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ebilly99
24th February 2011, 11:59 PM
I am ready for all the abuse so lets see what we got. Also yes 90 percent are fusions so don't tell me I need to scratch more. Also the whole Osaka thing is so people know me.
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/12-7.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/12-5.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/12-3.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/Marowack.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/wip.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/megatron.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/prime.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/darkpsy.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/teravult.pnghttp://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/athiests.png

Zozo1999
25th February 2011, 12:11 AM
Okay, First of all it's pointless making a reigon for only Fusions. Most of them aren't recoloured probably and still have the outline of their old colour. They are all C+P and really messy also. You also need to work on your scratching. No, scratching isn't doing a little piece by yourself and messily slapping real Pokemon's parts on, Scratching a Fakemon should be 100% Scratch. And your outlines are all straight lines or circles, not a good idea, they should flow with what your making. And also work on your shading, they are just straight lines too. You should plan on what your making before you slap random things on.

Long Crit is Long

ebilly99
25th February 2011, 12:16 AM
Thanks as you can tell I was kinda expecting it. Also that last part hurt. I do think it out quite a bit. Anyway thanks again

BynineB
25th February 2011, 1:05 AM
Well, start out with a basic scratch Pokemon of your own design, and I (and hopefully other members of the board) will work with you from there. Remember to keep one constant lightsource while making it!

ebilly99
28th February 2011, 10:46 PM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/12-5.png This is a scratch I made

BynineB
28th February 2011, 11:30 PM
There are pretty clearly things from Carnivine, but okay, we can start here.

First of all, I don't understand the concept. I'm assuming that it is some sort of venus fly trap (again, because you took parts and colours from Carnivine) , but it doesn't look like one. It looks like a cracked egg with leaves and christmas vomit flowing out of it. Look at what you're basing something on and try to make your design roughly similar to it.

http://i53.*******.com/1z3vtrt.png Is this what it's supposed to look like?

The outline is all over the place. The main body is perfectly circular (with a few pixels missing), which is never a good thing, because it means it's standing up straight. The shading is also not circular and doesn't follow the contours of the body properly. The spots just look blotchy.

Overall, it's very messy, the concept isn't clear, and the shading, outlining, and patterning need work.

ebilly99
2nd March 2011, 7:05 PM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f263/ebilly99/athiests.pngThis is why I dont scratch they suck