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EzzPeon
28th January 2011, 8:33 PM
THIS ISN'T A SPRITE SHOP.


Hey there, I made a sprite thread a few months ago. The sprites I started with were just terrible. So I'm making a new thread hoping I improved!

Fusions:
http://i53.*******.com/30a973l.pnghttp://i51.*******.com/4ln6nl.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/23mq42r.pnghttp://i55.*******.com/14e9mrr.png
http://i55.*******.com/2isbc6e.png

Revamp/Recolor:

http://i53.*******.com/2vjz7nm.pnghttp://i52.*******.com/eg8v94.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/2hgv2ox.png

Scratch & Other:

http://i55.*******.com/339hnhd.pnghttp://i53.*******.com/2h3cv9w.png http://i54.*******.com/10zsilu.png http://i54.*******.com/ncjjt3.png

http://i55.*******.com/14sdu1h.pnghttp://i53.*******.com/2i7pl5.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/345nf5x.png

http://i51.*******.com/wbe6v5.pnghttp://i53.*******.com/1zgu6fp.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/358b684.png http://i51.*******.com/2zp3ubl.png

Work in progress:

http://i55.*******.com/14scio7.png

Rex exploder
28th January 2011, 9:28 PM
Your fusion are onluy copy/paste + recolor but they are really good-looking. You should improve in the future making scartch so you can make parts more in scale with the body and connect pieces better. You are going ina good way. Keep' ;)

M4zz
29th January 2011, 1:16 AM
The only c+p I really don't care for is Salamence's head. It would have looked better scratched. The Absol+Mighteyna fusion is brilliant, with a decent amount of both sprites. I like the Latias and blaziken fusion, but the arm to our right needs fixing. One, it shouldn't bend like that, and two, the positioning seems off.

These are quite good. Well done.

Northern Lights
29th January 2011, 12:45 PM
I didn't know you did sprites =] Critique here I come.

On the Mightyena fusion the backlegs look a little off, they're too close together and you might want to fix up the lines as they look patchy and the line where the underbelly should be is missing.

Espeon and Umbreon could have done with a slightly longer tail maybe, because Espeon and Umbreon stature are quite similar it still looks too much like Umbreon.

Asmoday
29th January 2011, 1:10 PM
You did a very good job on your first fusion, I love it :)

DiegoPkm
29th January 2011, 1:17 PM
the second fusion is the best of your

noobiess
29th January 2011, 1:58 PM
Well it's a prety nice start :)
I like your unique style.
I think you should focus for your next fusion on making the part look even more naturally and don't be afraid to try to scratch a bit.

But keep up the good work

EzzPeon
30th January 2011, 11:32 AM
I have a lot of new ones added and.... I scratched the ears and the blue on pachirisu/emonga's head... and umbresols tail.
Not much but it is a start, I guess.

aclover
30th January 2011, 2:22 PM
I remeber seeing the Blaziken/lati@s fusion in your shop and i loved it, You've actualy inspired me to do some fusions now! ;) keep up the good work!

EzzPeon
30th January 2011, 2:44 PM
Thanks, I added one more to the first post.
I slightly edited the Absol/Mightyena fusion, but it didn't help that much :/

M4zz
31st January 2011, 1:40 AM
Your Emonga + Pachirisu sprite's tail needs a reshade. IT has a different light source from the rest of the body. Makes it seem off. Also, the antennae on the Flygon + Charizard mix needs a bit of editing, maybe even removing the lower outline on top of the head, and making it the same colour. On the Absol + Umbreon fusion, the left ear also needs a reshade. Consider your light source, and work from that.

EzzPeon
31st January 2011, 9:08 AM
I did a revamp, to practice shading.
It turned out... well take a look:

http://i53.*******.com/2vjz7nm.png

I need to practice A LOT more.

M4zz
31st January 2011, 9:11 AM
Very good. Now, replace some of the black outline with the darkest shade of whichever colour, and you're set!

noobiess
31st January 2011, 8:12 PM
Well the devamp is a great start. The shaidng looks decent. The darkest shade is also something that bothers me a bit...
Also with devamps, try to make it in the 5/4th gen style. Now you actually only did some minor edits, but actually if you want to make it look like a 5th gen sprite, you have to change the outlining too... But it's a great start and I'm curious what you'll make next

Ps: I heard you where Dutch... me too :p

EzzPeon
31st January 2011, 8:18 PM
Yeah, I'm working on another one now, using the things you mentioned ;)

~~~


Ps: I heard you where Dutch... me too
Hoi :] Er zijn hier eigenlijk best wel veel mensen die Nederlands spreken :P

wolftamer
13th February 2011, 9:42 PM
You put the Absoyena you made me here!I think it is really good :3

bob_is_cool
15th February 2011, 10:55 AM
They look pretty good, and the only problem I see is the outlines.

Pachirisu//Emolga:
The outline around the neck seems too dark/thick.

Pikachu//Larvitar:
There seems to be some missing/too light pixels on the head.

Salamence//Flygon//Charizard:
The outlines surrounding the green bits look like they are not recolored (looks reddish, a darker green would be better), and a bit of shading would be nice on the neck area.

Espeon//Umbreon:
It looks too much like Umbreon, maybe add more bits of Espeon.

Flygon//Charizard:
Some missing pixels on the head (antennae?).

Haxorus//Dragonite:
The dark green outlines on the body are too dark, and since those lines are on an orange body, a darker orange line color would be better.

Absol//Espeon:
The left ear is shaded wrong, the body's (legs) outlines seem off... , and the furry part (chest fur?)'s outline is too dark.

Absol//Mightyena:
The hind legs look awkward, otherwise, it looks good.

Latias//Blaziken && Flareon revamp:
The outlines look pure black, some shading on it will make it look better.

I hope you don't take offense to my blunt comments.

EzzPeon
15th February 2011, 3:54 PM
Latias//Blaziken
The outlines look pure black
It was a request at my shop and requested with black outline, just to let know ;)


I hope you don't take offense to my blunt comments.
Oh, that's okay. I'm posting it her for the crits so go ahead :P

I'm working on a few now, I will post them later on.

wolftamer
19th February 2011, 2:04 PM
I can really see that your improving ^_^
Placing things in the exact right place is really hard x_x but your placement is really good!
Maybe you could work on shading under arms if a body part is there...i do to ;^_^
If a part looks weird after you have made a fusion you can always edit it with the pencil tool ^_^

EzzPeon
19th February 2011, 4:03 PM
Thanks for the crits and comments, I added two more fusions.
- Jigglypix/Vulpuff
- Huntbyss/Goretail

I also slightly edited the other fusions at some parts. Sorry for not posting new sprites often, but the shop also keeps me busy ^_^'

Asmoday
27th February 2011, 9:08 AM
I did a revamp, to practice shading.
It turned out... well take a look:

http://i53.*******.com/2vjz7nm.png

I need to practice A LOT more.

I think it turned out quite nice ^^


Thanks for the crits and comments, I added two more fusions.
- Jigglypix/Vulpuff
- Huntbyss/Goretail

I also slightly edited the other fusions at some parts. Sorry for not posting new sprites often, but the shop also keeps me busy ^_^'

Haa :) cuute, very simple but adorable
Creative too, flashy coloring, but looks a lil long horizontally ;p

EzzPeon
28th February 2011, 8:49 PM
Yeah, indeed it does =]

http://i52.*******.com/2qiso3s.png
A request at my shop a while ago, to make murkrow 'angel-like'. Please tell what's wrong with it. It seems a bit off, or is that me?

Grovyl
1st March 2011, 1:45 AM
Hm, the wings do looks a bit strange. The right one(our right) seems a bit un-connected. It still looks very good. Also, the outline on the feathers in the middle of the wings needs a dark yellow color other than the dark blue.

EzzPeon
2nd March 2011, 7:53 PM
Thanks for the critism, it really helps. I'm busy with editing the wings now.

I'm trying to get into Fakemon again, but I need to practice more scratching before then.
I made a (very) little icon.
Ghosty ^_^

http://i54.*******.com/103cr3b.png

And an Eevee chao.
http://i56.*******.com/8xu1p2.png

murkrowrob
2nd March 2011, 8:50 PM
I didn't think they were bad in the shop and I thought the bronzong + cofagrigus + claydol one was really good.

Time to critique.
Yeah, the espeon + umbreon only really has 1 espeon-ish thing, which are on teh head, so maybe adding espy's tail could help makeit more obvious.
Also, on the flygon + salamence, Salamence's head seems a little disproprtionate, so it would probably look better smaller.
The legs are quite weird on the mightyena and absol.

Besides those, they're good :D

EzzPeon
2nd March 2011, 8:56 PM
Thanks for commenting.

@ Esbreon: Yes, but the body is Espeon, the eyes are espeon and the tufts of fur under the ears are espeon. It does look more Umbreon maybe, but it's more balanced than my previous one.

And I would try to scratch salamence's head, if it wasn't for my low-leveled scratching skills. =]

http://i54.*******.com/103cr3b.pnghttp://i52.*******.com/4t0ba8.png
I would like crit on these two. Sorry, I know it isn't that much of a sprite but it's the first thing I've sprited this small.
(the coffee 'steam' is not correct, I will edit it sooner. Or later.)

wolftamer
7th March 2011, 10:31 AM
The Eevee chao is super good!And you scratch sprites are awesome!The shading is really good!I think i will also try to make a scratch sprite ^_^

EzzPeon
7th March 2011, 7:04 PM
Thanks! Scratch spriting is something you should really try. It comes in handy by fusions, too. I never expected the eevee chao would turn out this good (since it was my second chao I ever made). I guess I should try and make more.

And just to post something new:
http://i54.*******.com/2505s15.png
I plan on making a bigger scratch sprite, but the shading still bugs me. This small ones maybe work out, but still the shading bugs me and I think the lightest shades are totally wrong.
And a little sprite thingy xP
http://i51.*******.com/2woirec.png
Yes, I chose Snivy ^_^

Grovyl
8th March 2011, 2:52 AM
The small sprites look good if your looking at the outline, but the shading is off. Example would be the coffee mug: You would need to have the highlight stretch one pixel across the top. Also, you curved it the wrong way. Just look more into the shading with all them.
The evolution shadow is cool! Did you pick Snivy for your starter?

EzzPeon
8th March 2011, 9:01 PM
Thanks Grovyl, for one of the few helpful crits. I never scratched something before but I figured I should do it sometime. Otherwise all fusions would be totally copy-paste. The thing I was mostly aiming to practice is to make some smooth lines but I was aiming for shading as well.
I will go edit the shading right now soon.

And yes, I chose snivy. =]

EzzPeon
13th March 2011, 12:31 PM
http://i53.*******.com/2h3cv9w.png http://i54.*******.com/10zsilu.png http://i54.*******.com/ncjjt3.png

Okayy, I re-did all of the shading. Still not perfect, but better IMO.
I also made a new teacup -.- Not quite happy, comments?

http://i53.*******.com/kb5308.png

wolftamer
13th March 2011, 12:49 PM
I found this texture map at the group Serebii Spriters:
http://i420.photobucket.com/albums/pp286/TMH360/textures.png
This might help you ^_^

EzzPeon
15th March 2011, 7:21 PM
Umm, thanks I guess :P

http://i51.*******.com/303ic1d.png
^ I made a fusion but it turned out...ugh.
It looks like a ghost-mermaid or something :U I tried to scratch the 'tail' but it looks like some fishy fin now >.<
Maybe I should leave out the red spikes.

And I would mostly like crit on this one:
http://i53.*******.com/kb5308.png

noobiess
15th March 2011, 11:28 PM
The fusion is prety well done. Only the fins wheren't really clear to me....

For the cup: It's a little bit too wide I think. Maybe make it 2/3 pixles smaller.
Also the transition on the right isn't smooth at thr bottom. It sohuld be the same as the left one. For hte rest, it looks clean :)

EzzPeon
16th March 2011, 6:27 PM
http://i55.*******.com/339hnhd.png
Any better?
- I shrunk it down 2 pixels.
- I made the right side somewhat smoother (or at least I hope so) :P

Grovyl
16th March 2011, 7:01 PM
The right side of the cup looks... squiggly?. The left side looks perfect and the cup size looks alright to me. The handle doesn't look too round. You should smooth it out and make it look round. Other than that it looks really good.
If you don't mind me asking, what is the substance in the cup:P.

EzzPeon
16th March 2011, 10:22 PM
You don't wanna know
I don't know XD Purple tea or something. It's not poisonous, I'm sure of that though.

deusexpokemon
21st March 2011, 12:49 AM
Heh, the Latias+Blaziken fusion looks... a bit off, I can't grasp the idea of a Latias with legs... The sprites overall, are great though!

shinjiniisan
23rd March 2011, 12:54 AM
Blazias, and some other don't look natural however Pachimonga and Larvichu were just awesome,keep up like that

EzzPeon
16th April 2011, 8:00 PM
THREAD DON'T DIE D:
Okay, own fault. There were so many thigs that kept me from spriting lately, and finally I found some time to make a fusion.
Anyways, here it is.

http://i53.*******.com/30a973l.png
Gardevoir + Gothitelle, as you can guess. I think Gothitelle is gen v's gardevoir. ;P
I don't think it's perfect, but I tried my best. Please let me know what you think of it. n.n

wolftamer
16th April 2011, 8:03 PM
I think that you are a copycat!Just joking ^_^
I think it's really nice!But I don't like the B/W sprite for Gardevoir >.<

EzzPeon
16th April 2011, 8:09 PM
Nah, I saw a lot of people making this fusion, so I gave it a go. =]
I know what you mean about the sprite, I especially hate how the eye is, but whatever. xP

wolftamer
16th April 2011, 8:10 PM
I hate the whole angle of the head!The Pt one was better XP

EzzPeon
25th April 2011, 12:49 PM
FFFFFFFFFFFFFF- Thread stop dying plz.
Here's my WSC entry, a fusion of three Pokémon that can learn trick room in gen V.

http://i53.*******.com/2u7anub.png

So yeah, I chose ESPEON, Swoobat and Porygon-z. It's a bit of a weirdo though..

wolftamer
25th April 2011, 5:21 PM
^
That.Is.Awesome.No,it's epic.No,it's....No word can describe my love for that fusion.You,madam,are a genius.

EzzPeon
27th April 2011, 8:08 PM
Thanks, I hope other people will think that too...
This is something I kinda made out of boredom, but I guess it turned out pretty interesting;

http://i51.*******.com/wbe6v5.png

I noticed that a lot of Pokémon made a clear color change over the generations, with Hoppip being one of them. So I recolored/revamped the RSE sprite to match the gen V color scheme. Any thoughts?

Lucas.G
27th April 2011, 11:09 PM
http://i55.*******.com/2isbc6e.png
Wow, u are really good in what u do, do not stop doing them, they are great!

Lucas.G
27th April 2011, 11:12 PM
http://i51.*******.com/2woirec.png
That seems like the Digimon style, I like it

wolftamer
27th April 2011, 11:12 PM
Thanks, I hope other people will think that too...
This is something I kinda made out of boredom, but I guess it turned out pretty interesting;

http://i51.*******.com/wbe6v5.png

I noticed that a lot of Pokémon made a clear color change over the generations, with Hoppip being one of them. So I recolored/revamped the RSE sprite to match the gen V color scheme. Any thoughts?

Wow.Thats quite a change.Also,I love how you put the Color palette there!And you made them glow...Lovely!

EzzPeon
29th April 2011, 5:04 PM
So, I made another one. Same concept:
I thought Chikorita turned pretty pale..
http://i53.*******.com/1zgu6fp.png

I promise that the next update will contain some more things...

Finch.
29th April 2011, 5:24 PM
ooh, Nice chikorita!

wolftamer
29th April 2011, 5:26 PM
So, I made another one. Same concept:
I thought Chikorita turned pretty pale..
http://i53.*******.com/1zgu6fp.png

I promise that the next update will contain some more things...

Ooh.Pretty!

EzzPeon
30th April 2011, 1:57 PM
http://i56.*******.com/358b684.png http://i51.*******.com/2zp3ubl.pnghttp://i55.*******.com/14scio7.png
More color washes and a (WIP) Roserade scratch sprite.
I got the pose from this (http://www.collectorscache.com/StoreModules/ProductImages/760/roserade81.jpg) card. For now I only got the lines done, but I still have to fix it at some points.
Crit is welcome though. It's the first time I actually scratched something this big.


http://i56.*******.com/2eg9vvc.pnghttp://i53.*******.com/fc6wj5.png
Red-haired N - I don't even know why I made this one, I believe it was for a teampose or something. :P I like him better with green hair though.
The second sprite is my Pokesona that I designed a while ago. Yeah, Espeon with Smeargle tail. ^^'

wolftamer
30th April 2011, 2:13 PM
The color washes are still pretty ^_^
The scratch sprite is actually really good!The lines look a bit wobbly,though.

You made the red haired N to show me how to recolor hair :P.
The pokčsona Is really nice,too!Whats it's name?

EzzPeon
7th May 2011, 10:06 AM
Thanks! I'm busy changing the lines on the Roserade, but I'm not that far.
My Pokésona's name is Ezz. :P

My entry for the WSC: (Growlithe with Barboach colours.)
http://i52.*******.com/eg8v94.png

EzzPeon
13th May 2011, 11:00 PM
Sorry, still no progress on Roserade.
New fusion, it was a shop request:
http://i51.*******.com/4ln6nl.png

Not my best, I certainly know. But it was kinda hard to fuse those two Pokémon without making it look like a weird palmtree.

SlayerSam15
15th May 2011, 9:47 PM
If this is your shop could you do froslass and togekiss or froslass and darkrai

Exxmaniac
16th May 2011, 2:32 AM
*Facepalm* This isn't a sprite shop.

EzzPeon
16th May 2011, 6:00 AM
If this is your shop could you do froslass and togekiss or froslass and darkrai

Um, this isn't my shop either. This thread is only to comment on my sprites.
This (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=517273) is my shop.

BLABO
17th May 2011, 1:39 AM
aww... jigglypix is soo cute X3
and goretail is cool... it kinda reminds me of a mermaid for some reason

EzzPeon
17th May 2011, 7:00 AM
http://i56.*******.com/23mq42r.png

My entry for the WSC for this week. It's Vaporeon + Onix + Crobat.
I think it turned out pretty well.

PinkPalkia
17th May 2011, 7:18 AM
I think you did a lovely job on that, but I'm not so sure about the shading of the body with the wings. Good luck to you!

benknightprime
21st May 2011, 1:57 AM
Can you make one of torterra and blaziken combined?

wolftamer
21st May 2011, 7:53 AM
Can you make one of torterra and blaziken combined?

This isn't her sprite shop,It's Ezzpeon's sprite thread.Her shop is in a link a few comments up.

EzzPeon
21st May 2011, 1:23 PM
Can you make one of torterra and blaziken combined?


This isn't her sprite shop,It's Ezzpeon's sprite thread.Her shop is in a link a few comments up.
^Thanks.


THIS ISN'T A SPRITE SHOP. STOP ASKING, THE LINK IS ON THE PREVIOUS PAGE.

Plat. Frontier
21st May 2011, 1:36 PM
^Thanks.


THIS ISN'T A SPRITE SHOP. STOP ASKING, THE LINK IS ON THE PREVIOUS PAGE.

...And in your siggy.

BTW, all of your sprites are great.

EzzPeon
28th May 2011, 12:24 PM
;_; Thread don't die plz.
Bump with crappy outlines. >.>

http://i51.*******.com/1zdvv3k.png

wolftamer
28th May 2011, 12:26 PM
Pretty!Maybe you should make It a recolor!

EzzPeon
28th May 2011, 1:33 PM
Thanks!
But I'm not really sure what you mean by making it a recolor?

TheEpicGoomba
28th May 2011, 1:35 PM
These look really good. The Vaporeon,Crobat and Onix fusion looks good too.

EzzPeon
30th May 2011, 9:26 AM
http://i55.*******.com/14e9mrr.png
New Fusion..

I would like some constructive critism, instead of just nice comments and mindless praise. Because I really appreciate it, but it doesn't really help me to improve.

Plat. Frontier
30th May 2011, 3:14 PM
You have a slight problem with shading on this one. The tail needs more light towards the the NW direction, and you have no black outlines.

tskune
30th May 2011, 3:20 PM
vulpix zorua!!! how cute!!!

EzzPeon
30th May 2011, 3:46 PM
You have a slight problem with shading on this one. The tail needs more light towards the the NW direction, and you have no black outlines.
THANK YOU!
For one of the only comments that actually help me. I'll get to it right now.

[That's a lie, I have to do my homework first.]

EzzPeon
2nd June 2011, 12:39 PM
@tskune: Thanks? -.-
Umm, sorry for the double post, but my pc is acting up and it won't let me save my edits. >.< (Or is the site doing that? I think it's the pc though.)

1.http://i55.*******.com/6j29ts.png 2.http://i56.*******.com/25qqh3a.png 3.http://i56.*******.com/6t0fu0.png 4.http://i54.*******.com/op1j7r.png 5.http://i56.*******.com/2096hbd.png 6.http://i55.*******.com/2uq1uvo.png

1) Honestly, I don't think there is much improvement going on in here. -.- But I added in black outlines, and slightly adjusted the shading.
2) Togekiss, Tangrowth and Gliscor as 'dittofication'.
3) The colour palette for the Roserade scratch. Yes, I'm aware that the lines are still wobbly, but I fixed it at some points and I'm not done yet.
4) & 5) Two requests from my shop, a shiny Eevee Evolution shadow and a greyscale Dunsparce.
6) My WSC entry, a fusion of 10 Pokémon from the same egg group [Fairy]. I think it kinda sucks, fusions with that amount of Pokémon aren't my best.
The Pokémon in it are:

- Pikachu
- Shroomish
- Marill
- Clefairy
- Togetic
- Skitty
- Raichu
- Roselia
- Chansey
- Snubbul

Plat. Frontier
2nd June 2011, 1:04 PM
At least your entry doesn't look like a Playboy Bunny...

Need to add shading on Roserade.

EzzPeon
2nd June 2011, 2:13 PM
Need to add shading on Roserade.
=

and I'm not done yet.
I never said this was the full sprite, only the colour palette. :P
No playboy bunny, altough I doubt this is better. :x

satsumarax
2nd June 2011, 4:36 PM
@tskune: Thanks? -.-
Umm, sorry for the double post, but my pc is acting up and it won't let me save my edits. >.< (Or is the site doing that? I think it's the pc though.)

1.http://i55.*******.com/6j29ts.png 2.http://i56.*******.com/25qqh3a.png 3.http://i56.*******.com/6t0fu0.png 4.http://i54.*******.com/op1j7r.png 5.http://i56.*******.com/2096hbd.png 6.http://i55.*******.com/2uq1uvo.png

1) Honestly, I don't think there is much improvement going on in here. -.- But I added in black outlines, and slightly adjusted the shading.
2) Togekiss, Tangrowth and Gliscor as 'dittofication'.
3) The colour palette for the Roserade scratch. Yes, I'm aware that the lines are still wobbly, but I fixed it at some points and I'm not done yet.
4) & 5) Two requests from my shop, a shiny Eevee Evolution shadow and a greyscale Dunsparce.
6) My WSC entry, a fusion of 10 Pokémon from the same egg group [Fairy]. I think it kinda sucks, fusions with that amount of Pokémon aren't my best.
The Pokémon in it are:

- Pikachu
- Shroomish
- Marill
- Clefairy
- Togetic
- Skitty
- Raichu
- Roselia
- Chansey
- Snubbul

Hey, these are looking quite good. You mentioned above somewhere that you wanted constructive criticism, and I know how hard that is to find sometimes (stupid nice people :P) so I'll have a go at being nit-picky.

1. I really like the idea behind this fusion and it is done fairly effectively. I feel like the body could use more shading, such as lighter on the nose and darker on the back legs. I felt like the 3rd tale from the right looked awkward, that it seemed to twist less than the others, but then found out that that's more of a problem on the original vulpix sprite so it's probably not something that you have to fix...

2. They look really cool. The middle ones right eye could be lifted 1 pixel maybe, they look a little lopsided at the moment. Also, the limbs on the right one (I have trouble with pokemon names that aren't 1st or 2nd gen, sorry) look like the outline is too dark? I don't know, I think it might be they're too harsh to look entirely ditto-ey... I'm not really sure how you could fix that though...

3, 4, 5. I have no crit for these. I mean, I feel like the yellow colour in 3 might be a bit harsh but that wouldn't be a problem once it has been shaded and stuff. 5 is very good. Recolours can be really hard sometimes and are easy to do wrong (I've been there...) but this is done well.

6. Okay, I know you seem to have a different point of view about fusions than I do when it comes to telling which part came from where so I won't get into that aspect of it. I'm not sure I really like the colour choice of this one, as white is really hard to get right and can look 2D a lot easier than other colours, but I can see why you chose it so it's not too bad... The legs could be moved a little to the right so that they are in the middle of the body, even if it's just the right foot to give it a wider stance. The flowers look awkward too. Because the left flower is pointing backwards it looks like the left arm has to be dislocated, but it's sort of shaded so that it looks like its bending forward. Also, the right arm looks like it is pointing to the side but the flower is pointing to the front. I know they're c&p but, I dunno, for me they look awkward. Another thing is the tail. Because the sprite is facing more towards the right, the tail would look a lot better if it was on the left so it looks more like it is coming from behind rather than the side.
Other than this the sprite is well put together. Most of the other body parts are put together pretty flawlessly and I liked how you used shroomish as the body shape. It's like it's wearing a little dress.

Okay, I hope this was the sort of constructive criticism you were looking for. Every time I give any type of criticism I feel really mean but I know this is the sort of stuff I want people to tell me about, and I'm just trying to help.

EzzPeon
11th June 2011, 12:48 PM
Wow. Thanks SO much for the crit, this is definitely really useful for me!
The Ditto's are kinda hard to make more Ditto-ey, I tried removing some black outlines or changing colours, but they never seem to come out right. As for the Roserade, I'm halfway done with the shading and editing the lines. (And yeah, stupid nice people!)
While I'm editing the previous sprites, I'll post this WSC entry;

http://i56.*******.com/2hgv2ox.png

A rainbow recoulor of a normal type.

Grovyl
11th June 2011, 8:10 PM
http://i56.*******.com/2hgv2ox.png
Oh man, this looks really good. The colors aren't too harsh for the eyes and are placed in the right place. I like the dithering, or whatever it's called, in between colors. It looks like there is only little shading on the feet and tail only. I don't know if that is a problem with the bright colors blocking the shading, the original sprite, or just you, but I think it needs more shading. The colors together and their patterns and placements is amazing. Great job!

EzzPeon
11th June 2011, 10:12 PM
http://i56.*******.com/2hgv2ox.png
Oh man, this looks really good. The colors aren't too harsh for the eyes and are placed in the right place. I like the dithering, or whatever it's called, in between colors. It looks like there is only little shading on the feet and tail only. I don't know if that is a problem with the bright colors blocking the shading, the original sprite, or just you, but I think it needs more shading. The colors together and their patterns and placements is amazing. Great job!

Thanks! I'm determined to win at least one WSC, with no luck yet. -___-
About the shading, some of the shading is there but barely visible due to the colours. On other parts, like the back, the shading would let down the rainbow effect so I left it out. Shh. Don't tell anyone. :P