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DiegoPkm
29th January 2011, 12:23 PM
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new gallery here (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=551294)

Northern Lights
29th January 2011, 12:41 PM
Hmm, not bad, but stay away from copy and pasting different parts of pokemon, while some of them are well blended it's better and shows more skill if you simply scratch the additional parts on to the base sprite, makes it look more natural and flows as a whole sprite.

Your scizor fusions show the most potential with good C+P blending and some scratch work.

Houkage is good, but you might want to work on his shading, atm he looks a little flat.
Pumpkinmon Gourwin looks good, but again, work on your shading, decide a light source and stick to it, don't just put shading or highlights anywhere that you think looks good. The vines have a no common light source and both leaf arms have highlights, where one should be complete shadow with even darker tones near the base of the arm and body.

If you're still unsure look around for some shading tutorials and keep testing

DiegoPkm
29th January 2011, 1:10 PM
thanks for the criticism, I have to improve in the shadows

noobiess
29th January 2011, 2:00 PM
Well I like some of them. Alot of them are just copy pasted I think, but I really see some improvement in the lateest sprites. Especially the camperupt/torkoal really is awesome.
But I think it's al ittle too soon to scratch beause they are a bit unshaded and the pose of the looks a bit akward...
But you really have cool ideas and the fusions are really unique, so all I have left to say is to keep up the good work :)

DiegoPkm
29th January 2011, 2:39 PM
yes the last jobs I think are my best fusion

Miss Alexis
29th January 2011, 6:24 PM
majin buu, thats pretty cool but could be better shapin

EzzPeon
29th January 2011, 7:00 PM
You have got some nices ones, but also some that are a little too much c+p.
Your Crawdaunt/Scizor fusion is really good, it really blends and shows some scratching talents.

Rex exploder
29th January 2011, 9:29 PM
I don't like much your first two lines of fusion but the other ones are really well done. Houkage is cool but it looks like some kind of...Infernape + Magmoartar fusion. You are progressing well. Keep ;)

PaperMarlo
29th January 2011, 9:36 PM
Darkrai/Magmortar & Electivire/Starraptor are probably my favourite.

Runners up would be Blastoise/Nidoking & Skeleton Rapidash

M4zz
29th January 2011, 9:43 PM
Definitely room for improvement, but these aren't half bad. I've seen and even made worse.

As almost everyone else has mentioned, shading, scratching, and some other elements are still needed. Feel free to refer to the tutorials if necessary.

DiegoPkm
30th January 2011, 11:20 AM
I have to improve with the scratch

DiegoPkm
30th January 2011, 12:35 PM
i added two new retype
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1600/retype.png

M4zz
31st January 2011, 1:42 AM
You sprite fire very well. It looks very good.

On a side note, remember to edit your posts instead of double or triple posting. There's an edit button on the bottom right of your post, enabling you to add to it if 24 hours havn't passed.

DiegoPkm
5th February 2011, 7:09 PM
fake evo complete
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3751/steelwhack.png stelwack

Miss Alexis
5th February 2011, 7:35 PM
i added two new retype
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1600/retype.png

These are very cool
As Pkmaster said, you do know how to sprite fire very well :)
Keep up the awesome work ^^



fake evo complete
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3751/steelwhack.png stelwack

This is a very good idea for an evolution of Marowak,
but the sprite itself could be a bit better itself
IMO, the lighting/shading maybe incorrect, it looks as if there are multiple light potions and unnecessary glows scattered throughout it.
Maybe instead of using a black as an outline of its parts, you could try mixing it up with a darker tone brown and gray color


But overall, your creativity and imagination is well shown, I love it :)

SalamanceKing
5th February 2011, 8:04 PM
I <3 the skeleton rapidash!

DiegoPkm
5th February 2011, 8:57 PM
These are very cool
As Pkmaster said, you do know how to sprite fire very well :)
Keep up the awesome work ^^




This is a very good idea for an evolution of Marowak,
but the sprite itself could be a bit better itself
IMO, the lighting/shading maybe incorrect, it looks as if there are multiple light potions and unnecessary glows scattered throughout it.
Maybe instead of using a black as an outline of its parts, you could try mixing it up with a darker tone brown and gray color


But overall, your creativity and imagination is well shown, I love it :)

thanks for the compliments and for the advice.


I am not convinced the legs

M4zz
6th February 2011, 1:36 AM
The leg on the right needs a bit of thinning. It gets much to thick near the top, and looks slightly different than the other. The concept is great.

DiegoPkm
6th February 2011, 11:30 AM
http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/7292/stewack.png

I have a little improved the fake

DiegoPkm
17th February 2011, 6:17 PM
my new fusion http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/777/heranja.png heracross + shedinja

bones090
17th February 2011, 6:24 PM
Not bad, although the blue thing in between it's legs could do with a bit of work on the positioning. The ring around the horn could also have better shading, it seems quite strange and doesn't work with the position of the horn.

DiegoPkm
6th March 2011, 1:02 PM
my new fusion : heatran + rhydon

http://i55.*******.com/2qkijq9.png

bones090
6th March 2011, 1:24 PM
The shading on your Heatdon needs a bit of work. The head looks disconnected from the body and at the wrong angle. There is also something about the arms that is slightly off... I'm not to sure...

Good work though

DiegoPkm
2nd April 2011, 11:16 AM
for pass the time http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5240/electapig.png

sinful7
4th April 2011, 6:56 AM
I like all of those, keep up the good work. :3

DiegoPkm
9th April 2011, 4:36 PM
thanks sinful7

this is my new fusion, infernape + weavile

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6628/allenarescimmia2.png

DiegoPkm
16th April 2011, 10:38 AM
new fusion http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/7264/exudon.png
expluod+groudon recolor scizor

orangezilla
16th April 2011, 11:26 AM
That Darkrai/Magmortor is genius

DiegoPkm
23rd April 2011, 2:30 PM
new little fusion http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5681/allenareelectrikegrowli.png

DiegoPkm
15th May 2011, 1:05 PM
new fusion, volcarona + dragonite
http://i54.*******.com/vnknxy.png

DiegoPkm
22nd May 2011, 10:09 AM
retype http://i54.*******.com/mlpbbk.png

DiegoPkm
28th May 2011, 1:02 PM
the cosplay for the contest http://i53.*******.com/2ujowbc.png

DiegoPkm
4th June 2011, 4:06 PM
new fusion with pelipper and exploud
http://i54.*******.com/2mwv2qh.png

DiegoPkm
19th June 2011, 1:32 PM
new fusion swampert manectric http://i54.*******.com/2882gjc_th.png

DarkyWyvern
19th June 2011, 4:39 PM
Sorry, but I don't like your last fusion. IMO it looks a lot of thing but not natural... The face is also too big. It wasn't for Swampert because the details (like its tail) were big so the face didn't seem disproportionate. It seems to have a tiny body with BIG legs and arms.

As for your other sprite, in general they're good event though sometime you made some odd fusions.
You're fire need improvement. I don't really believe in it, it looks too static, not clean enough. Look at Chamander and its evolution, ponyta and Rapidash, etc. you'll notice that the fire isn't yellow near the pokemono and red at the end of the fire and the shape also seems in motion. I think your Exploud+Groundon fusion's fire is better, but not clean enough.

DiegoPkm
26th June 2011, 2:10 PM
my new fakemon http://i53.*******.com/25t8cx2.png
it's fire-fight, the pose it's like lucario

DiegoPkm
8th July 2011, 9:59 PM
new fusion http://i53.*******.com/s25jdv.png

-Raiga-
8th July 2011, 11:17 PM
Wow, I was surprised. For some reason I thought you were someone who didn't really know what you were doing when I clicked on the thread, but all of these fusions are well put together.

The best thing you're doing is keeping the overall color scheme to one particular pokemon, as many people try to do 50/50 and they never work.

Keep it up.

Alder
9th July 2011, 4:36 PM
-Raiga-, I had that feeling too. I think it's because there's been a lot of...inexperienced spriters that just create a thread and leave.

But yeah. Diego, you show a lot of prowess. I can only think of a few things I'd like to point out.

The head on the Rapidash ghost is askew.

The Manectric/Swampert thing needs a lot of shading work. The tail needs to be moved farther down the the rump, where tails are wont to be. When shading the legs, consider the arms, and think of where they would cast a shadow. It seems to be suffering from good ol' MLSS; stands for Multiple Light Source Syndrome. That means that the light seems to be coming from a couple of different places. The head suggests that it's coming from the left top corner, but the left (our right) leg looks liek it's coming from underneath it. And if you're goign to use more than two shades to shade the body, you should probably do the same for the head.

Everything else has pretty much been said already. I have to give you major props on making your CP spriting mesh together well enough to fool my (admittedly half-asleep) brain into thinking it was mostly scratch. That takes a lot more talent that some people realize.

Flaywait
9th July 2011, 10:35 PM
Skeleton Rapidash for me still is the best.

DiegoPkm
10th July 2011, 2:34 PM
thanks for the comments
new fusion lucario + garchomp http://i55.*******.com/15qxb0x.png

-Raiga-
10th July 2011, 8:04 PM
Very nice editing, the problem here however is that there is virtually no garchomp in it. Its practically a lucario repose at this point.

Lugia81
11th July 2011, 3:44 AM
Nice job,sorta criticzized out though...sorry...but nice I like the retypes.

DiegoPkm
20th July 2011, 9:14 PM
new fusion charizard + tyranitar http://i51.*******.com/a2em9l.png

Zekromaster826
21st July 2011, 2:48 AM
I like the Charizard + tyranitar fusion.

DiegoPkm
23rd July 2011, 2:57 PM
charizard and dialga http://i56.*******.com/30k916w.png

lucarioisawesome
23rd July 2011, 3:03 PM
they are really good.
Better then me.
I like ur fakemon.

DiegoPkm
30th July 2011, 10:11 AM
charizard + palkia http://i53.*******.com/2duxdw7.png

RaichuArcanine
30th July 2011, 11:29 AM
I'm a big fan of your work! The fusions, especially your latest ones, look really good, however they might be a little over shaded.=)

~RaichuArcanine~

DiegoPkm
15th August 2011, 12:36 PM
volcarona + sceptile
http://i51.*******.com/2iibdag.png

DiegoPkm
3rd September 2011, 4:10 PM
flareon rock/ground retype

http://i55.*******.com/33m3iav.png

Gelatino95
3rd September 2011, 4:18 PM
I love the Vocarona fusions. Make more.

I also love the Pelipper + Exploud... nice expression.

Generic User Name
4th September 2011, 4:26 PM
Gourwin is awesome!

Bluespeon
9th September 2011, 11:28 AM
Really amazing Sprites :3

Aquablast
13th September 2011, 4:46 PM
Your sprite are like not thing I ever saw, they are amazing.

DiegoPkm
1st October 2011, 3:52 PM
raikou preevo http://i52.*******.com/hunfiq.png

DiegoPkm
29th October 2011, 9:18 PM
revamp gyarados pokemon red http://image.forumcommunity.it/4/5/1/1/2/1/7/1309079826.png