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Jinchuuriki Hunter
16th September 2011, 2:53 AM
Shainingu Senshi no Kyoujou (Shining Warrior of Truth)
Kagayaki Kyoujou no Senshi.
Likewise, the bankai name should be appropriately fixed.

@MC: I don't even remember my Arrancar profile. But what I do remember is what it looks like.
Unreleased: Just a guy with a helmet completely covering the top-half of his head.
Released: Just a guy hanging by his head from a massive 4-legged dome thing with Cero blasters between the legs.
I might just draw it and post it here since it's not easy to describe.

minchan
16th September 2011, 4:52 AM
Ooooh, a Pacman! XD


Umm... Yeah that was my first reaction too. XD

Lately, I've been strangely obsessed with Pacman... It's very odd, really.

Oh yeah, and I support Rex in becoming a captain or lieutenant... As long as it's not taking my spot. XD Because I'm pretty attached to this specific position, as you guys probably know. LOL

On that note, when is the last time Senny was active anyway? =O I don't really remember a time he was very active on here, must've been even before I joined or something... LOL

Anyway, about thinking it's too early, Rex, I came to this club after requesting I could be lieutenant of squad 5 (because of my emotional attachment to this particular position... XD). I don't think it's too early at all. As long as I don't get bumped around, I think you deserve to be a captain or lieutenant at least. XD

Oh and to be fair, I will try to post more. I follow a lot of forums, on top of school stuff, but if I bump up SPPF and the Bleach club thread specifically on my list, I'll be able to be more active here. =)

And for the record, even if I had been super active lately, I wouldn't want to lose this position I have anyway. Ahaha I said that like 3 times already. But even if it were to mean moving up, I'd rather stay here anyway.

Before I shut up, as this is getting long and probably boring (lol)... MC YOUR RED FONT IS KILLING MY EYES ON THIS GREEN BACKGROUND. Just saying. XD

Oh yeah and umm for those of you who I have on MSN... I will TRY to log in more often... XD It's hard to remember though since it doesn't auto-open on this computer, like my other one. I know how to do it, but sometimes, when I do work and stuff, I don't WANT it to... LOL So yeah. I'll try to at least get on there more often.

Oh but if I'm "online" and don't respond, I may have fallen asleep - lately I've fallen asleep with my laptop open a LOT. Just a warning.

And before I go (for real this time, I promise!! XD) has anyone kept count of the anime episodes in this season? (The ones with the current ending theme song, the one that has the video recaps of all the canon seasons.) I kinda-sorta lost count and I'm just too lazy (AND BUSY) to look it up... Does anyone know? If so, please say... lol thanks. ^o^

Golde
16th September 2011, 6:09 AM
I don't think anyone has contacted Senny in a long time. :\ sucks.

MC, if you keep on me about it, I'll draw a picture of my arrancar form and resuurecion if you're interested. Just keep on me about it, send me a PM. As for what it is, it's a bird. In this new form it's more like a toucan :p

And I won't be on WLM for a bit, until I can get an antennae. Which is at home. So next time I go home XD

PKMN Trainer Rex
16th September 2011, 7:07 AM
*resists the urge to post "d'awwwwwwwww"*


xD



XD You'd get bumped, the bricks are on the quarter mile walkway and lots of people use that route. Or else bump into somebody else while reading, cause you'd have to look down to read.


Or I could just mow them over.



Hetalia characters coming up


Maybe



XD Haven't found that one yet.


It be surprised if there isn't.



I'm fine with writing. But academic writing is another point altogether. When you have too much criteria to think on, it becomes hard. "Determine the project of the writer. What are the "moves" that the writer used in her writing? Point out where she is forwarding or countering other authors. Geez. =\ I miss the old high school writing task of "Write about an event that you will remember most". XD


Well yeah, that kind of writing I don't really like. But if its something I'm really into like story writing, I can do for days.



I know. XD I'm a terrible procrastinator. I want to stop procrastinating.... maybe tomorrow.


We some another thing in common. We're "great" at procrastinating.



I'm sure I'm even thicker than you are XD


xD



XD It's not a must, really, but it's fun to update that. You could try looking at the other pages. I believe almost every Captain has one. Basically it's just a banner (or just huge fonts)... applying criteria (not really used much, but whatever), member list (with the link to their zanpakto/profile/whatnot), survey (if you want to do one), and links (to fanfics, fanarts, but not all have those). You could also include trivial stuff like I did with my page

Again, not compulsory. XD It just provides a quick link to your profiles/zanpakto/library/etc, mostly, because you can go to the squad page from the front page. Though ILPy also has all the links, I believe


Ah, okay.



On another note, it's just the beginning of fall and it's already c-c-cold. Ah, hot coffee. And numb fingers.

I love the fall/winter, its not hot :p.


Kagayaki Kyoujou no Senshi.
Likewise, the bankai name should be appropriately fixed.


Thank you, I'll make/ask for the change. I'm kind of fond of the Engrishness of my Zan's name.



Oh yeah, and I support Rex in becoming a captain or lieutenant... As long as it's not taking my spot. XD Because I'm pretty attached to this specific position, as you guys probably know. LOL

On that note, when is the last time Senny was active anyway? =O I don't really remember a time he was very active on here, must've been even before I joined or something... LOL

Anyway, about thinking it's too early, Rex, I came to this club after requesting I could be lieutenant of squad 5 (because of my emotional attachment to this particular position... XD). I don't think it's too early at all. As long as I don't get bumped around, I think you deserve to be a captain or lieutenant at least. XD


Don't worry, I won't do that to you Or would I? >D


I don't think anyone has contacted Senny in a long time. :\ sucks.

MC, if you keep on me about it, I'll draw a picture of my arrancar form and resuurecion if you're interested. Just keep on me about it, send me a PM. As for what it is, it's a bird. In this new form it's more like a toucan :p

And I won't be on WLM for a bit, until I can get an antennae. Which is at home. So next time I go home XD

NL said she tried to recently, she's just waiting for a reply.

Use a piece of tin foil.

minchan
16th September 2011, 8:54 AM
^
Ohhhh you better not!! XD

BTW. Tin foil isn't as magic as you may think. Besides, duct tape is the new "in" thing now. XD

Oh yeah. I don't like when it gets cool. I like the spring best. <3

But I don't like rain... It rained almost every day the past month and a half, or so. At least in NYC.

This post had almost nothing to do with Bleach at all, did it... ^^;

Well to make it relevant, swords are awesome. <- TOTALLY RELEVANT!!! *shot*

Anyway.

I'm glad to see I'm not alone in the procrastination thing... As I'm currently procrastinating homework and sleeping. At 3AM with classes for 12 hours starting at 9AM. And only my homework for the first of three classes is done. *sigh*

Remember - the sword comment made this post relevant.

Oh yeah, I do need a life.

Blackacer
16th September 2011, 9:21 AM
Imma go read the manga now ciaos!
BUT FIRST! :D


Zanpaktou Name; Kagekkou (Ka = Kage(Shadow) ll Gekkou = Moonlight)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P

PKMN Trainer Rex
16th September 2011, 10:23 AM
BTW. Tin foil isn't as magic as you may think. Besides, duct tape is the new "in" thing now. XD


But it protects my mind from the aliens.



Oh yeah. I don't like when it gets cool. I like the spring best. <3

But I don't like rain... It rained almost every day the past month and a half, or so. At least in NYC.


I love the rain. Light rain @ night = lullaby. And in Hawaii in never gets too cold.


This post had almost nothing to do with Bleach at all, did it... ^^;


Well to make it relevant, swords are awesome. <- TOTALLY RELEVANT!!! *shot*


Did you check out my new Zan (http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13419729&postcount=4452)?


Imma go read the manga now ciaos!
BUT FIRST! :D


Zanpaktou Name; Kagekkou (Ka = Kage(Shadow) ll Gekkou = Moonlight)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P

Nice, short, simplistic and Ichigo-esque.

Blackacer
16th September 2011, 11:26 AM
Editted the shikai form.

Anyway it seems that the storyline on anime and manga is messed up not to mention the filters and the stuffs are all mess'd up too...

Northern Lights
16th September 2011, 2:49 PM
I don't think anyone has contacted Senny in a long time. :\ sucks.

Got this response from him:


Yeah I doubt I'll be coming back D: feels bad saying that..

So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*

OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.

kusari
16th September 2011, 3:37 PM
>OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.

*everyone in unison* Yes, Miss Kida.


>Anyway it seems that the storyline on anime and manga is messed up not to mention the filters and the stuffs are all mess'd up too...

It's not really messed up. Kubo just doesn't handle it right. Every arc generally follows this formula: Young/Teenage girl is plot centric. Ichigo's friends fight miniboss squad. Ichigo fights Big Bad/Dragon and loses. Big Bad capturea Plot Centric Girl. Ichigo gets sad and trains. Ichigo beats Big Bad.


So yeah. I've begun writing a bit. Still haven't found my flash drive.

Blackacer
16th September 2011, 3:57 PM
I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

MasterCharizard15
16th September 2011, 5:48 PM
Imma go read the manga now ciaos!
BUT FIRST! :D


Zanpaktou Name; Kagekkou (Ka = Kage(Shadow) ll Gekkou = Moonlight)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P

Simple. No one should really have a problem with it. Compared to other zanpaktou here, it' refreshing a bit to see one that doesn't need to be shot down for being godmoddy. No matter how well hidden the god moddy powers are. *looks at EVERY Captain*



But it protects my mind from the aliens.

I love the rain. Light rain @ night = lullaby. And in Hawaii in never gets too cold.

Did you check out my new Zan (http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13419729&postcount=4452)?

Nice, short, simplistic and Ichigo-esque.

*Bro fist* Rain = Win.


Editted the shikai form.

Anyway it seems that the storyline on anime and manga is messed up not to mention the filters and the stuffs are all mess'd up too...

I approve. Though I do wonder if you'll be asking to change/revamp/update it anytime soon.

As for the manga/anime, just ask Squad 2. They'll write on essay almost on many things are wrong with Bleach. XD




Got this response from him:

So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*

OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.

He will be missed. :c
Yes, with the dragonwolf gone, NOBODY can stop my global conquest! Now to get rid of that mermaid, Lazy wolf and proverb talking Panda. *plots*



>OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.

*everyone in unison* Yes, Miss Kida.


>Anyway it seems that the storyline on anime and manga is messed up not to mention the filters and the stuffs are all mess'd up too...

It's not really messed up. Kubo just doesn't handle it right. Every arc generally follows this formula: Young/Teenage girl is plot centric. Ichigo's friends fight miniboss squad. Ichigo fights Big Bad/Dragon and loses. Big Bad capturea Plot Centric Girl. Ichigo gets sad and trains. Ichigo beats Big Bad.


So yeah. I've begun writing a bit. Still haven't found my flash drive.

Agreed and have fun.


I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

They both look nice.
Do you plan to make more banners?
Hopes you stay active. That way, you can make of entire page to show off your banners.

I like Pokemon (...)
16th September 2011, 8:11 PM
I am SO saving this and posting it when the club lacks of activity because manga goes on hiatus for two weeks, and see what happens XD
Do eeeeeeeeeeeeet

Suuuuuuuuuuure <Another ILPy influence
I think that one was actually mine.


.... They all look pretty much the same. XD idk Maybe except the first
I agree with you there.

Is she the result of you cancelling your major in Psychology? (http://www.makemymood.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/philosaptor-30.jpg)

HOW DID I NOT THINK OF THIS BEFORE

lol, he can easily change that like Cell did.
Who said I was referring to that data?
Also, can't be bothered to look at/collect that data, so just go with a yes :p


That's the old one... nvm, I edited it. But why don't you link that to my profile sheet (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12523902&postcount=3445)? Same thing though. And I'll add in a bit more about his personality, etc.
When I first made that post, it wasn't intended to be a long-term "here are the links to ALL the profiles!", it was just a "okay, here are the profiles, if you haven't made one then you can. Use this skeleton that I made from all the others". Soyeah

I know. XD I'm a terrible procrastinator. I want to stop procrastinating.... maybe tomorrow.
PROCASTINATORS UNITE!
...Another day.



@MC: I don't even remember my Arrancar profile. But what I do remember is what it looks like.
Unreleased: Just a guy with a helmet completely covering the top-half of his head.
Released: Just a guy hanging by his head from a massive 4-legged dome thing with Cero blasters between the legs.
I might just draw it and post it here since it's not easy to describe.
If/when you make a write up (skeleton for that is in the spoiler below), can you post that on a page with your shinigami profile (unless you don't have one), so it can be linked to on the "first post" please.

Arrancar Name (Spanish):

Aspect of Death:

Mask Form/Location:

Hollow Hole Location:

Cero Colour/Firing Location:

Physical Appearance:

Personality:

Resurrección Details:
-Name:
-Release Command:
-Zanpakutou Base:
-Physical Appearance:
-Release Details/Abilities:
-Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar):
-Misc:




Oh yeah, I do need a life.
I can try and build you one?



Zanpaktou Name; Kagekkou (Ka = Kage(Shadow) ll Gekkou = Moonlight)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P
I quite like it. When I first read "type; darkness" I feared that you had a similar zanpakutou to our 11th Squad Captain, Blue, but you definitely don't. I'll put it up on the "first" post.
Also, another wolf XP




Got this response from him:



So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*
Ah, alright. So what should we do? Move him down to lieutenant, or even a spirit? I'd like a comment from most people (especially Golde) before I touch the "first" post concerning Senny.


I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.pnghttp://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png
Oh wow, that looks really good!
On the first post, we can link to "Fanart pages" by each person (which is an easy way for your art to get linked to the first post, without Golde or I having to do it ourselves). If you want, you can make a Fanart Page?

Golde
16th September 2011, 9:08 PM
So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*

That is sad. I'm going to go ahead and remove him from page 1.


I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

I like them. Especially the second. Make a fan-art page. We only have like one XD

Hmm...maybe I should make one :p


Simple. No one should really have a problem with it. Compared to other zanpaktou here, it' refreshing a bit to see one that doesn't need to be shot down for being godmoddy. No matter how well hidden the god moddy powers are. *looks at EVERY Captain*




*Look at you* XD

Yeah, I like it when someone can find a simple idea and stick with that as well. It is wolf-based again, which is pretty much the theme of this club, but whatever.

BTW, I'm going to do a few revamps of my zan. Shouldn't have any new powers or anything to make it more powerful, just clearing up and changing a few aesthetic details.

EDIT - As I was doing it, something occurred to me. Not sure why I ever thought of it before, but should I put a section in the Zanpakutou format for 'sealed details'? I think it might be a good idea

minchan
16th September 2011, 10:03 PM
ILP you can try but you will fail. Just saying. XD Not that I'm happy about that per se, but my life is pretty much a fail anyway... =P

On topic, it's too bad about Senny. But I guess some people have more important things to do than come to a Bleach thread in a Pokemon forum, even if only once in a while. (I know I haven't completely let go, hence my posting here. XD)

In fact, I still have my Neopets account from when I was like, 10. XD Just saying. I don't go on much but I go on enough for them not to delete my account due to inactivity... LOL I suck at letting go. =.=

Speaking of fan art... I was gonna make a fan art page when I joined all that time ago, huh... I'll get around to it eventually. Maybe in late December - mid January, when I don't have school.

Eon Master
17th September 2011, 12:11 AM
I'm really not liking how this chapter turned out, but since it's mostly a filler-ish thing, I don't really care as much. It's also shorter than usual, only 9 1/2 pages as opposed to my usual dozen+ page chapters.


Last time, on Hunting Death Itself...
Rouga and Aozora dueled in a clash of the titans, and Rouga became the Captain of Squad 7. Golde dropped a major bombshell and revealed that Seijuro had chosen to die and made sure that Rouga would become his replacement. Kida and Senny had a bit of a heart-to-heart, and the seeds of mistrust for Rouga are sown...

Niche lounged restlessly on a bench outside of the Squad 2 Interrogation Center, waiting for Rouga to show up. He hated interrogations, so the newly appointed Squad 7 Captain had offered to take care of it. The only reason he was even here was because it was happening in his facilities, and he didn’t have many reliable officers to delegate such tasks to.

“Hey Niche, you ready to go?” Rouga’s voice called from down the path.

The Squad 2 Captain sat up, finding Rouga standing at the end of the bench, not wearing his new haori. “Why so casual? You’re here on official business.”

He shrugged. “Wouldn’t do to have him spit on my haori so soon after I’ve gotten it.” He smirked darkly. “Or for me to get any of his blood on it.”

“You actually plan on making him bleed?”

“Only if he tries my patience,” Rouga replied seriously. “Either way, he’s not getting out of that room without at least a few injuries, unless he starts spilling his guts straight off.”

Niche grimaced; this was why he hated interrogations. You had to have a stomach of steel to be an interrogator, that and a heart of ice. Either that or you had to enjoy causing pain, something Niche most empathetically did not. “Mind if I sit this one out?” he asked. “I just had lunch.”

Rouga chuckled. “You can sit out my session, but only if you go first. Be nice to him, offer him a larger cell, a comfortable bed, better food, proper medical attention… you know. All he has to do is tell us what we want to know.”

Niche gave him an odd look. “You want to try a ‘good cop, bad cop’ act or something?”

“Basically.” He nodded. “It’s an actual interrogation tactic, just not so widely used anymore in the World of the Living because you can’t actually hurt prisoners by law in most countries.” He chuckled mirthlessly. “Once he starts hurting, that good food and comfy bed will sound really good.”

Niche shrugged, standing from the bench and smoothing out his robes. “Makes sense. As long as I don’t have to do the actual interrogating, I’d be happy to help.”

“You’re free to go after you’ve done your part,” Rouga replied, sitting down in his spot. “You go ahead, this probably won’t take long. If he does start giving you information, make sure to get me first. I can make sure he’s being truthful.”

Niche nodded, then he opened the door and entered the darkened facility. Rouga sighed. “You can come out now, Senny. I know you’re there.”

The air behind Rouga blurred, the colors wavering as though caught in a heat wave until the Squad 8 Captain faded into view. “How did you know?”

“Kyokko is a useful Kidou against normal Shinigami,” he answered, “but it’s useless against Fenrir. It hides you from sight and the spiritual sense, but I can still smell you underneath it.”

“Useless against what?” he asked innocently.

Rouga turned his head, sending his fellow Captain an annoyed glance. “Don’t play dumb; it doesn’t suit you. Kida already told you everything last night.”
Senny looked dumbfounded. “How the hell do you always know these things?”
Rouga sighed. “The pack bonds give us unique abilities. Kida gained a form of empathy. Seijuro could feed on the resolve of his packmates to fuel his own.” He turned away. “My ability is that I always know what my packmates are up to.” His lips formed into a halfhearted smirk. “Not always pleasant, mind you, but useful.” He paused for a moment, letting it sink in, before he continued with his own question. “So, why are you even here? You already know about Fenrir. You already know about Seijuro’s death. What more could you possibly need to know?”

“Now who’s playing dumb?” Senny scoffed before growing serious. “First of all, why does Kida think you’re a ‘heartless monster’? And second, what makes her hate you so much? I’ve never felt as much hatred from her then when she speaks of you.”

“I’ll tell you after this interrogation is complete; just come to my office in Squad 7,” Rouga grunted. “Go. Niche is coming out soon.”

Senny scowled, but he did as Rouga requested and stalked off, leaving just as Niche appeared in the doorway of the interrogation chamber.

“Well, that went well,” he said sarcastically, wiping at his cheek with his sleeve. Rouga chuckled; he’d been right about the spitting thing. “At this point, I’m almost hoping that you beat a few manners into his head.”

“With pleasure.” Rouga stood, moving into the room and shutting the door behind him. Before him, a greasy man with long black hair was secured to a chair with manacles on his wrists and ankles. He was dressed in a standard white prisoner’s robe and wore a red seki-seki collar around his neck. A small table sat off to the side, a black recording device sitting innocently upon its surface.

“I’ll tell you the same thing I told your Captain; I ain’t telling you spit,” the prisoner droned to Rouga.

Rouga didn’t respond, moving forward until he towered over the man and then punched him in the stomach. “Rule number one: don’t speak unless spoken to,” he hissed, purposefully making his voice as harsh as possible.
He shoved the man backwards until his chair toppled onto the floor. “Rule two: if I ask you a question, I expect an answer. Rule three: if you don’t answer my questions, or give me an answer I don’t like, you get hurt.” He grinned devilishly, stomping down on the man’s chest hard enough to make his ribs pop. “And one piece of advice: I have full rights to make your life a living hell. I suggest you don’t make me do that.”

The dark-haired Jäger glowered at Rouga from the floor, gasping for air until Rouga lifted his foot off of the man’s diaphragm. “You have a name?” Rouga asked as he righted the chair.

“…**** you.”

Rouga grinned. “Ok Mr. ****you, if that’s what you really want to be called.”

The man cringed, then thought better of his newest moniker. “It’s Hans. Hans Maier.”

“Alright, Hans. What I want to know is this: what is your plan for the upcoming assault on the Seireitei?”

To a normal person, Hans’ reaction would’ve seemed calm and neutral, but Rouga noticed the subtle clues. His shoulders tightened, his breathing quickened for a split second, and his pupils widened slightly. “No clue,” Hans replied neutrally, the wavering, stiff stench of a lie wafting up to Rouga’s nose. As though he’d sensed this, Hans added two truths to his statement. “I’m only a junior officer; I’m not part of the upper-echelon command structure.”

Rouga’s fist flashed and plowed into Hans’ jaw, sending a few flecks of blood to the floor as it split his lip. “That was rule number three in effect,” Rouga growled. “Don’t bother lying to me; I can tell when you do. The last two parts are true, but to say you have ‘no clue’ is a downright lie.”

Hans’ gasped subtly, giving further proof to his lie. “No way,” he muttered. “Then you’re…”

Rouga punched him again, harder this time, snapping his head to the side from the force of the strike. “That was rule number one. Who I am doesn’t matter; you’re the one you should be worrying about.” He grabbed Hans by the hair and yanked his head up to face him. “Tell me what I want to know.”

Hans’ only response was an angry, pained scowl.

Rouga sighed, rocking Hans’ head back and stepping back slightly. “I see that I’ll have to do this the hard way,” he said stonily. He snatched one of Hans’ fingers and bent it back sharply, breaking it with a loud snap and a scream from its owner. “Here’s how this is going to work,” he snarled nastily, releasing the mangled digit. “Each time you don’t answer my questions, I’m going to break one of your fingers. When I run out of them, I’ll move on to your toes. After that…” He leered spitefully, “well, I’ll just have to get creative.”

“You… really are… a monster,” Hans spat between panting breaths. “You’re enjoying this…”

Rouga’s leer turned up into a sadistic smirk. “Maybe so,” he growled. “I’ve been caged for far too long. Now, answer.”

“Never.”

This time, Hans’ finger was snapped so fast he didn’t even realize it had happened until he saw the digit pointing backwards over his hand. Pain screamed into his brain and an ache-ridden howl ripped unbidden from his throat.

“Answer me.”

“**** you!” he screeched. “You-!”

Another snap, another horrible scream. Hans slumped as much as he could while chained to the chair, gasping raggedly for air he couldn’t seem to find. His arm twitched as he registered the loss of three of its digits, each spasm only intensifying the awful feeling.

“You’re running out of fingers on that hand. Maybe I should just cut it off.”

Hans turned his eyes fearfully to face his tormentor. Behind the leer, behind the sadistic façade, Hans could see that Rouga was growing frustrated, and was struggling with something. Maybe he’s losing his patience. Maybe if I keep it up, I can get him to leave. He hocked up a wad of spit, and let fly straight at Rouga’s face.

He vanished in a blur, his right hand crashing into Hans’ throat and slamming him, chair and all, into the wall as his left drew his blade and rammed it through the wooden seat only millimeters from Hans’ crotch. The spit wad impacted the ground behind him with a pitiful splash.

Hans’ struggled to draw air for a moment before his eyes met Rouga’s and he froze in terror at what he saw. The iris had expanded and covered most of his eye, the pupil a black slash straight through it. However, the dark golden amber color that glared out at him was what truly stopped him cold. Just with that shade alone, the fury and animal instinct were almost palpable. It was inhuman.

“Last chance,” Rouga snarled, his voice layered with power, authority, and the promise of pain and death. “Tell me everything. Refuse, and your demise shall be a mercy at the end of the agony I’ll subject you to.”

Just as fast as he’d attacked him, Rouga released Hans, sending the chair clattering to the floor. Tears of fear and anguish formed in the prisoner’s eyes as he wheezed and babbled every detail he knew of the Jäger’s plans.

***

Upon Rouga’s exit from the interrogation chamber, Niche sat up from the bench where he’d been lying down. “How’d it go?” he asked.

Rouga didn’t respond verbally at first, his eyes closed as he tossed the black recording device that had been on the table to the Squad 2 Captain. “Take that to Ant, and get the Jäger whatever you bribed him with,” he replied, his voice rough and raspy. “Tell Ant that I’ll discuss its contents with him tomorrow.”

Niche glanced apprehensively at the door, and turned back to ask Rouga a question only to find that he was already gone.

***

Rouga stalked through the halls of his barracks, practically radiating irritation and making every Shinigami steer clear. He followed the corridors to his office, finding Senny arguing with Kai, who was once again the Squad 7 Lieutenant after a brief stint as Acting Captain.

“Captain Yamakiri, I can’t let you go in while Captain Kouken is out,” Kai was saying. “Even if he told you to come here, you’ll have to wait for him to let you in.”

“That won’t be necessary any longer,” Rouga stated as he walked up, drawing the attention of both officers. “Thanks for holding down the fort while I was out, Kai. You’re free to go.”

Kai nodded, and Rouga brushed past Senny without even a glance as he flung open the door of his office. “Come.”

Senny dodged the closing door and looked back just in time to watch Rouga flop down in one of the two swivel chairs in front of his desk. “Have a seat,” Rouga offered, the dour edge to the words making them sound like a command.

Senny scowled, something he seemed to be doing a lot around Rouga, and sat in the chair across from him. “I wanted to ask about what Kida told me,” he began.

“You want to know why she considers me a… how did you put it? A ‘heartless monster’?” He continued after receiving a nod of confirmation. “And you also wanted to know why she hates me so much.” He chuckled mirthlessly. “As it so happens, the answers to both questions are one and the same.”

“And the answer is?”

Rouga leveled his gaze with Senny’s, the intensity in his electric blue eyes shining bright. “She holds me responsible for Chii’s death.”

That was perhaps the last thing Senny had been expecting. “But… that’s impossible! Chii disappeared way before Kida could’ve ever met you!”

“How do you know? Neither of us has ever told you when we met.”

Senny’s mouth formed a hard line in irritation. “I’ve narrowed it down to when she and Seijuro both left the Seireitei, searching for a way to control their powers.”

Rouga’s mouth quirked up into a halfhearted smirk. “Pretty smart, kid,” he chuckled, prompting a grimace from Senny at being called ‘kid’. “Now I can see why Rabbit holds you in such high regard.”

Senny’s mind stumbled over the name. “Rabbit?”

Rouga laughed. “Kida.” The expression on Senny’s face could’ve only been described as ‘priceless’. “It’s a long story, but basically, the first time I saw her she was so out of sorts that she was practically terrified. She was like a rabbit trying to hide from a pack of wolves until Chii showed up and made her feel welcome.”

Senny couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “And she lets you get away with calling her that?”

Rouga’s face fell. “She used to, occasionally. Now I count my blessings every time she doesn’t try to kill me with a look.” He cleared his throat, regaining his composure. “Also, what you said earlier about Seijuro and Kida trying to find a way to control their powers was only partially correct. Only Seijuro needed help controlling his Bankai. Kida needed an outlet for her protective instincts, a pack.” He chuckled. “And both of them needed practice with channeling their Fenrir influence without affecting others inadvertently.”

“I don’t really understand what you mean by ‘Fenrir influence’,” Senny admitted.

“You’re not meant to,” Rouga replied dismissively. “To truly grasp the concept, you have to understand and think like a wolf and also understand it in terms of human emotions. The intricacies of it will be lost on a normal Shinigami.”

“But…”

“No,” Rouga snapped. “I’m not going to explain it to you. It has no bearing on your questions and quite frankly it’s none of your business because you’re not a Fenrir. If Kida sees fit to share it with you I can’t exactly stop her, but I’m not going to tell you anything.”

Senny raised his hands defensively. “Fine, fine, no need to be a jerk about it,” he muttered.

Rouga only gave him a cold look. “It’s pretty much your fault that I’m acting this way. If you hadn’t gotten in my face before the interrogation my control would be a hell of a lot better than it is now. I nearly killed that Jäger because you’d gotten my hackles up before an extremely trying time.” Senny cringed at the implied accusation as Rouga continued. “As long as you’ve been around Seijuro, you should’ve known better than to do that to a dominant Fenrir. We’re temperamental, we have short fuses, and we respond to any sort of challenge as a direct threat to our safety and authority. You have no right to demand anything from me; much less something you don’t have any reason to know.”

Senny winced at Rouga’s harsh tone and the way his eyes lightened and became flecked with gold, sure signs that the wolf was close to the surface. He looked down and away, hoping to diffuse some of the tension. “I’m sorry,” he muttered. “I didn’t think…”

“Damn right you didn’t,” Rouga scoffed, “but I’m not a complete *******. You’ll get the information you asked for, and then I hope you’ll be content to leave me in peace for now.”

Doubtful, Senny thought, his eyes still on the floor. “Sure.”

Rouga sighed, then leaned back in his chair, shading his eyes with a hand until they turned back to normal and stopped glowing. “Now then… Kida and Seijuro came to us about a century ago. Seijuro came because he needed to control his Bankai and reinforce his technique for keeping the wolf under control; Kida came because she’d never received any formal training on how to control her wolf. With too much weighing on Kida, she needed to be around her own kind, which would allow her an outlet for her instincts and practice controlling them.”
“Things went well at first,” he stated fondly, possibly thinking back on good memories. “Kida was a bit timid early on, but the minute she found out that Chii had been alive, and here, the whole time, she gradually opened up to the rest of us. Seijuro took well to the training, and both of them decided that sticking around for a while would be a good idea.” He laughed. “They stayed for ten whole years.”

“Seriously?” Senny asked, dumbfounded. “Why that long?”

Rouga still chuckled. “Think of it this way: Kida and Seijuro were mistrusted, feared, or reviled by many people for much of their life. In joining the pack, they found not only a place to belong, but also a place where they’re appreciated or at least acknowledged by everyone. They were happy.”

“I guess so,” Senny muttered, smiling faintly. “Anyway, I’m guessing that it couldn’t last.”

“Got that right,” Rouga growled, remembering the events as though they were yesterday. “Damn Gintakai. If it weren’t for him, none of us would be in this mess. Seijuro might still be alive, and Zeruda wouldn’t be nearly as big of a threat as she is now.” He turned his gaze to Senny, his tone now bitter with the smallest touch of fear. “He overthrew the Alpha, and took over the pack completely.”

Senny shuddered at the notion of anything that could scare Rouga. “Who was he?”

Rouga clasped his hands together and leaned forward, staring at the ground with his smoldering glare. “He was the pack enforcer, and our second. The position should’ve gone to me, the third, but I had refused on the grounds that I wouldn’t be around in situations that necessitated my services because I was out gathering intel on the Jäger so often. Our fourth wasn’t quite powerful enough to deal with the demands of the position, so it naturally fell to Gintakai.”

“What does the enforcer do?”

Rouga grimaced. “Honestly, ‘assassin’ is the euphemistic way to put it. They’re to kill off threats to the pack and make ‘examples’ of traitors.” Rouga looked up, his eyes glittering with suppressed regrets. “Usually, the enforcer is the third because if they were to become a traitor the second could still take care of them. If the second goes rogue, then it automatically becomes the Alpha’s responsibility to kill them, as they’re the only one capable of it, usually.”

Still more questions sprang to mind, but Senny asked the most poignant one. “How strong is the usual pack?”

“You mean in terms of ranks?” he asked. “Usually, the ranks above the first seven are all Captain-class or stronger. From there it varies; the power jumps can be either exponential or tiny depending on their dominance. Hell, power doesn’t have to go in order; ranking is determined by dominance alone.”

“And how strong is Gintakai?”

He grimaced. “Too powerful. If there’s any being in the universe worthy of the title of ‘monster’ or ‘demon’, it’s him. I wouldn’t stand a chance against him in a straight fight. At best, I might manage to inflict a semi-serious injury before being killed.”

“How’d he manage to hide it?” Senny asked. “That power should’ve been obvious to everyone in the first few ranks, right?”

“I have no idea,” Rouga admitted, still staring at the floor. “He managed to hide his dominance too, faking it most likely. However he did it, it was effective. He killed the Alpha, and took us all by surprise. The backlash from our Alpha’s death had immobilized or numbed most of us completely, and no one could resist him.” He shook his head. “Of the ones unaffected were my younger brother, Kida, Seijuro, myself, and Chii.” Rouga met Senny’s eyes again, his stare grave. “Chii was the Alpha’s mate. She died trying to avenge him. My brother went to protect our younger sister, and I took Kida and Seijuro with me, to escape. They argued every step of the way, but they both knew that the fight was lost the minute Gintakai revealed his full power.”

“Why them?”

Rouga shook his head. “I couldn’t take anyone else. My sister needed to be protected, and my brother was the logical choice. Plus, if Kida and Seijuro went missing, the Soul Society wouldn’t have stood idle, and that probably would’ve resulted in an all-out war between the Shinigami and the Fenrir, which I doubt that either side would’ve really won.” He closed his eyes and leaned back, looking old and weary far beyond his appearance. “I wasn’t thinking clearly; I would’ve tried to take my siblings too but it wouldn’t have worked.”

Senny nodded, understanding. “So why let Kida keep hating you? Why not just tell her the truth?”

“If it prevents her from hating herself unfairly, I’ll gladly be the target of her anger,” he answered softly. “It’ll keep her focused on preventing any more loss of life rather than wallowing.”

“Is that it? Just pure logic?”

Rouga turned to Senny, opening his eyes as the yellow orbs of the wolf took hold. “The other reason she’s so wary of me is because I’m partially immune to her empathy. The only emotion she can feel from me is anger, and she doesn’t understand that. She thinks that I’m ‘acting’ the rest of the time; that my other emotions are just masks that I put on and take off to fool normal Shinigami.” He held his stare at Senny, power enveloping the Squad 8 Captain as he spoke again, voice growing deeper and gaining a growling tone. “Don’t tell Kida any of this. If you do, it’ll negatively affect her focus on the upcoming war.”

Despite the choking thickness of the air around him, Senny spoke. “Why tell me then?”

Rouga’s golden eyes were cold with the promise of death and burning with suppressed anger. “Because you’re one of the people I can trust to leave me to die.”

Senny’s eyes widened. “You want to… die?”

“Shinigami may be nearly immortal, but it doesn’t mean that time doesn’t wear on us heavily. We’re not supposed to live past 400, else we fixate on our motivations and become obsessed and hateful.” Rouga turned his gaze away, now staring out the window as the power surrounding Senny faded causing him to gasp slightly. “I’m over six-hundred years old, Senny, and I’ve been a murderer in almost all of them. I’ve ended thousands of lives, yet I can’t even save my student or protect my siblings. The last thing I can do is to fix the biggest mistake in my life and die with some sense of success.”

Senny couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “What about your siblings?” he half-shouted, lurching out of his chair and glaring at Rouga. “How can you just leave them to die?”

The air in the room stilled at his statement, and when Rouga looked back at his fellow Captain, his eyes had darkened. Now dark golden and glowing like searchlights, his iris was completely split by the slits of his pupils. “No one can defeat Gintakai,” Rouga replied, his voice deathly quiet and full of menace. “He’s the closest any Shinigami has ever gotten to a god using their power alone. His command over the pack is absolute, and even I can’t resist his influence if he gets close enough.” He glared at Senny until the latter dropped their gaze to the floor. “Only an Omega would stand any chance against him, and Kida isn’t powerful enough. They can’t be saved at this point.”

“So you’re just going to give up?” Senny muttered darkly to his shoes. “You coward.”

The next instant was a blur and Senny found himself pinned to the wall with Rouga holding the collar of his Shihakushou. The look in new Captain’s eyes had now changed completely. No more anger, no more pain or bloodlust; now only pure force of will and lethal intent glared out at him. “You are ignorant, Senny Yamakiri,” Rouga hissed, his voice coming out more like an animal’s growl than a human’s words. “You have no comprehension of what it is like for someone to exert such control over another. You have no concept of his power, nor do you have any idea what makes him a monster. You know nothing. You do not even realize when you’re pushing Rouga too far.”

Senny’s eyes widened and he gasped sharply, not missing the third person reference. Rouga isn’t here right now…

“I should kill you for your insolence,” Wolf-Rouga continued, “but unfortunately, you are more useful to us alive. Be grateful that Rouga knows how to hold me back so well.” He reared back and hurled Senny out the door of his office and into the hall. “If you were wise, you would fear Gintakai,” Wolf-Rouga stated as he turned away, but he looked back just as he shut the door to his office, “and you would fear me as well.”

“I told you so,” a female voice called from behind Senny as the door closed. He rolled over, noticing Kida was leaning against the wall, her eyes a dazzling opaline white with harsh black slashes through the iris. “He’s a monster.”

Senny grimaced. “How much did you hear?”

“The tail end of it, just before he ‘removed’ you from his office,” she said, nary a trace of humor in her voice. She turned away, tail swishing as she swaggered down the hall. “Come. I need to calm down, and being in his territory is decidedly not helpful.”

Senny scrambled to his feet, marveling at how Rouga could inspire such fear, and yet was only a coward himself as he followed Kida out of the barracks.
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So, nothing really happened. Rouga's scary as hell. Senny doesn't know when to stop pushing buttons. Niche is confused. Kida is angry. Also, there's someone who scares even Rouga? Wow.

Gintakai means "silver death", which refers to the myth that silver is deadly for werewolves. The events in this chapter are mostly relevant to the sequel, as well as the upcoming war with the Jager.

Next chapter will focus on the war effort and Ant and Rouga's efforts to prepare the Shinigami for it. It'll also have Kai making an important appearance, and Dauc's entrance.

Character List (In no particular order):

Niche Neeja (Cell)

Rouga Kouken (Eon Master)

Senny Yamakiri (Senbonzakura)

Hans Maier

Anternero Aielpy (I Like Pokemon(...) )

Kai Blaize (CyberBlaziken)

Kida Ookami (Northern Lights)

Seijuro Arashi

Feel free to destroy this, ILP, MC.

I like Pokemon (...)
17th September 2011, 1:33 AM
Yeah, I like it when someone can find a simple idea and stick with that as well. It is wolf-based again, which is pretty much the theme of this club, but whatever.

EDIT - As I was doing it, something occurred to me. Not sure why I ever thought of it before, but should I put a section in the Zanpakutou format for 'sealed details'? I think it might be a good idea
So two captains, and a spirit are wolves, so now the whole club has the wolf theme? XP

Yeah, I think that could work.

ILP you can try but you will fail. Just saying. XD Not that I'm happy about that per se, but my life is pretty much a fail anyway... =P
Hey, it worked for m- ohwait, damnit, where did I put that thing...


I'm really not liking how this chapter turned out, but since it's mostly a filler-ish thing, I don't really care as much. It's also shorter than usual, only 9 1/2 pages as opposed to my usual dozen+ page chapters.
Alright everyone, wish me luck.



Last time, on Hunting Death Itself...
Rouga and Aozora dueled in a clash of the titans, and Rouga became the Captain of Squad 7. Golde dropped a major bombshell and revealed that Seijuro had chosen to die and made sure that Rouga would become his replacement. Kida and Senny had a bit of a heart-to-heart, and the seeds of mistrust for Rouga are sown...
Recaps are always awesome 8D

Niche lounged restlessly on a bench outside of the Squad 2 Interrogation Center, waiting for Rouga to show up. He hated interrogations, so the newly appointed Squad 7 Captain had offered to take care of it. The only reason he was even here was because it was happening in his facilities, and he didn’t have many reliable officers to delegate such tasks to.
Alright, that makes sense. Cell is the most recent captain, so he would naturally be a bit timid. The thing is, I think you may be making him a bit TOO timid. How long has it been since he joined? But also, Cell would work with assassinations and the like fairly commonly, so something like an interrogation shouldn't have this much of an effect on him.

Though it does make sense for Rouga to do the interrogations, as the person is a Jager; so not only does this allow him the opportunity for revenge-threats, but he should know enough about the Jager to know when something sounds off.


He shrugged. “Wouldn’t do to have him spit on my haori so soon after I’ve gotten it.” He smirked darkly. “Or for me to get any of his blood on it.”
Good ol' dark humour. Though would Rouga really care that much about the state of his haori?

Niche grimaced; this was why he hated interrogations. You had to have a stomach of steel to be an interrogator, that and a heart of ice. Either that or you had to enjoy causing pain, something Niche most empathetically did not. “Mind if I sit this one out?” he asked. “I just had lunch.”
Though I see the point of not enjoying causing pain. I still feel he wouldn't hate interrogations. Heck, if he wanted to, he could probably find some creative ways to get the info out.

“Basically.” He nodded. “It’s an actual interrogation tactic, just not so widely used anymore in the World of the Living because you can’t actually hurt prisoners by law in most countries.” He chuckled mirthlessly. “Once he starts hurting, that good food and comfy bed will sound really good.”
Which gives a better idea of the kind of... area the Soul Society/Seireitei is, if they would allow torture. When you think about it, the system that it follows is pretty archaic.

“Kyokko is a useful Kidou against normal Shinigami,” he answered, “but it’s useless against Fenrir. It hides you from sight and the spiritual sense, but I can still smell you underneath it.”

“Useless against what?” he asked innocently.
Doesn't Senny know that Fenrir have a heightened sense of smell? If so, then he would probably something to help mask his scent, as he knows that Kyokko only blocks sight and reiatsu sense.


Rouga sighed. “The pack bonds give us unique abilities. Kida gained a form of empathy. Seijuro could feed on the resolve of his packmates to fuel his own.” He turned away. “My ability is that I always know what my packmates are up to.” His lips formed into a halfhearted smirk. “Not always pleasant, mind you, but useful.” He paused for a moment, letting it sink in, before he continued with his own question. “So, why are you even here? You already know about Fenrir. You already know about Seijuro’s death. What more could you possibly need to know?”
To what extent does Rouga know what his packmates can do? Is it complete telepathy, where you hear every thought? If so, can this be turned on/off? Or is it more like "oh, okay, so I can tell Kida is talking to Senny, and she's feeling a bit angry", or what?


“I’ll tell you the same thing I told your Captain; I ain’t telling you spit,” the prisoner droned to Rouga.
Perhaps this was why he didn't wear his haori? So that the Jager would think he was not a captain?

Rouga didn’t respond, moving forward until he towered over the man and then punched him in the stomach. “Rule number one: don’t speak unless spoken to,” he hissed, purposefully making his voice as harsh as possible.
Immediately laying down the rules. As harsh as it is, it would be pretty effective, and a good way to keep him in line.


He shoved the man backwards until his chair toppled onto the floor. “Rule two: if I ask you a question, I expect an answer. Rule three: if you don’t answer my questions, or give me an answer I don’t like, you get hurt.” He grinned devilishly, stomping down on the man’s chest hard enough to make his ribs pop. “And one piece of advice: I have full rights to make your life a living hell. I suggest you don’t make me do that.”
The rib popping was just evil.

“…**** you.”
Testing the waters; seeing how close to his word Rouga will go, or how far into torture methods he will go.

Rouga grinned. “Ok Mr. ****you, if that’s what you really want to be called.”
He grinned. That is NOT a good thing at all.

The man cringed, then thought better of his newest moniker. “It’s Hans. Hans Maier.”
I think, Hans is equivalent to John, no? What is the meaning of Maier?

To a normal person, Hans’ reaction would’ve seemed calm and neutral, but Rouga noticed the subtle clues. His shoulders tightened, his breathing quickened for a split second, and his pupils widened slightly.
I like the small little details, in particular, how there were more than one, so it didn't seem like he was making up the signals.

Rouga punched him again, harder this time, snapping his head to the side from the force of the strike. “That was rule number one. Who I am doesn’t matter; you’re the one you should be worrying about.” He grabbed Hans by the hair and yanked his head up to face him. “Tell me what I want to know.”
Makes me wonder, how would Rouga react to being in the same position as Hans?

He snatched one of Hans’ fingers and bent it back sharply, breaking it with a loud snap and a scream from its owner. “Here’s how this is going to work,” he snarled nastily, releasing the mangled digit. “Each time you don’t answer my questions, I’m going to break one of your fingers. When I run out of them, I’ll move on to your toes. After that…” He leered spitefully, “well, I’ll just have to get creative.”
Once again, evil.


Hans turned his eyes fearfully to face his tormentor. Behind the leer, behind the sadistic façade, Hans could see that Rouga was growing frustrated, and was struggling with something. Maybe he’s losing his patience. Maybe if I keep it up, I can get him to leave. He hocked up a wad of spit, and let fly straight at Rouga’s face.
What a smart man Hans is.

He vanished in a blur, his right hand crashing into Hans’ throat and slamming him, chair and all, into the wall as his left drew his blade and rammed it through the wooden seat only millimeters from Hans’ crotch. The spit wad impacted the ground behind him with a pitiful splash.
What I really liked about this was the mention of the spit wad right at the end; I was imagining it to happen so quickly, that by the time the blade was in the seat, the spit was about to reach the ground.

Hans’ struggled to draw air for a moment before his eyes met Rouga’s and he froze in terror at what he saw. The iris had expanded and covered most of his eye, the pupil a black slash straight through it. However, the dark golden amber color that glared out at him was what truly stopped him cold. Just with that shade alone, the fury and animal instinct were almost palpable. It was inhuman.
Ah - that last phrase, and the italicised writing backed up my thoughts; this is Wolfga, isn't it?

“Last chance,” Rouga snarled, his voice layered with power, authority, and the promise of pain and death. “Tell me everything. Refuse, and your demise shall be a mercy at the end of the agony I’ll subject you to.”
One thing that stoof out was the contraction at the end, "I'll". I imagine Wolfga to have that rage where he speaks with emphasis on his words, and so he would say each word out. Often. Like. This. In. An. Annoyed. Kind. Of. RAGE.


Rouga didn’t respond verbally at first, his eyes closed as he tossed the black recording device that had been on the table to the Squad 2 Captain. “Take that to Ant, and get the Jäger whatever you bribed him with,” he replied, his voice rough and raspy. “Tell Ant that I’ll discuss its contents with him tomorrow.”
Would he call him by such an informal nickname, like Ant? I kind of expected him to say Aielpy.
Though it would be interesting to see what else Rouga and Ant will continue to analyse from that recording.


Kai nodded, and Rouga brushed past Senny without even a glance as he flung open the door of his office. “Come.”
Someone's not too cheerful.


Senny scowled, something he seemed to be doing a lot around Rouga, and sat in the chair across from him.
Just the kind of effect that Rouga - and probably Kida too - has on Senny.

Rouga leveled his gaze with Senny’s, the intensity in his electric blue eyes shining bright. “She holds me responsible for Chii’s death.”
I don't think I've heard that in a long time XD. In fact, she may have left before I joined...

Rouga’s mouth quirked up into a halfhearted smirk. “Pretty smart, kid,” he chuckled, prompting a grimace from Senny at being called ‘kid’. “Now I can see why Rabbit holds you in such high regard.”
I'm probably overanalysing, but I think the rabbit comment might have a bit more importance. I don't think it would be used ONLY to introduce Kida's relationship with Chii and the rest, or to describe her initial reaction.

“You’re not meant to,” Rouga replied dismissively. “To truly grasp the concept, you have to understand and think like a wolf and also understand it in terms of human emotions. The intricacies of it will be lost on a normal Shinigami.”
Which means that Ant would either understand it perfectly, or would undestand it less than Senny XD.


“No,” Rouga snapped. “I’m not going to explain it to you. It has no bearing on your questions and quite frankly it’s none of your business because you’re not a Fenrir. If Kida sees fit to share it with you I can’t exactly stop her, but I’m not going to tell you anything.”
Someone's touchy

“As long as you’ve been around Seijuro, you should’ve known better than to do that to a dominant Fenrir. We’re temperamental, we have short fuses, and we respond to any sort of challenge as a direct threat to our safety and authority. You have no right to demand anything from me; much less something you don’t have any reason to know.”
Hmm, again, this section stands out a bit. Zeruda probably knows this about the dominant Fenrir, and may use it as bait against Rouga - though whether or not it will work...

Rouga still chuckled. “Think of it this way: Kida and Seijuro were mistrusted, feared, or reviled by many people for much of their life. In joining the pack, they found not only a place to belong, but also a place where they’re appreciated or at least acknowledged by everyone. They were happy.”
Which brought the next logical statement that Senny and I both got to:

"I’m guessing that it couldn’t last.”


Rouga clasped his hands together and leaned forward, staring at the ground with his smoldering glare. “He was the pack enforcer, and our second. The position should’ve gone to me, the third, but I had refused on the grounds that I wouldn’t be around in situations that necessitated my services because I was out gathering intel on the Jäger so often. Our fourth wasn’t quite powerful enough to deal with the demands of the position, so it naturally fell to Gintakai.”
Okay, so we have the (unknown?) Alpha, Gintakai the second, Rouga the third, a weaker fourth, as well as Kida, Chii and Seijuro.

“You mean in terms of ranks?” he asked. “Usually, the ranks above the first seven are all Captain-class or stronger. From there it varies; the power jumps can be either exponential or tiny depending on their dominance. Hell, power doesn’t have to go in order; ranking is determined by dominance alone.”
Which reminds me of the lists you posted; how powerful a person is, and how dangerous they are, etc.


He grimaced. “Too powerful. If there’s any being in the universe worthy of the title of ‘monster’ or ‘demon’, it’s him. I wouldn’t stand a chance against him in a straight fight. At best, I might manage to inflict a semi-serious injury before being killed.”
So Golde level?

Of the ones unaffected were my younger brother, Kida, Seijuro, myself, and Chii.” Rouga met Senny’s eyes again, his stare grave. “Chii was the Alpha’s mate. She died trying to avenge him. My brother went to protect our younger sister, and I took Kida and Seijuro with me, to escape. They argued every step of the way, but they both knew that the fight was lost the minute Gintakai revealed his full power.”
Ah, so it was because of Gintakai killing the alpha that it split... I should also add Rouga's younger brother and sister to that list I mentioned a few quotes ago.


“If it prevents her from hating herself unfairly, I’ll gladly be the target of her anger,” he answered softly. “It’ll keep her focused on preventing any more loss of life rather than wallowing.”
So it seems like the "seeds of mistrust" that were sown last chapter by Kida are... mostly thrown away now my Rouga. It explains that the reason why Kida hates him is because she doesn't know the FULL story, and because Rouga is taking the burden of her hate, so it doesn't go on him. Though when I say it like that, it sounds like Rouga COULD just be ********ting half of this.

Rouga turned to Senny, opening his eyes as the yellow orbs of the wolf took hold. “The other reason she’s so wary of me is because I’m partially immune to her empathy. The only emotion she can feel from me is anger, and she doesn’t understand that. She thinks that I’m ‘acting’ the rest of the time; that my other emotions are just masks that I put on and take off to fool normal Shinigami.”
I'm guessing that the reason how/why it only partially works on him will be explained later?


“Shinigami may be nearly immortal, but it doesn’t mean that time doesn’t wear on us heavily. We’re not supposed to live past 400, else we fixate on our motivations and become obsessed and hateful.” Rouga turned his gaze away, now staring out the window as the power surrounding Senny faded causing him to gasp slightly. “I’m over six-hundred years old, Senny, and I’ve been a murderer in almost all of them. I’ve ended thousands of lives, yet I can’t even save my student or protect my siblings. The last thing I can do is to fix the biggest mistake in my life and die with some sense of success.”
Didn't Seijuro also want to die, not unsimilar to Rouga? Or am I completely mucking that up?

“He’s the closest any Shinigami has ever gotten to a god using their power alone. His command over the pack is absolute, and even I can’t resist his influence if he gets close enough.” He glared at Senny until the latter dropped their gaze to the floor. “Only an Omega would stand any chance against him, and Kida isn’t powerful enough yet. They can’t be saved at this point.”
First comment - there's something going on behind Ginkatai. This is the closest they've gone without powers - or the closest they've gone with powers that Kouga doesn't know of? Because when you immediately mention god, I think of Aizen and his Hougyoku.

Also, I fixed that line for you.
“So you’re just going to give up?” Senny muttered darkly to his shoes. “You coward.”


“You are ignorant, Senny Yamakiri,” Rouga hissed, his voice coming out more like an animal’s growl than a human’s words. “You have no comprehension of what it is like for someone to exert such control over another. You have no concept of his power, nor do you have any idea what makes him a monster. You know nothing. You do not even realize when you’re pushing Rouga too far.”
Like the contraction before, using "Senny" and not "Senbonzakura" sounds too informal.

Senny’s eyes widened and he gasped sharply, not missing the third person reference. Rouga isn’t here right now…
And it is official, his Wolfga is italics.

“The tail end of it, just before he ‘removed’ you from his office,” she said, nary a trace of humor in her voice. She turned away, tail swishing as she swaggered down the hall. “Come. I need to calm down, and being in his territory is decidedly not helpful.”
So she still does not know of most of what happened?
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Overall, I think this chapter felt like it had quite a bit less... description than I'm used to from you, I think. It's probably becomes 90% of the chapter was dialogue, which is much harder for me to analyse, I think. I hope that the review was up to standards, though I'm feeling a bit disappointed in the review.

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 2:27 AM
They both look nice.
Do you plan to make more banners?
Hopes you stay active. That way, you can make of entire page to show off your banners.

Yeah for some reason i dont really like making other banners other then anime characters lol.

But i need to know which character you guys want me to do?

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 2:28 AM
They both look nice.
Do you plan to make more banners?
Hopes you stay active. That way, you can make of entire page to show off your banners.

Yeah for some reason i dont really like making other banners other then anime characters lol.

But i need to know which character you guys want me to do?

MasterCharizard15
17th September 2011, 2:37 AM
I'm really not liking how this chapter turned out, but since it's mostly a filler-ish thing, I don't really care as much. It's also shorter than usual, only 9 1/2 pages as opposed to my usual dozen+ page chapters.


Last time, on Hunting Death Itself...
Rouga and Aozora dueled in a clash of the titans, and Rouga became the Captain of Squad 7. Golde dropped a major bombshell and revealed that Seijuro had chosen to die and made sure that Rouga would become his replacement. Kida and Senny had a bit of a heart-to-heart, and the seeds of mistrust for Rouga are sown...

Niche lounged restlessly on a bench outside of the Squad 2 Interrogation Center, waiting for Rouga to show up. He hated interrogations, so the newly appointed Squad 7 Captain had offered to take care of it. The only reason he was even here was because it was happening in his facilities, and he didn’t have many reliable officers to delegate such tasks to.

“Hey Niche, you ready to go?” Rouga’s voice called from down the path.

The Squad 2 Captain sat up, finding Rouga standing at the end of the bench, not wearing his new haori. “Why so casual? You’re here on official business.”

He shrugged. “Wouldn’t do to have him spit on my haori so soon after I’ve gotten it.” He smirked darkly. “Or for me to get any of his blood on it.”

“You actually plan on making him bleed?”

“Only if he tries my patience,” Rouga replied seriously. “Either way, he’s not getting out of that room without at least a few injuries, unless he starts spilling his guts straight off.”

Niche grimaced; this was why he hated interrogations. You had to have a stomach of steel to be an interrogator, that and a heart of ice. Either that or you had to enjoy causing pain, something Niche most empathetically did not. “Mind if I sit this one out?” he asked. “I just had lunch.”

Rouga chuckled. “You can sit out my session, but only if you go first. Be nice to him, offer him a larger cell, a comfortable bed, better food, proper medical attention… you know. All he has to do is tell us what we want to know.”

Niche gave him an odd look. “You want to try a ‘good cop, bad cop’ act or something?”

“Basically.” He nodded. “It’s an actual interrogation tactic, just not so widely used anymore in the World of the Living because you can’t actually hurt prisoners by law in most countries.” He chuckled mirthlessly. “Once he starts hurting, that good food and comfy bed will sound really good.”

Niche shrugged, standing from the bench and smoothing out his robes. “Makes sense. As long as I don’t have to do the actual interrogating, I’d be happy to help.”

“You’re free to go after you’ve done your part,” Rouga replied, sitting down in his spot. “You go ahead, this probably won’t take long. If he does start giving you information, make sure to get me first. I can make sure he’s being truthful.”

Niche nodded, then he opened the door and entered the darkened facility. Rouga sighed. “You can come out now, Senny. I know you’re there.”

The air behind Rouga blurred, the colors wavering as though caught in a heat wave until the Squad 8 Captain faded into view. “How did you know?”

“Kyokko is a useful Kidou against normal Shinigami,” he answered, “but it’s useless against Fenrir. It hides you from sight and the spiritual sense, but I can still smell you underneath it.”

“Useless against what?” he asked innocently.

Rouga turned his head, sending his fellow Captain an annoyed glance. “Don’t play dumb; it doesn’t suit you. Kida already told you everything last night.”
Senny looked dumbfounded. “How the hell do you always know these things?”
Rouga sighed. “The pack bonds give us unique abilities. Kida gained a form of empathy. Seijuro could feed on the resolve of his packmates to fuel his own.” He turned away. “My ability is that I always know what my packmates are up to.” His lips formed into a halfhearted smirk. “Not always pleasant, mind you, but useful.” He paused for a moment, letting it sink in, before he continued with his own question. “So, why are you even here? You already know about Fenrir. You already know about Seijuro’s death. What more could you possibly need to know?”

“Now who’s playing dumb?” Senny scoffed before growing serious. “First of all, why does Kida think you’re a ‘heartless monster’? And second, what makes her hate you so much? I’ve never felt as much hatred from her then when she speaks of you.”

“I’ll tell you after this interrogation is complete; just come to my office in Squad 7,” Rouga grunted. “Go. Niche is coming out soon.”

Senny scowled, but he did as Rouga requested and stalked off, leaving just as Niche appeared in the doorway of the interrogation chamber.

“Well, that went well,” he said sarcastically, wiping at his cheek with his sleeve. Rouga chuckled; he’d been right about the spitting thing. “At this point, I’m almost hoping that you beat a few manners into his head.”

“With pleasure.” Rouga stood, moving into the room and shutting the door behind him. Before him, a greasy man with long black hair was secured to a chair with manacles on his wrists and ankles. He was dressed in a standard white prisoner’s robe and wore a red seki-seki collar around his neck. A small table sat off to the side, a black recording device sitting innocently upon its surface.

“I’ll tell you the same thing I told your Captain; I ain’t telling you spit,” the prisoner droned to Rouga.

Rouga didn’t respond, moving forward until he towered over the man and then punched him in the stomach. “Rule number one: don’t speak unless spoken to,” he hissed, purposefully making his voice as harsh as possible.
He shoved the man backwards until his chair toppled onto the floor. “Rule two: if I ask you a question, I expect an answer. Rule three: if you don’t answer my questions, or give me an answer I don’t like, you get hurt.” He grinned devilishly, stomping down on the man’s chest hard enough to make his ribs pop. “And one piece of advice: I have full rights to make your life a living hell. I suggest you don’t make me do that.”

The dark-haired Jäger glowered at Rouga from the floor, gasping for air until Rouga lifted his foot off of the man’s diaphragm. “You have a name?” Rouga asked as he righted the chair.

“…**** you.”

Rouga grinned. “Ok Mr. ****you, if that’s what you really want to be called.”

The man cringed, then thought better of his newest moniker. “It’s Hans. Hans Maier.”

“Alright, Hans. What I want to know is this: what is your plan for the upcoming assault on the Seireitei?”

To a normal person, Hans’ reaction would’ve seemed calm and neutral, but Rouga noticed the subtle clues. His shoulders tightened, his breathing quickened for a split second, and his pupils widened slightly. “No clue,” Hans replied neutrally, the wavering, stiff stench of a lie wafting up to Rouga’s nose. As though he’d sensed this, Hans added two truths to his statement. “I’m only a junior officer; I’m not part of the upper-echelon command structure.”

Rouga’s fist flashed and plowed into Hans’ jaw, sending a few flecks of blood to the floor as it split his lip. “That was rule number three in effect,” Rouga growled. “Don’t bother lying to me; I can tell when you do. The last two parts are true, but to say you have ‘no clue’ is a downright lie.”

Hans’ gasped subtly, giving further proof to his lie. “No way,” he muttered. “Then you’re…”

Rouga punched him again, harder this time, snapping his head to the side from the force of the strike. “That was rule number one. Who I am doesn’t matter; you’re the one you should be worrying about.” He grabbed Hans by the hair and yanked his head up to face him. “Tell me what I want to know.”

Hans’ only response was an angry, pained scowl.

Rouga sighed, rocking Hans’ head back and stepping back slightly. “I see that I’ll have to do this the hard way,” he said stonily. He snatched one of Hans’ fingers and bent it back sharply, breaking it with a loud snap and a scream from its owner. “Here’s how this is going to work,” he snarled nastily, releasing the mangled digit. “Each time you don’t answer my questions, I’m going to break one of your fingers. When I run out of them, I’ll move on to your toes. After that…” He leered spitefully, “well, I’ll just have to get creative.”

“You… really are… a monster,” Hans spat between panting breaths. “You’re enjoying this…”

Rouga’s leer turned up into a sadistic smirk. “Maybe so,” he growled. “I’ve been caged for far too long. Now, answer.”

“Never.”

This time, Hans’ finger was snapped so fast he didn’t even realize it had happened until he saw the digit pointing backwards over his hand. Pain screamed into his brain and an ache-ridden howl ripped unbidden from his throat.

“Answer me.”

“**** you!” he screeched. “You-!”

Another snap, another horrible scream. Hans slumped as much as he could while chained to the chair, gasping raggedly for air he couldn’t seem to find. His arm twitched as he registered the loss of three of its digits, each spasm only intensifying the awful feeling.

“You’re running out of fingers on that hand. Maybe I should just cut it off.”

Hans turned his eyes fearfully to face his tormentor. Behind the leer, behind the sadistic façade, Hans could see that Rouga was growing frustrated, and was struggling with something. Maybe he’s losing his patience. Maybe if I keep it up, I can get him to leave. He hocked up a wad of spit, and let fly straight at Rouga’s face.

He vanished in a blur, his right hand crashing into Hans’ throat and slamming him, chair and all, into the wall as his left drew his blade and rammed it through the wooden seat only millimeters from Hans’ crotch. The spit wad impacted the ground behind him with a pitiful splash.

Hans’ struggled to draw air for a moment before his eyes met Rouga’s and he froze in terror at what he saw. The iris had expanded and covered most of his eye, the pupil a black slash straight through it. However, the dark golden amber color that glared out at him was what truly stopped him cold. Just with that shade alone, the fury and animal instinct were almost palpable. It was inhuman.

“Last chance,” Rouga snarled, his voice layered with power, authority, and the promise of pain and death. “Tell me everything. Refuse, and your demise shall be a mercy at the end of the agony I’ll subject you to.”

Just as fast as he’d attacked him, Rouga released Hans, sending the chair clattering to the floor. Tears of fear and anguish formed in the prisoner’s eyes as he wheezed and babbled every detail he knew of the Jäger’s plans.

***

Upon Rouga’s exit from the interrogation chamber, Niche sat up from the bench where he’d been lying down. “How’d it go?” he asked.

Rouga didn’t respond verbally at first, his eyes closed as he tossed the black recording device that had been on the table to the Squad 2 Captain. “Take that to Ant, and get the Jäger whatever you bribed him with,” he replied, his voice rough and raspy. “Tell Ant that I’ll discuss its contents with him tomorrow.”

Niche glanced apprehensively at the door, and turned back to ask Rouga a question only to find that he was already gone.

***

Rouga stalked through the halls of his barracks, practically radiating irritation and making every Shinigami steer clear. He followed the corridors to his office, finding Senny arguing with Kai, who was once again the Squad 7 Lieutenant after a brief stint as Acting Captain.

“Captain Yamakiri, I can’t let you go in while Captain Kouken is out,” Kai was saying. “Even if he told you to come here, you’ll have to wait for him to let you in.”

“That won’t be necessary any longer,” Rouga stated as he walked up, drawing the attention of both officers. “Thanks for holding down the fort while I was out, Kai. You’re free to go.”

Kai nodded, and Rouga brushed past Senny without even a glance as he flung open the door of his office. “Come.”

Senny dodged the closing door and looked back just in time to watch Rouga flop down in one of the two swivel chairs in front of his desk. “Have a seat,” Rouga offered, the dour edge to the words making them sound like a command.

Senny scowled, something he seemed to be doing a lot around Rouga, and sat in the chair across from him. “I wanted to ask about what Kida told me,” he began.

“You want to know why she considers me a… how did you put it? A ‘heartless monster’?” He continued after receiving a nod of confirmation. “And you also wanted to know why she hates me so much.” He chuckled mirthlessly. “As it so happens, the answers to both questions are one and the same.”

“And the answer is?”

Rouga leveled his gaze with Senny’s, the intensity in his electric blue eyes shining bright. “She holds me responsible for Chii’s death.”

That was perhaps the last thing Senny had been expecting. “But… that’s impossible! Chii disappeared way before Kida could’ve ever met you!”

“How do you know? Neither of us has ever told you when we met.”

Senny’s mouth formed a hard line in irritation. “I’ve narrowed it down to when she and Seijuro both left the Seireitei, searching for a way to control their powers.”

Rouga’s mouth quirked up into a halfhearted smirk. “Pretty smart, kid,” he chuckled, prompting a grimace from Senny at being called ‘kid’. “Now I can see why Rabbit holds you in such high regard.”

Senny’s mind stumbled over the name. “Rabbit?”

Rouga laughed. “Kida.” The expression on Senny’s face could’ve only been described as ‘priceless’. “It’s a long story, but basically, the first time I saw her she was so out of sorts that she was practically terrified. She was like a rabbit trying to hide from a pack of wolves until Chii showed up and made her feel welcome.”

Senny couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “And she lets you get away with calling her that?”

Rouga’s face fell. “She used to, occasionally. Now I count my blessings every time she doesn’t try to kill me with a look.” He cleared his throat, regaining his composure. “Also, what you said earlier about Seijuro and Kida trying to find a way to control their powers was only partially correct. Only Seijuro needed help controlling his Bankai. Kida needed an outlet for her protective instincts, a pack.” He chuckled. “And both of them needed practice with channeling their Fenrir influence without affecting others inadvertently.”

“I don’t really understand what you mean by ‘Fenrir influence’,” Senny admitted.

“You’re not meant to,” Rouga replied dismissively. “To truly grasp the concept, you have to understand and think like a wolf and also understand it in terms of human emotions. The intricacies of it will be lost on a normal Shinigami.”

“But…”

“No,” Rouga snapped. “I’m not going to explain it to you. It has no bearing on your questions and quite frankly it’s none of your business because you’re not a Fenrir. If Kida sees fit to share it with you I can’t exactly stop her, but I’m not going to tell you anything.”

Senny raised his hands defensively. “Fine, fine, no need to be a jerk about it,” he muttered.

Rouga only gave him a cold look. “It’s pretty much your fault that I’m acting this way. If you hadn’t gotten in my face before the interrogation my control would be a hell of a lot better than it is now. I nearly killed that Jäger because you’d gotten my hackles up before an extremely trying time.” Senny cringed at the implied accusation as Rouga continued. “As long as you’ve been around Seijuro, you should’ve known better than to do that to a dominant Fenrir. We’re temperamental, we have short fuses, and we respond to any sort of challenge as a direct threat to our safety and authority. You have no right to demand anything from me; much less something you don’t have any reason to know.”

Senny winced at Rouga’s harsh tone and the way his eyes lightened and became flecked with gold, sure signs that the wolf was close to the surface. He looked down and away, hoping to diffuse some of the tension. “I’m sorry,” he muttered. “I didn’t think…”

“Damn right you didn’t,” Rouga scoffed, “but I’m not a complete *******. You’ll get the information you asked for, and then I hope you’ll be content to leave me in peace for now.”

Doubtful, Senny thought, his eyes still on the floor. “Sure.”

Rouga sighed, then leaned back in his chair, shading his eyes with a hand until they turned back to normal and stopped glowing. “Now then… Kida and Seijuro came to us about a century ago. Seijuro came because he needed to control his Bankai and reinforce his technique for keeping the wolf under control; Kida came because she’d never received any formal training on how to control her wolf. With too much weighing on Kida, she needed to be around her own kind, which would allow her an outlet for her instincts and practice controlling them.”
“Things went well at first,” he stated fondly, possibly thinking back on good memories. “Kida was a bit timid early on, but the minute she found out that Chii had been alive, and here, the whole time, she gradually opened up to the rest of us. Seijuro took well to the training, and both of them decided that sticking around for a while would be a good idea.” He laughed. “They stayed for ten whole years.”

“Seriously?” Senny asked, dumbfounded. “Why that long?”

Rouga still chuckled. “Think of it this way: Kida and Seijuro were mistrusted, feared, or reviled by many people for much of their life. In joining the pack, they found not only a place to belong, but also a place where they’re appreciated or at least acknowledged by everyone. They were happy.”

“I guess so,” Senny muttered, smiling faintly. “Anyway, I’m guessing that it couldn’t last.”

“Got that right,” Rouga growled, remembering the events as though they were yesterday. “Damn Gintakai. If it weren’t for him, none of us would be in this mess. Seijuro might still be alive, and Zeruda wouldn’t be nearly as big of a threat as she is now.” He turned his gaze to Senny, his tone now bitter with the smallest touch of fear. “He overthrew the Alpha, and took over the pack completely.”

Senny shuddered at the notion of anything that could scare Rouga. “Who was he?”

Rouga clasped his hands together and leaned forward, staring at the ground with his smoldering glare. “He was the pack enforcer, and our second. The position should’ve gone to me, the third, but I had refused on the grounds that I wouldn’t be around in situations that necessitated my services because I was out gathering intel on the Jäger so often. Our fourth wasn’t quite powerful enough to deal with the demands of the position, so it naturally fell to Gintakai.”

“What does the enforcer do?”

Rouga grimaced. “Honestly, ‘assassin’ is the euphemistic way to put it. They’re to kill off threats to the pack and make ‘examples’ of traitors.” Rouga looked up, his eyes glittering with suppressed regrets. “Usually, the enforcer is the third because if they were to become a traitor the second could still take care of them. If the second goes rogue, then it automatically becomes the Alpha’s responsibility to kill them, as they’re the only one capable of it, usually.”

Still more questions sprang to mind, but Senny asked the most poignant one. “How strong is the usual pack?”

“You mean in terms of ranks?” he asked. “Usually, the ranks above the first seven are all Captain-class or stronger. From there it varies; the power jumps can be either exponential or tiny depending on their dominance. Hell, power doesn’t have to go in order; ranking is determined by dominance alone.”

“And how strong is Gintakai?”

He grimaced. “Too powerful. If there’s any being in the universe worthy of the title of ‘monster’ or ‘demon’, it’s him. I wouldn’t stand a chance against him in a straight fight. At best, I might manage to inflict a semi-serious injury before being killed.”

“How’d he manage to hide it?” Senny asked. “That power should’ve been obvious to everyone in the first few ranks, right?”

“I have no idea,” Rouga admitted, still staring at the floor. “He managed to hide his dominance too, faking it most likely. However he did it, it was effective. He killed the Alpha, and took us all by surprise. The backlash from our Alpha’s death had immobilized or numbed most of us completely, and no one could resist him.” He shook his head. “Of the ones unaffected were my younger brother, Kida, Seijuro, myself, and Chii.” Rouga met Senny’s eyes again, his stare grave. “Chii was the Alpha’s mate. She died trying to avenge him. My brother went to protect our younger sister, and I took Kida and Seijuro with me, to escape. They argued every step of the way, but they both knew that the fight was lost the minute Gintakai revealed his full power.”

“Why them?”

Rouga shook his head. “I couldn’t take anyone else. My sister needed to be protected, and my brother was the logical choice. Plus, if Kida and Seijuro went missing, the Soul Society wouldn’t have stood idle, and that probably would’ve resulted in an all-out war between the Shinigami and the Fenrir, which I doubt that either side would’ve really won.” He closed his eyes and leaned back, looking old and weary far beyond his appearance. “I wasn’t thinking clearly; I would’ve tried to take my siblings too but it wouldn’t have worked.”

Senny nodded, understanding. “So why let Kida keep hating you? Why not just tell her the truth?”

“If it prevents her from hating herself unfairly, I’ll gladly be the target of her anger,” he answered softly. “It’ll keep her focused on preventing any more loss of life rather than wallowing.”

“Is that it? Just pure logic?”

Rouga turned to Senny, opening his eyes as the yellow orbs of the wolf took hold. “The other reason she’s so wary of me is because I’m partially immune to her empathy. The only emotion she can feel from me is anger, and she doesn’t understand that. She thinks that I’m ‘acting’ the rest of the time; that my other emotions are just masks that I put on and take off to fool normal Shinigami.” He held his stare at Senny, power enveloping the Squad 8 Captain as he spoke again, voice growing deeper and gaining a growling tone. “Don’t tell Kida any of this. If you do, it’ll negatively affect her focus on the upcoming war.”

Despite the choking thickness of the air around him, Senny spoke. “Why tell me then?”

Rouga’s golden eyes were cold with the promise of death and burning with suppressed anger. “Because you’re one of the people I can trust to leave me to die.”

Senny’s eyes widened. “You want to… die?”

“Shinigami may be nearly immortal, but it doesn’t mean that time doesn’t wear on us heavily. We’re not supposed to live past 400, else we fixate on our motivations and become obsessed and hateful.” Rouga turned his gaze away, now staring out the window as the power surrounding Senny faded causing him to gasp slightly. “I’m over six-hundred years old, Senny, and I’ve been a murderer in almost all of them. I’ve ended thousands of lives, yet I can’t even save my student or protect my siblings. The last thing I can do is to fix the biggest mistake in my life and die with some sense of success.”

Senny couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “What about your siblings?” he half-shouted, lurching out of his chair and glaring at Rouga. “How can you just leave them to die?”

The air in the room stilled at his statement, and when Rouga looked back at his fellow Captain, his eyes had darkened. Now dark golden and glowing like searchlights, his iris was completely split by the slits of his pupils. “No one can defeat Gintakai,” Rouga replied, his voice deathly quiet and full of menace. “He’s the closest any Shinigami has ever gotten to a god using their power alone. His command over the pack is absolute, and even I can’t resist his influence if he gets close enough.” He glared at Senny until the latter dropped their gaze to the floor. “Only an Omega would stand any chance against him, and Kida isn’t powerful enough. They can’t be saved at this point.”

“So you’re just going to give up?” Senny muttered darkly to his shoes. “You coward.”

The next instant was a blur and Senny found himself pinned to the wall with Rouga holding the collar of his Shihakushou. The look in new Captain’s eyes had now changed completely. No more anger, no more pain or bloodlust; now only pure force of will and lethal intent glared out at him. “You are ignorant, Senny Yamakiri,” Rouga hissed, his voice coming out more like an animal’s growl than a human’s words. “You have no comprehension of what it is like for someone to exert such control over another. You have no concept of his power, nor do you have any idea what makes him a monster. You know nothing. You do not even realize when you’re pushing Rouga too far.”

Senny’s eyes widened and he gasped sharply, not missing the third person reference. Rouga isn’t here right now…

“I should kill you for your insolence,” Wolf-Rouga continued, “but unfortunately, you are more useful to us alive. Be grateful that Rouga knows how to hold me back so well.” He reared back and hurled Senny out the door of his office and into the hall. “If you were wise, you would fear Gintakai,” Wolf-Rouga stated as he turned away, but he looked back just as he shut the door to his office, “and you would fear me as well.”

“I told you so,” a female voice called from behind Senny as the door closed. He rolled over, noticing Kida was leaning against the wall, her eyes a dazzling opaline white with harsh black slashes through the iris. “He’s a monster.”

Senny grimaced. “How much did you hear?”

“The tail end of it, just before he ‘removed’ you from his office,” she said, nary a trace of humor in her voice. She turned away, tail swishing as she swaggered down the hall. “Come. I need to calm down, and being in his territory is decidedly not helpful.”

Senny scrambled to his feet, marveling at how Rouga could inspire such fear, and yet was only a coward himself as he followed Kida out of the barracks.
__________________________________

So, nothing really happened. Rouga's scary as hell. Senny doesn't know when to stop pushing buttons. Niche is confused. Kida is angry. Also, there's someone who scares even Rouga? Wow.

Gintakai means "silver death", which refers to the myth that silver is deadly for werewolves. The events in this chapter are mostly relevant to the sequel, as well as the upcoming war with the Jager.

Next chapter will focus on the war effort and Ant and Rouga's efforts to prepare the Shinigami for it. It'll also have Kai making an important appearance, and Dauc's entrance.

Character List (In no particular order):

Niche Neeja (Cell)

Rouga Kouken (Eon Master)

Senny Yamakiri (Senbonzakura)

Hans Maier

Anternero Aielpy (I Like Pokemon(...) )

Kai Blaize (CyberBlaziken)

Kida Ookami (Northern Lights)

Seijuro Arashi

Feel free to destroy this, ILP, MC.

*Cracks Knuckles* Here we go.


Overview: This chapter was in fact filler. It did how set up a few plot points and gave us more in-depth looks at Rouga and Senny. Niche and Kida got some screen time as well, though this really a Rouga-centric chapter. This chapter strong point was informing us of back-story for several characters as well as showcasing Rouga's personality and parts of his true nature.
It was an intense chapter, running of the emotion of several characters to make us forget that nothing big is happening.

Settings: This pretty much just happens in two rooms really. The interrogation room and Rouga's office. I could picture both in my mind, but thats mostly from the anime. I did like the bits of description mixed in with the dialogue and overall action. Both locations had pretty much only one-on-one interaction between characters and the fact no one else was there, added to the intensity of the fic.

Characters (As a Cast): The cast of characters and the emotions they showed, really made this a good filler chapter. Their personalities and reactions to things show us lot about them as well as makes us want to know about them. They had nice synergy with each other, making dialogue seem natural and not forced at all. From here I'll speak of each character individually.

Hans: Poor guy, that's what he gets for testing Rouga and spitting on Niche.
I cringed at some parts of his interrogation, though he did bring must of it upon himself.

Niche: He was timid in this, though I wouldn't picture him as the type to be freaked out of torturing information out of people. Just talk to him on MSN, you'll learn how to kill with kilts. you established his character a bit with what little screen time you gave him, so overall, nice interpretation.

Kida: Needs hugs, nuff said. XD She had the least amount of screen time in this chapter, but she showed up a bit in the back-story. I want to call this a cameo from her, since aside from a few words with Senny, she really didn't do anything other than end the chapter.

Senny:Is going to die soon. His care and devotion to Kida and her feels shine as clear as day in this chapter. Going so far as to push Rouga into his Wolf -ego, in order to get his questions and concerns answered. I say this interpretation came off well, granted I don't think would be the type to push other buttons like that. Though the fact Kida is involved, excuses the OOC-ness from him.

Rouga: The star of the fic. Dominance, Rage, Torment, Regret, Pain, Fear and Guilt all strike the reader with intensity as he goes from interrogation to a chat with Senny. His complexity comes across quite well, the way to talks to Niche , Hans and finally Senny, all showcase his personality and nature to various levels and degrees. A tortured soul only living to get what he thinks needs to get done. I have no idea how you'll get him to saty a Captain and not just pass on and die after this story....unless the Sequel has something for him to chase after.

Conclusion: This chapter did what it had to do, it was filler, but it didn't waste our time. It fleshed out Rouga and Senny a lot as well as set up a few plot points for later.

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 2:58 AM
Err... Where am I in the first page? Because I don't really see my name anywhere recorded.
Anyway heres another banner.

Ulquiorra's 2nd transform.
http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png

http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png

arceus03
17th September 2011, 5:35 AM
It be surprised if there isn't.

lol, I don't think so. Most are just names and graduating years. And stuff like "In memory of" or "I love you mom"


Well yeah, that kind of writing I don't really like. But if its something I'm really into like story writing, I can do for days.

Yup. Though sometimes you get writer's block when you start writing stories


We some another thing in common. We're "great" at procrastinating.

8D



Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P

Thank you for the link. I would have imagined the blade looked otherwise. XD


Anyway it seems that the storyline on anime and manga is messed up not to mention the filters and the stuffs are all mess'd up too...

How is the manga storyline messed up?

The anime isn't messed up really, just that the filler doesn't tally with the canon storyline - like they go into filler episodes just by mentioning them in Shinigami's Cup and no continuity from the canon.



So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*

OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.

Gonna miss him =(

Bye =D


I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.


I like the first one. The font looks a bit... messy, but that might be me.


No matter how well hidden the god moddy powers are. *looks at EVERY Captain*

That includes YOU, Ojii-san


Yes, with the dragonwolf gone, NOBODY can stop my global conquest! Now to get rid of that mermaid, Lazy wolf and proverb talking Panda. *plots*

Who has a mermaid spirit? XD


Do eeeeeeeeeeeeet

Wait until it becomes inactive


Who said I was referring to that data?
Also, can't be bothered to look at/collect that data, so just go with a yes :p

lol, then what other data you mean?
... Unless you were joking. XD


PROCASTINATORS UNITE!
...Another day.

Oh God I LOVE this! XD


Hmm...maybe I should make one :p

You should. 8D And put your bonnet-wearing Soi Fon there.


*Look at you* XD

*Joins*


EDIT - As I was doing it, something occurred to me. Not sure why I ever thought of it before, but should I put a section in the Zanpakutou format for 'sealed details'? I think it might be a good idea

That could work. We all have different sealed forms anyway. At the very least, the guards are different.


Chapter 5: Fear of Courage

WHEEEEEE



But i need to know which character you guys want me to do?

UNOHANA PLEASE! =D


Err... Where am I in the first page? Because I don't really see my name anywhere recorded.
Anyway heres another banner.

It's in the spirits section, number 20. Check the second post, not the one. ILPy usually does the updating until Golde comes on and edits the first post. Or choose a Squad quick before Golde edits the first post. =D Squad 4 offers you cookies and fun! The only requirement is that you cannot be squeamish with blood. Come and apply!

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th September 2011, 5:49 AM
I got real bored so i wanna train my smudge banner :P
Feel free to use if you dont mind my poor arts.
Also give me some comments on the smudge banner.

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/nodfgw.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png

http://i54.*******.com/xc6i5k.png


Siiiiiick. That is all I can say.


Simple. No one should really have a problem with it. Compared to other zanpaktou here, it' refreshing a bit to see one that doesn't need to be shot down for being godmoddy. No matter how well hidden the god moddy powers are. *looks at EVERY Captain*


I know, I felt "weak" because the only thing my old bankai was make things explode.




*Bro fist* Rain = Win.
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Rain is like explosions, add to any situation to enhance the mood.




Got this response from him:



So, yeah, I think we can consider his spot as Captain in 8th up for re-assignment... *sad face*

OT - Not here until Sunday afternoon =3 play nicely kiddies.




He will be missed. :c
Yes, with the dragonwolf gone, NOBODY can stop my global conquest! Now to get rid of that mermaid, Lazy wolf and proverb talking Panda. *plots*


Awww, I was hoping for a chance to meet him :(



Who said I was referring to that data?
Also, can't be bothered to look at/collect that data, so just go with a yes :p


Your Ant, when do you not look at charts, numbers and data?


Err... Where am I in the first page? Because I don't really see my name anywhere recorded.
Anyway heres another banner.

Ulquiorra's 2nd transform.
http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png

http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png

I think someone will approve of this.



lol, I don't think so. Most are just names and graduating years. And stuff like "In memory of" or "I love you mom"


Dawwwwww. That is money well spent.




Yup. Though sometimes you get writer's block when you start writing stories


Doh, I hate having writers block.



Who has a mermaid spirit? XD


Mermaid? Where?



lol, then what other data you mean?
... Unless you were joking. XD

Thats what I was asking myself.




UNOHANA PLEASE! =D


I actually didn't see that coming :P.

arceus03
17th September 2011, 6:01 AM
Awww, I was hoping for a chance to him :(

You were hoping for a chance to him. XD


Dawwwwww. That is money well spent.

I found this AWESOME image (http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSKtCnSaeQmSBCL7NzqY4EzFy6oV4ZWR %20%20c_QpLrO7JJw5sADlzOLyUJ4Sie_) I'm gonna post everytime I get a d'awwww moment. XD But yeah. Agreed.


Doh, I hate having writers block.

Who doesn't?


Mermaid? Where?

idk, MC said mermaid. *shrug*


Thats what I was asking myself.

First I thought he was referring to the battle charts data, so I said that you could easily change that one if it doesn't fit. But then he said it's another data, so I'm assuming it's another "data" he has as the 12th Squad Captain. Told you I'm slow at getting jokes XD


I actually didn't see that coming :P.

Ahahahaha you need to be more familiar with me :p

minchan
17th September 2011, 6:17 AM
GAHHH Every time I look at those banner things I remind myself that I suck at making cool graphics... LOL

Blackacer, what program do you make those in?

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 6:41 AM
Photoshop CS5.1 Extended o.O
Heres another banner , which kinnda look suck lol
http://i55.*******.com/72yis8.png
For some reason i kindda suck at making human banners i prefer hollow banners

BTW : how to apply for squads or something?

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th September 2011, 6:58 AM
You were hoping for a chance to him. XD


*facepalm* I fixed it :P.



I found this AWESOME image (http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSKtCnSaeQmSBCL7NzqY4EzFy6oV4ZWR %20%20c_QpLrO7JJw5sADlzOLyUJ4Sie_) I'm gonna post everytime I get a d'awwww moment. XD But yeah. Agreed.


xD



Who doesn't?


Touché



idk, MC said mermaid. *shrug*
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That would be a cool Zan spirit though.

[QUOTE=arceus03;13445130]
First I thought he was referring to the battle charts data, so I said that you could easily change that one if it doesn't fit. But then he said it's another data, so I'm assuming it's another "data" he has as the 12th Squad Captain. Told you I'm slow at getting jokes XD


I thought he was talking about my hex and octo stats.



Ahahahaha you need to be more familiar with me :p

Luckily I'm sticking around for a while.


GAHHH Every time I look at those banner things I remind myself that I suck at making cool graphics... LOL


I know, I'm kinda jelly.


Photoshop CS5.1 Extended o.O
Heres another banner , which kinnda look suck lol
http://i55.*******.com/72yis8.png
For some reason i kindda suck at making human banners i prefer hollow banners

Suck?!?!? It's better than anything I could ever make.

minchan
17th September 2011, 7:49 AM
LOLIKR I can't do that either. orz Though I feel like I just said that... XD I think I did. ^^;

Also, Rex, your new zan has an error. "Senshi no" is NOT "warrior of" but rather "warrior's" or "of warrior... So "warrior of xxx" would become "xxx no senshi". Just saying, and you may wanna fix that. XD

My Japanese grammar isn't good enough to nitpick the specific words though. But since that error was pretty basic, you might wanna just fix that. Swap the two words around the "no" and it's fine, in terms of sentence structure. "No" is used like the English "of" BUT the words that come before and after are swapped.

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th September 2011, 8:17 AM
LOLIKR I can't do that either. orz Though I feel like I just said that... XD I think I did. ^^;

Also, Rex, your new zan has an error. "Senshi no" is NOT "warrior of" but rather "warrior's" or "of warrior... So "warrior of xxx" would become "xxx no senshi". Just saying, and you may wanna fix that. XD

My Japanese grammar isn't good enough to nitpick the specific words though. But since that error was pretty basic, you might wanna just fix that. Swap the two words around the "no" and it's fine, in terms of sentence structure. "No" is used like the English "of" BUT the words that come before and after are swapped.

Yeah, Jin pointed out that/something similar to it earlier. And alls I can say is......I blame MC (Sorry bro.) :p. He provided the translated words. But blame is a two way street, I have literally have no real knowledge of Japanese grammar and just strung them together.

But ILP hasn't edited my profile to add the new zan so the it will be fixed soon.

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 8:30 AM
I wanna join a squad :P
Who wants me? O.o

MasterCharizard15
17th September 2011, 8:50 AM
Yeah, Jin pointed out that/something similar to it earlier. And alls I can say is......I blame MC (Sorry bro.) :p. He provided the translated. But blame is a two way street, I have literally have no real knowledge of Japanese grammar and just strung them together.

But ILP hasn't edited my profile to add the new zan so the it will be fixed soon.

Yeah, Jin, Min and Eon are the ones to go to for correct translations.
None of them got anything on my manly eyebrows though.


I wanna join a squad :P
Who wants me? O.o

Hello, I'm Captain of Squad 6 of the Bleach club.

To join a squad, you have to ask the Captain of whichever squad you want to join.
Though, you might have to wait for a lot of them, as we had a lot of people join and just stop coming.
As for making an Art page, all you need to do is make it, just like you would a normal post.
Just label it as your art page and posts the banners you've done so far under a spoil tab labeled 'Banners' or 'Smudge banner', however you want to label it.

Welcome to the club. I hope you enjoy it here.

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 9:20 AM
Lol you just simply copied them.
Anyway who got some idea for me to make banner maybe which character?

PKMN Trainer Rex
17th September 2011, 9:31 AM
Yeah, Jin, Min and Eon are the ones to go to for correct translations.
None of them got anything on my manly eyebrows though.


Now I know where to go for a lesson in Japanese grammar. I'm gonna miss the Engrish name we gave it, though.


Anyways, what's up with the red letters?


Lol you just simply copied them.


Well, its pretty much the same for all captains.



Anyway who got some idea for me to make banner maybe which character?



UNOHANA PLEASE! =D


^^^And there is your request.

MasterCharizard15
17th September 2011, 11:12 AM
Lol you just simply copied them.
Anyway who got some idea for me to make banner maybe which character?

Yourichi would be nice.

What power do you wish got more screen time/explanation/more use?

Shunko and...Kido in general.
Spells...I need spells...

How else are Arc and I supposed to unleash unholy wrath on everyone? Ignore the other things we have and can do...<,<

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 11:47 AM
As Arceus requested. Unohana Retsu
http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png

http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png

I like Pokemon (...)
17th September 2011, 12:20 PM
Yeah for some reason i dont really like making other banners other then anime characters lol.

But i need to know which character you guys want me to do?
Well, Kida has already done some of the Captains (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10806256&postcount=331) (that, btw, is what an art page should look like; some kind of heading, and then spoilers that have all of your banners/sprites/icons/whatever). Though you say that you're better with Hollows, how do you feel about Arrancars? I think going through the 10 Espadas would look quite nice.

*Cracks Knuckles* Here we go.


Overview: This chapter was in fact filler. It did how set up a few plot points and gave us more in-depth looks at Rouga and Senny. Niche and Kida got some screen time as well, though this really a Rouga-centric chapter. This chapter strong point was informing us of back-story for several characters as well as showcasing Rouga's personality and parts of his true nature.
It was an intense chapter, running of the emotion of several characters to make us forget that nothing big is happening.

Settings: This pretty much just happens in two rooms really. The interrogation room and Rouga's office. I could picture both in my mind, but thats mostly from the anime. I did like the bits of description mixed in with the dialogue and overall action. Both locations had pretty much only one-on-one interaction between characters and the fact no one else was there, added to the intensity of the fic.

Characters (As a Cast): The cast of characters and the emotions they showed, really made this a good filler chapter. Their personalities and reactions to things show us lot about them as well as makes us want to know about them. They had nice synergy with each other, making dialogue seem natural and not forced at all. From here I'll speak of each character individually.

Hans: Poor guy, that's what he gets for testing Rouga and spitting on Niche.
I cringed at some parts of his interrogation, though he did bring must of it upon himself.

Niche: He was timid in this, though I wouldn't picture him as the type to be freaked out of torturing information out of people. Just talk to him on MSN, you'll learn how to kill with kilts. you established his character a bit with what little screen time you gave him, so overall, nice interpretation.

Kida: Needs hugs, nuff said. XD She had the least amount of screen time in this chapter, but she showed up a bit in the back-story. I want to call this a cameo from her, since aside from a few words with Senny, she really didn't do anything other than end the chapter.

Senny:Is going to die soon. His care and devotion to Kida and her feels shine as clear as day in this chapter. Going so far as to push Rouga into his Wolf -ego, in order to get his questions and concerns answered. I say this interpretation came off well, granted I don't think would be the type to push other buttons like that. Though the fact Kida is involved, excuses the OOC-ness from him.

Rouga: The star of the fic. Dominance, Rage, Torment, Regret, Pain, Fear and Guilt all strike the reader with intensity as he goes from interrogation to a chat with Senny. His complexity comes across quite well, the way to talks to Niche , Hans and finally Senny, all showcase his personality and nature to various levels and degrees. A tortured soul only living to get what he thinks needs to get done. I have no idea how you'll get him to saty a Captain and not just pass on and die after this story....unless the Sequel has something for him to chase after.

Conclusion: This chapter did what it had to do, it was filler, but it didn't waste our time. It fleshed out Rouga and Senny a lot as well as set up a few plot points for later.



What I like about your review is you went more generalised, whereas I went more indepth. Oh god am I reviewing your review?

Err... Where am I in the first page? Because I don't really see my name anywhere recorded.
As Arc mentioned, that actual first post gets updated every now and then. The second post (should) get updated as soon as it needs to (like when a new member joins, or a person makes a zanpakutou, etc.). You will be in "spirits", because you haven't yet joined a squad (and MC has explained how to do that).


Ulquiorra's 2nd transform.
http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png

http://i55.*******.com/25svq6x.png
That is AWESOME. I especially love the picture that you used, and the line that goes behind the 2ND TRANSFORM. Definitely saving that.

Yup. Though sometimes you get writer's block when you start writing stories
I get writers block before I start writing.


lol, then what other data you mean?
... Unless you were joking. XD
Well, I have data on join date, birth date, post count (old club, new club, and both together), and some other things I think. So I can probably make up some stuff from there.

It's in the spirits section, number 20. Check the second post, not the one. ILPy usually does the updating until Golde comes on and edits the first post. Or choose a Squad quick before Golde edits the first post. =D Squad 4 offers you cookies and fun! The only requirement is that you cannot be squeamish with blood. Come and apply!Blackacer, you can usually find "squad requirements" on each Captain's squad page (click on the icon in each squad's spoiler with the insignia).

Your Ant, when do you not look at charts, numbers and data?
Like Arc said, it's a different set of data XP
Speaking of, I'm getting ever so slightly closer to organising all the data charts. I think after that, I'll start doing the hardcore analysis again with some new stuff 8D.


First I thought he was referring to the battle charts data, so I said that you could easily change that one if it doesn't fit. But then he said it's another data, so I'm assuming it's another "data" he has as the 12th Squad Captain. Told you I'm slow at getting jokes XD
I have tons of data need moar

Photoshop CS5.1 Extended o.O
Heres another banner , which kinnda look suck lol
http://i55.*******.com/72yis8.png
For some reason i kindda suck at making human banners i prefer hollow banners
I think it looks quite nice. You picked a good picture for Zaraki (though I think the colours look a bit... saturated? I don't know if that's the right word). But the effects on the name is a bit too much, I think, and makes it a bit hard to read. If I may suggest, try remaking that, but behind Kenpachi's hand, have a busy background and plain text - though I know nothing about banner making, I'm almost curious to see what that would look like, and it would be a good way to try some different styles.


But ILP hasn't edited my profile to add the new zan so the it will be fixed soon.
I was under the impression that you would edit the post that is linked to on the first post, sorry. Fixed, anyway.

What power do you wish got more screen time/explanation/more use?

It's not quite a power, exactly, but I think more Quincies would be nice. Having them as an endangered species, and with such cool powers, does get a bit annoying.

Though I think more kidou would be nice, too. We still have a lot of number yet to be shown.

As Arceus requested. Unohana Retsu
http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png

http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png
That, I really like. It's got a nice, simple image of Unohana, and the font suits her, if that makes sense. The way it fades to black around the edges gives a nice focus to the center.

I'll keep bugging you about it, make a fan art page. Just dedicate one page to archive all of your banners, so that they aren't just all over the place, and they can easily be found in the first post.

Blackacer
17th September 2011, 12:25 PM
That is AWESOME. I especially love the picture that you used, and the line that goes behind the 2ND TRANSFORM. Definitely saving that.
I get writers block before I start writing.
Yeah because i remember ulquiorra saying "I am the only Arrancars that has a 2nd transformation and even aizen don't knows about it.


I'll keep bugging you about it, make a fan art page. Just dedicate one page to archive all of your banners, so that they aren't just all over the place, and they can easily be found in the first post.
I have , i kept all them here : [url]http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560 (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10806256&postcount=331)
All my banner regarding animes all goes here.

EDIT :


Well, Kida has already done some of the Captains (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=10806256&postcount=331) (that, btw, is what an art page should look like; some kind of heading, and then spoilers that have all of your banners/sprites/icons/whatever). Though you say that you're better with Hollows, how do you feel about Arrancars? I think going through the 10 Espadas would look quite nice.
Yeah hollows are good for me since i dont have to worry about human's skin colour when i fool around with the colours setting :P

kusari
17th September 2011, 3:48 PM
>Who wants me? O.o

*slowly raises hand*


>Oh god am I reviewing your review?

Yep.


Topic
Specifically Unohana's powers and The bankai of Shunsui and Urahara. For non-shinigami, Quincy and Kido abilities are still pretty vague.


New topic:
What would your Doll be if you were a Bount?
I don't think we've ever done this before and I thought it'd be interesting.

arceus03
17th September 2011, 7:12 PM
I thought he was talking about my hex and octo stats.

Luckily I'm sticking around for a while.


That what I thought too XD

You'd better



Yeah, Jin, Min and Eon are the ones to go to for correct translations.
None of them got anything on my manly eyebrows though.

Who's the mermaid?

Oh for the note... You don't need to wrap the color code tag around each paragraph. Just once at the beginning of your post and once at the end is enough.


How else are Arc and I supposed to unleash unholy wrath on everyone? Ignore the other things we have and can do...<,<

Hey, I can drown people. Or bribe them with cookies. Or inject them with a tranquilizer


As Arceus requested. Unohana Retsu
http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png

http://i53.*******.com/2n67qbr.png

8D OMG THAT. IS. COOL. *saves* Thanks! ^_^
Just wondering, though, where did you get the images? Drew them yourself, or from the anime/manga?



As Arc mentioned, that actual first post gets updated every now and then. The second post (should) get updated as soon as it needs to (like when a new member joins, or a person makes a zanpakutou, etc.). You will be in "spirits", because you haven't yet joined a squad (and MC has explained how to do that).

Eh, he requested to join mine. :p Change that, please. 5th seat. Check my profile, if you want proof...


Well, I have data on join date, birth date, post count (old club, new club, and both together), and some other things I think. So I can probably make up some stuff from there.
Blackacer, you can usually find "squad requirements" on each Captain's squad page (click on the icon in each squad's spoiler with the insignia).

We're all lucky that ILPy is not the kind of people who knocks on your door and say "I know who you are" in that creepy voice. You are a stalker. XD


I have tons of data need moar

I can't imagine the look on your face if you someday woke up and realized that your sister had formatted your computer/laptop

What power do you wish got more screen time/explanation/more use?

Kido would be nice, but 99 magic arts is going to be repetitive, believe me. Look what happened to spells number 31, 32 and 33. Same element, different color. Bleh.
Forbidden spells would be even nicer, but it's forbidden for a reason. >.>
Shikai. It's weird but, only when introducing the shinigami concept Kubo focuses on shikai. After that, it's pretty much all bankai. Esp. Ichigo



I have , i kept all them here : http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560
All my banner regarding animes all goes here.

That's nice, but I think if you could make one post here to post only Bleach banners it would be easier. Or do you want us to link to that page for your banners?


*slowly raises hand*

Sorry, I got him first :p
Though you can offer him Lieutenant seat after some time if you want, since I already have one


Topic
Specifically Unohana's powers and The bankai of Shunsui and Urahara. For non-shinigami, Quincy and Kido abilities are still pretty vague.

Especially the first one. 8D


New topic:
What would your Doll be if you were a Bount?
I don't think we've ever done this before and I thought it'd be interesting.

Ahaha. I don't know if anyone realizes, but Tsukibana is pretty much based on Guhl and Gunter (sp?), the twin's Doll. I'd have pretty much the same ability as my zanpakto for the Doll. Though my item (idk, seal, whatever, that they use to invoke the Doll?) would be a small umbrella as opposed to bottle caps.

I like Pokemon (...)
17th September 2011, 7:26 PM
Yeah because i remember ulquiorra saying "I am the only Arrancars that has a 2nd transformation and even aizen don't knows about it.
Yup, though I think that Aizen DID actually know, since well, he's Aizen.


I have , i kept all them here : http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560
All my banner regarding animes all goes here.
Like Arc said, I think it'd be nice to have a page JUST for this club. I'm sure it won't take much extra effort or time to put a banner on both pages.

Yeah hollows are good for me since i dont have to worry about human's skin colour when i fool around with the colours setting :P
Ah, I see, which means that Arrancar will be just as difficult. Unless you decide to do released Arrancar... I think some don't look very humanoid.

What would your Doll be if you were a Bount?
I... Do not remember anything of the Bount. I think I'll do some research and come back with an answer.

Eh, he requested to join mine. :p Change that, please. 5th seat. Check my profile, if you want proof...
Done.

We're all lucky that ILPy is not the kind of people who knocks on your door and say "I know who you are" in that creepy voice. You are a stalker. XD
Which reminds me, I think I have almost everyone's country/state. Most of these are so it's easier for me to say happy birthday, or find out what time zone people are from, etc. The postcount and join date is simply because that will come in handy someday. I think.


I can't imagine the look on your face if you someday woke up and realized that your sister had formatted your computer/laptop
brb backing up my data ten times over she wouldn't do that though.

Eon Master
17th September 2011, 7:54 PM
So two captains, and a spirit are wolves, so now the whole club has the wolf theme? XP

I am okay with this =D



Recaps are always awesome 8D

PREVIOUSLY ON DRAGON BALL Z...

Alright, that makes sense. Cell is the most recent captain, so he would naturally be a bit timid. The thing is, I think you may be making him a bit TOO timid. How long has it been since he joined? But also, Cell would work with assassinations and the like fairly commonly, so something like an interrogation shouldn't have this much of an effect on him.

I'll be explaining why next chapter. Or rather, you will.

Though it does make sense for Rouga to do the interrogations, as the person is a Jager; so not only does this allow him the opportunity for revenge-threats, but he should know enough about the Jager to know when something sounds off.

Exactly.

Good ol' dark humour. Though would Rouga really care that much about the state of his haori?

Hey, blood is a ***** to get out of fabric, especially white fabric.

Though I see the point of not enjoying causing pain. I still feel he wouldn't hate interrogations. Heck, if he wanted to, he could probably find some creative ways to get the info out.

Next chapter. Although yes, you're on the right track with the pain thing.

Which gives a better idea of the kind of... area the Soul Society/Seireitei is, if they would allow torture. When you think about it, the system that it follows is pretty archaic.

Basically. Also, this is wartime, so they're more lenient with that sort of thing.

Doesn't Senny know that Fenrir have a heightened sense of smell? If so, then he would probably something to help mask his scent, as he knows that Kyokko only blocks sight and reiatsu sense.

It's impossible to completely erase your scent. That's what he'd need to slip past Rouga. Plus, he's trying to appear ignorant of it, remember?

To what extent does Rouga know what his packmates can do? Is it complete telepathy, where you hear every thought? If so, can this be turned on/off? Or is it more like "oh, okay, so I can tell Kida is talking to Senny, and she's feeling a bit angry", or what?

He can tell what they're doing and get a general idea of the content. So it'd be like, "ah, Kida is talking to Senny about Fenrir".

Perhaps this was why he didn't wear his haori? So that the Jager would think he was not a captain?

And to let them know that he's not bound by the regulations of honor like a Captain.

Immediately laying down the rules. As harsh as it is, it would be pretty effective, and a good way to keep him in line.

It's an interrogation; they're supposed to be as harsh as possible.

The rib popping was just evil.

Mwahahaha.

Testing the waters; seeing how close to his word Rouga will go, or how far into torture methods he will go.

Pretty much.

He grinned. That is NOT a good thing at all.

Definitely not.

I think, Hans is equivalent to John, no? What is the meaning of Maier?

It means "farmer". "Hans Maier" is like "John Smith" to an American.

I like the small little details, in particular, how there were more than one, so it didn't seem like he was making up the signals.

Good.

Makes me wonder, how would Rouga react to being in the same position as Hans?

He wouldn't have gotten caught in the first place :p

Once again, evil.

Nice to know it has the desired effect.

What a smart man Hans is.

He's a "genius".

What I really liked about this was the mention of the spit wad right at the end; I was imagining it to happen so quickly, that by the time the blade was in the seat, the spit was about to reach the ground.

Great, I was hoping for that sort of effect.

Ah - that last phrase, and the italicised writing backed up my thoughts; this is Wolfga, isn't it?

Wolfga xD Very funny. And yes, it is.

One thing that stoof out was the contraction at the end, "I'll". I imagine Wolfga to have that rage where he speaks with emphasis on his words, and so he would say each word out. Often. Like. This. In. An. Annoyed. Kind. Of. RAGE.

Ahhh, darn it. I knew I missed at least one contraction! Anyway... Wolfga is actually enunciating clearly and using slightly fancier language because that's his personality. It's not actually because he's angry, it's because he's supposed to convey an air of power and authority as well as the rage that Rouga is in.

Would he call him by such an informal nickname, like Ant? I kind of expected him to say Aielpy.
Though it would be interesting to see what else Rouga and Ant will continue to analyse from that recording.

Rouga isn't much for formality. Plus, his focus is divided because he's trying to hold back his wolf, control his temper, and talk to Niche at the same time.

Someone's not too cheerful.

Gee, I wonder why?

Just the kind of effect that Rouga - and probably Kida too - has on Senny.

xD Why would Kida make Senny scowl?

I don't think I've heard that in a long time XD. In fact, she may have left before I joined...

You've heard it in my and Rotrum's fanfics, lol.

I'm probably overanalysing, but I think the rabbit comment might have a bit more importance. I don't think it would be used ONLY to introduce Kida's relationship with Chii and the rest, or to describe her initial reaction.

You're overanalyzing.

Which means that Ant would either understand it perfectly, or would undestand it less than Senny XD.

The latter. You only use logic, remember?

Someone's touchy

Gee, I wonder why?

Hmm, again, this section stands out a bit. Zeruda probably knows this about the dominant Fenrir, and may use it as bait against Rouga - though whether or not it will work...

Zeruda knows nothing about the Fenrir. She thinks Rouga is just a Shinigami with lots of powers and abilities unique to him.

Which brought the next logical statement that Senny and I both got to:

Basically.

Okay, so we have the (unknown?) Alpha, Gintakai the second, Rouga the third, a weaker fourth, as well as Kida, Chii and Seijuro.

The fourth isn't really "weaker", he's still well above the average Captain-class fighter. There's just a power gap between him and Rouga that's large enough to make him invalid for the enforcer role.

Which reminds me of the lists you posted; how powerful a person is, and how dangerous they are, etc.

I'm glad you remember; that's the sort of thing I was going for here.

So Golde level?

I'm not going to tell you exactly how strong Gintakai is, but here's a general hint: I could probably inflict serious injuries on Golde, possibly enough to disable him, before I died thanks to my planning ability and skill.

Ah, so it was because of Gintakai killing the alpha that it split... I should also add Rouga's younger brother and sister to that list I mentioned a few quotes ago.

Yes on both counts.

So it seems like the "seeds of mistrust" that were sown last chapter by Kida are... mostly thrown away now my Rouga. It explains that the reason why Kida hates him is because she doesn't know the FULL story, and because Rouga is taking the burden of her hate, so it doesn't go on him. Though when I say it like that, it sounds like Rouga COULD just be ********ting half of this.

Do you really think he'd do that?

I'm guessing that the reason how/why it only partially works on him will be explained later?

Good guess ;)

Didn't Seijuro also want to die, not unsimilar to Rouga? Or am I completely mucking that up?

He didn't want to die, per se, he just chose to die then as opposed to trying to delay the inevitable.

First comment - there's something going on behind Ginkatai. This is the closest they've gone without powers - or the closest they've gone with powers that Kouga doesn't know of? Because when you immediately mention god, I think of Aizen and his Hougyoku.

The "with his power alone" bit means that no, he isn't using outside influence. Well, he kind of is for one part, but his Zanpaktou (which is technically his power) is what gives him the ability to do it.

Also, I fixed that line for you.

We'll see ;)

Like the contraction before, using "Senny" and not "Senbonzakura" sounds too informal.

I'm treating Senny as his name in this fic because "Senbonzakura" is the name of a famous Captain's Zanpaktou.

And it is official, his Wolfga is italics.

Yep.

So she still does not know of most of what happened?

Of course not.
__________________________________

Overall, I think this chapter felt like it had quite a bit less... description than I'm used to from you, I think. It's probably becomes 90% of the chapter was dialogue, which is much harder for me to analyse, I think. I hope that the review was up to standards, though I'm feeling a bit disappointed in the review.

That would do it. And that was above and beyond your review so far. I definitely got a few points and some nice criticism from it. Thanks :)





Overview: This chapter was in fact filler. It did how set up a few plot points and gave us more in-depth looks at Rouga and Senny. Niche and Kida got some screen time as well, though this really a Rouga-centric chapter. This chapter strong point was informing us of back-story for several characters as well as showcasing Rouga's personality and parts of his true nature.
It was an intense chapter, running of the emotion of several characters to make us forget that nothing big is happening.

Good, so at least I know how to keep things interesting despite filler-ish chapters.

Settings: This pretty much just happens in two rooms really. The interrogation room and Rouga's office. I could picture both in my mind, but thats mostly from the anime. I did like the bits of description mixed in with the dialogue and overall action. Both locations had pretty much only one-on-one interaction between characters and the fact no one else was there, added to the intensity of the fic.

That was actually my intention, because I knew that wide-scale interaction would dull things down a lot.

Characters (As a Cast): The cast of characters and the emotions they showed, really made this a good filler chapter. Their personalities and reactions to things show us lot about them as well as makes us want to know about them. They had nice synergy with each other, making dialogue seem natural and not forced at all. From here I'll speak of each character individually.

This is really high praise. I'm glad that you think I'm deserving of it.

Hans: Poor guy, that's what he gets for testing Rouga and spitting on Niche.
I cringed at some parts of his interrogation, though he did bring must of it upon himself.

Honestly, even I was cringing while writing the finger-breaking scene. Never tick off a wolf.

Niche: He was timid in this, though I wouldn't picture him as the type to be freaked out of torturing information out of people. Just talk to him on MSN, you'll learn how to kill with kilts. you established his character a bit with what little screen time you gave him, so overall, nice interpretation.

Killing and torturing are two entirely different things. Besides, Ant will give us a bit of background next chapter.

Kida: Needs hugs, nuff said. XD She had the least amount of screen time in this chapter, but she showed up a bit in the back-story. I want to call this a cameo from her, since aside from a few words with Senny, she really didn't do anything other than end the chapter.

*hugs Kida* Yeah, mostly a cameo.

Senny:Is going to die soon. His care and devotion to Kida and her feels shine as clear as day in this chapter. Going so far as to push Rouga into his Wolf -ego, in order to get his questions and concerns answered. I say this interpretation came off well, granted I don't think would be the type to push other buttons like that. Though the fact Kida is involved, excuses the OOC-ness from him.

Not yet he's not. Good, I was hoping for that effect. Yeah, but if he doesn't realize that Rouga's buttons stay pushed once you hit them, he'd get hit anyway. I never thought of him as the kind of guy who was good at picking up cues from other people, especially ones he doesn't know too well.

Rouga: The star of the fic. Dominance, Rage, Torment, Regret, Pain, Fear and Guilt all strike the reader with intensity as he goes from interrogation to a chat with Senny. His complexity comes across quite well, the way to talks to Niche , Hans and finally Senny, all showcase his personality and nature to various levels and degrees. A tortured soul only living to get what he thinks needs to get done. I have no idea how you'll get him to saty a Captain and not just pass on and die after this story....unless the Sequel has something for him to chase after.

You, my friend, have nailed every point directly on the head. Well done.

Conclusion: This chapter did what it had to do, it was filler, but it didn't waste our time. It fleshed out Rouga and Senny a lot as well as set up a few plot points for later.

Phew... that's a relief. Thanks.

MC, I agree with Min, nix on the red font. It doesn't show up any better on GSC background than it does on the default =P

I like Pokemon (...)
17th September 2011, 9:16 PM
PREVIOUSLY ON DRAGON BALL Z...
I knew that had an influence on me...


I'll be explaining why next chapter. Or rather, you will.
Screentime, woo!


Hey, blood is a ***** to get out of fabric, especially white fabric.
I'll remember that the next time I have a nosebleed.

He can tell what they're doing and get a general idea of the content. So it'd be like, "ah, Kida is talking to Senny about Fenrir".

Ah, I see.

It means "farmer". "Hans Maier" is like "John Smith" to an American.
Ah, figured.

He wouldn't have gotten caught in the first place :p
Besides the point.

Ahhh, darn it. I knew I missed at least one contraction! Anyway... Wolfga is actually enunciating clearly and using slightly fancier language because that's his personality. It's not actually because he's angry, it's because he's supposed to convey an air of power and authority as well as the rage that Rouga is in.
Ah.

xD Why would Kida make Senny scowl?
The empathy? Though now I realise, is that only one way?

You've heard it in my and Rotrum's fanfics, lol.
Yeah, I know :p

You're overanalyzing.
XD At least I said it first.


Zeruda knows nothing about the Fenrir. She thinks Rouga is just a Shinigami with lots of powers and abilities unique to him.
Ah, alright. So when he goes Wolf on her arse...

I'm glad you remember; that's the sort of thing I was going for here.
8D


I'm not going to tell you exactly how strong Gintakai is, but here's a general hint: I could probably inflict serious injuries on Golde, possibly enough to disable him, before I died thanks to my planning ability and skill.

Ah, okay...

Do you really think he'd do that?
Weeeeeeeelll


I'm treating Senny as his name in this fic because "Senbonzakura" is the name of a famous Captain's Zanpaktou.
Ah, okay.


That would do it. And that was above and beyond your review so far. I definitely got a few points and some nice criticism from it. Thanks :)
8D

minchan
17th September 2011, 10:33 PM
What power do you wish got more screen time/explanation/more use?

I'll be unoriginal and say Kido like the rest of you. XD But seriously, I hate looking them up and seeing only about 20 or so (haven't counted one by one, mind you) even though there's supposed to be like 100 of each kind. (Hado, bakudo... There are supposed to be a lot like that, right?) Well anyway I need to know more!!! XD XD XD

Because, well, you know, I'm me.

arceus03
18th September 2011, 12:56 AM
idk why MS Word decides to be a nitpick and copies every formatting from SPPf. And that includes the green background. What the heck?



“Shinigami may be nearly immortal, but it doesn’t mean that time doesn’t wear on us heavily. We’re not supposed to live past 400, else we fixate on our motivations and become obsessed and hateful.”

Eh, Yamamoto doesn't seem to be that way :p


“Only an Omega would stand any chance against him, and Kida isn’t powerful enough. They can’t be saved at this point.”

Why only the Omega? has forgotten all the wolf explanation we had last chapter


“He’s the closest any Shinigami has ever gotten to a god using their power alone. His command over the pack is absolute, and even I can’t resist his influence if he gets close enough.”

Aizen

There's one thing I'm confused... How is it the setting for the pack and shinigami? (Sounds weird, I know). I mean like, how are they different? Kida/Seijuro are in the pack and are Captains as well, so how does that work? Do the pack live together? Is the pack sort of like a different "group", like the noble families? (except maybe they're not known to public, as opposed to the noble families) Is Ace also in the pack?

And interrogation... I daresay Ed's method is more... "gore", but maybe with less details. :p



Ah, I see, which means that Arrancar will be just as difficult. Unless you decide to do released Arrancar... I think some don't look very humanoid.

True. Look at Zommari.


Done.

Thankyou =)


Which reminds me, I think I have almost everyone's country/state. Most of these are so it's easier for me to say happy birthday, or find out what time zone people are from, etc.

Does "or easier for me to stalk them" fall under "etc."?


brb backing up my data ten times over she wouldn't do that though.

I shall tell her to


What power do you wish got more screen time/explanation/more use?

I'll be unoriginal and say Kido like the rest of you. XD But seriously, I hate looking them up and seeing only about 20 or so (haven't counted one by one, mind you) even though there's supposed to be like 100 of each kind. (Hado, bakudo... There are supposed to be a lot like that, right?) Well anyway I need to know more!!! XD XD XD

I just wonder how the shinigami memorize all their Kido spells. Imagine what would happen if they say the wrong number. "Hado #30, Tenran" *nothing happens* "Er, 31? No? 33? Not too? Damnit, which number was it?"

I need two hundred and one more posts to catch up to ILPy. Not going to happen.

Oh, I forgot the customary gift! *gives a bag of chocolate chip and butter cookies to Ace* Enjoy!

Blackacer
18th September 2011, 4:07 AM
Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png

Eon Master
18th September 2011, 4:34 AM
Eh, Yamamoto doesn't seem to be that way :p

Maybe I should've said bitter or jaded rather than hateful. Yamamoto is definitely bitter and jaded, and he's obsessed with maintaining the peace of the Seireitei. Remember the fight with Aizen, when he was willing to sacrifice half the freaking Captains along with himself to kill the bastard? Yeah, he's definitely obsessed, and jaded.

Why only the Omega? has forgotten all the wolf explanation we had last chapter

Because they're immune to the dominance effect. They could stand up to him without having to worry about his influence.

There's one thing I'm confused... How is it the setting for the pack and shinigami? (Sounds weird, I know). I mean like, how are they different? Kida/Seijuro are in the pack and are Captains as well, so how does that work? Do the pack live together? Is the pack sort of like a different "group", like the noble families? (except maybe they're not known to public, as opposed to the noble families) Is Ace also in the pack?

The pack exists outside of the Seireitei's borders, for reasons that will be explained in the sequel. They stay hidden from the Shinigami, and never stay in one place for too long. That way, only other Fenrir (using their natural pack instinct) can find them. Golde knows they exist, but that's only because he's the Head Captain and he wouldn't be able to find them without a mass-mobilization of the Shinigami. As for them being Captains and in the pack, they were taking extended leaves of absense at the time, and the positions aren't technically mutually exclusive. If they'd wanted to go back to the Seireitei, they could have, but they wouldn't have held any position in the pack. And we'll see about Ace, if he sticks around, he'll get a spot.

And interrogation... I daresay Ed's method is more... "gore", but maybe with less details. :p

I wasn't going for gore. That's not interrogation, that's actual torture.

Emboldeth be the comments.

kusari
18th September 2011, 6:24 AM
EDIT - As I was doing it, something occurred to me. Not sure why I ever thought of it before, but should I put a section in the Zanpakutou format for 'sealed details'? I think it might be a good idea
I just went and did this to my zan because I was bored. Also got rid of the reverse grip thing.


Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png
MC's going to love that.


I've officially started work on the next fic. I'm trying to make it different from the last ones especially on the subject of Dac. Just wanted to make it clear.

Blackacer
18th September 2011, 6:29 AM
Maybe i should come up with my bankai :P
Hmm... No more request?

EDIT :


Zanpaktou Name; Gekkō yami no doragun (Moonlight Darkness Dragoon)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P


Bankai Name; Gekko no yami no doragon sutōmuburēdo (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Storm Blade)

Bankai Details; It looks like : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/e9/Vanquisher3.png also the storm blades can be splitted into half as weapon like this : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/ed/Vanquisher2.png. But its a black/white coloured and have a dragon head logo on the storm blade.

Gekkō yami doragon surasshu (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Slash) : Its a more powerful and enhance attack of "Gekkou Supuritta" it creates a powerful spinning crescent moon which also appears a full moon since its spinning.
Yami doragon shīrudo (Darkness Dragon Shield) : By spinning the storm blade it creates a "Aura" Dragon head as a shield that blocks attacks. [Warning! : Very powerful / strong attacks can easily break the shield]
Gekkō no sutabu (Moonlight Stab) : My spamming the storm blade like billiards hitting the billiard ball , the user can shoots its attack it also is a far range attack.

MasterCharizard15
18th September 2011, 7:36 AM
Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png

Awesome. *Sets as his sig*


I just went and did this to my zan because I was bored. Also got rid of the reverse grip thing.


MC's going to love that.


I've officially started work on the next fic. I'm trying to make it different from the last ones especially on the subject of Dac. Just wanted to make it clear.

Okay.

You know well, it seems.

Mhm, good luck.

Maybe i should come up with my bankai :P
Hmm... No more request?

Renji, Hisagi, Matsumoto...those three are win. So pick your poison.



Zanpaktou Name; Gekkō yami no doragun (Moonlight Darkness Dragoon)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P


Bankai Name; Gekko no yami no doragon sutōmuburēdo (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Storm Blade)

Bankai Details; It looks like : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/e9/Vanquisher3.png also the storm blades can be splitted into half as weapon like this : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/ed/Vanquisher2.png. But its a black/white coloured and have a dragon head logo on the storm blade.

Gekkō yami doragon surasshu (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Slash) : Its a more powerful and enhance attack of "Gekkou Supuritta" it creates a powerful spinning crescent moon which also appears a full moon since its spinning.
Yami doragon shīrudo (Darkness Dragon Shield) : By spinning the storm blade it creates a "Aura" Dragon head as a shield that blocks attacks. [Warning! : Very powerful / strong attacks can easily break the shield]
Gekkō no sutabu (Moonlight Stab) : My spamming the storm blade like billiards hitting the billiard ball , the user can shoots its attack it also is a far range attack.



Ryuu= Dragon.
Doragun <Ryuu, since doragun is pretty much a loan word in Japan.

It all looks fine, though until Bankai, the doragon makes doesn't connect with the spirit. Dear grief if we end up with a dragon/wolf again...

minchan
18th September 2011, 7:38 AM
I just wonder how the shinigami memorize all their Kido spells. Imagine what would happen if they say the wrong number. "Hado #30, Tenran" *nothing happens* "Er, 31? No? 33? Not too? Damnit, which number was it?"

Oh wow LOL I never thought of that. But it's funny... Now I want to see a new character who sucks at remembering kido spells. (Maybe someone in the academy or fresh out of it... Something like that.)

If they don't create a character like that ever, be they canon or not, I'll just design them and write a fanfic about them myself. If I can ever get rid of my 8th grade writers' block, the reason I failed English in 12th grade. I'm lucky to be in college right now, since I did so badly. XD Seriously though, more than four years of writers' block... I feel like I NEED to write something, or I'll never be able to write again. XD

I mean, except for rambling. I'm great at rambling, even with written/typed words. =w=

PKMN Trainer Rex
18th September 2011, 8:22 AM
I was under the impression that you would edit the post that is linked to on the first post, sorry. Fixed, anyway.


Ah. Next time I will :p.



Topic
Specifically Unohana's powers and The bankai of Shunsui and Urahara. For non-shinigami, Quincy and Kido abilities are still pretty vague.


^^^That. I also would like to see the mysterious powers of the 3 Captains.


Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png

I'm still jelly.

Is it possible for me to make non-bleach character requests?

Blackacer
18th September 2011, 11:50 AM
Ryuu= Dragon.
Doragun <Ryuu, since doragun is pretty much a loan word in Japan.

It all looks fine, though until Bankai, the doragon makes doesn't connect with the spirit. Dear grief if we end up with a dragon/wolf again...
Doragon and ryu basically means the same thing. Its not spirit its just a name , example your name is named ryuu does that means you're a dragon? Well its just a name no big deal :P


I'm still jelly.

Is it possible for me to make non-bleach character requests?

Lol , its possible as long as its a anime character its fine.

I actually planned to use a super sexy picture for yoruichi but think again it might not be appropriate for the forum and mastercharizard thinks so too.

CyberBlaziken
18th September 2011, 12:02 PM
Guess who's back?

What up people? =D
I'm back, and will be active atleast once everyday.
Update me anyone?

Giriko.. died? Well, Kubo's making me loose interest in Bleach through these chapters, i mean it was okay overall.. but still not up to the level you'd expect. And Yukio just became an annoying b*tch. And Byakuya with his Pride speech, liked it a little. Funny was Rukia-Riruka

And Welcome Acer ( I'll call you that?) to The Bleach Club!
I'm Kai, Lieutenant of Squad 7, nice to meet you =)
Hope you don't die out like some other hopefuls ._.

And congrats too Rex on Lieut./Captain position, you deserve it! =)

I wish I knew Senbonzakura.. MC's fic makes me to get to know him =/

Sorry I can't review either story =/

And Eon, can tweak my Zampakuto a bit? I feel it's relatively weak for a Lieut.

Good to be back B|

Blackacer
18th September 2011, 12:05 PM
And Welcome Acer ( I'll call you that?) to The Bleach Club!
I'm Kai, Lieutenant of Squad 7, nice to meet you =)
[SIZE="1"]Hope you don't die out like some other hopefuls ._.

And congrats too Rex on Lieut./Captain position, you deserve it! =)

I wish I knew Senbonzakura.. MC's fic makes me to get to know him =/

Sorry I can't review either story =/

And Eon, can tweak my Zampakuto a bit? I feel it's relatively weak for a Lieut.

Good to be back B|

Yeah you can call me that.
And thanks. :D

I like Pokemon (...)
18th September 2011, 3:04 PM
idk why MS Word decides to be a nitpick and copies every formatting from SPPf. And that includes the green background. What the heck?
I know, right.

Does "or easier for me to stalk them" fall under "etc."?
If you so wish to <.<

I just wonder how the shinigami memorize all their Kido spells. Imagine what would happen if they say the wrong number. "Hado #30, Tenran" *nothing happens* "Er, 31? No? 33? Not too? Damnit, which number was it?"

Oh god that is hilarious. Anyone up to write a drabble?


I need two hundred and one more posts to catch up to ILPy. Not going to happen.
202

Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png
Wow.


I've officially started work on the next fic. I'm trying to make it different from the last ones especially on the subject of Dac. Just wanted to make it clear.
Awesome. Definitely looking forward to it.

Maybe i should come up with my bankai :P
Hmm... No more request?
If you really want them...
Barragan, Harribel, Zommari and Szayel, all released, please. That should keep you busy.



Zanpaktou Name; Gekkō yami no doragun (Moonlight Darkness Dragoon)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A wolf-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right wolf arm with a wolf tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P


Bankai Name; Gekko no yami no doragon sutōmuburēdo (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Storm Blade)

Bankai Details; It looks like : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/e9/Vanquisher3.png also the storm blades can be splitted into half as weapon like this : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/ed/Vanquisher2.png. But its a black/white coloured and have a dragon head logo on the storm blade.

Gekkō yami doragon surasshu (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Slash) : Its a more powerful and enhance attack of "Gekkou Supuritta" it creates a powerful spinning crescent moon which also appears a full moon since its spinning.
Yami doragon shīrudo (Darkness Dragon Shield) : By spinning the storm blade it creates a "Aura" Dragon head as a shield that blocks attacks. [Warning! : Very powerful / strong attacks can easily break the shield]
Gekkō no sutabu (Moonlight Stab) : My spamming the storm blade like billiards hitting the billiard ball , the user can shoots its attack it also is a far range attack.


MC brings up a good point - the name of your zanpakutou is dragon, though your spirit is a wolf? That sounds a bit... odd.

As for your attacks, they seems fine, nothing odd. Perhaps when you rise in ranks, your attacks should become more powerful in general, and/or you can add some attacks Which is why I waited until I became a captain to post my bankai.

Linked to in the "first" post.


I mean, except for rambling. I'm great at rambling, even with written/typed words. =w=
I think it'd be interesting to review your fic.


Guess who's back?

8D 8D 8D 8D 8D


What up people? =D
I'm back, and will be active atleast once everyday.
Update me anyone?
Well.... Luke has been scared away, Eon continues to post his fic, Arc gains a new fifth seat in Blackacer, a few people have moved down in seats (inactive lieutenants and such), Senny is leaving (though I want to talk with Golde first before I change my post), Rex is moving up a few seats (where exactly still needs to be discussed, I think), MC is writing a fic using Arrancar profiles (prompting many, including me, to revamp their profiles and/or to make fraccion), I'm getting obsessed with charts and data (no surprise). And some other stuff.

Blackacer
18th September 2011, 3:17 PM
SHIKAI EDITTED AGAIN!


Zanpaktou Name; Gekkō yami no doragun (Moonlight Darkness Dragoon)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A dragon-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right dragon arm with sharp claws with a dragon tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P


Bankai Name; Gekko no yami no doragon sutōmuburēdo (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Storm Blade)

Bankai Details; It looks like : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/e9/Vanquisher3.png also the storm blades can be splitted into half as weapon like this : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/ed/Vanquisher2.png. But its a black/white coloured and have a dragon head logo on the storm blade.

Gekkō yami doragon surasshu (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Slash) : Its a more powerful and enhance attack of "Gekkou Supuritta" it creates a powerful spinning crescent moon which also appears a full moon since its spinning.
Yami doragon shīrudo (Darkness Dragon Shield) : By spinning the storm blade it creates a "Aura" Dragon head as a shield that blocks attacks. [Warning! : Very powerful / strong attacks can easily break the shield]
Gekkō no sutabu (Moonlight Stab) : My spamming the storm blade like billiards hitting the billiard ball , the user can shoots its attack it also is a far range attack.





If you really want them...
Barragan, Harribel, Zommari and Szayel, all released, please. That should keep you busy.

Sure thing if i can find their renders i will XD

I like Pokemon (...)
18th September 2011, 3:54 PM
SHIKAI EDITTED AGAIN!


Zanpaktou Name; Gekkō yami no doragun (Moonlight Darkness Dragoon)


Type; Darkness


Zanpaktou Spirit; A dragon-man , with the body of a man with silvery long hair. And a right dragon arm with sharp claws with a dragon tattoo on its chest.


Release Command; Yoru no dansu (Dance in the night)


Shikai Details;
Black crescent blade with a wolf head / logo at the middle(Handle). This long blade can be splitted from the middle making 2 dagger.
Gekkou Supuritta (Moonlight Splitter) : Shooting out ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho but in a shape of a crescent moon.
Rokku no yajirushi (Arrow Of Lock) : Using the cresent blade as a base it fires a black arrow that shoots a person's shadow and lock him in his position not allowing him to move. However strong shinigami with strong reiatsu can easily break free from it


Anything Else; Shikai release with blade that looks like : Link (http://www.google.com.sg/imgres?q=Grandchase+ryan+weapon&um=1&hl=en&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=Vt7rPI27fZhMwM:&imgrefurl=http://gcphilippines.blogspot.com/2011/05/ryan-2nd-job-sentinel.html&docid=kIkH8zSNY83BOM&w=250&h=313&ei=TfRyToi2Asz2mAX249z8DA&zoom=1) Basically the grandchase game which i was playing months back gave me the idea :P


Bankai Name; Gekko no yami no doragon sutōmuburēdo (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Storm Blade)

Bankai Details; It looks like : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/e9/Vanquisher3.png also the storm blades can be splitted into half as weapon like this : http://images.wikia.com/grandchase/images/e/ed/Vanquisher2.png. But its a black/white coloured and have a dragon head logo on the storm blade.

Gekkō yami doragon surasshu (Moonlight Darkness Dragon Slash) : Its a more powerful and enhance attack of "Gekkou Supuritta" it creates a powerful spinning crescent moon which also appears a full moon since its spinning.
Yami doragon shīrudo (Darkness Dragon Shield) : By spinning the storm blade it creates a "Aura" Dragon head as a shield that blocks attacks. [Warning! : Very powerful / strong attacks can easily break the shield]
Gekkō no sutabu (Moonlight Stab) : My spamming the storm blade like billiards hitting the billiard ball , the user can shoots its attack it also is a far range attack.






Sure thing if i can find their renders i will XD
Alright, editted the "first" post with this. Good luck :p


One thing that I wanted to do with the Octa charts is make a new web, because the Hex charts had only one pixel thick webs (which I wanted to carry over), and it would allow for more accuracy, and imo it would look a bit neater. Zam thinks, though, that having more than one pixel thick lines look more natural. What do you guys think?

My chart is a bit bigger, because it allows me to fit all the pixels of the web. I also rearranged the stats so that if you were to put a line vertically down the middle, you would find the opposite on the other side (Offense/Defense, Physical Strength/Kidou [Physical Strength is more "body", while Kidou is more "spirit"], Stamina/Reiatsu [both are sort of like "HP" - reiatsu might be more like PP - and if you run out, it'll be very difficult to continue fighting], and Mobility and Intellect were the only ones left XD). What are your guys' thoughts?
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/PNGOctaBDC.png http://oi52.*******.com/2dgrzn4.jpg
As an example, here is mine:
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ILPOctaBFCBDC.png http://oi53.*******.com/3589q9l.jpg

What are your thoughts? Do you prefer the old or new web?

kusari
18th September 2011, 4:02 PM
Doragon and ryu basically means the same thing. Its not spirit its just a name , example your name is named ryuu does that means you're a dragon? Well its just a name no big deal :P

lolwut. The name most certainly does matter in relation to the spirit, unless you have a vague one like Tenretsujin.

With "doragon" and "ryu", everyone was saying it would sound more natural if you used the Japanese word rather than the English word said with a heavy Japanese accent. And while we're on the subject of translations, Mae is a better translation for "Dance".

MC's zan is Iroriryuu (probably not spelled right). The spirit is "Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail."


I know, right.
I think it'd be interesting to review your fic.

It'd probably be something very happy.


Mmmmmeeeeeeehhhhhhh. (<--- I don't know what this is. I just put it there.)

Ice Heart
18th September 2011, 4:36 PM
Wow. It has been SO long since I've been able to connect with this forum. ( I don't want to go into details) So... Hi guy! I'm back.

Northern Lights
18th September 2011, 7:03 PM
^ 8D My only seated member returns! just as i'm about to leave

WOW, that Art Page is OLD ... I have some more stuff to add I think
Ergh, Uni tomorrow, I should be excited but I am just so depressed. *sigh* Flowers are almost done.

I like Pokemon (...)
18th September 2011, 9:14 PM
Wow. It has been SO long since I've been able to connect with this forum. ( I don't want to go into details) So... Hi guy! I'm back.
Welcome back, Ice Heart! I hope this means you'll stay active.

And here is my new Arrancar profile, and my 2 fraccion! Because some of you have seen them already (and I've made edits where I needed to), I'll add it to my profile page:


Arrancar Name (Spanish): Draco Marinero

Aspect of Death: Obsession

Mask Form/Location: Make up the thin-framed glasses on his face, and a small halo that rests on the top of his head.

Hollow Hole Location: Centre of the forehead, passing completely through. About as wide as a small fist.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Ultra-violet, from between the index and middle finger (pointed like a V). The cero travels like a sine wave.

Physical Appearance: Short, standing at around 5’4; very pale skin (almost as pale as Ulquiorra); long, black spiky hair that covers his forehead and ears, and pure black eyes with deep bags underneath. He wears his Arrancar coat like a lab coat on top of a plain white t-shirt and long, plain white trousers. He wears a pair of thin, white framed glasses and wears a white watch on his right wrist. His rank number is tattooed on his left eyelid, and his blade (a bit shorter than most people’s) rests on his back, from his right shoulder to his left hip.

Personality: Draco is incredibly intelligent, and incredibly logical. He always thinks through every possible situation before making a move, or saying a word; though his incredible thinking speed allows him to do this in seconds. He personally prefers to not say a word, and will often not speak in an entire day unless spoken to, or when somebody is wrong (in which case, he will correct them). He has a very pessimistic view on, well, everything, and thinks that everything will go horribly wrong, or at least as badly as his data allows. He has an incredible memory, in particular to numbers, though peoples’ names tend to escape him. As such, he calls people by various nicknames attached to their description. He tries to avoid other people, or minimise contact with them as much as possible, so he is often just in his laboratory, experimenting on Hollows; if he goes out on a mission, he will try and end it as quickly as possible. He absolutely despises when people are irrational, or impulsive, or have no logical reasoning behind anything.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Caído Ángel
-Release Command: Blaspheme to your God!
-Zanpakutou Base: Fallen Angel
-Physical Appearance:
The mask-spectacles, the halo and his sword first glow bright, then shatter into reiryoku in the wind. For a moment, he looks almost human, until 3 pairs of black wings rip out from inside his back (at his shoulder blades, mid-back, and lower-back). His wingspan is roughly twice his arm span. His shirt and coat gets ripped by the wings, and they fall off, revealing very thin but incredibly tough armour over his entire torso and upper arms (slightly tougher than hierro, but it doesn’t look like a bare chest). He has a white outline around his body, made of tightly compressed reishi.
-Release Details/Abilities:
The basic principle of Caído Ángel is reishi, reiryoku and reiatsu control. Draco’s wings are made up of both reiryoku that he absorbs from the air, as well as his own reiryoku. After releasing, his entire reiryoku reserve is replenished using reiryoku from his surroundings. His reiatsu almost entirely disappears, and only incredibly spiritually aware people (such as the top few Espada and Shinigami) can faintly feel his reiatsu.

He can close his wings around him, with enough space to cover him entirely and one extra person (if need be). These wings can absorb reiryoku and reishi based attacks (kidou spells, bala, cero, and almost all of the Quincy attacks), and will grow extra feathers when he absorbs those attacks. However, if he absorbs too much reiryoku without releasing some through cero or bala, he becomes slower. It’s subtle at first, but as the battle continues, he becomes slower and slower.

These feathers can be eaten to heal wounds, or can be crushed (only by Draco) to spread reiryoku through the air. He can also shoot his feathers at his enemies, but they do not cause much pain or damage, and will instead absorb some of his opponent’s reiryoku, only to shatter immediately.
By compressing the reiryoku that is in the air and from his body, he can create much more powerful cero and bala that explode on contact. Because he shapes them to be more aerodynamic, his bala can almost break the sound barrier.

The small layer of reishi boosts his sonido slightly, but also gives him higher defence (in addition to his hierro). They also allow his physical attacks to cause more damage.

-Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar): He has an incredibly understanding of reiatsu, having a massive range of “sight”, and being able to remember reiatsu signatures that he has met even for only a few seconds. Even when unreleased, he also is completely unaffected by reiatsu pressures, and will actually be able to absorb some of it and turn it into reiryoku.

-Misc: He loves chocolate. Chocolate bars, hot chocolate, chocolate cake, anything made of chocolate. That’s pretty much his diet, really.

Arrancar Name (Spanish): Felicia Triste

Mask Form/Location: A pair of goggles that rest on her forehead.

Hollow Hole Location: Below her lips, through her chin.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Bright yellow, she holds her hands out like a gun.

Physical Appearance: Very short, barely making 5 feet tall. She’s a little bit chubby and has a round face. Her eyes are yellow with a black ring around the iris. She’s slightly tanned in skin, looking possibly North-African. She wears a pilot’s helmet that covers her hair, though when she takes it off; it looks to be short and pale silver. She has the standard Arrancar uniform, with the exception of a fluffy collar and fluffy cuffs (yellow in colour). She has a hexagon (that points up and down) on her back. She looks to be around 14 years old, or so.

Personality: Felicia switches between happy and bubbly, and sad and depressed practically every few lines.

When happy, Felicia has very wide eyes, is very jumpy, and will move a lot when talking (this includes pacing, slightly exaggerated facial expressions, and lots of pointing and waving her hands); she is very animated. She’s talk a bit too loudly, and at quite a high pitch, too.

When she becomes sad, she visibly slouches, and her tone of voice is deeper and more serious, though still feminine. She still uses her hands while she talks, but it becomes more sharp jabs and pokes. She becomes much more violent, and will react much more harshly while unhappy. Her facial expressions range from a frown to a scowl, and everything in-between.

In both forms, she is very organised and almost has an OCD about it. She is effectively Draco’s personal assistant. If she finds that anything is out of order, she will try her best to fix it. She talks to Draco a lot, but a full-out conversation between them is rare. She doesn’t mind, though, as she knows he is listening, and that he cares for her, as her master.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Miel de Abeja
-Release Command: Sting
-Zanpakutou Base: Bees
-Physical Appearance:
Felicia shrinks to around one foot tall. Her top becomes sleeveless and striped black and white. She has stingers on both of her wrists (similar to Suzumebachi), and she grows clear wings on her back. Her lower half becomes like that of a bee, with her sword becoming the stinger (which is about a foot long). She can stay suspended in air for hours at end, and can move at surprisingly quick speeds.
-Release Details/Abilities:
She can repeatedly use the stingers on her hands. At first, they’ll cause a mild sting, but over time, the body part will start to feel number, and become paralysed. From sting to paralysation, is about 20 minutes, but every sting on that body part after the first will halve the remaining time. For example, if she stings your left arm, you have 20 minutes left, after 2 minutes, she stings you again (the remaining time, which would have been 18 minutes, has been halved to 9 minutes). Another 3 minutes pass, and she stings the arm again, so the remaining 6 minutes has been cut down to 3 minute. Altogether, 5 minutes have passed, with 3 minute left to go.

When the stinger on her backside penetrates a person, she can release it from her body; this not only releases deadly, fast acting toxins into the opponent’s body, but it also explodes after being released. The result is almost always death, even with high level shinigami and Arrancar – for both her, and her opponent. This move is a sacrificial one-hit-kill. The attack also releases a sort of… pheromone that makes almost anyone that smells it become more aggressive and offensive.

-Misc: She loves honey, and when treating Draco with a bar of chocolate after a hard day of work, she’ll nom on some honey.

Arrancar Name (Spanish): Carino Jujol

Mask Form/Location: 2 antennae, about a foot long, each from his temples.

Hollow Hole Location: Exactly where his Adam’s apple is, about 2 fingers wide.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: A dark grey, almost black, shot out of the tips of his antennae.

Physical Appearance: Hormiga appears to be around 10 or so years old, wearing a simplified Arrancar uniform that is a bit too big for him. His brown hair is messy and reaches to his chin, which his fringe almost covering his big brown eyes. He has that typical baby face that you just want to pinch and go “awww”. His teeth are quite big and sharp, but he often hides them by keeping his mouth closed, and only barely opening his lips when he wants to talk.

Personality: He almost acts like a little kid in that almost everything he does and say can make people go awww. His innocent and cute behaviour is so sweet that he can give anyone diabetes just by hanging around with him for 5 minutes. Though – and this is hidden from almost everyone – his innocence is a ruse, and he’ll use it manipulatively to get what he wants, in particular from the girls. He doesn’t use it perversely, but he finds that in general, his cuteness affects them more. He doesn’t enjoy fighting, and would much rather just go back to Draco’s lab to play with his machinery. He looks up to Draco, and will try and mimic the way he talks (often mispronouncing words, or getting the numbers mixed up); this only helps his cuteness factor.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Hormiga Lindo
-Release Command:
-Zanpakutou Base: Ant
-Physical Appearance:
An extra pair of arms grow beneath his current pair, and all of his limbs gain a bit of muscle mass (not so much that it looks ridiculous, however). His teeth grow larger and become much sharper, and his sight improves greatly. He becomes much faster at running, though his reaction time does not improve too greatly.

-Release Details/Abilities:
He becomes much more physically strong, being able to lift at least ten times as much weight, which means his punches and kicks are really hard. He also has incredibly powerful jaws, which releases a highly corrosive acid when he bites. Like most other Arrancar, his hierro becomes tougher, but not incredibly so. His fighting style consists of flailing around and hoping to hit things; that is, he has no fighting style. He is incredibly inexperienced in fighting, and this is both because he is still young (relative to Arrancars), and because he does not like fighting at all.

-Misc: Like Draco and Felicia, he has a love of sweet foods.



Gah, MS Word added in formatting bloody everywhere. Fixed it all up. Does anyone think I should have a Spider Fraccion to match the bee and ant? Another bugphobia >D

kusari
18th September 2011, 9:27 PM
Welcome back, Ice Heart! I hope this means you'll stay active.

And here is my new Arrancar profile, and my 2 fraccion! Because some of you have seen them already (and I've made edits where I needed to), I'll add it to my profile page:


Arrancar Name (Spanish): Draco Marinero

Aspect of Death: Obsession

Mask Form/Location: Make up the thin-framed glasses on his face, and a small halo that rests on the top of his head.

Hollow Hole Location: Centre of the forehead, passing completely through. About as wide as a small fist.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Ultra-violet, from between the index and middle finger (pointed like a V). The cero travels like a sine wave.

Physical Appearance: Short, standing at around 5’4; very pale skin (almost as pale as Ulquiorra); long, black spiky hair that covers his forehead and ears, and pure black eyes with deep bags underneath. He wears his Arrancar coat like a lab coat on top of a plain white t-shirt and long, plain white trousers. He wears a pair of thin, white framed glasses and wears a white watch on his right wrist. His rank number is tattooed on his left eyelid, and his blade (a bit shorter than most people’s) rests on his back, from his right shoulder to his left hip.

Personality: Draco is incredibly intelligent, and incredibly logical. He always thinks through every possible situation before making a move, or saying a word; though his incredible thinking speed allows him to do this in seconds. He personally prefers to not say a word, and will often not speak in an entire day unless spoken to, or when somebody is wrong (in which case, he will correct them). He has a very pessimistic view on, well, everything, and thinks that everything will go horribly wrong, or at least as badly as his data allows. He has an incredible memory, in particular to numbers, though peoples’ names tend to escape him. As such, he calls people by various nicknames attached to their description. He tries to avoid other people, or minimise contact with them as much as possible, so he is often just in his laboratory, experimenting on Hollows; if he goes out on a mission, he will try and end it as quickly as possible. He absolutely despises when people are irrational, or impulsive, or have no logical reasoning behind anything.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Caído Ángel
-Release Command: Blaspheme to your God!
-Zanpakutou Base: Fallen Angel
-Physical Appearance:
The mask-spectacles, the halo and his sword first glow bright, then shatter into reiryoku in the wind. For a moment, he looks almost human, until 3 pairs of black wings rip out from inside his back (at his shoulder blades, mid-back, and lower-back). His wingspan is roughly twice his arm span. His shirt and coat gets ripped by the wings, and they fall off, revealing very thin but incredibly tough armour over his entire torso and upper arms (slightly tougher than hierro, but it doesn’t look like a bare chest). He has a white outline around his body, made of tightly compressed reishi.
-Release Details/Abilities:
The basic principle of Caído Ángel is reishi, reiryoku and reiatsu control. Draco’s wings are made up of both reiryoku that he absorbs from the air, as well as his own reiryoku. After releasing, his entire reiryoku reserve is replenished using reiryoku from his surroundings. His reiatsu almost entirely disappears, and only incredibly spiritually aware people (such as the top few Espada and Shinigami) can faintly feel his reiatsu.

He can close his wings around him, with enough space to cover him entirely and one extra person (if need be). These wings can absorb reiryoku and reishi based attacks (kidou spells, bala, cero, and almost all of the Quincy attacks), and will grow extra feathers when he absorbs those attacks. However, if he absorbs too much reiryoku without releasing some through cero or bala, he becomes slower. It’s subtle at first, but as the battle continues, he becomes slower and slower.

These feathers can be eaten to heal wounds, or can be crushed (only by Draco) to spread reiryoku through the air. He can also shoot his feathers at his enemies, but they do not cause much pain or damage, and will instead absorb some of his opponent’s reiryoku, only to shatter immediately.
By compressing the reiryoku that is in the air and from his body, he can create much more powerful cero and bala that explode on contact. Because he shapes them to be more aerodynamic, his bala can almost break the sound barrier.

The small layer of reishi boosts his sonido slightly, but also gives him higher defence (in addition to his hierro). They also allow his physical attacks to cause more damage.

-Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar): He has an incredibly understanding of reiatsu, having a massive range of “sight”, and being able to remember reiatsu signatures that he has met even for only a few seconds. Even when unreleased, he also is completely unaffected by reiatsu pressures, and will actually be able to absorb some of it and turn it into reiryoku.
-Misc: He loves chocolate. Chocolate bars, hot chocolate, chocolate cake, anything made of chocolate. That’s pretty much his diet, really.


Arrancar Name (Spanish): Felicia Triste

Mask Form/Location: A pair of goggles that rest on her forehead.

Hollow Hole Location: Below her lips, through her chin.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Bright yellow, she holds her hands out like a gun.

Physical Appearance: Very short, barely making 5 feet tall. She’s a little bit chubby and has a round face. Her eyes are yellow with a black ring around the iris. She’s slightly tanned in skin, looking possibly North-African. She wears a pilot’s helmet that covers her hair, though when she takes it off; it looks to be short and pale silver. She has the standard Arrancar uniform, with the exception of a fluffy collar and fluffy cuffs (yellow in colour). She has a hexagon (that points up and down) on her back. She looks to be around 14 years old, or so.

Personality: Felicia switches between happy and bubbly, and sad and depressed practically every few lines.
When happy, Felicia has very wide eyes, is very jumpy, and will move a lot when talking (this includes pacing, slightly exaggerated facial expressions, and lots of pointing and waving her hands); she is very animated. She’s talk a bit too loudly, and at quite a high pitch, too.

When she becomes sad, she visibly slouches, and her tone of voice is deeper and more serious, though still feminine. She still uses her hands while she talks, but it becomes more sharp jabs and pokes. She becomes much more violent, and will react much more harshly while unhappy. Her facial expressions range from a frown to a scowl, and everything in-between.

In both forms, she is very organised and almost has an OCD about it. She is effectively Draco’s personal assistant. If she finds that anything is out of order, she will try her best to fix it. She talks to Draco a lot, but a full-out conversation between them is rare. She doesn’t mind, though, as she knows he is listening, and that he cares for her, as her master.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Miel de Abeja
-Release Command:
-Zanpakutou Base: Bees
-Physical Appearance:
Felicia shrinks to around one foot tall. Her top becomes sleeveless and striped black and white. She has stingers on both of her wrists (similar to Suzumebachi), and she grows clear wings on her back. Her lower half becomes like that of a bee, with her sword becoming the stinger (which is about a foot long). She can stay suspended in air for hours at end, and can move at surprisingly quick speeds.
-Release Details/Abilities:
She can repeatedly use the stingers on her hands. At first, they’ll cause a mild sting, but over time, the body part will start to feel number, and become paralysed. From sting to paralysation, is about 20 minutes, but every sting on that body part after the first will halve the remaining time. For example, if she stings your left arm, you have 20 minutes left, after 2 minutes, she stings you again (the remaining time, which would have been 18 minutes, has been halved to 9 minutes). Another 3 minutes pass, and she stings the arm again, so the remaining 6 minutes has been cut down to 3 minute. Altogether, 5 minutes have passed, with 3 minute left to go.

When the stinger on her backside penetrates a person, she can release it from her body; this not only releases deadly, fast acting toxins into the opponent’s body, but it also explodes after being released. The result is almost always death, even with high level shinigami and Arrancar – for both her, and her opponent. This move is a sacrificial one-hit-kill. The attack also releases a sort of… pheromone that makes almost anyone that smells it become more aggressive and offensive.

-Misc: She loves honey, and when treating Draco with a bar of chocolate after a hard day of work, she’ll nom on some honey.



Arrancar Name (Spanish): Carino Jujol

Mask Form/Location: 2 antennae, about a foot long, each from his temples.

Hollow Hole Location: Exactly where his Adam’s apple is, about 2 fingers wide.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: A dark grey, almost black, shot out of the tips of his antennae.

Physical Appearance: Hormiga appears to be around 10 or so years old, wearing a simplified Arrancar uniform that is a bit too big for him. His brown hair is messy and reaches to his chin, which his fringe almost covering his big brown eyes. He has that typical baby face that you just want to pinch and go “awww”. His teeth are quite big and sharp, but he often hides them by keeping his mouth closed, and only barely opening his lips when he wants to talk.

Personality: He almost acts like a little kid in that almost everything he does and say can make people go awww. His innocent and cute behaviour is so sweet that he can give anyone diabetes just by hanging around with him for 5 minutes. Though – and this is hidden from almost everyone – his innocence is a ruse, and he’ll use it manipulatively to get what he wants, in particular from the girls. He doesn’t use it perversely, but he finds that in general, his cuteness affects them more. He doesn’t enjoy fighting, and would much rather just go back to Draco’s lab to play with his machinery. He looks up to Draco, and will try and mimic the way he talks (often mispronouncing words, or getting the numbers mixed up); this only helps his cuteness factor.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Hormiga Lindo
-Release Command:
-Zanpakutou Base: Ant
-Physical Appearance:
An extra pair of arms grow beneath his current pair, and all of his limbs gain a bit of muscle mass (not so much that it looks ridiculous, however). His teeth grow larger and become much sharper, and his sight improves greatly. He becomes much faster at running, though his reaction time does not improve too greatly.
-Release Details/Abilities:
He becomes much more physically strong, being able to lift at least ten times as much weight, which means his punches and kicks are really hard. He also has incredibly powerful jaws, which releases a highly corrosive acid when he bites. Like most other Arrancar, his hierro becomes tougher, but not incredibly so. His fighting style consists of flailing around and hoping to hit things; that is, he has no fighting style. He is incredibly inexperienced in fighting, and this is both because he is still young (relative to Arrancars), and because he does not like fighting at all.
-Misc: Like Draco and Felicia, he has a love of sweet foods.


Looks beutiful, you IckleLittlePervert. Also, way to steal my Aspect of Death.

EDIT:

Arrancar Name (Spanish): Adriana (pronounced Ah-driana) Kroyer (Generally refferred to as Kroyer)

Mask Form/Location: Two scwiggly strips in her hair. They meet in the back where a tendril extends out two feet and has a glowing light on the tip.

Hollow Hole Location: Chest

Aspect of Death: Hostility

Physical Appearance: A young woman. Looks about 19. Long brown hair. Deep brown eyes. Wears a variation of the standard arrancar uniform. A short cut top with a knee length white coat.

Personlaity: She's rather cruel to anyone she doesn't like and isn't above making jokes at their expense. She is confident enough in her abilities to seek out strong opponents.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Gold/Top of wrist (when released, it fires from the tip of her spike)

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base: Anglerfish

Zanpakutou details: dark green hilt, regular bronze tsuba

- Name: Pescador (Angler)

- Release Command: Lure

- Physical Appearance: a cap of bone forms on her head. The tendril on the back grows longer and larger forming two curved spikes around the light. A collar of bone also forms around her neck, obscuring the lower part of her face. Two bone spike form on the top of her wrists.

- Release Abilities: The light has the ability to release electric charges, fire beams of electricity and be used as whip. The spikes can also be charged with electricity.


Arrancar Name (Spanish): Alvaro Lauritzen

Mask Form/Location: A plate around his shoulder

Hollow Hole Location: Center of chest

Aspect of Death: Pride

Personality: One of the nicest guys you'll ever meet. He's extremely polite and courteous. This is just facade, however. He is truely a sadistic, prideful bastard who enjoys torturing for no apparent reason.

Physical Appearance: About seven and a half feet tall. Lean but muscular Mid length brown hair. Slate grey eyes.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Red/from the tip of his spear

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base: Narwhal

Zanpakutou details: a long white spear, resembling a narwhal's horn. Is about six feet long and is generally carried resting on his shoulder.

- Name: Narval (Narwhal)

- Release Command: Pierce

- Physical Appearance: Alvaro becomes significantly more bulky with bone armor on his upper body. A six foot horn forms on his head.

- Release Abilities: He has the ability to dive through any substance as if it were water. However, he moves kind of slow due to the larger size.


Arrancar Name (Spanish): Faye Villanueva

Mask Form/Location: Two curved strips that are across her cheek bones with the point under her eyes

Hollow Hole Location: Abdomen

Aspect of Death: Deception

Physical Appearance: A young girl, looks about 13. Chest length blond hair. Large sea green eyes. She wears a variation of the standard hollow attire, with the top cut short that shows off her midrif.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Sea green/from her palm

Personality: Faye is rather timid, choosing to hide behind Kroyer or Arquero for protection. She's rather childish at times and is only comfortable around those she knows. She hates violence and prefers to act timid and innocent to avoid it at all costs. However, she's not above fighting if she's forced into it. She is fiercly loyal to Arquero and follows his instructions to the letter.

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base: Leafy sea dragon

Zanpakutou details: regular bronze tsuba, sea green hilt

- Name: Mar hoja (Sea Leaf)

- Release Command: Embrace

- Physical Appearance: Eight thin tendrils sprout from her back, each has leaf-like growths. Her arms and chest are covered in bone armor.

- Release Abilities: She can extend her tendrils ad infinitum, using them as whips or piercing weapons. The leaves are razor edged and can be used as cutting weapons if she so chooses.

Misc: She generally sticks to Arquero while travelling, holding his hand in a child-like way.


Note: Arquero, who is referred to a couple of times, is the name of my Arrancar profile. It's on the first page if you want to read it. My Fraccion are also there.

arceus03
18th September 2011, 9:33 PM
Ah, alright. So when he goes Wolf on her arse...


XD I am SO waiting for this moment.


Maybe I should've said bitter or jaded rather than hateful. Yamamoto is definitely bitter and jaded, and he's obsessed with maintaining the peace of the Seireitei. Remember the fight with Aizen, when he was willing to sacrifice half the freaking Captains along with himself to kill the bastard? Yeah, he's definitely obsessed, and jaded.

Because they're immune to the dominance effect. They could stand up to him without having to worry about his influence.

The pack exists outside of the Seireitei's borders, for reasons that will be explained in the sequel. They stay hidden from the Shinigami, and never stay in one place for too long. That way, only other Fenrir (using their natural pack instinct) can find them. Golde knows they exist, but that's only because he's the Head Captain and he wouldn't be able to find them without a mass-mobilization of the Shinigami. As for them being Captains and in the pack, they were taking extended leaves of absense at the time, and the positions aren't technically mutually exclusive. If they'd wanted to go back to the Seireitei, they could have, but they wouldn't have held any position in the pack. And we'll see about Ace, if he sticks around, he'll get a spot.

One massive response to all: Ah, I see.


I wasn't going for gore. That's not interrogation, that's actual torture.

Ed's scenes? More like it, yeah.


If they don't create a character like that ever, be they canon or not, I'll just design them and write a fanfic about them myself. If I can ever get rid of my 8th grade writers' block, the reason I failed English in 12th grade. I'm lucky to be in college right now, since I did so badly. XD Seriously though, more than four years of writers' block... I feel like I NEED to write something, or I'll never be able to write again. XD

Write eeeeeeeet
You had THAT LONG writer's block? XD


Guess who's back?

Hope you don't die out like some other hopefuls ._.

Wheeeeeeee
Welcome back :)

I hope so too


I know, right.

It wasn't like this, was it? >.> I had to clean the formatting, and that means finding the italicized/bolded parts and italicizing/bolding them again. Second option: Set theme to Happy, because it's got an almost white background.


Oh god that is hilarious. Anyone up to write a drabble?

You


202

Two hundred and one.

...Damn, you posted again. Ah well, 202 it is >.>


MC brings up a good point - the name of your zanpakutou is dragon, though your spirit is a wolf? That sounds a bit... odd.

Hey, my zanpakto name is flower, my spirit is a woman. How odd is that?


SHIKAI EDITTED AGAIN!


Alright, I'm putting this post for the link next to your name in the Squad page. Anytime you feel like editing the post again (with valid reasons that is), please edit that post, will you? Thanks =)



One thing that I wanted to do with the Octa charts is make a new web, because the Hex charts had only one pixel thick webs (which I wanted to carry over), and it would allow for more accuracy, and imo it would look a bit neater. Zam thinks, though, that having more than one pixel thick lines look more natural. What do you guys think?

What are your thoughts? Do you prefer the old or new web?

Whichever one. I'm not fussy over how it looks, but the idea of putting related stats on the opposite side of one another sounds good.



Mmmmmeeeeeeehhhhhhh. (<--- I don't know what this is. I just put it there.)

Lack of sleep?


Wow. It has been SO long since I've been able to connect with this forum. ( I don't want to go into details) So... Hi guy! I'm back.

Wheeeeeeee
Welcome back :)
Now why did that felt like deja vu?



WOW, that Art Page is OLD ... I have some more stuff to add I think
Ergh, Uni tomorrow, I should be excited but I am just so depressed. *sigh* Flowers are almost done.

8D Uni! Good luck with that. :p



-Misc:[/B] He loves chocolate. Chocolate bars, hot chocolate, chocolate cake, anything made of chocolate. That’s pretty much his diet, really.

*is eating M&M* OM NOM NOM

Zameric
19th September 2011, 1:07 AM
Wow, there's been a few pages since my last post.
Glad to see the club so active! :D
If only the One Piece club could be as active.

I like your Arrancar profiles, ILP and Kusari. :)
Your fracciones are all pretty interesting.

What would your Doll be if you were a Bount?
I haven't thought about it much, but I think I remember one I came up with. I'll put it here a little later.


Uhh MasterCharizard's Yoruichi banner.
http://i55.*******.com/312ybmv.png
Where'd you find that image of Yoruichi?
I don't remember her wearing that outfit before.


Oh wow LOL I never thought of that. But it's funny... Now I want to see a new character who sucks at remembering kido spells. (Maybe someone in the academy or fresh out of it... Something like that.)

If they don't create a character like that ever, be they canon or not, I'll just design them and write a fanfic about them myself. If I can ever get rid of my 8th grade writers' block, the reason I failed English in 12th grade. I'm lucky to be in college right now, since I did so badly. XD Seriously though, more than four years of writers' block... I feel like I NEED to write something, or I'll never be able to write again. XD
You mean like Renji? Renji sucks at Kido, compared to most other Soul Reapers.
Or do you mean just someone who always forgets the correct numbers/names?


WOW, that Art Page is OLD ... I have some more stuff to add I think
Ergh, Uni tomorrow, I should be excited but I am just so depressed. *sigh* Flowers are almost done.
Woo!~ I've been a bit anxious to see those finished, after seeing the wonderful job you did on Squad 4's.

I like Pokemon (...)
19th September 2011, 1:21 AM
Looks beutiful, you IckleLittlePervert. Also, way to steal my Aspect of Death.
Thank you... I think? I can change the Aspect of Death to pessimism if you want. I just figured "obsession" fit the stalker comments that Circ, Eon and Arc say.
I really like Alvaro, especially how he's manipulative like Carino. Speaking of, I think he and Faye could be good friends. XD

It wasn't like this, was it? >.> I had to clean the formatting, and that means finding the italicized/bolded parts and italicizing/bolding them again. Second option: Set theme to Happy, because it's got an almost white background.
I dunno. But it made the formatting for my profiles so weird. It took me half an hour to clean up all the tags.

You
Me, write? Hahahahahaha. I think everyone who has written a story (so almost everyone in the club) would rip my fic apart if I did.

*is eating M&M* OM NOM NOM
*Steals some*

Wow, there's been a few pages since my last post.
Glad to see the club so active! :D
I know, right. And to think, we were fearing that the club would die.


I like your Arrancar profiles, ILP and Kusari. :)
Your fracciones are all pretty interesting.
Why thank you.

You mean like Renji? Renji sucks at Kido, compared to most other Soul Reapers.
Or do you mean just someone who always forgets the correct numbers/names?
I took it to mean in general, just a random shinigami who forgets kidou spells.

minchan
19th September 2011, 4:03 AM
Regarding ILP's chart thing

I think it's good to have it BIGGER. I don't mind what else is factored in

But I think it'd be interesting if the "opposites" were directly across from each other instead of mirrored straight down the middle. Just an idea though.


Or do you mean just someone who always forgets the correct numbers/names?
That is what a mean.


You had THAT LONG writer's block? XD
Yes, yes I did.

I could have sworn I said this already many many times in this club. =w=

BTW it's not "had". It's still going on. I still "have" it. orz

Zameric
19th September 2011, 5:48 AM
Regarding ILP's chart thing

I think it's good to have it BIGGER. I don't mind what else is factored in

But I think it'd be interesting if the "opposites" were directly across from each other instead of mirrored straight down the middle. Just an idea though.
Okay, so including Arc, that's 1 for switching to the bigger chart, 1 for using either, and 2 that at least think the categories should be rearranged.
*waits for others to give their opinion* (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13454116&postcount=4557)


Yes, yes I did.

I could have sworn I said this already many many times in this club. =w=

BTW it's not "had". It's still going on. I still "have" it. orz
Ya sure that not just what I think they call, sucking at it? *shot*

Eon Master
19th September 2011, 6:06 AM
Alright, since ILP and Kusari are doing it, here's my updated Espada and my Fraccion. And yes ILP, I'll be sure to update my page with them.

Arrancar Name (Spanish): Talon Cetrero (Falconer)

Mask Form/Location: Two feathers which seem to poke straight out of his hair, over his ears.

Number Location: Left side of his neck, partially on his shoulder.

Hollow Hole Location: Just below and to the right of his heart. Talon is nearly heartless, which explains the oddly specific placement.

Aspect of Death: Fear

Physical Appearance: Talon is tall, almost ungainly so. His arms are very long, but they're concealed by his even longer sleeves. His Arrancar outfit is similar to Gin's, with Starrk's oversized black sash. His skin is reddish-tan, which is usually indicative of Native American decent. His hair is black, and is tied back into a long ponytail. His sclera (sp?) and iris are black with gold pupils.

Personality: Talon is condescending and brash, with a tendency to look down on his opponents. He's also very self-centered, and somewhat cruel to others. The only other person he genuinely cares about is his Fraccion, Iduvina, although he hides it as much as possible. In battle, he doesn't really taunt much, especially in a serious fight. He's mainly focused on winning.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Reddish-purple; Talon curves his pointer and middle fingers on his right hand like claws, and the Cero generates from between them.

Animal/Plant/Whatever Zanpakutou Base: Falcon

Zanpakutou details: It's a pair of twin daggers that are curved like the claws of a bird of prey. They're completely silver, and ornately etched. Neither has any sort of grip, they're just completely metal. Similar to this (http://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/1895/PreviewComp/SuperStock_1895-4906.jpg), but with thicker blades, and more claw-like. He's deciptively quick and extremely accurate with them, and he uses his longer arms to his advantage.

- Name: Halcón de Caza (Hunting Falcon) [not sure if this is correct, my spanish is quite rusty]

- Release Command: Swoop down

- Physical Appearance: When Talon's resuriccion is active, he grows a pair of huge wings with twelve grande-size red and gold feathers on each wing, the colors alternating between the two. The bone feathers on his head shift forward and cover the eyes before becoming transparent, turning into goggles (if you've ever seen Ultimo, like that). His daggers grow into full-length scimitars (http://www.shoppingbattle.com/img/1/470.jpg), and golden spirit energy arcs behind him, forming a sort of halo.

- Release Abilities: Standard release powerup, with more emphasis on power than anything else. The feathers on Talon's wings not only serve as blades and shields, but also as points to fire Cero and Bala from. He can launch a dozen Cero at once, or fire them intermittently to gain a field of fire and alternate so he never leave an open window for people to attack. He mainly keeps his distance for opponents who he doesn't view as worth his time, firing Cero attacks and only using his scimitars when his opponent gets close (if they get close) to block their attack before sweeping them aside with his wings.

However, if he finds an opponent he deems as worthy, he'll fight all out, using his powerful wings to increase his speed and strike hard and fast. His wings and feathers are also prehensile, so he can move using them as well (like, by pushing of the ground with them, forcing a mid-movement direction change, ect.) He'll block and attack with his wings as well as his scimitars, and if you're at a deadlock with him, he'll let loose with Cero from all of his feathers at once at close range. If you really tick him off, he'll generate Gran Rey Cero from all of his wings at a single point, which has roughly the power of a Cero Oscuras.

Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar): Talon's eyes aren't just for show, they allow him to see and track his opponent's movements no matter where they're hiding or how fast they're moving. "Eyes of a Hawk" is a literal phrase with him.

Misc: He prefers tea to coffee xD

Arrancar Name (Spanish): Iduvina Doncella (Devoted Maiden)

Aspect of Death: N/A (Fraccion)

Mask Form/Location: She has a feathery crest of sorts that sits high on her forehead and stops just under halfway from along the top of her skull.

Hollow Hole Location: Just under her breasts.

Cero Colour/Firing Location: Dusty Gold; Mouth

Physical Appearance: Iduvina is fairly petite and lithe, with average-sized bust and the muscles of a gymnast. She stands about 5'3" tall and weighs just under 120 lbs. She has golden-brown hair, somewhat pale skin, and cloudy grey eyes. She wears a top similar to Mila Rose's, except nowhere near as revealing and it comes down far enough to cover her Hollow Hole (which is most of her torso). Her skirt is also longer than Mila Rose's, and it lacks the slit up the side. Her boots are identical to the ones that Mila Rose wears. Her Zanpaktou is a pair of sickles with the blade on the inside curve.

Personality: Iduvina is very quiet and reserved, rarely speaking unless spoken to. This makes her seem somewhat emotionless, and only those who really know her well (or are extremely good at reading people/body language) can tell that this isn't the case. She quietly adores Talon, and she knows of his hidden feelings. She's extremely devoted to him, obedient and always willing to do his bidding.

Resurrección Details:
-Name: Primoroso Cazadora (Beautiful Huntress)
-Release Command: Bring down your prey!
-Zanpakutou Base: Velociraptor

-Physical Appearance:
Bones form around her in a sort of harness; covers her... um... feminine areas, and creates two bone struts down the sides of her arms, while her legs have those plus a third directly in front of her leg. It also forms an X of bone accross her stomach, while leaving her hollow hole exposed. Her neck also gains a bony collar, and her back is covered in a similar manner to what Ichigo's completed Fullbring does except with larger holes and gaps. Her hands gain three claws and become thinner, while her bone crest flares up and cascades down her back until it extends into a five foot-long tail just above the waist. Her legs gain boots that function just like a raptor's talons (three clawed toes, with the one closest to the other foot gains a huge, sickle-shaped claw that sticks up). The main claw is about 8 inches long. Finally, her eyes glow silver and gain slitted pupils while two black splotches cover her eyes, starting at the forehead and then tapering to a point under her eyes about halfway between her eyes and mouth.

-Release Details/Abilities:

Power Boost Details and New Abilities: The main boost of her release is in her speed and agility, making her fast and manuverable enough to keep up with even Captain-class Shinigami. Her strength is only moderately increased, and her defense (outside of her hierro) is barely increased at all. Her hollow abilities (cero, bala, hierro, pesquisa, ect) are all stronger in this form as well. Her sense of smell is stronger, and she has a form of infared vision as well.
Combat Style: Iduvina's combat style mainly focuses on moving fast and dealing damage at every opportunity, no matter how small the damage. Her clawed feet are her main weapons (for obvious reasons), so there's a lot of kicking and jumping involved, meaning that she has extremely strong legs. She'll usually catch opposing weapon attacks with the claws on her hands or block them with her tail. Her tail is also very commonly used in attacking as a follow-up move.
Whiplike Tail: Iduvina's tail is prehensile in this form, and is composed of serrated bone segments that are like vertebre. The tip is a spike that she can use to impale things.
Claws: Iduvina's claws are extremely sharp and strong enough to block direct sword blows. The raptor claws on her feet have powerful "muscles" powering them, so they can flick and strike to dig into prey for increase damage.


-Special Abilities (unique to you as an Arrancar): N/A

-Misc: Like Talon, she prefers tea to coffee, particularly spearmint tea. Her favorite flower is the carnation (which symbolizes devotion).

@the charts: Against the grain on this one, I actually prefer the old design, but whatever =P

PKMN Trainer Rex
19th September 2011, 7:06 AM
Lol , its possible as long as its a anime character its fine.

I actually planned to use a super sexy picture for yoruichi but think again it might not be appropriate for the forum and mastercharizard thinks so too.

Can you do Simon, Kamina & Viral from Gurren Lagann.

How sexy is it?


Guess who's back?

What up people? =D
I'm back, and will be active atleast once everyday.
Update me anyone?

What up, yo? Good to have you back.




And congrats too Rex on Lieut./Captain position, you deserve it! =)


Thanks.



I wish I knew Senbonzakura.. MC's fic makes me to get to know him =/


Me too.


Wow. It has been SO long since I've been able to connect with this forum. ( I don't want to go into details) So... Hi guy! I'm back.

Hey! Welcome back to you too!



Misc: He loves chocolate. Chocolate bars, hot chocolate, chocolate cake, anything made of chocolate.

Chocolate? Did you say chocolate?!? (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NBhxIyT8Slg&feature=related)

Sweet fraccion ILP, Kusari, & Eon. That reminds me, I have to get mines going too.

@ Charts: I am.....indifferent.

Blackacer
19th September 2011, 11:05 AM
If you really want them...
Barragan, Harribel, Zommari and Szayel, all released, please. That should keep you busy.

DONE 1st : http://i53.*******.com/r89n3k.png

http://i53.*******.com/r89n3k.png

I like Pokemon (...)
19th September 2011, 5:41 PM
Regarding ILP's chart thing

I think it's good to have it BIGGER. I don't mind what else is factored in

But I think it'd be interesting if the "opposites" were directly across from each other instead of mirrored straight down the middle. Just an idea though.
Ah, okay. When I get on my laptop, I'll try and make it. Possibly (from top left, clockwise):
Offense, Kidou, Reiatsu, Defense, Intellect, Physical Strength, Stamina, Mobility?
Though there's probably a better order. And we might be able to have a web with a point at the top (like the hex web), if that makes sense.


I could have sworn I said this already many many times in this club. =w=

I don't remember.

Okay, so including Arc, that's 1 for switching to the bigger chart, 1 for using either, and 2 that at least think the categories should be rearranged.
And quite a few people for "Indifferent".


Alright, since ILP and Kusari are doing it, here's my updated Espada and my Fraccion. And yes ILP, I'll be sure to update my page with them.
Looks good. There's nothing that stands out as needing to be changed, or anything I'm in my lazy review mood


@the charts: Against the grain on this one, I actually prefer the old design, but whatever =P
Would you be opposed to it being bigger/being rearranged?


Chocolate? Did you say chocolate?!? (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NBhxIyT8Slg&feature=related)
Aha, I remember that.

DONE 1st : http://i53.*******.com/r89n3k.png

http://i53.*******.com/r89n3k.png
Awesome.
Have you made the art page yet?

arceus03
19th September 2011, 10:31 PM
Thank you... I think? I can change the Aspect of Death to pessimism if you want. I just figured "obsession" fit the stalker comments that Circ, Eon and Arc say.

Pessimism 8D my idea woot


*Steals some*

I finished it long before you types this, so... too bad. :p



Yes, yes I did.

I could have sworn I said this already many many times in this club. =w=

BTW it's not "had". It's still going on. I still "have" it. orz

No you haven't said it :P

If it's not "had", why did you say "I did" then? XP Meh, moot point.



Sweet fraccion ILP, Kusari, & Eon. That reminds me, I have to get mines going too.


I would too. But it's going to be a busy week, assignment, an exam (I think), lab reports and whatnot... So hopefully I could get to those during this upcoming weekend. Cross your fingers. XD


Awesome.
Have you made the art page yet?

He's going to bug you until you do so, Ace, so I'd suggest.... doing it on your next post. If you don't want to make a banner for the title, bolded, flashy, huge fonts work too. Then simply below that post all the banners you have done, and voila!

Blackacer
20th September 2011, 10:51 AM
Hey there guys just to notify you guys.
I kept all my bleach banners here : http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560
Basically because im lazy to update here and there often lol...

CyberBlaziken
20th September 2011, 11:03 AM
I have a request for you Acer!

A Grimmjow, if it's not too much trouble.

Blackacer
20th September 2011, 1:44 PM
There you go!
I'm careful with the saturations and stuff this time lol
http://i52.*******.com/2wef86b.png

http://i52.*******.com/2wef86b.png

minchan
20th September 2011, 9:48 PM
No I'm pretty sure I HAVE said it. But it was actually such a long time ago... Like when I first joined-ish... Around then, iirc... LOL

Still, I have massive writers' block... ^^;

MasterCharizard15
20th September 2011, 10:35 PM
Min has said it several times, Ilp just forgot.

How would you react if one of the following groups attacked our Gotei 13?
Groups:
1.) Ichigo's Gang + Urahara's Shop.
2.) The Canon Gotei 13
3.) The Canon Esapda
4.) Our Esapda.
5.) Fullbringers (Canon)
6.) OUR Fullbringers.

...there, this topic should keep us alive for a while.

arceus03
20th September 2011, 10:58 PM
Hey there guys just to notify you guys.
I kept all my bleach banners here : http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560
Basically because im lazy to update here and there often lol...

Ah well. Okay then, I'll put that link.


Min has said it several times, Ilp just forgot.

ILPy forgot? *gasp* RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! THE SKY IS FALLING!


How would you react if one of the following groups attacked our Gotei 13?
Groups:
1.) Ichigo's Gang + Urahara's Shop.
2.) The Canon Gotei 13
3.) The Canon Esapda
4.) Our Esapda.
5.) Fullbringers (Canon)
6.) OUR Fullbringers.

1) Ichigo's gang is no big deal. Urahara could pose a problem though. But we also have our strategist. So it shouldn't be too hard... Unless Ichigo goes into that Hollow mode.

2) YAY TIME! *glomps Unohana*

3) With or without Aizen? Without, they're pretty much screwed. I think our forces are strong enough to take care of them. Maybe except Barragan... Yeah.

4) I didn't really remember our Espada except my own. XD

5) So long as we don't get cut by Tsukishima. >.>

6) See number 4.

Yeah... Not really a good answer tons of homework but yeah. Feeble attempt. XD


...there, this topic should keep us alive for a while.

We're not dying yet, manga is coming out soon anyway. Or tomorrow.

kusari
20th September 2011, 11:12 PM
Min has said it several times, Ilp just forgot.

How would you react if one of the following groups attacked our Gotei 13?
Groups:
1.) Ichigo's Gang + Urahara's Shop.
2.) The Canon Gotei 13
3.) The Canon Esapda
4.) Our Esapda.
5.) Fullbringers (Canon)
6.) OUR Fullbringers.

...there, this topic should keep us alive for a while.

1.) Nearly easy win. Ichigo's Hollow, Urahara and Yoruichi could pose a threat. But putting them against good counters for their abilities can deal with that easily.

2.) Probably us. We don't know their exact strength yet (see unknown Bankai) but like Urahara, good counters can stop them.

3.) They're screwed without Aizen. Barragan can be dealt with swiftly by long range fighters. Zam would probably be our best option.

4.) Tough to say but again, probably our shinigami. It'd be a close fight.

5.) Avoid the troll and we're good.

6.) Again, our shinigami. None of our Fullbringers have quite the power to fight soul reapers.



I am depressed. Want manga to cheer me up.

minchan
21st September 2011, 2:22 AM
Apparently the next opening theme is supposed to be by SCANDAL again, and it's supposed to start in episode 343... With 340 having just been released, there are apparently only two more episodes to this filler arc.

This is according to someone who commented on the video on Crunchyroll.

Episode was... Interesting, but I don't feel like I have much to talk about, regarding it.

But as for the ending sequence, it's now up to the part around when Tosen dies, so it's getting pretty close. I'd say two episodes would probably do it.

Hopefully after this filler arc, things will go back to the canon storyline. I'm pretty sure they will, because the voices have been announced and all. I'm looking forward to it. LOL

As for the question...

I'm kinda guilty of not paying much attention to the club's Espada/Fullbringers because I'm just not that interested in that stuff. And I also don't know everyone's zanpakuto, because it's just too hard for me and my crappy memory to remember everyone's.

But personally, I'd just bribe them to go away with free cookies.

...If that didn't work, well... Then we have a problem. =w=

Also, on PokeCommunity, we were kinda talking about making a Bleach Time Line... Because the one on the Bleach Wikia is really lacking... There's no details on the past events, Act 2, or any fillers.

I made a Google Doc that you're all free to add to.

http://bit.ly/bleachtimeline

But please, don't change the formatting. I kinda like how it is, for now.

You don't have to work on it, but if you'd like to, you're more than welcome.

I like Pokemon (...)
21st September 2011, 6:03 PM
I finished it long before you types this, so... too bad. :p
Nooooooooo!

Hey there guys just to notify you guys.
I kept all my bleach banners here : http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=541560
Basically because im lazy to update here and there often lol...
You've already linked us to that :p

No I'm pretty sure I HAVE said it. But it was actually such a long time ago... Like when I first joined-ish... Around then, iirc... LOL

Still, I have massive writers' block... ^^;
Min has said it several times, Ilp just forgot.
Ah. Well, if both of you are that certain, sorry minchan.

How would you react if one of the following groups attacked our Gotei 13?
Groups:
1.) Ichigo's Gang + Urahara's Shop.
2.) The Canon Gotei 13
3.) The Canon Esapda
4.) Our Esapda.
5.) Fullbringers (Canon)
6.) OUR Fullbringers.

1) Ichigo, Ishida, Chad, Orihime, Urahara, Tessai, Yoruichi, Ururu and Jinta? Are Rukia/Renji, and Isshin/Ryuuken included?
The biggest threats are, of course, Hollow Ichigo, Urahara, Tessai and Yoruichi (though Ururu can be a problem). I figure that between Eon, Da.c and I in particular, Urahara should be handled. I think Yoruichi Vs Blue would be... awesome. Tessai, being a Kidou master, can probably be challenged by other Kidou experts, such as MC, Arc and NL (who have 100 in either Kidou or Spiritual Power, and 90 in the other) as well as many people who have 80-100 or 90-90 should be able to handle him. Hollow Ichigo and the others can probably be taken care of with those I haven't mentioned.

2) One thing to be mentioned is how it could be balanced. For example, do we have Jin and Da.c? Is it just Captains, or EVERYONE? Do they have Gin, Aizen and Tousen?
I'm almost not bothered to answer this one now XD

3) The Canon Espada... Alright, so they have Yammy, Starrk, Hallibel, Ulquiorra, Nnoitra, Grimmjow, Zommari, Szayel and Aaroniero. They're screwed. Not only do we outnumber them, but Aaroniero can be taken out by a Lieutenant-leveled Shinigami, Szayel is outclassed by Da.C, Zommari is just... lol, Grimmjow will probably get glomped by Eon, Nnoitra should be handled fairly well, Ulquiorra will get glomped by me, Hallibel will get glomped by MC, I can probably take Barragan, and Starrk will get glomped by Eon and NL, and Yammy will get pwned by Blue. No contest.

4) This is a hard one. But immediately (assuming no Fraccion or Lieuts), we outnumber them with Golde, Flash, Senny, Jin and Da.C. And I'm assuming roughly equal power levels between each Espada and their Shinigami counterpart. Okay, maybe not so hard.

5) I think Yukio, Trollkishima and possibly Giriko would pose an immediate problem in terms of their abilities. But, as I've mentioned, we are strong in our numbers. I think that if the shinigami can beat them, so can we.

6) XD I don't remember them all that well. I think we outnumber them even more than our Espada, though XD. Plus, we have Kidou.


Can you tell I've gotten lazy? Though when I was looking at the stats for the Kidou and Spiritual Power... I got an idea 8D.

ILPy forgot? *gasp* RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! THE SKY IS FALLING!
It seems that you have forgotten how forgetful I can be.


3) With or without Aizen? Without, they're pretty much screwed. I think our forces are strong enough to take care of them. Maybe except Barragan... Yeah.
3.) They're screwed without Aizen. Barragan can be dealt with swiftly by long range fighters. Zam would probably be our best option. I think I can take him 8D


Also, on PokeCommunity, we were kinda talking about making a Bleach Time Line... Because the one on the Bleach Wikia is really lacking... There's no details on the past events, Act 2, or any fillers.

I made a Google Doc that you're all free to add to.

http://bit.ly/bleachtimeline

But please, don't change the formatting. I kinda like how it is, for now.

You don't have to work on it, but if you'd like to, you're more than welcome.
When I stop being lazy and stuff, I'll start working on it.

I'm also (slowly) working on different orders for the charts - in particular, having opposite stats opposite each other. I was also thinking of having a web with points up/down, left/right, and the diagonals. Though I'll experiment some more.



MANGA!
I like how Ginjou only appears on the splash page.

I wonder if Ikkaku will do the "lucky dance" in the fight...

He... what? I think that might come out funnier in the anime, with silly music.

Aha, there should be an omake on Hisagi bringing in the bike.

AND SO SHE EXPLAINS HER POWERS AGAIN.

I think she gets too angry too quickly. She did the same with Ichigo, no?

"I've been training to be able to fight Aizen." Hahahahahaha that's funny if he thinks he can reach Aizen in 17 MONTHS. Though I guess it's nice to see that he's at least gained a few levels in badass in that time, that line just turned him into Narm.

What I don't really like is by how much the Shinigami are now outclassing the Fullbringers, especially with how this is their first fight. They seem like wimps compared to Shinigami.

PKMN Trainer Rex
21st September 2011, 10:01 PM
"F*** Yeah!" (http://manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/465/7) I love this page sooooo much. I feel bad for Moe though, he ain't got no power ups. And he's fighting Ikkaku, who's obviously playing around.

I wanna how that bike thing worked out for Hisagi.

Jebus, how strong did everyone get? Kenpachi "killed" Giriko in one hit, Rukia is playing with life size plushies, Hitsugaya is playing dodgeball & Renji takes kicks like a boss.

The cockiness that the powered up Xcution is showing is soooo annoying. So far they look like they're on the decline.





I would too. But it's going to be a busy week, assignment, an exam (I think), lab reports and whatnot... So hopefully I could get to those during this upcoming weekend. Cross your fingers. XD


I actually finished one assignment. I still have one assignment, 4 lab reports, my weekly journal due this Friday & research for my group presentation to go. Yay progression.

As for my fraccion, I have the ideas mostly worked out in my head but too lazy to type.


There you go!
I'm careful with the saturations and stuff this time lol
http://i52.*******.com/2wef86b.png

http://i52.*******.com/2wef86b.png

Like, seriously. When do you ever make a "sucky" banner?


No I'm pretty sure I HAVE said it. But it was actually such a long time ago... Like when I first joined-ish... Around then, iirc... LOL

Still, I have massive writers' block... ^^;

Then I must of forgot too.

arceus03
22nd September 2011, 12:16 AM
MANGA

Alright. A few chapters later, and I still don't know how Shishigawara's Fullbrings works. Whatever.

Aaaaaand yeah. Renji took 9000 levels in badass... (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TookALevelInBadass) I mean... look at the Renji we had (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v20/c173/14.html) and look at him now (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v51/c465/19.html). Originally I thought he and Ikkaku were on the same level of strength, but if now he can take a fully-powered dirty boobs boots hit on his stomach and just move that little, and also destroy a mountain (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v51/c465/18.html) (or rock, whatever) Ichigo style (http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/v47/c418/7.html), while Ikkaku got his arm dislocated (ARM!), he must be some levels up higher than him. Eh, idk.

"Man or woman, you just don't cut it" Did anyone tell you that Jackie's a hermaphrodite, Renji? XP

What new technique you think Hitsugaya will have? *shot*



I am depressed. Want manga to cheer me up.

There you have manga.


Nooooooooo!

It seems that you have forgotten how forgetful I can be.
I think I can take him 8D


Too late. 8D There' still some chocolate chip cookies though
And I bought a new packet. Oops, shouldn't have told you that. *hides M&M*

Indeed.

But your scythe actually has to touch something for it to work? I mean, wouldn't it rot before it even touched Barragan?

Water could work though. I still don't see how it could rot, idk



I actually finished one assignment. I still have one assignment, 4 lab reports, my weekly journal due this Friday & research for my group presentation to go. Yay progression.


... Woah. XD I should be grateful indeed. (http://wtfcontent.com/img/130192478837.jpg) Only one precis to be submitted tonight wooo. Though I still need to finish that reading >.> Now, if the lecturer asks me to do a precis of Bleach manga, that I could do.

MasterCharizard15
22nd September 2011, 12:24 AM
Go Ikkaku and Renji!
So Fullbringers do outright FAIL compared to Shinigami, even with free hits they get owned.
Though, I read Renji's line a different way:
"I've been training to fight against Aizen."
I read it as "The Entire Gotei 13 has been training their ***es off, preparing for the slim chance Aizen breaks free before 10,000 years pass.
^- So pretty much while Ichigo was brought down to normal, everyone took several levels of badass during the 17 month break.
Meaning The Fullbringers are so outclassed right now, it's just sad.


Topic:
We can win all of them easily, just sic the fanboy/fangirls on them. Nuff said.

kusari
22nd September 2011, 1:06 AM
The way I see it, Shishigawara's Fullbring works like this. Let's say that there's a building. In this building's foundation there is a crack. This crack has a 1 in 5000 chance of destroying the building if manipulated the correct way. Moe punches the building, without much force, and uses his Fullbring to manipulate the probability of the crack destroying the building. His Fullbring allows him to hit that 1 in 5000 chance and break the building.


Ikkaku vs Shishigawara: Shaping up to look funny as anime. Hope it's better than some of the fights.

Renji vs Jackie: If they've all been training be on Aizen levels, we're going yo have a bunch of godmodding for the rest of the story. I had no doubt that Renji would win, but that easily, really?

Other: Hisagi and his motorcycle have a chance to he a very lol-worthy omake/Shinigami Golden Cup

minchan
22nd September 2011, 5:14 AM
OMG About the Hisagi bike thing... YES. I MUST SEE THAT.

As my favorite group of characters just so happens to include Hisagi, I must see this. The group also includes Renji, BTW. It's the group from the academy days~ Momo, Renji, Izuru, plus Hisagi. ^o^ I like that part~ LOL

Back to the actual current manga and stuff...

Ikkaku is kinda badass but Renji is moreso, IMO.

I wants to see Shiro-chan's new powers. HE BETTER HAVE SOME, BECAUSE THE OTHER CHARACTERS ARE ALL GETTING STRONGER/MORE AWESOME. Then again, he's kinda the youngest (except Yachiru, right?), so I dunno. LOL But he's a captain so I expect something...

Can't really understand why Kubo's letting the fullbringers get beaten up so easily though. I mean, personally, I'm happy, but for the sake of the story, I gotta wonder what he's planning next...

Also, about my writers' block, ILP definitely just forgot, but I'm not sure if I said it any time after Rex joined. It was around when I joined, a good while ago, that I mainly talked about it. Well, maybe a little after I joined. But yeah... LOL

Anyway guys, remember to add to the timeline, if you can!

And add your name to the contributors list on the footer~ You only have to add your name once. =)

arceus03
22nd September 2011, 5:48 AM
The way I see it, Shishigawara's Fullbring works like this. Let's say that there's a building. In this building's foundation there is a crack. This crack has a 1 in 5000 chance of destroying the building if manipulated the correct way. Moe punches the building, without much force, and uses his Fullbring to manipulate the probability of the crack destroying the building. His Fullbring allows him to hit that 1 in 5000 chance and break the building.


So like, if he punches you, and have that 1 in a 10000000*include parades of zero here*000 chance to kill you, he could manipulate that and kill you? >.<



I wants to see Shiro-chan's new powers. HE BETTER HAVE SOME, BECAUSE THE OTHER CHARACTERS ARE ALL GETTING STRONGER/MORE AWESOME. Then again, he's kinda the youngest (except Yachiru, right?), so I dunno. LOL But he's a captain so I expect something...



You're kidding me. Hitsugaya gets ten new moves every arc. Why the heck would he need more? >.> Moreover, they're all just differently shaped ice. Each different shape has a different flashy name. Barely two had different effects.

No offense but... We need to see more Unohana. Not Hitsugaya. <.<

minchan
22nd September 2011, 6:47 AM
Well I'm biased. So there. =w=

MasterCharizard15
22nd September 2011, 3:22 PM
Go news everyone, I just posted.
Dodges every attack you all can throw at him

Fic news:

1. The profiles: Well I was working on them and ended up having an Esapda with three fracciones. Then while slowly working on the lesser details of that group, I decided to work on my other villains as well. So I won't be posting my profiles for a bit...maybe next week if everything goes right.

2. The actual fic: Since honestly the reason the profile are taking so long is due to to my brain not stopping writing out the chapter, I'm going to do just that. Warning, it will be another long one, but worth it, I hope.

3. Since everyone put so much effort into their arrancar profiles, even going so far as to make so many fracciones, the entire story might be a few more chapters than I originally thought. Though do not fear, nobody should be getting a Yammy style death.

Other news: Ignoring college and personal life, I'll post about the anime...later.

I like Pokemon (...)
22nd September 2011, 8:42 PM
"F*** Yeah!" (http://manga-access.com/manga/B/Bleach/chapter/465/7) I love this page sooooo much. I feel bad for Moe though, he ain't got no power ups. And he's fighting Ikkaku, who's obviously playing around.
When you say Moe, I think of...
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/43/Chara04.png
Or something.

I don't think she comes from an actual anime/manga, though, I just stole the image from wikipedia.

Too late. 8D There' still some chocolate chip cookies though
And I bought a new packet. Oops, shouldn't have told you that. *hides M&M*

But your scythe actually has to touch something for it to work? I mean, wouldn't it rot before it even touched Barragan?
*Takes them anyway*

Ivory and Ebony affect themselves, so neither I, nor my blades, should worry about rotting away while fighting Barragan. Though after resealing, everything goes back to normal, so...


Also, about my writers' block, ILP definitely just forgot, but I'm not sure if I said it any time after Rex joined. It was around when I joined, a good while ago, that I mainly talked about it. Well, maybe a little after I joined. But yeah... LOL
Ah, I see.



So like, if he punches you, and have that 1 in a 10000000*include parades of zero here*000 chance to kill you, he could manipulate that and kill you? >.<
Presumably, I guess. But the chances are only increased by however much. If it's a one in a million chance, but his powers make things 1000 times more likely, that's still only 1 in a thousand chance.

arceus03
22nd September 2011, 11:07 PM
Well I'm biased. So there. =w=

Whatever. You're lucky Hitsugaya is a famous character... And watch the one liners. >.>


Go news everyone, I just posted.
Dodges every attack you all can throw at him

Fic news:

1. The profiles: Well I was working on them and ended up having an Esapda with three fracciones. Then while slowly working on the lesser details of that group, I decided to work on my other villains as well. So I won't be posting my profiles for a bit...maybe next week if everything goes right.

2. The actual fic: Since honestly the reason the profile are taking so long is due to to my brain not stopping writing out the chapter, I'm going to do just that. Warning, it will be another long one, but worth it, I hope.

3. Since everyone put so much effort into their arrancar profiles, even going so far as to make so many fracciones, the entire story might be a few more chapters than I originally thought. Though do not fear, nobody should be getting a Yammy style death.

Other news: Ignoring college and personal life, I'll post about the anime...later.

Can I have one massive response? YAY!

Oh, I still have to watch the anime. XD Anyway. It's weekends, so I should get some free time to actually write about my profiles... I hope.


When you say Moe, I think of...
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/43/Chara04.png
Or something.

XD


*Takes them anyway*

*hides M&M in cookie oven*


Ivory and Ebony affect themselves, so neither I, nor my blades, should worry about rotting away while fighting Barragan. Though after resealing, everything goes back to normal, so...

So you rot? That wouldn't be good D8


Presumably, I guess. But the chances are only increased by however much. If it's a one in a million chance, but his powers make things 1000 times more likely, that's still only 1 in a thousand chance.

Do we know how much is "however much"?

Zameric
22nd September 2011, 11:25 PM
Lmao, Ikkaku is always ready for an injury in battle. XD
He would be an interesting member on Squad 4. :p

So is Renji actully on the same level as a captain now?
That's kind of what I thought he was getting at there...
Or maybe I'm just being optimistic


You're kidding me. Hitsugaya gets ten new moves every arc. Why the heck would he need more? >.> Moreover, they're all just differently shaped ice. Each different shape has a different flashy name. Barely two had different effects.

No offense but... We need to see more Unohana. Not Hitsugaya. <.<

Well I'm biased. So there. =w=
Wow Arc, you're lucky you still have your head... >.>

minchan
22nd September 2011, 11:53 PM
Just because you use the strike through tag, doesn't mean I can't read what you guys wrote~ LOL

Sorry about the one liner but I really kinda didn't have anything else to say... XD =w=

...I like this emoticon. =w= As you can see.

It'd be pretty epic, at least in concept, if Renji got to the level of a captain so easily. In terms of experience, he'd still obviously be lacking, but then there's Shiro-chan, who we know became a shinigami after Renji. (Renji was in Momo's class, and Momo went to the academy first. And there's no reason to think anyone but Gin and Kaien graduated faster than normal.) I wonder if Renji would ever take a captain position...? I think it'd be cool, but I'm not sure if it'd ever happen or not.

And remember guys, if you are interested, please feel free to work on the time line. =)

http://bit.ly/bleachtimeline

I like Pokemon (...)
23rd September 2011, 12:20 AM
*hides M&M in cookie oven*



So you rot? That wouldn't be good D8



Do we know how much is "however much"?
*Steals M&Ms*

I... would guess so. Though time is a very tricky thing to deal with.

Not yet, no.

Lmao, Ikkaku is always ready for an injury in battle. XD
He would be an interesting member on Squad 4. :p

So is Renji actully on the same level as a captain now?
That's kind of what I thought he was getting at there...
Or maybe I'm just being optimistic
"Interesting" doesn't cover it XP

I think the Captains have gotten quite a bit stronger, so even though Renji became more powerful, so did everyone else. But I'd say that, if he wanted to, he could easily be a captain if Hanatarou didn't take that spot.

Just because you use the strike through tag, doesn't mean I can't read what you guys wrote~ LOL
LIES.

arceus03
23rd September 2011, 1:30 AM
Wow Arc, you're lucky you still have your head... >.>

What, it's true. :P If you can point out the differences between Hiryu Senbi and Guncho Tsurara (apart from the name and shape) I'll give you free stale cookies.


Just because you use the strike through tag, doesn't mean I can't read what you guys wrote~ LOL

And remember guys, if you are interested, please feel free to work on the time line. =)

http://bit.ly/bleachtimeline

I'm interested in seeing the end product Are you going to like put EVERYTHING that has happened or just the really important events? And do stuff like 7:13 PM really matter? :p


*Steals M&Ms*

Too bad. My cookie oven only registers my reishi to open it.
... Crap, don't tell me you already copied my reishi? Damn. Maybe I need to add in cookie signature... Hm.


I... would guess so. Though time is a very tricky thing to deal with.

D8 Bye~ *shot*


if Hanatarou didn't take that spot.

Eh, he's the new Head Captain. XD


LIES.
Right, they're plants.

minchan
23rd September 2011, 6:51 AM
I guess whatever people want to do for the timeline. It's an open project for anyone and everyone in the club here and on Pokecommunity.

BTW I did not write the 7:13 part. LOL

Anyway you can be as detailed or not detailed as you want, and others can maybe add to that if it seems lacking. It's a group collaboration.

And if you contribute, put your name on the footer so you get credit! LOL

Zameric
23rd September 2011, 7:19 AM
I'll check out the timeline tomorrow after school.
Should have plenty of free time this weekend.


While browsing the Bleach Wiki, I found this link (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ianqnDpcW94).
It's the trailer for the English dub of the 3rd movie, Fade to Black.

Blackacer
23rd September 2011, 7:57 AM
Hey guys ,
My exams are coming up lately so i cant online often and make banners.
But though they ends at 2 weeks later. Just to inform you guys incase u thought im inactive.

arceus03
23rd September 2011, 5:50 PM
While browsing the Bleach Wiki, I found this link (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ianqnDpcW94).
It's the trailer for the English dub of the 3rd movie, Fade to Black.

Wha- Oh, dub. I don't watch the dubs :p


Hey guys ,
My exams are coming up lately so i cant online often and make banners.
But though they ends at 2 weeks later. Just to inform you guys incase u thought im inactive.

Okay, sure. Good luck with your exams =D
Speaking about exams... one more paper next week

Ohyeahanime
What... That part about Urahara, Mayuri and Kon seems like a real Deus ex Machina. And it also means there's a missed moment of awesome in the Urahara fight Eh, maybe it's just me. I honestly thought that at first, that Nemu is actually giving some sort of Mayuri's drug to Kagerozomi (the name that Zam gave him/her) to actually separate them into two again. Buuuuuut no. And Ichigo goes bankai... yawn. Not looking forward to that fight. I only hope they'd show the Captains' fights more next week. Bored as hell of Ichigo's fight, wants to see the Captains fightUnohana


Topic:
We can win all of them easily, just sic the fanboy/fangirls on them. Nuff said.

Yammy got no fan, you forget.

I like Pokemon (...)
23rd September 2011, 6:13 PM
Too bad. My cookie oven only registers my reishi to open it.
... Crap, don't tell me you already copied my reishi? Damn. Maybe I need to add in cookie signature... Hm.
I could probably break that, given enough time :p and I have almost infinite of that! Bwuahaha

I guess whatever people want to do for the timeline. It's an open project for anyone and everyone in the club here and on Pokecommunity.

BTW I did not write the 7:13 part. LOL
I think Rasen (from the other club) did that. I like that bit of detail though, because it really shows us exactly when it was.


I'll check out the timeline tomorrow after school.
Should have plenty of free time this weekend.
I'll be going to a wedding this weekend XD

minchan
24th September 2011, 6:33 AM
I never said I disliked that bit of info~ I'm just pointing out that I didn't put it there. That's why I have a footer to put in credit to contributors. =P

Please keep updating the time line, guys.

MasterCharizard15
24th September 2011, 4:21 PM
FRIENDSHIP!
...seriously, in EVERY shonen series they HAVE to have the "friendship" episode at one point.
At least the Captains pulled it off with more dignity:
"We'll do anything to protect the Soul society, even use...TEAMWORK!"

Kag-whats his name's zan is so broken, but we all knew that already.
KOn in Nemu's body...just...wow.
I finally noticed he's a masochist as well.
...Urahara and Mayuri using teamwork...
Yeah there is one episode left for this filler Arc.


Fic News: Everyone looks pretty in their kimonos! *shot, stabbed and oar'd*
I'm making progress on it.

...so yeah, that's it. Still need to work on those profiles.

minchan
25th September 2011, 1:33 AM
OMG GUYS When I came to this thread just now... IT WAS ON THE SECOND PAGE... THE SECOND PAGE!!!!!!!!!

Has this club died???? D=

...Hahaha... I mean, I know the last post WAS just this morning but still... XD In comparison to those other clubs...... XD

Also, please add to the timeline, I haven't seen very much from the SPPF club in terms of contributions...

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th September 2011, 1:38 AM
Hey everyone, just stopping by to say that I am alive. Like I told MC, my older brother and his family has been here since Wednesday & with school & assignments I have no time to be on that much. And yesterday my dad and I spent over an hour chasing a goat up and down my street. So yeah, this week has been pretty hectic, but I will be back in full force next week.

arceus03
25th September 2011, 2:18 AM
I could probably break that, given enough time :p and I have almost infinite of that! Bwuahaha


Damn... Ah well, I'll have to add in more security then... Personal question. A secret ingredient. Thumbprints and retina scan. And a quote to open the oven. Ah yeah.



Also, please add to the timeline, I haven't seen very much from the SPPF club in terms of contributions...

If I have time, I might do so... later. If I don't feel too lazy about it. I still have MC's profile to finish (I deem that to be of higher priority than this :P) and a whole hoard of assignments. And reading to be done.

Also... you made it sound as if it were necessary to contribute to the timeline >.> Whatever.
That, and I don't really see the purpose of doing it...?


Hey everyone, just stopping by to say that I am alive. Like I told MC, my older brother and his family has been here since Wednesday & with school & assignments I have no time to be on that much. And yesterday my dad and I spent over an hour chasing a goat up and down my street. So yeah, this week has been pretty hectic, but I will be back in full force next week.

Chasing a goat must be fun Whose goat? Why did you chase it? XD

PKMN Trainer Rex
25th September 2011, 7:47 AM
Chasing a goat must be fun Whose goat? Why did you chase it? XD

It's a very long, yet entertaining story. But short version, its a feral goat that my uncle caught so he could sell it later that day. It got lose, and we chased it to a random neighbor's house down the street. An hour and two semi injured dogs later, we got it and dragged it back to our house.


I tell ya, doing that is the best cardio-exercise you can get. After the whole ordeal, my dad and I were spent. S-P-E-N-T, spent, my dd was lucky enough to get some sleep.

Northern Lights
25th September 2011, 1:22 PM
Sorry I havn't posted in so long, but as i've told MC and Eon, I am likely to drop out every once and a while now that Uni is back up.
I want to do really well even if First Year doesn't count to final grade *shot*

But I joined an Anime/Manga society at my Uni so I should be getting back into the whole Anime thing, which i've dirfted from recently =]

I will however try my best to post here regularly =]


No offense but... We need to see more Unohana. Not Hitsugaya. <.<

hate to burst your bubble but ... ICHIMARU!!! <3 ... =[

Interesting idea there with the Timeline, unfortunatly I can hardly remember any of it >.<;[/COLOR]

I like Pokemon (...)
25th September 2011, 8:03 PM
Please keep updating the time line, guys.
Wedding season seems to have begun (seriously, this weekend, next weekend, then skip a week, then another weekend) are all weddings. I doubt I'll have enough free time for homework/coursework AND doing the time line.


Has this club died???? D=
No, I just went away for a few days XP

Hey everyone, just stopping by to say that I am alive. Like I told MC, my older brother and his family has been here since Wednesday & with school & assignments I have no time to be on that much. And yesterday my dad and I spent over an hour chasing a goat up and down my street. So yeah, this week has been pretty hectic, but I will be back in full force next week.
Sounds like an awesome week.

Damn... Ah well, I'll have to add in more security then... Personal question. A secret ingredient. Thumbprints and retina scan. And a quote to open the oven. Ah yeah.
All possibly crackable.


hate to burst your bubble but ... ICHIMARU!!! <3 ... =[
Ulquiorra!!

minchan
26th September 2011, 1:23 AM
And yesterday my dad and I spent over an hour chasing a goat up and down my street.
Wow. That sounds interesting. XD

---

Well about the timeline, the purpose is because the one on the Bleach Wikia is not complete, we only have Act 1. No past stuff (TBTP, flashbacks, mentions of history) or Act 2 (post-time skip, current chapters' time)... It's mainly for that... For people to be able to reference it so they don't have to go back and read every single chapter.

OBVIOUSLY it's not required to work on the time line, I couldn't force you if I wanted to. LOL

But it's appreciated and if you have spare time, even adding just one event somewhere could help a lot. Every little bit counts. =)

Golde
26th September 2011, 4:57 AM
So two captains, and a spirit are wolves, so now the whole club has the wolf theme? XP


In fact, yes.


Err... Where am I in the first page? Because I don't really see my name anywhere recorded.


Erm...something something technical difficulties. :p actually working on it, you should see it in the next day or so. Just smoothing stuff out on my side.




You should. 8D And put your bonnet-wearing Soi Fon there.




I am surprised you still remember that O.o

arceus03
26th September 2011, 5:18 AM
It's a very long, yet entertaining story. But short version, its a feral goat that my uncle caught so he could sell it later that day. It got lose, and we chased it to a random neighbor's house down the street. An hour and two semi injured dogs later, we got it and dragged it back to our house.

Ah. XD Must be fun if I were a neighbor and can watch that from a window



But I joined an Anime/Manga society at my Uni so I should be getting back into the whole Anime thing, which i've dirfted from recently =]

hate to burst your bubble but ... ICHIMARU!!! <3 ... =[
[/COLOR]

Cool. There's an anime club here as well, and I think they show anime movies every Friday at 8 p.m. :p

... Okay, Unohana and Gin? No, not a new shipping



All possibly crackable.

Ulquiorra!!

We'll see... Or maybe I should just tell YOU to lock them somewhere safe...

Oh well... Unohana + Gin + Ulquiorra?
Am I glad I posted this before Eon



Erm...something something technical difficulties. :p actually working on it, you should see it in the next day or so. Just smoothing stuff out on my side.

I am surprised you still remember that O.o

XD Oh btw, is Rex a Captain now?

8D I think you also drew Byakuya once. :p I have quite a number of your drawings.

Eon Master
26th September 2011, 5:19 AM
And yesterday my dad and I spent over an hour chasing a goat up and down my street.

...that sounds like tons of fun.



hate to burst your bubble but ... ICHIMARU!!! <3 ... =[
Ulquiorra!!

*starts shouting the names of random characters just to add to the chaos*


In fact, yes.

So totally ok with this.


I am surprised you still remember that O.o

I also remember it. It was just that good, lol.

...also, I almost put down Golde's name as "Godly". Epic misspellings ftw?

EDIT: Darn it Arc, stop stealing Cell's job, lol.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
26th September 2011, 12:15 PM
@Arc03:
Shishigawara's ability seems to be the ability to cause something really lucky to happen everytime he punches something. He was lucky enough to break Ginjou's sword when he punched it. He was lucky enough to unscrew a chandelier when he punched a coin onto it. He was lucky enough to slice trees clean in half when he punched them. He was lucky enough to dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder when he punched him.
There aren't any clear guidelines on what limitations this ability has so for now, I'm going to assume he can't kill with this ability unless Kubo lets him.

Eon Master
26th September 2011, 5:44 PM
Shishigawara's ability seems to be the ability to cause something really lucky to happen everytime he punches something. He was lucky enough to break Ginjou's sword when he punched it. He was lucky enough to unscrew a chandelier when he punched a coin onto it. He was lucky enough to slice trees clean in half when he punched them. He was lucky enough to dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder when he punched him.
There aren't any clear guidelines on what limitations this ability has so for now, I'm going to assume he can't kill with this ability unless Kubo lets him.

He could kill if he hits the neck. If he hits your neck and it "just happens" to dislocate, you're up **** creek without a paddle. Or a canoe, for that matter. And you're dead.

If there is a limit on that ability, it's most likely that his luck can only affect what he actually hits. He can knock down one tree per punch, not hit one tree and the entire forest collapses like dominos. It's like he directly channels luck into the tree and that "just happens" to knock it down, but it can't reach beyond that one tree.

Also, it probably has to be limited to the direct area that he hits. He punched Ikkaku's shoulder and dislocates it, not breaks every bone in his arm (which could technically happen if there was some sort of hairline fracture that affected more than just one part of his arm). He hit the guard on Ginjou's sword and it snapped off, but he didn't hit it and make the entire sword split to pieces (which, again, could technically happen).

Finally, it also seems like he can only affect one variable at a time. He can knock a tree down, but he can't make it shatter or splinter as well. He can break off Ginjou's guard, but not shatter it or hurl it on a trajectory that would "just happen" to strike his eye. He can dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder, but he can't shatter it as well, which would've rendered it totally useless. Furthermore, I'm sure some of you are wondering why Ikakku's arm didn't get added to the arm collection and Shishigawara's attack didn't just rip it off. The answer is simple: because he can only affect one target at a time, he can't sever the muscles and tendons, break the bone, and dislocate the appendage all at once. This is why he doesn't just completely wreck anything he hits; it's totally dependant on a single lucky factor.

So, to boil it down, this means that you're probably right for the most part; it's extremely difficult for him to kill with this ability because he can't directly cause lethal injury unless he dislocates your neck or completely crushes your skull. And since he can only use it with one hand (he only has one Jackpot Knuckle), he can't rapid fire his attacks or attack and defend simultaniously. The fact that his luck is projected through the knuckle buster also means that he can't affect himself with its luck to make him nigh-invulnerable or at least impossible to defeat.

In short, Shishigawara's Jackpot Knuckle, while it seems to be an extremely dangerous ability, is actually very limited compared to the total potential he could achieve with the technique and is really not much of a threat as long as you know how to counter it.

I like Pokemon (...)
26th September 2011, 6:25 PM
Oh well... Unohana + Gin + Ulquiorra?

Oh.. wow.

...also, I almost put down Golde's name as "Godly". Epic misspellings ftw?
Rofl. Almost as epic as misspelling shirt.


He could kill if he hits the neck. If he hits your neck and it "just happens" to dislocate, you're up **** creek without a paddle. Or a canoe, for that matter. And you're dead.

If there is a limit on that ability, it's most likely that his luck can only affect what he actually hits. He can knock down one tree per punch, not hit one tree and the entire forest collapses like dominos. It's like he directly channels luck into the tree and that "just happens" to knock it down, but it can't reach beyond that one tree.

Also, it probably has to be limited to the direct area that he hits. He punched Ikkaku's shoulder and dislocates it, not breaks every bone in his arm (which could technically happen if there was some sort of hairline fracture that affected more than just one part of his arm). He hit the guard on Ginjou's sword and it snapped off, but he didn't hit it and make the entire sword split to pieces (which, again, could technically happen).

Finally, it also seems like he can only affect one variable at a time. He can knock a tree down, but he can't make it shatter or splinter as well. He can break off Ginjou's guard, but not shatter it or hurl it on a trajectory that would "just happen" to strike his eye. He can dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder, but he can't shatter it as well, which would've rendered it totally useless. Furthermore, I'm sure some of you are wondering why Ikakku's arm didn't get added to the arm collection and Shishigawara's attack didn't just rip it off. The answer is simple: because he can only affect one target at a time, he can't sever the muscles and tendons, break the bone, and dislocate the appendage all at once. This is why he doesn't just completely wreck anything he hits; it's totally dependant on a single lucky factor.

So, to boil it down, this means that you're probably right for the most part; it's extremely difficult for him to kill with this ability because he can't directly cause lethal injury unless he dislocates your neck or completely crushes your skull. And since he can only use it with one hand (he only has one Jackpot Knuckle), he can't rapid fire his attacks or attack and defend simultaniously. The fact that his luck is projected through the knuckle buster also means that he can't affect himself with its luck to make him nigh-invulnerable or at least impossible to defeat.

In short, Shishigawara's Jackpot Knuckle, while it seems to be an extremely dangerous ability, is actually very limited compared to the total potential he could achieve with the technique and is really not much of a threat as long as you know how to counter it.

You could be in Squad 12 if you wanted to XP

Makes me wonder what his super-powered ability could let him do.

Eon Master
26th September 2011, 6:34 PM
Oh.. wow.

Please tell me that your mind didn't just go there.


Rofl. Almost as epic as misspelling shirt.

Nothing will ever beat my friend Eve. I said I was "topicless" and she replied confusedly with "you're topless? ...can I see a picture?"

Needless to say, I was laughing for about twenty minutes.


You could be in Squad 12 if you wanted to XP

Makes me wonder what his super-powered ability could let him do.

I could actually, and I'm about to prove it by resolving Arc's query about the security.

You know Arc, the best method to secure your cookies would be to get an updating biometric scanner with multiple failsafes. The only possible way to crack it would be for ILP to make a clone at the moment of your birth and have it go through all the same events and environmental stresses as you and he would have to upate the clone's status with each system update you do, and even then it might not work because the clone, while a perfect genetic copy, isn't subject to a lot of the factors that a growing embryo is, and then it would have to be from your parent to be a perfect match. You'd only have to do this once a month or so, but nobody else would ever be able to get to your stuff without your permission and direct help.

Basically he could always avoid injury, get impossibly lucky with every single move he makes and defeat you in the quickest ammount of time possible.

arceus03
26th September 2011, 8:34 PM
@Arc03:
Shishigawara's ability seems to be the ability to cause something really lucky to happen everytime he punches something. He was lucky enough to break Ginjou's sword when he punched it. He was lucky enough to unscrew a chandelier when he punched a coin onto it. He was lucky enough to slice trees clean in half when he punched them. He was lucky enough to dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder when he punched him.
There aren't any clear guidelines on what limitations this ability has so for now, I'm going to assume he can't kill with this ability unless Kubo lets him.


He could kill if he hits the neck. If he hits your neck and it "just happens" to dislocate, you're up **** creek without a paddle. Or a canoe, for that matter. And you're dead.

If there is a limit on that ability, it's most likely that his luck can only affect what he actually hits. He can knock down one tree per punch, not hit one tree and the entire forest collapses like dominos. It's like he directly channels luck into the tree and that "just happens" to knock it down, but it can't reach beyond that one tree.

Also, it probably has to be limited to the direct area that he hits. He punched Ikkaku's shoulder and dislocates it, not breaks every bone in his arm (which could technically happen if there was some sort of hairline fracture that affected more than just one part of his arm). He hit the guard on Ginjou's sword and it snapped off, but he didn't hit it and make the entire sword split to pieces (which, again, could technically happen).

Finally, it also seems like he can only affect one variable at a time. He can knock a tree down, but he can't make it shatter or splinter as well. He can break off Ginjou's guard, but not shatter it or hurl it on a trajectory that would "just happen" to strike his eye. He can dislocate Ikkaku's shoulder, but he can't shatter it as well, which would've rendered it totally useless. Furthermore, I'm sure some of you are wondering why Ikakku's arm didn't get added to the arm collection and Shishigawara's attack didn't just rip it off. The answer is simple: because he can only affect one target at a time, he can't sever the muscles and tendons, break the bone, and dislocate the appendage all at once. This is why he doesn't just completely wreck anything he hits; it's totally dependant on a single lucky factor.

So, to boil it down, this means that you're probably right for the most part; it's extremely difficult for him to kill with this ability because he can't directly cause lethal injury unless he dislocates your neck or completely crushes your skull. And since he can only use it with one hand (he only has one Jackpot Knuckle), he can't rapid fire his attacks or attack and defend simultaniously. The fact that his luck is projected through the knuckle buster also means that he can't affect himself with its luck to make him nigh-invulnerable or at least impossible to defeat.

In short, Shishigawara's Jackpot Knuckle, while it seems to be an extremely dangerous ability, is actually very limited compared to the total potential he could achieve with the technique and is really not much of a threat as long as you know how to counter it.

You guys made it MUCH clearer. Thanks =D
And Eon's last statement made me wonder if it is possible to counter his ability with Kido, since... you can't punch a ball of flame or a streak of lightning and hope you'll "luckily" block it or something.


Please tell me that your mind didn't just go there.

That just made me lol. Literally.


Nothing will ever beat my friend Eve. I said I was "topicless" and she replied confusedly with "you're topless? ...can I see a picture?"

Needless to say, I was laughing for about twenty minutes.

Someone's got a fangirl 8D


I could actually, and I'm about to prove it by resolving Arc's query about the security.

You know Arc, the best method to secure your cookies would be to get an updating biometric scanner with multiple failsafes. The only possible way to crack it would be for ILP to make a clone at the moment of your birth and have it go through all the same events and environmental stresses as you and he would have to upate the clone's status with each system update you do, and even then it might not work because the clone, while a perfect genetic copy, isn't subject to a lot of the factors that a growing embryo is, and then it would have to be from your parent to be a perfect match. You'd only have to do this once a month or so, but nobody else would ever be able to get to your stuff without your permission and direct help.

Basically he could always avoid injury, get impossibly lucky with every single move he makes and defeat you in the quickest ammount of time possible.

Ahahaha. I'd like to see how ILPy says he can crack this apart from "I have a lot of TIME Thankyou :p *gives a stash of cookies*

I like Pokemon (...)
26th September 2011, 9:33 PM
Please tell me that your mind didn't just go there.
I shall let you wonder where my mind wandered.


I could actually, and I'm about to prove it by resolving Arc's query about the security.

You know Arc, the best method to secure your cookies would be to get an updating biometric scanner with multiple failsafes. The only possible way to crack it would be for ILP to make a clone at the moment of your birth and have it go through all the same events and environmental stresses as you and he would have to upate the clone's status with each system update you do, and even then it might not work because the clone, while a perfect genetic copy, isn't subject to a lot of the factors that a growing embryo is, and then it would have to be from your parent to be a perfect match. You'd only have to do this once a month or so, but nobody else would ever be able to get to your stuff without your permission and direct help.

Basically he could always avoid injury, get impossibly lucky with every single move he makes and defeat you in the quickest ammount of time possible.
All this for M&Ms.

Would it not be easier to create a perfect copy, atom for atom, as it would be like taking a copy of Arc at whatever point in time I copied him? And unless his biometric scanners are so precise that the copy would have to go through all the same events and factors since I created it, then... well, he'd have to come to the 12th Squad for that XP



Also, going back to the charts DATA! here are Zam's original chart, my suggested chart, Zam's chart stretched out (like Min suggested, a bigger chart), and a sideways chart (as it matches the orientation of the Hex chart, and it might look better/be easier with the opposite stats being on the same line, like with Offense at the top, and Defense at the bottom). Both with the original order, and with a blank, to decide what order:


http://oi52.*******.com/jutzep.jpghttp://oi51.*******.com/2cpfjfo.jpghttp://oi55.*******.com/ra1en8.jpghttp://oi56.*******.com/2n6dgy9.jpg


http://oi54.*******.com/9izgw3.jpghttp://oi52.*******.com/2cik209.jpghttp://oi54.*******.com/11io7s2.jpghttp://oi51.*******.com/28twcgz.jpg

Eon Master
26th September 2011, 11:27 PM
Would it not be easier to create a perfect copy, atom for atom, as it would be like taking a copy of Arc at whatever point in time I copied him?

Except that "atom for atom" would require having Arc there for the procedure, which would mean that he would either have to comply with it, or you would have to knock him out or something. I don't think it's that easy to knock him out, especially since he's the medical Captain. Injury, poisons, drugs... you name it, he can detect and avoid it.


And unless his biometric scanners are so precise that the copy would have to go through all the same events and factors since I created it, then... well, he'd have to come to the 12th Squad for that XP

Not quite. You admitted that I could be in Squad 12. Therefore, I could've created the device for him without your knowledge, because I am an unknown quantity. And so, you have outsmarted yourself.

MasterCharizard15
27th September 2011, 12:22 AM
...*Reads above*
I'm surrounded by geniuses.
Seriously, HOW much will all this cost to pull off?
It will cheaper just to Make more cookies then what the three of you are trying to pull off.

Just hide the cookies in your inner world.
It will be protected by your zan spirit. Unless it's lazy.
If anyone found a way to break in and disable the spirit to take the cookies, then honestly, there are more things to worry about then the cookies that can be easily replaced.

...*shakes head* Using common sense and logic against you three of all people, next thing will be me giving Dauc fashion advise or teaching Blue how to kill something. >.<


...so he can be lucky enough to break dislocate someone's jaw, but never lucky enough to get a girlfriend. How fitting...

I like Pokemon (...)
27th September 2011, 12:34 AM
Except that "atom for atom" would require having Arc there for the procedure, which would mean that he would either have to comply with it, or you would have to knock him out or something. I don't think it's that easy to knock him out, especially since he's the medical Captain. Injury, poisons, drugs... you name it, he can detect and avoid it.
He's good, but he's not that good that he could detect and and every kind of injury/poison/drug. Yes, he'd be damn hard to knock out, but not impossible. Especially with the Research and Development Department on my side.

Not quite. You admitted that I could be in Squad 12. Therefore, I could've created the device for him without your knowledge, because I am an unknown quantity. And so, you have outsmarted yourself.
As MC mentioned; funding. I think this is semi-fanon, but most of, if not all of the technology comes FROM the 12th Squad. And while I did say that (and that was mostly a joke as you analysed Sushi's ability not unsimilarly to how I would :p), you wouldn't have the same technical knowledge and understand to build that, at least as well as me/Ryuu. And I figured that unknown quantities were generally ommited since, well, an argument gets boring when you can throw in stuff from all over the place :p


It will cheaper just to Make more cookies then what the three of you are trying to pull off.
I love how this is all for M&Ms, as well.


Just hide the cookies in your inner world.
It will be protected by your zan spirit. Unless it's lazy.
If anyone found a way to break in and disable the spirit to take the cookies, then honestly, there are more things to worry about then the cookies that can be easily replaced.
Someone write a fic of all the Zan Spirits interacting with each other.



...so he can be lucky enough to break dislocate someone's jaw, but never lucky enough to get a girlfriend. How fitting...

Is it bad that the last part may have thrown him into my top 5 favourite characters?

arceus03
27th September 2011, 1:13 AM
...*Reads above*
I'm surrounded by geniuses.

Just hide the cookies in your inner world.
It will be protected by your zan spirit. Unless it's lazy.
If anyone found a way to break in and disable the spirit to take the cookies, then honestly, there are more things to worry about then the cookies that can be easily replaced.


XD I feel small.

Great idea. =D


He's good, but he's not that good that he could detect and and every kind of injury/poison/drug. Yes, he'd be damn hard to knock out, but not impossible. Especially with the Research and Development Department on my side.

Eh, I could say the same thing. You could try, but with the Medical Relief team on my side, you'd be hard pushed to. You could channel all the all the department energy to creating new poisons and whatnot, but I can order my division to research on all kinds of them as well. :p



I love how this is all for M&Ms, as well.

My stock ran out again D=


Someone write a fic of all the Zan Spirits interacting with each other.

Psssh. You'd be pushed even harder to steal cookies from Tsukibana's castle. The layout changes every time and there are countless numbers of rooms. And it's underwater, meaning that every time a spirit comes to visit, he/she/it would be enveloped with an air bubble Sandy and unless you want to drown, you wouldn't try to steal the cookies.

Well, that, unless you equip your Panda with an oxygen mask. But that still wouldn't provide enough time for him to go spelunking every single room.

Okay... back to revision

Eon Master
27th September 2011, 1:25 AM
He's good, but he's not that good that he could detect and and every kind of injury/poison/drug. Yes, he'd be damn hard to knock out, but not impossible. Especially with the Research and Development Department on my side.

As Arc said, he also has an entire division on his side, a division of qualified medical professionals, no less. In terms of injuries and health issues (which is what pertains to you being able to use the atom for atom replication), he has the edge over you. It's slight, but it's there.


As MC mentioned; funding.

*raises eyebrow* If we're going by semi-fannon, Rouga is over six-hundred years old. Kinda gives a new meaning to the term "compound interest" I think I'll be fine as far as money is concerned.


I think this is semi-fanon, but most of, if not all of the technology comes FROM the 12th Squad.

Because that totally gives you a monopoly on all technology in the Soul Society. Sorry, but no. Squad 12 is Research and Development, not Manufacturing. They're likely mass-produced with the help of other divisions. I'd likely be able to get the hardware if I needed to, or I could just steal it. And since this is semi-fannon, Rouga is a master sneaksman.


And while I did say that (and that was mostly a joke as you analysed Sushi's ability not unsimilarly to how I would ), you wouldn't have the same technical knowledge and understand to build that, at least as well as me/Ryuu.

Ah, but I do have three times your experience. I think that evens it out. You might be able to build it faster, but quality won't be an issue with my work any more than yours.


And I figured that unknown quantities were generally ommited since, well, an argument gets boring when you can throw in stuff from all over the place

How did you ever pass an Algebra class with that mindset, lol? Jk.
Unknown quantities are what you need to focus on, because they're what you can't predict. You have to predict all outside factors to be able to understand them, and your ignoring them simply leaves that loophole open.

@MC: I really don't think you can just take cookies into your inner world. Think of the reprocussions if some of our Zan spirits got their hands on sugar.

MasterCharizard15
27th September 2011, 1:43 AM
...the most brilliant minds in the Sereitei everyone.


@MC: I really don't think you can just take cookies into your inner world. Think of the reprocussions if some of our Zan spirits got their hands on sugar.

...your zan maybe. >>
Even if all of them become hyperactive nutcases with any kind of sugar, they'll have to materialize into the outside world in order to reek havoc.
In which case they can ALL be easily stopped by their owners, even if they went Bankai.

...did I just justify us having a Rouge Zanpaktou Arc with Arc's cookies?
That has got the be the most hilarious and sad way to have have a filler Arc. XD


ILp: Is it bad that the last part may have thrown him into my top 5 favourite characters?
Yes, yes it is. XD
Got a Sushi boy a fan without even trying. This is how much my awesome can without effort.


Arc: Psssh. You'd be pushed even harder to steal cookies from Tsukibana's castle. The layout changes every time and there are countless numbers of rooms. And it's underwater, meaning that every time a spirit comes to visit, he/she/it would be enveloped with an air bubble Sandy and unless you want to drown, you wouldn't try to steal the cookies.

Well, that, unless you equip your Panda with an oxygen mask. But that still wouldn't provide enough time for him to go spelunking every single room.


...that means your inner world is the BEST place to hide them. All you would have to do is keep your zan from eating them. Since Eon thinks zans+sugar=Doom

EDIT: I'm coming down with something, so the next chapter and profiles will take longer to finish.
I'm trying this radical new treatment called resting. It seems gimmicky and stupid, but it works according to most.

arceus03
27th September 2011, 2:43 AM
@MC: I really don't think you can just take cookies into your inner world. Think of the reprocussions if some of our Zan spirits got their hands on sugar.

You zan maybe. XD Tsukibana would be fine with cookies. Or M&Ms. Speaking of which. I need to get some more.



...did I just justify us having a Rouge Zanpaktou Arc with Arc's cookies?
That has got the be the most hilarious and sad way to have have a filler Arc. XD

Ahaha, that sounds cool XD
What would I be plotting, though? To overturn Sereitei? Some dark past? Idea of a sick joke? Taking over the world? (Though that would be ILPy's intention, not mine)


...that means your inner world is the BEST place to hide them. All you would have to do is keep your zan from eating them. Since Eon thinks zans+sugar=Doom

Indeed XD
I don't think underwater women like to eat cookies though. They'd probably prefer, idk, sushi?
Now that gave me an idea to wholly personalize Tsukibana... Favorite food, color preference, hobby...


EDIT: I'm coming down with something, so the next chapter and profiles will take longer to finish.
I'm trying this radical new treatment called resting. It seems gimmicky and stupid, but it works according to most.

It's not radical and gimmicky. Certainly not stupid, either. XD Get well soon. =D Iyasu, Tsukibana

Golde
27th September 2011, 3:06 AM
It's a very long, yet entertaining story. But short version, its a feral goat that my uncle caught so he could sell it later that day. It got lose, and we chased it to a random neighbor's house down the street. An hour and two semi injured dogs later, we got it and dragged it back to our house.


I tell ya, doing that is the best cardio-exercise you can get. After the whole ordeal, my dad and I were spent. S-P-E-N-T, spent, my dd was lucky enough to get some sleep.

We used to have a pig. Her name was Sue (short for Sewer). The previous tenant had this big pen she used to raise bulldogs in. One day she got out, and lemme tell you, pot belly pigs can run. So us and our two neighbors tried catching her, for like, 2 hours. After that she walked back in her pen and fell asleep.



XD Oh btw, is Rex a Captain now?

8D I think you also drew Byakuya once. :p I have quite a number of your drawings.

Uh...yes :p

And I don't remember. Probably. I can't access DA while at school.



...also, I almost put down Golde's name as "Godly". Epic misspellings

Lol better than what everyone else jumps too. I don't fight wolves.

Zameric
27th September 2011, 5:20 AM
I wish more of you would weigh in on the different charts (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13496862&postcount=4618)...


...*Reads above*
I'm surrounded by geniuses.
Seriously, HOW much will all this cost to pull off?
It will cheaper just to Make more cookies then what the three of you are trying to pull off.

Just hide the cookies in your inner world.
It will be protected by your zan spirit. Unless it's lazy.
If anyone found a way to break in and disable the spirit to take the cookies, then honestly, there are more things to worry about then the cookies that can be easily replaced.

...*shakes head* Using common sense and logic against you three of all people, next thing will be me giving Dauc fashion advise or teaching Blue how to kill something. >.<
You sir, win 10 internets and a brofist. *gives MC his goodies*


Because that totally gives you a monopoly on all technology in the Soul Society. Sorry, but no. Squad 12 is Research and Development, not Manufacturing. They're likely mass-produced with the help of other divisions. I'd likely be able to get the hardware if I needed to, or I could just steal it. And since this is semi-fannon, Rouga is a master sneaksman.
Ah, yes. The Kajiya clan is the main sword manufacturer for the Soul Society.
We create the blank zanpakutos used in the Soul Reaper Academy that allow Soul Reapers in-training to manefest their abilities.


Lol better than what everyone else jumps too. I don't fight wolves.
Goldie Locks! :D

arceus03
27th September 2011, 6:13 AM
We used to have a pig. Her name was Sue (short for Sewer). The previous tenant had this big pen she used to raise bulldogs in. One day she got out, and lemme tell you, pot belly pigs can run. So us and our two neighbors tried catching her, for like, 2 hours. After that she walked back in her pen and fell asleep.

That... is a truly inspiring funny story. XD


Uh...yes :p

Cool. =D
Congratulations, Rex. *gives a bag of chocolate chip cookies*

Now get to work on that Squad page


And I don't remember. Probably. I can't access DA while at school.

XD Why not? And yeah, you did. I still have that pic in my folder. :p


I wish more of you would weigh in on the different charts (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13496862&postcount=4618)...

Quite honestly, I don't care whichever layout you guys want to use. I'll just take whatever everyone agrees on. I mean... Not that it changes the way I view my stats, or something. I know ILPy would find the areas to be different for different layouts or maybe not but personally, I just know I have stats and I'd like to see them presented as an image, that's all. However you want to put the image, up to you. Even if you suddenly decide to make a bar chart like the Bulbapedia one


Goldie Locks! :D

What you just did... o.o
*waits for a blade thunderstorm clash with popcorns*

PKMN Trainer Rex
27th September 2011, 6:53 AM
We used to have a pig. Her name was Sue (short for Sewer). The previous tenant had this big pen she used to raise bulldogs in. One day she got out, and lemme tell you, pot belly pigs can run. So us and our two neighbors tried catching her, for like, 2 hours. After that she walked back in her pen and fell asleep.


Someone who knows my pain! It's a good story to tell to others isn't it?





Uh...yes :p


Uhhh................SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE T!!!!!



Congratulations, Rex. *gives a bag of chocolate chip cookies*

Now get to work on that Squad page


COOOOOOOOOOKIEE!!! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqL7jyrXhLs)

Maybe

Speaking of hiding places for your cookies. Hide them in your tummy. Thats the first last place anyone will ever think of.

Jinchuuriki Hunter
27th September 2011, 2:42 PM
@Eon:

That explanation seems sound until you try applying it to the chandelier situation. If, as you say, the punch may only affect a single "variable" of luck (which brings up the question of what happens if there are multiple variables that happen to be neither mutually exclusive nor independent of each other, as in most of real life), then surely, flipping or "punching" the coin should only cause some strange "lucky" thing to happen to ONLY the coin.
Except it didn't. It caused the coin to unscrew an entire chandelier.
If something like that can happen, what's stopping him from causing Ikkaku's shoulder to twist his fingers into his own eyes?
The limitations are, as of yet, not clear enough.
I say more information is required for further investigation.

I like Pokemon (...)
27th September 2011, 10:32 PM
Eh, I could say the same thing. You could try, but with the Medical Relief team on my side, you'd be hard pushed to. You could channel all the all the department energy to creating new poisons and whatnot, but I can order my division to research on all kinds of them as well. :p
So I'd call a possible stale mate.

Well, that, unless you equip your Panda with an oxygen mask. But that still wouldn't provide enough time for him to go spelunking every single room.
*Cough*

*raises eyebrow* If we're going by semi-fannon, Rouga is over six-hundred years old. Kinda gives a new meaning to the term "compound interest" I think I'll be fine as far as money is concerned.
In a place where living to well over a hundred years and still being in your prime is normal, I think "compound interest" would be a relative term.



Because that totally gives you a monopoly on all technology in the Soul Society. Sorry, but no. Squad 12 is Research and Development, not Manufacturing. They're likely mass-produced with the help of other divisions. I'd likely be able to get the hardware if I needed to, or I could just steal it. And since this is semi-fannon, Rouga is a master sneaksman.
But monopoly is such a fun game....


How did you ever pass an Algebra class with that mindset, lol? Jk.
XD I know, it's a miracle that I passed Year 7 maths.


Unknown quantities are what you need to focus on, because they're what you can't predict. You have to predict all outside factors to be able to understand them, and your ignoring them simply leaves that loophole open.
There's also the fact that I'm not taking this entirely seriously I've been rather blank minded recently

@MC: I really don't think you can just take cookies into your inner world. Think of the reprocussions if some of our Zan spirits got their hands on sugar.
Do we know if objects can be taken INTO the inner world, anyway?

Even if all of them become hyperactive nutcases with any kind of sugar, they'll have to materialize into the outside world in order to reek havoc.
In which case they can ALL be easily stopped by their owners, even if they went Bankai.
Makes me wonder if Kagirinai-Kuuhaku likes chocolates as much as Draco...


Yes, yes it is. XD
Got a Sushi boy a fan without even trying. This is how much my awesome can without effort.
I just oversympathise with characters that can't get a girlfriend/boyfriend.



EDIT: I'm coming down with something, so the next chapter and profiles will take longer to finish.
I'm trying this radical new treatment called resting. It seems gimmicky and stupid, but it works according to most.
D8 I hope you get better.
I think Eon is a master with that treatment. Kusari, on the other hand, would know absolutely nothing about it.

Ahaha, that sounds cool XD
What would I be plotting, though? To overturn Sereitei? Some dark past? Idea of a sick joke? Taking over the world? (Though that would be ILPy's intention, not mine)
Yes it is, thank you for posting it all over the internet so early on in my stages <.<

We used to have a pig. Her name was Sue (short for Sewer). The previous tenant had this big pen she used to raise bulldogs in. One day she got out, and lemme tell you, pot belly pigs can run. So us and our two neighbors tried catching her, for like, 2 hours. After that she walked back in her pen and fell asleep.
Ahaha, that's awesome.


Congratulations, Rex!


Quite honestly, I don't care whichever layout you guys want to use. I'll just take whatever everyone agrees on. I mean... Not that it changes the way I view my stats, or something. I know ILPy would find the areas to be different for different layouts or maybe not but personally, I just know I have stats and I'd like to see them presented as an image, that's all. However you want to put the image, up to you. Even if you suddenly decide to make a bar chart like the Bulbapedia one
The areas would change indeed 8D. Would make it interesting to compare, especially since the chart puts emphasis on consecutive stats.

Maybe I should take the Pokemon stats and turn them into a chart. I even have the layout planned in my head already.

MasterCharizard15
27th September 2011, 11:47 PM
The Arc has ended.
I loved the final battle, te fact everyone had some use was refreshing. I knew it would end up being Ichigo vs Yusima, but wow, even then even KON had use.

I'm guessing his loses his powers like the first time he eats the pill. Slowly, but surely he'll lose his powers again. Meaning we can have one last episode for Ichigo and Rukia to have a tear good bye that ill make the shippers become even more belligerent.

Since Ichigo + Any emotion or no emotion to a character= TRUE WUV!

...got off track for a moment...

I really enjoyed this arc, the Captain battles were nice to watch and Kon really got development. Also Yoruichi and Urahara were in this filler alot, meaning pure fanservice incarnate was injected into this arc, with a reason to boot!

Overall, I say this filler arc is on par if not better than the zanpaktou Arc, really good fight scenes and developing Kon of all people into a much more likeable character. Though Rukia, Renji, Chad, Uyru and Orihime did seem to just go with everything without anything noticeable beside worrying for Ichigo/Nazomi/Kon or the Soul Society. Then again, could they have added anything more?


...

arceus03
28th September 2011, 12:01 AM
COOOOOOOOOOKIEE!!! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqL7jyrXhLs)

AHHHH! ABOMINATION! Get that thing AWAY from me DX
See, it doesn't really eat the cookie, it just scatters it on the floor. An awful waste. >.>

btw, MC pulled that on me once


Maybe

Ahaha. Take your time :p It's not compulsory, but hey, it's fun, and it's always nice to keep your Squad organized.


Speaking of hiding places for your cookies. Hide them in your tummy. Thats the first last place anyone will ever think of.

XD But that means I can't save any for midnight snack or something like that.


So I'd call a possible stale mate.

XD Meh nvm, my M&M has ran out anyway. *buys some more*

*entire debate about hiding M&M in cookie oven starts again*


*Cough*

I know. Still, a HUGE palace? With lots and lots and lots of doors? Eternally changing layout? It's going to get exhausted.


But monopoly is such a fun game....

Digression


Yes it is, thank you for posting it all over the internet so early on in my stages <.<

Ahaha, you could have denied it, but you admitted it. Not my fault :p


The areas would change indeed 8D. Would make it interesting to compare, especially since the chart puts emphasis on consecutive stats.

... Right.



Except it didn't. It caused the coin to unscrew an entire chandelier.

Ah. How can a coin unscrew a chandelier, though? There's not as much "luck" in that as "weird occurrences".

btw, I had my Biology test today. (http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/308062_1801397333545_1798170828_1212982_648381345_ n.jpg)

PKMN Trainer Rex
28th September 2011, 8:37 AM
Congratulations, Rex!


W00T!





AHHHH! ABOMINATION! Get that thing AWAY from me DX
See, it doesn't really eat the cookie, it just scatters it on the floor. An awful waste. >.>

btw, MC pulled that on me once


Its a puppet, it can't eat. :p You can not shake my love of the cookie monster!




Ahaha. Take your time :p It's not compulsory, but hey, it's fun, and it's always nice to keep your Squad organized.


Or I could just keep Senny's. But its really bland.




XD But that means I can't save any for midnight snack or something like that.


Then keep them...................under a false bottom of your drawers. Not just one, multiple drawers. So you have back up stashes. Just be sure that they're in air tight containers.

Edit: More ideas. Maybe hollowed out books, or the empty spaces of a stereo speaker.

Blackacer
28th September 2011, 10:49 AM
Yo guys , im on study break these few days so anyone needs banner?

arceus03
28th September 2011, 5:15 PM
Its a puppet, it can't eat. :p You can not shake my love of the cookie monster!

No wonder it's called a monster :p I prefer the yellow bird anyway. Whatever his name is. XD


Or I could just keep Senny's. But its really bland.

It is, kinda.


Then keep them...................under a false bottom of your drawers. Not just one, multiple drawers. So you have back up stashes. Just be sure that they're in air tight containers.

Edit: More ideas. Maybe hollowed out books, or the empty spaces of a stereo speaker.

Ahaha, ILPy could easily sniff those out. I'm devising a hiding place against him, remember?


Yo guys , im on study break these few days so anyone needs banner?

Um, please avoid posting one-liners like that. At least put in something more to your posts, okay?

Manga~! =D
Uh... Another one-shot. Two, actually. >.> Chances are, Byakuya vs Tsukishima is going to end in the same way. Or all we're gonna see is a bloody mess like Yammy again. Uhh..

Though, interesting insights on Jackie's and Yukio's past. idk Jackie's motive with her last move. She could be trying to kill Renji, or she somehow knew Renji is protected by plot would survive the explosion, so she had no worries in killing herself, knowing that it won't hurt Renji. The former would be a typical villain move, the latter would be d'awwwwww typical Kubo move. Whichever one, I guess. XD

lol, Yukio. You are too young and too powerless to claim the same thing as Barragan. He, at least, had no need to depend on a strapped device on his arm to do things. You do.

Does controlling the rooms remind you of Szayel?

Ahaha. For one who taunts people, he gets agitated pretty fast himself. And seems like Hitsugaya can freeze people with only touching them now. I'm interested to know the improved abilities of other shinigami as well now.

I'm beginning to share ILPy's thoughts on this. Kubo is making the shinigami seem too overly powerful so that even the Fullbringers with their power boosts are diddly squat against them. Looks like this IS a filler arc, lol. And I hope Ichigo's fight doesn't last 10 chapters. It'll be a real troll when other shinigami get half a chapter fight each, but Ichigo gets 10. But then, Kubo has always been a troll anyway

Eon Master
28th September 2011, 6:48 PM
First off, let me just say that Jin was right on the money when he said that Bleach is a total copy of Yu Yu Hakushou. Yukio is basically Anauma, aka Game Master, the kid who hated his parents and peers because he was smarter than them, and whose "territory" ability was to bring video games into the real world. The only major difference is that Anauma was forced to play by the rules of the game, while Yukio is akin to a hacker, basically messing with the game for his own enjoyment.

Also, as for this being a "filler arc", I'm pretty sure there might be something else behind the scenes, and the Fullbringers are just being set up to take a fall. Think about it; even the lower Espada weren't completely shat on by their opponents. Now? It's just a bloodbath. There's got to be more, even Kubo isn't that stupid.

I like Pokemon (...)
28th September 2011, 7:47 PM
Not a bad chapter, imo. Most of it WAS just Yukio talking, though, so things happened quite quickly - speaking of, it feels like I missed a chapter. Most of the Fullbringers have only fought for, what, one or two chapters before dying?

Of course, Renji has to be noble and not kill her. Completely goes against what Ikkaku said though XD

So Yukio would rather kill them both, than let them both live. Makes me wonder how he'd play chess.

We have too many characters that lean law instead of chaotic, I think.

Okay, so Jackie had a tragic past? I wonder if that might be explained later.

Aaaand Jackie died. So that's Jackie and Giriko.

The scene of Hitsugaya blasting a hole in the wall is how I imagined the invasion on Hueco Mundo to be like (before I read it).

Is it just me, or does Yukio have quite a... blank look in his eyes? Like when he said "coooool".

"I'M LIKE A GOD HERE" okay, so we have Gods of Death (Shinigami); Aizen; Barragan (God of Hueco Mundo, I think?), Giriko and his Gods of Time, and now Yukio...

"You must have been abandoned" hit a nerve there. Though it is giving some backstory to Yukio, but it seems a bit... cliche. At least it explains where he gets all of his money from.

So he's at least partially frozen, at the monsters are going to attack him. I almost want his powers to not just rely on the arm-thing, and he can command them to stop. Though at the same time, I want to see deaths. Yukio's a good character, I think, but he's a dick.


Ahaha, you could have denied it, but you admitted it. Not my fault :p
XD I try not to lie XP

Or I could just keep Senny's. But its really bland.
You could copy and paste it, if that's what you mean, but the link in the first post will have to change to one of your posts, in order to edit it for new members and stuff.

Uh... Another one-shot. Two, actually. >.> Chances are, Byakuya vs Tsukishima is going to end in the same way. Or all we're gonna see is a bloody mess like Yammy again. Uhh..

Does controlling the rooms remind you of Szayel?


I think that maybe Tsukishima and Ginjou will have the most extended fights. Of all people, I don't think Tsukishima should be killed in two chapters.

Szayel, and Tousen, I think, used a control room.

First off, let me just say that Jin was right on the money when he said that Bleach is a total copy of Yu Yu Hakushou. Yukio is basically Anauma, aka Game Master, the kid who hated his parents and peers because he was smarter than them, and whose "territory" ability was to bring video games into the real world. The only major difference is that Anauma was forced to play by the rules of the game, while Yukio is akin to a hacker, basically messing with the game for his own enjoyment.

Also, as for this being a "filler arc", I'm pretty sure there might be something else behind the scenes, and the Fullbringers are just being set up to take a fall. Think about it; even the lower Espada weren't completely shat on by their opponents. Now? It's just a bloodbath. There's got to be more, even Kubo isn't that stupid.
I really do not remember anything about Yu Yu Hakusho

You could be right there. What are Isshin and Urahara doing? Something special, probably. Though I do think that Kubo is rushing it, partially because he just wants this arc to end so he can focus on the shinigami. And what's better than a curbstomp battle? 5 of them.

PKMN Trainer Rex
28th September 2011, 10:10 PM
Renji is noble, and Jackie has a tragic past. No real surprise there.

I used to like Yukio, (I said this before) but his cockiness is really annoying.

"You brat!" Look who's calling the kettle black. xD It's also funny how irritable he is though.





No wonder it's called a monster :p I prefer the yellow bird anyway. Whatever his name is. XD


His name is Big Bird. xD




Ahaha, ILPy could easily sniff those out. I'm devising a hiding place against him, remember?


Then its not wise to talk about on this thread.




Is it just me, or does Yukio have quite a... blank look in his eyes? Like when he said "coooool".

I sensed a little sarcasm there.



You could copy and paste it, if that's what you mean, but the link in the first post will have to change to one of your posts, in order to edit it for new members and stuff.


That's what I mean. But since its so blah, I'll just change the font.

Zameric
29th September 2011, 1:49 AM
If Jackie isn't actually dead, then I suspect Jackie x Renji fanfiction, somewhere on the internet.

Yukio is a wanna be troll. He's just hasn't realized is god-mod potential though.

I am disappoint by the fights in this arc. Hopefully Ginjou or Trollkishima will put up a better fight.

MasterCharizard15
29th September 2011, 3:04 AM
Renji hasn't been told chivalry is dead yet. I use it, so i know this to be true.

Jackie and Yukio have tragic pasts...meh.
Jackie is dead...and possibly Yukio as well.
I'm more interested in the fact Hitsugaya can freeze people by touch now.
...does that mean all elemental Zanpaktou can effect their owners that way?
Yay, Kida, Arc, Dre, Kusari , Golde and Myself can be even more BROKEN now!
Rukia and Byakuya's battles should last longer...


Poor Manga only out a few hours and pretty much everyone already pounced and commented on you. *Shakes head*

minchan
29th September 2011, 5:13 AM
Gosh you guys, you always end up discussing the whole chapter before I even get here... XD And I couldn't help it, I read it right before going to class, and then when I came back I had a lot of stuff to do, including eating dinner... =/ LOL

arceus03
29th September 2011, 5:29 AM
Think about it; even the lower Espada weren't completely shat on by their opponents. Now? It's just a bloodbath. There's got to be more, even Kubo isn't that stupid.

Yammy
Aha, we'll see...



We have too many characters that lean law instead of chaotic, I think.

Yukio's a good character, I think, but he's a dick.

What do you mean?

I know, I liked him. :<


XD I try not to lie XP

lol. You won't last long as a villain.


I think that maybe Tsukishima and Ginjou will have the most extended fights. Of all people, I don't think Tsukishima should be killed in two chapters.

Szayel, and Tousen, I think, used a control room.

Of course not two, half a chapter. As what happened with the others. XD

Tousen, which spawned the whole theory of "TOUSEN CAN ACTUALLY SEE"


Though I do think that Kubo is rushing it, partially because he just wants this arc to end so he can focus on the shinigami. And what's better than a curbstomp battle? 5 of them.

Mhm.
XD 5 of them indeed.



I used to like Yukio, (I said this before) but his cockiness is really annoying.

Me too. :<


His name is Big Bird. xD

Ah yeah, him. XD


Then its not wise to talk about on this thread.

Ironic, isn't it? Talking about hiding something from him, and telling him what I'm planning to do. Then him refuting the methods. Enter Eon, who gave me the failsafe way of saving my M&M. And he refutes back. XD



Yukio is a wanna be troll. He's just hasn't realized is god-mod potential though.

I am disappoint by the fights in this arc. Hopefully Ginjou or Trollkishima will put up a better fight.

What god-mod potential?

Me too..



I'm more interested in the fact Hitsugaya can freeze people by touch now.
...does that mean all elemental Zanpaktou can effect their owners that way?
Yay, Kida, Arc, Dre, Kusari , Golde and Myself can be even more BROKEN now!

Yup, me too.

Ahaha. *handshakes with people* *people die of suffocating* Ooops.

Alternatively, brofist! *steams* That's MC's idea

OT: My roommate was watching Pokemon, and suddenly the first theme song played. Ah, nostalgia :3

Zameric
29th September 2011, 7:01 AM
When I mistyped the url of a manga website, I was redirected to this website (http://www.opening-ending.com/).
But I ended up finding on there, full versions of all the opening and closing songs (http://www.opening-ending.com/generiques-vo.htm#bleach) of the Bleach anime.
They seem to just be on the website for listening purposes, no downloads.

MasterCharizard15
29th September 2011, 10:30 AM
Yup, me too.

Ahaha. *handshakes with people* *people die of suffocating* Ooops.

Alternatively, brofist! *steams* That's MC's idea


*Brosfists back causing steam to cover the entire club*

Yup, We're so cool were hot and so hot were cool!

Though elements are always nerfed by this rule:

General Rule in fiction: Elemental powers must be nerfed so that fights can last longer. Which is why fire type zans can't boil people can't kill via breathing in superheated air or smoke.

Just for fun, I'll list how many Instant death moves Kubo just opened up for elemental zan users.

Fire: Boil to death or burn to death. Users choice if they target internally or externally. Or just making the body explode via chemicals in said body.

Water: Drowning or filling the target with enough of it to make limbs or the entire body explode.

Wind/Air: Suffocation or good old fashioned sucking the oxygen out of someone, even via their pores.

Earth/Metal: Manipulating the minerals that make up their body and turning it into dust or destructing said minerals so they literally fall apart.

Lighting/Electrical: Short circuit their brains and kill them, or just plasma level heat of lightning and boil them to death.

Ice: Flash freeze them to death.

Wood: Drain the nutrients from their bodies, leaving them dried dead husks.

Light/Dark/Void are more concept than actually making up the living things bodies. I mean you could say they could score a death blow via massive soul damage or just reducing the soul to nothing.

*All deaths are subject to time variables and the skill of said person trying to pull it off.

...did I miss or forget any of them?

Also, since one of you thinks I'm horribly uncreative and quite possibly stupid, I'll let the rest of you all add more fun ways for elemental users to kill things. Since CLEARLY I'm incompetent. >.>

Yup my fan fics don't mean jack **** at ALL. Seriously, I don't know why I still even bother to nice and helpful to others.

I like Pokemon (...)
29th September 2011, 8:29 PM
I sensed a little sarcasm there.
Probably.


That's what I mean. But since its so blah, I'll just change the font.
Ah, I see.

If Jackie isn't actually dead, then I suspect Jackie x Renji fanfiction, somewhere on the internet.
I wouldn't be surprised if there already is.


I'm more interested in the fact Hitsugaya can freeze people by touch now.
...does that mean all elemental Zanpaktou can effect their owners that way?
Yay, Kida, Arc, Dre, Kusari , Golde and Myself can be even more BROKEN now!

I highly doubt that, actually. It's probably just another power that he gained/learnt to use. Imo it wouldn't make sense for suddenly EVERYONE can do something similar to that (trying to keep it vague).

Gosh you guys, you always end up discussing the whole chapter before I even get here... XD And I couldn't help it, I read it right before going to class, and then when I came back I had a lot of stuff to do, including eating dinner... =/ LOL
Ahaha, sorry XD. I remember some people, before, saying how they don't reply to the manga because I say everything.


What do you mean?

lol. You won't last long as a villain.

Tousen, which spawned the whole theory of "TOUSEN CAN ACTUALLY SEE"

What god-mod potential?

OT: My roommate was watching Pokemon, and suddenly the first theme song played. Ah, nostalgia :3
We have a lot of characters that are like "I WILL DO THE RIGHT THING!" I suppose this is because of the number of main characters we have, though it would be nice to see more Neutral Goods, or Chaotic Goods. Or even Chaotic Neutral and True Neutral.

I've always liked the idea of a villain who follows a very strict moral code (Lawful Evil); including things like no lying (making exceptions for white lies, and "lying by omission").

I always assumed he understood the Reiatsu signatures.

He has the ability to control whatever he wants, right?

Ahhh nostalgia.


Though elements are always nerfed by this rule:

General Rule in fiction: Elemental powers must be nerfed so that fights can last longer. Which is why fire type zans can't boil people can't kill via breathing in superheated air or smoke.
I think it's just the fact that the idea of elements in nature is that it is what makes up nature. And depending on how small your powers work for, can very easily make things more or less dangerous. For example, Arc can control water, but that's very vague on its own. Can he control, literally, a water molecule? Could he focus and control a tiny droplet of water, as easily as he could control a much larger body of water (like a glass of water)? How about in comparison to an entire ocean?

arceus03
29th September 2011, 10:28 PM
When I mistyped the url of a manga website, I was redirected to this website (http://www.opening-ending.com/).
But I ended up finding on there, full versions of all the opening and closing songs (http://www.opening-ending.com/generiques-vo.htm#bleach) of the Bleach anime.
They seem to just be on the website for listening purposes, no downloads.

Cool 8D I already have my favorites donwloaded, but that's a nice place if you want to suddenly listen to the songs on your phone, I guess. XD


*Brosfists back causing steam to cover the entire club*

Also, since one of you thinks I'm horribly uncreative and quite possibly stupid, I'll let the rest of you all add more fun ways for elemental users to kill things. Since CLEARLY I'm incompetent. >.>

Seriously, I don't know why I still even bother to nice and helpful to others.


*brofist*
Looking back, though, he didn't really freeze Yukio with his touch. He pushed him, sending him to a spot where there's ice on the floor, and Yukio started getting frozen from his feet, meaning that the ice on the floor is actually doing the freezing, not Hitsugaya's touch. And that ice must have come from the attack before, or another technique of Hyourinmaru...

Man, we lost the chance to upgrade? XP

Shh, don't mention that here >.>
jk. Eh, what that person thinks of you doesn't necessarily mean that everyone else do too. If that person's opinion is shared by many others, then probably that person is right and you might want to look at yourself. But if that's only one voice over a million others saying otherwise, then you know who's correct or wrong.

Heh, we don't need a reason to be nice and helpful to others, do we? Let the thing that's bothering you go and simply continue with your life, no point going back to that part.



We have a lot of characters that are like "I WILL DO THE RIGHT THING!" I suppose this is because of the number of main characters we have, though it would be nice to see more Neutral Goods, or Chaotic Goods. Or even Chaotic Neutral and True Neutral.

Something tells me ILPy is posting this in a hurry
Neutral Goods.. what? I'm not a frequent troper, lol. Meh, nvm. XD


I always assumed he understood the Reiatsu signatures.

Yeah, right. And that includes "observing" the Menos Grande with a pair of binoculars. Though that was an omake :p


He has the ability to control whatever he wants, right?

Well, first off, we can safely assume that doing "whatever he wants" requires him to push the buttons on his arm. And secondly, when he said "In here", I assumed that he was referring to the game room, or any dimension inside the game. So he could probably create any stuff out of that dimension (we've seen rockets and monsters) but he couldn't actually control someone who is trapped within that room, because his powers don't extend to that. I could be wrong, though, because earlier he DID have control over the characters (giving HP to Ichigo), but he couldn't possibly make a character inside that space choke to death or something.

So, as long as Hitsugaya keeps freezing/destroying things over, Yukio can't really do anything else. idk.


For example, Arc can control water, but that's very vague on its own. Can he control, literally, a water molecule? Could he focus and control a tiny droplet of water, as easily as he could control a much larger body of water (like a glass of water)? How about in comparison to an entire ocean?

I can. First off, allow me to correct you. I cannot control water, I only control Tsukibana, which is actually my blade. It's a limited volume of water, but the possibilities of where I can go with that are endless. Tiny droplet or big splashes make no difference. When she goes inside the body, for example, to extract a certain poison out, I could be really precise so as to let only a small volume enter the body system (cells, possibly) so she doesn't disrupt the whole system in itself hemolysis. Water molecule, also yes, because in the rare case that Tsukibana evaporates, I have to be able to control the steam in order to release that heat somewhere else. So my control over water is limited to the amount that I have, but the possibilities are broad. As opposed to, Halibel, for example. She could make huge fountains and waterfalls and high-pressured jets of water, but once released, she has no control over it.

Which makes me think... then I should also be able to control the ice if Tsukibana is frozen. Hmm.

minchan
30th September 2011, 12:05 AM
ILP I BLAME YOU. =w=

Off topic: I heard the first season Pokemon theme a few months ago, and even watched an episode. It was free on demand. =w= Soooo nostalgic. Like, it's my childhood. XD

Back on topic:

I'm tired of waiting a week for more content... =.= Maybe I should take some time to re-read the entire series, or at least maybe this arc... I dunno. I'm grasping at straws right now. I just need more Bleach. XD

I like Pokemon (...)
30th September 2011, 12:56 AM
Looking back, though, he didn't really freeze Yukio with his touch. He pushed him, sending him to a spot where there's ice on the floor, and Yukio started getting frozen from his feet, meaning that the ice on the floor is actually doing the freezing, not Hitsugaya's touch. And that ice must have come from the attack before, or another technique of Hyourinmaru...
That makes more sense.

Something tells me ILPy is posting this in a hurry
Neutral Goods.. what? I'm not a frequent troper, lol. Meh, nvm. XD
Why do you say that?
Then go on TVTropes XP


Well, first off, we can safely assume that doing "whatever he wants" requires him to push the buttons on his arm. And secondly, when he said "In here", I assumed that he was referring to the game room, or any dimension inside the game. So he could probably create any stuff out of that dimension (we've seen rockets and monsters) but he couldn't actually control someone who is trapped within that room, because his powers don't extend to that. I could be wrong, though, because earlier he DID have control over the characters (giving HP to Ichigo), but he couldn't possibly make a character inside that space choke to death or something.
At least with the way that he's portraying it, it sounded like he could do (almost) anything in his room. That's what we were referring to. Though he does seem to have those limitations.

I can. First off, allow me to correct you. I cannot control water, I only control Tsukibana, which is actually my blade. It's a limited volume of water, but the possibilities of where I can go with that are endless. Tiny droplet or big splashes make no difference. When she goes inside the body, for example, to extract a certain poison out, I could be really precise so as to let only a small volume enter the body system (cells, possibly) so she doesn't disrupt the whole system in itself hemolysis. Water molecule, also yes, because in the rare case that Tsukibana evaporates, I have to be able to control the steam in order to release that heat somewhere else. So my control over water is limited to the amount that I have, but the possibilities are broad. As opposed to, Halibel, for example. She could make huge fountains and waterfalls and high-pressured jets of water, but once released, she has no control over it.

Which makes me think... then I should also be able to control the ice if Tsukibana is frozen. Hmm.
I keep forgetting that you can only control Tsukibana-water XD. Using you was a bad example, then. If you reply all "Arc"s with "a person that controls water", maybe that makes more sense.

I think you're fine as you are.

ILP I BLAME YOU. =w=
So do I.

kusari
30th September 2011, 1:16 AM
This chapter was OK.

Renji and Jackie was rather meh. Could've been better and Jackie could have a not-so-cliche backstory. Btw, RenJack is my new OTP.

Toshi vs Yukio was pretty good. Yukio is a pretty arrogant prick when he controls everything. He seems to turn back into a scared child again once Toshiro starts beating him.

All in all, Ginjo vs Ichi had better be longer.

Also, while killing some time before class this morning, I decided to look at the Bleach Wiki. I looked at the various Resurrecion and discovered that both Aaronierro and Mila Rose both use the release command "Devour". Because of that, I decided to change my release command because I don't like to be a dirty copier.

I'm also considering dropping the Lightning half of my Zan. Yay or nay?

arceus03
1st October 2011, 12:13 AM
That makes more sense.

Yup. I only realized it the second time I read it, because I first read it on my phone and kinda between classes, so I failed to notice that before. XD


Why do you say that?
Then go on TVTropes XP

You usually break quotes into smaller ones. You did not with that post. Amirite?

lol, no. That place is just a bit too confusing, like Wikipedia. You open one page to read about a trope, but the trope description contains a lot of other tropes that in the end you end up opening lots of tabs.

It's just confusing. XD (http://d24w6bsrhbeh9d.cloudfront.net/photo/273662_700b.jpg)


At least with the way that he's portraying it, it sounded like he could do (almost) anything in his room. That's what we were referring to. Though he does seem to have those limitations.

Mmmf. I think his ability is just to create anything from that room... And that doesn't seem godly enough. Whatever.


I think you're fine as you are.

Someone is afraid. 8D Though since ice has its water molecules fixed in place by hydrogen bonds and... something about lattice structure, I think, I wouldn't be able to move them freely. :P And it's not like she gets frozen easily anyway.



All in all, Ginjo vs Ichi had better be longer.

I'm also considering dropping the Lightning half of my Zan. Yay or nay?

Ahhhh I hope not. XD I hate Ichigo fights. Though since he's got a new outfit and a new blade, he might have, what, more power? idk, but his fight would most probably be all melee with occasional cries of Getsuga Tensho, so... yeah. >.>

Yay for me, because lightning is my weakness lol, it's your zan, your choice. :)

upbeatbarubeat
1st October 2011, 2:05 AM
may I join?

lest the forgotten sea
be overrun by the plunderers of the harbor
who ride the winds with unceasing laments
as the day comes to an end
in the late days of summer
ZACHIRU!!

arceus03
1st October 2011, 2:16 AM
may I join?

lest the forgotten sea
be overrun by the plunderers of the harbor
who ride the winds with unceasing laments
as the day comes to an end
in the late days of summer
ZACHIRU!!

A new member! Hai. =D arceus03, Captain of Squad 4, avid Unohana fan.

So, to get started, maybe you can tell us a bit more about yourself? Hobby, interest, education level For example, are you up to date with the manga and/or anime, or do you only keep track with only one? Favorite character, shinigami, arrancar, etc?

All in all, welcome to the Cllub! Enjoy your stay here. =)

upbeatbarubeat
1st October 2011, 2:27 AM
A new member! Hai. =D arceus03, Captain of Squad 4, avid Unohana fan.

So, to get started, maybe you can tell us a bit more about yourself? Hobby, interest, education level For example, are you up to date with the manga and/or anime, or do you only keep track with only one? Favorite character, shinigami, arrancar, etc?

All in all, welcome to the Cllub! Enjoy your stay here. =)

coolio.my interests are art, writing, foreign languages, psychology and foreign cultures.my hobbies are drawing, writing, reading, and practicing Japanese( i hav studied it for four years now).I am up to date on both the anime and manga. My favorite Bleach character is Shunsui. My favorite arrancar is Coyote Starrk.I also like Mashiro Kuna and all of the Visoreds.i also have a Bleach OC and am writing a fanfic. i hav only finished the 1st chapter though.

MasterCharizard15
1st October 2011, 2:41 AM
coolio.my interests are art, writing, foreign languages, psychology and foreign cultures.my hobbies are drawing, writing, reading, and practicing Japanese( i hav studied it for four years now).I am up to date on both the anime and manga. My favorite Bleach character is Shunsui. My favorite arrancar is Coyote Starrk.I also like Mashiro Kuna and all of the Visoreds.i also have a Bleach OC and am writing a fanfic. i hav only finished the 1st chapter though.

I'm Captain of Squad 6, also know as the offense Squad! You can call me MC.

Nice to meet you, you sound interesting and you're around the age of...well, the majority of the club here. XD So you're among many old college students.

Starrk and Shunsui are cool.

*pulls out list of random favorites: Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji are just a few of my favorites.

You write as well? May I ask for how long have you been writing?

In anycase, welcome to the Bleach club! I hope enjoy your time here. If you need any help or have any questions, feel free to ask a Captain.

arceus03
1st October 2011, 2:46 AM
coolio.my interests are art, writing, foreign languages, psychology and foreign cultures.my hobbies are drawing, writing, reading, and practicing Japanese( i hav studied it for four years now).I am up to date on both the anime and manga. My favorite Bleach character is Shunsui. My favorite arrancar is Coyote Starrk.I also like Mashiro Kuna and all of the Visoreds.i also have a Bleach OC and am writing a fanfic. i hav only finished the 1st chapter though.

Ah ha, Japanese. Cool =D And it's great that you're on par with the manga and anime, because we discuss those on a weekly basis here, so you don't need to be wary of spoilers or anything. ^_^

Oh, an OC? You might want to post it here, almost every member here has their own profile and zanpakto post where you put all of those in one post. You could go check the links on the first post if you want to have an idea how your zanpakto/profile page looks like.

Just so you know... New members here are considered as "Pluses". If you're active, you can choose any Squad you'd like to join. (You could do that even now though..) And the Squads here have their own Captains, though some are... inactive.

Oh, a fanfic? We have LOTS of fanfics here though only one or two are actually updated... others get updated once in a while, and the rest are dead so if you want to, you can post what you've written here and get a comment on it. It's not obligatory, but if you want extra review, yeah.

Also... You have a particular nickname you'd like us to call you with? I certainly don't want to write your full username every time. :p Oh btw, people refer to me as Arc.

upbeatbarubeat
1st October 2011, 2:50 AM
Ah ha, Japanese. Cool =D And it's great that you're on par with the manga and anime, because we discuss those on a weekly basis here, so you don't need to be wary of spoilers or anything. ^_^

Oh, an OC? You might want to post it here, almost every member here has their own profile and zanpakto post where you put all of those in one post. You could go check the links on the first post if you want to have an idea how your zanpakto/profile page looks like.

Just so you know... New members here are considered as "Pluses". If you're active, you can choose any Squad you'd like to join. (You could do that even now though..) And the Squads here have their own Captains, though some are... inactive.

Oh, a fanfic? We have LOTS of fanfics here though only one or two are actually updated... others get updated once in a while, and the rest are dead so if you want to, you can post what you've written here and get a comment on it. It's not obligatory, but if you want extra review, yeah.

Also... You have a particular nickname you'd like us to call you with? I certainly don't want to write your full username every time. :p Oh btw, people refer to me as Arc.

well sure i will post my OC profile!yeah once i have more written ( or at least when I finish the 2nd chapter) i can post my fanfic.i would like to join the 8th division and i would like the 4th seat if it is open.you can call me watever u like rly.call me baru or something i dont care :)

MasterCharizard15
1st October 2011, 3:00 AM
nice to meet you. :D i have been writing for awhile now i suppose. i just started my bleach fanfic on Monday actually. O3O' i wish i had more done but at least I am working on my second chapter. i hav like 8 chapters of a One Piece fanfic written but I dont know where to go with it.


well sure i will post my OC profile!yeah once i have more written ( or at least when I finish the 2nd chapter) i can post my fanfic.i would like to join the 8th division and i would like the 4th seat if it is open.you can call me watever u like rly.call me baru or something i dont care :)

Oh a One Piece fan as well? have you checked out the club for it on the forums?
Anyway, we look forward to your chapter and profile.

I'm sure the 8th captain will be happy to have you, though I don't think the page will be updated for a bit. So as long as your active and don't vanish like the many poor souls that couldn't keep up with the awesome win that is Bleach or this club, you'll be fine.

Final note: Try to avoid double posts, you can click the edit button on the bottom of your first post to add more stuff.

upbeatbarubeat
1st October 2011, 3:02 AM
Oh a One Piece fan as well? have you checked out the club for it on the forums?
Anyway, we look forward to your chapter and profile.

I'm sure the 8th captain will be happy to have you, though I don't think the page will be updated for a bit. So as long as your active and don't vanish like the many poor souls that couldn't keep up with the awesome win that is Bleach or this club, you'll be fine.

Final note: Try to avoid double posts, you can click the edit button on the bottom of your first post to add more stuff.

i havent looked at the one piece club yet actually o3o'
i will try my best not to vanish lol
(sorry about the double post.im new here QAQ')

MasterCharizard15
1st October 2011, 3:11 AM
i havent looked at the one piece club yet actually o3o'
i will try my best not to vanish lol
(sorry about the double post.im new here QAQ')

I see. The 9th captain here, runs that club.

Cool, hope you don't as you seem cool.

Welcome to the forums as well. XD It's okay.

Blackacer
1st October 2011, 5:49 AM
Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

kusari
1st October 2011, 7:09 AM
Here's the rewrite of my zan as a pure Wind type. Wanted to let you guys look over it before I changed anything.
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Hold your breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I punch the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~6 feet).

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Kaze no Shukumei: Saishuukokyuu (Winds of Fate: Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into winds of great force on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.



>New guy

Hey, Baru. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. I hope you have a good time in our fair club.


>People talking about delayed fics

I feel crappy about mine. I just can't seem to write things the way I want them.


>Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji are just a few of my favorites.
>Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji
>Yoruichi, Halibel

Forgetting someone (http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=nelliel#/d36flsj)?


>Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

If it's not too much trouble, could I ask for a banner? As for the look, possibly a Halibel banner.

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st October 2011, 7:11 AM
coolio.my interests are art, writing, foreign languages, psychology and foreign cultures.my hobbies are drawing, writing, reading, and practicing Japanese( i hav studied it for four years now).I am up to date on both the anime and manga. My favorite Bleach character is Shunsui. My favorite arrancar is Coyote Starrk.I also like Mashiro Kuna and all of the Visoreds.i also have a Bleach OC and am writing a fanfic. i hav only finished the 1st chapter though.

Well, ain't this a coinkey dink. Hey, I'm Rex, newly appointed Captain of Squad 8. As MC has said, my squad page isn't up yet, but I'll gladly take you on as my 4th seat. Unless you to go straight to lieutenant?

I like your taste in characters, deyz iz pimpz.



*pulls out list of random favorites: Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji are just a few of my favorites.


*Pulls out my list* Mitsubishi Lancer Evo V-IX (series 5 though 9), Subaru Impreza WRX-STI, Toyota AE86 Trueno, Nissan Skyline GTR, Ford Fiesta, Ford Focus RS.....Wait that's my favorite cars, never mind.



Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

Please, watch the one liners, its a no no.

But if you want, can make me a Shunsui banner that says "Squad 8" or something. Please and thank you.

MasterCharizard15
1st October 2011, 7:58 AM
Here's the rewrite of my zan as a pure Wind type. Wanted to let you guys look over it before I changed anything.
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Hold your breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I punch the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~6 feet).

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Kaze no Shukumei: Saishuukokyuu (Winds of Fate: Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into winds of great force on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.



>New guy

Hey, Baru. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. I hope you have a good time in our fair club.


>People talking about delayed fics

I feel crappy about mine. I just can't seem to write things the way I want them.


>Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji are just a few of my favorites.
>Yoruichi, Halibel, Kensei, Soi Fon, Hisagi, and Renji
>Yoruichi, Halibel

Forgetting someone (http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=nelliel#/d36flsj)?


>Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

If it's not too much trouble, could I ask for a banner? As for the look, either an Ukitake banner that says "Squad 13" or a Hallibel banner.

Your zan looks good.

It was at random, so Neliel, Urahara, Nemu, Matsumoto, Renji, Grimmjow, Ulquorra, Orihime, Ukitake, Rukia and Kon were left unsaid. Until now.


Banner: A Byakuya and Renji Banner that says Squad 6!

arceus03
1st October 2011, 8:12 AM
Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

... One liners, Ace. <_<; I believe I told you that already, lol.


Here's the rewrite of my zan as a pure Wind type. Wanted to let you guys look over it before I changed anything.

I like the command. :p Apart from that, I think that is fine.


Hey, Baru. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. I hope you have a good time in our fair club.

Just so you know, Baru means new in my language. XD A fitting name :p


If it's not too much trouble, could I ask for a banner? As for the look, either an Ukitake banner that says "Squad 13" or a Hallibel banner.



But if you want, can make me a Shunsui banner that says "Squad 8" or something. Please and thank you.



Banner: A Byakuya and Renji Banner that says Squad 6!

Oh... yeah. I still have the banners made by Mimori Kiryu (back in the old club) that has the custom font of the Squad name plus the respective captains and lieutenants. If anyone is interested, I could put those up. If no one wants to, I won't bother.

CyberBlaziken
1st October 2011, 8:24 AM
Welcome to The Bleach Club, upbeatbarubeat :D I'll call you Beat. okay?
I'm Kai, Lieut. of Squad 7,the awesome-est one
Nice to meet you.
Hope you have a good time.

Other than that, no comments on the Manga, it suucked. Utterly disappointed.

And Acer, watch those one liners >.> That's two now..

Slowly working away on my Zampakuto :/
I'll post it up by next week.

minchan
1st October 2011, 8:55 AM
Oh look a new member. HI I'M HYPER Min. Nice to meet you~ LOL I'm the lieutenant of squad 5 here. =) WE HAS COOKIEZ *shot*

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st October 2011, 9:16 AM
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Hold your breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I punch the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~6 feet).

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Kaze no Shukumei: Saishuukokyuu (Winds of Fate: Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into winds of great force on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.



I like it. Especially the giant Zanbato.



Oh... yeah. I still have the banners made by Mimori Kiryu (back in the old club) that has the custom font of the Squad name plus the respective captains and lieutenants. If anyone is interested, I could put those up. If no one wants to, I won't bother.

I'll take one. I can get my squad page up sooner.


Oh look a new member. HI I'M HYPER Min. Nice to meet you~ LOL I'm the lieutenant of squad 5 here. =) WE HAS COOKIEZ *shot*

Remember Min, one liners.

I like Pokemon (...)
1st October 2011, 1:40 PM
Btw, RenJack

All in all, Ginjo vs Ichi had better be longer.
Notsureifserious.

It's an Ichigo fight, of course it's going to be long.

Also, while killing some time before class this morning, I decided to look at the Bleach Wiki. I looked at the various Resurrecion and discovered that both Aaronierro and Mila Rose both use the release command "Devour". Because of that, I decided to change my release command because I don't like to be a dirty copier.

I'm also considering dropping the Lightning half of my Zan. Yay or nay?
You sound like you'd rather have the wind only type anyway XP It looks good.

You usually break quotes into smaller ones. You did not with that post. Amirite?
This time, I just wasn't bothered, especially since Firefox doesn't show the font tags, so I have to put more effort into not making my post the same as your font. I was lazy.

may I join?

lest the forgotten sea
be overrun by the plunderers of the harbor
who ride the winds with unceasing laments
as the day comes to an end
in the late days of summer
ZACHIRU!!
Welcome to the Bleach club 2! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname. As you suggested Baru, I shall call you that :)

I see Arc has already given you the test of joining.

Also, you write fanfiction? I'm the reviewer of the club >D. When you post it, I'll be sure to give it a thorough bashing (that's a good thing).

I think I just need Flash Step's new Hex charts, and I have everyone's >D

Jinchuuriki Hunter
1st October 2011, 3:51 PM
Yukio: This entire dimension is under my control! I could remove myself from it and erase it with you still inside if I wanted to! Or, I could turn the walls into fire or slow down time or turn the floor beneath you into a death pool of electric sharks!
But I'll make generic monsters instead.
Hitsugaya: *pushes Yukio onto ice*
Yukio: NOOO!! You've foiled me!!

Meanwhile...

Jackie: You've won...go ahead, finish me...
Renji: I won't hit a lady.
Jackie: Well I'm pretty seriously injured here and I don't think I've been hitting myself, idiot!
Renji: ...I won't hit a lady who can't fight back?
Jackie: Screw you, I'm self-destructing!

Seriously Kubo, you give your characters nigh-invulnerable abilities, and then you make them use them in the most inefficient and absolutely retarded ways possible. Aizen's illusions were nearly undefeatable, he could've stuck with them. But then you turned him into a condom butterfly and he just stopped illusioning people, WHY?!

On the other hand, Ichigo's ability to shoot generic moonblades wins him many of his battles.

One more thing. Those random flashback panels are ineffective.

I like Pokemon (...)
1st October 2011, 4:13 PM
Yukio: This entire dimension is under my control! I could remove myself from it and erase it with you still inside if I wanted to! Or, I could turn the walls into fire or slow down time or turn the floor beneath you into a death pool of electric sharks!
But I'll make generic monsters instead.
Hitsugaya: *pushes Yukio onto ice*
Yukio: NOOO!! You've foiled me!!

Meanwhile...

Jackie: You've won...go ahead, finish me...
Renji: I won't hit a lady.
Jackie: Well I'm pretty seriously injured here and I don't think I've been hitting myself, idiot!
Renji: ...I won't hit a lady who can't fight back?
Jackie: Screw you, I'm self-destructing!

Seriously Kubo, you give your characters nigh-invulnerable abilities, and then you make them use them in the most inefficient and absolutely retarded ways possible. Aizen's illusions were nearly undefeatable, he could've stuck with them. But then you turned him into a condom butterfly and he just stopped illusioning people, WHY?!

On the other hand, Ichigo's ability to shoot generic moonblades wins him many of his battles.
Definitely one of the worst things about Bleach. Everyone has an epic, or unique power, but doesn't know how to use it correctly, or even when to use it correctly (see: everyone goes bankai at the beginning of the fight, or never).

Speaking of Aizen's powers, I was really annoyed that we never saw what he can really do.


On the second post, I've put Rex as the Captain of the 8th Squad, and Senbonzakura under spirits. I know Golde is going to do a clean up of the spirits section, though, so if he wants to completely kick out Senny (and others), then that's up to him now. I've also added Baru to the spirits, though if she joins Rex's squad, I'll edit for that.

arceus03
1st October 2011, 5:58 PM
Oh look a new member. HI I'M HYPER Min. Nice to meet you~ LOL I'm the lieutenant of squad 5 here. =) WE HAS COOKIEZ *shot*

My cookies > yours One liners =\



I'll take one. I can get my squad page up sooner.

Okay. Here (http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/squad8banner.png) it is, though I think it's kinda intended to be put in sigs more because the size is kinda small. Still. :p

And remember to give credits to her. XD Though she doesn't come to the club anymore lol



This time, I just wasn't bothered, especially since Firefox doesn't show the font tags, so I have to put more effort into not making my post the same as your font. I was lazy.

I see Arc has already given you the test of joining.

I think I just need Flash Step's new Hex charts, and I have everyone's >D

I see.

What test? o.o

Why that emoticon? >.>


Yukio: This entire dimension is under my control! I could remove myself from it and erase it with you still inside if I wanted to! Or, I could turn the walls into fire or slow down time or turn the floor beneath you into a death pool of electric sharks!
But I'll make generic monsters instead.
Hitsugaya: *pushes Yukio onto ice*
Yukio: NOOO!! You've foiled me!!

Meanwhile...

Jackie: You've won...go ahead, finish me...
Renji: I won't hit a lady.
Jackie: Well I'm pretty seriously injured here and I don't think I've been hitting myself, idiot!
Renji: ...I won't hit a lady who can't fight back?
Jackie: Screw you, I'm self-destructing!

Seriously Kubo, you give your characters nigh-invulnerable abilities, and then you make them use them in the most inefficient and absolutely retarded ways possible. Aizen's illusions were nearly undefeatable, he could've stuck with them. But then you turned him into a condom butterfly and he just stopped illusioning people, WHY?!

On the other hand, Ichigo's ability to shoot generic moonblades wins him many of his battles.

One more thing. Those random flashback panels are ineffective.

Ahaha, I see now what Zam means as godmod potential. I love your manga analysis. XD



Speaking of Aizen's powers, I was really annoyed that we never saw what he can really do.


wkr. His zanpakto alone could have defeated Ichigo, I think. What prevents him from showing Ichigo the release sequence? Unless, of course, once the Hogyoku takes over his body, he couldn't do so anymore.. which is kinda absurd.

Eon Master
1st October 2011, 6:48 PM
Well, since the squads are undergoing cleanup, I suppose I should do so as well.

First, Cyndagirl hasn't been on Serebii for a long time now, so I'm afraid that I must drop her from the Squad and place her in Spirits. I won't place her on fallen members, though, since she did follow all the other rules and was active while she was here.

Luke hasn't been on Serebii for a month, and frankly, due to his previous disregard for authority and continuous spamming and trolling, not to mention his plagarism of my fanfic, I'm in favor of dropping him from the Club completely. At the very least, he's out of Squad 7 permanently.

I'll fix up my Squad page momentarily.

And, with that out of the way, I'm pleased to inform you that I'm making progress on my Fanfic once again. I don't know when the next chapter will be finished, but it will be. Count on it.

@Baru: Welcome to the club. I'm Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7. You can call me Eon if you want. And don't be intimidated by the fact that I just kicked out two Squad members, I almost never do this and the one is only because he majorly ticked off multiple Captains, myself included =P

Also, you're writing a fanfic? Awesome, that's another one to add to the list.


Guys its sat now im free for the moment any one needs banner?

Just be glad Golde hasn't called you out on this, lol. He would've brained you with a diamond oar by now xD

Please, watch the one liners. PLEASE.


Here's the rewrite of my zan as a pure Wind type. Wanted to let you guys look over it before I changed anything.
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Hold your breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I punch the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~6 feet).

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Kaze no Shukumei: Saishuukokyuu (Winds of Fate: Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into winds of great force on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.


Looks good, but it has a major weakness to Fire control Zanpaktou. You have only a handful of ways to block moderate-strength flames, and nothing to defeat anything strong except for your ultimate technique.

One technique I would advise is something to deal with flame attacks. A focused gale of high-speed wind concentrated at once point, which would enable you to put out flames like one would snuff out a candle. It won't work on the really big stuff, but it's something. This can also be used as a blade form of sorts.


>People talking about delayed fics

I feel crappy about mine. I just can't seem to write things the way I want them.

That was what was taking me so long with this chapter. I just couldn't get the characters to act like themselves while being descriptive :/

I like Pokemon (...)
1st October 2011, 7:27 PM
What test? o.o

Why that emoticon? >.>
"Where are you in the anime/manga? Who are your favourite characters?"

Why not? Because I'm feeling ~evil~

Well, since the squads are undergoing cleanup, I suppose I should do so as well.

First, Cyndagirl hasn't been on Serebii for a long time now, so I'm afraid that I must drop her from the Squad and place her in Spirits. I won't place her on fallen members, though, since she did follow all the other rules and was active while she was here.

Luke hasn't been on Serebii for a month, and frankly, due to his previous disregard for authority and continuous spamming and trolling, not to mention his plagarism of my fanfic, I'm in favor of dropping him from the Club completely. At the very least, he's out of Squad 7 permanently.
Cyndagirl is moved. For the moment, I'll throw Luke into the Spirits. I have a feeling most people will want to completely kick him out anyway, but like I said, Golde can clean that section up I'm doing it like this because spirits aren't in my jurisdiction. And I don't want to have to try and find any zanpakutous if I've deleted them and I need to put them somewhere else.


I'll fix up my Squad page momentarily.
Anyone else who has asked me to move - please update your squad pages. Kusari, this includes your new zanpakutou, of course.

And, with that out of the way, I'm pleased to inform you that I'm making progress on my Fanfic once again. I don't know when the next chapter will be finished, but it will be. Count on it.woo


@Baru: Welcome to the club. I'm Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7. You can call me Eon if you want. And don't be intimidated by the fact that I just kicked out two Squad members, I almost never do this and the one is only because he majorly ticked off multiple Captains, myself included =P
You should be intimidated for may other reasons instead



Remember when Zam and I were designing new charts? Well we decided together on it (it includes the votes as well, so most people should be okay with it). We're going with:
http://oi52.*******.com/2vdfbcw.jpg

The reason for the stat order is because:
Offense and Defense are the only complete "pair" to each other. It makes sense that Offense stays at the top, which puts Defense at the bottom. It also means that a more bottom-heavy chart implies a more defensive character, while a top-heavy chart implies an offensive character.

I figured that the stats that relate to Defense the most are "Stamina" and "Spiritual Power" (which act a bit like HP and PP, respectively). I had no real reason to put Stamina on the left and Spiritual Power on the right, but I figure it would make sense to have them on either side of Defense.

Now, it makes sense to have Physical Strength and Kidou next to Offense, as they sort of imply more offense than defense (though technically, Kidou can mean Hadou and Bakudo, and is neutral). I put Kidou on the right and Physical Strength on the left, so that Physical Strength and Stamina are on the left, and Kidou and Spiritual Power are on the right. The former pair is more like the "body", while the latter pair are the "spirit". So you can tell that if a chart "leans left", then they're more into physical, close-range "I'MA PUNCH YOUR HEAD OFF", while if it leans more to the right, they're more long-range "I'MA BLAST YOUR HEAD OFF".

This left Mobility and Intellect. I figured that Physical Strength, Mobility and Stamina are all to do with the body, and movement, so they fit together. Kidou, Intellect and Spiritual Power are all to do with the mind/spirit, and are things you can do without moving.

Plus, we now have Mobility, Physical Strength, Offense and Kidou (all "typically offensive stats") together, and Intellect, Spiritual Power, Defense and Stamina (all "typically defensive stats") next to each other.


Does anyone think that there should be a different stat order?

upbeatbarubeat
1st October 2011, 7:36 PM
@Baru: Welcome to the club. I'm Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7. You can call me Eon if you want. And don't be intimidated by the fact that I just kicked out two Squad members, I almost never do this and the one is only because he majorly ticked off multiple Captains, myself included =P



i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O

Zameric
1st October 2011, 7:43 PM
Here are some finish charts with the new layout.
I'll start revamping all the charts probably next week.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/GoldeOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/DaucOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/JinOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ILPOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/ZamOctaBDC.png



i havent looked at the one piece club yet actually o3o'
Well then click on the user bar in my sig! :D


Here's the rewrite of my zan as a pure Wind type. Wanted to let you guys look over it before I changed anything.
Zanpaktou Name: Tenretsujin (Heaven-Rending Blade)

Type: Wind

Zanpaktou Spirit: A teenage girl who never shows any emotion. She wears a white kimono, the kind that would typically be used for funerals. She eternally holds a three foot diameter glass sphere. Inside the sphere is the true spirit. It is a small black ball with one large eye and a big smile. He constantly makes jokes about killing his master and devouring his soul.

Sealed Form: A standard nodachi. Has a general rectagular, bronze tsuba, with no special design. The hilt thread is charcoal grey.

Release Command: Hold your breath

Shikai Details: The sword splits into two black, knuckle duster trench knives with silver blades.

Attacks:
-- Kazeheki (Wind Burst): I force a burst of air with my punches to strengthen the blow, multiplying the concussive force.

-- Shippukabe (Hurricane Wall): With a wave of a hand, a gust wraps around me creating a barrier from attacks.

-- Nentenrepputama (Twisting Gale Bullet): I punch the air, sending a sphere of air towards the opponent at high speed. The sphere twists as it flies, giving a drilling effect.


Bankai Name: Soraketatamashii Tenretsujin (Sky-Piercing Heaven-Rending Blade)

Bankai Details: A zanbato with a silver blade. Hilt is average nodachi length (~12 in) while the blade is average zanbato length (~6 feet).

Attacks:
-- Arashisetsudanki (Storm Cutter): I repeatedly slash in the air, sending a flurry of razor edged gusts (think of Air Cutter)

-- Arashiken (Storm Blade): By slashing the air with Fujin, I perform a singular version of Arashisetsudanki.

-- Reppuarashi (Gale Storm): By focusing energy into the blade and slashing, I can send multiple (3-5 depending on the amount of energy used) spheres of air at the opponent. The spheres spin for a drilling effect.

-- Kaze no Shukumei: Saishuukokyuu (Winds of Fate: Last Breath): The ultimate technique of my zanpakuto. Using an extremely large amount of energy and collected air, I swing to shoot a giant Gale Bullet that explodes into winds of great force on impact. The attack leaves me almost completely drained and is only used as a last ditch effort.

I'm sorry Kusari, but I'm still on your Iron Tusk zan. xD
I guess I just don't pay well enough attention.


Hey, I'm Rex, newly appointed Captain of Squad 8.
I'm still not used to you being a captain. o.0
Maybe it's just because I haven't talked to you much.


Yukio: This entire dimension is under my control! I could remove myself from it and erase it with you still inside if I wanted to! Or, I could turn the walls into fire or slow down time or turn the floor beneath you into a death pool of electric sharks!
But I'll make generic monsters instead.
Hitsugaya: *pushes Yukio onto ice*
Yukio: NOOO!! You've foiled me!!

Meanwhile...

Jackie: You've won...go ahead, finish me...
Renji: I won't hit a lady.
Jackie: Well I'm pretty seriously injured here and I don't think I've been hitting myself, idiot!
Renji: ...I won't hit a lady who can't fight back?
Jackie: Screw you, I'm self-destructing!

Seriously Kubo, you give your characters nigh-invulnerable abilities, and then you make them use them in the most inefficient and absolutely retarded ways possible. Aizen's illusions were nearly undefeatable, he could've stuck with them. But then you turned him into a condom butterfly and he just stopped illusioning people, WHY?!

On the other hand, Ichigo's ability to shoot generic moonblades wins him many of his battles.

One more thing. Those random flashback panels are ineffective.
I..can't..stop..laughing!! xD


i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O
Get used to it, they love to pounce on new meat.
Welcome to the club btw. I'm Zameric, captain of Squad 9. :)

arceus03
1st October 2011, 8:41 PM
And, with that out of the way, I'm pleased to inform you that I'm making progress on my Fanfic once again. I don't know when the next chapter will be finished, but it will be. Count on it.


YAY =D


"Where are you in the anime/manga? Who are your favourite characters?"

Ah, I see.


Why not? Because I'm feeling ~evil~

lol, what does the stats have anything to do with you being evil? XD


You should be intimidated for may other reasons instead

XD


Now, it makes sense to have Physical Strength and Kidou next to Offense, as they sort of imply more offense than defense (though technically, Kidou can mean Hadou and Bakudo, and is neutral). I put Kidou on the right and Physical Strength on the left, so that Physical Strength and Stamina are on the left, and Kidou and Spiritual Power are on the right. The former pair is more like the "body", while the latter pair are the "spirit". So you can tell that if a chart "leans left", then they're more into physical, close-range "I'MA PUNCH YOUR HEAD OFF", while if it leans more to the right, they're more long-range "I'MA BLAST YOUR HEAD OFF".

Does anyone think that there should be a different stat order?

Aha, I see. It sorta makes sense, I guess.

Yes, I want another order completely *shot*


i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O

That's what we all do, basically. XD And it's not a bad feeling. Hey, if someone's recruiting you, it means you're wanted, and that's cool.

You could join whichever one you want, basically. Maybe base it on your favorite Squad from Bleach like me, I effing love Unohana <3 ~ so it's Squad 4 for me, or your favorite character, or whoever.

And you might want to check the Squad pages for a particular Squad before requesting. Most don't have it, but a few wants members with specifications (like Squad 3 Captain, Kida, only allows members with animal zanpakto spirit to join her Squad).


http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/GoldeOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/DaucOctaBDC.png

Get used to it, they loves to pounce on new meat.
Welcome to the club btw. I'm Zameric, captain of Squad 9. :)

I like how Dac's looks like. XD And it's symmetrical.
Though I find Golde's to be a bit... weak? idk, maybe he says he's not good at Kido, something, but a Head Captain must at least be proficient enough to be able to utilize them well. Maybe 40/50 instead of 20? With the total stat of him as 700, it kinda makes me feel guilty of having a total of 680 :p

They loves indeed
Eh, I prefer the term "recruiting" than pouncing.

CyberBlaziken
1st October 2011, 8:54 PM
So it's just you and me again, huh Eon?
.. Sad.

Jin.. Should be an official reviewer. God, he literally kills me :/

Uh, Zam? Could you give me those Battle Stats of mine? I'll updat my profile and Zampakto tomorrow.

Other than that, baked myself a batch of cookies, and they sucked.
I want cookies >.>

kusari
1st October 2011, 9:31 PM
Looks good, but it has a major weakness to Fire control Zanpaktou. You have only a handful of ways to block moderate-strength flames, and nothing to defeat anything strong except for your ultimate technique.

One technique I would advise is something to deal with flame attacks. A focused gale of high-speed wind concentrated at once point, which would enable you to put out flames like one would snuff out a candle. It won't work on the really big stuff, but it's something. This can also be used as a blade form of sorts.

I put in a move to combat fire on the page that the first post links too. Basically its the high speed, focused gale you suggested.



That was what was taking me so long with this chapter. I just couldn't get the characters to act like themselves while being descriptive :/
Basically my problem. Except I'm having issues with Blue of all people. Her part in the chapter kind of breaks the tension and I can't write it so she says her stuff and keeps the tension.



I'm sorry Kusari, but I'm still on your Iron Tusk zan. xD
I guess I just don't pay well enough attention.

It's basically the Iron Tusk. Just with a name change and different bankai form.



Get used to it, they love to pounce on new meat.

I refrained from it this time.

By the way Zam, do you know what the Japanese word "Seigi" translates to in English. I think you'll like it.

Northern Lights
1st October 2011, 9:32 PM
i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O

Hello new member, I have a really bad urge just to call you Angle Beats from now on, Kida Ookami, Captain of 3rd Squad. =]

Just read all the squad pages and see which would suit you best, sometimes it's easier to create a Zanpaktou, then we can see your affliations and tactics and maybe suggest a squad that would suit you. For instance mine is a Defence Squad based upon the powers of Nature "magic".

OT: Went to the anime society showing, it was Nausicaa in original japanese =D but they were all in accord that Bleach sucks now XD
I also meant 2 bronies 1 of whom used to compete in pokemon tournaments and watched the whole series for hours at a time eating only pot noodles <--- I love this guy so much

PKMN Trainer Rex
1st October 2011, 10:01 PM
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Okay. Here (http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/squad8banner.png) it is, though I think it's kinda intended to be put in sigs more because the size is kinda small. Still. :p

And remember to give credits to her. XD Though she doesn't come to the club anymore lol


I'll take, if Blackacer makes one I'll just switch it that one.

And yes, yes I will.


i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O

Take your time. Just be comfortable with your pick. Or you could stay a spirit, like Dauc.



I'm still not used to you being a captain. o.0
Maybe it's just because I haven't talked to you much.


I know right?.....Did we ever talk?

I like Pokemon (...)
1st October 2011, 10:15 PM
i hav a bad feeling like u all r trying to recruit me lol.now i dont know which to join O3O
Ahaha.

Here are some finish charts with the new layout.
I'll start revamping all the charts probably next week.
I'll be doing some. So that we don't end up doing the same ones, I'll do the canon charts, you do the club charts. When/if I'm done, I'll help you.


lol, what does the stats have anything to do with you being evil? XD

I like how Dac's looks like. XD And it's symmetrical.

Though I find Golde's to be a bit... weak? idk, maybe he says he's not good at Kido, something, but a Head Captain must at least be proficient enough to be able to utilize them well. Maybe 40/50 instead of 20? With the total stat of him as 700, it kinda makes me feel guilty of having a total of 680 :p
It doesn't. But I still feel evil nonetheless.

Yeah, and he didn't even try for that XD.

I'm glad that he has a 700 Octa Stats, and 540 Hexa stats. But what are you on about with 680 total? You have 650. Rotrum has the next highest, with 660.


So it's just you and me again, huh Eon?
.. Sad.
*Looks at the people with no members*


Uh, Zam? Could you give me those Battle Stats of mine? I'll updat my profile and Zampakto tomorrow.
I have your old Oct stats, and old Hex stats
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/KaiOctaBDCLT.pnghttp://zameric.webs.com/photos/Bleach-Club-BDCs/CyBlazeBDC%28LT%29-2.png
One thing is that this web is that your hex chart is slightly off (10 more Defense, Mobility, Kidou/Reiatsu). So I'll make a new Hex Chart to match your Oct chart (80 or 70 Kidou/Reiatsu? 80 or 70 Stamina?). Also, what colour would you like?

OT: Went to the anime society showing, it was Nausicaa in original japanese =D but they were all in accord that Bleach sucks now XD
I also meant 2 bronies 1 of whom used to compete in pokemon tournaments and watched the whole series for hours at a time eating only pot noodles <--- I love this guy so much

That reminds me, are you coming to the expo on the weekend of the 30th?

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd October 2011, 12:31 AM
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Welcome to 8th Division!
Credit to Mimori Kiryu for the banner


If you are to be a member, here are some rules
1) Thou shalt be active.
2) Thou shalt be respectful to everyone.
3) Thou must have a sense of humor.
4) Thou shalt do the dance!

Current Positions
Captain - PKMN Trainer Rex (Shikai/Bankai (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13419729&postcount=4452), Arrancar (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12612173&postcount=3591), Fullbring. (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12769934&postcount=3830))
Lieutenant -
3rd Seat -
4th Seat -
5th Seat

Recruitment Survey
1. What kind of individuals are you seeking?

Anyone who applies.

2. How would you describe the atmosphere around your division?

It's a fun place. ♥

3. What do you require of new recruits?

Recruits must be respectful and know how to laugh.

4. Some words for the shinigami recruits.

Y'all have fun now, ya hear?

Battle Stats
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http://oi54.*******.com/eb6802.jpg http://oi51.*******.com/2crubzo.jpg


Fallen members

minchan
2nd October 2011, 1:50 AM
Sorry, didn't realize it was one line. In the quick reply box, it was two. (IN MY DEFENSE. XD)

And I was in a rush.

ANYWHO.

Golde's chart looks like a pacman. *shot* Sorry I really had to.

BTW. MY COOKIES PWN ALL. <- FACT

=w=

Okay I'll shut up now.

*sneaks out back door*

Oh and PS

I lost the game.

*runs for life*

arceus03
2nd October 2011, 2:35 AM
So it's just you and me again, huh Eon?

Other than that, baked myself a batch of cookies, and they sucked.
I want cookies >.>

I almost thought of something perverted when you said that. Gosh, ILPy is influencing me

COOKIES! XD



By the way Zam, do you know what the Japanese word "Seigi" translates to in English. I think you'll like it.

Ahaha. Where did you get that word, though?



I know right?.....Did we ever talk?

We never talked to each other, as well. [/literally] *shot*



Yeah, and he didn't even try for that XD.

I'm glad that he has a 700 Octa Stats, and 540 Hexa stats. But what are you on about with 680 total? You have 650. Rotrum has the next highest, with 660.


XD He's gonna say something like "I'm naturally beautiful, after all" or something like that if he sees that then.

Ahaha, glad why? XD And really? I forgot. XD I thought I had 680, lol.



4) Thou shalt do the dance!


XD What dance?


Sorry, didn't realize it was one line. In the quick reply box, it was two. (IN MY DEFENSE. XD)

BTW. MY COOKIES PWN ALL. <- FACT



One liners doesn't necessarily mean it's one line on the display. If you have a post that spans three lines but only says something like

I
like
Bleach

that still counts as one liner. It simply means that the message is too short.

Maybe. But my cookies > yours. Do the math.

MasterCharizard15
2nd October 2011, 2:56 AM
Cookie war?

If the Captains had a group attack, what would it be like?

Canon or Us. I prefer us since we have of a chance of using it. ;/

Now everyone hold hangs and say your name so we can destroy the world.

Eon Master
2nd October 2011, 3:06 AM
Here are some finish charts with the new layout.
I'll start revamping all the charts probably next week.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/GoldeOctaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/DaucOctaBDC.png

Thank god Golde's finally the strongest Captain, lol.

Also, we now have incontrevertable proof that Dauc is weaker than Kida. His stats are a solid 30 points lower than hers, as well as a solid 50 lower than the arbitrary average. Somebody please rub this in his face.


I almost thought of something perverted when you said that. Gosh, ILPy is influencing me

How do you 'almost' think of something perverted? If you know about what thought you were going to have, then you did think of it xD


So it's just you and me again, huh Eon?
.. Sad.

Not for too long. Soroft will come back eventually, afaik he's planning to join Squad 7.

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd October 2011, 4:02 AM
BTW. MY COOKIES PWN ALL. <- FACT




COOKIES! XD

Maybe. But my cookies > yours. Do the math.



Cookie war?


Cookiez r fo' suckuhz *trollface*



We never talked to each other, as well. [/literally] *shot*


At least you and I have some "interaction", like we are right now. But I don't think Zam and I ever did this....that...whatever




XD What dance?


Movie reference. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yYC5RH9ksM)



How do you 'almost' think of something perverted? If you know about what thought you were going to have, then you did think of it xD


Indeed.

minchan
2nd October 2011, 4:25 AM
Well I didn't write a single sentence on multiple lines like that. I was in a rush, okay? I didn't realize it wasn't more than a single line.

And my cookies are the best.

BTW Rex, now that you're no longer in the same squad as me, cookies are no longer free, or discounted. Just saying. XD

...Not that it matters. ^^;

ANYWAY.

If Golde is the strongest captain, and Golde's chart looks like a pacman (WHICH IT TOTALLY DOES) then does that mean that pacman is stronger than us...? =O

LE GASP.

*shot*

*runs away*

arceus03
2nd October 2011, 5:34 AM
Cookie war?

If the Captains had a group attack, what would it be like?


A noble does not indulge in such outrageous behavior. *brushed dust off shoulder* I shall not lower my status with the likes of such foolish indulgences.

*shot*

Uhm. Anyway. Group attack? XD That's not gonna work... ever. lol. We're all gonna clash and cancel out each other or alternatively, Blue runs amok and kills the enemy first anyway. The closest group attack scene I had once in mind was killing off a huge enemy (Hollow, I think) with everyone chanting and using Hado #91 LARGE EXPLOSION HELL YEAH buuuuut that's all. XD


How do you 'almost' think of something perverted? If you know about what thought you were going to have, then you did think of it xD

... Good point. XD


Cookiez r fo' suckuhz *trollface*

At least you and I have some "interaction", like we are right now. But I don't think Zam and I ever did this....that...whatever

Movie reference. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yYC5RH9ksM)

*takes back cookie that I gave you* j/k :p

When you say "interaction", I immediately thought of... hydrogen bonds. XD

Did not watch Eh, maybe later. :p


Well I didn't write a single sentence on multiple lines like that. I was in a rush, okay? I didn't realize it wasn't more than a single line.

And my cookies are the best.

I told you, even if it was more than one line, it would still be counted as a one-liner if it doesn't contain anything much. >.> lol, moot point. Just don't do it again.

Of course. But as I wrote earlier, mine are better than yours. So. Yeah.

Zameric
2nd October 2011, 5:40 AM
By the way Zam, do you know what the Japanese word "Seigi" translates to in English. I think you'll like it.
what I got from some online translators was...Justice/Righteousness.
Is that the Japanese word Tosen always uses for justice?


I know right?.....Did we ever talk?
Eh, not really except in the club. Do you have WLM?
If not, drop me a PM/VM once in a while.
I'll try to do the same when I can remember. :p


Battle Stats
http://oi56.*******.com/333lpqb.jpg http://oi54.*******.com/2nuovm0.jpg
http://oi54.*******.com/eb6802.jpg http://oi51.*******.com/2crubzo.jpg
I'm guessing ILP made these for you, since I don't remember making them. xD

I have a few problems with your stats. Considering your zanpakuto's abilities, I think defense should be upped to 80 or 90. Mobility should probably be dropped by 10 or 20 points. Physical strength on your octa chart could probably be maxed out. And I know it'd bug ILP, but offense on your octa chart could be dropped by 10 points, since physical strength and offense are separated.


Also, we now have incontrevertable proof that Dauc is weaker than Kida. His stats are a solid 30 points lower than hers, as well as a solid 50 lower than the arbitrary average. Somebody please rub this in his face.
Well, the charts only measure one's abilities statistically.
There are some variables that can't be accounted for.
But generally, yes, it does prove that Dauc is filled with hot air.


Cookiez r fo' suckuhz *trollface*
Would you like to use this?... http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/trollplz.png


If Golde is the strongest captain, and Golde's chart looks like a pacman (WHICH IT TOTALLY DOES) then does that mean that pacman is stronger than us...? =O
Well, Pacman can't purify eat Hollows ghosts unless he eats drugs a fruit "power pellets" (a.k.a. Pacman drugs) first.

minchan
2nd October 2011, 7:19 AM
Wait, so Golde's stats are only that high because he's on drugs? LOL

BTW I'm pretty sure pacman eats power pellets to gain the power to eat ghosties. =w=

YAY PACMAN.

I've lately become obsessed with doodling pacman in my notebooks... It's a really random thing... yeah.

PKMN Trainer Rex
2nd October 2011, 7:55 AM
And my cookies are the best.

BTW Rex, now that you're no longer in the same squad as me, cookies are no longer free, or discounted. Just saying. XD

...Not that it matters. ^^;




*takes back cookie that I gave you* j/k :p

When you say "interaction", I immediately thought of... hydrogen bonds. XD

Did not watch Eh, maybe later. :p

Of course. But as I wrote earlier, mine are better than yours. So. Yeah.

Honestly, you people and your cookies.

Odd xD.

THOU SHALT DO THE DANCE!

Famous Amos FTW!



Eh, not really except in the club. Do you have WLM?
If not, drop me a PM/VM once in a while.
I'll try to do the same when I can remember. :p


Nope, I do not have a WLM.
But I will drop you a line.



I'm guessing ILP made these for you, since I don't remember making them. xD

I have a few problems with your stats. Considering your zanpakuto's abilities, I think defense should be upped to 80 or 90. Mobility should probably be dropped by 10 or 20 points. Physical strength on your octa chart could probably be maxed out. And I know it'd bug ILP, but offense on your octa chart could be dropped by 10 points, since physical strength and offense are separated.

Why yes, yes he did.

I can see the upped defense since it is armor. In shikai I can imagine the drop in speed, but my bankai is based off of Power Ranger Battlizers & Iron Man, that does enhance physical capabilities. But let's wait for ILP, since I did not save them.




Would you like to use this?... http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/trollplz.png

I shall save this for future use.

Zameric
2nd October 2011, 8:46 AM
^ It's also on my photobucket in-case you ever lose it. :D


So I was thinking about making speculative BDCs for the captain class characters in the canon, who are not officially captains.
I think posted the one I did on Ichigo before, but I'll put it up again.
I'm using the first incarnation of the octa charts, because I'm too lazy to switch over.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/IchigoBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/UraharaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/YoruichiBDC.png

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/IchigoStatRange.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/UraharaStatRange.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/YoruichiStatRange.png

The charts reflect their speculative stat range, from minimum total to maximum total.
If a final chart where to be made, I suspect if would be somewhere in that range.
Please let me know what you think and if you'd like me to continue on. I had more characters in mind...
I'm even open to input on the stat ranges; if you think anything should be changed.

minchan
2nd October 2011, 1:09 PM
I think that'd be cool...

Do you have the stats for the actual captains? (Canon, duh.)

I was under the impression you guys were working on them, but I didn't know if you actually made charts yet.

I keep forgetting that Ichigo knows zero Kido... It's quite funny. =w=

CyberBlaziken
2nd October 2011, 4:15 PM
Name: Koorimizu ('Koori' for Ice "Mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Koorimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inches. His attire is a dark blue, along with a black cape, thick black gloves and boots. He has grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle, usually does not like to hold back. A bit arrogant and his stubbornness tend to get the better off him. Does not like walking, floats instead. A man of few words, but we get along pretty well, not including the few arguments..

Release Command: Saewataru Koorimizu (Freeze Over)

Shikai Details:

Kourimizu in its released state, the hilt is made of very strong, yet a thin layer of Ice, crystal in color. The blade is like an icicle shard, rough all around, but sharp as well. Water molecules are present inside the hilt and the blade, and runs throughout the blade and the hilt.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) – Clouds starts to grow darker, and soon rain starts to fall from them, yet is isn't rain. Ice shards, almost as sharp as knives drop at incredible speed. Cuts through almost everything.

Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Water molecules surrounding the blade freezes due to the cold emitted from the blade, and the swing the sword for a basic slash attack. A bit like Getsuga Tenshou.

Ekitai Hazumi (Liquid Rebound) - Koorimizu absorbs all the water that can be found nearby. Then from the tip of the blade, the water then spreads out and covers me completely. Forming a suit of water. Acts as a shield to rebound solid projectiles and attacks, for a short period of time and heals minor injuries during that time.

Bankai Name: Taisan Koorimizu (Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Koorimizu no longer possesses a blade or hilt, it evaporates into the atmosphere. As it is now merged with the atmosphere, it allows me to manipulate the molecules. Freezing or melting at my will.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall heavily, which is extremely cold water. A blue aura surrounds me, and I start to radiate reishi.
The rain falling helps me helps recover my reiatsu slowly, thus making me stronger bit by bit.

Attacks: All Shikai Attacks can be used, but more powerful than before.

Tenka no Akayaiba ( Bloody Blade of Snow) – Koorimizu regains its base form, but the color changes to red crystal instead of the usual blue/ Lets me to fight with basic sword techniques again.

Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - Balls of crystallized blue energy forms in my palm, and starts to enlarge in size. Made into a fist and pointed at opponent, shoots out energy beams of Ice.

Ryuukawa Ishigiri (Flowing River Stone Cutter) - This attack focuses pressurized water at the tip of my blade and then emits it as a focused stream that can slice through pretty much anything. However, it is easy to block or disrupt with proper timing or an attack.

Hyoutenka Goryou (Subzero Absolute Tomb) – The Final Attack of Koorimizu. The falling rain starts to cover up both my fists, and then, I thrust both on the ground, sends a shock wave which surrounds the opponent(s) in a circle. With snap of the finger, the ground inside the circling forms a whirlpool of freezing cold water. Drowning them and then freezing them in Ice. Escape is almost impossible. Reiatsu completely finished when this is used.

I like Pokemon (...)
2nd October 2011, 8:02 PM
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Welcome to 8th Division!
Credit to Mimori Kiryu for the banner



If you are to be a member, here are some rules
1) Thou shalt be active.
2) Thou shalt be respectful to everyone.
3) Thou must have a sense of humor.
4) Thou shalt do the dance!

Current Positions
Captain - PKMN Trainer Rex (Shikai/Bankai (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=13419729&postcount=4452), Arrancar (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12612173&postcount=3591), Fullbring. (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=12769934&postcount=3830))
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3rd Seat -
4th Seat -
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Recruitment Survey
1. What kind of individuals are you seeking?

Anyone who applies.

2. How would you describe the atmosphere around your division?

It's a fun place. ♥

3. What do you require of new recruits?

Recruits must be respectful and know how to laugh.

4. Some words for the shinigami recruits.

Y'all have fun now, ya hear?

Battle Stats
http://oi56.*******.com/333lpqb.jpg http://oi54.*******.com/2nuovm0.jpg
http://oi54.*******.com/eb6802.jpg http://oi51.*******.com/2crubzo.jpg


Fallen members

I have editted the second post for that.

BTW. MY COOKIES PWN ALL. <- FACT
I believe that it was mutually agreed that Arc's cookies are better than yours, but as you have an all-over bakery, you create cakes and pastries that are better than Arc's (non-existent) cakes and pastries, etc.


Oh and PS

I lost the game.

*runs for life*
You realise the game is in my signature, right?

I almost thought of something perverted when you said that. Gosh, ILPy is influencing me
And yet I had no inkling of perversion from that.

Ahaha, glad why? XD And really? I forgot. XD I thought I had 680, lol.
Glad, because as Eon said, it makes him greater than us. But for the hex, he's on the 500s while we're on the 400s; and for the oct, he's on the 700s while we're on the 600s.

If the Captains had a group attack, what would it be like?
The universe is destroyed in a massive amount of power.

Thank god Golde's finally the strongest Captain, lol.
I know, right.

Also, we now have incontrevertable proof that Dauc is weaker than Kida. His stats are a solid 30 points lower than hers, as well as a solid 50 lower than the arbitrary average. Somebody please rub this in his face.
When I got his stats, Da.C himself said, and I quote:

i like my stats haha, even though i have a lower total than you and probably a lot of other people xD
You, more than anyone, should know how these numbers aren't "incontrovertable proof"; it doesn't take into account zanpakutou powers, overall experience, and the fact that someone's "100" is different to another (and how some people are more like "95 rounded up").
Not that I wouldn't enjoy rubbing it in his face that he isn't the strongest XD


I have a few problems with your stats. Considering your zanpakuto's abilities, I think defense should be upped to 80 or 90. Mobility should probably be dropped by 10 or 20 points. Physical strength on your octa chart could probably be maxed out. And I know it'd bug ILP, but offense on your octa chart could be dropped by 10 points, since physical strength and offense are separated.
I'll just make clear, I only ask for data, make charts, make spreadsheets, and analyse. The only thing I worry about is the total, as that shows how people are, overall.


I can see the upped defense since it is armor. In shikai I can imagine the drop in speed, but my bankai is based off of Power Ranger Battlizers & Iron Man, that does enhance physical capabilities. But let's wait for ILP, since I did not save them.
I almost always make new charts from scratch. Only takes a few minutes.

So I was thinking about making speculative BDCs for the captain class characters in the canon, who are not officially captains.
I think posted the one I did on Ichigo before, but I'll put it up again.
I'm using the first incarnation of the octa charts, because I'm too lazy to switch over.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/IchigoBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/UraharaBDC.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/YoruichiBDC.png

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/IchigoStatRange.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/UraharaStatRange.png http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b5/customizer13/Battle%20Data%20Charts/Canon%20Charts/YoruichiStatRange.png

The charts reflect their speculative stat range, from minimum total to maximum total.
If a final chart where to be made, I suspect if would be somewhere in that range.
Please let me know what you think and if you'd like me to continue on. I had more characters in mind...
I'm even open to input on the stat ranges; if you think anything should be changed.
You know my thoughts on those XP.
I think Urahara could actually have 100 everything if he wanted to.

Do you have the stats for the actual captains? (Canon, duh.)
Canon hex, coloured. (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12215035)
Canon oct, old style (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12199217)

I have the canon hex, uncoloured; the new oct style (both coloured and uncoloured) on my hardrive. Will send them all over to Zam to put on the website when I finish making one or two more.

Name: Koorimizu ('Koori' for Ice "Mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Koorimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inches. His attire is a dark blue, along with a black cape, thick black gloves and boots. He has grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle, usually does not like to hold back. A bit arrogant and his stubbornness tend to get the better off him. Does not like walking, floats instead. A man of few words, but we get along pretty well, not including the few arguments..

Release Command: Saewataru Koorimizu (Freeze Over)

Shikai Details:

Kourimizu in its released state, the hilt is made of very strong, yet a thin layer of Ice, crystal in color. The blade is like an icicle shard, rough all around, but sharp as well. Water molecules are present inside the hilt and the blade, and runs throughout the blade and the hilt.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) – Clouds starts to grow darker, and soon rain starts to fall from them, yet is isn't rain. Ice shards, almost as sharp as knives drop at incredible speed. Cuts through almost everything.

Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Water molecules surrounding the blade freezes due to the cold emitted from the blade, and the swing the sword for a basic slash attack. A bit like Getsuga Tenshou.

Ekitai Hazumi (Liquid Rebound) - Koorimizu absorbs all the water that can be found nearby. Then from the tip of the blade, the water then spreads out and covers me completely. Forming a suit of water. Acts as a shield to rebound solid projectiles and attacks, for a short period of time and heals minor injuries during that time.

Bankai Name: Taisan Koorimizu (Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Koorimizu no longer possesses a blade or hilt, it evaporates into the atmosphere. As it is now merged with the atmosphere, it allows me to manipulate the molecules. Freezing or melting at my will.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall heavily, which is extremely cold water. A blue aura surrounds me, and I start to radiate reishi.
The rain falling helps me helps recover my reiatsu slowly, thus making me stronger bit by bit.

Attacks: All Shikai Attacks can be used, but more powerful than before.

Tenka no Akayaiba ( Bloody Blade of Snow) – Koorimizu regains its base form, but the color changes to red crystal instead of the usual blue/ Lets me to fight with basic sword techniques again.

Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - Balls of crystallized blue energy forms in my palm, and starts to enlarge in size. Made into a fist and pointed at opponent, shoots out energy beams of Ice.

Hyoutenka Goryou (Subzero Absolute Tomb) – The Final Attack of Koorimizu. The falling rain starts to cover up both my fists, and then, I thrust both on the ground, sends a shock wave which surrounds the opponent(s) in a circle. With snap of the finger, the ground inside the circling forms a whirlpool of freezing cold water. Drowning them and then freezing them in Ice. Escape is almost impossible. Reiatsu completely finished when this is used.


Ryuukawa Ishigiri (Flowing River Stone Cutter) - This attack focuses pressurized water at the tip of my blade and then emits it as a focused stream that can slice through pretty much anything. However, it is easy to block or disrupt with proper timing or an attack

It looks mainly the same as the previous zanpakutou, just a bit more descriptive, and with the addition of Ekitai Hazumi (Liquid Rebound) in shikai, and slightly changing (and moving to bankai) Frozen Flood into Flowing River Stone Cutter. Also, I suggest having your "final move" at the very end of the zanpakutou XP.

I'll let you edit your old post for this. Partially because I'm too lazy to change the link myself.

rotrum
3rd October 2011, 12:35 AM
Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?

upbeatbarubeat
3rd October 2011, 1:18 AM
Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?
your banner looks pretty sweet. that reminds me that i havent chosen a division or posted my character/zanpakuto yet. meh :T

Zameric
3rd October 2011, 2:55 AM
If the Captains had a group attack, what would it be like?
The universe is destroyed in a massive amount of power.

I'll just make clear, I only ask for data, make charts, make spreadsheets, and analyse. The only thing I worry about is the total, as that shows how people are, overall.
Eh, I think a galaxy is more realistic. :p

My beef there wasn't with you.


Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?
I really like it, better than what I could probably do.
Although, I personally don't care for the font type.

tarverboy101
3rd October 2011, 3:47 AM
Zanpaktou Name; [The name of your designed Zanpaktou] Suna Oni
Type; [What type is it; Kido, Fire, Water, etc] Sand
Zanpaktou Spirit; [what manifestation is your Zanpaktou spirit?] Suna Omi is a demon made of sand, with red eyes and black fangs. He is rather large(about komamura's siz), with no wings. The sand he is made of is constantly failling off of him.
Release Command; [What command do you give it for Shikai?] Choke.... Suna Omi!
Shikai Details; [What does it look like? What does it do? Effects?] It is a chain, on one end an axe and the other end a scythe. It turns anything but people into sand when hit. The Axe turns it to quicksand (Used for ground trapping) and the scythe is used for turning things into regular sand, used for destroying kido and other objects. The scythe and axe have handles that are attached to the chain.
[If you do not have Bankai do not complete the following]
Bankai Name; [Does it's name differ when in Bankai?]Kurogane Suna Oni.
Bankai Details; [What does it look like? What does it do? Effects?] My chain grows longer, with a double axe and scythe. Sand forms into a helmet(Entire face visible) shoulder pads, and a chest plate.
Anything Else; [Any thing else about you wish to add, an image, etc] I become faster, and use the chain to choke my opponents more often.


So, now that thats done. How does this club work? Also, do I need to unclude a description of my Shinigami?

arceus03
3rd October 2011, 4:08 AM
Honestly, you people and your cookies.

Odd xD.

THOU SHALT DO THE DANCE!

Famous Amos FTW!


Cookies are tasty. =]

XD Or the hydrophobic/hydrophilic interaction in phospholipids. XP

THOU SHALT... EAT THE COOKIE

Yum



The charts reflect their speculative stat range, from minimum total to maximum total.
If a final chart where to be made, I suspect if would be somewhere in that range.
Please let me know what you think and if you'd like me to continue on.

I have more stats than Ichigo! *shot*

I think his physical strength should be 100? idk. I thought his Mobility could go 100, but considering there are many other characters who are faster than him, maybe 90 fits. Also, this is general Ichigo we're talking about right? Hollow Ichigo should have 100 in all... except Kido and maybe Defense



Zanpaktou Spirit: not like walking, floats instead.

Ryuukawa Ishigiri (Flowing River Stone Cutter)

Hyoutenka Goryou (Subzero Absolute Tomb) – The Final Attack of Koorimizu. The falling rain starts to cover up both my fists, and then, I thrust both on the ground, sends a shock wave which surrounds the opponent(s) in a circle. With snap of the finger, the ground inside the circling forms a whirlpool of freezing cold water. Drowning them and then freezing them in Ice. Escape is almost impossible. Reiatsu completely finished when this is used.


And mine glides. :P

... *is tempted to steal the name for his own technique* jk :p

When you said "escape is almost impossible"... perhaps you should add another criterion that really "traps" the opponent in, maybe the falling rain that compresses the enemy's reiatsu, or the ice/water restricts movement, or something like that. Because simple water and ice trap wouldn't take long to break through, with a strong enough Kido spell. MC could probably blast through that easily with his zan.


I have editted the second post for that.

I believe that it was mutually agreed that Arc's cookies are better than yours, but as you have an all-over bakery, you create cakes and pastries that are better than Arc's (non-existent) cakes and pastries, etc.


Edited. :p

Eh, my cookies are existent. *noms some* It's just these aren't home-made atm. Cause I can't cook... yet. Can't wait to go off campus :p


Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?

I already told you my thoughts on it.

Also, make a Squad page. Nao. 8D


that reminds me that i havent chosen a division or posted my character/zanpakuto yet. meh :T

Ahaha. You can choose a division first before posting your zanpakto, if you want to.



So, now that thats done. How does this club work? Also, do I need to unclude a description of my Shinigami?

Read the rules on the first page, and try again :) After that, you can post everything you want - your zanpakto, your shinigami profile, etc. Also your Arrancar and/or Fullbring, if you made one.

As for how the club works, it basically is a place for Bleach fans to hang out. We discuss the manga and anime on a weekly basis (or when it comes out), write/read/review fanfictions, talk about theories in Bleach, rant about our favorite characters, anything, as long as it's Bleach related.

The owner is Golde, whom you might or might not have seen. He's the Head Captain here, and we also have the Captains from the 12 Squads (basically the members who have been active... Some join and left, some remain, so yeah). Then we have the rankings (Lieutenants, seated officers, etc). Currently, all the Squads have their own Captains though a few are inactive and a few have members. Also, in case you have seen the data charts of the canon Captains (from the Bleach Official Bootleg, IIRC), we also have those as well.

So, go reread the first post, include what you missed out, and we're set! :)

I'll read and comment on your zanpakto when you've done what you should do when requesting to join :p

tarverboy101
3rd October 2011, 4:22 AM
Name; Suna Omi (Sand Demon)
Type; Sand
Zanpaktou Spirit;Suna Omi is a demon made of sand, with red eyes and black fangs. He is rather large(about komamura's siz), with no wings. The sand he is made of is constantly failling off of him.
Release Command; Choke.... Suna Omi!
Shikai Details; It is a chain, on one end an axe and the other end a scythe. It turns anything but people into sand when hit. The Axe turns it to quicksand (Used for ground trapping) and the scythe is used for turning things into regular sand, used for destroying kido and other objects. The scythe and axe have handles that are attached to the chain. It also aloows me to not only turn things to sand, but control to control the sand.
Bankai Name; Kurogane Suna Oni.
Bankai Details; My chain grows longer, with a double axe and scythe. Sand forms into a helmet(Entire face visible) shoulder pads, and a chest plate. I can now also creats two snakes made of sand to fight with me.
Anything Else; I become faster, and use the chain to choke my opponents more often.

Zachiru.
Also, do i need a character name and desc?
Also, heading to bed.

arceus03
3rd October 2011, 4:41 AM
Zachiru*
(Thats the only thing I can see I messed up on.)

Exacta. :p Welcome to the club. arceus03, Captain of Squad 4, avid Unohana fan

So, to get you started, tell us where are you exactly on with the manga and/or anime. While you're there, maybe a bit about your favorite character, shinigami, Espada, etc. Use spoilers where spoilers are due.



Shikai Details; [What does it look like? What does it do? Effects?] It is a chain, on one end an axe and the other end a scythe. It turns anything but people into sand when hit. The Axe turns it to quicksand (Used for ground trapping) and the scythe is used for turning things into regular sand, used for destroying kido and other objects. The scythe and axe have handles that are attached to the chain.


Eh, turning everything except people into sand seems a bit cheap, since then you could just probably clash weapons with everyone and render them helpless. If I may suggest something, I'd say give that ability to bankai, and in shikai, try to limit your power so that they don't seem too powerful. You could give your shikai an ability to turn the area that you hit with the weapons instead into quicksand/normal sand (not things). You could also control the sand, for example, and make a miniature sandstorm, etc.


[If you do not have Bankai do not complete the following]
Bankai Name; [Does it's name differ when in Bankai?]Kurogane Suna Oni.
Bankai Details; [What does it look like? What does it do? Effects?] My chain grows longer, with a double axe and scythe. Sand forms into a helmet(Entire face visible) shoulder pads, and a chest plate.
Anything Else; [Any thing else about you wish to add, an image, etc] I become faster, and use the chain to choke my opponents more often.


Your bankai, on the other hand, seems to be nothing much changed except different appearances and longer chain. You could include the turning-things-into-sand ability here, but also add in a limiting reactant condition: maybe your reiatsu, maybe the size of the object, etc, so as not to make it too cheap. And maybe you can include a few techniques using sand in shikai/bankai... Like trapping the opponent using sand, sand blade, whatever.

That's all I could think of atm about your zanpakto. There'll be other Captains who'll also look and say what they think about your zanpakto later, when they come online, so yeah.



Also, do i need a character name and desc?
Also, heading to bed.

You could make them if you want to. We do have the skeleton somewhere... but I'm too lazy to find it. ILPy (that's the 12th Squad Captain) can post it here when he comes online, or alternatively you can check any of our profile pages for it. (The links are in the first page, first/second post. First post is the original/formal post, second post is the "copy" post, it's updated more frequently than the first.)

Night.

Eon Master
3rd October 2011, 5:51 AM
When you said "escape is almost impossible"... perhaps you should add another criterion that really "traps" the opponent in, maybe the falling rain that compresses the enemy's reiatsu, or the ice/water restricts movement, or something like that. Because simple water and ice trap wouldn't take long to break through, with a strong enough Kido spell. MC could probably blast through that easily with his zan.

No Arc... it isn't possible to break out of the tomb with a Kidou spell. The ice isn't just holding you in place, you're literally frozen inside a block of ice that is several feet thick, unable to breathe, speak, or move. And it's his Bankai's best attack... it's not going to be easy to shatter without something around the level of a fully completed Kurohitsugi, and you can't do that because it would have to be a totally non-verbal casting. You have to break free while it's forming, or completely destroy it by exerting your Zanpaktou's full power, which would leave you just as drained as he is, and thus on equal footing. Also, MC can't just blast through it with his Zanpaktou... unlike Rotrum's pure Ice Zanpaktou, Kai's power is both Ice AND Water. Not to mention that he'd have to build up the heat from 0 degrees Kelvin... which would take a while, probably too long before he would have to breathe.

Just because a power or weakness isn't directly stated doesn't mean it doesn't exist. You have to read between the lines with each of our Zanpaktou, and your own is a prime example of this, seeing as it IS possible to exploit both evaporation and freezing of your Zanpaktou, it just has to be done in a certain manner.

For evaporation, you'd simply need to superheat the air after evaporating Tsukibana until it becomes too dispersed for you to control. The only drawback is that this would take a ridiculous ammount of energy, meaning it would have to be either a direct ability of that person's Zanpaktou, or the person would have to wield a fire or temperature controlling Zanpaktou while posessing reiatsu on par with the Head Captain.

As for freezing, you would either need to freeze it from the inside out all at once (since your explanation states that freezing it from the outside is innefective, it leaves a loophole in that your Zanpaktou is weak from the inside), which is possible if someone sticks their sword into Tsukibana before activating the freeze technique. Alternately, they could lower Tsukibana's temperate to 0 degrees Kalvin (the point at which everything in the universe freezes), or freeze and shatter the surface often enough that you eventually run out of water to control.

...haven't we gone over this? Maybe it was Dauc or ILP who said it, but I know this has been brought up before.

@Tarver: Welcome to the club. I'm Eon Master, Captain of Squad 7. You can call me Eon if you like.

@Rotrum: That is an excellent banner. I'm actually slightly jealous.

Zameric
3rd October 2011, 6:10 AM
I think his physical strength should be 100? idk. I thought his Mobility could go 100, but considering there are many other characters who are faster than him, maybe 90 fits. Also, this is general Ichigo we're talking about right? Hollow Ichigo should have 100 in all... except Kido and maybe Defense
Yes, this is general Soul Reaper Ichigo; no Vizard or FGT powers.
Well, I figured there are at least a few characters physically stronger than him.
Bleach wiki only ranks him as an Expert Hand-to-Hand Combatant, not a master.


Zachiru.
Also, do i need a character name and desc?
Also, heading to bed.
Welcome to the Bleach club. I'm Zameric, captain of Squad 9.

I pretty much have the same comments as Arc, about your zanpakuto.
Try to limit shikai a bit, and maybe come up with some creative attacks.

minchan
3rd October 2011, 6:37 AM
@ rotrum
Is that a "T"? Because it barely looks like one... LOL It's a nice banner but the font is kinda meh. LOL

@ ILP
Thanks for the links to the charts.

And I still like my cookies better. All my sweets are the best in the universe. Because I say so. You don't have to agree, but you can't argue my opinion, because that will never change.

And yes, I know the game is in your signature. I lost the game without even looking at it, though. (I'm serious.)

---

Oh look a new member. Welcome.

I agree with the people saying the shikai is too powerful, and the bankai is comparatively weak... I like the concept though.

---

Also, I lost the game. Again. ILP, I hate you. =w=

arceus03
3rd October 2011, 7:15 AM
No Arc... it isn't possible to break out of the tomb with a Kidou spell. The ice isn't just holding you in place, you're literally frozen inside a block of ice that is several feet thick, unable to breathe, speak, or move. And it's his Bankai's best attack... it's not going to be easy to shatter without something around the level of a fully completed Kurohitsugi, and you can't do that because it would have to be a totally non-verbal casting. You have to break free while it's forming, or completely destroy it by exerting your Zanpaktou's full power, which would leave you just as drained as he is, and thus on equal footing. Also, MC can't just blast through it with his Zanpaktou... unlike Rotrum's pure Ice Zanpaktou, Kai's power is both Ice AND Water. Not to mention that he'd have to build up the heat from 0 degrees Kelvin... which would take a while, probably too long before he would have to breathe.

Ah... In that case, he should probably have put "absolute zero" somewhere inside the description... I read "freezing cold water" as 0 Celsius, which isn't cold at all compared to absolute zero. I see now. :p


For evaporation, you'd simply need to superheat the air after evaporating Tsukibana until it becomes too dispersed for you to control.

Don't say that, I don't want to go looking for Tsukibana molecules floating away at high speed over the Sereitei >.<


As for freezing, you would either need to freeze it from the inside out all at once (since your explanation states that freezing it from the outside is innefective, it leaves a loophole in that your Zanpaktou is weak from the inside), which is possible if someone sticks their sword into Tsukibana before activating the freeze technique.

Ahh, sorry about that. I should have said freezing it from one side is ineffective - that's probably a better wording. Buuut yeah, the point remains that you can only freeze her if you lower her temperature the whole body of water simultaneously. That said, she's easier to be frozen/evaporated while she's forming a thin wall of water instead of balled up together.


...haven't we gone over this? Maybe it was Dauc or ILP who said it, but I know this has been brought up before.

Why did you bring this up then? XD:p

MasterCharizard15
3rd October 2011, 10:43 AM
...*face-palms*
...*sighs*
I'm captain of Squad 6, MC. Welcome to the club.
Please don't mind Arc and Eon too much, as their genius is just too much to hide at times.
Traver, your zanpaktou checks out for me. Garra fan/sandstorm user?

...I consider this post a one-liner so far. :/

Which Captains, both canon and Club, would you love to fight? Which would you hate to fight? To make this interesting, lets throw in Ichigo as well.

CyberBlaziken
3rd October 2011, 4:22 PM
Welcome to The Bleach Club, Traver :)
I'm Kai, Lieut. of Squad 7, hope you enjoy your stay here.
And about you Zampakuto, Your Bankai is relatively weak, you could exchange it with your Shikai, or ask one of the Captains to help you with it.

Eon pretty much explained about Hyoutenka Goryou.

My real life failed Cookies> Your Virtual Cookies P:

tarverboy101
3rd October 2011, 7:01 PM
Zanpaktou Name; Suna Oni
Type; Sand
Zanpaktou Spirit; Suna Omi is a demon made of sand, with red eyes and black fangs. He is rather large(about komamura's siz), with no wings. The sand he is made of is constantly failling off of him.
Release Command; Choke.... Suna Omi!
Shikai Details; It is a chain, on one end an axe and the other end a scythe. It turns anything but people into sand when hit. (I'm counting swords as people.) Also, It turns hados 30 and under into sand. The Axe turns it to quicksand (Used for ground trapping. 3 foot diameter circle.) and the scythe is used for turning things into regular sand, used for destroying kido and other objects. The scythe and axe have handles that are attached to the chain.

Bankai Name; Kurogane Suna Oni.
Bankai Details; My chain grows longer, with a double axe and scythe. Sand forms into a helmet(Entire face visible) shoulder pads, and a chest plate. It also allows me to control the sand I create(by hitting things with my sword.) The power level on changing the hados is increased to 60, including the kido of the same power. My axe's quicksand diamter is increased to a 9 foot diameter. I also have the ability to create to snakes of sand to fight by my side.
Anything Else; I become faster, and use the chain to choke my opponents more often.

I hope this is better. I forgot to include the limits. They were in my thought process, just forgot to put them.
I am currently on episode 308. My favortie Espada is Stark, and my favorite Shinigami is SoiFon. I love that squad. I did like Tosen, but screw him My least favorite captain is Komamura. His bankai just seems innefective to me. Yeah, its big, but really only works against bigger opponents. I had another idea for a member of squad 2, but the sand apealed more to me. (Yes, Gaara rules. I actually made my team based on Gaara. 3:3 dark sand team.)

Thank you all for the warm welcomes. What do I do now?

I like Pokemon (...)
3rd October 2011, 7:20 PM
Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?
I like it a lot, and definitely think it would be fitting as a squad page.
Though I think that the font colour could stay the same for both "squad" and "ten". Besides that, it's perfectly fine.

Eh, I think a galaxy is more realistic. :p
XD

My beef there wasn't with you.
Ah, right. Is it halal beef, nonetheless?


Edited. :p

Eh, my cookies are existent. *noms some* It's just these aren't home-made atm. Cause I can't cook... yet. Can't wait to go off campus :p
That's the thing, I wrote "edited" first, but read that as "ed-ite-ted", not "ed-it-ted", so I added another t.

Not your cookies are not existent, but the cakes and pastries etc.


Zachiru.
Also, do i need a character name and desc?
Also, heading to bed.
Welcome to the Bleach Club 2, Tarver! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) but I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

I quite like the theme of your zanpakutou, and looking at the improved version which you posted while I was making this post, I don't really have much to comment on. While waiting for the next manga chapter or anime episode, you can create your shinigami profile with this skeleton:

Name:

Gender:

Rank/Squad:

Zanpakutou:

Inner World:

Eyes:

Hair:

Height:

Physical Age:

Other Physical Appearance:

Personality:

Primary Hand:

Battle Style:

Battle Stats:

- Offense:

- Kidou:

- Intellect:

- Reiatsu:

- Defense:

- Stamina:

- Mobility:

- Physical Strength:

- Total:

District of Origin:

Backstory:

Misc:

It's generally self-explanatory. You don't have to fill in things like the Rank/Squad yet (though you can edit it in after you join a squad).

As for the stats, you can choose to ignore them for now (since generally a higher position means higher stats). But as an explanation, each stat is out of 100, and is a gauge of how well you do in that stat; for example, being the Captain of the 12th Squad, I have 100 Intellect. However, because I am physically very small and weak, my Physical Strength is only 60 (which is below average, for a captain). If you want to make stats, I suggest you ask me or Zam for help with that before posting them.

...haven't we gone over this? Maybe it was Dauc or ILP who said it, but I know this has been brought up before.
Most likely Da.C

And I still like my cookies better. All my sweets are the best in the universe. Because I say so. You don't have to agree, but you can't argue my opinion, because that will never change.
If it is an opinion, then you should say it like an opinion. There is a BIG difference between fact and opinion, and if you say opinions that sound like fact ("my sweets are the best in the universe" is a perfect example), then people will be arguing with you.

Likewise, there is a difference between "you can't argue my opinion" and "you can't change it". People have arguments and debates all the time knowing that they won't convince the other side to change. So I suggest you don't confuse those two again.

Ah... In that case, he should probably have put "absolute zero" somewhere inside the description... I read "freezing cold water" as 0 Celsius, which isn't cold at all compared to absolute zero. I see now. :p
I understood it as 0 Celsius, so if it IS Kelvin, then make that specific, please, Kai.


Which Captains, both canon and Club, would you love to fight? Which would you hate to fight? To make this interesting, lets throw in Ichigo as well.

I would LOVE to fight Urahara. I KNOW I'll get smashed easily, but a scientist versus scientist fight would be a brilliant watch 30 xanatos pile up (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GambitPileup?from=Main.ThirtyXanatosPileUp). That's all I can be bothered to think of XD.

tarverboy101
3rd October 2011, 7:30 PM
Name: Akiyo Bishamon

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad:

Zanpakutou: Suna Omi

Inner World: A desert with a pitch black sky

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Orange, long and over my left eye. (Also, wearing a backwards flatbill black hat.)

Height: 6'0

Physical Age: 25

Other Physical Appearance: My left arm is tattoed with tribal type tattoos.

Personality: Not the most social of people, but he looks out for his friends. He'll never leave a fellow Shinigami behind. He secretly loves puns.

Primary Hand: Right

Battle Style: Agressive. Likes to strike first.

Battle Stats:

- Offense: 80

- Kidou:50

- Intellect:50

- Reiatsu:70

- Defense:60

- Stamina:70

- Mobility:90

- Physical Strength:80

- Total:550

District of Origin: Rukon

Backstory: Akiyo's mother died at a very young age. He never knew is father, but has been told he is a soul reaper. Akiyo's longest dream was to becaome a soul reaper like his father, and avenge his mother's death.

Misc:Nothing much else really.


So, I will need help doing my stats. Also, how do I know what division I am in? Do I just pick one?

arceus03
3rd October 2011, 10:24 PM
Please don't mind Arc and Eon too much, as their genius is just too much to hide at times.

Eh, much more Eon than me :p Now you see why I decided to lower my Intellect by 10 as well I only asked a single question regarding Kai's bankai hey that rhymed and he answered about it while referencing to my zanpakto. XD

I could try spouting more biological nonsense but eh

Which Captains, both canon and Club, would you love to fight? Which would you hate to fight? To make this interesting, lets throw in Ichigo as well.

What do you mean, "throw in Ichigo"? XD If it's a fair battle with Ichigo one on one, I could (probably) trump him out, but if Ichigo is chasing after me because I killed Rukia or kidnapped Orihime or something, I'd be pretty much dead since his sense of protecting his friends trumps over everything else. :p

A Captain I would love to fight, canonically, would be Hitsugaya. Weird choice? XP But since we did a topic on "how would you fare against a Captain" before, that pretty much explains it. No one's crazy enough to challenge the Head Captain. Soi Fon is too fast for me. Unohana? Don't even ask. XD Byakuya's Senbonzakura can be (or so I think) countered by Tsukibana, plus his speed is (I think) on par with, or slightly below, Soi Fon. Shunsui is too dangerous since we don't know the extent of his abilities. Komamura's strength far overpowers mine, and the same goes for Kenpachi. Mayuri has too many weird poisons and whatnot around him. Aaaand finally, Ukitake is sick. So all in all, the only Captain whom I think have no advantages over me, and I over him, is Hitsugaya. We are both good at Kido, my Mobility might be a bit lower than him, but it's still not too bad. Our zanpakto have no clear advantages over the other (though in the long run, his control over the temperature could somehow affect me). And our intellect are more or less the same. Soyeah, it's a battle that can go both ways. *shrug*



Shikai Details; It is a chain, on one end an axe and the other end a scythe. It turns anything but people into sand when hit. (I'm counting swords as people.) Also, It turns hados 30 and under into sand.

Bankai Name; Kurogane Suna Oni.
Bankai Details; The power level on changing the hados is increased to 60, including the kido of the same power. My axe's quicksand diamter is increased to a 9 foot diameter. I also have the ability to create to snakes of sand to fight by my side.

Thank you all for the warm welcomes. What do I do now?

Weird grouping, swords and people. They don't even fall under the same domain. Heck, they don't even both fit into "life" category :P And what about the powers that come from the zanpakto? So you cannot turn a zanpakto into sand, but if that zanpakto creates ice, could you turn that ice into sand?

Also, about the Kido? This is just my opinion, but I think specifying numbers is a bit too ambiguous. What if the caster is proficient in Kido? Would a level 30, full-chanted spell by an expert user turn into sand as would a level 30 spell, chant-skipped by an inexperienced Kido user?

Let's see.. You've made your zanpakto, your profile. Now you can request to join a Squad, or you can hold that off first. Other than that, you could just rant on about your favorite character, why you like him/her, or just discuss Bleach in general. Yup.



Ah, right. Is it halal beef, nonetheless?

That's the thing, I wrote "edited" first, but read that as "ed-ite-ted", not "ed-it-ted", so I added another t.

Not your cookies are not existent, but the cakes and pastries etc.

I understood it as 0 Celsius, so if it IS Kelvin, then make that specific, please, Kai.


halal beef mmmmm

Ah, I see. XD

Eh, they might be as well. Once I start living... off campus. Unless you meant something else. XD

*high fives* Is it "Great minds think alike", or are you influencing me so much now that I start thinking the way you think, or the other way round?



So, I will need help doing my stats. Also, how do I know what division I am in? Do I just pick one?

Yeah, you just pick a division you want. The choice is basically up to you.

tarverboy101
3rd October 2011, 10:28 PM
Then how would you suggest I do my limits?

Cell
3rd October 2011, 10:51 PM
Welcome Tarverboy, I'm Cell, Captain of the Second squad.

First I'd like to point out that posts like this, aren't really effective.

Then how would you suggest I do my limits?

If you edit/change your zanpakuto in progress, please do so in the previous post OR remove the others, otherwise it'll get messy. ;)


I'd advice you to stay squadless for now, though.

Be active (*coughlikeI'mtheonetotalkcough*), follow the rules and see which squad you like best. You can find (most) of the squad pages/profiles by opening the spoilers in the Devisions section in the first (or second) post.





So yeah, college started, I'm incredibly busy with all sorts of things and recently I've lurked more than posted. I even had to schedule a single gaming hour. :(

I'm still reading the manga, lessened on some anime but I can't find the time to actually post about it. XD



Anyway, I'm off now, got to get up early. Hope you all stay well. :)

PKMN Trainer Rex
4th October 2011, 9:37 AM
Name: Koorimizu ('Koori' for Ice "Mizu for Water) (Frosted Water)

Type: Kido, Water-Ice based.

Zanpaktou Spirit: Koorimizu spirit manifests into a man about 5 ft 7 inches. His attire is a dark blue, along with a black cape, thick black gloves and boots. He has grey hair and crimson red eyes. He is a man with no mercy. When in a battle, usually does not like to hold back. A bit arrogant and his stubbornness tend to get the better off him. Does not like walking, floats instead. A man of few words, but we get along pretty well, not including the few arguments..

Release Command: Saewataru Koorimizu (Freeze Over)

Shikai Details:

Kourimizu in its released state, the hilt is made of very strong, yet a thin layer of Ice, crystal in color. The blade is like an icicle shard, rough all around, but sharp as well. Water molecules are present inside the hilt and the blade, and runs throughout the blade and the hilt.


Attacks:
Kouu Hyoushou (Ice Crystal Rain) – Clouds starts to grow darker, and soon rain starts to fall from them, yet is isn't rain. Ice shards, almost as sharp as knives drop at incredible speed. Cuts through almost everything.

Hasakigiri (Misted Blade Edge)- Water molecules surrounding the blade freezes due to the cold emitted from the blade, and the swing the sword for a basic slash attack. A bit like Getsuga Tenshou.

Ekitai Hazumi (Liquid Rebound) - Koorimizu absorbs all the water that can be found nearby. Then from the tip of the blade, the water then spreads out and covers me completely. Forming a suit of water. Acts as a shield to rebound solid projectiles and attacks, for a short period of time and heals minor injuries during that time.

Bankai Name: Taisan Koorimizu (Dispersed Frozen Water)

Bankai Details: Koorimizu no longer possesses a blade or hilt, it evaporates into the atmosphere. As it is now merged with the atmosphere, it allows me to manipulate the molecules. Freezing or melting at my will.

Bankai Abilities: As soon Bankai has been reached, the temperature drops near zero degree and rains start to fall heavily, which is extremely cold water. A blue aura surrounds me, and I start to radiate reishi.
The rain falling helps me helps recover my reiatsu slowly, thus making me stronger bit by bit.

Attacks: All Shikai Attacks can be used, but more powerful than before.

Tenka no Akayaiba ( Bloody Blade of Snow) – Koorimizu regains its base form, but the color changes to red crystal instead of the usual blue/ Lets me to fight with basic sword techniques again.

Ikaten Kogoru (Flash Freeze) - Balls of crystallized blue energy forms in my palm, and starts to enlarge in size. Made into a fist and pointed at opponent, shoots out energy beams of Ice.

Ryuukawa Ishigiri (Flowing River Stone Cutter) - This attack focuses pressurized water at the tip of my blade and then emits it as a focused stream that can slice through pretty much anything. However, it is easy to block or disrupt with proper timing or an attack.

Hyoutenka Goryou (Subzero Absolute Tomb) – The Final Attack of Koorimizu. The falling rain starts to cover up both my fists, and then, I thrust both on the ground, sends a shock wave which surrounds the opponent(s) in a circle. With snap of the finger, the ground inside the circling forms a whirlpool of freezing cold water. Drowning them and then freezing them in Ice. Escape is almost impossible. Reiatsu completely finished when this is used.


That's a lot of attacks.



You, more than anyone, should know how these numbers aren't "incontrovertable proof"; it doesn't take into account zanpakutou powers, overall experience, and the fact that someone's "100" is different to another (and how some people are more like "95 rounded up").
Not that I wouldn't enjoy rubbing it in his face that he isn't the strongest XD


That's how I feel about the stat/chart/stuff.

The only thing I worry about is the total, as that shows how people are, overall.
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Yeah, I didn't want to step on people's toes with my overall total


Nothing new to say. But I did make a banner which may or may not lead to me actually making a squad page (Although I don't have any members anyways)

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3292/squadbannerreal.jpg

What do you think?

Nice. I should of asked you to make a banner for my squad page.




Cookies are tasty. =]

XD Or the hydrophobic/hydrophilic interaction in phospholipids. XP

THOU SHALT... EAT THE COOKIE

Yum


They are, but I'd pick Pocky & Yan-Yan over cookies any day.

I actually covered that in my Human A&P class :p.

If that cookie is Famous Amos, the yes I will.



Zachiru.
Also, do i need a character name and desc?
Also, heading to bed.

Hello, I'm Rex. Captain of Squad 8,if you need anything shoot me a PM/VM and I'll gladly help.



So yeah, college started, I'm incredibly busy with all sorts of things and recently I've lurked more than posted. I even had to schedule a single gaming hour. :(

Thats kind of a good thing in college.

I like Pokemon (...)
4th October 2011, 6:48 PM
Battle Stats:

- Offense: 80

- Kidou:50

- Intellect:50

- Reiatsu:70

- Defense:60

- Stamina:70

- Mobility:90

- Physical Strength:80

- Total:550

Your charts:
http://oi51.*******.com/2u79lqg.jpghttp://oi55.*******.com/wldjjs.jpg
Also, there was an old design (that is more similar to the Official Charts), that I based your stats off of: The Kidou/Reiatsu is an average of your Kidou and Reiatsu stats, and Physical Strength is completely ignored.
http://oi54.*******.com/nosm87.jpghttp://oi56.*******.com/dop1yd.jpg


*high fives* Is it "Great minds think alike", or are you influencing me so much now that I start thinking the way you think, or the other way round?
You're probably influencing me XD



That's how I feel about the stat/chart/stuff.
Yeah, it's fun stuff though.
Which reminds me, with you being a Captain now, I'll have to reorganise some stuff.

tarverboy101
4th October 2011, 6:56 PM
Your charts:
http://oi51.*******.com/2u79lqg.jpghttp://oi55.*******.com/wldjjs.jpg
Also, there was an old design (that is more similar to the Official Charts), that I based your stats off of: The Kidou/Reiatsu is an average of your Kidou and Reiatsu stats, and Physical Strength is completely ignored.
http://oi54.*******.com/nosm87.jpghttp://oi56.*******.com/dop1yd.jpg

Which chart am I going to be using?

I like Pokemon (...)
4th October 2011, 10:12 PM
Which chart am I going to be using?
Like the others have said, do not one line.

As for which chart you use, you can use any. I suggest an Orange one, since it's more unique to you (everyone has different colours). You can decide between the Hex and Oct, but people tend to agree that the Oct chart is more accurate (as it has the extra Physical Strength stat, and Kidou and Reiatsu are seperate stats - which is important for character like Kenpachi).

I'll still be analysing them both, though.

And actually a little bit glad that Hitsugaya chose to USE him instead of just killing him. Like he said, he doesn't know if the powers will reverse if Yukio dies, and at least this way he gets both info, and he can get Yukio to do what he wants.

On this page, (http://www.mangareader.net/bleach/467/4)I have to say, I really like that look in Yukio's eyes.

Ahaha, I love the beginning of the fight. "I'm not flying, I'm just standing." And he's saying it with such a straight face as well XD.

I also quite like Sushi's response "I'LL BEAT YOU TO A PULP LIKE A MAN!". It just shows the fighting spirit that they both have.

And the fact that Houzukimaru was broken? That means we get a melee fight. We rarely see them, but I definitely enjoyed this one. I don't know what it was, maybe it was the different shots (that animated nicely in my head), but I really like this fight.

What I really like is that Sushi is learning about his powers. It shows the kind of experience that he's had (not many long fights), but it means there's less chance of "This is what my power does!" that everyone SHINJI says. And it's nice to see the point of view of the villain; these are all his thoughts, not Ikkaku's. Might be one of my favourite fights, and Sushi is one of my favourite (if not my most favourite) Fullbringer.

K.O. FATALITY.

I wonder if Ikkaku will do his lucky dance? (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_IHDZz0nZc)

arceus03
4th October 2011, 11:40 PM
Manga! add anything else later
Ahhaha, so that's another two fight done. And Yukio's still being a jerk when he almost got crushed. Ah well. I guess if Kubo turns Yukio into a good guy, it'll be like having 2 Hitsugaya, and we certainly don't want that to happen anyway.

And seems like Kubo is saving the anticipated fight till the last, lol. We probably won't see Byakuya vs. Tsukishima for another chapter or two.. My hunch is that we're seeing Rukia after this.

Nothing much to say about Ikkaku vs Moe. Melee combats. Me hate them =P Though Moe had a wrong thought on his powers... lol. The luck doesn't decrease, it only applies to something else. Just your luck, Moe. Ahaha.

MasterCharizard15
5th October 2011, 12:06 AM
Ikkaku, the luckiest shinigami.
^- T.V movie title anyone?
Anyway, the fact his fight was an ACTUAL fight, makes it better than what we have seen so far.

*Ignores Hitsugaya and Yukio*

So Rukia is up next...plesae, plesae let there be humor in her fight.


Fan Fic news: It actually has something more interesting now.

minchan
5th October 2011, 1:33 AM
Anime
Well that was an episode full of IchiRuki fanservice... XD Wasn't a bad episode though. I didn't know what they'd do for the ending credits video, since they kinda already went through the defeat Aizen arc, and they didn't use any fillers for the endings... But then they did an IchiRuki ending... LOL Like I said, it's all fanservice this episoce. XD Well I'm excited that the next episode will be the end of fillers... It's pretty much confirmed, with the cast being announced, Ginjou appearingi at the end, and the timeskip being mentioned as well... Yeah. Looking forward to seeing the new arc in anime form. ^o^

Manga
So this chapter is pretty much all about Ikkaku's fight, with Shiro-chan's fight ending at the start of the chapter. Initially, with Ikkaku's fight, I thought when his zanpakuto broke, that he'd be the first to fail, similarly to how he failed to defend the tower in the Fake Karakura Town arc... Kinda nice to see I was wrong, though. Even if it's a little cliche that they're all owning the fullbringers, I can't say I dislike that result... LOL

Zameric
5th October 2011, 3:14 AM
I like how Hitsugaya is fighting smart instead of just to defeat his enemy.

Ikkaku's fight against Sushi-boy was a change from the norm.
Though, I think it's a bit ridiculous how flimsy Ikkaku's shiki is.
Sushi-boy's abilities aside, Ikkaku's shikai breaks in almost every fight he's in.
But I like the fight overall. I think it would be a shame if he didn't do his lucky dance.
But I doubt Kubo will waste anymore time on this fight.

Eon Master
5th October 2011, 3:57 AM
Threw me for a loop, but I'm not complaining.

I just noticed, the Shinigami who came to aid Ichigo were, excepting Toushiro and Rukia, his direct opponents when he invaded the Seireitei. Definitely not coincidence.

I'm glad it wasn't the same pattern as the last couple of fights, but still, it's really starting to tick me off that the Fullbringers are so ignorant of their powers and limitations that they're weak by comparison. Really, only Shishigawara put up a decent fight, and even then it was pathetic that he didn't know the limits of his power.

Tsukishima and Ginjou had better put up a hell of a fight, otherwise this arc may get me to stop reading Bleach altogether.

Blackacer
5th October 2011, 11:35 AM
Anyone miss me? My exams will be finished in 11 October so wait for me :D

MasterCharizard15
5th October 2011, 12:05 PM
...*Standard one liner warning*
Cool, hope to see you soon.

...
The IchiRuki shippers will LOVE this episode.
...The artwork seems a bit higher than normal.
...Anyone hoping the fullbringer Arc will be better animated?

Jinchuuriki Hunter
5th October 2011, 2:25 PM
Hey, Hitsugaya, have you ever though it'd be a good idea to, y'know, have the kid brought to the Soul Society court or something? Instead of threatening to kill him? We know there's a court because that's where Aizen went for judgement.

Judge: Court is in session for the trial of Gameboy Yukio. The prosecution may present their statement.
Prosecutor Hitsugaya: Thank you, Your Honor. Defendant Yukio is suspected guilty of...um...murder?
Yukio: I didn't do that!
Hitsugaya: Larceny?
Yukio: Wrong!
Hitsugaya: Being a bad guy?
Yukio: I'm just a kid who plays games and happens to like feeling powerful!
Hitsugaya: ...As is obvious to the court, Yukio presents a great danger to the safety of Soul Society.
Yukio: You know that's not true! You're just looking for excuses to kill me!
Hitsugaya: My fans love me. Anything I say must be right.
Judge: I consider that conclusive evidence. I pronounce defendant Yukio GUILTY of being a bad guy. You will be sentenced to death by Hitsugaya.
Yukio: RESET!

And Jackpot Knuckle seems pretty useless right now. You get less "lucky" the more you use it. So when does your luck reset? After a fight? How does he know if a fight is over? Not all fights are conveniently one-on-one like this one.

I like Pokemon (...)
5th October 2011, 6:10 PM
I guess if Kubo turns Yukio into a good guy, it'll be like having 2 Hitsugaya, and we certainly don't want that to happen anyway.

And seems like Kubo is saving the anticipated fight till the last, lol. We probably won't see Byakuya vs. Tsukishima for another chapter or two.. My hunch is that we're seeing Rukia after this.
I'll doubt that Yukio will turn into a "good" guy, unless he has a major Heel-Face-Turn (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeelFaceTurn). He might survive (depending on if Kubo will have a kid be killed - probably won't), and if he does, then he'll probably go off on his own, maybe stripped of his powers or something.

I figure that Rukia will be the same; only 2-3 chapters long. Lots of cute plushies, though.


I just noticed, the Shinigami who came to aid Ichigo were, excepting Toushiro and Rukia, his direct opponents when he invaded the Seireitei. Definitely not coincidence.

Tsukishima and Ginjou had better put up a hell of a fight, otherwise this arc may get me to stop reading Bleach altogether.
Yeah, since those characters are the closest to Ichigo. Though, I figure that they're also just really popular characters, partially BECAUSE they were one of the first Shinigami shown.

I would think that the strongest Fullbringers would put up the best fights. Then again, with the pattern...

arceus03
5th October 2011, 10:25 PM
They are, but I'd pick Pocky & Yan-Yan over cookies any day.

If that cookie is Famous Amos, the yes I will.

Thats kind of a good thing in college.

Cookies > Pocky

Did I mention Wally Amos studied under me for 10 years? XP

Ahaha, yeah. Overloading time with games in college = bad idea. Unless it's on weekends. XD Even then, you'd probably still have to limit to like 3-4 hours anyway.



You're probably influencing me XD


No, you are


Fan Fic news: It actually has something more interesting now.

Cool =D
Which kinda makes me feel guilty because... I haven't finished the profiles yet. Late is late


Hey, Hitsugaya, have you ever though it'd be a good idea to, y'know, have the kid brought to the Soul Society court or something? Instead of threatening to kill him? We know there's a court because that's where Aizen went for judgement.

Judge: Court is in session for the trial of Gameboy Yukio. The prosecution may present their statement.
Prosecutor Hitsugaya: Thank you, Your Honor. Defendant Yukio is suspected guilty of...um...murder?
Yukio: I didn't do that!
Hitsugaya: Larceny?
Yukio: Wrong!
Hitsugaya: Being a bad guy?
Yukio: I'm just a kid who plays games and happens to like feeling powerful!
Hitsugaya: ...As is obvious to the court, Yukio presents a great danger to the safety of Soul Society.
Yukio: You know that's not true! You're just looking for excuses to kill me!
Hitsugaya: My fans love me. Anything I say must be right.
Judge: I consider that conclusive evidence. I pronounce defendant Yukio GUILTY of being a bad guy. You will be sentenced to death by Hitsugaya.
Yukio: RESET!

And Jackpot Knuckle seems pretty useless right now. You get less "lucky" the more you use it. So when does your luck reset? After a fight? How does he know if a fight is over? Not all fights are conveniently one-on-one like this one.

Ahaha, cool.

Ah, I believe the luck did not reset. Didn't Ikkaku say after the fight? He was lucky enough to hit the vital spots, but his hits were shallow. It turns out the luck, this time, did not work on causing a serious injury, but rather on the spot of the injury. Unlike before, where it caused a serious injury, but only on Ikkaku's shoulder and not, like, on his ribcage or something.

That's what I understood, anyway.


I'll doubt that Yukio will turn into a "good" guy, unless he has a major Heel-Face-Turn (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeelFaceTurn). He might survive (depending on if Kubo will have a kid be killed - probably won't), and if he does, then he'll probably go off on his own, maybe stripped of his powers or something.

I figure that Rukia will be the same; only 2-3 chapters long. Lots of cute plushies, though.

tl;dr
I seriously have no idea how Rukia's fight is going to be like, if the start was already something comical like that. Though I suppose it's going to be interesting to see Riruka's power upgrade.

minchan
6th October 2011, 11:10 AM
...
The IchiRuki shippers will LOVE this episode.
...The artwork seems a bit higher than normal.
...Anyone hoping the fullbringer Arc will be better animated?



LOL Definitely an IchiRuki episode...

I... dunno if I noticed the artwork being higher or lower quality...

However the main reason I quoted you is because, from various people/sources, I've noticed a very mixed reaction to the animation of the past filler arc. Some thing it's amazing, and some think it's sub-par... I think it's kinda interesting. ^^;

Golde
7th October 2011, 4:17 AM
Hey, Hitsugaya, have you ever though it'd be a good idea to, y'know, have the kid brought to the Soul Society court or something? Instead of threatening to kill him? We know there's a court because that's where Aizen went for judgement.

Judge: Court is in session for the trial of Gameboy Yukio. The prosecution may present their statement.
Prosecutor Hitsugaya: Thank you, Your Honor. Defendant Yukio is suspected guilty of...um...murder?
Yukio: I didn't do that!
Hitsugaya: Larceny?
Yukio: Wrong!
Hitsugaya: Being a bad guy?
Yukio: I'm just a kid who plays games and happens to like feeling powerful!
Hitsugaya: ...As is obvious to the court, Yukio presents a great danger to the safety of Soul Society.
Yukio: You know that's not true! You're just looking for excuses to kill me!
Hitsugaya: My fans love me. Anything I say must be right.
Judge: I consider that conclusive evidence. I pronounce defendant Yukio GUILTY of being a bad guy. You will be sentenced to death by Hitsugaya.
Yukio: RESET!

And Jackpot Knuckle seems pretty useless right now. You get less "lucky" the more you use it. So when does your luck reset? After a fight? How does he know if a fight is over? Not all fights are conveniently one-on-one like this one.

Ahaha XD nice

Well, Aizen assaulted, but he didn't really kill anyone, iirc. Maybe Tosen. And he certainly had intent. It really would seem like it's intent. If some dude walks into a bank waving a gun, he needs to be stopped, regardless of intention. Plus, that's still mutiny :p I mean, Yukio being associated with someone against an organization still can mean you're guilty.

And I assume the luck ability is like how a heater works. The fact you're winning makes you want to keep playing, even though you know you should stop. I assume like any other weapon, it requires you to step back and build up your powers again, but maybe him being inexperienced made him overlook this. I recall Ichigo's fight with Renji in the save Rukia arc being about how many times a person can strike before they need to restart.

But I could be way off. I rarely psychoanalyze like you people do. I just sit back and be entertained XD

Jinchuuriki Hunter
7th October 2011, 2:49 PM
@Golde: The problem with that line of thought is that one, Aizen did kill quite a few people in Karakura Town with sheer spiritual pressure. And before that even, he used many shinigami as guinea pigs for his Hougyoku experiments.
On the other hand, Ginjou's group did...nothing. They were just labelled bad guys because they were antagonistic towards Ichigo. Think about it, what did Tsukishima do? He made some new friends. Nothing wrong with that. Then Ichigo decides to just attack him without any evidence that Tsukishima attacked Ishida (and HE DIDN'T), causing Ichigo's own friends to turn against him.
The most Ginjou did was attack Ishida, who did not die, and just happened to be a Quincy, a race that the shinigami would probably prefer not to be acquainted with.
This is the heaven of Bleach, people.

I guess when you're so used to analysing everything that comes your way, you become harder to entertain.
No, that's not it, the fact that I can appreciate comedy means I do know when to stop analysing. It's just that with Bleach, the author is trying to make the situation seem serious. And when serious is involved, at the very least, I'd expect there to be continuity and consistency.

I like Pokemon (...)
7th October 2011, 5:54 PM
I'm surprised the club slowed down after the manga released.



And I assume the luck ability is like how a heater works. The fact you're winning makes you want to keep playing, even though you know you should stop. I assume like any other weapon, it requires you to step back and build up your powers again, but maybe him being inexperienced made him overlook this. I recall Ichigo's fight with Renji in the save Rukia arc being about how many times a person can strike before they need to restart.

But I could be way off. I rarely psychoanalyze like you people do. I just sit back and be entertained XD
That's a good way to look at it. So perhaps periods of time without using his powers would allow his luck to replenish (a little bit like Reiryoku, I guess. If a fight was long enough, and you didn't use it AT ALL, it would slowly build up again).

Despite my regular analysis, I'm pretty bad at it XD

PKMN Trainer Rex
8th October 2011, 12:40 AM
Cookies > Pocky

Did I mention Wally Amos studied under me for 10 years? XP

Ahaha, yeah. Overloading time with games in college = bad idea. Unless it's on weekends. XD Even then, you'd probably still have to limit to like 3-4 hours anyway.



Pocky > average cookies

Nope, but that does explain why they're so dang delicious.


Even then 3-4 hours is pushing it. I have so much to do, that I have to most of my spare time to work on projects or study. But I don't.



Fan Fic news: It actually has something more interesting now.

Yet I did not turn in my other 2 fraccion. Maybe I'm too cool to have 3 :p.


I'm surprised the club slowed down after the manga released.


I know right? I don't think I posted my response to it.

arceus03
8th October 2011, 6:53 AM
That's a good way to look at it. So perhaps periods of time without using his powers would allow his luck to replenish (a little bit like Reiryoku, I guess. If a fight was long enough, and you didn't use it AT ALL, it would slowly build up again).

Is it only me who saw Moe's ability differently? XD



Pocky > average cookies

Nope, but that does explain why they're so dang delicious.


Even then 3-4 hours is pushing it. I have so much to do, that I have to most of my spare time to work on projects or study. But I don't.

Famous Amos > Pocky

Ahaha. :P

Yup. Thank God I don't have such a huge addiction to games. XD

Anyway, here are my Arrancar OCs, at last.

Name: Clara Davino

Aspect of death: Deception

Mask form/location: A small tiara on the head, it has 3 points. The ends extend into a long structure that goes behind her ears and meeting at the base of her neck.

Hollow hole location: At the back of her neck.

Number location: Etched to her skin below the part where her hollow mask/tiara meets. It is only visible after she releases her Resurreccion.

Zanpakto details: A generic zanpakto, kept on her left side.

Cero color/firing location: The tip of her tiara, royal purple in color. She could fire one huge Cero coming from the middle tip or three smaller ones coming from each tip. The smaller Ceros have reduced offensive force, but greater speed. She fires her Cero from her trident when she releases.

Physical appearance: A tall woman of 180-ish cm height (http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii159/arceus03/clara.png). Her dark hair is hip-length. She has blue eyes. Her dress is similar to that of Sun Sun's, with the exception of the overly long sleeves though. Her long dress parts at her hips, revealing her long and graceful legs. She wears a pair of black trouser, and gloves.

Personality: Clara is a level-headed Arrancar, most of the time. When she is dealing with her Fraccions, she knows a certain way to handle them that could make them to listen to her orders (which is a remarkable feat, considering the personalities of her Fraccions). She is very friendly with her Fraccions, and only with them; she acts cold towards the other Espada.

Resurreccion details:
Name: Lernaean Hydra (“Lerneidra” is how you pronounce it)

Release command: Poison to death (Morikorosu)

Zanpakto base: Lernean Hydra

Release appearance: She holds up her zanpakto in front of her face, touching her tiara. The tiara liquefies, increasing in volume to cover her hair fully, causing them to turn white, while at the same time covering her zanpakto, turning it into a trident. The number on her neck is revealed. The parted long dress closes tight, making her unable even to take one step. When released, she hovers on the ground instead of standing on it.

Release abilities:
Even though she cannot take a step, her speed isn’t affected and she could still move freely to another place. However, she doesn’t generally move after release, but she can spin around easily.

Poison Flash: The tips of her trident contain a potent poison that corrodes anything on contact. She could also shoot out streams of poison from the trident tips. And from her mouth, occasionally.

Poison Surge: Clara spins her trident, causing poison to surge up around her in a 2-meter radius. Anything inside it would be corroded immediately; it also dispels any incoming attacks. This is one of her defensive techniques.

Morphallaxis: This is one of her stronger ability; regeneration. It means two things: any cut off limbs simply reattaches back, even if she got cleaved in two, and any damaged limbs would simply regrow. This makes her immune to almost all attacks.

Special ability (unique to you as an Arrancar): She has this weird nature with poison; her body nullifies any other poison directed towards her and any of her allies’ poisonous attacks have greater capabilities whenever they are fighting within her range. She is also capable of recognizing poison even if she never saw it before.

Her poison is also specialized; it changes composition as soon as it comes into contact with anything without altering the corroding qualities, so that no antidote can be created to neutralize it. Not that there's a need to neutralize it though, since anything that it touches immediately corrodes.

Misc: She likes toying with her opponents' psychology. Not that she taunts them or anything, but pretends to be grimacing in pain when cut, while she actually doesn't feel anything, just to make them drop their guard.

Name: Rico Vicente

Aspect of Death: N/A (If he has one, though, it would be indecision)

Mask Form/Location: Behind his head. It's like another face entirely, but only a mask. Most of the time, though, it's hidden by his long hair.

Hollow Hole Location: On his left palm. It's rather oval in shape.

Number location: N/A.

Zanpakto details: A generic zanpakto. Its guard is oval in shape, the same size as his Hollow hole.

Cero color/firing location: Light gray, it's almost luminescent on bright days; from his mouth.

Physical Appearance: Shoulder-length white hair, often kept tucked into his shirt. The presence of the mask behind his head causes it to look as if the back of his head is bulging.

Personality: Is a bit unstable; is shown through the way he talks. Loves to annoy people with his talking for no apparent reason. He has this weird personality of being very nice one moment, but could turn completely spiteful the next. He doesn't actually do anything (like pulling practical jokes on others) but his talking alone can sometimes make you feel stupid.

Resurreccion details:
Name: Elección Eterna (Eternal Choice)

Release command: Choose (Mitateru)

Zanpakto base: Janus, the Greek god of choice (Well technically it's doorways, but in some parts he also signifies decisions as in, which door? so yeah..)

Release appearance: He thrusts his zanpakto into his Hollow hole on his left palm, and it disappears inside the hole - blade, guard and hilt. His Hollow mask behind his head becomes alive and turns into his second head. The part where the second head etches to the first head is covered by the hair. Voldemort

The second head is mostly quiet all the time. It loves to fire a surprise Cero at an unsuspecting enemy trying to attack Rico from behind. Once it has been discovered that it's actually alive, though, it'll begin singing random Japanese songs.

After the release, he becomes semi-transparent. At a glance, you can't see straight through him, but if you look hard enough, you can.

Release abilities: His ability is relatively simple. It allows him to morph my body parts, basically into anything, but mostly into weapons. He cannot create additional limbs. So for example, he cannot suddenly have a pair of wings from his back, but he can change his hands into wings.

He can make projectile weapons to shoot at the enemy. He can also make a weapon that is connected to his body (by a chain, for example), so in a way, it is kind of like a semi-projectile. He can also make a hole on his body to let attacks pass through. That makes his a very hard target to hit in one-on-one battles unless you catch him by surprise (which is kind of hard since he has two heads). If he gets wounded, he can close it back up (his Resurreccion turns his body composition into something gooey, but he's still solid), but it would still hurt. However, the wound must be minor. He can't close a cut that severs his limbs into two, unlike his Espada.

Also, the morphing is not restricted to hands only. For example, he can make a blade protrude from his chest. (Blades aren't considered additional limbs, as a pair of wings would)

Special resurreccion ability: Complete morphing
With this, he can completely abandon his shape, turning into a shapeless creature (much like Mayuri's liquid transformation). In this state, he can seep into an enemy's body, and then turn into, say, a ball of blades, to tear them inside out. It can only be done once per release. This attack can only be used when he is completely close to an opponent, because he needs to get inside the body as soon as he transforms. Else, it will fail. It's extremely draining (because it causes instant death), and only used in a one-on-one battle (because after that he would be wiped out).

The release is purely melee, though he still have the usual Cero/Bala firing abilities.

Name: Reina Sanchez

Aspect of death: N/A

Mask form/location: A flower, pinned on her left side of head like a brooch

Hollow hole location: On her abdomen

Number location: N/A

Zanpakto details: A long knife she keeps hidden in her sleeve

Cero color/firing location: Red (the same color as her eyes), her hands.

Physical appearance: Reina is a small kid, about 13 years old. She has red eyes, and black hairs that reach up just below her shoulders. Totally didn't steal that from Ai Enma (https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-LPb7QNE9eH8/TYdOoAwnnbI/AAAAAAAAASM/zzCteYdsW2I/Ai+Enma+%2528Jigoku+Shoujo%2529.jpg)

Personality: Reina is a quiet kid. She doesn't talk to anyone. She shows her emotions through her facial expressions, though most of the time she maintains a passive uncaring face. She gets a lot of teases from Rico for being ever so silent, but she brushed it off most of the time. Though when she gets really annoyed, she'll stare at Rico whenever he speaks. She doesn't even blink if she does that, which kind of freaks Rico out after a few moments and he starts taunting others instead. The only time you might be able to hear her voice is when she releases. Even then, she whispers.

Resurreccion details:
Name: Silencio Eterno (Eternal Silence)

Release command: Be silent. (Shimekire; lit. shut up)

Zanpakto base: Harpocrates, the Greek god of silence

Release appearances: Her hollow mask liquefies and forms into a huge structure perched on her head. It looks like an inverted pyramid and it has four tubes coming out from each side, fusing with Reina on her hips. Her waist downwards then morphed into a hollow hole with the opening looking like the end of a trumpet. Like Clara, she floats upon release.

Release abilities: She has specific release abilities, each activated by saying its name and one of the tubes connecting the inverted pyramid to her waist will glow.

-Prelude: Sonic Flash
This is an ability directed more towards support, more than anything. Basically, it allows Reina to travel at the speed of sound. That's all it does, really. And she can only travel in one direction once she activated this ability, so if she wants to change direction, she has to stop and re-activate the ability.

-Requiem: Silence of the Gods
This ability mutes anyone who is within a 2-meter range of Reina. It might not be a big problem for high-leveled shinigami, but lower-leveled ones who need to say (or chant) the name of Kido spells, for example, and those who have to say out their release phrase, will be unable to do so, hence effectively limiting their fighting capabilities. Once a shinigami falls inside the radius, exiting it will not disable the effect until Reina switched into a different ability, or the tube gets cut down. This ability is only ever so useful if Reina releases before her opponent does, so in any battle, she would try to do that as soon as possible.

-Fantasia: Melody of Oblivion
This ability causes the trumpet part of Reina to emit a slow, pleasant melody. It messes up the memory of anyone who is within a 2-meter range of Reina. "Memory" here doesn't mean to long term memories, but more like short term ones. They make her enemies forget that they were going to kill her, so in a sense this ability confuses anyone who is within the range. The effect stays for about 5 minutes after they exit the range, after which they will remember their original intention.

-Glissando: The Fighting Cacophony
This ability causes any sound inside a 2-meter range of Reina to be amplified a hundredfold. Reina herself, however, is unaffected by her own ability. Unlike the first ability, though, the enemy is only affected inside the circle, so exiting it will return their hearing back to normal. Her trumpet hole below can emit a high-pitched sound. Outside the circle, the volume is normal, but inside is a different story.

Misc: She loves humming the song May It Be (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ce6ZNMeZOmA&feature=fvst).

Name: Eduardo Velasquez

Aspect of death: N/A

Mask form/location: A bandana on his forehead, extends to the back of his head.

Hollow hole location: On his chest.

Number location: N/A

Zanpakto details: A long spear.

Cero color/firing location: Electric yellow, from on top of his head. The color becomes pitch black after he releases.

Physical appearance: Eduardo is a tall man with long yellow hair. His mask almost completely cover his eyes, and it doesn't help that he wears a scarf... so that makes it harder for you to see his face. Another character stolen... this time Nanashi (http://images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/11500000/Nanashi-mar-marchen-awakens-romance-11564417-640-480.jpg)

Personality: Eduardo is a normal guy... as long as he doesn't open his mouth. Once he does, he would spout nonsense almost all the time. And all of them are related to biological stuff. And he's a very particular/nitpicky guy. As with Reina, Rico teases him a lot. Unlike Reina, though, he doesn't actually feel annoyed with Rico because most of the time when Rico speaks, he would often try to find faults in his grammar or wordings or pronunciations to fire back at Rico. If that fails, he begins spouting nonsense about life forms on earth and the theory of evolution instead, and how the cell theory is actually invalid and the theory of spontaneous generation is true.

Resurreccion details:
Name: Tiniebla Eterna (Eternal Darkness)

Release command: Enshroud (Tachikomere... I know, it's the same command as The Doctor's, but since he's not coming here anymore... eh.)

Zanpakto base: Erebus, the Greek god of darkness.

Release appearances: He holds up his spear in front of him, and darkness covers him (kind of like how Barragan's release is). After it's done, the darkness parts away (but remains around as a form of black mist). Eduardo's release looks like Darkrai (http://images.wikia.com/nintendo/en/images/9/99/ArtDarkrai.png), with the exception that the white thing on Darkrai's head is yellow in color, and he has circular yellow markings on his body (like Umbreon). His spear turns into a long scythe, the kind you normally see with Grim Reaper images (http://curezone.com/upload/Members/new03/grim_reaper.jpg).

Release abilities: His powers revolve around darkness (if you haven't figured that out already). It accounts for both literal and figurative, though with more emphasis on the latter. He radiates fear. Weak shinigami simply tremble and run away when he releases. Any light based moves becomes useless when used at him.

Dark Grasp: He can fire off black energy balls from his spear. It deals damage, though not really much, but it amplifies the fear his enemies have if it hits them. Get hit enough time and you'd cower in fear, too afraid even to run. His scythe also has that ability; his enemies would have increasing fear each time they get cut by his scythe. The feeling doesn't increase exponentially like Kira's zanpakto, but it still stacks. One hit from his scythe is more potent however, it would take three or four hits from the energy blast to make the enemy feel that same level of fear, and it also drains the enemy's spiritual energy a bit each time. It would only count if he hits the enemy on his body, though, not on the weapons.

Dark Clutch: A large claw made completely of darkness is shot at the enemy. It has the same effect as the Dark Grasp, but with greater power: this skill deals heavier injury on the target, and increases their fear much more. It has a longer charging time, though.

Misc: As with Blue, his power increases at nighttime. It's especially potent on 3.00 a.m. until 4.00 a.m. (with one Dark Grasp would be as strong as Dark Clutch), though it's rare you'd fight someone at that time. XD He's at his most powerful at 3.33 a.m. For about... one minute.

Yeah, I stole a few anime characters (because I really have a hard time imagining characters off my head. It's easier to imagine one that already has been drawn. XD). And in case you haven't noticed, yeah, the Espada is a wild beast from the Greek myth, while the Fraccions are all Greek gods. Blasphemy I have a hard time designing the last one, making him different from Blue, so I had to devise completely different abilities. lol. And btw, my own Arrancar OC is the second character, Rico. I changed a few stuff (like his base) but his powers remain largely the same. So, yeah. Thoughts?

I like Pokemon (...)
8th October 2011, 2:12 PM
Personality: Clara is a level-headed Arrancar, most of the time. When she is dealing with her Fraccions, she knows a certain way to handle them that could make them to listen to her orders (which is a remarkable feat, considering the personalities of her Fraccions). She is very friendly with her Fraccions, and only with them; she acts cold towards the other Espada.
Ah, so you put yourself as the Fraccion, then.


Poison Flash: The tips of her trident contain a potent poison that corrodes anything on contact. She could also shoot out streams of poison from the trident tips. And from her mouth, occasionally.
I imagine this to be similar to Barragan's Respira?

Poison Surge: Clara spins her trident, causing poison to surge up around her in a 2-meter radius. Anything inside it would be corroded immediately; it also dispels any incoming attacks. This is one of her defensive techniques.

Morphallaxis: This is one of her stronger ability; regeneration. It means two things: any cut off limbs simply reattaches back, even if she got cleaved in two, and any damaged limbs would simply regrow. This makes her immune to almost all attacks.
I think these two together makes her overpowered, defensively at least. All Kidou spells are dispelled via Poison Surge, and she is immune to all physical hits via Morphallaxis. I figure at the very least that her head would be the only weakpoint for Morphallaxis (not unsimilar to Cell from Dragonball Z in that he could regenerate as long as the central nucleus in his body was not destroyed), and maybe super-powerful Kidou could still make it through Poison Surge.


Her poison is also specialized; it changes composition as soon as it comes into contact with anything without altering the corroding qualities, so that no antidote can be created to neutralize it. Not that there's a need to neutralize it though, since anything that it touches immediately corrodes.
Personally, I think that saying "No antidote can be created" completely throws out a perfect opportunity for a Da.C versus Clara fight :p

I don't really thing I have much to comment on Rico, since he was your Espada before :p


Release appearances: Her hollow mask liquefies and forms into a huge structure perched on her head. It looks like an inverted pyramid and it has four tubes coming out from each side, fusing with Reina on her hips. Her waist downwards then morphed into a hollow hole with the opening looking like the end of a trumpet. Like Clara, she floats upon release.
I don't quite understand, what I'm imagining is the top half of a girl, with an upside down pyramid on her head, and 4 tubes that go to her hips, and then a trumpet that faces downward.

Misc: She loves humming the song May It Be.
I quite like how you did the sound based powers. Normally, I find, they're outright attacks, but this is more of a field effect.



As with Reina, Rico teases him a lot. Unlike Reina, though, he doesn't actually feel annoyed with Rico because most of the time when Rico speaks, he would often try to find faults in his grammar or wordings or pronunciations to fire back at Rico. If that fails, he begins spouting nonsense about life forms on earth and the theory of evolution instead, and how the cell theory is actually invalid and the theory of spontaneous generation is true.
Ahah, correcting grammar and wordings, and spouting nonsense about his theories? He is my favourite of your fraccion :p



And in case you haven't noticed, yeah, the Espada is a wild beast from the Greek myth, while the Fraccions are all Greek gods.
I like how, I think almost everyone, has some kind of theme for their Espada and fraccion. Why I picked bugs, I have no idea

CyberBlaziken
8th October 2011, 3:32 PM
So yeah, my laptop got stolen just a few days back >.>
Sorry for the inactivity. I tried coming on with my phone, but it took so damn long to load -.-

I decided not to make an Arrancar profile because of I hate them :)

Other than that, I'm reading the Manga right now, if i can I'll come back and comment on it.
And expect me to be not around for the next two days, have lot's of studying to do.

Flash_Step
8th October 2011, 7:51 PM
IM BAAAACK!!!!!
So hows everyone i miss u all..
ive been keeping up with the anime/manga and its ok the anime is pretty dumb and manga is getting interesting...
but im actually working right now so ill come back and post later..just wanted everyone to kno im still here

arceus03
9th October 2011, 6:02 AM
Been waiting for 12 so I can post this alongside with my replies

Happy Birthday Eon! =D *gives a stash of chocolate chip cookies*


Ah, so you put yourself as the Fraccion, then.

Ahaha, yup.


I imagine this to be similar to Barragan's Respira?

Quite. Only difference is the element (poison vs... time?) and the fact that the corrosion is not a chain effect. If she gets your hand, she gets your hand only. It doesn't extend to your arm and ultimately, your whole body.


I think these two together makes her overpowered, defensively at least. All Kidou spells are dispelled via Poison Surge, and she is immune to all physical hits via Morphallaxis. I figure at the very least that her head would be the only weakpoint for Morphallaxis (not unsimilar to Cell from Dragonball Z in that he could regenerate as long as the central nucleus in his body was not destroyed), and maybe super-powerful Kidou could still make it through Poison Surge.

I know XD I already shot MC a PM about her profile but since he didn't reply I figured it was okay. I also had another thought of a defensive technique where she curls up into an intense ball of poison but trashed it since it would make her essentially vulnerable. XD


Personally, I think that saying "No antidote can be created" completely throws out a perfect opportunity for a Da.C versus Clara fight :p

Ahaha, we'll see what MC would make of that. :p


I don't really thing I have much to comment on Rico, since he was your Espada before :p

Not even the two heads? Just so you know, the second head is... capable of speech as well. I should add that in.


I don't quite understand, what I'm imagining is the top half of a girl, with an upside down pyramid on her head, and 4 tubes that go to her hips, and then a trumpet that faces downward.

Ur doin it right. That's how she's supposed to look. :p Only, not a real trumpet, it's just that from the waist downwards, she just forms a weird structure, with the opening shaped like a trumpet head.


I quite like how you did the sound based powers. Normally, I find, they're outright attacks, but this is more of a field effect.

Field that is 2-meter, right. I figured a radius larger than that would make her OP, especially since she's only a Fraccion. I have this weird habit of thinking up of abilities which are too complex. XD


Ahah, correcting grammar and wordings, and spouting nonsense about his theories? He is my favourite of your fraccion :p

Ahahaha. I was kind of torn between Darkrai and a Grim Reaper for the released state, so now I decided to give him both. Yeah, I changed his spear into a scythe. :p
Any chance of him spouting any biology-related nonsense and your Draco counters by spouting an equally nonsensical physic-related speech?


I like how, I think almost everyone, has some kind of theme for their Espada and fraccion. Why I picked bugs, I have no idea

I had a few different ideas for my OCs, actually. Originally (as you know) it was supposed to be microorganisms at cellular level, but then Clara's ability isn't so much related towards that microorganism Hydra as she is geared towards the mythical Hydra, so I went for the Greeks instead. Even then, I sometimes thought of doing a set of OCs with youkai (Japanese demons) theme, but I couldn't fit my first OC into that team, so finally I settled for Greek gods.


So yeah, my laptop got stolen just a few days back >.>
Sorry for the inactivity. I tried coming on with my phone, but it took so damn long to load -.-


Ouch.

Ahaha, I hate replying via phone. It's so small it's hard to properly type and stuff. And making tags is one hundred (that's a hyperbole) times worse. I only occasionally reply via phone if I've got something that I really want to say.


IM BAAAACK!!!!!
So hows everyone i miss u all..
ive been keeping up with the anime/manga and its ok the anime is pretty dumb and manga is getting interesting...
but im actually working right now so ill come back and post later..just wanted everyone to kno im still here

HAIIIIIIIII! =D Our Fifth Squad Captain has returned from his mission
Welcome back :)

OT: I got a rank up :p

minchan
9th October 2011, 9:20 AM
IM BAAAACK!!!!!
So hows everyone i miss u all..
ive been keeping up with the anime/manga and its ok the anime is pretty dumb and manga is getting interesting...
but im actually working right now so ill come back and post later..just wanted everyone to kno im still here

YAY YOU'RE BACK.

Welcome back.

*gives cookie*

=D

YAY!!!!!!!!!!

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I feel like when the manga comes out early, and we get the manga/anime chat done by mid-Wednesday or so, everything slows down so much by Friday and the rest of the weekend... Kinda wish there was more to talk about, you know?

Well this coming week is the new arc with new voices so we can talk about how the characters sound and stuff... LOL Yeah.

edit

ZOMG YAY NEW PAGE.

desu. =w=

I like Pokemon (...)
9th October 2011, 12:50 PM
So yeah, my laptop got stolen just a few days back >.>
Sorry for the inactivity. I tried coming on with my phone, but it took so damn long to load -.-
Ouch.

I decided not to make an Arrancar profile because of I hate them :)
You hate the Arrancar? I really like them. The basic concept is just so... cooooooool.

IM BAAAACK!!!!!
So hows everyone i miss u all..
ive been keeping up with the anime/manga and its ok the anime is pretty dumb and manga is getting interesting...
but im actually working right now so ill come back and post later..just wanted everyone to kno im still here
Welcome back!

Haha, the anime is pretty dumb? I think that's the first time I've heard someone say that about this arc XD

Been waiting for 12 so I can post this alongside with my replies

Happy Birthday Eon! =D *gives a stash of chocolate chip cookies*
I was wondering why I didn't see your VM... I forgot you were in the US. And I didn't post in the club since it wouldn't have been a big enough post.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY EON!


Quite. Only difference is the element (poison vs... time?) and the fact that the corrosion is not a chain effect. If she gets your hand, she gets your hand only. It doesn't extend to your arm and ultimately, your whole body.
But part of the use of poison is that it gets into your bloodstream and spreads like mad in seconds... So perhaps you should mention that it doesn't spread?


Ahaha, we'll see what MC would make of that. :p
*emo corner* so you only change it if MC says so, but not if I say it...


Any chance of him spouting any biology-related nonsense and your Draco counters by spouting an equally nonsensical physic-related speed?
Only if he's wrong, then Draco will correct him.



I had a few different ideas for my OCs, actually. Originally (as you know) it was supposed to be microorganisms at cellular level, but then Clara's ability isn't so much related towards that microorganism Hydra as she is geared towards the mythical Hydra, so I went for the Greeks instead. Even then, I sometimes thought of doing a set of OCs with youkai (Japanese demons) theme, but I couldn't fit my first OC into that team, so finally I settled for Greek gods.
"I SETTLED FOR GODS"


Ahaha, I hate replying via phone. It's so small it's hard to properly type and stuff. And making tags is one hundred (that's a hyperbole) times worse. I only occasionally reply via phone if I've got something that I really want to say.
The only time I have a problem with replying on my phone is if there are a LOT of posts to reply to, or if you reply, because you used to have font tags. Not so much a problem now.


I feel like when the manga comes out early, and we get the manga/anime chat done by mid-Wednesday or so, everything slows down so much by Friday and the rest of the weekend... Kinda wish there was more to talk about, you know?
mmm yeah.
Well, I'm done with almost all of the charts, literally only a few left, so I'll probably get Zam to upload them all today if he can.

ZOMG YAY NEW PAGE.
Haha, not for me, I view 100 pages at a time. So we're only 2/5 of the way through a page for me.

arceus03
9th October 2011, 6:00 PM
Ouch.

Y u post the same thing as me? :p


I was wondering why I didn't see your VM... I forgot you were in the US. And I didn't post in the club since it wouldn't have been a big enough post.

You are forgetting things quite frequently lately... I'm worried.


But part of the use of poison is that it gets into your bloodstream and spreads like mad in seconds... So perhaps you should mention that it doesn't spread?

Ahaha. I probably should. It's not the kind of poison that spreads, it's more acidic in quality in the way that it corrodes. But it's not acid. Because if it is, then you can basically turn Clara into a clump of salt if you throw a bucketful of alkali at her. XD


*emo corner* so you only change it if MC says so, but not if I say it...

What... I didn't see any suggestion in the phrasing


Personally, I think that saying "No antidote can be created" completely throws out a perfect opportunity for a Da.C versus Clara fight :p

So I assumed you were just throwing out the fact that Da.C won't have an easy time with her. :p What was your suggestion, then?


Only if he's wrong, then Draco will correct him.

Does Draco only specialize in physics, or all kinds of knowledge?


"I SETTLED FOR GODS"

Yeah 8D Did I sound like Kubo?


mmm yeah.
Well, I'm done with almost all of the charts, literally only a few left, so I'll probably get Zam to upload them all today if he can.

XD "Literally", what did you mean by that?

I like Pokemon (...)
9th October 2011, 6:37 PM
Y u post the same thing as me? :p
Because I'm influencing you/you're influencing me/great minds think alike/twin telepathy/etc. Pick your poison.


You are forgetting things quite frequently lately... I'm worried.
I'm getting oooooooold.



Ahaha. I probably should. It's not the kind of poison that spreads, it's more acidic in quality in the way that it corrodes. But it's not acid. Because if it is, then you can basically turn Clara into a clump of salt if you throw a bucketful of alkali at her. XD
Hmm...


So I assumed you were just throwing out the fact that Da.C won't have an easy time with her. :p What was your suggestion, then?
Take out that bit of detail. Then we have a perfect match of poison versus poison.


Does Draco only specialize in physics, or all kinds of knowledge?
Like Ryuu, he's good in all kinds of knowledge (including sciences, maths, philosophy, general knowledge, etc.). It's just that they both enjoy in particular Maths and Physics. They're like me, but their brains are boosted with steroids.


Yeah 8D Did I sound like Kubo?
Only if someone loses an arm in the transformation.


XD "Literally", what did you mean by that?
I now actually have all the charts I need to make (except MAAAAAAYBE Sapph's Oct. I'll bug him for that later). The thing is, I've made a lot of charts that I haven't mentioned at all in the club, which is why it's taken so long to make them all, even though it only takes a few minutes to make one.

Soyeah, expect them up when Zam gets online XD

Zameric
11th October 2011, 2:41 AM
^ As per Ant's request, I have uploaded all the completed battle data charts to my webs.com account.

The Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415236) and Colored Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415259) for the club.
And the Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415263) and Colored Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415153) for the club.

The canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414912) and colored canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414918).
And the canon captain Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414923) and colored versions (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415224).

I like Pokemon (...)
11th October 2011, 5:18 PM
^ As per Ant's request, I have uploaded all the completed battle data charts to my webs.com account.

The Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415236) and Colored Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415259) for the club.
And the Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415263) and Colored Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415153) for the club.

The canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414912) and colored canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414918).
And the canon captain Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414923) and colored versions (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415224).
Thank you very much :)

I highly recommend that if you have a chart on your Squad Page (Cell, NL, MC, Rex, Zam and Kusari) or on your profile page (almost everyone has one, which has the stats written down) that you update it to either replace the ******* link with one of these links, or to use a coloured chart, or include Oct/Hex, etc.

Man, feels like such a slow week for Bleach. Or at least, the club.

arceus03
12th October 2011, 12:10 AM
Because I'm influencing you/you're influencing me/great minds think alike/twin telepathy/etc. Pick your poison.

Second one, because I posted it first. 8D *shot*


I'm getting oooooooold.

We all are. Every single day. So that's not an acceptable excuse. Eh. :p


Hmm...

What? >.>


Take out that bit of detail. Then we have a perfect match of poison versus poison.

Nooot really, idt so. Her body would nullify Dac's poison anyway, and as I mentioned, there isn't really anything that it does, because... anything immediately corrodes as it touches the poison maybe except un-corrodable stuff or gets corroded slower using your zanpakto. So I'll take that out... because it's redundant anyway. :p

Ohyeah I changed the name of their resurreccion. :p


Only if someone loses an arm in the transformation.

Ahahaha. I should do that. Maybe exchange Reina's arms for tubes. XD


I now actually have all the charts I need to make (except MAAAAAAYBE Sapph's Oct. I'll bug him for that later). The thing is, I've made a lot of charts that I haven't mentioned at all in the club, which is why it's taken so long to make them all, even though it only takes a few minutes to make one.

That still doesn't explain why you need to put "literally" in there


^ As per Ant's request, I have uploaded all the completed battle data charts to my webs.com account.

The Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415236) and Colored Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415259) for the club.
And the Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415263) and Colored Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415153) for the club.

The canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414912) and colored canon Hexa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414918).
And the canon captain Octa BDCs (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12414923) and colored versions (http://zameric.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=12415224).

Cooooooool 8D
Thanks =D



I highly recommend that if you have a chart on your Squad Page (Cell, NL, MC, Rex, Zam and Kusari) or on your profile page (almost everyone has one, which has the stats written down) that you update it to either replace the ******* link with one of these links, or to use a coloured chart, or include Oct/Hex, etc.

Man, feels like such a slow week for Bleach. Or at least, the club.

I'll do that later... during the weekend. XD

Lol, manga is coming out tomorrow? So expect activity to get boosted... maybe for a while. That, and because not everyone has infinite time on their hands like you. :p

Soroft
12th October 2011, 5:07 AM
woah this kid isnt gone yet

Dat inactivity.

Am I right to believe that we've finally moved on to a canon arc in the anime, just as the manga is starting to build up to a bigger battle??

And I can feel a Zanpakutou post coming on soon....

By the way, have I missed much? xD

arceus03
12th October 2011, 6:22 AM
woah this kid isnt gone yet

Dat inactivity.

Am I right to believe that we've finally moved on to a canon arc in the anime, just as the manga is starting to build up to a bigger battle??

And I can feel a Zanpakutou post coming on soon....

By the way, have I missed much? xD

Ohai =D

Ahaha, welcome back :P
Yes, dat.

Yup, you are. Though I don't know about a "bigger battle" since the last four or five we've had have been mostly... curbstomping. lol. But since Ichigo's fight would be due a few more chapters, you could be right there.

Cool 8D

Mmmmhm, not really much I think? XD When was your last activity again? Some new members joined, some disappeared, usual manga/anime discussions, people posting Arrancar profiles for MC's fanfics... That's all.

Oh, and Rex was appointed as the new 8th Squad Captain. =)

PKMN Trainer Rex
12th October 2011, 11:16 AM
What's up mah peepz? I've been working on my section of a group presentation, that I'm doing this Thursday. I'm posting to at least give me something else to think about for a bit. And yea, my brain is racing a mile a minute with ideas about my topic, so if anything sounds odd please forgive me. DAMN YOU, PROCRASTINATION! DAMN YOU TO HUECCO MUNDO!


So yeah, my laptop got stolen just a few days back >.>
Sorry for the inactivity. I tried coming on with my phone, but it took so damn long to load -.-


That sucks dude, having anything stolen from you isn't a good feeling at all. *thinks about something sad and personal from my deep dark past.*


IM BAAAACK!!!!!
So hows everyone i miss u all..
ive been keeping up with the anime/manga and its ok the anime is pretty dumb and manga is getting interesting...
but im actually working right now so ill come back and post later..just wanted everyone to kno im still here

Welcome back man. I forgot to tell you that I got a promotion :p.



Happy Birthday Eon! =D *gives a stash of chocolate chip cookies*


Happy belated birthday Eon.



I'm getting oooooooold.


I am 5 years older than you, so your excuse is invalid. :p


Thank you very much :)

I highly recommend that if you have a chart on your Squad Page (Cell, NL, MC, Rex, Zam and Kusari) or on your profile page (almost everyone has one, which has the stats written down) that you update it to either replace the ******* link with one of these links, or to use a coloured chart, or include Oct/Hex, etc.

Man, feels like such a slow week for Bleach. Or at least, the club.

Roger Wil-co


woah this kid isnt gone yet

Dat inactivity.

Am I right to believe that we've finally moved on to a canon arc in the anime, just as the manga is starting to build up to a bigger battle??

And I can feel a Zanpakutou post coming on soon....

By the way, have I missed much? xD

Ayyyyyyyyyyyye! What's up?! I look forward to seeing your zan.


Oh, and Rex was appointed as the new 8th Squad Captain. =)

AND MY AWESOME ZAN! ALL CAPS RAWR!!!!


..........................Crud, I just remembered I have a quiz in A&P on the muscles. Challenge accepted!