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QuickDraw13
17th February 2011, 12:37 AM
..Kinda.

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/6330/leoandflora.png[/img] Leo & Flora A retype, I decided to make it into two characters in my upcoming sprite series. http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5043/naturefairy.png Nature Fairy Not much to say. I used ;154; Meganium in Leo & Flora, and I just liked using it. The sprite is fun to use, and Plant types are my favorite. http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg839/scaled.php?server=839&filename=pyran.png&res=gal Pyran One of my best. I don't know what I did, but it turned out very good. I'm really glad. http://img695.imageshack.us/i/skrush.png/ Skrush Turned out OK, not as good as I had hoped. It's a evolution of ;105; Marrowack. http://img18.imageshack.us/i/soilders.png/ Soilders Two soilders, again for my sprite series. Turned out rather cartoony... http://img443.imageshack.us/i/sluggerbros.png/ The Slugger Bros. I love making Marcargo splices. I have another one, but right now it's WIP. http://img695.imageshack.us/i/rotomchao.png/ Rotom Choa Choas are fun to make. If you haven't ever heard of them, goto Here. (http://http://www.freewebs.com/howtosprite/chao%20guide.png) Thats all for now...I have a lot more, but I don't want to upload all of them..."]"http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3126/hweviel.png

Well that failed.

QuickDraw13
17th February 2011, 10:38 PM
Woops, double post...... of a thread..... FAIL....

Serris
22nd February 2011, 3:50 AM
Uploading all of them would give you a bigger portfolio for people to give you crit on. And in turn, hopefully make you better.

Most of your sprites aren't showing for me. The only ones that have are Pyran, your Nature Fairy, and the Murkwo-Sneasel at the end.

They're bland. Very C+P (copy and paste), and basically recolours. Shading needs to be changed on the Murkow-Sneasel because you can easily tell you took the head of a Murkwo and stuck it on Sneasel. Doesn't even blend in. And you didn't put in the effort to extend the hat so it would look even on both sides.

You have a long way to go.

Also, I'd like to point out that you already have a sprite thread on here, and it's on the first page. Stick to one, and don't bother posting a thread again if one already exists to avoid bad things.