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wolftamer
19th February 2011, 3:49 PM
EDIT: This thread is dead.I'll make a new one with new,Better works.

Hi!I like making fusions,pokeballs,trainers,chaos and recolors!I would like to be better though so i have made this thread for advice on what to improve on ^_^

Here are some of my works:

http://i51.*******.com/23u7o69.pnghttp://i55.*******.com/x1m1lk.pnghttp://i55.*******.com/2116u51.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/k0orj5.pnghttp://i55.*******.com/10yp1t3.png
http://i54.*******.com/e828b4.pnghttp://i53.*******.com/msnfi9.pnghttp://i52.*******.com/2v80su8.pnghttp://i56.*******.com/2v31moj.png
http://i51.*******.com/20955s3.png
http://i52.*******.com/hw096w.png

http://i56.*******.com/xlcg48.png

I made a teampose out of boredom.Please tell me what you think ^_^

http://i51.*******.com/b6romx.png

Please tell me how to improve ^_^
Oh,and i will post a lot of works here!

EzzPeon
19th February 2011, 4:08 PM
Hiya ^_^

The chao seems pretty good. The biggest problem of yours is the shading.
For example, the trainer is barely shaded.
Just take the color you used and darken it. Then pretend there is a light source from, let's say the above left.

Same goes for the fusion, it's okay, but the eyebrows are only one color green, with no shading or outline.

And the outline on the fusion too thick, I mean the brown outline.
The pokéball is okay, but remember to scratch some parts instead of copy pasting, cause the sizes won't always match.

wolftamer
19th February 2011, 4:25 PM
Thanks Ezz,i will fix them ^_^
Edit:Kinda like this?http://i51.*******.com/20955s3.png

EzzPeon
19th February 2011, 4:56 PM
It's better already, but there is still room for improvement.
When you are busy with making a sprite it can help to put an official game trainer next to it and look where it could use more shading.
That always helped me a lot. Keep up the good work, your chaos are great :)

wolftamer
19th February 2011, 6:04 PM
I remade the Meremaid:http://i55.*******.com/10yp1t3.png The eyebrows didn't look good so i didn't add them.

EzzPeon
19th February 2011, 9:14 PM
That's one is pretty good, I would say:
Just practice some more, and you will definetly see improvement.

Miss Alexis
19th February 2011, 11:47 PM
I remade the Meremaid:http://i55.*******.com/10yp1t3.png The eyebrows didn't look good so i didn't add them.

thats much better ^^

wolftamer
20th February 2011, 7:43 AM
Thanks ^_^

Added more works,take a look and see what you think ^_^

EzzPeon
20th February 2011, 12:14 PM
The gardevoir & Kirlia fusions are pretty good.
The gardevoir one has some shading errors here and there, but the kirlia one seems near perfect in my opinion.

wolftamer
20th February 2011, 12:18 PM
Thanks,Ezz!I added another one,a happy family!

noobiess
20th February 2011, 1:23 PM
I really love the fusion of the ralts-line and the emo-line.
The second one sertainyl is my favorite. The eyes really match emo-pokemon :)
For hte last one I think the hair is al ittle bit too weard...

wolftamer
20th February 2011, 2:08 PM
For hte last one I think the hair is al ittle bit too weard...

Yeah,i might remake that one soon.

EzzPeon
20th February 2011, 2:58 PM
Remember that when something doesn't really look right after putting it on, you can alwase erase a bit and re-do it with the pencil tool. I can see you've got potential.

wolftamer
20th February 2011, 3:08 PM
Aw,thanks Ezz ^_^

wolftamer
11th March 2011, 5:28 PM
Hey,I made a scratch sprite!Here it is:http://i52.*******.com/esm0xs.png
Sorry about the white background,I forgot to remove it ^_^'

EzzPeon
11th March 2011, 5:53 PM
That's a pretty good start. One thing though:

It's important to change a part of the outlines to a dark shade of the colors used.
For example you could use a very dark brown for a part of the outlines (the same way you do the shading)

So that means the left ear and the outlines in that area could use some dark brown in my opinion.

I'd love to see more =]

wolftamer
11th March 2011, 6:12 PM
Thanks,Ezz.You are very nice,and I would like to thank you for helping me improve ^_^

Pokemon Whisperer Natural Harmonia Gropius
12th March 2011, 12:18 AM
Cool I like all of it just keep being yourself when you do your art! hahahahah

Lucas.G
12th March 2011, 12:30 AM
http://i55.*******.com/x1m1lk.png
This ones are great

wolftamer
12th March 2011, 12:39 AM
http://i55.*******.com/x1m1lk.png
This ones are great

Thanks ^_^
Btw,I made a thingy... not sure what to call it but,here it is!http://i51.*******.com/28busrt.pngReal SPPF Members!

Killer_Squirtle
12th March 2011, 2:05 AM
Gothota+Kirlia... oddly fitting. Love your work.

wolftamer
12th March 2011, 7:16 AM
Gothota+Kirlia... oddly fitting. Love your work.

Aw,thanks!^_^
I made another sprite!
http://i54.*******.com/rhvpn4.png

And another one!
http://i54.*******.com/210brcg.png

EzzPeon
12th March 2011, 2:14 PM
http://i54.*******.com/210brcg.png
I like this one very much, and it's good, but I can still see a part of Zebstrika. (behind the neck.)
http://i54.*******.com/rhvpn4.png
Don't forget to recolor parts: The way gardevoir's upper body and liligant's lower body are connected isn't quite right.
I love the flower on gardevoirs head btw ^_^

http://i51.*******.com/28busrt.png
One important thing:
The red used on the hair looks like a default paint color. For example; When you want to recolor N's hair, make your own color palette. Also, the shading color can be a darker red than you used.
Maybe like this:
http://i56.*******.com/98v883.png
It's maybe not that big of a difference but I hope it helps.

wolftamer
12th March 2011, 2:17 PM
The N trainer was requested by my good friend Deoxysxx.And yes,you really help me a lot ^_^

Pokemon Whisperer Natural Harmonia Gropius
12th March 2011, 5:27 PM
I like the ralts fusion it is adorable! lol ^_^

noobiess
12th March 2011, 7:42 PM
Well you always can make your fusions match perfectly :) No bad commenhts here :)

wolftamer
12th March 2011, 7:43 PM
Well you always can make your fusions match perfectly :) No bad commenhts here :)

Thanks,You're so kind!

I made one for the Serebii spriters club.I quite like it!

http://i56.*******.com/27zvj4h.png

I also made another scratch sprite!Not as big as i wanted,but,Im really happy with it!
http://i52.*******.com/2lo21rn.png

EzzPeon
14th March 2011, 6:21 PM
http://i52.*******.com/2lo21rn.png
It's pretty nice (and I love the eyes =] btw), however it's kinda pointy on some parts.
When there is a corner, try to make the line more smooth, and also add a darker shade to the sprite and you're set!

wolftamer
14th March 2011, 6:33 PM
it's kinda pointy on some parts.


Yah,It's a electric type.Pointy it mut be!Jk,but it is an electric type.

EzzPeon
15th March 2011, 7:07 PM
No, I mean it's okay if it has some pointy parts but I mean the body is like a square.
http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/7/7c/522.png
If we take a look at blitzle, it has pointy parts but the body still has some curving lines. I can see where you're coming from but it being electric type doesn't mean it can't have smooth corners.

wolftamer
15th March 2011, 7:21 PM
No, I mean it's okay if it has some pointy parts but I mean the body is like a square.
http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/7/7c/522.png
If we take a look at blitzle, it has pointy parts but the body still has some curving lines. I can see where you're coming from but it being electric type doesn't mean it can't have smooth corners.

Yeah,I had trouble with making it round ^.^;

EzzPeon
15th March 2011, 7:55 PM
No worries =]
You got the basics down, and you improved a lot.

wolftamer
15th March 2011, 10:07 PM
I made a banner and messed around a bit,and i love the result!

http://i53.*******.com/2lc8ab9.png

Btw,my shop Pixel Pushers (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=495945) is now open!

EzzPeon
16th March 2011, 6:30 PM
What program do you use?
It looks nice but the styles of the Pokémon art are really different. The images could go with the background some more.
If you didn't make the background yourself, then there isn't much done to the banner except for adding a glow.

But that doesn't say it isn't good for a first try =]

Grovyl
16th March 2011, 6:38 PM
http://i52.*******.com/2lo21rn.png
Way too blocky. The head is turned towards us, but the body is pointing left.
Also, for the whiskers, you should put a pixel in between the two last pixels that are connected by the corners. That will make the whiskers better because right now they only look like diagonal rectangles. The idea is also sort of basic for a Pokemon, you should try to add more to it.

wolftamer
16th March 2011, 6:41 PM
What program do you use?
It looks nice but the styles of the Pokémon art are really different. The images could go with the background some more.
If you didn't make the background yourself, then there isn't much done to the banner except for adding a glow.

But that doesn't say it isn't good for a first try =]

I use photoshop =)

I only added Shadow and embossed it a bit ^.^;


Way too blocky. The head is turned towards us, but the body is pointing left.
Also, for the whiskers, you should put a pixel in between the two last pixels that are connected by the corners. That will make the whiskers better because right now they only look like diagonal rectangles. The idea is also sort of basic for a Pokemon, you should try to add more to it.

It is my second scratch sprite,don't expect much until i get better at scratching >.<

Captain Doctor Digi
16th March 2011, 6:43 PM
You make really nice fusions.

And congratulations on your shop opening!

wolftamer
16th March 2011, 6:46 PM
You make really nice fusions.

And congratulations on your shop opening!

Thanks a lot!

Captain Doctor Digi
16th March 2011, 6:47 PM
Your welcome!

Grovyl
16th March 2011, 6:57 PM
It is my second scratch sprite,don't expect much until i get better at scratching >.<
Oh I know. I was just trying to help you out, that wasn't me just bagging on your sprite it was for improvement if you were thinking about it.


http://i54.*******.com/210brcg.png
I like this one! Especially the blue eye! The major problem with this one is the clear spots on the head, but that is very easy to fix. There's a white part behind the ear which shouldn't be white. Those things are just quick mess ups that are very easy to fix.
It's pretty well done, but in my opinion I think it could use some more Zebstrika. All I see of Zebstrika is the color and the mane. Maybe you could add some Zebstrika stripes. Although, if your a little uncomfortable with scratching this could be a practice or if you don't want to scratch this is a good sprite.
Overall, I really like this sprite! This has to be one of your best fusions.

wolftamer
16th March 2011, 7:08 PM
http://i54.*******.com/210brcg.png
I like this one! Especially the blue eye! The major problem with this one is the clear spots on the head, but that is very easy to fix. There's a white part behind the ear which shouldn't be white. Those things are just quick mess ups that are very easy to fix.
It's pretty well done, but in my opinion I think it could use some more Zebstrika. All I see of Zebstrika is the color and the mane. Maybe you could add some Zebstrika stripes. Although, if your a little uncomfortable with scratching this could be a practice or if you don't want to scratch this is a good sprite.
Overall, I really like this sprite! This has to be one of your best fusions.

Thanks!Im a bit busy,I will fix it when i have the time.

wolftamer
20th March 2011, 11:20 AM
So,I haven't posted here in a long time,But i made wallpapers!First one:

http://i53.*******.com/x6h5wz.jpg

Second one:

http://i56.*******.com/2iijt5g.jpg

The second one is my desktop Background~

EzzPeon
20th March 2011, 11:26 AM
I suppose the walpapers and banner are more suitable for 'Digital Art'.
But as for the second one: the picture you used is of horribe quality :O
The first one's nice, but what did you do other than adding text? (And I'm curious to know who made the picture in the first place..)

wolftamer
20th March 2011, 11:33 AM
I suppose the walpapers and banner are more suitable for 'Digital Art'.
But as for the second one: the picture you used is of horribe quality :O
The first one's nice, but what did you do other than adding text? (And I'm curious to know who made the picture in the first place..)

I know,but making another thread for these two wallpapers?I don't think so.
The quality was better when I found it :/
http://o-eternal-o.deviantart.com/ I only added text,The picture is beautiful on its own.
I would use my own drawings,but I don't have a scanner ;_;
Maybe I will ask my Dad if I can borrow his at work...

shinjiniisan
23rd March 2011, 12:58 AM
Liked the splices,pokéballs and recolors, however the trainer and the CHAOSes weren't that good,is it just me or you're obsessed with Gardevoir?Anyways ,awesome!Keep up like that!

wolftamer
23rd March 2011, 7:46 AM
Im improving with all my work,You can check out my shop(Posted a link a page back) And see what you think.

shinjiniisan
23rd March 2011, 9:32 AM
Sure I will,in Brazil its 4:30 i have nothing to do...

wolftamer
29th March 2011, 5:42 PM
It has been a long time since I posted here,But I found loads of B/W sprites!I tested some out and ta-da!
http://i51.*******.com/2lnfqyd.png

Please tell me what you think about it!

Invader Zim
1st April 2011, 8:17 AM
Hi, nice work. :3

wolftamer
1st April 2011, 2:35 PM
Hi, nice work. :3

Thanks!I work hard!

sinful7
4th April 2011, 7:01 AM
Okay these are good but I would try staying out of the 5th gens as they seem to puts peoples skill down, I only say that because the 5th gen is very terrible, your work is very good but when the two mix your creativity seems to drop quite a bit.

Grovyl
4th April 2011, 7:16 AM
Okay these are good but I would try staying out of the 5th gens as they seem to puts peoples skill down, I only say that because the 5th gen is very terrible, your work is very good but when the two mix your creativity seems to drop quite a bit.

I'd say don't do this at all! Even if Generation V was terrible, which it's not, you could expand your spriting skills and work with them.
As for your newest sprite, it's nothing much just some sprites thrown together. But, it still looks well done and clean. I'd like to see more sprites!

wolftamer
4th April 2011, 7:54 PM
@sinful7:Thanks,I get you don't like 5th gen?
@Grovyl:Thanks,I'll get more sprites done,I have been a bit busy ;^_^
EDIT:Thread,don't die :'C
Well,here is a evolution thingy magig:
http://i55.*******.com/hs2ook.png

Edit:Well,This thread is dead.I'll make a new Sprite thread,With new,Better works.