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YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 1:13 AM
Note: I wrote this and posted it on ff.net. It's not long, this is from a first person point of view. Read and Reply! Also, one more thing. The character isn't me!!!!!!!

The Legend of Emerald

My name is Kira, I'm a 15 year old girl from the town called Silicon Valley. I have blonde hair and have green-bluish eyes. I wear a shirt with a skull on them and blue jeans with a chain for my wallet. This is my story...

I walk down an empty road as the sun starts to set and the night comes into the picture. I walk alone on an empty street near the Zoran Mining Company of Broken Dreams. You must be wondering why I said that? My life is dull. I have no relationship with mostly anybody. My friends are either stupid or they haven’t grown up. My parents, they really don't care about what I do. I try to avoid people that are mean at my school. Nobody really likes me and it gets really angry at me. Why? For no apparent reason. The only thing that’s a friend is my Game Boy Advance. Today, I got my Pokemon Emerald Version from Target and I was reading the strategy guide about the game on the way to my house.

My house was neat, clean and sometimes had a beautiful aroma. I tasted the aroma as I walked to my room. I turned on my Game Boy, turned on the radio and sat down on my beautiful bed. I typed my name on the GB Screen. I stopped and lay on the bed. I started to cry. "I want to go away and never come home again! I rather go somewhere. Somewhere where all the people like me and cherish for who I really am. All of a sudden, thunderstorms struck the town of Silicon Valley. I started to sweat and tremble. Then the Game Boy flashed at me and I blacked out…

One hour later...

I wake up and realize I'm not in California anymore. The place I was in was pitch black. I couldn't see where I was going. I tried looking for a wall or a door. When, I failed, I went to Plan B.

"HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME!"

No answer. Instead, I sat down and drew circles from the floor. I may not be able to see it. But, I knew it was there. Suddenly, a red background appeared and a black dinosaur-like Pokemon appeared in the distance. The blue stripes started glowing.

"Groudon!"

I also saw a couple of people wearing a red hooded sweatshirt and black pants with the letter "M" on them . They disappeared. Next thing I know, a blue basin appeared out of nowhere. It had red stripes on the whole entire body.

"Kyogre!"

Next to Kyogre, I saw people wearing blue bandanas with the letter "A" on it. They wore prison like clothing. Again, I don't know what kind of team organization this is. Suddenly, a Green Dragon appeared with an angry rage. It had yellow stripes all over. It had yellow eyes who stared down at me.

"Rayquaza?"

Then, the final unknown team came up. They were wearing a green suit with the letter "W" on it. They had pilot hats on top of their heads. The last thing I knew, before I blacked out, the whole entre place started to glow whiter than ever...

Cliffhangers… don’t you just love ‘em?

I got Zoran Mining Company from James Bond “A View To A Kill”

Review! Thank you!

whiteabsol
23rd November 2005, 1:31 AM
Okay dude. The first chapter needs to be about one page long in Microsoft Word. Read the rules -_-


I walk down an empty road as the sun sets and the night glows. I walk alone on an empty street near the Zoran Mining Company of Broken Dreams

Techincally, the same thing. You're mentioning the character is walking down the street twice. I think once is enough.

My friends are either stupid or they haven’t grown up. I try to avoid people that are mean at my school. Nobody really likes me and it gets really angry.

First sentance: That's kind of a sucker punch for your friends.

Second sentance: I think frustrating would be a better word instead of angry.


I walk alone on an empty street near the Zoran Mining Company of Broken Dreams; I have no relationship with mostly anybody.

I don't think that semi colin belongs there. And that last part sounds weird.

“I wish life was a lot easier.” All of a sudden, thunderstorms struck the town of Silicon Valley.

That seemed kinda out there. If you descibed the scenery in the beginning other than
I walk down an empty road as the sun sets and the night glows it wouldn't seem that way. You might also want to get rid of the s in sun sets and change glows to grew. But if you meant glowed, change it .

Aipika
23rd November 2005, 1:32 AM
Erm... Too short. Even for a prolouge. Make it larger. Stretch it out a little. Tell me about who this person is like name and what about the parents? What happened to make everyone hate erm... Whoever this is. You. I. XP
Ki the Aipom: *pokes* I think she got brain overload. Oh well. Nice to be in charge. *evil grin* now to flame to get Aipika kicked out. Mwahahahahahahah-
Whomp!
Must I hit you in every single post I make? So anyway. Yeah.

DKzM0mA
23rd November 2005, 1:41 AM
Okay dude. The first chapter needs to be about one page long in Microsoft Word. Read the rules -_-



Techincally, the same thing. You're mentioning the character is walking down the street twice. I think once is enough.


First sentance: That's kind of a sucker punch for your friends.

Second sentance: I think frustrating would be a better word instead of angry.



I don't think that semi colin belongs there. And that last part sounds weird.


That seemed kinda out there. If you descibed the scenery in the beginning other than it wouldn't seem that way. You might also want to get rid of the s in sun sets and change glows to grew. But if you meant glowed, change it .

Beat to eveything I was going to say-_-.

Way too short, even for a prolouge. You told us nothing about how the charecter(you) look like. You told nothing about why everyone hates him and why he has no relations.

Off topic: Why are you starting another fic when your power ranger one is still open? Why do you make multiple fics and delete the others?

Psychic
23rd November 2005, 2:05 AM
Wow. Talk about crappy. I'll run through the whole thing and tell you wht's wrong.


I walk down an empty road as the sun sets and the night glows.
Terrible first sentence. Horrible grammar, lack of description and the modd is poorly set.
And night does not glow.



I walk alone on an empty street near the Zoran Mining Company of Broken Dreams;
What is this 'Zoran Mining Company'? A factory? A mine? What do they do? Why did you bother mentioning it?
Uh, HELLO, 'Boulevard of Broken Dreams'? Am I the only one who thinks that was a total rip-off of the song by Greenday?



I have no relationship with mostly anybody.
Not only is that terrible grammar, but there was absolutely no point in mentioning that right away. It sounds stupid. And 'mostly anybody' should be replaced with 'almostnobody' or 'just about nobody'.



My friends are either stupid or they haven’t grown up. I try to avoid people that are mean at my school.
It was absolutely useless to mention this, seeing as the fic will obviously have nothing to do with the 'real world'.



Nobody really likes me and it gets really angry.
Wow. Worst grammar I've seen all day. I mean, 'it gets real angry'? LMAO, any other word would have been better, seeing as 'angry' isn't a word you use to describe the annoyance you feel.



The only thing that’s a friend is my Game Boy Advance.
Try 'My only friend is my Game Boy Advance.' Geez.



My house was neat, clean and sometimes had a beautiful aroma.
Just how could a smell be 'beautiful', pray tell? WHAT was the smell-describe it more. 'Beautiful' tells us nothing.



I tasted the aroma as I walked to my room.
Not only should that be two different sentences, ut you can't TASTE an aroma. -_-



I turned on my Game Boy, turned on the radio and sat down on my beautiful bed.
A bed? Beautiful? How? Explain. What did you turn your radio to? What does your entire room look like?



I typed my name on the GB Screen.
How? Game Boys don't have keyboards. And why? Did it ASK you for your name, at least?



I stopped and lay on the bed. “I wish life was a lot easier.”
Since when was life actually HARD? He's a kid with no friends. Boo hoo. His life isn't as trajic as that of Virginia Woolf of something.
And why does he say this NOW as he's playing his Game Boy, of all times?



All of a sudden, thunderstorms struck the town of Silicon Valley.
Wrong. A thunderBOLT strikes, a thunderSTORM starts. And what is Silicon Valley?



I started to sweat and tremble.
Why?



Then the Game Boy flashed at me and I blacked out…
It flashed AT you? Ewwwwww.
Ok, there's a flash of light from the Game Boy and you faint. Not only is that unoriginal, but it makes noense.



The last thing I saw was a green dragon.
Oh, gimme a break. Where's the description? Where is the dragon? What does it look like, aside from being green?



Ok, let''s see:

Description: absolutely none. We have no clue what anyone of anything looks like. Always describe everything in a story. Tat way we can imagine it better in our heads.
We should, during the first chapter, know what the main character looks like. We don't even know his hair color! I mean, what, is he naked and eye-less?

Grammar: terrible. I swear, even though you may have used MS Word, your sentences were still poorly structured.

Length: waaay too short. This should have been much longer. Had you included description and character deveopment and actually put more effort into writing this it might be of an almost proper length. Either way, I'm glad it was so short-less yerribly-written junk for me to review.

Characters: a total emo. Ok, so his friends are freaks. So what? Doesn't make his life some kind of Hellhole. He overdramatises, yet he has no personality.

Plot: Oh, look, another terribly-written story in which someone from the real world enteres the Pokémon world via a video game. How very unoriginal.


Your writing is too blunt and straightforward and everything happens too fast. Little thought and effort was put into this, if any. All you really did was type up whatever came to mind in ten minutes and posted it.


And DKz, people can have more than one fic at a time. -_-

~Psychic

DKzM0mA
23rd November 2005, 2:41 AM
And DKz, people can have more than one fic at a time. -_-

But he gives up on one everytime it seems unpopular and then starts a new one. I mut've seen 7 different fics from this guy all disappearing in the end, cause they weren't popular.

YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 3:04 AM
Rating: M (R)

Sexuality: Some
Violence: Maybe
Profanity: Why do you think it is a Rated R fic? Of course, there will be language in it!



I wake up to a beautiful scent. Not like a breakfast scent, but a scent that could lure you away from your house. It smelled like pink roses and blue violet flowers. I got up from my bed and walked toward the closet. I was thinking of heading towards the mall and shop for clothes and hang out by the food court like normal teenagers do. As soon as I opened the door, I see green and blue and yellow clothing with many shorts and many colors.

‘Okay, first I don’t have these kinds of clothes. I wear clothes that say like “I’m The ***** and that’s Miss ***** to you” and other clothing that says these names on it’ I thought.

Then, my door started to creak. I turned around and some woman came into my room with breakfast. Even though, I could smell the roses more than I can smell what’s on my plate.

“Hello, Kira,” she said.

“Hi,” I said.

“You know you have to go to Professor Birch’s today,” the woman said in response.

‘First off, I never played Pokemon before, who the heck is Professor Birch? This woman has to have a reality check or she must be sent to a Funny Farm’ I thought.

“Oh, Professor Birch, okay, thanks,” I said. She closed the bedroom while I sat down and ate my pancakes, eggs and bacon. “This is better here, than it is at home.”

I stopped eating and looked outside my bedroom window. I saw 4 houses in this design and I see a big gigantic building that says “Professor Birch’s Pokemon Lab”.

“No, I can’t be,” I said. “I’m in Hoenn? AAAAHHHH!” I started to freak out. Hell, I didn’t know what to do. But, I had to remain calm and shut up for once in my life.

“Okay, Kira. Remain calm, be normal and do what other trainers do. Get your Pokemon and start off on the right foot,”

I quickly finished my breakfast, cleaned the dishes and changed my clothes. What I wore was either weird or awkward. I wore green hat, a yellow sleeveless shirt, blue short shorts, white shoes and a big green backpack around my waist. I walked out of my house and into Professor Birch’s lab. Professor Birch’s lab was really big and interesting out of the ordinary. He had a massive chimney, a big green wood gecko Pokemon painted on the top of his rooftop and a nice little garden. I went towards the front door, but there was a sign that said:

Professor Birch is not here. Please try again later.

‘Damn’ I said. I was all up tight, until I heard a masculine voice.

“Hey, you must be looking for Birch, right?”

I turned around and I noticed a big strong teenager. He looked older than me, had black hair wore blue jeans, blue vest and a striped shirt. His left ear was pierced, next thing I know; my heart starts pumping like crazy. My eyes got the best guy I ever met. His brown, sexy eyes went straight into my greenish- blue eyes. I started to sigh in relief. Then he snapped his fingers in my face.

“Excuse me, you looking for Birch?”


“Yeah, do you know where he is at all?”


“I don’t know. I came looking for him too. He may be out there with his son and maybe doing fieldwork among the plains,”

“Oh,” I said. I walked back to the door and accidentally flung the door open. The guy followed me in the lab. We saw lab reports, journals, notebooks and lab machines. What we didn’t notice was that the Poke Balls were all on the table, which I sat on. All of a sudden, all three Pokemon pop out, I don’t know what they are, but I say the Chick Pokemon is kind of cute, the Mud Fish Pokemon, I don’t know, but the Wood Gecko was “ugly”.

“You know we shouldn’t be in here. What if someone finds us?” he said.

“Tell the truth. It’s better than nothing or making a white lie,”

We heard creaking from the front door. There wasn’t away out so this guy and me had to hide before we really get in trouble. The guy hid on one side and I hid on the other side of the lab, we heard the Professor come in with his son. He had white hair, green pants, red shirt and silver shoes.

“Well, Brendan,” Professor Birch said.

“Yes, Professor?” Brendan asked.

“Do you plan to go see Hoenn again?” Birch asked.

“You better believe it, I’ll take the Treecko,”

“Okay,”

I stood there in silence. Brendan chose a Wood Gecko; I thought I was going to puke. Then, I tripped over some book. I hit the floor hard on my face. Then, I found out that our cover was blown.

“Who was that?” Birch asked.

“Yeah? Come on out here!” Brendan asked.

“It’s me!”

Whoever that was, I think it was that guy I met at the lab earlier.

“Hi, Rocky. You’ve grown up!”

“Yup, I have,” and the guys started laughing as I stood up and walked up to the Professor.

“I was also hiding. Hi! I’m Kira and I want to become champion of this league. So, I choose Torchic and that’s that.”

That didn’t come out, as I wanted it to come out. I think I gave Birch some disrespect.

“Okay,” Professor Birch said. The chick jumped up and into my arms. She was the cutest little Pokemon I saw. I guess this is what a Pokemon looks like. Rocky, was really staring at the Torchic, Brendan was actually pretty impressed that I can care for such a cute Pokemon.

“I guess that leaves me with Mudkip,” Rocky said. Rocky got the Mud Fish Pokemon. It sprayed water all over its face. It was funny to watch. It would be even funnier if my Torchic sent him a flame, though it wouldn’t be funny because he could get burned.

“Well, I’ll give you guys these for your journeys, The Pokedex and the Poke Balls,” the Professor said.

The Pokedexes were distributed and 10 Poke Balls were distributed to each trainer, including me. I put the Pokedex in my bag, the Poke Balls including Torchic’s Poke Ball in the bag.

“Good Luck!” Professor Birch said.

“Thank you,” we all said and we took off.

Brendan, Rocky and I stood at where the paths take place. I decided that maybe I should head west and see what’s in store for me. Brendan and Rocky decided to head north to Oldale Town, since they know each other pretty well and know part of the region.

“We are heading to Oldale Town. Why don’t you come with us?”


“Oh, Rocky. I rather head to Petalburg City, besides I think its time I go alone and realize what’s in store for me. Besides, If I have any problem, I got my Torchic and whatever Pokemon I can grab. Okay?”

Brendan and Rocky looked at each other and kind of smiled. “Okay, go ahead,” Brendan, said.

“I’ll see you later,” I said. While, the guys head on Route 101, I took the local road to Route 102. It was a lot faster, but I could see the ocean view from here. I stopped walking and stood there. I looked at the phosphorescent sun setting down on the land of Hoenn and the other continents beyond. I found a town right off the intersection on where Route 102 and also this road lead to Verdanturf. But, I wanted to stop at Petalburg because it’s a lot faster than just going north. When, I continued walking into town. I just opened my eyes. I realized that now that I don’t have to be likeable to get friends; I already got Brendan and Rocky as two of my new friends; My new friends in Hoenn. But, are they going to like me? Well, I guess I’ll find out sooner or later…

Another beautiful cliffhanger… Next Chapter- Team Magma and Aqua decides to rage war with a new team in Petalburg City.

I think I got a little crazy at the end; I also like to rush things with dialogue. (I like to write this stuff with dialogue). I’ll update soon! – YF2

YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 3:41 AM
Kira and her Enemies:

I spent the night at the Pokemon Center in a nearby town next to Route 102 for the night. The Pokemon Center was kind of like a ski resort, but it still had the hospital and the lobby and other amenities. They served ginger chicken and turkey for dinner with mixed vegetables; I gave Torchic Pokemon Food with protein in it. I read in a guide that Protein raises attack power. Torchic ate its food rapidly. It must’ve love the food that I gave him. While my Pokemon were sleeping in its Poke Ball, I slept in a bed, a nice clean bed with blue sheets and red pillows. I couldn’t sleep for 3 hours because I was dreaming about my next adventure. How it would be for the greatest trainer, Kira Destiny, the Hoenn League Champion.

In my dream…

“Everybody, Kira Destiny is now the Hoenn League Champion,” the champion Wallace shouted out. Everybody roared at me as I got my Hall of Fame ribbon. “I thank all of you for your cooperation, without you I would never become champion! Thank you, Hoenn!”

Back to Reality…

I guess life is easier when you look at it. I guess I was brought here to realize that you have to earn things to make life easier. I put the sheets over my head and closed my gray-bluish eyes. The next morning, I woke up and went straight to Burger King for hash browns and a big croissant with ham and cheese. I decided to eat there and head on the road. Thank gosh it was one of those ramps like on the interstate highway, except no cars. I didn’t know where Petalburg City was, so I walked a mile and there was that intersection. Petalburg City heads North and Oldale heads South. So, I followed the signs.

The road was dirty path with forests and lakes in between. I met Pokemon like Poochyena. The little puppy couldn’t keep his paws off me. So, I let him join the group. And I didn't have to battle it! It made Torchic happy because I got a new friend for him. The black hound went into its Poke Ball while I trekked on. All of a sudden, I hear voices:

“Kira, wait up!”

I knew that voice. Rocky. I stopped and found that Rocky and Brendan were running toward me. So, I decided, okay, let them come here and see what they wanted.

“Hey, Rocky,” I said. “How was Oldale Town?”

“You should’ve came,” Rocky said. “They had the best food ever,”

“Oh really,”

“Uh-huh,”

”Are you sure?”

“Oh, yeah,”

“What kind,”

“Everything known to man,”

“You mean an-,”

Rocky cut me off. “ALL YOU CAN EAT BUFFET!”

Brendan sweatdropped and I started to laugh my brains off.

“You know something?” I asked. “I don’t believe you,”

“Go ahead and don't believe me. I don't care,” he said.

I couldn’t stand men or boys who can be so immature and weak. I couldn’t stand them; I even know them and I don’t even trust them. Later that afternoon, I arrived in Petalburg City, there was only one tiny little problem: What exit to walk off? So, I walk 10 miles until I see a sign that finally said:

Downtown Petalburg; Petalburg Gym

I heard from Littleroot Town, that there was a gym leader who is a friend of Professor Birch, I had to walk off Route 102 and find out. When I got to the gym, it was kind of weird looking. The gym was enormous. It looked like a temple with white steps coming down from the doors. I immediately walk inside to the main room, the Battlefield.

“Hello?” I asked. “Is anyone here?”

I heard a voice. “I am,”

He had black hair, black eyes. He was wearing a red shirt and red pants. He had his Poke Balls on his Pokemon Belt.

“I’m Norman. You are interrupting a meeting with all the gym leaders,”

“Gym Leaders?”

The Hoenn League leaders came out from the meeting room. Roxanne, the high-honors student, Brawly: The Next Big Wave, Wattson- the guy of fun, Flannery: Passionate, Winona- the high-flying daredevil, Tate and Liza- the twin duo and Juan- the artists of water.

“I’m sorry. I was wondering if there were gym battles today!” I said. Flannery started to grin.

“It’s okay, where do you come from?”

‘Okay, time to tell them the certified truth’ I thought.

“I come from Earth or the Real World,”

Everybody gasped.

“That’s what we are talking about! Get over here,” Norman said.

In the meeting…

The gym leaders were discussing about Team Magma, Team Aqua and Team Wind. Team Magma wants to expand the landmass. Team Aqua wants to flood the earth and Team Wind wants to expand the sky and take over the planet, which to me is impossible because Wind can be expanded only at a certain rate.

“So, you are trying to tell me that Team Magma, Team Aqua and Team Wind are kidnapping kids from the real world to help them take over? Weird,” I said.

“We know why, we think…” Tate started to say.

“Team Wind wants a girl,” Liza finished.

I started to say something, but Tate read my mind.

“They want a girl to summon Rayquaza?”

My eyes widened. “Excuse me, who the hell is Rayquaza?”

“Rayquaza is a dragon Pokemon, that lives on Sky Pillar. The other Pokemon, Groudon and Kyogre are dormant. We don't know exactly where they are. The locations are as we say unknown,” Juan said. “But, I felt vibrations coming from the Seafloor Cavern, maybe something is happening,”

Winona chimed in. “We better stay alert, people!”

Norman nodded. “That’s right,”

“I got to get back to Rustboro,” Roxanne said. “I’ll see you later.”

“I think you guys are like totally correct,” Brawly said. “Good Luck! We will stay alert if anything happens.”

“Right!” Wattson and Flannery said. They took off without any response.

Outside…

Rocky was heading towards the gym when he heard something from the back of the gym. He tiptoed to the back of the gym where he saw three people wearing yellow with the letter W on their belt buckle were outside the gym spying on Kira and the gym leaders.

“It’s that girl.” The admin said.

“You sure?” The grunt said.

“Yeah, take her and then pump information on anything about the ancient Pokemon, Groudon, Kyogre and Rayquaza,”

“Yes, sir,”

Rocky hid under the bushes.

“Are you trying to pump information?” Rocky said to himself. He clenched his fists. “Ooh. I can’t wait to kill you,”

In the gym…

“Thanks for everything, Norman,” I said.

“Good luck, Kira,” he said. I left the gym and headed straight out of the gym. I went to the forest and beach of Petalburg City when all of a sudden, 6 trainers showed up. Two were wearing yellow, two were wearing red and two were wearing blue.

“Hello, Kira,” the guy in red said.

“Who are you?” she asked. She pointed at the guy wearing the M on his chest.

“I’m from Team Magma, I’m Tabitha, the grunt leader,” he said.

Another guy from Team Magma showed up, “I’m Hank,”

The men wearing a blue bandana with the letter A on it came up towards me. “We are from Team Aqua. I’m Matt, and this is Sean,”

The yellow shirt with feathers and green pants came up behind me. “We are a new team, Team Wind. I’m Jeff and this is Joey,”

“What in god’s name are you doing?” I yelled out. “I’m bringing you to the back seat of the car and then you are going to tell me everything," Joey said.

Team Magma pulled my left arm. “She’s mine,”

Team Aqua pulled my right arm, “Get away from her. I kind of like the kid! I don't trust her. But, I want to know about Kyogre!”

I started to worry, and then I felt a whisper in my ear. It was Tabitha and he kissed my ear.

“How good will it feel if I made out with you?” he asked. I bit his neck hard and he yanked away. The bite was so superficial, there was blood-spitting out from the bite marks

“On a scale from one to ten on my to do list, ten being the best, one,” she said. I try to reach for my Torchic and Poochyena. But, Team Wind grabbed my arm. I wanted to kill him.

“I don’t think so,” Joey said. Then, I heard a loud voice. It sounded familiar.

“MUDKIP! Water Gun!”

The blasts pummeled all three teams and they were furious. I landed on top of the Team Wind admin. I tried to run but he grabbed me. I was so worried and scared. I didn’t know what to do. Rocky decked the admin, as I fell on the floor. I was so scared and terrified. Tabitha came after me.

“You are so going to party with me tonight?”

I turned around. “Think again. Go! Torchic!”

Torchic popped out of its Poke Ball.

“Go! Poochyena!”

The black hound was a lot bigger then my Torchic. But, I had to stop him from trying to rape me, worse than that kill!

”Torchic! Fire Spin!”

A blast of flames from Torchic’s mouth surrounded Poochyena.

“Quick Attack!”

SLASH! Torchic hit Poochyena on the head and the little puppy got burned by the flames.

“Poochyena! Return!” Tabitha said.

The teams ran away back to their operatives. Rocky saw me crying and streaming in tears. I didn’t know what to do, if it wasn’t for him, Hell, I wouldn’t be here. I just sat there streaming in tears. Rocky held me in his arms, I continued crying, he saw what damage they’d done to her.

‘Whatever happens to you, I’ll protect you’ he thought. He held me tighter like a boy hugging his teddy bear. I had a smile on my face as he rubbed my tears away. Next, thing I knew Brendan was standing on the side of me.

“What happened to her?” Brendan asked. Rocky’s brown eyes stared at him. His eyes were steel cold. “You don’t want to know. You ****in’ don’t want to know,”

The next morning, I left Petalburg City. I had to leave what happened in the past, when I mean the past, everything that happened since I came to this world. I hope that life is more in store for me, then what happened there was just the past. I heard a familiar voice, after that.

“Kira, wait!”

Rocky was running up to me. He was putting on his blue and gold gloves.

“Shall we?”

We left for the next city called Rustboro and me and Rocky were pretty content about leaving for the next town together, as we headed through the green pastures, we saw the blue ocean next to us. It was kind of awesome because I never seen it before at this angle. What I mean is, in the video games, you get an aerial view. But, nothing like this. I guess the world of Pokemon can have its differences… In Team Wind, Team Aqua and Team Magma’s vehicles. They all looked at what happened and decided to have only one word to stop her and her friends: WAR!

Next Chapter: Rocky and Kira catch Pokemon, Not just bugs but Roselia and Shroomish. Thank you and review!

YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 3:44 AM
DISCLAIMER: I really don’t own Pokemon. This is a short chapter, okay. In other words, this is a “chapter special”. I forgot to add these ages in, the more characters that appear, the more ages I put up.

Rocky-18

Kira-15

Brendan- 12

Sparks Fly
Walking through the Petalburg Woods, we see Pokemon, which I didn’t want to catch Pokemon like Slakoth and Taillow. The forest was so dark, that you can’t see your face. We had flashlights and we were walking heading north to Rustboro City. The next thing we see is the worst thing on the planet. A Shroomish! Who would want a crazy Shroomish? I certainly don’t like mushrooms. (No offense to the Shroomish over there, but you know what I’m talking about). We were in this marsh for three days! I feel dirty and I never live without showering for about uh… 48 hours. Next thing I know, Rocky catches him or at least tries to. But, I can’t believe he wanted one. EWW!

“Mudkip! Water Gun!”

Mudkip squirted a blast of water at the Shroomish. (To me, it’s mold)

“Go! Poke Ball!”

The Poke Ball opened up and swallowed Shroomish. The ball wiggled a couple of times and it was caught. It started to smell like mold, thank gosh!

“I caught a Shroomish!” Rocky said.

“Wow,” Kira said.

We continued walking toward the edge of the Petalburg Forest when I see a cute little Thorn Pokemon with two big roses.

“A Roselia? It is so cute!”

I threw my Torchic out on to the field.

“Torchic! Ember!”

Torchic spat out flames that burned Roselia’s back.

“Poke Ball! Go!”

The Poke Ball hit Roselia and swooped him down inside. It wiggled twice. Then, the ball stood still.

“Roselia is mine!” I said.

We got out of the Petalburg Forest and saw a lake. Since Rocky was training his Pokemon, I thought about going skinny dipping and relaxing on everything that happened. I removed my green shirt and bra revealing my white breasts. The pink nipples were now erect from the cold breeze. I removed my pants and underwear revealing my ****. I swam to the middle of the lake. Rocky saw me swimming in the middle.

“Now why do you have to have all the fun?” Rocky said. I saw him strip into nothing. His **** was humongous. Never seen anything that big before. He peeled off his blue sleeveless shirt toned Hispanic body. My jaw came down as I saw the man at the lake’s edge. The hard abs and pecs, The round, slightly brown nipples, now erect from the cold breeze, and the slight trail of hairs journeying from his belly button down below his erect ****. I started to fall in love with him. I wanted to taste the sweet nectre of Rocky's body. Rocky dove in and followed me to the middle.

“Why did you decide to swim to the lake?”

“I needed to relax,”

I tried to swim toward the edge when Rocky grabbed my arm and pulled me toward him, the next thing I knew Rocky pulled me toward him and kissed me, not just a total peck. A total lip-lock, Rocky kissed my neck and I thought I never would do this. I moaned, I moaned so loud, Rocky kept kissing, this time, more feverously. We kept making out, when we heard that voice.

“ROCKY!”

We broke the kiss and put on our clothes. We knew it was Brendan Birch looking for us.

“Where did you guys go?”

“We went to the Flower Shop!” I said.

“Is that all?” Brendan said.

“We caught a few Pokemon!” Rocky said.

“Okay, let’s go!” Brendan said.

We walked across the bridge when Brendan stopped and asked us again.

“Did you really?”

----

Next Chapter: Kira battles Roxanne

YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 3:48 AM
After Kira and Rocky’s “naughty” affair, they caught up with Brendan and arrived at Rustboro City. Rustboro City was a really great town full of science and nature. It wasn’t like Petalburg City at all. It was kind of nice for them to “get to know each other” a little bit.

Kira’s POV…

Since I came here, I done something I’ve never done in my life: Making out with a guy I didn’t know. He can be mean, funny and sometimes content with Brendan. But with me, well, you know, he’s hot, stunning, and sexy. Ooh, it makes me shiver from my head to my feet. His scent was… oh, man it was smelt so much like Old Spice body spray at home. We have known each for 10 days and we got to know each other a bit more. I never had a boyfriend at home so I have a boyfriend here. The only thing he doesn’t know is that I have feelings for this guy.

Anyway, we got to the Rustboro Pokemon Center, where we checked in. It was so dark, I decided to take my shower and change into my loveable pink robe. I jumped under the covers until I realized something was on top of my chest, it kept coming closer into my face. The next thing I knew, Rocky was being funny.

“Hey Kira,” he said. He slammed on top of me.

“So, do you want to…” I cut him off when I kicked him in the worst spot on the planet.

“Okay, let’s get this straight, just because I intentionally made out with you, does not mean you are gonna put buns in my oven! Uh-uh! No way, sorry!”

“Okay, can this help?”

Next thing, that happens to me: another lip-lock kiss, he can so brainwash girls into doing things that he would want to do. It makes me lose my self-control. I broke the kiss.

“Are you ****ing kidding me?” I asked. “Good night!”

I remove my bathrobe and pulled the covers over my head. But, Rocky… He can drive me to drink. A cold breeze filled the night air. I couldn’t sleep, something made me think about Rocky and me. How did this happen? Why did we kiss each other? It really got me ******. I lay on my back, looking at Rocky. We were both sleeping naked on the same bed. I heard a hoarse voice:

“Kira… Kira… Are you okay?” Rocky asked.

“Yeah, I’m fine.” I said.

Rocky pulled her closer to him, “Are you sure?”

“Yeah,”

Rocky allowed me to get on top of him, his body was so smooth, I kind of like it. Besides, he’s like a soft pillow, if you get what I mean. I left my bed the next morning and went outside to train with Torchic, Poochyena and Roselia. When he woke up and came downstairs to the back of the center, he was wearing his green shirt, black pants and white sneakers. I laughed because his hair was out of place and it looked like he woke up from a nightmare. Ha, it was hilarious. While, Rocky and Brendan went to have breakfast, I had a battle on the bridge where Rocky and me had our first little lip-lock. I was battling against twins. They were weird twins if you ask me:

“Seedot! Bide!”

“Lotad! Astonish!”

“Roselia dodge astonish! Torchic use Ember to burn Seedot!”

Torchic’s flames burned Seedot to a crisp. Seedot started to get very dizzy, it fainted instantly.

“Roselia! Petal Dance!”

Roselia started to use her awesome petals. It aimed at the Dish Pokemon. Lotad fell backwards into the water.

SPLASH!

“Seedot! Lotad! Return!” the twins said in unison.

I jumped for joy. “We won! Yay! Woo-hoo!”

Then I heard someone clapping. I turned around and I saw a girl who is 15 years older than me, she wore high stockings, a pink skirt and a black uniform like people wear in private schools.

“Wow,” Roxanne said. “How did you ever manage to pull that off?”

“I can, sometimes,” I said. “I have luck and friends that guide me,”

“Oh, really, I usually use my knowledge when it comes to battles, who are you?”

“I’m Kira Destiny.” I said.

“I’m Roxanne. The Rustboro City Gym Leader,”

“Oh, I saw you at the meeting! What is a gym leader? I never asked Norman that question,” I asked.

“A gym leader is a leader of a gym in one of the Pokemon Leagues that specializes in a type of Pokemon. What type do you use?”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“Well, your Torchic is a Fire-Type, Roselia is a Grass-Poison Type and your other Pokemon, Poochyena is a Dark Type.”

“I guess I use different types,”

“I use the Rock Type, I think your Pokemon are ready, come with me and we will do battle,”

“Where?”

“Where else? The Rustboro Gym, duh!” Roxanne said. We walked together to the gym.

“Do you have a cell phone?” I asked.

“Here,” Roxanne said. It was a device, I don’t know what it was called, but it did have Brendan on it, so I called him.

“Hello?” Brendan said on the intercom.

“Hi, Brendan. It’s Kira. Is Rocky with you?”

“Kira, why are using Roxanne’s Pokenav?”

“Because I am,” I said. “Tell Rocky that I will be at the Rustboro Gym in 5 minutes. You guys would want to come that’s swell, I don’t care, just get here.”

“Okay, later!” Brendan said. I closed the Pokenav or whatever Brendan called it and gave it back to Roxanne.

When we got to the gym, the gym looked like a mountaintop. It had a golden stone on top of the doors as I walked inside.

I looked at the nice, quaint rock gym. I noticed that there were benches on either side, a field and trainer boxes. I was actually pretty amazed at the fact that each gym has a specified field for their Pokemon, kind of cool. Anyway, the referee was there that way we can have our gym battle.

“You ready?”

“I’m always ready,” I said.

The referee stated the rules for the match.

“Each trainer can use two Pokemon. The battle is decided when both Pokemon from either side are either fainted or unable to battle. This match is for one Stone Badge. The trainer is allowed to switch, the gym leader is not allowed to substitute. Is that clear? You ready to battle?”

“Yes,” we said to both questions.

“Start!”

“Go, Geodude!” Roxanne said.

The Poke Ball opened up to reveal a rock with two arms. “Geo-dude!”

“Go! Roselia!” I said.

My Poke Ball opened up to reveal my Roselia on the field.

Battle Layout: Gym Match, Round 1

Opponent: Roxanne’s Level 12 Geodude vs.

Challenger: Kira Destiny’s Level 14 Roselia

Situation: 1-on-1 with 2 Pokemon, no time limit.

BATTLE START!

“Geodude! Rock Throw!”

Geodude tackled the wall sending Rocks to tumble on Roselia.

“Roselia, use Magical Leaf to block the Rocks!” I yelled. Roselia started to spin around blocking all the rocks. “Now, use Sunny Day!”

The sun came in through the rooftop and it shone through the gym.

“What are you planning? If you are planning to use Solarbeam, Don’t even try!” Roxanne said.

I took that as a bluff. “Use Solarbeam!” Roselia’s roses started to glow white.

“Use Rock Blast!” Roxanne said.

Geodude shout out 5 rocks at Roselia. Roselia shot out a white beam toward the rocks, The rocks melted due to the Sun’s intensity. The beam pummeled Geodude. Geodude slammed into a wall and fainted.

“Geodude is unable to battle, Roselia is the winner!”

I did a victory dance. But, I knew she had one more Pokemon. I wonder what it is.

“Nosepass, Let’s go!” Roxanne said.

A big Rock, Metallic thing appeared that was way bigger than Roselia.

“NOSE-PASS!”

Round 2

Roxanne’s Level 15 Nosepass vs. Kira’s Level 14 Roselia. No time limit. Battle Begin!

“Kira, not bad, I never expected anybody to stop me, but if you plan to beat me, you better have a good strategy. I trained with this Nosepass ever since I was a little girl. I never let anybody beat me. Nosepass! Rock Tomb!”

Nosepass slammed on the ground.

“Kira!”

Kira turned and saw Rocky sitting on one of the bleachers. “You can stop her!”

Kira looked at Roxanne and looked at the Roselia covered up in rock.

“There are many ways to cut a rock! Use Magical Leaf!”

Roxanne started to laugh. “Like sharp leaves can cut Rock Tomb!”

SLASH!

“Huh?”

Roselia appeared and closed her eyes. She opened her eyes and had an evil grin.

“Roselia! Solarbeam!”

Roselia’s roses started to shoot out a big beam of white light which hit Nosepass.

“Nosepass! Zap Cannon!” she said.

Nosepass started to use an electrical charge. He shot forward an electric ball which paralyzed Roselia!

“Roselia!” I yelled.

Roselia fell to the ground. I recalled it before the referee judged it as unable to battle. I threw Torchic on the field.

“Tor-chic!”

I noticed that Roselia’s damage showed a big opening, an opening small to burn a Rock Pokemon.

“Torchic! Quick Attack!”

Torchic shot toward Nosepass.

“Zap Cannon!” Roxanne said.

Nosepass shot out a ball of electricity.

“Dodge to the side! Then use Ember on that hole!”

Torchic dodged to the right and shot out flames at Nosepass’ opening. Nosepass fell to the ground.

“Nosepass is unable to battle, Torchic’s the winner. The winner of Rustboro Gym is Kira!”

“We did it Torchic!”

“Torch-,”

Torchic started to glow.

“It’s evolving!” Roxanne said.

“Wow,” Rocky said. “Awesome,”

It wasn’t a little bird anymore. It had two arms, two legs. It had claws on each hand, it has a bird beak, that was orange and its eyes were red.

“Com-busken!”

“Wow! Combusken!” I said. “Never heard of it, but I like it!”

“Cool!” Rocky said. “So, Roxanne. Can we have our gym battle later today?”

“Okay, Rocky!” Roxanne said. She turns to me. “Here, Kira, this is for you!”

It was a golden badge with two triangle points on either side.

“A Stone Badge? Thanks!”

“You’re welcome!”

So, Kira won her badge. What will happen next? You’ll find out!

Next Time on Emerald Legends:

Kira meets Mr. Stone, the leader of Devon Corporation

Rocky battles Roxanne for his first badge

Also, Kira rescues a Wingull from a Team Wind Grunt

Joe Vega #4
23rd November 2005, 4:53 PM
Wow. You've made yet another fic where characters from reality zap into games. This is just showing you don't have too much creativity. if one fic fails, don't recycle the plot. Abandon it and think up a new one. Sheesh.

Aipika
23rd November 2005, 9:29 PM
This isn't bad it's a lot better than the last one actually but some points have to be made.
1.Twist the plot more. Why don't someone meet someone mysterious or something. Being a Pokemon League Champion is plain.
2. This isn't really a point but Roselia couldn't be found at Petalburg Forest. They are found near Route 117 besides, Roselia couldn't be found in emerald.

Try harder.

whiteabsol
23rd November 2005, 9:48 PM
I see some improvement. You might still want to try to describe some things a little bit better but it's better than nothing.

YankeeFan2
23rd November 2005, 11:01 PM
Now, let’s CONTINUE…

Kira vs. The Rock-Loving Honors Student
After Kira and Rocky’s “naughty” affair, they caught up with Brendan and arrived at Rustboro City. Rustboro City was a really great town full of science and nature. It wasn’t like Petalburg City at all. It was kind of nice for them to “get to know each other” a little bit.

Kira’s POV…

Since I came here, I done something I’ve never done in my life: Making out with a guy I didn’t know. He can be mean, funny and sometimes content with Brendan. But with me, well, you know, he’s hot, stunning, and sexy. Ooh, it makes me shiver from my head to my feet. His scent was… oh, man it was smelt so much like Old Spice body spray at home. We have known each for 10 days and we got to know each other a bit more. I never had a boyfriend at home so I have a boyfriend here. The only thing he doesn’t know is that I have feelings for this guy.

Anyway, we got to the Rustboro Pokemon Center, where we checked in. It was so dark, I decided to take my shower and change into my loveable pink robe. I jumped under the covers until I realized something was on top of my chest, it kept coming closer into my face. The next thing I knew, Rocky was being funny.

“Hey Kira,” he said. He slammed on top of me.

“So, do you want to…” I cut him off when I kicked him in the worst spot on the planet.

“Okay, let’s get this straight, just because I intentionally made out with you, does not mean you are gonna put buns in my oven! Uh-uh! No way, sorry!”

“Okay, can this help?”

Next thing, that happens to me: another lip-lock kiss, he can so brainwash girls into doing things that he would want to do. It makes me lose my self-control. I broke the kiss.

“Are you ****ing kidding me?” I asked. “Good night!”

I remove my bathrobe and pulled the covers over my head. But, Rocky… He can drive me to drink. A cold breeze filled the night air. I couldn’t sleep, something made me think about Rocky and me. How did this happen? Why did we kiss each other? It really got me ******. I lay on my back, looking at Rocky. We were both sleeping naked on the same bed. I heard a hoarse voice:

“Kira… Kira… Are you okay?” Rocky asked.

“Yeah, I’m fine.” I said.

Rocky pulled her closer to him, “Are you sure?”

“Yeah,”

Rocky allowed me to get on top of him, his body was so smooth, I kind of like it. Besides, he’s like a soft pillow, if you get what I mean. I left my bed the next morning and went outside to train with Torchic, Poochyena and Roselia. When he woke up and came downstairs to the back of the center, he was wearing his green shirt, black pants and white sneakers. I laughed because his hair was out of place and it looked like he woke up from a nightmare. Ha, it was hilarious. While, Rocky and Brendan went to have breakfast, I had a battle on the bridge where Rocky and me had our first little lip-lock. I was battling against twins. They were weird twins if you ask me:

“Seedot! Bide!”

“Lotad! Astonish!”

“Roselia dodge astonish! Torchic use Ember to burn Seedot!”

Torchic’s flames burned Seedot to a crisp. Seedot started to get very dizzy, it fainted instantly.

“Roselia! Petal Dance!”

Roselia started to use her awesome petals. It aimed at the Dish Pokemon. Lotad fell backwards into the water.

SPLASH!

“Seedot! Lotad! Return!” the twins said in unison.

I jumped for joy. “We won! Yay! Woo-hoo!”

Then I heard someone clapping. I turned around and I saw a girl who is 15 years older than me, she wore high stockings, a pink skirt and a black uniform like people wear in private schools.

“Wow,” Roxanne said. “How did you ever manage to pull that off?”

“I can, sometimes,” I said. “I have luck and friends that guide me,”

“Oh, really, I usually use my knowledge when it comes to battles, who are you?”

“I’m Kira Destiny.” I said.

“I’m Roxanne. The Rustboro City Gym Leader,”

“Oh, I saw you at the meeting! What is a gym leader? I never asked Norman that question,” I asked.

“A gym leader is a leader of a gym in one of the Pokemon Leagues that specializes in a type of Pokemon. What type do you use?”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“Well, your Torchic is a Fire-Type, Roselia is a Grass-Poison Type and your other Pokemon, Poochyena is a Dark Type.”

“I guess I use different types,”

“I use the Rock Type, I think your Pokemon are ready, come with me and we will do battle,”

“Where?”

“Where else? The Rustboro Gym, duh!” Roxanne said. We walked together to the gym.

“Do you have a cell phone?” I asked.

“Here,” Roxanne said. It was a device, I don’t know what it was called, but it did have Brendan on it, so I called him.

“Hello?” Brendan said on the intercom.

“Hi, Brendan. It’s Kira. Is Rocky with you?”

“Kira, why are using Roxanne’s Pokenav?”

“Because I am,” I said. “Tell Rocky that I will be at the Rustboro Gym in 5 minutes. You guys would want to come that’s swell, I don’t care, just get here.”

“Okay, later!” Brendan said. I closed the Pokenav or whatever Brendan called it and gave it back to Roxanne.

When we got to the gym, the gym looked like a mountaintop. It had a golden stone on top of the doors as I walked inside.

I looked at the nice, quaint rock gym. I noticed that there were benches on either side, a field and trainer boxes. I was actually pretty amazed at the fact that each gym has a specified field for their Pokemon, kind of cool. Anyway, the referee was there that way we can have our gym battle.

“You ready?”

“I’m always ready,” I said.

The referee stated the rules for the match.

“Each trainer can use two Pokemon. The battle is decided when both Pokemon from either side are either fainted or unable to battle. This match is for one Stone Badge. The trainer is allowed to switch, the gym leader is not allowed to substitute. Is that clear? You ready to battle?”

“Yes,” we said to both questions.

“Start!”

“Go, Geodude!” Roxanne said.

The Poke Ball opened up to reveal a rock with two arms. “Geo-dude!”

“Go! Roselia!” I said.

My Poke Ball opened up to reveal my Roselia on the field.

Battle Layout: Gym Match, Round 1

Opponent: Roxanne’s Level 12 Geodude vs.

Challenger: Kira Destiny’s Level 14 Roselia

Situation: 1-on-1 with 2 Pokemon, no time limit.

BATTLE START!

“Geodude! Rock Throw!”

Geodude tackled the wall sending Rocks to tumble on Roselia.

“Roselia, use Magical Leaf to block the Rocks!” I yelled. Roselia started to spin around blocking all the rocks. “Now, use Sunny Day!”

The sun came in through the rooftop and it shone through the gym.

“What are you planning? If you are planning to use Solarbeam, Don’t even try!” Roxanne said.

I took that as a bluff. “Use Solarbeam!” Roselia’s roses started to glow white.

“Use Rock Blast!” Roxanne said.

Geodude shout out 5 rocks at Roselia. Roselia shot out a white beam toward the rocks, The rocks melted due to the Sun’s intensity. The beam pummeled Geodude. Geodude slammed into a wall and fainted.

“Geodude is unable to battle, Roselia is the winner!”

I did a victory dance. But, I knew she had one more Pokemon. I wonder what it is.

“Nosepass, Let’s go!” Roxanne said.

A big Rock, Metallic thing appeared that was way bigger than Roselia.

“NOSE-PASS!”

Round 2

Roxanne’s Level 15 Nosepass vs. Kira’s Level 14 Roselia. No time limit. Battle Begin!

“Kira, not bad, I never expected anybody to stop me, but if you plan to beat me, you better have a good strategy. I trained with this Nosepass ever since I was a little girl. I never let anybody beat me. Nosepass! Rock Tomb!”

Nosepass slammed on the ground.

“Kira!”

Kira turned and saw Rocky sitting on one of the bleachers. “You can stop her!”

Kira looked at Roxanne and looked at the Roselia covered up in rock.

“There are many ways to cut a rock! Use Magical Leaf!”

Roxanne started to laugh. “Like sharp leaves can cut Rock Tomb!”

SLASH!

“Huh?”

Roselia appeared and closed her eyes. She opened her eyes and had an evil grin.

“Roselia! Solarbeam!”

Roselia’s roses started to shoot out a big beam of white light which hit Nosepass.

“Nosepass! Zap Cannon!” she said.

Nosepass started to use an electrical charge. He shot forward an electric ball which paralyzed Roselia!

“Roselia!” I yelled.

Roselia fell to the ground. I recalled it before the referee judged it as unable to battle. I threw Torchic on the field.

“Tor-chic!”

I noticed that Roselia’s damage showed a big opening, an opening small to burn a Rock Pokemon.

“Torchic! Quick Attack!”

Torchic shot toward Nosepass.

“Zap Cannon!” Roxanne said.

Nosepass shot out a ball of electricity.

“Dodge to the side! Then use Ember on that hole!”

Torchic dodged to the right and shot out flames at Nosepass’ opening. Nosepass fell to the ground.

“Nosepass is unable to battle, Torchic’s the winner. The winner of Rustboro Gym is Kira!”

“We did it Torchic!”

“Torch-,”

Torchic started to glow.

“It’s evolving!” Roxanne said.

“Wow,” Rocky said. “Awesome,”

It wasn’t a little bird anymore. It had two arms, two legs. It had claws on each hand, it has a bird beak, that was orange and its eyes were red.

“Com-busken!”

“Wow! Combusken!” I said. “Never heard of it, but I like it!”

“Cool!” Rocky said. “So, Roxanne. Can we have our gym battle later today?”

“Okay, Rocky!” Roxanne said. She turns to me. “Here, Kira, this is for you!”

It was a golden badge with two triangle points on either side.

“A Stone Badge? Thanks!”

“You’re welcome!”

So, Kira won her badge. What will happen next? You’ll find out!

Next Time on Emerald Legends:

Kira meets Mr. Stone, the leader of Devon Corporation

Rocky battles Roxanne for his first badge

Also, Kira rescues a Wingull from a Team Wind Grunt

Author's Note: Before I go away for a couple of days, I just want to say have a great thanksgiving!!!!

YankeeFan2
28th November 2005, 1:20 AM
After Roxanne’s battle, Rocky and I went to the Pokemon Center. We went to the room where there was a queen size bed. We started to kiss passionately, then we were on the bed. I started to feel wet between my legs as Rocky started to prick his fly under me. He was using foreplay on me, and it’s working all right. Until, Brendan came in. We were about to do it, when he came in my room.

“I knew I found you here!”

“What’s up?”

“Since Rocky has a gym leader battle in an hour, we can explore Rustboro!”

“Really?” I asked.

“Really,” Brendan said.

“You already have been around Hoenn, I’m going to go myself and see what’s there.”

I said.

“Good luck, Rocky. I’ll see you later,”

I pranced off with my town map. Skipping and looking for the nearest mall, I was thinking of getting Rocky a present. All of a sudden, I ran into someone. I fell on the floor.

“Hey, young lady. Are you okay?”

“I’m fine,”

“Okay, why are using a town map?”

“Because I don’t have a PokeNav,”

“Come with me,” the old man said.

I went to Devon Corp., really great people and the workers here have a really great building.

“I’m Mr. Stone, president of Devon Corp. My son Steven is the Pokemon League Champion,”

“Really?” I asked. “Neat!”

I saw the picture of Steven. My eyes started to widen. He looked so hot in the picture, unlike Rocky. This guy really knows how to smile!

“Here take this for you and your friend,” Mr. Stone said.

Two PokeNavs were given to me with a letter attached to it. I wanted to know what it is, but Mr. Stone stopped me in time.

“Do not touch the letter. The letter is for Steven,” Mr. Stone said.

I put them someplace where I can give them these items and where I can find it quickly and easily. “Thank you, I’ll see you later,”

At the Rustboro Gym…

Geodude got blasted away by Mudkip’s Water Gun technique.

“Geodude is unable to battle. Mudkip Wins!”

“Not bad,” Roxanne said as she recalled Geodude. “But can you try to knock out this, I knew Kira beat this Pokemon,”

“Bring it on!” Rocky said on the opposite side of the field.

“Nosepass, Go!”

The hard rock Pokemon looked specifically at Mudkip.

“Nose-pass. Nose-pass!”

On Route 116…

I brought my PokeNav with me, trained my Pokemon and continued west training my Pokemon. My Roselia grew to Level 17, my Poochyena grew to Level 17 and my Combusken grew to Level 18. Or was it 19? I didn’t know, it was somewhere in that range. The path stopped and I entered the cave called the Rusturf Tunnel.

Back at the gym…

Rocky Corona’s Level 15 Mudkip vs. Roxanne’s Level 15 Nosepass

No Time Limit. Battle Begin!

“Mudkip! Water Gun!”

Mudkip started shooting out blasts of water.

“Nosepass, Zap Cannon!”

Nosepass shot it with electricity. The next thing that happened, Mudkip was paralyzed.

“MUDKIP!” Rocky said. Mudkip fell to the floor. Then, he started to glow white. Like Kira’s Pokemon did. Except it grew bigger fins and it stood on 2 legs.

“Marsh-tomp!”

“Marshtomp? No way!” Roxanne said.

“Marshtomp! Let’s finish this battle, use Mud Shot!” Rocky yelled.

Marshtomp spat out mud all over Roxanne’s Nosepass. The Nosepass couldn’t move a muscle. Rocky was looking for a weakness to see if he could move. Apparently, since it’s like a magnet, it can rust with water. So, Rocky took drastic measures.

“Marshtomp! Water Gun!”

The spray of water made Nosepass unable to move.

“Nosepass is unable to battle. Marshtomp wins. The winner is Rocky Corona,”

“Yay,” Rocky said. He gave Marshtomp a big hug.

“Not bad,” Roxanne said. “I shall see you in the tournament.”

The badge was on Rocky’s palm.

Back to Rusturf Tunnel…

The sign said as I passed the entrance: WARNING! Enter at your own risk!

Something told me that the Pokemon here are either pretty strong, or Whismur, the Pokemon I saw on the way here were in here. I kept walking into the misty cave when I met a caged Wingull.

“Oh, why are you locked?”

“Wingull! Wingull!” Wingull pointed its beak toward the right of Kira. Kira looked and found her nemesis. He was wearing a big yellow and green outfit with an S on his belt.

“Team Wind! What do you want?”

“I want you to come with me,”

“Or what?”

“I guess I’ll have to battle you,”

“Bring it on!” I said.

“Taillow, Go!”

Taillow appeared out of its Poke Ball.

“Go, Poochyena!”

“Ruff-ruff!” Poochyena yelled.

Battle Layout:

Poochyena Level 17 vs. Taillow Level 20

No time limit, battle start!

“Taillow, Quick Attack!”

Taillow headed dead center toward Poochyena. Poochyena started to squirm.

“Aerial Ace!”

SLASH! Poochyena hit the ground hard. I started to cry.

“POOCHYENA!”

The Poochyena started to glow, it grew bigger and bigger. It evolved into a dog.

“MIGHTY-ENA!”

“A Mightyena,” Team Wind said. “Huh?”

Mightyena started to glow red. His eyes started to glow red as it aimed toward Taillow. His eyes fired a red laser toward Taillow. I checked my Pokedex and realized Mightyena has the power to fire a laser from his eye to decrease attack power. Something like Intimidate.

“What happened to Taillow? You cheated!” the grunt said.

“I didn’t cheat, Poochyena evolved to save me. His special ability is to lower your attack power in half,”

“What?” he said. He looked confused.

“Mightyena, chomp Taillow’s wings.”

CHOMP!

Mightyena crunched Taillow. Taillow fell to the floor and got really dizzy.

“Finish!” I said.

Mightyena touched Taillow. It fainted.

“NO! This will never happen again!”

He recalled Taillow and dropped a package as he left. I checked and found out the Devon Goods had to be transported to Slateport City. I didn’t know where it was; I found the cage Wingull and went back to Rustboro City. I went to the Pokemon Center and I finally found Rocky as we went upstairs to do our business.

“What’s the gift?”

I pulled out a ticket.

“A ticket for the movies and a PokeNav,”

“Is Brendan going?”

“No,”

“Good,” he said as he kissed me.

“Why is the Wingull caged?”

“Team Wind took it,”

"What are you going to do with it?" Rocky asked

“In the morning, I’m going to find its owner,”

TO BE CONTINUED…
Next, the lemon…

Mr. Briney’s boat breaks down and Kira and Rocky have the night… alone.

WARNING: If you hate sexual themes don’t read the next chapter.

YankeeFan2
28th November 2005, 1:22 AM
WARNING: Sex in this chapter, you have NOW been warned

I woke up on the right side of the bed, facing Rocky, who was still asleep. I left a message on his PokeNav. I got in the shower, got dressed and took the Wingull to find its owner.

I left Rustboro City for the last time. I may never see it again as I head across the lake into the Petalburg Woods…

In the meantime…

“Huh? Kira?” Rocky asked. He heard something beep on his PokeNav. He quickly opened and found a message.

Rocky- I am taking Wingull to Route 104. Meet me there and we can all go to Dewford Island. Thanks, Kira.

Rocky quickly jumped out of bed, took a shower, woke Brendan up, got dressed and both ran out of Rustboro to Mr. Briney’s cottage.

I got to the cottage, where I met Mr. Briney.

“Oh, thanks for saving me Peeko,” Mr. Briney said.

“You’re Welcome. I have errands to do, can we get to Dewford Island?”

“Sure, yeah sure you can,” he said. “Where are the rest of ye crew?”

“There coming,” I said. There they are now.

Rocky and Brendan ran toward the dock.

“We’re ready,” Brendan said.

“Cool,” Rocky said.

“Let’s go!” Mr. Briney said. “Raise the anchor,”

I looked for one.

“We don’t have an anchor,” I said.

“Untie the ropes,” Rocky said.

“Oh, thank you, Mr. Smartypants,” I said with sarcasm.

Rocky just smiled as he untied the ropes. The boat set sailed for Dewford Island.

One hour later…

Rocky, shirtless was looking at the waves. Brendan, was reading a book and I just lay down on the wood floor of Mr. Briney’s boat, getting a tan. A very, nice tan; I could use one. Besides, I was tired and I needed to rest. That Rustboro City gym battle and what happened since Littleroot got me heads over heels. Until, I can find a way home. I hope I don’t, but I should. But, since its 70 degree weather, the best spot to be is out in the ocean. Suddenly, a felt a bump from the ocean, I woke up and froze. It wasn’t Rocky, it was something huge.

“Mr. Briney, what’s wrong?”

“The wheel is out of control. Everybody, watch out!” Mr. Briney said.

We hit a cave. The ship stopped moving as it hit the mound. I fell off the ship and on to the floor.

“Rocky?” I asked. “Rocky?” I didn’t have my Pokemon with me. So, I was flying solo.

The sun started to set and I just sat there around the campfire I made for myself. Waiting for help, I got a little sleepier. The fire was out after three hours, even though I dozed off. Five hours later, I woke up to a comfortable sensation. When, I got up and did a 180 degree turn. Rocky saw me. I was about to freak out.

“Rocky,” I said.

“Kira,” he said. “I thought you were dead,”

“Dead? Me? Never,” I said.

I sat up against the mound, resting my back against the hard rock. My legs were sprawled against the sand. I had flashbacks at what happened at the lake on Route 104 in Rustboro. His lips were so…. Ooh, so tender. I could just feel him kissing my neck right now. I snapped out of it, and what do you know, his tender lips are sucking my neck. He stopped sucking and whispered in my ear.

“You have got to relax,” he said.

“Or what?” I asked.

“Or, we are never going to have a good time. Ever since we crashed, you have been next to this mound. If we can fix this boat tomorrow, we can get to Dewford. Besides, I need some… pointers,” he said.

“What kind?”

“You know just pointers in romance,” Rocky said.

“You got it, partner,”

Rocky understood that and leaned in and kissed me tenderly. As soon as I gave the kiss back, the kiss went from tender to passionate. The passion grew and everything around us was just the heat of their passion growing. Rocky slipped my top of the bathing suit off and trailed butterfly kisses down my neck. As Rocky’s scent trailed up my nose, I suddenly had the urge to pounce on him but I didn’t. I grabbed the hem of his blue t-shirt and slipped it off. I sent soft kisses on his chest as he unsnapped my bra. Rocky felt her warm soft lips on him and his heart pounded hard, real hard. I trailed my hand down to his pants and unbuttoned and unzipped them before he knew I did. Soon enough, they we were left with nothing on our bodies. Sweat covered us and the heat of passion warmed the whole island. After every kiss, we took a breath. Our love was pure and tender and nothing was going to get in the way. Later that evening, I was wrapped up in Rocky’s arms. I snuggled against his chest to feel the warmth of his body. I woke up to his warm brown eyes staring down at me.


“Hey, beautiful,” Rocky said.

“Hey, cutie. So, how do you feel,” I asked.

“Like I went to heaven and back.” Rocky said. “I will always be with you,”

“I will be there for you, too,” I said. We lay on the hot sand all night long.

Next Chapter: Kira, Rocky and Brendan arrive at Dewford Island and while Rocky battles Brawly, Kira finds Steven.

Author’s Note: Kira won’t be pregnant until the end of the story. That’s all I’m saying. Later…

Ouallada
28th November 2005, 10:27 AM
You should listen to the others here. I don't have the time to go through ALL lf your mistakes, because that would perhaps take till next Friday. Stop recycling your plots. Make them more interesting, and please make some effort to improve on the grammar.

YankeeFan2
30th November 2005, 12:23 AM
Disclaimer: I don’t own Pokemon.

A Meeting With the Hoenn Champion in Granite Cave

Daybreak rose over the horizon as Rocky and I slept on the island. I woke up and sat up on the beach, feeling the cool breeze on my face and down my hair. Next thing I knew, slender hands touched my bare back. I turned around and saw Rocky caressing my back, holding me tight.

“Come on, baby,” Rocky said. “Let’s do it again,”

“After all that love making we did? I can’t even move my legs,” I said.

I turned around. I was about to say something, but Rocky just gave me another total-lip-lock passionate kiss. He pressed his chest against me, as I just took the kiss. Then, Brendan comes walking around and saw Rocky and me… NAKED.

“AAH! Oh, Kira, you look so cute. I would like to have sex with you every day!” Brendan said.

I slapped him. “Pervert!” I said. “How long will the boat be fixed?”

“It will be done in about a couple of hours."

-------- Later in the Afternoon--------

Mr. Briney fixed the boat, So, we got dressed and got on his boat. We got back on our course to Dewford Island. Dewford Island was the greatest spot on the planet. The island had so many trees, a cave and a really great restaurant. After all that love making that Rocky and I had, we had to have something to eat. Besides, Rocky has to battle another gym leader and I, that’s right, me, has to go and give the letter to Steven Stone, the son’s president, then have a gym battle.

“What are you going to do?” Rocky asked as he ate a piece of pizza.

“All I know is I have to go meet Steven in the Granite Cave. I don’t know about you…” I said.

“I have a gym battle, babe. Why don’t you go?”

I kissed Rocky on the forehead.

“Thanks, Rocko.”

“You’re Welcome,” Rocky said.

--- Route 106---

After battling a couple of trainers, I have reached the Granite Cave. I entered it, unlike the Rusturf Tunnel, it was completely dark! I lurked around for hours until I fell into a large hole. I started to scream for my life. Then, I landed on the bottom floor.

“OW!” I said.

I kept walking, I saw Makuhita. But, I have a fighting-type, so that won’t do. But, I found an Aron. Aron are pretty cute Pokemon. Their blue eyes remind me of my grandma on Earth. Those sweet memories… I grabbed my Poke Ball when I heard the voice that boomed around the cavern.

“DON’T EVEN TRY TO CAPTURE THAT ARON!”

“Huh?”

It was a guy who appeared to be wearing a black suit. He had white hair and blue eyes. His chin was really perplexed and his face was white as snow. It was that guy in the picture!

“I’m Kira Destiny. I thought this Aron was wild!”

“It’s okay. I’m Steven, Steven Stone, son of Devon Corp and Hoenn League Champion!”

Hoenn League Champion? Wow, I never thought that this guy was the Hoenn League Champion. I started to blush.

“Steven? I have something two things to give you,”

“What’s that?”

I gave him the letter and then I grabbed his shirt and pulled his face towards mine and started to kiss.

“What was that for?” Steven asked.

I laughed. “Your brave voice. Besides, I liked the kiss. But, it was just a peck. I just needed to make sure you were real.”

“Real?” Steven asked. “How Real?”


“Just real. Anyway, that’s all I have to give you. I’ll see you later.”

I started to climb up the ladder when Steven caught me. Next thing I knew, he kissed me passionately.

“Take this TM and my phone number,” he said. “It’s a token of our friendship.”

“Thanks,” I said. I put in my TM Pocket in my bag and started climbing up the ladder. I heard him say as I headed upstairs.

“Damn, that kiss was so tender,”

I was devoted to Rocky though. What was I suppose to do? I better get to the gym and pretend nothing like this ever happened.

-Dewford Gym-

“Go, Makuhita!” Brawly said.

The big fat muscular Pokemon with black boxing gloves appeared. “Maku-hita!” he said.

I ran toward Brendan.

“How’s Rocky?” I asked him.

“He beat 2 out of the 3 Pokemon. I want to see how his Marshtomp can stop this Pokemon, he used so much strength in battling the last two,” Brendan said. He turned to me. “So?” Brendan asked. He started to kiss me as I used my leg to jab him in the balls.

“OW! ****!” Brendan said.

Rocky looked at me and then at Brendan. “Don’t you dare make a move on Kira,” he said.

I saw the battle against Brawly and Rocky. Boy, it was awesome. I never expected Mud Shot to blind Makuhita’s face. Then Makuhita started running around because it was blind. Then, Marshtomp used Muddy Water and drowned Makuhita.

“Makuhita is unable to battle. Marshtomp wins! The victory goes to Rocky Corona!”

“Yeah!” he said.

I clapped for him. Brawly recalled his Pokemon and went to him.

“Like dude, I never expected to lose like that man,” he said. “Take this narly Knuckle Badge,” Brawly said.

“Righteous!” Rocky said. “I got a Knuckle Badge! Go me! It’s my birthday! Oh, yeah. Uh-huh, uh-huh,”

I saw him being funny. I started to laugh. We went back to the Pokemon Center had a bash, and then went to bed. Before, I closed my eyes; I could see two men in my illusion. Steven on the left side, Rocky on the right side, what do I do? I just slept on it and maybe think about this tomorrow.”

Next Chapter: Kira versus The Big Wave

On my opinion, this chapter was choppy. The next time I write a chapter, it won’t happen. I hope…

YankeeFan2
4th December 2005, 10:48 PM
Disclaimer: I don’t own Pokemon for any reason… I own Kira and Rocky. Thanks! A/N: Also, this is a short chapter. I need to speed this up (not too much), but sometime before my concerts (It’s almost Christmas. Duh!)

Brawly- The Next Big Wave
That morning, I woke up and had breakfast with Rocky and Brendan.

“So, what do you think?” I asked. “Do you think I’m ready?”

“Due to what happened at the Granite Cave? I think you’re ready,” Rocky said.

“Really?” I said.

“Yeah,” Brendan said, drinking his orange juice. “You are really ready to battle him.”

“Cool,” I said. I stood up and started to head out the door. “Wish me luck,”

I ran toward the big light blue building with the Knuckle Badge design when suddenly, the door slammed me in the face.

“Oh, I’m sorry. Are you-,” he stopped to notice me. It was Brawly with a surfboard. He was wearing and orange shirt with cargo pants. He had blue spiky hair and blue sapphire eyes.

“You’re that little dudette I saw at the battle with Rocko yesterday. Here let me like help you up,” Brawly said.

And he did. “Hey Brawly, are you having any gym battles today?”

Brawly shook his head. “Actually, you’re like the first trainer today. Come on in,”

When we went in there, it was nothing but a fighting dojo.

“Here are the rules, you are only allowed to use three Pokemon. You know that the match is decided if all three Pokemon from either side are unable to battle. I can’t switch Pokemon. So, are you ready to have a narly battle, dudette?”

“Yeah,” I said.

“Go Machop!” Brawly said.

A Poke Ball opened and it released Machop. It was human-like with gray skin, with brown ridges and red eyes.

“Okay, go Roselia!” I yelled.

“Rose!” she yelled as she got released from the Poke Ball.

Battle Layout: Round 1

Brawly’s Level 17 Machop vs. Kira’s Level 15 Roselia. No Time Limit! Battle Start!

“Machop, Bulk Up,” Brawly yelled.

Machop breathed in so much air, that red and green sparks flew from the ground.

“Ha, you think I was going to use a Physical Attack, think again,” I said. “Use Magical Leaf!”

Roselia shout out multi-color leaves and shot it at Machop. It was a critical hit on Machop’s right side.

“Roselia, Sunny Day!”

Roselia started to use the sun for energy.

“Don’t tell me, you are going to do what I think you are going to do,” Brawly said.

“Exactly, dude! SOLARBEAM!” I called out.

A blast of illuminating white light damaged Machop. Machop got so dizzy, he fainted.

”Jeez, I thought it was going to take longer than that,” I said.

Brawly picked up another Poke Ball. “Meditite, Go!”

Meditite looked like someone was doing yoga on the floor. Except, it can levitate when needed.

“Meditite, let’s use Bide!”

Meditite started to glow red buying its time. It took me ten minutes to figure out how to stop it. But, I decided to blow up my strategy and attack.

“Solarbeam!” I yelled.

Roselia shot out an white beam when suddenly Meditite stopped Roselia’s attack and sent it back at my Pokemon.

“ROSELIA!” I yelled.

“Rose-lia,” she squeaked. She dropped on the floor.

“NO! Roselia!” I said.

“Well, you have two Pokemon left. What is your next Pokemon?”


I pulled out a Poke Ball.

“Combusken, your turn!”

The Young Fowl Pokemon stood across from Meditite.

“Use Slash!” I yelled.

Combusken started to jump and use slice Meditite. Two red marks went across her face. Combusken jumped down and saw Meditite fall to the floor.

“Makuhita, let’s show em, dude!” Brawly said.

Makuhita was yellow human Pokemon with a big gut and red circular cheeks. He had big black gloves and shouted. “MAKUHITA!”

“Dude, use like Arm Thrust!” the gym leader said.

Makuhita started slicing Combusken with his arm.

“Well, if you want it that way,” I said. “Combusken! Sky Uppercut!”

Combusken gave him a jab up Makuhita’s nose. He fell on his back and couldn’t move.

“Ow!” I said.

“Makuhita can you stand?”

Makuhita tried to stand, but fell and broke his neck.

The referee was so late he ran toward the podium. “Makuhita lost, Kira won!”

“Good Timing,” I said.

Brawly walked over to me and gave me a blue and orange fist badge design.

“Take this Knuckle Badge,” Brawly said.

“Thanks,” I said.

I left the gym and went to the Pokemon Center. When, I got there, Nurse Joy asked for me.

“You want to see me?” I said as I put the Poke Balls on the tray.

“A man came by and told me to give you his phone number that way you can transfer it on your PokeNav,”

“Oh,” I took the number and programmed it. The name came up and it said: Hard As Rock- Steven.

The next morning, we were heading toward Slateport City when Brawly stopped me.

“Dudette, wait!”

I stopped before I got on Mr. Briney’s boat. Brawly handed out his phone number.

“Program it and call me if anything happens. I know that the narly Team Wind members are after people from a different world. So, if anything happens, let me know,”

“Okay,” I said. “Later,”

We took off toward Slateport City.

Next Chapter: A new character comes and joins Kira and the gang.

They encounter an abandoned ship.

YankeeFan2
12th December 2005, 3:12 AM
Disclaimer: Except for Kira and Rocky and my new character, I own nothing…

A Stranded Coordinator
The sun rose up to the cracks of the clouds on that chilly morning as I was on the deck of Mr. Briney’s ship heading towards Slateport City. I really didn’t care how long it would be before I get there, I just wanted to get there that way I could go shopping. I need new clothes. I look like one of the pirates in a storybook. The ship was quiet as a cat as it rams through the quiet waves of Route 108. I kept thinking about that kiss between Steven and me. I had a great time with him! I really liked that kiss? But, what would I tell Rocky. Suddenly, a hand touched my left shoulder and I jumped out of my skin and found out it was Rocky.

“So, babe. Where do you think our next stop is?” Rocky asked.

“I told you and I will say it again. Slateport City, then Mauville City after that,” I said.

All of a sudden, the sunshine dimmed out and the dark clouds gathered to form a massive thunderstorm.

“Damn, Mr. Briney, a thunderstorm is coming!” Brendan said.

“Relax, Brendan. This ship is indestructible.”

Suddenly, lightning struck the side of the ship. The ship went off course and landed on a solid platform. The ship shook violently as it tilted off the port bow. I held on to the rail of the ship. The winds were so intense, my fingers nearly slipped until Rocky pulled me in.

“Where did we land?” I asked.

“I don’t think it’s where.” Rocky said. “What did we land on?”

We landed on a ship.

“Oh, man. We landed on the Abandoned Ship,” Brendan yelled.

“So?” I asked.

“There may be… ghosts,” Brendan said.

I pulled Brendan’s ear. “Come on, what are you chicken?”

“No,” Brendan said.

“Then shut up, let’s go,” I said.

We walked into the mysterious vessel. It was very dark; we didn’t have flash so we had to be careful to make sure we didn’t fall into any holes.

“Gosh, this place is really weird,” I said.

“Yeah. You could get lost in this place.” Rocky said.

“I know. It’s just-,” then something pulled me away. I heard Rocky scream my name as I plunged with something or someone that kidnapped me.

I woke up in an empty space. There was light all around the room, it was way different. It was a cold place. I noticed something out of the corner of my eye. A kid was walking toward me. He was wearing a black shirt, blue pants and a red hat. Next to him was a Pokemon that looked like a human with a spoon.

“Why are you here?”

“A thunderstorm struck my friend’s ship, and we are deserted here in this cold ship.”

“Join the club,”

I started to get really ******. “All right, who the hell are you. If you are from Team Wind, I swear to god, you are so dead meat when my friends come,”

“You’re friends are here too?”

I rolled my eyes. “What are you deaf?”

“No, But I will find them. Kadabra, let’s go,”

“Ka-da-bra,” it said as they went into the dark space. I was tied up in rope. I didn’t know what to do, but they were really stupid. I could summon Combusken and burn these ropes. I just hope it works. So, I reach for my Poke Ball and threw it toward the dark space.

“Com-bus-ken!” he said.

“Combusken! Slash!”

Combusken slashed the rope.

“Thanks,”

Combusken gave me a thumbs up. We left the place and continued walking to get out of here.

“This is getting weird. Come on Combusken, we’re getting out,” I said. When, suddenly, a big strong arm pulled me through.

“MM-Oh no!” I started to scream.

“Shh. It’s me Rocky,”

Rocky?

“How do I know it’s you?” I asked.

He pulled me into a passionate kiss. He pushed his chest up against me.

“Okay, let’s not.”

“Why not?”

“because… Combusken, return,” I said. I pulled out the Poke Ball and Combusken returned.

BOOM!

“What was that?”

I turned around. It was the guy.

“Oh great. It’s you and that Psychic Pokemon,”

“Relax, I was just wondering. Can I come with you on your journey,”

“Why?”

“I was on my way for a contest in Lilycove City when suddenly the ship capsized. Everybody died except for me. I was here for about three weeks.”

“When’s the contest?” Rocky asked.

“About three months from now,”

“Okay, hey Rocky let’s go,” I said.

We caught up with Brendan.

“Who’s the guy?” Brendan asked.

“Oh. I’m Eddie,” the guy said. “Eddie the Magnificent. I'm sorry for tying up Kira. I thought she was trying to kill me.

"Oh," I said.

"Here take a look at my ribbons,”

I saw the 4 ribbons of a different color. “So, that’s why you are heading to Lilycove,”

“Well, let’s go,” Mr. Briney said.

We got on the boat and left for Slateport.

Next Chapter: Rocky’s Battle Tent Challenge

YankeeFan2
12th December 2005, 3:51 AM
You know I forgot to apologize for the long wait, I was lazy…

Short Chapter because it’s a two-part episode/chapter.


The Battle Tent and A Day Off(Slateport City Part 1)

As soon as we arrived at Slateport City, I quickly ran to the Pokemon Center and changed into my beautiful pink bathing suit. I didn’t feel like using the one I had when the boat crashed on the island near Dewford. Rocky entered my room and was looking for me.

“Well, someone got a little dressed up? Where you going?” Rocky asked.

“I’m going to get my tan, play with my Pokemon, come back and explore the Oceanic Museum,” I said.

“Oh, I think I am going to take the Battle Tent Challenge,” Rocky said.

“Why?” I asked.

“I just want to,” Rocky said.

“Later,” I ran out the door and headed for Slateport Beach.

~ROUTE 109- SLATEPORT BEACH/SEASHORE HOUSE~

I put my green towel on the sand, put on my black sunglasses and decided to sleep while the rays were burning up my skin. It felt so good, the breeze blows your hair, the comfortable rays shoot down at you. Oh, it was marvelous. So, marvelous, my Pokemon had to come out and play. So, I ditched sleeping and sent out my Pokemon.

“Buddies, come out and play!” I yelled.

Mightyena popped out first, then Roselia and finally Combusken.

“So, what do you want to do, we are here for the day, so think of something,” I said.

Mightyena plunged on to my bag and took out a Frisbee.

“Oh, you want to play?” he asked.

All the Pokemon nodded. I stood with Roselia and Combusken and Mightyena stood on the other side.

“Go, get it guys,” I said as I threw the Frisbee. Mightyena clenched onto the Frisbee first. He turned around and gave it back to me.

“Not bad.” I said with a happy smile on my face.

“Kira,”

I turned around and Ed and Kadabra came down the stairs.

“What?” I asked.

“May I join you?” Ed asked.

“Eddie, I would be happy too,” I said.

“Kadabra, come out,” Eddie said. The Poke Ball released Kadabra.

“Ka-da-bra,”

“You wanna play Frisbee?” he asked.

Kadabra nodded. Then, Brendan came.

“Don’t ask,” I said.

“Okay,” Brendan said. “Go, Grovyle.”

Grovyle must’ve evolved the other day while Brendan was training.

We played Frisbee for half the day and got suntans. We headed back to Slateport City and got dressed for dinner.

“I wonder what the food tastes like in Slateport?” I asked.

“Why don’t you try that restaurant?” Brendan asked. I looked at that place. It was a seafood restaurant: my favorite food. We ran to the restaurant, and had shrimp scampys and clam chowder. It tasted way better than home. After that we went to the Battle Tent to see how Rocky was doing.

“Ladies and Gentleman, Rocky Corona has beaten all three contestants.”

“How?” Brendan said.

“Yeah. Usually, you need Pokemon that are really experienced unless…” Eddie said.

“Unless what?” I asked.

“He may have used rentals,”

“Rentals?” I asked.

“Yeah,”

“Oh my god,” I said. “Got to admit it, Rocky is a talented trainer,”

“Cool,” Rocky said.

He scared me. He showed me what he won. It was a crown made out of rock.

“A King’s Rock,” Rocky said.
“Oh,” I said.

“Well, let’s go,” Rocky said.

As the sun started to set, we went to the Pokemon Center and decided to talk and hang out there for the rest of the night.

Next Chapter:

Kira, Eddie, Brendan and Rocky face off against the three teams and Kira finally gets her reason why everybody from Earth is coming here!

YankeeFan2
14th December 2005, 10:12 PM
Time for the next chapter, this is a short chapter because the only thing that matters is the big battle.

Slateport City- Part 2

Daybreak rose over the shadows of the night as I woke up and looked at the sight. Sorry, I just wanted to say that. Anyway, today was the last day we are going to be in Slateport City. We leave before the sun sets for my third badge at Mauville City. Before we left, I had to stop by at the Oceanic Museum.

One hour later

After everybody got dressed and settled down for a couple of minutes eating breakfast, we decided to go to the museum.

“Wow,” I said as I walked around. I needed to ask the curator something about that poster next to the stairs. It showed a red Pokemon and a blue Pokemon fighting. In the middle, a green dragon stood in the middle. I went up to him.

“You must be good when it comes to oceanography,” I said.

“You must like the ocean. Do you?” he said. “I’m Captain Stern,”

“I’m Kira. Kira Destiny,” I said.

Captain Stern looked at me awkwardly. “So, Kira. Do you have any questions?”


“Yeah,” I said. “What’s with the poster?”

I pointed to the one that was next to the stairs.

“Oh, that’s a prophecy. The reason why kids are getting sent into this world is because of Emerald. Emerald is the symbol for Rayquaza. Everybody that tried it failed.”

“Let me guess, Sapphire is the symbol for Kyogre and Ruby is Groudon?” I said.

“Yup,” he said.

In the distance, three team members from different teams look at Kira.

“That’s her, let’s go,” Tabitha said as he snuck underground to the Oceanic Museum.

In the ocean… “I can see her with my binoculars from a really great angle, let’s move,” Shelly yelled.

In the sky, Team Wind Admin Joey sees Shelly and Tabitha heading toward the Museum.

“Land here!” Joey yelled.

BOOM!


“What was that?” Brendan asked.

“I don’t know,” Rocky said.

“What the hell?” Eddie asked.

“Oh, great. It’s Team Magma, Aqua and Wind,” I said.

“We have to run,” Captain Stern yelled.

We were running to his office where we were ambushed by a Team Aqua Grunt, the other behind us was a Team Magma Grunt and to the side was a Team Wind Grunt.

“Give us the power to revive Rayquaza,” TW said.

“No give it to us for Kyogre,” TA said.

“No for Groudon,” TM said.

Rocky, Brendan, Eddie, Captain Stern and I picked up our Poke Balls.

“You got to make us first!” Brendan said.

“Yeah,” Rocky said.

“You can’t get to me,” Eddie said.

“You are going to have to go through us,” Captain Stern said.

“Yup,” I said.

“Go, Carvanha,” Team Aqua yelled.

“Go, Doduo,” Team Wind yelled.

“Numel, go!” Team Magma yelled.

“Combusken, Go!” I yelled.

“Grovyle, Go!” Brendan said.

“Kadabra, Go!” Eddie yelled.

“Marshtomp, Go!” Rocky said.

“Sealeo, Go!” Captain Stern yelled.


Battle Layout:

Kira and Rocky’s Combusken Level 24 and Marshtomp Level 23 versus Team Magma’s Numel Level 20

Eddie and Brendan’s Kadabra Level 30 and Grovyle Level 22 versus Team Aqua’s Carvanha Level 20

Captain Stern’s Level 34 Sealeo versus Team Wind’s Doduo Level 23. BATTLE BEGIN!


“Combusken, Flamethrower!” I yelled.

“Marshtomp, Mud Shot,” Rocky said.

“Kadabra, Thunderbolt,” Eddie called out.

“Grovyle, Leaf Blade,” Brendan said.

“Sealeo, Blizzard,” Captain Stern said.

Combusken blasted a big stream of flame and Marshtomp shot out Mud from its mouth toward Numel.

“Numel, Ember on Combusken!” Team Magma yelled. The Ember was so weak, that Marshtomp’s Mud and Combusken’s flame burnt down everybody.

Big Lightning bolts from Kadabra immobilized them and Grovyle cut them to teeny-weeny pieces.

“Carvanha, Water Pulse,”

“Kadabra, Light Screen!” Eddie yelled.

A pink screen appeared on Kadabra as it stopped it’s attack.

“Mirror Coat!”

A blast of Water Pulse hit all the Carvanha.

A blast of ice killed the Doduo.

“Did you stop them?” Joey, Shelly and Tabitha yelled. Next thing they knew, their mouths dropped and saw that the trainers beat the members.

“This is the last time we get beat against you four. Don’t you dare interfere,” they said.

The three teams left in tanks, subs and helicopters and jets. I relaxed my muscles returned Combusken and had to say thanks to the Captain.

“Thanks,” I said.

“No problem,” Capt. Stern said.

-

The sun was about to set as the four of us left on our journey.

“Good luck, you four on your journey,”


“Thank you,” we all said back as we waved our goodbyes. We headed north on Route 110 toward Mauville City. I just hope I can win my third badge.

Next Chapter: Kira meets Wally