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dserebrin
21st January 2011, 1:13 AM
HELLO SEREBII FORUMS!!!!!!!!!!!
I HAZ SPRITEZ 2 MAKEZ AND SHAREZ WITH U!!!!
Here they are!!!

Recolorz!
http://www.iaza.com/work/110121C/iaza12754110118100.png
http://www.iaza.com/work/110121C/iaza12754136001500.png
http://www.iaza.com/work/110121C/iaza12754162601000.png

Fusionz!
http://www.iaza.com/work/110121C/iaza12754175116400.png

Animationz!
http://www.iaza.com/work/110121C/iaza12754127340800.gif

I DO CUSTOM ORDERS!!!!!!!!!!!!! ADD A POST WITH THE TYPE OF SPRITE, AND THE POKEMON(s) AND COLOR(s) YOU WANT!!!!!!!!!!!!

ENJOY!!!!!

Ditto123
21st January 2011, 1:16 AM
This goes in the fan art shops thread
this is the fan sprites thread

M4zz
21st January 2011, 2:48 AM
However, I will give some crit.

For the recolours, NEVER USE MS PAINT DEFAULT COLOURS. EVER. Stick to a custom colour pallette or that of another Pokemon.

For your fusion, it is horribly copy+pasted. No effort involved. You didn't even try to reshade it, letalone recolour it.

dserebrin
24th January 2011, 7:09 AM
However, I will give some crit.

For the recolours, NEVER USE MS PAINT DEFAULT COLOURS. EVER. Stick to a custom colour pallette or that of another Pokemon.

For your fusion, it is horribly copy+pasted. No effort involved. You didn't even try to reshade it, letalone recolour it.

Thats cold man. real cold.

M4zz
24th January 2011, 8:07 AM
How is giving you advice cold? Your logic baffles me. I gave you a few pointers. If your not sure on what I mean, check out the tutorials.

tomthepom
24th January 2011, 9:51 AM
These are very eye burning, the colours clash horribly and the fusion is terrible.

^That would be cold to say.

These are very eye burning, the colours you picked don't go too well together and are far too light. I can't even tell what is going on with the Typhlosion, the green mashes it all together. Sazandora is a tiny bit better but still to light.

The fusion isn't good, it's just copy and pasted together without re-shading or recolouring.

The animation is choppy, it's 3 seperate sprites put together, it doesn't flow well, plus it's on a constant loop with makes it look even stranger.

This is probably a lot colder than PokeMazter's advice, but hey, sometimes people need to be told exactly how things are.

moonlightning
24th January 2011, 10:21 PM
If Sazandora's mouth wasn't red and the background was clear, you would have a nice... er, winter themed sprite. Dragonite isn't terrible but nothing about it is very exciting either.

Typhlosion takes the cake for the eye rape. NEVER use such a violently bright green backed by that blue. I think you may have accidentally demolished the outline in some places too (or it's just too bright I can't see it.)

Here's a tip. Colour the backrounds of your sprites a colour that isn't in the picture (like pink for example.) Upload them to a site called IAZA (google it) then use the transparent tool to make the background transparent. Click on the image, copy the url to a site like imageshack. Check the URL box and paste the URL from Iaza. Upload then copy the forum link and paste.

You would now have a transparent sprite. Do you think you can do that?

Lucario9
24th January 2011, 10:32 PM
The recolors are ok, although, they're much too harsh on the eyes. You didn't happen to use paint default colors did you?

On to the fusion... If you can call it that. It's nothing more than random bits and pieces stuck together, with no re-shading or recoloring. Fusions need to flow and look natural.

The animation is just choppy and strange.

Also, shops need to be in the FAN ART SHOPS section. You could ask a mod to move it, though I'd work on improving your work first.

EDIT: Rank up ^_^

Miss Alexis
24th January 2011, 11:00 PM
the animation is okish but the rest are meh

Rex exploder
24th January 2011, 11:04 PM
Gotta say it took me a while to figure out that existed a white Hydreigon on you gallery. You have a long way to go. And please, PLEASE, never use such bright colors again. Never

dserebrin
26th January 2011, 1:14 AM
Well EXCUUUSE me for trying to create art for people you inconsiderate little
*fill in offensive words here*

M4zz
26th January 2011, 1:17 AM
And yet, we give advice on how to improve. Get over yourself, and maybe listen to what we're trying to tell you. You will improve.

Innocent Bystander
26th January 2011, 1:43 AM
Guys, it's obviously a troll.
Don't feed it.

Sweet May
26th January 2011, 6:06 AM
Closing this because OP can't take criticism.