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quilt
8th May 2011, 1:34 PM
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C&C Thanks?

Plat. Frontier
8th May 2011, 6:28 PM
Too much Copy + Paste in my liking on the first. Try scratching more than just an orb.

The second one is good, but the face creeps me out.

poix_the_yak
11th May 2011, 5:21 AM
I gotta say, the first one is one of my favorite concepts I've ever seen. As P.F. said, it is c+p, but not nearly as much as the second one imo. Like, the sceptile tail on the body is a totally different shade of green; you should recolor it to match the rest of the body. I'd love to see a scratched version of both of them, but I'd practice with fusions or shading first.

quilt
12th May 2011, 6:44 AM
I gotta say, the first one is one of my favorite concepts I've ever seen. As P.F. said, it is c+p, but not nearly as much as the second one imo. Like, the sceptile tail on the body is a totally different shade of green; you should recolor it to match the rest of the body. I'd love to see a scratched version of both of them, but I'd practice with fusions or shading first.

Yeah there's no denying it, there was alot of c&p.

I didn't bother with the recolour of the tail because I preferred the first one.
But thanks for the c&c guys.

PinkPalkia
12th May 2011, 7:13 AM
The stripe near the neck of the first one seems to bother me because of the way it curves since it's flat. You could try scratching that to make the appropriate curve. Also, I think the squarish area at the base of the neck seems to contribute to that.

These are very nice, by the way. I love the second one, even with the face. As someone else said, you could try matching the greens to unify the parts more. x3