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The Mega Champion
29th October 2005, 4:59 AM
Ever wanted to know what would happen if Ash and his friends got weapons? And something began to happen where they'd have to use force instead of pokemon? Well, this is your chance! That's what this fic is. This fic deals with weapons in Final Fantasy games that only I've played and I'm not describing them. Just deal. I like writing this because it gives Ash and his friends more of a "mess with me and I'll kick your ***" feeling to it. Sounds fun, right? Read it, or not, it's your choice.
The title is "The Legendary Pokemon Organization". If you have played KH, KH: CoM, and have read up on KH2, you'll know what the "Organization" is. Anyway, here's chapter 1!

Chapter 1: Back to normal... or not...
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Ash and his friends have had some crazy adventures with their pokemon in the past. But, some things can not be resolved with pokemon. One day, they had some weapons custom made for them. They chose them from their favorite Final Fantasy games, such as Final Fantasy 7, 8, and 10. Ash chose a LionHeart gunblade, Misty received a Strange Vision nunchaku, Brock chose an Exetor gun for himself, Lance received a Spirit Lance, and Delia Ketchum received a Save the Queen whip.

Munsey, their new friend, already had a weapon. It was an extra one his dad had given him. They didn't know much about Munsey because he was a loner. He wore a black long-sleeved T-Shirt on with a dark blue vest over it. On the back of the vest was two huge golden letters, which were "MC", which stood for Mega Champion. He was called this because he's beaten the elite four thrice (three times), plus all of the gym leaders. Plus, he had all 386 pokemon. Who were all at unthinkable levels, at least over 1,000. He was an exceptional pokemon trainer.

He also wore blue jeans with dark blue Nike shoes. He had a skinny build, but that didn't matter, he was still widely respected. He has dark brown hair, blue eyes, and contacts instead of glasses. He also had the huge sword known as "Ultima Weapon"(from FF7).

Ash and his friends met Munsey almost as soon as Ash started his journey. Munsey sometimes followed Ash and the others, and sometimes he didn't, but over the years, he's gotten friendlier with Ash and the others and seems to be getting out of being a loner.

Something was a little strange as well. For some reason, Ash and the others can summon their weapons whenever they feel like it. They knew it was strange, but they didn't care and just thought it would be a good thing. Ash and his friends have decided to take a vacation in Fuchsia City before Ash goes out to the region of Diamond and Pearl.

"Okay... is everyone ready?" asked Ash. Everyone quickly checked, and his mom answered him. "Seems like it..." said Delia. "Then lets go!" said Misty, excitedly. Munsey sent out his Charizard and they flew to Fuchsia City. They automatically headed to the beach to set up their stuff. But, unknown to Ash or any of his friends, they were being watched. But... by who? And why? Plus, will anyone find out about it? Well... let's hope so...

PS: Um... is it freaky? I guess it would be to anyone. As most of you can tell, Munsey's an original character. I thought a new character would add some originality to it. But... don't worry... most of this fic is battling, but there are a couple of chapters where Ash and his friends just get info of why the legendary pokemon formed the "Legendary Pokemon Organization" just thought I'd give you the heads up. If you didn't like it, then you don't have to read the coming chapters! I'm still going for it and there's not a damn thing ANYONE can do about it. That includes you too, Draconic Mage. Updates soon!

The Mega Champion
29th October 2005, 5:02 AM
Note: Just because I'm updating already, doesn't mean I'll be updating frequently. This is... a special occasion...

Chapter 2: Who's spying on us!
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If you recall, Ash and his friends were having a great time at the beach. But, they had no idea that they were being watched. It wouldn't take to long before they would figure it out.
Ash, Misty annd Brock were having fun in the water, while everyone else was just kind of relaxing. Although, Delia and Lance were watching Ash, Misty, and Brock to make sure they were alright and safe. Then, of course, there was that "thing" in hiding, who was spying on them. But, for now, they didn't notice it.

"They certainly look like they're having fun..." said Delia, happily "Whatever works for them..." said Munsey. "Well... this is probably their only chance to have some fun before going out to the next newest region, so let's just keep an eye on them to make sure nothing bad happens" said Lance. About fifteen minutes later, Ash, Misty, and Brock came out of the water and lyied down on the beach to dry off. Plus, the "thing" was getting closer to Ash and the others.

Munsey went to be with the others, but stopped. He somehow "sensed" that something was behind him. He quickly turned around to look, nothing was there. Because the "thing" quickly hid behind a wall. Munsey went to the others and sat with them, but at the same time, tried to see out of the corner of his eyes if something was watching them. About fifteen more minutes would pass, and Ash, Misty, and Brock were dry. So they took of their swimsuits and put their original clothes back on in the nearest dressing room, and came back. Now they just lyied down on the beach and relaxed.

Fifteen minutes later, Misty thought she heard something behind her, so she quickly jumped up, summoned her Strange Vision, and turned around, to see nothing. But it cause some concern among Ash and the others if something was watching them.

"What's wrong!" asked Ash as he ran up to Misyt. Misty put away her nunchaku and said "Nothing, I just thought I heard something, that's all." "Okay, Misty, as long as your all right..." said Ash in a concerned voice. "I'm fine" said Misty. Everyone rushed to see what happened, and Ash explained to them what Misty told him. Munsey came last, and said "Your concerns are true. I thought I sensed something behind me about a half an hour ago or so. I think someone or something is spying on us." "Okay... but why?" asked Ash "I have no idea. Let's just be on guard..." said Munsey "Right" said everyone else, simultaneously. They now were going to try to trap whatever was watching them, and they would.

Everyone separated, with no one anywhere near someone else. The "thing" then would make it's first, and last, mistake. It tried to kidnap Delia Ketchum, Delia sensed it, and whacked it good with her Save the Queen. Everyone heard the whip, and rushed to Delia. They finally saw who was spying on them, it was the legendary pokemon, Deoxys. Something was strange, though. It had the number "21" on his forehead. Deoxys knew he was caught, so he made a break for it and started flying away from Ash and the others, but, when Deoxys looked behind him... Ash and the others were chasing after him! Deoxys now started to fly faster. Would Ash and the other catch Deoxys and get why he tried to kidnap Delia, and why he was spying on them? Hmm... who knows...

PS: Still is a little freaky, but, it'll start to get better in the next chapter. I hope...

The Mega Champion
10th November 2005, 2:36 AM
Note: Well... sorry about the delay. I got mixed up in a whole bunch of things last Sunday, so I couldn't write this. But, finally, here's the next chapter!! A somewhat long one, as well.


Chapter 3: Separated!!!
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Ash, Misty, Brock, Lance, Munsey, and Delia continued to chase after Deoxys. They were going through small towns and cities and even going through Saffron City, where everyone was staring at them as they chased Deoxys. They didn't care, though, so Ash and the others just continued to chase after Deoxys. It seemed as thought that they couldn't catch him, though.

Everytime Deoxys looked behind him, he saw Ash and the others five feet behind him, which just made Deoxys more scared, yes scared, and fly faster. Ash and the others got annoyed when this happened, because they had to run faster as well, just to keep up with Deoxys, and they knew that eventually they would get tired and lose Deoxys, which they couldn't afford to do. So, they had to come up with a plan to get Deoxys on the ground.

It would be hard to talk and make a plan while running, but Ash and the others didn't have a choice. If they stopped, they would lose Deoxys, so, they continued to run and talked to each other, to figure out a way to get Deoxys on the ground.

"So... any bright ideas to get Deoxys on the ground?" asked Ash. Everyone started to thing of something. Five minutes late, Munsey was the first to speak. "I think I might have something" said Munsey "Go ahead, what is it?" ask Ash "How about I send out one of my flying types? It can easily keep up with Deoxys" said Munsey "That would solve our running problem..." started Ash "But if we rode whatever flying type you have in mind... we would just weigh it down and we'd be back to where we started." "True..." started Munsey "But I wasn't finished." "Oh, sorry, please continue Munsey" said Ash "Right..." started Munsey "Once the pokemon catches up to Deoxys, I have it attack, you should know the rest" Ash did, too. Ash knew if one of Munsey's pokemon attacked Deoxys, Deoxys would easily get knocked onto the ground, and then they interrogation could begin. "Do it" said Ash. Munsey just nodded.

Munsey thought of a pokemon and the ball of which it was in appeared, another one of Munsey's mysterious powers. "Go, Skarmory!" yelled Munsey, he then told it what to do "Take down that stupid Deoxys with a Steel Wing!!" Deoxys quickly fell, Munsey recalled Skarmory, Ash pulled out his LionHeart, and jumped on Deoxys. Ash had the sharp side of the LionHeart only centimeters about Deoxys's throat. Ash was now going to ask question, but he was ****** off, so he asked them angrily.

"Why were you spying on us Deoxys?!" asked Ash. Deoxys knew he had to answer, and answer truthfully, or he'd be dead. "I was told to" said Deoxys, calmly "By who?!" asked Ash "By Ho-Oh" Everyone just stood there, they were shocked. Ash even accidentally raised his gunblade some, but then shook it off, got angry again, and put his gunblade only centimeters about Deoxys's throat. Ash continued the interrogation. "What's that number on your head?! Are you being controlled?!" asked Ash, then Deoxys answered somewhat angrily "No!!! Of course not!!! Even you should know legendary pokemon couldn’t be controlled. Anyway it was put on by Mewtwo, but it's not a mind control." "What's that number mean?!" asked Ash "My number in the group" said Deoxys "What group?!" asked Ash "That... I can't tell you" said Deoxys. Ash got angrier, he looked back at the others, Munsey then said "If he won't talk, others will, don't worry" "Right" said Ash. Ash turned back to Deoxys "Last question!" started Ash "Why'd you try to kidnap my mom?!!" Ash finished REALLY angrily. Deoxys closed his eyes, smirked, then said "I was told if I had the slightest chance to kidnap any of you, to do it. I was just closer to Delia, so I tried to kidnap her, obviously I failed." "Duh" said Delia. Then, Deoxys did the unexpected. He blew them all away with an invisible psychic barrier blast. Ash and the others flew in separate directions, they were being separated!!! Deoxys smiled an evil smile, then said "But I succeeded in separating the Pokemon group." Deoxys then teleported back to the "groups" hideout. What is this "group"? Will Ash and the others find out who they are? Where will Ash and the other land? Will they ever be back together as one group again? All we can do is hope that they will find out what this "group" is and that they will find each other and be together as a group again.

PS: Meh. I don't know what I'm trying to do in the endings... o_O;; But, the battles start up next chapter!! Or... at least I think they do...

Klaus
11th November 2005, 4:06 AM
Ash and his friends have had some crazy adventures with their pokemon in the past. But, some things can not be resolved with pokemon. One day, they had some weapons custom made for them. They chose them from their favorite Final Fantasy games, such as Final Fantasy 7, 8, and 10. Ash chose a LionHeart gunblade, Misty received a Strange Vision nunchaku, Brock chose an Exetor gun for himself, Lance received a Spirit Lance, and Delia Ketchum received a Save the Queen whip.

Sorry, I've never played Final Fantasy so I belive it be a good idea to describe those. I know what they all look like, but don't you think it wise to add just a wee bit more decription. YAY! DELIA WITH A WHIP!* gears turn* lol.


Munsey, their new friend, already had a weapon. It was an extra one his dad had given him. They didn't know much about Munsey because he was a loner. He wore a black long-sleeved T-Shirt on with a dark blue vest over it. On the back of the vest was two huge golden letters, which were "MC", which stood for Mega Champion. He was called this because he's beaten the elite four thrice (three times), plus all of the gym leaders. Plus, he had all 386 pokemon. Who were all at unthinkable levels, at least over 1,000. He was an exceptional pokemon trainer.


Sorry, that's wrong. First if they were at levels over 1,000 then a trainer couln't control them. And, catching all 386 is a game plot because if this were a true story, noone could capture groudon of kyoger. ANd if he got all 386 then what about Deoxys.


As most of you can tell, Munsey's an original character.

No, sorry, he's a Gary Stu. Like I said before, having that many pokemon at those levels he isn't original.


Closing comments, I read all three chapters.

First: These aren't long enough to be called chapters, more like paragraphs in reality.

Decription: Not much, could be better.

Grammer: WOW, actually pretty good. ^_^

1/5

It's okay, just work on it just a bit more. I liked it.

As always, be kind to the mime.

The Mega Champion
11th November 2005, 11:06 PM
Sorry, I've never played Final Fantasy so I belive it be a good idea to describe those. I know what they all look like, but don't you think it wise to add just a wee bit more decription. YAY! DELIA WITH A WHIP!* gears turn* lol.

Well... it's a little late for that. They're just weapons. I like to see you come up with better weapons for the pokemon anime characters to have besides FF weapons. Can't do it can you? Didn't think so...


Sorry, that's wrong. First if they were at levels over 1,000 then a trainer couln't control them. And, catching all 386 is a game plot because if this were a true story, noone could capture groudon of kyoger. ANd if he got all 386 then what about Deoxys.

This is FANFICTION not metagame. I can do what I want with it, how I want with it, and do whatever I want to it. Obviously, you can catch Groudon and Kyogre just not send them both out at the same time, duh. Fine then he has all 387 pokemon. Happy?


No, sorry, he's a Gary Stu. Like I said before, having that many pokemon at those levels he isn't original.

No he's not, fool. Gary's a *******. He has all those pokemon because he *gasps* caught them all!!!!! Geez.... just let me do to this fic whatever the hell I want to!!! And like I said, this is FANFICTION not metagame. Go back to netbattle where you belong.

Burnt Flower
12th November 2005, 12:18 AM
Your arrogance frankly disgusts me.

If you continue treating your reviewers with that same abhorrent treatment, you'll soon find your fic a dry, heartless lump that no one will care about.

And you really don't know the real term for Gary-Stu so STFU if you don't know what the hell you're talking about. Gary-Stu is a term for a character that is too utterly perfect that it sickens readers. Which *gasps* Munsey is! :O

Just look at his first appearance for proof:


He was called this because he's beaten the elite four thrice (three times), plus all of the gym leaders. Plus, he had all 386 pokemon. Who were all at unthinkable levels, at least over 1,000. He was an exceptional pokemon trainer

A character needs realistic, unmanipulative flaws. Also a bad-*** loner is definitely a cliche.


Ash and his friends have had some crazy adventures with their pokemon in the past. But, some things can not be resolved with pokemon. One day, they had some weapons custom made for them.

So, they give up all their goals and dreams, as well as their Pokemon friends...for weapons for Final Fantasy? The story is seriously flawed.


Well... it's a little late for that. They're just weapons. I like to see you come up with better weapons for the pokemon anime characters to have besides FF weapons. Can't do it can you? Didn't think so...

No, it's not too late; there's a nice little Edit button for a reason, genius. Oh and your over-inflated ego makes me laugh.

Reread your two chapters since there were some grammar and spelling errors that could've been easily spotted and fixed. You know, like how you misspelled Misty's name for 'Misyt'. Also, start a new paragraph each time a new character starts talking.

Two things you need to read are the 'Fanfiction Rules' as well as the 'Advice for Aspiring Authors' thread.

Oh, and start accepting criticism NOW.

It'll soon become your best friend.

Dragonfree
12th November 2005, 12:24 AM
A Gary Stu is the male version of a Mary Sue, and a Mary Sue/Gary Stu is generally a character who is unnaturally perfect. Which DOES apply to any character who just "happens" to have caught all the Pokémon.


Munsey, their new friend, already had a weapon. It was an extra one his dad had given him. They didn't know much about Munsey because he was a loner. He wore a black long-sleeved T-Shirt on with a dark blue vest over it. On the back of the vest was two huge golden letters, which were "MC", which stood for Mega Champion. He was called this because he's beaten the elite four thrice (three times), plus all of the gym leaders. Plus, he had all 386 pokemon. Who were all at unthinkable levels, at least over 1,000. He was an exceptional pokemon trainer.

He also wore blue jeans with dark blue Nike shoes. He had a skinny build, but that didn't matter, he was still widely respected. He has dark brown hair, blue eyes, and contacts instead of glasses. He also had the huge sword known as "Ultima Weapon"(from FF7).
Those two paragraphs just reek of Stuness. He's a friend of the animé characters, he gets his weapon before the others because his dad gave it to him, he's all mysterious, he's described more than all the other characters put together (actually, from my quick skim, the overdescription of him is pretty much all the description in the whole thing), he's a "Mega Champion", he's beaten the Elite Four multiple times, he's beaten all the Gym leaders, he's somehow caught all the Pokémon, his Pokémon are somehow "level 1000", he's referred to as an "exceptional Pokémon trainer" by an otherwise seemingly unbiased narrator, he is "widely respected", and has something called an "Ultima Weapon", which, although I myself do not know a lot about Final Fantasy, sounds like something 00ber-powerful, and worst of all, there is no apparent reason for any of it - it seems like it's just in there to make him look cool.

Additionally, the chapters were too short, Klaus was right in that you have to describe the Final Fantasy weapons (he never claimed he could make "better weapons" for the Pokémon characters, anyway), the plot doesn't seem to make much sense (why the heck did they suddenly get Final Fantasy weapons made for them?) and if you just want to be able to do whatever you want with your fic without anybody criticizing it, you frankly shouldn't be posting it.

The Mega Champion
18th November 2005, 3:25 AM
Note: This chapters a long one. Probably a good thing. Anyway, pretty good battle, IMO, in this chapter. Enjoy.



Chapter 4: First Battle! Latias and Latios!!
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Last time, Ash and the other got some answers from Deoxys. But, then, only more questions arose. What is this "group" Deoxys talked about? Why were they formed? For what purpose? Hopefully we'll find out soon. But obviously, not now, because thanks to Deoxys, Ash and the rest of his friends were all separated from each other, due to a Psychic invisible blast by Deoxys. So, for now, all the group could do, was try to find where everyone else was.

Ash was about to land hard on the concrete ground below him. Luckily, Ash still had his pokemon with him. So, he brought out his Swellow, and his Swellow grabbed him with his beak. He didn't have Ash for long, because Ash was to heavy for Swellow. So he let go, but it didn't matter, because Ash easily landed on his feet. Ash quickly said to Swellow "Sorry about that, but I didn't want to get badly injured. I can't afford that" Swellow nodded, then Ash said "Thanks, Swellow, take a rest" Ash then returned Swellow to his ball. Ash now had time to look around, and see where he was. It was definitely familiar to Ash. This... wouldn't be a good thing...

"You've got to be kidding me..." Ash started to say softly, so no one could hear him, to himself. Ash continued "It's Alto Mare, home to my old friends, Latias and Latios." Ash thought to himself quickly, then shrugged. "Actually, this figures. Deoxys blasting us and making sure we land in a home to one or more legendary pokemon. He's good... definitely good." Then, unexpectedly, even though Ash wasn't surprised, Latias and Latios showed up.

"Well... it's been awhile hasn't it? Latias and Latios?" said Ash. At first, neither Latias nor Latios said anything. Latias was behind Ash and Latios was in front of Ash. He closely examined both of them. He then noticed that Latias had the number "16" on her forehead, while Latios had the number "17" on his forehead. Ash closed his eyes, smirked, then said "I'm not surprised your part of that group." Latias then went wide-eyed and was shocked, Latios got angry. "How do you know about that?" asked Latios "Easy..." started Ash "Deoxys was spying on us and tried to kidnap my mom. He failed, we chased him down, and got some answers from him." "Figures..." said Latios, Ash then looked seriously at Latios and said "I'm surprised your alive Latios, after what happened" Latias then finally talked, but she had a sad tone in her voice "He was reborn. Alto Mare can't have one guardian, so, he came back. Technically, it's a different Latios, but he's exactly like the other Latios, so I'm happy." Ash turned his head and glanced at Latias for a second, then turned back to Latios. Ash the got completely serious, then asked Latios "I guess that means your already know that Deoxys blasted me here?" Latios just nodded "Yes" "So... I know to much..." Ash said. Neither Latias nor Latios said anything. "You know... two against one isn't that fair..." said Ash "That's your problem" said Latios, Latias just floated there, without one word to say ".........." "But... that doesn't mean you'll win!!!" said Ash, angrily. Ash summoned his gunblade. Latias and Latios seemed shocked. "The truth is..." started Ash "We didn't get these weapons made because we wanted them, we got them made because we all had a strange feeling we'd need them."

Ash then slashed Latios all of a sudden, and pulled the trigger, a small explosion occurred, but it easily sent Latios flying into one of the buildings. Ash quickly turned around, and started to try to combo Latias, but Latias started to dodge. Ash "sensed" something, and jumped upward. Good call. Latios flew right into Latias. Ash landed, and started a successful gunblade combo on Latios pulling the trigger everytime he slashed Latios. He spinned around once, and slashed Latios hardly horizontally, also pulling the trigger, Latios then flew right into Latias, AGAIN. They continued to fly into another building. Latias and Latios got up, and finally were angry. Ash just did the "Just Bring it!" gesture to them. They would now actually try to hurt Ash.

They quickly flew towards him and tried to do claw swipe combos, but Ash just easily started to block them in every which way, with his gunblade. Ash was only slightly being forced backward, but only because of the force of the combos Latias and Latios were trying to do to him. Ash jumped into the air and trigger slashed both Latias and Latios. They both hit the ground HARD. Latios jumped up and flew behind Ash. Ash quickly turned and tried to slash Latios, but Latios distanced himself from Ash. Ash looked for Latias, she distanced herself for Ash, as well. Then, Latias shot a Mist Ball, while Latios shot a Luster Purge. Both attacks were heading straight for Ash!!! Ash just rolled his eyes and jumped into the air. The attacks collided with each other, and exploded, creating a smokescreen. Ash started falling, but aimed himself at Latias. Latias couldn't see him. Ash came down hard as he vertically trigger slashed Latias. Latias screamed, and fell on the ground. Unconscious, not dead. Latios went straight for Ash, as fast as he could. Ash just quickly turned around, and trigger slashed Latios horizontally. Latios screamed, and fell to the ground. Once again, not dead, just unconscious. Ash then said "Next time, don't underestimate me." Ash went to the port, got his Kingler from Professor Oak, sent it out, and said to Kingler "Just get me out of here. I don't need to be in Alto Mare now that I just badly injured it's guardians. Kingler just nodded and headed north for anywhere but Alto Mare.

PS: Whoa... that's not good... What else is going to happen?! You'll see...

DKzM0mA
18th November 2005, 3:40 AM
This is crazy. Sure its your fanfic but, it will never be a good fanfic. The chapters are too short, isn't deoxys is part of the 386 pokemon, and catching all the pokemon is just ridiculous. This fic has Gary-Stu all over it. Try accepting peoples' comments. Most aren't insulting you.

Eternal Daydreamer
18th November 2005, 5:37 AM
I agree with the others. This reeks of Stueness. If it was a sequel... Maybe you get away with this. Maybe. But the first one? Nope. Not gonna happen. I know I'm not the best out there but I know how to make a character believable.

For example, look at my characters: Kylee, Katrina, and Mason in "Not So Sensational". Sure I didn't describe Katrina yet, but that wasn't important yet. And Kylee, the Anime characters I put her with hated her ignorance and pride. Mason, well he's a messy guy and belivable. These characters aren't Mary Sues, or in Mason's case a Gary Stue. They aren't perfect nor will they ever be.

My suggestion is try to rework the whole story. If someone told me that something was wrong, I would fix it. Perhaps, you should try, too.

This isn't a flame. Nor do I think that I'm better than you. I'm trying to help you before people start totally flaming you. And you flaming Klaus was just wrong. Klaus in fact is quite a gentle criticzer. Take Clammyshazam! on the other hand would of flamed it outright. I am not lying.

There will be less "kind" reviewers if you don't change your story. I'm trying to help you, not hurt you. And unfourtantly DKzM0mA is right. This isn't any good.

The Mega Champion
25th November 2005, 11:44 PM
Note: The battle probably won't be well done. Plus, it probably won't make much sense. It may seem to easy, especially with the legendary pokemon that the character fights. It probably should have been longer and harder, but there really wasn't any other way, so it works for me.


Chapter 5: Can Mew be beaten?
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Ash just defeated numbers 16 and 17, Latias and Latios. He knew he couldn't stay in Alto Mare, or the whole city would be after him for severely injuring their guardians, so Ash got, then sent out, his Kingler and rode on him. He told Kingler to go anywhere but Alto Mare. Hopefully, Ash will find some land in the Johto region, and can continue from there.

Misty was about to land hard on the ground of a large open field, but luckily she had her pokemon as well. She sent out her Gyarados, and it caught her on it's large snake-like body. Misty jumped off Gyarados and said "Thanks Gyarados." Gyarados nodded, and Misty recalled it back into it's ball. "Now... where am I..." Misty said somewhat aloud, but it didn't matter, because no one was around to hear her. Misty looked every which way, and it was empty space of field. "An empty field?" Misty asked to herself. She then recalled Ash telling her of an empty field in his many serious legendary pokemon adventures. Misty got a serious look on her face and thought to herself "It can't be that field, can it?" Misty's question would be answered.

All of a sudden, Mew showed up. Misty came out of thought and noticed Mew, she then kinda jumped. "Whoa! Don't scare me like that Mew!" said Misty, Mew didn't respond. Misty took a look at Mew, and notice that she had the number "4" on her forehead. Misty then got serious. She recalled the order of the legendary pokemon pokedex-wise and asked Mew "If it goes in order dex-wise, shouldn't you be after Mewtwo? Not before?" Mew finally responded, she had a somewhat sad tone in her voice. "True, I should, but, as you should remember, Mewtwo was made from me, so he said I should come before him , and I agreed." Misty closed her eyes, smirked, the said "So Deoxys has already informed you we know about the group? Figures." Mew just nodded "Yes" "I know to much?" asked Misty, Mew just nodded "Yes" again. Misty then said sarcastically "Then erase my memory" Mew then got serious and said "We should, but we can't. Somehow, you and your friends are immune to it, which is one of the reasons we need to study one of you." Misty got madder, then said "Let's see... there was the time we saved Mewtwo, and then that Rukario incident. We've been through a lot. But... I won't go down easily!!!" Misty then took out her Strange Vision nunchaku. Mew got more serious. Misty got defensive with the nunchaku and put it out in front of her, horizontally. "Let's go!!!" yelled Misty, Mew said nothing.

Mew tried to teleport behind Misty, but Misty expected it, and quickly turned around and whacked Mew horizontally, and Mew went flying. Misty knew she couldn't let Mew recover, so she went after Mew. Misty tried to start a combo on Mew, but Mew just started to easily dodge. Misty jumped backwards and dodged a psychic blast that would of sent her flying. Mew then flew into the air and started throwing psychic balls at Misty. Misty started running in a counter-clockwise circle. She was dodging them, so it worked. Then, Misty tried something.

Mew threw another psychic ball at Misty, but Misty stopped running. Misty hit the psychic ball, and it went back at Mew! Mew didn't expect that, so the psychic ball hit Mew and Mew fell towards the ground. Misty ran towards Mew and started a successful long combo! Misty just wailed on Mew time after time, hit after hit. Misty ended it by hitting Mew upwards, jumping into the air , and hitting Mew downwards. Mew hit the ground hard, and was worn out! It was almost over, but, Mew put that stupid pink barrier around herself. "Oh you've got to be kidding me!" thought Misty. Mew couldn't attack, but neither could Misty, because it wouldn't do any damage. This wasn't good, it seemed as though Mew couldn't be beaten!

Misty then tried something else. She quickly sent out her Gyarados again and had it use a full-powered Hyper Beam! Mew didn't expect that either, so it hit Mew's barrier hard. Misty quickly recalled Gyarados and ran towards Mew. She sent Mew upward, jumped into the air, and did a hard combo on Mew! Misty then put one of the ends of her nunchaku on Mew's stomach, and was starting to fall towards the ground! Mew hit the ground hard, and Misty's nunchaku hit Mew hard as well. Misty quickly back flipped and landed safely. Misty actually beat Mew! Mew was just unconscious, not dead. Misty quickly ran north and started to look for one of her friends. Can she find someone else? Let's hope so.

PS: Told you. Mew's tougher then that, but I guess Mew was only defeated because Misty surprised her a lot, and outsmarted her. But, like I said, it works for me.

The Mega Champion
6th December 2005, 11:01 PM
Sorry for the bump, basically, but I need to announce something.


ATTN Anyone who's actually reading, and likes this fic:

This fic is being delayed until the completion of my other fic, Final Fantasy: X to 7 (see sig if your interested in it), is completed. If my plan goes according to the plan, the fic should end in 4 weeks. I will continue the fic after that. I apologize for the delay, but I just can't focus on this fic with pressure I already have on me to make the final battle, a good, award-worthy, chapters. Once again, I apologize.

The Mega Champion
5th January 2006, 11:02 PM
You know... this fanfiction will continue, but obviously not here, since I'm about to get my *** banned. Anyway, just thought I should let you guys know that my other fanfiction is completed. So this fic should continue next Saturday, unless I get myself banned, of course.