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turboredeemed
27th October 2005, 11:00 PM
Here is what I have so far, and Razor Leaf, this is the absolute BEST I could come up with, so don't ban me again!

This rp takes 2 years after the original Pocket Hearts. The plot is that the portals have opened up again, but just in Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn, and the evil Pokemon Teams have teamed up with Villains from the Kingdom Hearts worlds AGAIN, and the Heartless are back, along with the Thirteenth Order, and the Nobodies! You are a Pokemon trainer who receives a Weapon from the Kingdom Hearts games, and will team up with other trainers who also received weapons. You have 6 fully-evolved, non-legendary Pokemon (Legendaries are summons, like in the original Rp). You are the only ones who can stop all this madness in all the worlds!

Portal List (will add more when more worlds are revealed!)
Twilight Town- LittleRoot Town
Agrabah- Desert Underpass
Pride Lands- Safari Zone (The one in Kanto)
Land of the Dragons- Blackthorn City
Timeless River- Route 24
Port Royale- Olivine City
Destiny Islands- Cinnabar Island
Beast's Castle- Ever Grande City
Atlantica- Cerulean City
Olympus Coliseum- Route 45
Halloween Town- Mt. Pyre
Hollow Bastion- Lake Of Rage
Disney Castle- Celadon City
100 Acre Wood- Viridian Forest
Castle Oblivion- Lilycove City
Deep Dive- Seafloor Cavern

The sign-ups
Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Hot temper, but a nice guy, has mood swings sometimes
Physical Descriptions
Regular: The boy trainer from Pokemon Emerald.
Halloween Town: A gothic form of the regular.
Timeless River: A black-and-white cartoony version of the regular.
Atlantica: Like the regular, only a merman.
Pridelands: A dark brown teenage lion with a white mane and his Pokeballs around his neck.
Pokemon: Sceptile, Kingdra, Crobat, Rhydon, Gyarados, Donphan
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade

turboredeemed
28th October 2005, 9:56 PM
I would REALLY HATE to double post, but Razor Leaf, COME OVER HERE!

Yami Ryu
28th October 2005, 10:09 PM
Man someone doesn't know the PM feature.


Someone also doesn't know how to try and get better T_T too bad you don't ****ing listen to help, to what mods say, and etc etc etc. I'm not gonna tell you what I told you 5 times before, and I think Dan should just ban you.

I SEE NO IMPROVEMENT.

And btw;

Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Hot temper, but a nice guy, has mood swings sometimes
Physical Descriptions
Regular: The boy trainer from Pokemon Emerald.
Halloween Town: A gothic form of the regular.
Timeless River: A black-and-white cartoony version of the regular.
Atlantica: Like the regular, only a merman.
Pridelands: A dark brown teenage lion with a white mane and his Pokeballs around his neck.
Pokemon: Sceptile, Kingdra, Crobat, Rhydon, Gyarados, Donphan
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade

^That is Beyond sad for a sign up.

turboredeemed
28th October 2005, 10:15 PM
Aw, crap, YOU! Why, God, WHY? *looks around for Razor Leaf* I hope you go poop on some other n00b's party!

Yami Ryu
28th October 2005, 10:23 PM
Aw, crap, YOU! Why, God, WHY? *looks around for Razor Leaf* I hope you go poop on some other n00b's party!

I have no idea wether to be insulted by that, or laugh at you .. so I'll just go with the latter. I'm amused that you tell that to me, when I offered you help in the last two threads, and you whined, whimpered and claimed you couldn't get better. You haven't even tried, you didn't even try, and this further shows you won't ever try.

And this also goes to show you don't read advice from Role Players, and wtf don't you just go PRIVATE MESSAGE DAN instead of acting like a newbie and double posting and all *where is Dan?* *posts again* *and again* and etc, etc, up into infinity.

Psychic
28th October 2005, 10:25 PM
*slaps turboredeemed*

HOW DARE YOU?!

A POX O' YOUR THROAT, YOU BAWLING, BLASPHEMOUS, INCHARITABLE DOG!
Sometimes, it helps to quote your own character. I love Sabastien right now, as this line seems to have been made for turboredeemed, not the Boatswain. Shakespear is a genius.


What the Hell is wrong with you, turboredeemed? You have posted more RPG 'plots' then anyone on the entire board, and each time we reply, attempt to make you listen and each time YOU BLOW US OFF! YOU NEVER LISTEN TO A WORD ANYONE SAIS!
Maybe if you took the time to read the posts, work on your plot, make a decent Sign Up, YOU'D BE GETTING SOMEWHERE. MAKE THE DAMNED EFFORT!


I don't know why I'm even going to say this, as I've already said it to you loads of time.
Your plot. Ok, tell us about 'Kindom hearts'. What is it. I have never played the game before, so I don't know. If I don't know, I can't be in the RPG. You want people in your RPG? Make it so we can understand it.

Go back to the old threads you've made. Check to see what we said there. THINK about what we said there. IT IS EASY AND SIMPLE IF YOU USE YOUR SORRY EXCUSE FOR A BRAIN.


And if you want RaZoR to help you, PM him. Don't double post.

~Psychic

PsiUmbreon
28th October 2005, 10:33 PM
Here is an example of what an RPG is supposed to be: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=90983

Notice the key difference? For starters, it's a lot LONGER than yours, and wasn't simply pulled out of your butt and done in 30 minutes. It took TIME and EFFORT to make it.

It's also a lot more descriptive, and in detail. It gives a very detailed background and plot. It wasn't all thrown together in a single paragraph like yours.

You also need to learn how to make a sign up. It's not that hard, anyone with a brain can look and see how other people do their sign ups and just go off that. One line under "personality" is NOT a sign up. Maybe it is where you come from, but on SPPf it's not.

I personally don't see why Razor Leaf shouldn't ban you right now simply for not being able to follow simple directions given to you loads of times by both members and mods. In fact, maybe I'll IM him right now...

RaZoR LeAf
29th October 2005, 12:59 AM
You ignorant little ****. If you you want to talk to me specifically, you do what every other member does and use the ****ing PM system like you are supposed to! That is NOT the absolute best you can come up with, because that is exactly what you wrote the FIRST time you wrote it! Lets have little history lesson shall we?

I need help with a good plot for a digimon RP! (http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=89556)


Turbo - I will give you advice, hell I will help you improve if you would just sit down and take the effort to try out what people tell you. The reason all these people have flamed you, is that they have given advice before and seen you ignore it in each and every new RPG you make, which are inevitably closed.

Now, I will break down your RPG and advise on what to do next. For your sake, and my own sanity, use this thread to keep posting your ideas in. I will help you the best I can, but only if you PROMISE to make an effort. We can't help you, if you wont help yourself.

And what happened pray tell? You IGNORED EVERY SINGLE PIECE OF ADVICE GIVEN TO YOU, AND POSTED THIS **** INSTEAD! You NEVER take any advice given to you, you ignore everything people say and henceforth nobody cares to give you advice anymore.

I WARNED YOU when you posted this as an RPG before! LISTEN TO ME NOW!

IMPROVE OR LEAVE. THE MODS OF THIS FORUM HAVE DECIDED THAT IF YOU CONTINUE TO FILL IT WILL POOR ATTEMPTS AT RPGS THEN YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE FORUM FOR A CONSIDERABLE LENGTH OF TIME.

THIS IS YOUR FINAL WARNING!

Blivsey
22nd November 2005, 1:32 AM
Oh. My. Satan.

It never fails, turbo, you always come up with something worse than the previous. This has so many errors (besides grammar) that I'm not going to bother to take the half hour I'm sure it would take to pick out every last mistake. What really peeves me is that you, above all, are the RP creator. You need to SET A FLIPPIN' EXAMPLE. I would NEVER, under ANY circumstances, accept your signup into my lowest ideas. And if you need help with it, employ help BEFORE you post this. I have seen you do this, be banned, do this again, be banned again, try something else, get banned AGAIN again, and now try the stupid Pocket Hearts RP thing again. Now knock it off and go to the RPGers' training school in the cafe section of the RPG boards. There you might learn how to at least spell.

A single good aspect: At least his sig isn't breaking any rules...

RaZoR LeAf
22nd November 2005, 1:03 PM
What idiot bumped this topic up after 2 months?