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7th February 2011, 3:27 AM
Well, I've been keeping at spriting and would like critique on them again. I know I'm not as good as people like CeCe or Northern Lights, but I want to get better, so I feel your C+C will help.

I've conviently seperated them into sections, to make it easier :)

These fusions are recent ones, not the old crappy ones I used to have.

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/SteeleonGIF.gifGlaceon+Bronzong+Heatran+Skarmory+R egisteel
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/SwashioGIF.gifAmpharos+Wartortle+Azumarill+Floatze l
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/WaterDragonairGIF.gifDragonair+Dewgong+Vaporeon+Wa rtortle
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/RapresTransperent-2.pngRapidash+Shiny Ponyta+Moltres

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/bearpawiaza.gifThis pretty old, so I understand if it has a lot of flaws. I don't plan on redo-ing it any time soon.
The first of its evolution line, Ghast here needs lots of improvements.

These are fairly old, but I felt the need to put more here. :p

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/EtherXatu.pngXatu colored to the elemt Ether.
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/foxninetales.pngFox Ninetales
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/AutumnArticuno.gifSummer Articuno

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/ChaosSonic.gif Sonic absorbing the Chaos emeralds

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/chaosshield.gifChaos charging an attack/Building up a shield

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/jolteonmaster537/FireKirby.gifFire Kirby flaming

There will be more to come over time.

7th February 2011, 4:09 AM
Your fusions are impressive. I really like the Glaceon base one, and the Jirachi/Deoxys.

7th February 2011, 4:50 AM
Thanks! :D

Well, I really want to scratch sprites more, so that I get better, because I'm horrible. Thats probably because I don't get shading and outlining. (Like the outline colors :p) Heres Spidicine, one of my older ideas. I remember making official artowrk for it then discarding it, so I sprited it and would really like some critique on it.


7th February 2011, 5:06 AM
To be incredibly honest, I don't know what's happening with your fakemon. Like. I don't know which way it's looking, the shading doesn't tell me much either. But I will say one thing, you're right that you need to work on anti-aliasing which is, as you say, the colours in the outlines. Normally anti-aliasing works with the shading you've put on it, but this fakemon sadly shows no form of direction. You might need to try revising it, or try and look for a tutorial on scratch spriting. I hope this fakemon can be revised and worked on more, then I'll come back critique you again.

25th February 2011, 7:39 AM
Hey i really like Shelgon+Skarmory+Kyurem+Gabite and Jirachi+Deoxys... just in some the outlines arent very obvious or mabey its just me :) you should cheeck out my thread

26th February 2011, 4:20 PM
Alright, I think I'm getting somewhat better at animations, so here is Emerl doing a handstand. (The picture wasn't big enough for him to flip over. Also, sorry about the blue, I'm using it for Chao Island and I can't save GIFs with Photoshop. D: )

As for fusions, well, I think these are getting much better! :D

And finally, a scratch I made. Its very bland because its the first stage of the evolution line. This one is named after the Minecraft Nether enemie, Ghast.

26th February 2011, 4:25 PM
The fusion is fairly good, with some shading errors here/there.

Well, there isn't much to an animation.
It seems to be clean, so its well done. The blue block makes it hard to view though.

26th February 2011, 4:36 PM
Thank you :3

Sorry about the blue block. I'll try to work on it, but I may just start from scratch on it.
Speaking of scratch, I just updated Spidicine. Mainly just anti ailiasing.