffft. Major pfffffft. Sorry, but Ichigo with his Hollow mask was barely on par with Grimmjow. The Captains are way stronger than the Espada maybe at least not Hitsugaya. Unless, of course, you're talking about that final Hollow form Ichigo had. And plus, Ichigo himself is Captain level. For that record, all the Vizard are at least Lieutenant level. I believe any shinigami lower than that would fail in the fight against his inner hollow. idk.

It's cold

*waits for kusari's chess fic*

Zameric
27th August 2011, 5:47 AM
I finished the octa char.....Seriously, there is a commercial spoken in complete Spanish, on the BBC America channel!
There couldn't be a more English language channel out there.... *facepalm @ the fail*

I finished the octa charts for all the the canon captains earlier today.
But I'm not totally sure if Ant wants me to post them just yet... >.>


I will, thanks =D It's cool here. Literally. XD I'm used to the warmer climate of my country.
Though I've been warned that winters here are horrible x.x
Trust me, cold is easier to deal with than heat. :p


If we keep the same ratio of 490:600, then our new total would be 650, yes. But the average of the Canon Captains (chart in the spoiler) is 670. In the Hexa charts, most of us fit between Hitsugaya and Gin, which would make our total between 670 and 640. I just wanted a good range of totals before anyone makes charts, so we know what kind of area we should aim for.
Kind of the thing I don't like about how you analyze the stats.
I think the charts should reflect each individual and not aim for some common average/area/etc.
But that's just my opinion, which I think is what Kubo was doing. :p

MasterCharizard15
27th August 2011, 6:17 AM
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I demand that Unohana has got 800 total. That is all. Reason? She doesn't need a reason.


Damn Straight!




Yeah. But how do you know she's intelligent? :p
She is the nicest and most feared Captain, who is the medic and the mother to them all.
Do the math.





That basically sums up my thoughts. And fyi, Luke, in the old days, the Gotei 13 don't keep vizards on probation. They kill them.
Agreed.
We'll likely have Blue to the execution too.
Then Ilp would exeriemnet on the remains and analyze them on the cellular level.
...then the "subject" escapes from his lap, trying to take over the world and kill us all off. >.>


And "nearly cost us the lives of three Captains"? You're implying that your Hollow form is strong enough to beat a Captain. Pfffft. Major pfffffft. Sorry, but Ichigo with his Hollow mask was barely on par with Grimmjow. The Captains are way stronger than the Espada maybe at least not Hitsugaya. Unless, of course, you're talking about that final Hollow form Ichigo had. And plus, Ichigo himself is Captain level. For that record, all the Vizard are at least Lieutenant level. I believe any shinigami lower than that would fail in the fight against his inner hollow. idk.

Again, agreed.


I went through the Captains and put what I thought they should have for each stats. Zam has checked through and has approved them - but if you guys think that anything is off, tell us and we might change it (depending if we think you're argument is good enough :p).

I already said my peace about those stats. Nice work.




If you make Octagon stats, can you post Hexagon stats that match that? So the same Offense/Defence/Mobility/Intellect on both charts, it's just the Kidou/Reiatsu and Stamina might be slightly different between the charts. Because I don't want a complete swap over to the Octagon charts - I want to use both charts at the same time.

Likewise, if you felt like you wanted to update your stats, now is probably the best time to do it, while you post your Octagon stats. I'll probably update mine soon, after I'm done playing around a bit...

So we'll Hex Charts and Octa Charts.

You love this, so much.



Lol. Did I mention how much I like numbers? 8D

...you do!?
I-I just don't know what to say anymore...
You think you know a person and they spring THIS on you!
I-I-I have no idea who you are anymore!




I doubt that. Yoruichi is a strong and intelligent woman, and it's unlikely that she'd let Urahara do all the thinking.

Agreed. The Noble Ninja thinks for herself!


^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

...


I can name at least five situations/lines that are copied almost verbatim from my fanfic, if not more. Golde laying down the law, the "aren't you overestimating them; right now I'm afraid I'm underestimating them" dialogue, Jaku getting turned down to go on the mission (same thing that happened to Kai in my fanfic), not to mention that you have Blue fighting you and the "now you're ****ed" and "this is my time/domain" lines, which I also used. And the bit about swordplay. And the "this is a no-holds barred fight" thing. And the multiple officers being sent to combat the enemy bit.

Imitation is the most sincerity form of flattery.
Still can get your *** sued for plagiarism and possibly copy-right infringement.



^ The list just keeps going, and I'm not happy about it. If there's one thing I will not tolerate, it's someone plagurizing my work. You were just getting on my nerves before, but you can officially consider yourself on thin ice. If you pull some stunt like this again, or something else that we disapprove of, I'll have to suspend you from the Squad until you prove that you're a worthy member. If you can't think up your own ****, don't ****ing copy someone else's just to make it work.

See Cell and Zam, THIS is how you bring the law hammer down.

The fact you have the best lines...nah, still bad.




*sigh* Ok, rant over. We will now return to the scheduled program.

Welcome back to Numbers with ILP!
Today we're going to calculate the ratio, area and percentage of the Captain's Data Charts!

PKMN Trainer Rex
27th August 2011, 6:56 AM
Not to mention, he's an old man. It's a surprise his Mobility hasn't lowered as well (but if the official hexagons say his mobility is 100, it will stay like that - the only ones that will be different from the hex charts are Kidou/Reiatsu, and Stamina).

That too, but imo his muscle tone say 65-70 ish. But its just a few numbers, its fine as it stands.



I will, thanks =D It's cool here. Literally. XD I'm used to the warmer climate of my country.
Though I've been warned that winters here are horrible x.x.




Trust me, cold is easier to deal with than heat. :p


^That. Even though at its coldest Hawaii hits 55-60ish degrees F in the Winter mornings and low 80's in the afternoons, I love the cold weather.



Reply to Rex:


XD Unique or not, if it's REALLY another copy of the Aizen arc, I'll just go ugh. As we have seen now, Tsukishima's ability is as frightening as Aizen, only less haxxy, since you have to be cut rather than only SEE.





True.




http://oi55.*******.com/10cqmvn.jpg
The average total is exactly 669 according to my spreadsheet o.o



Seeing Unohana's stats make me fear and respect her more. Mostly fear.



It's cold

Deal With It.



*waits for kusari's chess fic*

Wait, what? Oh yeah, that thing.


And in Rex irl news: DAYS UNTIL NEW TO ME CAR: 7

arceus03
27th August 2011, 11:48 AM
Trust me, cold is easier to deal with than heat. :p

Maybe. XD


Kind of the thing I don't like about how you analyze the stats.
I think the charts should reflect each individual and not aim for some common average/area/etc.
But that's just my opinion, which I think is what Kubo was doing. :p

Hear, hear


Damn Straight!

See? 8D


She is the nicest and most feared Captain, who is the medic and the mother to them all.
Do the math.

Oh, I was referring to Yoruichi for this one. XD



...then the "subject" escapes from his lap, trying to take over the world and kill us all off. >.>

Lap :p


...you do!?
I-I just don't know what to say anymore...
You think you know a person and they spring THIS on you!
I-I-I have no idea who you are anymore!

I know right! This is a big surprise :o



^That. Even though at its coldest Hawaii hits 55-60ish degrees F in the Winter mornings and low 80's in the afternoons, I love the cold weather.

I'll try. XD People did give advice to go out and have fun, because if you're not, you'll be gloomy and stressed up.


Seeing Unohana's stats make me fear and respect her more. Mostly fear.

8D


Deal With It.

:p


Wait, what? Oh yeah, that thing.

XD I think he said it should be up around what, August 28-ish until September 5-ish, IIRC.


And in Rex irl news: DAYS UNTIL NEW TO ME CAR: 7

Cool!

Oh OH OHHHH. The 4th Bleach Movie: The Hell Chapter is SUBBED. 8D *goes off to watch*

...And what, 13 minutes into the story and Ichigo screams bankai. WHAT THE.

There's no way that white haired guy helps them for just the... dislike reason. I sense treason

Some forty minutes into the story, and I'm starting to think the Soul Society isn't getting involved in this Hell business. Awww.

"Everything is according to plan" I'm sick of hearing that sentence >.> Aizen does it a bunch of times.

They mention you quite a lot of times in this, kusari

Renji used a weird technique. Oooh.

"It's all your fault" Yamamoto couldn't be more sensitive, could he? >.> Though yeah, he is correct I guess.

Rukia fanservice WHAT THE >.>

Oh God. What is it with the animators and half-naked Ichigo? :x That's already TWICE man. And inevitably the same place got ripped.

Hell decided to help him, indeed.

The ending is pretty funny and stupid. XD

SO. All in all. I hate this movie. Not even a brief glimpse of Unohana. :< Heck, not even all the Captains are shown. I expected at least Mayuri, he's be pretty interested in this. Hmm.

I like Pokemon (...)
27th August 2011, 4:05 PM
What was the average stat of the Canon Captain in the original chart again?
With Zaraki having 100 Offense, 490 average. With Zaraki having 200 Offense, 500 average, if you count them as 2 seperate people, it's a 490 average again (but just barely lower than the first one).


Ikr. My high school final exam was exactly like that. XD I remember what my lecturer told me. Something that goes like

"This is the American system. You work hard all year round. It's not like the British system, where you play all year long, and at the end of the year, you die."

Ahaha, he's right. I have my exams around January, and then again in June. The people a year below me have exams only in June, and I think the people above me have exams in Jan and June too. I prefer it like this XD. I don't die.

This is NEWS! You do, seriously? Woah =D
I know, it was a massive shock to me too.

Yeah. But how do you know she's intelligent? :p
Because the stats say she is.


I finished the octa charts for all the the canon captains earlier today.
But I'm not totally sure if Ant wants me to post them just yet... >.>
Just in case anybody disagreed with the stats, I'd rather that happen and then you make it, rather than making the charts and having to remake some because we changed a few numbers. But it seems like everyone's okay with this...


Kind of the thing I don't like about how you analyze the stats.
I think the charts should reflect each individual and not aim for some common average/area/etc.
But that's just my opinion, which I think is what Kubo was doing. :p
Yeah, but I'd rather that not everyone's stats are all over the place, like Kubo's are. It sort of gives everybody ranks in the club to say "X is stronger than Y", while I think we should all be on kind of equal footing, or at least very close to each other (which is why this time, I gave a few different numbers).

Do the math.
Can I? 8D



You love this, so much.
ohyes.



...you do!?
I-I just don't know what to say anymore...
You think you know a person and they spring THIS on you!
I-I-I have no idea who you are anymore!
ohyou


Welcome back to Numbers with ILP!
Today we're going to calculate the ratio, area and percentage of the Captain's Data Charts!
Wha-today?! *Cough* Alright, give me 5 minutes to set up all my spreadsheets...


And in Rex irl news: DAYS UNTIL NEW TO ME CAR: 7
Awesome.


Oh OH OHHHH. The 4th Bleach Movie: The Hell Chapter is SUBBED. 8D *goes off to watch*
I'll... watch that later. Some time this year.

Northern Lights
27th August 2011, 5:49 PM
@My Fanfic: No progress. I haven't even had time to sit down in front of a computer until today, everything I've done on Serebii has been from my phone, and I'm not happy about it. In addition, I realized that I'd forgotten to copy my notes onto my USB drive, so I'll have to wait for Labor Day weekend (the first time I'll be going home) before I can even start :/

*Sad Face*


This is SO cool *reminds self to do it when exams are over*

You still have Exams? O.o


I see XD I only played, what, 2 or 3 TLoZ games and in all those, all the fairies ever did was replenish your health. And give you bigger bomb bags. Ooh, and a silver bow arrow, in the case of a very fat fairy. XD

She's constantly going "Hey, Listen" or something like that, she's even fairly annoying in the Manga too, only less insistant XD


allright, sorry for my absence but the rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated

... there were no rumours about your death


ON WITH THE SHOW
this is only part 1 of this chapter due to the sheer length of it, and the fact that i'm tired as hell


That's two pages worth in Microsoft Word, and it's mostly dialogue, not that long at all, you clearly havn't seen Dauc or Eon's fics, you also don't need a line of space between each line of text, you only have spaces between lines of speech.
- where's the setting? the descriptions? the actions of the characters?
A story that's just carries on a rather vague plot needs to make it up with the quality of writing.


Blue managed to block most of them, but the flash of light each strike delivered made it difficult. Letting some strikes come within a hairs breadth of her neck.
For a while they continued to duel like this, as the sun slowly started to sink down, it came to night.
They both stopped for a moment, breathing heavily out of exhaustion.

Blue is a Captain, Jaku, as merely a seated officer would not stand a chance; Jaku would be dead before he knew the battle had started.


^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

XD That is the funniest thing i've read all day.
Gotta agree with the rant though, I never consider Plagerism of Original Content to be "flattering" it's just plain aggrivating and ... somewhat dissapointing to a certain degree, that people believe others won't notice.


And in Rex irl news: DAYS UNTIL NEW TO ME CAR: 7

WHAT CAR ARE YOU GETTING?!

In Other News:

http://i54.*******.com/29uysmq.jpg

Ah, the joys of clubbing...are you gonna bango?


so i hear you went to a srtip club my dear
and that you passed out :P

Strip Club yes, they're like bloody gymnasts - Passed out? b*tch please.
I have quite a high alcohol tolerance, Esha was the one that was weaving all over the place, Me and the Boys had to look after her for heavens sakes, just when I started dancing to the heavy bass she started crashing ... oh well

Da14u.C
27th August 2011, 6:17 PM
Nope
http://assets0.ordienetworks.com/images/GifGuide/DealWithIt/30wphfo.jpg.gif


GIF WAR!!!

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_loa4gzIYEW1qj9yz6.gif
tried to deal with it, and failed!
but on a more positive note:

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lq9n76Ljd71qazx4ao5_250.gif




The zanpakutou suits the person - and I am not a dramatic person. In a fight, if I want a power-up, I want it to come quickly. Seriousbusiness.

you have really terrible excuses :|





Well I'm glad you tried to find a polite way to say it XD
Alright, so you think I should take it out. Does anyone else think that it would be better to just keep it for the sake of having a weakness, or do most people think I shouldn't have it because it doesn't fit.


"for the sake of having a weakness"

ok, i get that when we all make a zan, we make sure it has weaknesses so that we arent all being god. but the way this is being done is stupid. the way it should happen is someone come sup with a zanpaktou idea, a theme or whatever, and follows it through. every idea has weaknesses. leave it to others to find those weaknesses. I dont advertise the weaknesses of my zan, but if you look carefully enough, i am sure you will find some. NL doenst advertise her weaknesses, just her limitations. i could go on. you and arc are going about the whole weaknesses thing the wrong way. you do not "add"weaknesses, you just let others determine them and accept thm. some people will have naturally more powerful zan's than others. compare aizen and soifon to people like Ukitake and Komamura. it does not mean that you shoudl just randomly add weaknesses for the sake of having a weakness!




Because he is. I wonder how many times we've told you that Golde is a boy. The funny thing is, is that it's just you who thinks that Golde is a girl XD.

wow..... i keep on forgetting for some reason :/




Aaaand I'm in the States. Woohoo Just got here today to discover not even a single page had added since I last posted

Welcome to North America



Why do YOU refer to Golde as a girl?

well, i thought she was.....



Pfffft. That just means you start thinking even when you were a spermatozoa in your father's seminiferous tubules. :p
yupyup!!!
my soul is older than that though :D
my soul was born at the dawn of time and floated, learning, thinking, growing for eons, until it popped into my sexy embryo




I think that was the nerdiest thing I've heard you said (besides our conversation entirely in Chess notation).

you have the weakest definition of nerd i have ever seen. Arc has said plenty of nerdy things. PLENTY of nerdy things :P



I grew up in a military family, I can't help it ;P


i love military families! most of my friends before i came back to canada are military kids. i grew up in a peace keeping family, so i lived in countries that arent the most... habitable xD




Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *dies* I don't even want to think about exams now, I have so much on my plate as it is.

GAAAAAAHHHHH
same here :(



I did with his first one; gave him a few pointers and said "go". That didn't work so well. I'm letting him change it around the time I turn 19, in October, and I will be designing it with his ideas, heavily supervising the process and making sure it's a Zan he'll be happy with for a while.
yeah... good luck with that. i look forward to when i pop back next may to see what he has come up with




This is SO cool *reminds self to do it when exams are over*


to do what?







At the words of this sudden prophecy, many of the captains began to talk. The only silent one being Captain Blue, of squad 11. Her face showed that she was annoyed by the fact that people were scared. In a fit of rage, she stormed out of the meeting room.

"Enough!" Golde said, silencing all with his booming voice.

"Take Garra to the infirmary, we'll need more information when he wakes up, that said, if we can find where these 'knights' are holed up, we can send a team in for a preemtive strike. I will send Captain Rouga Kouken of squad 7, as well as 5 lieutenants in."

"Excuse me, sir, but aren't you overestimating them? Sending in a captain and five lieutenants to combat them?" captain Ant said.

"At this time I'm afraid we're underestimating them." Golde said with a sigh. He had an obvious look of both strain and frustration on his face, the way he looks when he needs his mid-afternoon candy.

"Sir, let me go too." Jaku said, stepping up.

"Absolutely not."

"But I fought one of them, I can help."

"It is true, but you lost had to revert to your hollow form, were brutally injured, and nearly cost us the lives of three captains. The fact that you haven't been demoted or worse, or that I still let you live is a ****ing miracle. That being the case, you are put on probation, and banned from using you zanpakuto until further notice. Do I make myself clear?"

"Yes, captain." Jaku said, clenching his hands into fists. He had to go, he couldn't let anything bad happen again, yet, maybe captain Golde is right, maybe he should just let it pass.

"Jaku, go see what is bothering captain blue and report back to me."

Jaku nodded and proceeded to the squad 11 barracks, a 5th seat there said that she went to her quarters after knocking out several squad members and crushing a boulder with her bare hands.

Jaku knocked on the door. "Captain Blue, are you in there?"

There was no answer.

Jaku, knowing he would probably regret it, opened the door.

The events of what happens next are very vulgar and blurred by Jaku's memory, it is recounted in the simplest way possible.

Jaku opened the door to find the captain taking a shower, a chill ran up is spine along with the thought. "God damnit you ****ing idiot."

A little ways away, Ant was carrying some books to his lab when he heard a booming noise, and saw a huge dust cloud over squad 11, he then saw a oddly shaped object flying out of the dust cloud straight at him.

The force of it hit the captain like a bus.

"Oh God Jaku, you really gotta stop laying off the chocolate man, and why are you wet? Jaku?"

Jaku's face was dumbfounded and awestruck, accompanied by several lines of blood dripping down his face as well.

Ant threw Jaku off and looked at him. Jaku still had that strange look on his face.

"I have seen the fist of God." was all he could mutter out.

Ant looked over to see Blue running at him. She stopped and started kicking Jaku's body.

"You ****ing pervert! What are you thinking walking in on me like that!"

"I'm sorry, I knocked but you didn't answer!"

"Excuses!" she yelled as she continued to kick him while he was down.

"Blue, if you continue you'll probably kill him, don't you think you should stop?"

"No."

Ant looked at her.

"Fine." She said, putting one more kick into Jaku's face before picking him up.

They stood Jaku back on his feet. His expression still hadn't changed, so Blue slapped it off him.

"Oh, thanks!"

Blue slapped him again. "I liked you better when you sat there like a retard. So, if I really want to kill you, I'll just have to fight you."

A few hours later. . .

People were gathered all around in preparation of Jaku and Blue's fight. Captain Golde walked forward.

"All right, these two imbeciles wish to have a fight to the death in order to settle a score." Golde cringed. "This will be a no holds barred fight, but if it gets too dangerous, I will have to step in."

"Don't worry, he'll be dead before he even draws his sword." Blue said.

Jaku's right hands rested on the hilt of his sword, as he put his tactical glasses in place. "So I guess we'll start with regular swordplay then, huh? Well then again, who am I to judge a captain." Jaku grabbed the hilt of his blade and held it back up his arm. "It's show time."

In a flash Jaku lunged at Blue, swiping his sword down in a head-splitter. Blue reacted by quickly blocking the blade just inches from her skull.

Blue looked down at Jaku's other hand, and her eyes widened.

"Tenran!" Jaku yelled, as a cyclone of spiritual energy blasted at blue, knocking her back as her feet skidded on the stone.

"That was a dirty trick." she said.

"It is no holds barred, remember?"

Jaku quickly moved into flash-step, several after images appeared behind him, telling blue where he is going to strike.

She twisted backwards, just fast enough to slash Jaku in the stomach, and then, he disappeared.

"Gotcha." Blue heard in her ear as Jaku threw a powerful punch into her back.

Blue skidded to a halt. "What was that, you could've killed me right there!"

"I could have, but this is just too much fun!"

This time Blue reacted first, slashing at Jaku as he blocked with the wide edge of his scimitar. Jaku parried and threw a wide slash at Blue's right side, which he dodged with ease.

Blue flash stepped above Jaku and sent a powerful kick into his lower jaw, sending him flying backwards.

Jaku stood up and wiped the blood off his lip. "You could've killed me too."

"What can I say, this is fun."

Jaku chuckled, then threw another strike at Blue.

Not having time to react, Blue dodged just as the blade sliced off a locke of her hair.

Blue jumped backwards. "You've forced me into this. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!"

Blue's sword turned pitch black, and lengthened a bit.

"Now, you're ****ed."

Blue quickly leaped at Jaku, he blocked the slash, just as she slipped into the shadow of a nearby building.

"Where is she?"

Blue jumped out of Jaku's shadow and slashed at his back.

Jaku fell forward, pain searing through his body. "I won't give up, not yet, not here! Blind them, Sukui o shainingu!"

Jaku's scimitar quickly changed into a long gun blade with a revolver on the hilt. Several sparks flew out of the barrel, and the blade seemed to shine with an ethereal power.

Blue continuously jumped in and out of the shadows, and slashing at Jaku. Some of the hits were blocked, but all the rest hit him.

After the flurry of attacks stopped, Jaku stood, hunched over in pain and exhaustion.

Jaku pushed up his shades. "I'm not done yet." Jaku threw off his tattered trench coat, revealing a white t-shirt that seemed to be glowing from his zanpakuto's light.

Jaku looked up. "I'm not gonna let this pain stop me!"

In a flash Jaku appeared in front of Blue. Reacting, blue locked her blade against his.

"Big mistake." Jaku said, looking down.

Blue's blade was on the top edge of Jaku's.

Jaku pulled the trigger.

The force of the bullet nearly threw the sword out of Blue's hands.

"No more opening for you." Blue said as she slipped into the shadows.

"Time to hit everywhere at once, Kajō-gaki no arashi!" Jaku said, jumping into the air as hundreds of bullets flashed out of his gun in all directions, searing away the shadows and revealing blue.

"Furasshu aitsugu!" Jaku yelled as he flashed in front of blue, letting loose dozens of strikes from his sword in a matter of seconds.

Blue managed to block most of them, but the flash of light each strike delivered made it difficult. Letting some strikes come within a hairs breadth of her neck.

For a while they continued to duel like this, as the sun slowly started to sink down, it came to night.

They both stopped for a moment, breathing heavily out of exhaustion.

"This is my time now." Blue said as the darkness of night fell all around them. "Dark Jumper, Kokuchouyaku Senshu!" she said, as her blade lengthened a bit more, all the shadows seemed to creep closer around Jaku, as a devilish grin appeared on Blue's face.

this made me LOL



^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

I can name at least five situations/lines that are copied almost verbatim from my fanfic, if not more. Golde laying down the law, the "aren't you overestimating them; right now I'm afraid I'm underestimating them" dialogue, Jaku getting turned down to go on the mission (same thing that happened to Kai in my fanfic), not to mention that you have Blue fighting you and the "now you're ****ed" and "this is my time/domain" lines, which I also used. And the bit about swordplay. And the "this is a no-holds barred fight" thing. And the multiple officers being sent to combat the enemy bit.

^ The list just keeps going, and I'm not happy about it. If there's one thing I will not tolerate, it's someone plagurizing my work. You were just getting on my nerves before, but you can officially consider yourself on thin ice. If you pull some stunt like this again, or something else that we disapprove of, I'll have to suspend you from the Squad until you prove that you're a worthy member. If you can't think up your own ****, don't ****ing copy someone else's just to make it work.

*sigh* Ok, rant over. We will now return to the scheduled program.
this made me LOL harder
you are still polite even when yelling at the kid :P a few vulgarities, but essentiually, polite. like a teacher scolding a pupil





In Other News:

http://i54.*******.com/29uysmq.jpg

Ah, the joys of clubbing...are you gonna bango?

so i hear you went to a srtip club my dear :D
and that you passed out :P

its so interesting when people cant hold in their liquor :P and was it a male or female strip club?
and did u get some girl on girl action? if so, DO U HAVE PICTURES?????



so on a more random note, i havent been on much. ILP knows why. sigh (but in a good way). lots of good things happening in my life atm.



Damn Straight!



She is the nicest and most feared Captain, who is the medic and the mother to them all.
Do the math.



i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?

kusari
27th August 2011, 9:23 PM
^ Luke, what in the name of Christ's holy left testicle do you think you're doing?!

Best thing I've heard all day.



A story that's just carries on a rather vague plot needs to make it up with the quality of writing.

What plot?



Strip Club yes, they're like bloody gymnasts - Passed out? b*tch please.
I have quite a high alcohol tolerance, Esha was the one that was weaving all over the place, Me and the Boys had to look after her for heavens sakes, just when I started dancing to the heavy bass she started crashing ... oh well
Correction. This is the best thing I've heard all day. NL, you and I need to hang out.


i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?
NO. NEIN. NYET. NE. ARANGKWA. DAH. KEKA. LE. UGUI.


Last night when I logged onto Serebii, I noticed I had recieved a VM. This is what it said:

You gonna post in the Bleach Club? I don't want you to miss the shitstorm that's happening from Luke's latest chapter.
Now, I'm going to post.

Disclaimer: Kusari's rant may include language that is not suitable for young children.

To begin, allow me to say that this rant will be getting everything off my chest, in regards to Luke. I have refrained from writing a giant rant due to Luke being Eon's subordinate and going off could possibly have put my friendship with Eon in jeporady. However, due to Eon also taking offense to this most recent issue and giving Luke a stern word himself, I feel like I think it would be at least a bit okay to do so myself.

Luke, when you first joined and Eon recognized you as a friend, I thought "oh, this guy knows Eon, so he's probably an OK guy". You quickly proved that wrong. The issue that began your decline in my eyes was the suggestion of starting a new club. At that point, I believe many of use have started looking at you pretty tenatively. From that point on, you only sabotaged yourself even further.

You have shown multiple times that when something you have done wrong has been pointed out or you have been told "no" to something, you completely ignore anyone's comments and input and continue on doing whatever the hell you feel like doing. Personally, I've had enough this ****.

Multiple people told you that we weren't okay with you creating a new zanpakuto, yet you came in with this overpowered monstrosity that everyone disapproved of. Your response "I guess I need to tweak it a bit". That's not what we meant, we meant "No". After being told "No" and agreeing to keep your current zan for the time being, I thought: "This is good. Maybe this kind of progress will continue and we'll be without issue anymore."

That thought, however, was sadly shattered in to an infinite amount of minute pieces. You pulled, what I believe to be, the ultimate in all ***hole moves when it comes to writing. You blatently plagerized someone else's work. To make it worse, he was your captain and seemed to have been at least an aquaintence to you, before you joined this club. That's extremely bad and you should feel extremely bad.

Using that last paragraph as a segue, let's get to the eternally-spiraling black hole of what-the-**** that you you call a fic. I would first like to address the issue of your so called "plot", if it so can be called. To lead us off, the fact that your idea is way too cliche. The whole Four Horseman idea has been done many, many, many times before. Unless your's was going to be spectacularlly different from the rest, you should have come up with something else. I get the feeling that you don't plan things out in advance. I mean you started with hunting for the skull guy, followed by a severely uneeded crossover (this will be covered more in depth further on into the rant), into some crazy ******** with an Arrancar and the skull guy reappearing out of ****ing nowhere. Add in a bunch of fights written very half assly and you have a massive fustercluck and no one can figure out what the hell is going on. You seem to be filling the story with uneeded fluff just so you can get to your last few chapters and wrap the "plot" up.

Moving on, let's hit upon the issue that I refer to as "Disregarding Standards". This is the portion of the rant that I focus on your tendency to ignore standards set about by the canon. Before any complaining is done, I do know that this a fanfiction and it has some authority to alter the standards slightly. Your's takes these alterations and rockets off the scale of acceptance. It began in the first chapter with inconsistance in the personality of a canon character (the whole "You don't talk back to Byakuya" fiasco).

The corrosion continued with in the most recent chapter. Your whole "forcing Blue to release her zan" made me laugh my *** off. She's one of the strongest club captains and you're you. It seems that you're so incredibly dense that you skipped the face that even a minor increase in her reiatsu would most likely be enought to cripple you severely. So again I laugh

Another nice little piece of your ignorance are the names of the characters Carlos and Rose. Generally, most residents of the Soul Society have a Japanese name. Yes there are some exceptions but the trend is generally followed and it pressed a point with me. Not the biggest thing but still breaking standards.

You want more? My pleasure. Jaku's a vizard/visored who Golde just so happens to be cool with. Major ********. I've pointed it out before that as soon as Golde knew that you were a visored he would have ordered you killed and sent to ILPy for experimentation. The only reason the canon visoreds are still alive, is due to the fact that Urahara helped them escape from the Soul Society.

My final take on "Disregarding Standards" is your dodging of the fact that you generally have to be dead to go to the Soul Society. With the characters of Jaku and Rose, you regard them as living humans who chose to go to the Soul Society, as if it were a country you could just drive to. Sadly, this ain't Asgard and there ain't no Bifrost.

Now, onto an issue I promised to get to earlier. The pretty goddamn uneeded crossover. You interjected this already plotless story with a severely out of place and Deus-Ex-Machina sounding crossover. It seems as if you only included that little collection of scenes to attempt to justify the visored transformation. But, as it turns out, you failed in that department. Crossovers normally work better if it's a full on fusion of the two fandoms and not a short, chapter-and-a-half interruption that took time that could have been better used. It was basically just more of the fluff I mentioned earlier.

All in all, it should be obvious that I'm not fond of your mechanations. By this point you've just become an epic troll and are getting to be rather annoying. By this reasoning, I believe that if you force Eon's hand into suspending you, none of us will stand up to defend you.

And with that, my rant is complete.

Eon Master
27th August 2011, 11:35 PM
MASSIVE QUOTE POST ALERT.


*Sad Face*

I know, I'm doing the same thing.


You still have Exams? O.o

He just moved into his dorm, of course not xD


She's constantly going "Hey, Listen" or something like that, she's even fairly annoying in the Manga too, only less insistant XD

Ikr. Midna was so much better as a partner. The article is actually pretty funny, I'll see if I can't dig it up somewhere.


... there were no rumours about your death

hides crappy rumor mill


That's two pages worth in Microsoft Word, and it's mostly dialogue, not that long at all, you clearly havn't seen Dauc or Eon's fics, you also don't need a line of space between each line of text, you only have spaces between lines of speech.
- where's the setting? the descriptions? the actions of the characters?
A story that's just carries on a rather vague plot needs to make it up with the quality of writing.

This time about a thousand. In addition to all I've said.

And in case you're thinking of pulling the "I was inspired" card, lemee give you something, Luke.

http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRsvTvJY-QGsD7pJL-Bh8eGSb-zhUykhok9zij5bi29eUuzIVBm

^ This is basically what you did here.


Blue is a Captain, Jaku, as merely a seated officer would not stand a chance; Jaku would be dead before he knew the battle had started.

More like before Blue even drew her sword. She's not just a Captain, she's the effing Kenpachi. She could probably break his neck with a single *****slap.


XD That is the funniest thing i've read all day.

Hahaha, a pleasure, as always xD


Gotta agree with the rant though, I never consider Plagerism of Original Content to be "flattering" it's just plain aggrivating and ... somewhat dissapointing to a certain degree, that people believe others won't notice.

Ikr. I honestly can't think of anything else more annoying.


In Other News:

http://i54.*******.com/29uysmq.jpg

Ah, the joys of clubbing...are you gonna bango?

Oh f*ck yes.


Strip Club yes, they're like bloody gymnasts - Passed out? b*tch please.

Ok, now I seriously want to go clubbing.


I have quite a high alcohol tolerance, Esha was the one that was weaving all over the place, Me and the Boys had to look after her for heavens sakes, just when I started dancing to the heavy bass she started crashing ... oh well

Gah, I hate it when your friends are such lightweights... I'm used to heavy drinks, and my friends are driking lite beer. LITE. F*CKING. BEER. It's ridiculous, and they get drunk after like, four. I can drown four straight shots of whiskey in an hour and barely feel tipsy, damn it. Need to find someone who can at least attempt to keep up with me... stupid genetic tolerance for alcohol...


GIF WAR!!!

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_loa4gzIYEW1qj9yz6.gif
tried to deal with it, and failed!
but on a more positive note:

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lq9n76Ljd71qazx4ao5_250.gif

Psh, pansy... :D


Welcome to North America

Specifically, New York. Home of the crowds and some of the crappiest weather this side of the Arctic.


well, i thought she was.....

Clearly, you still do. Either that, or you're "forgetting" on purpose.


yupyup!!!
my soul is older than that though :D
my soul was born at the dawn of time and floated, learning, thinking, growing for eons, until it popped into my sexy embryo

Jeez, no wonder he talks so much, stuck that long without being able to talk to anyone xD


you have the weakest definition of nerd i have ever seen. Arc has said plenty of nerdy things. PLENTY of nerdy things :P

Smart and nerdy are entirely seperate adjectives. I've known nerds who are actually complete idiots.


i love military families! most of my friends before i came back to canada are military kids. i grew up in a peace keeping family, so i lived in countries that arent the most... habitable xD

Hospitable? And haha, my siblings are worse than me. My little brother is on his way to becoming a shavetail Lieutenant in the USMC (now he's a military genius), and my sister is going to become an Air Force medic. I disassociated myself with most things military after PTSD drove my dad insane, but I still act like a drill sergeant or general at times.


GAAAAAAHHHHH
same here :(

*throws pity party and invites everyone*


yeah... good luck with that. i look forward to when i pop back next may to see what he has come up with

Might not even happen now.


to do what?

Die?


this made me LOL harder
you are still polite even when yelling at the kid :P a few vulgarities, but essentiually, polite. like a teacher scolding a pupil

Congratulations, you've picked up on the fact that I'm practicing for my chosen profession! XP


so i hear you went to a srtip club my dear :D
and that you passed out :P

I highly doubt Kida is that weak when it comes to holding her alcohol.


its so interesting when people cant hold in their liquor :P and was it a male or female strip club?

I don't agree... if someone can't hold their liquor, it's no fun to party with them.


and did u get some girl on girl action? if so, DO U HAVE PICTURES?????

...no comment.
Which reminds me, Kida, are you still in your lesbian mood from months ago that Rotrum quoted?

so on a more random note, i havent been on much. ILP knows why. sigh (but in a good way). lots of good things happening in my life atm.

Not fair. Why am I the only one with a lame-*** college life?


i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?

Long as you don't post it in the club. If you like that stuff, fine, but I don't want to see it.


Best thing I've heard all day.

Rofl, you should've seen what happened when I used that in real life.


What plot?

This.


Correction. This is the best thing I've heard all day. NL, you and I need to hang out.

Seconded. I'm game.


NO. NEIN. NYET. NE. ARANGKWA. DAH. KEKA. LE. UGUI.

After "NE" I thought you were just having a spaz attack for a minute xD


Last night when I logged onto Serebii, I noticed I had recieved a VM. This is what it said:

Now, I'm going to post.

*gets popcorn*


Disclaimer: Kusari's rant may include language that is not suitable for young children.

Most people this even pertains to aren't gonna care.


To begin, allow me to say that this rant will be getting everything off my chest, in regards to Luke. I have refrained from writing a giant rant due to Luke being Eon's subordinate and going off could possibly have put my friendship with Eon in jeporady. However, due to Eon also taking offense to this most recent issue and giving Luke a stern word himself, I feel like I think it would be at least a bit okay to do so myself.

Luke, when you first joined and Eon recognized you as a friend, I thought "oh, this guy knows Eon, so he's probably an OK guy". You quickly proved that wrong. The issue that began your decline in my eyes was the suggestion of starting a new club. At that point, I believe many of use have started looking at you pretty tenatively. From that point on, you only sabotaged yourself even further.

You have shown multiple times that when something you have done wrong has been pointed out or you have been told "no" to something, you completely ignore anyone's comments and input and continue on doing whatever the hell you feel like doing. Personally, I've had enough this ****.

Multiple people told you that we weren't okay with you creating a new zanpakuto, yet you came in with this overpowered monstrosity that everyone disapproved of. Your response "I guess I need to tweak it a bit". That's not what we meant, we meant "No". After being told "No" and agreeing to keep your current zan for the time being, I thought: "This is good. Maybe this kind of progress will continue and we'll be without issue anymore."

That thought, however, was sadly shattered in to an infinite amount of minute pieces. You pulled, what I believe to be, the ultimate in all ***hole moves when it comes to writing. You blatently plagerized someone else's work. To make it worse, he was your captain and seemed to have been at least an aquaintence to you, before you joined this club. That's extremely bad and you should feel extremely bad.

Using that last paragraph as a segue, let's get to the eternally-spiraling black hole of what-the-**** that you you call a fic. I would first like to address the issue of your so called "plot", if it so can be called. To lead us off, the fact that your idea is way too cliche. The whole Four Horseman idea has been done many, many, many times before. Unless your's was going to be spectacularlly different from the rest, you should have come up with something else. I get the feeling that you don't plan things out in advance. I mean you started with hunting for the skull guy, followed by a severely uneeded crossover (this will be covered more in depth further on into the rant), into some crazy ******** with an Arrancar and the skull guy reappearing out of ****ing nowhere. Add in a bunch of fights written very half assly and you have a massive fustercluck and no one can figure out what the hell is going on. You seem to be filling the story with uneeded fluff just so you can get to your last few chapters and wrap the "plot" up.

Moving on, let's hit upon the issue that I refer to as "Disregarding Standards". This is the portion of the rant that I focus on your tendency to ignore standards set about by the canon. Before any complaining is done, I do know that this a fanfiction and it has some authority to alter the standards slightly. Your's takes these alterations and rockets off the scale of acceptance. It began in the first chapter with inconsistance in the personality of a canon character (the whole "You don't talk back to Byakuya" fiasco).

The corrosion continued with in the most recent chapter. Your whole "forcing Blue to release her zan" made me laugh my *** off. She's one of the strongest club captains and you're you. It seems that you're so incredibly dense that you skipped the face that even a minor increase in her reiatsu would most likely be enought to cripple you severely. So again I laugh

Another nice little piece of your ignorance are the names of the characters Carlos and Rose. Generally, most residents of the Soul Society have a Japanese name. Yes there are some exceptions but the trend is generally followed and it pressed a point with me. Not the biggest thing but still breaking standards.

You want more? My pleasure. Jaku's a vizard/visored who Golde just so happens to be cool with. Major ********. I've pointed it out before that as soon as Golde knew that you were a visored he would have ordered you killed and sent to ILPy for experimentation. The only reason the canon visoreds are still alive, is due to the fact that Urahara helped them escape from the Soul Society.

My final take on "Disregarding Standards" is your dodging of the fact that you generally have to be dead to go to the Soul Society. With the characters of Jaku and Rose, you regard them as living humans who chose to go to the Soul Society, as if it were a country you could just drive to. Sadly, this ain't Asgard and there ain't no Bifrost.

Now, onto an issue I promised to get to earlier. The pretty goddamn uneeded crossover. You interjected this already plotless story with a severely out of place and Deus-Ex-Machina sounding crossover. It seems as if you only included that little collection of scenes to attempt to justify the visored transformation. But, as it turns out, you failed in that department. Crossovers normally work better if it's a full on fusion of the two fandoms and not a short, chapter-and-a-half interruption that took time that could have been better used. It was basically just more of the fluff I mentioned earlier.

All in all, it should be obvious that I'm not fond of your mechanations. By this point you've just become an epic troll and are getting to be rather annoying. By this reasoning, I believe that if you force Eon's hand into suspending you, none of us will stand up to defend you.

And with that, my rant is complete.

*reads along, nodding* I agree with most of that, if not all of that. I also thought Luke had improved vastly (as when I first knew him, he was a complete moron), and was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt and allow him into my squad. Sure, he was still a little spazzy... but this is just getting ridiculous.

Consider this your last warning, Luke. Also, you might just want to cancel your fanfic and try learning how to write (and about Bleach) before you try this sort of thing again.

Done for the day. Time for some serious clubbing waaaaay later.

PKMN Trainer Rex
28th August 2011, 5:36 AM
I'll try. XD People did give advice to go out and have fun, because if you're not, you'll be gloomy and stressed up.

New city, new people. Might as well enjoy yourself.




XD I think he said it should be up around what, August 28-ish until September 5-ish, IIRC.


That sounds about right. I'd dig around for the actual quote but I'm lazy.



Cool!




Awesome.


Yup.



WHAT CAR ARE YOU GETTING?!

A 90's Acura Integra DA. My older brother is giving it to us for free, to save us (me and my younger bro) from whatever car our dad buys.



In Other News:

http://i54.*******.com/29uysmq.jpg

Ah, the joys of clubbing...are you gonna bango?


http://www.gifbin.com/bin/163563561.gif

DANCE!!


GIF WAR!!!

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_loa4gzIYEW1qj9yz6.gif
tried to deal with it, and failed!

http://www.threadbombing.com/data/media/2/asian_loser.gif




but on a more positive note:
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lq9n76Ljd71qazx4ao5_250.gif


http://www.halolz.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/halolz-dot-com-nope.avi.gif
Again.

Zameric
28th August 2011, 7:18 AM
Alright, so here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12199217) are the octa BDCs for the canon captains.
Hope ya all enjoy these. I wonder what Kubo would think of these...


i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?
Hell no...


Gah, I hate it when your friends are such lightweights... I'm used to heavy drinks, and my friends are driking lite beer. LITE. F*CKING. BEER. It's ridiculous, and they get drunk after like, four. I can drown four straight shots of whiskey in an hour and barely feel tipsy, damn it. Need to find someone who can at least attempt to keep up with me... stupid genetic tolerance for alcohol...

...no comment.
Which reminds me, Kida, are you still in your lesbian mood from months ago that Rotrum quoted?
Does Rootbeer count? 8D

I can't help but snicker at this question...

arceus03
28th August 2011, 11:57 AM
Ahaha, he's right. I have my exams around January, and then again in June. The people a year below me have exams only in June, and I think the people above me have exams in Jan and June too. I prefer it like this XD. I don't die.

She Of course you don't, you're a cyborg. o.o


Because the stats say she is.

She doesn't have a stat. We were talking about Yoruichi. Not Unohana. XD



You still have Exams? O.o

Nah :p Not yet anyway Just a mental reminder XP


She's constantly going "Hey, Listen" or something like that, she's even fairly annoying in the Manga too, only less insistant XD

Ah. XD The only manga of TLoZ I read was about the Minish Cap, I think. Even that one was unfinished. XD


... there were no rumours about your death


XDD indeed



but on a more positive note:

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lq9n76Ljd71qazx4ao5_250.gif

I like this XD


you and arc are going about the whole weaknesses thing the wrong way. you do not "add"weaknesses, you just let others determine them and accept thm.

Pssssh. You're contradicting yourself. Remember what you said?


you are lucky that my zan can defeat yours, or i would be hammering you to make a legitimate weakness


Welcome to North America

Thankyou =D


you have the weakest definition of nerd i have ever seen. Arc has said plenty of nerdy things. PLENTY of nerdy things :P

I have? o.o


to do what?

To do what you said. I.e



ooooh, if you are sending this now, i am scared to see what you will send when i post at the end of apr2012 going "EXAMS DONE!!!!!" and you havent even started yours yet :p


to shout that to Eon


i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?

......
Oooooh! That sounds so...

NO

:p



And with that, my rant is complete.

*hearty applause*

Just for the note, Luke, we don't hate you. We hate what you're doing.


New city, new people. Might as well enjoy yourself.

Indeed


That sounds about right. I'd dig around for the actual quote but I'm lazy.

We all are


A 90's Acura Integra DA. My older brother is giving it to us for free, to save us (me and my younger bro) from whatever car our dad buys.

Cool


DANCE

I saw a pedobear dancing. I must be having a fever. Ooooh.


Alright, so here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12199217) are the octa BDCs for the canon captains.


I demand that Unohana got 800 total. That is all
Cool!

Oh, I just got around to watching the latest episode. 8D
I just wonder how they all were saved. >.> But meh, fights next episode!

I like Pokemon (...)
28th August 2011, 4:48 PM
http://i54.*******.com/29uysmq.jpg
That .gif is... hypnotising...

ok, i get that when we all make a zan, we make sure it has weaknesses so that we arent all being god. but the way this is being done is stupid. the way it should happen is someone come sup with a zanpaktou idea, a theme or whatever, and follows it through. every idea has weaknesses. leave it to others to find those weaknesses. I dont advertise the weaknesses of my zan, but if you look carefully enough, i am sure you will find some. NL doenst advertise her weaknesses, just her limitations. i could go on. you and arc are going about the whole weaknesses thing the wrong way. you do not "add"weaknesses, you just let others determine them and accept thm. some people will have naturally more powerful zan's than others. compare aizen and soifon to people like Ukitake and Komamura. it does not mean that you shoudl just randomly add weaknesses for the sake of having a weakness!
Alright, alright, it's out.



you have the weakest definition of nerd i have ever seen. Arc has said plenty of nerdy things. PLENTY of nerdy things :P
Yes, I know, it was a joke :p



i really wnat to write a yaoi fic with you and arc as main characters....
fire&water
pain&healing
male-male love
thriple forbidden.....

can i have ya'lls permission?
I just laughed so much.

Disclaimer: Kusari's rant may include language that is not suitable for young children.

And with that, my rant is complete.
10/10

Gah, I hate it when your friends are such lightweights... I'm used to heavy drinks, and my friends are driking lite beer. LITE. F*CKING. BEER. It's ridiculous, and they get drunk after like, four. I can drown four straight shots of whiskey in an hour and barely feel tipsy, damn it. Need to find someone who can at least attempt to keep up with me... stupid genetic tolerance for alcohol...
Which reminds me, when we have the MASSIVE IRL BLEACH CLUB MEETING, I'm going to make everyone mad drunk and bring a few cameras Of course, Arc, Kai, a few others and I are designated drivers


Done for the day. Time for some serious clubbing waaaaay later.
Is it bad that when you guys are talking about "clubbing" I think of posting in this thread?


Alright, so here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12199217) are the octa BDCs for the canon captains.
Hope ya all enjoy these. I wonder what Kubo would think of these...
Awe
Some.

You know what this means, right? STAT ANALYSIS COMING RIGHT UP!
Mayuri's stats look like an hourglass



She Of course you don't, you're a cyborg. o.o
For some reason, I was sure you said he. I must've misread 8D

She doesn't have a stat. We were talking about Yoruichi. Not Unohana. XD
I know, I was trying to be contradicting:
"She's smart"
"How do you know"
"Her stats say so"
"But you made those up"
"Yeah, but she's smart, so it fits."

/fail


Just for the note, Luke, we don't hate you. We hate what you're doing.

Exactly. My biggest suggestion for you is to get MSN, and talk with us. You can learn what to do and what not to do by asking us. If you're ever unsure of something (this includes zanpakutou and fanfiction) then you can ask us about it and stop something like what just happened from happening again.

minchan
28th August 2011, 10:27 PM
GUYS. THIS PICTURE IS AWESOME. (IMO)

http://i.imgur.com/eCZXM.jpg

It shows the Bleach movie poster! (And also, it shows my favorite J-pop idol group, Morning Musume, on their new concert poster!!!)

I found this image posted on a forum dedicated to Hello! Project (the group of groups in which Morning Musume is a part of) and I wanted to share it here, too, since it nicely displays the Bleach movie poster. =)

Also, the octagonal charts... Those seem pretty interesting. How are you guys figuring that stuff out, anyway?

MasterCharizard15
29th August 2011, 4:22 AM
MASSIVE QUOTE POST ALERT.
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Woo.


hides crappy rumor mill

I saw that.





More like before Blue even drew her sword. She's not just a Captain, she's the effing Kenpachi. She could probably break his neck with a single *****slap.

Agreed. Aren't we all glad she's on our side? 8D



Ikr. I honestly can't think of anything else more annoying.
Failed Sarcastic joke fails.

I agree. It also makes me wish the writer they stole from was making the story I was reading.




Ok, now I seriously want to go clubbing.
You, Zam, Kusari and...ILp.
Remember, Ilp wants you all drunk. ALL OF YOU!


Gah, I hate it when your friends are such lightweights... I'm used to heavy drinks, and my friends are driking lite beer. LITE. F*CKING. BEER. It's ridiculous, and they get drunk after like, four. I can drown four straight shots of whiskey in an hour and barely feel tipsy, damn it. Need to find someone who can at least attempt to keep up with me... stupid genetic tolerance for alcohol...

...I have no idea what my tolerance is. :/




I don't agree... if someone can't hold their liquor, it's no fun to party with them.

Got to keep them from puking on your shoes...in your closet.



Not fair. Why am I the only one with a lame-*** college life?

Since your awesome, that's why.




Done for the day. Time for some serious clubbing waaaaay later.
Labor Day weekend or later than that...like Thanksgiving? *shot*


New city, new people. Might as well enjoy yourself.

Yup.




A 90's Acura Integra DA. My older brother is giving it to us for free, to save us (me and my younger bro) from whatever car our dad buys.

Sweet, hope it drives well.



Alright, so here (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12199217) are the octa BDCs for the canon captains.
Hope ya all enjoy these. I wonder what Kubo would think of these...

Hey, that kid with the fiunny hate is a fan!
Maybe...I should make a character wearing one of those!


Hell no...
That's one.



Does Rootbeer count? 8D
I can't help but snicker at this question...
Spikes it. Yes, yes it does. >.>


[FONT=Candara]
She doesn't have a stat. We were talking about Yoruichi. Not Unohana. XD


I think the fact we both think they're win confused him.



Just for the note, Luke, we don't hate you. We hate what you're doing.

Pretty much.








[QUOTE=I like Pokemon (...);13320974]I just laughed so much.
You and Eopn were no help on this. >.>



Which reminds me, when we have the MASSIVE IRL BLEACH CLUB MEETING, I'm going to make everyone mad drunk and bring a few cameras Of course, Arc, Kai, a few others and I are designated drivers[/QUOTE

Proof he wants us drunk.


[QUOTE=I like Pokemon (...);13320974]You know what this means, right? STAT ANALYSIS COMING RIGHT UP!
Mayuri's stats look like an hourglass

Saw that coming. XD



GUYS. THIS PICTURE IS AWESOME. (IMO)

http://i.imgur.com/eCZXM.jpg

It shows the Bleach movie poster! (And also, it shows my favorite J-pop idol group, Morning Musume, on their new concert poster!!!)

I found this image posted on a forum dedicated to Hello! Project (the group of groups in which Morning Musume is a part of) and I wanted to share it here, too, since it nicely displays the Bleach movie poster. =)

Also, the octagonal charts... Those seem pretty interesting. How are you guys figuring that stuff out, anyway?

Offical stats for the canon Captains, we got from the offical bootleg.
Our own stats we made up.
Zam makes the charts and Ilp does MATHS with them.

FanFic Update: 2nd Chapter is ready to post!

arceus03
29th August 2011, 7:00 AM
I was browsing through some of the older posts, and realized that ILPy has been an IckleLittlePervert long before we realized it.



Ichigo's a spiritual stud. He could probably handle two or three Fullbringers at the same time xD



And... Ohgod that mental image.



Which reminds me, when we have the MASSIVE IRL BLEACH CLUB MEETING, I'm going to make everyone mad drunk and bring a few cameras Of course, Arc, Kai, a few others and I are designated drivers

AND MARKER PENS!!


Is it bad that when you guys are talking about "clubbing" I think of posting in this thread?

No. I do that every time.


For some reason, I was sure you said he. I must've misread 8D

I was sure I didn't. Hm


I know, I was trying to be contradicting:
"She's smart"
"How do you know"
"Her stats say so"
"But you made those up"
"Yeah, but she's smart, so it fits."

/fail

Oh. Okay. XD


Exactly. My biggest suggestion for you is to get MSN, and talk with us. You can learn what to do and what not to do by asking us. If you're ever unsure of something (this includes zanpakutou and fanfiction) then you can ask us about it and stop something like what just happened from happening again.

Indeed



You, Zam, Kusari and...ILp.
Remember, Ilp wants you all drunk. ALL OF YOU!

AND YOU


...I have no idea what my tolerance is. :/

Me neither

@Minchan That poster is nice 8D

PKMN Trainer Rex
29th August 2011, 7:56 AM
We all are


Kusari found the post for us. (http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13193351&postcount=4262)




I saw a pedobear dancing. I must be having a fever. Ooooh.


Nah, thats my homeboy BBoy Pooh. He's cool.



http://i.imgur.com/eCZXM.jpg


Thats a pretty sweet poster. ME WANT ONE!




Sweet, hope it drives well.


Yup, you get what you pay for. The only thing I'm kinda disappointed about is that the car is an automatic.



...I have no idea what my tolerance is. :/




Me neither


Me three.

MasterCharizard15
29th August 2011, 8:27 AM
Recap: The captains meeting was halted due to the Head Captain collapsing from poisoning. With not all the Captains aware of why the meeting was called along with an ill leader, can they keep things together?
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Cast:
Head-Captain – Golde
Niche Neeya – Cell
Kida Ookami – NL
Mizuhashi Akira -Arc
Dre Flashy- Dre
Senshuken Toumoku- MC
Rouga Kouken/Seijuro-Eon
Captain of Squad 8-Senny
Zameric Kajiya- Zam
Captain of Squad Ten- Rotrum
Aozora Blue -Vizard Blue
Ryuu Schiffer – ILP
Saiga Hayashi – Kusari
Narcisse Dac - Dac
-

Captain Akira frowned as the rain washed over his white hair and captain's robes. The sky was grayish-white, the rain showering down on the entire Seireitei. He carried a satchel strapped to his shinigami uniform. Inside contained samples for Squad Twelve to analyze and hopefully give him an idea of what kind of poison had plagued the head captain.

As he flash stepped to his target site, the Shinigami he passed all looked at him in awe. Since normally, they never saw the Squad Four Captain do much aside from heal everyone. The Eleventh Squad captain was pretty much a one-woman army, leaving the rest of the captains in reserve. So seeing the man who healed your broken arm flash step like that was shocking. The site left a few shinigami unsettled, wondering what could cause him to be in such a rush.

Soon Captain Mizuhashi Akira reached his destination, Squad Twelve Labs. He went through several identification procedures, all set up by Captain Ryuu Schiffer himself. Retina scans, saliva scans, bio-chemical makeup analyst. All done via several beams of light from several impressive looking machines. Such extremes would unsettle most, but Mizuhashi went through all the scans and security checks without much effort.

He found his fellow captain doing work on his super computer. Ryuu had all twelve ports on the back of his neck all jacked into several machines. His cybernetic arm raced across the keyboard of the super computer, not a moment wasted in movement. The normal arm was moving at a slower pace, doing analogue work. A small pile or written sheets were next to it, the arm writing down something.

The rest of Ryuu's body was hidden from view, a joint effort by the large chair he was sitting in and his shinigami Captain's robes. The only other thing visible was his bare feet for some reason, being soaked.

“Sore feet?” Mizuhashi asked noting that the room they were in was lit only by computer screen light and flashing machine indicators. He unfastened the satchel from his uniform, waiting for directions for which machine or machines to place the samples in.

“The blood and bodily fluids in the blue machine to your left. The poison sample goes in the green machine to your upper right. Also, yes, I've been on my feet for seventy-two hours straight.” Ryuu responded to him, not turning his attention away from his calculations and other various sets of data on his computer screen.

“That's not healthy at all, even if your body is cybernetically enhanced, it still needs rest. You do know your effectiveness decreases the more you strain yourself to stay up and keep working.” Mizuhashi told him placing the samples in the correct machines. “ Also, do not forget those cybernetic enhancements do put a lot strain on your body, granted upgrades over the years has reduced this drawback, it still poses a valid reason for concern. I may have to give you a check up to see your body is still functioning properly.”

“My self-diagnostic program assures me that I'm operating at an acceptable level.” Ryuu countered moving his feet a little in the water he was soaking them in. “ I also point out that the Head-Captain's well-being is more important than my lack of sleep.” A few colorful charts and graphs appeared on the screen, several sets of data with various numbers also present on the screen.

“While that is true, I'd prefer it if I didn't have two captains to tend to.” Mizuhashi answered the workaholic cyborg, noting all the new stuff on the computer screen. “ You have data on the poison already?” He asked shocked, only a good minute or two had passed since he placed them in the machines. “If I recall correctly it takes twenty-four to forty-eighty hours to get all those readings.”

Ryuu kept working, “Normally yes, but using the time manipulation powers of my zanpaktou, I can speed up the process dramatically.” He still had not turned to face Mizuhashi, his eyes glued to the information before him.

“Fatigue brought on from three days worth of missed sleep mixed with stress from your cybernetics. You're adding stress from high reshi and reiatsu concentration and usage?” Mizuhashi then noticed a bowl of curry on the far left of him, untouched. “Then to add starvation to it as well, you need a few days to recover and eat.”

“I can do that as soon as this crisis gets taken care of, simple as that.” Ryuu answered checking over all the data from the samples. “The poison is just below Narcisse's caliber, it does seem that the high level of sugar in the Head-Captain's system caused the poison to have an adverse reaction. Thus reducing it's lethality.”

Mizuhashi frowned, he knew that made no sense, he had to use his Bankai to remove that poison from his system to repair the massive damage it did. “Is that so, is it possible for your machines and other doohickeys made a miscalculation or error?”

“There is a .071435256% chance of an error being made to cause this radical of a reading.” Ryuu answered him, glancing at the cold curry to his left from time to time.

“I personally think you should run a few more tests, letting them take however long they need to while you rest. I really wouldn't want to have to drag you kicking and screaming to my squad. Aozora should be proof enough that I can and will do so if I see fit.” Mizuhashi then walked up to Ryuu and looked at him directly in the face, leaning a bit over the keyboard.

Their eyes locked, and under the famous “death-glare” of Captain Akira, Captain Ryuu Schiffer wasn't completely immune from the glare that sent almost anything into a mental wreck. “Your eyes lock with your victim, your spiritual pressure is then manipulated to add moisture around a small controlled area. Next, your spiritual energy is lightly coated on your target. These factors give off the illusion of a cold sweat and the feeling of the body going into shock.” Mizuhashi smiled and kept staring, “It seems my organic components are not completely immune to your gaze. I may need to to collect more data to create an effective counter measure against you.” Ryuu told him in a monotone, unable to move.

“You would be able to move if you were in good condition, however the starvation, insomnia and stress all weaken you. Let's go to my squad, we have freshly baked cookies for good patients!” Mizuhashi said cheerfully, dragging Ryuu out of his chair and away from his lab.

“You say that as if I have a choice in the matter.” Ryuu said unable to escape his grip.
-

Captain Niche Neeya and his elite team of punishment force members arrived at one of the legendary four nobles estates. The darkening gray sky with drizzling rain was oddly fitting, his team hiding their presence with kido. Bending the light around them so that it appeared they were invisible, a technique hardwired into them, the former Squad Two captain being hailed as the best at it.

Niche looked around, a few maid wearing very skimpy and frilly uniforms were working on the estate along with butlers. He had never knew how skimpy service uniforms for both genders could get until coming here, he wondered what the others had to say about it for a moment.

He was broken from his thoughts by a maid, strawberry blonde with blue tipped hair, wearing a maid uniform with a pink and white color scheme, like the rest of the workers there, save for different colors. “How may I help you today, Captain?” She asked in a pleasantly sweet tone of voice.

“I'm here to meet and speak with your master.” He told her calmly, watching her body language and behavior for anything odd. His team stood by, ready to act in case this situation turned ugly.

“His Handsomeness Master Dac? I'll inform him of your visit.” She told him. She ran into the estate to talk to a few butlers and maids inside.

Niche glanced around the estate, it was huge and vast, giving off an overwhelming presence. The nobility and wealth of the Dac clan was easily seen just from this, the beautiful and lush green garden with a multitude of vibrantly colored flowers just adding to the beauty and class of this estate.

Niche then noticed that even the traditional wood used to make the estate seemed finely polished and waxed. The fact it managed to pull this off even in the rain, just made it that much more impressive to him. This was actually the first time he ever made a visit to one of the noble families homes. Normally he would have just went to said Noble Head's Squad to talk with them.

Then again, Dac had turned over control of the Squad he used to head, Squad Twelve, to Ryuu a few hundred years ago. The reasons for this shift in power were not completely clear, granted there were rumors that he turned it over due to laziness. He assumed Senshuken, Mizuhashi and Dre knew, but never asked, since he never really cared about it that much to begin with.

Narcisse Dac graced Niche with his presence after a good twenty-five minutes of waiting. His robes were made fine silk, the almost pure white robes getting soaked, revealing some odd piece of clothing underneath. “Why hello there new Captain of Squad Two, to what do I owe the pleasure? “ He asked while the maids and butlers stopped what they were doing and moved into areas where his team was hiding.

“I was informed that you specialized in poison and toxins during your reign as the Squad Twelve Captain.” Niche told him, now uneasy about how things were turning out.

“Yes, I did. However, I would assume you'd go to Captain Schiffer now if you needed a scientist. I mean he isn't as smart as me in poisons or as sexy, but he tries and I did see him worthy enough to take over while I was gone.” Dac told him winking.

Niche frowned a bit, the rumors about his ego were understatements. “ Well a high-profile person has been poisoned, said poison being compared to something created by you.”

“Do you think I poisoned this person? If they're still alive, clearly that is not the case.” Dac told him wagging his finger in niche's face. During this time the maids undid the kido used to hide the ninjas and grabbed the male ninjas. The butlers did the same targeting the female ninjas. Both exposed teams tried removing them, but struggled to avoid the groping hands of the help.

“How the hell did they do that!?” Niche asked surprised at their actions. He watched in shocked awe as his highly trained punishment force team was outright molested in public by a punch of maids and butlers in skimpy and flashy versions of the uniforms of those professions.

Narcisse smirked, “How cute, they seem to like each other.” He noted at how inexperienced this team and Niche was compared to Jin and his group. “ Now if I'm following you correctly, you want to take me in for questioning over the failed attempt to kill someone using poison. I won't remind you of who I am or how if I wanted someone dead, they would be. Instead, I'll humor you and actually take this matter seriously.” Dac's expression darkened a bit, the maids and butlers now trying to strip the poor ninjas.

“I see, well I'll have to escort you to my Squad for questioning. Before we go, please tell your workers to stop trying to molest my squad members.” Niche asked him exasperated at the scene playing out around him.
-

The rain washed down on everything, cleaning the stone gray tiles on the ground along with the buildings. Three captains were discussing the current crisis of events going on now. The shinigami outside rushed to get into the barracks, trying to stay dry.

Normally, such a sight would bring a trace amount of joy in the Third Squad captain's heart, but now it only pained her more. The Sixth and Seventh Squad captains were meeting with her in her squad's barracks. The three were currently in a sealed off location, protected by several kido to make it nearly impossible to spy or overhear them.

“So the both of you fought his murderers, you know how strong they are, can they be beaten? I want their heads for what they did to him.” Kida told them looking out the window to see the rain make her squad members run inside. Thanks to the kido combinations, she could see them but they couldn't see or feel her watching.

Senshuken looked over to Seijuro, who nearly had an unreadable expression on his face. He glanced back to him, not saying a word. They had suffered heavy losses and damage from that mission, it wasn't surprising that the two were acting slightly off. It took all of his upbringing and near inhuman amount of patience to not breakdown into a psychotic mess.

“Revenge will be gotten, they will pay for their crimes. However we need to regroup and plan out our next move. Since Head-Captain is out of commission, it's up to the eleven captains left to deal with this.” Senshuken said without a hint of emotion. He did note that what he told them was common sense and stating the obvious was not something he'd do.

“Well who will take charge while he recovers?” Kida asked hugging herself with her arms, her eyes hidden by her bangs.

“Niche will be investigating the poisoning, meaning Ryuu, Mizuhashi and possible Narcisse will be focused mainly on that. Since Mizuhashi and Ryuu know about the mission and the aftermath of it, I think they'll tell the other two about what happened.” Senshuken told them, leaning against a wall. “Dre, Zameric, and Saiga along with the Tenth Squad Captain, would be the captains that would know nothing and be free to do something.”

“The Tenth Squad Captain left on an investigation of a powerful spiritual pressure in the world of the living, possible on vasto lorde level.” Seijuro informed the other two, not looking either of them in the eye.

“Meaning we have only three captains that have no idea what's going on now.” Senshuken stated, “I can fill those three in on whats going on. What will you two do?”

“Aozora tole me she ask Ryuu to scan the battle ground for any links to go on, along with Niche's Squad. Since Squad Two and Twelve are going to be spread thin, I'll have my Squad investigate the area.” Seijuro answered, a hand gripping his sword tightly.

“Actually, I can fill everyone else in on whats going on. Plus if what I think will happen, happens, Narcisse will end up getting involved in this.” Kida told them, her pained expression changing a bit.

“In that case, I'll pretty much be sitting on my hands till we get a lead on where the enemy is.” Senshuken said bitterly.

“Your Squad took a lot of damage from that mission, I'm sure you'll be busy stabilizing it.” Seijuro said while looking out the window, noting it was raining harder than it was before.

“My squad will manage.” Senshuken said coldly, his expression tense and hard. “It wasn't as damaged as other squads on that mission.”

The three stood there in silence after that was said, they tried their hardest not to get emotional over the facts. The last thing they needed was for one of them to lose it and possibly be a danger to everyone around them.

They had to face facts, the Captain of Squad Eight, Senny, was murdered.

Golde
29th August 2011, 4:12 PM
Guess who has internet in their room : DDDD

and has a shitty computer still >>

but yeah, i got internet, and socks have been rocked.

Mizuhashi get to Kansas. Nao.

I'll look over the last few pages soon :P

I like Pokemon (...)
29th August 2011, 6:58 PM
GUYS. THIS PICTURE IS AWESOME. (IMO)

http://i.imgur.com/eCZXM.jpg
Oh wow, that is awesome.


Also, the octagonal charts... Those seem pretty interesting. How are you guys figuring that stuff out, anyway?
The Offense/Defense/Mobility/Intellect are all the same on both charts (why wouldn't they be?). We then work out the Kidou, Reiatsu, Physical Strength and Stamina from the Hex stats, and from their Bleach.wikia page (under Powers & Abilities), Zam and I discuss what the numbers would be and post them here - if anyone disagrees, then we'll talk it over and change it again.

Agreed. Aren't we all glad she's on our side? 8D
Definitely 8D 8D


Failed Sarcastic joke fails.
Happens to me all the time.

You, Zam, Kusari and...ILp.
Remember, Ilp wants you all drunk. ALL OF YOU!
8D


Got to keep them from puking on your shoes...in your closet.
*Insert inappropriate "in the closet" joke here*


Hey, that kid with the fiunny hate is a fan!
Maybe...I should make a character wearing one of those!
I think he is one of the more likely members to become a Bleach characters (since most of us seem to be based on our counterparts, like Blue and I, which just gave me an idea...)


I think the fact we both think they're win confused him.
Confused me or confused Arc? Because to me it looks like you brought in Unohana when Arc and I were talking about Yoruichi, XD:



I doubt that. Yoruichi is a strong and intelligent woman, and it's unlikely that she'd let Urahara do all the thinking.
Yeah. But how do you know she's intelligent? :p
She is the nicest and most feared Captain, who is the medic and the mother to them all.
Do the math.
INCEPTION.
Pretty much.


I was browsing through some of the older posts, and realized that ILPy has been an IckleLittlePervert long before we realized it.

XP I'm sure you can go much further back than that.

No. I do that every time.

*Socially inept 5* yeah


Me three.
Is it bad that I know I don't.



Cast:
Head-Captain – Golde
Niche Neeya – Cell
Kida Ookami – NL
Mizuhashi Akira -Arc
Dre Flashy- Dre
Senshuken Toumoku- MC
Rouga Kouken/Seijuro-Eon
Zameric Kajiya- Zam
Captain of Squad Ten- Rotrum
Aozora Blue -Vizard Blue
Ryuu Schiffer – ILP
Saiga Hayashi – Kusari
Narcisse Dac - Dac
One thing to note - Senny isn't in the list. Perhaps this was accidental foreshadowing? Because Rotrum was only mentioned, but was listed, while Senny was also only mentioned, but wasn't listed.


As he flash stepped to his target site, the Shinigami he passed all looked at him in awe. Since normally, they never saw the Squad Four Captain do much aside from heal everyone. The Eleventh Squad captain was pretty much a one-woman army, leaving the rest of the captains in reserve. So seeing the man who healed your broken arm flash step like that was shocking. The site left a few shinigami unsettled, wondering what could cause him to be in such a rush.
I like this little bit - not only did it show an action, but it also mentions that it was unusual for him, and that the other people in the area realised that. It puts a bit more focus on the background of the scene, and the background of the character, and tells us a bit more about what Mizuhashi's role is in the G13.

I don't quite understand the mention of Aozora, though. You mention that she was a one-woman-army, and the rest of the captains were in reserves, but I don't understand the relevance to Mizuhashi and his role as the medic.


Soon Captain Mizuhashi Akira reached his destination, Squad Twelve Labs. He went through several identification procedures, all set up by Captain Ryuu Schiffer himself. Retina scans, saliva scans, bio-chemical makeup analyst. All done via several beams of light from several impressive looking machines. Such extremes would unsettle most, but Mizuhashi went through all the scans and security checks without much effort.
Another good bit of description. It shows a bit more about the kind of person that Ryuu is: he creates machines (on his own, as well), and has a very high-security set up to protect his lab. And the fact that Mizuhashi went through without much effort shows that he's done this many times before, and is probably used to it by now, which shows the close relationship between them though of course, I say that because I know it's true :p


He found his fellow captain doing work on his super computer. Ryuu had all twelve ports on the back of his neck all jacked into several machines. His cybernetic arm raced across the keyboard of the super computer, not a moment wasted in movement. The normal arm was moving at a slower pace, doing analogue work. A small pile or written sheets were next to it, the arm writing down something.
Again, this shows a bit more about who Ryuu is; a cyborg. I like the little detail (which I bolded) because it almost reveals that he prefers efficiency, and dislikes wasting time or energy, which is fitting of a mathematician/engineer/physicist in particular (since we're always striving to be as efficient as possible).


The rest of Ryuu's body was hidden from view, a joint effort by the large chair he was sitting in and his shinigami Captain's robes. The only other thing visible was his bare feet for some reason, being soaked.
The fact that his body was mostly hidden is probably due to his small size - perhaps a little detail that could be thrown in, which would help visualise the character. Also, you've used the feet soaking before :p


Mizuhashi asked noting that the room they were in was lit only by computer screen light and flashing machine indicators.
Another nice little bit of description that helps visualise the scene.


"The blood and bodily fluids in the blue machine to your left. The poison sample goes in the green machine to your upper right.”
If there's one thing that I myself have learnt, is that colours are very useful when showing things to people - something Ryuu has also learnt XP


Ryuu responded to him, not turning his attention away from his calculations and other various sets of data on his computer screen.
DAAAAATAAAAA


“That's not healthy at all, even if your body is cybernetically enhanced, it still needs rest. You do know your effectiveness decreases the more you strain yourself to stay up and keep working.” Mizuhashi told him placing the samples in the correct machines. “Also, do not forget those cybernetic enhancements do put a lot strain on your body, granted upgrades over the years has reduced this drawback, it still poses a valid reason for concern. I may have to give you a check up to see your body is still functioning properly.”
And of course, Mizuhashi stays in-character as the medic, voicing his concern on the way that Ryuu is treating his body - something which makes sense for Ryuu to not always be top-priority.


“My self-diagnostic program assures me that I'm operating at an acceptable level.” Ryuu countered moving his feet a little in the water he was soaking them in. “ I also point out that the Head-Captain's well-being is more important than my lack of sleep.” A few colorful charts and graphs appeared on the screen, several sets of data with various numbers also present on the screen.
His use of the phrase "acceptable level" again proves that his well being wouldn't always be "top-priority". In this case, he is okay as long as his body can do what he wants it to do, at an acceptable level/speed. And the fact that he consider's the Head-Captain's well-being more important than him makes sense for his personality (and quite nicely contrasts with Narcisse, who holds himself/his looks above most other things).


Mizuhashi answered the workaholic cyborg, noting all the new stuff on the computer screen.
Good description of workaholic - I am the same, when it's something that I enjoy doing, and is definitely a good decription of Ryuu.


Ryuu kept working, “Normally yes, but using the time manipulation powers of my zanpaktou, I can speed up the process dramatically.” He still had not turned to face Mizuhashi, his eyes glued to the information before him.
Which shows just how top-priority the Head-Captain is to them, if he's using his zanpakutou like that. And the fact that he's focusing both of his eyes purely on the screen supports that.


“Fatigue brought on from three days worth of missed sleep mixed with stress from your cybernetics. You're adding stress from high reshi and reiatsu concentration and usage?” Mizuhashi then noticed a bowl of curry on the far left of him, untouched. “Then to add starvation to it as well, you need a few days to recover and eat.”
One of my more favourite lines of the chapter - it's quite a typical, almost, line you'd get from a doctor, but the added bowl of curry is a nice touch as well.


“I can do that as soon as this crisis gets taken care of, simple as that.” Ryuu answered checking over all the data from the samples. “The poison is just below Narcisse's caliber, it does seem that the high level of sugar in the Head-Captain's system caused the poison to have an adverse reaction. Thus reducing it's lethality.”
Once again, Ryuu puts his own health on a lower priority. And the fact that he had an explanation using the sugar was good - but in terms of the plot, it shows that whoever the assassin was either did not realise that the sugar would affect the poison like that; did not know that Golde was a sugar-holic, or knew the effect of the sugar, and his aim was not to kill, but to weaken (as having an ill Golde would mean that Mizuhashi would have to take care of him. Of course, it means that there would be a time limit until Golde heals).


“Is that so, is it possible for your machines and other doohickeys made a miscalculation or error?”
I like that he used the word "doohickey", which just shows the different levels of understanding of machinery that Ryuu and Mizuhashi have. But I don't understand what exactly he thinks is wrong? My first thought was that it was the sugar, because that was simply incorrect (would blood sugar levels negatively affect the lethality of a poison?), but it seems it's the fact that the poison was below Narcisse's level (as well as the fact that it was weakened?), but Mizuhashi still had to use Bankai. Perhaps that could be made more clear.


“There is a .071435256% chance of an error being made to cause this radical of a reading.” Ryuu answered him, glancing at the cold curry to his left from time to time.
RANDOM NUMBERS FOR THE WIN! Also, cold curry is still nice if it's spicy.


“I personally think you should run a few more tests, letting them take however long they need to while you rest. I really wouldn't want to have to drag you kicking and screaming to my squad. Aozora should be proof enough that I can and will do so if I see fit.” Mizuhashi then walked up to Ryuu and looked at him directly in the face, leaning a bit over the keyboard.
Looks like Dr. Medic just can't stand to see a person make themself ill.


Their eyes locked, and under the famous “death-glare” of Captain Akira, Captain Ryuu Schiffer wasn't completely immune from the glare that sent almost anything into a mental wreck.
"Almost anything" what, even objects? XD


“Your eyes lock with your victim, your spiritual pressure is then manipulated to add moisture around a small controlled area. Next, your spiritual energy is lightly coated on your target. These factors give off the illusion of a cold sweat and the feeling of the body going into shock.” Mizuhashi smiled and kept staring, “It seems my organic components are not completely immune to your gaze. I may need to to collect more data to create an effective counter measure against you.” Ryuu told him in a monotone, unable to move.
And so Ryuu objectively analyses Mizuhashi's glare, in an attempt to weaken it, perhaps. It didn't seem to work XD. I like how he's talking to him almost like an enemy with that last line.


“You would be able to move if you were in good condition, however the starvation, insomnia and stress all weaken you. Let's go to my squad, we have freshly baked cookies for good patients!” Mizuhashi said cheerfully, dragging Ryuu out of his chair and away from his lab.
Cookies, definitely Mizuhashi.

I really like this scene. As I've analysed, it really shows both of the characters, and the way that they interact with each other. It was only a small bit of plot, but was stretched from what could be one line "Mizuhashi went to the Twelfth Squad and gave Ryuu blood and poison samples, before dragging him back to the Fourth Squad." into all of that. It does explain a bit more about the villain as well, with my mention of how good he/she is at poisons.


Captain Niche Neeya and his elite team of punishment force members arrived at one of the legendary four nobles estates. The darkening gray sky with drizzling rain was oddly fitting, his team hiding their presence with kido. Bending the light around them so that it appeared they were invisible, a technique hardwired into them, the former Squad Two captain being hailed as the best at it.
The light-bending-kidou emphasises the ninja-ness of the squad. Though why does he have the "team of punishment force members" with him? They aren't yet going to punish Narcisse, as they don't know that it is him. Narcisse would never admit to killing the Head-Captain, even if it was him, because only an idiot would do so.


Niche looked around, a few maid wearing very skimpy and frilly uniforms were working on the estate along with butlers. He had never knew how skimpy service uniforms for both genders could get until coming here, he wondered what the others had to say about it for a moment.
Typical Narcisse, that's all there is to say on the matter XP


“His Handsomeness Master Dac? I'll inform him of your visit.”
Typical Narcisse, though it does show his ego very well.


Niche then noticed that even the traditional wood used to make the estate seemed finely polished and waxed. The fact it managed to pull this off even in the rain, just made it that much more impressive to him.
Again, even this little bit of detail shows the grandness that is a Noble's estate.


Narcisse Dac graced Niche with his presence after a good twenty-five minutes of waiting.
It seems like a typical Narcisse thing to make someone wait, but he doesn't explain the reason for it? I would have expected him to say something like "I wasn't too sure what outfit would match my darker complexion in the rain" or something like that.


His robes were made fine silk, the almost pure white robes getting soaked, revealing some odd piece of clothing underneath. “Why hello there new Captain of Squad Two, to what do I owe the pleasure? “
He didn't come out with an umbrella or something? It seems almost unlike him to not mind his clothes getting wet. But the mention that Niche is a new captain may be slightly important - he is the least experienced of them all.


“Do you think I poisoned this person? If they're still alive, clearly that is not the case.” Dac told him wagging his finger in niche's face.
As big as his ego is, Narcisse is right - unless of course, my previous statement was correct, and he intended only to make ill.


During this time the maids undid the kido used to hide the ninjas and grabbed the male ninjas. The butlers did the same targeting the female ninjas. Both exposed teams tried removing them, but struggled to avoid the groping hands of the help.
Nice detail of the butlers getting the girls, and the maids getting the boys. It makes sense for Narcisse to get perverse - yet powerful - servants.


“How the hell did they do that!?” Niche asked surprised at their actions. He watched in shocked awe as his highly trained punishment force team was outright molested in public by a punch of maids and butlers in skimpy and flashy versions of the uniforms of those professions.
I think the last bit of detail seemed unnecessarily long "in skimpy and flashy uniforms" would have sufficed.


Narcisse smirked, “How cute, they seem to like each other.” He noted at how inexperienced this team and Niche was compared to Jin and his group.
Wouldn't his team be just as experienced as Jin's? That is, assuming that only Jin was replaced by Niche.


Dac's expression darkened a bit, the maids and butlers now trying to strip the poor ninjas.
I like the contrast between the seriousness of Niche and Narcisse's conversation, and the silliness of the servants and ninjas.

And so we have suspect number one in custody. Of course, Narcisse himself denies killing the Head Captain - and most likely isn't actually the murderer. Something tells me, though, that he may have had a connection with the murderer - perhaps a childhood rival while studying toxins. Of course, this is but pure speculation.


The three were currently in a sealed off location, protected by several kido to make it nearly impossible to spy or overhear them.
The kidou barriers show the seriousness of the conversation - I doubt that most of the conversations between Captains are this serious.


“So the both of you fought his murderers, you know how strong they are, can they be beaten? I want their heads for what they did to him.”
Ah, a murder. Of course, having read the ending, they're obvioiusly talking about Senny's murder - likely the subject of the Captain's meeting in the previous chapter (hence the tension). But murdererS? So it was not a one-man job, and it seems that both Senshuken and Seijuro (or maybe only them?) know who they are.


They had suffered heavy losses and damage from that mission, it wasn't surprising that the two were acting slightly off. It took all of his upbringing and near inhuman amount of patience to not breakdown into a psychotic mess.
Wow, it just shows how bad the mission must have gone, and how close Senny was to Senshuken.


“Revenge will be gotten, they will pay for their crimes. However we need to regroup and plan out our next move. Since Head-Captain is out of commission, it's up to the eleven captains left to deal with this.” Senshuken said without a hint of emotion.
Stone-cold logic.


“Niche will be investigating the poisoning, meaning Ryuu, Mizuhashi and possible Narcisse will be focused mainly on that. Since Mizuhashi and Ryuu know about the mission and the aftermath of it, I think they'll tell the other two about what happened.” Senshuken told them, leaning against a wall. “Dre, Zameric, and Saiga along with the Tenth Squad Captain, would be the captains that would know nothing and be free to do something.”
So Niche, Ryuu, Akira and Dac are focusing on the poisoning, and tracking down whoever did it. At the moment, Dre, Zam and Saiga aren't doing anything, so one or all three are likely to try and cover Golde's position.


“The Tenth Squad Captain left on an investigation of a powerful spiritual pressure in the world of the living, possible on vasto lorde level.” Seijuro informed the other two, not looking either of them in the eye.
This is definitely something to take note of - Vasto Lorde level power is incredibly rare and extremely dangerous. In fact, I think it should have been mentioned that Rotrum took a small team with him - we know from canon that VL are stronger than that of a Captain, and there's no way that only one captain would be sent. Likely 2 and a small group of Lieutenant and third seats, or 1 captains with a larger group of Lieuts and third seats. Also, I think that this will tie in with Golde and Senny - our strongest captain is ill, our Medic is busy taking care of him, Senny is dead (or is he?) and Rotrum is in the World of the Living. That's four of our Captains kept busy at the least.


“Aozora tole me she ask Ryuu to scan the battle ground for any links to go on, along with Niche's Squad. Since Squad Two and Twelve are going to be spread thin, I'll have my Squad investigate the area.” Seijuro answered, a hand gripping his sword tightly.
As mentioned, Squad 12 and 2 will be kept incredibly busy - investigating the toxins and analysing the battlefield.


They had to face facts, the Captain of Squad Eight, Senny, was murdered.
I like the buildup that you've had with the last seen, sort of implying here and there what happened, but not stating it until the very end with a quick, short line. I think it was dramatic and had a big impact, and helps clear up that last scene as well.

Overall, a very good chapter. The decription was detailed, but not overly so. As you can see, it's let me have a more detailed analysis of the characters throughout each scene, but with the way that it was spread out, it didn't get boring. The way that the characters interacted with each other was very good, and showed everyone's personality through it as well. The plot seems to be setting up a bit more, with the revelation of Senny's death, and the introduction of the Vasto Lorde, it seems a lot will happen in the later chapters - especially when they start to connect with each other.



Guess who has internet in their room : DDDD
****ing awesome.

and has a shitty computer still >>
better than nothing <<

Mizuhashi get to Kansas. Nao.
Golde get to England >.>

Zameric
29th August 2011, 11:51 PM
That was a cool poster, Min.
I'd like to get one of those to hang up in my room.
The walls in my room are pretty bare. :/


Which reminds me, when we have the MASSIVE IRL BLEACH CLUB MEETING, I'm going to make everyone mad drunk and bring a few cameras Of course, Arc, Kai, a few others and I are designated drivers
Pffft, that's what you think'll happen. >D


I was browsing through some of the older posts, and realized that ILPy has been an IckleLittlePervert long before we realized it.
I knew he was like that for about as long as I've known him. :p


Here are the first three octa Battle Data Charts; Eon, ILP, and myself...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/EonOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ZamOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ILPOctaBDC.png

Eon Master
30th August 2011, 3:59 AM
Definitely 8D 8D

You for entirely different reasons than everyone else, lol.


Happens to me all the time.

Don't you just ruin other people's sarcastic jokes?


8D

Good luck. 180 proof stuff still takes about two shots before I start to even feel anything. Being huge + having a ridiculous tolerance for alcohol tends to do that.


*Insert inappropriate "in the closet" joke here*

Ohyou.


XP I'm sure you can go much further back than that.

xD Probably.


*Socially inept 5* yeah

Rofl, this club basically is a party.


Is it bad that I know I don't.

*shrug* There are only two ways to know your alcohol tolerance: drink until you drop, or be so experienced that you just naturally know your limits. I'm (unfortunately) in the latter catagory. Certainly not a bad thing to be clueless, but it's annoying when my friends can't keep up with me.




One thing to note - Senny isn't in the list. Perhaps this was accidental foreshadowing? Because Rotrum was only mentioned, but was listed, while Senny was also only mentioned, but wasn't listed.


I like this little bit - not only did it show an action, but it also mentions that it was unusual for him, and that the other people in the area realised that. It puts a bit more focus on the background of the scene, and the background of the character, and tells us a bit more about what Mizuhashi's role is in the G13.

I don't quite understand the mention of Aozora, though. You mention that she was a one-woman-army, and the rest of the captains were in reserves, but I don't understand the relevance to Mizuhashi and his role as the medic.


Another good bit of description. It shows a bit more about the kind of person that Ryuu is: he creates machines (on his own, as well), and has a very high-security set up to protect his lab. And the fact that Mizuhashi went through without much effort shows that he's done this many times before, and is probably used to it by now, which shows the close relationship between them though of course, I say that because I know it's true :p


Again, this shows a bit more about who Ryuu is; a cyborg. I like the little detail (which I bolded) because it almost reveals that he prefers efficiency, and dislikes wasting time or energy, which is fitting of a mathematician/engineer/physicist in particular (since we're always striving to be as efficient as possible).


The fact that his body was mostly hidden is probably due to his small size - perhaps a little detail that could be thrown in, which would help visualise the character. Also, you've used the feet soaking before :p


Another nice little bit of description that helps visualise the scene.


If there's one thing that I myself have learnt, is that colours are very useful when showing things to people - something Ryuu has also learnt XP


DAAAAATAAAAA


And of course, Mizuhashi stays in-character as the medic, voicing his concern on the way that Ryuu is treating his body - something which makes sense for Ryuu to not always be top-priority.


His use of the phrase "acceptable level" again proves that his well being wouldn't always be "top-priority". In this case, he is okay as long as his body can do what he wants it to do, at an acceptable level/speed. And the fact that he consider's the Head-Captain's well-being more important than him makes sense for his personality (and quite nicely contrasts with Narcisse, who holds himself/his looks above most other things).


Good description of workaholic - I am the same, when it's something that I enjoy doing, and is definitely a good decription of Ryuu.


Which shows just how top-priority the Head-Captain is to them, if he's using his zanpakutou like that. And the fact that he's focusing both of his eyes purely on the screen supports that.


One of my more favourite lines of the chapter - it's quite a typical, almost, line you'd get from a doctor, but the added bowl of curry is a nice touch as well.


Once again, Ryuu puts his own health on a lower priority. And the fact that he had an explanation using the sugar was good - but in terms of the plot, it shows that whoever the assassin was either did not realise that the sugar would affect the poison like that; did not know that Golde was a sugar-holic, or knew the effect of the sugar, and his aim was not to kill, but to weaken (as having an ill Golde would mean that Mizuhashi would have to take care of him. Of course, it means that there would be a time limit until Golde heals).


I like that he used the word "doohickey", which just shows the different levels of understanding of machinery that Ryuu and Mizuhashi have. But I don't understand what exactly he thinks is wrong? My first thought was that it was the sugar, because that was simply incorrect (would blood sugar levels negatively affect the lethality of a poison?), but it seems it's the fact that the poison was below Narcisse's level (as well as the fact that it was weakened?), but Mizuhashi still had to use Bankai. Perhaps that could be made more clear.


RANDOM NUMBERS FOR THE WIN! Also, cold curry is still nice if it's spicy.


Looks like Dr. Medic just can't stand to see a person make themself ill.


"Almost anything" what, even objects? XD


And so Ryuu objectively analyses Mizuhashi's glare, in an attempt to weaken it, perhaps. It didn't seem to work XD. I like how he's talking to him almost like an enemy with that last line.


Cookies, definitely Mizuhashi.

I really like this scene. As I've analysed, it really shows both of the characters, and the way that they interact with each other. It was only a small bit of plot, but was stretched from what could be one line "Mizuhashi went to the Twelfth Squad and gave Ryuu blood and poison samples, before dragging him back to the Fourth Squad." into all of that. It does explain a bit more about the villain as well, with my mention of how good he/she is at poisons.


The light-bending-kidou emphasises the ninja-ness of the squad. Though why does he have the "team of punishment force members" with him? They aren't yet going to punish Narcisse, as they don't know that it is him. Narcisse would never admit to killing the Head-Captain, even if it was him, because only an idiot would do so.


Typical Narcisse, that's all there is to say on the matter XP


Typical Narcisse, though it does show his ego very well.


Again, even this little bit of detail shows the grandness that is a Noble's estate.


It seems like a typical Narcisse thing to make someone wait, but he doesn't explain the reason for it? I would have expected him to say something like "I wasn't too sure what outfit would match my darker complexion in the rain" or something like that.


He didn't come out with an umbrella or something? It seems almost unlike him to not mind his clothes getting wet. But the mention that Niche is a new captain may be slightly important - he is the least experienced of them all.


As big as his ego is, Narcisse is right - unless of course, my previous statement was correct, and he intended only to make ill.


Nice detail of the butlers getting the girls, and the maids getting the boys. It makes sense for Narcisse to get perverse - yet powerful - servants.


I think the last bit of detail seemed unnecessarily long "in skimpy and flashy uniforms" would have sufficed.


Wouldn't his team be just as experienced as Jin's? That is, assuming that only Jin was replaced by Niche.


I like the contrast between the seriousness of Niche and Narcisse's conversation, and the silliness of the servants and ninjas.

And so we have suspect number one in custody. Of course, Narcisse himself denies killing the Head Captain - and most likely isn't actually the murderer. Something tells me, though, that he may have had a connection with the murderer - perhaps a childhood rival while studying toxins. Of course, this is but pure speculation.


The kidou barriers show the seriousness of the conversation - I doubt that most of the conversations between Captains are this serious.


Ah, a murder. Of course, having read the ending, they're obvioiusly talking about Senny's murder - likely the subject of the Captain's meeting in the previous chapter (hence the tension). But murdererS? So it was not a one-man job, and it seems that both Senshuken and Seijuro (or maybe only them?) know who they are.


Wow, it just shows how bad the mission must have gone, and how close Senny was to Senshuken.


Stone-cold logic.


So Niche, Ryuu, Akira and Dac are focusing on the poisoning, and tracking down whoever did it. At the moment, Dre, Zam and Saiga aren't doing anything, so one or all three are likely to try and cover Golde's position.


This is definitely something to take note of - Vasto Lorde level power is incredibly rare and extremely dangerous. In fact, I think it should have been mentioned that Rotrum took a small team with him - we know from canon that VL are stronger than that of a Captain, and there's no way that only one captain would be sent. Likely 2 and a small group of Lieutenant and third seats, or 1 captains with a larger group of Lieuts and third seats. Also, I think that this will tie in with Golde and Senny - our strongest captain is ill, our Medic is busy taking care of him, Senny is dead (or is he?) and Rotrum is in the World of the Living. That's four of our Captains kept busy at the least.


As mentioned, Squad 12 and 2 will be kept incredibly busy - investigating the toxins and analysing the battlefield.


I like the buildup that you've had with the last seen, sort of implying here and there what happened, but not stating it until the very end with a quick, short line. I think it was dramatic and had a big impact, and helps clear up that last scene as well.

Overall, a very good chapter. The decription was detailed, but not overly so. As you can see, it's let me have a more detailed analysis of the characters throughout each scene, but with the way that it was spread out, it didn't get boring. The way that the characters interacted with each other was very good, and showed everyone's personality through it as well. The plot seems to be setting up a bit more, with the revelation of Senny's death, and the introduction of the Vasto Lorde, it seems a lot will happen in the later chapters - especially when they start to connect with each other.


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You better give my next chapter a review that extensive, or I'm going to be greatly annoyed with you and your "my reactions were lame" excuses.

...nah, not quite that bad. Maybe mildly peeved at worst, but still. Annoyed Eon warning is in effect until after my next chapter gets posted (sometime in the next month or so, hopefully).


****ing awesome.

Wow, somebody's pumped.


Golde get to England >.>

All of you, get TO DA CHOPPA to Ohio and we can party. Damn, I sound like Flashy, lol.


Pffft, that's what you think'll happen. >D

Agreed. ILP, you have no idea what you're up against >D


Here are the first three octa Battle Data Charts; Eon, ILP, and myself...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/EonOctaBDC.png

Lopsided hourglass ftw! Much, much more fitting and easier to explain than my last one. Thanks Zam.

I like Pokemon (...)
30th August 2011, 9:01 AM
I knew he was like that for about as long as I've known him. :p
Surely not that long. I mean, we're talking YEARS here! for once, I can say "years" and not be exaggerating.


Here are the first three octa Battle Data Charts; Eon, ILP, and myself...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/EonOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ZamOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ILPOctaBDC.png
Awesome. I think my charts looks more silly than it was before, but would be pretty symmetrical if I had 70 Stam and 80 Phys.

You for entirely different reasons than everyone else, lol.
8D


Don't you just ruin other people's sarcastic jokes?
Mostly, yeah.


Good luck. 180 proof stuff still takes about two shots before I start to even feel anything. Being huge + having a ridiculous tolerance for alcohol tends to do that.
I have a different plan for you... *Evil laugh*


Ohyou.
Ohme.


Rofl, this club basically is a party.
8O Does that make me ~cool~?



*shrug* There are only two ways to know your alcohol tolerance: drink until you drop, or be so experienced that you just naturally know your limits. I'm (unfortunately) in the latter catagory. Certainly not a bad thing to be clueless, but it's annoying when my friends can't keep up with me.
Neither of which I'm going to try :p
Though logically I'd probably have quite a low tolerance; my small build, Asian genes and not having ever drank alcohol (I'm guessing that people who regularly drink, slowly build a stronger tolerance?) means I'd probably get knocked out after a few.


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You better give my next chapter a review that extensive, or I'm going to be greatly annoyed with you and your "my reactions were lame" excuses.

...nah, not quite that bad. Maybe mildly peeved at worst, but still. Annoyed Eon warning is in effect until after my next chapter gets posted (sometime in the next month or so, hopefully).
Aha, yeah. It was only after I read MC's chapter that I realised that my reviews are very poor. So, I decided to go more in-depth. I'll try and do this from now on, so hopefully your's and Kusari's (I've always wondered how plural possessive works) fics will give me more practice.


Wow, somebody's pumped.
It's Golde.


All of you, get TO DA CHOPPA to Ohio and we can party. Damn, I sound like Flashy, lol.
Which reminds me - I know the country (or state if you're in USA) of almost everyone in the club. I think if I use the Lat/Long of the capitals of each country/state (though I know not all of us live near our capitals), I can probably work out what would be the best place for us all to meet, that makes fewer people travel very far (so probably somewhere near the east coast of the USA). I can try that with everyone, or with just the Americans (because I think having Senny in Aus, Jin in Malay, and a handful of Europeans will throw the numbers off), and I can probably get a good place. Depending on how bored and/or stalkery I feel.
Edit: If I used everyone, then that throws us smack bang in the Atlantic Ocean.
Only using people from the USA, however, puts us in around Missouri. Perhaps the "Buck Mountain Conservation Area" makes sense to anyone?



Lopsided hourglass ftw! Much, much more fitting and easier to explain than my last one. Thanks Zam.
If only you had 10 Stamina and 100 Phys Strength Ignore that, I prefer you with one fewer 100 XP

Northern Lights
30th August 2011, 1:42 PM
Oh wow, Nice new charts Zameric, does this mean i need to fill out a new Stat?

Offense - 70 - I can be quite intimidating but I try to avoid starting fights
Defense - 100 - Well, I am Captain of the Defense Squad
Mobility - 60 - In Shikai I can move around a lot, but Bankai requires limited movement
Kido - 70 - Usually cannot be bothered with the incantations, so i'm trying to practice without saying it outloud
Spiritual Power - 100 - As someone deeply connected to nature through her Zanpaktou [bit like the "Dust" principle]
Intellect - 80 - I consider myself fairly intelligent, above average atleast, but not genius level
Physical Strength - 70 - For all my lack of muscle i'm actually quite strongStamina - 50 - I can quite comfortably say that my stamina sucks.

Once again, lower than Captain average, total - 600

I swear, we all seemed to just miss eachother on MSN last night =[

Eon Master
30th August 2011, 4:33 PM
Surely not that long. I mean, we're talking YEARS here! for once, I can say "years" and not be exaggerating.

Lol, like, two or three.


Awesome. I think my charts looks more silly than it was before, but would be pretty symmetrical if I had 70 Stam and 80 Phys.

But we both know that the last one isn't accurate.


I have a different plan for you... *Evil laugh*

Mwahahaha.


8O Does that make me ~cool~?

In here? Hell yeah.


Neither of which I'm going to try :p
Though logically I'd probably have quite a low tolerance; my small build, Asian genes and not having ever drank alcohol (I'm guessing that people who regularly drink, slowly build a stronger tolerance?) means I'd probably get knocked out after a few.

*nods* Yep, your alcohol tolerance is probably rock-bottom low.


Aha, yeah. It was only after I read MC's chapter that I realised that my reviews are very poor. So, I decided to go more in-depth. I'll try and do this from now on, so hopefully your's and Kusari's fics will give me more practice.

Coolness. Thanks.


(I've always wondered how plural possessive works)

=D GRAMMAR LESSON TIME.

Ok, in this case, it's not actually plural posessive. You're talking about two seperate owners, meaning that it's singular posessive for both of them. However, usually you'd use "s' " if you're talking about more than one of the same kind of posessor. For example, "Ninetales' Energy Ball attack is super-effective against Water-types."


It's Golde.

True.


Which reminds me - I know the country (or state if you're in USA) of almost everyone in the club. I think if I use the Lat/Long of the capitals of each country/state (though I know not all of us live near our capitals), I can probably work out what would be the best place for us all to meet, that makes fewer people travel very far (so probably somewhere near the east coast of the USA). I can try that with everyone, or with just the Americans (because I think having Senny in Aus, Jin in Malay, and a handful of Europeans will throw the numbers off), and I can probably get a good place. Depending on how bored and/or stalkery I feel.
Edit: If I used everyone, then that throws us smack bang in the Atlantic Ocean.
Only using people from the USA, however, puts us in around Missouri. Perhaps the "Buck Mountain Conservation Area" makes sense to anyone?

Good god, Circ was right, you are a stalker.


If only you had 10 Stamina and 100 Phys Strength Ignore that, I prefer you with one fewer 100 XP

xD Yeah, plus that wouldn't fit me anyway. Speed and skill > Power, 100 times out of 100.


Once again, lower than Captain average, total - 600

I swear, we all seemed to just miss eachother on MSN last night =[

Currently, that's 50 points less than our arbitrary "average". A little on the low side, don't you think?

Gah, I still need to get that.

Zameric
31st August 2011, 4:03 AM
Here is your octa Battle Data Chart, NL...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/NLOctaBDC.png

Also, I've uploaded the colored canon captain hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12215035) that ILP made. :)
These are based off the charts that Kubo originally made.
He colored them based of the theme colors of each squad.

arceus03
31st August 2011, 5:03 PM
Kusari found the post for us. (http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13193351&postcount=4262)

Cool. That's not too far off anymore =D


Nah, thats my homeboy BBoy Pooh. He's cool.

Is he pedobear's twin? :p


Guess who has internet in their room : DDDD

YAY


Mizuhashi get to Kansas. Nao.

Wait till I can drive. XD



INCEPTION.
Pretty much.

You are dreaming in a dream in a dream in a dream in a dream in a- *oar'd*


XP I'm sure you can go much further back than that.

Goodness, I can?


*Socially inept 5* yeah

Woo *high fives*


Golde get to England >.>

ILPy get to the US <.<

.... Also, nice read, MC. Apart from "I'm interested to read more", there's nothing more I could say ILPy said them all



Here are the first three octa Battle Data Charts; Eon, ILP, and myself...

Cool =D
I'll get around to my stats soon... Hopefully


All of you, get TO DA CHOPPA to Ohio and we can party.

No. All of you, come to Rochester. We'll have a snowball fight. 8D



Gah, I still need to get that.

Get eeeeeeeeet



Also, I've uploaded the colored canon captain hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12215035) that ILP made. :)
These are based off the charts that Kubo originally made.
He colored them based of the theme colors of each squad.

Colors! 8D Neat, Zam.

Oh, new episode.
So that's how the Captains were saved. Bit of random, but workd I guess.

8D 8D 8D Unohana 8D
She stopped both of the ninja's shunko without even taking a stance 8D idc if her powers are upped. Or if she's a reigai XD As long as I get to see her. 8D
I hope they're going to show the full fights of those original vs reigai next episode. 8D

And whaaaaaat? A reigai Urahara? >.>

Oooh, manga is out =D

MasterCharizard15
31st August 2011, 8:25 PM
...
Urahara and Isshin are always good for comedy.
Moving on, I swear if they all become Captain class level fighters from this, I can't WAIT for their deaths.

What I'm talking about is the sharing Ichigo's fulllbringer power plotholepoint.

Way One: Think of Fullbring Ichigo's powers as 10000 EXp. Ginjou's sword swipe was Exp. all. Granting everyone an equal chunk of power/experience, with Ginjou being slightly ahead.

This method means that if their powers + a fraction of Ichigo's power, can fight captains on equal footing, then I call bull.

Way Two: The stat boost way. Fullbring Ichigo is now Ichigo with...a 6 level boosts to all his stats. Ginjou's swipe is a group version of Psych up, granting them all the SAME boost along their own powers.

This method makes me wis death upon them all in the horrible way possible. >.> Just how many logical things are defied in that method is not funny, just sad and horrible, horrible, HORRIBLE!

...moving.

Chad and Orihime are out of the fight, oh joy. >.>


Offense: 100 -I'm the Offensive Squad Captain.

Defense: 40 -See above.

Mobility: 100 - Speed and Power = Fun for me, hell for my foes. Yay using Hoho in conjunction with everything!

Kido: 100 - I am a Kido Master afterall.

Spiritual Power: 90 - My style is overwhelming my foes before they can kill any of my comrades or damage something important, thus I'll use alot of Kido. Meaning lost of spiritual pressure to fuel it.

Intellect: 80 - ILp and Eon are going to murder me on this. I'm more well rounded and balanced in knowledge, I'm really more wise than intelligent or knowledgeable, so yeah...not 100 material.

Physical Strength: 80 -Offensive Squad, plus I focus on Zanjutsu and Haduka alot as well, to keep me sharp and my opponents guessing. Plus it helps keep my fights interesting.

Stamina: 60 - Yeah, I have to able to keep up the assaults and can't afford to have my body being strained from the constant heat absorption.

Captain Total: 650 ... yup, I'm going to get so many comments on these. In my defense that's what I was thinking in the Hex Charts, so...yeah, no excuse.

I like Pokemon (...)
31st August 2011, 9:06 PM
Happy birthday Jin! Even though it's no longer the 31st in Malaysia


Ah, okay, that's interesting - the rule was made because of Ginjou. Makes me wonder - what happened along the line?

Ah, okay, so it looks like we might get a flashback, or at least one chapter explaining the whole Ginjou thing.

"Why me sad" doesn't Kubo usually have kind of good English as his titles? Though looking at his previous titles, they weren't all perfect...

Ah, okay, so it seems her ~wuv~ for Ichigo helps her to overcome Trollkishima's power slightly, or at least have the gut instinct that something is wrong.

Trollkishima looks so creepy in one of the pages. Reminds me of Aizen.

Oopsy, he broke them. And once again, the non-shinigami have become USELESS.

Ahaha, I love Isshin's (only) line.

Oh? Looks like Riruka is still Tsundere for Ichigo.

So it looks like they all got a bit of Ichigo's powers. Tsukishima, Ginjou, Riruka, Yukio, Jackie and Giriko, versus Ichigo, Renji, Byakuya, Hitsugaya, Kenpachi, Ikkaku (and maybe Isshin and Urahara, but I think they'll do more behind-the-scenes work). I wonder who will fight who? My thoughts:
Ginjou - Ichigo (for obvious reasons)
Tsukishima - Byakuya (idk, they just seem to fit)
Yukio - Hitsugaya (kid versus kid)
But the others, I'm not so sure about...
Ohwait, where's Rukia? Perhaps she gets Sushigawara.

Well, an alright chapter. We got to see some of the other characters now (though what were they doing before...?), and it seems like we'll get to see Ichigo's powers in full.


Once again, lower than Captain average, total - 600 [
Hmm, last time, you were only 10 points below the average (or I think just about the average, before the "power creep"). This time, you're quite a bit below. Though we might have to wait and see what the other captains will have - either we'll all have a massive range of stats, or we'll have a power "de-creep".


Which reminds me, in Shunsui's hex stats, he has 90 in everything, except 100 Kidou/Reiatsu and 70 Stamina. In his Oct stats, though, he has 90 in everything (except 100 Kidou and 70 Physical Strength) but 80 Stamina. I was wondering, do you guys think he should have 90 Stamina instead? It's pretty clear (to me) that he was meant to be a very well rounded character, and the slightly lower Stamina kind of puts it off. Though if we do that, it closes the gap between his stats and Unohana's, and it's also quite clear that she's meant to be above him (with the way that he talks about her, and the stats themselves), which might mean that we would change her stats too (perhaps 90 Physical Strength, too? In the Japanese, Stamina was called Phys Strength, so it would actually be a big stretch).


But we both know that the last one isn't accurate.
Just wait until I start lifting weights.


In here? Hell yeah.
Awwwwww yeaaaaa


*nods* Yep, your alcohol tolerance is probably rock-bottom low.
Oh well.


Ok, in this case, it's not actually plural posessive. You're talking about two seperate owners, meaning that it's singular posessive for both of them. However, usually you'd use "s' " if you're talking about more than one of the same kind of posessor. For example, "Ninetales' Energy Ball attack is super-effective against Water-types."
Once again, poor wording on my part. What I meant was that I was referring to a possession by more than one person - in which case, would it be "Eon's" and "Kusari's" charts? Or "Eon and Kusari's" charts (with "Eon and Kusari" being regarded as "one" noun). And would it change between if it was one object shared between them ("Eon's and Kusari's chart"?), or if they shared many, or if they both had many, but did not share the same ones.


Good god, Circ was right, you are a stalker.
This is not the first time you've said that >.>



Gah, I still need to get that.
Yes, yes you do D<

Also, I've uploaded the colored canon captain hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12215035) that ILP made. :)
These are based off the charts that Kubo originally made.
He colored them based of the theme colors of each squad.
Ah, yes it seems you didn't post the normal charts I did for them, too

I was thinking of also colouring charts for us as well - something that will be very, very important for later. I was thinking that everyone's "default" colour would be their canon's counterpart, unless stated otherwise. If you want to change it, preferrably give me a hex code, or link me to the image with that colour. If you say something vague like "blue" or even "blood red", I'll ignore you just google it or something. For the moment, I'll only do the Hex stats, because I asked Zam and he didn't want me to do the Oct stats just yet.

For example, here is my chart as normal, with Mayuri's colour, and with my own colour:

http://zameric.webs.com/photos/Bleach-Club-BDCs/IlpBDC-1.png
http://oi53.*******.com/1zv3nsh.jpg
http://oi55.*******.com/15hetqr.jpg


For example, Kida already had her own colour:
http://i55.*******.com/34o8ye1.jpg
If you want, you can keep that colour, or change it *shrug*.


Goodness, I can?

ILPy get to the US <.<
Probably.

I will someday <.<



Offense: 100 -I'm the Offensive Squad Captain.

Defense: 40 -See above.

Mobility: 100 - Speed and Power = Fun for me, hell for my foes. Yay using Hoho in conjunction with everything!

Kido: 100 - I am a Kido Master afterall.

Spiritual Power: 90 - My style is overwhelming my foes before they can kill any of my comrades or damage something important, thus I'll use alot of Kido. Meaning lost of spiritual pressure to fuel it.

Intellect: 80 - ILp and Eon are going to murder me on this. I'm more well rounded and balanced in knowledge, I'm really more wise than intelligent or knowledgeable, so yeah...not 100 material.

Physical Strength: 80 -Offensive Squad, plus I focus on Zanjutsu and Haduka alot as well, to keep me sharp and my opponents guessing. Plus it helps keep my fights interesting.

Stamina: 60 - Yeah, I have to able to keep up the assaults and can't afford to have my body being strained from the constant heat absorption.

Captain Total: 650 ... yup, I'm going to get so many comments on these. In my defense that's what I was thinking in the Hex Charts, so...yeah, no excuse.

I already badgered you to go from 710 to 650. If anyone else wants to have a turn lowering it, I won't complain.
Wait, I know Kida was "officially" the Defense Squad from a while ago, but I don't remember if 6 was "officially" the Offense Squad.

EDIT:
MC's new Hex chart (and his colour one, they're the same because MC is boring he likes the colour).
Also, Eon's new hex chart (and colour - 191970).
http://oi54.*******.com/2cid72o.jpg
http://oi52.*******.com/2s79cv4.jpg
http://oi54.*******.com/o77t6d.jpg

rotrum
31st August 2011, 10:21 PM
They're all evil. But I still wanna see Yukio Fight.

Ginjou casted Drain on Ichigo Kurosaki.
Ginjou casted *Insert innumerable amount of buffs* on Team!



Octo-Stats?

Offense: 100. I control an army of weapons, and from each of those I can control and create Ice.

Defense: 80. I'd call ice and control over the battlefield a pretty good defense.

Mobility: 100. I'm fast. I keep my distance and use range to my advantage.

Kidou: 80. I know my way around Kidou.

Spiritual Power: 90. The battlefield becomes my weapon, need a lot of power to do that.

Intellect: 80. My fighting style generally involves slowly gaining an increasingly large advantage over my opponent(s), where every throw could mean a trap and every thrown weapon builds into a larger attack/defense.

Physical Strength: 40. I throw things. That's about it.

Stamina: 90. I can throw a LOT of things while freezing things and making ice, and I can last a decent while doing it.

Captain Total: 660.

Northern Lights
31st August 2011, 10:32 PM
Ok, sorry Zameric, but yeah, my stats were low, and talking with Eon I've decided to raise a few a bit, Kido mostly because, as he pointed out, I have to ability, as my Zanapktou is Elemental Kido based, I just can't be bothered to say the incantations Shunsui syndrome

Offense - 70 - Stays the same
Defense - 100 - Stays the same
Mobility - 70 - Increased by 10, seeing as in Shikai I am all about dodging instead of deflecting attacks serpentine
Kido - 90 - Increased by 20, for reasons stated top of post
Spiritual Power - 100 - Stays the same
Intellect - 80 - Stays the same
Physical Strength - 70 - Stays the same
Stamina - 50 - Stays the same

New Total - 630
That's better =]


Wait, I know Kida was "officially" the Defense Squad from a while ago, but I don't remember if 6 was "officially" the Offense Squad.

Oh yeah, he leads the Fire Squad basically, Fire is very "Offense" based, not much else you can do with fire ... So i'd say that claim was fairly justified, if not, we can all agree on it.

Votes for MC to lead "Offense Squad"?

PKMN Trainer Rex
31st August 2011, 11:30 PM
Is this a Captains only thing? Cuz I want a chart too.


So thats where Troll man & friends are, they went for a jog. And we get to see the shinigami in action. SWEET!


Edit 2.0: Heres my octo stats.

Offense- 70
Defense-70
Mobility- 80
Kido/Reiatsu - 60
Intellect- 60
Stamina- 80
Physical Power - 80
Spiritual Power - 70
Total: 420/600
New Total: 570/800

Seems right for a 3rd seat.

*snickers* My total is 420. *snickers*

Eon Master
31st August 2011, 11:54 PM
Voting for MC to lead the Offense Squad.

Actually, I made a list. ILP, I stole your job.

1. Golde- The Leadership Squad

2. Cell- The Subterfuge Squad

3. Kida- The Defensive Squad

4. Arc- The Medical/COOKIES Squad

5. Dre- The Party Squad

6. MC- The Offensive Squad

7. Me- The Tactical Squad (as appointed by ILP)

8. Senny- The Missing Squad

9. Zameric- The Justice Squad / The Execution Squad

10. Rotrum- The Ice Cream / SnoCone Squad

11. Blue- The Combat Squad / The Mass Murder Squad

12. ILP- The Scientific Squad

13. kusari- The Hangover Squad (why? Well, kusari loves booze and sleeping, and what do you do when you have a hangover: sleep it off.)

Any suggestions or comments?

That was fun, actually.


Is this a Captains only thing? Cuz I want a chart too.

iirc, it's not here. Go for it.

I like Pokemon (...)
1st September 2011, 12:16 AM
New Total - 630
That's better =]



Oh yeah, he leads the Fire Squad basically, Fire is very "Offense" based, not much else you can do with fire ... So i'd say that claim was fairly justified, if not, we can all agree on it.

Votes for MC to lead "Offense Squad"?

Much better.

Yeah, it makes sense, I just didn't it was officially called that - though it seems with a quick search, it was, and I just have terrible memory.

Edit 2.0: Heres my octo stats.

Offense- 70
Defense-70
Mobility- 80
Kido/Reiatsu - 60
Intellect- 60
Stamina- 80
Physical Power - 80
Spiritual Power - 70
Total: 420/600
New Total: 570/800

Seems right for a 3rd seat.
I think that looks good to me.

Actually, I made a list. ILP, I stole your job.
We've actually done this a few times before, I think.

2. Cell- The Subterfuge Squad
Cell suggested Undertaker for himself, but he might change his mind.

10. Rotrum- The Ice Cream / SnoCone Squad
Rofl.

13. kusari- The Hangover Squad (why? Well, kusari loves booze and sleeping, and what do you do when you have a hangover: sleep it off.)
Ahaha, he's like the Shunsui.

Sounds good to me This time, I'll save it as a word file.

Zameric
1st September 2011, 12:49 AM
No. All of you, come to Rochester. We'll have a snowball fight. 8D
That sounds awesome! Wait, it's not snowing there...


Offense: 100 -I'm the Offensive Squad Captain.

Defense: 40 -See above.

Mobility: 100 - Speed and Power = Fun for me, hell for my foes. Yay using Hoho in conjunction with everything!

Kido: 100 - I am a Kido Master afterall.

Spiritual Power: 90 - My style is overwhelming my foes before they can kill any of my comrades or damage something important, thus I'll use alot of Kido. Meaning lost of spiritual pressure to fuel it.

Intellect: 80 - ILp and Eon are going to murder me on this. I'm more well rounded and balanced in knowledge, I'm really more wise than intelligent or knowledgeable, so yeah...not 100 material.

Physical Strength: 80 -Offensive Squad, plus I focus on Zanjutsu and Haduka alot as well, to keep me sharp and my opponents guessing. Plus it helps keep my fights interesting.

Stamina: 60 - Yeah, I have to able to keep up the assaults and can't afford to have my body being strained from the constant heat absorption.

Captain Total: 650 ... yup, I'm going to get so many comments on these. In my defense that's what I was thinking in the Hex Charts, so...yeah, no excuse.
Actually, I think that's a pretty good total for you.
I'll get started on it in a little while. :)


Which reminds me, in Shunsui's hex stats, he has 90 in everything, except 100 Kidou/Reiatsu and 70 Stamina. In his Oct stats, though, he has 90 in everything (except 100 Kidou and 70 Physical Strength) but 80 Stamina. I was wondering, do you guys think he should have 90 Stamina instead? It's pretty clear (to me) that he was meant to be a very well rounded character, and the slightly lower Stamina kind of puts it off. Though if we do that, it closes the gap between his stats and Unohana's, and it's also quite clear that she's meant to be above him (with the way that he talks about her, and the stats themselves), which might mean that we would change her stats too (perhaps 90 Physical Strength, too? In the Japanese, Stamina was called Phys Strength, so it would actually be a big stretch).
No, I think it's fine the way it is...


Octo-Stats?

Offense: 100. I control an army of weapons, and from each of those I can control and create Ice.

Defense: 80. I'd call ice and control over the battlefield a pretty good defense.

Mobility: 100. I'm fast. I keep my distance and use range to my advantage.

Kidou: 80. I know my way around Kidou.

Spiritual Power: 90. The battlefield becomes my weapon, need a lot of power to do that.

Intellect: 80. My fighting style generally involves slowly gaining an increasingly large advantage over my opponent(s), where every throw could mean a trap and every thrown weapon builds into a larger attack/defense.

Physical Strength: 40. I throw things. That's about it.

Stamina: 90. I can throw a LOT of things while freezing things and making ice, and I can last a decent while doing it.

Captain Total: 660.
Ok, I'll make your chart in a little while too.


Ok, sorry Zameric, but yeah, my stats were low, and talking with Eon I've decided to raise a few a bit, Kido mostly because, as he pointed out, I have to ability, as my Zanapktou is Elemental Kido based, I just can't be bothered to say the incantations Shunsui syndrome

Offense - 70 - Stays the same
Defense - 100 - Stays the same
Mobility - 70 - Increased by 10, seeing as in Shikai I am all about dodging instead of deflecting attacks serpentine
Kido - 90 - Increased by 20, for reasons stated top of post
Spiritual Power - 100 - Stays the same
Intellect - 80 - Stays the same
Physical Strength - 70 - Stays the same
Stamina - 50 - Stays the same

New Total - 630
That's better =]



Oh yeah, he leads the Fire Squad basically, Fire is very "Offense" based, not much else you can do with fire ... So i'd say that claim was fairly justified, if not, we can all agree on it.

Votes for MC to lead "Offense Squad"?

Alright!~ Another chart. :p

I vote for for it, unless Blue has something to say about it...
Squad 11 is know as the direct-combat squad in the canon.


Is this a Captains only thing? Cuz I want a chart too.

Heres my octo stats.

Offense- 70
Defense-70
Mobility- 80
Kido/Reiatsu - 60
Intellect- 60
Stamina- 80
Physical Power - 80
Spiritual Power - 70
Total: 420/600
New Total: 570/800

Seems right for a 3rd seat.

*snickers* My total is 420. *snickers*
No, I have charts for non-captain members too. :D

Of course, you live in Hawaii...

Golde
1st September 2011, 3:25 AM
Happy apparently belated birthday in his country to Jin. Congrats XD But here in America I still have three and three quarter hours to wish you happy birthday...so get here fast, I want it to count

DUDE. I am now so into this arc it's not even cool. It sucks that I guess everyone (with the exception of Riruka?) is evil (I think?)...I so totally thought they were gonna die though. When he cut them...but...wait...

...

I could be totally wrong or behind somehow...but Ginjou is a Shinigami, right? And he just cut the Fullbringers...who are technically human...wouldn't that technically mean he gave some of his shinigami powers to them? Or can that be controlled?


Oh yeah, no promises, but since things got hectic this summer, once I have a computer with Word on it, I may start the fanfic again. If anyone's interested

I like Pokemon (...)
1st September 2011, 3:33 AM
No, I think it's fine the way it is...
Alright, I just thought I should ask.

DUDE. I am now so into this arc it's not even cool. It sucks that I guess everyone (with the exception of Riruka?) is evil (I think?)...I so totally thought they were gonna die though. When he cut them...but...wait...

...

I could be totally wrong or behind somehow...but Ginjou is a Shinigami, right? And he just cut the Fullbringers...who are technically human...wouldn't that technically mean he gave some of his shinigami powers to them? Or can that be controlled?

I think you are one of the few people to like this arc.

Ginjou is or at least WAS a Sub Shinigami. At the moment, he's not using those powers (he's using the ones he stole from Ichigo). It is currently unknown whether or not he can still use his shinigami powers or not, but I believe we did see his badge before...

So yeah, he gave the other Fullbringers his/Ichigo's Fullbring powers.

As for the evilness, well, I think Riruka is the same with the others, she's just being Tsundere baka Ichigo, I don't want your stupid powers. Though we currently don't know if XCution are actually good guys, or bad guys (because of the number of times that Trollkishima bloody cut them). It's likely, though, that only Ginjou and Tsukishima are evil, and that the other XCution members aren't (so that Kubo can minimise the death toll) - this would then allow them to return their powers to Ichigo, if he so chooses to get them back.

Erm... Yeah, that's all, I think.

Oh yeah, no promises, but since things got hectic this summer, once I have a computer with Word on it, I may start the fanfic again. If anyone's interested
The one that included all of us, or your OCs? Either way, I'm excited.

arceus03
1st September 2011, 3:41 AM
Happy birthday Jin! Even though it's no longer the 31st in Malaysia

idk if you knew, but August 31st is also Malaysia's Independence Day. Jin is what you'd call a "budak merdeka" in my language. :p
Butyeah, HAPPY BIRTHDAY JIN =D



Ah, okay, so it seems her ~wuv~ for Ichigo helps her to overcome Trollkishima's power slightly, or at least have the gut instinct that something is wrong.

Ohwait, where's Rukia? Perhaps she gets Sushigawara.

Eh, I thought that the other Fullbringers are evil as well?

And we didn't actually see Shishigawara in the last panel, did we?
Giriko got clocks rotating around him. XD


I was thinking of also colouring charts for us as well - something that will be very, very important for later. I was thinking that everyone's "default" colour would be their canon's counterpart, unless stated otherwise. If you want to change it, preferrably give me a hex code, or link me to the image with that colour. If you say something vague like "blue" or even "blood red", I'll ignore you just google it or something. For the moment, I'll only do the Hex stats, because I asked Zam and he didn't want me to do the Oct stats just yet.

I want blue

Mmmmfff, too lazy to pick a color right now. >.< Just go with Unohana's color, for me.


I will someday <.<

Make sure that someday is within these upcoming 4 years




They're all evil. But I still wanna see Yukio Fight.



SECONDED



10. Rotrum- The Ice Cream / SnoCone Squad


You are going to have an icy death. Apart from that, lol.


That sounds awesome! Wait, it's not snowing there...

Not yet, yeah. XD Soon it will. I just hope it won't start too early. I heard people say last year it was winter for six months o.o

Alright, stats? I'll give explanation for the two new stats, but the rest... They're the same as my old one.

Offense: 80

Defense: 100 [Same. Try charging through a wall of rapid churning water, pressurized. When you're through, you have approximately 50 different Bakudo to get through. Ready, set, GO!]

Kido: 100 [Same. I use Kido a LOT on a daily basis, and what with Tsukibana enhancing my Kido flow, etc.]

Spiritual power: 90 [Well, I base this on the fact that Kido itself comes from spiritual power. "Kidō is the technique that Shinigami use to focus their Spiritual Energy into a wide variety of magic spells that can serve many purposes, such as healing, defense, or combat." Quoted from Bleach Wiki. Sooooo yeah. Do the math. [s]Tell me if my logic phails

I was going for 100 spiritual power at first, but taking other things into consideration... Well, let's say 90 is high enough.]

Mobility: 60

Intellect: 80 [Lowered by 10. [s]You can't help feeling that when you've been long enough with Eon Buuuut yeah, I started thinking like MC, and just decided I'm not 90 material. XD Though my knowledge on medical stuff is unrivaled. Muahahahaha. Well for my character at least But yeah, because knowledge is not equal to intellect.]

Physical Strength: 70 [I was going for 60 physical strength and 80 stamina at first, but these two are somewhat closely related, so decided to give them the same amount instead.]

Stamina: 70 [Yeah, 70 is just about... nice I guess. I'm not the kind that's always puffed up and brimming to go, whatever, XD but I can work for quite a long time if I push myself. Something like that]

Total: 650

Is it fine? Or should I like, put down a few more stats, something?



Oh yeah, no promises, but since things got hectic this summer, once I have a computer with Word on it, I may start the fanfic again. If anyone's interested

YAYYYYY

I cbb to keep up with the current arc logic anymore, though. I'll just read through and enjoy the fights. XD And wait for ILPy's explanation

kusari
1st September 2011, 3:56 AM
So, stuff.

>13. kusari- The Hangover Squad (why? Well, kusari loves booze and sleeping, and what do you do when you have a hangover: sleep it off.)

Ripley'sBelieve it or not, that's not my preferred hangover cure. I'm much more partial to the Greasy Breakfast-Orange Juice method. Sleeping generally comes before and after this system though.


>Manga

*I'll get to it later.


>Stats

This works out well. I've been needing to revamp.

Offense- 100 (The first part of my Trifecta of 100's. My zan is very offensively based, pretty much being the embodiment of "offense is the best defense". Both shikai and bankai offer less defensive options than offensive, as they're relativly small and light weaponry.)

Defense- 30 (The size of my shikai leaves a lot to be desired in the ways of defense. A weapon with a nine inch blade and based on punching leaves me defensively short. While the bankai does offer better defensive options, it really isn't geared towards defense.)

Mobility- 90 (When your strategy is mainly centered on a hit and run tactic, it heavily relies on being able to get out of the opponent's close range before they can hurt me too bad.)

Kido - 40 (I really don't utalize kido at all in battle, I only put it where it is because of the dual-elemental nature of my zan.)

Intellect- 90 (ILP is the Squad 12 Captain and a pretty good tactician, therefore, he gets an auto-100. Eon is the club strategist and gets the second auto-100. It's been priven that Eon is a better strategist than I and ILP is more academically gifted than I. However, I'm not one to be scoffed at mentally, so while I'm not exactly even with them, I feel that 90 is a fair number to level out at.)

Stamina- 100 (The second leg of the Trifecta. I set my stamina this high due to the physicality of my battle style. Constantly moving to and from the opponent can easily tire the average person. A high stamina is essential for making a battle style like mine work.

Physical Power - 100 (The final part of the Trifecta that is my battle style. Using a weapon like knuckle-dusters us basically like fighting hand-to-hand. What's a great way to deal more damage hand-to-hand wise? Physical strength. Psyical strength is basically my secondary weapon.)

Spiritual Power/Reiatsu - 80 (Of someone at my level, I think this is fairly reasonable. I'm assuming that the average is 70 or 80, and I consider myself to be average in this field.)

Total: 630/800 (A bit below average but, hey, what're you going to do.)

Zameric
1st September 2011, 5:14 AM
Here are the 8 battle data charts that I got requests for today. xD
If you still see Kida's total at 600, then refresh the page.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/CellOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/NLOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ArcOctaBDC.png
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/RexOctaBDCLT.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/MCOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/KaiOctaBDCLT.png
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/RotrumOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/kusariOctaBDC.png

Golde
1st September 2011, 5:56 AM
I think you are one of the few people to like this arc.

It/s Yukio. He does it for me.

Ginjou is or at least WAS a Sub Shinigami. At the moment, he's not using those powers (he's using the ones he stole from Ichigo). It is currently unknown whether or not he can still use his shinigami powers or not, but I believe we did see his badge before...

Are you sure, his fullbring thing looks a lot like Ichigo's current shinigame stuff.

As for the evilness, well, I think Riruka is the same with the others, she's just being Tsundere baka Ichigo, I don't want your stupid powers. Though we currently don't know if XCution are actually good guys, or bad guys (because of the number of times that Trollkishima bloody cut them). It's likely, though, that only Ginjou and Tsukishima are evil, and that the other XCution members aren't (so that Kubo can minimise the death toll) - this would then allow them to return their powers to Ichigo, if he so chooses to get them back.

I think she is different, actually. She legitimately seems like she's fighting it. I bet she'll be one of those stereotypical 'changed by power' characters. But like, she was surprised by Yukio and Giriko, when they talked about dividing them.


The one that included all of us, or your OCs? Either way, I'm excited.

Bolded

And yeah, that one. And if you remind me I'll do the dramatic voice 'PREVIOUSLY ON' Thing again.




I cbb to keep up with the current arc logic anymore, though. I'll just read through and enjoy the fights. XD And wait for ILPy's explanation

Mine or the actual manga arc?

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st September 2011, 6:29 AM
No, I have charts for non-captain members too. :D

Of course, you live in Hawaii...

I totally spaced and forgot my original hex chart that was made when I joined. xD I also realized that I'm the only non-captain still active. Don't know why I didn't make that connection earlier.

Someone got the joke! SWEET! xD




http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/RexOctaBDCLT.png

Looks pretty sweet, and evenly spread out.

Cell
1st September 2011, 12:45 PM
Sorry for the disappearance, I was lurking but not posting. >.>

Belated congratulations, Jin! :)



I found the whole assortiment of captains appearing (with hardly any changes) already fanservice.. Yamamoto is acting out of character, Ginjou being the first substitute shinigami.. Where the hell is this going.. but that is not all..

A mindscrew BSOD for Chad and Orihime and suddenly a power-up for all the fullbringers by sharing Ichigo's power? WHAT POWER? His (uncompleted) Fullbring?

Total ********.. What's next? They all gain higher-than-a-captain power and sweep the floor with everyone in Soul Society?
Then Ichigo gets another power-up, turns into a hero and loses his powers again! Hah! So aweso- No it's not.


Kubo... PLEASE GET A GRIP ON WHERE YOU WANT TO GO WITH YOUR STORY. Jesus, it's getting worse and worse.


Honestly.. Bleach is quickly dropping in rank in my book..




Thanks for the new chart, Zam.. But you raised psychical strength again. :P Ah well, I'll settle for it.. (or I could lower psychical strength and raise the other stats and get a first 100).



Anyway, I'm off to hide in the flower pots again.

arceus03
1st September 2011, 12:55 PM
Here are the 8 battle data charts that I got requests for today. xD

Sweet, thanks Zam :)


Bolded

And yeah, that one. And if you remind me I'll do the dramatic voice 'PREVIOUSLY ON' Thing again.

Mine or the actual manga arc?

Yukio 8D ikr

Do eeeeeeeet
Though I still remember because... well it's only 2 chapters of the new arc so far. XD

Ah, sorry. The actual manga arc. XD Plus, anything I don't understand with your story I just ask it straightaway.


I totally spaced and forgot my original hex chart that was made when I joined. xD I also realized that I'm the only non-captain still active. Don't know why I didn't make that connection earlier.

Someone got the joke! SWEET! xD

IT'S QUANTUM PHYSICS! whatever that means. XD

There's a joke? *fails at life*

On a less cheerful note, I am getting busier. XD Classes are just about to start, adapting to college life (lol), etc. So yeah. Subtle warning of "I might not be very active soon"

I like Pokemon (...)
1st September 2011, 4:01 PM
idk if you knew, but August 31st is also Malaysia's Independence Day. Jin is what you'd call a "budak merdeka" in my language. :p
Oh wow, what a day to be born on.

Oh, something I forgot, Jin shares his birthday with Renji - 31st August.

Eh, I thought that the other Fullbringers are evil as well?

And we didn't actually see Shishigawara in the last panel, did we?

Mmmmfff, too lazy to pick a color right now. >.< Just go with Unohana's color, for me.

I cbb to keep up with the current arc logic anymore, though. I'll just read through and enjoy the fights. XD And wait for ILPy's explanation
From what I remember - when Ichigo was still being trained by XCution (and everyone was "good"), Tsukishima came in, and Ginjou and Ichigo escaped. Tsukishima cut all of the XCution - making them evil.

Later on, Ginjou then gets cut, revealing that he was evil from the very beginning, and that this was his second time being cut - turning him back to normal.

It is currently unknown how many times XCution as a whole (Yukio, Riruka, Jackie and Giriko) have been cut - it is at least once. If it is only once, then they were good turned bad and that's it.

And no, we didn't, but those are the two that are "left out". Though I guess Rukia can fight Riruka or Jackie or something.

Puce (Dusty Pink) (http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Squad_4)? Ya sure? XP

If you have any questions, I'll try and explain. Where I fail, Eon will pick up <.<


This works out well. I've been needing to revamp.
If we make hex stats out of this, it'll be:
Offense: 100 (Same as before)
Defense: 30 (60 before)
Mobility: 90 (was 80)
Kidou/Reiatsu: 60? (average between 40 Kidou and 80 Reiatsu. Was 80 before)
Intellect: 90 (was 80)
Stamina: 100 (was 90)
Total: 470

I think you might be able to get away with bumping the Kidou/Reiatsu up a bit if you wanted a 480 or 490 total. At least this Hex Chart would match your new Oct Chart. Also what colour do you want?

One thing that I quite like is that you followed with a "trifecta of 100s", to go for a good combo - in this case, the combo would make you hit like a truck.



Here are the 8 battle data charts that I got requests for today. xD
Absolutely beautiful 8O

I think when almost everyone has made Octa stats, I'll be sure to make matching Hex charts, too.



It/s Yukio. He does it for me.
At least we'll be able to see more of him soon.


Are you sure, his fullbring thing looks a lot like Ichigo's current shinigame stuff.
Ginjou's own powers are making the pendantthing into a giant sword. Remember when he stole Ichigo's powers? He's using those ones now. Possibly the reason why the Fullbring that Ginjou is using is similar to Ichigo's shinigami stuff if simply because it's Ichigo's powers, and Ichigo can't use anything except for Getsuga Tenshou.


I think she is different, actually. She legitimately seems like she's fighting it. I bet she'll be one of those stereotypical 'changed by power' characters. But like, she was surprised by Yukio and Giriko, when they talked about dividing them.
Perhaps.

And yeah, that one. And if you remind me I'll do the dramatic voice 'PREVIOUSLY ON' Thing again.
Do the PREVIOUSLY ON thing again.


Someone got the joke! SWEET! xD
Is it bad that I first thought of 42?


A mindscrew BSOD for Chad and Orihime and suddenly a power-up for all the fullbringers by sharing Ichigo's power? WHAT POWER? His (uncompleted) Fullbring?


Kubo... PLEASE GET A GRIP ON WHERE YOU WANT TO GO WITH YOUR STORY. Jesus, it's getting worse and worse.

Honestly.. Bleach is quickly dropping in rank in my book..

Ah, I find it kind of funny that it's mainly the second squad that seems to be constantly disappointed by where Bleach is going XD.
To me, it seems like the power that they are using, while it is Ichigo's Fullbring, is only partially his power, and perhaps it's more like the concept of his abilities - if you look, Ginjou, Riruka, Yukio, Giriko and Jackie all have different version, that are adapted to their own Fullbring (Giriko has clocks around him, Yukio has... headphones?, Jackie has things on her legs, etc.). So I suppose it's less "Ichigo's power" (which implies strength), as "Ichigo's abilities" (which implies that things that he can do; like ninja to the opposite wall while you blink).

There's a joke? *fails at life*
Zam explained it to me so I didn't get it either.


Oh, I almost forgot, I think I know what Senny's stat would be:
Offense: 80
Defence: 80
Mobility: 80
Kidou: 100
Reiatsu: 80
Intellect: 80
Physical Strength: 70
Stamina: 80
Total: 650

The reason why I say this is because in his hex charts, all of his stats are 80 except for Kidou/Reaitsu which is 100, and Physical Strength (he left before Zam made the change to Stamina) which is 70. One thing to note are that Shunsui's hex stats are exactly the same except all the 80s are instead, 90s.

If we do the same thing with Shunsui's octa chart (turning the 90s into 80s, and leaving the 100/80/70 alone), we end up with these stats. It also still shows what I think Senny's hex chart was trying to show - he's very well rounded, but he'd rather shoot a kidou spell than throw a punch.

His total is also a good number, with I think a few people getting 650.

So what do you guys think? Should we use these stats for him, or not bother making an Octa Chart for him at all?

MasterCharizard15
1st September 2011, 8:09 PM
Oh, I almost forgot, I think I know what Senny's stat would be:
Offense: 80
Defence: 80
Mobility: 80
Kidou: 100
Reiatsu: 80
Intellect: 80
Physical Strength: 70
Stamina: 80
Total: 650

The reason why I say this is because in his hex charts, all of his stats are 80 except for Kidou/Reaitsu which is 100, and Physical Strength (he left before Zam made the change to Stamina) which is 70. One thing to note are that Shunsui's hex stats are exactly the same except all the 80s are instead, 90s.

If we do the same thing with Shunsui's octa chart (turning the 90s into 80s, and leaving the 100/80/70 alone), we end up with these stats. It also still shows what I think Senny's hex chart was trying to show - he's very well rounded, but he'd rather shoot a kidou spell than throw a punch.

His total is also a good number, with I think a few people getting 650.

So what do you guys think? Should we use these stats for him, or not bother making an Octa Chart for him at all?

I say it works.
He stats look really nice too...

Do it, just so that we can have a complete collection!
It would finally be something since zanpaktou that each Captain has. *looks at the Squad page list*

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st September 2011, 10:05 PM
IT'S QUANTUM PHYSICS! whatever that means. XD


I WAS BLINDED....BY SCIENCE!!



[FONT=Candara]
There's a joke? *fails at life*



Is it bad that I first thought of 42?

YOU BOTH FAIL!!!!!! You wanna guess what 420 mean? xD



From what I remember - when Ichigo was still being trained by XCution (and everyone was "good"), Tsukishima came in, and Ginjou and Ichigo escaped. Tsukishima cut all of the XCution - making them evil.

Later on, Ginjou then gets cut, revealing that he was evil from the very beginning, and that this was his second time being cut - turning him back to normal.

It is currently unknown how many times XCution as a whole (Yukio, Riruka, Jackie and Giriko) have been cut - it is at least once. If it is only once, then they were good turned bad and that's it.

And no, we didn't, but those are the two that are "left out". Though I guess Rukia can fight Riruka or Jackie or something.

I think they were all evil from the beginning.




Zam explained it to me so I didn't get it either.


Don't! I'm enjoying this!

EDIT: THE FREE CAR CAME IN A DAY EARLY!!!! W00T!!

arceus03
2nd September 2011, 3:57 AM
Oh wow, what a day to be born on.

Indeed.



It is currently unknown how many times XCution as a whole (Yukio, Riruka, Jackie and Giriko) have been cut - it is at least once. If it is only once, then they were good turned bad and that's it.

Ah. I thought they all like, get cut twice. >.> Meh. I'll just wait and see.


Puce (Dusty Pink) (http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Squad_4)? Ya sure? XP

On second thoughts. XD Give me Royal Blue. Color code #2B60DE.


Zam explained it to me so I didn't get it either.

Good, then explain it to me


So what do you guys think? Should we use these stats for him, or not bother making an Octa Chart for him at all?

Well like MC said. I don't mind. Just for the sake of completion, go ahead.

Also, I've been wondering. You said "Reiatsu" but Zam labeled it as "Spiritual Power". Which one is it? If it's reiatsu, I'd probably lower mine to, 80 or 70, because I don't really exert THAT much spiritual force. If it's spiritual power, then yeah, I have it that high because Kido comes from spiritual power.


I WAS BLINDED....BY SCIENCE!!

QUANTUM PHYSICS


YOU BOTH FAIL!!!!!! You wanna guess what 420 mean? xD

ikr. XD I have a hard time catching on to jokes, and I laugh at lame jokes. Yeah, I'm slow and weird that way. 8D


I think they were all evil from the beginning.

MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY


EDIT: THE FREE CAR CAME IN A DAY EARLY!!!! W00T!!

Cool. Have a nice drive =D

I like Pokemon (...)
2nd September 2011, 4:48 AM
I say it works.
He stats look really nice too...

Do it, just so that we can have a complete collection!
It would finally be something since zanpaktou that each Captain has. *looks at the Squad page list*
Completion was the main reason why I made it XD

I WAS BLINDED....BY SCIENCE!!
Remind me why I didn't immediatelly jump in at the mention of "Quantum Physics"?


YOU BOTH FAIL!!!!!! You wanna guess what 420 mean? xD
My fail was an AWESOME fail!


EDIT: THE FREE CAR CAME IN A DAY EARLY!!!! W00T!!
Woo! Congrats!

On second thoughts. XD Give me Royal Blue. Color code #2B60DE.
XP Thought so.

So your new stats (to match the octa charts) are:
Offense: 80
Defense: 100
Mobility: 60
Kidou/Reiatsu: ? 100 Kidou, but about the Reiatsu...
Intellect: 80
Stamina: 70
10 has moved from Intellect to Stamina, in this case.

I'll make your new chart, and coloured version after your reply to this.


Also, I've been wondering. You said "Reiatsu" but Zam labeled it as "Spiritual Power". Which one is it? If it's reiatsu, I'd probably lower mine to, 80 or 70, because I don't really exert THAT much spiritual force. If it's spiritual power, then yeah, I have it that high because Kido comes from spiritual power.
Officially, it says Attack, Defense, Mobility, Kidou/Spirital Pressure, Intellect, Stamina. I think Zam said that he preferred spiritual power because pressure is an affect of it (and people with low spiritual pressure don't always have a low spiritual power). I say "Reiatsu" because I'm too lazy to type out "Spiritual Pressure/Power", and because both terms are thrown around in the manga quite freely, I find.

ikr. XD I have a hard time catching on to jokes, and I laugh at lame jokes. Yeah, I'm slow and weird that way. 8D
It's not something you or I would understand immediately.

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd September 2011, 5:50 AM
Ah. I thought they all like, get cut twice. >.> Meh. I'll just wait and see.




MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY


OR! Or the other members of XCution could be good actors/esses. Most of their contact with him was when they were using their fullbring and/or beating him up. Which isn't that hard to act out if you actually wanted to do it.



On second thoughts. XD Give me Royal Blue. Color code #2B60DE.


Whats wrong with puce? It is Unohana's squad color, and its a pleasant shade of pink.



Good, then explain it to me


This whole 420 thing amuses me xD. Oh yea, I was in class today and checked my phone for the time and guess what time it was? 4:20! xD :p



QUANTUM PHYSICS


Same difference.



ikr. XD I have a hard time catching on to jokes, and I laugh at lame jokes. Yeah, I'm slow and weird that way. 8D


I used to have a friend like that. He made everything that much funnier.



Cool. Have a nice drive =D



Woo! Congrats!


Thanks. And it was a glorious drive.



Remind me why I didn't immediatelly jump in at the mention of "Quantum Physics"?


Because it doesn't have anything to do with it?



My fail was an AWESOME fail!


It was so lame that it turned awesome.



It's not something you or I would understand immediately.

So, how much of it do you understand now?

arceus03
2nd September 2011, 12:34 PM
Remind me why I didn't immediatelly jump in at the mention of "Quantum Physics"?

I wondered why. XD


So your new stats (to match the octa charts) are:
Offense: 80
Defense: 100
Mobility: 60
Kidou/Reiatsu: ? 100 Kidou, but about the Reiatsu...
Intellect: 80
Stamina: 70
10 has moved from Intellect to Stamina, in this case.

Sounds about good. Nobody else complained so I guess it's okay? Let the Kido be 100, just so the total stays the same?


Officially, it says Attack, Defense, Mobility, Kidou/Spirital Pressure, Intellect, Stamina. I think Zam said that he preferred spiritual power because pressure is an affect of it (and people with low spiritual pressure don't always have a low spiritual power). I say "Reiatsu" because I'm too lazy to type out "Spiritual Pressure/Power", and because both terms are thrown around in the manga quite freely, I find.

Effect. :p And so is it pressure or power?


It's not something you or I would understand immediately.

Ah. Tellmetellme


OR! Or the other members of XCution could be good actors/esses. Most of their contact with him was when they were using their fullbring and/or beating him up. Which isn't that hard to act out if you actually wanted to do it.


spoilers please :p

Er, meaning?


Whats wrong with puce? It is Unohana's squad color, and its a pleasant shade of pink.

Nothing wrong with it XD But I like blue. =D

Oh. MC,

Offensive Squad, plus I focus on Zanjutsu and Haduka alot as well

It's Hakuda. :p

I like Pokemon (...)
2nd September 2011, 2:21 PM
OR! Or the other members of XCution could be good actors/esses. Most of their contact with him was when they were using their fullbring and/or beating him up. Which isn't that hard to act out if you actually wanted to do it.
That sounds a bit too long winded and trollish, even for Kubo.


Because it doesn't have anything to do with it?
So? ~QUANTUM PHYSICS~


It was so lame that it turned awesome.
It was awesome from the beginning.


So, how much of it do you understand now?
Presumably all of it, unless there's another part I'm missing.

Sounds about good. Nobody else complained so I guess it's okay? Let the Kido be 100, just so the total stays the same?
http://oi55.*******.com/jr8p4i.jpg
http://oi52.*******.com/jb44y9.jpg


Effect. :p And so is it pressure or power?
>.> It sounds like you ignored everything except for that.

According to the official books - pressure
According to Zam - power
Depends if you want to agree with what Zam's chart describes, or what the official books describes.
I use the word "reiatsu" because I'm lazy.

Zameric
2nd September 2011, 9:18 PM
ikr. XD I have a hard time catching on to jokes, and I laugh at lame jokes. Yeah, I'm slow and weird that way. 8D
Might just be a joke that Americans would understand better.
Especially with the way I responded to it. xD


Whats wrong with puce? It is Unohana's squad color, and its a pleasant shade of pink.

This whole 420 thing amuses me xD. Oh yea, I was in class today and checked my phone for the time and guess what time it was? 4:20! xD :p
Just sounds kind of...wrong. xD

That's like when ILP notices 3 1 4 in ordinary things.



Effect. :p And so is it pressure or power?
>.> It sounds like you ignored everything except for that.

According to the official books - pressure
According to Zam - power
Depends if you want to agree with what Zam's chart describes, or what the official books describes.
I use the word "reiatsu" because I'm lazy.
Just wondering...

Reiatsu = Spiritual Pressure
Reiryoku = Spiritual Power

Is that the answer to your question, or was it ILP's?

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd September 2011, 9:49 PM
spoilers please :p

Er, meaning?


Meaning they weren't cut at all. Only Ginjou was, and the whole time everyone else knew exactly what was going on from the beginning.

...Nevermind, this whole theory thing doesn't play out. I'll just stick with they were all evil from the beginning.



Nothing wrong with it XD But I like blue. =D


Blue is awesome. But purple PWNS all!


That sounds a bit too long winded and trollish, even for Kubo.


Yup. *See my response to Arc*



So? ~QUANTUM PHYSICS~


It's like me and Zam jumping at 420 *snickers* 420.



It was awesome from the beginning.


Either way, it was awesome in the end.



Presumably all of it, unless there's another part I'm missing.


I'm guessing you'll never fully grasp the amusement of it, like me and Zam have.


Might just be a joke that Americans would understand better.
Especially with the way I responded to it. xD


Or people in Amsterdam & Jamaica. But either way, we Americans love 420, even non-smokers.



Just sounds kind of...wrong. xD

That's like when ILP notices 3 1 4 in ordinary things.


Hmmm.......puce......puce........puce....puce. Its so close to puke. xD

Like Jim Carey and the number 23!

arceus03
3rd September 2011, 4:50 AM
http://oi55.*******.com/jr8p4i.jpg
http://oi52.*******.com/jb44y9.jpg


>.> It sounds like you ignored everything except for that.

According to the official books - pressure
According to Zam - power
Depends if you want to agree with what Zam's chart describes, or what the official books describes.
I use the word "reiatsu" because I'm lazy.

XD Cool, thankies.
Though the edges are pixelly

Ookay so it's pressure. Mizuhashi does have a huge spiritual power reserve, but he doesn't really exert that much reiatsu. That is, he could do so if he wants to... Just rarely so mostly while deathglaring?

Soyeah, I guess 90 is okay? For the octa chart, that is. For the hex, keep it at 100, because of Kido.



Just wondering...

Reiatsu = Spiritual Pressure
Reiryoku = Spiritual Power

Is that the answer to your question, or was it ILP's?

ILPy's. Still. Thanks. :p


Meaning they weren't cut at all. Only Ginjou was, and the whole time everyone else knew exactly what was going on from the beginning.

Blue is awesome. But purple PWNS all!



Ohhh. I see. Hey, you never know, that could happen. *shrug*

Purple is in the same family color as blue

PKMN Trainer Rex
4th September 2011, 5:10 AM
The club dropped to the middle of the second page :O.



Ohhh. I see. Hey, you never know, that could happen. *shrug*

Purple is in the same family color as blue

*Shrugs* Maybe we'll have to wait and see.

You could say that.

I like Pokemon (...)
4th September 2011, 1:45 PM
I decide to spend 2 days watching TV, and the club slows down. Godamn.


Might just be a joke that Americans would understand better.
Perhaps. Then again, I think Arc and I are more... "sheltered" XD.

That's like when ILP notices 3 1 4 in ordinary things.
Ahaha, yeah. In fact, I think it was you who noticed the Bleach episode was 314 once :p
I also try and spot 141 and 173 wherever I can (the first 3 digits of SQRT2 and SQRT3). If I can remember e to more than one decimal place, I would do that, too.


Blue is awesome.
I'll agree with you there 8D *Cough*


Either way, it was awesome in the end.
Yup XP


I'm guessing you'll never fully grasp the amusement of it, like me and Zam have.
Not that, no.


Hmmm.......puce......puce........puce....puce. Its so close to puke. xD
It is.

Though the edges are pixelly
Yeah, I do it like that because I find it easier for me to colour in. Though I may fix up all the charts that I have done, since there are very small mistakes all over the place.

Soyeah, I guess 90 is okay? For the octa chart, that is. For the hex, keep it at 100, because of Kido.
Alright.


Purple is in the same family color as blue
Depends on what you consider the "families" to be - for example, if you have the families being red, blue and yellow, then Purple would be in the families of red and blue. Alternatively, if you go with the colours of the rainbow (red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, violet), purple would fall under indigo/violet moreso than blue, methinks.

arceus03
4th September 2011, 3:49 PM
The club dropped to the middle of the second page :O.

*Shrugs* Maybe we'll have to wait and see.


Yeah :O

Indeed.


I decide to spend 2 days watching TV, and the club slows down. Godamn.

Not my fault, the last post was mine before it died, so cannot blame me for not bringing it alive again


Perhaps. Then again, I think Arc and I are more... "sheltered" XD.

I am innocent *blinking big sparkly eyes* *oar'd*


I'll agree with you there 8D *Cough*

You for a totally different reason than anyone else, lol.

Hey, I sound like Eon


Depends on what you consider the "families" to be - for example, if you have the families being red, blue and yellow, then Purple would be in the families of red and blue. Alternatively, if you go with the colours of the rainbow (red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, violet), purple would fall under indigo/violet moreso than blue, methinks.

I thought Blue falls into ILPy family? *shot*

I need to add something Bleach related. So. UNOHANA. 8D

314 what?

MasterCharizard15
4th September 2011, 7:19 PM
What is your Squad's color and insignia?

Crimson Red and a Flaming Claw. What? I have no idea really...

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

...I'll answer later.

There you now having something live off of, now do so!

arceus03
4th September 2011, 8:55 PM
What is your Squad's color and insignia?

The color would be the same as my chart color... Royal blue. Insignia... I think the ones introduced in the manga are the official ones, and I'd just use that, but if we're making new ones, whatever, then I'll go with... moonflower (http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_heY4oPHHFrE/TCOSwWKjBbI/AAAAAAAAE2g/hIxsaoFpt8k/s1600/moonflower_full_bloom.jpg). =D

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

.... What?

Eon Master
5th September 2011, 12:51 AM
What is your Squad's color and insignia?

Electric Blue, and http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss287/EonADS/rvavd3.png

Thanks to Kida for making that icon up a while ago.

EDIT: Explain what the insignia means.

Mine basically means two things. "United We Stand, Divided We Fall", much like a wolf pack. The other meaning is "Temper Logic With Instinct".

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

Lol, no.

PKMN Trainer Rex
5th September 2011, 2:06 AM
I decide to spend 2 days watching TV, and the club slows down. Godamn.[quote]

Thats what you get for playing hooky.


[QUOTE=I like Pokemon (...);13369866]
Perhaps. Then again, I think Arc and I are more... "sheltered" XD.


Not that, no.


...Gah, I totally forgot what I was gonna say about this.....


What is your Squad's color and insignia?

Electric Blue, and http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss287/EonADS/rvavd3.png

Thanks to Kida for making that icon up a while ago.


BOSS.

What is your Squad's color and insignia?

Bam! (http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l264/KiLotr/tumblr/15107-gurren_lagann-logo-skull-vect.png)...no. I don't know, I'll leave it to me captain.

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

Byakuya for every month. Same pose different background.

arceus03
5th September 2011, 2:08 AM
... Wait, I thought insignias are supposed to be flowers? XD
Oh, just to add another one:

Explain what your insignia means
lol, mine is pretty easy. If the bellflower (official insignia in the manga) means "Those who grieve are loved", mine would be something along that line. Or if I want to take that further... How about "The ultimate healing is the healing of soul"?

Aaaaand now we can add that to our squad pages! Yay!

kusari
5th September 2011, 2:39 AM
Hey, it's Kusari. Guess what he doesn't have.

What is your Squad's color and insignia?
Puce Silver and the Albatross, a bird that was said to have been a symbol of good luck by ancient mariners.


Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way. (I'm actually going to respond)

January: Golde and Yamamoto with their zans released in badass poses
February: A picture of the forest. Cell and Soi Fon are hidden in the picture somewhere.
March: Kida glomping Gin.
April: Arc fanboying at Unohana's feet.
May: Aizen in his "I am God" form, standing on Flash.
June: MC and Byakuya locked in combat.
July: Eon teaching Komamura how to be useful.
August: Shunsui with Nanao. Senny is nowhere to be found.
September: Tosen and Zam standing in front of a giant banner that says "JUSTICE".
October: Rotrum and Hitsugaya in the snow. The least imaginative one.
November: Blue and Kenpachi beating the **** out of eachother.
December: ILP and Mayuri doing science stuff.
Smarch: Ukitake and I sleeping.

arceus03
5th September 2011, 3:39 AM
Oh ILPy. btw, puce is DUSKY pink. Not dusty. XP
Also, I'm getting a t-shirt. It'll have number 42 on it. 8D



Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

Byakuya for every month. Same pose different background.

Lol. That's not gonna work. Remember when the Shinigami's Women Association, IIRC, tried to take his picture? The omake with Nemu saying "Butter."? XD

Wait lemme find that vid... Ah, here it is. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOsWxz4ACF0) XD


Hey, it's Kusari. Guess what he doesn't have.

The chess fic?



Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way. (I'm actually going to respond)

January: Golde and Yamamoto with their zans released in badass poses
February: A picture of the forest. Cell and Soi Fon are hidden in the picture somewhere.
March: Kida glomping Gin.
April: Arc fanboying at Unohana's feet.
May: Aizen in his "I am God" form, standing on Flash.
June: MC and Byakuya locked in combat.
July: Eon teaching Komamura how to be useful.
August: Shunsui with Nanao. Senny is nowhere to be found.
September: Tosen and Zam standing in front of a giant banner that says "JUSTICE".
October: Rotrum and Hitsugaya in the snow. The least imaginative one.
November: Blue and Kenpachi beating the **** out of eachother.
December: ILP and Mayuri doing science stuff.
Smarch: Ukitake and I sleeping.

That's a cool response really. XD
Though I'd say I'd be baking cookies with Unohana. lol

Golde
5th September 2011, 4:15 AM
Do eeeeeeeet
Though I still remember because... well it's only 2 chapters of the new arc so far. XD

Ah, sorry. The actual manga arc. XD Plus, anything I don't understand with your story I just ask it straightaway.



Yeah. I'll like, clarify. I hit a wall writing the third. Then gave up due to moving :P

And yeah, do.



Byakuya for every month. Same pose different background.

I wanna see the swimsuit months



January: Golde and Yamamoto with their zans released in badass poses

I'd draw that if I didn't hate Yama

February: A picture of the forest. Cell and Soi Fon are hidden in the picture somewhere.

I like that XD

March: Kida glomping Gin.

I can relate :P

April: Arc fanboying at Unohana's feet.

Well she IS boss

May: Aizen in his "I am God" form, standing on Flash.

XD

June: MC and Byakuya locked in combat.

Awesome! :D

July: Eon teaching Komamura how to be useful.

Komamura rocks >> though yeah, hasn't really done anything I guess..

August: Shunsui with Nanao. Senny is nowhere to be found.

Clever. You're clever

September: Tosen and Zam standing in front of a giant banner that says "JUSTICE".

I sense a comedic element here

October: Rotrum and Hitsugaya in the snow. The least imaginative one.

Yeeeeah

November: Blue and Kenpachi beating the **** out of eachother.

Or ganging up on some mo-fo's :p

December: ILP and Mayuri doing science stuff.

LIKE IN THE NIGHTMARE BEFORE CHRISTMAS

Smarch: Ukitake and I sleeping.

Nice :p

PKMN Trainer Rex
5th September 2011, 7:16 AM
... Wait, I thought insignias are supposed to be flowers? XD

I say we forge our own path on this one. With that said, I have personally adopted the team dai-gurren logo & what it means to heart.


Explain what your insignia means

What it means to me. No matter the odds, no matter what happened, just keep moving forward.


Hey, it's Kusari. Guess what he doesn't have.


Rabies?



Lol. That's not gonna work. Remember when, iirc, he Shinigami's Women Association, IIRC, tried to take his picture? The omake with Nemu saying "Butter."? XD

Wait lemme find that vid... Ah, here it is. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOsWxz4ACF0) XD


They ambushed him, just tell him that it's his duty as a royal to "please" the women of Soul Society.



I wanna see the swimsuit months

It's him wearing a speedo, with his arms on his head staring off into the distance.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
5th September 2011, 2:49 PM
A belated thank you to those who wished me a happy birthday in large, bold letters.
And small letters while I'm at it.


Ah, I find it kind of funny that it's mainly the second squad that seems to be constantly disappointed by where Bleach is going XD.
I know why I'm disappointed. I've read enough manga that if I'm going to feel excited over a manga, it's gonna have to be a stand-out from the rest.
You could say that Bleach is standing out...but not for the right reasons.
It used to be so interesting too...rather disappointing that it turned out this way. I guess you just can't keep making stuff up as you go when you're making a long-term series...
But I must give him credit where it's due. It was Kubo after all who sparked the passion within me for drawing comics. He made me realize that if someone like him can be considered a professional mangaka, my chances are absolutely positive. That's why I'm drawing comics now.
All I've got to do is refine my art style and gain more experience as an artist and story writer.

As for the current chapter:
Hey, you know what I'd have done if I were Hitsugaya? Freeze all the fullbringers while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting them all.
If I were Kenpachi, I'd just cut all of them down with a single hand swipe while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting his comrades. Or with two hands if I'm feeling bored.
If I were Byakuya, I'd just overpower Ginjou and his comrades with pretty pink flowers...while he's busy smirking and cutting his comrades.
If I were Ichigo even, a single Getsuga Tenshou, while overused and boring, would be enough to absolutely destroy all fullbringers at once.
Why in the world did every single one of them just stand there and do nothing while Ginjou was busy smirking and cutting his comrades?
Idiots.

Zameric
6th September 2011, 6:33 AM
Here is Red Globe's battle data chart...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/RGOctaBDCLT.png


What is your Squad's color and insignia?
If I could change it from the canon...
An argent coat of arms type shield (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/4/49/Heraldic_Shield_Argent.svg/122px-Heraldic_Shield_Argent.svg.png). Kusari took silver -_-
On the shield would be a Libra scale on one side and scroll on the other.
The version used on badges and limiters would just be a shield silhouette.
I don't know much about flowers or what they may symbolize. >.>


As for the current chapter:
Hey, you know what I'd have done if I were Hitsugaya? Freeze all the fullbringers while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting them all.
If I were Kenpachi, I'd just cut all of them down with a single hand swipe while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting his comrades. Or with two hands if I'm feeling bored.
If I were Byakuya, I'd just overpower Ginjou and his comrades with pretty pink flowers...while he's busy smirking and cutting his comrades.
If I were Ichigo even, a single Getsuga Tenshou, while overused and boring, would be enough to absolutely destroy all fullbringers at once.
Why in the world did every single one of them just stand there and do nothing while Ginjou was busy smirking and cutting his comrades?
Idiots.
Because then it would be short and boring in the bad way. >.>

Cell
6th September 2011, 10:26 AM
I know why I'm disappointed. I've read enough manga that if I'm going to feel excited over a manga, it's gonna have to be a stand-out from the rest.
You could say that Bleach is standing out...but not for the right reasons.
It used to be so interesting too...rather disappointing that it turned out this way. I guess you just can't keep making stuff up as you go when you're making a long-term series...


Actually, I'm a bit in the same boat. I daresay I've read about 300 manga so far, with my favorite being 'Lucifer and The Biscuit Hammer'.

But when you then see where Bleach is going from what it once was.. It's just so disappointing.

My main problem with Bleach, is that there isn't ANY (decent) character building anymore. =s


What is your Squad's color and insignia?
I quote Zameric here, if I can change it from cannon;
2 crossed daggers in white, on a black background.

If it has to be a 'flower' then a fly trap. ;)

Jinchuuriki Hunter
6th September 2011, 11:29 AM
I've read about 300 manga
Woah, I've only got like a bit over 10...
But yeah, character building seems to be a problem with both Bleach and Naruto. But I'll just talk about Bleach here.
Ichigo has no character.
Uryuu has no character.
Orihime's only defining character trait is Kurosaki-kun.
Chad barely feels like a character.
And these are supposed to be the main protagonists...

MasterCharizard15
6th September 2011, 3:55 PM
Woah, I've only got like a bit over 10...
But yeah, character building seems to be a problem with both Bleach and Naruto. But I'll just talk about Bleach here.
Ichigo has no character.
Uryuu has no character.
Orihime's only defining character trait is Kurosaki-kun.
Chad barely feels like a character.
And these are supposed to be the main protagonists...

...so its clear as day that the Soul Society/Las Noches pretty much has everything we like/liked about Bleach then?

Though with so many chapters, HOW can it be that they have no character?

Eon Master
6th September 2011, 7:43 PM
^ Because Kubo is hopeless as a writer. His concepts are great, but his development of both characters and plot are pathetic. Ichigo was supposed to be that gruff, edgy kind of good guy while Ishida was supposed to be overly rightous one, and yet they ended up moving closer towards the other's character until they became bland and uninteresting. It's not that they don't have a personality, it's that their personality is completely unchanging and uniform :/


Good news: I finally have my notes, so the next chapter can finally be written. I'm about six pages in right now, so this one might end up a bit shorter than the others. Still, look forward to it.

I like Pokemon (...)
6th September 2011, 8:43 PM
Big post ahead~


You for a totally different reason than anyone else, lol.

I thought Blue falls into ILPy family? *shot*

314 what?
Yup 8D

Blue does, blue doesn't. Man, imagine if I swapped the nouns around...

I jokingly try and find 314 in as many things as possible.

What is your Squad's color and insignia?
I don't know if there's a name, but the colour I used for my charts is, I think, the colour of the tears down Ulquiorra's face in the manga. *Cough* What?

As for insignia, I'm guessing that anything I'll say, Da.c will say I have no imagination - this would probably mean the obvious stuff, like a calculator, a test tube, a microscope etc.

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

I think Kusari did a DAMN good job of it. But I've always sort of wondered what would happen if I could make a calender that is different from the typical gregorian:
We have 365 days, which splits almost perfectly into 13 months, of exactly 28 days (there's one day left over, though). I figure the main reason why we have 12 months and not 13 months is the fact that 13 is a prime, while 12 can be split into 1:12, 2:6, 3:4 (and vice-versa), making it much nicer to group seasons together, or to say "half a year", or a quarter or a third, etc.

...What was I doing?


Thats what you get for playing hooky.
Playing what? Hooky sounds like hickey



Byakuya for every month. Same pose different background.
My sister would love that too much.


Hey, it's Kusari. Guess what he doesn't have.
Ah well. I'm surprisingly patient, it seems.

December: ILP and Mayuri doing science stuff.
I'mokaywiththis.

Oh ILPy. btw, puce is DUSKY pink. Not dusty. XP
Also, I'm getting a t-shirt. It'll have number 42 on it. 8D
Ah, my mistake.
I have a hoodie with Phi on the back.


But I must give him credit where it's due. It was Kubo after all who sparked the passion within me for drawing comics. He made me realize that if someone like him can be considered a professional mangaka, my chances are absolutely positive.
Reminds me of this. (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RightForTheWrongReasons)


Hey, you know what I'd have done if I were Hitsugaya? Freeze all the fullbringers while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting them all.
If I were Kenpachi, I'd just cut all of them down with a single hand swipe while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting his comrades. Or with two hands if I'm feeling bored.
If I were Byakuya, I'd just overpower Ginjou and his comrades with pretty pink flowers...while he's busy smirking and cutting his comrades.
If I were Ichigo even, a single Getsuga Tenshou, while overused and boring, would be enough to absolutely destroy all fullbringers at once.
Why in the world did every single one of them just stand there and do nothing while Ginjou was busy smirking and cutting his comrades?
Idiots.
If they did that, it wouldn't be Bleach.

Here is Red Globe's battle data chart...
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/RGOctaBDCLT.png
DAAAATAAAA
which reminds me, new Hex charts to match Rotrum, NL, and Kusari's Oct charts. I think I managed to "fix" the edges, and I'll do that for the others at some point:

http://oi56.*******.com/30vg3rr.jpghttp://oi56.*******.com/2qjvk41.jpg
http://oi51.*******.com/110yix2.jpghttp://oi51.*******.com/s1ntpk.jpg
http://oi54.*******.com/280rrc7.jpghttp://oi52.*******.com/9sgryv.jpg



Actually, I'm a bit in the same boat. I daresay I've read about 300 manga so far, with my favorite being 'Lucifer and The Biscuit Hammer'.
That sounds like Monty Python <.<


There's also the fact that Kubo makes SO MANY BLOODY CHARACTERS

Zameric
7th September 2011, 12:43 AM
What is your Squad's color and insignia?
I don't know if there's a name, but the colour I used for my charts is, I think, the colour of the tears down Ulquiorra's face in the manga. *Cough* What?

As for insignia, I'm guessing that anything I'll say, Da.c will say I have no imagination - this would probably mean the obvious stuff, like a calculator, a test tube, a microscope etc.
You insignia should totally be a logarithmic spiral (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Logarithmic_spiral)! 8D
The link is for those who don't know what it is.


Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

I think Kusari did a DAMN good job of it. But I've always sort of wondered what would happen if I could make a calender that is different from the typical gregorian:
We have 365 days, which splits almost perfectly into 13 months, of exactly 28 days (there's one day left over, though). I figure the main reason why we have 12 months and not 13 months is the fact that 13 is a prime, while 12 can be split into 1:12, 2:6, 3:4 (and vice-versa), making it much nicer to group seasons together, or to say "half a year", or a quarter or a third, etc.

...What was I doing?
Lol, ILPy was rambling about numbers again.
Is that drool on your chin?

arceus03
7th September 2011, 3:23 AM
I say we forge our own path on this one.


8D Then I might just put a cookie... But a cookie isn't much of an emblem, lol



But I must give him credit where it's due. It was Kubo after all who sparked the passion within me for drawing comics. He made me realize that if someone like him can be considered a professional mangaka, my chances are absolutely positive. That's why I'm drawing comics now.

XD


As for the current chapter:
Hey, you know what I'd have done if I were Hitsugaya? Freeze all the fullbringers while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting them all.
If I were Kenpachi, I'd just cut all of them down with a single hand swipe while Ginjou is busy smirking and cutting his comrades. Or with two hands if I'm feeling bored.
If I were Byakuya, I'd just overpower Ginjou and his comrades with pretty pink flowers...while he's busy smirking and cutting his comrades.
If I were Ichigo even, a single Getsuga Tenshou, while overused and boring, would be enough to absolutely destroy all fullbringers at once.
Why in the world did every single one of them just stand there and do nothing while Ginjou was busy smirking and cutting his comrades?
Idiots.

Sadly that is never going to happen in Bleach. Logic just... fails here. Example. What was Ichigo doing when he saw the Captains and Vizards attacked the Hinamori Aizen? Nothing. Absolutely nothing. Then after they've realized it's Hinamori only he seems to have found his voice. >.>


Ichigo was supposed to be that gruff, edgy kind of good guy while Ishida was supposed to be overly rightous one, and yet they ended up moving closer towards the other's character until they became bland and uninteresting. It's not that they don't have a personality, it's that their personality is completely unchanging and uniform :/

Er, what? You said they ended up moving closer towards each other's character, but they're unchanging?


Good news: I finally have my notes, so the next chapter can finally be written. I'm about six pages in right now, so this one might end up a bit shorter than the others. Still, look forward to it.

YAYY



Blue does, blue doesn't. Man, imagine if I swapped the nouns around...

Er... What?


I jokingly try and find 314 in as many things as possible.

What is there with 314? o.o


As for insignia, I'm guessing that anything I'll say, Da.c will say I have no imagination - this would probably mean the obvious stuff, like a calculator, a test tube, a microscope etc.

You would't want a test tube for an insignia. People's going to think it's condom.


I have a hoodie with Phi on the back.

Cool 8D


DAAAATAAAA
which reminds me, new Hex charts to match Rotrum, NL, and Kusari's Oct charts. I think I managed to "fix" the edges, and I'll do that for the others at some point:

Stop before I start copying you and keep saying DAAAATAAAA

Fix mine as well


There's also the fact that Kubo makes SO MANY BLOODY CHARACTERS

Indeed. Well actually it's fine if it's just that, but when the one and only one getting the spotlight the whole time is Ichigo, it's boring. :\ I mean, I wanted to see the 0th Espada fight, for goodness's sake! >.> And Kensei releasing his bankai only to be.... *poof*



Lol, ILPy was rambling about numbers again.
Is that drool on your chin?

XD

I like Pokemon (...)
7th September 2011, 7:15 PM
Aha, Yukio was spot on, he DOES sound like a geezer.

"Don't forget to kill him once the battle's over," this is kind of interesting. Especially since Tsukishima seems to have a kind of... respect almost, for Sushigawara. Ironically, he was talking about "leaving out friends", though his powers allow him to create false friends with a slice of his sword - though he could be sarcastic. This also shows a bit more about Ginjou and almost how ruthless he is, but as a villain, he's wary of even those who fight with him, and does not want them to become too strong. Perhaps the fact that he told Tsukishima shows even more about their relationship.

Godamnit Ichigo, seriously, if you really want to protect people, you need to learn that just because you caused it does NOT mean that only you have to fix it. If you have a bunch of captains and lieutenants behind you, FIGHT WITH THEM. Honestly.

I think Yukio's lines would've been funnier if he used Pokemon lines.

Wow, Ikkaku just stabbed right through him. I think my eyes actually widened when I read that.

Hitsugaya and Yukio (I guessed right!)
Ikkaku and Shishigawara
Byakuya and Tsukishima (also guessed right!)
Kenpachi and Giriko (I'm good at this XD)
Which leaves either Renji and/or Rukia, with Jackie and/or Riruka. I think Rukia will pair with Riruka, and Renji with Jackie, unless they fight together.

I actually do think that the shinigami will murder the Fullbringers. Except maybe Trollkishima, because he's needed for the plot.

...That's it for Giriko. Well, he got slashed in half, but it's possible that his abilities might be able to reverse or undo that - since his powers are based on time (anyone see the almost irony in the time user versus the Kenpachi?). It would be very boring and very lame if that was all that Kenpachi did. Yes, we know that he's strong. But are the Fullbringers THAT much weaker by comparison?

Overall, kinda eh.




You insignia should totally be a logarithmic spiral (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Logarithmic_spiral)! 8D
The link is for those who don't know what it is.

Ah, yes, of course, a logarithmic spiral. The Golden Spiral is also considered a "beautiful" spiral (because it's based on the Golden Ratio, which is considered very beautiful in art and music) - probably something Da.c would like as well.


Lol, ILPy was rambling about numbers again.
Is that drool on your chin?
Eheh, you should've seen the look on my face when my teacher said "we are drowing in data!"

8D Then I might just put a cookie... But a cookie isn't much of an emblem, lol
A cookie with a bandage.

Sadly that is never going to happen in Bleach. Logic just... fails here. Example. What was Ichigo doing when he saw the Captains and Vizards attacked the Hinamori Aizen? Nothing. Absolutely nothing. Then after they've realized it's Hinamori only he seems to have found his voice. >.>

I was under the impression that the Captains could not hear Ichigo shouting, and Aizen decided to drop the hypnosis on their ears first, so they could hear him, and then on their eyes, so they could see what had happened. Though of course, Ichigo could have rushed in and blocked, but that might have led to him being attacked or something...?

Er... What?
Blue is a person, blue is a colour. We always capitalise Blue the person, but we only capitalise blue the colour when it's at the beginning of the sentence.
Blue is, but blue isn't (part of the ILP family) <- in this case, Blue the person is first, and blue the colour is second.
Blue isn't, but Blue is (part of the ILP family) <- in this case, blue the colour is first (and was capitalised), and Blue the person was second (and it capitalised because it's a proper noun). But that they both were capitalised might seem confusing (but when you look at the context, the latter HAS to be a proper noun; Blue the person, leaving the first "Blue" mentioned to be the colour).

What is there with 314? o.o
It's the first three digits of pi... You know the cliche (is that the right word?) of mathematicians being obsessed with Pi.

You would't want a test tube for an insignia. People's going to think it's condom.

Aha, didn't even realise that at first.


Stop before I start copying you and keep saying DAAAATAAAA

Fix mine as well
Aha, it's fun, though.

I will... Someday.

PKMN Trainer Rex
7th September 2011, 9:12 PM
Playing what? Hooky sounds like hickey


It's old American slang for being lazy.



My sister would love that too much.


You're welcome



You insignia should totally be a logarithmic spiral (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Logarithmic_spiral)! 8D
The link is for those who don't know what it is.


That totally fits him.




8D Then I might just put a cookie... But a cookie isn't much of an emblem, lol




A crying cookie with a bite taken out of it and a band-aide over the bite




Godamnit Ichigo, seriously, if you really want to protect people, you need to learn that just because you caused it does NOT mean that only you have to fix it. If you have a bunch of captains and lieutenants behind you, FIGHT WITH THEM. Honestly.



...That's it for Giriko. Well, he got slashed in half, but it's possible that his abilities might be able to reverse or undo that - since his powers are based on time (anyone see the almost irony in the time user versus the Kenpachi?). It would be very boring and very lame if that was all that Kenpachi did. Yes, we know that he's strong. But are the Fullbringers THAT much weaker by comparison?

Overall, kinda eh.




I know right? This semi-lone wolf thing is getting kinda annoying.

Nah, it ain't over yet. It's never that easy. But I did get a good chuckle when Kenpachi wanted to switch.

Besides the Kenpachi thing, yes this chapter was meh.



Yay! My 100th Club Post!

MasterCharizard15
7th September 2011, 10:47 PM
That's our Kenpachi, owning canon fodder like the worthless pieces o filler they are. /Harsh

Well lest see how these fights turn out, I guess.


Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.

Golde= Childishness (though Dac beats him in this.)
Cell= Observing
NL= Nurturing
Arc= Compassion
Dre= Euphoria
MC= Duty
Eon= Independence
Senny=Distance
Zam= Indifference
Rotrum= Ambition
Blue= Passion
Ilp- Curiosity
Kusari= Easy going or Passive
--
Dac= Vanity
Jin = Mystery

arceus03
7th September 2011, 11:16 PM
Overall, kinda eh.


The moment I read that Ichigo was going to fight them alone, I facepalmed mentally. But on the up side, it's not going to happen.

I wonder why Kenpachi did not target Ginjou, but Tsukishima instead. I mean, in terms of strength, you could clearly see that Ginjou is somewhat stronger than Tsukishima.

Byakuya vs Tsukishima is going to be a what...? Prideful fight. Whatever. XD

I just hope the same thing is not going to happen with Yammy. I mean, while we see pages of Ichigo in slow motion slashing at Ginjou, suddenly all the other Fullbringers are dead. >.>

I didn't understand Yukio's and Giriko's power extensions at all. ILPy, explain!

Seems like the only fullbringer who is going to survive is Shishigawara. Mmmmph. I like Yukio :<
I bet Hitsugaya is going to get ANOTHER new technique. lol


Though of course, Ichigo could have rushed in and blocked, but that might have led to him being attacked or something...?

Eh. Since when have we seen Ichigo not rushing in and blocking when a comrade is being attacked? It just contradicts his personality. >.>


Blue is a person, blue is a colour. We always capitalise Blue the person, but we only capitalise blue the colour when it's at the beginning of the sentence.
Blue is, but blue isn't (part of the ILP family) <- in this case, Blue the person is first, and blue the colour is second.
Blue isn't, but Blue is (part of the ILP family) <- in this case, blue the colour is first (and was capitalised), and Blue the person was second (and it capitalised because it's a proper noun). But that they both were capitalised might seem confusing (but when you look at the context, the latter HAS to be a proper noun; Blue the person, leaving the first "Blue" mentioned to be the colour).

.... Whatever


It's the first three digits of pi... You know the cliche (is that the right word?) of mathematicians being obsessed with Pi.

Yeah that is the right word. lol. I am so used to 3142 as pi's number. Did not realize.


I will... Someday.

Do that nao


Eheh, you should've seen the look on my face when my teacher said "we are drowing in data!"

Drowing =D


A crying cookie with a bite taken out of it and a band-aide over the bite

That would work actually XD Reminds me of the Wall Nut in Plants Vs Zombies but isn't an emblem supposedly something that, idk, just outlines and colors?




Yay! My 100th Club Post!

Congratulations. :p
Keep that up and we might, you know, give you Senny's spot? idk




Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.


I'm gonna do this for the canon captains.

Yamamoto: Indifference
Soi Fon: Stealth
Gin: Creepiness
Unohana: DAWWWWWW
Aizen: Idiot
Byakuya: Emotionless
Komamura: Loyalty
Shunsui: Easygoing
Tousen: Twisted justice
Hitsugaya: Coldness
Kenpachi: Insane (reminds you of Blue's sig. lol)
Mayuri: Inquisitiveness
Ukitake: .... No idea.

idk? XD

[/offtopic]I never knew the meme "They see me rollin they hatin" came from a song. It's quite catchy actually. XD

Zameric
8th September 2011, 5:57 AM
I had some different ideas from what MC and Arc said, so...

Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.
(I'm just gonna describe them each with an adjective)

Golde -------------- Playful
Cell ---------------- Vigilant
Northern Lights ----- Nurturing (this one seems fine)
Arceus03 ----------- Sympathetic
Flash Step ---------- Festive
MasterCharizard ---- Stable
Eon Master --------- Independant (slight variation on MC's)
Senbonzakura ------- Friendly
Zameric ------------ Impartial
Rotrum ------------- Tenacious (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/tenacious)
Vizard Blue ---------- Vivacious (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/vivacious)
ILP (...) ------------- Curious (slight variation on MC's)
Kusari -------------- Relaxed

Yamamoto ---------- Steadfast
Soi Fon ------------- Tsundere Adamant
Gin ----------------- Sly
Unohana ------------ Caring
Aizen --------------- Arrogant
Byakuya ------------ Priviledged
Komamura ---------- Loyal (slight variation on Arc's)
Shunsui ------------- Laid-back
Tousen ------------- Conflicting
Hitsugaya ----------- Serious
Kenpachi ------------ Bellicose
Mayuri -------------- Fiendish
Ukitake ------------- Considerate

Jinchuuriki Hunter
8th September 2011, 1:57 PM
I believe most of you already know this but I mainly read Bleach because I'm rather interested in the abilities Kubo thinks up. Some are great, others are not, but I always enjoy contemplating their usefulness in and out of battle. Which brings me to the latest chapter:
DAMMIT KUBO! You give yourself ONE chance to showcase a more creative and interesting and possibly game-breaking time-based ability and you just increase his MUSCLE MASS?! A time manipulator manipulates time to increase his MUSCLE MASS?!

I would also like to ask why these shinigami are so easily slaughtering people left and right. They aren't ghosts or spirits, y'know? I don't think you're allowed to go around killing them even if they're antagonistic.


I didn't understand Yukio's and Giriko's power extensions at all. ILPy, explain!

I could help. Yukio's is rather simple - Before: He has free control over the space within his game console. After: His control over game space extends to the real world, taking the form of Atari-era pixels.
For King Bradley Giriko - Before: He is capable of setting a condition on someone for him to fulfill within a given time limit, together with set prerequisites that he can't change. If the subject fails to fulfill the condition in time, he dies. Instantly. After: He signs a contract with the Gods of Time, allowing him greater power the simpler his conditions are. Which, incidentally, is something I don't think the Gods of Time have control over. Also, he knows Hulk Smash.

kusari
9th September 2011, 5:17 AM
Chapter was meh. Mainly just a set up for the fights to come.

Speaking of fights, it's time for Kusari's Fight Outcome predictions!

Sushi vs Ikkaku ---- Winner: Ikkaku, if only by a hair's breath.
Trollkishima vs Bya-kun ---- Winner: Bya-kun. It's a one-sided fight. The troll can manipulate your memories and Byakuya can do Byakuya stuff. You know what I mean.
Yukio vs Hitsugaya ---- Winner: Hard one to call. Yukio's ability seems pretty impressive with the upgrade but Toshiro is a prodigy. Too close to call.

I like Pokemon (...)
9th September 2011, 10:16 PM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAPPH! Even if you're not likely to see this.

It's old American slang for being lazy.
But I AM lazy!




Yay! My 100th Club Post!

Congrats!
My next post will be all in red.

Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.

Golde= Childishness (though Dac beats him in this.)
Cell= Observing
NL= Nurturing
Arc= Compassion
Dre= Euphoria
MC= Duty
Eon= Independence
Senny=Distance
Zam= Indifference
Rotrum= Ambition
Blue= Passion
Ilp- Curiosity
Kusari= Easy going or Passive
--
Dac= Vanity
Jin = Mystery
I like how Senny is Distance.
Curiosity, very fitting :p



I wonder why Kenpachi did not target Ginjou, but Tsukishima instead. I mean, in terms of strength, you could clearly see that Ginjou is somewhat stronger than Tsukishima.


Mayuri: Inquisitiveness

Ichigo's prey?
Same thing as me XP

arceus03
10th September 2011, 5:56 AM
I could help. Yukio's is rather simple - Before: He has free control over the space within his game console. After: His control over game space extends to the real world, taking the form of Atari-era pixels.
For King Bradley Giriko - Before: He is capable of setting a condition on someone for him to fulfill within a given time limit, together with set prerequisites that he can't change. If the subject fails to fulfill the condition in time, he dies. Instantly. After: He signs a contract with the Gods of Time, allowing him greater power the simpler his conditions are. Which, incidentally, is something I don't think the Gods of Time have control over. Also, he knows Hulk Smash.

Ah, I see Yukio's ability now,. You made it much clearer, thanks =D

Though Giriko.... What does simpler conditions mean? o.o
Hulk Smash, you don't mean Vital Throw? lol


HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAPPH! Even if you're not likely to see this.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUFFIN as well
Cookies!


My next post will be all in red.

What, why?


Ichigo's prey?
Same thing as me XP

lolno, I don't think Kenpachi's gonna stop attacking the strongest because of that reason. Kubo is just weird. >.>
That's what Zam put, not me

Also, I've been thinking to change my shinigami profile a bit, buuuuuut I need to ask you guys' permissions first, because it's kinda something.... big. Well if not big, medium. Got an inspiration after watching the Transformers I kinda wanted to have a, you know, mechanical left arm, from the elbow downwards. The additional 'equipment' will be mostly medical related... Syringes, scalpels, needles, whatnot. Also, I have a store of tranquilizers, sedatives, some other basic stuff you could find on a hospital rack in my arm. Is that ok? I'll make up of some woozy backstory to explain how I lost an arm, whatever. And no, it wouldn't be because I'm the victim of Kubo's arm fetish XD

Northern Lights
10th September 2011, 12:18 PM
What is your Squad's color and insignia?

Probably a Purple and silver sheild with Ivy crawling up and along it ... I need to draw this!
I really want to make the insignias, because unlike the other things I promised I would do, but in the end gave up because they were horrendous abominations [yes, i'm talking about the sprites] THESE I can do with quill and ink ... 83

Make a calendar using the Bleach Captains (Canon and or Club) and say why you made it that way.

Goddamn, I REALLY need to clean this mouse, it keeps sticking ... ergh. Now, these months are interpretations based on British weather, so hold your umbrellas

January - ILP - the begginning of a new year means the start of new projects
February - Eon - the transition of the cold months to new life in the spring
March - Kida/me - my Birth Month and it's when trees begin to flower and leaves turn green
April - Arceus - Because of Easter, even though it originally means fertility, it's considered a festival of re-birth, as a medic, this fits.
May - Kusari - Nice sunshine and breeze for you to sleep in
June - Zameric - honestly, I see you as quite a reliable and nice/arm person, much like this month
July - MC - Warmest month of the year
August - Senbonsakura - The leaves all change colours to yellows, oranges, reds and a few late greens, it looks beautiful
September - Cell - end of warm weather, preparing for the cold months ahead
October - Dauc - "this is halloween" ... I regret nothing
November - Rotrum - this is usually considered the cold and stormy season
December - Flash Step - christmas, boxing day, new years eve, plenty of parties to be had

I can't explain some of these all that well, but the feeling of each month just seems to fit some people


Gin: Creepiness

D8


Gin ----------------- Sly

>D

HAPPY BIRTHDAYS WERE DUE ... where has Muffin been actually?

Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.

Golde - Wisdom [Ko]
Cell - Stealth
NL - Loyalty [Chu]
Arceus - Balance
Flash - Jubulation
MC - Duty [Gi]
Eon - Brotherhood [Tei]
Senny - Faith [Shin]
Zam - Justice[ Jin]
Rotrum - Honor [Rei]
Blue - Passion
ILP - Knowledge [Chi]
Kusari - Patience

Totally didn't take some of these from the Eight Canine Warriors...

I like Pokemon (...)
10th September 2011, 1:25 PM
What, why?
Post number 666.

lolno, I don't think Kenpachi's gonna stop attacking the strongest because of that reason. Kubo is just weird. >.>
That's what Zam put, not me

Probably.
Zam put fiendish, and you put inquisitiveness.


Also, I've been thinking to change my shinigami profile a bit, buuuuuut I need to ask you guys' permissions first, because it's kinda something.... big. Well if not big, medium. Got an inspiration after watching the Transformers I kinda wanted to have a, you know, mechanical left arm, from the elbow downwards. The additional 'equipment' will be mostly medical related... Syringes, scalpels, needles, whatnot. Also, I have a store of tranquilizers, sedatives, some other basic stuff you could find on a hospital rack in my arm. Is that ok? I'll make up of some woozy backstory to explain how I lost an arm, whatever. And no, it wouldn't be because I'm the victim of Kubo's arm fetish XD
Hmm... Well, I figure that it would suit, because of both being my twin, and being the medic would allow for appropriate equipment. I suppose it would be fine if the stuff you were keeping was all medical related and cookies and not stuff like rockets and lasers those are mine.



I really want to make the insignias, because unlike the other things I promised I would do, but in the end gave up because they were horrendous abominations [yes, i'm talking about the sprites] THESE I can do with quill and ink ... 83
Abomination is a good word. I should use it more.

Goddamn, I REALLY need to clean this mouse, it keeps sticking ... ergh. Now, these months are interpretations based on British weather, so hold your umbrellas
RAIN RAIN EVERYWHERE


January - ILP - the begginning of a new year means the start of new projects

March - Kida/me - my Birth Month and it's when trees begin to flower and leaves turn green

June - Zameric - honestly, I see you as quite a reliable and nice/arm person, much like this month

October - Dauc - "this is halloween" ... I regret nothing

The start of new projects that will never be completed. I like it.
It's funny how a lot of people are born in March, actually. But I think it does seem to suit you. Checking over, March borns seem to be the most active; Arc, Cell, NL, me, Blue
I think June suits Zam really well Though if he's a nice/arm person, I hope Kubo doesn't do anything to him...
OHGOD DA.C WITH HALLOWEEN *hides*
Golde doesn't get one? I'd associate April with him for some reason. Or maybe Halloween and candy

Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain.

Golde - Wisdom [Ko]
Cell - Stealth
NL - Loyalty [Chu]
Arceus - Balance
Flash - Jubulation
MC - Duty [Gi]
Eon - Brotherhood [Tei]
Senny - Faith [Shin]
Zam - Justice[ Jin]
Rotrum - Honor [Rei]
Blue - Passion
ILP - Knowledge [Chi]
Kusari - Patience
What's the [Ko/Chu/etc.]?
Knowledge yeah

Jinchuuriki Hunter
10th September 2011, 1:46 PM
Though Giriko.... What does simpler conditions mean? o.o
Imagine this, you're given a choice between two tasks:
1. Kill a rabbit while one hand is injured.
2. Kill a worm while both hands are injured, one leg is deformed, and with a giant clam that shoots mirages out of its dong strapped to your back.
As you can (hopefully) see, the conditions for task 1 are much simpler compared to those of task 2. That's what's meant by simpler conditions. When Giriko has less to do, he presumably has more power.
I'm not sure what kind of power he's referring to but whatever.

Y'know, if I were Giriko, I'd ask the time gods to turn back time and make it so that the extreme divider never happened. Erase a portion of time, basically. I wonder if Kubo is going to do that next chapter...

arceus03
10th September 2011, 5:51 PM
I really want to make the insignias, because unlike the other things I promised I would do, but in the end gave up because they were horrendous abominations [yes, i'm talking about the sprites] THESE I can do with quill and ink ... 83

Do eeeeeeeeet 8D


April - Arceus - Because of Easter, even though it originally means fertility, it's considered a festival of re-birth, as a medic, this fits.

How does a rebirth fit me? XD
Though April is the 4th month. And I'm in Squad 4. 8D


D8

He is, though


Arceus - Balance

Wait, I thought you were the one who is supposed to be the Omega wolf? XP Or at least Eon's fic says so


Totally didn't take some of these from the Eight Canine Warriors...

What's that? A game?



Post number 666.

lol


Zam put fiendish, and you put inquisitiveness.

Sorry. I meant MC.


Hmm... Well, I figure that it would suit, because of both being my twin, and being the medic would allow for appropriate equipment. I suppose it would be fine if the stuff you were keeping was all medical related and cookies and not stuff like rockets and lasers those are mine.

AND COOKIES. How did I forget that?

8D


What's the [Ko/Chu/etc.]?
Knowledge yeah


The equivalent of the characteristic/idea/emotion that she wrote.


Imagine this, you're given a choice between two tasks:
1. Kill a rabbit while one hand is injured.
2. Kill a worm while both hands are injured, one leg is deformed, and with a giant clam that shoots mirages out of its dong strapped to your back.
As you can (hopefully) see, the conditions for task 1 are much simpler compared to those of task 2. That's what's meant by simpler conditions. When Giriko has less to do, he presumably has more power.
I'm not sure what kind of power he's referring to but whatever.

Y'know, if I were Giriko, I'd ask the time gods to turn back time and make it so that the extreme divider never happened. Erase a portion of time, basically. I wonder if Kubo is going to do that next chapter...

Ah, so now like Giriko has to kill Kenpachi, he has more power?

How would someone consider killing Kenpachi an easy condition though? XD

So it never happened.... Meaning they'll lose their power boost and go back to square one? Why?

Zameric
10th September 2011, 5:53 PM
Here are Vizard Blue and Senbonzakura's battle data charts, as per request of Blue and ILP.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/BlueOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/SennyOctaBDC.png

I like Pokemon (...)
10th September 2011, 8:42 PM
Ahaha, how embarassing. I just realised that I made a mistake. Sapph's birthday isn't on the 9th, it's on September I blame the fact that America and England use different date/month system. His birthday isn't until the 29th <.<
I could turn my embarassment into a rope and hang myself with it right about now.



Imagine this, you're given a choice between two tasks:
1. Kill a rabbit while one hand is injured.
2. Kill a worm while both hands are injured, one leg is deformed, and with a giant clam that shoots mirages out of its dong strapped to your back.
As you can (hopefully) see, the conditions for task 1 are much simpler compared to those of task 2. That's what's meant by simpler conditions. When Giriko has less to do, he presumably has more power.
I'm not sure what kind of power he's referring to but whatever.
It seems like "more power" just means "bigger muscles".

The equivalent of the characteristic/idea/emotion that she wrote.
Ah, I see. Is it connected to the Eight Canine Warriors thing?

Here are Vizard Blue and Senbonzakura's battle data charts, as per request of Blue and ILP.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/BlueOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/SennyOctaBDC.png
8O Awesome. Now I just need Golde and Flash's and we will have a COMPLETE SET!

Eon Master
10th September 2011, 9:25 PM
Not much progress on my fanfic... homework and trying to write a Final Fantasy VII fanfic at the same time are too much to balance atm.

Name an Emotion or Idea that fits each Captain

Club first, then Canon.

Golde- Energetic
Cell- Watchful
Kida- Protective
Arc- Quirky in a good way
Dre- Jubilant
MC- Confident
Eon/Me- Driven / Determined
Senny- Intagibile
Zam- Integrity
Rotrum- Tenacious
Blue- Headstrong
ILP- Innovative
Kusari- Balanced / Fair
----
Jin- Analytical
Dauc- Narcissistic


Yamamoto- Resolute
Soi Fon- Stubborn
Gin- Sophisticated / Tricky the sly fox / Glompable
Unohana- Mothering
Aizen- Power Hungry / Godmodding
Byakuya- Serene / Classy
Komamura- Honorable / Grateful
Kyoraku- Under-challenged / Easygoing
Tousen- Compelled
Hitsugaya- Indifferent
Kenpachi- Combattive
Kurotsuchi- Amoral
Ukitake- Idealistic

Aaaaaand just because I feel like it, I'll do the Espada too.

Starrk- Callous / Cynical
Barragan- Arrogant his release means "the arrogant one", fgs
Halibel- Comitted
Ulquiorra- Nihilistic
Nnoitra- Fatalistic
Grimmjow- Beligerent
Zommari- Delusional
Szayel- Organized / Nitpicky
Aaroniero- Spiteful / Cruel
Yammy- Pigheaded

Zameric
11th September 2011, 1:16 AM
Here is Flash Step's battle data chart.
I got his stats over Facebook messages.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/FSOctaBDC.png



I really want to make the insignias, because unlike the other things I promised I would do, but in the end gave up because they were horrendous abominations [yes, i'm talking about the sprites] THESE I can do with quill and ink ... 83
Do eeeeeeeeet 8D
I second that notion! :D

arceus03
11th September 2011, 1:38 AM
Ahaha, how embarassing. I just realised that I made a mistake. Sapph's birthday isn't on the 9th, it's on September I blame the fact that America and England use different date/month system. His birthday isn't until the 29th <.<
I could turn my embarassment into a rope and hang myself with it right about now.

lol.


Ah, I see. Is it connected to the Eight Canine Warriors thing?

Probably is.


8O Awesome. Now I just need Golde and Flash's and we will have a COMPLETE SET!

You and your obsession with complete sets, lol



Arc- Quirky in a good way

Define "in a good way"


Yamamoto- Resolute
Soi Fon- Stubborn
Gin- Sophisticated / Tricky the sly fox / Glompable

How do you differentiate between stubborn and resolute? XD
Glompable? Kida has affected you THAT much? XP


Here is Flash Step's battle data chart. I got his stats over Facebook messages.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/FSOctaBDC.png

It's symmetrical! Look at ILPy foaming at the mouth

Also, eh, since no one commented otherwise. My OC now has a mechanical left arm. Loaded with syringes and scalpels. :p

Eon Master
11th September 2011, 2:30 AM
I could turn my embarassment into a rope and hang myself with it right about now.

Stop channeling Jin with these jokes. You're freakin' me out.


It seems like "more power" just means "bigger muscles".

Like Togoro from YYH?
And no, I don't need to spoiler ILP's comment. It's not specific.


Define "in a good way".

As in "your quirks make you fun to be around" as opposed to "your quirks annoy me".


How do you differentiate between stubborn and resolute? XD

Resolute is unflinching, immovable, and steadfast. Stubborn is stubborn not knowing when to quit (or not caring), and difficult to change their mind. One has a more positive connotation than the other.


Glompable? Kida has affected you THAT much? XP

Yes :) Why yes, yes she has. XD Nah, but I've come to absolutely love Gin's character, on par with Grimmjow or Starrk. He's just so complex and his motives are always his own (that's why I said 'Sophisticated'). Plus, he even looks like an amazing character, which Starrk can't really claim and Grimmjow can't quite match.


Also, eh, since no one commented otherwise. My OC now has a mechanical left arm. Loaded with syringes and scalpels. :p

This will now have an explanation in the sequel to my current fanfic.


I second that notion! :D

THIRDED!


EDIT: I'm also thinking of redoing the Battle Themes that I did a while ago if I have time. Yay or nay?

kusari
11th September 2011, 5:25 AM
You guys ever wake up and you realize that it's just one of those days? I did today. It's just been one thing after another. I woke up to find that my 32 gig flash drive, that had literally everything data-wise on it, disappeared and **** went downhill from there.

Basically, I've got a lot happening at the moment and it'll be a while before I get to post again. It'll be at least a week, probably more. Just thought I should tell you guys.

Northern Lights
11th September 2011, 1:20 PM
Do eeeeeeeeet 8D
I second that notion! :D
THIRDED!


Very well then. If you give me a simple symbolic insignia i'll draw them out and colour them =] I've just done mine, i'll post it in a mo.


How does a rebirth fit me? XD

Though April is the 4th month. And I'm in Squad 4. 8D

Re-Birth, healing the sick, bringing them back ... etc.


You guys ever wake up and you realize that it's just one of those days? I did today. It's just been one thing after another. I woke up to find that my 32 gig flash drive, that had literally everything data-wise on it, disappeared and **** went downhill from there.

Try having a month where your dog has anemia, has her spleen taken out, goes on steroids, develops insulin dependant diabetes, the guinea pig has to be put down, the dog now has IMHA [immune mediated haemolytic anemia] which is potentially fatal.
Yeah, i've not been good latley.


EDIT: I'm also thinking of redoing the Battle Themes that I did a while ago if I have time. Yay or nay?

Oooh, yes, i'm always quite interested in how all the members view eachother =3

arceus03
11th September 2011, 4:50 PM
As in "your quirks make you fun to be around" as opposed to "your quirks annoy me".

8D


Resolute is unflinching, immovable, and steadfast. Stubborn is stubborn not knowing when to quit (or not caring), and difficult to change their mind. One has a more positive connotation than the other.

Ah, I see.


Yes :) Why yes, yes she has. XD Nah, but I've come to absolutely love Gin's character, on par with Grimmjow or Starrk. He's just so complex and his motives are always his own (that's why I said 'Sophisticated'). Plus, he even looks like an amazing character, which Starrk can't really claim and Grimmjow can't quite match.

Oh. That's interesting. XD


This will now have an explanation in the sequel to my current fanfic.

8D


EDIT: I'm also thinking of redoing the Battle Themes that I did a while ago if I have time. Yay or nay?

The one where I got Atlanta? Sure, go ahead :D


You guys ever wake up and you realize that it's just one of those days? I did today. It's just been one thing after another. I woke up to find that my 32 gig flash drive, that had literally everything data-wise on it, disappeared and **** went downhill from there.

Basically, I've got a lot happening at the moment and it'll be a while before I get to post again. It'll be at least a week, probably more. Just thought I should tell you guys.

Ouch. >.< Good luck with those =)



Very well then. If you give me a simple symbolic insignia i'll draw them out and colour them =] I've just done mine, i'll post it in a mo.

8D I will


Re-Birth, healing the sick, bringing them back ... etc.

Ah, I see.


Try having a month where your dog has anemia, has her spleen taken out, goes on steroids, develops insulin dependant diabetes, the guinea pig has to be put down, the dog now has IMHA [immune mediated haemolytic anemia] which is potentially fatal.
Yeah, i've not been good latley.

I'm sorry to hear that. =(

I like Pokemon (...)
11th September 2011, 6:21 PM
Ulquiorra- Nihilistic
Zommari- Delusional

Nihilistic, of course Perhaps "despair" ...
Delusional, haha, that he is.

Here is Flash Step's battle data chart.
I got his stats over Facebook messages.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/FSOctaBDC.png
Awesome.
All that's left is Golde, and then we'll have a full set! The first one, excluding the Zanpakutou and the original Hex Charts

You and your obsession with complete sets, lol

It's symmetrical! Look at ILPy foaming at the mouth
Complete sets are awesome 8D

xD I wouldn't be foaming at the mouth unless it was symmetrical horizontally/vertically. Because then I wouldn't have to tilt my head.

Stop channeling Jin with these jokes. You're freakin' me out.
I wasn't actually channeling Jin. I'm not good with embarassment.



Yes :) Why yes, yes she has. XD Nah, but I've come to absolutely love Gin's character, on par with Grimmjow or Starrk. He's just so complex and his motives are always his own (that's why I said 'Sophisticated'). Plus, he even looks like an amazing character, which Starrk can't really claim and Grimmjow can't quite match.
All very valid points 8D


EDIT: I'm also thinking of redoing the Battle Themes that I did a while ago if I have time. Yay or nay?
Sure, no complaints from me.

You guys ever wake up and you realize that it's just one of those days? I did today. It's just been one thing after another. I woke up to find that my 32 gig flash drive, that had literally everything data-wise on it, disappeared and **** went downhill from there.

Basically, I've got a lot happening at the moment and it'll be a while before I get to post again. It'll be at least a week, probably more. Just thought I should tell you guys.
Ouch, that sucks. Good luck getting everything back together again.

Try having a month where your dog has anemia, has her spleen taken out, goes on steroids, develops insulin dependant diabetes, the guinea pig has to be put down, the dog now has IMHA [immune mediated haemolytic anemia] which is potentially fatal.
Yeah, i've not been good latley.
Likewise, that sucks.


I'm redoing my Arrancar profile Too similar to my shinigami profile and will post that... someday.

PKMN Trainer Rex
12th September 2011, 7:57 AM
Post number 666.


>D



Abomination is a good word. I should use it more.


ABOMINATION! RAWR!


You guys ever wake up and you realize that it's just one of those days? I did today. It's just been one thing after another. I woke up to find that my 32 gig flash drive, that had literally everything data-wise on it, disappeared and **** went downhill from there.

Basically, I've got a lot happening at the moment and it'll be a while before I get to post again. It'll be at least a week, probably more. Just thought I should tell you guys.

Heck yeaz. But I've moved on, and I'm now more awesome than EVAR!

MC and I have been working on my new Zan, I hope everyone approves. But be forewarned, it contains cliches & stolen borrowed ideas.


Zanpaktou: Kagayaki Kyoujou no Senshi. (Shining Warrior of Truth)
Sealed form: Standard Katana, the hilt is baby blue with silver wrap. The guard is in the shape of the Filipino sun (as a nod to me being Flip IRL and an allusion to my Zan’s name.)

Shikai
Release Command: Reside yourself to your fate,
My blade fueled by justice will overcome all,
Hear our hearts roar as we charge into battle!

Description: A pair of giant gauntlets (http://i.neoseeker.com/ca/god_of_war_chains_of_olympus_conceptart_tsEs6.jpg) (Minus the face of Zeus & the armor past the elbow.) That are Baby blue (Base coat), silver and black (Alternate trim/border colors) in color. Four flat (two on each side) cords, studded with spikes, run from the end of the gauntlets at the elbow, up my biceps and triceps and meet/connect with a black Filipino Sun & stars triangular crest (4in across) at the center of my chest and a larger crest (7in across) on my back.

Abilities: Provides good defense with their size, enhance my physical strength, and pact a great punch (literally & figuratively). But due to their bulk, I am hindered in the mobility department.
It has a kidou disruptor. A mediocre kidou user casting Hado #4 Byakurai, will severely weaken or dissipate completely. While someone high kidou skills like Byakuya, does the same Hado, it will be somewhat weakened.
No attacks, I’ll just punch and block.


Bankai
Tadashii Kagayaki Kyoujou no Senshi. (Righteous Shining Warrior of Truth)

Description: For lack of a better description and laziness, Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin is based off of this Battlizer. (http://images.wikia.com/powerrangers/images/7/75/MF_Red_Dragon_Fire_Ranger.jpg) The red parts, gold shoulder fenders and gold shin guards are changed into baby blue, the blue is now silver, and the black lines, arm pieces & belt are black. The “M” on the chest is replaced with my Flip crest, but the lines that come “M” & run down the armor remain. The blue “frills” on the helmet are removed and the blacked out visor is in the shape of an “X” (the bottom half of the X is half the length of the top half, and tapir into sharp points.) But the crest remains.

Abilities: With its sleeker, armor design, I have higher defensive and mobility capabilities. Like its Shikai form, it disrupts/cancels out nearly any kidou up to level 90 (also depends on the kidou user, of course.)
The helmet has an Iron-Man type function. It shows my current health & reiatsu levels, my vitals (heart rate, blood pressure), and armor and bone damage. It can also display environmental stats, such as oxygen level, oxygen content and temperature. And finally tracks any enemy reiatsu with in a range of 300 ft.

Attacks:
Again like its shikai, I prefer to do hand to hand combat.

Kagayaki Kobushi (Radiant/Radiance Fist): A 6 foot plasma two handed sword. It is the offensive manifestation. Summoning/conjure/use it drains so much energy I can only use it once every 24 hours.

Kenage Engo (Heroic Protection): A medieval knight shield. It is the defensive counter part of Kagayaki Kobushi. And like its counterpart, it can only be used once every 24 hours.

Other: In this form, I tend to speak in a cliché heroic tone complete with puns and metaphors.

Zan Spirit: Senshi’s personality is a stereotypical/borderline parody of Super Sentai/Super Hero with a strong sense of justice and protection, complete super hero dialog.
In sealed/shikai, Senshi wears a de-armores, standard spandex Kamen Rider/Super Sentai version of my Bankai. And since my powers are his, he also wears the armor in his bankai appearance. If that makes sense.

Inner World: “The Temple of Truth” An enormous stone temple, the interior is more futuristic, with lights, security cameras, and a control room.

Blackacer
12th September 2011, 8:34 AM
RAWR!
Hmm... I wanna join :)
Zachiru

MasterCharizard15
12th September 2011, 10:32 AM
RAWR!
Hmm... I wanna join :)
Zachiru

Welcome to the club, I'm Captain of Squad 6, MC.

How about you tell a us little about your favorites in Bleach? Possibly where you are in following the Anime/Manga?

Favorite Soul Reaper/Shinigami?
Favorite Arrancar?
Favorite Huamn?

My favorites are Yoruichi, Renji, Neliel, Grimmjow, Rukia, Orihime, Urahara and Halibel. [s]Puts away random favorite bleach characters list.[s/]

Bad News everyone, my fic is ready to post.

Blackacer
12th September 2011, 11:26 AM
Favorite Soul Reaper/Shinigami? Kurosaki / Yoruichi
Favorite Arrancar? Neliel / Grimmjow / Ulquiorra / Harribel
Favorite Human? ME! / MYSELF! / AND I!

Hmm... Well i've been following anime but i dint have time to watch weekly so i watches them like once every 2 week. Basically im thinking of following with the manga too but yeah.. dont have much time.

MasterCharizard15
12th September 2011, 12:33 PM
Recap: The Head-Captain had been poisoned, right after a mission went horribly wrong. The price of the failed mission was high. The Eighth Squad Captain had died during said mission, leaving the Seireitei shaken up badly. Now the Captains planned their counter-strike as well as investigated the creator of the poison. One of great four Noble clans even getting involved in this mess of affairs.

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Cast:
Golde – Head-Captain | Flash-Dre | Zam- Zameric |Kusari- Saiga |Sapph-Testu
Cell- Niche | MC-Senshuken | Rotrum-Yukimura |Dac- Narrcise |Badmanjaro-Akio
NL- Kida | Sennny-Senbon | Blue-Aozora |Minchan-Min |CyberBlaze-Kaii
Arc- Mizuhashi | Eon- Seijuro | ILP- Ryuu |PKMN Rex- Rex |Lucario-Jaku
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Her body tensed as he came closer to her. His tall and dark body overshadowing her more petite and pale one. The cold darkness of the empty office only made the situation more heart racing. As he drew closer, his dominating aura washed over her, flooding the room with his intensity.

The aura that sent enemies running terrorized with fear or charging in reckless as a last-ditch effort of survival, overwhelmed her senses. Her eyes became glazed over, making her sight become blurry. Her nose was assaulted with a mixed of smells that made up his scent. The smells stimulated her taste-buds, giving her a taste in her mouth that was hard to describe. It was subtle and faint, yet combined with the smell, was a taste that worked up every single taste-bud.

His voice made her eardrums savor every vibration. His deep baritone vocals left her in an almost trace like state. He body was covered in sweat, with every bead of sweat falling off her skin was felt. His very presence made her body become much more sensitive and-

A powerful voice broke the group listening on the story being read to them. “What the hell are you all doing?” Captain Seijuro asked as his booming voice broke them from their enthralled enjoyment of the story. Him towering over all of them might have had something to do with it as well.

The crowd of shinigami mostly made of "women" couldn't look at him. A large number of them were blushing, few trying to get away while others laughed nervously. All but one female were too embarrassed to say anything. The exception of the women, walked right up to him. getting as close she could to his face and stared dead set into his eyes.

“Why the hell did you stop story time? I wanted to know if the girl would pass out from her heart attack before or after describing every bloody thing!” The Captain of Squad Eleven, Aozora asked him glaring.

Seijuro frowned and motioned to a nearby rooftop, “Meet me.” That was all he told her before flash stepping away from the group. She growled a bit, but complied and followed him to roof via flash-step.

They both left the group of flustered shinigami to promptly nose-bled over images of The Seventh Captain being the man in the book. Then quickly scattered to treat their current condition before someone saw them.

“Why are you just sitting back listening to stories at a time like this!?” Seijuro asked her, vexed at her seemingly lackadaisical behavior. His metal boots almost left an impression on the roof's ceiling tiles.

“Don't get your panties in a bunch, I really can't do anything until Ryuu is free to send someone to the battlefield with me to collect data.” She told her with a hint or boredom in her voice. “Niche and Mizuhashi pretty much own him at this point right now.”

Seijuro held the bridge of his nose in frustration. She did have a point, as he couldn't find Ryuu either. “Still doesn't tell me why you were listening to that garbage.”

“Well originally I wasn't planning too, it just happened. I was coming back from Squad Eleven, heard the part about her “heart racing and feeling unable to breathe” and stopped to listen.” She told him not phased at all by his aggravation. “So then I listen some more, and either that girl has a messed up illness or she is the only person to describe everything around her while having a heart attack.”

Seijuro chuckled a bit, that explanation could only be pulled off by Aozora. “That explains a lot, you didn't strike me as the type to read those kinds of books anyway.”

“What kind of book was it? It seem really weird and described everything in a super vivid detail.” She asked him wondering what the heck she was just read.

He furrowed his brows, how do you explain something like that to a person? “You'll learn in the streets like everyone else when your older.” He told her not wanting to tell her the basis behind those kinds of novels.

Aozora pouted a bit and scoffed, “Lame.” Silence fell between the two of them for a good fifteen seconds before she broke it, “So what are you doing now anyway?”

Seijuro's expression darkened a bit, “I was going to give Yukimura back up, since Senbon was originally supposed to go assist him.”

“Well lets go then! I hate standing around anyway.” She told him eagerly and impatiently.

Both wasted no more time with semi-idle chit-chat, flash stepping to the gate to the World of the Living, the Dangai.

The two saw a familiar face standing in front of gate when they arrived. Two guards were also at the gate, seemingly preventing anyone from leaving at the moment.

“On the orders of Fourth Squad Captain Mizuhashi Akira, you three are not allowed passage into the World of the Living until he says otherwise.” Both guards did their best to stay strong and not show any fear, but were terrified inside. As their luck would have it, both new arrivals could smell their fear and just looked at them. The weight of their stares along was slowly crushing the two.

“Oji-san?” Aozora called out to the Sixth Squad Captain standing in between them and in-front of them, blocking her from simply smacking the two guards out-of-the-way.

“Sen...” Seijuro said not taking his eyes off the two terrified guards.

Senshuken didn't turn to acknowledge his two former students, just simply did a gesture with his hands and said something smoothly, calming and with the emotion of a frozen wasteland.

“Hakufuku.”

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In the Artic, a battle raged on in a furious blizzard, the fact that it was the middle of six months of night, didn't help at all. As the harsh white coldness ruthlessly washed over the land, only two powerful beings seemed to be able to work through it. Four figures cloaked in black laid motionless in the snow, bodies being slowly buried by the blizzard.

“Those guys were no fun, an hour in the snow and they're all dying of Hypothermia. Wimps.” Commented a figure seemingly enjoying the freezing temperatures and harsh weather. He was hard to see through the blizzard, his all white uniform and shoulder length white hair stuffed into his shirt.

“Tch.” Yumimura answered back, his white hair covered with frost and his shinigami uniform partly frozen.

The two glared at each other through the harsh blizzard, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. Yukimura had the advantage, the frozen wasteland was a winter wonderland for his Zanpaktou and fighting style. He knew nothing of this arrancar but felt that he could easily kill this one without much effort.

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Kida frowned at the Captain that had returned to the captain's Meeting Hall, Dre, Zameric, and Saiga all focused on her. They all were impatiently waiting to be filled on what exactly was going on, the fact that it wasn't the Head-Captain briefing them, just added to the tension and uneasiness of the group.
Kida worked on a computer console installed in the captain's meeting table. After a few moments a large flat screen slowly descended from the ceiling, facing all of them. A few rounds of typing and button pressing activated the screen, showing various data records and stats.

“Great, should we get popcorn for this movie?” Zameric asked laying back in his seat and smirking.

“Now's not the time.” Kida said in a bitter tone of voice. She sent a cold glare at Zameric, making Dre and Saiga pity him a bit.

The table then changed a bit, a miniature screen complete with readings and data appearing before the three Captains being briefed. Finally, the battle data was shown to them as clear as day.

Hollows of all shapes and sized appeared in the clear blue sky, a back of Menos Grande blocking the sunlight for many around the area.

“The final count: Twelve-hundred hollows. Three-hundred Adjuchas level, three-hundred Gillian level and seven-hundred normal hollows.” Kida informed them all in a shaky tone of voice.

“Damn. Must have taken all day to clean up that mess.” Dre commented after hearing the head count.

Leading their squads into battle, Senshuken, Seijuro, Senbon and Aozora all left the small fry hollows to their lower ranked members, heading for the Adjuchas.

“Oh this will take a while.” Senbon said looking at all the enemies around them.

“ There are so many to kill, I feel like a kid at a candy store!” Aozora said cheerfully as he rushed to slice a Adjuchas in half.

“It's obvious hollow bait was used in large amounts, but I didn't know they could be potent enough for attracting Adjuchas class hollows.” Seijuro said as he prepared to fight the nearest foes by him.

“Most of these are just freshly made Adjuchas, so their lack of experience will be their downfall.” Senshuken said releasing his zanpaktou.

“How can you tell Senshuken-Sensei?” Senbon asked slicing off the arm of an adjuchas that tried to attack him and then landing a killing blow to its head.

“Just look at how Aozora is tearing through them like wet tissue paper.” Senshuken responded pointing to the blood soaked blur also know as Aozora.

“One little, two little, three dead adjuchas! Four little, five little, six dead adujuchas!” Aozora sang as she ruthless and quickly sliced through any adjuchas in her path. Her prey tried hard to fight back firing ceros at her, but she dodged them while singing happily. “Seven little, eight little, nine dead adjuschas and I still have hundreds of hollows to go!”

“Well she's enjoying herself.” Seijuro commented flatly as he cut a adjuchas's arm off. The hollow charged at him screaming in rage, but he simply flash stepped out of the way and delivered the killing blow in one swift motion.

“Honestly with Aozora here, we pretty much can just sit back and watch her kill them all.” Senbon told the three of them, countering a cero fired at him with mid ranged kido. Senbon ended the hollow with a combination of kido spells, damaging a few other hollows near by.

Senshuken send multiple kido spell blasts at the gillains and adjuchas in his line of sight, “True, but then we'd all get out of shape if we let her do all the fighting.”

Aozora currently was riding on a winged hollow, decapitating anything in her range while directing the poor hollow toward large groups of them. “Yee-haw! Giddy up ugly winged horse thing.”

The Adjuchas fired cero and bala blasts all targeting the winged hollow and Aozora, scoring a direct hit and causing a cloud of smoke to appear, covering the aftermath.

“Aozora!” Senbon yelled out as he watched her get hit.

Senshuken and Seijuro didn't even seem phased by the event, “Those morons used too many bala blasts, she's fine.”

“Aww, how cute. You all think that's playing rough. “ Aozora said revealed to only be partly scuffed and singed by the blasts. “ Hey Old Man and Wolfie! Lets show these wusses how it's done!”

Seijuro and Senshuken both smirked a bit, both preparing to put an iota of effort into the fight.

“Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!”

“Ravage, Garou!”

“Immolate, Iroriryuu!”

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Meanwhile, on the side of the battlefield that wasn't completely one-sided, Seated officers watched the carnage in awe. A Lieutenant going over to the one Captain not acting like a mass murdering sociopath.

“Captain Senbon, a few men reported a strange light coming from the city below. The few that went to investigate haven't come back yet.” Lieutenant of Squad Six, Testu Shinku reported to him.

“I see. I'll investigate it myself.” Senbon told him confidently, flying over to the area in question.
“Blaize and Luke, you're with me in cleaning up any hollows that come near that area, got it?!” Testu asked the two, making sure his order was clear.

“Yes, sir!” Kaii said dashing over to the site and attacking a hollow that had gotten close.

“I wanna fight the adjuchas!” Luke told him looking over at the adjuchas being obliterated by the three Captains.

“I wasn't asking. Now get over to your position and do your job!” Testu told him having no qualms of smacking him to make a point.

“Fine.” Luke said grumpily as he attacked a hollow that came too close to the town.

Testu turned towards where the captains were, watching them wipe out the hollow army without breaking a sweat pretty much. “I love watching them cause so much carnage.” He said cheerfully moving stray blonde hairs from his face.

An adjuchas got close to the city, Testu and Kaii both sensed it and were about to land a quick death-blow on the thing, until Luke charged head on at it. The adjuchas had four arms and was covered in black fur against its gray skin.

The adjuchas fired four bala blasts at once, two connecting with Jaku as he managed to deflect the other two. “Ha! You'll-” He promptly was nearly smashed into pieces as the hollow used sonido to add speed to his momentum and land a single deadly tackle. Luke had braced himself but quickly opened his eyes to see what happened to the attack.

“Holy ****, that guy broke my half-assed Danku. It's clear he's taking steroids.” Testu commented and mocked the hollow, as shattered pieces of the kido spell fell to the ground.

“I think he's just over did taking his vitamins.” Kaii answered back jokingly as he stood in-between the hollow and Luke.

“Don't butt in! I had him right where I wanted him!” Luke yelled at the two of them ticked off.

“Use your head, if we didn't do anything, you'd be dead right now.” Testu said harshly not bothering to look Luke in the eye. Instead he prepared to cast a few kido spells, his mind focused.

Kaii felt a small stream of blood run from his black hair with brown highlights to left orange eye. He closed it and tried to wipe it away, “ I think I'll get a bit more serious.”

His expression darkened as his eyes grew cold and broadcasted a death glare. “Freeze the Icy Water, Koorimizu!”

The captains watching the mission video data all absorbed the information playing before them in the dark room.

“I don't understand, this mission seems to be going almost flawlessly so far, I mean you even have three captains there who almost specialize in dealing with multiple enemies.” Dre said wondering how this mission ended so badly.

“Just keep quiet and keep watching.” Saiga told him yawning a bit.

“Someone must had poked fun at them for their weird hair styles, making Grandpa and Wolfie over there pissed when they came to the meeting.” Zameric said jokingly to the group of captains.

Kida sent a death-glare at him, “We have one captain dead already, do you really want to be next one? No? Then HUSH!”

Silenced filled the room as they watched on, this meant that the battle recording would be Senny's last recorded mission.

Outside side the meeting room, Dre's fifth seat and lieutenant both waited for the meeting to be over. Having an important message from his family.

Senbon walked around the city, going unseen by its inhabitants. “I don't sense anything at all,” he said to himself out loud. That was unusual. He placed his hand on his sword, mainly as a precaution for any hidden traps or ambushes set for him.

There was a tingling in the back of his skull. While everything had been unusually still before, he now sensed someone coming to his location at a fast pace. He drew his sword, bracing himself to fight, and looked toward the direction the aura was coming from. He frowned as it turned out to be Luke with his sword already drawn.

“I can fight the weird guys in the cloaks no problem!” Luke told him grinning.

Senbon turned to see three cloaked figures standing a few feet in front of him. He was shocked to see that a group manged to sneak up on him. This fact alone tipped him off that they were nothing to take lightly.

Senbon's expression harden, with Luke here, he was at even of a disadvantage. He gripped his sword and got into a stance, “Who are you three?”

The white cloaks with silver lining hide their figures and faces from view. The only thing else noticeable about them besides their tall height, was the kido enhanced chains. The chains seem to be for the one in the center, as it looked as if the other two were containing them.

A full minute passed and yet none of them answered Senbon's question. Jaku walked up to the three, “Hey cloaked guys, I'm the most promising and badass member of Squad Seven, Jaku!”

Silence filled the street they all standing on, Senbon wondering if Jaku had a death wish. He couldn't believe how arrogant he was, there just wasn't any way a seated officer ould have such a big ego. The cloaked figures seemed unaffected by the declaration by Jaku, save for the one on the left. They gave the thin chains they were holding to the one on the right, then slowly walked up to Jaku.

The figure was short compared to Jaku, but didn't seem to care about the height difference based on her response. “Boys talk action while Men make action, now lets see how much a man you really are!”

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“Flourish, Shippu no Hana Toge!” Testu's blade became large fan covered in vines. The fan was almost as big as his entire body and the vines were covered in sharp thorns. The vines quickly charged and impaled a hollow nine feet away from him, killing it.

“You could have easily killed it without releasing your zanpaktou, so whats the deal?” Kaii asked holding his ice blade in a neutral position.

“I didn't feel like going all the way over there to kill it.” Testu replied to him in a nonchalant manner.

“Pretty much everyone released their Zanpaktou for overkill. I mean just look at what the captains did to those poor Adjuchas.” Kaii commented as he noticed that pretty much all the hollows were taken care of.

The two quickly found themselves hearing an awful screech that made their bodies become too tense to move. Shocked and confused about what was happening they struggled trying to move and make sense of the situation.

“You shinigami think you're all hot ****. Well now I'll rip the smirk right off your ugly little faces!” An Adjuchas appeared before the two, its body covered in spikes and dark greenish brown skin glowing. “I can use sound-waves to trap my prey and make them helpless. Now prepare to be my new meal shinigami!”

“Swoop down and snatch your prey, Hauringu-Ryoku!” Yelled a lean and slightly muscular man with long straight hair nearly covering his teal eyes. His sword became two daggers.

The adjuchas quickly turned to glare at new arrival, “Whoever the hell you are shinigami, you're dead.”

“Buraito wa, bimu!” The shinigami quickly crushed a dagger in his had, the other becoming a normal sized sword again. “Hakai no Hibana!” Balls of electrical energy were fired at the hollow in rapid session, injuring him.

“Damn shinigami, I'll feast upon you first!” The Adjuchas said as he unleashed his sound-wave attack on the shinigami. “You're finished!” He charged at the shinigami, unable to move due to his power.

“Touketsu Kouzui!” The attack never reached him as a powerful blast of reiatsu damaged his body.

“Your mistake was leaving us alive.” Kaii said as he watched Testu send a vine to deliver the killing blow to the adjuchas.

“Thanks Akio, I can't believe such a weakling got the jump on us.” Testu told him laying his fan against his shoulder.

“Yeah, thanks a lot Akio...?” Kaii said questioning, hoping he would tell him his last name as well.

“No need for thanks, it's my job to protect my allies and destroy my enemies after all.” Akio answered them, “ I'm Akio Sato, Fifth seat of Squad Six.”

“You're pretty good for a fifth seat.” Kaii told him comparing Akio to Jaku.

“Thank you, though I came to ask why I was left to guard my post alone. I understand if Captain Senbon needed him for the investigation, but not sending someone to watch my back in battle, confused me.” Akio told the two lieutenants calmly.

“A lieutenant or third seat would be asked to investigate something. Even if he needed him specifically, we'd know about it.” Kaii answered him with a irradiated look on his face.

“Go inform the captains about this, meanwhile, the two of us will “ask” Jaku about whats going on.” Testu ordered Akio with an evil look on his face.

“Ask meaning yelling at him for going against orders, right?” Kaii asked as he went over to the area being investigated.

“Maybe for you, for me it means savage beating.” Testu told him gleefully as he followed Kaii to the city.

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“Is that it? Little boys can put up better fights than you, I can't even call you an infant. They are nowhere near as weak and pathetic as you are right now.” The shortest cloaked figure taunted Jaku with a voice that sounded like a noble woman's.

Jaku tried to release his zanpaktou, but found that he couldn't do it. He called and called out the release command for his sword, but was only met with failure. “Coward! What kind of trick did you pull?”

The figure laughed at him, “It's the warrior that makes the weapon, if you fight like this without it, I doubt you'd be any better with it.”

Senbon frowned, he couldn't release his sword either. It was clear that they did something to block anyone trying to use their zanpaktou, or at least that would be what he thought. The fact the female sounding cloaked figure had a zanpaktou and could use it with no problem, made him think there was more to this situation.

“I was just going easy on you, now I'll get serious!” Jaku yelled as he ran at the cloaked figure with his sword.

The figure had a golden whip as a weapon, using it to whip Jaku away as soon as he got anywhere near them. Senbon noticed the two other figures seemed to be just watching as their ally toyed with Jaku. He began chanting a kido spell chant in a whispered low pitch. He planned to take all three out with one attack.

“Is it rude to say I'm bored during a fight?” The figure with a whip asked as they smacked away another attack from Jaku, sending him rolling over to where Senbon was. “Hey, I hope you plan to do something besides watch, killing the both of you like this is just boring.”

A black box formed and trapped the three cloaked figures, Jaku got up and looked on in shock. Several black spear like protrusions appeared on all sides of the box.

“Hado number Ninety, Kurohitsugi!”

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Akio rushed over to the captains as soon as he caught them in his sights. The captains in question seemed to conversing pleasantly with each other after pretty much wiping out all the hollows in the area.

“Captain Seijuro, Captain Aozora, and Captain Tomoku, I was ordered by my Lieutenant to inform you all that the we cleared the hollows in the area. Also that Captain Senbon went to investigate a strange sighting in the city.” Akio kept going as all three captains paid attention to him.

“Fifth seat Jaku went along with him, though I was told nobody ordered him to do so. So now Lieutenants Shinku and Blaize have gone to the city to clear up why he went there unasked.”

Senshuken and Seijuro both face palmed over the report, meanwhile Aozora looked at her sword in the sunlight. “Can I kill him please?”

“Lets go.” Senshuken said to all of them as he rushed off to the city, Seijuro keeping up with him and Akio following them.

“Last one there gets stabbed in the foot!” Aozora shouted as she rushed off after the group.

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Kaii and Testu arrived to the battle after the kido spell was set off. A giant cloud of dark smoke and dust covering the streets. They saw Captain Senbon and Jaku facing the aftermath of the spell, unflinching.

“What happened?” Kaii asked as he and Testu joined them on the streets below.

“I had this girly sounding guy right where I wanted 'em, then Captain Senbon blew them up along with his buddies.” Jaku told them, watching the smoke.

“They're still alive.” Senbon told them noting that Kaii and Testu had released their zanapktou before arriving to the scene. His attention was quickly shifted back to the smoke, he could sense that they were about to make their move. “ Keep on your guard!”

An attack erupted from the smoke, pushing Senbon back a few feet and sending Jaku crashing through a store window.

“What the hell?! I didn't even see it!” Testu said as the next attack came, sending himself and Kaii crashing into a greenhouse across from the store Jaku landed.

As the smoke finally cleared up, he saw the shortest foe was female, her face covered up by her blonde hair with black tips. The one that was chained was missing, while the other one had protected himself with a another kido spell. Shattered pieces of the spell littering the street around them.

“Thanks.” Senbon blocked an attack from behind that nearly cleaved his head off, turning to see that it was missing person talking to and attacking him. Senbon's jaw nearly dropped as he took a close look at him. He looked like Seijuro after being left in desert for months. Shaggy unkempt hair with eyes that glazed over with primal rage and blood-lust.

Senbon flash-stepped away from him, trying to get back in control of the battle. “Who are you?”, Senbon asked while trying to think of how to deal with someone so fast.

“Muyomi, you know brother Seijuro, right? We'll after I kill you all and destroy everything he loves, cares for and stands for, I'll send him to hell to meet you.” With that declaration, he promptly attacked Senbon with ruthlessly wild swings full of power.

The recoil from each block was so much, Senbon couldn't counter or even parry the blows. He tried to distance himself from Muyomi, but he just kept up with him unleashing an unholy hell of blade attacks on him.

Testu and Kaii both pulled themselves together, seeing Senbon being overpowered by Muyomi.

“Hey Kaii.” Testu said as he got ready to fight again.

Kaii got up and looked at Testu expectantly. “Yeah?”

“Wanna try it?” Testu asked him smirking.

“I'd thought you'd never ask!” Kaii responded getting into a good position. “Kongobaku!” A giant sphere of red energy went flying towards Muyomi and Senbon.

Senbon quickly dodged the blast, charging after Kaii.

“Gaki Rekko!” Testu created a circle of energy that fired green blasts of light, forming cage around Muyomi. Muyomi roared like a mad animal and wildly attacked the cage until it started cracking. He then punched the bars, shattering them into pieces.

“Hyoga Seiran!” Kaii sent a massive wave of freezing ice, flash freezing Muyomi and the surrounding street and storefronts.

“This is it! Hado number Fifty-Four, Haien!” Tetsu fired a purple blast of energy meant to incinerate Muyomi to death.

“Hado number Eighty-Eight, Hiryugekizokushintenraiho!” Kaii fired a gigantic blast of electrical energy meant to take Muyomi, his allies and anything else caught in its path.

“On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens.” Senbon smirked, they were positioned perfectly! Out of each others way and having the almost perfect synergy with their attacks. There attacks along with his boosted by its chant, should be the end of all three of them. He hoped that Seijuro could forgive him for doing this later. “Hado number Seventy-Three, Soren Sokatsui!”

Senbon sent one blast of blue energy at Muyomi and the other at his allies. At the very least Muyomi would be dead and possibly that woman that beat Jaku effortlessly. The remaining cloaked figure was their only hope for survival.

“Jikanteishi.” Senbon's smirk turned to a horrified look of shock as he heard the deep voice call out the spell. Time stopped for anything right in-front of the mystery cloaked figure.

“Kukanteni!” The figure transported the space around Muyomi and the unconscious woman to a spot right behind him. Then transported the kido along with their casters into a position where they would all be vaporized by their own attacks. As time began its flow forward once again, the foe watched as they kido attacks collided with each other, creating a devastating explosion that damaged pretty much anything on the street.

Smoke filled the area once again, hiding the aftermath of the attacks.

Muyomi broke out of his icy prison and glared at the person who saved him, “What the hell did you do!, old man!?”

The man didn't even bother to look at him, “ Saving you two fool hardy children from dying due to your own stupidity and arrogance.”

Muyomi tried to slice him in half, only for the man dodge him. “ I told you all once before, I'm only working with you all to get my wuss of a brother to fight me to the death. You don't get involved with my battles!”

“You would have been dead at least two times since the battle started child, don't you dare think I care about your reasons for fighting. As long as your under master's orders, you shall live until you severe your purpose. Afterward, I could care less if you die or not.”

As the smoke cleared the old man and Muyomi were both shocked to see that all there were still alive. Their uniforms were burned and torn apart, barely holding together. Their skin partly signed and all showing they were exhausted through body language. What was most noticeable was that Senbon had lost his left arm.

“I see, you used Danku to mostly protect the other two and blocked the Haien and Soren Sokatsui with a lesser bakudo spell. I must say that is truly an impressive display of kido mastery. You must have had a very good sensei.” The old man comment in a tone that would fool others into thinking he was enjoying this.

“D-D-Damn...you.” Senbon said weakly as he struggled to stand up. Kaii and Testu were shaken up badly from the near death experience, both trying to pull themselves together.

Muyomi gained a psychotic grin on his face, “Oh boy, brother is on his way to play. Better clean up a bit before he gets here.” He held his sword out, “Massacre, Banryoku no Tsume!”

His blade became as thin and sharp as a scalpel, also much more fragile. Kaii and Testu were confused as to why he would use such a weak looking weapon. Muyomi simply smirked and flash stepped to them, he delivered two slices across the chest to both Lieuteants, blood gushing out from them.

It had felt like a sword had torn through their bodies even though he only delivered shallow cuts to them. Senbon looked on in horror as he was too weak to flash step away in time. The last thing he saw was the cloudless clear blue sky as he was decapitated by Muyomi. The old man quickly incinerated the body with Haien.

Seijuro, Aozora and Senshuken arrived to the battle along with Akio too late to save anyone. Testu and Kaii were horrifically injured and Senbon only had his head left. The group was left almost speechless at what they had come to, save for Seijuro how was now facing to face with his “supposedly” dead little brother.

“Muyomi!” Seijuro yelled out in an anguished rage as he saw the sadistically happy Muyomi grin like a maniac at him.

The old man snapped his fingers, causing a Menos Grande to appear through a garganta to the dimension. It then used a Negacion energy field to transport the woman, Muyomi and himself away from the new arrivals.

“Coward! Get back here and fight like a little girl!” Aozora yelled as she watched them get away.

Senshuken looked over to Seijuro, seeing him paralyzed by a bunch of emotions all fighting for dominance in his mind. All wanting to be expressed and relieve him of this stressful reunion of family he though was dead. He then turned to see Senbon's head between Kaii and Testu's nearly dead bodies. Refusing to let his emotions of seeing his former student and colleague's decapitated head and half-dead lieutenants body, he called for Squad Four to come to the location. He made sure that Mizuhashi came along with the group.

Akio looked at all the carnage and destruction, this mission was a brutal.


...*breathes*


Casts looks so jacked up on the post editor. >.> I was thinking of doing the cast that way from now on. I though it look neater and wouldn't stretch the post out more than it needed to be.

Recap was short and sweet, so I'm happy about that.

The formatting and spacing for these chapters gets jacked up between the 2nd spell checker and what not. So I try my best to go back and make it look as nice as possible. Also slip in all the curse words.

Originally I planned for Akio and Jaku to get injured in the fight as well, then having scuffle between Seijuro, Aozora and Senshuken. Though I had to cut this, since this chapter was borderline 6000 words. DX

I also had planned to have the kido battle longer, but once again, huge chapter is huge. Though I am mostly satisfied with how it all came out.

Once again, thank you everyone who read my chapter and even bothered to read this note. I had alot of fun writing this chapter and hope you enjoyed reading it as well.

Blackacer
12th September 2011, 12:58 PM
Wow...
Thats a hugeeeeee pieces of work lol...
Anyway your sig is easy to make lol he uses C4D renders.

arceus03
12th September 2011, 2:54 PM
We got a new member? Welcome, Ace (mind me calling you that?). arceus03, Captain of Squad 4. Avid Unohana fan If you're not up to date with the manga and/or anime, be careful of spoilers. They contain a lot of those you might not want to read yet. However, if you are perfectly fine with them, go ahead and open them.

Just dropping by to say hello to the new member. I'll read the other things later homewoooooooork

You seem to know your stuff with Photoshop. Cool. 8D We have a new banner maker yay

Also. *giggles* You're an Eon lover? *giggles*

Blackacer
12th September 2011, 3:21 PM
Yeah thanks
Yeah i know my way around in photoshop since i used for months.
You can call me ace or acer.

Northern Lights
12th September 2011, 4:27 PM
Well, starting the Insignia ... I have the list here of the parts I have and don't have, first the flowers chosen, then the symbol design for each division
If you want a good site for different Plant meanings i'd suggest going here - http://www.victorianbazaar.com/meanings.html

1 - Golde - ... - ...
2 - Cell - FLY TRAP / 2 cross Daggers
3 - Kida - IVY / Purple and Silver sheild with Ivy growing across it
4 - Arceus - MOON FLOWER / ...
5 - Flash Step - ... - ...
6 - MC - EDELWEISS/ALPINE CUDWEED / Crimson Red and a Flaming Claw.
7 - Eon - CACTUS FLOWER / Electric Blue Tribal Wolf
8 - Senbonsakura - Cherry Blossom / ...
9 - Zameric - ... / Sheild, one side scrool, other side libra scales
10 - Rotrum - ... /
11 - Blue - ... /
12 - ILP - ... / Teal test tube in a circle?
13 - Kusari - SNOW DROP / Silver Albatross

I'm going to ask Senny if he's planning to come back, if not i'll ask if we can re-assign his Captaincy to someone else.

I like Pokemon (...)
12th September 2011, 8:38 PM
Zanpaktou: Shainingu Senshi no Kyoujou (Shining Warrior of Truth)
Sealed form: Standard Katana, the hilt is baby blue with silver wrap. The guard is in the shape of the Filipino sun (as a nod to me being Flip IRL and an allusion to my Zan’s name.)

Shikai
Release Command: Reside yourself to your fate,
My blade fueled by justice will overcome all,
Hear our hearts roar as we charge into battle!

Description: A pair of giant gauntlets (http://i.neoseeker.com/ca/god_of_war_chains_of_olympus_conceptart_tsEs6.jpg) (Minus the face of Zeus & the armor past the elbow.) That are Baby blue (Base coat), silver and black (Alternate trim/border colors) in color. Four flat (two on each side) cords, studded with spikes, run from the end of the gauntlets at the elbow, up my biceps and triceps and meet/connect with a black Filipino Sun & stars triangular crest (4in across) at the center of my chest and a larger crest (7in across) on my back.

Abilities: Provides good defense with their size, enhance my physical strength, and pact a great punch (literally & figuratively). But due to their bulk, I am hindered in the mobility department.
It has a kidou disruptor. A mediocre kidou user casting Hado #4 Byakurai, will severely weaken or dissipate completely. While someone high kidou skills like Byakuya, does the same Hado, it will be somewhat weakened.
No attacks, I’ll just punch and block.


Bankai
Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin (Righteous Shining Warrior of Truth)

Description: For lack of a better description and laziness, Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin is based off of this Battlizer. (http://images.wikia.com/powerrangers/images/7/75/MF_Red_Dragon_Fire_Ranger.jpg) The red parts, gold shoulder fenders and gold shin guards are changed into baby blue, the blue is now silver, and the black lines, arm pieces & belt are black. The “M” on the chest is replaced with my Flip crest, but the lines that come “M” & run down the armor remain. The blue “frills” on the helmet are removed and the blacked out visor is in the shape of an “X” (the bottom half of the X is half the length of the top half, and tapir into sharp points.) But the crest remains.

Abilities: With its sleeker, armor design, I have higher defensive and mobility capabilities. Like its Shikai form, it disrupts/cancels out nearly any kidou up to level 90 (also depends on the kidou user, of course.)
The helmet has an Iron-Man type function. It shows my current health & reiatsu levels, my vitals (heart rate, blood pressure), and armor and bone damage. It can also display environmental stats, such as oxygen level, oxygen content and temperature. And finally tracks any enemy reiatsu with in a range of 300 ft.

Attacks:
Again like its shikai, I prefer to do hand to hand combat.

Kagayaki Kobushi (Radiant/Radiance Fist): A 6 foot plasma two handed sword. It is the offensive manifestation. Summoning/conjure/use it drains so much energy I can only use it once every 24 hours.

Kenage Engo (Heroic Protection): A medieval knight shield. It is the defensive counter part of Kagayaki Kobushi. And like its counterpart, it can only be used once every 24 hours.

Other: In this form, I tend to speak in a cliché heroic tone complete with puns and metaphors.

Zan Spirit: Senshi’s personality is a stereotypical/borderline parody of Super Sentai/Super Hero with a strong sense of justice and protection, complete super hero dialog.
In sealed/shikai, Senshi wears a de-armores, standard spandex Kamen Rider/Super Sentai version of my Bankai. And since my powers are his, he also wears the armor in his bankai appearance. If that makes sense.

Inner World: “The Temple of Truth” An enormous stone temple, the interior is more futuristic, with lights, security cameras, and a control room.


I really like in - in particular, the uniqueness of speaking in cliches, so I'm guessing that's only in Bankai?

Well, there's not really much to comment on, I guess. The image designs look really cool, and being purely melee prevents you from having any kind of overpowered attacks. I'm sure it'll be fun for the fanfic writers XD


RAWR!
Hmm... I wanna join :)
Zachiru
Welcome to the Bleach Club 2! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...), though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

Like Arc said, be wary of spoilers. I highly suggest catching up with the manga, as it's a big point of discussion for us, and it means you generally don't have to worry about spoilers.


Favorite Arrancar? Grimmjow / Ulquiorra
This is a good list 8D

*Cracks knuckles* Let's try and do this... again.



Golde – Head-Captain | Flash-Dre | Zam- Zameric |Kusari- Saiga |Sapph-Testu
Cell- Niche | MC-Senshuken | Rotrum-Yukimura |Dac- Narrcise |Badmanjaro-Akio
NL- Kida | Sennny-Senbon | Blue-Aozora |Minchan-Min |CyberBlaze-Kaii
Arc- Mizuhashi | Eon- Seijuro | ILP- Ryuu |PKMN Rex- Rex|Lucario-Jaku

I think in the reply to topic, the formatting looks fine, though it's a bit messier on the actual page. Perhaps you should put it in a spoiler? I think more of us know almost all of the names, by now (though Yukimura is a new one).


Her body tensed as he came closer to her. His tall and dark body overshadowing her more petite and pale one. The cold darkness of the empty office only made the situation more heart racing. As he drew closer, his dominating aura washed over her, flooding the room with his intensity.
Okay, it's in italics, which means it's possibly a kind of dream or something. You specifically italicised it to make it stand out from normal text for a reason.

The aura that sent enemies running terrorized with fer or charging in reckless as a last-ditch effort of survival, overwhelmed her senses. Her eyes became glazed over, making her sight become blurry. Her nose was assaulted with a mixed of smells that made up his scent. The smells stimulated her taste-buds, giving her a taste in her mouth that was hard to describe. It was subtle and faint, yet combined with the smell, was a taste that worked up every single taste-bud.
A very powerful aura; must belong to a very powerful person.
Also, you said terrorized with "fer".
And there was a lot of description that she was tasting and smelling, but not what she was tasting or smelling.

His voice made her eardrums savor every vibration. His deep baritone vocals left her in an almost trace like state. He body was covered in sweat, every bead of sweat falling off her skin was felt. His very presence made her body become much more sensitive and-
"He body was covered in sweat, every bead of sweat falling off her skin was felt." should be:
"Her body was covered in sweat, with every bead falling off her skin being felt."
It makes the two clauses flow into each other more, and reduces the redundancy of using the word "sweat" twice.
Y'know, if I didn't know any better, I'd think you were writing a...


A powerful voice broke the group listening on the story being read to them. “What the hell are you all doing?” Captain Seijuro asked as he booming voice broke them from their enthralled enjoyment of the story. Him towering over all of them might have had something to do with it as well.
Ah, it was a story being read out loud. Something tells me lols will come soon...
Also "as he booming voice"

The crowd of shinigami mostly made of women couldn't look at him. A large number of them were blushing, few trying to get away while others laughed nervously. All but one female were too embarrassed to say anything thing, the exception walk right up to him and getting as close she could to his face, staring dead set into his eyes.
I think the "mostly made of women" could have hyphens/commas/brackets around it, as it feels a bit like extra detail that can be focused on.
I think the second sentence could be written as "A large number of them were blushing or laughing nervously, with a few trying to get away." It flows a bit more, I think.
You say "...to say anything thing". You can end the sentence there, start a new one, and say "...walk right up to him, getting as close as she could to his face and staring dead set into his eyes." Again, for a more clear flow.

“Why the hell did you stop story time? I wanted to know if the girl would pass out from her heart attack before of after describing every bloody thing!” The Captain of Squad Eleven, Aozora asked him glaring.
Ah, of course, only Blue would react to Seijuro like that. Though you say "before of after describing...".
Wait, was she really having a heart attack? Or was it... something else?

Seijuro frowned and motioned to a nearby rooftop, “Meet me.” That was all he told her before flash stepping away from the group. She growled a bit, but complied and followed him to roof via flash-step.
Alright, so whatever he wants to tell her, he wants to do in private, and not in front of everyone. Probably something important; captains only.

They both left the group of flustered shinigami to promptly nose-bled over images of The Seventh Captain being the man in the book. Then quickly scattered to treat their current condition before someone saw them.
Ah, of course, Seijuro is the man in the book. Makes you wonder who wrote that.

“Why are you just sitting back listening to stories at a time like this!?” Seijuro asked her vexed at her seemingly lackadaisical behavior. His metal boots almost leaving an impression on the roof's ceiling tiles.
There should be a comma after "Seijuro asked her", because it sounded like "Seijuro asked her vexed". Lackadaisical is a good word. And the metal boots is a good reference to his design, though it should be "left", not "leaving" as you need an active verb.


“Still doesn't tell me why you were listening to that garbage.”
Wait, so he knows what that is? 8O I figured he'd want them all burned... But if he didn't, then maybe he likes them! *shot*

Seijuro chuckled a bit, that explanation could only be pulled off by Aozora. “That explains a lot, you didn't strike me as the type to read those kinds of books anyway.”
You were writing that, weren't you!

“On the orders of Fourth Squad Captain Mizuhashi Akira, you three are not allowed passage into the World of the Living until he says otherwise.” Both guards did their best to stay strong and not show any fear, but were terrified inside. As their luck would have it, both new arrivals could smell their fear and just looked at them. The weight of their stares along was slowly crushing the two.
Ah, so Arc doesn't want anyone to leave? Hmm... I'm trying to think of why, perhaps he doesn't want to send members out to treat people in the living world, if he's a bit short on staff?

“Old man?” Aozora called out to the Sixth Squad Captain standing in between them and in-front of them, blocking her from simply smacking the two guards out-of-the-way.
The thing about using "Old man" in place of "Oji-san" is that it makes you sound actually old.

“Hakufuku.”
Hmm... Alright, so Sen did not want them to leave, either. Presumably, he either does not want them to know why (otherwise he would have told them), or he is not bothered to explain the reason (though if it was really that important, I think he'd explain instead of attacking them). The fact that he used a kidou that caused them to black out instead of a restraining spell, or a powerful hadou shows that he doesn't want any kind of retaliation. The reason why though...


In the Artic, a battle raged on in a furious blizzard, the fact that it was the middle of six months of night, didn't help out at all. As the harsh white coldness ruthless washed over the land, only two powerful beings seemed to be able to work through it. Four figures cloaked in black laid motionless in the snow, bodies being slowly buried by the blizzard.
I think you can turn "help out at all" into "help at all", because it sounds less informal.
"white coldness ruthlessly washed over"
I'm guessing the 4 bodies are shinigami?


The two glared at each other through the harsh blizzard, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. Yukimura had the advantage, the frozen wasteland was a winter wonderland for his Zanpaktou and fighting style. He knew nothing of this arrancar but felt that he could easily kill this one without much effort.
I just realised, I think you use "Yumimura" a few times.
Also, an arrancar? There wasn't really much build up to that revelation. In fact, besides the "white cloak", there was no build up, it was just kind of thrown at us. Perhaps a description of a mask (without using that word) in the character's general description would have helped.

Alright, so we have an Arrancar! Now, looking at the fact that he enjoyed the snow and some inside knowledge, I'm going to go with the idea that he's Rotrum's Arrancar! If so, then this possibly links some ideas:
The massive hollow attack could be organised by Arrancars (assuming that they are organised, which I think they would have to be, for them to attack the Shinigami). It also means that they probably have Arrancar!Me, and possibly Arrancar!Da.c (though he doesn't have an Arrancar profile, if you really wanted to have him, you could just copy and paste his design and powers and whatnot. Would make for an interesting meeting) - which would allow for someone to create the poison used for Golde.

Kida frowned at the Captain that had returned to the captain's Meeting Hall. Dre, Zameric, and Saiga all focused on her. They all were impatiently waiting to be filled on what exactly was going on. The fact that it wasn't the Head-Captain briefing them, just added to the tension and uneasiness of the group.

You have a few short sentences which could be made into fewer complex sentences. Since this scene doesn't require the build-up that short sentences do.


“Great, should we get popcorn for this movie?” Zameric asked laying back in his seat and smirking.
Bloody smart arse

The table then changed s bit, a miniature screen complete with readings and data appearing before the three Captains being briefed. Finally, the battle data shown to them as clear as day.
You used "s" instead of "a", and you should say "the battle data was shown to them".

Hollows of all shapes and sized appeared in the clear blue sky, a back of Menos Grande blocking the sunlight for many around the area.
I think around here, you should've described the setting a bit more. In my head, I was imagine a sort-of desert, up until it was mentioned that there was a city nearby. I think this would have been a good place to give a detailed description.

“The final count was twelve-hundred hollows. Three-hundred Adjuchas level, three-hundred Gillian level and seven-hundred normal hollows.” Kida informed them all in a shaky tone of voice.
After the final count, you should use a colon, as she was listing the hollows.

“ There are so many to kill, I feel like a kid at a candy store!” Aozora said cheerfully as he rushed to slice a Adjuchas in half.
Ah, of course, this is like heaven for her XD.

“It's obvious hollow bait was used in large amounts, but I didn't know they were potent enough for attracting Adjuchas class hollows.” Seijuro said as he prepared to fight the nearest foes by him.
I think "they were potent" should be "they could be potent" - as it's a one-off case that adjuchas came, I think it just makes more sense like this.

“Most of these are just freshly made Gillains and Adjuchas, so their lack of experience will be their downfall.” Senshuken said releasing his zanpaktou.
For adjuchas, yes, but Gillian (not Gillains, which you used throughout) have no mind of their own, with the exception of the "special" ones that can turn into adjuchas (which are very rare, considering how many adjuchas and Vasto Lorde there are).

“How can you tell Senshuken-Sensei?” Senbon asked slicing off the arm of a adjuchas that tried to attack him and then landing a killing blow to its head.
You use "a adjuchas" quite a bit, actually.

“One little, two little, three dead adjuchas! Four little, five little, six dead adujuchas!” Aozora sang as she ruthless and quickly sliced through any adjuchas in her path. Her prey tried hard to fight back firing ceros at her, but she dodged them while singing happily. “Seven little, eight little, nine dead adjuschas and I still have hundreds of hollows to go!”
Best.
Lines.
Ever.


“Well she's enjoying herself.” Seijuro commented flatly as he cut a adjuchas's arm off. The hollow charged at him screaming in rage, but him simply flash stepped out-of-the-way and delivered the killing blow in one swift motion.
"But him simply flash stepped" should be he, not him.
And out-of-the-way doesn't need the hyphens. Just "out of the way" is fine.


Senshuken send multiple kido spell blasts at the gillains and adjuchas in his line of sight, “True, but then we'd all get out of shape if we let her do all the fighting.”
Sent, not send.
That's the only reason? XD

Aozora currently was riding on a winged hollow, decapitating anything in her range while directing the poor hollow toward large groups of them.
Toward, not towards, because it's third person.

“Aozora!” Senbon yelled out as he watched her get hit.
It's like he doesn't know her.

“Aww, how cute. You all think that's playing rough. “ Aozora said revealed to only be partly scuffed and singed by the blasts. “ Hey Old Man and Wolfie! Lets show these wusses how it's done!”
The nicknames remind me of Yachiru XD wait, what's my nickname?

Seijuro and Senshuken both smirked a bit, both preparing to a tiny iota of effort into the fight.
Preparing to put an iota of effort (you need a verb, and the tiny is redundant).

Meanwhile, on the side of the battlefield that wasn't completely one-sided, Seated officers watched the carnage in awe. A Lieutenant going over to the one Captain not acting like a mass murdering sociopath.
I think that could be rephrased into "Meanwhile, on the side of the battlefield that wasn't an absolute massacre, a few seated officers watched the carnage in awe. A Lieutenant went to the only Captain that wasn't acting like a mass murdering sociopath." You don't repeat "side", and the latter part flows more nicely how many times have I said that?


“I see. I'll investigate it myself.” Senbon told him confidently, flying over to the area in question.
So THIS is how he dies.


“I love watching them do so much carnage.” He said cheerfully moving stray blonde hairs from his face.
Can you "do" carnage? I think "cause carnage" makes more sense.

The adjuchas fired four bala blasts at once, two connecting with Luke as he managed to deflect the other two. “Ha! You'll-” He promptly was nearly smashed into pieces as the hollow used sonido to add speed to his momentum and land a single deadly tackle. Luke had braced himself but quickly opened his eyes to see what happened to the attack.
Looks like Luke will be attacked a lot this chapter/fic...
Also, can Hollows use sonido? I was under the impression that only Arrancars can.

Oh, I just remembered, you jump between Jaku and Luke sometimes.


His expression darkened as his eyes grew cold and broadcasted a death glare. “Freeze the Icy Water, Koorimizu!”
So... Almost everyone released now?

The captains watching the mission video data all absorbed the information playing before them in the dark room.
Which brings up a point - how is all of this data recorded? Especially since it seems to be from a few different points (as it looks at some scenes that are a few metres away from each other) - I'm going to assume that Ryuu sent some kind of recording bats to capture everything, but that should be mentioned, then.

Silenced filled the room as they watched on, this meant that the battle recording would be Senny's last recorded mission.
Silence, not silenced <.<

Outside side the meeting room, Dre's fifth seat and lieutenant both waited for the meeting to be over. Having an important message from his family.
Outside side?

Hmm... If it's SUPER IMPORTANT, then I think they could interupt the meeting, so it seems that it might not be a top priority.


Senbon walked around the city, going unseen by its inhabitants. “I don't sense anything at all,” he said to himself out loud.
Silly!

He frowned as it turned out to be Luke with his sword already drawn.

“I can fight the weird guys in the cloaks no problem!” Luke told him grinning.
This will not end good, not at all.

The white cloaks with silver lining hide their figures and faces from view. The only thing else noticeable about them besides their tall height, was the kido enhanced chains. The chains seem to for the one in the center, as it looked as if the other two were containing them.
Okay, so probably more Arrancars. Though they can use Kidou? And "The chains seem to be for the one in the center"

Silence filled the street they all standing on, Senbon wondering if Jaku had a death wish. He couldn't believe how arrogant he was, there just wasn't any way. The cloaked figures seemed unaffected by the declaration by Jaku, save for the one on the left.
"Silence filled the street. Senbon wondered if Jaku had a death wish; he couldn't believe how arrogant he was. . The cloaked figures seemed unaffected by Jaku's decleration, save for the one on the left."

The figure was short compared to Jaku, but didn't seem to care about the height difference based on her response. “Boys talk action while Men make action, now lets see how much a man you're really are!”
I'm guessing that we know she's a girl by her more feminine voice? Also "you're really are"?


The adjuchas quickly turned to glare at new arrival, “Whoever the hell you are shinigami, your dead.”
You're.

“Your mistake was leaving us alive.” Kaii said as he watched Testu send a vine to deliver the killing blow to the adjuchas.
Ah, I think it's fair for 2 Lieutenants and a 5th seat to kill an Adjuchas.


“No need for thanks, it's my job to protect my allies and destroy my enemies after all.” Akio answered them, “ I'm Akio Sato, Fifth seat of Squad Six.”
Sounds like a line Rex should say


“Thank you, though I came to ask why I left to guard my post alone. I understand if Captain Senbon needed him for the investigation, but not sending someone to watch my back.” Akio told the two lieutenants calmly.
I don't get what he said. "I came to ask why I left to guard my post alone".

“Ask meaning yelling at him for going against orders, right?” Kaii asked as he went over to the area being investigated.

“Maybe for you, for me it means savage beating.” Testu told him gleefully as he followed Kaii to the city.
Ah, of course.

“Is that it? Little boys can put up better fights than you, I can't even call you an infant. They are no where near as weak and pathetic as you are right now.” The shortest cloaked figure taunted Jaku with a voice that sounded like a noble woman's.
[I]Damn that is some trash talking. Also "nowhere", not "no where".

Jaku tried to release his zanpaktou, but found that he couldn't do it. He called and called out the release command for his sword, but was only met with failure. “Coward! What kind of trick did you pull?”
That's... weird. Possibly an affect of one of the other two Arrancars.


“Hado number Ninety, Kurohitsugi!”
Something tells me Cell won't like that XD

Also that Captain Senbon went to investigate a strange sighting in the city.” Akio kept going as all there captains paid attention to him.
The captains, not there captains.

“Last one there gets stabbed in the foot!” Aozora shouted as she rushed off after the group.
Typical Blue.

Senbon told them noting that Kaii and Testu had released their zanapktou before arriving to the scene.
Ah, okay, so this "release prevention barrier" doesn't reseal zanpakutous that go in it.

“What the hell?! I didn't even see it!” Tetsu said as the next attack came, sending himself and Kaii crashing into a greenhouse across from the store Jaku landed.
You use "Tetsu here" Though I think Tetsu is correct, since it can be written in Hiragan, while Testu can't. But Sapph's profile DOES say Testu...

The one that was chained was missing, while the other one had protected himself with a another kido spell. Shattered pieces of the spell littering the street around them.
This doesn't look good; he must have been chained up for a reason, and now he's free? Also, it seems like your Arrancars can learn kidou spells?


Senbon's jaw nearly dropped as he a close look at him.
As he took a close look.

“Muyomi, you know brother Seijuro, right? We'll after I kill you all and destroy everything he loves, cares for and stands for, I'll send him to hell to meet you.” With that declaration, he promptly attacked Senbon with ruthlessly wild swings full of power.
So Muyomi is his name, and he's Seijuro's brother? Wait, who is and who isn't an Arrancar, I'm confused.

Senbon smirked, they were positioned perfectly! Out of each others way and having the almost perfect synergy with their attacks. There attacks along with his boosted by its chant, should be the end of all three of them.
Well, it makes sense that Sen and Seijuro's Lieutenants can do combos with each other.

He hoped that Seijuro could forgive him for doing this later. “Hado number Seventy-Three, Soren Sokatsui!”
Why would Seijuro have to forgive him?

“Jikanteishi.” Senbon's smirk turned to a horrified look of shock as he heard the deep voice call out the spell. Time stopped for anything right in-front of the mystery cloaked figure.
Okay, so this person knows forbidden kidou...

Then transported the kido along with their casters into a position where they would all be vaporized by their own attacks. As time began its flow forward once again, the foe watched as they kido attacks collided with each other, creating a devastating explosion that damaged pretty much anything on the street.
Eeeeevil. I like it.


“You would have been dead at least two times since the battle started child, don't you dare think I care about your reasons for fighting. As long as your under master's orders, you shall live until you severe your purpose. Afterward, I could care less if you die or not.”
Ah, so they are working under a single person. And it's clear that their relationship with each other is at best neutral, as worst, they dislike each other but are putting that aside for the moment.

They're uniforms were burned and torn apart, barely holding together.
Their.

“I see, you used Danku to mostly protect the other two and blocked the Haien and Soren Sokatsui with a lesser bakudo spell. I must say that is truly an impressive display of kido mastery. You must have had a very good sensei.”
Of course you would add that in XP


It had felt like a sword had torn through their bodies even though he only delivered shallow cuts to them. Senbon looked on in horror as he was too weak to flash step away in time. The last thing he saw was the cloudless clear blue sky as he was decapitated by Muyomi. The old man quickly incinerated the body with Haien.
Wow. Gruesome. And he didn't even kind of die in a heroic sort of way, he was just fighting, too damaged to move, and had his head sliced cleanly off.

Seijuro yelled out in an anguished rage as he saw the sadistically happy Muyomi grin like a maniac at him.
Why does this description suit Blue?

The old man snapped his fingers, causing a Menos Grande to appear through the dimention. It then used a Negacion energy field to transport the woman, Muyomi and himself away from the new arrivals.
Dimension. And did he snap his fingers and it came? I think opening a garganta that brought in a Gillian, or something, would make more sense.

“Coward! Get back here and fight like a little girl!”
Still has the best lines.

Senshuken looked over to Seijuro, seeing him paralyzed by a bunch of emotions all fighting for dominance in his mind. All wanting to be expressed and relive him of this stressful reunion of family he though was dead. He then turned to see Senbon's head between Kaii and Testu's nearly dead bodies. Refusing to let his emotions of seeing his former student and college's decapitated head and half-dead lieutenants body, he called for Squad Four to come to the location.
"A bunch of emotions" sounds informal.
Relive -> Relieve?
college -> Colleague
And who called for Squad 4, Seijuro or Sen? I think it would make more sense for Sen to call, because Seijuro would likely be to emotionally distraught to do anything at the moment (while Sen is, he would be less so).

Akio looked at all the carnage and destruction, this mission was a brutal.
Understatement much?

Alright, so this explains how the mission went, but also had a short introduction of an Arrancar. For the moment, I think I'm only confused on what species the girl, the figure and Muyomi are.




Casts looks so jacked up on the post editor. >.> I was thinking of doing the cast that way from now on. I though it look neater and wouldn't stretch the post out more than it needed to be.
Ah.

I also had planned to have the kido battle longer, but once again, huge chapter is huge. Though I am mostly satisfied with how it all came out.
Yeah, I think this is fine as it is.

Once again, thank you everyone who read my chapter and even bothered to read this note. I had alot of fun writing this chapter and hope you enjoyed reading it as well.
Hope the review is good for you This took me a long time to write.



Also. *giggles* You're an Eon lover? *giggles*
I wonder whose squad Ace will go into...

Well, starting the Insignia ... I have the list here of the parts I have and don't have, first the flowers chosen, then the symbol design for each division
If you want a good site for different Plant meanings i'd suggest going here - http://www.victorianbazaar.com/meanings.html

1 - Golde - ... - ...
2 - Cell - Fly Trap - 2 cross Daggers
3 - Kida - Ivy -
4 - Arceus - Moon Flower - ...
5 - Flash Step - ... - ...
6 - MC - ... - Crimson Red and a Flaming Claw.
7 - Eon - Cactus Flower - Electric Blue Tribal Wolf
8 - Senbonsakura - Cherry Blossom - ...
9 - Zameric - ... - Sheild, one side scrool, other side libra scales
10 - Rotrum - ... -
11 - Blue - ... -
12 - ILP - ... - Teal test tube in a circle?
13 - Kusari - ... - Silver Albatross

I'm going to ask Senny if he's planning to come back, if not i'll ask if we can re-assign his Captaincy to someone else.
Ah, thanks for the link, I think I'll go with an iris from that list. It's better than a test tube for reasons Arc said, wisdom (which squad 12 could be said to have as well as just knowledge) is mentioned twice. Plus it looks pretty 8D

arceus03
12th September 2011, 9:32 PM
You can call me ace or acer.

Cool, I'll go with Ace. Oh btw, people refer to me as Arc. But the Head Captain sometimes call me Mizuhashi. Yeah.


Well, starting the Insignia ... I have the list here of the parts I have and don't have, first the flowers chosen, then the symbol design for each division
If you want a good site for different Plant meanings i'd suggest going here - http://www.victorianbazaar.com/meanings.html

=D The list doesn't have moonflower, though. Cowslip is the next likely flower I would choose (Rusticity, Winning Grace, Healing, Youth, Pensiveness) but it has a... weird name. So I'll stick with moonflower. XD Let's go in-depth for anyone who is interested:

It signifies, as I've mentioned before, that "The ultimate healing os the healing of soul". But also, found here (http://lifestyle.iloveindia.com/lounge/how-to-grow-moonflower-5425.html), moonflowers also represent nocturnal bloomers. It blossoms white at night, when all other flowers have closed their petals. In a way, it symbolizes the "hope" that remains when all else seems futile: If you can keep on living, you can keep on going. They are also hardy, which is an essential quality of a 4th Squad member and not only for the 11th Squad: you have to be able to keep your head in times of great distress, and not succumb to your emotions after seeing your comrades fell in battles, etc.

In a different way, moonflower also symbolizes the Squad itself. While the remaining 12 Squads are geared for combat (maybe less for the 12th Squad), the 4th Squad's aim is to aid, to heal. While all other flowers bloom in the sun, this flower blooms at night in the presence of the moon.

Is it bad I think too much of this? XD
Er hem. Anyway. If I must have a symbol, then be it as Rex said. XD A bitten cookie with bandages. Or if that is somewhat too complex, then just go with the caduceus.


I really like in - in particular, the uniqueness of speaking in cliches, so I'm guessing that's only in Bankai?

I can't wait to see a scene with his zanpakto spirit and yours. One would talk entirely in proverbs, and another in cliches.


I wonder whose squad Ace will go into...

No prizes for guessing right



Shikai
Release Command: Reside yourself to your fate,
My blade fueled by justice will overcome all,
Hear our hearts roar as we charge into battle!

Ah ha. The first release command that mirrors Shunsui/Ukitake. It's a bit... idk what word to use here, I mean like the phrases aren't exactly my favorite, but I like the fact that it's a poem. Also, justice sounds like Tousen


Description: A pair of giant gauntlets (http://i.neoseeker.com/ca/god_of_war_chains_of_olympus_conceptart_tsEs6.jpg) (Minus the face of Zeus & the armor past the elbow.)

You got a PAIR of those huge gauntlets? o.o How are you going to even move? Though it's a bit like Chad's ability XD


Description: For lack of a better description and laziness, Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin is based off of this Battlizer. (http://images.wikia.com/powerrangers/images/7/75/MF_Red_Dragon_Fire_Ranger.jpg)

I lol'd when I saw the picture. No joking.


It shows my current health & reiatsu levels, my vitals (heart rate, blood pressure), and armor and bone damage. It can also display environmental stats, such as oxygen level, oxygen content and temperature. And finally tracks any enemy reiatsu with in a range of 300 ft.

And this. XD

Well yeah. I don't have much to comment on it. Seems fine.



Bad News everyone, my fic is ready to post.

8D
That is not the bad news. The bad news is when ILPy posts a huge review and stretches my page so long I had to scroll doooooooooown just to skip it

PKMN Trainer Rex
12th September 2011, 10:53 PM
RAWR!
Hmm... I wanna join :)
Zachiru

Hello, Acer. I'm Rex, 3rd seat of Squad 5 if you need anything just send me a VM. I'll gladly help.


I really like in - in particular, the uniqueness of speaking in cliches, so I'm guessing that's only in Bankai?

Well, there's not really much to comment on, I guess. The image designs look really cool, and being purely melee prevents you from having any kind of overpowered attacks. I'm sure it'll be fun for the fanfic writers XD


Yes, speaking in cliches is bankai exclusive. You all would kill me if I constantly spoke like that.



I can't wait to see a scene with his zanpakto spirit and yours. One would talk entirely in proverbs, and another in cliches.


Our brains would implode



Ah ha. The first release command that mirrors Shunsui/Ukitake. It's a bit... idk what word to use here, I mean like the phrases aren't exactly my favorite, but I like the fact that it's a poem. Also, justice sounds like Tousen


Yup, thats me, always wanting to stick out.




You got a PAIR of those huge gauntlets? o.o How are you going to even move? Though it's a bit like Chad's ability XD


I guess its like how Ikkaku wields his bankai. He just does, although I would move slower than usual.



I lol'd when I saw the picture. No joking.


Be glad I did chose any of those comically huge battlizers from the older generations.



And this. XD


Another cliche I had to "borrow"


I'm glad to its been approved so far.

Northern Lights
12th September 2011, 11:04 PM
Ok guys, it seems that people are getting confused over the insignia's and we shall just choose new flower symbols that have meaning relevant to our Squads.

I chose the Ivy - Defense, Fidelity, Affection

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And this is Squad 4, with a Moonflower

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MasterCharizard15
12th September 2011, 11:45 PM
I really like in - in particular, the uniqueness of speaking in cliches, so I'm guessing that's only in Bankai?

Well, there's not really much to comment on, I guess. The image designs look really cool, and being purely melee prevents you from having any kind of overpowered attacks. I'm sure it'll be fun for the fanfic writers XD

Oh yes, I'll LOVE writing for that. >D



*Cracks knuckles* Let's try and do this... again.


Come at me, BRO!




I think in the reply to topic, the formatting looks fine, though it's a bit messier on the actual page. Perhaps you should put it in a spoiler? I think more of us know almost all of the names, by now (though Yukimura is a new one).

I'll experiment more with it. I hate doing a long list, and spoilers might end up being what I'll do.


Okay, it's in italics, which means it's possibly a kind of dream or something. You specifically italicised it to make it stand out from normal text for a reason.

Plushie for you, that was the idea.


A very powerful aura; must belong to a very powerful person.
Also, you said terrorized with "fer".
And there was a lot of description that she was tasting and smelling, but not what she was tasting or smelling.

Fixed along with all the other errors you pointed out. XD



Y'know, if I didn't know any better, I'd think you were writing a...

...a story. :|



Ah, it was a story being read out loud. Something tells me lols will come soon...

Nothing gets past you, huh?


I think the "mostly made of women" could have hyphens/commas/brackets around it, as it feels a bit like extra detail that can be focused on.
I think the second sentence could be written as "A large number of them were blushing or laughing nervously, with a few trying to get away." It flows a bit more, I think.
You say "...to say anything thing". You can end the sentence there, start a new one, and say "...walk right up to him, getting as close as she could to his face and staring dead set into his eyes." Again, for a more clear flow.

Flow advice, okay either you or Eon are gonna end up being my overworked and unpaided Beta reader. >>



Ah, of course, only Blue would react to Seijuro like that.
Wait, was she really having a heart attack? Or was it... something else?

Yup, gotta love her.
Also, no, it just went over her head a bit and thats what she thought.



Alright, so whatever he wants to tell her, he wants to do in private, and not in front of everyone. Probably something important; captains only.

Ah, of course, Seijuro is the man in the book. Makes you wonder who wrote that.

Yup, don't want the gossips talking.
Fear the fangirls, fear them!


There should be a comma after "Seijuro asked her", because it sounded like "Seijuro asked her vexed". Lackadaisical is a good word. And the metal boots is a good reference to his design, though it should be "left", not "leaving" as you need an active verb.

He was upset and irradiated a bit, so...


Wait, so he knows what that is? 8O I figured he'd want them all burned... But if he didn't, then maybe he likes them! *shot*


He has 100 Intelligence, so yes, yes he does.
Also, the author of it will actually have meaning to the plot latter.


You were writing that, weren't you!

The fangirl cried after Seijuro hid in his office, she then called her friends to help her kidnap him and keep him in her "bishie closet".
^- That would be my writing.



Ah, so Arc doesn't want anyone to leave? Hmm... I'm trying to think of why, perhaps he doesn't want to send members out to treat people in the living world, if he's a bit short on staff?

With so many heavy hitter downs, do you think he'd want more in his squad seeking treatment?



The thing about using "Old man" in place of "Oji-san" is that it makes you sound actually old.

Fixed.


Hmm... Alright, so Sen did not want them to leave, either. Presumably, he either does not want them to know why (otherwise he would have told them), or he is not bothered to explain the reason (though if it was really that important, I think he'd explain instead of attacking them). The fact that he used a kidou that caused them to black out instead of a restraining spell, or a powerful hadou shows that he doesn't want any kind of retaliation. The reason why though...


Muyomi and the woman aren't arrancars. /spoiler




I just realised, I think you use "Yumimura" a few times.
Also, an arrancar? There wasn't really much build up to that revelation. In fact, besides the "white cloak", there was no build up, it was just kind of thrown at us. Perhaps a description of a mask (without using that word) in the character's general description would have helped.

The scene should have been cut out, now that I look back on it. Thought Rotrum finally got screen time, so meh.


Alright, so we have an Arrancar! Now, looking at the fact that he enjoyed the snow and some inside knowledge, I'm going to go with the idea that he's Rotrum's Arrancar! If so, then this possibly links some ideas:
The massive hollow attack could be organised by Arrancars (assuming that they are organised, which I think they would have to be, for them to attack the Shinigami). It also means that they probably have Arrancar!Me, and possibly Arrancar!Da.c (though he doesn't have an Arrancar profile, if you really wanted to have him, you could just copy and paste his design and powers and whatnot. Would make for an interesting meeting) - which would allow for someone to create the poison used for Golde.

This too, had get introduce the arrancar. Though your train of though is correct, in an alternate universe. :p



Bloody smart arse

Who else but Zam?


I think around here, you should've described the setting a bit more. In my head, I was imagine a sort-of desert, up until it was mentioned that there was a city nearby. I think this would have been a good place to give a detailed description.

Yeah, though last chapter did say it happened in the World of the living. So I though "random city" would instantly come to mind.



Ah, of course, this is like heaven for her XD.

You know it.


For adjuchas, yes, but Gillian (not Gillains, which you used throughout) have no mind of their own, with the exception of the "special" ones that can turn into adjuchas (which are very rare, considering how many adjuchas and Vasto Lorde there are).

Fixed.


You use "a adjuchas" quite a bit, actually.

Had few things to call them.


Best.
Lines.
Ever.

I'm pretty sure everyone agrees with you.



The nicknames remind me of Yachiru XD wait, what's my nickname?

I wonder what are her nicknames for everyone...
Cuddles the science bear.


I think that could be rephrased into "Meanwhile, on the side of the battlefield that wasn't an absolute massacre, a few seated officers watched the carnage in awe. A Lieutenant went to the only Captain that wasn't acting like a mass murdering sociopath." You don't repeat "side", and the latter part flows more nicely how many times have I said that?

Noted. Alot.



So THIS is how he dies.

Yup.



Looks like Luke will be attacked a lot this chapter/fic...
Also, can Hollows use sonido? I was under the impression that only Arrancars can.

I'm evil and really?


Oh, I just remembered, you jump between Jaku and Luke sometimes.

Fixed.


So... Almost everyone released now?

Nope.


Which brings up a point - how is all of this data recorded? Especially since it seems to be from a few different points (as it looks at some scenes that are a few metres away from each other) - I'm going to assume that Ryuu sent some kind of recording bats to capture everything, but that should be mentioned, then.

Next chapter big guy, next chapter. XD




Hmm... If it's SUPER IMPORTANT, then I think they could interupt the meeting, so it seems that it might not be a top priority.

Kida threatened to kill Zameric over being himself, so I think fear had a part to do with it. Also the fact this was thrown in...poorly.



This will not end good, not at all.

Yup.


Okay, so probably more Arrancars. Though they can use Kidou? And "The chains seem to be for the one in the center"

Arrnacar can't use Kido, though...Vizards can use kido and ceros...hmm...it's possible.



Ah, I think it's fair for 2 Lieutenants and a 5th seat to kill an Adjuchas.


So do I.


Sounds like a line Rex should say

Pfft. not nearly manly and cheesy enough.
I don't get what he said. "I came to ask why I left to guard my post alone".



Damn that is some trash talking. Also "nowhere", not "no where".


She even backed it up too!



Something tells me Cell won't like that XD

He wasn't there, so he gets no say. >>.




Ah, okay, so this "release prevention barrier" doesn't reseal zanpakutous that go in it.

Yup. Clever guys, huh?




This doesn't look good; he must have been chained up for a reason, and now he's free? Also, it seems like your Arrancars can learn kidou spells?

SEnny fired the Kidou. I don't think they can, since someone would have to TEACH them the kido.



So Muyomi is his name, and he's Seijuro's brother? Wait, who is and who isn't an Arrancar, I'm confused.

Muyomi and the Woman. The Old man is another can of worms...>>


Well, it makes sense that Sen and Seijuro's Lieutenants can do combos with each other.


Yup, go team work!



Why would Seijuro have to forgive him?

For killing Muyomi, his brother.


Okay, so this person knows forbidden kidou...

Eeeeevil. I like it.

Oh yes, I love it too.



Ah, so they are working under a single person. And it's clear that their relationship with each other is at best neutral, as worst, they dislike each other but are putting that aside for the moment.


Nothing get's past the cyborg.


Of course you would add that in XP

It was meant in a more mocking tone.



Wow. Gruesome. And he didn't even kind of die in a heroic sort of way, he was just fighting, too damaged to move, and had his head sliced cleanly off.

Thats how battle is sometimes. :/



"A bunch of emotions" sounds informal.
Relive -> Relieve?
college -> Colleague
And who called for Squad 4, Seijuro or Sen? I think it would make more sense for Sen to call, because Seijuro would likely be to emotionally distraught to do anything at the moment (while Sen is, he would be less so).


Fixed and that last paragraph was Senshuken.


Alright, so this explains how the mission went, but also had a short introduction of an Arrancar. For the moment, I think I'm only confused on what species the girl, the figure and Muyomi are.
Muyomi and the woman,= Shinigami.
Figure = Spoiler





Ah.

Yeah, I think this is fine as it is.

Hope the review is good for you This took me a long time to write.

This took a long time to answer as well. XD




I wonder whose squad Ace will go into...

If ace is a girl, Eon's squad. If ace is a boy, then we all have a shot.

[/QUOTE]




I can't wait to see a scene with his zanpakto spirit and yours. One would talk entirely in proverbs, and another in cliches.

Same here. Somone should write that.



Ah ha. The first release command that mirrors Shunsui/Ukitake. It's a bit... idk what word to use here, I mean like the phrases aren't exactly my favorite, but I like the fact that it's a poem. Also, justice sounds like Tousen

I pretty much made it.






8D
That is not the bad news. The bad news is when ILPy posts a huge review and stretches my page so long I had to scroll doooooooooown just to skip it

Too true, too true.

Eon Master
12th September 2011, 11:45 PM
Replies to ILP's comments which also serve as my own comments.




I think in the reply to topic, the formatting looks fine, though it's a bit messier on the actual page. Perhaps you should put it in a spoiler? I think more of us know almost all of the names, by now (though Yukimura is a new one).

Probably wise. The only reason I don't for mine is because it's at the end of the text in a column.

Okay, it's in italics, which means it's possibly a kind of dream or something. You specifically italicised it to make it stand out from normal text for a reason.

Obviously.

A very powerful aura; must belong to a very powerful person.
Also, you said terrorized with "fer".
And there was a lot of description that she was tasting and smelling, but not what she was tasting or smelling.

"He body was covered in sweat, every bead of sweat falling off her skin was felt." should be:
"Her body was covered in sweat, with every bead falling off her skin being felt."
It makes the two clauses flow into each other more, and reduces the redundancy of using the word "sweat" twice.
Y'know, if I didn't know any better, I'd think you were writing a...

You would immediately jump to this conclusion.

Ah, it was a story being read out loud. Something tells me lols will come soon...
Also "as he booming voice"

I think the "mostly made of women" could have hyphens/commas/brackets around it, as it feels a bit like extra detail that can be focused on.
I think the second sentence could be written as "A large number of them were blushing or laughing nervously, with a few trying to get away." It flows a bit more, I think.
You say "...to say anything thing". You can end the sentence there, start a new one, and say "...walk right up to him, getting as close as she could to his face and staring dead set into his eyes." Again, for a more clear flow.

Thank you for doing this so I don't have to.

Ah, of course, only Blue would react to Seijuro like that. Though you say "before of after describing...".
Wait, was she really having a heart attack? Or was it... something else?

*rolleyes* No she wasn't having a heart attack.

Alright, so whatever he wants to tell her, he wants to do in private, and not in front of everyone. Probably something important; captains only.

Ah, of course, Seijuro is the man in the book. Makes you wonder who wrote that.

...MC, you got some 'splaining to do. XP

There should be a comma after "Seijuro asked her", because it sounded like "Seijuro asked her vexed". Lackadaisical is a good word. And the metal boots is a good reference to his design, though it should be "left", not "leaving" as you need an active verb.

More thanks for this.

Wait, so he knows what that is? 8O I figured he'd want them all burned... But if he didn't, then maybe he likes them! *shot*

Shush you XP

The only reason such stories aren't being burned is because, "frankly my dear, I don't give a damn". As long as they're not slandering me or spreading lies about my character, they can believe what they will.

You were writing that, weren't you!

DUH!

Ah, so Arc doesn't want anyone to leave? Hmm... I'm trying to think of why, perhaps he doesn't want to send members out to treat people in the living world, if he's a bit short on staff?

Reactionary fear. He's worried that their foes will pick them off if they do so. They obviously have more than enough forces to pick off weaker shinigami if they can commit so many Hollows at once.

The thing about using "Old man" in place of "Oji-san" is that it makes you sound actually old.

Maybe because he's actually supposed to be old? XP

Hmm... Alright, so Sen did not want them to leave, either. Presumably, he either does not want them to know why (otherwise he would have told them), or he is not bothered to explain the reason (though if it was really that important, I think he'd explain instead of attacking them). The fact that he used a kidou that caused them to black out instead of a restraining spell, or a powerful hadou shows that he doesn't want any kind of retaliation. The reason why though...

If they're not allowed out of the Seireitei, they have to do so by force. They're in the middle of a major crisis right now; Captains can't just run off as they please.

I think you can turn "help out at all" into "help at all", because it sounds less informal.
"white coldness ruthlessly washed over"
I'm guessing the 4 bodies are shinigami?

Who else?

I just realised, I think you use "Yumimura" a few times.
Also, an arrancar? There wasn't really much build up to that revelation. In fact, besides the "white cloak", there was no build up, it was just kind of thrown at us. Perhaps a description of a mask (without using that word) in the character's general description would have helped.

Definitely would've been helpful. Although you're forgetting that the buildup happened last chapter

Alright, so we have an Arrancar! Now, looking at the fact that he enjoyed the snow and some inside knowledge, I'm going to go with the idea that he's Rotrum's Arrancar! If so, then this possibly links some ideas:
The massive hollow attack could be organised by Arrancars (assuming that they are organised, which I think they would have to be, for them to attack the Shinigami). It also means that they probably have Arrancar!Me, and possibly Arrancar!Da.c (though he doesn't have an Arrancar profile, if you really wanted to have him, you could just copy and paste his design and powers and whatnot. Would make for an interesting meeting) - which would allow for someone to create the poison used for Golde.

Damn. MC was worried you'd pick this apart, and for good reason.

Bloody smart arse

It's Zam. He's supposed to be the smart arse

I think around here, you should've described the setting a bit more. In my head, I was imagine a sort-of desert, up until it was mentioned that there was a city nearby. I think this would have been a good place to give a detailed description.

Ditto. Always describe the battlefield.

After the final count, you should use a colon, as she was listing the hollows.

Thank you.

Ah, of course, this is like heaven for her XD.

Obviously xD

I think "they were potent" should be "they could be potent" - as it's a one-off case that adjuchas came, I think it just makes more sense like this.

Mhm. Pretty much.

For adjuchas, yes, but Gillian (not Gillains, which you used throughout) have no mind of their own, with the exception of the "special" ones that can turn into adjuchas (which are very rare, considering how many adjuchas and Vasto Lorde there are).

Experience is the wrong word, I think he means power. They're not very powerful for their respective classes yet.

Best.
Lines.
Ever.

I.
Know.
Right?

That's the only reason? XD

Yuuuuup xD

It's like he doesn't know her.

He kinda doesn't xD

The nicknames remind me of Yachiru XD wait, what's my nickname?

That's the point xD You have so many, which one?

I think that could be rephrased into "Meanwhile, on the side of the battlefield that wasn't an absolute massacre, a few seated officers watched the carnage in awe. A Lieutenant went to the only Captain that wasn't acting like a mass murdering sociopath." You don't repeat "side", and the latter part flows more nicely how many times have I said that?

Too many.

So THIS is how he dies.

No, that happens later XP

Can you "do" carnage? I think "cause carnage" makes more sense.

No, you cannot do carnage.

Looks like Luke will be attacked a lot this chapter/fic...
Also, can Hollows use sonido? I was under the impression that only Arrancars can.

He deserves it, the little punk...

Never been strictly stated that this is true.

Oh, I just remembered, you jump between Jaku and Luke sometimes.

I also noticed this.

Which brings up a point - how is all of this data recorded? Especially since it seems to be from a few different points (as it looks at some scenes that are a few metres away from each other) - I'm going to assume that Ryuu sent some kind of recording bats to capture everything, but that should be mentioned, then.

Kidou recording devices set up throughout the Seireitei, no doubt your doing. And yes, this should be mentioned.

Outside side?

Oh god.

Hmm... If it's SUPER IMPORTANT, then I think they could interupt the meeting, so it seems that it might not be a top priority.

Top-secret briefings wait for no one.

Silly!

For a second I thought he was actually being sarcastic xD

This will not end good, not at all.

well, not good

Okay, so probably more Arrancars. Though they can use Kidou? And "The chains seem to be for the one in the center"

Not strictly stated that they're Arrancar.

"Silence filled the street. Senbon wondered if Jaku had a death wish; he couldn't believe how arrogant he was. . The cloaked figures seemed unaffected by Jaku's decleration, save for the one on the left."

The sentence you don't get is either "no way to win", or "now way Jaku could do this by himself".

I'm guessing that we know she's a girl by her more feminine voice? Also "you're really are"?

That would be correct.

Ah, I think it's fair for 2 Lieutenants and a 5th seat to kill an Adjuchas.

Since Rukia can do it on her own... more than fair.

Sounds like a line Rex should say

No, Rex would say something classier.

I don't get what he said. "I came to ask why I left to guard my post alone".

Missing "was".

[I]Damn that is some trash talking. Also "nowhere", not "no where".

By Jaku's standards, maybe.

That's... weird. Possibly an affect of one of the other two Arrancars.

effect

Something tells me Cell won't like that XD

Huh?

Typical Blue.

She always steals the best lines!

Ah, okay, so this "release prevention barrier" doesn't reseal zanpakutous that go in it.

It's not so much as release prevention as it is sealing, methinks. Probably forbidden Kidou.

This doesn't look good; he must have been chained up for a reason, and now he's free? Also, it seems like your Arrancars can learn kidou spells?

Still not strictly stated that they're Arrancar.

As he took a close look.

So Muyomi is his name, and he's Seijuro's brother? Wait, who is and who isn't an Arrancar, I'm confused.

Try thinking back to my old fic... Muyomi is my brother from then.

Well, it makes sense that Sen and Seijuro's Lieutenants can do combos with each other.

Damn right.

Why would Seijuro have to forgive him?

'Cause he's about to kill his brother. Senny doesn't know that they hate each other.

Okay, so this person knows forbidden kidou...

No surprise.

Eeeeevil. I like it.

It's sadistic is what it is.

Ah, so they are working under a single person. And it's clear that their relationship with each other is at best neutral, as worst, they dislike each other but are putting that aside for the moment.

Like any other group of evildoers. Do you ever see them being all buddy-buddy?

Of course you would add that in XP

Ahahaha

Wow. Gruesome. And he didn't even kind of die in a heroic sort of way, he was just fighting, too damaged to move, and had his head sliced cleanly off.

That's Muyomi's Shikai ability; the damage and force behind his cuts is multiplied exponentially so that even shallow wounds do the damage of a full-on slash. That part is to show Muyomi's brutality; killing a helpless foe without even a shred of mercy.

Why does this description suit Blue?

Because Muyomi is a berserker to the nth degree. Think of Blue without any redeeming qualities and an animalistic hunger for death and carnage in the worst way. Muyomi's the kind of bastard who could snap his grandmother's neck and then eat a peanut butter and jelly sandwich in her kitchen without so much as batting an eyelash.

Dimension. And did he snap his fingers and it came? I think opening a garganta that brought in a Gillian, or something, would make more sense.

Kidou signal. Probably easier for him to do than actually open a Garganta.

Still has the best lines.

It's so unfair!

"A bunch of emotions" sounds informal.
Relive -> Relieve?
college -> Colleague
And who called for Squad 4, Seijuro or Sen? I think it would make more sense for Sen to call, because Seijuro would likely be to emotionally distraught to do anything at the moment (while Sen is, he would be less so).

No, Seijuro is just to angry to think straight.

Understatement much?

No.

Alright, so this explains how the mission went, but also had a short introduction of an Arrancar. For the moment, I think I'm only confused on what species the girl, the figure and Muyomi are.

This. They need to be defined. Just because I know doesn't mean everybody else does.


I wonder whose squad Ace will go into...

Not mine. The third seat spot is temporarily reserved for Soroft in case he wants to join once he has time to write up his Zanpaktou that I helped him design.

Ah, thanks for the link, I think I'll go with an iris from that list. It's better than a test tube for reasons Arc said, wisdom (which squad 12 could be said to have as well as just knowledge) is mentioned twice. Plus it looks pretty 8D

The Iris is Squad 7's canon flower. Off limits, dude.

I like Pokemon (...)
13th September 2011, 12:25 AM
Long posts. Remind me why I write them?


Is it bad I think too much of this? XD

I can't wait to see a scene with his zanpakto spirit and yours. One would talk entirely in proverbs, and another in cliches.

8D
That is not the bad news. The bad news is when ILPy posts a huge review and stretches my page so long I had to scroll doooooooooown just to skip it
Trust me, I've done worse.

FUND IT!!

Sorry...

Yes, speaking in cliches is bankai exclusive. You all would kill me if I constantly spoke like that.
Awwww



Our brains would implode
It would implode in AWESOME.



I chose the Ivy - Defense, Fidelity, Affection

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And this is Squad 4, with a Moonflower

http://i53.*******.com/2eb8uq9.jpg
Wow, those look amazing




Plushie for you, that was the idea.

Yay!


Nothing gets past you, huh?

Sarcasm?


Flow advice, okay either you or Eon are gonna end up being my overworked and unpaided Beta reader. >>

I thought we already were?



With so many heavy hitter downs, do you think he'd want more in his squad seeking treatment?

Fair enough. Perhaps I'm trying to look too deeply into this.

Muyomi and the woman aren't arrancars. /spoiler

Sorry, I don't know why I thought they were. I understand now, though.



This too, had get introduce the arrancar. Though your train of though is correct, in an alternate universe. :p

What do you mean "in an alternate universe"? D8

I wonder what are her nicknames for everyone...
Cuddles the science bear.

Science bear?
I am so okay with this.

I'm evil and really?

Well, we've only seen Arrancar use it.

Next chapter big guy, next chapter. XD

Alright.



Kida threatened to kill Zameric over being himself, so I think fear had a part to do with it. Also the fact this was thrown in...poorly.

Perhaps edit it to include these and Eon's point; that they were fearful of Kida, and that nothing goes above a debriefing.

Arrnacar can't use Kido, though...Vizards can use kido and ceros...hmm...it's possible.
That's why I got even more confused.
Butyeah, that's a bit unfair.


Muyomi and the Woman. The Old man is another can of worms...>>

Okay, well, we know that he can do Kidou. So presumably, some form of a shinigami, or part shinigami, or a race that can control their reiatsu/reiryoku pretty well, with a shinigami teacher.
So that leaves shinigami, substitute shinigami, Vaizard, or (and this is a STRETCH), maybe a Quincy.

Nothing get's past the cyborg.
More sarcasm?





If ace is a girl, Eon's squad. If ace is a boy, then we all have a shot.


Depending on what Ace wants XD


You would immediately jump to this conclusion.

XP I read the story first before starting to review, so I already knew what it was.


Thank you for doing this so I don't have to.

You're welcome :)

Something tells me that - if I was to write a fanfiction - everyone would either owe me epic reviews, or would tear it apart like nothing.

*rolleyes* No she wasn't having a heart attack.
I was implying something entirely different.

The only reason such stories aren't being burned is because, "frankly my dear, I don't give a damn". As long as they're not slandering me or spreading lies about my character, they can believe what they will.
Why did I read "frankly my dear, I don't give a damn" in Kida's voice?

Reactionary fear. He's worried that their foes will pick them off if they do so. They obviously have more than enough forces to pick off weaker shinigami if they can commit so many Hollows at once.

Likewise, fair enough.


Maybe because he's actually supposed to be old? XP
Heh? In my mind, Seijuro and co. are physically ~21 or something (with Senny and Blue being younger), while Senshuken is probably ~26-28?


Who else?
With everyone wearing cloaks...

Definitely would've been helpful. Although you're forgetting that the buildup happened last chapter
What I remember is that Rotrum was sent to fight a Vasto Lorde level Hollow? So we know he was fighting at least a Hollow (and if you look at Hallibel, they look VERY humanlike) - the fact that it was specifically an Arrancar, is what could have had more build up.

Damn. MC was worried you'd pick this apart, and for good reason.
Is... that a good thing?

Experience is the wrong word, I think he means power. They're not very powerful for their respective classes yet.
Ah, right.

I wonder, would it be redundant to pass it through me, then to you? Or if he was to get a human spellchecker, he should just send it to you, since you picked up everything I did and more.



That's the point xD You have so many, which one?

The one only Blue uses

Since Rukia can do it on her own... more than fair.

Kubo isn't as good a story writer as you guys <.<

effect
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Huh?
Kurohitsugi is his favourite Kidou spell.

Try thinking back to my old fic... Muyomi is my brother from then.
OHGOD don't make me remember that far back! *Huddles in a corner*


'Cause he's about to kill his brother. Senny doesn't know that they hate each other.

Yes he does. Senny asked him "Who are you", and Muyomi replied with:

“Muyomi. You know brother Seijuro, right? Well after I kill you all and destroy everything he loves, cares for and stands for, I'll send him to hell to meet you.”


Like any other group of evildoers. Do you ever see them being all buddy-buddy?
For the most part, I think the antagonists of 07-Ghost and D.Gray-Man (both AWESOME Anime and Manga) are slightly less... evil. Which I actually quite like; they're more like "the other side" of a morally-equal battle. And I either like a more "grey" villain, or a very very evil one.


That's Muyomi's Shikai ability; the damage and force behind his cuts is multiplied exponentially so that even shallow wounds do the damage of a full-on slash. That part is to show Muyomi's brutality; killing a helpless foe without even a shred of mercy.

Because Muyomi is a berserker to the nth degree. Think of Blue without any redeeming qualities and an animalistic hunger for death and carnage in the worst way. Muyomi's the kind of bastard who could snap his grandmother's neck and then eat a peanut butter and jelly sandwich in her kitchen without so much as batting an eyelash.
...Damn.

Kidou signal. Probably easier for him to do than actually open a Garganta.
Keep forgetting about that.

This. They need to be defined. Just because I know doesn't mean everybody else does.
And to be fair, I already knew a few points, like the fact that Arrancars were going to be introduced.

The Iris is Squad 7's canon flower. Off limits, dude.
Ah, I forgot about that. Damn, I'll have to see what I can pick from the list...

MasterCharizard15
13th September 2011, 12:57 AM
For squad Flowers, I pick:
EDELWEISS/ALPINE CUDWEED - Daring, Courage, Noble Purity
It can be with the fiery dragon claw, correct?


Thanks for all the feedback.

I tried to be a vague as possible about the villains, mainly due to the fact I NEED to keep them a secret till later points. Muyomi was a special case, since well, he pretty much gave himself away.

I would have liked to show and say more about them, but since Ryuu had the battle being recorded and what not, it would mean pretty much ALL the Captains would know about them. Killing any hope to keep them "hidden."

Also if the profile descriptions are bare, then I have little to work with. I try to cover it up by describing other things and what not, but yeah...no very good story telling skills.

Well next Chapter will have Mizuhashi and Ryuu, so hopefully I can clear up things. Cause they're supah smarts!

Also that meeting bot will be touched upon next chapter, so again...that scene's ending was added poorly. :/

I'm glad to hear you loved the battle and my interpretation of Muyomi.

Though that Arrancar with Kido bit did make me think about something...
Anyway, thanks for the reviews.

kusari
13th September 2011, 1:09 AM
So, with the big issue being resolved, i found a bit of down time and decided to handle a few issues, club-wise.

Flower: Sticking with canon and the Snowdrop.

ILP, if you're still doing the thing with an updated first post, would you mind moving the guys from my squad into Spirits? They're not active and I think it'd be for the best. If not to Spirits, at least a to a lower seat. (Theo to Fifth, Akua to Fourth)

Blackacer
13th September 2011, 8:00 AM
If ace is a girl, Eon's squad. If ace is a boy, then we all have a shot.


Well obviously im a boy lol. Eon = Latios! LATIOS FTW!

PKMN Trainer Rex
13th September 2011, 9:09 AM
Oh yes, I'll LOVE writing for that. >D


I bet you will.....I bet you will.



I pretty much made it.


Yes, yes you did.


Ok guys, it seems that people are getting confused over the insignia's and we shall just choose new flower symbols that have meaning relevant to our Squads.

I chose the Ivy - Defense, Fidelity, Affection

http://i51.*******.com/19qtts.jpghttp://i56.*******.com/28888w6.jpg

And this is Squad 4, with a Moonflower

http://i53.*******.com/2eb8uq9.jpg

Those are seriously impressive. *Golf clap*


Long posts. Remind me why I write them?


Because you can.



Awwww


Too bad. But if it makes up for it, I strike poses before taking action, in both forms.



It would implode in AWESOME.


Our implosions would have explosions. That doesn't make sense, Rex.


Well obviously im a boy lol. Eon = Latios! LATIOS FTW!

Try to stay away from one liners here, but since you're a newbie to the club you get a free pass :p.

I like Pokemon (...)
13th September 2011, 6:09 PM
I think this chapter felt a bit longer, largely because we saw at least one or two pages of the different scenes. I'm sure that if/when this gets animated, these will be more stretched out and padded.

That's... it of the Giriko fight? I'd guess so, because the scene went back to the normal world. If so, that is so disappointing, maybe even second to Yammy. Giriko's powers are time related, if he doesn't reverse time back, then... I don't even.

Yachiru has a new hairstyle too. She used to have fringes that framed her face. Maybe we have a new captain that is a barber? There's also the cross-bones on her head. So what're they going to do for the next hour or something?

How did Ishida get in, and Yukio not realise? You'd think he'd notice that. But also, I'm not entirely sure that Ichigo even needs Ishida to fight, because Ichigo gained a MASSIVE powerup (remember how many times Ichigo just slashed, and Ginjou shat himself?) not to mention, the possibility of Bankai.

That... While it makes sense, it seems a bit like an arsepull, tbh.

He kicked a wounded man! <.<

"That possibility is extremely unlikely" by saying this, it is now the ONLY possibility.

Okay, so Hitsugaya is entirely in Yukio's terrain. I think Yukio's downfall will be that he's going to treat this fight like a game, and will probably be a bit arrogant, even.

I wonder if Chappy will be there... Butyeah, Riruka versus Rukia, which leaves Jackie to be with Renji.

Aaaaaand Byakuya gives a speech. I think it works quite well, actually. Like I mentioned, Byakuya is the least likely to get hit by Book of the End, so he's the best choice. Though it's obvious that Tsukishima isn't defeated yet :/

Alright, I think the Byakuya/Tsukishima fight should lead to something interesting. For the moment, it will probably be Byakuya trying to keep a distance, while Tsukishima tries to go in to attack. Tsukishima is likely to die, or escape and be killed by someone else or something.

Rukia and Riruka will end up... I don't even. I doubt Riruka will die though.

Hitsugaya versus Yukio: for the moment, it looks like Yukio can't even be hit by Hitsugaya, but I'm pretty sure he'll find a way. I think Yukio may die, though there's a small chance that he won't.

Soyeah.





Though that Arrancar with Kido bit did make me think about something...
Anyway, thanks for the reviews.

No comment on the rest, because that's mainly just me nodding along.

An Arrancar with Kidou... I suppose that could work, but I think they have a different control of reiryoku than Shinigami.


So, with the big issue being resolved, i found a bit of down time and decided to handle a few issues, club-wise.
That's good to hear :)

ILP, if you're still doing the thing with an updated first post, would you mind moving the guys from my squad into Spirits? They're not active and I think it'd be for the best. If not to Spirits, at least a to a lower seat. (Theo to Fifth, Akua to Fourth)
*Facepalm* I COMPLETELY FORGOT I WAS DOING THAT.

I've put them into spirits (along with their zanpakutou). Don't forget to update your squad page.

Does anyone else want to change their squads a bit? I'm thinking of putting Emperor Giratina in spirits, but I'll probably bug him a bit more first.

Does anyone have anything to update the "first post" with? Rex, can you change your shikai post so that it contains your new zanpakutou? (makes it neater than me linking to this new post), Blackacer is now a spirit (speaking of, maybe after you show that you'll be consistently active, you can create a zanpakutou and join a squad).

Too bad. But if it makes up for it, I strike poses before taking action, in both forms.
Yay!


Our implosions would have explosions. That doesn't make sense, Rex.
Hmm... An implosion is when something collapses on itself (often due to gravity; a building can implode due to the structure being disrupted/damaged, or a massive star can implode into a black hole). An explosion would be a massive release of energy. I don't know if this is actually possible, but there's a small chance that an implosion could possibly lead to nucleur fusion, which gives off a ton of energy.


Try to stay away from one liners here, but since you're a newbie to the club you get a free pass :p.
Once more though, and you will get oar'd by Head Captain Golde himself you really don't want to.

MasterCharizard15
13th September 2011, 7:15 PM
Yachiru has a crossbones hair dec!
Also Rukia might have trouble if giant Chappys are thrown at her.
Overall it was okay.
Uyru pretty much confirmed what we were all thinking and Byakuya is going to kill the Troll.



ATTENTION TO ALL WHO HAVE ARRANCAR PROFILES!

Since I plan to use them, now is your final chance to change them, make alterations or even add things to them. For example, if you want your arrancar to have fraccion or to BE fraccion to someone else's, please be sure to let it be know.

Also, I plan to redo mine and make fraccion for him.

Bases claimed:
MC- Dragon(Espada), Monkey and Rooster(Fraccion).
Ilp- Angel(Esapda), Bee, Spider & Locust(Possible Fraccion)
Arc-Amoeba (Espada), Hydra, Paramecium* & Chlamydomonas* (*= Subject to change)
Kusari-Dunkleosteus (Espada), Anglerfish, Narwhal& Leafy Seadragon
Zam-Black Bear (Espada), Fraccion-(To be announced.)

Zameric
13th September 2011, 10:05 PM
Hey Blackacer, welcome to the Bleach club! >D
How ya been? Haven't seen ya in a while.

Overall, the chapter was pretty good. Rukia vs. Riruka is hilariously cute. :D
I totally agree with Byakuya, he's perfect to fight Trollkishima. >D
But then the Kenpachi vs. Giriko battle just left me feeling...
http://www.myfacewhen.com/images/399.gif


MC and I have been working on my new Zan, I hope everyone approves. But be forewarned, it contains cliches & stolen borrowed ideas.


Zanpaktou: Shainingu Senshi no Kyoujou (Shining Warrior of Truth)
Sealed form: Standard Katana, the hilt is baby blue with silver wrap. The guard is in the shape of the Filipino sun (as a nod to me being Flip IRL and an allusion to my Zan’s name.)

Shikai
Release Command: Reside yourself to your fate,
My blade fueled by justice will overcome all,
Hear our hearts roar as we charge into battle!

Description: A pair of giant gauntlets (http://i.neoseeker.com/ca/god_of_war_chains_of_olympus_conceptart_tsEs6.jpg) (Minus the face of Zeus & the armor past the elbow.) That are Baby blue (Base coat), silver and black (Alternate trim/border colors) in color. Four flat (two on each side) cords, studded with spikes, run from the end of the gauntlets at the elbow, up my biceps and triceps and meet/connect with a black Filipino Sun & stars triangular crest (4in across) at the center of my chest and a larger crest (7in across) on my back.

Abilities: Provides good defense with their size, enhance my physical strength, and pact a great punch (literally & figuratively). But due to their bulk, I am hindered in the mobility department.
It has a kidou disruptor. A mediocre kidou user casting Hado #4 Byakurai, will severely weaken or dissipate completely. While someone high kidou skills like Byakuya, does the same Hado, it will be somewhat weakened.
No attacks, I’ll just punch and block.


Bankai
Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin (Righteous Shining Warrior of Truth)

Description: For lack of a better description and laziness, Tadashii Shainingu Senshi no Shin is based off of this Battlizer. (http://images.wikia.com/powerrangers/images/7/75/MF_Red_Dragon_Fire_Ranger.jpg) The red parts, gold shoulder fenders and gold shin guards are changed into baby blue, the blue is now silver, and the black lines, arm pieces & belt are black. The “M” on the chest is replaced with my Flip crest, but the lines that come “M” & run down the armor remain. The blue “frills” on the helmet are removed and the blacked out visor is in the shape of an “X” (the bottom half of the X is half the length of the top half, and tapir into sharp points.) But the crest remains.

Abilities: With its sleeker, armor design, I have higher defensive and mobility capabilities. Like its Shikai form, it disrupts/cancels out nearly any kidou up to level 90 (also depends on the kidou user, of course.)
The helmet has an Iron-Man type function. It shows my current health & reiatsu levels, my vitals (heart rate, blood pressure), and armor and bone damage. It can also display environmental stats, such as oxygen level, oxygen content and temperature. And finally tracks any enemy reiatsu with in a range of 300 ft.

Attacks:
Again like its shikai, I prefer to do hand to hand combat.

Kagayaki Kobushi (Radiant/Radiance Fist): A 6 foot plasma two handed sword. It is the offensive manifestation. Summoning/conjure/use it drains so much energy I can only use it once every 24 hours.

Kenage Engo (Heroic Protection): A medieval knight shield. It is the defensive counter part of Kagayaki Kobushi. And like its counterpart, it can only be used once every 24 hours.

Other: In this form, I tend to speak in a cliché heroic tone complete with puns and metaphors.

Zan Spirit: Senshi’s personality is a stereotypical/borderline parody of Super Sentai/Super Hero with a strong sense of justice and protection, complete super hero dialog.
In sealed/shikai, Senshi wears a de-armores, standard spandex Kamen Rider/Super Sentai version of my Bankai. And since my powers are his, he also wears the armor in his bankai appearance. If that makes sense.

Inner World: “The Temple of Truth” An enormous stone temple, the interior is more futuristic, with lights, security cameras, and a control room.

Looks good, I approve! :)


Well, starting the Insignia ... I have the list here of the parts I have and don't have, first the flowers chosen, then the symbol design for each division
If you want a good site for different Plant meanings i'd suggest going here - http://www.victorianbazaar.com/meanings.html

I'm going to ask Senny if he's planning to come back, if not i'll ask if we can re-assign his Captaincy to someone else.
I'll pick out a flower/plant in a little while.

'Bout tim*shot*
If he does get re-assigned, I'll miss him.
Like having a brother move away.


ATTENTION TO ALL WHO HAVE ARRANCAR PROFILES!

Since I plan to use them, now is your final chance to change them, make alterations or even add things to them. For example, if you want your arrancar to have faccion or to BE faccion to someone else's, please be sure to let it be know.

Also, I plan to redo mine and make fraccion for him.

Bases claimed:
MC- Dragon(Espada), Monkey and Rooster(Faccion).
Ilp- Angel(Esapda), Bee, Spider & Locust(Possible Faccion)
Arc-Amoeba (Espada), Hydra, Paramecium* & Chlamydomonas* (*= Subject to change)
Keeping my current Arrancar profile. I'd prefer for him to be the Sexta (6th) Espada.
I'll PM you with a profile for my fracción later.

PKMN Trainer Rex
13th September 2011, 11:14 PM
Thats it for Kenpachi's figh? Thats wasn't even a scuffle. Weaksauce.

Lol @ Rukia, Yachiru, & the swift kick to Ishida's a**. Especially the swift kick to the a** xD.

Yukio seems pretty confident and Hitsuguya seems pretty lax. Thats all I have to say.

Looks like Troll-man vs Byakuya is gonna be an intense one, just look at their eyes.




Yay!


See, isn't it better than constant cliche speak?



Hmm... An implosion is when something collapses on itself (often due to gravity; a building can implode due to the structure being disrupted/damaged, or a massive star can implode into a black hole). An explosion would be a massive release of energy. I don't know if this is actually possible, but there's a small chance that an implosion could possibly lead to nucleur fusion, which gives off a ton of energy.


I know what they are, I was trying to say adding explosions make everything more awesomer than usual.



Once more though, and you will get oar'd by Head Captain Golde himself you really don't want to.

Thats one powerful oar.



Looks good, I approve! :)


Yeah, buddy! Looks like I get to keep it!

arceus03
14th September 2011, 12:13 AM
MANGA

Giriko just... died. I seriously expected a contract with the Gods of Time would at least allow him to, idk, reverse time, whatever. Mmmmf. Though he COULD still probably be alive. This is only a repetition of Yammy's fight. >.>

Power up with the force of love? Geez, Kubo is making Yukio an annoying character. Shame. I like him :<

Aaaaaand yeah, Byakuya knows about Tsukishima's powers. Yay. And... Pride is everything. Yeah. Sure.



And this is Squad 4, with a Moonflower

http://i53.*******.com/2eb8uq9.jpg

8D Coolio, thanks! *Gives a huge bag of chocolate chip cookies*
It's up on the Squad page (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10641894&postcount=125) now =D Thanks again ^^


Long posts. Remind me why I write them?

Cause you've got nothing to do.



FUND IT!!

Fund what?


It would implode in AWESOME.

That, or the audience would start yawning and fall asleep five minutes after.


Well obviously im a boy lol. Eon = Latios! LATIOS FTW!

One-liners, dear. Watch them. :) Though Rex have already done so

Seventh Squad Captain = Komamura = Wolf = Eon = Latios = Dragon
In short, wolf = dragon.

... Kida?




ATTENTION TO ALL WHO HAVE ARRANCAR PROFILES!

Bases claimed:
Arc-[I]Amoeba (Espada), Hydra, Paramecium* & Chlamydomonas*

Yeah... Like I told you though, I'm planning to give the Hydra a powerful ability and me becoming his/her Fraccion. 8D Also, I might or might not change the remaining 2. But they'll still be based of microorganisms.




But then the Kenpachi vs. Giriko battle just left me feeling...
http://www.myfacewhen.com/images/399.gif

True that.



Lol @ Zachiru,


XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Okay, maybe that was an overreaction but still...
Ed, you have totally muddled up this member's memory. Kudos. XD


Thats one powerful oar.

He's got a diamond oar. Fear that.

Also, not related to Bleach, but look what I found:
http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/IMG_0035.jpg

Who would pay a lot of money just to put 42 there? XD ILPy might

PKMN Trainer Rex
14th September 2011, 7:33 AM
ATTENTION TO ALL WHO HAVE ARRANCAR PROFILES!

Since I plan to use them, now is your final chance to change them, make alterations or even add things to them. For example, if you want your arrancar to have fraccion or to BE fraccion to someone else's, please be sure to let it be know.


Ahhh, which to choose!? My Muy Thai fighter profile or my walking sound system?



MANGA

Giriko just... died. I seriously expected a contract with the Gods of Time would at least allow him to, idk, reverse time, whatever. Mmmmf. Though he COULD still probably be alive. This is only a repetition of Yammy's fight. >.>

Power up with the force of love? Geez, Kubo is making Yukio an annoying character. Shame. I like him :<

Aaaaaand yeah, Byakuya knows about Tsukishima's powers. Yay. And... Pride is everything. Yeah. Sure.


Like I said, it ended to fast & easy. There has to be some kind of "part 2" to it.

It is, I liked him too.

I like this match up.




Fund what?


"Fund" as in someone take the time to write the meeting of Super-Sentai Zan and Cyborg-Panda in a Fan-fic.



That, or the audience would start yawning and fall asleep five minutes after.


Or rofl, due to the strangeness and confusion.



XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Okay, maybe that was an overreaction but still...
Ed, you have totally muddled up this member's memory. Kudos. XD


That happened long ago.



He's got a diamond oar. Fear that.


Diamond is one of the strongest and sharpest substances on Earth, thats the oar of Exodia.



Also, not related to Bleach, but look what I found:
http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/IMG_0035.jpg

Who would pay a lot of money just to put 42 there? XD ILPy might

I would.

minchan
14th September 2011, 9:40 AM
I know I've been inactive lately, I'm sorry. With college having just started, I've been so busy that I couldn't keep up with all the forums I visit. But I just had to come comment on this latest chapter, 464.


The thing that got me thinking, the minute I read it, was, "The real worst case... Would be if none of those were applicable." The first thought I had after reading that panel was the thought of a possible conspiracy. Something that couldnt be said, for whatever reason. It brings so many thoughts to mind, as to who exactly Ginjou really is. It's really quite puzzling to me.


I guess I'll check back a little more often now, but I can't really promise a strict schedule or anything. I'm sorry, adjusting to college, especially the workload, has been a bit crazy for me. Actually, I should either be doing homework or sleeping right now.

Blackacer
14th September 2011, 9:49 AM
Heyo guys ,
Sorry i was inactive lol , i've been catching up with the anime and soon after manga.
Left few episodes to go :)

kusari
14th September 2011, 12:50 PM
>Sorry i was inactive lol

You weren't inactive, Ace. Senny is inactive. Most of the people that joinex around Rex's time are inactive. You're good.


>Ahhh, which to choose!? My Muy Thai fighter profile or my walking sound system?

MC asked me to rank the arrancars of the club and I used your sound one for that. It reminds me of this guy.
http://www.concretebadger.net/images/blog/speed-grapher/5-3.jpg


Also, thanks to MC, I'm comsidering starting a new fic, when I get back of course. It's probably going to be more well written than my others, if I choose to write it.

Just thought I'd throw that out there, for the heads up.

I like Pokemon (...)
14th September 2011, 4:06 PM
Also, I plan to redo mine and make fraccion for him.

Ilp- Angel(Esapda), Bee, Spider & Locust(Possible Fraccion)

Likewise, my Arrancar will have different powers. The possible fraccion are depending on when/if I make them, and how much they suck.

See, isn't it better than constant cliche speak?
I'd still like it XP


I know what they are, I was trying to say adding explosions make everything more awesomer than usual.
I tend to define things before I explain it. Habit, I guess.


MANGA

Giriko just... died. I seriously expected a contract with the Gods of Time would at least allow him to, idk, reverse time, whatever. Mmmmf. Though he COULD still probably be alive. This is only a repetition of Yammy's fight. >.>

Power up with the force of love? Geez, Kubo is making Yukio an annoying character. Shame. I like him :<


Seventh Squad Captain = Komamura = Wolf = Eon = Latios = Dragon
In short, wolf = dragon.

Also, not related to Bleach, but look what I found:
http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/IMG_0035.jpg

Who would pay a lot of money just to put 42 there? XD ILPy might
That's why I'm still a bit skeptical on Giriko's death.

Yukio was making fun of the cliche. To be honest, he is a bit annoying.

You... got to Kida like that. That is awesome. I'm sure you can get from Eon to MC quite easily and get Kida from that

That is awesome. I probably wouldn't do 42 Rotrum would, though the "I love maths" is so me.



The thing that got me thinking, the minute I read it, was, "The real worst case... Would be if none of those were applicable." The first thought I had after reading that panel was the thought of a possible conspiracy. Something that couldnt be said, for whatever reason. It brings so many thoughts to mind, as to who exactly Ginjou really is. It's really quite puzzling to me.

Hmm... a conspiracy... So Ukitake new about what happened to the Sub Shinigami, but decided not to tell Ichigo, so that Ginjou would kill him or whatever. Hm...

>Sorry i was inactive lol

You weren't inactive, Ace. Senny is inactive. Most of the people that joinex around Rex's time are inactive. You're good.
Imagine if I went inactive.


Also, thanks to MC, I'm comsidering starting a new fic, when I get back of course. It's probably going to be more well written than my others, if I choose to write it.
If it's any insentive, I'd give my super-review, like I did to MC, and will to Eon.

PKMN Trainer Rex
14th September 2011, 7:08 PM
I know I've been inactive lately, I'm sorry. With college having just started, I've been so busy that I couldn't keep up with all the forums I visit. But I just had to come comment on this latest chapter, 464.


I guess I'll check back a little more often now, but I can't really promise a strict schedule or anything. I'm sorry, adjusting to college, especially the workload, has been a bit crazy for me. Actually, I should either be doing homework or sleeping right now.

Ah freshman year of college. So active and fun.


Heyo guys ,
Sorry i was inactive lol , i've been catching up with the anime and soon after manga.
Left few episodes to go :)



You weren't inactive, Ace. Senny is inactive. Most of the people that joinex around Rex's time are inactive. You're good.


This.............And its true. I am the only one that "survived"



MC asked me to rank the arrancars of the club and I used your sound one for that. It reminds me of this guy.
http://www.concretebadger.net/images/blog/speed-grapher/5-3.jpg


Wow, that is amazingly similar to my profile. What anime is this?




Also, thanks to MC, I'm comsidering starting a new fic, when I get back of course. It's probably going to be more well written than my others, if I choose to write it.

Just thought I'd throw that out there, for the heads up.

Sweet, don't expect a super review from me though.



I'd still like it XP


I'm starting to warm up to the idea.



I tend to define things before I explain it. Habit, I guess.


Which is the opposite for me, I tend to blurt things out.




Imagine if I went inactive.


God help us if that happens.

EDIT: In non-club news. Yesterday, I got my reserved copy of White Knight Chronicles II! This weekend/next weekend should be epic.

kusari
14th September 2011, 9:20 PM
>Wow, that is amazingly similar to my profile. What anime is this?

Speed Grapher. It's pretty good. I'd recommend it, if you feel like looking for it. I'll warn you though, if you decide to watch it, there are a few prime examples of Nightmare Fuel. And the method that determines a person's abilities is a bit Squick-ish.


>This.............And its true. I am the only one that "survived".

Yep. And that's why we like you. You chose to put up with the craziness that is our Bleach Club.


>Sweet, don't expect a super review from me though.

ILP is really the only one I expect a super review from. He likes gutting fics and putting the organs back the wrong way.


>If it's any insentive, I'd give my super-review, like I did to MC, and will to Eon.

I'd expect nothing less.


>Likewise, my Arrancar will have different powers. The possible fraccion are depending on when/if I make them, and how much they suck.

Mine are all fishies. That gives a wide variety of options.

arceus03
15th September 2011, 1:52 AM
Like I said, it ended to fast & easy. There has to be some kind of "part 2" to it.

It is, I liked him too.

I like this match up.


I hope.

Yeah :<

I think everyone does. XD


"Fund" as in someone take the time to write the meeting of Super-Sentai Zan and Cyborg-Panda in a Fan-fic.

Ah. It's going to be very hilarious, or monotonous


Or rofl, due to the strangeness and confusion.

I'd run away


Diamond is one of the strongest and sharpest substances on Earth, thats the oar of Exodia.

Oar of what?


I would.

XD I'd rather put my name :p


Also, thanks to MC, I'm comsidering starting a new fic, when I get back of course. It's probably going to be more well written than my others, if I choose to write it.

Just thought I'd throw that out there, for the heads up.

8D Do eeeeeeeeeet
Yeah ILPy had influenced my that much


Likewise, my Arrancar will have different powers. The possible fraccion are depending on when/if I make them, and how much they suck.

That. I'd like to have, like maybe 2 friends (planning to be the Fraccion), but it means I'll have to think up of 3 characters, with 3 abilities. >.<



Yukio was making fun of the cliche. To be honest, he is a bit annoying.

First I thought he was taunting him about Hinamori, though. XD


You... got to Kida like that. That is awesome. I'm sure you can get from Eon to MC quite easily and get Kida from that

XD
Well Latios is a dragon. And Eon is always attributed to wolves. Ryookami is the perfect zanpakto spirit for that XD


That is awesome. I probably wouldn't do 42 Rotrum would, though the "I love maths" is so me.

I thought you'd do pi


Imagine if I went inactive.

No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews.... Everyone would die. Except me. I'm awesome


Ah freshman year of college. So active and fun.

Aaaaaand packed. And busy.


This.............And its true. I am the only one that "survived"

Yup. I think NL said something about asking Senny whether he wants to come back or not. If not, I think we could move you to Lieutenant seat for Squad 8, and Captain later on.


EDIT: In non-club news. Yesterday, I got my reserved copy of White Knight Chronicles II! This weekend/next weekend should be epic.

Cool



Yep. And that's why we like you. You chose to put up with the craziness that is our Bleach Club.

8D Yup, we're a weird bunch.


ILP is really the only one I expect a super review from. He likes gutting fics and putting the organs back the wrong way.

I like how you put it that way XD Not only putting the organs back, but adding in a few nanomachines XP


Mine are all fishies. That gives a wide variety of options.

Cool. I think my Arrancar OC would have a fun time playing around with them

kusari
15th September 2011, 3:29 AM
>Cool. I think my Arrancar OC would have a fun time playing around with them.

You pedo. One of them is a little girl.


>I like how you put it that way XD Not only putting the organs back, but adding in a few nanomachines XP

Basically this.


>Yup. I think NL said something about asking Senny whether he wants to come back or not. If not, I think we could move you to Lieutenant seat for Squad 8, and Captain later on.

If it means anything, I'd totally back Rex getting either spot.


>No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews.... Everyone would die. Except me. I'm awesome.

I'd die a little bit inside and a lot outside. I'd probably cry because I'd have no one to validate me.



So, with you guys favoring me writing again, I've resolved to try and write it ("try" being the operative word). I just want to give a bit of heads up. MC and possibly Eon knows that I'm using a relitively unexplored topic and some things (cough Vaizards/Arrancars/Quincies cough) which could be construed as the "Disregarding Standards" I gave Luke trouble about. Of course, unlike him, I'm going to have a viable explanation for these things.

arceus03
15th September 2011, 3:44 AM
You pedo. One of them is a little girl.

XD You forget that my Arrancar OC is a bit of a weirdo+maniac. He doesn't do much apart from taunting other people. Though he does get on well with his friends (read: the other Fraccion from his Espada)


Basically this.

That's ILPy for you


If it means anything, I'd totally back Rex getting either spot.

Yup. No one's been active much longer than he is... Well there's min, but she's been a bit busy lately, and she only discusses the manga/anime here. There's also... Luke? But he's, urm, well, I'd say just too inexperienced to lead a Squad.


I'd die a little bit inside and a lot outside. I'd probably cry because I'd have no one to validate me.

... Validate?


So, with you guys favoring me writing again, I've resolved to try and write it ("try" being the operative word). I just want to give a bit of heads up. MC and possibly Eon knows that I'm using a relitively unexplored topic and some things (cough Vaizards/Arrancars/Quincies cough) which could be construed as the "Disregarding Standards" I gave Luke trouble about. Of course, unlike him, I'm going to have a viable explanation for these things.

Ah, this should be interesting.

Zameric
15th September 2011, 4:38 AM
Here are Min and Luppi's battle data charts. Have fun ILP. :p
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/MinOctaBDCLT.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/LuppiOctaBDCLT.png

PKMN Trainer Rex
15th September 2011, 5:06 AM
Speed Grapher. It's pretty good. I'd recommend it, if you feel like looking for it. I'll warn you though, if you decide to watch it, there are a few prime examples of Nightmare Fuel. And the method that determines a person's abilities is a bit Squick-ish.


I live for nightmare-fuel. Maybe not




Yep. And that's why we like you. You chose to put up with the craziness that is our Bleach Club.


Crazy? No. Awesome? Yes.




ILP is really the only one I expect a super review from. He likes gutting fics and putting the organs back the wrong way.


Sounds fun, actually.



Mine are all fishies. That gives a wide variety of options.

I only got one fraccion so far, don't know if I will have a theme or not.



Ah. It's going to be very hilarious, or monotonous


It's so monotonous, its funny.



[FONT=Candara]
I'd run away


I would stay and watch.



Oar of what?


It would obliterate us all. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcUuerzmgh8&feature=related)



XD I'd rather put my name :p


I would put something so ridiculous, only people who know me enough would say "OMG, Thats Rex!"



Aaaaaand packed. And busy.


That too, but its still awesome.



Yup. I think NL said something about asking Senny whether he wants to come back or not. If not, I think we could move you to Lieutenant seat for Squad 8, and Captain later on.


I'd be fine with Lieutenant.




8D Yup, we're a weird bunch.


Weird meaning awesome.


If it means anything, I'd totally back Rex getting either spot.


Sweet, sweet, validation. :p



I'd die a little bit inside and a lot outside. I'd probably cry because I'd have no one to validate me.


Awww, wait. That means no validation for me either....




So, with you guys favoring me writing again, I've resolved to try and write it ("try" being the operative word). I just want to give a bit of heads up. MC and possibly Eon knows that I'm using a relitively unexplored topic and some things (cough Vaizards/Arrancars/Quincies cough) which could be construed as the "Disregarding Standards" I gave Luke trouble about. Of course, unlike him, I'm going to have a viable explanation for these things.

Eeeeeenteresting, very eenteresting.



Yup. No one's been active much longer than he is... Well there's min, but she's been a bit busy lately, and she only discusses the manga/anime here. There's also... Luke? But he's, urm, well, I'd say just too inexperienced to lead a Squad.


Where has our confused friend gone, anyway?




... Validate?


Making him feel good.

arceus03
15th September 2011, 5:18 AM
Here are Min and Luppi's battle data charts. Have fun ILP. :p
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/MinOctaBDCLT.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/LuppiOctaBDCLT.png

Ooooh, a Pacman! XD


Crazy? No. Awesome? Yes.

8D


I only got one fraccion so far, don't know if I will have a theme or not.

Not necessarily. XD But it makes everything much more fun. XD Microorganisms! And I just did microscopy in Bio lab today XD


It's so monotonous, its funny.

Eh, monotonous = soporific.


I would stay and watch.

And yawn, probably


It would obliterate us all. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcUuerzmgh8&feature=related)

That's not an oar. XD That's a KAMEHAMEHA (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KamehameHadoken)


I would put something so ridiculous, only people who know me enough would say "OMG, Thats Rex!"

XD There's one brick that says "I came to RIT and all I got was this brick". Gotta find that brick and snap a picture


That too, but its still awesome.

It is. 8D Though I just can't wait until I get to choose my liberal arts class next quarter. Right now it's writing and... interesting, yeah, I could say, but I couldn't exactly decipher what the author of the textbook is trying to say with his concept of "coming to terms", and idk how I should apply that to my writing assignments, so it sucks. XD

Ooops. I ranted.


I'd be fine with Lieutenant.

No one plans on giving you more than that lol jk, but yeah. Right now you're a third seat, and you could have requested to be a Lieutenant. A few more, weeks? months? Depending on the other Captains, and Golde, I think you can move up to the Captain spot :)


Weird meaning awesome.

8D


Where has our confused friend gone, anyway?

XD idk. He slips in, says he wants to change his zanpakto, posts a random fanfic chapter, and goes poof.


Making him feel good.

I thought he was illegitimate or something... And ILPy has this huge stamp "YOU ARE VALIDATED"

kusari
15th September 2011, 5:41 AM
>XD idk. He slips in, says he wants to change his zanpakto, posts a random fanfic chapter, and goes poof.

I think my rant scared him off.


>I'd be fine with Lieutenant.

So modest. Just how a captain should act.


For the bricks: I'd put something incredibly random. Then everyone would try to decipher what it meant.

MasterCharizard15
15th September 2011, 6:16 AM
Basically this.


>Yup. I think NL said something about asking Senny whether he wants to come back or not. If not, I think we could move you to Lieutenant seat for Squad 8, and Captain later on.

If it means anything, I'd totally back Rex getting either spot.

He could be Lt. for almost any squad and then take over as Squad 8 Captain.
I mean Eon used to be my 3rd seat before taking over Squad 7.
He didn't have to be Lt. of it first.



>No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews.... Everyone would die. Except me. I'm awesome.

I'd die a little bit inside and a lot outside. I'd probably cry because I'd have no one to validate me.

...
...ILp leaving would be the downfall of us all, huh?
...*Gets on top of the roof of the club, using the dramatic wind kido to set up the perfect atmosphere*
...
We will survive.
The empty void that was once fended off by Ilp's posts shall not end us.
As we stand, right here and right now, we live.
With our heads held high and topics swords at the ready,
We gallantly face the nothingness that brings down the silence embrace of death with our livelihood.
WE shall stand against all despair brought from his absence, with drive from our hearts and souls!
We'll all share the burden of our missing brother-in-arms, letting our suffering empower our resolve for survival.
This club will survive, its members all united as one, fighting against anything trying to bring about its downfall into the dark nothingness of inactivity!




So, with you guys favoring me writing again, I've resolved to try and write it ("try" being the operative word). I just want to give a bit of heads up. MC and possibly Eon knows that I'm using a relatively unexplored topic and some things (cough Vaizards/Arrancars/Quincies cough) which could be construed as the "Disregarding Standards" I gave Luke trouble about. Of course, unlike him, I'm going to have a viable explanation for these things.

Once again, good luck.




Yup. No one's been active much longer than he is... Well there's min, but she's been a bit busy lately, and she only discusses the manga/anime here. There's also... Luke? But he's, urm, well, I'd say just too inexperienced to lead a Squad.


Blue would straight up kill him if he tried to be a Captain here. /story.





I would stay and watch.
...
I'd be fine with Lieutenant.



That's cause your my student. We're pretty much made into 100% Badass.
Humble? You'll make a good Captain.

PKMN Trainer Rex
15th September 2011, 6:25 AM
Ooooh, a Pacman! XD


xD *makes pacman sound fx*




Not necessarily. XD But it makes everything much more fun. XD Microorganisms! And I just did microscopy in Bio lab today XD


It would, but my fraccion is a muy thai fighter. And if I carried on with the martial artist theme, they'd all end up the same.



Eh, monotonous = soporific.


I ran out of funny things to say to this.



And yawn, probably


Maybe



That's not an oar. XD That's a KAMEHAMEHA (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KamehameHadoken)


What you didn't see is that the oar is hidden inside the laser.



XD There's one brick that says "I came to RIT and all I got was this brick". Gotta find that brick and snap a picture


That is pure genius, really it is.



It is. 8D Though I just can't wait until I get to choose my liberal arts class next quarter. Right now it's writing and... interesting, yeah, I could say, but I couldn't exactly decipher what the author of the textbook is trying to say with his concept of "coming to terms", and idk how I should apply that to my writing assignments, so it sucks. XD

Ooops. I ranted.


I hated taking my liberals. Well, some of them, ok just one. It was Expository Writing aka English.

xD, you feel better now don't you?


[FONT=Candara]
No one plans on giving you more than that lol jk, but yeah. Right now you're a third seat, and you could have requested to be a Lieutenant. A few more, weeks? months? Depending on the other Captains, and Golde, I think you can move up to the Captain spot :)




So modest. Just how a captain should act.



That's cause your my student. We're pretty much made into 100% Badass.
Humble? You'll make a good Captain.



As long as I'm still in the club.




I thought he was illegitimate or something... And ILPy has this huge stamp "YOU ARE VALIDATED"

Now I wish ILP actually had one.



I think my rant scared him off.


I think it did.




For the bricks: I'd put something incredibly random. Then everyone would try to decipher what it meant.

Arc will be an expert on that. Come at me bro. :p


..ILp leaving would be the downfall of us all, huh?
...*Gets on top of the roof of the club, using the dramatic wind kido to set up the perfect atmosphere*
...
We will survive.
The empty void that was once fended off by Ilp's posts shall not end us.
As we stand, right here and right now, we live.
With our heads held high and topics swords at the ready,
We gallantly face the nothingness that brings down the silence embrace of death with our livelihood.
WE shall stand against all despair brought from his absence, with drive from our hearts and souls!
We'll all share the burden of our missing brother-in-arms, letting our suffering empower our resolve for survival.
This club will survive, its members all united as one, fighting against anything trying to bring about its downfall into the dark nothingness of inactivity!


*....slow clap*



Blue would straight up kill him if he tried to be a Captain here. /story.

Thats a scary story.

Blackacer
15th September 2011, 9:29 AM
Guys who knows anime episode 339 is manga's chapter what?
Because i cant seems to find the correct chapter to continue the story lol...

Northern Lights
15th September 2011, 11:22 AM
[SPOILER="Manga"]
ATTENTION TO ALL WHO HAVE ARRANCAR PROFILES!

Since I plan to use them, now is your final chance to change them, make alterations or even add things to them. For example, if you want your arrancar to have fraccion or to BE fraccion to someone else's, please be sure to let it be know.

Also, I plan to redo mine and make fraccion for him.

Bases claimed:
MC- Dragon(Espada), Monkey and Rooster(Fraccion).
Ilp- Angel(Esapda), Bee, Spider & Locust(Possible Fraccion)
Arc-Amoeba (Espada), Hydra, Paramecium* & Chlamydomonas* (*= Subject to change)
Kusari-Dunkleosteus (Espada), Anglerfish, Narwhal& Leafy Seadragon
Zam-Black Bear (Espada), Fraccion-(To be announced.)

I swear I had one of these too, I had a flute as my ressurection, the different songs I played had different effects. I'll have a look for it ...

EDIT: thanks to Eon Master ... here it is - [Link] ('http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=11554085#post11554085')



Seventh Squad Captain = Komamura = Wolf = Eon = Latios = Dragon
In short, wolf = dragon.

... Kida?


Hate to burst your bubble of logic very impressive bubble though it may be but Komamura is a Fox =P which is not in the Canis family.

EDIT: Really?! He is actually a Wolf, but he looks like a fox! ... O.o


Ryookami is the perfect zanpakto spirit for that XD

Yep, and Wolves and Dragons being my favourite creatures ever have nothing to do with it =3
But now that you make the connection XD no wonder I can get along with Eon


If it means anything, I'd totally back Rex getting either spot.

I was going to suggest Rex for Captaincy position straight off tbh, but first I must ask Senny, if he replies.


I think my rant scared him off.

Seconded.


Anyone fancy a group chat later? I really need some cheering up and maybe laughing.

Cell
15th September 2011, 12:49 PM
I swear I had one of these too, I had a flute as my ressurection, the different songs I played had different effects. I'll have a look for it ...


Yeah, I remember this one, I think you posted it in the club somewhere.




Anyone fancy a group chat later? I really need some cheering up and maybe laughing.

Sure, if I'm online.



I'd be fine with Lieutenant.


I'd support you either way, Lieutenant or Captain. There is still room in the second squad aswell /joke


Arrancar Name (Spanish):
Maullido

Mask Form/Location:
My mask remnants are a piece of colarbone around my neck and a sabretooth on my ear.

Number Location:
Left lower ankle

Hollow Hole Location:
Exactly where the human heart would be

Aspect of Death:
... Driving too fast? Honestly, I don't really have one.

Physical Appearance:
Green eyes, these light up when I get excited.

I have long dark brown hair which is in a wild look (like I just got electrocuted). My teeth are slightly different as I have 2 fangs.


Cero Colour/Firing Location:
Light blue/grey, mouth

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base:
Saber-toothed Tiger

Zanpakutou details:

- Name:
Electricidad de los Dientes Sables (The Electric Cat of Saber-Teeth)

- Release Command:
Carga eléctrica (Electric charge)

- Physical Appearance:
Once released, I discard my humanoid form and take the form of a small sabretoothed tiger. Coloured black with light blue stripes shaped like lightning (much like lightning in the night sky). Electric currents run over my body constantly and when I rush around I leave burn marks with static currents circling them.

- Release Abilities:
EXTREMELY HIGH SPEED

Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar):
I am able to compress my body into a lightning bolt to pierce an enemy.

Dientes de tigris cero - A cero in the form of biting jaws, these can slightly track an enemy. I could also imbue the cero in my fangs and release it when I bite.

I can turn my reiatsu in pure electricity which makes my fur stand on end, this reacts like normal electricity and can be conducted through Viverri's water ability.

Misc:
I have high jaw strength and a chaotic battle style build around speed, biting and electrocuting.



At first I didn't think I'd need/want a fraccion, but a sarcastic comment to MC actually gave me an idea.



Arrancar Name:
Viverri

Mask Form/Location:
2 boney cat ears at the side of her head, boney tail parts worn like a belt

Number Location:
Right lower ankle

Hollow Hole Location:
Not visible

Personality:
Outgoing and social, sometimes overprotective.

She is distrustfull (at first) of strangers and will go as far as to start hissing.

Aspect of Death:
Drowning

Physical Appearance:

She is dark skinned, with lighter brown hair which looks soaked in water and has dark brown eyes which seem to be as deep as an ocean.

She is of average build and is 168cm tall.

she has 2 fangs, which are slightly poisonous (causes itching).

Her clothes are tribal-ish, in a dark brown colour.

Cero Colour/Firing Location:
Dark ocean blue, hands(mouth when released)

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base:
Fishing Cat

Zanpakutou details:

- Name:
Gato de los lagos (Cat of the lakes)

- Release Command:
Inundaciones (Flood)

- Physical Appearance:
She discards her human form and takes the form of a cat (average size). Color pattern like this (linky) (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/db/Portrait_of_a_Fishing_Cat_at_Taronga.jpg).

- Release Abilities:
overal increased speed and awareness, very sensitive to sounds and vibrations.

Special Abilities:
Everywhere she walks, she leaves puddles of water. She can turn into a liquid state for short periods at a time (30 seconds maximum).

Tsunami Cero - A huge cero which rolls over the ground like a wall of water

Misc:
Swipes with her tail when annoyed. Likes the hunt more than the kill and will mostly play around with a weaker enemy before killing him/her. She likes collecting round objects.

She often performs combo attacks with Maullido.


Yeah, I like cats, sue me.


Anyway, an update and my computer has to restart, I may or may not edit this post later.

Eon Master
15th September 2011, 2:44 PM
My Arrancar is also up, and ready to go, and he's got a Fraccion. Her base is Velociraptor.


I swear I had one of these too, I had a flute as my ressurection, the different songs I played had different effects. I'll have a look for it ...

Just sent you a VM containing the link to it and your appearance that you designed fully later.


Hate to burst your bubble of logic very impressive bubble though it may be but Komamura is a Fox =P which is not in the Canis family.

BleachWiki says that he's an anthropomorphic (bipedal humanoid) wolf. Not to mention that Kenpachi calls him "wolf-jerk" to Yumichikia after his fight with Komamura and Tousen. He's definitely a wolf.

...still loling at the fact that "Me = MC = You" xD


Yep, and Wolves and Dragons being my favourite creatures ever have nothing to do with it =3
But now that you make the connection XD no wonder I can get along with Eon

xD Tbh, the "Eon" in my username is supposed to refer to the seven Eevee evolutions (all of their names end in "eon"), which are also commonly known as the Eons.
Buuuut, since I love Latias and Latios too, I'll just go with it xD


I was going to suggest Rex for Captaincy position straight off tbh, but first I must ask Senny, if he replies.

Ditto, but yeah, waiting on Senny.


Seconded.

No complaints here. The kid seriously needs to calm down and get his head on straight.


Guys who knows anime episode 339 is manga's chapter what?
Because i cant seems to find the correct chapter to continue the story lol...

I'm pretty sure that's just a filler arc... you'll want to start at the beginning of the Fullbringer arc, but idk offhand what chapter that is.

Gaaaah, writing is slow. Classes and homework are taking up way too much of my time.

I like Pokemon (...)
15th September 2011, 5:27 PM
I love how I joke about going inactive, and you guys post 15 times after that.


This.............And its true. I am the only one that "survived"
Yeah. That was our most active joining. I think Senny and I both joined at roughly the same time, and guess who survived...
Though one thing I find funny is that Blue joined, and then it was... 4 months (and 2 days) until the next member, Minchan, joined (and that was because Zam and I got her from Zam's club). After Minchan was Arenak, who joined less than a week after.



EDIT: In non-club news. Yesterday, I got my reserved copy of White Knight Chronicles II! This weekend/next weekend should be epic.
Cool.

>Sweet, don't expect a super review from me though.

ILP is really the only one I expect a super review from. He likes gutting fics and putting the organs back the wrong way.
Not sure if I should be flattered by that description... But it's DAMN fun, and keeps me entertained.


>Likewise, my Arrancar will have different powers. The possible fraccion are depending on when/if I make them, and how much they suck.

Mine are all fishies. That gives a wide variety of options.
I'm going with insects. And I'm changing spider to.... ant. And no locust.


8D Do eeeeeeeeeet
Yeah ILPy had influenced my that much

I thought you'd do pi

No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews.... Everyone would die. Except me. I'm awesome
DK influenced me a lot too. It's why I use 8D, D8, XD, DX, Do eeeeeeeeeet, and I'M SO FONCUSED so often.
Pi is overated sometimes
"No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews" why does that sound like a GOOD thing? XD


>Cool. I think my Arrancar OC would have a fun time playing around with them.

You pedo. One of them is a little girl.
Is it bad that both of my Fraccion are kids?


>No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews.... Everyone would die. Except me. I'm awesome.

I'd die a little bit inside and a lot outside. I'd probably cry because I'd have no one to validate me.
That... was not the reaction I was expecting.
...Remind me never to die.



So, with you guys favoring me writing again, I've resolved to try and write it ("try" being the operative word). I just want to give a bit of heads up. MC and possibly Eon knows that I'm using a relitively unexplored topic and some things (cough Vaizards/Arrancars/Quincies cough) which could be construed as the "Disregarding Standards" I gave Luke trouble about. Of course, unlike him, I'm going to have a viable explanation for these things.
That should be VERY interesting, especially with the "disregarding standards" which you know I'll point out XP
So I'm guessing that you won't rewrite the Arrancar chess fic? It's fine if you don't, I was just curious.


Here are Min and Luppi's battle data charts. Have fun ILP. :p
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/MinOctaBDCLT.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/LuppiOctaBDCLT.png
MOAR CHARTS YAY
You got stats from Luppi? That's actually quite surprising XD. I'll bug her for Hex stats, then.
Funny about her stats, too, I expected practically the opposite XD. Though I think we cover each others' bases quite well (the only "problem" being that both of us have 70 Defense).
I wonder if I/you/we can get stats from Jin and Dauc, too... It would be nice to have all the ex-captains.

Rex, I think I'd have to check my data first to see if you should be a captain or not XP Chances are, it's a yes.




I thought he was illegitimate or something... And ILPy has this huge stamp "YOU ARE VALIDATED"
You found that?!

For the bricks: I'd put something incredibly random. Then everyone would try to decipher what it meant.
Why do I feel like this is aimed at me?

...
...ILp leaving would be the downfall of us all, huh?
...*Gets on top of the roof of the club, using the dramatic wind kido to set up the perfect atmosphere*
...
We will survive.
The empty void that was once fended off by Ilp's posts shall not end us.
As we stand, right here and right now, we live.
With our heads held high and topics swords at the ready,
We gallantly face the nothingness that brings down the silence embrace of death with our livelihood.
WE shall stand against all despair brought from his absence, with drive from our hearts and souls!
We'll all share the burden of our missing brother-in-arms, letting our suffering empower our resolve for survival.
This club will survive, its members all united as one, fighting against anything trying to bring about its downfall into the dark nothingness of inactivity!
Pure. Bloody. Awesome.

Guys who knows anime episode 339 is manga's chapter what?
Because i cant seems to find the correct chapter to continue the story lol...
Like Eon said, that arc is a filler, so it's not from the manga. That latest non-filler episode is roughly chapter 422/423.

I swear I had one of these too, I had a flute as my ressurection, the different songs I played had different effects. I'll have a look for it ...

Anyone fancy a group chat later? I really need some cheering up and maybe laughing.
XD
Maybe I'll try and compile all the Arrancar profiles into one page. Most of them are here (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12523657&postcount=3443).

I'd like a group convo.


My Arrancar is also up, and ready to go, and he's got a Fraccion. Her base is Velociraptor.
Did you make a profile for your Fraccion?

arceus03
15th September 2011, 10:16 PM
I think my rant scared him off.

For the bricks: I'd put something incredibly random. Then everyone would try to decipher what it meant.

He doesn't seem to be the type who reads what other people comments on him, but who knows

If someone even notices it. XD Or someone was walking slowly and reading every single brick.



...
...ILp leaving would be the downfall of us all, huh?
...*Gets on top of the roof of the club, using the dramatic wind kido to set up the perfect atmosphere*
...
We will survive.
The empty void that was once fended off by Ilp's posts shall not end us.
As we stand, right here and right now, we live.
With our heads held high and topics swords at the ready,
We gallantly face the nothingness that brings down the silence embrace of death with our livelihood.
WE shall stand against all despair brought from his absence, with drive from our hearts and souls!
We'll all share the burden of our missing brother-in-arms, letting our suffering empower our resolve for survival.
This club will survive, its members all united as one, fighting against anything trying to bring about its downfall into the dark nothingness of inactivity!


I am SO saving this and posting it when the club lacks of activity because manga goes on hiatus for two weeks, and see what happens XD


It would, but my fraccion is a muy thai fighter. And if I carried on with the martial artist theme, they'd all end up the same.

XD Maybe you can differentiate the characteristics based on where they come from... Taekwondo, jeet kune do, etc. idk. XD


What you didn't see is that the oar is hidden inside the laser.

Suuuuuuuuuuure <Another ILPy influence


That is pure genius, really it is.

XD I know.


I hated taking my liberals. Well, some of them, ok just one. It was Expository Writing aka English.

Ugh. Writing.


xD, you feel better now don't you?

Quite, but not so. XD My writing assignments are due tomorrow. I'll feel better after I finished it.


Arc will be an expert on that. Come at me bro. :p

Me? I can't even detect sarcasm, much less decipher what he means. XD

Oh. Get designing your Squad page :P



Hate to burst your bubble of logic very impressive bubble though it may be but Komamura is a Fox =P which is not in the Canis family.

EDIT: Really?! He is actually a Wolf, but he looks like a fox! ... O.o

Well to compare...

There's the fox,
http://www.mynewhair.info/wp-content/uploads/2008/12/02-megan-fox-hairstyle.jpg

Sorry. I mean
http://images.nationalgeographic.com/wpf/media-live/photos/000/006/cache/red-fox_679_600x450.jpg

There's the wolf
http://akvis.com/img/examples/sketch/wolf-sketch/wolf-photo.jpg

And there's Komamura
http://images.wikia.com/bleachwiki/de/images/a/a2/Komamura.png

.... They all look pretty much the same. XD idk Maybe except the first


Yep, and Wolves and Dragons being my favourite creatures ever have nothing to do with it =3
But now that you make the connection XD no wonder I can get along with Eon

You are a pack. No surprises there XD


Anyone fancy a group chat later? I really need some cheering up and maybe laughing.

Yes please 8D If I'm online that is



I'd support you either way, Lieutenant or Captain. There is still room in the second squad aswell /joke

And in Squad 4


Yeah, I like cats, sue me.

Nyaaaa!


My Arrancar is also up, and ready to go, and he's got a Fraccion. Her base is Velociraptor.

Is she the result of you cancelling your major in Psychology? (http://www.makemymood.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/philosaptor-30.jpg)


...still loling at the fact that "Me = MC = You" xD

... Wait, where did MC come in? XD
Oh, the dragon. XP


Gaaaah, writing is slow. Classes and homework are taking up way too much of my time.

Homework 8D


Yeah. That was our most active joining. I think Senny and I both joined at roughly the same time, and guess who survived...

Senny?


"No rants, no analysis, no DAAAATAAAA, no long-arse reviews" why does that sound like a GOOD thing? XD

Depends on who you're talking to.


Is it bad that both of my Fraccion are kids?

Because your Arrancar is small himself, I don't think that matters XD Though be careful. My OC will give them poisoned candies if they're not watchful. It gives you diarrhea for one week.


...Remind me never to die.

Sadly you cannot. :P


Rex, I think I'd have to check my data first to see if you should be a captain or not XP Chances are, it's a yes.

lol, he can easily change that like Cell did.


You found that?!

Ah ha! So that's what you were hiding behind the fridge.


Maybe I'll try and compile all the Arrancar profiles into one page. Most of them are here (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12523657&postcount=3443).

That's the old one... nvm, I edited it. But why don't you link that to my profile sheet (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12523902&postcount=3445)? Same thing though. And I'll add in a bit more about his personality, etc.

PKMN Trainer Rex
16th September 2011, 1:06 AM
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I was going to suggest Rex for Captaincy position straight off tbh, but first I must ask Senny, if he replies.




I'd support you either way, Lieutenant or Captain. There is still room in the second squad aswell /joke




Ditto, but yeah, waiting on Senny.


I thought I had a long ways to go before I was even going to be considered for a lieutenant position. Thanks for the support everyone.


My Arrancar is also up, and ready to go, and he's got a Fraccion. Her base is Velociraptor.


Siiiiiiiiiiiiiick.



No complaints here. The kid seriously needs to calm down and get his head on straight.


Lol, hopefully his time away from here he has made some changes. Kinda doubt it though.



Yeah. That was our most active joining. I think Senny and I both joined at roughly the same time, and guess who survived...
Though one thing I find funny is that Blue joined, and then it was... 4 months (and 2 days) until the next member, Minchan, joined (and that was because Zam and I got her from Zam's club). After Minchan was Arenak, who joined less than a week after.


I wonder who that could be?



Rex, I think I'd have to check my data first to see if you should be a captain or not XP Chances are, it's a yes.


Charts, what charts?




He doesn't seem to be the type who reads what other people comments on him, but who knows
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I don't think he does either.

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If someone even notices it. XD Or someone was walking slowly and reading every single brick.


I'd be that person to read every single brick.





XD Maybe you can differentiate the characteristics based on where they come from... Taekwondo, jeet kune do, etc. idk. XD


Bruce Lee FTW! And now I have ideas. Thank you.





XD I know.


Did anyone make a brick that said "Hey, you. Stop reading this brick!", yet? xD



Ugh. Writing.


I thought I was the only person who hates writing?



Quite, but not so. XD My writing assignments are due tomorrow. I'll feel better after I finished it.


Better get on it.



Me? I can't even detect sarcasm, much less decipher what he means. XD

Oh. Get designing your Squad page :P


Then we can be hopeless together.

Don't even know how to do that.

arceus03
16th September 2011, 1:23 AM
I thought I had a long ways to go before I was even going to be considered for a lieutenant position. Thanks for the support everyone.

*resists the urge to post "d'awwwwwwwww"*


I'd be that person to read every single brick.

XD You'd get bumped, the bricks are on the quarter mile walkway and lots of people use that route. Or else bump into somebody else while reading, cause you'd have to look down to read.


Bruce Lee FTW! And now I have ideas. Thank you.

Hetalia characters coming up


Did anyone make a brick that said "Hey, you. Stop reading this brick!", yet? xD

XD Haven't found that one yet.


I thought I was the only person who hates writing?

I'm fine with writing. But academic writing is another point altogether. When you have too much criteria to think on, it becomes hard. "Determine the project of the writer. What are the "moves" that the writer used in her writing? Point out where she is forwarding or countering other authors. Geez. =\ I miss the old high school writing task of "Write about an event that you will remember most". XD


Better get on it.

I know. XD I'm a terrible procrastinator. I want to stop procrastinating.... maybe tomorrow.


Then we can be hopeless together.

I'm sure I'm even thicker than you are XD


Don't even know how to do that.

XD It's not a must, really, but it's fun to update that. You could try looking at the other pages. I believe almost every Captain has one. Basically it's just a banner (or just huge fonts)... applying criteria (not really used much, but whatever), member list (with the link to their zanpakto/profile/whatnot), survey (if you want to do one), and links (to fanfics, fanarts, but not all have those). You could also include trivial stuff like I did with my page

Again, not compulsory. XD It just provides a quick link to your profiles/zanpakto/library/etc, mostly, because you can go to the squad page from the front page. Though ILPy also has all the links, I believe

On another note, it's just the beginning of fall and it's already c-c-cold. Ah, hot coffee. And numb fingers.