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samurottwarrior
12th April 2011, 6:50 PM
Hello guys,

As some of you probably know i've recently opened up a shop and have started making mostly Chao and some Pokedolls.

Since it is spamming in shops if it isn't a request/thank you/art post it is very hard for me to get good feedback on my work, and constructive critisism is good for everyone.

One user contacted me with his opinion and it brought to my attention some flaws in my Chao's. I would love it if I could get some help to improve my chao making.

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It seems that some of my chao's turn into poke dolls unintentionally without me trying. The user who contacted me noted that chao's should be cute and kind of pudgy. I think I have gotten this with a lot of them, but when I completely make a chao form scratch such as my darkrai or rayquaza it turns out very differently.

All constructed critisism welcomed! :D

gardevoir rocks
12th April 2011, 7:52 PM
Awesome sprites, though chimchar's flames are kinda triangular (the ones on his head).

samurottwarrior
14th April 2011, 8:01 PM
Awesome sprites, though chimchar's flames are kinda triangular (the ones on his head).

Unfortunately that doesn't really help me a lot. I could use some help with some of the animations that are in my shop as well, does anyone know how to rotate something like a chao and not lose pix-elation? I dont have any high tech programs or anything :(

Zozo1999
14th April 2011, 8:30 PM
Your Three Legendaries to look like Dolls >w< But they are really adorable :D

I know some a difficult, but DON'T Copy-Paste parts of Official Sprites onto the Chao. Try to Scratch all of it. That's the one Twist with Chao-Making. Scratching can be difficult, but if you keep trying, analyzing real Sprites for guidance. It's hard, but not impossible. Keep Trying and you can do it :D